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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Karan k ankho se nind koso dur thi , use rah rah ker apni purani yaade k kaaran, uski ankho se nirantar aansu bahte rahe kafi time , lekin usne kuch samay baad khud per kabu pa liya.

Karan man me khud se hi :- are ye m kya ker raha hu , bhale hi wo past kitna dukhdayi h mera , per jo bhi h mere hi kermo ka phal h jise mujhe bhogna hi hoga.

Lekin m apne karmo ka fal apni guriya ko ni bhogne dunga , meri gudiya ne pahale hi bahut dard or taklif jheli h past me , ab or m usko dukhi ni hone dunga .

Or uske liye chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe khud ko kabu m rakhna hoga , kyunki m ese hi dukhi raha to gudiya ko mujh pe shak ho jayega or ager usne mujhpe jara sa bhi force kiya to m usse humare us gujre hue dukhdayi ateet chupa ni paunga , jo wo bhul chuki h us hadse k baad.

Kyuki us past k yaad aane se meri gudiya ko kasht hi pahuchega or ho sakkta h ki wo mujhse dur..

(Nam ankho se ) ni ni m esa ni hone dunga ,chahe bhale hi is dukh k athah agni m mujhe puri jindgi jalna pade , per m us dukh ki ek anch bhi apni gudiya tak ni pahunchne dunga.

Ye sochte hue karan ne apne ansu puche or khud ko majbut rakhne ka irada ker apne Aradhya se uske liye shakti ki prathna kerta h or fir apni gudiya yani jyoti ki or dekh ek baar muskura ker uske gaal chum leta h , jisse jyoti k nind m hi uske chahre p muskaan aajati h or wo karan se or kaske chipak jati h.

Karan bhi jyoti ki muskan dekh apna dard ek baar bhul jata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga, nind ki wadio m kho jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Shani lok

Shani dev aaj apne singhasan pe ni bethe the , balki wo apne singhasan k piche lage lohe ka bade se taraju ko nihar rahe the , jo pratik tha nayay k devta Shani k nyay ka.

Shani dev taraju ko dekhte hue :- putra karn jis prakar humare is taraju k dono palde ek hi saman ek hi sthan p sthir h , vese hi is sansar m sthith humare dawara rachit nayay chakra k liye sab ek saman h chahe dev ho ya asur manushya ho ya gandarbh.

Sadharan manushy ho ya swayam mera hi ansh swayam dandnayak hi kyu na ho , humara nyaya chakra sab k liye ek saman h , isliye chahe bhutkaal m jo bhi karm , jo bhi bhule tumse hui , uska fal to humara nyay chakra tumhe avashy denga , tumhare hi kiye gaye bhutkaal k karmo ka fal ab tumhare samksh tumhari ab tak ki sabse durgam or kashtdayi pariksha k roop m samaksh aayegi putra , jisme hum chahker bhi tumhari sahayta ni ker payenge , kyunki is samay tumhare Pita ni , balki.

(Apne dand ko dharam kerte hue) is sansaar ka Karmfal data hoga.

Tabhi mata chaya waha aate huye boli.

Mata dukhi swar me:- mana putra ki putra karn ne jo karm kiye uska hi fal h , parantu usne jo kiya wo uski majburi thi putra , uske sivay uske pas or koi marg ni tha putra , ye baat tum bhi jante ho putra , fir uske sath itni kathorta kyu putra.

Shani :- janta hu mata , parantu m vivash hu , guru dev ne mujhe jis pad p asin kiya h , m uski Garima or maryada ko putra moh k vashibhoot ho ni bhang ker sakta , is pad k liye chahe koi bhi ho dev ho ya asur , manushya ho ya ishwer , chahe swayam m Karmfal data hu ya uska ansh sab ek saman h , jis kaarsn m na chahte hue bhi karan ki koi sahayta ni ker sakta.

Or itna hi ni mata is nyay chakra se m bhi kaha achuta hu, dekhiye na mata m bhi is Karmfal k chakra m lipt ho chuks hu , jitni taklif mere putra ko apne bhutkaal k karmo k kaaran ho rahi or aage hone wali h , utni hi mujhe bhi hogi , kyu ki uske karmo ka fal mujhe yani Karmfal data ko hi pradan kerna h , jisme mujhe hi apar kasht prapt hona h , or is kasht ka kaaran bhi yahi h ki bhavishya m karan k liye gaye nirnay m mera bhi hath tha or sahmati bhi , prishthitio k Anukul hone k kaaran , isi kaaran mujhe apne hi putra ko karmo ka fal pradan kerte hue kasht dene ka dand prapt ho raha h mata.

Ye bolte hue man se dudrid Shani k anko m bhi ek shan nir aagaye, lekin unhone apne aap ko agle hi shan sambhal liya or apne ashru puchte hue waha se chale jate h

Mata chaya hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey narayan , hey mahadev ye kesi lila h aapki prabhu , mere dono hi putra us kasth ko jhel rahe h , un karmo ka fal bhog rahe h jinme unka koi swarth na tha , tha to keval sansar k kalyan ki fikar , fir unke sath esa sab kyu mahadev.

Hey mahadev aapki is bhaktn ko ap per pura bharosa h aap jo bhi karenge uchit karenge , parantu sath m hi hey prabhu ek binti h aapse ki prabhu mera putra karan jitna apne kartvya k prati dudrid h utna hi najuk hriday h uska , kripya use shakti dena prabhu , use tutne mat dena bhGwan

Ye sab sochte hue mata apne kash m jati h , lekin tabhi unke man me ek baat aayi.

Mata :- mana ki jo bhi ho raha h wo karan k bhutkal k kaaran ho raha , prantu prashn ye h ki ye sab abhi hi kyu , itne varsh bit chuke us ghatna ko , aaj tak to kabhi esa na hua , itna bhay itni asuraksha k bhav putra karan jese veer k hriday m yu achanak aana koi sadharan baat to bilkul ni , avashy hi kisi ka bahut bada shadyantra h k, kisi ka nakaratmak prabhav ne hi karan k man m bhay ka itna bhayankar prabhav dala h per esi konsi shakti h jo dandnayak ko prabhavit ker sakti h

Kuch sochne k baad ek naam mata chaya k mastishk m gunja.

Mata chaya :- ha is sansaar m ek hi nakaratmak shakti h jo putra karan ko prabavit ker sakti h.

(Chintit or gambhirta bhare swar me ek naam lete hue ) Rahu.

Aaiye jab rahu ka nam aahi gaya h to ek najar uspe bhi dal li jaye.

Rahu jo Shani or devi chaya pe najar rakhte hue unke vartalp sun raha tha , jab usne devi chaya k mukh se apna naam suna to ek bhayankar hasi haste hue bola.

Rahu :- bilkul sahi pahachana aapne devi chaya , or kon ho sakta h uske alawa jiska dusra naam hi bhay h , jiska bhay se tino loko k jiv , yaha tak dev bhi thar thar kampte h , us jagat ko apne bhay rupi astra se prabhavit kerne wale , singhika putra rahu k alawa or kon us dandnayak ki ye halat ker sakta h.

Shani or devo us din to bhale hi tumne mahadev ki sahayta se mujhse karan ki raksha ker samraat ki hatya kerwa di ho or use apni vijay or meri prajay samjh rahe ho , parantu satya to ye h ki rahu humesha tum devo se ek kadam aage rahata h.

Ketu :- kya Bharata karan ki ye halat aapne ki h parantu kese or kab


Rahu :- bharata ketu , jab meri chodi hui shakti gagan me akasmat pragat hue om ne apne ander samahit ker li thi , jab hi m samjh gaya tha ki mahadev kisi bhi shan jagrit hone wale h , tabhi mane badi hi chalaki se devo ki najro se chupate hue apni bhaykarini sidhi ka upyog Bandi banne se pahale hi us karan pe ker dala tha or is prakar ab mahadev or na hi wo Shani chahker bhi humara kuch ni bigad sakte kyunki mane esa unki antim chetavni se pahale hi ker dala tha.

Ye bol rahu haste hue bola.

Rahu :- ab dekhna ketu , kese mere dwara rachit bhay or pida k Chakravyuh us karan ko tod k rakh dega bhitar se bhi or uske or jyoti k rishte ko bhi.

Ketu :- parantu rahu kya hum is baar Safal ho payenge, kyunki hum ye prayas pahale bhi ker chuke h , lekim asafal rahe to tumhe esa kyu lagta h ki is baar hum safal honge.

Rahu :- vo isliye ketu , kyu ki is baar hum apni bhul sudharane wale h , humne har bar ek hi bhul ki h ki humne humesha ek tarfa or sharikrik aghat kerne ka prayas kiya h us dandnayak pe , jo humesha vifal rahe kyunki vo sharirik roop se bahut hi shaktishali h or uske sathi humesha uske kavach k roop m rahe h.

Parantu esa is baar na hoga , is baar aghat ek tarfa or sharikrik ni balki ek mansik aghato ka esa Chakravyuh hoga , jo karan k astitv ko ander se ek dam nasht ker denge or esa kerne wale hum ni , honge uske apne , jisse wo sabse jyada prem kerta h vahi uski barbadi ka kaaran banegi.

Ketu :- tumhara arth h ki uski.

Rahu :- ha ketu ha uski bahane , jinhe sabse badi shakti manta aya h na wo rakshak ab rahu k prabhav se dekhna kese vo hi uska kaal banegi.

Ye bol rahu hasne laga or sath m ketu bhi.

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Agli subah karan jaldi uth jata h or naha dhoke fresh ho ker jyoti ko uthata h.

Jyoti ankh khol karan ki gardan m bahe dal :- good morning bhaiyu.

Karan jyoti k gal chum:- good morning meri gudiya.

Jyoti bhi vese hi karan k gal chumte , halke se uske hotho ko bhi chum leti.

Karan :- haye , sahi maine m to ab hui morning good to.

Karan ki ye baat sun jyoti shamaht se apna muh chupa leti h , jyoti ki is ada pe to karan fida ho gaya.

Karan :- haye m marjawan teri is ada pe Kudiye.

Karan k muh se esi baat sun jyoti khilkhila k hasti h or bolti h .

Jyoti :- bhai aap bethiye m nahake aati hu.

Karan ankh marte hue :- kaho to m bhi tumhe join keru.

Jyoti Sharma k jhuta gusa dikhate hue thappad ka ishara kerte hue :- chup badmaash.

Ye bol hasti hui wo bathroom m chali gayi , subah subah ki romantic nok jhok ne karan ka mood acha ker diya or wo raat valo baato ko bhul chuka tha.

Fir Karan apni dono Mao k pas jaker unhe good morning wish kerta h

Kavya gal p kiss kerte hue :- good morning mera bacha

Asha bhi vesa hi kerti h.

Karan:- choti ma aap sab ready ho to hum nikalne ki teyari kare.

Asha karan se :- beta hume aaj aj yahi rukna hoga.

Karan :- wo kyu mummy

Tab asha batati h ki master ji ki icha thi ki wo aaj aj or ruke or naina ne bhi ye hi zid ki thi .

Asha :- beta tumko koi problem to ni h na.

Karan :- ni maa mujhe isme kesi problem hogi , naina meri choti or pyari bahan h uski jid m puri ni karega to or kon karega.

Asha pyaar se karan ko puchkarte hue :- mera pyara bacha.

Karan :- mummy , choti maa m abhi Mandir ja raha hu koi saman lana ho to bata dijiye.

Garima :- ni lala , tum aaram se jao or ghum bhi aao thoda.

Karan :- ji choti ma, love u

Ye bol wo apni dono ma k gal p kiss kerke nikal pada ghar se bahar.

Tavbi piche se Radha use pukarte hue aati h.


Radha :- good morning bhaiya.

Karan Radha k gal sahalate hue :- good morning my barbie doll.

Radha pyaar se humesha ki tarah apnii adar anusar:- bhai nind ache se aayi na raat ko, vese aap abhi kaha ja rahe ho.

Karan :- kuch ni choti bas mandir tak ja raha tha , tum chalogi mere sath

Radha :- ha ha kyu ni bhaiya , bahut din ho gaye aapke sath walk p gaye hue.

Fir yu hi dono bhai bahan yu hi baate kerte hue , mandir Jate h or jab prathna kerke wo lot rahe the ki tabhi unhone dekha ki komal sonam or shivani , or diya ganv k chopal me baki bacho k sath khel rahi h to Radha bhi bhag k unko join ker leti h or karan vahi pas m beth apni bahano ko khelta dekhne laga.

Tabhi karan apne side m dekta h ki ek bacha jiske harmonica tha wo use bajane ki koshis ker raha tha , jise dekh karan puchta.

Karan :- are chote kya ker rahe ho tum.

Bacha :- bhaiya m ye mouth organ bajane ki koshis ker raha hu , per dekho na mujhse ye thik se baj hi ni raha.

Karan :- acha lao to , aao m tumhe sikhata hu ye kese bajate h.

Ye bol karan us bache se wo mouth organ leke use samjhate hue ek dhun bajane lagta h

Karan sholey ki wahi dhun bajake sunata h jo film m amitab bachan bajata tha , karan k mouth organ ki dhun sun sare bache or uski bahane khelna chod uski surili dhun se mantrmugdh ho uske pas aajati h or bina use disturb kiye hue use sunne lagi

Kuch der baad jab karan ruka to sab bache or uski bahane jordar taliya bajake karan ki tarife kerne lage.

Or sab ek sath tez tez aawaz me bolne lage.

Sonu :- wow bhai aap to sach m multi-talented ho , kitna acha bajaya aapne ye organ .

Komal :- sonu di bilkul sahi bol rahi h bhai , aapne bahut hi pyaari dhun bajayi , aapne kaha se sikha ye bajana.

Komal ka ye sawal sun karan ki muskan gayab ho gayi or fir se uski aankho k samne uski purani yaade aane lagi.

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Karan :- na baba na ye meri bas ki baat ni h , ye tere hi hatho m acha lagta h or tere dwara bajaye gaye sur.

Samne wala shaqs :- yaar mote tu ek tto tu ghabrata bahut h try to ker k dekh na , bahut easy h.


Jyoti :- ha bhai ...... Ne sahi kaha ek baar try to kero

Karan hathiyar girate hue :- matlab meri ni suni jane wali.

Dono ek sath :- bilkul bhi ni.

Karan :- chalo jab tumne college m sabke samne ijjat ka faluda banane ka soch hi liya h to chalo fir .


Wo shaqs karan ko samjhate hue :- dekho isko ese pakadte h or fir ese muh pe rakhte h , ab m kerke dikati hu tumhe or baad m tum bhi vesa hi kerna samjhe.

Ye bol wo shaqs ne ek dhun bajana shuru kiya jisko karan bade hi dhyan sw dekh raha tha .

