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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Last benchers

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Kaya ko apni janm ka jhalk dekhna spno Mai mujhe aisa lgta hai Karan SE ho naho uske family SE Judi Hui hai.
Sonam ko v apne janm ki rahshya dikhna .Kiya ye v Karan ki family SE Judi Hui hai..
Sonam Avi tk govind ko nhi pehchan payi ..
Sonam ki Kon si parkisha li ja rhi hai dekhna dilchsp hoga..
Karan ki v apne janm ka jhalk dikha sath sath Sonam ka v ..
Shuruti je andar kali aatna kaise aai .
Tantrik laxman rekha kaise par ki..
Wait rahega next update ka
 

Radhe

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Nice update yr maza aa rha hai dekhte hai aage. Kya hota hai
Mujhe lag rha hai karan ne apni sis ko theek karne le ja rha hai wahi vrindavan me bhagwan shree krishna ji sharthi bane huye hai
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Ek ek line aap ne soch samjh ke likhi hai maza aa rha hai
Aaisa lag rha hai bhagwan ke darshan ho gaye hame bhi
Maza aa gya bhai
Waiting for next update
 

Iron Man

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Update no :- 164
Sham ko doctors radha ka ek baar fir full body check up kerne k baad radha ko ghar le jane ki permission de dete h.

Karan radha k room m aata h or kavya or garima se bolta h.

Karan :- choti maa , bhua ek good news h , apni radha ki sari reports normal h or hum use abhi ghar le ja sakte h.

Kavya khush hote hue :-. Ye to bahut achi khabar sunayi tune lalla , acha h chalo radha bitiya apne ghar p aram keregi to jald hi thik ho jayegi.

Ye sun radha udass ho gayi ki use firse karan se kuch din k liye dur hona padega , abhi abhi hui sulah hone k kaaran wo kuch din or time karan k sath spend kerna chahti thi.

Karan ne radha ka udas chahra dekha ni gaya or usne sari baat samjhte hue kavya se kaha.

Karan :- choti ma , aapse ek request h.

Kavya karan ko pyar se puchkarte hue :- bol na mera bacha.

Karan :- choti ma , m kuch din bhua k ghar rahana chahta hu please , taki radha ka m khayal bhi rakh saku or use akelapan bhi feel na ho please choti ma.

Kavya :- ha beta jarur , mujhe bhala kya harj hoga isme , lekin teri bhua se to puch le.

Tabhi garima jo bathroom gayi hui thi , wo room me enter kerte hue boli.

Garima - kesi baat kerti ho aap bhabhi , karan kya sirf aapka hi lalla h , are ye to mera pyara guddu mera bacha h ye , isliye wo ghar jitna radha ka h utna hi karan ka bhi.

Radha ye sun khush ho gayi or karan bhi lekin karan ne ek baat notice ki thi kal raat jab uski bhua ne use mara tha, uske baad se garima usse bajre chura rahi thi , karan ne is baare m baad m baat kerne ka soch chup rahata h.

Lekin karan k is fesle se kuch log thode udass bhi the , jo or koi ni sonam or jyoti hi thi.

Karan jyoti k dil ka hal samjh gaya or kamre se bahar aaker jyoti ka intezaar kerne laga.

Kuch minute baad jab jyoti karan k piche piche aayi to karan ne uske galo ko pyaar se .

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , meri jaan aaj udaas kyu najar aarahi h.

Jyoti :- aap to ese puch rahe ho , jese kuch jante hi na ho.

Karan - aree ?

Jyoti ;- bhai aap to chale jaoge bhua k ghar per fir mera kya hoga bhai , aap to jante hi ho na , apke bina mujhe ek pal bhi chen ni milta.

Karan halke se haste hue :- are meri bholi jaan , bas itni si baat , tum to ese udaas ho rahi ho jese bhua tumhe ghar m aane hi na degi ya mane tujhe mana kiya h.

Jyoti khush hote hue :- kkya sachi , to chaliye bhai , der kis baat ki.

Karan :- kya aaj hi .

Jyoti :- kyu bhai aaj m kya problem h.

Karan :- mujhe to koi problem ni , per aapko ni lagta aap kuch bhul rahi ho dand nayika ji , koi adhura kaam.

Karan ka ishara tha raj or uske pita ka dand ki or , jo kal raat jyoti ne adhura choda tha.

Jyoti karan ka ishara samjhte hue boli

Jyoti :- oh ha , acha yaad dilaya bhai , ab wakt aagaya h un kamino ka kaam tamam kerne ka or is baar ye kam m hi karungi bhai , aap bich m mat aaiyega

Karan :- are pagli jab hi to mane kaha tumhe hi ye karya h.

Jyoti karan k ekbar gale lagti h or fir wo dono lag jate h radha ko ghar le jane ki teyari me.

Karib adhe ghante baad sari formalities k baad ambulance ki help se radha ko ghar le jaya jata h.

Karan khud radha ko apni baho me leke uske room me leker jata h or use khana khilakar use sula deta h dawai deker.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- samrat haveli.

Megha humesha ki tarah hi usi ped k niche bethi thi or apne aradhya ka smaran kerte hue apni aajadi ki pratiksha ker rahi thi .

