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Karan k ganv k hi ek ghar me ek admi bed per tadaf raha tha, uske pure sharir per ghav ho chuke the or jinse khun ris raha tha , jo usko mrityu tulya pida de raha tha

Ye admi or koi ni diya ka sasur tha, vo dard k mare tadf raha tha or bar bar apne bete ko bol raha tha ki wo kuch kare.

Lekin wo kahate h na insaan ka jab bura waqt aata h to charo or se aata h vesa hi uske sath ho raha tha, uske bete ko apne baap ki is halat per dukh hone se jyada uspe ghin aarahi thi, lekin fir bhi wo bola ki wo kuch kerta h or ghar se bahar chala gaya.

Siya ka sasur apne bete ki har mansha ko Samjh raha tha jis kaaran wo bahar jaker rote hue bola.

Sasur :- hey bhagwan ye kis janm ka badla le raha h mujhse pahale ye bhayankar bimari dedali or ab beta bhi mod raha h, kyu bhagwan kyu bhagwan.

Abhi wo ye baat bol hi raha tha ki tabhi us kamre m achank ek hasi gunjj jo bahut hi darawni thi.

Sasur :- kkkkon

Tabhi waha ek tez roshni k sath ek kavachdhari purush prakat hua jiske hath me trishul tha or chahre pe ye mask.


Yuvak :- bhagwan ko kya dosh de h murkh apni is halat ka tu khud jimedar h.

Sasur darte hue :- kon ho tum.

Yuvak :- tujh jeso ko marg per lane ko jise swayam karmfal data ne bheja h, m wahi hu jise ye sansar dandnayak k naam se jantaa h

Ji ha dosto siya k sasur k samne swayam dandnayak khada tha, dandnayak ka naam sunte hi siya k sasur ki fat k hath me aagayi, kyunki use pata tha ki karmfal data shani ko kaha jata h or unka dand chakra vishvikhyat h ki kitna durbhar h wo.

Sasur tadafte hue :- dandnayak, par aap mujhe kyu tadfa rahe h , m to swayam shani bhakt hu, har shaniwar tel chadate hu, puja kerta hu.

Dandnayak :- murkh tujhe kisne kaha ki ye puja path, ya tel chadane se tu apne karmo se bach jayega, or yadi Tu sacha shani bhakt hota to esa ghinona paap na to kabhi kerta,,. Or na hi aaj teri ye halat aaj hoti.

Sasur :- kesaa paap, mane koi paap ni kiya.

Dandnayak krodh se :- kya kaha tu papi ni, kya us ladki ko ghar se beijat kerke nikalna ko teri bahu thi, teri beti saman thi usko tune beijjat kerke ghar se nikala apne lalach k kaaran.

Sasur :- kesa paap wo mera haq tha akhir mere bete ki shadi hui usse uske baap ne mere satg dhoka kiya h pap uske baap ne ni mane ni.

Dandnayak :- satya kaha h kisi ne vinaash kaale vipareet buddhi, tujh jese nich ko samjhane ka koi labh ni, Tu keval ab dand ka adhikari h, isliye ab tu Humare dand chakr se jivan bhar ni nikal sakega, Or tumhara jivan nark se bhi battar hoga, yahi dand h mera.

Ye bol ker dand nayak apna trishul gayab kerte hue uske pass aaye or uske per ko pakadte hue bole,

Dandnayak :- isi per se tumne apni ghar ki lakshmi ko laat mari thi na.

Phir uske per ko dandnayak ek halka sa jhatka diya, jisse uske per m bhayankar pida hui vo dard k mare chilane laga.

Dandnayak :- apni beti saman bahu ko lat marne wale dusht jis per se tune use laat mari thi, le tere karmo ka dand , ab tu is per se kisi pe prahar kerna to dur ab khud iske sahare chal tak ni payega.

Apna hathiyaar late hue,

Dandnayak :- or ha ye mat sochna tera dand pura hua ye to abhi keval aarambh h or smaran rakhna, dandnayak na kabhi kuch bhulta h or na hi kisi paapi ko shama kerta h

Ye bol dandnayak gayab hota h or pahunch gaya apne ghar yani Rajiv ki haveli or waha karan apne asli roop m aagaya.

Lekin ye kya ager karan yaha h to komal k sath kon gaya h.

Karan ghar me enter ker jese hi kitchen m pani pine jata h to nidhi bol uthi.

Nidhi :- are karan beta tum yaha tum gaye ni abhi tak.

Karan herani se :- kaha chachi.

Nidhi :- are tum aaye the n thodi der pahale bole the ki komal ko apne sath kahi leker ja rahe ho or ye bol komal ko apne sath leke gaye the.


Karan ye sun ker bahut heran tha wo to kafi der se haveli m tha hi ni, wo sochne laga


Karan man me :- m to kaam se pahale bahar gaya hua tha or fir siya k ghar or fir yaha komal ko kon leker gaya,

jyoti ya rohan to bina bataye Mujhe esa kuch karenge ni, jarur kuch to gadbad h .

Per pahale mujhe chachi ko sambhalna hoga unhe sachai ka pata ni chalna chahiye verna bahut badi gadbad ho jayegi.

Karan :- oh ha chachi hum bus nikal hi rahe the tabhi mujhe or komal ko pyas lagi to m yaha pani ki bottle lene aaya tha.

Nidhi :- oh acha, aram se jana beta or apna khayal rakhna.

Karan :- ji chachi.

Ye bol kitchen se nikal ker jaldi se bahar ki or bhagta h or jaldi se garage se dusri jeep nikal us disha m bad gaya jaha se use komal ki urja mahasus ho rahi thi.

Wahi dusri or

Komal ko najane kyu aaj Pahali baar karan k sath acha mahasus kyu ni ho raha tha, uske man m akaran hi bhay or shanka ka janm ho raha tha, shuru shuru m to usne ignore kiya lekin jese jese wo ghar se dur ja rahe the ye bhay bhadta ja raha tha.


Tabhi side m betha karan ya yu kaho jo bhi koi wo duplicate tha vo muskurate hue bola.

Karan d :- kya hua gudiya tum ghabrayi hui sir kyu lag rahi ho (ghahri or darawani aawaz me, sab kuch thik to h naa) .

Komal darte hue :- kkkuch bhi to ni bhaii, m kaha dar rahi hu.


Karan :- good girl.

Ye bol karan fir se gadi chalane laga, komal ko ab apna doubt sahi hota najar aaraha tha, lekin use samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo kya kare.

Abhi usne apne aas pass dekha to samne ki or jese uski najar shishe m padi to chikh padiiiiii dar se.

Hua darasl yu tha ki rear view miror me usko apna aks to normal dikh raha tha, per karan k aks ki jagah koi behad hi darawna jiv dikh raha tha jise dekhte hi masum komal ki chikh nikal padi.

Komal ki chikh sun us duplicate ne gadi roki or bola.


Karan :- kya hua komL tum chilayi kyu ye bolte hue.

Komal kampte hue :- ni mere karib mat aao, tum mere bhai ni ho.

Karan d shetani muskurahat k sath :- are ye tum kya bol rahi ho choti m tumhara bhai to hu tumhara karan bhaiya.

Komal chikhte hue :- ni tum mere bhai ni ho sakte tum koi shetan ho mane abhi miror m dekha h

Jese hi ye baat usne yani karan k roop wale bahrupiye ne suni to jor jor se hasne laga bhayankar hasi k sath or bola.

Oh to tumhe sach ka pata chal hi gaya or usike sath wo duplicate apne asli roop m aGaya jo bahut hi bhayank tha kuch esa

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Jise dekh komal ki halat kharab ho gayi or wo boli


komal :- kkon ho tum or mere bhaiya k sath tumne kya kiyaaa.

Darinda :- apne bhai ki chinta chod ladki or khud ki chinta ker ladki, kyunki tu ab chalawe ki kaid m achuki ho.

Ye bol wo komal k pas ane ki koshis kerta h.


Komal ye nam sun ander tak ka moot gayi.

Komal :- cchalawa.

Uski aawaz se saf pata chal raha tha ki wo kuch to janti h us darinde ya yu kahoo us chalawe ko.

Komal :- please me re paas mat aoo, please mujhe jane doo yaha se, mane tumhara kya bigada h.

Chalawa :- jana chahti ho to ,(sochne ka natak kerte hue) hmmm thik h jao, jao choda tumhe.

Komal jese hi ye sunti h jaldi se gadi se uterne ki koshis kerti h per haye bechari ki kismat ya yu ka ho uske kharab per, jiske kaaran vo bhagna to dur thik se gaadi se uter bhi ni pati or bichari niche gir gayi.

Jisse usko chote Ayi or wo dard se bhai chilane lagi.