Or fir baad m rokte hue , dekha kitna easy to h , ab chalo tumhari bari.

Karan ko pahale to thodi ghabrahat ho rahi thi , kyunki harmonica ki dhun sun ker kafi students jama ho chuke the waha , ab itne sabke samne bajane m usko thodi jhijak ho rahi thi.

Tabhi jyoti or wo shaqs :- common karan , bhai , let's do it.

Tab jyoti or us shaqs ki hosla awzai se karan me thodi himmat aayi or usne bajana shuru kiya.

Pahale to use thodi mushkil hui , lekin baad m usne itna acha bajaya ki sab students ne uski tarif ki .

..... :- wah mote tune to kamal ker diya , ek hi baar m itna acha bajaya, mujhse bhi acha , that's like my boy

Karan :- h na chalo ager esa h to kal se coaching lene aajana fir ghar or fees hum wahi discuss ker lenge

...... :- (haste hue ) pagal kahika.

Ye bol wo teno has pade.

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Karan apni yaado m hi khoya hua tha ki tabhi diya ki aawaz se wo hosh m aaya ,

Diya :- bhai kaha kho gaye , please ek baar firse organ bajaiye na.

Karan ye sun ek fiki muskan k sath organ firse uthata h or apne us atit ko yaad kerte hue karan fir ek baar wahi dhun bajata h jo usne us din bajayi thi.

Tere Jaane Ka Gham,
Aur Naa Aane Ka Gham,
Phir Zamaane Ka Gham,
Kya Karein?

Raah Dekhe Nazar,
Raat Bhar Jaag Kar,
Par Teri Toh Khabar Na Mile,

Bahut Aayi Gayi Yaadein,
Magar Iss Baar Tum Hi Aana,
Iraade Phir Se Jaane Ke Nahi Laana,
Tum Hi Aana,

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Meri Dehleez Se Hokar,
Baharein Jab Guzarti Hain,
Yahan Kya Dhoop Kya Saavan,
Hawayein Bhi Barasti Hain,

Humein Poocho Kya Hota Hai,
Bina Dil Ke Jiye Jaana,

Bohat Ayi Gayi Yaadein,
Magar Is Baar Tum Hi Aana.

Karan us organ ko bajate hue apni un yaado m mano kho sa hi gaya tha , or sath m uski bahano samet baki sab bache us dhun m

Jab karan ne dhun bajana band ker samne dekha to usne paya ki samne jyoti khadi h , jise dekhte hi uske chahre p muskan aajati h , per agle hi pal wahi dar or chinta ki rekhaye , lekin is bar karan ne apne nishchay k anusar jald hi apne bhav bas normal kerte hue bole.

Karan :- are gudiya tu khadi kyu h aa beth na mere pas , vese tum kab aayi.

Jyoti :- jab aap itni hi shiddat or dhayanmagn ho itni pyaari dhun bsja.rahe the , to bolke disturb kerna mujhe sahi na laga bhai.

Ye bol jyoti karan ko pyari muskan deti h , or karan bhi

Jyoti :- vese bhai aapne ye organ bajana kab sikha, mujhe to esa yaad hi hi aaraha .

Karan abhi aage kuch bolta usse pahale hi tabhi sabke kano m ek kisi ladki ki chikh suni

Karan ne us or dekha to paya ki ek oraat unki or bhagke aarahi h, or wo jaker karan se vinti kerne lagi.

Orat :- please mujhe bacha lo , kuch gunde mere piche pade h , wo mujhe mere ganv se jabardasti utha k kahi leke jarahe h , yaha unki gadi band pad gayi to m kese n kese bach k yaha tak pahunchi hu , please mujhe bacha lo , mujhe kahi chupa do

Karan :- dekhiye aap pahale shant ho jaiye , aapko kuch ni hoga , ab aap surakshit h, Radha jara inke liye pani to lao.

Tab Radha dod k pas k pyau se unke liye pani lake pilati h , or abhi us ladki ne pura pani piya bhi ni tha ki wo gunde jo us ladki k piche pade the , wo waha pahunch gaye.

G1 :- oh to yaha h tu , badi hi aag h na tujme , teri aag to hum jaldi hi nikalenge , chal ab chupchap

Ye bol wo gunda dusre aadmi ko us orat ko pakadne ko kahata , lekin isse pahale wo gunda us ladki tak pahuchta tabhi ek jordar mukka uske muh p pada or wo mukka kisi ne ni karan ne hi mara tha, jiske kaaran wo gunda dhul chatne laga.

Karan :- kyu re tumhare baap ka raz h kya jo inhe kahi bhi jabardasti apne sath lejaoge.

G1:- bache humare raste se hat ja or jake kahi or khel, tu janta ni ki hum kon ...

Karan :- are band kero yar apna vahi purama ghisa pita dialogue , ki m janta ni hu tum kon ho or kan kholke sun lo na hi mujhe koi interest h janne ka , isliye ager bhalayi chahte ho to chupchap chale jao yaha se , ni to kahi jane k layak ni bachoge

G1 haste hue :- bahut charbi chadi h tujhme bache , ruk abhi sab utarte h ,

ye bol G1 apne ek admi ko ishara kerta h or wo karan ki or bhagta h , or jese hi ek ghusa marne ko hota h to karan bich m hi uska hath rok usko buri tarah marod ek jordar laat uske sine p marta h , jisse wo kuch dur jake girta h or fir baki bhi gunde uski taraf aaker uspe humla kerte h G1 ko chod ker , lekin karan jald hi unhe bhi dhul.chata deta h.

Karan G1 se :- ab ager akal thikane ho gayi ho to chupchap apne sathiyo ko leker yaha se 9 do 11 ho jao, ni to aage tum khud jimmedar hoge

Ye bol karan jese hi piche mudne ko hua to uske kano m G1 ki aawaz padi.

G1 :- itni bhi kya jaldi h bache , khel to abhi shuru hua h

Karan jab wapas mudke dekhta h to thoda chok jata h , kyunki jin gudo ko usne abhi dhoya tha , unke ghav apne aap bharne lage or wo agle hi pal wapas yu khade ho gaye jese unko kuch hua hi na ho or unki ankho ki putliyan gayab ho gayi , jinhe dekh karan ki bahane buri tarah dar gayi , jyoti or diyu ko chod k.

Karan bhi samjh gaya ki samne jo h wo koi mamuli insan ni h , usne turant chutki bajayi , jisse komal Radha samet sabhi bache jaha thw wahi tham gaye.

G1 :- oh to tu bhi hum jesa hi h fir to bahut maja aane wala h khel me .

Karan apni talvaar ka avahan kerte hue :- maja ni murkho samay h tumhari saja ka.


G1 :- kon kisko saja deta h wo waqt hi batayega.

Ye bol G1 ne kuch mantra padha jiske sath hi waha kuch der pahale kuch hi gunde the, ab waha puri ek sena khadi thi.

Sena ko dekh jyoti or diya ne bhi apne hathyaar nikal liye or fir ganv ka wo chopal ek ranbhumi m tabdil ho gaya.

Wo to Karan ne apni shaktio se kuch logo ko chod sabko freez ker diya tha , verma itna khofnak manjar dekh to ganv valo ko heart atack aajata.

Per ye kya karan or uske sathiyo ka koi bhi war un rashaymayi darindo p koi asar hi ni ker raha tha .

Diya ek teer se 2 darindo k sir uda deti h , lekin unke sir wapas se jud jate h tab pareshan ho diya boli:- bhai ye sab kya ho raha h , humara koi bhi vaar ka asar kyu ni ho raha in pe.

Jyoti apni talvar se ek darinde ko bich se chirte hue :- diya ye in shetano ki koi maya h , jis kaaran esa ho raha h , inhe harana h to us maya ka tod dundna hoga hume.

Karan ne ek baat notice ki ki un sabke gale me ek jese locket the , tab karan ne jyoti or diya ko kuch soch ker un locket ko todne ka nirdesh diya.

Diya or jyoti ne vesa kiya bhi lekin uska koi asar hua ni ,

Tabhi jyoti ne dekha ki same wesa hi locket G1 k gale m hi tha jo lekin thoda bada tha.

Jyoti :- bhai uska locket dekhiye bakiyo se kitna bada h , shayad use hi nasht kerne se ye maya tute


Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagi or usne apni talvaar ko dhanush m badal G1 k locket ko nishana bana teer choda or wo teer sidhe jake uske locket se laga jisse wo nasht ho gaya or uske nasht hote hi Maya bhi tut gayi or ab wo darinde marne lage.

G1 :- tune meri maya ko nasht to ker diya bache , lekin tu aaj fir bhi jinda ni bachne wala

Ye bol wo khud ladayi k.medan m aagaya or karan se yudh kerne laga, vo bhale hi karan jitns shaktishali na ho lekin fir bhi wo kafi achi takar de raha tha use.

Or wahi dusri or jyoti or diya devi kalrati ka Swaroop dharan ker dono hatho se unki sena ka nash ker rahi thi , apne ko harte dekh us shetan ne ek chal chali usne badi hi chalaki se usne apne ek sathi ko ishara kiya ki or G1 ka ishara pa uska sathi karan k pith piche uspe humla kerne hi wala hota ki achanak uske sharir m aag lag gayi or wo jalne laga.

Ye aag aasman se aayi thi , jise dekh G1 jese hi uper dekhta h to uski herani se ankh khuli ki khuli rah gayi , kyu ki ek bada sa kova k muh se wo prachand agni nikal rahi thi, jo uski sena ka vinash ker rahi thi.

Ji ha dosto sahi pahachana aapne ye or koi ni humare dandnayak ka vahan kam Aziz dost or uska sahayak rohan tha , jo karan ki sahayta k liye vaha pahunch gaya tha

G1 gusse :- se ni chodunga tujhe , ye bol G1 ne tezi se udte hue karan k pas aaker use mukka marna chaha lekin karan ne ek hath se uske mukke ko rok dusre hath se ek jordar mukka de mara jise wo hawa me uchal gaya or uper jane laga, karan tezi se uske uske pas pahuchta h or dono hatho or fir hava m ek jordar lat marta h use , jisse wo chikte hue or dur jane laga or fir se karan uske pas pahunch uske uper jake ek apne dono hath mila k ek jordar mukka uske pet m de mara , jiske kaaran wodhadam see niche aagira

Wahi dusri ie Jald hi dandnayak k sathiyo ne puri sena ka nash ker diya or G1 ko karan ne jese hi Bandi bana ker usse uske bare m jankari nikalni chahi.

Lekin usse pahale hi.

G1 :- m marna pasand karunga per gaddari ni .

Ye bol usne apne pas pade hi chaku se khud k sine m ghop ki jan leli.


G1 k marte hi waha ka mahol shant ho gaya or jyoti , diya or veer karan k pas aate h

Diya :- bhai ye sab kya tha kon the ye log , jaha tak mujhe knowledge h ye koi vampires ya koi asur to the ni.

Jyoti :- per inki shakti or darindgi dekh to ye confirm h ki ye log koi aam insan ni h.

Rohan :- wo chahe koi bhi ho jyoti , lekin aaj ki ladai k baad hum inlogo ki dushmano ki list m shamil ho chuke h or aage bhi hum per ye log humla jarur karenge.

Karan :- humpe humla kare ya na kare lekin hume esa kuch kerna hoga jisse wo log yaha k logo p wapas humla na kare humare chalte or isme mujhe tum dono ki help chahiye hogi rohan or jyoti.

Veer :- ye bhi koi puchne wali baat h dost aao.

Ye bol karan veer or jyoti ek circuler shape banate hue khade hote h or karan k ishare pe rohan or jyoti karan k sath ek mantra padh apna hath uper kerti h , jiske sath hi un tino k hatho se ek roshni nikal ek sath mil ek shakti ka roop leleti h , jise karan asman m chod deta h or uske sath hi us shakti ne us ganv k sath sath hi aaspas k sabhi ganvo k uper ek sheild ban gaya.

Jyoti :- bhai ye kam to ho gaya bhai , lekin ab in lasho ko thikane lagaiye or bahano ki bhi yaade mitani hongi , kyu ki wo buri tarah dar chuki thi un darindo ko dekh.


Karan hehe :- apko hukm sir ankho p madam .

Jyoti or baki sab bhi has pade or fir rohan or karan ne apni power se sabki lasho ko jalake thikane m laga diya.

Or wahi jyoti ne apni bahano ki yaade mitane lagi , lekin esa kerte hue use ek badi ajib si feeling aane lagi , use esa lagne laga ki jesa esa kuch uske sath bhi hua h.

Lekin jyoti ne agle hi pal us khayal jatakte hue , apna kaam kerne lagi.

Kuch der baad jab sara kam ho gaya to karan ne us ladki mind se koi uski kidnapping ki yaade mita ker use uske ghar pahuncha diya or esa hi usne uski family k sath bhi kiya .

Or fir sab kuch thik kerne k baad karan apni jagah aaker wapas oragan bajata h jiske sath hi wapas sab normal ho jata h or unki bahano ko bas itna hi dhyan rahata h ki karan unhe organ bajake dikha raha tha.

Tabhi kaya or riya bhi waha aajati h or bolne lagi.

Riya veer se :- are ye kya bhai mane tum ko in sab ko ghar bulane k liye bheja tha or tum bhi idher inke sath hi lag gaye.

Veer :- didu vo sab chodo na dekho karan kitna acha organ baja raha h .

Tab veer k kahane pe karan ek dhun unhe bhi baja k sunata h to jaha riya ka man khush ho jata h , wahi kaya to apne sakha ki dhun m kho si gayi.

Wo bahut hi pyari si muskaan k sath karan ko niharte hue wo dhun ka aanand lene lagi .

Jab karan ki najre kaya ko khud ko yu ghurta pati h to karan naughty way me use ankh marta h , jise kaya k gaal tamatar jese lal ho gaye sharmhat se karan ki is harkat se.

Fir jab karan ne apna organ banana band kiya to riya ne tarif kerte hue bola.

Riya :- ab aap logo ka music concert ho gaya ho to ab ghar chale khana ready kis kis or uske baad ice cream bhi h .

Ice cream ka nam sun ker sab khush ho gaye or Radha bhagti hui boli.

Radha :- jo sabse pahale ghar pahucha sabse jyada ice cream uski.

Ye bol wo bhagi or uske piche baki sab bhi or yu hi masti majak m race lagate hue wo log ghar pahunche.

Or fir sabne masti kerte hue ice cream ka aanand liya.

Jyoti Garima se :- bhua naina kaha h , wo ak subH se dikhayi na di.

TB Garima batati h ki wo abhi preety or veer k sath hi rukegi or kal subah tak aajayegi

Fir ese hi pura din nikal jata h or agle din aagaya tha vidai ka naina ka man to bahut dukhi tha brihaspur ko chod ker jane ka lekin ghar to jama hi tha.

