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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

Kya mujhe story restart kerni chahiye

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Update no :- 18 .
Mandir se nikal ker tino bhai bahan college ko nikal jate h. Wahi p unko rohan bhi mil jata h . Rohan bhi ab karan or jyoti ka bahut acha dost ban chuka tha .

Rohan :- or bhai aagaya aaj late kese ho gaya.

Karan :- ha bhai wo aaj monday tha na to aaj mandir gaye hue the.

Karan or rohan ese hi baate ker rahe the ki tabhi ek ladki ne aker piche se rohan ki aankhe band ker di, jese rohan ko bol rahi ho ki pahachano m kon hu.

Kisi anjaan ladki ko esa kerta dekh sabhi chonk gaye . Rohan ko bhi pahale herani hui phir kuch second baad uske chahre per muskaan aagayi .

Rohan :- mane aapko kitni baar bola h ki mujhe aapko pahachanane k liye in ankho ki jarurat ni h meri pyari didu.

Or itna bol k wo us ladki k hatho ko hatha deta h or jaldi se piche mud ker us ladki k kaske gale lag jata h.

New introduction

Riya:-(age:- 23 years) jyoti ki tarah ye bhi ek simple or bahut hi sunder ladki h or rohan ki badi bahan h. Ye pichle 4 saalo se delhi m study ker rahi thi . Or aaj hi vapas loti h. Ye apne bhai rohan se bahut pyaar kerti h . Ye to rohan ko chodker delhi jana hi ni chahati thi but rohan ne inko apni kasam de ker delhi bheja tha.kyunki wo ni chahata tha ki uski di ka career unki vajah se kharab ho.

Now back to story.

Rohan riya k gale lagte hi khushi k ansu rone laga .

Rohan :- didu aap aagayi m bata ni sakta m aajkitna khush hu .

Riya :- ha betu m bhi khush hu m hi janti hu k ye char saal mane tere bina kese gujare h, or tu ro kyu raha h ab to m aagayi hu na.

Rohan :- ye to khushi k aansu h didu
Aapne bataya kyu ni ki aap aane wali hu .

Riya:- (galo ko pyar se khinchate hue) bata deti to mere pyare betu k chahareye surprise milne ki khushi kese dekh pati.

Rohan :- didu ab to aap mujhe chod k ni jaogi na.

Riya:- ni ab m apne betu ko chod k kahi jaungi or tere liye ek or surprise h betu .

Rohan (excited hote hue) :- kya di

Riya :- yahi ki mane apni post graduation k liye tere hi college m hi admission leliya h betu or ab m tere sath har waqt rah sakungi.


Rohan :- wow di I m so happy .

Bol ker fir se riya k gale lag jata h.

Riya :- are betu apne friends se mujhe ni milwayega

Rohan :- are ha di .
Fir rohan, karan jyoti or radha ko riya se milwata h.
Per fir rohan dekhta h ki karan or jyoti ki ankho m aansu h .

Rohan :- kyu hua jyoti , kya hua bhai tum dono ro kyu rahe ho.

Karan :- bhai ye ansu to tere or riya di k pyaar ko dekh ker aagaye h ankho m hamari.

Jyoti :- ha rohan bhai bhai aaj pata chala ki badi bahan ka pyaar kya hota h , ye dukh is baat ko sochkar aarahe h ki kash hamari bhi ek badi bahan hoti.

Riya bhi unki baate sun ker bahut emotional ho gayi or karan or jyoti ko apne sine se laga k boli.

Riya:- kisne kaha ki tumhari koi badi bahan ni h, m rohan k sath sath tum dono ki bhi badi bahan hu samjhe aajse. Or dobara esa kaha na ki tum dono ki koi badi bahan ni h to bahut pitayi hogi tum dono ki samjhe .

Karan or jyoti ye sun ker bahut khush ho jate h or riya ko tightly hug kerke bolte h .

Dono :- ok di.

