Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[RAAZ]

Update no :- 141
Mata chaya :- abhi ni putra abhi ratri bahut ho chuki h or tum dono ko hi abhi ek dusre k sath or vishram ki jarurat h.

Hum is vishay me kal pratah charcha karenge.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas ek ache bache ki tarah sir hila deta h.

Mata chaya fir karan ko mahal me chalne lagi.

Karan apne charo or dekhta h to dukhi ho jata h ki uske krodh ne kitni tabahi macha di , per acha hua kisi ka jan mal ka nuksan na hua , matlab koi nirdosh mara ni.

Tab karan ne apni ankh band ker apni shakti ko ekatrit ker ek chutki bajai , jiske kaaran mahal, vaid ka ghar or aaspas jaha bhi tabahi hui thi , wo sab thik ho gayi pahale jese.

Lekin esa kerne me karan se ek galti ho gayi , karan ne pahale hi apni bahut energy ka use ker liya tha gusse me or upper se itne bade scale ki tabahi ko thik kerne me kafi energy lag gayi , jiske kaaran usko bhi kamzori aane lagi or wo ladkhada k girne hi laga tha ki aman ne use sahara de sambhala.

Aman :- karan tu thik to h na mere dost.

Karan kamzori bhari muskan k sath :-. Mujhe maaf ker dena dost , meri vajah se tumhe itni taklif hui , mane sab kuch thik kerne ki puri kosis ki h.

Aman :- sale tu mujhse pitega, dost bhi bolta h or maafi bhi mangta h , tu dost ni bhai h mera or jyoti meri bahan , or m khush hu ki wo dono hi sahi h.

Tabhi mata chaya jyoti ko god me lene lagi , kyunki usse chala bilkul bhi ni ja raha tha.

Karan :- are mata aap ye kya ker rahi ho .

Mata chaya :- apni beti ko god me le rahi hu karan .

Karan :- are Mata aap rahane dijiye , ye moti bahut bhari h , aapki kamar me dard ho jayega.

Karan ne ye majak mahol halka kerne ko kiya tha or esa hua bhi kuch pal k liye sabke chahre pe muskan aagayi or jyoti bhi jhut mut ka chid ker gussa hone ka natak kerne lagi.

Mata chaya muskurate hue :- khabardar shetan yadi meri beti ko kuch bola to or vese bhi beta bhul gaye m devi hu , mere liye ye koi muskil kam ni h or vese bhi ek maa k liye uske bache kabhi bade ni hote.


Tabhi kaya ne vinamra nivedan kerte hue bola.

Kaya :- pranam devi.

Mata chaya :- kalyan bhavah putri.

Kaya :- devi mera aapse nivedan h ki aap ye kasht na kare or jyoti ji ki is seva ka moka mujhe de .

Kyunki ek to ye rastal k raj parivar ki mahaman h or yaha ki senapati hone k nate ye mera kartavya bhi h or mere sakha ki bahan hone k kaaran ye meri bhi bahan jesi h , isliye mera dharm bhi.

Mata chaya ne kuch shan kaya ki or dekha or fir bole :-thik h putri jesi tumhari icha.

Ye bolte hue mata chaya side hui or kaya ne bade hi prem k sath jyoti ko apni baho m utha liya , vo bhale hi ab vampire ni rahi thi , lekin usme vampire ki takat abhi bhi thi.


Wahi dusri or

Karan k shant hote hi tufan bhi shant ho gaya or mosam bilkul esa ho gaya jese tufan kabhi aaya hi na ho.

Kavya heran hote hue :- kamal h abhi kuch der pahale to itna bhaynk tufan aaraha tha or ab sab kuch normal , ye mosam bhi pata ni kesa ho raha h

Wahi puja me bethi ankhe band ker prathna kerti hui sonam ka man bhi shant hone laga or tabhi use apni band akho me bahut shub najara dikha jisne uske man k sare bhay ka nash kerte hue uske chahre pe muskan la di.

Use apni band akho me mor pankh k sath bansuri dikhayi di , jo shri krishna ka pratik tha , jise dekhte hi sonam samjh gayi ki uska bhai or di Ab safe h .

Sonam khushi se kanha ki murti ko apne gale lagate hue boli :- dhanyawad kanha tune apne bhakt ki laaj rakh li , love u soo much.

Chalo ab sone ka time ho gaya h raat bahut ho gayi.

Ye bol sonam ne ladoo gopal k kapde change ker unhe sulane lagi or fir wapas hall me aaker beth gayi , jaha shivani tv dekh rahi thi.