Lekin usne jid kerke veer or preety ko bhi apne sath chalne ko kaha apne ganv or kuch din uske sath rahane ki hi jid ki jise preety or veer tal na paye.


Or fir master ji se vida leker naina or uska parivar chal pada apni manjil ki or jo tha naina ka ghar yani ki rampur


Ek on naina bahut khush thi apne ghar jane ki to sath m bahut tension m bhi thi ki wo kese apne baba ki sachai batayegi apni maa ko.

Karan jo naina ko tension m dekhta h to jake puchta h, lekin naina apne rude way m use jhagad ker use waha se bhaga deti h

Sham ko kareeb 6 baje tak naina or uski family ne rampur m enter ker liya , jaha naina ko wapas aaya dekh waha k ganvvale bhi bahut khush hote h.

Or naina ki tarif k pul bandhte h , fir naina un sab se baad m milne ane ka wada ker wo sab nikal pade apne ghar ki or.

Or thodi der m unki dono gadiya ma kali k mandir k samne thi.

Asha uter k us jagah ko ek tak niharte hue apni un yaado ko taza kerti hui , mandir m jake darshan kerti u

Asha :- hey maa aapko koti koti dhanyawad maa aapki kripa k liye, jis kaaran mere bache mujhe wapas mile or burai ka nash sambhav hua or apne darshan k punah sobhagya dene k liye bhi maa.

Fir asha waha pandit ji ko dhundne lagi , lekin jab use pandit ji kahi ni mile , unki jagah to koi or hi pandit tha , jinhe Naina ne hi rakha tha Mandir ki uske piche se dekh rekh k liye , to wo naina se puchti h.

Asha :- naina beti Das bhaiya kaha h vo kahi dikhayi ni de rahe.

Naina badi mushkil se apna rona control kerte hue :- maa vo vo

Asha :- m bhi na ek dam bhulakkad hu shayad bhaiya is waqt ghar m honge or maa k bhog ki teyari ker rahe honge , m unse vahi mil leti hu.

Ye bol wo ghar m bhi jati h , lekin jab pandit ji use waha bhi ni milte to ab asha ko bhi kisi anarth ka andesha hone laga.


Asha ghabrahat se :- naina beti tu kuch bol kyu ni rahi h , kaha h bhaiya , na jane mujhe kyu kisi anarth ka andesha ho raha h, bol na beti kaha h tumhare baba.

Naina se ab or control ni hua or wo fut fut k rone lagi , naina ko yu rota dekh sab heran or parehan the.

Asha naina ko gale laga :- kya hua beti tu ro kyu rahi h , kya hua bhaiya ko, jo tu unke nam sunte hi rone lagi

Naina kuch bolne ki himmat me ni thi , usne bas ek divar ki or ishara kiiya or jaise hi asha ne us or dekha to uska mano kaleza fat gaya or wo jor se ni chilate hue beshosh ho gayi.

Karan or jyoti apni ma ko behosh hote dekh :- maaaaaa

Or wo turant uske pas bhage or asha ko hosh m lane ki koshish kerne lage or unke ankho m bhi ansu the


Wahi dusri or.

Ek gadi kisi anjan raste p dodti hui ja rahi thi , or us gadi m betha shaks or koi ni balki wahi shaks or koi ni wahi unhi me ek tha , jinse karan ki brihaspur m takkar hui thi.

Ye banda sirf isliye bach gaya , kyu ki wo apne sathiyo ka gadi m intezaar ker raha tha, lekin jab kafi der bad bhi jab uske sathi wapas na aaye the to wo unki khoj m unke piche piche jab vaha pahunchta h to usne or apne sathiyo ko karte hue dekhta h to uski dar se halat kharab ho gayi or uski himat na hui waha jane ki

Or darse jyada uski herani ki sima na rahi jab usme karan or uske sathiyo k chahro ko dekha , wo turant waha se bhaga or gadi samet teleport or kahi kisi or hi state k kis ganv k area m pahunch gaya tha or wo apni gadi Doda pahunch gaya ek badi si haveli k samne.

Gadi rok usne turant waha k darbaan se kaha ki use turant maharani sahiba se milna h abhi ki abhi ek bahut jaruri khabar deni h unhe.

Dar ban turant ander jata h or thodi der baad us shaqs ko aake ander jane deta h

Wo shaqs jaker ek orat k samne sir jhuka k khada ho jata h or unko pranam kerta h


Orat jo kapdo se hi kahi ki rani lag rahi thi , wo ek bhayanak aawaz me boli.

Orat :- bolo Mansingh itni jaldi hume kisliye milna tha or meri vidhi k liye ladki laye.

Mansingh :- malkin m usi bare m batane to aaya hu , humare jo sathi ladki la rahe the wo sabhi mare gaye.

Rani gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahe ho tum , kiski itni majal k.mere aadmio ko mare or un darindo ko koi sadharan insan.mar kese sakta h.

Malkin :- malkin vo koi sadharan insan ni the or sab mayavi the or jante ho unke smuh me mane kise dekha .

Rani :- kise ?

Mansingh :- malkin Aryan ko.

Rani herani or khushi se :- kya firse kaho.

Mansingh apni baat dobara bat dohrate h.

Rani khusi se :- tum.sach kah rahe ho na , tum jante ho na ager tumhari ye baat jhut nikli to tumhara kya hashr ho sakta h.

Mansingh kampte hue :- janta hu malkin meri itni majal kaha jo aapse jhut bolu m.

Rani ye sun shetani hasi haste hue :- akhir kar , mera intezaar khatam hua , tum lot hi aaye Aryan , ab mera maksad pura ho ker hi rahega.

Mansingh bich m tokte hue :- bich m tokne k liye shama chahunga malikin , lekin is achi khabar k sath ek buri khabar bhi h , Aryan akela ni h , uske sath prerna bhi lot Ayi h

Prerna Naam sunte hi rani k chahra gusse se lal ho gaya or usne ek glass utha same pade mirror p marte hue kaha.

Rani :- aahhhsh , prerna kamini tu kab mera or Aryan ka picha chodegi , pichli baar to tune mujhse Aryan ko dur ker use bacha liya tha , lekin is baar esa ni hoga , kyu ki is baar m Aryan se pahale tujhse hi niptungi.

Tab rani kuch sochte hue ek sone k sikko ki potli is khush khabri ka inam dete hue Mansingh ko dete hue use kuch adesh deti h or use waha se bhejte hue wo ek kamre ja ek photo ko dekhte hue boli.

Rani :- Aryan pichli baar bhale hi hum tumse juda hue , lekin is bar esa ni hoga , is baar hum apne maksad m kamyab hoke hi rahenge.

Ye bol rani waha se apne room m chali gayi

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Karan k ankho se nind koso dur thi , use rah rah ker apni purani yaade k kaaran, uski ankho se nirantar aansu bahte rahe kafi time , lekin usne kuch samay baad khud per kabu pa liya.

Karan man me khud se hi :- are ye m kya ker raha hu , bhale hi wo past kitna dukhdayi h mera , per jo bhi h mere hi kermo ka phal h jise mujhe bhogna hi hoga.

Lekin m apne karmo ka fal apni guriya ko ni bhogne dunga , meri gudiya ne pahale hi bahut dard or taklif jheli h past me , ab or m usko dukhi ni hone dunga .

Or uske liye chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe khud ko kabu m rakhna hoga , kyunki m ese hi dukhi raha to gudiya ko mujh pe shak ho jayega or ager usne mujhpe jara sa bhi force kiya to m usse humare us gujre hue dukhdayi ateet chupa ni paunga , jo wo bhul chuki h us hadse k baad.

Kyuki us past k yaad aane se meri gudiya ko kasht hi pahuchega or ho sakkta h ki wo mujhse dur..

(Nam ankho se ) ni ni m esa ni hone dunga ,chahe bhale hi is dukh k athah agni m mujhe puri jindgi jalna pade , per m us dukh ki ek anch bhi apni gudiya tak ni pahunchne dunga.

Ye sochte hue karan ne apne ansu puche or khud ko majbut rakhne ka irada ker apne Aradhya se uske liye shakti ki prathna kerta h or fir apni gudiya yani jyoti ki or dekh ek baar muskura ker uske gaal chum leta h , jisse jyoti k nind m hi uske chahre p muskaan aajati h or wo karan se or kaske chipak jati h.

Karan bhi jyoti ki muskan dekh apna dard ek baar bhul jata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga, nind ki wadio m kho jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Shani lok

Shani dev aaj apne singhasan pe ni bethe the , balki wo apne singhasan k piche lage lohe ka bade se taraju ko nihar rahe the , jo pratik tha nayay k devta Shani k nyay ka.

Shani dev taraju ko dekhte hue :- putra karn jis prakar humare is taraju k dono palde ek hi saman ek hi sthan p sthir h , vese hi is sansar m sthith humare dawara rachit nayay chakra k liye sab ek saman h chahe dev ho ya asur manushya ho ya gandarbh.

Sadharan manushy ho ya swayam mera hi ansh swayam dandnayak hi kyu na ho , humara nyaya chakra sab k liye ek saman h , isliye chahe bhutkaal m jo bhi karm , jo bhi bhule tumse hui , uska fal to humara nyay chakra tumhe avashy denga , tumhare hi kiye gaye bhutkaal k karmo ka fal ab tumhare samksh tumhari ab tak ki sabse durgam or kashtdayi pariksha k roop m samaksh aayegi putra , jisme hum chahker bhi tumhari sahayta ni ker payenge , kyunki is samay tumhare Pita ni , balki.

(Apne dand ko dharam kerte hue) is sansaar ka Karmfal data hoga.

Tabhi mata chaya waha aate huye boli.

Mata dukhi swar me:- mana putra ki putra karn ne jo karm kiye uska hi fal h , parantu usne jo kiya wo uski majburi thi putra , uske sivay uske pas or koi marg ni tha putra , ye baat tum bhi jante ho putra , fir uske sath itni kathorta kyu putra.

Shani :- janta hu mata , parantu m vivash hu , guru dev ne mujhe jis pad p asin kiya h , m uski Garima or maryada ko putra moh k vashibhoot ho ni bhang ker sakta , is pad k liye chahe koi bhi ho dev ho ya asur , manushya ho ya ishwer , chahe swayam m Karmfal data hu ya uska ansh sab ek saman h , jis kaarsn m na chahte hue bhi karan ki koi sahayta ni ker sakta.

Or itna hi ni mata is nyay chakra se m bhi kaha achuta hu, dekhiye na mata m bhi is Karmfal k chakra m lipt ho chuks hu , jitni taklif mere putra ko apne bhutkaal k karmo k kaaran ho rahi or aage hone wali h , utni hi mujhe bhi hogi , kyu ki uske karmo ka fal mujhe yani Karmfal data ko hi pradan kerna h , jisme mujhe hi apar kasht prapt hona h , or is kasht ka kaaran bhi yahi h ki bhavishya m karan k liye gaye nirnay m mera bhi hath tha or sahmati bhi , prishthitio k Anukul hone k kaaran , isi kaaran mujhe apne hi putra ko karmo ka fal pradan kerte hue kasht dene ka dand prapt ho raha h mata.

Ye bolte hue man se dudrid Shani k anko m bhi ek shan nir aagaye, lekin unhone apne aap ko agle hi shan sambhal liya or apne ashru puchte hue waha se chale jate h

Mata chaya hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey narayan , hey mahadev ye kesi lila h aapki prabhu , mere dono hi putra us kasth ko jhel rahe h , un karmo ka fal bhog rahe h jinme unka koi swarth na tha , tha to keval sansar k kalyan ki fikar , fir unke sath esa sab kyu mahadev.

Hey mahadev aapki is bhaktn ko ap per pura bharosa h aap jo bhi karenge uchit karenge , parantu sath m hi hey prabhu ek binti h aapse ki prabhu mera putra karan jitna apne kartvya k prati dudrid h utna hi najuk hriday h uska , kripya use shakti dena prabhu , use tutne mat dena bhGwan

Ye sab sochte hue mata apne kash m jati h , lekin tabhi unke man me ek baat aayi.

Mata :- mana ki jo bhi ho raha h wo karan k bhutkal k kaaran ho raha , prantu prashn ye h ki ye sab abhi hi kyu , itne varsh bit chuke us ghatna ko , aaj tak to kabhi esa na hua , itna bhay itni asuraksha k bhav putra karan jese veer k hriday m yu achanak aana koi sadharan baat to bilkul ni , avashy hi kisi ka bahut bada shadyantra h k, kisi ka nakaratmak prabhav ne hi karan k man m bhay ka itna bhayankar prabhav dala h per esi konsi shakti h jo dandnayak ko prabhavit ker sakti h

Kuch sochne k baad ek naam mata chaya k mastishk m gunja.

Mata chaya :- ha is sansaar m ek hi nakaratmak shakti h jo putra karan ko prabavit ker sakti h.

(Chintit or gambhirta bhare swar me ek naam lete hue ) Rahu.

Aaiye jab rahu ka nam aahi gaya h to ek najar uspe bhi dal li jaye.

Rahu jo Shani or devi chaya pe najar rakhte hue unke vartalp sun raha tha , jab usne devi chaya k mukh se apna naam suna to ek bhayankar hasi haste hue bola.

Rahu :- bilkul sahi pahachana aapne devi chaya , or kon ho sakta h uske alawa jiska dusra naam hi bhay h , jiska bhay se tino loko k jiv , yaha tak dev bhi thar thar kampte h , us jagat ko apne bhay rupi astra se prabhavit kerne wale , singhika putra rahu k alawa or kon us dandnayak ki ye halat ker sakta h.

Shani or devo us din to bhale hi tumne mahadev ki sahayta se mujhse karan ki raksha ker samraat ki hatya kerwa di ho or use apni vijay or meri prajay samjh rahe ho , parantu satya to ye h ki rahu humesha tum devo se ek kadam aage rahata h.

Ketu :- kya Bharata karan ki ye halat aapne ki h parantu kese or kab


Rahu :- bharata ketu , jab meri chodi hui shakti gagan me akasmat pragat hue om ne apne ander samahit ker li thi , jab hi m samjh gaya tha ki mahadev kisi bhi shan jagrit hone wale h , tabhi mane badi hi chalaki se devo ki najro se chupate hue apni bhaykarini sidhi ka upyog Bandi banne se pahale hi us karan pe ker dala tha or is prakar ab mahadev or na hi wo Shani chahker bhi humara kuch ni bigad sakte kyunki mane esa unki antim chetavni se pahale hi ker dala tha.

Ye bol rahu haste hue bola.

