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Location :- kabristan


Karan or mahadev jab aapas m baat ker rahe the or karan jab mahadev k samaksh apne sabhi dukho ko vyakt ker raha tha , tab use jara bhi abhas ni tha ki uski sabhi dukh bhari baate or uski pida mahadev k alawa koi or bhi sun raha tha ya yu kaho sun rahi thi.


Or ye baat mahadev bhi bhalibhanti jante the , or esa hona swabhavik tha bhala sansaar ka esa konsa rahasya h , konsi esi baat h jo bhala mahakal se chup sakti thi , or vese bhi samay thamne k bavjood bhi wo shaks normal thi , sab dekh sun pa rahi thi , uska kaaran bhi to mahadev ki hi to icha thi , lekin wo shaqs is baat se shayad anbhigya thi.


Aaiye dekhte h ki wo ladki kon thi , are ye ladki ka koi sharir hi ni tha , uske aar par saaf saf dekha ja sakta tha , yani ki ye to ek aatma thi , jo usi qabar k piche ek ped k piche mojud sab dekh rahi thi or sun rahi thi.


Na jane kyu jese jese karan ka dard or pida bhad rahi thi , vese us ankho se bhi nbahate nir ki gati badhti hi ja rahi thi, jinhe dekh k mano yu pratit ho raha tha ki uske ansu ni bah rahe balki uska dard or taklif uski ankho se bah rahi thi , mano jitna dard uske samne karan vyakt ker raha tha mahadev k.samne utna hi dard m wo thi.


Or jab karan bilakh k mahadev k charno m gir pada Us aatma se ek baar to raha na gaya , to uske kadam apneaap hi badh gaye karan ki or


Lekin agle hi pal use apne kadam rokne pade or uski ankho se vivashta k neer teji se bahane lage or vo jamin p ghutno k bal gir bilakh k rone lagi or kuch der vo yu hi roti rahi , asahay bhav se karan ko dekhte hue, lekin kuch der baad usne paya ki mahadev k sanidhya m karan ka man shant ho gaya h or ab vo apne dard or taklif se ubher ek fiki muskan hi sahi lekin muskura to raha h to , uske bhi ashru ki gati kam ho gayi or karan ki muskaan dekh uske chahre p ek dard bhari muskaan fel gayi.


Or mahadev se vartalap ker or aasma k sath karan ka prem dekh us atma k chahrd p ek dard k sath ek santosh bhAri muskaan thi.


Wo ye sab tabtak niharti rahi thi , tabtak karan or asma kabristan se bahar na chale gaye or fir wo bhi jese hi ji bhar karan or asma ko niharne k.baad jab wo bhi vaha se jane lagi to piche se uske kaano m ek aawaz padi jise sun kaya chonk gayi , or piche mud jinhe dekha to wo ghabra gayi.


Kyunki piche mahadev khade the , jo kafi gambhir (serious) najar aarahe the.


Wahi dusri or.


Karan apni gudiya ko apni baho m liye uske sath hi leta tha or uske gaalo ko prem se sahala raha tha or jyoti bhi itni taklif m bhi jitna ho sake apne bhai se chipak k leti hui thi , usne apne bhai ki ek bah ko apna takiya banaye hue , apne humsafar or apne bhaiya k sir m takiya banaye hue leti apne bhai ko nihar rahe thi or esa hi karan ker raha tha wo ek tak apni gudiya ko nihar rahe the


Tabhi karan ki najar jese hi jyoti k tan p padi to uski chote hath m fracture m or sir p lagi pati dekh karan ka dil pida se bhar utha , or uske ankho se neer bahane lage .


Jise dekh jyoti ghabra gayi.


Jyoti :- bhaiya ap ro kyu rahe ho , aapki gudiya se koi bhul hui kyaa


Karan pyaar se jyoti k gaal se :- bhul tumse ni gudiya tere is bhaiya se hui , meri hi vajah se meri ful si gudiya aaj is haal m h .


Meri hi galti thi jo mane bina tere se bina icha jane ki itna bada fesla liya , jiske kaaran tum maa se dur ho gayi , tu dur hui or usi dukh k kaaran hi tumhari ye haalat hui.


Jyoti :- bhai please aap mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki bilkul galti ni thi , aapne to apne kartavya ko nibhaya , m hi pagal thi jo aap se bevajah hi Ruth gayi , jabki m bhul hi gayi ki jo takleef mujhe maa se dur hone p ho rahi h , vo aapko bhi to ho rahi hogi , aapki sangini hoke bhi m apne ardhangh ka dukh or dard na samjh saki , ni samjh saki ki m to is nirnay k kaaran m hi dard m hu , lekin ye bhul hi gayi ki apne to kitne kathor hriday se kartavya nirvahan hetu ye nirnay liya hoga .


Ye bol jyoti bhi rone lagi , to karan taraf utha or khud k aasu bhul apni gudiya k ansu puch use shant karane laga.


Shant hone k baad jyoti prem se apne bhai ko samjhati h.


Jyoti :- bhai aap please shant ho jaiye , aap ye bhi to sochiye ager ye sab na hua hota to aaj un ladkio k sath na jane kya hota, aaj humari is jara si taklif ne kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi barbaad bachayi h.


Karan muskurate hue :- jhali kahi ki abhi khud hi bacho jese ro rayi thi , or ab shant hui to khud tayi ji ban k bade bhai ko sikha rahi h.


Jyoti masti kerte hue :- oh hello bade aap ni , badi m hu , wo bhi pure 5 min badi , samjha bandar.


Karan :- kya boli bandar , m bander to tu bhaisiya wo bhi moti wali.


Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola m bhais , ruk tujhe m batati hu khujli wale bander .


Ye bol wo jese hi uske uper tut padne ko hui , lekin jese hi usne uthna chaha to dard se wo taraf uthi or gir padi .


Jyoti :- aaahhh bhaiiiiii.......


Jyoti ki chikh sun karan ghabra gaya or jyoti ko sambhal ker datte hue bola


Karan :- ek no ki pagal ladki h tu , ab bed se hili na to ek lagaunga.


Ye bol karan ne apna hath thappad jese banaya , gussa dikhate hue.


Jyoti masti se uski nakal kerte hue :- lagaungi ek .


Jyoti ki bachkani harkat se karan ki hasi chut jati h or wo ek chappat lagate hue


Karan uske baal khichte hue :- ek no ki jhali h tu.


Jyoti bhi masti k mood m thi :- ouch gande kahike,
Ye bol usne bhi karan k sir p ek tapli maar deti h.


Karan :- aah , chipkali maar kyu rahi h .


Ye bol usne bhi ek chapat laga di.


Jyoti :- kute shuruat tune ki thi n ki m


Ye bol jyoti ne karan k baal noch liye or karan ne bhi uski choti khichte hue bola


Karan :- or khatam bhi m karunga jungli billi.


Jyoti ye sun chidke :- kya bola jungli billi , ab dekho ye bili kya kerti h.


apne karan k hath m apne nakun ghupa deti h , jisse karan ki aah nikal. Jati h or jyoti hasne lagi .


Jyoti jibh nikal k use chidane lagi .


Fir shuru hui karan or jyoti ki pyaar bhari nok jhok.


Location :- kailash .