Dono bahane pyaar se tv dekh rahi thi , tabhi kavya ne dono ko dinner k liye bulaya.

Dono dinner kerne lagi or uske baad kavya ne un dono se pucha.

Kavya :- shivani , sonam beta tum dono ki tumhare bhaiya ya didi se baat hui kya.

Shivani :- ni to mumma kya baat h.

Kavya chintit hote hue :- wo beta mujhe na jane kyu ghabrahat si ho rahi h or un dono ka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Tabhi kavya ka ring hua kavya ne receive kerte hue.

Kavya :- hello

Samne se aawaz aayi.

Hello choti ma.

Ye aawaz karan ki thi , jise sun kavya khush hui or use kuch chen aya.

Kavya :-. Ha karan beta, tum thik to ho na lala or jyoti bhi thik h na ,or tumhara phone kyu band araha tha, jante ho kitni chinta ho rahi thi mujhe.


Karan :- oh sorry choti ma aapko mane delhi wali company k baare me bataya tha na , bas usi ke kaam m busy the to pata hi ni chala kab mera or jyoti ka phone discharge ho gaya.

Sorry choti ma.

Kavya :-. Hmm koi baat ni lala , hota h kabhi kabhi , tum dono ne khana to khaya na.

Karan :- ji choti ma , bas abhi abhi kiya mane bhi or gudiya ne bhi .

Kavya :- le beta teri dono gudiya tere se baat kerna chahti h.

Kavya ne phone speaker pe ker diya.

Sonam :- ha hello bhaiya kaha ho aap , aap or di thik to hona .

Karan :- ha meri sona m or jyoti bilkul first class h tum chinta mat kerna m subah tak aajaunga.

Shivani :- bhaiya pakka aajana , hume camping k liye bhi jana h yaad h na.

Karan :- ha meri princess y bhi bhala koi bhulne ki baat h.

Karan kuch der yu hi apni bahano or choti ma se baat kerta h or phir phone rakh deta h.


Ab aap log soch rahe honge ki karan ne yaha kese baat ki , abhi to vo jyoti m busy h.

To jyada apne dimag per jor na dale m hi bata deta hu.

Darasal ye call karan ne ni ki thi , balki dand nayak k sahayak or uski family k bodyguard yani ki apne kaal mahoday ne ki thi.


Kaal bhi jyoti ki halat ko dekh ek baar fir vichlit ho gaya tha , lekin is baar uske kuch kerne se pahale hi baba ne use samja diya tha.

Usne hi apni aawaz badal ker karan ki aawaz me baat ki jiske kaaran karan ki family ka tension khatam kerne k liye.

Ye sab kerne k baad kaal jo baba k ashram m hi tha usne baba ko bola

Kaal :- lijiye baba ye kaam to ho gaya or mujhe pura bharosa h karan jyoti ko thik bhi ker dega , parantu.

Baba :- parantu kya putra.

Kaal :- parantu ye ki baba jab karan k satya ko janne ka or usse milan ka samay nikat aahi chuka h to ye ajib bhet kyu.

Kaal us ladki k is tarah aana or uske chahre ka na dikhne wale ki baat ker raha tha.

Baba :- wo isliye putra kyunki bhale hi samay najdik h ,parantu na hi karan or jyoti or na hi wo abhi is milan ko sajj h or na hi ye samay or sthan uchit tha.

Rasatal se lotne k baad karan or jyoti ki us yatra ka aarambh hoga , jisse use apne jivN se jude aaj tak k sabse bade satya se avgat hoga.

Kaal :- parantu baba us safar per jane k liye kaha jana hoga aapko to gyat h hi na .

Per kya karan or jyoti waha jane ko teyar honge , apne bhut kal ko made najar rakhte hue.

Baba :- sayam rakho putra sab samay or niyati per chod do , niyati apna marg swayam bana legi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- mandir.

Naina jo veer or preety ko chod mandir pahunch gayi or apne raat ki puja ki teyari kerne lagi .

Lekin aaj uska man bilkul ni lag raha tha , uska man bahut sare sawalo se ghira hua tha , khaskar ki un sawalo se jo uske sath kal hui ghatna k baad utpan hue.


Short flashback

Darasal hua naina havan kund k samne dhyan me bethi hui thi, tabhi waha ek roshni k sath devi chaya prakat hui , per naina ko iska jara sa bhi abhas na hua.

