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Karan jese hi mandir se bahar nikala tha use ek jani pahachani si anubhooti hui thi, vesi hi anubhuti, jese use tab hui thi, jab wo kaya ko insan banane k liye kaal gad k jungle se amritunjay jal lane gaya tha, tab hui thi.
Use ahasas hua ki jab wo kaya k sath baate kerte hue sidiyo se uter raha tha to use wahi anubhuti vahi ek apnatv se bhari urja mahasus hone lagi, jise mahasus ker karan ko ek alag hi aanand ka ahasas hone laga, use esa ahasas hua jesa ki uske karib wo h jiska intezaar to use mano kayo varsho ya yugo se ho, ye ahasas kuch vesa hi tha, jese use tab mahasus hota jab vo jyoti k sanidhy m mahasus kerta tha.
Ek baar to karan us anubhuti ko mahasus ker wapas mandir ki or jane laga, lekin jab kaya ne karan ko wapas mandir ki or yu besudh avastha m dekh vo chonk gayi or wo bhi uske piche chali tabhi uska panv phisaal gaya or wo gir padi.
Jisse uske muh se ek halki di chikh nikal padi.
Kaya :- sakha.
Kaya ki chik sun karan wapas hosh m aata h or wo kaya ko gira hua dekh turant uske pss gaya.
Karan Kaya ko uthate hue chinta se :- kya hua sakhi tum gir kese gayi, tumhe kahi chot to ni lagi.
Kaya apne kapde sahi kerte hue :- ni sakha m thik hu, bas jara per phisal gaya tha, per aapko kya hua tha, aap wapas uper kyu ja rahe the yu.
Karan :- pata ni sakhi mujhe esa ahasas hua kii....
Kher chodo chalo hume ghar chalna chahiye, ghar wale uth gaye to faltu m hune waha n dekh pareshaan honge.
Karan ne esa isliye kaha Kyunki use ho rahi vo anubhuti ab gayab ho chuki thi.
Kaya :- ha chaliye.
Fir karan or kaya waha se ghar nikal pade ghar ki or raste m karan se kaya ne pucha.
Kaya :- sakha ek baat puchu.
Karan :-- ha pucho.
Kaya :- sakha aapne itni aasani se daityguru shukracharya ko kese avahan ker yaha bulaya, jabki ye karya to asuro k liye bhi atyadhik kathin hh, kyunki vo to ek dev bhi or navgrah me se ek bhi h.
Karan :- iske piche ek kaaran h sakhi, ye us samay ki baat h.
Short flashback
Swarg per hue krodhasur k aakraman ko rok jab dandnayak ne krodhasur ka ant kiya tab devraj samet sabhi devo ne dandnayak ka swagat kerte hue unka dhanyavaad kiya.
Indra :- hey dandnayak tumhara koti koti dhanyavaad putra, tumne aaj keval krodhasur ka ant ker na keval devo ki raksha ki , apitu dharm ki bhi raksha ki h, kyunki yadi aaj krodhasur swarg jit leta to aaj anarth ho jata.
Dandnayak :- hey aadarniya devraj kripya aap mujhe dhbayawad ker mujhe paap ka bhagi na banaye, aapka pad mere se bahut ucha h, aap devraj ho or m ek sadharn manushya, mane jo kiya wo mera karm tha, bhagwaan.
Devraj :- utam, ati utam vyavhaar h tumhara putra, tumhare sath itna kuch hua fir bhi tumne dharm ka marg na tyaga balki usi vinamrata k sath aaj bhi apne karmpath per dridh ho isliye putra hum tumse prasan h or tumhe kuch dena chahte h, mango putra jo chahe wo war mango.
Lekin karan ne ashirwaad k sivaye sabhi devo se kuch na manga.
Devraj :- putra hum jante the ki tum swayam to kuch na mangoge isliye hum sab ne mil ker ek nirnay liya h putra.
M tumhe avahan mantra ki vidya pradan kerta hu putra, jisse tum jab chaho kisi bhi dev ka avahan ker sakte ho, jis prakaar aaj tumne hum devo ki sahayta ki putra, usi prakaar tumhare dwaara avahan kerne per prakat hue dev bhi tumhari avashya sahayata karenge, ye var h mera.
Ye bol devraj ne apna hath aage ker karan ko var diya, tabhi jyoti bhi khushi aaker karan k gale mili, vo bahut khush thi, kyunki karan aaj apne divya roop ko punah praapt ker or bhi jyada shaktishali ho chuka tha.
Aaj devlok m sabhi bahut hi jyada khush the, lekin kuch chahre the, jinki ankho m ye drishy chubh raha tha, specually karan or jyoti ka prem bhara aalingan or khushi.
Ye kon tha or kya maksad tha uska, ye aapko aage hi pata chalega.
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Kaya :- satya hi kaha h kisi ne ki is sansar ki koi bhi ghatna aakaran hi ni hoti, uske piche koi na koi kaaran jarur hota h.
Karan :- ha ye to h madam, per jaldi chalite werna ye bate hi humare dant padne ka bhi kaaran ban jayegi.
Ye bol karan or kaya ghar ki or nikal pade.
Aaiye dekhte h ki esa kya hua mandir m jo karan ko esi anubhuti hui, chaliye mandir m najar marte h.
Mandir m ek ladki khadi thi, jo karan jese hi apne m hi khoyi hui thi, are ye kya ye to apni naina h.
Ye yaha kese aaphunchi or yaha kya ker rahi h aaiye jante h.
Hua darasl ye ki ye mandir shivpur or ramgarh dono. Ki hi sima pe mojud h, bas dono ka. Rasta alag alag h.
Jaha karan mandir k aage wale darwaje se mandir m aaye the , jab karan puja samapt ker niche uterne laga, tabhi mandir k piche pale gate se naina mandir m aayi jo shivpur ka raste se juda hua tha.
Naina bhi yaha puja k liye hi aayi hui thi, jab usne mandir m enter kiya tabhi se hi karan ko vo ahasas hona shuru hua or esa hi ahasas naina ko bhi hona shuru ho gaya.
Naina man me :- ye kesi anubhuti h, esa pratit ho raha h jese mere jivan ka gantavya mere karib, esa kyu lag raha h jese abhi tak m adhuri thi or wo adurapan dur kerne wale mere nikat h.
Esa hi ahasas ko anubhav kerte hue naina wahi kho si gayi, bilkul sthir ho, lekin karan jese hi mandir se kuch dur nikla naina ki tandra tuti to uski tandra tuti.
Jisse wo chonk gayi or turant us or bhagi bhi jis or se use vo ahasas ho raha tha, lekin tab tak karan or Kaya bahut aage nikal gaye the.
Jisse naina hatash ho gayi or uski ankho m ek pal yu asrudhara bahane lagi, jese uska koi apna uske bahut hi najdik aaker bhi bina usse mile dur chala gaya.
