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भाई आप ऐसा करो 1-2 महीने की छुट्टी ले लो। फिर आराम से ताजातरीन मूड से कहानी को दुबारा शुरूआत करना। बार बार आपको भी शर्मिंदा होना नहीं पड़ेगा और पाठकों को भी बार बार निराश नहीं होना पड़ेगा।
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Wahi dusri or
Shruti preety ko leker city k ek bade hi hifi pub leker jati h jaha ladke ladkiya har umer k log mojud the .
Preety or shruti waha pahunch ek table p bethti h , fir preeti boli.
Preety :- partner bole to ye jagah jitni hifi h us hisab se apun ko to lag rela h, jeb ko apni solid fatka bhi lagne wala h.
Shruti :- are partner relax yaar tu mere hote kyu peso ki chinta ker rahi h, tu to bas dil khol k bol kya piegi abhi to raat ka competition bhi pura kerne ka h.
Preety :- ye baat tune sahi boli bhidu, dekh lena aaj apun hi jitegi.
Shruti :- ha ha wo to waqt hi batayega.
Shruti waiter ki bulake bolti h :- suno yaha ki sabse badiya quality ka stock lao, aaj meri partner ko bhi to pata chale jaipur walo ka taste.
Waiter kuch der m bottle or glass le aata h , bottle ko dekhte hi dono bevdiya tut padi unpe, pahale to unhone kafi der jam k pi, fir thodi der baad preety ka mood music sunke dance kerne ka hua, wo shruti ko khichte hue stage p leker gayi, pahale to shruti ne aana kani ki, lekin fir wo bhi nashe m jhumte hue dance kerne lagi.
Dono saheliyon ne milker kafi acha dance kiya, lekin tabhi waha kuch us area k local gunde aaphunche or wo waha pite hue dance ker rahi ladkiyon ko tadne m lag gaye.
Unme se ek gunde ki najar jese hi shruti or preety p padi to unhone apne boss se kaha.
Gundda 1:- boss wo dekho aaj to club m chand uter aayi h wo bhi 2 2
Boss :- chand ni bhosdike ye to maal h , jabardast maal
Gunda 3 :- ha boss kya figure h, us blue geans (preety )wali ki gand dekh ker to mera abhi se khada ho gaya, ye aaj raat k liye mil jaye to maja aajaye.
Boss :- sahi bola re Tu, chal chalke try marte h.
Gunda 4 :- ager boss wo ni mani to.
Gunda 5 :- ni mani to kya hua wahi purana tarika apnayenge, utha lenge saliyo ko or apne ade pe le jake ache se masalenge.
Ye bol wo sab gunde jaker preety or shruti k sath milker dance kerne lage, or dance k bahane se wo unke chipakne lage, or idher udher unhe chune lage.
Kuch der to shruti or preety ne khud ko control m rakhte hue unse dur hatne ka try kerne lagi , lekin had to jab ho gayi jab unmese ek gunde ne shruti ki ass ko touch kerne ki koshish kerta h, jiske kaaran uska control ni hua or usne us gunde ko kas ke chanta de mara.
Shruti gusse se chillayi :- you bloody motherfuckers teri himmat kese hui mujhe chune ki,
Gunda 2 :- chinal tune mujhpe hath uthaya
ye bol usne shruti ka hath ko kss k
marodne laga, lekin agle hi pal ek jordaar ghuss uske muh p pada, jo or koi ni preeti ne hi mara tha, jiske ek vaar se wo gunduapne kai danto k sath hosh bhi kho betha or behosh ho gats
Shruti ki aawaz sun or apne sathi ko pitte Sare gunde ruk gaye, or fati ankho se kabhi to kabhi preety ko dekhne lage,tabhi preety bhi boli.
Preety nashe m jhumte hue ;- kya hua partner tera para High kyu ho rela h or ye chilgoja kaheko tere se ul
Shruti tab preety ki harkat use batati h, jise sun preety boli.
Preety :- in do take ki gundo ki ye majal jo tumhe chue.
(Gundo se) abe o Chulggujo ager apni hadiya pyaari h naa to pahali fusat m yaha se one two ka four holo, verna bekar m apne maa baap k bhoj ban jaoge bhudape m.
Gundo ka boss gusse :- sali randi ek to mere hi aadmi pe hath uthati h or mujhe hi dhamka rahi h, Tu janti ni h ki m kon hu shera bhai hu m shera bhai.
Preety :- abe ja be gandu tere jese kitne shera ko sheru bana diya h apun ne, ager gand m dam h na to baate chodne k bajay aake do do hath ker.
Boss :- bate ni balki Chodunga to tumhe m randiyo or to or uske baad teri maa ko bhi m.....
Isske aage vo kuch bole usse pahale hi wo agle pal ek divar se takra k dhul chat raha hota h or dard se karah raha hota h.