Rahu :- ab dekhna ketu , kese mere dwara rachit bhay or pida k Chakravyuh us karan ko tod k rakh dega bhitar se bhi or uske or jyoti k rishte ko bhi.

Ketu :- parantu rahu kya hum is baar Safal ho payenge, kyunki hum ye prayas pahale bhi ker chuke h , lekim asafal rahe to tumhe esa kyu lagta h ki is baar hum safal honge.

Rahu :- vo isliye ketu , kyu ki is baar hum apni bhul sudharane wale h , humne har bar ek hi bhul ki h ki humne humesha ek tarfa or sharikrik aghat kerne ka prayas kiya h us dandnayak pe , jo humesha vifal rahe kyunki vo sharirik roop se bahut hi shaktishali h or uske sathi humesha uske kavach k roop m rahe h.

Parantu esa is baar na hoga , is baar aghat ek tarfa or sharikrik ni balki ek mansik aghato ka esa Chakravyuh hoga , jo karan k astitv ko ander se ek dam nasht ker denge or esa kerne wale hum ni , honge uske apne , jisse wo sabse jyada prem kerta h vahi uski barbadi ka kaaran banegi.

Ketu :- tumhara arth h ki uski.

Rahu :- ha ketu ha uski bahane , jinhe sabse badi shakti manta aya h na wo rakshak ab rahu k prabhav se dekhna kese vo hi uska kaal banegi.

Ye bol rahu hasne laga or sath m ketu bhi.

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Agli subah karan jaldi uth jata h or naha dhoke fresh ho ker jyoti ko uthata h.

Jyoti ankh khol karan ki gardan m bahe dal :- good morning bhaiyu.

Karan jyoti k gal chum:- good morning meri gudiya.

Jyoti bhi vese hi karan k gal chumte , halke se uske hotho ko bhi chum leti.

Karan :- haye , sahi maine m to ab hui morning good to.

Karan ki ye baat sun jyoti shamaht se apna muh chupa leti h , jyoti ki is ada pe to karan fida ho gaya.

Karan :- haye m marjawan teri is ada pe Kudiye.

Karan k muh se esi baat sun jyoti khilkhila k hasti h or bolti h .

Jyoti :- bhai aap bethiye m nahake aati hu.

Karan ankh marte hue :- kaho to m bhi tumhe join keru.

Jyoti Sharma k jhuta gusa dikhate hue thappad ka ishara kerte hue :- chup badmaash.

Ye bol hasti hui wo bathroom m chali gayi , subah subah ki romantic nok jhok ne karan ka mood acha ker diya or wo raat valo baato ko bhul chuka tha.

Fir Karan apni dono Mao k pas jaker unhe good morning wish kerta h

Kavya gal p kiss kerte hue :- good morning mera bacha

Asha bhi vesa hi kerti h.

Karan:- choti ma aap sab ready ho to hum nikalne ki teyari kare.

Asha karan se :- beta hume aaj aj yahi rukna hoga.

Karan :- wo kyu mummy

Tab asha batati h ki master ji ki icha thi ki wo aaj aj or ruke or naina ne bhi ye hi zid ki thi .

Asha :- beta tumko koi problem to ni h na.

Karan :- ni maa mujhe isme kesi problem hogi , naina meri choti or pyari bahan h uski jid m puri ni karega to or kon karega.

Asha pyaar se karan ko puchkarte hue :- mera pyara bacha.

Karan :- mummy , choti maa m abhi Mandir ja raha hu koi saman lana ho to bata dijiye.

Garima :- ni lala , tum aaram se jao or ghum bhi aao thoda.

Karan :- ji choti ma, love u

Ye bol wo apni dono ma k gal p kiss kerke nikal pada ghar se bahar.

Tavbi piche se Radha use pukarte hue aati h.


Radha :- good morning bhaiya.

Karan Radha k gal sahalate hue :- good morning my barbie doll.

Radha pyaar se humesha ki tarah apnii adar anusar:- bhai nind ache se aayi na raat ko, vese aap abhi kaha ja rahe ho.

Karan :- kuch ni choti bas mandir tak ja raha tha , tum chalogi mere sath

Radha :- ha ha kyu ni bhaiya , bahut din ho gaye aapke sath walk p gaye hue.

Fir yu hi dono bhai bahan yu hi baate kerte hue , mandir Jate h or jab prathna kerke wo lot rahe the ki tabhi unhone dekha ki komal sonam or shivani , or diya ganv k chopal me baki bacho k sath khel rahi h to Radha bhi bhag k unko join ker leti h or karan vahi pas m beth apni bahano ko khelta dekhne laga.

Tabhi karan apne side m dekta h ki ek bacha jiske harmonica tha wo use bajane ki koshis ker raha tha , jise dekh karan puchta.

Karan :- are chote kya ker rahe ho tum.

Bacha :- bhaiya m ye mouth organ bajane ki koshis ker raha hu , per dekho na mujhse ye thik se baj hi ni raha.

Karan :- acha lao to , aao m tumhe sikhata hu ye kese bajate h.

Ye bol karan us bache se wo mouth organ leke use samjhate hue ek dhun bajane lagta h

Karan sholey ki wahi dhun bajake sunata h jo film m amitab bachan bajata tha , karan k mouth organ ki dhun sun sare bache or uski bahane khelna chod uski surili dhun se mantrmugdh ho uske pas aajati h or bina use disturb kiye hue use sunne lagi

Kuch der baad jab karan ruka to sab bache or uski bahane jordar taliya bajake karan ki tarife kerne lage.

Or sab ek sath tez tez aawaz me bolne lage.

Sonu :- wow bhai aap to sach m multi-talented ho , kitna acha bajaya aapne ye organ .

Komal :- sonu di bilkul sahi bol rahi h bhai , aapne bahut hi pyaari dhun bajayi , aapne kaha se sikha ye bajana.

Komal ka ye sawal sun karan ki muskan gayab ho gayi or fir se uski aankho k samne uski purani yaade aane lagi.

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Karan :- na baba na ye meri bas ki baat ni h , ye tere hi hatho m acha lagta h or tere dwara bajaye gaye sur.

Samne wala shaqs :- yaar mote tu ek tto tu ghabrata bahut h try to ker k dekh na , bahut easy h.


Jyoti :- ha bhai ...... Ne sahi kaha ek baar try to kero

Karan hathiyar girate hue :- matlab meri ni suni jane wali.

Dono ek sath :- bilkul bhi ni.

Karan :- chalo jab tumne college m sabke samne ijjat ka faluda banane ka soch hi liya h to chalo fir .


Wo shaqs karan ko samjhate hue :- dekho isko ese pakadte h or fir ese muh pe rakhte h , ab m kerke dikati hu tumhe or baad m tum bhi vesa hi kerna samjhe.

Ye bol wo shaqs ne ek dhun bajana shuru kiya jisko karan bade hi dhyan sw dekh raha tha .

Or fir baad m rokte hue , dekha kitna easy to h , ab chalo tumhari bari.

Karan ko pahale to thodi ghabrahat ho rahi thi , kyunki harmonica ki dhun sun ker kafi students jama ho chuke the waha , ab itne sabke samne bajane m usko thodi jhijak ho rahi thi.

Tabhi jyoti or wo shaqs :- common karan , bhai , let's do it.

Tab jyoti or us shaqs ki hosla awzai se karan me thodi himmat aayi or usne bajana shuru kiya.

Pahale to use thodi mushkil hui , lekin baad m usne itna acha bajaya ki sab students ne uski tarif ki .

..... :- wah mote tune to kamal ker diya , ek hi baar m itna acha bajaya, mujhse bhi acha , that's like my boy

Karan :- h na chalo ager esa h to kal se coaching lene aajana fir ghar or fees hum wahi discuss ker lenge

...... :- (haste hue ) pagal kahika.

Ye bol wo teno has pade.

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Karan apni yaado m hi khoya hua tha ki tabhi diya ki aawaz se wo hosh m aaya ,

Diya :- bhai kaha kho gaye , please ek baar firse organ bajaiye na.

Karan ye sun ek fiki muskan k sath organ firse uthata h or apne us atit ko yaad kerte hue karan fir ek baar wahi dhun bajata h jo usne us din bajayi thi.

Tere Jaane Ka Gham,
Aur Naa Aane Ka Gham,
Phir Zamaane Ka Gham,
Kya Karein?

Raah Dekhe Nazar,
Raat Bhar Jaag Kar,
Par Teri Toh Khabar Na Mile,

Bahut Aayi Gayi Yaadein,
Magar Iss Baar Tum Hi Aana,
Iraade Phir Se Jaane Ke Nahi Laana,
Tum Hi Aana,

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Meri Dehleez Se Hokar,
Baharein Jab Guzarti Hain,
Yahan Kya Dhoop Kya Saavan,
Hawayein Bhi Barasti Hain,

Humein Poocho Kya Hota Hai,
Bina Dil Ke Jiye Jaana,

Bohat Ayi Gayi Yaadein,
Magar Is Baar Tum Hi Aana.

Karan us organ ko bajate hue apni un yaado m mano kho sa hi gaya tha , or sath m uski bahano samet baki sab bache us dhun m

Jab karan ne dhun bajana band ker samne dekha to usne paya ki samne jyoti khadi h , jise dekhte hi uske chahre p muskan aajati h , per agle hi pal wahi dar or chinta ki rekhaye , lekin is bar karan ne apne nishchay k anusar jald hi apne bhav bas normal kerte hue bole.

Karan :- are gudiya tu khadi kyu h aa beth na mere pas , vese tum kab aayi.

Jyoti :- jab aap itni hi shiddat or dhayanmagn ho itni pyaari dhun bsja.rahe the , to bolke disturb kerna mujhe sahi na laga bhai.

Ye bol jyoti karan ko pyari muskan deti h , or karan bhi

Jyoti :- vese bhai aapne ye organ bajana kab sikha, mujhe to esa yaad hi hi aaraha .

Karan abhi aage kuch bolta usse pahale hi tabhi sabke kano m ek kisi ladki ki chikh suni

Karan ne us or dekha to paya ki ek oraat unki or bhagke aarahi h, or wo jaker karan se vinti kerne lagi.

Orat :- please mujhe bacha lo , kuch gunde mere piche pade h , wo mujhe mere ganv se jabardasti utha k kahi leke jarahe h , yaha unki gadi band pad gayi to m kese n kese bach k yaha tak pahunchi hu , please mujhe bacha lo , mujhe kahi chupa do

Karan :- dekhiye aap pahale shant ho jaiye , aapko kuch ni hoga , ab aap surakshit h, Radha jara inke liye pani to lao.

Tab Radha dod k pas k pyau se unke liye pani lake pilati h , or abhi us ladki ne pura pani piya bhi ni tha ki wo gunde jo us ladki k piche pade the , wo waha pahunch gaye.

G1 :- oh to yaha h tu , badi hi aag h na tujme , teri aag to hum jaldi hi nikalenge , chal ab chupchap

Ye bol wo gunda dusre aadmi ko us orat ko pakadne ko kahata , lekin isse pahale wo gunda us ladki tak pahuchta tabhi ek jordar mukka uske muh p pada or wo mukka kisi ne ni karan ne hi mara tha, jiske kaaran wo gunda dhul chatne laga.

Karan :- kyu re tumhare baap ka raz h kya jo inhe kahi bhi jabardasti apne sath lejaoge.

G1:- bache humare raste se hat ja or jake kahi or khel, tu janta ni ki hum kon ...

Karan :- are band kero yar apna vahi purama ghisa pita dialogue , ki m janta ni hu tum kon ho or kan kholke sun lo na hi mujhe koi interest h janne ka , isliye ager bhalayi chahte ho to chupchap chale jao yaha se , ni to kahi jane k layak ni bachoge

G1 haste hue :- bahut charbi chadi h tujhme bache , ruk abhi sab utarte h ,

ye bol G1 apne ek admi ko ishara kerta h or wo karan ki or bhagta h , or jese hi ek ghusa marne ko hota h to karan bich m hi uska hath rok usko buri tarah marod ek jordar laat uske sine p marta h , jisse wo kuch dur jake girta h or fir baki bhi gunde uski taraf aaker uspe humla kerte h G1 ko chod ker , lekin karan jald hi unhe bhi dhul.chata deta h.

Karan G1 se :- ab ager akal thikane ho gayi ho to chupchap apne sathiyo ko leker yaha se 9 do 11 ho jao, ni to aage tum khud jimmedar hoge

Ye bol karan jese hi piche mudne ko hua to uske kano m G1 ki aawaz padi.

G1 :- itni bhi kya jaldi h bache , khel to abhi shuru hua h

Karan jab wapas mudke dekhta h to thoda chok jata h , kyunki jin gudo ko usne abhi dhoya tha , unke ghav apne aap bharne lage or wo agle hi pal wapas yu khade ho gaye jese unko kuch hua hi na ho or unki ankho ki putliyan gayab ho gayi , jinhe dekh karan ki bahane buri tarah dar gayi , jyoti or diyu ko chod k.

Karan bhi samjh gaya ki samne jo h wo koi mamuli insan ni h , usne turant chutki bajayi , jisse komal Radha samet sabhi bache jaha thw wahi tham gaye.

G1 :- oh to tu bhi hum jesa hi h fir to bahut maja aane wala h khel me .

Karan apni talvaar ka avahan kerte hue :- maja ni murkho samay h tumhari saja ka.


G1 :- kon kisko saja deta h wo waqt hi batayega.

Ye bol G1 ne kuch mantra padha jiske sath hi waha kuch der pahale kuch hi gunde the, ab waha puri ek sena khadi thi.

Sena ko dekh jyoti or diya ne bhi apne hathyaar nikal liye or fir ganv ka wo chopal ek ranbhumi m tabdil ho gaya.

Wo to Karan ne apni shaktio se kuch logo ko chod sabko freez ker diya tha , verma itna khofnak manjar dekh to ganv valo ko heart atack aajata.

Per ye kya karan or uske sathiyo ka koi bhi war un rashaymayi darindo p koi asar hi ni ker raha tha .

Diya ek teer se 2 darindo k sir uda deti h , lekin unke sir wapas se jud jate h tab pareshan ho diya boli:- bhai ye sab kya ho raha h , humara koi bhi vaar ka asar kyu ni ho raha in pe.

Jyoti apni talvar se ek darinde ko bich se chirte hue :- diya ye in shetano ki koi maya h , jis kaaran esa ho raha h , inhe harana h to us maya ka tod dundna hoga hume.

Karan ne ek baat notice ki ki un sabke gale me ek jese locket the , tab karan ne jyoti or diya ko kuch soch ker un locket ko todne ka nirdesh diya.

Diya or jyoti ne vesa kiya bhi lekin uska koi asar hua ni ,

Tabhi jyoti ne dekha ki same wesa hi locket G1 k gale m hi tha jo lekin thoda bada tha.

