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Behtareen zaberdast shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update bhaiupdate no :- 216
Riya ko yu ghabraya dekh rohan bhi tension m aajata h kyunki anhoni ka ahasas to use bhi dhire dhire hone laga tha ,Riya ko yu ghabraya dekh rohan bhi tension m aajata h kyunki anhoni ka ahasas to use bhi dhire dhire hone laga tha ,lekin usne khud ko sambhalte hue riya ko sine se laga ker bola
Rohan :- di aap dar kyu rAhi ho m yahi to hu m bas abhi doctor ko call kerke aata hu , kyunki mera phone uper chat p hi rah gaya h.
Riya :- ni betu m thik hu , bas tu yahi rah , mujhe chod k kahi mat jaa, na jane kyu achanak se mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi h , esa lag raha h bhai tumhe koi mujhse chin lega .
Rohan :- are di aap bekar m hi ghabra rahi ho , esa kuch ni hone wala , bhala aapke hote hue kisi ki itni himmat ho sakti h ki wo mujhe apse dur le jaye .
Ye bol rohan firse jane ki koshis kerta h lekin riya use jor se pakad use kaske sine se laga bolti h.
Riya :- mane kaha na bhai m thik hu , tu bas yahi rah mere pas.
Rohan :- per di
Riya ruansi aawaz me :- ager tu mujhe abhi yaha gaya na betu to m tere se bilkul baat ni karungi.
Ye bol wo rone lagi , jisse rohan ghabra k bol.utha.
Rohan :- are di aap ro kyu rahi ho , acha baba ni jata m bas ab to shant ho jao.
Lekin riya shant hone ka naam hi ni le rahi thi , bas subak subak k ro hi rahi thi , jiske kaaran rohan pareshan ho gaya , use riya ko shant karane ka use bas ek hi upay sujhta h
Usne riya ko apne sine se hata uske hatho ko tham wo kiya jise ek shan to riya chonki, lekin agle hi shan uski khusi ka koi thikana na raha.
Hua yu tha ki rohan ko jab kuch na sujha to usne riya ka chahra tham apne hoth uske hotho p rakh diya or bade hi pyaar se apni bahan k hotho ka ras pite hue use kiss kerne laga.
Jiska kuch hi second m riya bhi sath dene lagi , dono hi bhai bahan sab kuch bhul ek dusre ko passionate way m kiss kerne lage , rohan bade hi pyaar se kabhi riya k nichle hotho ko chumta to kabhi uper wale hotho ko , or riya bhi apne bhai ka sath dete hue bilkul wesa hi kerne lagi.
Dono bhai bahan k bich havas naam matra bhi ni thi , tha to keval pavitra prem wesa hi prem jesa karan or jyoti m tha
Dono hi ek dusre ko ese chum.rahe the ki mano kabhi alag hi na hoge , rohan riya ki backless top k uper se uski pith sahalne laga to riya bhi josh m aaker uske t shirt m hath dal uske sine ko sahala rahi thi.
Thodi der baad jab dono ki hi sanse ukhadne lagi to majburan alag hona pada , jiske sath hi riya sharma k dusri or muh ker leti h jisse rohan ko lagta h ki riya naraj ho gayi jise rohan ghabra gaya.
Rohan :- sorry didu wo mane aaapko shant karane k liye, kiya lekin fir bhi aapko bura laga to please apne betu ko maaf ker do , per please mujhse naraj mat ho.
Itna bolne k sath rohan ki aawaz ruasi ho gayi thi , jisse sun riya turant ghabra k rohan ko rota dekh riya turant sine se laga k boli.
Riya :- are pagal tu ro kyu raha h , pahale m tujhse naraj ni hu , wo to tune achanak wo kiya na t.o..
Ye bol riya fir sharmane lagi , jise rohan samjh k chedte hue
Rohan :- mane mane kya kiya di.
Riya jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kute tu bahut bigad gaya h ruk tujhe m abhi batati hu.
Ye bol riya rohan ko marne jhapti per ussse pahale hi rohan bach k bhagne laga or uske piche piche riya bhi.