Lekin aaj usne notice kiya ki trijata ,yani wo rakshasi jise khud samraat ne megha ki rakhwali k liye rakha tha , aaj wo bahut hi udaas or tension m najar aarahi thi.

Megha trijata se :- kya baat h amma , aaj tum itni chintit kyu najar aarahi ho.

Trijata khud ko normal dikhane ki kosis kerte hue :- ni to beti m tumse esa kisne kaha.

Megha :- ama beti bhi bolti ho or sach chupake paraya bhi kerti ho.

Megha k baar bar force kerne k baad trijata boli.

Trijata :- beti m bhi usi kaaran chintit or udas hu beti jis kaaran tum ho , mane tumhe bataya tha na ki m is dusht ki sirf isliye seva kerti hu kyunki isne mere bete ko kaid kiya hua h , bas beti usiki chinta or duri ki vajah se hi vyathit hu m beti.

Megha trijata ka dard ko bhali bhanti samjh sakti thi.

Trijata nam ankho se :- na jane kab vo samay aayega beti jab m apne bete ko firse apne hriday se laga paungi or uspe apni mamta luta paungi, itne sal ho gaye use dekhne ko bhi taras gayi hu m.

Ye bol trijata rone lagi , megha use lagate hue boli :- mat roiye ama , ishwer pe bharosa rakhiye wo sab thik ker denge , dekhna bahut hi jald jab meri bachi aayegi , apne dosto or ......... K sath jab na sirf wo mujhe yaha se mukt karayengi , apitu us dusht samraat ka ant kerte hue aapko bhi aapke bete se jarur milengi ama.

Megha abhi santvana de hi rahi thi ki ek rakshasi bhagte hue trijata k pas aayi or boli.

Rakshasi ghabrayi hui si :- trijata trijata , ek buri khabar h

Trijata :- kya hua tum itni ghabrayi hui kyu ho.

Rakshasi hafte hue :- wo samar ,....

Trijata ghabra k :- kya hua samar ko.

Samar trijata k usi bete ka nam tha jise samrat ne ked kiya hua tha.

Rakshasi :- samar maharaj ki ked se nikalkar bhag chuka h.

Trijata :- kya sach.

Wo ye khabar sun k khush ho gayi thi ki uska beta ab ked m ni h.

Trijata :- are ye to achi khabar h per tu itni ghabrayi kyu hui h.

Rakshas :- ye achi ji buri khabar h trijata , tantrik kubdi bahut gusse m h or usne shakal or uske seniko ko piche laga diya h ye adesh deker ki wo jaha mile use wahi khatam ker diya jaye.

Trijata shakal ka naam sun buri tarah kamp jati h , kyunki shakal samrat ka sabse vafadar or sabse takatwar admi ya yu kaho ek darinda tha , jiske ander raham ya daya nam ki koi chij na thi .

Wo 7feet ka wo ek shetan tha ,jiske hath ek 6 mahine k bache tak ko marte hue na kampe , uska din bhi jabtak pura na hota tha , jab tak wo ek insan ko roj kha na leta or har roj use ek ni ladki chahiye hoti thi ka jab tak rape karta , jab tak mar wo na jati or wo apne shikar ko bahut hi buri mot marta tha.

Ye baat trijata bhali bhanti janti thi or ye bhi ager shakal kisi k piche pad jata to jab tak usko mar na de chen se na bethata.

Jisse wo buri tarah ghabra gayi or rone lagi , megha use kese na kese samjha ker shant to karwaya lekin ek ma kese shant rah sakti thi jab use pata ho ki uski olad k pran sankat me h.

Wahi usi mahal ki dusri or

Kubdi gusse se paharedaro pe chilla rahi thi

Kubdi :- bevkufo kisi kaam k ni ho tum , ek sirf ek kaam sompa tha malik ne tumhe , us ladke ko ked kerne ki pahare dari k liye or tum wo tak na ker sake.

Ek senik kamptee hue :- hume maaf ker do tai , hum to puri mustadi se us pe najar rakhe hue the , fir bhi wo sala pata ni kese wo bhag gaya.

Kubdi :- maaf ? Maaf ni malik saaf ker denge tum sab ko or sath m mujhe bhi yadi humne use jald na dhund khatam na kiya to kyunki malik bhale hi apni sadhna m lin ho , lekin unhe is ghatna ka gyaat avashya ho gaya hoga.

Isliye tum sab jao or madad kero shakal ki us samar ko dhundne me ni to malik mujhe mare na mare tum sab k sir m jarur kat ker latka dungi.

Kubdi ka ye adesh sun waha se bhage bhage gaye.

Back to the hero.

Radha ko sulane k baad karan garima k room me jata h to pata h ki garima ki pith gate ki or h or wo apni company k kaam m itna vyast h ki use karan k ane ka abhas bhi na hua

Karan dhime se garima k piche jata h or piche se use gale lag bolta h.

Karan garima k kandhe pe apna sir rakh :- meri pyari bhua kya ker rahi h.

Garima apna chahra thoda ghuma ker karan k bal sahala ker :- kuch ni beta bas office ka thoda kaam ker rahi hu.