Naina :- ye kya ho raha h mere sath kyu baar baar mujhe esi madhur anubhuti de, fir use yu chin ,apni beti ko kasht de rahi ho maa.
Naina kuch der wahi sab soch dukhi hoti rahi fir wo mandir m ja puja kerne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Karan or Kaya jab ghar pahunche to paya ki unki chachi jag chuki h, karan unhe hug ker good morning wish kerta h Or kaya
Nidhi karan k mathe ko chumte hue :- good morning mera pyara bacha, good morning beti,itni subah subah kaha gaye the tum dono beta.
Karan :- kahi ni chachi bas pas k hi mandir hi gaye the, wese aap itni jaldi kese uth gayi chachi.
Nidhi :- pata ni beta aaj kese itni jaldi ankh khul gayi, lekin aaj man bada hi khush ho raha h, man ker raha h khushi se jhum uthu, esi anubhuti ho rahi h jald hi kuch esa hone wala h, jo is ghar m fir se khusiya le aayega beta (apne past ko yaad ker) or purane ghavo ko bhi bhar dega.
Karan :- ha chachi esa jarur hoga dekhna dada dadi ko bhi ek din apni galti ka ahasas hoga or fir hum sab mil ker rahege.
Karan ne nidhi ko santavana dete hue esa kaha taki unka mood kharab na ho.
Nidhi :- acha wo sab chodo ye batao beta kya khaoge nashte m, kya kya pasand h hume
Karan masti kerte hue :- chachi aap to in hatho se kuch bhi bana do, humari to wahi pasand ban jayegi.
Nidhi :- acha beta itna pasand apni chachi k hath khana.
Karan majak kerte hue :- or ni to kya chachi, wo to chachu ki kismat achi thi jo aap unko pahale mil gayi, ni to m pakka aapko apni gf bna ker aapse shadi ker leta, akhir itni beautiful or acha khane wali Wife or kaha milegi.
Nidhi sharmake jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola badmash, apni chachi se shadi karega, ruk tujhe m batati hu.
Ye bol wo karan ki or bhagi or karan bhi bhaga tabhi waha ranvir bhi aapahuncha or karan uske piche chup gaya.
Nidhi :- badmash apne chacha k piche kya chupta h, bahar
Karan :- chachu bacha lo.
Rajiv masti kerte hue :- bhatije ye subah subah kisse panga le liya, ager mane Tujhe bachane ki kosis ki to meri bhi kher ni.
Nidhi :- ab baat samjh hi gaye ho to side ho jaiye or Tu badmash idher aa jara.
Rajiv side hatte hue:- sorry bhatije.
Karan :- are chachu ye to dhoka h.
Nidhi :- ab aaya na bachu ut pahad k niche, ab punishment k liye ready ho jayo.
Ye bol wo apna hath uthati h karan bhi jhut mut ka darte hue ankh band ker leta h, lekin agle hi pal hi use apne gal p kisi k hotho ka ahasas hua, jo or koi ni nidhi k the, jisne pyaar se karan k gal p kiss ki thi.
Karan ankh khol k dekhta h nidhi ko to wo boli.
Nidhi :- are ese kya dekh rahe ho (ankh marte hue) ab m bf ko kiss bhi ni ker sakti.
Ye bol nidhi has padi or sath m karan bhi, tab Rajiv bola.
Rajiv :- are bhai bhai, wo mera eklota mal h, uspe to najar mat daal .
Nidhi Rajiv k pet m sharma k koni marti h, karan haste hue bola.
Karan haste hue :- dekha chachu bhatije ko dhoka dene ka natija, ab jhelo.
Yu hi masti majak k sath karan waha thodi der ruk nikal pada apne room ki or per raste m diya ka room bhi aaya to usne socha ki jabse diya aayi h wo usse thik se baat bhi na ker paya, isliye wo uske room p knock kerta h.
Diya kuch min m gate kholti h to subah subah karan ko dekh khush ho jati h Or gale mil boli.
Diya :- are bhaiya aap,good morning.
Karan pyar se :- good morning diyu, mane disturb to ni kiya na.
Diya :- are kesi baat kerte ho aap, aap to mere pyare bhaiya aapke aNe se m bhala disturb ho sakti hu, aap khade kyu ho aaiye na ander bhai.
Ye bol wo karan ko apne sath le aayi or bed or sofe per beth uske kandhe p si r rakh li.
Diya :- ab boliye bhai, aaj itni subah subah apni diyu ki yaad kese aayi.
Karan :- tumse sorry bolna tha gudiya
Diya :- sorry kyu bhai.
Karan :- at first sorry diyu, ek to tum itni dur se mujhse milne aayi or m tumhe time hi ni de pata.
Diya :- koi baat ni bhai, i can understand, aapko apni family ko bhi to time dena hota hi h na.
(Nam ankho se)M to is baat se hi khush hu bhai ki aapne mujh jesi anath or apvaitra ladki ko naya jivan deker apnaya, jo apne past k kaaran kisi ko muh dikhane layak bhi ni h.
Diya ki baat m chupa uska dard karan mahasus ker raha tha, usne turant diya ko sine se laga liya or uski bhi ankh nam ho gayi.
Karan diya k ansu pochte hue:- pagli kisne kaha tu anath h, ya apvitra h pagli Tu to meri vo pavitra shakti h jiske kaaran aaj m or meri jaan jyoti aaj sahi salamat h, naya jivan to hum dono bhai bahan ko tumne a h meri gudiya, is sansar m bhai humesha bahan ki raksha kerta h lekin tumne apne bhai k jivan ki raksha ki , or esi meri apvitra h esa savayam vidhata bhi aake kahe to m usko bhi nakar du.
Or ek baat humesha yaad rakh lena gudiya, humari pavitra is sharir se ni balki humare charitra or humari hriday k sad vichaaro se hoti h, ye sharir to nashwar h yahi rah jayega, lekin humare sath jaker ishwer k paas jo humari pavitra ka praman dete h vo humare sadkarm.
Diya karan ki baat ki gaharayi samjhte hue :- thanks bhai aap sach m bahut ache ho or pyare bhi aapne mere sare avsaad ko kitni aasani se dur ker diya.
Karan :- thanks ki bachi wo sab to thik h, lekin aage se khud ko anath ya family se alag kaha na to bahut pitegi.
Diya masti kerte hue :- bhai kya aap mujhe maroge.
Karan :- ha bilkul vo bhi bahut jyada.
Diya haste hue :- rahane do rahane do, aap se esa bilkul ni hoga.
Karan :- acha bachu apne bhaiya ko challenge.
Diya :- ji ha bilkul.
Karan sofe k cuison se majak m marte hue :- acha fir ye le chudel
Diya :- kya bole m moti, ruko m abhi batati hu you bandar.
Ye bol wo karan p tut padi or fir shuru hui dono bhai bahan ki pillow fight, jisme kuch der baad karan diya ko khus kerne k liye jan bhujke haar jata h
Karan :- are bas bas rajkumaari ji apne is nachij ki gustakhi ko shama ker dijiye.