Jyoti :- bhai uska locket dekhiye bakiyo se kitna bada h , shayad use hi nasht kerne se ye maya tute


Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagi or usne apni talvaar ko dhanush m badal G1 k locket ko nishana bana teer choda or wo teer sidhe jake uske locket se laga jisse wo nasht ho gaya or uske nasht hote hi Maya bhi tut gayi or ab wo darinde marne lage.

G1 :- tune meri maya ko nasht to ker diya bache , lekin tu aaj fir bhi jinda ni bachne wala

Ye bol wo khud ladayi k.medan m aagaya or karan se yudh kerne laga, vo bhale hi karan jitns shaktishali na ho lekin fir bhi wo kafi achi takar de raha tha use.

Or wahi dusri or jyoti or diya devi kalrati ka Swaroop dharan ker dono hatho se unki sena ka nash ker rahi thi , apne ko harte dekh us shetan ne ek chal chali usne badi hi chalaki se usne apne ek sathi ko ishara kiya ki or G1 ka ishara pa uska sathi karan k pith piche uspe humla kerne hi wala hota ki achanak uske sharir m aag lag gayi or wo jalne laga.

Ye aag aasman se aayi thi , jise dekh G1 jese hi uper dekhta h to uski herani se ankh khuli ki khuli rah gayi , kyu ki ek bada sa kova k muh se wo prachand agni nikal rahi thi, jo uski sena ka vinash ker rahi thi.

Ji ha dosto sahi pahachana aapne ye or koi ni humare dandnayak ka vahan kam Aziz dost or uska sahayak rohan tha , jo karan ki sahayta k liye vaha pahunch gaya tha

G1 gusse :- se ni chodunga tujhe , ye bol G1 ne tezi se udte hue karan k pas aaker use mukka marna chaha lekin karan ne ek hath se uske mukke ko rok dusre hath se ek jordar mukka de mara jise wo hawa me uchal gaya or uper jane laga, karan tezi se uske uske pas pahuchta h or dono hatho or fir hava m ek jordar lat marta h use , jisse wo chikte hue or dur jane laga or fir se karan uske pas pahunch uske uper jake ek apne dono hath mila k ek jordar mukka uske pet m de mara , jiske kaaran wodhadam see niche aagira

Wahi dusri ie Jald hi dandnayak k sathiyo ne puri sena ka nash ker diya or G1 ko karan ne jese hi Bandi bana ker usse uske bare m jankari nikalni chahi.

Lekin usse pahale hi.

G1 :- m marna pasand karunga per gaddari ni .

Ye bol usne apne pas pade hi chaku se khud k sine m ghop ki jan leli.


G1 k marte hi waha ka mahol shant ho gaya or jyoti , diya or veer karan k pas aate h

Diya :- bhai ye sab kya tha kon the ye log , jaha tak mujhe knowledge h ye koi vampires ya koi asur to the ni.

Jyoti :- per inki shakti or darindgi dekh to ye confirm h ki ye log koi aam insan ni h.

Rohan :- wo chahe koi bhi ho jyoti , lekin aaj ki ladai k baad hum inlogo ki dushmano ki list m shamil ho chuke h or aage bhi hum per ye log humla jarur karenge.

Karan :- humpe humla kare ya na kare lekin hume esa kuch kerna hoga jisse wo log yaha k logo p wapas humla na kare humare chalte or isme mujhe tum dono ki help chahiye hogi rohan or jyoti.

Veer :- ye bhi koi puchne wali baat h dost aao.

Ye bol karan veer or jyoti ek circuler shape banate hue khade hote h or karan k ishare pe rohan or jyoti karan k sath ek mantra padh apna hath uper kerti h , jiske sath hi un tino k hatho se ek roshni nikal ek sath mil ek shakti ka roop leleti h , jise karan asman m chod deta h or uske sath hi us shakti ne us ganv k sath sath hi aaspas k sabhi ganvo k uper ek sheild ban gaya.

Jyoti :- bhai ye kam to ho gaya bhai , lekin ab in lasho ko thikane lagaiye or bahano ki bhi yaade mitani hongi , kyu ki wo buri tarah dar chuki thi un darindo ko dekh.


Karan hehe :- apko hukm sir ankho p madam .

Jyoti or baki sab bhi has pade or fir rohan or karan ne apni power se sabki lasho ko jalake thikane m laga diya.

Or wahi jyoti ne apni bahano ki yaade mitane lagi , lekin esa kerte hue use ek badi ajib si feeling aane lagi , use esa lagne laga ki jesa esa kuch uske sath bhi hua h.

Lekin jyoti ne agle hi pal us khayal jatakte hue , apna kaam kerne lagi.

Kuch der baad jab sara kam ho gaya to karan ne us ladki mind se koi uski kidnapping ki yaade mita ker use uske ghar pahuncha diya or esa hi usne uski family k sath bhi kiya .

Or fir sab kuch thik kerne k baad karan apni jagah aaker wapas oragan bajata h jiske sath hi wapas sab normal ho jata h or unki bahano ko bas itna hi dhyan rahata h ki karan unhe organ bajake dikha raha tha.

Tabhi kaya or riya bhi waha aajati h or bolne lagi.

Riya veer se :- are ye kya bhai mane tum ko in sab ko ghar bulane k liye bheja tha or tum bhi idher inke sath hi lag gaye.

Veer :- didu vo sab chodo na dekho karan kitna acha organ baja raha h .

Tab veer k kahane pe karan ek dhun unhe bhi baja k sunata h to jaha riya ka man khush ho jata h , wahi kaya to apne sakha ki dhun m kho si gayi.

Wo bahut hi pyari si muskaan k sath karan ko niharte hue wo dhun ka aanand lene lagi .

Jab karan ki najre kaya ko khud ko yu ghurta pati h to karan naughty way me use ankh marta h , jise kaya k gaal tamatar jese lal ho gaye sharmhat se karan ki is harkat se.

Fir jab karan ne apna organ banana band kiya to riya ne tarif kerte hue bola.

Riya :- ab aap logo ka music concert ho gaya ho to ab ghar chale khana ready kis kis or uske baad ice cream bhi h .

Ice cream ka nam sun ker sab khush ho gaye or Radha bhagti hui boli.

Radha :- jo sabse pahale ghar pahucha sabse jyada ice cream uski.

Ye bol wo bhagi or uske piche baki sab bhi or yu hi masti majak m race lagate hue wo log ghar pahunche.

Or fir sabne masti kerte hue ice cream ka aanand liya.

Jyoti Garima se :- bhua naina kaha h , wo ak subH se dikhayi na di.

TB Garima batati h ki wo abhi preety or veer k sath hi rukegi or kal subah tak aajayegi

Fir ese hi pura din nikal jata h or agle din aagaya tha vidai ka naina ka man to bahut dukhi tha brihaspur ko chod ker jane ka lekin ghar to jama hi tha.

Lekin usne jid kerke veer or preety ko bhi apne sath chalne ko kaha apne ganv or kuch din uske sath rahane ki hi jid ki jise preety or veer tal na paye.


Or fir master ji se vida leker naina or uska parivar chal pada apni manjil ki or jo tha naina ka ghar yani ki rampur


Ek on naina bahut khush thi apne ghar jane ki to sath m bahut tension m bhi thi ki wo kese apne baba ki sachai batayegi apni maa ko.

Karan jo naina ko tension m dekhta h to jake puchta h, lekin naina apne rude way m use jhagad ker use waha se bhaga deti h

Sham ko kareeb 6 baje tak naina or uski family ne rampur m enter ker liya , jaha naina ko wapas aaya dekh waha k ganvvale bhi bahut khush hote h.

Or naina ki tarif k pul bandhte h , fir naina un sab se baad m milne ane ka wada ker wo sab nikal pade apne ghar ki or.

Or thodi der m unki dono gadiya ma kali k mandir k samne thi.

Asha uter k us jagah ko ek tak niharte hue apni un yaado ko taza kerti hui , mandir m jake darshan kerti u

Asha :- hey maa aapko koti koti dhanyawad maa aapki kripa k liye, jis kaaran mere bache mujhe wapas mile or burai ka nash sambhav hua or apne darshan k punah sobhagya dene k liye bhi maa.

Fir asha waha pandit ji ko dhundne lagi , lekin jab use pandit ji kahi ni mile , unki jagah to koi or hi pandit tha , jinhe Naina ne hi rakha tha Mandir ki uske piche se dekh rekh k liye , to wo naina se puchti h.

Asha :- naina beti Das bhaiya kaha h vo kahi dikhayi ni de rahe.

Naina badi mushkil se apna rona control kerte hue :- maa vo vo

Asha :- m bhi na ek dam bhulakkad hu shayad bhaiya is waqt ghar m honge or maa k bhog ki teyari ker rahe honge , m unse vahi mil leti hu.

Ye bol wo ghar m bhi jati h , lekin jab pandit ji use waha bhi ni milte to ab asha ko bhi kisi anarth ka andesha hone laga.


Asha ghabrahat se :- naina beti tu kuch bol kyu ni rahi h , kaha h bhaiya , na jane mujhe kyu kisi anarth ka andesha ho raha h, bol na beti kaha h tumhare baba.

Naina se ab or control ni hua or wo fut fut k rone lagi , naina ko yu rota dekh sab heran or parehan the.

Asha naina ko gale laga :- kya hua beti tu ro kyu rahi h , kya hua bhaiya ko, jo tu unke nam sunte hi rone lagi

Naina kuch bolne ki himmat me ni thi , usne bas ek divar ki or ishara kiiya or jaise hi asha ne us or dekha to uska mano kaleza fat gaya or wo jor se ni chilate hue beshosh ho gayi.

Karan or jyoti apni ma ko behosh hote dekh :- maaaaaa

Or wo turant uske pas bhage or asha ko hosh m lane ki koshish kerne lage or unke ankho m bhi ansu the


Wahi dusri or.

Ek gadi kisi anjan raste p dodti hui ja rahi thi , or us gadi m betha shaks or koi ni balki wahi shaks or koi ni wahi unhi me ek tha , jinse karan ki brihaspur m takkar hui thi.

Ye banda sirf isliye bach gaya , kyu ki wo apne sathiyo ka gadi m intezaar ker raha tha, lekin jab kafi der bad bhi jab uske sathi wapas na aaye the to wo unki khoj m unke piche piche jab vaha pahunchta h to usne or apne sathiyo ko karte hue dekhta h to uski dar se halat kharab ho gayi or uski himat na hui waha jane ki

Or darse jyada uski herani ki sima na rahi jab usme karan or uske sathiyo k chahro ko dekha , wo turant waha se bhaga or gadi samet teleport or kahi kisi or hi state k kis ganv k area m pahunch gaya tha or wo apni gadi Doda pahunch gaya ek badi si haveli k samne.

Gadi rok usne turant waha k darbaan se kaha ki use turant maharani sahiba se milna h abhi ki abhi ek bahut jaruri khabar deni h unhe.

Dar ban turant ander jata h or thodi der baad us shaqs ko aake ander jane deta h

Wo shaqs jaker ek orat k samne sir jhuka k khada ho jata h or unko pranam kerta h


Orat jo kapdo se hi kahi ki rani lag rahi thi , wo ek bhayanak aawaz me boli.

Orat :- bolo Mansingh itni jaldi hume kisliye milna tha or meri vidhi k liye ladki laye.

Mansingh :- malkin m usi bare m batane to aaya hu , humare jo sathi ladki la rahe the wo sabhi mare gaye.

Rani gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahe ho tum , kiski itni majal k.mere aadmio ko mare or un darindo ko koi sadharan insan.mar kese sakta h.

Malkin :- malkin vo koi sadharan insan ni the or sab mayavi the or jante ho unke smuh me mane kise dekha .

Rani :- kise ?

Mansingh :- malkin Aryan ko.

Rani herani or khushi se :- kya firse kaho.

Mansingh apni baat dobara bat dohrate h.

Rani khusi se :- tum.sach kah rahe ho na , tum jante ho na ager tumhari ye baat jhut nikli to tumhara kya hashr ho sakta h.

Mansingh kampte hue :- janta hu malkin meri itni majal kaha jo aapse jhut bolu m.

Rani ye sun shetani hasi haste hue :- akhir kar , mera intezaar khatam hua , tum lot hi aaye Aryan , ab mera maksad pura ho ker hi rahega.

Mansingh bich m tokte hue :- bich m tokne k liye shama chahunga malikin , lekin is achi khabar k sath ek buri khabar bhi h , Aryan akela ni h , uske sath prerna bhi lot Ayi h

Prerna Naam sunte hi rani k chahra gusse se lal ho gaya or usne ek glass utha same pade mirror p marte hue kaha.

Rani :- aahhhsh , prerna kamini tu kab mera or Aryan ka picha chodegi , pichli baar to tune mujhse Aryan ko dur ker use bacha liya tha , lekin is baar esa ni hoga , kyu ki is baar m Aryan se pahale tujhse hi niptungi.

Tab rani kuch sochte hue ek sone k sikko ki potli is khush khabri ka inam dete hue Mansingh ko dete hue use kuch adesh deti h or use waha se bhejte hue wo ek kamre ja ek photo ko dekhte hue boli.

Rani :- Aryan pichli baar bhale hi hum tumse juda hue , lekin is bar esa ni hoga , is baar hum apne maksad m kamyab hoke hi rahenge.

Ye bol rani waha se apne room m chali gayi

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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The truth is still not in front of us, so I will not say anything, by the way, it is said that according to the work we do, we get results and maybe the same is going to happen with Karan. No matter how much Rahu and Ketu try, they will not spoil as Karan walks on the path of righteousness.
We have to find out about those elusive people, there must be some reason for those people to come there. By the way, who is Aryan, Karan or Rohan.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...
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Aakash. Brother , By reading this update it is not cleared that is Aryan is Karan or Rohan !!
In short , this update consists only suspence , But as an old reader I can surely say that Aryan is Karan .
I am very sure of my answer because , According to the story problem will come upon Karan . And

Secondly , In this story you will never find any incident till now which has happened to the any of the side actor or actress .
You will find that the incidents which happened to the side actors like Diya , Kaya , the couple of Brother-sister ( I forgot their names ) , Asha (Karan's mother incedent ) , the story which came infront of us during Naina's Travel to Samrat . Everything has flashback and climax .
And if you closely watch this story then you will find that this story is only focused on Naina , Jyoti and Karan .

I am damn sure that nobody has read this story so sincerely as Me .
The main motive of writer is to give a glimpse of his life incidents but in such a manner that he can make his own privacy by giving a face of mythology and he also added too much of girls so we can't find out the actual relations between Our Harry rocks and Our Bhabhi . I know and I also believe that Our hero is getting emotional during writing updates

Yeh Mera Request kuch shayerana andaaz main :-

Bhai humse kya chupate ho apne dil ki baat ,
Jo kehena hai keh dalo .