Jise dekh sab heran the ki ye hua to hua kese, sivaye preety k, darasl hua ye tha ki jab preety ne Boss k muh se apni maa k bare m galat suna to uska gussa fut pada or usne badi hi tezi se ek jordaar laat us Boss k sir p de mari.
Preety jo itni der se apna gussa isliye control kiye hue the ki uski tritiya shakti k kaaran koi jaan se hi hath n dho bethe ya kahi uski pahachan sabke samne na aajaye, lekin pani ab sir k uper se Gujarat chuka tha.
Preety lal surkh ankho k sath :- teri himat kesi hui bhosdike apni gandi jaban pe meri maa ko lane ki, bas bahut hua, ab tumne se koi bhi yaha se ager sahi salamat bach k bhaga to m uski gulaam.
Boss gusse se :- dekh kya rahe ho haramjado is chinal ko iski okaat dikhao.
Boss ka order sunte hi ek gunda apne piche se chaku nikal preety ki or doda , lekin isse pahale ki wo preety ko touch bhi ker paye, usse pahale hi preety ne badi hi teji se jordar ghusa uske pasli p de mara or jab wo dard se kaharahata hua apne pet ko pakad niche muh kiya to apne ghutne ka ek jordar war uske muh pe ker ker dala.
Jiske agle hi pal wo banda behosh ho ek lambi nind m chala gaya yani ki koma me.
Apne us sathi ki ye halat dekh ek baar to bakiyo ki hava tight ho gayi, lekin unhone himmat juta unme se 2 jano ne preety pe humla kerne ki koshis ki, to preety ne uchal ker apni dono hig hills pahane hue pero se jabardast prahar ek k muh p kiya.
Us bande ki halat to fir kya hui hogi aap khud hi andaza laga sakte ho, lekin preety ke esa kerne per dusre gunde ne moke ka fayda utha jese hi preety p war kerna chaha to usi waqt ek flying kick uske muh pe padi, jise wo dhul chatne laga
Are ye kya ye to apni shruti ne mari thi , jise dekh preety boli.
Preety :- are wah bhidu bole to kya jordar fatka diyela h tune to.
Shruti :- ha to partner tune kya mujhe yu koi eri geri samjh rakha h, apun bhi karate M black belt h.
Chal milke in loduo ko ek sath pelte h.
Preety apni anguliya marodte hue :- ha wo bhi bina tel k.
Ye bolte hue unhone baki bache tino ki or dekha, gundo ki to fat k hath m aachuki thi, isliye wo bahar ki or bhagne lage.
Lekin preety ne jaha badi hi tezi se ek k per p itni zor se war ker dala ki uska per hi tut gaya or shruti ne bhi dusre wale k ek jordar laat uske main point pe de mari or ek jor daar war uski gardan p de mara jisse agle hi pal wo behosh ho gaya kyunki uski gardan tut chuki thi.
Fir preety unke Boss k pas gayi jo abhi bhi vahi jamin pe betha kamp raha tha.
Shruti uske ek hath ko apne pero se chithte hue boli :- kyu re kute kya bola tha okaat.
Boss rote hue or chilate hue mafi mangne laga.
Preety :- bola tha na jhantu ki tere jese shera ko sheru banana roj ka h apun ka, lekin ni teri (thapad marte hue) gand m charmure kat rahe the
Ye bol usne pahale to ache se use dhoya or fir guards se bolker sabko bahar fikwa diya, yaha preety ne ek kaam or bhi ker diya tha, usne fight shuru hone se pahale hi baki sabhi k minds control ker liye the taki koi police ko na bulaye.
Lekin jab fight khatam hone k baad sabme gundo ki halat dekhi hosh aane k baad sabki ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi, ki 2 ladkiyo ne 5 hate kste gundo ki kya halat ki
Preety sab kuch hone k baad waha counter se ek bottle utha pite hhe:- sala in chutiyo ne sari utar di, mood ki maa bahan kerke rakh di, ab firse charge kerna padega
Shruti :- are darling Tu kahe ko fikar ker reli h, konsa sara stock khatam ho gaya, vese bhi raat ki mahfil to baki h, lekin pahale yaha se nikalte h, verna ye jhatu log hume yu hi ghurte rahenge
Fir dono saheliya Waha se nikal ker pare ghar ki or raste m shruti or preety k bich m kuch baate hui , jisme shruti ne jo preety ko bataya use sun preety ki herani ki sima na rahi ho uskike sath use shruti k ese vyavhaar ka karan samjh aa chuka tha.
Wo kaaran kya tha or kya nashe m dhut preety ne us kaaran ko ache se samjha tha ye aage hi pata chalega
Wahi dusri or
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Khana khane k baad pahale to sabhi bhai bahano ne khub masti ki fir sab apne kamre me sone chale gaye.
Karan or jyoti bhi sone ki teyari ker hi rahe the ki tabhi unka gate knock hua , karan ne jab gare khola to samne sonu khadi thi.