Diya haste hue :- shama mil jayegi bhaiya lekin ek shart h, aap ne kuch der pahale kaha tha na ki aap mujhe time na de paye,
to aapki saja ye h ki aap mujhe or Kaya ko ghumane leke jaoge bas hum tino hi jayenge.
Karan :- ok done diyu, but next week
Diya ;- next week kyu bhai.
Karan :- kyonki gudiya abhi samay ghume ka ni balki yudh ki teyario ka h.
Diya chonk ker :- kesa yudh bhai.
Karan short m kuch baate batata h or sham ko jyoti samet sabhi se is bare m meeting ka decide kerte h,
Wahi dusri or
Naina mandir se aker apne kamre m bethi aaj hui ghatna k baare m soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi samar waha bhagta hua aaya.
Samar :- naina bahan gajab ho gaya.
Naina :- kya hua bhai aap itni chonke hue kyu ho esa kya dekh liya.
Samar :- tum mere sath chalo sab pata chal jayega.
Ye bol naina ko Samar apne sath leke hall m jata h, jaha pahunch naina ne jo dekha to wo bhi chonk gayi.
Kyunki samne preety or shruti dono ek dusre se yu hasti hui bate ker rahi thi jese paki saheliyaan ho or usse bhi jyada herani ki baat thi ki preety ek baar fir apne purane avatar m aachuki thi, yani ki wahi roop jisme wo naina se mili thi, usne ek sleveless top or mans jeans pahani thi or wese hi apne balo ko bandhe hue thi, dur se to use koi ladka hi samjh bethta.
Preety naina ko dekh apne purane andaz me :- are sister, uth gayeli Tu, bole to good morning.
Naina herani se :- good morning di, wo sab to thik h per ye kya h
Preety :- wo sab chodo sister, pahale tumhe ek good news yani ki ek rapchik news dene ka h mujhe, tumko malum h kal raat ko hi apna or shruti ki Friendship ho gayi h bole to full to patch.
(Shruti se) kyu sahi boli na m partner.
Shruti :- ofcourse partner, vese hi naina or bole to sorry bhi haa, mane gusse m tumko kya kuch ni bola tha us din, lekin tension not Tu apni partner ki sister h means apni sister, koi bhi problem ho to batana.
Naina herani se :- ok
Naina ek taraf to heran thi ki ek raat m hi prety ne esa kya jadu kiya ki shruti m itna change aa gaya, per use pura bharosa tha preety p ki wo kuch galat ni karegi, isliye wo khush thi.
Tabhi veer bhi vaha aa gaya or vo bhi ek baar dekh preety ko choka or fir bola.
Veer :- are kya baat h bhai, humari lady don firse apne original roop me.
Fir yu hi hasi majak k sath thodi bahut bate hui, fir jesa ki dono bevdiyo ne decide kiya tha vese hi dono akele hi nikal gayi ek or bina naina or baki sab ko bataye ki wo ja kaha rahi h.
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Diya se milne k baad karan apne kamre m jata h to pata h ki jyoti uth ker naha chuki h or aaine k same bethi baal bana rahi h.
Tab karan chupchaap piche se jaker jyoti ko good morning wish kerta h or gal chum leta h.
Karan :- good morning meri gudiya.
Jyoti karan k gal apne gal se sahalate hue :- good morning mere janu Bhaiya, vese aap kaha gaye the.
Karan pyaar se :- m na bhagwan ji ko thanks kahane mandir gaya tha, jo unhone mujhe itni pyaari or gudiya si bahan di jo mujhe kitna pyaar kerti h, uske liye.
Jyoti bacho jese :- kya sachi Bhaiya.
Karan :- muchi meri gudiya.
Jyoti :- fir to mujhe bhi mandir jana chahiye , thanks bolne jo unhone mujhe bhi itna pyaar kerne wale bhaiya diye..
Karan jyoti ko chedte hue :- wese pyaar se yaad aaya, raat ko apne is bhaiya k pyaar kesa laga tumhe.
Ye bol wo jyoti ki ek chuchi ko halka sa daba deta h.
Jyoti chihunk k :- aaj, gande kahi ke esa sawal bhi bhala koi puchta h apni bahan se.
Karan :- ab jiski itni pyari bahan hi uski gf hogi to banda or karega bhi kya madam.
Jyoti :- hmpphhh, mujhe ni pata, per aap bahut gande ho.
Karan haste hue :- acha ji raat ko bade maje se bol rahi thi suck my boobs bhai, kha jao inhe, or ganda hua m , wah bhai wah.
Jyoti jo sharm se lal ho gayi thi wo jhuta gussa dikhate hue.
Jyoti :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii, aaj to m aapko chodungi ni,
Ye bol wo karan pe tut padi, usne pahale to karan ko bister p gira k khub gudgudi ki.
Karan :- haha, are bas ker gudiya sorry.
Jyoti :- ab aaya na ut pahad k niche.
Karan shararati andaz ankh marte hue:- ont pahad k niche, ya utni k niche.
Jyoti sharmate hue karan ki chati p marte hue :- aap sudheroge ni na.
Yu hi hasi majak kerte hue dono bhai bahan ki ankhe apas m takragayi or wo ek dusre m khote chale gaye or fir achanak se jyoti ne karan k hotho k giraft m le bade hi pyaar se use kiss kerne lagi, jisme karan ne jyoti ka bharpoor sath diya.
Fir kuch der baad jyoti kiss tod k karan k sine pe let gayi or boli.
Jyoti :- bhai m bata ni sakti kal raat k humare milan se mujhe kitne aanand ki anubhuti hui, aapki baho ka sukun, aapke pratyek ang ka sparsh ek alag hi aanand de raha tha, man to ker raha tha humari ye kam krida kabhi khatm hi na ho.
Karan :- mera bhi. Kuch esa hi haal tha meri gudiya, Tu hi to mera parmanand h
Jyoti :- bhai ab mujhe to us pal ka intezar h jab hum sharikrik roop se bhi ek honge.
Karan :- wo samay bhii jald hi aayega gudiya, kyunki m chahta hu humara milan koi esa vesa na ho, humara milan bahut hi special hona chahiye na.
Jyoti :- hmm bhai, per
Karan jyoti k bhay ko samjhate hue :- m tumhare bhay ko samjhta hu meri jaan or esa hi kuch hal mera h, per yahi humari niyati h gudiya, jise hume swikarna hoga gudiya.
Lekin m tumse wada kerta hu gudiya humari life m bhale hi koii bhi aaye, lekin mere liye mere liye tujse badke koi na hogi mere pe or mujse jude har nirnay p tumhara adhikaar hoga.
Karan ne indirectly jyoti ko yakin dila diya tha ki uska pahala sex jyoti k sath hi hoga, per kya karan apna vada nibha payega, vo to aage hi pata chalega.
Tabhi achank bahar se unhe kuch aawaaz aati h dono bhai bahan bahar jaker dekhte h to pate h ki unke dada dadi ghar wapas aa gaye h jo sahar gaye the apme kisi kaam se.