Tabhi radha bol padti h

Radha:- are ye kya m sabse choti hu to mujhe to aap sab mujhe to bhul hi gaye , bhul gaye kya m bhi aap sab ki kuch lagti hu .

Karan:-(radha k galo pe kiss kerte hue) are tujhe kese bhul sakte h tu to hum sabki jaan humari pyari gudiya h.

Or fir sabhi milker baari bari se radha k galo p kiss kerke radha ko charo taraf se gale laga lete h.

Fir ese hi sabhi apni apni classes ke liye chale jate h.

Or ese hi din nikal jata h fir college k off hone p sabhi parking m milte h .

Rohan :- friends aaj aap 3no ko raat ko mere ghar pe aana h kyunki meri family ne di k wapas aane ki khushi m ek party rakhi h.

Karan isse pahale kuch bolta usse pahale hi riya bol padi.

Riya:- ha bhai tumko or jyoti ko Aaj aana hi padega m koi bahana ni sunugi. Ye tumhari di ka apne chote bhai se ye request h or radha tu bhi aarahi h samjhi .

Riya k itna kahana tha ki 3no man jate h or sham ko milne ka bol apne apne ghar ki taraf nikal jate h.

Room m pahunch k karan or jyoti fresh hote h or
or khana khaker thodi der let jate h.

Sham ko dono bhai bahan teyar hote h . Or jyoti ne aaj red colour ki ethnic dress pahani thi jisme vo bahut pyari lag rahi thi. kuch is tarah ki lag rahi thi jyoti

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Fir wo dono jese hi ghar k bahar nikalte h to unke samne ek car aake rukti h jisme se radha nikalti h jo unko pic kerne aayi thi .

Fir vo 3no rohan k ghar ki taraf nikal jate h or vaha jese hi pahunchte h to rohan or riya bahut khush hote h or gale mil ker milte.

Fir party m shamil hote h party jyada badi ni thi bas kuch khas log hi aaye the jo thodi der m chale jate h

Introduction :-

Sunil gupta :-age 49 dil k bahut hi ache insaan h or apne biwi or rohan or riya se bahut pyar kerte h. Inki love marrige hui thi.

Anita gupta :- age 49 ek housewife or ek sushil grahni h or dil ki bahut hi saaf h .

Rohan or riya k baare m to aap jante hi h friends

Now back to story .

Anita or sunil dono hi karan ,jyoti or radha k nature se bahut impressed hote h .

Anita:- wese karan beta I really impressed with u tumhare mummy papa ne tumhe bahut ache sanskaar diye h jara batao unke baare m kuch.

Ye sab sunker karan or jyoti ko apni maa ki yaad aajati h or vo khud ko control ni ker pate or dono hi rone lagte h

Anita ye dekh k ghabra jati h or bolti h
Anita :- kya hua bacho tum ro kyu rahe ho.

Karan :- aunty aapki baate sunker hame apni mummy ki yaad aagayi or karan fir apni jindagi ki sari kahani suna dete h .

Anita bhi ye sun ker bhavuk ho jati h per khud ko thoda control kerte hue



Anita:- bas kero beta ese rote ni h aage se esa kabhi mat bolna ki ki tumhari maa ni h , m bhi to tumhari maa jesi hi hu. aaj se mere do ni 4 bache h.

Ye sun ker karan or jyoti dono bahut khush hote h kyunki aaj unhe ek badi bahan or maa dono mil gayi thi.

Fir anita kuch soch ker bolti h

Anita :- wese beta tumhari mummy ka naam kya tha. Or wo kaha ki rahane wali thi.
Anita ne esa isliye pucha tha kyunki use jyoti ka face kuch jana pahachana sa laga tha.
Jyoti :- aunty hamari mummy ka naam asha sharma tha or wo mumbai se thi.

Anita:- thoda excited hote hue beta tumhare pass unki koi pic h kya .
Kya m dekh sakti hu .

Karan anita ko apne mobile pic dikha deta h or jese hi Anita wo pic dekhti h to.


