Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Xabhi]

Update 10
Mandir se nikal ker karan or jyoti ghar pahuchte h ,or nashta ker college k liye nikal jate h .
Jab tak ye dono college pahunchte h tab tak aayiye dekhte h college m kya ho raha h.
Location :- st xaviors college.

Ek 18 sal ki ladki apni activa k sath sath college m enter kerti h ,or jese hi apni gadi parking m laga ker ground m pahuchti h to dekhti h ki har jagah seniors fresher's ki raging le rahe h . Vo pahale hi din koi jhamela ni chahti thi isliye wo side se nikalne ki koshis kerti h per uski kismat kharab thi ki college k sabse badnam or bigde hue group ki nazar us per pad jati jinme 5 ladke or 1 ladki thi.(m us group wali ladki 1 likhunga)
Ladki 1 :- e ladki bina apne seniors ko introduction diye kidher chali chal jaldi se idher aa.
Ladki unke paas chali jati h
Us group ka leader jiska naam kunal h wo bola.
Kunal:- Chalo apna introduction do
Ladki :- ji mera nam radha h or mane yaha bcom first year m admision liya h.
Ji ha dosto ye ladki or koi ni balki radha hi h jisko apne hero ne us din un gundo se bachaya tha.
Kunal:- ok chalo tumhara task ye h ki tum mere dost ko kiss kero abhi
Radha (gusse se ) ye kya badtamiji h m esa kuch ni kerne wali .
Amit(jisko kiss kerne k liye kunal ne radha ko bola tha) :- itna natak kya ker rahi h sali ,ek kiss k liye hi to bola konsa ek raat hum sab k sath sone ko....
Amit isse pahale apni baat puri kerta usse pahale hi radha ne gusse m apni pancho ungliyan uske galo per chaap di .
Kunal:- sali chinal teri ye himmat ki tune mere dost p hath uthaya aaj pure college k samne teri wo halat karunga ki tu kisi ko muh dikhane k layak ni rahegi.
Or jese hi uske sath jabardasti kerne k liye aage badha itne m ek jordaar mukka uske muh pe padha jisse uska pura jabda hil gaya .
Or radha jese hi us mukke marne wale ladke ko dekhti h to bahut khush ho jati h s, or bhaiya bol ker uske gale lag jati h , kyunki wo ladka or koi or ni apna hero karan hi tha. Ek baar to karan radha ko dekh ker shock ho jata h.
Short flashback.
Hua yu tha ki Karan or jyoti jese hi college pahunchte h to dekhte h ki h ki kunal or uska dost kisi ladki ko pareshan ker rahe h or uske sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis ker rahe h.(karan kunal k baare m ache se janta tha jo ki ek number ka ghatiya ladka or aayash kism ka ladka tha . apne baap k sahar k commissioner hone ka najayaj fayda uthata . Or apne hero se is ka 36 ka aakda tha kyunki apna hero padhayi or ya sports dono m no 1 tha . Jiske kaaran kunal karan se bahut chidta tha).karan ne abhi tak radha ka chahra ni dekha tha kyunki radha ki pith uski taraf thi . Or jese hi kunal ne jese hi radha ki taraf jabardasti k irade se badha karan ne furti se us tarf ja ker kunal k muh per ek jabardast mukka chipka diya .

Present
Karan jese hi dekhta h ki kunal jiske sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis ker raha tha vo or koi ni radha h to uska gussa or bad jaata h . Kyunki wo bhale hi uske liye anjaan ho abhi tak lekin pahali hi mulakat m najane kyu use or jyoti ko vo koi apni lagi, isliye dono bhai bahan ne use dil se apni bahan maan chuke the .
Kunal :- karan tu ! Teri ye mazzal ek anjaan ladki k liye mujh per hath uthaya .
Karan:- swal ye ni h ki ye ladki meri jan pahachan ki h ya ni swal ye uthta h ki , he hak kisne diya ki tu ek ladki ki ijjat k sath khilwad ker sakta h.
Kunal:- band ker apni bakwas ab bahut hua m abhi hi pata is college se saaf ker dunga. aaj tu yaha aya to apne pero p h lekin jayega 4 kndho per.
Kunal ka itna bolna hi tha ki k ek jordar laat uske sine p padhi laat itni jordar thi ki wo apni jagah se 5 ft dur jaker gira . Per is baar ye war apne hero ne ni balki uski jaan yani jyoti ne kiya . Wo bahut gusse m thi or uski ankhe ekdam laal ho chuki thi.
Jyoti:- kute teri himmat kese hui mere bhai meri jan k bare me yu bolne ki , tujhe m dikhati hu aaj ki ek ladki ki ijjat pe haat dalne ka kya hashr hota h. Or jyoti kunal per buri tarah tut padhi or usko utha utha ker marne lagi. Apne jabardast fighting skills k kaaran usne kunal ki halat bahut jald hi kharab kerdi. Tabhi amit hokey stick leke jyoti ko marne k liye uski taraf doda per jyoti uske liye pahale hi teyar tha or or iske pahale ki amit jyoti per hamla ker pata usse pahale hi jyoti ne amit ki tango k bich uske main point pe ek jabardast laat mari.jiske kaaran wo jamin pe let ke lage tadfne laga or uske hath se hokey stick chut gayi jise jyoti ne utha liya or kunal k baki sathi jo jyoti ki or badh rahe the, to usi hokey stick ke sath jyoti baki sab ladko pe tut padhi. Jyoti or un ladko ki itni jabardast ladayi dekh ker college k sabhi students or teachers jo is hungame ko dekhne waha ikatha ho gaye the dekh ker heran ho gaye the(karan ko chod ker) ki kese ek akeli ladki 5 hate kate ladko p bhari pad rahi h .Or ek herani ki baat or thi ki itna sab kuch hone k bavjood bhi karan kuch ni bola na hi jyoti ki madad k liye aage badha. Idher jyoti k ladte hue uske lambe kale baal pure khul ker bikhar gaye the or uski fight dekh ker esa pratit ho raha tha jese mata mahakali asuro ka sanghar ker rahi ho . Or jab karan ko laga ki bas ab bahut hua or uske hastakshep ka time aagaya h to wo pahale to jyoti ko rukne ko bolta h per jyoti rukne ka naam hi ni le rahi thi. Jab karan dekhta h ki jyoti ruk hi ni rahi to , karan bhag ker jata h jyoti k pass or jyoti ko apne sine se laga leta h. Jyoti bhi apne bhai k gale lagte hi dhire dhire shant ho gayi . Or karan fir sabhi college k ladko or male teacher ko bolta h .
Karan:- sharm aani chahiye aap logo ko aap sab k samne ye chand badmash ladke ek ladki ki ijjat lutne wale the or aap sab log tamasha dekh rahe the. Thu h esi napunsakta per .
Or phir sabhi ladkiyo or females ko bolta h
Karan:- or girls and teachers m aap sab ko ek hi baat bolna chahata hu ese ghatiya log isiliye aap ladies ki ijjat se khilwad kerne ki himmat ker pate h kyunki aap sab khud k liye awaz ni uthati or chup chap har zulm sahti ho. Or ese darinde tab tak ni sudher sakte tab tak aap khud apne liye ni ladogi .
Tabhi bhid m se ek ladki bolti h
Ladki:- lekin hum ladkiya bechari zulm sahane k kaaran ker bhi kya sakti h in takatwar darindo k aage.