Jo or kuch ni ranvir ko bahar nikalana thha, lekin karan ki vakra drishti ne unke har kaam bigad diye the, or to or ab karan ki vakra drishti ne dada dadi ki raato ki ninde bhi uda di thi, unhe bhayankar sapne aate jinme unhe ye ahasas dilaye jate ki wo kitne bade pap k bhagidaari ban chuke h or to or unke hath se ek badi deal bhi nikal. Chuki thi, jiske kaaran unka mood or off tha.
(Friends yaha m dada dadi ki saja ko short m hi niptana chahta hu kyunki ab m is chapter ko jald hi pura kerna chahta hu, aapka kya khayal h is baare m jarur batiyega)
Nidhi apne sas sasur ko dekh :- are maaji, pitaji aap aagaye.
Ye bol wo unke per chuti h, dada to ache se ashirwaad dete h lekin dadi apni akad se.
Dadi :- ha thik h thik h,agyai sasural ki yaad, ghar m mahaman aYe hue the or tumhe mayke ki padi thi
Nidhi upset ho :- maji wo
Dadi :- acha wo chod or ab yu khada hi rakhegi ya pani bhi pilayegi.
Ye bol wo sofe p beth jati h or nidhi pani lene jati h.
Karan or jyoti jab per chune aate h to tanz kaste hue boli.
Dadi :- wah kya dogle sanskaar h tumhari maa k ek or to badtamiji se humse baat kerte ho or ab per chu rahe ho, rahane do ye natak.
Karan gussa pite hue :- raat ko jo. Humne kiya tha, wo aapke hi karmo ka fal tha dadi or jo ab hum ker rahe h wo humari ma k sanskaar h.
Karan ki ye baat sun dadi jal bhun gayi, lekin dada ki gardan sharm se niche ho gayi, shayad unhe apni galti ka ahasas hone laga tha.
Karan or jyoti jab dada k per chute h to wo bahut pyaar se unko ashirwaad to dete h.
Per jyada kuch bol ni pate.
Fir dopaher k waqt jab nidhi karan or baki sabko khana khila rahi hoti h to dadi aake boli.
Dadi :- sun bahu, kitchen m jaker jo dudh ka pateela mane chadaya tha wo mere room m pahuncha de, tumhare sasur ko dawai leni h.
Nidhi :- maji bas 2 min bacho ko khana khila du fir ye ker dungi.
Dadi nidhi ki ye baat sun chod gayi.
Dadi man me :- mujhe na bolegi, lagta h ise bhi us kamini ki tarah sabak sikhana hoga.
Ye soch wo kitchen m gayi or us dudh k patile ko kafi der tak ubala jisse wo aag ki tarah garam ho gaya.
Dadi ne wahi chal chali thi, jo kisi samay usne asha p chali thi, lekin is baar use ye kaha malum tha uspe dandnayak ki amogh vakra drishti h
Karan ko jab is bare m pata chala yo use bahut gussa aaya or usne ab dadi ko acha sabak sikhane ki thani.
5 min baad nidhi jese hi barta lene aati h to karan ek roshni nidhi p chod deta, jiske sath hi nidhi sidhe patila uthane k bajaye ek kapde se utha leti h, lekin karan ne ek esi maya sath me or rach di jisse dadi ko wo kapda dikha hi ni.
Nidhi ne jese hi wo patila le jake kamre me rakh kitchen m loti to dadi ki herani ki sima na rahi, or wo apne kamre m jaker
Dadi :- ye kese ho sakta h is patile ko to mane khud... Aaaaahhhhhhhhhh
Ye bol dadi ne patle ko uthana chaha to garam patile se uska hath jal gaya or dudh bhi usper girte girte bacha, lekin kuch dudh k chite uske badan or hath p gire.
Dadi ki chikh sun sab kamre m aaye oe or sab chomk gaye, garima ko to asha k sath hua wahi hadsa yaad aagaya jo dadi ne kisi waqt asha k sath kiya tha
Aaj uski bhi vahi halat thi jo kisi samay usne asha ki thi, yahi to h karmo ka fal dandnayak ka dand.
Fir karan sabko dadi ki kartut k bare m batata h, jo usne ye bahana deker batayi ki usne dadi ko esa kerte dekh liya tha jab wo pani pine kitchen m gaya tha or chachi ko sahi waqt p kapda use kerne ko bhi bol diya tha or karan k us megic k kaaran hi nidhi ne karan ki ha me ha milayi.
Garima gusse se :- sharm ni aayi maa, aapko firse wahi nich harkat ki koshish kerte hue, itne salo m aap bilkul na badli .
Rajiv :- gudu ne bilkul sahi kaha, aap aaj bhi vesi ki vesi hi h, or m to ye bhi kahata hu ki jo aaj hua aap usike layak ho
Nidhi bichari chinta se :- maji m aapko malham laga deti hu aapko.
Dadi gusse se :- koi jarurat ni h mujhe, hath per sahi salamat h mere.
Ye bol wo nidhi ko waha se bhaga di.
Karan side m ye sab dekhte hue man me :- chachi ko to aapne bhaga diya dadi, per un karmo se kese picha chudaogi jinka dand aaj bhog rahi ho aap, kese bavhogi meri vakra drishti se.
Ye sab soch karan waha se nikal gaya.
Sham tak sabka mood off raha, lekin sham ko karan jab apni bahano or dosto k sath garden m bethe hue bate ker raha tha.
Tab jyoti ne ek baat notice ki ki karan gumsum sa betha hua h.
Jyoti :- kya hua bhai aap itne udaas kyu ho, subah wali baat ko bhul jaiye na.
Karan :- are ni gudiya wo baat ni h, darasal m ye soch raha tha, kitna acha lag raha h na aaj humare sath humari puri family h or hum sath m enjoy ker rahe h, Pee
ShivNi :- per kya bhaiya.
Karan :- per fir bhi kami mahasus ho rahi h n gudiya, sonam ki kami, kitne din ho gaye na sona se baat kiye hue h na radha.
Radha udaas hote hue:- wahi to bhai , mujhe sonu ki bahut yaad aarahi h, hume use sath leker aana tha
Karan :- yaad to aaj mujhe bhi bahut aarahi h gudiya humari sonu ki, subah se Phone bhi ni lag raha uska, pata ni kaha hogi meri pyari sonu.
Tabhi karan samet sabke kaano m ek aawaz padi, jisse sab chonk gaye.
Aaapki sonu aapko chod ker kaha jayegi bhaiya.
Karan ne chonk k piche mud k dekha to waha main gate p sonu khadi thi hatho m ek apna bag liye.