Bhai humse kya chupate ho apne dil ki baat ,
Jo kehena hai keh dalo .

Kya pata kal hum rahe ya na rahe !! (×2)


Tum Apne Jazbaton ko tod dalo (×2) .

Harry rocks Bhai ka Jawab aisa hai:-

Yeh baat mere dil ki hai

Gaur se suno tum !!
Yeh baat mere dil ki hai

Jo kehena hai woh keh dalunga

Kasam hai mere mehbuba ki ,

Agar roko ge toh tod dalunga.


Harry rocks Bhai I hope you will praise my shayeri.

I hope for a quick health recovery





 

Harry rocks

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Aakash. Brother , By reading this update it is not cleared that is Aryan is Karan or Rohan !!
In short , this update consists only suspence , But as an old reader I can surely say that Aryan is Karan .
I am very sure of my answer because , According to the story problem will come upon Karan . And

Secondly , In this story you will never find any incident till now which has happened to the any of the side actor or actress .
You will find that the incidents which happened to the side actors like Diya , Kaya , the couple of Brother-sister ( I forgot their names ) , Asha (Karan's mother incedent ) , the story which came infront of us during Naina's Travel to Samrat . Everything has flashback and climax .
And if you closely watch this story then you will find that this story is only focused on Naina , Jyoti and Karan .

I am damn sure that nobody has read this story so sincerely as Me .
The main motive of writer is to give a glimpse of his life incidents but in such a manner that he can make his own privacy by giving a face of mythology and he also added too much of girls so we can't find out the actual relations between Our Harry rocks and Our Bhabhi . I know and I also believe that Our hero is getting emotional during writing updates

Yeh Mera Request kuch shayerana andaaz main :-

Bhai humse kya chupate ho apne dil ki baat ,
Jo kehena hai keh dalo .

Bhai humse kya chupate ho apne dil ki baat ,
Jo kehena hai keh dalo .

Kya pata kal hum rahe ya na rahe !! (×2)


Tum Apne Jazbaton ko tod dalo (×2) .

Harry rocks Bhai ka Jawab aisa hai:-

Yeh baat mere dil ki hai

Gaur se suno tum !!
Yeh baat mere dil ki hai


Jo kehena hai woh keh dalunga

Kasam hai mere mehbuba ki ,

Agar roko ge toh tod dalunga.


Harry rocks Bhai I hope you will praise my shayeri.

I hope for a quick health recovery
Ab ye to Harry bhai hi Jane bhai ki kya chal raha h abhi unke man me , abhi tak to mujhe bhi unke man m kya chal raha h wo mujhe tak ni pata , but ye comment pad unhone msg diya h apke liye ki.


Boxerji bahi aapke is comments se pata chal raha h ki aapne mujhe kafi had tak pahachan liya h or story ko bhi per afsos puri tarah ni , mane pahale bhi kaha h ye story jitni simple or straight dikhti h utni h ni , abhi to picture shuru hui h dost😉😊
 
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Ab ye to Harry bhai hi Jane bhai ki kya chal raha h abhi unke man me , abhi tak to mujhe bhi unke man m kya chal raha h wo mujhe tak ni pata , but ye comment pad unhone msg diya h apke liye ki.


Boxerji bahi aapke is comments se pata chal raha h ki aapne mujhe kafi had tak pahachan liya h or story ko bhi per afsos puri tarah ni , mane pahale bhi kaha h ye story jitni simple or straight dikhti h utni h ni , abhi to picture shuru hui h dost😉😊
Harry rocks Bhai wo toh hum bhi jante hai ki maine apke bare jo bhi likkha hai woh puri tarah se sach nahi hai .
Aur wo jo maine likkha hai apki itni sari ladkiyon ke add karne ke bare main woh jhut hai .
Bhai woh toh hum bas maze le rahe the .
Bas bura mat maan lena .

Maine socha ki jab writer mahashay itna mehenat kar rahe hai khud ko chupane ki toh hum bekar main apne mitr ke kiye gaye parishram ko vyarth kyu jane de.

Aur baki readers ko bhi nahi pata apke bare main toh maine thora apke bare main glimpse de diya .
Aur sanyog ki baat yeh hai ki apke aur mere life incidents lagbhag milte julte hai . Bas itna soch lijiye ki apke jo bhaw hai wo mere bhi ubhar ke ate hai updates padhne ke baad .

Lekin ek baat ka afsos hai ki apne meri shayeri ka jawab nahi diya .
Bhai itni mehenat se likkha hai sabbashi toh milni hi chahiye .. Kyu :respekt:
 

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Aakash. Brother , By reading this update it is not cleared that is Aryan is Karan or Rohan !!
In short , this update consists only suspence , But as an old reader I can surely say that Aryan is Karan .
I am very sure of my answer because , According to the story problem will come upon Karan . And

Secondly , In this story you will never find any incident till now which has happened to the any of the side actor or actress .
You will find that the incidents which happened to the side actors like Diya , Kaya , the couple of Brother-sister ( I forgot their names ) , Asha (Karan's mother incedent ) , the story which came infront of us during Naina's Travel to Samrat . Everything has flashback and climax .
And if you closely watch this story then you will find that this story is only focused on Naina , Jyoti and Karan .

I am damn sure that nobody has read this story so sincerely as Me .
The main motive of writer is to give a glimpse of his life incidents but in such a manner that he can make his own privacy by giving a face of mythology and he also added too much of girls so we can't find out the actual relations between Our Harry rocks and Our Bhabhi . I know and I also believe that Our hero is getting emotional during writing updates

Yeh Mera Request kuch shayerana andaaz main :-

Bhai humse kya chupate ho apne dil ki baat ,
Jo kehena hai keh dalo .

Bhai humse kya chupate ho apne dil ki baat ,
Jo kehena hai keh dalo .

Kya pata kal hum rahe ya na rahe !! (×2)


Tum Apne Jazbaton ko tod dalo (×2) .

Harry rocks Bhai ka Jawab aisa hai:-

Yeh baat mere dil ki hai

Gaur se suno tum !!
Yeh baat mere dil ki hai


Jo kehena hai woh keh dalunga

Kasam hai mere mehbuba ki ,

Agar roko ge toh tod dalunga.


Harry rocks Bhai I hope you will praise my shayeri.

I hope for a quick health recovery
:applause: :applause:
 

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Naina or uski family ki gadiya jese hi ganv me enter hui to ganv m khel rahe bacho ki jese hi naina p najar padi to unme hadkamp mach gaya.

Ek Bacha tez aawaz me :- naina didi , preety didi

Us bache ki aawaz sun baki bacho ne jese hi naina ko dekha to sare khushi se jhum uthe or unme se khuch bache naina or preety ka naam leker unki gadi k pas pahunche.

Ek baar bacho ko ekdam se gadi k samne aate dekh naina bhi ghabra gayi ki kya hua or usne fat se break lagaya , lekin jab usne bacho k chahre apne aane ki khushi dekhi to uske bhi chahre p muskaan aagayi.

Or baki bache bacho ne pure ganv m bhag bhag k chila chila k sab k batana shuru ker diya.

Bache :- chacha , masi , jaldi bahar aao dekho naina didi , preety didi or veer bhaiya lot aaye h.

Unme se hi ek bacha master ji k ghar bhi pahunch gaya , (jo naina k teacher rah chuke the) or unka darwaja jor jor se pitte hue bulane laga.

Ladka :- master ji ! Master ji jaldi darwaja kholiye .

Master ji kuch der m darwaja khol use dant lagate hue :- kya re shyam k bache ab konsi sharart ki planning bana rahe ho tum or tumhari toli ,(uske kaan pakadte hue ) or jo mane tujhe homework diya tha wo kiya ya ni.

Shyam :- aah master ji , mera homework baad m check ker lijiyega , pahale ganv ki chopal p chaliye , naina didi veer bhai or preety didi lot aaye h

Master ji khushi se :- kya naina or uske dost lot aaye h , e shyam tu sach to bol raha h na.

Shyam :- ha master ji ab yaha khade mere hi piche pade rahoge ya unka chal k swagat bhi karoge.

Master ji :- ha ha bhai kyu ni, chalo .

Fir master ji apni wife ko sab batate h or unhe naina k swagat ki teyari kerne ko kahate h.

Wahi naina or uske dost jaker un bacho se milne lagte h ki tabhi Radha aaker boli.

Radha :- are wah naina , aap log to bahut famous ho yaha apne ganv me.


Veer :- hum apna to ni kah sakte Radha, per tumhari bhabhi bahut famous h yaha hi ni aaspas k ganvo m lady don k naam se .

Sonam :- hehe , esa kyu bhai.

Veer :- vo isliye sonu , kyunki yaha esa koi aas pas ka lafanga ya gunda ni jiski hadiya na thodi na ho tumhari bhabi ne .

Ye bol veer preety k karname sab ko batata h jise sun sabhi khil khila k haste h.

Preety chidte hue :- veer k bache tujhe kitni baar bola h ki mujhe us nam se mat bulaya ker ,per tu ni manta , ruko tumhe abhi batati hu.

Ye bol vo veer ki or bhagi , use pakad k pitne lagi.

Veer ;- are yaar preety aahh , kuch to sharam ker tera hone wala pati hu m.

Preety :- pati wati hoge ghar pe ,or sun lo shadi se pahale hi ye rule dobara mujhe us naam se bulaya na to isse bhi khatarnak pitayi hogi.


Sab un dono ki nok jhok dekh k has rahe the , tabhi komal majak me hi boli.

Komal :_- bhai hone wali bhabhi to badi dangerous h m to kahati hu ek baar phir soch lo,

Veer :- tu thik kah rahi h komal , kahi esa na ho shadi wheelchair p kerni pade.


Isi tarah hasi majak wo sab ker hi rahe the , ki tabhi naina k kano m ek aawaz padi.

Are bhai dosto se free ho gayi ho to humse bhi mil lo naina beti.

Naina :- us aawaz ko dekhte hue khushi se :- master ji.

Ye bol naina master ji k pas jaker unke per chuti h.

Master :- humesha khush raho beti , m tumhare liye bahut khush hu beti aakhir tumne apni manjil pa hi li, apni maa ko us narak se nikal hi liya beti.

Naina :- ye to aapka or maa kali ka ashirwad h sir jo m apni manzil pa saki , aaiye na sir m aapko apni family se milati hu.

Naina sabse pahale master ji ko asha se milvati h

Master ji :- pranam bhanji , aap badi hi bhagyashali h bahan ji , jo aapne itni sushil or bahadur beti ko janm diya.

Asha :- wo to h hi sir , lekin bhagyashali to meri beti bhi kam ni jo unhe aapke jese guru ka margdarshan or shiksha mili , jinke kaaran wo aaj itni kabil bani.

Master ji :- ji ni bahan ji , esa ni h mane to apna ek teacher hone ka farz nibhaya or naina ko sirf kitabi gyan diya .


Vastvikta to ye h ki yadi naina beti k yogya banane ka shrey yadi kise jata h to wo keval pandit ji ko jata h jinhone use itne uch or mahan sanskar di , gyaan ka ghamand na rakhne ki siksha di , vastvikta m pandit ji hi naina k asli guru the , bhagwan unki....

Master ji abhi aage kuch bolte ki naina ne unhe ishara ker diya jiske kaaran wo ruk gaye , or unko dhyan aaya ki naina ne unhe phone kerke bol diya tha ki wo unhe pandit ji ki mot ki khabar na de


Asha :- the ? Se apka kya matlab h sir.

Master ji :- wo wo m..

Naina bat Badalte hue :- are aap bhi kin baato m ulajh gaye , sir aaiye m aaplogo ko apni baki family members se milwati hu.

Ye bol naina karan or jyoti ko chod baki sab se master ji ko milvati h , apne prati jyoti k ignorance ko dekh jyoti ko bahut bura lagta h , lekin jabse karan ne master ji ko dekha tha uske chahre pe ek alag hi bhav the kuch khushi k kuch tension k.


Jab sabse milne k baad sir ki najar jese hi karan or jyoti p padi to unko bhi kuch yaad ane laga , or wo apna chashma utar karan ko ache se dekh bole.

Master ji :- beta tum mujhe jane pahachane se lag rahe ho , kya hum kabhi pahale mile h.

Karan muskurate hue :- sir aap mujhe bhul gaye shayad ,per m un mahan aatma ko kese bhul sakta hu jinki madad se hi hum us masoomo ki jan bacha sake.

Asha kuch na samjhte hue :- sir ye naina k bade bhai or bahan yani mere bache h karan or jyoti hai.

Master ji :- bahan ji aap sach me dhany h , jo apke 3no hi bache kafi samjhdar , bahadur or paropkari h.

Short flashback

Ye us samay ki baat h jab master ji apne kisi rishtedar ki shadi m karan ki city m gaye hue the, or ek raat jab wo shadi k function se lot rahe the , wo rasta jaha se wo apni gadi m lot rahe the wo ek jungle k raste rok rahe the , late kafi ho gayi thi to wo driver ko jaldi gadi chalane ko bole the, gadi raftaar m thi , lekin achanak se unki car k samne ek ghayal ladka aagaya or rukne ka ishara kerne laga , jese madad liye rok raha ho.

Master ji :- driver jaldi gadi roko.

Driver jaldi se break lagata h or gadi turant ladke k pas jaker rukti h , tabhi master ji gadi se bahar aak us ladke ko dekhte h to pate h ki wo ladka buri tarah ghayal tha , jese ki jangal uspe kisi jungli janwar ne humla kiya ho , lekin herani ki baat to ye thi ki itna ghayal hone k baad bhi vo hosh m tha.

Master ji turant us ladke k pas jaker use sambhalte hue bole :- are beta tum yaha itne raat gaye kya ker rahe ho or tumhari ye halat kese hui.

Ladka apne dard ko sahate hue :- uncle m thik hu , aap mujhe chodiye or un aunty ki madad kijiye, unper sher ne humla kiya hai , unhe bacha lijiye

Master ji us ladke k ishare ki or dekhte h to pate h ki orat jo kapdo se adiwasi lag rahi thi


Master ji :- per beta ye sab hua kese or ...

Ladka:- uncle abhi in sab baato ka time ni h , hume inko bachana hoga

Master ji ko ladke ki baat bilkul sahi lagti h :- ha chalo.

Ye bol master ji us ladke ko or us orat ko apni gadi m bitha ker hospital leker gaye , jaha unhone turant us orat ko hospital m admit kerwaya.

Master ji :- beta tumhe bhi kafi chot aayi h , aao tum bhi apni maraham Patti kerwa lo.