Karan :- are sonu tum yaha is waqt
Sonu :- ha bhai mujhe aapse kuch jaruri baat kerni thi
Karan use ander leker aata h, or fir wo jyoti k sath bethte hur bola.
Karan :- bolo sona kyaa baat kerni thi.
Sonam jyoti ko dekhte hue :- bhai wo....
Karan samjh gaya ki wo jyoti k samne hickicha rahi h , to wo bola.
Karan pyaar se :- sona apni di se bhala tum kabse hickhichane lagi, jo bolna h khul ker bolo bacha, tumhe jyoti se kuch bhi chupana ni chahiye kyunki karan Or jyoti dono alag alag ni balki ek hi h.
Jyoti pyaar se sonam. Ko dekhte hue :- koi baat ni bhai , ager sonam ko mere yaha hone se koi problem ho rahi h apse baat kerne m, to m chali jati hu
Ye bol jyoti jese hi jane ko uthi tabhi sonam uthke jyoti ko rokti h Or karan or jyoti k pero m gir rote hue boli.
Sonam :- di aapko kahi jane ki jarurat ni h, bhai ne bilkul sahi kah rahe h, Or unki baat m chupe m ishare ko bhi ache se samjh rahi hu.
Jyoti sonam ko uthate hue chintit swar me :- sona tu ro kyu rahi h or ye kis ishare ki baat ker rahi.
Sonam :- mujhe ro lene dijiye di apne in asuo se dho lene dijiye apna wo paap jo mane kiya h.
Jyoti :- paap kesa paap, tum kya bol rahi ho gudiya mujhe kuch samjh ni aaraha.
Sonam rote :- wahi paap di jo paap mane arjit kiya aapke or bhai k sambandh ko todne ki kosis ki us mahapaap ka, jin bhai k prem k kaaran aaj mujhe ye nayi jindagi mili usi prem p apne anuchit adhikar jamane k prayas ka di.
(Fir karan k pero m gir ) bhaiya please mujhe maaf ker do agyanta k andhkaar m m apni jid ko hi apna prem samjh liya or apni us jid k kaaran hi apne vyavhaar se apko bahut kasht diya, ye janke bhi anjab ban gayi ki mere ese vyavhaar se aapko kitna kasht pahunchega.
Karan sonam ko apne gale se laga ker :-ssshhhh shant ho ja gudiya shant ho ja, jo hua usme teri koi galti ni thi , ye to niyati ka lekha h jise hume swikar kerna hi hoga.
(Jyoti ki or nam ankho se dekh)Or bhala apne prem ko batne ka dard humse jyada kon samjh sakta h, isliye mera bacha m tumse bilkul gussa ni hu.
Sonam :- aap sach m mahan ho bhaiya, m kese dhanyavaad keru apne kanha ka jo unhone mujhe aap jesa bhai diya, jo mujhse kitna prem krte h.
(Fir himmat juta sonam boli) isliye hi to bhaiya aapke isi prem ko aapki ye sona jindagi bhar pane ki icha rakhti h bhaiya, please apni gudiya ko apna bana lo bhaiya, i can't live without u bhaiya,
I really love u so much, i can't live without you.
Karan jyoti ki or dekhta h jyoti bhi dard bhari ankho se apni sahmati jatati h
Karan sonam ko uthate hue :- gudiya sach to ye h ki tumhara ye bhai bhi ab tumhare bina ni rah sakta, jesi mere liye meri jyoti h vesi hi tum ho isliye m tumhare pyaar ko kese nakaar sakta hu.
Sonam khushi se ':- iska matlab ki..
Karan bich me :- parantu jesa ki tumhe mane bataya tha ki yadi tum mujhe apna apna premi roop m swikar kerna chahti ho to ek bandhan ek niyati ko tumhe swikar kerna hoga.
Sonam :- ji bhai m janti hu, janti hu bhai ki aap sirf mere ni ho sakte , aapka prem sirf kisi ek ka ni ho sakta, lekin ab aapki ye gudiya samjh chuki h ki prem keval pana hi ni hota , balki prem to wo pavitra bhavna h jo kisi k hriday m aajaye to wo apne premi ya premika ki khushi k liye apna sarvasv nyochavar ker de , yahi prem ka path mere aradhya ne sikhaya h
Isliye bhaiya mujhe niyati ka ye bandhan swikaar h, mujhe koi fark ni padta ki mere bhaiya ki. Life or koi kab kon or kese aayega , m to bas itna janti hu ki mere bhaiya ka pyaar apni sona k liye kabhi khatam ni hoga.
(Masumiyat se ) ab to apni gudiya ko apna lo na bhaiya, i love u so much naa.
Karan sonam k vachano se bahut prabhaavit hua or sath hi apne liya uska prem dekh to karan khud ko rok na paya.
Karan jhat se use gale laga :- i love you tooo meri sonaa, sahi kaha tumne bilkul meri life m bhale hi kitni hi or ladkiya aaye lekin meri sona ki jagah koi ni le payega.