Karan khushi se :- sonu
Ye bol bhag k jata h or sonam ko kaske apne gale se laga leta h, sonam bhi itne din baad apne bhaiya, apne prem ki bhao m simat us sukoon ka aanand lene lagi.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Karan jese hi mandir se bahar nikala tha use ek jani pahachani si anubhooti hui thi, vesi hi anubhuti, jese use tab hui thi, jab wo kaya ko insan banane k liye kaal gad k jungle se amritunjay jal lane gaya tha, tab hui thi.
Use ahasas hua ki jab wo kaya k sath baate kerte hue sidiyo se uter raha tha to use wahi anubhuti vahi ek apnatv se bhari urja mahasus hone lagi, jise mahasus ker karan ko ek alag hi aanand ka ahasas hone laga, use esa ahasas hua jesa ki uske karib wo h jiska intezaar to use mano kayo varsho ya yugo se ho, ye ahasas kuch vesa hi tha, jese use tab mahasus hota jab vo jyoti k sanidhy m mahasus kerta tha.
Ek baar to karan us anubhuti ko mahasus ker wapas mandir ki or jane laga, lekin jab kaya ne karan ko wapas mandir ki or yu besudh avastha m dekh vo chonk gayi or wo bhi uske piche chali tabhi uska panv phisaal gaya or wo gir padi.
Jisse uske muh se ek halki di chikh nikal padi.
Kaya :- sakha.
Kaya ki chik sun karan wapas hosh m aata h or wo kaya ko gira hua dekh turant uske pss gaya.
Karan Kaya ko uthate hue chinta se :- kya hua sakhi tum gir kese gayi, tumhe kahi chot to ni lagi.
Kaya apne kapde sahi kerte hue :- ni sakha m thik hu, bas jara per phisal gaya tha, per aapko kya hua tha, aap wapas uper kyu ja rahe the yu.
Karan :- pata ni sakhi mujhe esa ahasas hua kii....
Kher chodo chalo hume ghar chalna chahiye, ghar wale uth gaye to faltu m hune waha n dekh pareshaan honge.
Karan ne esa isliye kaha Kyunki use ho rahi vo anubhuti ab gayab ho chuki thi.
Kaya :- ha chaliye.
Fir karan or kaya waha se ghar nikal pade ghar ki or raste m karan se kaya ne pucha.
Kaya :- sakha ek baat puchu.
Karan :-- ha pucho.
Kaya :- sakha aapne itni aasani se daityguru shukracharya ko kese avahan ker yaha bulaya, jabki ye karya to asuro k liye bhi atyadhik kathin hh, kyunki vo to ek dev bhi or navgrah me se ek bhi h.
Karan :- iske piche ek kaaran h sakhi, ye us samay ki baat h.
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Swarg per hue krodhasur k aakraman ko rok jab dandnayak ne krodhasur ka ant kiya tab devraj samet sabhi devo ne dandnayak ka swagat kerte hue unka dhanyavaad kiya.
Indra :- hey dandnayak tumhara koti koti dhanyavaad putra, tumne aaj keval krodhasur ka ant ker na keval devo ki raksha ki , apitu dharm ki bhi raksha ki h, kyunki yadi aaj krodhasur swarg jit leta to aaj anarth ho jata.
Dandnayak :- hey aadarniya devraj kripya aap mujhe dhbayawad ker mujhe paap ka bhagi na banaye, aapka pad mere se bahut ucha h, aap devraj ho or m ek sadharn manushya, mane jo kiya wo mera karm tha, bhagwaan.
Devraj :- utam, ati utam vyavhaar h tumhara putra, tumhare sath itna kuch hua fir bhi tumne dharm ka marg na tyaga balki usi vinamrata k sath aaj bhi apne karmpath per dridh ho isliye putra hum tumse prasan h or tumhe kuch dena chahte h, mango putra jo chahe wo war mango.
Lekin karan ne ashirwaad k sivaye sabhi devo se kuch na manga.
Devraj :- putra hum jante the ki tum swayam to kuch na mangoge isliye hum sab ne mil ker ek nirnay liya h putra.
M tumhe avahan mantra ki vidya pradan kerta hu putra, jisse tum jab chaho kisi bhi dev ka avahan ker sakte ho, jis prakaar aaj tumne hum devo ki sahayta ki putra, usi prakaar tumhare dwaara avahan kerne per prakat hue dev bhi tumhari avashya sahayata karenge, ye var h mera.
Ye bol devraj ne apna hath aage ker karan ko var diya, tabhi jyoti bhi khushi aaker karan k gale mili, vo bahut khush thi, kyunki karan aaj apne divya roop ko punah praapt ker or bhi jyada shaktishali ho chuka tha.
Aaj devlok m sabhi bahut hi jyada khush the, lekin kuch chahre the, jinki ankho m ye drishy chubh raha tha, specually karan or jyoti ka prem bhara aalingan or khushi.
Ye kon tha or kya maksad tha uska, ye aapko aage hi pata chalega.
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Kaya :- satya hi kaha h kisi ne ki is sansar ki koi bhi ghatna aakaran hi ni hoti, uske piche koi na koi kaaran jarur hota h.
Karan :- ha ye to h madam, per jaldi chalite werna ye bate hi humare dant padne ka bhi kaaran ban jayegi.
Ye bol karan or kaya ghar ki or nikal pade.
Aaiye dekhte h ki esa kya hua mandir m jo karan ko esi anubhuti hui, chaliye mandir m najar marte h.
Mandir m ek ladki khadi thi, jo karan jese hi apne m hi khoyi hui thi, are ye kya ye to apni naina h.
Ye yaha kese aaphunchi or yaha kya ker rahi h aaiye jante h.
Hua darasl ye ki ye mandir shivpur or ramgarh dono. Ki hi sima pe mojud h, bas dono ka. Rasta alag alag h.
Jaha karan mandir k aage wale darwaje se mandir m aaye the , jab karan puja samapt ker niche uterne laga, tabhi mandir k piche pale gate se naina mandir m aayi jo shivpur ka raste se juda hua tha.
Naina bhi yaha puja k liye hi aayi hui thi, jab usne mandir m enter kiya tabhi se hi karan ko vo ahasas hona shuru hua or esa hi ahasas naina ko bhi hona shuru ho gaya.
Naina man me :- ye kesi anubhuti h, esa pratit ho raha h jese mere jivan ka gantavya mere karib, esa kyu lag raha h jese abhi tak m adhuri thi or wo adurapan dur kerne wale mere nikat h.
Esa hi ahasas ko anubhav kerte hue naina wahi kho si gayi, bilkul sthir ho, lekin karan jese hi mandir se kuch dur nikla naina ki tandra tuti to uski tandra tuti.
Jisse wo chonk gayi or turant us or bhagi bhi jis or se use vo ahasas ho raha tha, lekin tab tak karan or Kaya bahut aage nikal gaye the.
Jisse naina hatash ho gayi or uski ankho m ek pal yu asrudhara bahane lagi, jese uska koi apna uske bahut hi najdik aaker bhi bina usse mile dur chala gaya.
Naina :- ye kya ho raha h mere sath kyu baar baar mujhe esi madhur anubhuti de, fir use yu chin ,apni beti ko kasht de rahi ho maa.