Karan :- kya bhua aap bhi na bahut boring ho , aapka itna pyara or ek lota bhatija pahali baar aapke yaha aaya h or aap ho ki kaam le ke bethi ho.

Garima :- acha mera bacha isliye itna naraj najar aaraha h (files ko side me rakhte hue) ,aaja mela bacha apni bhua k pas.

Ye bol garima ne apni bahe fela di or karan garima k gale lag, uski god m sir rakh k so let gaya.

Garima pyaar se karan k sir k hath firate hue use bate kerne lagi.

Garima :- acha mere pyare bhatije ji , ye batao ki meri bahu se kab mila rahe ho mujhe.

Karan chonkte hue :- bahu ?

Garima halke se chapat lagate hue :- are budu m tumhari gf k bare m baat ker rahi hu

Karan sharmate hue :- kya bhua aap bhi , meri koi gf ni h.

Ab karan abhi kese bol sakta tha ki uski gf uski sagi judwa bahan jyoti hi h or abhi to or bhi h line m.

Garima :- m ni manti mera itna handsome bhatija h or uski koi gf na ho.

Karan :- m sach hi bol raha hu bhua meri sach me hi koi gf ni or aap to janti hi ho na jin halato me m or jyoti bade hue , un sab k chakkar m na to in sab ka na to humare pas kabhi samay raha or na hi kabhi man hua.

Karan ne ye aawaz bade hi dukh k sath kahi thi , jise sun garima bhi udaas ho gayi or use apne bhatije or bhatije k sath hue har atyachar or unhe mile kast ka dhyan aate hi uski ankhe nam ho gayi.

Or sabse jyada dukh or rona to use is baat se aaraha tha ki anjane m or avesh m hi sahi usne bhi apne bhatije ko kal bahur hi bura bhala kaha or yaha tak ki uspe hath bhi uthaya.

Jise yaad aate hi uski ankho se nir bahane lage , isi kaaran se hi to wo karan se aaj najre chura rahi thi hospital me.

Garima k ansu jab karan k chahre pe gire to karan ko ahasas hua ki uski bhua ro rahi h.

Karan turant utha or chintit ho usse pucha :- bhua aap ro kyu rahi ho.

Tab garima rote hue karan se kal k vyavhar k liye mafi mangti h to karan bola.

Karan :- are bhua aap bas itni si baat pe ro rahi ho , m to us baat ko sbka bhul chuka tha , kya ho gaya aapne mere uper hath utha diya to aap to meri pyari bhua ho , meri maa saman ho , aapka to hak banta h ye , isliye please mat roiye na bhua ni to m bhi ro dunga.

Karan ne ye baat bilkul bache jese bolte hue roni si surat bana keta h , jise dekh garima ko uspe bahut pyaar aata h or wo karan ko gale laga keti h.

Karan kafi der garima k gale lage unhe shant karata h , tabhi use ek idea aata h apni bhua ka mood change kerne ka.

Karan :- bhuaa

Garima :- ha mera bacha.

Karan :- bhua aapko ek secret batau , promise kero aap kisi ko ni bataoge.

Garima excited hote hue :- pakka wala promise.

Karan :- bhua aapka guess bilkul sahi tha (sharmane ki acting kerte hue ) meri ek gf h.

Garima karan k gal khichte hue :-are wah mera bacha to bada ho gaya , naam kya h uska.

Karan :- naam m kya rakha h bhua , m aapko uski photo hi dikha deta hu na.

Ye bol karan apna phone m kuch khol ker garima ko pakda deta h , jise dekh garima chonk si jati h.

Kyunki karan ne apne phone ka front camera khol k diya tha.

Garima :- are beta ye kya h , ye too...

Karan :- ha to yahi to h meri pyari si gf , meri beautiful bua.

Garima sharmate hue :- hat pagal , mujh jesi budi tere ko kaha se beautiful najar aane lagi.

Karan :- kya bhua, kisne kaha aap bhudi ho gayi ho , balki m to kahata hu aap to din b din or beautiful hoti ja rahi ho.

Mera to bas chake to m kal hi aapse shadi ker lu.

Garima pahale to sharmayi or fir jhuta gussa dikhate hue boli :- thahar badmash teri m karati hu abhi shadi apni bhua se hi flirt kerta h.

Ye bol garima karan pe tut padi or usko bed pe gira ker use gudgudi kerne lagi.

Karan haste hue:- hihi, bhua please ruk jao .

Garima karan ko gudgudi kerte hue :- ab bol badmash ab karega shetani.

Karan haste hue :- ni karunga bhua, aah please sorry.

Kuch der karan ko gudgudi kerne k bad garima ne karan k side m hi let gayi or karan ko apne sine me daba ker apne pas hi sula liya.

Sham ko bhi garima ne karan ko apne hatho se khana khilaya or fir wo din bhi vese hi nikal gaya.

Agli subah

Radha ab kuch thik thi , isliye wo hall me karan k sine pe leti hui tv dekh rahi thi ki tabhi tv pe news ane lagi

Anchor :- breaking news , mashoor industrialist mr rathore or unke bete ki lashe unhike ghar m bahut hi buri halat m payi gayi or sath me hi unke pas me hi rakhe mile kuch files or cd jinse saf saf pata chalta h ki un dono k kayi ger kanuni dhande the or sath me unka hath human trafficking or prostitution racket m bhi tha.