Ye bol karan sonam k chahhre ko apne dono hath me tham uske chahre ko chumne laga.
Sonam ki to aaj khusi ka thikana hi ni tha, wo bas chupchaap apne premi , apne bhai k pyar ka aanand le rahi thi.
Wahi sonam ki khushi dekh jyoti bhi mand mand muskura rahi thi, lekin is muskarahat m ek dard bhi tha.
Jaha jyoti ki wo muskan apni bahan ko uski khushi milne k liye thi, wahi wo dard ek premika ka tha , jiska prem ab do bhago m bat chuka tha, lekin apni bahan ki khushi k liye wo dard bhi jyoti ne ander hi ander yu piliya jese mano shiv ji ne halahal piya ho.
Esa hi kuch hal karan ka tha, lekin jyoti saman usne bhi apna dard apni sona ki khushi k liye chupa liya.
Or masti krte hue jab wo sonam k chare ko chum raha tha to usme halke se uske hotho p bhi kaat liya, jisse sonam sharmake jyoti khushi se jyoti k gale lag gayi.
Sonam :- di i m so happy today
Jyoti :- tumhe dekh m bhi bahut khush hu gudiya mujhse bahatar bhala is khushi ko or kon samjh sakta h ki bhai k prem milne m kitne aanand ki praapti hoti h.
Sonam :- hmmm.
Fir kuch der tino bhai bahan yu hi pyaar bhari bate kerte h , sonam bhi aaj yahi sone ka fesla leti to fir jyoti uth k jane lagi.
Sonam :- di kya hua kaha ja rahe ho aap.
Jyoti :- are gudiya, jab tum. Yaha so rahi ho to choti maa k paas bhi to kisi ko hona chahiye na, ni to wo bekar m pareshan hogi.
Karan :- to usme tumhe jane ki kya jarurat h gudiya m phone kerke abhi bata deta hu sona aaj humare sath soyegi
Jyoti :- are wo baat ni bhai actually mera bhi aaj man choti ma k sath sone ka ker raha h,
Or wese bhi abhi aapko humari sona ko waqt dena chahiye kitne dino baad loti h wo akhir
(Sonam k kan me dhire se) meri nanhi sutan sahiba aapko akele m time de rahi hu new relationship ki first night khulke enjoy kerna
Ye bol jyoti sonam ko ankh marti h, jise wo sharma gayi or fir jyoti haste hue waha se chali gayi, lekin us hasi k piche ka dard karan bhali bhanti samjh sakta tha or ab to shayad sonam bhi wo dard samjh pa rahi thi, use bhi jyoti ka dard ka ahasas ho raha tha, jiske kaaran uska chahta murjha gaya..
Jo karan ko bilkul acha na laga ki uski sona apne new relation ki pahali raat ko hi yu udaas ho, isliye usne sonam ka mind distract kerne k liye romantic way me sonam ki kamar m hath dal use apne sine se chipkake bed pe let gaya.
Sonam sharmate hue :- ye kya ker rahe ho bhaiyaa.
Karan pyaar se sonam k gaal sahalate hue :- apni soni si new girlfriend ko pyaar .
Sonam ye bolte hue wo pyaar se sonam ki ankho m jhakne laga.
Sonam :- bhaiya mujhe ese maat dekho naa mujhe bahut sharma aati h.
Ye bol wo karan k sine m apna muh chupane lagi.
Karan uske chahre ko uthate hue :- ye waqt sharmane ka ni ye waqt to tumhara us prem ko pane ka h sona jiske liye tum kabse tadaf rahi ho .
Ye bol karan dhire dhire apne hoth sonam k hotho ki or bhadane laga, sonam samjh gayi thi ki aage kya hone wala h, isliye usne apni ankhe band ker li
Or agle hi pal karan Or sonam k hoth aapas m jud gaye or karan bade hi prem se sonam k hotho ko chumte hue uske hotho ka raspan kerne laga, ye karan ki life ka first lipp kiss tha jo usne jyoti k alawa kisi or ko kiya tha, or wo bhi apni hi ek bahan ko ye sochte hue karan k ander ek alag hi utejna ho rahi thi.
Wahi sonam bas ankhe band ker apmi life ki first kiss ka aanand le rahi thi, fir wo bhi dhire dhire karan ka sath dete hue aand lene lagi.
Karib 15 min ki kiss k baad dono alag hue, sonam to sharm se kuch bol hi na payi or fir dono bhai or karan usko chedne laga.
Fir yuhi pyaar or masti majak kerte hue dono ek dusre ki baho m so gaye
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
Stay tuned
Wahi dusri or
Shruti preety ko leker city k ek bade hi hifi pub leker jati h jaha ladke ladkiya har umer k log mojud the .
Preety or shruti waha pahunch ek table p bethti h , fir preeti boli.