Mata parvati apne sthan p bethe bethe un dono bhai bahan ki nokjhok dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi .


Parvati maa :- kitna anokha rishta h in dono ka , kabhi ek dusre k bhai bahan ban ek dusre k prati sneh jatate h , kabhi ek dusre k mat pita swayam hi ban ek dusre ka khyal rakhte h , kabhi ek dusre k premi premika ban ek dusre k jivan prem ras ka sanchar kerte h or ab dekho ek dusree ke mitra ban kese is haalat m bhi titholi or nokjhok kerte hue ek dusre k man ka dukh santap ko mita rahe h.


Tabhi narad ji waha prakat hote h.


Naradaji :- jagat janni ko narad ka pranam , aapne bilkul satya kaha mata , or yahi anokha pan hi to in dono mahan aatmao ki is katha ko bhin banata h.


Parantu ye dekh ker bahut kasth hota h mata , jin bhai bahan ne aajtak kisi ka sapne m bhi ahit kerne ka bhi na socha , sadev satkarm or bhakti marg p adig rahe h , esa kerne k bavjood bhi in dono k jivan m ab tak sirf kasht or pida hi praapt hui h , esa kab tak chalega mata , kya jo bhai bahan sabke dukh mita ker sabke jivan m khushiya bharte h kya kabhi unke jivan m khushiyan ni aayengi mata.


Kya sabke sath nayay kerne wale dandnayak evam dand nayak k sath niyati kabhi nyay karegi .


Parvati mata :- avashya hoga devrishi, karan or jyoti k jivan m shighr hi uchit samay p itni khushiya aayegi ki wo apne pichle sare dukh dard ko swatah hi bhula bethenge or apne parivar k sath ek sukhmay jivan vyatit karenge.


Parantu.


Naradaji :- parantu kyaaa maatee.


Mata :-parantu ye devrishi karan or jyoti k jivan k khushiya avashya aayegi , parantu ye samay h pariksha ka.


Narad ji :- pariksha ? Ye kya kah rahe h mata , abhi putra karan ki abhi ek pariksha to samapt hui ni or dusri pariksha or saj h uske liye.


Parvati :- pariksha to karan k jivan abhin ang h de rishi , parantu ye samay jyoti ki pratiksha ka ni balki samay h uski shakti or ardhangini jyoti,


Ye bol mata sab narad ji ko sab batati h , jise sun narad ji chintit swar m bole.


Naradji :- yadi esa h to hume jyoti ko is tathay se avgat karwana hoga mata , tabhi to jyoti apni is pariksha m safal ho payegi or is sansaar ki raksha bhi tabhi hogi.


Parvati mata :- dhairya rakhiye devrishi, uska bhi bandobast abhi ho jayega.


Abhi mata ne abhi baat puri ki hi thi ki tabhi ek laal roshni wHa chamki or waha prakat hue.


Navraho m se ek h jo , jo manushy k man m garv or krodh ka niyantran kerte h , wo the .


Bhumi putra


Mangal dev.
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Mangal dev hath jod :- bhumi putra mangal ka pranam swikaar kare mata.


(Naradjise) pranam devrishi.


Parvati mata ashish dete hue :- aaiye mangal dev aaj kailash ka marg kese bhul gaye.


Mangal :- mata kafi samay se aapke or prabhu mahadev k darshano ki icha man m uth rahi thi , bas isliye mata , aapke darshan to ho gaye , parantu prabhu kahi najar ni aarahe.


Mata parvati :- parantu mahadev to kisi avashyak karya se kahi gaye h mangal dev


Mangal dev udaasi m :- koi baat ni mata m fir kabhi aajaunga.


(Hath jod ) aagya de mata


Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan hone wale the ki tabhi mata parvati boli.


Mata parvati :- thahriye mangal dev , apne lok prasthan kerne se purb kya aap humara ek karya karenge.


Mangal dev hath jod :- aagya dijiye mata.


Mata parvati fir mangal dev ko apna karya mangal dev ko batati h , jise sun mangal dev saharsh swikar kerte hue, waha se anterdhyan ho gaye


Naradji :- narayan narayan ! Mata aapne bahut uchit kiya mangal dev ko yah karya deker parantu mata is karya k liye mangal dev ko kasht kyu diya ye karya to aap mujhe bhi somp sakte the.


Parvati mata :- aapka kahana bhi uchit h devrishi, parantu satya to ye bhi h na narad ji ki jo prabhav mangal dev ka h wo aap to ni naa.


Ye bol mata muskurane lagi.


Naradji mata ki muskurahat dekh sab samjh gaye or khushi se bole.


Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Dhanya ho aap or dhanya aapki lila mata .


Ye bol naradji bhi mata se agya le waha se prasthan ker liye.


Wahi dusri or


Wo aatma mahadev ko apne samaksh yu gambhir dekh ghabra gayi .


Mahadev us aatma ko yu ghabraya dekh mand muskurahat k sath shant swar m bole .


Mahadev :- shant ho jao putri , tumhe humse ghabrane ki jarurat ni , tum jesi pavitra or sachi aatma ko kisi se ghabrana ni chahiye putri.


Mahadev k shant swar ko sun ker us aatma ki ghabrahat kam hui.


Aatma :- jesa aap kahe mere malik mere parvartikar


Mahadev :- ye kya putri ye hume tum kis naam se pukar rahi ho , hum to shiv h , tum hume apne khuda apne allah k naamo se kyu sambodhit ker rahi ho.


Mahadev k ye prashna sun wo aatma has padi or to mahadev bole.


Mahadev :- putri humne koi vyag to ni kiya fir tum had kyu rahi ho.


Atma :- gustakhi k liye muhafi chati ho mere malik , par kya karu aapke muh se ese baato ki ummid kabhi na ki thi.


Mere malik ye dharm , jati , ye sab to hum murkh aapke in bando ki ki gayi wo murkhta h , jisne ek khuda ek ishwer ko hi anek naamo anek sampradayon m baat diya h or aaj wo sab bevkoof usi k naam p aapas m lad rahe h .


Khud ko mazhab ka thekedar to wo ghoshit kerte h wo lekin bhul jate h ki majhab chahe koi sa bhi h , wo ek hi sikh deta h ki ishwer ek h or un sab majhabo ka ek hi sandesh ,ek hi paigam h wo h insaniyat , lekin bade hi khed k sath kahana padta h , insaniyat ka wo paigam , jinhe bhagwan ram , shri krishn , goutam budh , saw paigambar muhammad or jesus Christ , ओर nanak dev ji jese kitni hi mahan vibhuti ne samay samay p is duniya ko diya wo aaj bhul gayi h.


Bhul gaye h ki ishwer , allah god ye sab to keval naam matra h us shakti k (mahadev ki or hath fela ker ) yani k aap hi mere malik ho jo is sansaar k eklote kaarak h.


(Khushi se uski ansu) aap hi wo nirakar parbhrham ho jise aapke bande bade hi adab se allah kahkar bulate h or aap hi sakar mahakal h jinhe aapke bhakt prem se mahadev kahkar bulate h


To ese m aapki ye bandi allah kahke aapke aage sajda kare .