Rohan bhag k apne ghar jake apni mummy k piche chup gaya or uske piche piche riya bhi aagayi.
Rohan :- mummy mujhe bachao ni to aaj ye bandariya apke bete ko noch khayegi.
Riya :- tune mujhe bandariya bola ruk kute tujhe abhi dikhati hu bandariya kya hoti h, mummy aap hat jaoo.
Anita :- hey bhagwaan itne bade ho gaye lekin harkate bacho se bhi gaye gujri , tum dono ka kya karu m
Riya :- mummy jo kerna h m karungi, aap bas hat jao.
Ye bol wo rohan ko kese n kese pakad hi leti h , or usko sofe p sofe p.gira k uske uper use gudgudi kerne lagi.
Rohan haste haste :- diduu please chod please, aah mummy mujhe bachao.
Anita :- na baba n m tum bhai bahan k bich ni aane wali .
Ye bol wo hasne lagi.
Tabhi rohan riya se dhire se bola.
Rohan :- di dekho to mummy kese maje le rahi h apne
Riya ankh mar :- to mummy ko bhi lapet le.
Iske sath hi dono bhai bahan :-1..... 2......3.
Or itna bol apni maa ko hi hath pakad k khich lete h or fir apni maa ko hi sofe p gudgudi kerne lage.
Jisse anita bhi has has k thak gayi or phir dono bhai bahan ruk ke dono taraf se apni maa ko hug ker use masum si shakal bana k dekhne lage.
Pahale to anita dono ko gusse se dekhti h jisse ek bar dono bhai bahan dar jate h lekin unke dare hue chahre dekh khud ko control ni ker pati or khil khila k hasne lagi or uske sath dono bhai bahan bhi.
Fir anita dono bhai bahan ko apne se lapet unke matha chum leti .
Ek or jaha ek tino maa bete or beti ek dusre p pyaar or vatsalya luta rahe the , wahi dusri or ek beti , ek bahan or thi , jise abhi apne bhai or ma dono k prem ki kami khal rahi thi , jo or koi ni humari dand nayaika humare hero ki praan jyoti thi.
Location :- bhua ka ghar
(Aage jyoti ki jubani)
Dikhane ko to m sabko yahi dikha rahi thi ki m normal hu or mujhe koi pareshani ni , lekin satya to ye tha ki is samay mujhse jyada koi parshan or taklif m is waqt shayad hi koi tha.
Or ab is taklif or dard ki mano aadat si hi ho gayi h , kyunki bachpan se mujhe or mere judwa ko uske alawa or mila hi kya tha
Bachpan m jab hume sabse jyada maa k prem ki jarurat thi , us samay halato ne humse humari maa ko china , pita k durvyavahar or upeksha k kaaran to unka hona n hone k barabar tha , lekin bhaiya ka prem or. Sath ne mujhe kabhi tutne ni diya or mere sobhagya ki baat to dekho jinke sath mane is duniya m ane tak ka safar tay kiya , ishwer ne unko hi mera jivan sathi bana diya or jab ye hua to mano meri khushi ka thikana n raha , parantu nishthur niyati ne to kabhi hum bhai bahan p daya dikhayi kaha , pahale us hadse se humare parivar m darar dal lagbhag tod hi dala tha or jab mere swami mere premi yani mere bhaiya ne mera prem swikaar , tab niyati ne ek or chal chal di , mere prem ka batwara kar dala , mahadev k mukh se ye kahalwa ki mere bhai. Ki or bhi jivan sangniya hogi.
Mane yaha bhi apni niyati ko swikar kiya , kyunki mujhe apna batwara kisi praye se ni balki apni bahano se kerna tha.
Or jab hum dono bhai bahan ko laga ki sab kuch normal. Ho gaya h , to fir hum dono ko laga apni life ka sabse bada shock jab hume pata chala ki humari maa na keval jivit h , balki ek choti pyaari si ek bahan bhi h.