Preety :- partner bole to ye jagah jitni hifi h us hisab se apun ko to lag rela h, jeb ko apni solid fatka bhi lagne wala h.
Shruti :- are partner relax yaar tu mere hote kyu peso ki chinta ker rahi h, tu to bas dil khol k bol kya piegi abhi to raat ka competition bhi pura kerne ka h.
Preety :- ye baat tune sahi boli bhidu, dekh lena aaj apun hi jitegi.
Shruti :- ha ha wo to waqt hi batayega.
Shruti waiter ki bulake bolti h :- suno yaha ki sabse badiya quality ka stock lao, aaj meri partner ko bhi to pata chale jaipur walo ka taste.
Waiter kuch der m bottle or glass le aata h , bottle ko dekhte hi dono bevdiya tut padi unpe, pahale to unhone kafi der jam k pi, fir thodi der baad preety ka mood music sunke dance kerne ka hua, wo shruti ko khichte hue stage p leker gayi, pahale to shruti ne aana kani ki, lekin fir wo bhi nashe m jhumte hue dance kerne lagi.
Dono saheliyon ne milker kafi acha dance kiya, lekin tabhi waha kuch us area k local gunde aaphunche or wo waha pite hue dance ker rahi ladkiyon ko tadne m lag gaye.
Unme se ek gunde ki najar jese hi shruti or preety p padi to unhone apne boss se kaha.
Gundda 1:- boss wo dekho aaj to club m chand uter aayi h wo bhi 2 2
Boss :- chand ni bhosdike ye to maal h , jabardast maal
Gunda 3 :- ha boss kya figure h, us blue geans (preety )wali ki gand dekh ker to mera abhi se khada ho gaya, ye aaj raat k liye mil jaye to maja aajaye.
Boss :- sahi bola re Tu, chal chalke try marte h.
Gunda 4 :- ager boss wo ni mani to.
Gunda 5 :- ni mani to kya hua wahi purana tarika apnayenge, utha lenge saliyo ko or apne ade pe le jake ache se masalenge.
Ye bol wo sab gunde jaker preety or shruti k sath milker dance kerne lage, or dance k bahane se wo unke chipakne lage, or idher udher unhe chune lage.
Kuch der to shruti or preety ne khud ko control m rakhte hue unse dur hatne ka try kerne lagi , lekin had to jab ho gayi jab unmese ek gunde ne shruti ki ass ko touch kerne ki koshish kerta h, jiske kaaran uska control ni hua or usne us gunde ko kas ke chanta de mara.
Shruti gusse se chillayi :- you bloody motherfuckers teri himmat kese hui mujhe chune ki,
Gunda 2 :- chinal tune mujhpe hath uthaya
ye bol usne shruti ka hath ko kss k
marodne laga, lekin agle hi pal ek jordaar ghuss uske muh p pada, jo or koi ni preeti ne hi mara tha, jiske ek vaar se wo gunduapne kai danto k sath hosh bhi kho betha or behosh ho gats
Shruti ki aawaz sun or apne sathi ko pitte Sare gunde ruk gaye, or fati ankho se kabhi to kabhi preety ko dekhne lage,tabhi preety bhi boli.
Preety nashe m jhumte hue ;- kya hua partner tera para High kyu ho rela h or ye chilgoja kaheko tere se ul
Shruti tab preety ki harkat use batati h, jise sun preety boli.
Preety :- in do take ki gundo ki ye majal jo tumhe chue.
(Gundo se) abe o Chulggujo ager apni hadiya pyaari h naa to pahali fusat m yaha se one two ka four holo, verna bekar m apne maa baap k bhoj ban jaoge bhudape m.
Gundo ka boss gusse :- sali randi ek to mere hi aadmi pe hath uthati h or mujhe hi dhamka rahi h, Tu janti ni h ki m kon hu shera bhai hu m shera bhai.
Preety :- abe ja be gandu tere jese kitne shera ko sheru bana diya h apun ne, ager gand m dam h na to baate chodne k bajay aake do do hath ker.
Boss :- bate ni balki Chodunga to tumhe m randiyo or to or uske baad teri maa ko bhi m.....
Isske aage vo kuch bole usse pahale hi wo agle pal ek divar se takra k dhul chat raha hota h or dard se karah raha hota h.
Jise dekh sab heran the ki ye hua to hua kese, sivaye preety k, darasl hua ye tha ki jab preety ne Boss k muh se apni maa k bare m galat suna to uska gussa fut pada or usne badi hi tezi se ek jordaar laat us Boss k sir p de mari.
Preety jo itni der se apna gussa isliye control kiye hue the ki uski tritiya shakti k kaaran koi jaan se hi hath n dho bethe ya kahi uski pahachan sabke samne na aajaye, lekin pani ab sir k uper se Gujarat chuka tha.