Anita :- (khushi k maare chonkte hue) kya tum ashu k bache ho.

Itna bol ker hi wo un dono ko fir se gale laga leti h or unke pure chaharo p kisses ki jhadi laga deti h

Karan :- kya hua aunty kya aap meri mummy ko jante ho

Anita:- beta tum janne ki baat ker rahe ho tumhari mummy meri bahut hi achi dost kum bahan jesi thi hum dono ek sath ek college m padhte the or ek hihostel m rahate the.but graduation k baad tumhari mummy se koi contact ni ho paya mane bahut koshis ki or aaj itne time baad uski khabar mili bhi to ye khabar mili ki wo ab is duniya m ni rahi .Jyoti beta tumhara chahara bilkul apni mummy jesa h.

Esa bol ker wo bhi rone lagi badi mushkil se anita ko chup karwaya sab ne . Aaj wo khush or udaas dono hi thi dukh is baat ka ki uski sabse achi saheli ab is duniya m ni rahi or khushi apni saheli k bacho se milne ki thi.

Isi tarah sab thodi der pyar se mile .
Anita ne karan or jyoti ko apne hatho se khana khilaya or radha ko bhi or fir karan jyoti or radha 3no apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Ghar pahunch k karan or jyoti aaj ki hui sabhi incidents k bare m baat kerte hue jyoti or karan so gaye per unhe kya pata tha kal un dono ko ek or surprise milne wala h.
Note :- sorry for late friends ab dekhte h ki kya surprise milne wala h kal karan or jyoti ko
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To karan or Jyoti ko ek badi bahan ke roop me Riya mil gyi jo ki rohan ki badi bahan hai or vo pg yhi se kregi Wao tikdi ab to punch mel khichdi ban gyi Jisme sabka apna ek alag astitva hai pr jb sath ho to dhmal hi hoga to rohan ko Mummy karan ke Ma ki bachpan ki dost kam bahan jaisi thi Sabhi milte hai raat ki party me radha ne car se pick kiya tha Jyoti karan ko sab apna bare me baat karte hai... Sandar update bhai
 

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Agle din or jyoti uth ker bari bari se nahate h or fir teyar hote h .Tabhi jyoti bolti h.

Jyoti :- bhai aaj rahane dete h college jane ka man ni h

Or fir wo jaker karan ki god m beth jati h or aapni bahe karan k gale me dalkar.

Jyoti:- m aaj aajaka pura din apne pyare bhaiyu k sath spent kerna chahati or masti kerna chahati hu please.

Jyoti ne ye baat itni masumiyat or pyar se boli thi ki karan mana ni ker paya.

Karan:- (uske galo ko apne sahalte hue bolta h) jesi meri gudiya ki mazi .
Or ye bol ker jyoti k galo ko chum liye.

Jyoti:- (bilkul bacho ki tarah khush hote hue) yahooooooooooo! Thank u thank u thank u so much bhai.

Or fir usne karan k chahare per kisses ki jhadi laga di.

Karan:- are bas ker bas ker gudiya.

Jyoti thodi masti kerte hue uske gal per kaat leti h

Karan :- ouch kat liya , gandi bachi.
Or apna gal sahalane lagta h.

Karan ne ye sab itni funny way m bola ki jyoti khil khilakar hasne lagti h.or use dekh karan bhi khush ho jata h.

Fir karan jyoti se bolta h

Karan:- chal choti nashta kerte h .

Jyoti :- ha bhai chalungi na but ese ni.

Karan :- fir kese ?

Jyoti :- jara ghumiye bhai.

Karan jese hi piche ghumta h to jyoti jaldi se bad per chad ker
karan k piche se uske gale m bahe dal ker uski pith p latak jati h or apne per karan k pet per lapet leti h.or bolti h

Jyoti:- ese bhai .