Naina kuch der wahi sab soch dukhi hoti rahi fir wo mandir m ja puja kerne lagi.
Wahi dusri or
Karan or Kaya jab ghar pahunche to paya ki unki chachi jag chuki h, karan unhe hug ker good morning wish kerta h Or kaya
Nidhi karan k mathe ko chumte hue :- good morning mera pyara bacha, good morning beti,itni subah subah kaha gaye the tum dono beta.
Karan :- kahi ni chachi bas pas k hi mandir hi gaye the, wese aap itni jaldi kese uth gayi chachi.
Nidhi :- pata ni beta aaj kese itni jaldi ankh khul gayi, lekin aaj man bada hi khush ho raha h, man ker raha h khushi se jhum uthu, esi anubhuti ho rahi h jald hi kuch esa hone wala h, jo is ghar m fir se khusiya le aayega beta (apne past ko yaad ker) or purane ghavo ko bhi bhar dega.
Karan :- ha chachi esa jarur hoga dekhna dada dadi ko bhi ek din apni galti ka ahasas hoga or fir hum sab mil ker rahege.
Karan ne nidhi ko santavana dete hue esa kaha taki unka mood kharab na ho.
Nidhi :- acha wo sab chodo ye batao beta kya khaoge nashte m, kya kya pasand h hume
Karan masti kerte hue :- chachi aap to in hatho se kuch bhi bana do, humari to wahi pasand ban jayegi.
Nidhi :- acha beta itna pasand apni chachi k hath khana.
Karan majak kerte hue :- or ni to kya chachi, wo to chachu ki kismat achi thi jo aap unko pahale mil gayi, ni to m pakka aapko apni gf bna ker aapse shadi ker leta, akhir itni beautiful or acha khane wali Wife or kaha milegi.
Nidhi sharmake jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola badmash, apni chachi se shadi karega, ruk tujhe m batati hu.
Ye bol wo karan ki or bhagi or karan bhi bhaga tabhi waha ranvir bhi aapahuncha or karan uske piche chup gaya.
Nidhi :- badmash apne chacha k piche kya chupta h, bahar
Karan :- chachu bacha lo.
Rajiv masti kerte hue :- bhatije ye subah subah kisse panga le liya, ager mane Tujhe bachane ki kosis ki to meri bhi kher ni.
Nidhi :- ab baat samjh hi gaye ho to side ho jaiye or Tu badmash idher aa jara.
Rajiv side hatte hue:- sorry bhatije.
Karan :- are chachu ye to dhoka h.
Nidhi :- ab aaya na bachu ut pahad k niche, ab punishment k liye ready ho jayo.
Ye bol wo apna hath uthati h karan bhi jhut mut ka darte hue ankh band ker leta h, lekin agle hi pal hi use apne gal p kisi k hotho ka ahasas hua, jo or koi ni nidhi k the, jisne pyaar se karan k gal p kiss ki thi.
Karan ankh khol k dekhta h nidhi ko to wo boli.
Nidhi :- are ese kya dekh rahe ho (ankh marte hue) ab m bf ko kiss bhi ni ker sakti.
Ye bol nidhi has padi or sath m karan bhi, tab Rajiv bola.
Rajiv :- are bhai bhai, wo mera eklota mal h, uspe to najar mat daal .
Nidhi Rajiv k pet m sharma k koni marti h, karan haste hue bola.
Karan haste hue :- dekha chachu bhatije ko dhoka dene ka natija, ab jhelo.
Yu hi masti majak k sath karan waha thodi der ruk nikal pada apne room ki or per raste m diya ka room bhi aaya to usne socha ki jabse diya aayi h wo usse thik se baat bhi na ker paya, isliye wo uske room p knock kerta h.
Diya kuch min m gate kholti h to subah subah karan ko dekh khush ho jati h Or gale mil boli.
Diya :- are bhaiya aap,good morning.
Karan pyar se :- good morning diyu, mane disturb to ni kiya na.
Diya :- are kesi baat kerte ho aap, aap to mere pyare bhaiya aapke aNe se m bhala disturb ho sakti hu, aap khade kyu ho aaiye na ander bhai.
Ye bol wo karan ko apne sath le aayi or bed or sofe per beth uske kandhe p si r rakh li.
Diya :- ab boliye bhai, aaj itni subah subah apni diyu ki yaad kese aayi.
Karan :- tumse sorry bolna tha gudiya
Diya :- sorry kyu bhai.
Karan :- at first sorry diyu, ek to tum itni dur se mujhse milne aayi or m tumhe time hi ni de pata.
Diya :- koi baat ni bhai, i can understand, aapko apni family ko bhi to time dena hota hi h na.
(Nam ankho se)M to is baat se hi khush hu bhai ki aapne mujh jesi anath or apvaitra ladki ko naya jivan deker apnaya, jo apne past k kaaran kisi ko muh dikhane layak bhi ni h.
Diya ki baat m chupa uska dard karan mahasus ker raha tha, usne turant diya ko sine se laga liya or uski bhi ankh nam ho gayi.
Karan diya k ansu pochte hue:- pagli kisne kaha tu anath h, ya apvitra h pagli Tu to meri vo pavitra shakti h jiske kaaran aaj m or meri jaan jyoti aaj sahi salamat h, naya jivan to hum dono bhai bahan ko tumne a h meri gudiya, is sansar m bhai humesha bahan ki raksha kerta h lekin tumne apne bhai k jivan ki raksha ki , or esi meri apvitra h esa savayam vidhata bhi aake kahe to m usko bhi nakar du.
Or ek baat humesha yaad rakh lena gudiya, humari pavitra is sharir se ni balki humare charitra or humari hriday k sad vichaaro se hoti h, ye sharir to nashwar h yahi rah jayega, lekin humare sath jaker ishwer k paas jo humari pavitra ka praman dete h vo humare sadkarm.
Diya karan ki baat ki gaharayi samjhte hue :- thanks bhai aap sach m bahut ache ho or pyare bhi aapne mere sare avsaad ko kitni aasani se dur ker diya.
Karan :- thanks ki bachi wo sab to thik h, lekin aage se khud ko anath ya family se alag kaha na to bahut pitegi.
Diya masti kerte hue :- bhai kya aap mujhe maroge.
Karan :- ha bilkul vo bhi bahut jyada.
Diya haste hue :- rahane do rahane do, aap se esa bilkul ni hoga.
Karan :- acha bachu apne bhaiya ko challenge.
Diya :- ji ha bilkul.
Karan sofe k cuison se majak m marte hue :- acha fir ye le chudel
Diya :- kya bole m moti, ruko m abhi batati hu you bandar.
Ye bol wo karan p tut padi or fir shuru hui dono bhai bahan ki pillow fight, jisme kuch der baad karan diya ko khus kerne k liye jan bhujke haar jata h
Karan :- are bas bas rajkumaari ji apne is nachij ki gustakhi ko shama ker dijiye.