Preety lal surkh ankho k sath :- teri himat kesi hui bhosdike apni gandi jaban pe meri maa ko lane ki, bas bahut hua, ab tumne se koi bhi yaha se ager sahi salamat bach k bhaga to m uski gulaam.
Boss gusse se :- dekh kya rahe ho haramjado is chinal ko iski okaat dikhao.
Boss ka order sunte hi ek gunda apne piche se chaku nikal preety ki or doda , lekin isse pahale ki wo preety ko touch bhi ker paye, usse pahale hi preety ne badi hi teji se jordar ghusa uske pasli p de mara or jab wo dard se kaharahata hua apne pet ko pakad niche muh kiya to apne ghutne ka ek jordar war uske muh pe ker ker dala.
Jiske agle hi pal wo banda behosh ho ek lambi nind m chala gaya yani ki koma me.
Apne us sathi ki ye halat dekh ek baar to bakiyo ki hava tight ho gayi, lekin unhone himmat juta unme se 2 jano ne preety pe humla kerne ki koshis ki, to preety ne uchal ker apni dono hig hills pahane hue pero se jabardast prahar ek k muh p kiya.
Us bande ki halat to fir kya hui hogi aap khud hi andaza laga sakte ho, lekin preety ke esa kerne per dusre gunde ne moke ka fayda utha jese hi preety p war kerna chaha to usi waqt ek flying kick uske muh pe padi, jise wo dhul chatne laga
Are ye kya ye to apni shruti ne mari thi , jise dekh preety boli.
Preety :- are wah bhidu bole to kya jordar fatka diyela h tune to.
Shruti :- ha to partner tune kya mujhe yu koi eri geri samjh rakha h, apun bhi karate M black belt h.
Chal milke in loduo ko ek sath pelte h.
Preety apni anguliya marodte hue :- ha wo bhi bina tel k.
Ye bolte hue unhone baki bache tino ki or dekha, gundo ki to fat k hath m aachuki thi, isliye wo bahar ki or bhagne lage.
Lekin preety ne jaha badi hi tezi se ek k per p itni zor se war ker dala ki uska per hi tut gaya or shruti ne bhi dusre wale k ek jordar laat uske main point pe de mari or ek jor daar war uski gardan p de mara jisse agle hi pal wo behosh ho gaya kyunki uski gardan tut chuki thi.
Fir preety unke Boss k pas gayi jo abhi bhi vahi jamin pe betha kamp raha tha.
Shruti uske ek hath ko apne pero se chithte hue boli :- kyu re kute kya bola tha okaat.
Boss rote hue or chilate hue mafi mangne laga.
Preety :- bola tha na jhantu ki tere jese shera ko sheru banana roj ka h apun ka, lekin ni teri (thapad marte hue) gand m charmure kat rahe the
Ye bol usne pahale to ache se use dhoya or fir guards se bolker sabko bahar fikwa diya, yaha preety ne ek kaam or bhi ker diya tha, usne fight shuru hone se pahale hi baki sabhi k minds control ker liye the taki koi police ko na bulaye.
Lekin jab fight khatam hone k baad sabme gundo ki halat dekhi hosh aane k baad sabki ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi, ki 2 ladkiyo ne 5 hate kste gundo ki kya halat ki
Preety sab kuch hone k baad waha counter se ek bottle utha pite hhe:- sala in chutiyo ne sari utar di, mood ki maa bahan kerke rakh di, ab firse charge kerna padega
Shruti :- are darling Tu kahe ko fikar ker reli h, konsa sara stock khatam ho gaya, vese bhi raat ki mahfil to baki h, lekin pahale yaha se nikalte h, verna ye jhatu log hume yu hi ghurte rahenge
Fir dono saheliya Waha se nikal ker pare ghar ki or raste m shruti or preety k bich m kuch baate hui , jisme shruti ne jo preety ko bataya use sun preety ki herani ki sima na rahi ho uskike sath use shruti k ese vyavhaar ka karan samjh aa chuka tha.
Wo kaaran kya tha or kya nashe m dhut preety ne us kaaran ko ache se samjha tha ye aage hi pata chalega
Wahi dusri or
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Khana khane k baad pahale to sabhi bhai bahano ne khub masti ki fir sab apne kamre me sone chale gaye.
Karan or jyoti bhi sone ki teyari ker hi rahe the ki tabhi unka gate knock hua , karan ne jab gare khola to samne sonu khadi thi.
Karan :- are sonu tum yaha is waqt
Sonu :- ha bhai mujhe aapse kuch jaruri baat kerni thi
Karan use ander leker aata h, or fir wo jyoti k sath bethte hur bola.
Karan :- bolo sona kyaa baat kerni thi.
Sonam jyoti ko dekhte hue :- bhai wo....
Karan samjh gaya ki wo jyoti k samne hickicha rahi h , to wo bola.
Karan pyaar se :- sona apni di se bhala tum kabse hickhichane lagi, jo bolna h khul ker bolo bacha, tumhe jyoti se kuch bhi chupana ni chahiye kyunki karan Or jyoti dono alag alag ni balki ek hi h.