Lekin nishthur niyati ne to nishthurata ki hi sima hi langh di , usne esa chakra chalaya jisse aaj meri hi sagi choti bahan humse yani apne hi sage bhai bahan se nafrat kerti h or maa humse door h or had to tab jo gayi jab mere praan mere bhaiya ne bhi apni gudiya ka khayal na kiya or apne kartvya ki duhai dette hue , unhone niyati k aage ghutne tek maa ko khud se or mujhse dur ker dala.
Ese m mera sabra ka bandh tut gaya or m wo ker bethi jo aajtak na hua ,mane apne bhai apni jaan se jhagda kiya , unse naraj ho ker yaha aagayi, ye jante hue bhi ki mere bhai kitna tadaf rahe honge , kitna dard m honge wo , ek taraf to maa or naina se judai ka dard or uper se meri narajgi ka bhi , or ese m m unhe akela chod aayi.
M bhale hi apne bhaiya se chahe kitni door hu , lekin m apne bhaiya ka dard saf saf mahasus ker sakti thi , lekin wo ye ni samjh rahe the ki unhe apne kartavya ka to bodh tha , lekin wo anjane m hi apni gudiya ka dard bhul gaye the , unhone aaj mera dil dikhaya tha ese m m bhi kya kerti .
Inhi anter dwand or apne bhai k dard ko mahsus kerte hue meri sari raat jagte hue kati ,, or mujhe nind bhi kese aati kyunki m mahasus ker sakti thi mere bhai bhi ni so pa rahe the isi dard m.
Lekin subah hote hote nind ki devi ne mujhe apne vashibhoot ker liya or mujhe kab nind aagayi mujhe khud hi naa pata chala.
Thodi der baad bhua jab uthi to unhone mujhe sone diya kyunki wo janti thi k m raat ko late hi soyi houngi.
Mujhe soye hue kuch hi der hui thi , jisse mere man ko thodi shanti mili thi , per mere nasib m ye sukun jyada dr thodi na tha.
Kyunki achanak se mujhe sapno m kuch aawaz sunayi dene lagi or kuch anjane dhundhale drishya , lekin wo mere liye jane kyu mujhe anjaan hokr bhi anjaan ni the.
Unhe dekh esa pratit ho raha tha, jese wo meri koi yade ho.
Sabse pahale mujhe ek drishya dikhayi diya ki m humare collage k park me bethi hu , or mere sat do jan or h ek to wo. The jo mera sab kuch the , jinhe m bina ankho k bhi pahachan sakti thi , wo or koi ni mere bhaiya the , jinke sath m bethi humesha ki tatah unke hatho se lunch ker rahi thi or unhe kerwa rahi thi .
Lekin wo 3sr saksh jo bhi tha ya yu kaho thi , uska chahara mujhe saf dikhayi ni de raha tha , lekin na jane kyu use dekh meri ankho se apne apne aap ansu chalak pade or mera dil na jane kyu teji se dhadak pada or mere dil m ek tis uthi , na jane kyu wo mere liye anjan ni thi , balki mujhe to esa pratit ho raha tha ki jese usse to mera ek bahut hi gahara rishta ho, lekin na jane kyu dimag p bahut jor dene k baad bhi mm use pahachan ni pa rahi thi.
Us drishya m hum 3no khub enjoy ker rahe the or hasi majak kerte hue nashta ker rahe the or dhire dhire drishya badale or kayi ese drishya dikhe jisme m bhai or vo sath har lamha ji tahe the jindagi ka , jiske kaaran mere chahre p muskan hoti kabhi dukh to kabhi kuch or bhav
Lekin in sab drishyo ko dekh m kuch or soch ya samjh pati usse pahale hi meri ankho k samne andhera cha gaya or ek goli k tez aawaz k sath 2 dard bhari chikhe sunayi di , jiske kaaran mujhse or sahan ni hua .
Or m dard se chilate hue uth bethi.
Mai :- Niiiiiiiiiiiiii
Uth ker m jor jor se hafne lagi , or khud per kabu kee abhi jo hua wo kya tha use smjhne ki Koshis kerne lagi.
Tabhi meri chikh sun bhua waha bhagi aayi or mere sir ko sahalate hue puchne lagi ki m chikhi kyu.