Karan jyoti ki is harkat p muskura uttha h or achanak usko apne bachpan ki yaad aajati h jab unki maa jinda thi to unke papa bhi undono se bahut pyaar kerte the , or jab bhi vo 4ro kahi ghumne jate to unke papa kabhi use ya kabhi jyoti ko ese apni pith per leker ghumte the. Ye sab yaad aate hi wo thoda emotional ho jata h per jaldi khud ko control ker leta h.or jyoti ko leker kitchen m aata h

Fir dono bhai bahan mil ker khana banate h or jyoti aaj. Karan ki god m beth k hi usko khana khilati or karan jyoti ko khilata h or

fir wapas jyoti karan ki pith p sawar ho jati h . Dono k papa or soteli maa to as usual ghar p the ni to wo befikar the.

Karan jyoti ko leker hall m aaker usko sofe per bithaya h or dusre sofe pe let ker

Karan:- (natak kerte hue) haye meri pith , jyoti tu kitni bhari ho gayi h , moti kahi ki meri pith ki band baja di.

Jyoti (banawati gusse me ) kya bole bhai aapne mujhe moti bola ruko.

Or jyoti karan k uper chad k usper pyar se mukko ki barsaat ker di

Fir karan sofe per beth gaya or jyoti ne apna sir uski god m rakh diya or dono bhai bahan tv dekhne lagte h

Tabhi karan bolta h
Karan :- chal choti bahut din ho gaye tere liye shopping ni ki jaldi se ready ho ja fir mall chalte h.

Jyoti itna sun ker bahut khush ho jati h or ho bhi kyu naa aakir ladkiyo ka pasandida kaam jo h shopping.

Fir dono bhai bahan ready ho ker mall pahunchte h or ek esi shop p jaate jaha ladies or gent dono k kapde milte ho , waha jaker har ladki ki tarah puri dukan sir o utha li

Chaliye jab tak inki shopping ker rahe h ek najar narad ji per daal lete h.

Narad ji kfd se mil ker sidha rishi piplaad k aashram me pahunchte h .rishiwer unhe dekh ker bahut khush hote h.

Rishiwer:- pranam devrishi ! Aapka swagat h

Fir rishiwer narad ji ki khub dil se seva kerte h unhe bhojan karwate h.

Fir bolte h

Rishiwer :- kahiye narad ji mere liye kya aagya h

Narad ji :- narayan narayan rishiwer m aapke liye kfd ka ek sandesh le ker aaya hu unhonne aapko ek karya sompa h .

Rishiwer:- ye to mera soubhagya h devrishi ki swayam kfd ne mujhe is layak samjha kahiye kya sandesh h .
Narad ji unhe wo karya bata ker waha se chala jata h.

Wahi dusri taraf shahr k bahar khandar m vo tantrik jisse mla milne aaya tha (uska naam aghora) sadhna m betha hua tha ki tabhi usko ek awaj sunayi deti h ki
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"Aankhe kholo aghora"

Aghora jese hi ankhe kholta h to dekhta h ki uske samne 'vp' khada thA .

Aghora:- prabhu aap yaha is samay mujhe se koi bhul hui kya.

Vp :- ni aghora balki tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki shetano k shahnshah (Mv) ne tumhe apne ek kaam k layak samjha.

Aghora :- aagya dijiye prabhu

Phir vp usko vo kam bata ker gayab ho jata h or aghora us kam ki teyari m lag jata h.

Chaliye wapas chalte h hero ki taraf

Pure do ghante baad jyoti ki shopping khatam hoti h to karan chen ki saas leta h.

Fir wo ek restaurant m jaker lunch kerte h .Apna hero aaj bahut handsome lag raha tha to waha mojud sabhi ladkiya use hi ghure jaa rahi thi ,karan to dhayan ni deta per jyoti sab notice kerti h or usko pata ni kyu use gussa aaraha tha.

Jyoti man me. :- dekho to in kaminiyo ko kese mere bhaiyu ko ghur rahi h kese kha hi jayenge . Per in bechariyo ki bhi kya galti bhai h hi itne handsome or jane kyu sharmane lagti h man hi man.