Giri hui komal k pas aaya or haste hue bola.

Chalawaa :- kya hua komal, jao dekho chalawe ne tujhe chod diya or tum ho ki ja hi ni rahi.

Kyu mere sath chalna chahogi kyaaa.

Komal uthne ki kosis kerti h apni baisakhi ki taraf hath bhadate hue, lekin us dusht ne apni shakti ka prayog kerte hue uski baisakhi ko dur fek diya.

Chalawaa :- jao jao ruk kyu gayi, jao na.

Haha jana to dur tum khud se hil bhi ni sakti langdi, jin baisakhiyo k bharose Tu yaha se nikalna chahti thi, wo to dur ja giri, ab kya karegi tu langdi.

Chalawe k muh se khud k liye langdi shabd sun komal ka dil rone laga, use bahut rona aaraha tha apni is kamzori pe.

Komal rote hue boli :- dusht sharm ni aati tujhe ek apahij ladki ka majak udaate, are meri ye bimari to ishwer ki den h per kabhi kya tune khud ko dekha h, na to Tu insaan h na janwar, are dusht sunderta kurupata, swasth or bimari to ishwer ki den hoti h jo vo vyakti ko karmanusar deta h.

Mera to pata ni per itna to m samjh gayi ki tujh jese papi ko esa sharir isiliye mila h kyunki tu ek nisahay or apahij ladki ko istarah beijat kerne wala adham prani h, dhikkar h tujhpe dhikkaar.

Chalawaa gusse see:- komaaaal...

Komal us chalawe ki tez chikh sun saham gayi.

Chalawa :- mane to socha tha ki tujhe apne sthan p aaram se bina kisi nuksan k leler jaunga taki marne se pahale kuch to raahat mile tujhe, per kamini langdi tu is layak ni.

Ab dekh m kya kerta hu, pahale to mn yahi bich raste m teri ijajat ko tar tar karunga fir nangi hi tujhe balo se ghasitte hue lker jaunga.

Ye bol wo komal k najdik aane laga.


Komal rote chikhte hue :- please esa mat kero, mane tumhara kya bigada h, m kahi ki ni rahungi wernaa

Chalwa :- kamini ye sab tujhe mera apmaan kerne se pahale sochna chahiye tha.

Ye bol wo komal k top k gale ko pakad jese hi fadne ko hua ki tabhi achanak se ek amogh tir uske hath m alaga or aarpar ho gaya.

Achanak hue is prahar se chalawa dahal gaya or chilaker piche gir pada.

Chalawa gusse se :- kisne, kisne kiya ye.

Tabhi samne se aawaz aati h.

Tere is baap ne kaminee.

Chalawa ne samne dekha to paya ki samne karan khada jiske hath me uska amogh dhanush tha.
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Chalawa :- oh to Tu bhi aa gaya rakshak.

Karan :- ab jaha galat karm ho rahe ho or dandnayak na aaye esa kabhi ho sakta h, lekin fir bhi antim chetawani de raha hu.

Marg pe aajao or apne hathiyaar ger ker komal se pero m girke mafi mang lo anyatha ager m ye sab kerwane p aaya to tumhe tarika pasand ni aayega.

Chalawa apne hath se tir nikalte hue :- mafi or is langdi se kabhi ni, ab Tu dekh pahale to m tujhe iske samne marunga fir teri lash p hi iska m...


Aaahhhhhh

Chalawa aage kuch bol pata usse pahale hi ek or ban karan ne uske per p de mara.
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Karan :- kamine tune apna akhri moka kho diyaa h, ab mott k liye teyar ho jaa.

Ye bol karan ne ek or ban uski or chalaya.

Chalawa ban nikalte hue :- itni jaldi ni kamine.

Ye bol wo jaldi se adrishy ho gaya

Karan ye dekh turant dod ker komal k pas gaya , komal thi to bachi hi wo bahut jyada dar chuki thi ye sab dekh ker isliye uski apni ankhe kholne ki himat bhi na thi.

Karan komal ko uthne ki kosis kerte hue :- komal. Meri gudiya Tu thik to h n.

Komal itna dar chuki thi ki usne karan ko pahachama ni or wo use chalawa samjhte hue boli.

Komal :- please mujhe mat maro mujhe jane do,

Ye bolte hue wo karan se dur hatne lagi.

Karan :- komal daro mat gudiya m tumhara bhai hu karan ye dekho.

Kafi der samjhane k baad jab yakin hua komal ko ki samne karan hi h to wo jor se bhaiyaaa chilate hue rote hue karan k sine m muh chupa k rone lagi.


Karan :- gudiya ab dar mat meri bachi, tera bhai aa gaya h ab tujhe koi kuch ni ker sakega, chal ghar chalte h.

Komal bas darte hue ha m gerdan hila firse karan k chipak gayi.

Ye bol wo karan ko god m uthane ko hi hua ki tabhi chalawa ki aawaz aayi.

Chalwa :- itni bhi kya jaldi h rakshak pahale mujhse to do do hath ker le.

Ye bolne k sath hi hava me se ek tir tezi se karan or komal ki or aaya.

Karan :- komal bacho,


ye bolte hue wo komal k sath ek disha m ho gaya or tir uski bah ko chute hue nikal gaya, komal to wese hi us dusht ki aawaz fir sun dar gayi thi or wo karan se or jor se chipak gayo.


Karan gusse se :- chup ker war kya ker raha h dust ager veer h to samne aake lad yu kayro ki tarah yudh kya ker raha h.

Ye bol karan ne jis disha se tir aaya tha us disha m tir chala diya

Chalawa :- m to samne hi hu rakshak tujhme ager dam h to mujhse lad.

Ye aawaz fir kisi or se aayi or fir dusri disha se ek tir karan ki or aaya jisse wo bar bari bacha.

Karan man me :- ye kapti to mayavi yudh ker raha h, mujhe bhi usko usiki bhasha m jwab dena hoga per pahale.

Karan ne komal ko alag kerte hue bola
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Karan :- gudiya m tumhe gadi m leke jaraha hu tum wahi betho tav tak m is dusht ka kam tamam ketta hu.

Komal :- ni bhaiya m please aap mat jaiye m aapko kahi ni jane dungi, wo bahut hi khatarnaak h, wo dusht kahi aapko kuch ker na dee, please aap chalo yaha se

Karan :- komal tum chinta mat kero meri bahan tuumhare bhai ka janm inhi dushto k ant k liye hua h, tum bas ab dekho ki kese is dusht ko m tumhare apman ka dand deta hu.

Or karan ne apni kasam dete hue komal ko gadi m bithaya , tabhi ek tir udta hua aaya jiska nishana komal thi, per ye kya karan ne apne ek hath se or gusse me guraya,

Karan :- bas bahut hua, ab bahut dikha li tune apni maya.

Ye bol karan ne apni ankh band ki or wo apne dandnayak roop m aagaya, jise dekh komal ki herani ki simaa na rahi use to samjh ni aaraha tha ki ho kya raha h.
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Dandnayak ne apna dhanush ko uper utha khali pratyancha khich ek mantra bola jiske sath hi uske dhanush per ek tir aagaya.

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Karan :- jai shri hari.

Ye bol karan ne ban hava me uper ki or chod diya.

Jiske sath hi pure area m ek nili roshni fel gayi or usike sath hi chalawa k Sare adrishy mayavi dhanush jo karan p charo or se war ker rahe the najar aane lage or usike sath jal kee bhasm ho gaye.
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Chalawa visible :- asambhav is maya ka tod to devo k pas bhi ni tha, tune ye kese kiya


Karan :- dusht tere pas keval tuch maya h, per mere pad sakshat mayapati bhagwan ka narayan ashirwad h.

Ye bol karan ne ek tir chalawa ki or choda, lekin wo gayab ho gaya.

Chalawa dusri disha m pahun:- hahaha, itna aasan ni h mujhe marna , le vach mere is war se.

Ye bol chalawe ne ek bar karan pe chalaya, lekin is bar karan ready tha usne bhi apna ban chalaya or jiske sath hi us chalawe ka baan ek shan m nasht ho gaya.

Karan muskurate hue use or war kerne ka ishara kerta h, lekin wo chalawa apne nam k anurup sidhe war na ker bar bar gayab ho alag disha se war kerne laga.

Kahi wo jamin per hota to kabhi asman pe, kabhi aage kabhi piche, wo har Or se tiro kiha barsaat ker raha tha, per karan ne uske har tir ka jwab badi bahaduri se de raha tha.

Jise dekh chalawa ka para high ho gaya or wo bola.

Chalawa man me :- ise ese harana bahut mushkil h, lagta h isper sharirik ni mansik aghat kerna hoga.

Tabhi uski nazar jeep m dubki hui komal pe padi to uske dimag m ek shetani plaan aaya.