Ladke ko master ji ki baat sahi lagi or wo master ji k sath jaker maraham pati kerwane laga, jabhi uske chot p dawai lagate samay uski chikh nikal gayi.

Ladka :- aahhhh

Master ji ladke ko shant kerwate hue uske sir ko sahalate hue :- beta tumhara nam kya h.

Ladka abhi agr kuch bolta usse pahale hi ek nurse aati h or bolti h ki patient ko ab+ blood ki jarurat h or wo na hi hospital m or na hi blood bank m available h , kyunki wo bahut rare blood group tha.


Tab ladka bolta h ki uska blood group Ab- h or wo blood donate kerne k liye ready ho gaya.

Master ji :- per beta tum esa ni ker sakte tum khud abhi ghayal ho ise tum khud ghayal ho , ese m tumhari tabiyat bigad sakti h.

Ladka :- uncle mujhe meri parwah ni , meri maa kahti thi ki hume kisi asahay ki sahayta kerne k liye har had tak gujer jana chahiye .

Or ager mere rahate ager unko kuch ho gaya tha to m kabhi khud ko maaf ker ni paunga
Ye bol wo ladka uth ker apna blood dene nurse k sath chal pada , master ji ka

kahana sach hua blood donation k baad hi wo ladka kamzori se behosh ho gaya , lekin us orat ka operation success raha.

Karib ghante bhar baad ladkie hhoshaaya to usne master ji ko apne pas paya

Tab masterr ji usse puchte h ki wo orat
uski kya lagti h to, tab wo ladka bolta h ki.Wo uski kuch ni lagti h to, wo us raste se. gujar raha too usne paya ki us orat p sher humla ker chuka tha , jisko usne kese n kese bacha liya or isi bich wo ghayal huaa. master ji ko is baat ki. Bahut nherani hui or bahuut prabhavit bhi hue.

Master ji :- sach me beta tum sach m. Mahan ho , jaha aajkal koii saaga bhi aapno ki madad ni kerrta , waha tumne apni jan p khel k ek aanjan ki jan bachayi khud ki jan p khelke.

Ladka :- isme Mahanta kesi uncle m to usi raste p chalta hu , jis raste p chalna mujhe meri maa sikhaya.

Master ji :- dhany h esi maa , jisne tumhe janm diya bete, kya m tumhari maa se mil sakta hu .

Master ji ki is baat ko sun ladke k ankho se ansu bahane lage , jise dekh master ji ne uska kaaran pucha to ladke k ne bataya ki uski maa is duniya m ni h ab jise sun master ji ko dukh hua , or unhone karan ko shant kerwate hue bole

Master ji :- beta tum jese bahadur bache ko rona Shoba ni deta , tumhari maa jaha bhi hongi , wo tumhari bahaduri orr satkarmo se kafi khus hongi.

Kuch der shant kerwane k baad master ji topic badalne k liye haste hue bole.

Master ji :- vese kamal ki baat h hume mile itni der ho gayi , per mane tumse tumahara nam hi ni pucha .

Ladka kuch der shant rahane k baad :- ji uncle mera nam karan h

(Ji ha dosto wo ladka apna hero karan hi tha , jo rat ko apna college k ek project k kaaran library m rukne k kaaran late ho chuka tha , jyoti ko to usne pahali hi ghar samjha bujha ker bhej diya tha or kam m kab raat ho gayi use pata tak na chala .

Karan angdai lete hue ghadi dekhta hua apne ek class mate se :- are teri aaj to gaye kaam se bhai , mujhe nikalna hoga ni to meri shamat aajayegi.

Dost :- yaar mujhe ek baat samjh ni aati , tu apni soteli maa se itna kyu Darta h , tu ab adult h or wo hoti kon h tujhe p haq kyu ni jamati h.

Karan apna bag uthate hue :- yaar baat dar ki ni baat ijjat ki h , soteli h to kya hua , h to maa hi na, or ek maa to apne bache p apna haq jatayegi hi na

Dost :- tu yaar sach m kis mitti ka bana h , itna sab hone k baad bhi

Karan bich m tokte hue :- chod na yaar tu bhi kin baato ko leke beth gaya or wese tere ko bata du , ki dar mujhe choti maa ka ni balki gudiya ka h, ager time p na pahuncha na jald hi to fir aaj rat ka khana bhi naseeb ni hoga.

Yu hi hasi majak k sath hi karan nikal pada apni bike pe,abhi wo ghar ka adha rasta hi par kiya hoga ki uski bike band pad gayi , usne bahut koshish ki lekin bike start ni hui .

Tabhi jyoti ka bhi phone aagaya , jise pick kerte hi jyoti ne sawalo ki jhadi laga di.

Jyoti chintit swar m datte hue :- kaha ho aap bhai , time dekh rahe ho raat ki 10 bajne wale h or ap abhi tak bahar hi ho, ghar aaiye aapko m batati hu.

Karan :- are meri dadi amma , araha hu yaar bas raste m hi hu m.

Karan ne bike band hone ki baat jyoti ko ni batayi kyunki wo ni chahta tha ki uski bahan pareshan ho or wo yaha taxi kerke lene ko aajati , jis kaaran problem or bad jati kyunki us time karan k pas peso ki dikat bahut thi.

Isliye usne bike se niche uter bike sath me leker pedal chalne ka decide kiya , or nikal pada apne ghar ki or.


Karan kuch hi door us jungle wale raste m pahuncha hoga ki use chikh sunayi di , ek orat ki chikh .

Orat :- bacho ....


Karan ek baar to chikh sun ghabra gaya or baad m turant us disha ki or bhaga , or vaha jake usne dekha to wo ghabra gaya usne dekha ki ek orat jo pregnant jamin p buri tarah dari hui h or ghayal hui giri padi h or uske thik samne kuch hi kadam dur ek sher h jo uspe jhapta marne ki teyari m h.

Sher kuch kadam piche ho jese hi us orat p chalang lagata h to tabhi ek jordar kick uske muh p padi , jisse wo thoda dur jake gira.

Ye kick karan ne hi mari thi , jo jaldi se bhag ker orat ko uthata h or bolta h.

Karan :- aunty humare pas waqt bahut kam h jaldi se bhagiye.

Lekin orat bichari pregnant hone ki vajah se bhag ni pati or itne m sher bhi khada ho gaya , karan or orat abhi main road k thode hi pas pahunche the ki wo sher tezi se unke samne aagaya.

Orat :- beta tum mujh anjan k liye apni jan khatre m mat dalo , tum bhag jao yaha se , shayad meri jindagi itni hi thi.

Orat k dil m karan ko dekhte hi mamta paida ho gayi thi or us mamta k vashibhoot hoker hi usne esa kaha tha.

Karan :- ni aunty m aapko chod k kahi ni jaunga , na hi m aapko kuch hone dunga.

Sher ne fir ek bar us orat or karan p jhapata mara jisse ek uska ek panja us orat or dusra karan ko laga.

Orat to girte hi adhbehoshi ki halat m pahunch gayi , usnr apni band aankhon se paya ki karan apni puri jan laga ker use bachane ki kosis ker raha , karan niche jamin pe gira hua h or sher uske uper apne panjo se war kerne ki koshis ker raha h , jise karan rokne ki namumkin si koshish ker raha h


Us samay karan ek sadharan insan hi tha , use apni shaktio ka kinchit bhi bhan na tha, lekin fir bhi wo dat ker sher ka mukabla ker raha tha.

Shayad karan ki isi bahaduri ne usko apni pahali shakti k liye worthy bana diya , jo thi super human strength.

Hua yu ki jese hi karan thoda thakan k kaaran dhila pada tabhi sher ne pure jor se apne panje se prahar kiya , tabhi wo hua jiski ummid karan ko bilkul na thi, hua yu ki jese hi sher ne apna akhri war kerna chaha tabhi karan ka sharir chamka or usne ghabrahat me ek mukkA us sher ke muh pe jad diya , jo itna jabardast tha ki sher 20 feet door ja gira.

Or wo mukka itna shaktishali tha ki sher buri tarah dar gaya or wapas jungle m bhag gaya.


Karan to hakka bakka rah gaya jab usne paya ki usne abhi kya kiya, lekin tabhi use us orat ka dhyan aaya , or wo turant uski or bhaga , usne paya ki orat sher panje se ghayal ho behosh ho chuki h to usne kese n kese orat ko utha ker main road tak laya or kisi gadi ka intezar kerne laga or kismat se masterji use mil gaye.)


Karan sari kahani master ji ko sunata h jise sun ek baar master ji se herani hui, lekin sath m wo karan se bahut impress bhi hue.

Sath m jab bill bherne ki bari aayi to karan tension m aagaya kyunki uske pas pese bahut kam the , tab master ji ne hospital ka bil bhara tha

Master ji :- beta vese tumhare ghar me or koi hai.

Karan :- ha h na uncle , meri pyaari gudiya, meri bahan meri jyoti...

(Jyoti ka nam yaad aate hi ) oh no uncle in sab m m apni gudiya k baare m bhul hi gaya tha sir , wo to bahut pareshan ho rahi hogi abhi.

Ye sab bol karan apna phone check kerta h to uske pasine chutne lage or use samjh ni araha tha kya kare wo.


Tabhi uske dimag me ek idea aaya or usne turant kisi ko phone lagaya.

Flashback end.

Karan ki bahaduri ka ek or qissa sun jaha uski bahano ka khushi ka thikana na tha wahi asha ka to garv se sina choda ho gaya tha.

Lekin ek shaks esa bhi tha jo khush hone k sthan pe irsha se jal raha tha or wo thi naina jisko master ji ka karan ki yu tarif kerna bilkul raas na aaraha tha

Abhi master ji aage or kuch bolte ki naina bol padi.

Naina :- sir ab khada hi rakhoge ya ghar bhi leke chaloge , badi bhuk lagi h.

Master ji :- are ha m bhi naa , aap log itni dur se thake hue aaye ho or m aap logo ko ghar lejane ki jagah , yahi khada ker rakha hi

(Naina se) chalo beta tumhari aunty to jabse chen se ni bethi , jabse tumne subah unke aane ki khabar di thi phone m , tumhre liye , sab kuch tumhara favourite bana h.

Naina :- acha , aapne khaya sir.

Master ji :- tumhari aunty k rahate meri itni majal thodi h ki tumhara favourite khana ghar bane or tumse pahale use koi or khale.

Naina :- hmm , wo to h hehe

Fir naina apne parivaar or dost k sath nikal pade master ji k ghar ki or jaha unka ache se swagat kiya .

Ghar jyada bada ni tha lekin ek raat k liye sabke adjust hone k liye kafi tha or wese bhi bas ek raat ki hi to baat hi to thi.

Kuch der baad sab fresh hote h , or hall m bethe hall m baat ker rahe the ki tabhi naina pati dekhti h ki preety apna saman leker kahi ja rahi h

Naina :- are di tum ye saman leker kaha ja rahi ho.

Preety muskurate hue :- ab safar to bahut ker liya choti ab waqt aagaya h wapas ghar lotne ka.

Naina samjh jati h ki preety ab apne ghar jana chahti h , jo ishara tha ki ab kuch samay k liye uska or preety ka bichoh ka samay nikat achuka h .

Naina :- hmm m bhi chalu di aapke sath aapko chodne.

Preety :- ha choti kyu ni.

Fir naina jese hi apni jeep k pas jane koN hoti h to preety bolti h ki.
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Preety :- are sister udher kidher ja rahi ho

Naina :- di jeep se hi to chalna h , ya pedal hi Jane ka irada.

Preety :- paidal kyu jana , apun ki farari ki swari m h na.

Ye bol wo aaspas dekhti h ki koi hai to ni ,or fir chutki bajati h , or agle hi minutes ek auto apne aap hi dodta hua unke samne aa ruka jo preety ka hi tha , jiske sath preety apna gujara kerti thi.


Preety apni gadi se hi :- aaagai meeri dhano , badi yaad aai teri.

Yu hi majak k sath dono pahunch gayi vo apne ghar ,. Ghar pahunchte hi preety k chahre per ek santushti Bhari muskan thi, or ho bhi kyu na akhir itne lambi yatra ko purn ker itne lambe samay baad wo wapas ghar loti thi.

Preety jaker ek kuri p beth angdai leker :- aahh sahi kaha h kisine , ghar Jessa Swarg kahi ni.

Naina kuch ni bolti bas preety ko muskurate hue dekhti h , tabhi preety ki najar apni maa ki tasveer p padti h .

Jise dekh wo thoda emotional ho jati h or uske pass jaker bolti h.

Preety :- m ghar aagayi ma dekho , ha janti hu itne time baad loti hu , jiske liye aap mujhse naraj bhi hogi , lekin kya karu maa aap to janti hi ho , ye safar kitna jaruri tha, aakhir masi ko bhi to bachana tha or..

Ye age bol wo rone lagi , kyunki use apne hi pita ka apne hatho se vadh kerna yaad aane laga.

Or preety ki ye purani aadat thi , wo jab bhi kaam kerke din bhar thak har ke ghar Lotti to kafi der tak apni ma ki tasveer se baate kerti , usse preety ki esa hi feel hota , jese wo apni maa se hi baat ker rahi ho.

Naina preety ko sambhalte hue :- mat royo preety , tumne jo kiya wo dharm sangat tha , tumne is sansaar se paap ka nash ker is sansaar ka udhar kiya h , ese mahan karya k liye devta bhi bhua ko dhany ho kahte honge, bhua ko tumpe bahut naaz hoga di, ese m Roker aap kyu unke dil ko dukhati ho.


Naina k samjhane per preety shant hoti h or kafi der baad preety boli.

Preety :- tu sahi bol rahi h choti , vese dekh na choti waqt ka kuch pata hi ni chalta na , esa lagta h ki mano kal ki hi baat ho.

Jab hum dono pahali baar yahi isi ghar m mile the anjan ki tarah or fir hum kab dost ban gaye pata hi na chala tha , or jo yatra humari dosti ka kaaran bani wo bhi pata hi ni chali kab puri ho gayi or ab bichoh ka time bhi aagaya h

Naina udaas ho :- esa kyu bolti ho di , is yatra ne hume sirf dosti ka ni balki bahano k pavitra rishto m bhi bandha h , aapse milne k baad hi to mera parivar purn hua, or ab aap hi dur ki baat ker rahi ho.

Ye bolte bolte naina ki naino se ashru bahane lage.

Preety :- are tum Rone kyu lagi sister , aaj ni to kal tum ko apne ghar apni family k sath jana hi hoga na.

Naina :- to kya aap or veer meri family ni ho

Preety :- ni choti mere kahane ka wo matlab ni tha , m to bas itna hi kah rahi thi..

