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for your previous reviewSuperb update . Hero pareshan lag raha hai . Update ka ek dilogue mujhe kuchh jyada jam gaya
Conductor(gusse se): beta tu jis dost ki shadi ki bat kar raha hai naa woh koi ladka nahi ek ladki hai..
Aur itna toh mujhe yakin hohi gaya hai ki tu waha shadi mai nahi kisi aur hi kam se Jaa rahe ho..
for your previous reviewCongrats bhai for new story
Awesome start
Romance Kam thriller Wala story lag RHA h
for your previous reviewFinally, you have posted the first update of the story. The hero of the story is lost in his own thoughts. Hearing Ratan Singh Chaudhary's name, the bus conductor stops speaking, meaning something is secret. The heroine has not yet entered the story.
Today's update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
for your previous reviewExcellent starting, waiting for another update
to my thread sonajifor new story
for your previous reviewNice update waiting for next update
to my threadfor new thread
for your previous reviewSuru Mai padhte hue thoda ajeeb laga , Haryanvi language thoda Kam samjh aati , update Acha hai , Ratan Singh ke naam se conductor darr Gaya ya uski izzat karta? , Kya hero sach Mai sadi Mai ja Raha hai ? Well ye toh next update Mai clear Hoga ,
Sukriya itni request Karne par story start Karne ke liye
for your previous review bachheAre bawa Hariyanvi to meko bhi ni aati...
But movie and YouTube se bahut had tak shikh gya hai aapun...
Bahut badhiya update diya re ju ne...
Wese conductor conductor kam Gunda jyada lg rha hai
Wese ye hero shadi me party krne jaa rha hai...
Ya ladki ko udane
for your previous reviewfirst of all for new story
Brilliant update.... great going