Tabhi usne hava me apne bahut se roop bana liye , jinhe dekh karan confuse ho gaya ki inmese asli kon h..


Chalawa k Sare roop ek sath :- kya hua rakshak dar gaye kya, abhi bhi vaqt h har man le.

Karan :- wo to m tujse manvaunga dusht.

Chalawa :- wo to samay hi batayega rakshak.

Ye bolte hue sabne ek sath karan per humla bol diya , lekin dandnayak k kavach per un tiro ka koi asar ni hua or fir karan bhi sabse ek sath yudh kerme laga.

Lekin tabhi uske kaano m komal ki chikh sunayi di.

Komal :- bhaiyaaaaaaaaa

karan ne us tarf dekha to paya ki chalawe ne uska dhyan bhataka kerapni chal chal di h, chalawa ka ek roop jo arishya tha usne piche se jaker komal ko apni giraft m le liya h.


Karan gusse se :- chalawee ager jan pyari h to chod de meri bahan ko.

Chalawa :- udher dur khada kya chila raha h rakshak ager h dam to aaker chuda le.

Karan ye sun komal ki or bhanda chahta h to use sab pratirop gher lete h or ek sath humla kerne lage.

Karan gusse se laal ankho se :- bas bahut hua

Ye bol usne apne dhanush ki pratyancha khich or ankh band ker mantra jap kiya.
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Karan man me :- vayuastra prakat ho..

Tabhi karan k dhanush per prakat hua vayudev ka mahan vayuastra jiske prayog ye bade se bade tufan ko laya bhi ja sakta h Or nasht bhi.
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Vauastra k prakat hote hi charo Or ka mosam badalne laga Or ese lagne laga ki jese bahut bada tufan aane wala ho.

Karan ne vayuastra ko pranam kiya or aasan me chod diya.

Or uske esa kerte hi ek bada or khatrusne atufani bawander hava me prakat hua, jo chalawa ko apni or khich ker apne ander samahit ker nasht kerne laga

Komal ko ked kiye chalawe ne jese hi ye dekha to wo samjh gaya ki karan ko harana abhi uske bas ki baat ni, per usne apni kamini chal chal di.

Chalawa chilaya :- rakshak tune meri maya ko to tod diya lekin teri ye bahan bhi ab ni bachegi.

Karan bhag ker uski or bhadta hue :- niiiiiiiiiiiiii

Ye bol usne badi tezi se hi apne bade nakhun komal k sine m ghopne hi wala tha ki achanak se ek jabardast prahar k sath hi kisi ne use jeep se utha ker dur tak fek diya.
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Ese kerne wale shaks ko jese hi karan ne dekha to use herani or khushi dono ek sath hui or uske muh se bas itna hi niklaaa.

Karan :- sakhiiii.

Ji ha dosto us chalawe se komal ko kaya ne hi bachaya tha jo kuch shan pahale hi waha pahunchi thi.

Tabhi ye kya ek chalawe ka pratibimb jo pata ni kese bach gaya tha usne piche se karan p war kerna chaha hi tha ki ek tir dusri disha se use alaga or wo vahi dher ho gaya.

Karan ne us disha me dekha to uski khushi or herani or bhi bad gayi.

Samne khadi shaks boli :- sirf aapki sakhi hi ni, aapki bahan bhi aayi h bhaiyaa.

Karan :- diyuuu.

Ha wo dusri shaks diya hi thi.
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Kaya us chalawa ko gardan se pakd k uthate hue :- kya be kayar sharm ni aati ek ladki pasand piche se war kerte hue.

Ye bol wo use utha ker karan k pas leker aayi.

Kaya :- lijiye sakha aapka shikar boliye iska kya kerna h.

Karan :- bata kamine kyu kiya meri bahan k apaharan ka prayaas.


Chalawa :- kuch bhi ker le rakshak ni bataunga m

Karan :- fir le mar.

Ye bol karan ne apne bagal me bandhe khanjar ko nikal uske sine m ghop diya.

Lekin ye kya karan k war kerte hi wo chalwa bhi bakiyo ki tarah hi gayab ho gaya, matlab ye bhi asli chalawa na tha.

Kaya :- sakha kya wo mar gaya.

Karan :- ni sakhi ye us chalawa ka ek or chal tha, wo humare hath se nikal ker bhag gaya.

Diya :- jyada der tak ni bach payega bhai, aap aagya kero m use patal se bhi ghasit ker aapke pas le aaungi.

Karan normal roop me aaate hue :- shant meri gadadhari bhim shant, itne din baad aayi ho pahale apne bhaiya k hriday se lag ker uske dil se virah ki agni to shant kero jo itne din tumse dur rahane k kaaran jal rahi. H

Ye sunte hi diya dod ker karan k gale lag gayi .

Diya :- itna yaad ker rahe the to milne kyu ni aaye bhaiya.

Karan (diya k mathe ko chum) :- kyunki m chahta tha ki meri diyu khud mere se milne aaye.


Karan diya ko thoda adjust ker kaya se bola.


Karan ankh mar :- apne hone wale husband k gale ni lagogi meri jaan

Ye sun kaya sharmate hue karan k gale lag gayi .

Tabhi unke kaan m aawaz aayi.

Are bhai hum bhi h yaha koi humse bhi mil lo.

Karan ne us or dekha to samne aman or jhumki bhi khade the.

Karan :- what a pleasent suprise m bata ni sakta aaj m kitna khush hu Ap sab ko yaha dekh.

Karan jhumki se :- are meri pyari jhumu kesi h.

Jhumki bhi karan k dod k gale mili or boli..

Jhumki :- aapse mil ker bahut khush hu bhaiya.

Fir karan aman k pas jaker majakiya andaz m bola.

Karan :- dhanybhag humare jo rasatal k adhipati ne hume darshan diye , (hath jod) sevak k praan swikar kare maharaj.

Aman :- kamine Tu ni sudherne wala.

Ye bol wo bhi karan k gale mila.

Fir karan ne sabse yu achanak aane ka kaaran pucha to aman ne bataya, aaj uske samrajya ko ek varsh purn ho chuke the isliye niyamanusaar wo ab kahi bhi aajaskta tha.

Aman :- bas isliye socha dost jese pichli baar tumne hume surprise diya tha is baar hum bhi tumhe de.

Jhumki :- kesa laga humara surprise bhai.

Karan jhumki k gaal chum :- bahut hi pyara meri pyari rajkumaari.

Tabhi karan ko komal ka dhyan aaya wo turant dod ker uske pas gaya.

Komal bahut dari hui thi, wo turant karan k chipak gayi or rone lagi, badi mushkil se komal ko karan ne shant kerwaya.

Tabhi aman or baki sab jese hi jeep k pas aaye to komal or dar gayi.

Karan pyar se :- daro mat mera bacha ye sab mere dost yani aPke bade bhaiya h, chalo sabko hello bolo.

Kafi der ki mashkat k baad komal shant hui , or fir kuch der baad wo thoda khulne lagi baki sab se.

Karan :- aman aap sab prathvilok per ho isliye apko yaha k anusar hi bheshbhusha dharan kerni hogi, taki kisi ko kuch sandeh na ho.

Diya :- aP chinta mat kijiye bhai hum sabn pahale hi ye soch ker aaye h.

Ye dekhiye.

Fir aman samet sabne megic se apni bheshbhusha badal li.


Sab bahut hi khubsurat lag rahe the kuch ese
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Lekin jese hi karan ki najar kaya pe padi to mano use uski najar hi ni hat rahi thi , usne bas simple si jeans top pahane the lekin uski ye sadgi hi to karan ko kYal ker rahi thi or ankho pe specs to uski khubsurti ko char chand laga rahe the.
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Karan ko yu khud ko ghurta paker kaya sharma gayi

or fir karan bhi jaldi se hosh m ghar ki or nikal gaya komal k sath or dusri gadi jo chalawa leker bhaga tha usme aman tha, karan ne use apni powers se un sab ko yaha ki har knowledge dedi thi.

Wahi dusri or

Naina ne havan prarambh ker diya tha or mantrocharan shuru hote hi ghar se badi hi bhayank aawaz ane lagi, or ye har kone se aarahi thi.

Naina :- aap sab mat dariye ye aawaaz un nakaratmak shaktiyo ki chinkhe h jo is pavitra agni k dhuye or mantrocharan se tilmila rahi h, wo humara kuch ni bigad sakti lekin dhyan rahe Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye, havan purn hone tak yaha se bilkul mat uthna.

Or naina apni baat purn ker yagya fir shuru ker deti h, tabhi apne sthan pe bethe tantrik ne mantra bol ek aahuti di.