Tab mane bhua ko bura sapna dekhne ka bahana bana diya.
Tab bhua boli.
Bhua :- koi baat ni beta shant ho jao tum to to meri bahadur bachi ho na, chalo jaldi se naha dhoke jaldi se aajao, nashta ready h
Mai :- ji bhua.
Ye bhua k ghar ka rule tha ki ghar m bina nahaye koi khana ni kha sakta tha , ye maa k hi diye hue sanskar the bhua ko jo wo aaj bhi follow kerti thi.
Bhua k jate hi m fir soch m dub gayi vo drishya bar bar mere dimag m ghum rahe the , mujhe itna to samjh aagaya tha ye drishy se kuch to sambhandh jarur h , or mane than liya ki in drishyo ka rahasya pata laga k rahungi.
Ye sochte hue jyoti uth ker nahane chali gayi.
Back to the hero.
Kabristan k ek kone m apna hero ghutno k bal betha kisi se baat ker raha tha.
Karan :- m janta hu naraj to tum bahut hogi or hona bhi chahiye m hu hi is layak , khud ko tumhara sabse acha or best friend kahane wala dost aaj kitne waqt baad aaya usse tumse milne.
Per tu janti hi h na meri saheli ki tere is motu ka or pareshaniyo se bhare halato or k sath esa gahara sambhandh ho chuka h ki ab to pareshaniya kabhi picha hi ni chodti dekh na or vese bhi tere se duur hone k baad bhi tera ye price kaha chen se ji pa raha h.
Ye bolne k sath hi karan apne jivan ki sari vyatha kah dala jisko dohrate dohrate uska gala rundh gaya or uski ankho se ansu chalak pade or wo usse or control ni hua to wo samne jisse baat ker raha tha usse lipat gaya.
Aaiye dekhte h wo kon h.
Are ye kya aaj jo drishya humare samne tha wo bada hi marmik tha , kyunki karan jisse lipta hua tha wo koi jivit shaks ni balki ek thi to wo jiska ye sthan tha , yani ki ek qabar thi.
Ji ha dosto karan ek qabra se lipta ro raha tha, wo usse yu lipta tha jese koi kisi apne se lipta ho.
Karan :- kabhi kabhi to man kerta h ki sab kuch chod m bhi tere pas aajau, lekin mere bina teri saheli bhi kaha ji payegi , bas inhi kartavya or prem ne hi hum dono ka virah kiya hua h ni to m kabka tere pas aajata.
Ab tu hi bata m kya karu , kya apna kartavya nibha k mane koi galti ki , ab tu hi samjha n apni saheli ko.....
Jyoti ka dhyan aate hi karan subakne laga or fir bola
Karan :- dekh na yaar , ab to gudiya bhi mujhse ruth gayi h , tu to janti hi h na tere prince ko har chij bardasht h per apni gudiya ki narajgi ni or dukh ki baat to ye h ki esa kerke wo khud ko hi taklif de rahi h , ye jante hue bhi ki wo apne is bhai k bina ek pal bhi ni rah sakti or ab kahi beth k ro rahi hogi or khud ko takilf de rahi hogi,or uski taklif se mera hriday chalni ho raha h ab tu hi samjha na apnin saheli ko zo........
Tu hi samjha.
Isse aage karan kuch ni bol paya or bas us qabar k lipte roye ja raha tha
Tabhi karan ko apni pith per kisi ka hath mahasus hua , jab usne piche mud k dekha to paya asma khadi thi phoolo ka boque liye hue.
Karan asma ko dekh usse lipat gaya or shikayti andaaz m bola :- dekh na asu itne din baad aaya fir bhi teri di mujhse baat hi ni ker rahi , ab tu hi samjha n apni di ko asu ki ab apne budu dost ko maf bhi ker de , bol na apni di ko asu.
Karan ki ye halat dekh asma ki ankho m ansu the or usko bhi atit ki wo sari yaade samne aagayi jo usne karan or apni us di k sath bitaye the , jiski qabra p karan or wo mojud the.
