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Ahamkaarn aisi jis ne Har ek. Bura Kia. Hain chahe munshya dev danav ya phir devta hi kyu na aur purush apne purshatr pe ghamand karta Hai to bhool kyu jaata hain woh is sansaar me aane ke liye ek naari ka vivash hain aur kirtigya hain.update no :- 221
Location :- karan house .
Karan jese hi ghar pahuncha sabse , wo jyoti k room m pahuncha jaha paya ki jyoti uth chuki h or thoda bahut uncomfortable mahasus ker rahi h garmi k kaaran or pasine se tar batar ho wo uthne ki koshis ker rahi h.
Karan turant jyoti k pas jate hue :- are gudiya tu kaha ja rahi h esi halat m kuch chahiye to mujhe bol.
Jyoti :- bhaiya wo bahut garmi lag rahi h to socha ki shivani k room m chali jau , waha ac h naa.
Karan or jyoti aaj bhale hi itne amir ho gaye the , lekin unhone kabhi bhi apne uper amiri ka nasha n chadne diya tha , wo aaj bhi apni pahale ki tarah simple life ji rahe the , or khud se pahale apne pariwar ka sochne wale ye dono bhai bahan apne liye kerna kuch bhul hi jate
Pichli baar unhonne jo apne liye ek second hand ac k liye pese jode the , wo bhi unhone apne ghar m laga diye the , or uske baad wo hadsa hua or jab wo wapas lote to pahale mosam ki thandK or ganw jane k chakkar m wo is bare m bhul hi chuke the
Karan pyaar se jyoti k gal p sahalatee hue dusre hath se apna ek. Kaan pakad. :- maaf ker de gudiya , m to bhul hi gaya ki itni garmi m or uper se ese plaster m or pattiyo k sath tujhe kese aaram milegz
Jyoti :- are bhai aap mafi kyu maNg rahe ho , m samjhti hu bhaiya humari family m gujre waqt m jo hua uske baad aapko time hi kaha mila.
Karan :- per ab ye tera bhai apni gudiya ko apna sara time dega.
Ye bol karan jyoti ka matha chum leta or fir ridhima ko phone lagata h.
Ridhima :- hello good afternoon bhai, ab kesi h gudiya ki tabiyat.
Phone speaker pe tha , to jyoti bol padi.
Jyoti :- good morning didu , mujhe bhala kya hoga m to ek dM fit and fine hu , ye to bhai ko bas bahana chahiye mujhe kamre m ked kerne se.
Ridhi haste hue :- acha esa kiya isne , ruko sham ko m jaldi ghar aati hu or fir dono bahane milke khabar lete h is mote ki.
Karan mazak kerte hue ;- to ms ridhima, esa sochti ho ap apne boss k bare m , lagta h ab aapko nayi job dhund leni chahiye.
Ridhi jhut mut ka ghabra k :- ye kya gudiya teri side lena bahut mahanga pada yaar , apni job se hi hath dhona pad raha h
Jyoti karan k kan khichte hue :- esa kuch ni hoga di , mat bhuliye ye aapke boss h to inki boss m hu , inhone esa socha bhi n to ye khud apni tange or is room se hath dho bethenge
Karan :- are n baba n malkin daya kero ,, meri to shadi bhi ni hui abhi.
Ese bolne k sath karan jyoti or ridhima has pade , tab karan .
Karan :- di aapki ek help chahiye thi please.
Ridhima :- tu na mujhse pitega kisi din , bhala koi apni di ko please bolta h.
Karan :- di aap please ek bhadiya sa ac or ek led tv bhijwa doge ghar p .
Fir karan apni problem batata h ridhima ko.
Jyoti :- are bhai tv ki kya jarurat h ghar m already tv to h hi na or ridhu di aap to bas ek second hand ac bhej dijiyega , bhai ki to adat h jabardasti kharcha kerne ki.
Karan :- ji ni tv ki bhi jarurat h , kyunki jabtak tum thik ni ho jati tab tak kamre se bahar ni niklogi , isliye tum yaha bethe bethe bore n ho or tumhara favorite serial dekhne bahar n jana pade , isliye tv mangwaya h
Jyoti :- thik h bhai , per tv bhi second hand hi mangwana di.
Ridhima :- per...
Ridhima aage kuch bolti isse pahale hi kavya ghar waha aati h jo gate p khadi sab sun rahi thi , or usne ridhima ko dono k liye hi mana ker diya ,
Ridhima k puchne p kavya boli.
Kavya :- vo isliye beta kyunki ye sab mane already order ker diya h or wo ane hi wale Honge.
Tabhi ghar ki door bell ring hoti h to darwaja komal kholti h or new tv or ac ko dekh uchhalte hue .