(Ye bol wo aatma namaz ki position m beth )


Aatma :-


لا إله إلا الله محمد رسول الله


LA ILAHA ILLALLAH MUHAMMADUR RASULULLAH



Ya fir m aapne mahadev ko apni astha prakat kerne hetu mantrocharan roopi pushp arpit keru


Ye bol us aatma ne apne hath jod mantrocharam kiya.


Aatma :-

ॐ हौं जूं स: ॐ भूर्भुव: स्व: ॐ त्र्यम्बकं यजामहे सुगन्धिं पुष्टिवर्धनम् उर्वारुकमिव बन्धनान् मृत्योर्मुक्षीय मामृतात् ॐ स्व: भुव: भू: ॐ स: जूं हौं ॐ !!


Baat to ek hi h na mere prabhu.


Us aatma k andaaz ko dekh mahadev atyant prabhavit hue.


Mahadev khushi se :- satya kaha tumne putri , naam bhale hi bhin ho ishwer ek hi h , m ek hi hu.


M hi sakar roop jab dharan karta hu to shiv kahalata hu .


Or m hi jab nirakar roop leta hu to.


Allah kahalAta hu


Ye bol mahadev ne ankhe band ki or uske sath hi ek tez prakash charo or fel gaya or jAb prakash hatha to atma khushi se niche ghutno k bal beth gayi.


Kyunki samne mahadev nirakar allah swaroop m the.



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Kabristan m jese hi allah prakat hue to kabra m leti sabhi ruhe kabro se nikal allah k samne jhuk gayi.


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Karan or jyoti ki nokjhok jab ruki tabhi aditi bhi vaha checkup k liye.


Aditi :- are wah tumhe hosh aagaya gudiya.


Jyoti karan ki or sawaliya najar se dekhti h jese sab puch rahi ho ki he kon h tab karan sari baat jyoti ko batata h jise sun jyoti ko fir ek bar apne dono bhaiyo p khub naaz hota h


Fir aditi jyoti ka checkup kerte hue boli :- are wah jyoti tum to kafi strong girl ho , badi hi jaldi hi tum recover ker rahi ho , per ye to batao tumhe ye chote kese lagi


Karan baat sambhalte hue :- didi humari gudiya strong hi ni kafi bahadur bhi h ..


Fir karan aditi ko batata h ki usne kese us ladkiyo ko un gundo se bachaya bina shaktiyo ka jikra kiye , or ye bataya ki jyoti ne unhe jabtak waha roke rakha tab tak police waha tak ni pahunchi.


Aditi :- are wah tum to sach me badi brave ho jyoti , lekin tumhe khud ka bhi khyal rakhna chahiye kyunki bahaduri or laparwahi m bahut barik fark hota h.


Aditi ne karan k kahane p jyoti ko heart attack wali problem ni batayi or na hi jyoti ne ispe dhyan n diya , kyunki uske man m to kuch or hi sawal the jo ab wo karan se puchne wali thi.


Aditi k jane k baad jyoti phir karan k sang let gayi or boli.


Jyoti :- bhai ek sawal puchu , jhut to ni bologe.


Karan :- pagli aajtak tere bhai ne tere se kabhi jhut bola h, tu kahe to teri kasam khau


Jyoti :- ni bhaiya aapki gudiya ko ap per pura bharosa h , use kisi praman ki avashyakta ni .


Karan :- to puch na meri gudiya jo chahe wo puch.


Jyoti gambhir ho kuch der shant rahane k baad
:- bhai wo kaha h


Karan :- kon gudiya , haa humari bahane , unhe to mane choti mas or bhua k sath ghar bhej diya meri bahana.


Jyoti :- bhai mane choti maa ya bahano k baare m ni puch rahi hu.


Karan pyaar se uske galo p hatn :- to kiske baare m puch rahi h meri gudiya.


Tab jyoti ne wo naam liya jise karan ne puri tarah ander se hila k rakh diya , use jara bhi ummid ni thi ki jyoti ye naam legi , or usike sath uske man m gir bhay utpan hone laga jo use itne dino se sata raha tha or uski ankho k samne andhera sa chane laga


Jyoti apna sawal doharate hue :- bataiye naa bhai , kaha h.


Zoya


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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Nice update but Aadishakti ne Mangaldev ko kya kaary saunpa hai? Aur us kaary ka Jyoti se kya vaasta?
Abhi Karna aur uski sabhi sanginiyon aur saathiyon ki kaunsi pariksha shesh hai?
Zoya hai kaun aakhir yeh kya ateet hai iska Karna-Jyoti ke saath
 

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Karan or mahadev jab aapas m baat ker rahe the or karan jab mahadev k samaksh apne sabhi dukho ko vyakt ker raha tha , tab use jara bhi abhas ni tha ki uski sabhi dukh bhari baate or uski pida mahadev k alawa koi or bhi sun raha tha ya yu kaho sun rahi thi.


Or ye baat mahadev bhi bhalibhanti jante the , or esa hona swabhavik tha bhala sansaar ka esa konsa rahasya h , konsi esi baat h jo bhala mahakal se chup sakti thi , or vese bhi samay thamne k bavjood bhi wo shaks normal thi , sab dekh sun pa rahi thi , uska kaaran bhi to mahadev ki hi to icha thi , lekin wo shaqs is baat se shayad anbhigya thi.
Karan aur mahadev ji bich ki baate koi aatma sun rhi hai..dekhate hai wo aatma hai kon??
Or jab karan bilakh k mahadev k charno m gir pada Us aatma se ek baar to raha na gaya , to uske kadam apneaap hi badh gaye karan ki or


Lekin agle hi pal use apne kadam rokne pade or uski ankho se vivashta k neer teji se bahane lage or vo jamin p ghutno k bal gir bilakh k rone lagi or kuch der vo yu hi roti rahi , asahay bhav se karan ko dekhte hue, lekin kuch der baad usne paya ki mahadev k sanidhya m karan ka man shant ho gaya h or ab vo apne dard or taklif se ubher ek fiki muskan hi sahi lekin muskura to raha h to , uske bhi ashru ki gati kam ho gayi or karan ki muskaan dekh uske chahre p ek d
Aisa lag rha hai jaise wo soul Karan ko achchhe se janati hai...tabhi wo Karan ke dukh ke Karan swayam dekhi hui ....
Karan apni gudiya ko apni baho m liye uske sath hi leta tha or uske gaalo ko prem se sahala raha tha or jyoti bhi itni taklif m bhi jitna ho sake apne bhai se chipak k leti hui thi , usne apne bhai ki ek bah ko apna takiya banaye hue , apne humsafar or apne bhaiya k sir m takiya banaye hue leti apne bhai ko nihar rahe thi or esa hi karan ker raha tha wo ek tak apni gudiya ko nihar rahe the


Tabhi karan ki najar jese hi jyoti k tan p padi to uski chote hath m fracture m or sir p lagi pati dekh karan ka dil pida se bhar utha , or uske ankho se neer bahane lage .


Jise dekh jyoti ghabra gayi.


Jyoti :- bhaiya ap ro kyu rahe ho , aapki gudiya se koi bhul hui kyaa


Karan pyaar se jyoti k gaal se :- bhul tumse ni gudiya tere is bhaiya se hui , meri hi vajah se meri ful si gudiya aaj is haal m h .