Naina :- m sab samjh rahi hu di aap kya kahana chahti hu , lekin aap sun lijiye mane pahale bhi kaha h or ab bhi kah rahi hu , m na to yaha se kahi jaungi or na hi maa ko jane dungi , m us hathyare kamine k sath bitaye ja rahe ek ek pal ko ghutan jesa mahasus ker rahi hu , or usike sath uske ghar jaungi , sapne m bhi ni.

Preety :- per sister.

Naina :- per wer kuch ni di , mane kaha na m kahi ni jane wali , hum humesha yu hi sath rahenge or ager dobara bichadne ki baat ki na to m kabhi tumse baat ni karungi di

Ye bol wo preety k gale lag jati h , preety ko samjh ni aaraha tha wo kya kare kese naina ko samjhaye , isliye usne sab kuch samay per chod diya.

Fir dono bahano ne decide kiya ki wo aaj ki raat yahi rukenge, ye baat naina ne phone kerke asha ko bhi bata di , jiske liye asha ne bhi bejhijak use permision dedi.

Wahi dusri or.

Veer bhi apne ghar lot gaya tha or usne bhi ab vahi rukne ka hi fesla liya , uske sath karan bhi gaya tha , jo kuch der uske sath ganv ghumne k baad wapas master ji k baad ghar lot aaya.


Karan ko ghar m enter kerte dekh master ji bole.

Master ji :- aaao karan beta ghum aaye ganv , vese veer kaha h.

Karan :- ji uncle wo apne ghar hi ruk gaya.

Master ji :- sahi kiya usne , akhir itne lambe safar kerne k baad ghar ko lota h , preety bhi apne ghar lot gayi.

Tabhi jyoti karan k pas aati h or usse puchti h .

Jyoti :- bhai khana ready h , khana paros du.

Karan :- gudiya abhi khane ka man ni h , ager tujhe tez bhuk na lagi ho to thodi der baad khana khaye.

Jyoti masumiyat se ha m gardan hilati h or karan k kandhe p siir rakh wahi beth jati h.

Master ji :- jyoti beta karan jab man hoga khana kha lega , kamse kam tum to khalo , tum kyu bhuki bethi ho.

Karan haste hue :- wo kya h na master ji ye meri moti h na , ye mujhse kuch jyada hi pyaar kerti h , mere sath hi khana khati h chahe kitna hi late ho jaye or kitna bukh lagi ho.

Master ji :- ha wo to janta hi hu beta , tumhara or jyoti ka preem to us din hospital m hi dekh liya tha , jab tumhari or jyoti ki pyaar bhari nok jhok , jyoti ki lagayi tumhe dant m bhi tumhari fikar dekh to humari ankhe hi nam ho gayi thi.

Jyoti :- humari ? Or waha kon tha uncle , aapne to bataya tha aapke or bhai k alawa to waha koi tha hi ni.

Master ji :- are beti tumhari baato se to lag raha h tumhe kuch yaad hi ni , m baat ker raha hu zo......


Abhi master ji kuch aage bol pate ki tabhi master ji ki wife ne unhe kisi kam se kitchen m bulaya , or jab wo kaam ker wapas jyoti k pas aarahe the ki achanak se tabhi unke samne karan dandnayak roop m pragat hua or unki ankho m apni laal ankhe daal unhe samohan m bandh

Karan :- uncle aap jyoti ko zo.... K bare m kuch ni bata sakte , kyuki m esa kisi haal m ni hone dunga , m apni jyoti ko apne se door bilkul ni hone dunga, isliye mujhe aapke dimag se bhi uski yaade mitani ho hogi.

Ye bolte hue dandnayak ki ankhon m ansu the , jese ki kisi purani yaad k kaaran taklif hui ho use ,lekin agle hi pal usne apne aap ko sambhala or tabhi dandnayak k ankho se ek lal roshni nikal master ji m sama gayi , jiske sath hi master ji k dimag se wo yaade mit gayi , jo karan mitana chahta tha.

Or fir karan gayab ho gaya or uske waha se jate hi master ji normal ho waha se nikal pade , lekin karan is baat se anjaan tha ki uski ye harkat do ankho m ked ho chuki h, yani ki use esa kerte kisi ne dekh liya h.

Master ji jab wapas jyoti or karan k pas pahunche to jyoti ne apna sawal fir dohraya to master ji ko bahut dimag p jor dene p bhi kuch yaad ni aaya.

Karan :- are master ji waha hum dono hi to the , or kon hoga waha.

Master ji :- hmm , ha tumne sahi kaha beta , kya h na bhuda ho gaya hu na , to kabhi kabhi jyada baate yad ni rahati

Ye bol master ji ne topic change ker diya , jise karan to khush tha lekin jyoti confused thi.

Fir sabne milker dinner kiya , or uske baad karan or jyoti chat p tahal rahe the , tabhi karan jyoti ko piche se baho m lapet leta.

Jyoti :- bhai mujhe apse ek baat puchni h.

Karan :- bolo meri jaan

Jyoti :- bhai master ji ne jo kissa bataya tha wo kab hua tha , i mean mane itna jor de liya dimag p per fir bhi mujhe kuch yaad kyu ni aaraha.

Karan jyoti k is sawal se tension m aagaya per use pata tha ki ye sawal jyoti jarur puchegi , isliye vo teyar tha

Karan :- ye to achi baat h na gudiya ki tum humari jindagi ki wo buri yaar bhul gayi, jisme mmujhe taklif hui thi.

Jyoti :- bhai aap baat to sahi bol rahe ho , per ye kuch jyada hi azeeb ni ki mujhe kuch bhi yaad ni.

Karan jyoti ko gale laga uske sir ko sahalate hue :- of o gudiya chod na purani baate , ye kafi purani baat h shayad isliye bhul gayi hogi tu , or us samay to teri khud ki tabiyat bhi to kharab thi , isliye shayad tumhe kuch yaad n aaraha ho.

Karan ne esa bol na keval jyoti ko samjhaya , balki bdi hi chalaki se uske sir ko sahalate hue apni power se uske brain ki wo yaade aajad ker di , jitna wo use yad dilana chahta tha.

Lekin sawal ye tha ki aakhir jyoti ki yaado ko uske brain m lock kiya kisne tha kya karan ne ya kisi or ne or kiya to kiya kyu , in sawalo ka jwab to aage hi milega.

Jyoti ko bhi dhire dhire natural way m yaade aane lagi to uska man shant ho gaya or tabhi asha ki niche se aawaz aati h jo jyoti ko bula rahi thi.

Jyoti :- chaliye bhai , Chalke sote h

Karan :- tu chal gudiya m ata hu


Jyoti karan ki baat man niche chali gayi or uske jate hi karan ki muskan gayab ho gayi or uske ankho se ansu fir wahi ansu chalakne lage

Or uske samne flashback aane laga.

Flashback.

Jyoti ki itni miss called dekh jab karan pareshan ho gaya tabhi use kisi ki yaaf aayi to usne turant phone kerke sari baat batayi.

Karan :- are yaar tu chinta mat ker mujhe kuch ni hua , tu bas gudiya ko sambhal le kese n kese use ye bol dena ki m tere sath hu or subah tak ghar aajaunga.

Samne se :- per m kese ...

Karan bich m tokte hue hue :- yaar please tu to kamse kam meri baat samjh ek to vese hi gudiya ki tabiyat kharab h or uper se m use is sabke baare m bata k or pareshan ni kerna chahta.

Samne wala karan ki baat mante hue :- thik h chal ye baat jyoti ko ni pata chalegi , per m or dada abhi waha pahunch rahe h or tu mujhe ni rokega

Karan :- are yaaar m thik hu , tujhe ane ki koi jarurat ni .

Tabhi ek dusre dusre shaqs ki aawaz aayi.

Awaz :- barkhubdar kuch punya ka kam ab hum bado ko bhi ker lene do , hum abhi vaha pahunch rahe h , jab tak tum sirf aram kero samjhe.

Karan haar mante hue :- ji uncle.

Karan vahi apne bed per kuch der ankhe band ker leta hi tha ki uske kano m ek aawaz padi jise sun k karan chonk k uth pada or uske muh se ek hi line.

Karan :- gayi bhains pani m , hey bhagwan bacha le mujhe aaj to.

aaj to aapko bhagwan bhi ni bacha sakte bhai .

Ji ha dosto ye aawaz jyoti ki hi thi , jo waha aaphunchi thi , jiski ankho se apne bhai ko is halat m dekh aansu bah rahe the to sath m gussa bhi tha ki karan ne use itni badi baat chupayi thi.

Karan haklate hue :- gudiya tu yaha kkkese

Jyoti :- yahi sawal to m aapse puch rahi hu bhai , aap yaha kese , aapto z..... K ghar rukne wale the na , fir yaha kese.

Karan to ghabrahat se pani Pani ho gaya tha , use samjh ni aaraha tha ki ye sab kese hua, tabhi uski najar jyotu k piche un dono shaqs p padi, jise dekh wo samjh gaya k unhone hi jyoti ko sari baate bata di h.

Hua darasl ye tha ki jab karan us shaqs se baat ker raha tha tab jyoti ne bhi use phone kiya tha kyunki karan itni raat ko hhi ghar ni pahuncha tha , isliye wo pata kerne k liye kahi karan waha to ni isliye udher phone kiya or jab us shaqs ne karan ki call bich m aati dekh li to jyoti k sath use confrence p leliya , lekin isse pahale jyoti kuch bole karan nebhi bolna shuru ker diya , jis kaaran usne sari baate sun li thi or wo bhi turant unke sath hi waha pahuch gayi .

Karan abhi aage kuch jyoti se kahata usse pahale hi jyoti karan p tut padi or karan p mukko ki barsaat kerti kerti khud rone lagi .

Karan jyoti ko chup kerwate hue :- are pagli chot to mujhe lagi h , per ro kyu rahi ho.

Jyoti siskte hue masumiyat se :-- apko in choto se bahut dard ho raha hoga na bhai , bas yahi soch soch k.

Jyoti ka yu masumiyat bhara pyaar dekh nam ankho se :- pagli , tu itna pyaar kerti h apne is bhai se.

Jyoti :- or ni to kya , lekin aap to mujhse bilkul pyaar ni kerte isliye hi to itna sab hone k baad bhi aapne mujhse se ye baat chupayi na .

Shayad aapne esa isliye kiya kyunki aap mujhe apne a sukh dukh batne k layak ni samjhte , aap mujhe apna ni samjhte.

Jyoti ki ye baat karan ko chub gayi or wo rote hue jyoti ko gale laga k bola.

Karan siskte hue :- gudiya aaj to esa bol diya lekin aage se esa mat bolna gudiya, tere siwa mera h hi kon , maa k jane k baad ek tu hi to jo meri sab kuch h .

Ye bolte hue karan rone laga, karan ko rota dekh jyoti ko ahasas hua ki wo gusse m kuch jyada hi bol gayi , jiske kaaran uske bhai ki bahut taklif hui h


Jyoti masumiyat se apne dono kan pakad :- sorry bhaiyu , m abse esa ni bolungi , please aap mat royo na.

Karan :- ni rounga , lekin wada ker meri gudiya aage se tu esi gandi bate kabhi ni bolegi.

Jyoti :- promise bhaiya , ab aap bhi promise kero ki aap kabhi bhi mujhse koi baat ni chupaoge.

Karan pyari smile dete hue :- promise meri gudiya .

Ye bol wo firse jyoti ki pyar se apne gale letta h , tabhi un dono k kano m ek aawaz padi.

Jo usi shaqs ki thi, jo jyoti ko yaha leke aaye the.

Wo shakhs :- o hello twin couple , ager tum logo ka aapas m sort out ho gaya ho to thoda idher bhi dhyan de lo.


Karan :- tum to kuch bolo hi mat , ager uncle yaha ni hote na to m tujhe batata aaj , kyunki tere kaaran hi bin sabun k meri dhulai ker di jyoti ne.

Wo shakhs :- tu isi layak h mote, akhir itni pyaar kerne wali bahan se jhut bolne ki kya jarurat thi , well done jyoti keep it up.

Jyoti pahale to hasti h fir thodi chintit swar me :- bhai jyada jor se to ni lagi .

Karan :- tu jor ki baat ker rahi h , sher se jordar or takatwar tere hath h chipkali , sharir ka purja purja dhila ker diya .

Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- dobara mujhe us naam se bulaya na to aapki fir se pitayi hogi bhaiya kah deti hu haa.

Karan jhut mut ka darte hue :- mujhe maaf ker de meri maa , mujhe tere hatho ka sirf khana khana pasand h mar ni.

Ye bol karan has pada or sath m jyoti or wo sab bhi jo bhi waha sab mojud the.

Agli subah us orat ko hosh aajata h or wo karan or master ji ka bahut abhar pragat kiya or fir master ji ne bhi waha se vida le apne ghar lot aaye

Flashback end.

Karan ne jyoti ko wo purani ghatna yaad to dilayi lekin jis shaks k sath wo waha aayi thi or unka uske sath jo bhi rishta tha un sab ko usne abhi bhi uski yaadon m kaid hi rahane diya , lekin kyu , karan ne esa kyu kiya tha aakhir , ye to sirf ya to karan janta tha ya fir swayam ishwer.

Raat ko sote hue , jyoti chipak k karan se leti thi tab karan pyaar se puchkarte hue usse pucha.

Karan :- ab to thik h na meri gudiya , ab to purani baate yaad aane se pareshan ni h na.


Jyoti :- ni ab aapki gudiya bilkul parehan ni h mere janu bhaiya , mujhe sab yaad aagaya ki kese mere bahadur bhaiya ne bina kisi shakti k hote hue bhi itni bahaduri k sath us sher se ladker us lady ki help ki.

Karan majakiya way me :- or baad m kisi male kapde ki tarah tere hatho se dhulayi bhi to hui.

Jyoti :- hehe , usme galti bhi to aapki thi , apne mujhse itni badi baat jo chupayi thi , lekin koi baat ni bhaiya past se mujhe koi fark ni padta , kyounki m janti hu ki mere pyaare bhaiya chahe kuch bhi ho jaye , na us din k baad se mujse kuch chupaya tha or na kabhi aage chupayenge.

Ye bol wo karan k hotho ko pyaar se chum leti h.

Karan fiki muskan k sath :- hmm wo to h.

Jyoti :- good night bhaiya.

Ye bol wo karan k gale lag k so gayi , per karan ki ankho se nind koso dur thi

Or sath m karan ne anjane m ek bahut badi galti ker di thi , jiske bhayankar parinam bhavishya m samne bhi aane wale the.

Aakhir kya tha karan k past ka raaz jo wo itna pareshan or bhaybhit tha .

Janne k liye sath bane rahiye

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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