Diya haste hue :- shama mil jayegi bhaiya lekin ek shart h, aap ne kuch der pahale kaha tha na ki aap mujhe time na de paye,
to aapki saja ye h ki aap mujhe or Kaya ko ghumane leke jaoge bas hum tino hi jayenge.
Karan :- ok done diyu, but next week
Diya ;- next week kyu bhai.
Karan :- kyonki gudiya abhi samay ghume ka ni balki yudh ki teyario ka h.
Diya chonk ker :- kesa yudh bhai.
Karan short m kuch baate batata h or sham ko jyoti samet sabhi se is bare m meeting ka decide kerte h,
Wahi dusri or
Naina mandir se aker apne kamre m bethi aaj hui ghatna k baare m soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi samar waha bhagta hua aaya.
Samar :- naina bahan gajab ho gaya.
Naina :- kya hua bhai aap itni chonke hue kyu ho esa kya dekh liya.
Samar :- tum mere sath chalo sab pata chal jayega.
Ye bol naina ko Samar apne sath leke hall m jata h, jaha pahunch naina ne jo dekha to wo bhi chonk gayi.
Kyunki samne preety or shruti dono ek dusre se yu hasti hui bate ker rahi thi jese paki saheliyaan ho or usse bhi jyada herani ki baat thi ki preety ek baar fir apne purane avatar m aachuki thi, yani ki wahi roop jisme wo naina se mili thi, usne ek sleveless top or mans jeans pahani thi or wese hi apne balo ko bandhe hue thi, dur se to use koi ladka hi samjh bethta.
Preety naina ko dekh apne purane andaz me :- are sister, uth gayeli Tu, bole to good morning.
Naina herani se :- good morning di, wo sab to thik h per ye kya h
Preety :- wo sab chodo sister, pahale tumhe ek good news yani ki ek rapchik news dene ka h mujhe, tumko malum h kal raat ko hi apna or shruti ki Friendship ho gayi h bole to full to patch.
(Shruti se) kyu sahi boli na m partner.
Shruti :- ofcourse partner, vese hi naina or bole to sorry bhi haa, mane gusse m tumko kya kuch ni bola tha us din, lekin tension not Tu apni partner ki sister h means apni sister, koi bhi problem ho to batana.
Naina herani se :- ok
Naina ek taraf to heran thi ki ek raat m hi prety ne esa kya jadu kiya ki shruti m itna change aa gaya, per use pura bharosa tha preety p ki wo kuch galat ni karegi, isliye wo khush thi.
Tabhi veer bhi vaha aa gaya or vo bhi ek baar dekh preety ko choka or fir bola.
Veer :- are kya baat h bhai, humari lady don firse apne original roop me.
Fir yu hi hasi majak k sath thodi bahut bate hui, fir jesa ki dono bevdiyo ne decide kiya tha vese hi dono akele hi nikal gayi ek or bina naina or baki sab ko bataye ki wo ja kaha rahi h.
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Diya se milne k baad karan apne kamre m jata h to pata h ki jyoti uth ker naha chuki h or aaine k same bethi baal bana rahi h.
Tab karan chupchaap piche se jaker jyoti ko good morning wish kerta h or gal chum leta h.
Karan :- good morning meri gudiya.
Jyoti karan k gal apne gal se sahalate hue :- good morning mere janu Bhaiya, vese aap kaha gaye the.
Karan pyaar se :- m na bhagwan ji ko thanks kahane mandir gaya tha, jo unhone mujhe itni pyaari or gudiya si bahan di jo mujhe kitna pyaar kerti h, uske liye.
Jyoti bacho jese :- kya sachi Bhaiya.
Karan :- muchi meri gudiya.
Jyoti :- fir to mujhe bhi mandir jana chahiye , thanks bolne jo unhone mujhe bhi itna pyaar kerne wale bhaiya diye..
Karan jyoti ko chedte hue :- wese pyaar se yaad aaya, raat ko apne is bhaiya k pyaar kesa laga tumhe.
Ye bol wo jyoti ki ek chuchi ko halka sa daba deta h.
Jyoti chihunk k :- aaj, gande kahi ke esa sawal bhi bhala koi puchta h apni bahan se.
Karan :- ab jiski itni pyari bahan hi uski gf hogi to banda or karega bhi kya madam.
Jyoti :- hmpphhh, mujhe ni pata, per aap bahut gande ho.
Karan haste hue :- acha ji raat ko bade maje se bol rahi thi suck my boobs bhai, kha jao inhe, or ganda hua m , wah bhai wah.
Jyoti jo sharm se lal ho gayi thi wo jhuta gussa dikhate hue.
Jyoti :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii, aaj to m aapko chodungi ni,
Ye bol wo karan pe tut padi, usne pahale to karan ko bister p gira k khub gudgudi ki.
Karan :- haha, are bas ker gudiya sorry.
Jyoti :- ab aaya na ut pahad k niche.
Karan shararati andaz ankh marte hue:- ont pahad k niche, ya utni k niche.
Jyoti sharmate hue karan ki chati p marte hue :- aap sudheroge ni na.
Yu hi hasi majak kerte hue dono bhai bahan ki ankhe apas m takragayi or wo ek dusre m khote chale gaye or fir achanak se jyoti ne karan k hotho k giraft m le bade hi pyaar se use kiss kerne lagi, jisme karan ne jyoti ka bharpoor sath diya.
Fir kuch der baad jyoti kiss tod k karan k sine pe let gayi or boli.
Jyoti :- bhai m bata ni sakti kal raat k humare milan se mujhe kitne aanand ki anubhuti hui, aapki baho ka sukun, aapke pratyek ang ka sparsh ek alag hi aanand de raha tha, man to ker raha tha humari ye kam krida kabhi khatm hi na ho.
Karan :- mera bhi. Kuch esa hi haal tha meri gudiya, Tu hi to mera parmanand h
Jyoti :- bhai ab mujhe to us pal ka intezar h jab hum sharikrik roop se bhi ek honge.
Karan :- wo samay bhii jald hi aayega gudiya, kyunki m chahta hu humara milan koi esa vesa na ho, humara milan bahut hi special hona chahiye na.
Jyoti :- hmm bhai, per
Karan jyoti k bhay ko samjhate hue :- m tumhare bhay ko samjhta hu meri jaan or esa hi kuch hal mera h, per yahi humari niyati h gudiya, jise hume swikarna hoga gudiya.
Lekin m tumse wada kerta hu gudiya humari life m bhale hi koii bhi aaye, lekin mere liye mere liye tujse badke koi na hogi mere pe or mujse jude har nirnay p tumhara adhikaar hoga.
Karan ne indirectly jyoti ko yakin dila diya tha ki uska pahala sex jyoti k sath hi hoga, per kya karan apna vada nibha payega, vo to aage hi pata chalega.