Jyoti pyaar se sonam. Ko dekhte hue :- koi baat ni bhai , ager sonam ko mere yaha hone se koi problem ho rahi h apse baat kerne m, to m chali jati hu
Ye bol jyoti jese hi jane ko uthi tabhi sonam uthke jyoti ko rokti h Or karan or jyoti k pero m gir rote hue boli.
Sonam :- di aapko kahi jane ki jarurat ni h, bhai ne bilkul sahi kah rahe h, Or unki baat m chupe m ishare ko bhi ache se samjh rahi hu.
Jyoti sonam ko uthate hue chintit swar me :- sona tu ro kyu rahi h or ye kis ishare ki baat ker rahi.
Sonam :- mujhe ro lene dijiye di apne in asuo se dho lene dijiye apna wo paap jo mane kiya h.
Jyoti :- paap kesa paap, tum kya bol rahi ho gudiya mujhe kuch samjh ni aaraha.
Sonam rote :- wahi paap di jo paap mane arjit kiya aapke or bhai k sambandh ko todne ki kosis ki us mahapaap ka, jin bhai k prem k kaaran aaj mujhe ye nayi jindagi mili usi prem p apne anuchit adhikar jamane k prayas ka di.
(Fir karan k pero m gir ) bhaiya please mujhe maaf ker do agyanta k andhkaar m m apni jid ko hi apna prem samjh liya or apni us jid k kaaran hi apne vyavhaar se apko bahut kasht diya, ye janke bhi anjab ban gayi ki mere ese vyavhaar se aapko kitna kasht pahunchega.
Karan sonam ko apne gale se laga ker :-ssshhhh shant ho ja gudiya shant ho ja, jo hua usme teri koi galti ni thi , ye to niyati ka lekha h jise hume swikar kerna hi hoga.
(Jyoti ki or nam ankho se dekh)Or bhala apne prem ko batne ka dard humse jyada kon samjh sakta h, isliye mera bacha m tumse bilkul gussa ni hu.
Sonam :- aap sach m mahan ho bhaiya, m kese dhanyavaad keru apne kanha ka jo unhone mujhe aap jesa bhai diya, jo mujhse kitna prem krte h.
(Fir himmat juta sonam boli) isliye hi to bhaiya aapke isi prem ko aapki ye sona jindagi bhar pane ki icha rakhti h bhaiya, please apni gudiya ko apna bana lo bhaiya, i can't live without u bhaiya,
I really love u so much, i can't live without you.
Karan jyoti ki or dekhta h jyoti bhi dard bhari ankho se apni sahmati jatati h
Karan sonam ko uthate hue :- gudiya sach to ye h ki tumhara ye bhai bhi ab tumhare bina ni rah sakta, jesi mere liye meri jyoti h vesi hi tum ho isliye m tumhare pyaar ko kese nakaar sakta hu.
Sonam khushi se ':- iska matlab ki..
Karan bich me :- parantu jesa ki tumhe mane bataya tha ki yadi tum mujhe apna apna premi roop m swikar kerna chahti ho to ek bandhan ek niyati ko tumhe swikar kerna hoga.
Sonam :- ji bhai m janti hu, janti hu bhai ki aap sirf mere ni ho sakte , aapka prem sirf kisi ek ka ni ho sakta, lekin ab aapki ye gudiya samjh chuki h ki prem keval pana hi ni hota , balki prem to wo pavitra bhavna h jo kisi k hriday m aajaye to wo apne premi ya premika ki khushi k liye apna sarvasv nyochavar ker de , yahi prem ka path mere aradhya ne sikhaya h
Isliye bhaiya mujhe niyati ka ye bandhan swikaar h, mujhe koi fark ni padta ki mere bhaiya ki. Life or koi kab kon or kese aayega , m to bas itna janti hu ki mere bhaiya ka pyaar apni sona k liye kabhi khatam ni hoga.
(Masumiyat se ) ab to apni gudiya ko apna lo na bhaiya, i love u so much naa.
Karan sonam k vachano se bahut prabhaavit hua or sath hi apne liya uska prem dekh to karan khud ko rok na paya.
Karan jhat se use gale laga :- i love you tooo meri sonaa, sahi kaha tumne bilkul meri life m bhale hi kitni hi or ladkiya aaye lekin meri sona ki jagah koi ni le payega.
Ye bol karan sonam k chahhre ko apne dono hath me tham uske chahre ko chumne laga.
Sonam ki to aaj khusi ka thikana hi ni tha, wo bas chupchaap apne premi , apne bhai k pyar ka aanand le rahi thi.
Wahi sonam ki khushi dekh jyoti bhi mand mand muskura rahi thi, lekin is muskarahat m ek dard bhi tha.