Devi chaya naina ki or dekhte hue man hi man boli

Devi chaya :- putri samay aagaya h ki tumhe tumhare jivan k asli uddeshy ka abhas ho.

Pure sansar samet aaj dand nayak karan ko apni dusri shakti ki aavshyakta aan padi h.

Putri ab keval tum hi ho jo apne .............. Yani karan or jyoti k prano ki raksha ker sako.

Kyunki mata parvati k or mahadev k ashirvad se tum me hi vo shakti mojud h , jo bone pishacho k jahar ko nast ker sakti h.

Putri keval tum hi ho jisne sansar ki us urja ko apni shakti bana sameta h , jo sare sansaar k liye abhishap h

Ye kahate hue devi chaya ne apne ek hath ko ashirwad mudra m aage kiya tabhi unke hath se ek roshni nikal ker havan kund se ban rahi naina ki parchai per padi.

Or agle hi shan us parchai se naina ka pratiroop nikla , jo bilkul naina jaisa tha , bas kapde alag the

Devi chaya ne ek baar fir roshni us pratiroop k chahre pe dali , jisse uska chahra parchai jesa ho gaya.

Devi chaya parchai se :- jao putri or is sansar ko vinash k mukh me jane se roko.

Parchai devi chaya ko pranam ker pahunch gayi rasatal.

Wahi naina ka mind us parchai se connect ho chuka tha . Naina abhi dhyan me lin thi , ki achanak se uski band aakho k samne ek bada hi akalpnkya drishya aagaya.

Naina ne dekha ki vo mandir k bajaye kisi alag hi sthan jo ek bahut bada medan h , us medan m ek ladki jiska sara sharir hara padne laga h , vo ek bahut bade khule medan me ek bistar per besudh leti hui h, naina ko uska chahra to saaf dikhayi na de raha tha , per fir bhi na jane kyu esa lag raha tha ki kuch to sambandh h uska us ladki se , or wo bhi bahut gahara .

Or sath ki sath naina ki ankhe bhi bahane lagi , us ladki ki us halat ko dekh , kyunki us ladki ka sharir pura hara pad chuka tha or uska antim samay najdik aane laga tha.

Naina khud se :- kon h ye , kyu mujhe esa lag raha ki ye meri koi apni h or ye kya inke sharir m to goblin ka jahar phel raha h (naina in sab ki expert thi to use goblin k bare m sab pata tha ).

Iska to koi ilaaj bhi ni , hey bhagwan ab m kya karu kese bachau inhe.

Tabhi naina k kano me ek garjana sunayi di.


Jyotiiiiiiiiiii....

Naina ne jab us aawaz ki or dekha to uski to mano sase tham si gayi , uski ankho me wo chamak aagayi , jese usne sara jahan pa liya ho, jab usne karan ko dekha.

Lekin ye khushi bhi jyada der tak na rahi jab usne karan ko aatmdah kerne ka prayas dekha.

Pahale to uski ye sab dekh ruh si kaamp gayi , use khud ko hi samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kisi anjan k liye kese itna vyakul h.

Lekin is baat ko side m rakhte hue naina ne priority karan or jyoti ko bachane ko di, use samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare.

Lekin jese hi usne jhumki k muh se jyoti ko pukarte hue ye suna ki ab bas aap hi rok sakti ho unhe , unhe bacha lo , aapke pyaar ko aapki jarurat h

Itna sunte hi naina ko samjh ni aaya ki achanak use kya sujha or wo jyoti ki or bhadi , use na jane kyu jhumki ki ye baat sun ker taklif to hui ki aapke pyaar ko aapki jarurat h , use ese feel hua ek baar ki jese uski duniya lut gayi ho.

Per fir bhi naina jyoti ki or bhadi or usne jyoti k sir p hath rakhte hue bola.

Naina :-. Aapko uthna hoga , unko aapki jarurat h.

Iske aage to aapko pata hi h kya hua or jab jyoti or karan gale mil rahe the to unka pyar dekh naina k na jane kyu aankho m pani aagaye, ab ye ansu un dono k pyaar ko dekh emotional hone k the ya kuch or ye to aage hi pata chalega.

Or jab karan ne naina ki or dekha or un dono ki najre takrayi , to naina ka man kerne laga ki jyoti ki tarah wo bhi lipat jaye karan se , lekin wo jese hi aage bhadi , uska dhyan aapne aap tut gaya or usne apne aap ko mandir m paya .

Or usike sath devi chaya k banaye us pratiroop jo naina k mind se jud rasatal me pahunchi thi , uska bhi kaam khatam hua or wo vilupt ho gayi.