Meri hi galti thi jo mane bina tere se bina icha jane ki itna bada fesla liya , jiske kaaran tum maa se dur ho gayi , tu dur hui or usi dukh k kaaran hi tumhari ye haalat hui.


Jyoti :- bhai please aap mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki bilkul galti ni thi , aapne to apne kartavya ko nibhaya , m hi pagal thi jo aap se bevajah hi Ruth gayi , jabki m bhul hi gayi ki jo takleef mujhe maa se dur hone p ho rahi h , vo aapko bhi to ho rahi hogi , aapki sangini hoke bhi m apne ardhangh ka dukh or dard na samjh saki , ni samjh saki ki m to is nirnay k kaaran m hi dard m hu , lekin ye bhul hi gayi ki apne to kitne kathor hriday se kartavya nirvahan hetu ye nirnay liya hoga .


Ye bol jyoti bhi rone lagi , to karan taraf utha or khud k aasu bhul apni gudiya k ansu puch use shant karane laga.


Shant hone k baad jyoti prem se apne bhai ko samjhati h.


Jyoti :- bhai aap please shant ho jaiye , aap ye bhi to sochiye ager ye sab na hua hota to aaj un ladkio k sath na jane kya hota, aaj humari is jara si taklif ne kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi barbaad bachayi h.


Karan muskurate hue :- jhali kahi ki abhi khud hi bacho jese ro rayi thi , or ab shant hui to khud tayi ji ban k bade bhai ko sikha rahi h.


Jyoti masti kerte hue :- oh hello bade aap ni , badi m hu , wo bhi pure 5 min badi , samjha bandar.


Karan :- kya boli bandar , m bander to tu bhaisiya wo bhi moti wali.


Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola m bhais , ruk tujhe m batati hu khujli wale bander .


Ye bol wo jese hi uske uper tut padne ko hui , lekin jese hi usne uthna chaha to dard se wo taraf uthi or gir padi .


Jyoti :- aaahhh bhaiiiiii.......


Jyoti ki chikh sun karan ghabra gaya or jyoti ko sambhal ker datte hue bola


Karan :- ek no ki pagal ladki h tu , ab bed se hili na to ek lagaunga.


Ye bol karan ne apna hath thappad jese banaya , gussa dikhate hue.


Jyoti masti se uski nakal kerte hue :- lagaungi ek .


Jyoti ki bachkani harkat se karan ki hasi chut jati h or wo ek chappat lagate hue


Karan uske baal khichte hue :- ek no ki jhali h tu.


Jyoti bhi masti k mood m thi :- ouch gande kahike,
Ye bol usne bhi karan k sir p ek tapli maar deti h.


Karan :- aah , chipkali maar kyu rahi h .


Ye bol usne bhi ek chapat laga di.


Jyoti :- kute shuruat tune ki thi n ki m


Ye bol jyoti ne karan k baal noch liye or karan ne bhi uski choti khichte hue bola


Karan :- or khatam bhi m karunga jungli billi.


Jyoti ye sun chidke :- kya bola jungli billi , ab dekho ye bili kya kerti h.


apne karan k hath m apne nakun ghupa deti h , jisse karan ki aah nikal. Jati h or jyoti hasne lagi .


Jyoti jibh nikal k use chidane lagi .


Fir shuru hui karan or jyoti ki pyaar bhari nok jhok.
Shuruwat me kafi emotional scene the joki itne dino ke baad milane Karan sawbhawik tha...but uske baad ye pyari payri nokjhok unke bechain man ko kuchh had Tak Shanti pradan kiya..
Mata parvati apne sthan p bethe bethe un dono bhai bahan ki nokjhok dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi .


Parvati maa :- kitna anokha rishta h in dono ka , kabhi ek dusre k bhai bahan ban ek dusre k prati sneh jatate h , kabhi ek dusre k mat pita swayam hi ban ek dusre ka khyal rakhte h , kabhi ek dusre k premi premika ban ek dusre k jivan prem ras ka sanchar kerte h or ab dekho ek dusree ke mitra ban kese is haalat m bhi titholi or nokjhok kerte hue ek dusre k man ka dukh santap ko mita rahe h.


Tabhi narad ji waha prakat hote h.


Naradaji :- jagat janni ko narad ka pranam , aapne bilkul satya kaha mata , or yahi anokha pan hi to in dono mahan aatmao ki is katha ko bhin banata h.


Parantu ye dekh ker bahut kasth hota h mata , jin bhai bahan ne aajtak kisi ka sapne m bhi ahit kerne ka bhi na socha , sadev satkarm or bhakti marg p adig rahe h , esa kerne k bavjood bhi in dono k jivan m ab tak sirf kasht or pida hi praapt hui h , esa kab tak chalega mata , kya jo bhai bahan sabke dukh mita ker sabke jivan m khushiya bharte h kya kabhi unke jivan m khushiyan ni aayengi mata.


Kya sabke sath nayay kerne wale dandnayak evam dand nayak k sath niyati kabhi nyay karegi .


Parvati mata :- avashya hoga devrishi, karan or jyoti k jivan m shighr hi uchit samay p itni khushiya aayegi ki wo apne pichle sare dukh dard ko swatah hi bhula bethenge or apne parivar k sath ek sukhmay jivan vyatit karenge.


Parantu.


Naradaji :- parantu kyaaa maatee.


Mata :-parantu ye devrishi karan or jyoti k jivan k khushiya avashya aayegi , parantu ye samay h pariksha ka.


Narad ji :- pariksha ? Ye kya kah rahe h mata , abhi putra karan ki abhi ek pariksha to samapt hui ni or dusri pariksha or saj h uske liye.


Parvati :- pariksha to karan k jivan abhin ang h de rishi , parantu ye samay jyoti ki pratiksha ka ni balki samay h uski shakti or ardhangini jyoti,


Ye bol mata sab narad ji ko sab batati h , jise sun narad ji chintit swar m bole.


Naradji :- yadi esa h to hume jyoti ko is tathay se avgat karwana hoga mata , tabhi to jyoti apni is pariksha m safal ho payegi or is sansaar ki raksha bhi tabhi hogi.


Parvati mata :- dhairya rakhiye devrishi, uska bhi bandobast abhi ho jayega.


Abhi mata ne abhi baat puri ki hi thi ki tabhi ek laal roshni wHa chamki or waha prakat hue.


Navraho m se ek h jo , jo manushy k man m garv or krodh ka niyantran kerte h , wo the .


Bhumi putra


Mangal dev.
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Mangal dev hath jod :- bhumi putra mangal ka pranam swikaar kare mata.


(Naradjise) pranam devrishi.


Parvati mata ashish dete hue :- aaiye mangal dev aaj kailash ka marg kese bhul gaye.


Mangal :- mata kafi samay se aapke or prabhu mahadev k darshano ki icha man m uth rahi thi , bas isliye mata , aapke darshan to ho gaye , parantu prabhu kahi najar ni aarahe.


Mata parvati :- parantu mahadev to kisi avashyak karya se kahi gaye h mangal dev


Mangal dev udaasi m :- koi baat ni mata m fir kabhi aajaunga.


(Hath jod ) aagya de mata


Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan hone wale the ki tabhi mata parvati boli.


Mata parvati :- thahriye mangal dev , apne lok prasthan kerne se purb kya aap humara ek karya karenge.