Karan(thode josh k sath bolta h ki):-
Naari ager shanka tyag de to khud shanker (mahadev) ban jati h, jese bhut kal m maa parvati ne shanka tyag ker mahakali bani or asuro ka vinash kiya jese , aaj jyoti ne akele hi in darindo ko dhul chata di m , m chahata to khud bhi jyoti ki madad k liye insab se bhid sakta tha, but aap sab ko dikhane k liye . Ki nari shakti kya hoti h .
Fir karan jyoti ko apne se alag kerta h jo ab puri tarah shant ho chuki thi.

Karan abhi aage kuch bolta ki tabhi college k gate k samne police ki 5 gadiya aaker rukti h or unme se ek gadi me se commissioner yani kunal ka baap utarta h . Or jab apne bete ki halat dekhta h to guse m pagal ho jata h or jor se chilata h
Commissioner:- kisne ki mere bete ki ye halat
Hua darasal yu tha ki jab jyoti kunal or uske dosto ki dhunayi ker rahi thi to ladki 1(jo kunal k sath uske group m thi ) ne commissioner ko sari baat bata di thi.
Or fir ladki 1 commissioner k paas jaker sari baat details m bata deti h jisko sun vo gusse m aag babula ho ker jese apne sath aye inspector ko bolta h
Commissioner:- arrest ker lo in dono ko or lockup m in dono ki ache se kharidari honi chahiye.
Commissioner ka order man ker jese hi inspector karan or jyoti ki taraf badhte h ki achaanak ek gadiyo ka kafila college k gate per aaker rukta h or jese hi us gadi m se ek shaks utarta h jisko dekh ker commissioner ki bhi hawa tight ho jati h kyunki wo or koi khud home minister tha .
Or vo aaker sidha radha k pass jata h or usse puchta h
Home minister ( H.M) beti tum thik to hona kahi us badmash ne tere sath kuch kiya to ni .
Commissioner ki to buri tarah fat gayi thi or usko apne bete pe bhi gussa aaraha tha ki us sale ne usko kaha fasa diya .
Small flashback.
Jab ladki 1 ne commissioner ko phone kiya tha tab radha ne ladki 1 ko notice ker liya tha or usne bhi jaldi se H.M ko phone ker diya (jo ki uske swargiya (late) pita k bahut hi ache dost the) or unhe sari baat batadi .

Back to the present

Radha:-ha uncle mujh ko kuch ni hua . Or m aapke samne yu salamat ager khadi hu to sirf karan bhaiya or jyoti di ki badolat or ye commissioner unhi ko arrest ker raha , please uncle bhaiya or di ko bachaiye.
H.M :- tum chinta mat kero beti ab aage m sambhal lunga,
or commissioner ko datte hue H.M bolte h

H.M :- e commissioner teri ye himmat ek to tera beta us ladki k sath jabardasti kerne ki koshis kerta h jo mere liye meri khud beti se bhi badhkar h , or phir tu usiko bachane walo ko arrest kerta h .Lagta h tu commissioner banne layak ni raha ab tu .
Commissioner ki to pahale hi fati padi thi wo bolta h
Commissioner :- sorry sir mujhe ye ni pata tha ki ye bachi aapki rishtedar h verna m esi galti kabhi .

H.M :- meri rishtedar se tumhara kya matlab h ager ye meri rishtedar na hoti ya koi or ladki abhi situation m phasi hoti to tu kya apne bete ki is giri harkat ka sath deta , kya shahar k commissioner hone k naate teri koi zimmedari ni banti shahar k ladkiyo ki prati soch ager is bachi ki jagah teri apni beti hoti or koi or powerful aadmi ka beta esi harkat uske sath kerta to tujhe kesa lagta.
Commissioner ko sahi m apni galti ka pachtava hota h or wo apni galti k liye radha, karan or jyoti se or sabhi se mafi mangta h or kunal ko leker nikal jata h .
H.M (karan or jyoti se ) hath jodker :- tumhara bahut bahut shukriya bacho k tumne radha ki madad ki
Karan or jyoti ko ye acha ni lagta ki koi bada uske aage hath jode
Karan:- H.M k hatho ko pakdte hue are are uncle ye aap kya ker rahe h aap kya radha hamari kuch ni lagti , radha ne mujhe bhaiya bola h or ek bhai ka farz hi hota h apni bahan ki hamesha raksha kerna .
Jyoti:- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha uncle or ye please ap hath mat jodiye kyunke bado k hath hamesha aashirvad dete hue hi ache lagte h . Or dono bhai bari bari se per chu ker aashirwad lete h .
Or H.M bhi unke itne saral nature ko dekh ker bahut impress hota h . Or apna card dete hue bolta h
H.M :- beta ye apne paas rakho or jab bhi jarurat ho bejhijak ek call ker dena bas
Fir radha bolti
Radha:- uncle please aaj jo kuch bhi yaha hua uska pata mumma ko ni chalna chahiye.
Or H.M kuch bolta usse pahale hi radha ne use apni kasam dedi .
Fir kya tha H.M ko uski baat manni hi padhi or fir wo waha se nikal gaya.