Komal :- woww new ac or tv ye kiske liye h choti taiji ji.
Kavya :- komal beta ye sab aapke bhaiya or didi k liye h , unke room m ac ni h n.
Komal :- kya bhai aap itni garmi m kyu so rahe the aap or didi mere room m aajate.
Karan :- are choti ma aapko taklif kerne ki kya zarurat thi , m bas order ker hi raha tha.
Kavya :- ha dekh liya tha , kese kisi ka use kiya hua manga raha tha , mere bache kya kisi ki use ki hui chij use karenge , mere hote hargiz ni .
(Nam ankho se ) or vese bhi lala kerne de mujhe ye sab , mane bahut se pap kiye h apne phul se bacho per , ab apni is abhagi ma ko apne kartvya nibhane de use pashchatap kerne ka moka dede mere bache.
Kavya ko rota dekh karan turant apni choti maa k gale lag gaya or use chup karate hue bola.
Karan :- are ye kyaa choti maa , aapne apna promise tod diya , aapne mujhse vada kiya tha n ki aap purani baate yad kerke ni royogi, lekim aap to rone lagi , lagta h aap apne lalla se pyaar ni kerte .
Kavya karan ko sine se lagake :- apni nadan choti maa ko maaf ker de lala , esa aage se kabhi n hoga , per aage se esa kabhi mat bolna ki m tujhse pyaar ni kerti.
Shruti mahol ko.halka kerte hue :- are mote bahana acha banaya sabko emotional kerke party na dene ka , lekin afsos chalne ni wala , hume party chahiye , kyu bahano.
Sari bahane ek sath :- ha party party .
Sari bahane party party kahake ho halla kerne lagi to karan ne sabke liye pizza order kiya or pizza aane tak tv or ac bhi install ho gaya ,
or sab lag gaye pizza party m
wahi dusri or
Zoya k vaha se jane k baad mahadev bhi waha se anter dhyan ho wapas pahunch gaye apne kailash apne sthan per yani ki mata parwati k bagal m.
Mata parwati :- aagaye swami , parantu aapke jane ka mantavya purn roop se kaha safal hua bhagwan , ek or jaha aap karan ko shanti v sthirtha pradan kerne gaye wo bhi lambe samay tak n rah payi.
Or dusri or zoya bhi aapke kathan ko n samjh payi , wo bhut kaal m hui ghatnao ka doshi swayam ko manti h , wo samjhti h ki jo hua usme uski bhul thi , lekin satya to ye h ki bhul to ab ker rahi h wo apne satya ko karan or jyoti se chupa ker.
Yadi aaj wo aapka kaha maan leti to kinchit bhavishya m ghatne wali ashubh ghatnaye tal jati.
Mahadev :- priye , niyati ki ek khasiyat h , usne jo likh diya , use n koi tal sakta h or na hi badal sakta h , hum bhii ni
Bhavishya m hone wali wo ghatnaye jinki or sanket aapki or h wo ho ker to rahegi hi , or raha prashn humare mantavya ka to humara matvyA bhavishya m hone waLi un ghatnao ko rokne ka kabhi tha hi ni.
Humara mantavya to keval karan ko ane wali paristhitiyon k liye visheshkar jyoti k sath us hadse k baad khud ko sambhalne ka tha jo avashyak tha.
Parwati :- hmm , parantu mere man m ek or prashn tha swami.
Mahadev :- yahi n gouri ki humne mangal dev ko darshan dena aswikar kyu kiya.
Parwati :- ha swami hum yahi janne k ichhuk h ki aapne mangal dev ko darshan kyu n diya jabki wo to kitne prem se aapke darshan k liye aaye the.
Unhe darshan dene k bajaye aapne unhe rishi pippalad k sath karan or jyoti k pas kyu bhijwaya, jabki yah karya to akele rishiwer bhi to ker sakte the.
Mahadev haste hue :- aap swayam jagat janni adishakti bhawani ho priye, is sansaar ka koi rahasya apse kya chupa rah sakta h , fir bhi aap humare mukh se sunna chahti h to suniye.
Gouri,mangal dev ko bhi wahi mithya brham or ahankar ho chuka h , jo bhut kaal m bhi kaiyo ko ho chuki h .
Nari shakti ko kam ankhne ki bhul , devi mangal dev apne purshtv k ahankaar m itne dub chuke h ki unhone uchit se aapka bhi abhivadan or prathna n ki , unhe to bas humse hi milne ki pratiksha thi , jis kaaran unhone aapki upeksha yu ki jese aap yaha ho hi na , or jo unhone aapka samman kerte hue apki aagya ka palan kerte hue waha pahunche h , wo isliye ni ki aap jagat janni h , apitu isliye kiya ki unhe humare krodh ka bhay tha , jo aPki agya ki avhelna p hume aana swabhavik tha
Isliye hey Priye , aane wali ghatna keval jyoti ki pariksha ban use ek naye makam p pahunchayegi apitu , mangal dev k ahankar ko nasth ker ,is sansaar ko fir nari shakti ki mahima batayegi.