Tabhi achank bahar se unhe kuch aawaaz aati h dono bhai bahan bahar jaker dekhte h to pate h ki unke dada dadi ghar wapas aa gaye h jo sahar gaye the apme kisi kaam se.
Jo or kuch ni ranvir ko bahar nikalana thha, lekin karan ki vakra drishti ne unke har kaam bigad diye the, or to or ab karan ki vakra drishti ne dada dadi ki raato ki ninde bhi uda di thi, unhe bhayankar sapne aate jinme unhe ye ahasas dilaye jate ki wo kitne bade pap k bhagidaari ban chuke h or to or unke hath se ek badi deal bhi nikal. Chuki thi, jiske kaaran unka mood or off tha.
(Friends yaha m dada dadi ki saja ko short m hi niptana chahta hu kyunki ab m is chapter ko jald hi pura kerna chahta hu, aapka kya khayal h is baare m jarur batiyega)
Nidhi apne sas sasur ko dekh :- are maaji, pitaji aap aagaye.
Ye bol wo unke per chuti h, dada to ache se ashirwaad dete h lekin dadi apni akad se.
Dadi :- ha thik h thik h,agyai sasural ki yaad, ghar m mahaman aYe hue the or tumhe mayke ki padi thi
Nidhi upset ho :- maji wo
Dadi :- acha wo chod or ab yu khada hi rakhegi ya pani bhi pilayegi.
Ye bol wo sofe p beth jati h or nidhi pani lene jati h.
Karan or jyoti jab per chune aate h to tanz kaste hue boli.
Dadi :- wah kya dogle sanskaar h tumhari maa k ek or to badtamiji se humse baat kerte ho or ab per chu rahe ho, rahane do ye natak.
Karan gussa pite hue :- raat ko jo. Humne kiya tha, wo aapke hi karmo ka fal tha dadi or jo ab hum ker rahe h wo humari ma k sanskaar h.
Karan ki ye baat sun dadi jal bhun gayi, lekin dada ki gardan sharm se niche ho gayi, shayad unhe apni galti ka ahasas hone laga tha.
Karan or jyoti jab dada k per chute h to wo bahut pyaar se unko ashirwaad to dete h.
Per jyada kuch bol ni pate.
Fir dopaher k waqt jab nidhi karan or baki sabko khana khila rahi hoti h to dadi aake boli.
Dadi :- sun bahu, kitchen m jaker jo dudh ka pateela mane chadaya tha wo mere room m pahuncha de, tumhare sasur ko dawai leni h.
Nidhi :- maji bas 2 min bacho ko khana khila du fir ye ker dungi.
Dadi nidhi ki ye baat sun chod gayi.
Dadi man me :- mujhe na bolegi, lagta h ise bhi us kamini ki tarah sabak sikhana hoga.
Ye soch wo kitchen m gayi or us dudh k patile ko kafi der tak ubala jisse wo aag ki tarah garam ho gaya.
Dadi ne wahi chal chali thi, jo kisi samay usne asha p chali thi, lekin is baar use ye kaha malum tha uspe dandnayak ki amogh vakra drishti h
Karan ko jab is bare m pata chala yo use bahut gussa aaya or usne ab dadi ko acha sabak sikhane ki thani.
5 min baad nidhi jese hi barta lene aati h to karan ek roshni nidhi p chod deta, jiske sath hi nidhi sidhe patila uthane k bajaye ek kapde se utha leti h, lekin karan ne ek esi maya sath me or rach di jisse dadi ko wo kapda dikha hi ni.
Nidhi ne jese hi wo patila le jake kamre me rakh kitchen m loti to dadi ki herani ki sima na rahi, or wo apne kamre m jaker
Dadi :- ye kese ho sakta h is patile ko to mane khud... Aaaaahhhhhhhhhh
Ye bol dadi ne patle ko uthana chaha to garam patile se uska hath jal gaya or dudh bhi usper girte girte bacha, lekin kuch dudh k chite uske badan or hath p gire.
Dadi ki chikh sun sab kamre m aaye oe or sab chomk gaye, garima ko to asha k sath hua wahi hadsa yaad aagaya jo dadi ne kisi waqt asha k sath kiya tha
Aaj uski bhi vahi halat thi jo kisi samay usne asha ki thi, yahi to h karmo ka fal dandnayak ka dand.
Fir karan sabko dadi ki kartut k bare m batata h, jo usne ye bahana deker batayi ki usne dadi ko esa kerte dekh liya tha jab wo pani pine kitchen m gaya tha or chachi ko sahi waqt p kapda use kerne ko bhi bol diya tha or karan k us megic k kaaran hi nidhi ne karan ki ha me ha milayi.
Garima gusse se :- sharm ni aayi maa, aapko firse wahi nich harkat ki koshish kerte hue, itne salo m aap bilkul na badli .
Rajiv :- gudu ne bilkul sahi kaha, aap aaj bhi vesi ki vesi hi h, or m to ye bhi kahata hu ki jo aaj hua aap usike layak ho
Nidhi bichari chinta se :- maji m aapko malham laga deti hu aapko.
Dadi gusse se :- koi jarurat ni h mujhe, hath per sahi salamat h mere.
Ye bol wo nidhi ko waha se bhaga di.
Karan side m ye sab dekhte hue man me :- chachi ko to aapne bhaga diya dadi, per un karmo se kese picha chudaogi jinka dand aaj bhog rahi ho aap, kese bavhogi meri vakra drishti se.
Ye sab soch karan waha se nikal gaya.
Sham tak sabka mood off raha, lekin sham ko karan jab apni bahano or dosto k sath garden m bethe hue bate ker raha tha.
Tab jyoti ne ek baat notice ki ki karan gumsum sa betha hua h.
Jyoti :- kya hua bhai aap itne udaas kyu ho, subah wali baat ko bhul jaiye na.
Karan :- are ni gudiya wo baat ni h, darasal m ye soch raha tha, kitna acha lag raha h na aaj humare sath humari puri family h or hum sath m enjoy ker rahe h, Pee
ShivNi :- per kya bhaiya.
Karan :- per fir bhi kami mahasus ho rahi h n gudiya, sonam ki kami, kitne din ho gaye na sona se baat kiye hue h na radha.
Radha udaas hote hue:- wahi to bhai , mujhe sonu ki bahut yaad aarahi h, hume use sath leker aana tha
Karan :- yaad to aaj mujhe bhi bahut aarahi h gudiya humari sonu ki, subah se Phone bhi ni lag raha uska, pata ni kaha hogi meri pyari sonu.
Tabhi karan samet sabke kaano m ek aawaz padi, jisse sab chonk gaye.
Aaapki sonu aapko chod ker kaha jayegi bhaiya.
Karan ne chonk k piche mud k dekha to waha main gate p sonu khadi thi hatho m ek apna bag liye.
Karan khushi se :- sonu
Ye bol bhag k jata h or sonam ko kaske apne gale se laga leta h, sonam bhi itne din baad apne bhaiya, apne prem ki bhao m simat us sukoon ka aanand lene lagi.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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