Karan :- are jyoti kaha kho gayi dekh khana aagaya h jaldi .

Fir dono ek dusre ko apne hatho se khilate h jise dekh ladkiya unhe couple samjh k jalne lagti h.or ladko ka bhi jyoti ko dekh yahi hal tha . Or jyoti bhi ye sab dekh ker man hi man muskura rahi thi .

Fir dono khana kha ker ghar pahunchte h or dono so jate h.
Sham ko unki nind doorbell ki aawaj se khulti h.

Karan jeSe hi gate kholta h to bahut khush ho jata h kyunki uske ma baap k sath gate k bahar shivani khadi thi

Intro
Shivani :- age 12 saal ranbir or kabya ki beti or karan or jyoti ki soteli bahan h. Ye abhi tak delhi m hostel m rah ker padh rahi thi .
Iske nature k bare m aage pata chalega .

Karan or jyoti shivani ko dekh bahut khush hote h per shivani bhi unhe ignore kerti h or esa behave ker rahi thi jese unhe janti hi na ho . Shivani ese behave ker rahi thi ki unhe janti hi na ho. Uska esa behave dekh dono bhai bahan ko bahut dukh hota h.

Fir karan or jyoti khana banaker apne room m jake khane bethte h to jyoti bolti h .

Jyoti (nam aankho se) :- bhai humari esi kya galti h ki papa or choti maa esa bartaav kerte h hamse or ab shivani bhi .

Bol k rone lagi . Karan bhi kuch ni bola or usko gale laga liye .

Fir dono bhai bahan khana khaker so jate h.

Note :- sorry for late update friends

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Superb update bhai to narad ji priplardh rishi ke pass pahuch kr unko kfd ka karya btate hai or vha se swagat satkar grahan karke chale jate hai yha karan aaj college nhi jate hai or Ghar me Pahle Thodi masti karte hai fir shopping karte hai Restorent me khana bhi khilate hai ek dusre ko raat me papa chhoti ma ke sath shivani (chhoti Sister) bhi aati hai pr un tino ka vyavhar dono ke prati nindniya rahta hai... Superb jabarjast update bhai
 

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Update no:- 20
Karan or jyoti so hi rahe the ki karan ko ahasas hua ki koi uske pero ko pakda hua h or usne nind m hi aadh khuli ankho se dekha ki koi sach m hi betha h bethi h uske pero k paas, per andhera hone ki vajah se kon h ye wo dekh na paya

samne wale ya wali ko bhi pata chal gaya ki karan jag gaya h to vo bhi jaldi se uth ker room se nikal gaya/gayi .

aaj k din hi dopahar k time jab shopping ker rahe the usi samay dusri taraf .

Mla or commissioner car me kunal ko leker shahar k bahar ja rahe the ,kunal to koma m hi tha . Mla gadi chala raha tha or commissioner apne bete ka sir apni god m rakh k piche wali seat per betha tha.

Commissioner:- yaar ye achanak se guruji(aghora) ne itni jaldi kyu bulaya h. Kahi kuch gadbad to ni ho gayi na or (ghabrate hue) kahi esa to ni ki humara kunal sahi ni ho sakta.

Mla :- tu chinta mat ker bhai esa kuch ni hoga mujhe baba pe pura bharosa h hamara kunal sahi bhi hoga or hamara badla bhi pura hoga.

Ese hi baate kerte hue wo dono aghora k adde per pahuch jate h

Mla:- pranam guru ji aapne

Aghora:- aao dushyant betho.

Dono fir beth jate h wahi jamin per aghora k pass .

Commisioner :- kya hua guruji koi sankat to ni aagaya na jo aapne hame itni jaldi yaha bulaya or wo bhi kunal k sath . Mera beta thik to ho jayega na.