Vo dekhiye devi mangal dev apne ahankaar ka pradarshan ab karan or jyoti k samne
Fir thodi der sabke sath waqt gujarne k baad karan jyoti ko god m le wapas room m aate h
Jyoti new tv ko chalu ker karan k sine se ek side lag tv dekhte hye boli
Jyoti :- choti maa ne to ek dam surprise ker diya n bhai , ek sath do do gift deke n bhai.
Karan muskurate hue :- choti maa ne to gift deker apni beti ko khush ker diya , ab meri bari h , jald hi m bhi apni gudiya ko ek surprise gift dene wali hu .
Jyoti excited ho ke :- gift , kesa gift bataiye n bhai.
Karan halke se jyoti k chapat laga :- bata diya to surprise kaha rahega jhali , tujhe thoda wait kerna padega.
Jyoti abhi age kuch bolti tabhi waha ek roshni k sath baba pragat hue lekin unke sath mahal dev bhi the mata parwati k adesh anusar
Karan or jyoti ek sath bister se khade ho baba ko pranam kerte h or mangal dev ki or ishara kerte h jese puch rahe ho ki wo kon h, kyunki aaj unhonne mangal dev ko dekha tha
Magal dev :- putra karn , hum bhumi putra mangal dev h.
Karan or jyoti jeSe hi sunte h ki unke ghar m swayam navgraho m se ek shubhta or garv k swami mangal dev padhare h to unki khushi se jhum uthe , un dono ne mangal dev ki stuti ki or karan ne unke bethne k liye ek singhasan bhi mangaya jadu se.
Fir dono baba se unke aane ka kaaran puchte h to baba bole.
Baba :- putra karn hum tumhare samasya k nidhan kerne aaye h , tum isi chinta m ho na ki putri jyoti ki shaktiya uchit roop se karya kyu ni kerti or na hi uspe tumhari shktiya karya kyu ni ker rahi.
Karan ha m sir hilata h to baba bole.
Baba :- putra karan shama kerna , hume tumhe is bare m pahale hi agah ker dena chahie tha , lekin hum bhul vash tumhe batana bhul gaye the , is baare m lekin mangal dev ne jab hume aake jyoti k sath hui ghatna k bare m bataya to unki h or ma parwati ki anumati se hum yaha padhare.
Putra bat darasal ye h bhale hi purti jyoti m divya shaktiya h parantu uska ye tan to h ek manushy yoni ka hi na is kaaran iski kuch simaye h , isliye tum ye baat jan lo , jab jyoti putri ka masik dharm chal raha hota tab tak uski shaktiya nishkriya ho jati h or wah durbal pad jati h , isliye tumhe in dino m jyoti ka vishesh khayal rakhna hoga, pure ek 10 din tak , kyunki is samay jyoti k uper khatra ho sakta h.
Karan ye sun chintit ho jata h or bolta h.
Karan :- kyu baba akhir meri hi gudiya k sath esa kyu hota h , kyu dand nayika ho ker bhi use niyati uska manobal badhane k bajaye use girane m lagi hui h , ese halat pragat ker, aaj jyoti ki shaktiya us samay nishkriya hui jis samay use sabse jyada jarurat thi , ager meri gudiya ko kuch ho jata to uska jimedar kon hota baba.
Karan ne abhi apni baat bhi puri na ki thi ki tabhi un logo k kaano m hasne ki aawaz padi , karan or jyoti ne paya hasne wala koi or ni balki mangal dev hi the.
Mangal dev hasi control kerte hue :- vyavadhan k liye shama kerna dand nayak , parantu tumne baat hi esi ker di , are bhai ek ladki ko ager itni badi jimedari sompoge to esa hi hoga na.
Bura mat mana karan , parantu mujhe samjh ni aata ki kya soch k tumhare pita ne tumhari bahan ko bhi itni shakti di , kya wo bhul gaye ki jyoti ek stri h , ye yudh , shaktiya kaha nari k vash ki baat h , nari ka kam to keval apna ghar sambhalna or apne swami ki seva kerna hota h , or use ese kam sompege to wahi hoga jo aaj jyoti k sath hua.