Mangal dev hath jod :- aagya dijiye mata.


Mata parvati fir mangal dev ko apna karya mangal dev ko batati h , jise sun mangal dev saharsh swikar kerte hue, waha se anterdhyan ho gaye


Naradji :- narayan narayan ! Mata aapne bahut uchit kiya mangal dev ko yah karya deker parantu mata is karya k liye mangal dev ko kasht kyu diya ye karya to aap mujhe bhi somp sakte the.


Parvati mata :- aapka kahana bhi uchit h devrishi, parantu satya to ye bhi h na narad ji ki jo prabhav mangal dev ka h wo aap to ni naa.


Ye bol mata muskurane lagi.


Naradji mata ki muskurahat dekh sab samjh gaye or khushi se bole.


Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Dhanya ho aap or dhanya aapki lila mata .


Ye bol naradji bhi mata se agya le waha se prasthan ker liye.
Narad Muni ki entry iska ek hi matbal hai ki Karan aur Jyoti phir se musibat me ...kitne pyare pal bits rhe hai Karan aur Jyoti but ye writer logis unhe kyo chain se jivan bitane dene lage.. I hate this writer logis whit so many reasons..
Jyoti ko kuchh bato ko pahale Bata Diya jayega jiske Karan wo pariksha me pass ho sake..but ye aadha adhuri jankari bhi khatarnak hoti hai ...kuchh bato ko batane ka jimma mangal Dev ko Diya gaya hai....taki in bato ka positive asar ho....dekhate hai aage kon si pariksha Deni hai karam- Jyoti ko...
Wo aatma mahadev ko apne samaksh yu gambhir dekh ghabra gayi .


Mahadev us aatma ko yu ghabraya dekh mand muskurahat k sath shant swar m bole .


Mahadev :- shant ho jao putri , tumhe humse ghabrane ki jarurat ni , tum jesi pavitra or sachi aatma ko kisi se ghabrana ni chahiye putri.


Mahadev k shant swar ko sun ker us aatma ki ghabrahat kam hui.


Aatma :- jesa aap kahe mere malik mere parvartikar


Mahadev :- ye kya putri ye hume tum kis naam se pukar rahi ho , hum to shiv h , tum hume apne khuda apne allah k naamo se kyu sambodhit ker rahi ho.


Mahadev k ye prashna sun wo aatma has padi or to mahadev bole.


Mahadev :- putri humne koi vyag to ni kiya fir tum had kyu rahi ho.


Atma :- gustakhi k liye muhafi chati ho mere malik , par kya karu aapke muh se ese baato ki ummid kabhi na ki thi.


Mere malik ye dharm , jati , ye sab to hum murkh aapke in bando ki ki gayi wo murkhta h , jisne ek khuda ek ishwer ko hi anek naamo anek sampradayon m baat diya h or aaj wo sab bevkoof usi k naam p aapas m lad rahe h .


Khud ko mazhab ka thekedar to wo ghoshit kerte h wo lekin bhul jate h ki majhab chahe koi sa bhi h , wo ek hi sikh deta h ki ishwer ek h or un sab majhabo ka ek hi sandesh ,ek hi paigam h wo h insaniyat , lekin bade hi khed k sath kahana padta h , insaniyat ka wo paigam , jinhe bhagwan ram , shri krishn , goutam budh , saw paigambar muhammad or jesus Christ , ओर nanak dev ji jese kitni hi mahan vibhuti ne samay samay p is duniya ko diya wo aaj bhul gayi h.


Bhul gaye h ki ishwer , allah god ye sab to keval naam matra h us shakti k (mahadev ki or hath fela ker ) yani k aap hi mere malik ho jo is sansaar k eklote kaarak h.


(Khushi se uski ansu) aap hi wo nirakar parbhrham ho jise aapke bande bade hi adab se allah kahkar bulate h or aap hi sakar mahakal h jinhe aapke bhakt prem se mahadev kahkar bulate h


To ese m aapki ye bandi allah kahke aapke aage sajda kare .


(Ye bol wo aatma namaz ki position m beth )


Aatma :-


لا إله إلا الله محمد رسول الله


LA ILAHA ILLALLAH MUHAMMADUR RASULULLAH



Ya fir m aapne mahadev ko apni astha prakat kerne hetu mantrocharan roopi pushp arpit keru


Ye bol us aatma ne apne hath jod mantrocharam kiya.


Aatma :-

ॐ हौं जूं स: ॐ भूर्भुव: स्व: ॐ त्र्यम्बकं यजामहे सुगन्धिं पुष्टिवर्धनम् उर्वारुकमिव बन्धनान् मृत्योर्मुक्षीय मामृतात् ॐ स्व: भुव: भू: ॐ स: जूं हौं ॐ !!


Baat to ek hi h na mere prabhu.


Us aatma k andaaz ko dekh mahadev atyant prabhavit hue.


Mahadev khushi se :- satya kaha tumne putri , naam bhale hi bhin ho ishwer ek hi h , m ek hi hu.


M hi sakar roop jab dharan karta hu to shiv kahalata hu .


Or m hi jab nirakar roop leta hu to.


Allah kahalAta hu


Ye bol mahadev ne ankhe band ki or uske sath hi ek tez prakash charo or fel gaya or jAb prakash hatha to atma khushi se niche ghutno k bal beth gayi.


Kyunki samne mahadev nirakar allah swaroop m the.



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Kabristan m jese hi allah prakat hue to kabra m leti sabhi ruhe kabro se nikal allah k samne jhuk gayi.
Uss aatma ne kafi samajhdari bhari bate ki ...ye jaat paat ,ye samuday in sab se uper uthkar bate ki usne... mahadev parsnan ho gaye uss aatma ki bate sunakar...
Aditi :- are wah tumhe hosh aagaya gudiya.


Jyoti karan ki or sawaliya najar se dekhti h jese sab puch rahi ho ki he kon h tab karan sari baat jyoti ko batata h jise sun jyoti ko fir ek bar apne dono bhaiyo p khub naaz hota h


Fir aditi jyoti ka checkup kerte hue boli :- are wah jyoti tum to kafi strong girl ho , badi hi jaldi hi tum recover ker rahi ho , per ye to batao tumhe ye chote kese lagi


Karan baat sambhalte hue :- didi humari gudiya strong hi ni kafi bahadur bhi h ..


Fir karan aditi ko batata h ki usne kese us ladkiyo ko un gundo se bachaya bina shaktiyo ka jikra kiye , or ye bataya ki jyoti ne unhe jabtak waha roke rakha tab tak police waha tak ni pahunchi.


Aditi :- are wah tum to sach me badi brave ho jyoti , lekin tumhe khud ka bhi khyal rakhna chahiye kyunki bahaduri or laparwahi m bahut barik fark hota h.


Aditi ne karan k kahane p jyoti ko heart attack wali problem ni batayi or na hi jyoti ne ispe dhyan n diya , kyunki uske man m to kuch or hi sawal the jo ab wo karan se puchne wali thi.


Aditi k jane k baad jyoti phir karan k sang let gayi or boli.


Jyoti :- bhai ek sawal puchu , jhut to ni bologe.


Karan :- pagli aajtak tere bhai ne tere se kabhi jhut bola h, tu kahe to teri kasam khau


Jyoti :- ni bhaiya aapki gudiya ko ap per pura bharosa h , use kisi praman ki avashyakta ni .