Or fir karan or jyoti radha se ache se mile or kal milne ka bolker. Apne ghar ko nikal gaye. Or sath m radha bhi nikal gayi apne ghar ki or. College m itna sab kuch hone k baad principal ne bhi college ka aaj ke liye off ker diya

Note :- Sorry for delay dosto reason to aapko m bata hi chuka hu . To please bura mat maniyega and yuhi sath bane rahiyega
Stay tuned

Update 6to10
Aapne Inme Bahut kuchh change kiya Aapki lagan or mehnat dikhti hai isme to dono bhai bahan ghumne jate hai vha pr radha naam ki ladki milti hai jisse unhe apnepn ki jhalak milti hai agle din mandir jate hai puja path karte hai vhi pr unhe ek rishi milte hai priplardh name ke vo dono ko dekh kr kuchh btane ja hi rhe hote hai ki unhe mahadev ke darsan mastisk patal me hote hai vo abhi ke liye kuchh btane se Mna kr dete hai or bhi kuchh bate hoti hai Jo wakt ke sath pta chalti rhengi vha se college jate hai vhi pr radha se dobara mulakat hoti hai radha HM ki bhatigi hai kunal Jo ki sahar ke comisnor ka beta hai Vo or uske badman gang vale students ki ragging le rhe the vo radha ko bhi paresan karte hai jiske falswarup karan Pahle ek mukke se ek ladke ko dur fek deta hai kunal, karan ko ulta seedha Bolta hai jo gudiya ko sahan nhi hua fir vo sabko Marti pitti hai yhi sb bakhede me Aaj ka din nikal jata hai HM or kamisnar ke Bich 2 4 bate hoti hai fir sb chale jate hai...
Superb effort bhai sandar jabarjast

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..to jyoty heart patient hai ..
kuch ladkiyo ko bachane ke liye gayi thi jyoty aur uski power kaam nahi kar rahi ye to bahut buri baat hai ,aur karan ki healing power bhi jyoty ko theek nahi kar paa rahi hai ..

aise power ka hona kuch kaam ka hi nahi jo waqt pe saath chhod de aur wo bhi jab swayam shiv ji aur shani ka ansh hai karan ..

shera ke aadmiyo ne maara hai jyoty ko buri tarah isliye wo ghaw ke nishan hai aur haath fracture jo gaya hai ..

aur jyoty ki itni buri halat thi tab bhi kisine uski maa ko ye khabar nahi di ..
kya aasha ke naina ke saath rehna hi sabse jaruri ho gaya hai sabke liye ..

 

[Harry rocks]

nice update ..to jyoty heart patient hai ..
kuch ladkiyo ko bachane ke liye gayi thi jyoty aur uski power kaam nahi kar rahi ye to bahut buri baat hai ,aur karan ki healing power bhi jyoty ko theek nahi kar paa rahi hai ..

aise power ka hona kuch kaam ka hi nahi jo waqt pe saath chhod de aur wo bhi jab swayam shiv ji aur shani ka ansh hai karan ..

shera ke aadmiyo ne maara hai jyoty ko buri tarah isliye wo ghaw ke nishan hai aur haath fracture jo gaya hai ..

aur jyoty ki itni buri halat thi tab bhi kisine uski maa ko ye khabar nahi di ..
kya aasha ke naina ke saath rehna hi sabse jaruri ho gaya hai sabke liye ..

Abhi tak asha ko koi khabar ni h is baare m

 

[abhishek123409@]

Wating for next update bhai

 

[Naik]

Agle update ka intizar h Harry bhai

 

[Bunny..]

update no :- 218
Location :- city hospital


Karan ki sabhi bahane , uski choti maa , bhua or rohan samet sabhi bhai bahan waha mojud the or sabki ankho m ansu the orr tension thi


Rohan ko to samjh hi ni aaraha tha ki jyoti ki ye halat kese ho gayi or itne time m bhi uski healing power ne use sahi kyu kiya.


Sab icu k bahar khade the , jaha jyoti ka treatment chal raha tha , uske sir p kafi chote aayi hui thi or hatho m fracture aaya hua or yaha tak ki ladies doctor defibliration treatment de rahe the

Karan pahuncha or rote hue tez aawaz me


Karan kavya se :- choti maa choti maa .. kaha h meri gudiya choti ma kya hua use.


Kavya rote hue karan ko sine laga the k :- jyoti icu m h lalla , sambhaal apne aap ko ager tu ese royega to teri choti maa or teri bhua ko kon sambhalega.


Karan ye sun thoda shant hua or abhi aage kuch abhi puchta tabhi usse pahale hi uski sabhi bahane sine lag ker rone lagi.


Karan abhi apni bahano ko sambhal hi raha tha ki tabhi doctor operation theater se bahar aati h , or. Jese hi wo karan ko dekhti h na jane kyu uske chahre p herani or khusi k mile jule bhav the.


Karan rote hue doctor k pas jake
Doctor karan se :- doctor meri gudiya, meri gudiya thik to h naa, kya hua meri gudiya ko, please doctor kuch to boliye.


Karan ko bhi vo doctor kuch jani pahachani lagi , or wo usse bola.


Karan :- kya m aapko janta hu doctor ?