Aghora:- chinta mat kero putra koi sankat ni h , tumhe to balki khush hona chahiye ki teri kismat kitni achi h ki tumhe ab grahan tak rukne ki aavashyakata ni h aaj amavas ki raat ko hi kaal muhoort padne wala h jisme tumhare dwara di gayi bali na sirf tumhare bete ko jivan daan degi apitu sath sath shetano k badsha "kaalbhanu" kali shaktiya bhi pradaan karenge.



Introduction :-

Kaalbhanu urf mv:- ji ha dosto yahi is story ka main villain ek 7 feet ka maha kroor or nirdayi asur h ye . Or charitra se bhi bahut gira hua h . Iski najar to har sunder naari per rahati h . Mahadev se ek do ni pure 3 3 wardan prapt ker iske hatyachar
Bahut bad gaye h. Isne mahadev se vardaan kya prapt kiye h wo to aage hi pata chalega.

Now back to story.

Commissioner:- kya sach me gurudev mera beta jaldi thik ho jayega.

Aghora :- ha bilkul

Flash back

Vp:- tumhe maharaj kaalbhanu ka ek karya kerna h aghora.

Aghora:- aagya dijiye prabhu .

Vp :- aaj se kuch dino pahale tumhare do shishya aaye the na tumhare pass apne putra k jivan daan k liye.

Aghora:- ha prabhu or vo aane wale grahan ko maharaj ko bali bhi pradan karenge.

Vp:- m tumse usi vishay m vartalap kerne aaya hu aghora. Apne shishyo se kah do k unhe 1 mah tak ki pratiksha kerne ki aavashyakata ni h , ager unhe apne putra k pran chahiye to aaj hi maharaj ko bali pradaan kare .

Aghora :- jesi aapki aagya prabhu ,parantu

Vp bich me hi tokte hue tej awaj me bola.

Vp:- apni jivha ko yahi pe lagam do aghora, jitna mane tumhe bataya h wo paryapt h , isse adhik janne ki tumhe koi avashyakta ni h . Jitna kaha gaya h utna kero bas. Or ha unhe bolna ki apna pratishodh aaj ni grahan wali raat ko hi le kyunki us samay uski shaktiya kayi guna bad jayegi.


Or ye bol k vp vaha se gayab ho gaya.

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Aghora :-ha ab shighrata se bali k liye us balak ka intezaam kero jese k baare m tumhe mane bataya tha.

Mla:- jesa aap kahe guruji

Or fir mla apne aadmi ko phone lagata h apne ek aadmi ko

Mla:- ha raka us londe ko utha lao address tumhe m msg ker raha hu.

Jis din aghora ne bola tha bache ki bali k baare m usi din se mla ne apne aadmiyo ko ek ese bache ki khoj m laga diya tha jo apne maa baap ka eklota ho or 5 saal ka ho or uske aadmiyo ne bache ko dhund bhi liya tha bas mla k order ka hi wait ker rahe the.

Karib 1 ghante baad raka us bache ko vaha le aata h, bacha behosh tha . Fir mla use wapis chale jane ko bol deta h. Or uske jaane k baad aghora bali ki teyari m lag jata h . Or mla or commissioner raat ka intezaar kerne lage .

Raat ko karib 12 baje sari tayariya puri ho chuki thi . Aaghora kuch der to pahale mantra jaap karke havan ki agni m aahuti de raha hota h or uske thik samne shetan ki ek badi si murti thi . Or usike side m wo jagah thi jaha bali di jani thi us masoom ki .

Thodi der baad aghora mla ko bache ko hosh m laker bali sthan per letane ka ishara kerta h . Mla us bache ko hosh m lata h or jese hi bacha hosh m aata h jor jor se rone lagta h or apni ma k pass le jane ko bol raha tha lekin un hevano ko us masoom per taras na aaya or jaldi se use bali wali sthan pe leta ker uski gardan talvaar k ek hi vaar m alag ker di . Us maasoom ka sir jaa ker shetan ki murti k pero m gir gaya. Fir aghora uth ker us bache k sir k khoon se kunal k sir p tilak kerta h or baki khun ek katore m daal ker kuch mantra jaap kerne lagt h .