Police tahkikat me lagi apradhi ko dhundne me lekin unhe koi surag ni mila h

Ji ha dosto ye raj or uska baap ab is duniya m ni rahe the , kal raat jyoti ne unka kam tamam ker dala tha or sath me uske sare kale dhando or unse jude logo ka bhanda for dala tha.

Sath me hi jyoti ne apna vo hisab bhi chukta ker dala tha vo purana jo salo pahale adhura rah gaya tha .

Kyunki raj wo shaks tha jisne ek samay karan or jyoti k pyare rishte ko bhut kal m nasht kerne ki kosis ki thi kuch galat fehmi k chalte

Jisse unse juda koi na bache.

Tv per jab raj or uske baap ki tasvire dikhayi jati h to radha unhe pahachan jati h or ghabra bhi jati h.

Lekin karan use sambhal leta h , fir garima dono bhai bahan ko naste k liye bulati h to karan radha ko god m liye dining table pe leke jata h.

Radha k liye garima ne daliya banaya tha , jise dekh radha ka mooh bigad gaya.

Radha :- bhaiya mujhe ye ni khana .

Karan :- ni betu galat baat aapki tabiyat sahi ni h na isliye aapko yahi khana khana padega.

Radha :- per bhai.

Karan :- per wer kuch ni , chLo aaj m apni barbie dol ko apne hatho se khana khilaunga.

Ye bol karan radha ko bacho ki tarah bahala fusla k khilane laga , tabhi unke kano me ek aawaz ayi.

Are bhai koi hume bhi itne pyar se khana khila do.

Karan or radha ne us aawaz ki or dekha to paya ki jyoti bhi apne vade k anusar apna kam pura kerke aachuki thi.

Jise dekh radha karan or garima khush ho gaye.

Fir 3no bhai bahan sath mil ker breakfast kerte h.

Tabhi garima ko ek phone aata h or jise attend ker kuch baste kerne k baad garima sabse boli.

Garima :- bacho tum ghar ka dhyan rakhna m office jaker asti hu.

Radha :- ye kya mumma , kal hi to aap aayi ho or aaj hi sidha office.

Karan :- radha sahi bol rahi h bhua , aapko thoda rest kerna chahiye , office me juhi ji sab sambhal hi legi hi na.

Garima radha ko samjhate hue :- sorry beta m janti hu ki aajkal m tumhe bilkul time ni de pa rahi hu.

Per kya karu beta ye project humari company k liye bahut important h , isliye.

Karan bich m :- bhua mane apko pahale bhi kaha tha na ki ab aPko kisi bhi kam k liye pareshan hone ki jarurat ni h kyunki aapka beta aagaya h na.

Ap esa kijiye aap yaha radha k sath rukiye , usko abhi aapki jarurat h office ka kam m or juhi ji dekh lenge

Jyoti :- bhai m bhi aapke sath chalti hu.

Garima :- are beta tum kyu taklif kerte ho m manage ker lungi na.

Lekin karan or jyoti ni mane or unhone garima ko ghar pe rukne k liye mana ker teyar hone lage office k liye.

Karan or jyoti jaldi se teyar ho office pahunch jate h , in 3 mahino me dono m kafi changes aagaye the, isliye unhe koi pahachan bhi ni pata.

Karan reception pe jata h jaha use wahi receptionist milti h jo is din mili thi , jab karan interview k liye aaya tha.

Karan use juhi k bare m puchta h to wo karan ko na pahachan puchti h.

Receptionist :- yes, wo to apne cabin m hi h , aap bataiye sir , how can I help you.

Abhi karan ise pahale aage kuch bolta isse pahale hi waha juhi aapahunchi or karan se boli.

Juhi :- yes, boliye m hi hu juhi verna, yaha ki genral manager

Jyoti :- kya mam aapne bhi hume ni pahachana.

Juhi :- ji .

Karan :- are mam hum wahi employes h aapke mr and mrs sharma, hehe.

Karan ne jab mr and mrs sharma bola to juhi ko dhyan aajata h karan or jyoti ka , kyunki interview k time usne karan or jyoti ko husband wife samjh ker ese hi bulaya tha

Juhi khushi se :- karan jyoti ye tum ho , omg m bata ni sakti kitna khush hu tumhe sahi salamat dekh.

Ye bol wo karan or jyoti se gale mili, juhi sach me bahut khush thi , kyunki karan or jyoti yaha kam kerte the , tab juhi unse kafi impress hui thi or unka apas me relation bhi boss or employee se jyada friends jesa ho gaya tha.



Juhi majak kerte hue :- welcome mam and sir.

Karan :- are juhi mam ye aap hume sir or mam kyu bol rahi ho.

Juhi :- ab aap humari boss k bhatije bhatiji ho to humare boss hi hue na .

Jyoti :- are ni ni juhi ji , please ese bolker hume sharminda na kare , ye company ki boss kalane layak sirf bhua hi h , kyunki unki hi mahanat se hi ye company aaj itni successful h.