Doctor :- bhai aap shayad mujhe bhul gaye lekin m aap dono ko ni bhuli.


Ye bol wo karan or rohan k per chune hoti h to rohan bol pada.


Rohan :- are doctor aP ye kya ker rahi ho aap


Doctor :- chu lene dijiye mujhe aP apne per bhai, aap mere liye bhagwan se kam ni, aJ aapke kaaran hi meri maa jivit h


Phir doctor un dono ko usdin ki yaad dilaati h , jab karan or rohan ne us ladki ki madad ki thi , jisko peso ki jarurat thi or rohan ne chor ban uske purse ko chura k usme pese rakh diya The.


Ye doctor wahi ladki thi , karan to vaha se jaldi se nikal gaya tha jaldi se , lekin ladki jab hospital ki taraf ja rahi thi , to usne karan se thank u kerne aage unke pas jane lagi thi , lekin isse pahale wo unke pas pahuchti usse pahale hi usne karan or rohan ki baate sun li jise use pata chala ki wo pese karan ne hi rakhe the or wo chor rohan hi tha jo acting ker raha tha


Doctor :- m aapka ahasan jindgi bhar ni utar paungi bhai , isliye please mujhe apne per chu lene dijiye.


Rohan :- dekhiye doctor humne jo kiya wo humara farz tha.


Or fir rohan jyoti k baare m batata h , jise sun doctor boli.


Doctor :- oh to wo aapki bahan h , dekhiye ab wese to khatra se bahar h , aap tension mat lijiye , per.....


Karan ne jab suna ki uski gudiya khatre se bahar h to uski sans m sans aayi , lekin doctor se per sun wo tention m aagaya.


Karan :- per kya doctor.


Doctor :- dekhiye baat thodi serious h , aapmese jo bhi jyoti k sabse karib h , wo please mere cabin m aake mile.


Ye bol doctor firse ek baar karan or rohan se ahasaan jatate hue or jyoti ko abhi kuch time k liye icu m hi rakhne ka khaker wo waha se chali gayi.


Karan jo itni der se khud ko shant rakhNe ki koshis ker raha tha , ab uska sabar k bandh m darar aane lagi thi ke jyoti ko is halat m dekh use bahut gussa aaraha tha , lekin usne pahale doctor k pas jane k decide kiya


Karan :- rohan bhai , tum sab ko sambhalo , m doctor se milke aata hu.


Garima :- karan beta m bhi sath m aati hu , pata ni kya ho gaya meri bachi ko , meri to chinta se pran hi sukhe ja rahe h


Karan gusse se rude way me :- rahane dijiye bhua , iski koi jarurat ni , ager aapne itni chinta pahale dikhayi hoti to shayad meri gudiya ki ye halat hui na hoti.


Ye bol karan bade gusse m waha se nikal pada , karan ka ye behavior dekh sab heran the , aajse pahale karan ne itne rude way m kisise baat ni ki thi.


Garima k ankho m ansu aagaye , isliye ni kyu ki usko karan ki baato ka bura laga tha , kyu ki wo janti thi , ki ki karan apni judwa se kitna pyaar kerta h , or apni usi bahan ko is halat m dekh ker uska apni bhai se gussa hona swabhavik hi tha , kyunki jyoti usike ghar m ruki thi , is kaaran jyoti ki jimedari usiki thi ,usko lagne laga ki lekwo apni jimedari thik se na nibha payi , or us kaaran se hi uski ye halat hui thi


Wahi dusri or


Karan jab doctor k pas pahunch ander aane ki permission leta h .


Doctor :- aaiye sir aiye , ye hospital aapka h to aapko kabse permission ki jarurat padne lagi.


Karan :- sir ?


Doctor :- ji sir verma ji ne aapke bare m abhi mujhe bataya .


Ye vahi hospital tha , jaha radha admit hui thi


Karan :- dekhiye doctor aap mujhse umer m or pad dono m bade h , ese sir bol mujhe sharminda na kare , or ager aapko mujhe bolna hi h to aap pahale ki tarah aap bhai bol sakti ho.


Doctor karan ki baat sun kafi impress hoti h usse or boli ki :- thik h bhai , aaj se m aapko bhai hi bulaungi, lekin meri bhi ek shart h , jese m aapko bhai bol rahi hu aap bhi mujhe didi bole , (udas hote hue ) mera koi bhai ni h na , ager aap mujhe di bologe to mujhe acha lagega.


Karan :- ji didi , per please ye sab baate hum baad m karenge per please mujhe bataiye esa kya ho gaya meri gudiya ko , jo ap mujhe vaha ni bata sakte the.




Pallavi (doctor) :- bhai darasal jyoti ko mini heart attack aaya tha .


Karan ne jese hi ye suna to mano ek shan swas hi ruk gayi .


Karan :- kyaa, ye kese possible h sister meri bahan ki abhi age hi kya h.


Aditi :- bhai heart attack jaruri ni ki badi age k log ko hi aaye, or khas ker ki jyoti jesi heart patient k liye to esa hona koi badi baat ni


Kyaa jyoti or heart patient ye kese possible tha , jis jyoti ne itni mushkilo m har na mani , apne bhai ka sath kadam kadam per diya tha, or anek asuro or papio ka sanghar kiya tha wo heart patient kese ho sakti thi .


Lekin usse herani ki baat to ye thi ki k aditi k muh se itni badi baat sun ker bhi karan ne kuch khas react ni kiya tha, usne sharmindagi se sir jhuka liya jese vo is baare m pahale se hi malum ho.


Karan :- ji didi


Aditi :- dekho bhai bura mat manna , lekin as a doctor mera ye bolna jaruri h , ki aapko apni bahan ka khas rakhne ki sakht jarurat h , heart patient ko humesha tention free hona chahiye , lekin jyoti ji ki reports or checkup k baad to mujhe iska ulta najar aaya , usko dekh ker hi saf saf samjh aaraha tha ki wo raat ko thik se na to soyi h or na hi khayi h, aap itna care less kese ho sakte ho bhai wo bhi jab , jab unka past m hi.......... Ho rakha h.