Jaha jyoti ki wo muskan apni bahan ko uski khushi milne k liye thi, wahi wo dard ek premika ka tha , jiska prem ab do bhago m bat chuka tha, lekin apni bahan ki khushi k liye wo dard bhi jyoti ne ander hi ander yu piliya jese mano shiv ji ne halahal piya ho.
Esa hi kuch hal karan ka tha, lekin jyoti saman usne bhi apna dard apni sona ki khushi k liye chupa liya.
Or masti krte hue jab wo sonam k chare ko chum raha tha to usme halke se uske hotho p bhi kaat liya, jisse sonam sharmake jyoti khushi se jyoti k gale lag gayi.
Sonam :- di i m so happy today
Jyoti :- tumhe dekh m bhi bahut khush hu gudiya mujhse bahatar bhala is khushi ko or kon samjh sakta h ki bhai k prem milne m kitne aanand ki praapti hoti h.
Sonam :- hmmm.
Fir kuch der tino bhai bahan yu hi pyaar bhari bate kerte h , sonam bhi aaj yahi sone ka fesla leti to fir jyoti uth k jane lagi.
Sonam :- di kya hua kaha ja rahe ho aap.
Jyoti :- are gudiya, jab tum. Yaha so rahi ho to choti maa k paas bhi to kisi ko hona chahiye na, ni to wo bekar m pareshan hogi.
Karan :- to usme tumhe jane ki kya jarurat h gudiya m phone kerke abhi bata deta hu sona aaj humare sath soyegi
Jyoti :- are wo baat ni bhai actually mera bhi aaj man choti ma k sath sone ka ker raha h,
Or wese bhi abhi aapko humari sona ko waqt dena chahiye kitne dino baad loti h wo akhir
(Sonam k kan me dhire se) meri nanhi sutan sahiba aapko akele m time de rahi hu new relationship ki first night khulke enjoy kerna
Ye bol jyoti sonam ko ankh marti h, jise wo sharma gayi or fir jyoti haste hue waha se chali gayi, lekin us hasi k piche ka dard karan bhali bhanti samjh sakta tha or ab to shayad sonam bhi wo dard samjh pa rahi thi, use bhi jyoti ka dard ka ahasas ho raha tha, jiske kaaran uska chahta murjha gaya..
Jo karan ko bilkul acha na laga ki uski sona apne new relation ki pahali raat ko hi yu udaas ho, isliye usne sonam ka mind distract kerne k liye romantic way me sonam ki kamar m hath dal use apne sine se chipkake bed pe let gaya.
Sonam sharmate hue :- ye kya ker rahe ho bhaiyaa.
Karan pyaar se sonam k gaal sahalate hue :- apni soni si new girlfriend ko pyaar .
Sonam ye bolte hue wo pyaar se sonam ki ankho m jhakne laga.
Sonam :- bhaiya mujhe ese maat dekho naa mujhe bahut sharma aati h.
Ye bol wo karan k sine m apna muh chupane lagi.
Karan uske chahre ko uthate hue :- ye waqt sharmane ka ni ye waqt to tumhara us prem ko pane ka h sona jiske liye tum kabse tadaf rahi ho .
Ye bol karan dhire dhire apne hoth sonam k hotho ki or bhadane laga, sonam samjh gayi thi ki aage kya hone wala h, isliye usne apni ankhe band ker li
Or agle hi pal karan Or sonam k hoth aapas m jud gaye or karan bade hi prem se sonam k hotho ko chumte hue uske hotho ka raspan kerne laga, ye karan ki life ka first lipp kiss tha jo usne jyoti k alawa kisi or ko kiya tha, or wo bhi apni hi ek bahan ko ye sochte hue karan k ander ek alag hi utejna ho rahi thi.
Wahi sonam bas ankhe band ker apmi life ki first kiss ka aanand le rahi thi, fir wo bhi dhire dhire karan ka sath dete hue aand lene lagi.
Karib 15 min ki kiss k baad dono alag hue, sonam to sharm se kuch bol hi na payi or fir dono bhai or karan usko chedne laga.
Fir yuhi pyaar or masti majak kerte hue dono ek dusre ki baho m so gaye
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Bahut achha update diya he bhai. Preeti ka purana rup dekh kar jaha acha to lag raha he lekin naina ko jab pata chalega ki usane fir se peena suru kar dita he to use dukha hoga.
Karan aur Jyoti ne sona ko accept kar hi liya aur wo bhi samajh gayi ki pyaar sird pane ka nahi balki batne ka naam he.
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Woh raaz kya hai jisne shruti ko aisa bana diya jise janne ke liye preeti ko apne puraane roop mein waapas aana pada... Kya naina preeti ke is kaarya ke peeche chhipe maqasad ko pehchan paayegi?
Karna ka first sex kahin sonam ke saath toh nahin hoga na?
Wese karna jyoti aur sonam ke madhya sanvaad kaafi bhavuktapurna raha... Khair dekhte hain aage kya hoga