Or usike sath ek gola nikal sidha haveli m pahunch gaya or us gole m se tarah tarah k bhut pret nikal ker aatank machane lage or sath hi sath havan ko nasht kerne k liye usme saman bhi fekne lage.

Rekha ka parivaar dar ker uthne hi wala tha ki naina ne unhe roka or ek mantra bol havan me ahuti di.

Tabhi havan me se ek pila rang ka gola nikal un bhut preto k pas gaya or usse esi roshni nikali ki sara ka Sare pret jal ker rakh ho gaye.

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Jise dekh sabke chahro p muskan aagayi or fir se havan start hua.

Tantrik :- preto se to bach gayi tu ladki , lekin ab dekhta hu ise kese sambhalti h.

Tantrik :- jai shetan


Ye bol ek ahuti usne di.

Jiske sath hi haveli m bhukamp aane laga, lekin naina aaj puri teyar thi, usne bhi ek mantra bol ahuti dete hue kaha.

Naina :- jai maa kali.

Or ahuti k sath hi bhukamp ruk gaya , yu hi tantrik ne naina k yagya ko rokne ki bahut koshish ki lekin naina ne maa ki shakti k prabhav se sab chal vifal ker di.

Ab samay aagaya tha yagya purn hone ka.

Naina man me :- bahut dikha li tune dusht tantrik apne shetan ki shakti, ab dekh meri maa ki shakti.

Ye bol naina ne kuch mantrocharan ker jau maa kali ka jaikara laga ek aahuti di, jiske sath hi havan se ek aag se bana trishul havan se nikla.

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jise naina ne pranam kiya or usike sath wo jaker us tantrik ki chati m ja laga.

Or uske lagte hi maa durga ki kripa se wo dusht jal ker rakh ho gaya, or fir naina ne safalta purvak yagya sampan kiya.


Or jese hi yagya sampan hua naina ki band ankho k same kuch drishya aane lage, jisme se pahale kuch drishyo se pata chala ki kese shruti m wo pret ghusa tha.

Hua darasal yu tha ki shruti ne kal sham ko pub me jane ka plan banaya tha late night, or wo usi k liye jane ko ghar k pichle darwaje se nikal gayi or anjane m uske per se wo lakshaman rekha bhi mit gayi tantrik isi moke ki talash me tha jese hi ye hua usne apne ek pret ko shruti m pravesh kerwa diya tha or subah tak rukne ko kaha tha.

Is drishya k baad jo drishy naina ne dekha use dekh naina ka shant man m krodh ki jwala bhadak uthi or uski bhohe tan gayi.

Wo gusse se khadi hui or apne sathiyo se boli .

Naina :- veer , preety, samar bhai, aap jaldi se saman pack kijiye ab hum ese ghar m ek shan bhi ni rukenge.

Naina ka esa reaction dekh sab chonk gaye, aakhir esa kya dekh liya tha naina ne.

Wahi dusri or

Sonam or reema ko govind ne pura vrindavan ke ek ek mandir k darshan kerwaye, jisse wo. Khush to thi, lekin uske man me ek asantushti thi.

Govind muskurate hue bole :- kya hua sonam ji, aapka chahta itna ashant kyu h kya aapko humara vrindavan pasand na aaya.

Sonam :- ni ni govind ji esi baat ni koi murkh ya durbhagi hoga jise vrindavan m aanand na aaye.

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Govind :- parantu kya devi


Sonam :- aapne hume pura vrindavan ghumaya, phir bhi na jane kyu esa aabhas ho raha h ki jese kuch to h jo abhi baki h, man bada hi asntust or adhir ho raha h jese koi to h jo mujhe bula raha ho

Govind :- hmm, kayi baar esi bhavnao ka sambandh humare vartmaan se ni apitu bhutkal se hota h devi, ho sakta h ki aapke bhutkal k karm aapko pukaar rahe ho.

Sonam :- matlab.

Govind :- matlab bahut shighr hi aapko gyaat ho jayega devi, vese karmo se smaran hua, aapko vrindavan k prasiddh karmfal data shani mandir k darshan to kerwye hi ni, jaha karmfal data swayam virajte h.

Sonam :- shani dev vrindavan me.

Govind :- ha devi vrindavan meek bahut hi suprasiddh or bada hi jagrit shani dham h, jise sansar kokilavan k naam se janta h.

Kokilavan ka naam sunte hi sonam ka man vaha jane ko adhir hone laga, to govind ne saharsh apna tanga us or le gaye.

Aakhir esa kya hua ki naina krodh se jal uthi , aakhir kon tha ye chalwa or kyu piche pada tha komal k or ab kese komal ko karan handle karega or kya nata h sonan ka kokilavan se janne k liye sath bane rahe

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Jese jese govind ka tanga kokilavan ki or bhad raha tha vese vese sonam ki bechani or dhadkan dono hi bhadti ja rahi thi

Sonam man me :- ye kya ho raha h mujhe, ye ahasas ye anubhuti jo mujhe vrindavan ki in galiyo m ho rahi h, wo kyu mujhe esi lag rahi h, jese m in sab se anjan ni hu, jabki yaha m aayi hi pahali baar, esa ahasas ho raha h mano m wahi pahuch chuki ho jaha meri manjil h, per wo manjil h kya.

Location :- shani lok

Shani jo ye sab muskurate hue dekh rahe the, tab narad ji ne bhi wahi prashn doharaya.

Shani :- sonam ko apni jis gantvya per pahunche ka abhas ho raha h Devrishi, wah gantavya or koi ni balki uske jivan ka vo satya h, jis kaaran wo karan se judi hui h or uske jivan ka ek mahatvapurn bhag bhi h.

Sonam keval kokilavan dham ki or hi ni apitu apne jivan k satya ki or bhad rahi, h or uska marg prashast ker rahe h gawale govind

Naradji :- parantu prabhu ye govind bhala h kon or kese wo itne guhd rahasya ko janta h, na jane kyu mujhe esa pratit ho raha h kahi to dekha h mane is gwale ko.

Shani haste hue :- are wah prabhu ki lila , Devrishi sonam ki bhanti apne bhi govind ko abhi tak na pahachaan, koi baat ni kuch der or dhairya rakhiye shighra hi aapko bhi apne prashn ka utter mil jayega or sonam ko bhi.


Abhi to aap is aane wali shubh ghadi ka se pahale k intezaar ka aanand lijiye.

Ye bol shani wapas dhyan m chale gaye


Wahi dusri or

Komal sahit karan wapas apne ghar ki or bhad raha tha, komal abhi bhi sahami hui karan se bilkul chipki hui thi.

Tab karan ne apni shakti ka use kiya jisse jeep apne aap chalne lagi, jise dekh komal ki herani or bhad gayi or wo dar k mare karan se dur ho boli.


Komal :- bbbhai ye sab kya h, ye sab aap kese ker rahe ho, aap sach m mere bhaiya hi ho naaa

Komal ki masumiyat dekh jaha karan ko bahut pyaar aaya wahi dusri or us bechari ki ye halat dekh use bahut dukh bhi ho raha tha.

Usne jhat se komal ko gale lagaya or bola,

Karan :- ni ni mere babu, daro mat m aapka bhaiya hu, ye dekho.

Ye bol karan ne apne hatho me ek band dikhaya jo use komal ne kal hi gift diya tha or usne ye baat notice ki thi ki chalawa jab karan k roop m uske sath tha, tab na hi uske hath me wo band tha or na hi uske gale ka wo locket.

Or sabse main baat jo dar ka ahasas use chalwa k sath ho raha tha, ab wo gayab ho chuka tha or uski jagah ab fir wahi prem or khud ko surakshit mahasus ker rahi thi komal.

Is baat ka ahasas hote hi bhai kahate hue fir se chipak ker siskne lagi.

Karan :- shant ho ja. Meri nanhi shant ho ja ab tera bhai aagaya h na, ab tuje koi kuch ni ker payega.

Komal ':- per bhai jo ye sab hua wo sab aapne kese kiya or aapke paas wo powerful weapon jese shri ram ji k pas the wo aapke pas kese aaye.

Karan bhulate hue :- are wah gudiya aapko kese pata ki ye hathiyaar ram ji k pas the.

Komal hi masumiyat :- bhai mane ramayan padhi thi or tv p bhi dekha tha unme ese hi hathiyaar ram ji k pas the or kuch rawan k pas bhi.

Lekin bhaiya ye sab aapke pas kese aaye, bhaiya mujhe bahut dar lag raha h , ab wo chalawa aapke bhi piche pad jayega , kahi aapko usne apko kuch ker diya to.

Karan :- acha tumne ramayan padhi h to ye baat to janti hi hogi ki rawan kitna shaktishali tha brahama ji se or shivji se kitne vardaan bhi mile the, fir bhi janti ho wo kyu hara ram se.