Karan ne jese hi ye sun to ander se pura hil gaya , use khud p bahut gussa Araha tha ki usne jyoti ko akela choda hi kyu.


Jis kaaran karan ki ankho se ansu bahane lage, jise dekh


Aditi karan ko rote dekh :- sorry bhai m kuch jyada bol gayi .


Karan :- ni ni di aapko mafi mangne ki jarurat ni aapne to bilkul sahi kaha h , laparwahi to hui h mujhse , per I promise aage se esa bilkul ni hoga di, abse apni gudiya ki sari jimedari m khud sambhalunga.


Aditi :- hmm, that's good bhai , per meri mano to aapko ye kaam apni mom ko hi sompna chahiye .


Karan :- kyu di , m esa maru to usme kya problem h.


Aditi :- mujhe samjh ni aaraha bhai m aapse is bare m kese baat karu .


Karan samjh jata h k koi ladies problem h jyoti se related jise aditi karan ko batane m hichkicha di


Karan fir aditi ko apni bachpan se leke ab tak ki sari baate batake samjhata h ki wo or jyoti kitne close h , or unme aapas m koi hichak ni .


Karan :- isliye di aap jyoti k bare m mujhse kuch bhi batane m bilkul na hichki chaiye.


Aditi :- wah bhai , kitna pyaar h aap dono m , vese ghabraiye mat bhai , koi badi problem ni , bas jyoti k hatho m fracture h na or uper se unke periods bhi chalu h , to aap samjh rahe ho naa bhai.


Karan :- dont worry di , m manage ker lunga.


Aditi :- lekin bhai ek baat abhi bhi mujhe samjh ni aarahi jyoti ko itni chote kese aayi , unki chot dekh ker to esa lag raha h , jese uspe attack hua ho


Karan ye suna to uska gusse se para high ho gaya , lekin usne khud ko aditi k samne control kiya or aditi se kuch or baate kerke waha se nikla or sidha jake pahuncha apni family k sath.


Karan ko dekh pahale to wo khush hue k ab unhe pata chalega ki jyoti sahi to h na , lekin agle hi pal sab dar gaye jiska kaaran tha ki karan bahut jyada gusse m tha , uski ankhe lal ho gayi thi gusse se or uske hath kale padne lage.


Karan garima k pas jake :- kese ? Kese hua ye sab .


Garima sir niche gardan ki hui thi sharmindgi k kaaran.


Karan gusse se chilaya :- mane pucha kese hua ye sab bhuaaaaa........


Karan ki dahad sunte hi sab kamp gaye , tabhi ek nurse aake shor na kerne ko kahati h , jisse karan ko ahasas hua apni galti ka.


Karan fir apna sawal shanti se doharata h , lekin uske gusse se ankhe dhire dhire laal se ek dam kali hone lagi thi , tab sonam ko chinta hone lagi , wo jhat se karan k gale la use shant kerne lagi.


Sonam bhi karan ki shakti thi , jyoti jese karan ki bahan or premika thi , or karan apni bahano m kabhi bhed ni kerta tha , is kaaran sonam ko sine se laga k uska man shant ho gaya.


Sonam :- bhai Ap please aap bhua p gussa mat kero , jo hua usme meri galti thi.


Fir sonam subah jo hua wo batana shuru kerti h.


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Jyoti uthne k baad jese hi bathroom m jake apni shorts utar jese hi cummod p bethti h to uske pet m achanak se dard uth gaya or wo jese hi sus ker apni chut ko pani se dhoti h to uska pura hath khun se san jata h , jisse jyoti turant samjh jati h ki uske periods shuru ho gaye h , jise uska mood or kharab ho jata h , kyunki ek to kal raat k sapne or sabse main baat apne bhai se hue jhagde se pahale hi dukhi or pareshan thi or uper se ye periods.


Aap soch rahe honge ki periods jesi chij to ladkio k liye normal h , fir jyoti usse itna parshan kyu thi , to baat esi thi ki normal ladkiyo k mukable jyoti ko is time m kuch jyada hi bleeding hoti thi or usko kayi baar to itni kamzori aajati ki usko tez bhukar ho jata , jesa abhi uske sath ho raha tha , uski tabiyat bigadne lagi thi, use apne bhai ki yaad ane lagi thi , use yaad aane laga ki jab use pahali baar periods aaye the wo kese ghabra gayi thi , use bleeding k baare m kuch ni maloom tha tab kese uske bhai ne na keval use is bare m avgat karwaya, balki uske pad ko bhi apne hatho se badla tha , or in dino m to wo jyoti ko kaam kerna to dur bina permission k bed se hilne tak ni deta tha, apne or jyoti k sare kaam khud hi kerta .


Wo sab baate yaad aate hi uski tadaf or bhadne lagi or usko karan se duri or bardasht ni ho rahi thi.


Jyoti nam ankho :- m kitni buri bahan hu mere bhai itna pyaar kerte h mujhse or mane unke sath esa kiya , jis waqt unko meri sabse jyada jarurat thi tab maine unhe akele chod aayi


(Pashchatap k ansu rote hue) ni bas or ni or m apne bhaiya se door ni rah sakti , m aaj hi wapas jaungi or bhaiya ko kese bhi kerke mana lungi.


Kitni bholi thi jyoti bilkul apne bhai ki tarah wo bol rahi thi ki wo apne bhai ko jake mana legi, pagli bhul gayi ki naraj karan ni hua tha, balki wo khud hui thi.


Ye sab decide ker jyoti jaldi se teyar hui , lekin tabhi use dhyan aaya ki uske pas pads to h hi ni.


Jyoti :- ab m kya karu , haa bhua k pas jarur honge.


Ye sochte hue wo kese n kese khud ko adjust ker sidha jati h bhua k pas.