Karan :- ha juhi ji , jyoti sahi kah rahi h , or hum aaj bhi as a employees hi yaha aaye h , taki hum us project pe kam ker sake to please aap pahale jese hi humse normal behave kijiye.

Juhi :- ok ok baba , thik h lekin aakar hum me se na koi boss na koi employee , abse hum 3no friends banke kam karenge.

(Karan ki ir hath aage bhadate hue friends )

Karan hath milate hue :- friends.

Karan jese hi juhi se hath milata h , fir karan or jyoti juhi k sath apne purane cabin me pahunche to unki purani yade taza ho gayi.

Kuch der idher udher ki bato k baad karan or jyoti lag gaye us kaam k liye jiske liye wo aaye the.

Juhi ne us project se related file karan ko laker deti h or jese hi karan or jyoti us file ko padhte h to ek second wo chonk jate h fir agle hi pal unke chahre pe muskan aajati h.

Karan jyoti se man hi man khushi se :- aakhir wo time aahi gaya gudiya.

Jyoti :- ha bhai , m to bahut excited hu , ab hume jald se jald teyariyo m lag jana chahiye us sab ki.

Karan :-. Tune bilkul sahi kaha gudiya.

Juhi karan ko muskurate hue dekh :- karan please be serious ye project humari company k liye bahut important h , m itni tension m hu or tum yu has rahe ho.

Karan :- of ho juhi ji , be relax aap jesi beautiful lady yu tension m achi ni lagti .

Juhi apni tarif sun khush hote hue :- thanks for the compliment , by the way handsome to tum pahale hi the , ab to or dashing or hot ho chuke ho .

Koi gf banayi ki ni.

Karan ankh marte hue :- ni yaar , aap jesi koi mili hi ni

Karan yu hi majak majak me flirt ker raha tha ki jyoti ne uski kamar me chuti kat di.

Karan uchalte hue :- aah , kya ker rahi h jyoti.

Jyoti karan ko ankh dikhate hue :- kya hua bhai mane kaha kuch kiya, jarur kisi chiti ne kata hoga.

Karan dhime se :- chiti ne ni , jungli billi ki karamat h.

Jyoti :- kya bole bhai , m suni ni

Karan hadbadate hue :- kuch bhi to ni,m bol raha tha ki hume jaldi se is project ko complete karna chahiye

Jyoti :- m bhi to yahi bol rahi thi bhai , kam per hi dhyan do.

(Karan k pass aaker dhime se ) ni to jungli bili fir se kat legi.

Karan ye sun fir se hadbada gaya or kam me lag gaya or jyoti bhi dhime se hasi or fir kaam m lag gayi

Aaiye ek najar naina pe bhi dal lete h.

Preety ko veer k sath bhejne k baad naina bhi nikal hi rahi thi ki piche se ghora baba ne aawaz di.

Ghora :- naina beti jara suno to

Naina mudte hue :- ji maharaj kahiye.

Ghora :- ladki m janta hu ye waqt sahi ni h parantu karya bahut hi matavpoorn.

Naina :- koi baat ni baba aap adesh kijiye.

Ghora :- beti kal mahashtami ki vishesh pooja k liye kuch jadi butiya or samagri ki avashyakta h jo abhi hi chahiye hogi

Naina :- per baba , is samay to sari dukane band hogi na.

Ghora :- janta hu beti parantu mujhe un samagri ki avashyakata subah braham muhurat m avashyakta padegi.

Isliye ye kam tumhe abhi kerna hoga , is shahar ke dakshin bhag ka bahari area h wo ek jungle se juda hua h .

Usi jungle m tumhe wo podhe mil jayenge.

Esa bol naina ko ghora baba un phodo ki pahachan batata h.

Naina bhi kuch soch ker khushi khushi jane ko teyar ho jati h, or baba se agya leker nikal padi.

Naina apni jeep se kafi speed se us jungle ki or ja rahi thi , kuch der baad vo us area m enter hi kiya tha ki tabhi achanak...


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Note :- friends mane raj wale part ko short m isliye skip ker diya h kyunki ek to wese hi kafi slow chal rahi thi or uper se koi khas lena dena bhi na tha uska aage ki story se.

Fir bhi aapko lagta h or aap chahte h ki m uski puri story detail m likhu to aap comment kerke jarur bataiyega or ha yadi ager esa ni chahte to ek good news h aap sab k liye.
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Ha update jarur late ho rahe h , per ap chinta mat kijiye ye story complete jarur hogi , bakiyon ki tarah m ise adhuri chod aapko nirash ni karunga.

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Update no :- 165
Naina abhi raste m apni jeep doda hi rahi thi ki achanak se naina ne notice kiya ki bagal m pade uske bag se bahut tez roshni nikal rahi h.

Naina ne gadi ko side m roka or apna bag khol ker dekha to paya ki bag m rakha uska naya hathiyar yani ki wo trishul chamak raha tha.

Naina us trishul ko apne hath me leker use ghurte hue :- ye naya ashtr itna chamak kyu raha h , maharaj k anusar to ye purn roop se abhi teyar bhi ni h .

(Naina sochte hue ) hm yad aaya ,us raat ko jab piya se mile the usse pahale bhi ye yu hi chamak raha tha.