Karan mangal dev k shabdo se samjh gaya ki ye mangal dev ni unke purushtv k ahankar bol raha h
Karam :- mangal dev aap apne purushtv m ye bhul rahe h ki is shrishti ki rachna kerne wali devi aadishakti h ek nari hi h , bhul rahe h aap ki mahishasur , shunbh nishunbh jese asuro ne jab aapko apne loko se nikal diya tha , tab unka sanghar ker aapka udhar kerne wali ma durga bhi nari thi , yaha tak ki aapki to pahachan bhi ek nari se , yani ki aaapki mata devi bhumi se hi h , bhumi putr mangal dev.
Mangal dev krodh se :- apni sima mat bhulo dand nayak , humari pahachan humare purushtv humare pad se h dand nayak , sansar k pratyek jivan ko shubh may ya ashubh may banane wale navgraho m se ek mangal dev h hum
Karan :- or unhi dev ki raksha kerne k liye meri gudiya hi age aayi thi , jab swarg p asuro ne akraman kiya tha, bhul gaye mangal dev .
Mangal deb :- parantu vijay to tumhare waha ane k baad hi praapt hui na dand nayak , tum waha aaye yani jab yudh m ek purush utra tav hi vijay safal hui na , anyatha jyoti bhi baki deviyon k sath bandi ban jati, to ye yahi sabit ho jati h ki bina purush k stri ka koi mulya ni.
Karan :- shama kijiyega mangal dev , lekin aap apne purush tv k ahankar m itne lipt ho chuke ho ki aapko mere bato se satya ka ahasas ni hoga , av to samay hi aapko satya se avgat kerwYega , tabhi apni aaj ki is nishkarisht soch p pachtava hoga.
Mangal dev :- pachtava to hoga karan per mujhe ni tumhe ki tumne mangal ka apman ker use shatruta kyu mol li .
Ye bol mangal dev waha se anter dhyan ho gaye or kuch bate batane k baad baba bhi anter dhyan ho gaye.
Karan or jyoti dono k mukh p chinta thi , lekin dono k karan alag the, jaha karan ko keval jyoti ki chinta thi , wahi jyoti ko ye bhay sata raha tha ki.mangal dev uske bhai ko kuch nuksan n pahuncha de .
Wahi dusri or
Location :- patal lok.
Baba ne jese hi karan k ghar m mangal dev k sath prakat hue the , to unki shakti ko mahasus rahu or ketu ne turant ker liya or unpe najar rakhte hue bate sunne lage.
Or jab unhone suna ki.jyoti abhi shaktihin ho chuki h or baba ki baki baat suni to dono k chahre p muskan aagayi.
Ketu :- bhrata rahu aap bhi vHi soch rahe h , jo m soch raha hu
Rahu :- ha ketu , ye yo bahut hi acha avsar h karan or jyoti ko prast ker phir se is sansaar p asuro ka shasan niyukt kerne ka.
Fir wo dono apne sthan se gayab ho ek gufa k samne pahunche..
Rahu tez aawaz me pukara :- tumhe jis waqt ka intezaar tha wo samay aachuka h mitra.
Ketu :- ha mitra samay agaya h tino loko p phir se asuro ka adhipaty kerne ka , isliye nindra tyag bahar aao
Tabhi gufa se ek bhayanak dahad ki aawaz aayi or dharti kampne lagi , or ek bhayanak asur jo 10 feet uncha tha or uska sir ek bhese ka tha.
Wo rahu ketu k samne aaker jhuk k bola.
Asur :- daitya raaj rahu evam asur raj ketu ko
Vritrasur ka pranam.
wahi dusri or
location :- mangal lok.
mangal dev gusse se idher udher tahalate hue .
mangal deb :- us manushya ki himat kese hui humse mangal dev se ese baat kerne ki
kah raha tha ki hum , mangal dev ko sabak sikhayega.
(karan ko wahi se dekhte hue ) sabak to ab hum sikhayenge tumhe karan , ab dekhega ye sara sansar kese pachtayega tu jab tumpe padega mangal ka prabhav.
sajj ho ja dussahasi karan
kyumki ab tere jivan m aagman hoga mangal k prabhav ka.
(bhayanak hasi haste hue)
prabav mangal dosh ka.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi.
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Lagta Hai kaal chakr Mangla Dev ka bhi aarambh hone wala hain ab. Lekin filhaal Mangal Dev ka aagman Karan ki bhagya Me ashubhta ke sath हो Gaya hain aur. Doosri taraf Rahu n Ketu Apni chal chal chuke hain. Ek taraf dohra hamla dekhte. Hain kaisay KJ ka pyaar iske Paar Pata hain.
Asha ko abhi tak Jyoti ki halat ka नहीं Pata. Chala jo ki hona. Chahiye aur Karan ne jo rude behave Kia thaa Garima ke sath uska bhi abhi maafi nahi Manga.
AB Intezar rahega aapki nxt update ka.
Apna khayal rakhna Bro!!!
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