Karan :- to puch na meri gudiya jo chahe wo puch.


Jyoti gambhir ho kuch der shant rahane k baad
:- bhai wo kaha h


Karan :- kon gudiya , haa humari bahane , unhe to mane choti mas or bhua k sath ghar bhej diya meri bahana.


Jyoti :- bhai mane choti maa ya bahano k baare m ni puch rahi hu.


Karan pyaar se uske galo p hatn :- to kiske baare m puch rahi h meri gudiya.


Tab jyoti ne wo naam liya jise karan ne puri tarah ander se hila k rakh diya , use jara bhi ummid ni thi ki jyoti ye naam legi , or usike sath uske man m gir bhay utpan hone laga jo use itne dino se sata raha tha or uski ankho k samne andhera sa chane laga


Jyoti apna sawal doharate hue :- bataiye naa bhai , kaha h.


Zoya
Aditi ko shak hua ki Karan ke aate hi Jyoti ki halat ek dam se kaise sudharne lagi..but Karan ne bato ko sambhal liya...
Jyoti ne aakhir wo sawal Kar hi Diya ,jisse Karan bachana chah rha tha..joya kaha hai....ab Karan ke samane phir se mushkile khadi ho gayi...aur Parvati Mata ka ye kahana ki ek pariksha hogi Karan aur Jyoti ki wo pariksha yahi lag rha hai....aur ek baat clear hui ki mahadev ke samane wo khadi aatma joya hi thi...wow really nice update.. iss update me sabhi conversation barabar barabar dikhaya gaya hai..aur anat me utne hi khubsurati se in sawalo ka jabab Diya gaya hai... it's make a perfect update... let's see what happens in next update....
 

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writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpana jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..

kahani mein ek romance, tragedy, happy moments, thrill, suspense, fantasy ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye...
ek khushnuma ehsaas chah jaye dilo dimag pe....
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai.. :bow:
Update sadharan si dincharya ho ya sadharan si ghatana lekin harry saheb usko apni kalam ke jaadu se jaan daal dete hai... itna manoram aur manoranjanmay kar dete hai ki sadharan baatein bhi apne apme aasadhaaran ho jaati hai... ...
sachhe pyar halaat ya paristithi dekhke nahi badlte balki woh atut rahte hai, lead characters kaise har muskil ko paar karke manjil paa lete hai, kaise kathin se kathin paristithi par bhi tut nahi ... iski udaharan Harry rocks saheb ki kahani ka mul mantra hai...
Nayak Nayika woh hota hai joh khud se pehle dusro ke bade mein soche . aur harry saheb ki kahaniyo ke lead characters sach mein ek nayak nayika ki soch rakhte hai.. aur un kirdaaro ki is soch ko ek Salam...
writer sahab fantasy ho ya thriller ho ya phir romantic topic ko kayi baar soch vichar kar lete hai ki kis tarah se pesh ki jaye taaki readers us topic ko padhte waqt unko real si lage... wo acceptable ho... aur padhne mein maza bhi aaye... aur entertaining bhi ho...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills harry ji :yourock: :yourock:
 

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Location :- kabristan


Karan or mahadev jab aapas m baat ker rahe the or karan jab mahadev k samaksh apne sabhi dukho ko vyakt ker raha tha , tab use jara bhi abhas ni tha ki uski sabhi dukh bhari baate or uski pida mahadev k alawa koi or bhi sun raha tha ya yu kaho sun rahi thi.


Or ye baat mahadev bhi bhalibhanti jante the , or esa hona swabhavik tha bhala sansaar ka esa konsa rahasya h , konsi esi baat h jo bhala mahakal se chup sakti thi , or vese bhi samay thamne k bavjood bhi wo shaks normal thi , sab dekh sun pa rahi thi , uska kaaran bhi to mahadev ki hi to icha thi , lekin wo shaqs is baat se shayad anbhigya thi.


Aaiye dekhte h ki wo ladki kon thi , are ye ladki ka koi sharir hi ni tha , uske aar par saaf saf dekha ja sakta tha , yani ki ye to ek aatma thi , jo usi qabar k piche ek ped k piche mojud sab dekh rahi thi or sun rahi thi.


Na jane kyu jese jese karan ka dard or pida bhad rahi thi , vese us ankho se bhi nbahate nir ki gati badhti hi ja rahi thi, jinhe dekh k mano yu pratit ho raha tha ki uske ansu ni bah rahe balki uska dard or taklif uski ankho se bah rahi thi , mano jitna dard uske samne karan vyakt ker raha tha mahadev k.samne utna hi dard m wo thi.


Or jab karan bilakh k mahadev k charno m gir pada Us aatma se ek baar to raha na gaya , to uske kadam apneaap hi badh gaye karan ki or


Lekin agle hi pal use apne kadam rokne pade or uski ankho se vivashta k neer teji se bahane lage or vo jamin p ghutno k bal gir bilakh k rone lagi or kuch der vo yu hi roti rahi , asahay bhav se karan ko dekhte hue, lekin kuch der baad usne paya ki mahadev k sanidhya m karan ka man shant ho gaya h or ab vo apne dard or taklif se ubher ek fiki muskan hi sahi lekin muskura to raha h to , uske bhi ashru ki gati kam ho gayi or karan ki muskaan dekh uske chahre p ek dard bhari muskaan fel gayi.


Or mahadev se vartalap ker or aasma k sath karan ka prem dekh us atma k chahrd p ek dard k sath ek santosh bhAri muskaan thi.


Wo ye sab tabtak niharti rahi thi , tabtak karan or asma kabristan se bahar na chale gaye or fir wo bhi jese hi ji bhar karan or asma ko niharne k.baad jab wo bhi vaha se jane lagi to piche se uske kaano m ek aawaz padi jise sun kaya chonk gayi , or piche mud jinhe dekha to wo ghabra gayi.


Kyunki piche mahadev khade the , jo kafi gambhir (serious) najar aarahe the.


Wahi dusri or.


Karan apni gudiya ko apni baho m liye uske sath hi leta tha or uske gaalo ko prem se sahala raha tha or jyoti bhi itni taklif m bhi jitna ho sake apne bhai se chipak k leti hui thi , usne apne bhai ki ek bah ko apna takiya banaye hue , apne humsafar or apne bhaiya k sir m takiya banaye hue leti apne bhai ko nihar rahe thi or esa hi karan ker raha tha wo ek tak apni gudiya ko nihar rahe the


Tabhi karan ki najar jese hi jyoti k tan p padi to uski chote hath m fracture m or sir p lagi pati dekh karan ka dil pida se bhar utha , or uske ankho se neer bahane lage .


Jise dekh jyoti ghabra gayi.


Jyoti :- bhaiya ap ro kyu rahe ho , aapki gudiya se koi bhul hui kyaa


Karan pyaar se jyoti k gaal se :- bhul tumse ni gudiya tere is bhaiya se hui , meri hi vajah se meri ful si gudiya aaj is haal m h .


Meri hi galti thi jo mane bina tere se bina icha jane ki itna bada fesla liya , jiske kaaran tum maa se dur ho gayi , tu dur hui or usi dukh k kaaran hi tumhari ye haalat hui.