Iska matlab ye h ki iska chamakna koi bevajah ni h , jarur koi na koi rahasya to h iske piche .

Maharaj se hi is bare m puchungi

Ye sochte hue naina apna trishul wapas apne bag m rakh hi rahi thi ki tabi uske kaano m ek chinkh gunji

AaaaaaaaaaAahhhhhhhhhhj

Jise sun naina chonk gayi .

Naina :- itni raat ko jungle m kon ho sakta h.

Tabhi dobara use ek chink khi aawaz aayi , jise sunte hi naina apne trishul ko liye hue hi hue jeep se utari or us aawaz ki disha ki or bhagne lagi.

Naina khud se :- ye waqt ye sab sochne ka ni h naina , jarur koi musibat m h , mujhe uski madad kerni chahiye.

Naina jungle k kuch hi ander pahunchi thi ki usne paya ki samne ek ladka jo bahut hi buri halat me h uska sharir lahu luhan h or vo behosh hone ki kagar p h , wo jamin per pada hua h or 5 shetan (jo dikhne m insan jese hi the , per unki laal ankhe or bhayanak lambe lambe dant is baat ki gawahi de rahe the ki wo insan to bilkul bhi ni h ) us ladke ko buri tarah pit rahe h.

Unme se ek shetan jo unka leader tha wo bola :- sale kya socha tha itni asani se humse bache bhag jayega , sale bahut bhagaya h tune , ye to hume adesh ni , werna tere ko yahi gad dete

(Apne ek sathi se ) utha lo sale ko, or le chalo

Ye bol wo shetan kuch aage chala hi tha ki tabhi ek dhamake k sath use ek chik sunayi di.

Jisse sun wo chonk gaya or jese hi piche muda to usne paya ki ek ladki jiske hath me trishul h , wo us ladke k aagr khadi h or uska wo sathi jise usne ladke ko uthane ko kaha tha wo kahi dur gira jal raha h or uski chinkhe pure watawaran m gunj rahi h.

Ye ladki or koi ni balki naina hi thi , jisne jab us shetan ko us ladke ki or badte hue jese hi dekha apne trishul se uski or prahar kita , jisse ek roshni nikal jese hi shetan k admi se takrayi wo udte hue ped se takraya or jalne laga.

Naina ek bar to khud apne naye hathiyar ki shakti dekh kee chonk gayi per fir usne khud ko sambhala.

Shetan gusse se :- kon h tu ladki teri himmat kese hui mere admi ko marne ki.

Naina :- same sawal m tum sab se puchhti hu , kon ho tum log , or kyu pade ho iske piche.

Ladka jisne abhi abhi naina ki takat ko dekha tha , use ek umid ki kiran najar aane lagi , wo rote hue bola.

Ladka rote hue :- bahan please mujhe bacha lo , verna ye log mujhe mar dalenge .

Bahan sun ker naina kuch bhavuk si ho gayi or vo us ladke se boli .

Naina :- aap ghabrao mat bhai , jab tak m jinda hu , ye shetan apko chu bhi na payenge.

Shetan chilaya :- band kero ye apna bhai bahan ka natak.

(Naina se) e ladki aakhiri moka de raha hu , chupchap yaha se ulte per lot ja , ni to teri lash bhi tere ghar walo ko .

Naina :- jaungi to m sahi , lekin inko sath leker.

Shetan apne baki 3 sathiyo se :- bahut akad h sali m , bata do sali ko kon h hum .

Apne leader ka adesh sun wo shetan naina ki or lapke lekin naina bhi teyar thi , jese hi wo dono shetan pe jhapte to naina ne ek hath se apna trishul ek bande ki or kiya or dusre hath se apni fire power use kerte hue ek gola bana uski or pheka .

Jiske kaaran agle hi pal dono shetan chinkhte hue jalne lage or rakh ho gaye.

Naina ne akhri bache shetan k sathi ko gale se pakad liya , jisse wo shetan naina ki pakad m hi jalne laga or usike sath naina ne leader ko aane ka ishara kia




Naina kal bal dekh shetano ka wo leader ghabra gaya or wo samjh gaya ki wo akela to naina se bilkul ni bhid sakta

Isliye usne bhagne me hi bhalayi samjhi.

Shetan gusse se :- abhi to m ja raha hu ladki , per tume bahut badi galti ki h humse panga leker,jald hi tu bahut pachtayegi.

Ye bol wo shetan waha se chamgadad ka roop leker ud gaya.

Naina ne bhi normal roop lete hue us ladke ki or bhadi , lekin ye kya naina jese hi us ladke k karib aayi to usne paya ki ladke ki halat bahut kharab h or wo behosh hone ki kagar per h.

Naina usko kandhe k sahare uthate hue :- aap chinta mat kijiye bhai , aapko m kuch ni hone dungi.

Ye bol naina ne kese na kese use jeep me leker gayi or use piche wali seat pe leta ker chal padi apne hotel ki or.

Wahi dusri or

Vp se ab sabar ka bandh tut chuka tha , lekin use samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare , kese karan or jyoti ka vinash kare.

Vp idher udher tahalate hue :- kab tak akhir kab tak m yu hi harta rahunga us shani se , kab tak us mamuli insan k hatho mujhe , ....... Ko har svikar kerni hogi.