Flashback end .

Naina man me :- kya tha wo sab kon the wo dono , jinhe takleef m dekh mujhe bhi rona aaya , esa lag raha tha ki kasht m vo h or dard mujhe ho raha h

Akhir kya sambhandh h mera unse.

Naina abhi inhi khayalo me thi ki uski tandra ghora baba ki aawaz se tuti.

Ghora baba :- ladki aager yu hi khayalo me khoyi rahi to puja ka muharat nikal jayega or fir intezaar kerna pure ek saal or tak apni maa se milne ka.

Naina or ghora baba dono sath me hi gupt navratra ki sadhna kerte the raat ko , isliye naina ne kisi ko raat ko rukne ko allowed ni kiya tha.

Naina :- ni ni baba ab or ni raha jata ab apni maa se dur , bhale hi mane apni maa ko ni dekha , lekin ek beti k liye uski maa ka kya mahtv hota h , ye keval ya to beti samjh sakti h ya fir usko janm dene wali ma.

Lekin baba prashn adhik h or utter kam , jo mere man ko vichlit ker rahe h.

Ghora baba :- ye vichlit man hi teri or samrat ki ladayi me teri sabse badi kamzori sabit ho sakta h ladki , ager samrat se jitna h to apne man ko sthir kerna sikh.

Naina :- per kese baba.

Ghora baba :- apni sari pareshani ma k charno m arpit ker de or maa ki puja m apna dhyan ekatrit ker.

Bhakti hi man ko sthir kerne ka sabse saral or kamyab marg h .

Apni chintao ko iske charno m rakh , teri sari chintaye mata chintpurni swyam har legi or tere prashno k utter jald hi tujhe gyaat honge

Ye bol baba naina k sir per hath rakh kuch mantra bolte h , jisse naina shant ho gayi or puja me lag gayi.

Back to the hero.

Yaha subah ho chuki thi jyoti ko chod sabhi devi chaya samet aman k kamre m mojud the , jyoti abhi apne kamre m aaram ker rahi thi, jaha karan or kaya ki bahas ho rahi thi.

Karan :- dekho sakhi baat ko samjhne ki koshis kero jo m kerne ja raha hu , usme bahut bade bade khatre aayenge , or mere sath rahane wala bhi is khatre ka shikar ho sakta h , isliye m ni chahta ki mere kaaran mera koi apna khatre m pade.

Kaya :- sakha ek or to aap mujhe apna bolte ho or dusri taraf esi baat ker mujhe paraya ker rahe ho.

Sakha aap hi to ho jisne mujhe apni sakhi banaya or dosti ka asli matlab bhi sikhaya.

Dosti ka sabse pahala dastoor hi hota h ki musibat m mitra ki dhal banna or aap mujhe rok ker khud hi mujhe apni dosti nibhane se rok rahe ho.

Ni sakha ni aaj to aapko apni sakhi ki sunni hi hogi , aaj m kuch na sunugi.

Kaya ne ye baat karan pe ek dost ki tarah hak jamate hue boli , karan ne kaya ko bahut samjhaya per wo na mani.

Phir aakhir me devi chaya ne hi karan ko kuch samjhate hue kaya ki baat maan lene ko kaha , or aakhir kaar karan ko kaya ki baat manni hi padi.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Bohat khoob to aakhir Naina ka KJ se milan hua chahe alag hi paristithi me ab yah triangle jo banne wala hai usme dekhna hoga kaun kis ko accept karega aur kaun kis ke milan ko kaisay lega.

 

[Aakash.]

Harry rocks ji, update was very good. Jyoti is feeling fine but not completely and the work that was to be done to cure jyoti completely, I hope Karan succeeds in it. Don't know what will happen in this new journey. The enemy is looking for a chance when to get a chance and eliminate both, But evil always loses as far as I know. Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamal ka flashback dikhaya h aapne.
Karan or Jyoti ka pyar , Mata Chhaya ka aashirwad.
Lekin jo unhone ne marg batlaya h usme dhero mushkile h .
Dekhe kaise paar pata h karan ?
Markesh ki yojna safal hoti h ya nahi ?
VP ka plan ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar

Update no :- 142
Aakhir kaya or karan k bich bahas ka kya kaaran tha , kyu karan kaya ko apne sath k liye mana ker raha tha , aaiye jante h

Short flashback

Karan or jyoti ko mata chaya or aman ne ne karan ko unke kamre me kuch der k liye akele chod diya , taki abhi jo incident hua h un dono k sath ,usse wo thoda ubhar sake.