Jyoti :- bhai please aap mat roiye, jo hua usme aapki bilkul galti ni thi , aapne to apne kartavya ko nibhaya , m hi pagal thi jo aap se bevajah hi Ruth gayi , jabki m bhul hi gayi ki jo takleef mujhe maa se dur hone p ho rahi h , vo aapko bhi to ho rahi hogi , aapki sangini hoke bhi m apne ardhangh ka dukh or dard na samjh saki , ni samjh saki ki m to is nirnay k kaaran m hi dard m hu , lekin ye bhul hi gayi ki apne to kitne kathor hriday se kartavya nirvahan hetu ye nirnay liya hoga .


Ye bol jyoti bhi rone lagi , to karan taraf utha or khud k aasu bhul apni gudiya k ansu puch use shant karane laga.


Shant hone k baad jyoti prem se apne bhai ko samjhati h.


Jyoti :- bhai aap please shant ho jaiye , aap ye bhi to sochiye ager ye sab na hua hota to aaj un ladkio k sath na jane kya hota, aaj humari is jara si taklif ne kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi barbaad bachayi h.


Karan muskurate hue :- jhali kahi ki abhi khud hi bacho jese ro rayi thi , or ab shant hui to khud tayi ji ban k bade bhai ko sikha rahi h.


Jyoti masti kerte hue :- oh hello bade aap ni , badi m hu , wo bhi pure 5 min badi , samjha bandar.


Karan :- kya boli bandar , m bander to tu bhaisiya wo bhi moti wali.


Jyoti jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya bola m bhais , ruk tujhe m batati hu khujli wale bander .


Ye bol wo jese hi uske uper tut padne ko hui , lekin jese hi usne uthna chaha to dard se wo taraf uthi or gir padi .


Jyoti :- aaahhh bhaiiiiii.......


Jyoti ki chikh sun karan ghabra gaya or jyoti ko sambhal ker datte hue bola


Karan :- ek no ki pagal ladki h tu , ab bed se hili na to ek lagaunga.


Ye bol karan ne apna hath thappad jese banaya , gussa dikhate hue.


Jyoti masti se uski nakal kerte hue :- lagaungi ek .


Jyoti ki bachkani harkat se karan ki hasi chut jati h or wo ek chappat lagate hue


Karan uske baal khichte hue :- ek no ki jhali h tu.


Jyoti bhi masti k mood m thi :- ouch gande kahike,
Ye bol usne bhi karan k sir p ek tapli maar deti h.


Karan :- aah , chipkali maar kyu rahi h .


Ye bol usne bhi ek chapat laga di.


Jyoti :- kute shuruat tune ki thi n ki m


Ye bol jyoti ne karan k baal noch liye or karan ne bhi uski choti khichte hue bola


Karan :- or khatam bhi m karunga jungli billi.


Jyoti ye sun chidke :- kya bola jungli billi , ab dekho ye bili kya kerti h.


apne karan k hath m apne nakun ghupa deti h , jisse karan ki aah nikal. Jati h or jyoti hasne lagi .


Jyoti jibh nikal k use chidane lagi .


Fir shuru hui karan or jyoti ki pyaar bhari nok jhok.


Location :- kailash .


Mata parvati apne sthan p bethe bethe un dono bhai bahan ki nokjhok dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi .


Parvati maa :- kitna anokha rishta h in dono ka , kabhi ek dusre k bhai bahan ban ek dusre k prati sneh jatate h , kabhi ek dusre k mat pita swayam hi ban ek dusre ka khyal rakhte h , kabhi ek dusre k premi premika ban ek dusre k jivan prem ras ka sanchar kerte h or ab dekho ek dusree ke mitra ban kese is haalat m bhi titholi or nokjhok kerte hue ek dusre k man ka dukh santap ko mita rahe h.


Tabhi narad ji waha prakat hote h.


Naradaji :- jagat janni ko narad ka pranam , aapne bilkul satya kaha mata , or yahi anokha pan hi to in dono mahan aatmao ki is katha ko bhin banata h.


Parantu ye dekh ker bahut kasth hota h mata , jin bhai bahan ne aajtak kisi ka sapne m bhi ahit kerne ka bhi na socha , sadev satkarm or bhakti marg p adig rahe h , esa kerne k bavjood bhi in dono k jivan m ab tak sirf kasht or pida hi praapt hui h , esa kab tak chalega mata , kya jo bhai bahan sabke dukh mita ker sabke jivan m khushiya bharte h kya kabhi unke jivan m khushiyan ni aayengi mata.


Kya sabke sath nayay kerne wale dandnayak evam dand nayak k sath niyati kabhi nyay karegi .


Parvati mata :- avashya hoga devrishi, karan or jyoti k jivan m shighr hi uchit samay p itni khushiya aayegi ki wo apne pichle sare dukh dard ko swatah hi bhula bethenge or apne parivar k sath ek sukhmay jivan vyatit karenge.


Parantu.


Naradaji :- parantu kyaaa maatee.


Mata :-parantu ye devrishi karan or jyoti k jivan k khushiya avashya aayegi , parantu ye samay h pariksha ka.


Narad ji :- pariksha ? Ye kya kah rahe h mata , abhi putra karan ki abhi ek pariksha to samapt hui ni or dusri pariksha or saj h uske liye.


Parvati :- pariksha to karan k jivan abhin ang h de rishi , parantu ye samay jyoti ki pratiksha ka ni balki samay h uski shakti or ardhangini jyoti,


Ye bol mata sab narad ji ko sab batati h , jise sun narad ji chintit swar m bole.


Naradji :- yadi esa h to hume jyoti ko is tathay se avgat karwana hoga mata , tabhi to jyoti apni is pariksha m safal ho payegi or is sansaar ki raksha bhi tabhi hogi.


Parvati mata :- dhairya rakhiye devrishi, uska bhi bandobast abhi ho jayega.


Abhi mata ne abhi baat puri ki hi thi ki tabhi ek laal roshni wHa chamki or waha prakat hue.


Navraho m se ek h jo , jo manushy k man m garv or krodh ka niyantran kerte h , wo the .


Bhumi putra


Mangal dev.
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Mangal dev hath jod :- bhumi putra mangal ka pranam swikaar kare mata.


(Naradjise) pranam devrishi.


Parvati mata ashish dete hue :- aaiye mangal dev aaj kailash ka marg kese bhul gaye.


Mangal :- mata kafi samay se aapke or prabhu mahadev k darshano ki icha man m uth rahi thi , bas isliye mata , aapke darshan to ho gaye , parantu prabhu kahi najar ni aarahe.


Mata parvati :- parantu mahadev to kisi avashyak karya se kahi gaye h mangal dev


Mangal dev udaasi m :- koi baat ni mata m fir kabhi aajaunga.


(Hath jod ) aagya de mata


Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan hone wale the ki tabhi mata parvati boli.


Mata parvati :- thahriye mangal dev , apne lok prasthan kerne se purb kya aap humara ek karya karenge.


Mangal dev hath jod :- aagya dijiye mata.


Mata parvati fir mangal dev ko apna karya mangal dev ko batati h , jise sun mangal dev saharsh swikar kerte hue, waha se anterdhyan ho gaye


Naradji :- narayan narayan ! Mata aapne bahut uchit kiya mangal dev ko yah karya deker parantu mata is karya k liye mangal dev ko kasht kyu diya ye karya to aap mujhe bhi somp sakte the.