Koi to , koi to marg avashya hoga us rakshak k ant ka.

(Kuch sochte hue ) mujhe vo marg jald se jald hi khojna hoga , kyuki ab us rakshak k samne us rahasya ka ujagar bhi ho chuka h.

Isse pahale wo us tak pahunche or mere varsho purani yojna nasht ho , kuch na kuch to mujhe kerna hoga, kuch to kerna hoga mujhe isse purv wo waha pahunche.

Abhi vp kuch soch hi raha tha uske chahre p ek shetani muskan aagayi or wo jor jor se haste hue khud se bola.

Vp :- hi hi ha ha , mil gaya marg , m bhi kitna murkh hu ye khayal mere dimag m pahale kyu ni aaya.

Vp ne apne seniko ko pukara.

Vp tez aawaz me :- sipahiyo.

Vp ki ek aawaz me waha 10 15 senik aaker jhuk ker uske samne khade ho gaye.

Vp :- kuch samay pahale tumhe jo karya tum logo ko sompa tha kya wo hua.

Senik darte hue :- mahaprabhu shama , shama chahate h humne apni puri takat laga di ,lekin hum un logo k bare m bilkul pata na laga paye, jinhone brahamrakshaso ki maharani ka vadh kiya.

Vp gusse se :- tum sB nikamme kisi kaam k ni ho .

Senik darte hue :- maharaj kripya hume ek or avsar de dijiye , hum apko nirash kadapi ni karenge

Vp :- ni abhi k liye tumhe us karya ko kerne ki jarurat ni , wo jo koi bhi h uska pata to m laga hi lunga.

Or rahi avsar ki bat to thik h jao tumhe diya , ek akhri avsar deta hu , jao or jitna shighra ho sake pata lagao ki humara hukum ka wo ikka kaha h , ab wahi keval us karan ka ant ker sakta h.

Senika darte hue :- prabhu , kahi aap unki to baat ni ker rahe....

Vp :- ha m usi ki baat ker raha hu , samjh gaye to jao khade khade mera mukh kya dekh rahe ho , jao or pata lagao kaha h vo , kyunki ab vo hi h jo us rakshak ka ant ker sakta h.

Senik to vp ka ishara samjhte hi thar thar kampne lage ,

Vp :- suna ni tumne kya kaha mane

(Jor se ) jaoooooooo....

Vp ki fatkar sun wo sab ese gayab hue jese ghade k sir se singh.

Vp haste hue :- ab dekhta hu shani kese bachayega tu apne ansh ko , kyunki is baar jisse tere us karan ka samna hone wala h wo koi sadharan asur ni , maha tapasvi or shaktishali h , tum devo dwara hi use shakti praapt h.

Ab dekhta hu ki kese tera rakshak samna karega swayam brahama k vardaan ko , kese samna karega.

Trityao k raja

samraat ka.

Ye bol vp jor jor se haste hue apne naye shadyantra ko rachne laga.

Wahi dusri or.

Kfd jo apne singhasan pe bethe chintit najar arahe the unse narad ji bole.

Naradji:- prabhu aap itne chintit najar kyu arahe h , ha mana naina me aaya badlav chinta ka vishay h , parantu ye itna bhi jatil ni .

Hume purntah vishwas h karan or jyoti is samasya ko bhi apne prem or apne anupam prabhav se swatah hi dur ker denge.

Kfd :- devrishi , ye samsya jitni saral dikhayi pad rahi h , utni h ni , naina k achran me aaye ye badlav sadharan asuraksha ki bhavna ni h .

Ye sanket h aane wale us vikat sankat ka , jiska prabhav na keval karan or jyoti k , apitu unse jude har vyakti k sath sath is pure sansar p padega.

Sabse jyada chinta ka vishay to ye h devrishi ki nikat bhavishya m naina ki mulakat usse avashya hogi , or yadi naina uske prabhav me aGayi to is sansar per bahut bada khatra mandrane lagega.

Shani ka ishara jese hi devrishi ne samjha to unke mukh per bhi chinta ki rekhaye dikhlayi dene lagi.

Devrishi :- yadi esa h to hume shighra hi uska upaay bhi kerna hoga prabhu , anyatha anarth ho jayega.

Shani :- yahi to vidambana h devrishi , sab kuch jante hue or karmfal data hote hue bhi hum chaker bhi niyati k chakra m hastakshep ni ker sakte.

Hum to sirf kamna ker sakte h devrishi ki sab kushal mangal ho .

(Halke se muskurate hue ) Per filhal to naina ko apni yatra k aage ka marg mil chuka h trijata putra samar k roop me.

Ji ha dosto wo ladka samar hi tha ,jo samraat ki ked se bach ker bhag aaya tha , lekin is jungle m pahunchte pahunchte wo bahut thak gaya tha bhagte bhagte or un shetan yani samraat k sipahiyo ki ked m aagaya.

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Office ka kaam niptate niptate unhe raat ki 9 baj gaye the .

Juhi ghadi dekhte hue :- are ye kya aaj to kam kerte kerte time ka pata hi na chala, kya kare tum dono ki company hi esi h.