Per waha pahunch k dekhti h ki waha to radha kaya or diya samet sabhi mojud the , jo ek baar k liye wahi ruk gayi thi karan k kahane liye , kyunki raat ko sabka adjustment possible ni tha.


Garima :- are jyoti beta tu aagayi , chal jaldi se beth ja breakfast ready h.


Jyoti :- bhua wo mujhe ..


Garima :- kuch chahiye tha beti ?.


Jyoti sabke samne kahne m sharma rahi thi , isliye usne apni bhua k kaan m bolti h.


Garima haste hue :- are beti to isme itna sharma kyu rahi ho , hum sab ladies hi to h yaha.


Garima radha se jyoti k liye pad lane ko kahati h , to radha apne room m jati h or fir kuch der bad m aake bolti h ki pads khatam ho gaye h


Garima :- are to kya hua, ek kam ker ja abhi bazar se jaker le aa.


Jyoti jise thodi weakness ho rahi thi wo dhime swar m boli :- koi baat ni bhua , m khud le aaungi radha ko kyu pareshan kerti ho.


Radha :- are didi isme pareshani kesi , aap aram kijiye m yu gayi or yu aayi.


Lekin jyoti ne ye bolke mana ker diya ki uska thod ji kharab ho raha h jo ghumne se thoda thik ho jayega.


Or fir garima se permission le jese hi wo ghar se bahar nikli ki tabhi usne dekha ki bahar activa p sonam aarahi h.


Tab sonam ne jyoti se pucha ki wo kaha ja rahi h ki tabhi jyoti ne usko sach bat bata di .


Sonam :- oh to di chaliye m bhi aapke sath chalti hu.


Kuch sochne k baad jyoti maan jati h or wo sonam k piche beth market ki or nikal jati h , sabse pahale wo medical shop se jake pad leti , tabhi waha pas m hi sonam ko kuch saman lena tha to wo ek pas ki shop m chali jati h or jyoti bahar intezaar ker rahi hoti h , ,tabhi jyoti ki najar samne ek dukan p jati h , jaha wo ek sunder si jacket dekhti h to use wo bahut pasand aati h karan k liye , wo turant shop m jati h or

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Wo jacket leker shop se bAhar hi nikali hi thi ki tabhi jyoti kuch esa dekhti h ki uski ankho se angare barasne lage.


Usne dekha ki kuch gunde type k log ek ladki ko jabardasti utha k le ke gadi m bithate h or waha se nikal gaye.


Jyoti turant unke piche bhagi , parantu pata ni kese aaj uski supper speed use dhoka de gayi or kuch dur jate hi wo buri tarah hamfte hue ruk gayi.


Tabhi jyoti sonam activa leke waha pahunch gayi usne sab dekh liya tha isliye usne turant jyoti se boli.


Sonam :- di jaldi se beth jaiye activa p.


Jyoti turant activa p beth jati h or code deti h activa ko us gaadi k piche kuch der picha kerne k baad wo gadi shahar k bahar mojud ek khali building ki thi wo gunde jaldi se utha k ander ke gaye.


Jab jyoti ne ye dekha to usne sonam ko bahar hi rahane ka kahke chupke se wo ander ghus gayi or invisible hoker wo us jagah ko observe kerne lagi to usne paya ki wo human trafficking gang thi , or waha or bhi kayi ladkiya thi , jinhe unhonne uthaya tha videsho m bechne k liye .


Abhi jyoti ye sab dekh planning ker hi rahi thi , lekin aj jyoti ki kismat ka kuch or hi or hi plan tha , speed power ki tarah invisibility power ne bhi dhoka de dala ,or wo achanak se sabhi gundo k samne visible ho gayi.


Apne samne jyoti ko achanK se dekh gunde heran ho gaye


Gundo ka leader jiska nam shera tha , wo bola.


Shera :- e ladki kon h tu or ander kese aayi.


Jyoti jo khud bhi heran thi ki esa kese hua lekin usne khud ko sambhal boli :- m kon hu ya kese aayi wo sab chodo , chupchap ladkio ko chod do verna .


Shera :- haha dekha sathiyo , ye ladki mujhko dhamki de rahi h , mujhko shera ko , lagta h isko andaza ni h ki isne yaha aake kitni badi galti ki h isne.


(Shera apne aadmio ko ishara kerta h , jisse sabhi admi gun liye use gher lete h)


Shera :- pakad k band ker do ise bhi baki sabhi ladkiyo k sath , bada hi kadak mal h sali iske to oro se double rs milenge.


Jyoti apni ankh band ker kholti h jisse uski nili ankhe laal ho gayi :- mane tumhe moka diya tha , lekin tum ni mane , kher jesi tumhari marzi .


Ye bol jyoti ne ek jordar laat jamin p de mari jiske sath hi jamin kampne lagi or jyoti ko chod sab ka balance bigad gaya or sab niche pade.


Tabhi jyoti ne pas m padi ek lohe ki rod uthake usne ek gunde k sir p bas normal force se hi mara tha ki uska sir nariyal ki tarah fat gaya.


Jyoti :- ab teyar ho jao apne karmo ka dan pane k liye.


Shera ek baar to jyoti ka ye roop dekh k kamp.gaya lekin kahate h na vinash kale viprit budhi vese hi uske sath hua tha.


Shera :- madarchodo dAr kya rahe ho vo. Bas ek ladki h or hum 50 mard , bata do is randi ko ki mardo se ulajhne ka kya hashr hota h


Jyoti gusse se dahadi :- waha khade khade kuto ki tarah bhokna chodo or yaha aayo haramio m bhi dekhu ki kitne bade mard ho tum


Jyoti ki lalkar sun sare gunde ek sath tut pade jyoti ki or , jese hi gunda jyoti k pas pahuncha to jyoti ne ghuma k rod us admi k dir p de mari or uska wahi ram nam satya h ho gaya.