Komal :- kyunki raam ji khud bhgwan the isliye na.

Karan :- ha bhagwaan the lekin unhone liya to insan k roop m hi janm na, or kaha rawan tha mahashaktishali asur, wo sirf isliye hi ni jite kyuki wo bhagwan the ya unke avtaar the, balki wo isliye jite kyuki wo dharm or sachai k sath the

Meri ek baat humesha yaad rakhna gudiya, burayi chahe jitni shaktishali ho, per achai se wo kabhi ni jit sakti.

Komal :- ji bhai.

Karan :- ha ek baat or gudiya , aaj jo bhi yaha hua uske bare m ghar p chachi ya kisi ko bhi mat batana, werna wo bekar m hi dar jayenge.

Komal :- ji bhai per.

Karan :- m janta hu komal tum kya puchna chahti ho per abhi is bare m batane k liye na hi time sahi h or na hi jagah.

Fir karan ne komal ko samjha ker ghar ki or bhad gaya.

Raste m usne man hi man jyoti se contact kiya.

Jyoti :- bhai ap yu achanak bina bataye kaha chLe gaye the, chachi ne bataya ki aap komal ko leker kahi bahar gaye ho, sab thik to h n bhai, mujhe n jane kyu rahi rah ker kisi anhoni ka andesha ho raha h.

Karan :- tumhara andesha sahi h gudiya, anhoni abhi hote hote hi bachi h.

Jyoti tension se :- kyaaa, kya hua bhai aap esa kyu bol rahe ho, kahi apko ya komal ko kuch.

Karan :- shant gudiya shant filhal k liye aayi hui musibat tal chuki h or m or komal dono sahi h, m ghar aaker is vishy p baat karunga itna tum rohan ko bhi bol dena ki mujhe usse ekant m milna h.

Jyoti :- bhai ap sach m thik ho na.

Karan :- are ha meri jan tumhaari kasam mujhe kuch ni hua, or ha tumhare liye ek surprise h, tumse milne koi aaya h bas tum unke swaagat ki teyari kero.

Jyoti :- surprise! Bhai kon aaraha h batao na

Karan :- wo to mere pahuche k baad hi pata chalega tumhe meri jaan.

Ye bol jaldi se karan ne apna connection hata liya.

Kuch der baad karan ki gadi haveli pe pahunch gayi, karan ne paya ki jyoti or rohan samet sari bahane bahar aangan m hi bethe uska intezaar ker rahe h.

Karan ko aaya dekh shivani radha dod k uske pas gayi or shikayti andaaz me boli.

Shivani :- bhaiyu ye bahut galat baat h aap akele akele kaha chale gaye the ghumne

Radha :- ha or usse bhi galat baat aap sirf komal ko hi leke gaye bhai, that's not fare.

Karan :- are meri nanhi rajkmariyo m kahi ghumne ni gaya tha, m to humare yaha kuch guests ko pick kerne gaya tha.

Radha :- konse guest bhai, kaha h wo

Jyoti :- ha bhai ab batao bhi na kon aaya h.

Karan awaz dete hue :- aajao friends.

Karan ki aawaz sunte hi aman samet sab main gate se garden m enter kerte h, karan k jese jyoti bhi pahale to heran hui aman samet sabko dekh lekin fir wo bhi khushi se uchal padi, or jake sabse milne lagi, sabse pahale jhumki aaker gale lagi jyoti k kyunki itne din jyoti jab waha thi to dono m kafi bonding ho gayi thi.

Fir aman or diya se or last me kaya se gale lag boli.

Jyoti :- kesi ho my lovely bae.

Kaya :- bae ye ap kya bol rahi ho sakhi.

Jyoti kan me :- sshh mat bhulo tum. Abhi prathvi p ho or yaha per saheliya ese hi baat kerti h, to abse tum bhi mujhe nam se ya ese hi kuch bol ker bulana Or bhai ko bhi.

Kaya ko ye sun thoda atpata laga, lekin baad m usne man liya.

Fir karan apni baki sabhi bahano ko bhi sabse milwata h or unhe apne delhi wale friends bolke introduce kerwata h.

Sab unse mil ker bahut khush hue, aman rohan k pas jaker man hi man

Aman :- to aap hi h rohan yani dandnayak k rakshak kal, pranam h aapko.

Rohan man hi man :- aapko bhi mera pranam rasatal naresh, per please ab ye opcharikta chodiye , kyunki aap humare mahaman bhi h or humare mitra k mitra bhi to hum aapke mitra hi hue.

Yu hi man hi man dono ek dusre gale mile.

Jhumki jo almost shivani ki age ki hi thi wo bhi jald hi usse or radha or komal se ghul mil gayi.


Sabki aawaze sun garima rajiv or nidhi or kavyabhi bahar aate h or aman or baki k bare m puchte h to karan unhe apne friends bata ker introduced kerwata h.

Karan :- chachi m inhe hi milne jaipur gaya tha,ye sab jaipur kisi kaam se aaye the ye log to aaj hi jane ki baat ker rahe the, per mane saf saf bol diya inhe humare yaha rukna hi padega.

Kavya : bilkul sahi kiya lala tumne, are bacho yaha bilkul bhi sharmana mat ise apna ghar hi samjhna.

Garima :- are bhabhi pahale bacho ko ghar m to laiye.

Fir sab ghar m jate h, tab karan rohan ko ishare se chat pr bulata h.


Rohan karan k pas pahunch :- ha bhai bol ab.

Karan :- rohan kya tumhe bilkul ni pata aaj kya hua kitni badi anhoni hote hue rah gayi.

Tab karan chalawa ki sari baat bata ker bola.

Karan :- mujhe to ye samjh ni aaraha ki wo baharupiya ghar m ghusa kese tumhare hote hue, kya tumhe uski urja ka Bilkul ahasas na hua.

Rohan sharminda hote hue :- bhai jo hua uske liye m sharminda hu, m bhi tumse is baare m baat kerna chahta tha, mujhe khabar mili guptcharon se ki is rampur or shivpur k bich m sthit ye jungle jo tum dekh rahe ho.

(Rohan ne chat pe se samne ki or jungle ki taraf ishara kiya. )

Ye sadiyon se bhut pishach or bhi na jane kesi kesi shaktiyon ka adda ban chuka h or ye chalawaa bhi isi jungle m rahata h or uska sardaar bhi h.

Karan :- to is chalawe ka kya sambandh komal se.

Rohan :- bhai ye to m ni janta per jitna m in darindo k bare m suna h, uske according inka jesa nam h wesa hi inka swabhaav yani chal ka or yahi inki khasiyat h ki inke chal ko samjh pana itna saral ni jo tumne uske sath yudh kerte hue mahasus kiya hoga or esa hi mere or jyoti k sath hua.

Mujhe pret guptcharon ne khabar di ki is chalawe k dar se hi koi bhi jungle ki or tak ni jata dar se or sunne m aaya h koi to connection jarur h tumhari family ka iske sath, jab hi ye n jane kab se tumhare family k khilaaf sajish rach raha h.

Karan gusse se :- or tum ye baat mujhe ab bata rahe ho rohan, itni badi laparvahi, mane tumse esi ummid ni thi rohan.

Rohan :- bhai vo vo.

Karan :- bas rohan bahane banane se tumhari galti ni chup jayegi, aaj ager komal ko kuch ho jata to kya jwab deta m is sansar ko ki puri duniya ka jo rakshak bana firta h wo apni bahan tak ko na bacha saka.


(Karan kuch jyada hi gusse me tha, shayad komal k sath hue us hadse k sath)

Karan :- rohan aaj tumne apne dost ka vishwas toda h

Rohan rote hue :- bhai please esa mat bol, chahe mujhe mar le saja de, per...

Karan :- tumhe saja dene se sach badal to ni jayega na rohan, sun lo ager aaj ager komal ko kuch ho jata na to m tumhe kabhi maaf na kerta kyunki uske jimedar tum hote rohan tum.

Ye bol karan gusse se waha se chala gaya or piche chod gaya rote hue rohan ko, lekin karan or rohan dono is baat se anjan the ki char ankhe na keval sirf unko dekh rahi thi balki unki sari baate bhi sun rahi thi..


Wahi dusri or

Shani dev dhyan me bethe shukracharya ka avahan kerte h, tabhi ek safed roshni k sath shukracharya prakat hote h.
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Shukracharya shani se :- pranam karmfal data.

Shani singhasan se uth :- pranam daitya guru, shani lok me aapka swagat h.

Shukracharya :- kahiye shani dev aJ humara smarn kese kiya aapne.

Shani :- aapka aahavan keval meri hi ni niyati ki bhi aavashyakta thi dev, ab samay aagaya h daityguru jab prathvi ki teen mahashatio ka milan hoga.