Asma :- bhai please shant ho jao , aap yu hi rote rahe to di kya sochenge ki itne din baad unke dost milne aaye or yu ro rahe h, a
Asma k prem bhare sparsh se karan kuch shant hua.
Asma :- chaliye ab meri di ko unka gift dijiye jo aap unke liye laye ho.
(Qabar ki or dekhte hue ) dekha di bhai ko aj bhi aapki pasand ache se yaad h , aapke favorite yellow rose laye h aapke liye
(Karan) dijiye bhai di ko unka gift .
Karan kuch ni bolta or wo flower us qabra p chadata h or uski shanti ki dua mangta h .
Fir karan or asma wahi khade rakhe kafi der bate kerte h , lekin karan abhi bhi bahut hatash tha , tabhi uske kaano m ek aawaz gunji.
Aawaz :- karan.
Ye aawaz sun karan pahale to chonk gaya or fir khushi se us disha m.dekha to uski khushi ki sima na rahi.
Ab wo kon tha ya thi , wo to agle update m pata chalega.
Wahi in sab se bahut dur
Location :- rani ka mahal.
Time :- pichli rat
Wo maharani jiske bando ne brihaspur m karan or uske sathiyo p humla kiya tha wo is samay apne mahal m mojud ek mandir m thi jo danvo ki devi nikumbhla ka tha.
Us mandir m maa ki murti k samne ek havan kund jal raha tha , jiske pas ek tantrik betha tha , jo rani ka khas admi chamund tha
Rani :- chamund humare varsho ka intezaar khatm ho hi gaya akhirkar aryan lot aaya h , ab bas tum apni shaktio se esa kuch kero ki aryan khud yaha lot aaye or humara adhura maksad pura ho.
Chamund :- rani sahiba m aap jesa kah rahe ho vesa avashya karunga, lekin dhyan rahe ki aryan k sath wo prerna jarur yaha aayegi , kyunki wo is janam m bhale hi uski bahan k roop m janmi h lekin uski niyati m uska vivah aryan se hi hona nirdharit h.
Rani gusse se :- prerna prerna , is kamini ne jina haram ker rakha h , pichle janm m bhi m apni jit k itne karib thi lekin us kamini ne sara khel chopat ker dala or jab mane usko mar dala to kamini firse janm lekr agyi mujhse aryan ko chinne.
Lekin is baar m use kamyab ni hone dungi , is baar esi.mot marungi us kamini ko ki uperwala ye punarjanm ka system hi khatm ker dega.
Chamund aane do us kamini ko , wo yaha aayegi to jarur lekin jivit lotegi ni , bas tum m jesa kahati hu vesa karo .
Ye bol wo apna plan batati h , jisse chamund puchta h isse kya hoga .
Rani.:- isse ye hoga chamund ki wo yaha ane tak wese hi tut jayegi mansik roop se kamzor ho jayegi or fir hume use kutiya ko marne m jyada samay vyarth ni kerna padega or iska asar us prerna p kal subah se hi aarambh ho jayega
Ye bol zor zor se hasne lagi.
Aryan ki diwar p lagi tasvir dekhte hue.
Rani :- aakhir kar tum lot hi aaye aryan apni rani k liye , or is baar hum ek hoker hi rahenge , is baar hume koi zuda n ker payega (gusse me ) wo kamini prerna bhi ni.
Ye bolte bolte rani shetani hasi hasne lagi or chamund ko apne kam ki shuruat kerne lagi.
Kon tha ye aryan or prerna kya sambhandh tha unka is rani se or humare hero se janne k liye sath bane rahiye yu hi
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Bahot khoob superb
sad yer writer shab aisa nhi karna chahiye tha kiran or jyoti ko alag karna vaise bhi imotional hokar pura din kharab ho jata hai Etna pyar hone ke bavajud bhi ye duriyan kyo jaldi se vapas i he ek kar dijiye chahe to baki kitna hi imotional bhar do par enki bich no no no means no
my jhamela hai or kon hai ye Prerna or aryan es rani ki to dekhte hai kya hota hai 
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