Aman ne karan ko sahara de bistar se tek lagaker bethaya or kaya ne karan k side me hi leta diya or wo sab waha se chale gaye.

Unke jate hi jyoti uthker bethne ki kosis kerti h , jisme usko taklif hone lagi , to karan ne use sambhalte hue bola.

Karan :- are ye kya ker rahi h gudiya , uth kyu rahi ho , kuch chahiye to mujhe bata.

Lekin jyoti kuch na boli or jhat se apni thodi himmat juta ker karan k sine se lag gayi or ese chipAk gayi , ki yadi usne karan ko choda to uska bhai use chod k kahi chala jayega.

Esa ni tha ki jyoti kamzor dil ki thi ya darpok thi , balki wo karan se jyada majbut thi , lekin goblin ka jahar keval insan ko sharirik hi ni , balki mansik roop se bhi kamzor ker deta h or dusra kaaran karan ka suicide attempt kerna bhi tha.

Jyoti ki ye halat karan samjh raha tha uska dil roya ja raha tha , use lag raha tha ki aaj uski hi ek choti laparwahi k kaaran uski jan , uski gudiya ki ye halat hui h , jiske kaaran use khud pe gussa aaraha tha or uske ankho se ansu bahate hue jyoti k kandho pe girne lage.

Jyoti ne jese hi karan k ansuo ko mahasus kiya to usne jhat se apna sir utha ker dekha or karan ko jese rote hue dekha to wo tadaf uthi or apne kampte hatho se karan k chahre ko pakad boli.

Jyoti masumiyat se :- bhaiya aap ro kyu rahe ho , aapko chot to ni lagi , jisse aapko dard ho raha h

Ye bol jyoti karan ko check kerne lagi , jyoti ki is masumiyat ko dekh karan ka rona or tez ho gaya h.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas rote hue apni gardan hilata h , jese bol raha ho ki chot or pida uske sharir me ni uske dil m h.

Uski ankho se nikalte hui ashrudhara chikh chikh ker gawahi de rahi thi ki wo jhuti glani ki pida m jal raha h.

Jyoti apne bhai ki pida bina bole hi samjh gayi or wo boli.


Jyoti :- bhaiya please mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki koi galti ni h , ye to humara bhagya tha.

Karan :- kab tak yu hi bhagya or niyati ka sahare lete hue tum.meri galti ko chupaogi gudiya.

Sach to yahi h na ki aaj tera bhai har gaya , wo ek nakamyab insan h , are jo rakshak apne bahan ki hi raksha na ker saka wo is sansar ki raksha na ker sakta .

(Sisakte hue) mujhe maf ker de gudiya , meri laparwahi k kaaran hi teri ye haalat hui , kesa bhai hu m jo apni gudiya ki hi raksha na ker saka.

Mane jo ma ko vachan diya tha ki tere pe aane wale khatre ko pahale mujhse bhidna hoga , wo bhi nibha saka.

Ese hi ul julul bolte hue karan roye ja raha tha ,jyoti usko shant kerwane ki koshis ker rahi thi , per karan to chup hi ni ho raha tha , tab jyoti k pas ek hi rasta bacha.

Usne turant apne hoth karan k hoth pe rakh diye or bade hi passionate way me karan ko kiss kerne lagi.

Karan ne piche hatne ki kosis ki to jyoti ne uske chahre ko kas k pakad liya or kuch hi second m karan bhi sab kuch bhul jyoti ka sath dete hue prem ras m dub gaya.


Kuch der baad dono ki sans fulne lagi , to wo alag hue , karan fir kuch bolne hua , lekin usse pahale hi jyoti ne karan k sir ko apne sine me chupa liya or uske sir ko sahalate hue boli.

Jyoti (karan k sir ko sahalate) bola na babu ,jo hua aapki koi galti ni h usme , aap apne didu k ache bache ho na , chalo chup ho jao , ni to aapki didu bhi rone lag jayegi.

Kitna adhbhut pyar tha dono bhai bahan ka , janm se to dono judwa the , lekin fir bhi kabhi koi problem hoti ya dono me se koi bhi ese dukhi ya udas hota to dusra uska bada bhai ya bahan banker sambhalte .