Or dusre gunde ko usne ek lat jad di , jiske sath hi wo gunda udte hue divar se itni jor se takraya ki uski ridh ki hadi or pasliya tut gayi or wo gir k tadfne laga.


Fir jyoti usi rod ko uchal k yu ghumati k samne se aarahe teen shaks ko ek sath padti h ki unke sir football ki tarah tan se juda hogaye.


Jyoti ki sari pareshani ne uske krodh ka roop le liya tha , jo uske hevaniyat bhare andaaz se saf saf pata chal raha tha , lekin aaj pata ni kya ho gaya tha , jo jyoti akeli asuro ki sena ka ek hi yuddh m sanghar kerne ki shamta rakhti thi wo , wo aaj in mamuli gundo se ladte hue hi thakne lagi thi , lekin wo ruk ni sakti thi , kyunki wo janti thi ki yaha mojud sabhi ladkio ki jindagi uske hatho m hi h.


Wahi dusri or shera ne jab dekha ki uske admi jyoti k hatho kute ki mot mar rahe h to usne ek ghatiya chal chali , wo turant us room m jata h jaha sari ladkiya mojud thi or usne turant ek ladki ko utha jyoti k pas khichte hue leke gaya or chilaya ladki.


Shera jor se :- jaha h vahi ruk ja ladki ni to is ladki ka bheja udaa dunga , m janta hu tu inko hi yaha se chudane aayi h.


Jyoti jese hi shera ko dekhti h to uske hath se rod ki pakad dhili ho jati h , tabhi usi moke ka fayda utha ek gunda uske hath pe ek bade se hammer se kidar war kerta h jisse uski hath ki hadi mano tut si gayi or wo chikhte hue niche beth gayi , lekin jyoti har na mante hue jese hi uthne ki koshis kerti h , tabhi uska dimag sun ho gaya or uske samne fir se ek dhundhla drishya aane laga black & white screen m jise use najar aane laga ki esa hi koi drishya tha wo ek ladke k hath m gun thi jisne use samne khadi ladki p tani hui thi , or agle hi pal usne jese hi goli chalayi to jyoti ki chinkh nikal gayi.


Jyoti :- niiiiiiiii........


Tabhi jyoti k sine m dard uthne laga shayad use heart attack aaya tha jesa ki doctor additi ne bataya tha , jisse wo chillate huee niche gir tadafne lagi.


Tabhi shera bola :- ladki bahut badi galti ker di mere. Admio ko mar k ab tu esi mot maregi ki tere ghar walo ko uski lash bhi ni milegi


(Apne admio se) dekh kya rahe ho haramjado , mar dalo is randi ko tadfa tadfa k .


Ye bol wo side m jake beth gaya , tabhi sare gunde tut pade jyoti p bat , rod , or kayi hathiyaro ko lekker, leki. Jyoti tadafne k kaaran kuch ni ker pa rahi thi.


Wahi dusri taraf


Sonam jo bahar jo itni der baad bhi jyoti k na ane se ghabra gayi , wo turant use building k pas jakr chupke se ander jhankti h or jese hi usne jyoti ki halat dekhi to uski ankho se ansu nikalne lage or use samjh ni aaraha tha ki. Ye kese hua , lekin usne ghabrane k bajaye himat se kam liya.


Sonam :- hey kanha ye kese sambhav h di ko in gundo ne....


Ab m kya karu kahi police k ane se pahale kahi der na ho jaye.


Jyoti k kahane p hi sonam ne police ko waha bulaya tha.


Sonam ko tabhi karan ka dhyan aaya , usne turBt karan ko call kerna chaha lekin phone not reachable aaraha tha or telepathy se bhi wo contact ni ked pa rahi thi.


Sonam:- hey kanha bhai se to contact ho hi ni pa raha ab m kya karu.


Tabhi use kaal yani rohan ka khyaal aata h , ki uske pass bhi powers h , wo turant rohan ko phone kerti h.


Sonam rote hue :- hello rohan bhai , aap please jaldi se yaha aajaye.


Rohan bina sawal kiye turant sonam k pas teleport hota h or sonam jese hi rohan ko dekhte hi uske gale lag rote hue sari baat batati h.


Rohan ne jese hi suna ki jyoti ki jan khatra m h , to turant sonam ko apne se alag ker use sambhalte hue apne kal roop m aata h or jese hi wo ander jane ko hua , tabhi usne suna ki police k siren ki aawaz aarahi thi .


Police ki aawaz sunte hi shera bola.


Shera :- chodo us ladki ko vese bhi itni mar khane k baad uska bachna vese bhi namumkin h or tum log jaldi se baki ladkio ko leke aao , hume yaha se nikalna hoga isse pahale police hume charo or se gher le, usse pahale piche wale gate se nikalna hoga.


Ye bol wo turant ladkio wale room me gaya kuch admio k sath , lekin waha pahunch k uski herani ki sima na rahi , wo turant bahar ki taraf bhagne ki liye bahar aaya to wo pata h jo ladke wo bahar jyoti or us dusri ladki jiske gunpoint p usne jyoti ko roka tha, uske liye bahar chode the , un sab ki lashe buri halat m padi h or wo ladki or jyoti gayab h.


Shera ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki kya hua , lekin usne khud ko sambhal jaldi se piche k gate se bhag gaya


Un ladkio or jyoti ko kaal hi waha se gayab ker bahar hi le aaya tha or un ladki ko police ko sompte hue usne ye bol diya ki wo log police ka siren sunte hi waha se ladkio ko chod bhag gaye or usne sabhi gundo ki lasho ko bhi gayab ker diya tha or jaldi se wo sonam or jyoti ko leker hospital pahuncha or usne jyoti ko jaldi se admit karwaya.


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Sonam ne sari baate rote hue karan ko telepathy k jariye bata di kyunki usne ghar walo ko jyoti k accident hone ka bataya tha


Karan ne jese hi shera ki kartoot ka pata chala , uska dimag gusse se phatne laga.