Parvati mata :- aapka kahana bhi uchit h devrishi, parantu satya to ye bhi h na narad ji ki jo prabhav mangal dev ka h wo aap to ni naa.


Ye bol mata muskurane lagi.


Naradji mata ki muskurahat dekh sab samjh gaye or khushi se bole.


Narad ji :- narayan narayan ! Dhanya ho aap or dhanya aapki lila mata .


Ye bol naradji bhi mata se agya le waha se prasthan ker liye.


Wahi dusri or


Wo aatma mahadev ko apne samaksh yu gambhir dekh ghabra gayi .


Mahadev us aatma ko yu ghabraya dekh mand muskurahat k sath shant swar m bole .


Mahadev :- shant ho jao putri , tumhe humse ghabrane ki jarurat ni , tum jesi pavitra or sachi aatma ko kisi se ghabrana ni chahiye putri.


Mahadev k shant swar ko sun ker us aatma ki ghabrahat kam hui.


Aatma :- jesa aap kahe mere malik mere parvartikar


Mahadev :- ye kya putri ye hume tum kis naam se pukar rahi ho , hum to shiv h , tum hume apne khuda apne allah k naamo se kyu sambodhit ker rahi ho.


Mahadev k ye prashna sun wo aatma has padi or to mahadev bole.


Mahadev :- putri humne koi vyag to ni kiya fir tum had kyu rahi ho.


Atma :- gustakhi k liye muhafi chati ho mere malik , par kya karu aapke muh se ese baato ki ummid kabhi na ki thi.


Mere malik ye dharm , jati , ye sab to hum murkh aapke in bando ki ki gayi wo murkhta h , jisne ek khuda ek ishwer ko hi anek naamo anek sampradayon m baat diya h or aaj wo sab bevkoof usi k naam p aapas m lad rahe h .


Khud ko mazhab ka thekedar to wo ghoshit kerte h wo lekin bhul jate h ki majhab chahe koi sa bhi h , wo ek hi sikh deta h ki ishwer ek h or un sab majhabo ka ek hi sandesh ,ek hi paigam h wo h insaniyat , lekin bade hi khed k sath kahana padta h , insaniyat ka wo paigam , jinhe bhagwan ram , shri krishn , goutam budh , saw paigambar muhammad or jesus Christ , ओर nanak dev ji jese kitni hi mahan vibhuti ne samay samay p is duniya ko diya wo aaj bhul gayi h.


Bhul gaye h ki ishwer , allah god ye sab to keval naam matra h us shakti k (mahadev ki or hath fela ker ) yani k aap hi mere malik ho jo is sansaar k eklote kaarak h.


(Khushi se uski ansu) aap hi wo nirakar parbhrham ho jise aapke bande bade hi adab se allah kahkar bulate h or aap hi sakar mahakal h jinhe aapke bhakt prem se mahadev kahkar bulate h


To ese m aapki ye bandi allah kahke aapke aage sajda kare .


(Ye bol wo aatma namaz ki position m beth )


Aatma :-


لا إله إلا الله محمد رسول الله


LA ILAHA ILLALLAH MUHAMMADUR RASULULLAH



Ya fir m aapne mahadev ko apni astha prakat kerne hetu mantrocharan roopi pushp arpit keru


Ye bol us aatma ne apne hath jod mantrocharam kiya.


Aatma :-

ॐ हौं जूं स: ॐ भूर्भुव: स्व: ॐ त्र्यम्बकं यजामहे सुगन्धिं पुष्टिवर्धनम् उर्वारुकमिव बन्धनान् मृत्योर्मुक्षीय मामृतात् ॐ स्व: भुव: भू: ॐ स: जूं हौं ॐ !!


Baat to ek hi h na mere prabhu.


Us aatma k andaaz ko dekh mahadev atyant prabhavit hue.


Mahadev khushi se :- satya kaha tumne putri , naam bhale hi bhin ho ishwer ek hi h , m ek hi hu.


M hi sakar roop jab dharan karta hu to shiv kahalata hu .


Or m hi jab nirakar roop leta hu to.


Allah kahalAta hu


Ye bol mahadev ne ankhe band ki or uske sath hi ek tez prakash charo or fel gaya or jAb prakash hatha to atma khushi se niche ghutno k bal beth gayi.


Kyunki samne mahadev nirakar allah swaroop m the.



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Kabristan m jese hi allah prakat hue to kabra m leti sabhi ruhe kabro se nikal allah k samne jhuk gayi.


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Karan or jyoti ki nokjhok jab ruki tabhi aditi bhi vaha checkup k liye.


Aditi :- are wah tumhe hosh aagaya gudiya.


Jyoti karan ki or sawaliya najar se dekhti h jese sab puch rahi ho ki he kon h tab karan sari baat jyoti ko batata h jise sun jyoti ko fir ek bar apne dono bhaiyo p khub naaz hota h


Fir aditi jyoti ka checkup kerte hue boli :- are wah jyoti tum to kafi strong girl ho , badi hi jaldi hi tum recover ker rahi ho , per ye to batao tumhe ye chote kese lagi


Karan baat sambhalte hue :- didi humari gudiya strong hi ni kafi bahadur bhi h ..


Fir karan aditi ko batata h ki usne kese us ladkiyo ko un gundo se bachaya bina shaktiyo ka jikra kiye , or ye bataya ki jyoti ne unhe jabtak waha roke rakha tab tak police waha tak ni pahunchi.


Aditi :- are wah tum to sach me badi brave ho jyoti , lekin tumhe khud ka bhi khyal rakhna chahiye kyunki bahaduri or laparwahi m bahut barik fark hota h.


Aditi ne karan k kahane p jyoti ko heart attack wali problem ni batayi or na hi jyoti ne ispe dhyan n diya , kyunki uske man m to kuch or hi sawal the jo ab wo karan se puchne wali thi.


Aditi k jane k baad jyoti phir karan k sang let gayi or boli.


Jyoti :- bhai ek sawal puchu , jhut to ni bologe.


Karan :- pagli aajtak tere bhai ne tere se kabhi jhut bola h, tu kahe to teri kasam khau


Jyoti :- ni bhaiya aapki gudiya ko ap per pura bharosa h , use kisi praman ki avashyakta ni .


Karan :- to puch na meri gudiya jo chahe wo puch.


Jyoti gambhir ho kuch der shant rahane k baad
:- bhai wo kaha h


Karan :- kon gudiya , haa humari bahane , unhe to mane choti mas or bhua k sath ghar bhej diya meri bahana.


Jyoti :- bhai mane choti maa ya bahano k baare m ni puch rahi hu.


Karan pyaar se uske galo p hatn :- to kiske baare m puch rahi h meri gudiya.


Tab jyoti ne wo naam liya jise karan ne puri tarah ander se hila k rakh diya , use jara bhi ummid ni thi ki jyoti ye naam legi , or usike sath uske man m gir bhay utpan hone laga jo use itne dino se sata raha tha or uski ankho k samne andhera sa chane laga


Jyoti apna sawal doharate hue :- bataiye naa bhai , kaha h.


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