Wahi abhi ho raha tha , indono ka pyaar duniya se alag ththa , jab bhi karan ese udaudas ho rota ya kabhi pareshan hota to jyoti ka ek badi bahan wala roop jag jata or wo apne bhai ko yu hi lad pyar kerke shant karwati jese uski judwa ni balki badi bahan ho or us time wo karan ko bhai ni balki babu kahakar bulati, kyunki asha bhi apne ankho k tare ko hamesha babu hi kaha kerti thi or us tarah jyoti apne bhai ko ek badi bahan k sath ek maa ka prem bhi deti , jiske kaaran karan turant shant ho jata

Or ba

Or jyoti ka ye tarika aaj bhi kamyab raha , jyoti k matratv or badi bahan k pyaar se bhare us alingan se karan turant shant hone laga or bacho ki tarah .

Karan. :- lo didu m chup ho gaya , please bas aap mat Lona mumma.

Jyoti muskurate hue karan k gal chumte :- ye ki na mele ache babu wali baat.

Karan ab jyoti k sneh k kaaran halka mahasus ker raha tha , jiske kaaran usne jyoti se or kaske chipak gaya , per usne yaha ek galti ker di.

Karan ne jeSe hi jyoti ko kaske uski pith se pakad apne se chipkana chaha uska hath , galti se uski us chot p lag gaya , jo chot use jab pahunchi thi , jab us saye ne uspe pith piche war kiya tha.

Jiske kaaran jyoti ki chikh nikal gayi.

Jyoti :- aaahhhhhhhhh bhaiiiii....

Or u

Or ye bolte hue vo karan k kaske chipak gayi or uski ankho m dard k ansu aagaye
jyoti ku chikhne se karan ghabra gaya or bola .


Karan :-. Gudiya tujhe or bhi kahi chot lagi h dikha to.

Karan ne ye bolte hue jyoti ko ghumaya or uske top ko utaar diya


( Jyoti ki nighty fat chuki thi yudh me to mata chaya ne use yaha late time hi magic se uske kapde change ker diye the) .

Jyoti ab uper se bilkul nirvastra thi , lekin karan ko sirf abhi apni bahan ki chinta thi.

Usne jese hi jyoti ki pith dekhi to uski ankho se fir ansu bahane lage , uski najuk si bahan , jiska sharir phulo se bhi komal tha , uspe ek ni bhaut se ghav the chote chote (goblins keval talvar se hi ni tiro se bhi lad rahe the or kamzor jyoti khud ko.unse defend na ker payi or jiske kaaran ye ghav ho gaye).

Lekin jab usne wo jagah dekhi jaha uska hath laga tha uski to mano ruh kamp gayi , apni jan apni gudiya k kharoch ane per bhi jo karan pura ghar sir pe utha leta tha , chot bhale hi jyoti ko lagti per dard use jyada hota.

Aaj usi bhai k samne uski bahan is dasha me thi , us saye ka waar itna khatarnak tha ki jyoti ki puri pith lahuluhan ho rakhi thi , ek bahut vada ghav ho chuka tha uski pith per.

Or goblin k jahar ki vajah se jyoti ki heal power bhi nishkriy ho chuki thi.

Karan k to anansu ruk hi ni rahe the , lekin ffir usne khud ko sambhala or uthne laga , lekin karan ko esa kerte dekh jyoti turant usse chipak gayi jese bol rahi ho ki bhai mujhe chod k mat jao.

Karan :- meri gudiya mera bacha , bhaiya aapko chod k kahi ni ja rahe m to bas aapke liye dawa lene ja raha tha

Per jyoti na kerte hue karan se chipki rahi , tabhi ek aawaz aayi.

Jab meri bachi bol rahi h to ruk jao n putra.

Is aawaz k sath waha mata chaya aaphunchi.

Karan :- per mata dekho na kitni chot lagi h ise dawai to lagani hogi na.

Mata chaya :- wahi to m leker aayi hu, lo laga do apne hatho se apne gudiya k dawai.

Jyoti ko tabhi dhyan aaya ki wo uper se nirvastra h or wo turant sharma k apna top dhundne lagi , tab mata haste hye boli .

Chaya :- are are ye to badi galat baat h , apni mata se bhala koi sharmata h , maa or beti to saheliya hoti h or saheli se bhala kya sharmana.

Vese bhi bache chahe kitne bade ho jaye maa k liye chote hi rahate h.

Mata chaya k samjhane se jyoti samjh gayi or relax hui , tab karan bola .

Karan :- chalo bate bahut hui ab davai lagaao.

Jyoti :- ni bhaiya isse bahut jalan hogi.

Karan :- kuch ni hoga mera bacha ,aapke bhaiya h na.