Man me :- sheraaaaaaaaa, tune jyoti p hath ni uthaya balki apni mot ko pukara .


Ye bol karan abhi bahar ki or ja hi raha tha ki tabhi ek nurce icu se bahar aake sabko ek good news deti h ki jyoti ko hosh aagaya h.


Jese hi karan ne ye suna karan ka sar gussa gayab ho gaya or khushi k mare uske ansu nikalne lage


Karan :- sister m aapke aage hath jodta hu , please mujhe meri gudiya k pas jane dijiye.


Tabhi aditi waha aapahunchi jise dusri dusri nurse ne inform ker diya tha jyoti k bare m.


Aditi :- bhai please aap thoda patience rakhiye , pahale mujhe jyoti ka checkup kerna hoga, abhi aap logo ka unse milna sahi na hoga.


Aditi ki baat sun karan nirash ho gaya , lekin aditi ki baat bilkul sahi thi , isliye hi karan kuch na bola , bas bebasi se uski ankho se ansu bahane lage.


Kavya aage bad k karan k kandhe p hath rakhti h to karan se control ni hota or wo kabya k gale lag rone laga.


Kavya bhi apne lala ka sir sahalate hue use sambhalne lagi , wahi aditi ander jyoti ka checkup kerke use nind ka injection de deti h or bahar aake sabko batati h ki jyoti ab puri tarah se gayab h or use nind ka injection dediya h kal subah tak jyoti ko hosh aajayega


Ye. Sun sab khush ho gaye or bhagwan ka shukriya kerne lage , tabhi karan bola


Karan :- choti maa raat bahut ho gayi h , aap please sabko leke ghar jaiye, gudiya k liye m yahi rukta hu.


Garima :- beta m bhi tumhare sath yahi rukti hu , tum akele kese sab sambhaloge.


Radha :- bhai m bhi.


Karan chid k gusse se :- mane kaha na yaha sirf m rukunga , apni gudiya ko sambhalne k liye mujhe kisi ki jarurat ni .


(Tank kaste hue ) or abhi itni fikar dikhane k bajaye aPne pahale meri gudiya ka khayal rakha hota , uski tabiyat kharab h ye janke bhi use bahar jane ni diya hota to , aaj shayad meri gudiya is halat m hoti hi ni.


Ye bol karan ne rohan ko sabko le jane ka farman suna diya.


Karan k krodh bhare vachan sun sabki ankho m pani aagaye , lekin moke ki najakat ko samjhte hue sab waha se nikal gaye.


Kaya karan k pas :- sakha kamse kam apni sakhi ko to apne pas rukne do.


Karam :- sakhi tumhara jana to sabse jaruri h , kyunki ager tum bhi yahi rahi to rohN akela teen gharo ki raksha kese karega , isliye mere piche se tumhe apne sakha ki jimedari nibhani hogi meri sakhi.


Yu karan kaya ko bhi samjha bujha ka waha se bhej deta h , jate hue kaya piche mudke nam ankho se dekhti h or waha se nikal jati h.


Karan bhi aditi se permission leker jyoti k hi room m ruk jata h or apni gudiya ka hath tham rote hue bola.


Karan :- mujhe maaf kerde meri gudiya , teri is halat k jimedar tera ye bhai h , na hi m tujhe khudse dor jane deta or na hi teri ye halat hoti.


Yu hi kafi der karan jyoti ka hath thame rota rha , lekin karan or jyoti ka anutha prem to dekho behoshi jese nind m bhi jyoti ne apne bhai ki taklif mahasus ker liya, jisse uska dil taraf utha or wo bhai pukarte hue uth bethi.


Jyoti :- bhaiiiii


Karan ne jese hi jyoti ko hosh me aaya dekha to uski khushi ki sima na rahi.


Karan :- gudiya .


Or itna hi vo dono bol pate h or ek dusre k kaske gale lag jate h.


Jyoti :- bhai please apni gudiya ko please maaf ker do , mane aapka bahut dil dukhaya h , chahe to aap mujhe saja dedo , lekin please yu mat roiye naa bhaiya.


Karan rote hue :- tu maafi kyu mang rahi h gudiya , dil to mane dukhaya h tera apni gudiya ka , jiske kaaran aaj teri ye halat hui , please gudiya apne is bhai ko saja de gudiya saja de


Jyoti khud ko sambhalte hue :- bhai please aap shant ho jaiye , na hi aapki gudiya naraj h or na hi meri ye halat aapki vajah se hui h , aapko meri kasam.


Karan :- per gudiya ...


Karan isse aage kuch bol pata usse pahle hi jyoti ne uske hotho p apne hoth rakh diye or use kiss kerne lagi , kyunki wo ni chahti thi ki karan jo pahale hi usko is halat m dekh kafi taklif m h wo yu roker apni taklif or badhaye or in sab bato k liye ye jagah bhi sahi ni thi.


jyoti k pyar bhare kiss se karan shant hone laga or tabhi galti se karan ka hath jyoti k fracture hue hath se lag gaya jisse jyoti ki chikh nikal gayi.


Jisse turant karan ko jyoti ka ahasas hua tab jaldi se usne apni gudiya ko bad pe letaya, or pyaar se uska matha chum liya , tab jyoti ne jid kerke karan ko bhi apne sath leta liya or dono judwa ek dusre k sine lag sare gile shikwe dur Kerne lage, tabhi karan ko apni healing power ka dhyan aaya or turant usne jyoti k sir p hath rakh use use ker jyoti ko thik kerna chaha


Lekin aaj pata ni jyoti ko kya ho gaya tha , karan ki healing power ka bhi jyoti p koi asar na hua , jisse karan or jyada chintit ho gaya , lekin usne jyoti ko ye baat ni batayi kyunki wo use tension ni dena chahta tha


Abhi karan soch hi raha tha ki ye sab kya or kyu ho raha h tabhi achanak....


Aaj k liye bas itna hi.


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