Shukracharya :- kahi aapka sanket karan jyoti or naina se to, kya vo shubh ghadi aachuki h dev

Shani :- ji daityaguru or us milan ka madhyam guru dev mahadev ne aapko sompa h.

Daityaguru :- ye to mera sobhagya h karmfal data, aadesh kijiye.

Tab shani shukracharya ko sari yojna batate h jise sun wo muskurate hhe bole.

Shukracharya :- aapne jesa kaha h vesa hi hoga shani dev..

Ye bol shukracharya antardhyan ho gaye.

Back to sonam.

Karib 20 min k safar k baad sonam Rima govind samet kokilavan aahi pahunchi.

Sonam ne jese hi waha panv rakha, achanak se uski ankhein band ho gayi or uske samne kuch dhundli si tasvire banne lagi.

Jisme ek ladki jo usiki age ki thi usne bhagwa saree pahani thi, wo yahi shani dev ki aradhana ker rahi thi or sath m hi pas m bane krishn mandir m hi.

Lekin lag esa raha tha jese wo seen wo bahut purane samay ka ho.

Sonam ki ankho se k vo seen ojhal hue tab wo achank se ankh khol hafne lagi, ab to uski anubhuti or bhi dridh ho chuki thi.

Reema :- sonu tum thik to ho na tum. Hamp kyu rahi ho.

Tab sonam use sari baat batati h, jise reema use bas vaham bolti h.

Govind :- kabhi kabhi ankho k samne aaye ese drishy keval bram ni hote devi, wo koi sanket bhi ho sakte h.

Reema :- aap humesha ghuma fira k hi baat kyu kerte ho, lagta h sidhe sidhe aapko baat kerna aata hi ni.

Govind :- satya humesha tedha hi hota h reema ji , ab yahi khade rahege ya chalenge bhi.

Fir sonam or reema bhagwaan shani or krishna k adhbhut darshan kerti h.

Kaha jata h ki jab bhagwaan shri krishna ka janm hua tha to sabhi dev unke darshan kerne aate the, or vese hi apne prabhu k darshan ko shani bhi waha aaye parantu shani ki drishti k bhay se yashoda mat ne unhe kanha k darshan na kerne diye.

Tab shani ne bhi jid than li ki wo krishna k darshan kerke hi lotenge or is sthan pe aake unhone tap aarambh ker diya.

Unke ghor tap se tino loko k sath indra ka singhasan tak dol utna, tab devo ki prathana or shani ki apne prati bhakti dekh gopal koyal k roop me pragat hue or unhe darshan de ker yahi nivas kerne ka nivedan kiya isliye yaha aaj bhi shani mojud h or yaha pooja kerne se sab manokaamna purn hoti h or krishna samet shani ka bhi ashirwaad milta h.

Govind ye kahani reema or sonam ko suna hi rahe the ki achanak rema bol uthi.

Rema :- are ye sonam kaha gayi.


Aaiye dekhte h kaha gayi sonam

Darasl katha sunte hi sonam ko kuch hone laga or wo mandir k picheojud jungle m bad chali yu ki jese use kisi or ki sudhbudh hi na ho.

Kuch dur chalne per sonam ko ek kutiya dikhayi di jo bilkul sunsan thi, sonam ne jese hi use dekha uski ankho se sawatah hi nir bahane lage, kyu wo abhi aage pata chalega.

Wo kutiya me jati h to uski najar kutiya me bane ek chote se krishna mandir p padi, jo kafi ganda ho chuka tha mano kafi time se waha safai na hui ho.

Sonam jesi krishan bhakt ye kese bardaasht ker sakti thi usne turant waha ki. Saf safai ki kele k pato se. Usne jhadu lagayi.

Or jese hi usne Bhagwan ko pranam ker unke charno m shish rakha to use Sare drishya saf najar aane lage jo ab tak dhundle the or sath hi use sab kuch yaad aane laga apne pichle janm ka.

Ji ha doston pichle janm ka aaiye jante h kya hua tha sonam k pichle janm m.

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Ye baat aaj se kayi sadiyo purani h

Darasal pichle janm me sonam ek sadhvi thi, jiska naam swarna tha, swarna shri krishna ki param bhakt thi.

uski bas ek hi lakshya tha jivan ka jo tha shri krishna k sakshat darshan.

Ek baar sakshat rishi agast vrindavan padhare jinki swarna ne khub seva ki, uski seva se prasann ho rishi agast ne unse kuch mangne ko kaha to swarna ne apni icha jatayi.

Tab rishi agast ne swarna ko kokilavan ki mahima bata, wahi krishan aaradhna ka sujhav diya or vishwas dilaya ki usko bhagwaan k darshan avshy honge.

Swarna bahut khush hui kr rishiver k kahe anusar unhone waha jaker krishan aaradhna shruru ki or sath sath wo shani dev ki bhi aradhna kerti kyunki wo waha k dev the.

Dhire dhire swarna ki ardhna tap m badal gayi or usne ghor tap aarambh ker diya.

Or akhirakara bhagwaan murari swarna k tap se prasan ho hi gaye, wo shani lok pahunche or shani dev ko bhi apne sath chalne ko kaha.

Shani :- Prabhu swarna aapki bhakt h or usne tap vhi aapke darshan k liye hi kiya h fir mujhe le jane ka aapka kya gantvya h

Krisshna :- shani dev mat bhuliye ki swarna mere sath aapki bhi bhaktibhav se ardhna ki h or kokilavan k niyamo k anusar vo aapki kripa ki bhi patra h isliye hum chahte h ki aap bhi humare sath chale, kya aap humari ye icha puri ni karenge karmfal data.

Shani :- prabhu aapki icha yani mere liye aagya or m apki aagya kese tal sakta hu, chaliye prabhu.

Swarna abhi apne tap me lin thi ki tabhi waha shri krishna or shani dev prakat hue or krishna ji bole.

Krishna :- netra kholo swarna putri humare tap se prasan h..

Swarna Prabhu ki aawaz sun apni ankhe kholti h to uski khushi ki koi sima n rahi, kyunki uske netro k samksh uske dono aradjya the.

Sonam :- Prabhu, karmfal data aap dono, m dhanya hui prabhu m dhanya hui

Ye bol swarna nana prakar se stuti kerti h, lekin krishan ji ne ek baat notice ki ki jab se usme shani ko dekha h tabse uski najar unse hat hi ni rahi, swarna k man m shani k liye prem bhav janm le chuka tha.

Tab shri krishna ne swarna se vardan mangne ko kaha.

Swarna :- prabhu mujhe jesi ek sadharna manushya ko aapne darshan de diye or ek bhakt ko kya chahiye hoga bhagwaan mane ye tap kisi vardaan k abhilasha se ni apitu keval aapke darshan hetu hi ki thi.

Shani :- to putri humse hi kuch var manglo, hum bhi tumhari apne prati bhakti se prasan h, mango putri jo icha ho vo mango.

Pahale to swarna sharmayi parantu fir krishma ne apni lila dikha swarna ki sari jijhak khatm ker di.

Swarna :- hey karmfal data, yadi aap apni is bhakt se prasan h to kripya mujhe apni ardhangini hone ka vardaan pradan kare.

Tab shani dharm sankat m pad gaye, kyunki unhone ek patnivrat liya tha jo shri ram ne liya tha.

Unhone swarna ko bahut samjhaya per krishna maya k kaaran swarna apni mang p adig rahi, tab shani dev ko ek hi marg dikhayi diya.

Shani krishna ki or yu dekhte h jese aagya mang rahe ho krishna bhi unhe swikriti dete h.

Shani :- putri jo tumne var manga h wo abhi to sambhav ni kyunki humne ek patnivrat liya h,. Parantu tumhara tap vyarth bhi ni jayega

Isliye he putri ye vardaan h mera, jab kaliyug m asuro or dusht aatmao ka aatank bhadega or prabhu ki aagya se mere ansh ka janm hoga tab tumhara bhi punarjanm hoga, or us janm me tum mere us ansh jo m hi hounga uski ardhangini banogi, parantu smaran rahe ki tum unki ekloti ardhangini ni hogi, or to or tumhe kayi kasht bhi sahane honge kyunki us samay wahi niyati ka khel hoga



Swarna use saharsh swikar kerti h Kyunki wo prem ka mahtv jan chuki thi krishn darshan k kaaran, or wo apne prem ko pane k liye kuch bhi sahane ko teyar thi.

Tab shri krishna ne kaha.

Krishna :- putri hum bhi tumhe ek vardaan dete h, jab tak tumhara prem tumhare suhag ki prati atal rahega tab tak is brahamand ki koi shakti uska kuch ni bigad payegi or yadi aavashyakta padi to mera sudarshan swayam unka rakshak banega.