Karan ye bol jara sa lep apne hatho me laga jese hi jyoti ka ghav chuta h to jyoti dard se chihunkh uthi or karan k gale lag gayi.

Karan ne jyoti ko samjhaya per wo alag na hui to karan apni bahan ko apne sine se lagaye hue hi uske dawa lagane laga, jyoti ko jalan or dard to ho raha tha , lekin apni bhai ki baho me hone se use thodi rahat bhi mahasus ho rahi thi.


Lekin apni jyoti se jyada taklif karan ko ho rahi thi apni gudiya ko is halat me dekh , or sath sath uski ankho me gussa bhi saf saf najar aaraha tha.

Karan man hi man :- mahadev ki sogandh gudiya , teri ye halat kerne walo ko ager khun k ansu na rulaye to m tera bhai ni .

Ek ek ko mot se bhi buri jindagi dunga , koi ni bachega ab meri jaan p hath dalne wala koi ni bachega.

Karan ye sab sochte hue hi karan k ghavo per maraham ker use apni god m sulata h or jab jyoti so jati h to karan bola.

Karan :- mata ratri bahut ho gayi h , ab aap bhi vishram ker lijiye.

Chaya :- jyoti k ghavon per to malham tumne laga di putra per tumhare ghavon ka kya , chalo betho m tumhare ghavo per oshadhi laga deti hu

Karan kuch na bola or chupchap beth gaya or chaya karan k ghavo pe dawai lagane lagi.

Chaya :- putra apne uper k vastra utaro.

Lekin karan sharmane laga, lekin mata chaya ne apni shakti se karan ki t shirt gayab ker di or dawai lagate hue boli.

Chaya haste hue :- tum bilkul shani pe gaye ho, bilkul us jese hi ho , or ho bhi kyu na aakhir ansh bhi to usike ho

Karan ne jese hi shani dev ka naam suna uska mood off ho gaya or use vo din yaad aane laga , jab shani dev ne uski maa k hatyare yani k uske baap ko hi uske hatho se bachaya tha , jise karan kabhi ni bhul sakta tha or wo abhi tak shani dev se rusht tha.

Karan baat badalte hue :- mata ab mujhe nind aarahi h .

Mata chaya sab samjh gayi or wo bhi dukhi ho gayi.

Chaya man me :- putra m samjh sakti hu tum per kya bit rahi h , parantu jis din tumhe satya ka gyan hoga usdin swatah hi tumhari sari narajgi khatm ho jayegi.

Chaya muskurate hue :- thik h mere bacha .

Chaya karan ko bed pe letati h or use pyaar se sahalate hue sula deti h.

Aaiye ek najar markesh pe bhi daal lete h.

Markesh or kubdi dono ek sath ek bahut hi bhayanak jungle k bicho bich prakat hote h.

Kubdi :- malik hum yaha kyu aaye h.

Markesh :- apna muh band rakho or chalo mere sath.

Itna bol markesh chalne laga or kubdi uske piche piche chalne lagi.

Kuch dur chalne k baad aage ka rasta band tha , kyunki samne ek pahad tha.

Lekin markesh muskurate hue apna hath aage kerta h jisse ek roshni nikal samne pahad pe padi or tabhi dekhte hi dekhte waha un dono k.samne ek gufa najar aane lagi.

Darasal ye gufa ka dwar adrishy tha , lekin markesh ne apni shakti se esa ker dikhaya.

Markesh gufa k ander chal pada or piche kubdi bhi.

Gufa k ander pahunch markesh ander chilaya


Markesh :-Vrishchika....

Markesh ki aawaz k sath ek bahut hi bhayanak bhesh bhusa , parantu dikhne me sunder orat prakat hui, lekin ye kya wo markesh k samne ni balki uske pith piche thi.

Orat :- vrishchika ka pranam swikar kare yuvraj.

Kubdi gusse se :- teri ye majal ki tu maharaj se ese baat karegi.

Ye bol kubdi uski or ghumne hi wali thi ki markesh ne uska hath pakad bola.

Markesh :- ni kubdi.esi galti bilkul bhi mat kerna , verna bahut buri mot marogi.

Ye bol markesh.esa kyu tha uska kaaran batata h , jise sun kubdi bhi kamp gayi.

Markesh :- vrishcika or kubdi suno filhal to wo insan jo bhi h vo bhale hi hamari najar se bache hue h , per m itna to samjh chuka hu unka maksad trishastra ko hasil kerna h .