Vese aage ka kya plan h , ab wapas se hi office join karoge ya.

Jyoti :- ni juhi ji ,mane or bhai ne decide kiya h ki hum abhi aage ki studies p dhyan denge .

I mean pg per , or ha office m jarurat padi to yaha bhi aajaya karenge.

Juhi :- chalo ye to bahut achi baat h , tum dono ne bilkul sahi decision liya , abhi tum dono ki umer h koi kaam kerne ki , abhi to tum dono ki ghumne firne or enjoy kerne ki umer hi h.

Yuhi kuch der thodi bahut normal baato k baad karan or jyoti nikal pade bike pe apne ghar ki or.

Jyoti karan se bilkul kaske chipki hui thi or karan se idher udher ki baate kerte hue achanak se vo kal raat ki ghatnao k bare m baat kerne lagi.

Jyoti :- bhai mane jo kiya sahi to kiya na.

Karan :- ha meri jaan tumne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya ,wo dono log isi k hakdar the.

Ek baar pahale bhi humne unhe maaf kiya tha ye soch ker ki wo khud ko sudharenge , parantu uske ulat unhonne to ulta vahi galti dobara dohrayi.

Bas fark itna tha ki pichli baar unhone shadyantra ka sahara liya tha or is baR bal ka.

Isliye jab moka dene k baad bhi apradhi usi apradh ko doharaye to wo keval bas dand ka adhikari hota h.

Samjhi meri jaan.

Jyoti :- ji bhai.

Jyoti purani yade yad ker thodi vichlit or udas ho gayi

Karan ne jab jyoti ki udasi ko mahsus kiya to usne turant gadi side lagayi or jhat se jyoti ko apne sine se laga liya ,jyoti bhi ek bache ki tarah uske sine m dubak gayi .

Karan :- are meri jaan , meri gudiya , jo beet gaya , use yaad ker kyu vichlit hoti ho , vo jo bhi tha jesa bhi tha humara past tha ,or past ko bhula ker aage bhadna hi samjhdari hoti h.

Or ye bhi koi mokka h udas hone ka , are pagli ye to khushi ka moka,jis kaam k pure hone ka ,jis avsar ka hume kabse intezaar tha , vo ab aane hi wala h or tum ho ki udaas bethi ho.

Chalo chalo apne bhaiya ko haske dikhao.

Ye bol karan jyoti ko gudgudi ker hasata h or yu hi masti majak k sath wo ghar pahunchte h.

Jaha unhone paya ki radha to apni dawaiya leker so chuki thi or garima unhika wait ker rahi thi.

Apne bhatije bhatiji ko aaya dekh wo jaldi se unhe khud khana parosti h or fir khana khilane k bad boli.

Garima :- beta m janti hu tum bahut thake hue ho per ....

Karan bich me bolte hue :- of o meri pyari bhua,ap kyu bevajah tension leti ho , jab aapka ye beta aapke pas h.

Jyoti :- ha bhua bhai sahi bol rahe h aap chinta mat kijiye , project file ready h or humne wo send bhi ker di.

Ap tension mat lijiye bhua , dekhna humari deal jarur ho jayegi.

Garima pyar se karan or jyoti k gal sahalate hue boli

Garima '- mujhe apne bacho p pura bharosa , wo koi kam kare or wo success na ho esa ho hi ni sakta .

Fir garima karan or jyoti ko apne pas hi sulati h .

Fir 1 2 din yu hi nikal gaye.

Aaj Saturday ki sham ko karan ki sabhi bahano samet rohan garima k ghar p hi mojud the or masti majak ker rahe the

Tabhi garima k liye ek courier aaya ,garima ne wo receive ker jese use khola to wo ek letter tha

Garima us letter ko khol jese jese padhne lagi , uske chahre k bhav badalne lage or jese hi usne wo letter pura padha wo khushi se uchal padi or karan or jyoti samet sabko bulane lagi

Karan apni bahano samet garima k room m pahuncha or garima ko khushi se uchhalte dekh karan ne pucha.

Karan :- kya bAAT H bhua ,aaj bahut khush najar aarahi ho aap.

Garima ne karan ko vo letter padne ko diya , karan ne jab vo letter pada to uski bhi khushi ka thikana na raha.
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Darasal ye letter usi company ki kr se tha jisse garima deal kerne k liye mahanat ker rahi thi.

Letter m saf saf likha tha ki wo company is deal k liye ready h or contract k paper work k liye unhone garima ko with family invite kiya h ek party m jo kal hone wali h unki company ki new branch ki opening m.

Sabhi ye khabar sun khush ho gaye.

Shivani :- are wah party , fir to bahano hume abhi se teyari m lagna hoga ,or shopping bhi to kerni h.

Karan :- are yar tum ladkiyo ko to bahana chahiye shopping ka to ,abhi kuch din pahale hi to ki thi.

Jyoti apni bahano ki side lete hue :- acha to kya hua , ye hum girl ka aapas ka matter h or vese bhi "

"our shopping is our shopping

,none of your shopping".

Jyoti ka dialogue sun sabhi bahane has padi or karan apna sa muh leker rah gaya .

Or fir sabhi jan kal ki party m lag gaye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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