Swarna shani dev or krishna ji k vardano ko saharsh swikar kerti h or fir shani or krishna ji anterdhyan ho gaye or fir swarna ne sara jivan shri krishna bhakti m smarpan meri samay aane per pran tyagi diye.

Or usi sadhvi swarna ne vartmaan me sonam k roop m janm liya

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Sonam ko sab yaad aachuka tha, jise yaad aate hi uski ankho m khushi k ansu jhalak uthe apne ghar apne krishna k dham aaj fir lot ker.

Tabhi uske kaano m ek aawaz padi.

Govind :- kya hua sonam ji aapke ye netro m ye ashru bata rahe h ki aapne wo paliya h jiske liye ap kabse adhir thi.

Sonam :- ha govind sab kuch yaad aabhi gaya or sab pahachan bhi liya.

Ye bol wo govind k charno m gir gayi or rote hue boli.

Sonam :- mujhe shama ker dijiye hey dinanath me aapko pahachan payi prabhu aapko pahachan na payi.

Govind muskurate hue :- hume is baat ki prasamta h putri tumhe sab yaad aahi gaya.

Yadi aap sach me mujhse prasan h to ye bhagwaan Kripya aapne us divya swaroop ka mujhe darshan kerwaye jiske liye aapki ye dasi yugo se taras rahi h.

Govind :- tathastu.

Govind k itna bolte hi achank samay than gaya or fir ek bahut hi tez praksh charo or fel gaya mano surya uter aaye ho or jab wo prakaash thama to samne ka najara dekh koi bhi mantra mughd ho jaye.

Kyunki sonam k samne wahi sanwli murat swaroop mor mukut dhari, banke bihari bhagwaan shri krishna khade the.

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Sonam ko dekh karan ki khushi ka thikana ni tha, wo dod ker sonam k paas gaya or khushi se bas uske muh se itna hi nikla.

Karan :- sonaa..

Sonam ka bhi kuch esa hi hal tha , wo bhi bahut tadfi thi karan ki ek jhalak ko, or sath hi uske man m pachtava bhi tha karan k sath kiye gaye rude behavior k kaaran, uske muh se bhi karan ko dekh itnaa hi niklaa .

Sonam :- bhaiyaaaa...

Karan ne bas itna sute ki sonam ko khich ker apne sine se laga liya kaske or sonam ne bhi karan ko apni baho m kas liya.

Dono bhai bahan kafi time ek dusre se yu hi gale lage rahe jese mano kitne salo baad mile ho, yahi to karan k saaf hriday ki pahachan thi ki wo apni sabhi bahano ko ek saman pyaar kerta tha, sagi ya muhboli wali soch to uske sapne m kabhi aayi na thi, kafi der yu hi gale lagane k baad karan bola.

Karan nam ankho se :- sonu, meri pyari bahan m bata ni sakta tujhe yaha dekh kitna khush hu m, yakin na ho to jyoti se puch lo, esa ek din na gaya hoga tumhe miss na kiya ho mane.

Sonam nam ankho se :- esa hi haal aapki sonu h bhai, aapki bahut yaad ati thi, lekin....

Isse aage sonam apni galti ka confess ker pati isse pahale hi usme dekha jyoti samet sab waha aapahunche isliye wo ruk gayi.

Jyoti khushi se :- are bhaiya ab hume bhi to milne do apni sonaa se.

Ye bol wo aage badhi or apni bahe fela k boli :- sonaa

Sonam bhi di kahate hue jyoti k mili fir wo radha k pas jati h, to radha majak m boli.

Radha :- to moti ko yaad aahi gayi ghar ki.

Sonam haste hue :- ha yaar bade dino se bandriya ni dekhi thi to aagayi tujhse milne

Radha muka mar usse milti h, tabhi piche se ek aawaz or aayi jise sun sab chok gaye or khush ho bethe.

Are bhai humse bhi to koii mil lo....

Sabne us or dekha to paya samne ridhima or swati bhi gadi se uterte h. , jinhe dekh sab khush hue or karan or jyoti samet sab mile.

Jyoti :- di sona, aap sabko yaha dekh bata ni sakte hum kitne khush h, lekin ye sab achanak kese or aap aane wale ho ye aapne bataya kyu ni.

Swati :- wo kya h na jyotu jabse aap sab yaha aaye the ghar m humara man hi ni lag raha tha or to or sonu bhi shimla ja chuki thi.

Ridhima :- ha bhai,To hum bhi yaha aane ka 2 din pahale decide kee hi rahe the ki tabhi hume sonam ka phone aaya ki wo bhi ab yaha aana chahti h to humne sab milke plan kiya tum logo ko surprise dene ka.

Or hum jaipur airport pe mile or yaha aaphunche.

Kesa laga humara surprise mera bacha
(Swati karan ko babu, ya bacha hi karke bulati thi, apna laad dikhne ko)

Karan ridhima :- it's amazing di.

(Swati se) per di aapne taklif kyu ki esi halat m bhi.

Swati :- off oo bhai tum kyu tension le raho faltu, itni bhi koi problem ni hui or fir ridhima ne mera bahut khayal rakha.

Ridhima :- babu ab hume yu hi bahar khada rakhoge kya.

Karan :- oh ha sorry di khushi m ye to dhyan hi na raha, laiye aap apna saman mujhe dedijiye.

Fir karan or rohan milker unka saman leker haveli m leker aata h or karan kavya or baki sabko pukarte hue.

Karan :- choti maa, bhua ,chachi ,chachu , dekho to kon aayaaa h.

Karan ki aawaz sun kavya or garima sabse pahale aayi or sonam samet sabko dekh wo bhi chonk gayi or khush bhi hui.

Sonam :- maaa

Kahate hue kavya k gale mili, sonam ne kavya ko apni ma hi man liya tha, isliye wo use maa hi kahake bulati.

Kavya sonam k sir sahalate hue :- are meri pyaari bachi bhi aagayi , beta bahut acha kiya tu yaha aagayi, tere bina to man hi ni lag raha tha humara to.

Fir kavya or garima sonam ridhima or swati se mile, tabhi nidhi bhi waha aaphunchi, karan bhi swati or ridhima se pahale apni chachi ko milata h.

lekin sonam abhi garima se gale mili hui thi isliye use abhi tak uska chahra ni dikha tha.

Karan sonam k paas aaker.

Karan :- or chachi ye meri sabse pyari or dulari bahan meri sonaaaa..

Sonam ne karan ki aawaz sun jese hi garima se alag ho palti or jese hi nidhi or sonam ki najar ek dusre se mili to dono mano tham si gayi, or dono k hriday m ek bahut hi majboot or apnatv bhari anubhuti hui, dono ki najre ek dusre se hat hi ni rahi thi.

Nidhi ki to ankho m jese apne aap hi ansu bahane lage or na jane kyu use apna wahi dukh bhara aatit uski ankho k samne aane laga, jise na hi wo kisiko batati or na hi khud bhul pati.

Nidhi mam me :- hey bhagwan ye kya ho raha h mujhe kyu is pyaari si bachi ko dekh mujhe lag raha h ki ye koi anjaan ni meri apni h , ya yu kaho mera hi ek bhag h.

(Purani yado ka dard mahasus kerte hue ) kahi esa to ni ye bachi....

Nii ye ni ho sakta humari galti ka yahi dand h ki hum is tarah jindagi bhar tadfe.

Wahi sonam k man me bhi kuch ese hi vichar aarahe the.

Sonam man. Me :- ye mujhe kya ho raha h bhaiya ki chachi ko dekh mujhe ye kesi anubhuti ho rahi h, ye to kuch kuch vesi hi h jesi tab hui thi jab m bhaiya se pahali baar mili thi .

Hey bhagwan ye sab akhir ho kya raha h mere sath, pahale wo sab sapne fir mera apne satya se parichay or ab ye anubhuti, kahi esa to ni ki mere kanha koi sandesh dena chah rahe h mujhe

Hey kanha apni is bhaktan ki sahayata kero.

Dono hi or se koi bhi reaction dekh karan ko herani hui or usne un dono ki tandra todte hue kaha.

Karan :- chachi, sona kaha kho gaye aap dono.

Karan ki aawaz sun dono hosh m aaye or fir dono ache se mile.

Karan ek taraf to bahut khush tha ki aaj uska sara pariwar yaha mojud h, wahi dusri or tension m bhi aa gaya tha, kyunki ab aane wale yudh m khatra bhi bad gaya tha uske parivar p.

Wahi duri oor

Location :- baikunth lok

Lakshmi maa abhi sheshshaiya pe bethi hi thi ki tabhi bhagwan narayan bhi apne vastvik swaroop m aagaye prathvi lok se lot.