Markesh trishastra ki janch kerne d2 or vikral k pas gaya tha , jaha use pata chal gaya ki usne trishastra k 2 hise kho diye h or uske khas aadmiyo ko insano ne hi mara h.

2 hisse to unko mil chuke h , or vo ab 3sra hissa lene bhi jarur aayenge.

Vrishchika :- lekin is baar vo bach ni payenge yuvraj , kyunki ab unka samna dayano ki rani se hoga .

Markesh :- m bhi yahi chahta hu vrishchika, or uske liye mane ek upay bhi socha h.

Ye bol vo apna idea kubdi or vrishchika ko bhi sunata h , jise sun vo 3no hasne lage or apne plan ko anjam dene ki teyariyo me lag gaye.

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Subah karan or jyoti apne aadat anusar jaldi uthe ,karan ne jyoti ko aaram kerne k liye khub bola ,per aaj somvar tha or vo humesha ki tarah aaj mandir jana chahti thi.

Jyoti jab na mani to karan ne use god me leker madir gaya or puja kerne laga.

Puja k baad vo dono sabke sath nashta kerte h , lekin aaj koi hasi majak ni hota kyunki sab jyoti ki halat ko leker tension me the.

Nashte k baad karan jyoti ko sula deta h or fir sab aman k kamre m milte h

Karan :- mata ab bataiye kya kerna hoga mujhe apni gudiya ko pahale jesa kerne k liye

Mata chaya :- putra mahadev ki kripa se putri jyoti us vish se bach to gayi h parantu , vo vish uske tam me abhi bhi vidyaman h jo use swasth ni hone de raha

Isliye yadi hume ager jyoti ko swasth kerna h to us vish ko uske tan se nikalna hoga , or vish ko nikalne ka ek hi upaay h vo ye h ki yadi lekin uske liye tumhe pishach lok jana hoga , jo goblins ki rajdhani h.

Karan :- ager meri jyoti ko bachane k liye mujhe yamalok bhi jana pade to m jaunga mata , aap kripya upaay bataiye.

Chaya :- to suno putra ,pishach lok jaker tumhe goblin k raja ko prast kerna hoga ,or ........

Parantu dhyan rahe putra pishach lok bahut hi mayavi sthan h or jyoti k shaktihin hone se tum bhi kamzor ho gaye ho , isliye tumhe waha har kaam badi savdhani se kerna hoga, waha sankat bahut jyada ho sakta h


Karan :- sankat chahe jitna bhi bada ho mata , ye karan apni jyoti ko bachane k liye use jarur par karega or un papiyo ko unke karmo ka dand dega ye dandnayak.

Pishach lok k shetano karmo ka fal pane ko saj ho jao.

Ye bolte hue karan apne dand nayak roop m aagaya .

Tabhi kaya jid kerte hue bol padi.

Kaya :- m bhi aapke sath chalungi.

Jis per karan or kaya ki bahas ho gayi.

Tab karan ko chaya ne samjhaya.

Chaya :- kaya ko apne sath le jao karan , kyunki is safar me tumhe kaya ki avashyakta padegi .

Kaya unme se hi ek thi to vo waha tak pahuchne ka or pishach lok k har ek marg se bhi parichit h , uska sath tumhare liye labhdayak hi hoga.

Chaya mata k samjhane per karan maan gaya or kaya ko sath lejane ko teyar ho gaya.

Wahi dusri or.

Vp ek baar fir apni haar ko dekh bhokla chuka tha or wo tod fod kerte hue chila raha tha.

Vp :- shaniiiiiiiiiiiiii , ni chodunga tujhe , ek baar fir tune meri yojna ko vifal ker diya.

Parantu samjh ni aaraha ki wo jyoti us vish k prabhav se bachi kese , aakhir konsi shakti h vo jo meri najro se chupi hui h , jabki is sansar ki har ek vyakti har ek shakti se m bhali bhanti parichit hu.

Kher jo bhi ho shani tune or tere us rakshak jyoti k prano ki raksha to ker li , lekin m janta hu ki vo rakshak apni bahan ko swasth kerne k liye kya karega.

Vp :- jalasur prakat ho.

Tabhi waha pani ka daitya prakat hua.

Vp :- jao jalasur yahi uchit samay h vo rakshak abhi nirbal h , ant ker do uska marg me hi , dhyan rahe wo pishach lok ni pahuchna chaiye

Jalasur :- ji maharaj.

Ye bol jalasur waha se gayab ho gaya or vp bhi apne kaksh m chala gaya

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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