Lakshmi ji :- aagaye swami apni bhaktn ko darshan de use aanand vibhor ker.

Narayan :- anand vibhor to hum hue h devi , jiske 2 mukhya kaaran h.

Lakshmi :- or wo kya h swami?



Narayan :- priye, pahala kaaran ye h ki jitni prasanta bhakt ko apne aradhya k darshan se praapt hoti h, usse kayi adhik parmanad bhakt k aradhya ko bhi praapt hota h, apne bhakt k prem or bhakti ki pavitra anubhuti se, bhakti keval bhakt ki hi shakti ni hoti priye, apitu bhakti to ishwer ki bhi shakti h, jis kaaran ishwer ka astitv is sansaar m h.

Or yaha to baat hi humari us bhaktn ki thi jisne keval is janm m hi ni, apitu apne purv janm se hi humari nishkaam bhakti ki, ese m hum apni us bhaktn ko kese darshan na dete.

Balki hum to kahate h sonam se jyada labh is lilla ka to hume hi praapt hua.

Lakshmi ji :- aapko ! Wo kese swami.

Narayan :- devi mat bhuliye sonam k kaaran hi humara apne vrindavan m punah aagman hua.

Dwapar m jab humne us pavitra bhumi ko chod mathura ki or prasthan kiye the, jabse humare man m ek hi icha rahati ki hum apni us bhumi pe ek baar fir jaa sake, jaha humne apne us janm ka sabse madhur samay vyatit kiya, parantu apne kartavyo k chalte ye kabhi sambhav na ho paya, ese m hum sonam ka aabhar kese na vyakt kare devi.

Lakshmi :- aap dhany h prabhu, ap swayam ishwer hote hue bhi khud se jyada mahatvta aap apne bhakt ko dete ho, aap dhanya ho dev.

(Kuch der ruk)Or dusra kaaran kya tha swami .

"Iska uttar m apko deta hu mata "

Is aawaz k sath waha shani dev prakat hue.

Shani :- pranam maaa, pranam bhagwaan

Lakshmi ji :- kalyan bhavah putra, kaho putra.

Shani :- mata prabhu ka sonam ko darshan dene ka ek kaaran or jo ye tha ki ab samay aachuka h ki sonam ko apne pichle janm k satya k sath sath apne is jivan se bhi jude rahasya ka bhi gyaat ho.

Lakshmi ji :- arthat samay wo samay achuka h putra?.

Shani :- ha mata samay aachuka h jab karan or jyoti ko apne jivan se jude sabse bade rahasya k gyaat hone ka, samay aachuka h tin mahashaktiyon k milan ka or samay aachuka h samraat k ant ka jiske baad megha ki mukti k sath hi wo rahasya khulega or karan or jyoti ka parivaar bhi tab purn hoga.

Shani jab ye baat bol. Rahe the tab unke chahre p khushi k sath pareeshani k bhav bhi shamil the.

Jinhe dekh mata boli.

Lakshmi ji :- putra ye to shubh samachar h, ki ek adharmi ka shighra hi ant hone wala h, or putra karn k jivan m bhi khushhali aane wali h ,

Lekin fir bhi tumhare mukh p ye nirarthak chinta ki rekhaye kyu putra.

Narayan :- karmfal data ki chinta nirarthak ni h devi

ha ye satya h ki ye sab shubh ghatnayo k ghatit hone ka samay aachuka h, parantu aapne sikke k dusre pahalu ko to andekha hi ker diya devi.

Bhul gayi devi aap bhutkaal m mahadev or humne jab usko.... Dandit kiya tha tab mahadev ne kya kaha tha.

Lakshmi ji Narayan ka ishara samjh gayi , or chintit swar m.

Lakshmi ji :- hey mahadev! Iska arth ye k swami!

Shani :- ha mata jese jese karan k jivan Sare rahasya khulne ka samay nikat aata jayega, guru mahadev or Narayan dwara arab use diye gaye dand k bandhan se uska dhire dhire swatantrata hona aarambh ho jayega.

Narayan :- ho jayega ni putra, aarambh ho chuka h, or is baar usko niyantran kerna humare liye bhi saral na hoga, kyunki hum tridev bhi niyati k lekh m hastakshep ni ker sakte.

Lakshmi ji :- ye to satya m hi bahut badi samasya h bhagwan, dand bandhan m hone k babjood bhi usne pahale bhi kayi baar karan or jyoti k jivan m hastakshep ker unke prano ko sankat m dal diya tha.

Shani :- satya kaha mata aapne, or aane wale dharmyudh m wo wapas se apni dhurt chaal avashya chalega, ese me putra karan or jyoti ki raksha hetu hi avashyak tha ki use sonam dwara vardan roopi kavach mile, isliye hi prabhu ne sonam ka margdarshan ker use putra karan k pasand bheja.

Lakshmi ji :- parantu putra samasya abhi bhi purntah hal ni hui h.

Shani :- janta hu mata or is samsya ka hal to swayam putra karan ko hi khojna hoga wo bhi atisheeghra.

Kyunki dekhiye mata un dushto ne shadyantr rachna aarambh ker diya h

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Jis tantrik ka ant naina ne apne shudi yagya or ma ki shakti dwara kiya tha, us dusht ka sharir ki bhasam abhi bhi wahi padi thi.

Tabhi waha do asur prakat hote h.

Asur 1 :- are bhai tumhe gyaat bhi h ki us budiya kubdi ne hume yaha kyu bheja h.

Asur 2 :- abe kitna bhulakkad H re Tu, bhul gaya us sanki bhudiya ne hume subah hi adesh diya tha ki hume is sthan per kuch manav avshesh milenge bas use hi uthake lana h.

Asur 1 :- ha per bhai mujhe samjh ni aata ki ye bhudiya is rakh ka karegi kya.

Asur 2 :- kya pata yaar lagta h bhudape m bhudiya sathiya gayi h, jab hi kuch bhi kerne ko bolti h.

Asur 1 :- ha per ek baat bata bhai sab bol rahe h ki yuvraj k ansh k sath hi trityao ka ant nishchit ho chuka h, tumhe kya lagta h kya sach m esa kuch h.

Asur 2 :- kya pata yaar, sala humari or se to dono or hi aafat h, ek or yudh m moti or dusri or is sanki raja k moti se badtr hatyachar, acha bhala salo chain se ji rahe the, jabse ye aaya firse devo se humari dushmani kera betha.

Asur 1:- ha yar mera bas chale to m to abhi us divya shakti ki sharan m chala jau.

Asur 2 :- jo ho ni sakta use chod or jaldi se apna kaam ker yaha se nikalte h verna wo sanki bhudiya humara jina haram ker degi.

Ye bol asur 2 us rakh ko uthane hi laga tha ki tabhi us rakh ko chute hi uska hath jalne laga, jisse wo chikhne laga

Asur 1 :- ye sanki bhudiya hume marwa k hi manegi.

Asur 2 apne hath ko bacha ker kese n kese maya ka use ker us rakh ko uthata h or ek ghade m bhar k asur 1 k sath waha se gayab ho jata h.

Or wo dono pahunch jate h kubdi k pas

Asur 1 :- lijiye malkin aapne jesa kaha tha m wo avshesh le aaya hu.

Kubdi shetani hasi k sath :- le aaye ise shabash ise yaha rakh do .

Asur 2:- malikin per kya m jan sakta hu aapne ye rakh kyu mangai h.

Kubdi gusse se :- ye jaanana tumhare liye jaruri ni h murkho

(Apne side se ek peso ki potli fekte hue) ye lo tumhare kam ki kimat or ab dafa ho yaha se.

Kubdi ki dant sun bichare wo dono potli utha chupchaap waha se chalte bane.



Unke jane k baad kubdi us ghade ko apne hath me lete hue boli.

Kubdi haste hue :- haha ab dekhti hu m tantrika kubdi ki is chaal se tu kese bachti h, ab m esa kuch karungi jiske baad tu marte samay apni akhiri sanse lete hue pachtayegi ki kyu samraat se tune dushmani mon li.

Ye bol kubdi apni kaale jadu ki kriyaa aarambh ker deti h.

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Harry Bro.. .Jitna aap se ummed tha is update ko la ke utna Nahi milla ...
It's ok-ok update not so good..
But next update bahot hi shandar Hona chaiya. (Take your time)
 

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Maybe nidhi Sonam ki maa ho....
hmm...... so woh kubdi chaal chalne wali hai The Great Naina ki khilaf..... itni himmat kahan se aa gayi us budhiya mein.... I think ish kubdi ke din bhar gaye hai... :roll:
Khair let's see what happens next week
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 

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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
 

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Behtareen update,
To kya sonam Nidhi ki beti hai?
 
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