Kuch hi der m kunal ko hosh aajata h or vo uth ker beth jata h , commissioner jese hi uske pass jane ko hota h ki aghora dur se hi use rukne ka ishara kerta h or us katori m rakha hua us bache ka khoon use pilata h jisse usko nayi shakti ka ahasas hota h . Fir aghora commissioner se bolta h h.

Commissioner:- tumhare bete ko shetan ne naya jivanadan or shaktiya to pradaan ker di h prantu aaj se ise shetan ka bhakt ban ker rahana hoga or sath sath ise har hafte ek bali deni hi hogi shetan ko khush kerne k liye.

Commissioner aghora ki sab baat maan leta h or fir wo charo aage ki planning kerne lagte h .

Wahi dusri or kfd bhi apne lok m singhasan per bethe hue ye sab drishya dekh rahe the or vo bahut krodhit the or bolte h.

Kfd:- manushya swarth me purntah andha ho chuka h aaj ye pramanit ho chuka h . Ek or karan or jyoti h jo apne pita or soteli ma k dwara unke sath kiye ja rahe dur vyavhar k bavjood bhi unke liye bhi un dono k dil m aaj bhi utna samman h or ek or ye paap Aatmaye h jinhone apne swarth purti hetu ek massom balak k pran lene m bhi sankoch n kiya . Apne putra k prano k liye kisi dusri maa ki khokh ujaad di . Hum chahe to abhi in dushto ka sarv nash ker de prantu niyati ne hamare hath bandhe hue h.

Prantu apni mrityu or apne karmfal se bhi bhala koi bach paya h or shighra hi inko bhi apne karmo ka fal praapt hoga.

Itna bol kfd waha se antardhyan ho gaye.

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Subah dono bhai bahan apna daily routine pura kerke nashte ki table p jaate h jaha shivani bhi bethi hoti h or breakfast ker rahi hoti h , wo jese hi karan or jyoti ko dekhti h to apna muh fer leti h or jaldi se khana kha ker apne room m chali jati h. Dono bhai bahan fir dukhi hote h. Or nashta banaker khane lagte h karan to bas yahi soch raha tha ki kal raat ko unke room m kon tha ya thi. Fir dono breakfast kerke college k liye nikal jaate h.

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Location :- ketu lok


Rahu ketu or vritrasur ki jab planning puri hui to ketu ne bola.


Ketu :- mitra yojna to ban gayi , ab waqt h yojna p amal kerne ka.


Vritrasur :- avashya , abhi lo mitra.


Tab vritrasur waha se trikut parwat k shikhar p , jo shastro k anusaar maa adishakti ka sthan mana jata h or ek bhavya mandir bhi mojud h maa kaa


Vritrasur waha pahunch maa adishakti ka avahan kerte hue :- hey mahamaya , jagadjanni mataa, kripya darshan de , hey maa bhutkal m.jo aapne mujhe samay aane p manchaha vardaan dene ka jo wachan diya tha , ab us vachan ko purn kerne ka samay aagaya h maa , heyyy maa isliye apne is bhakt ko darshan dene ka sobhagya prapt kare.


Ye sab baate bol vritrasur maa ka avahan kerne laga.


Vritrasur k avahan k sath hi waha tez hawaye chalne lagi , mandir m mojud ghantiya bajne lagi or pakshiyon ne bhi chachahana shuru ker diya.


Tabhi mandir m mojud maa ki murat se ek divya jyoti nikl ker waha asman m aagayi or us jyoti se ek divya roshni nikal charo or fel gayi.


Or jab kuch der baad kuch roshni hati to samne mojud shaks ko dekh vritrasur k chahre p ek shetani muskaan aagayi , kyunki samne ma adishakti prakat ho gayi thi.


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Darwaje p asha or naina ko dekh ker jaha jyoti samet sare parivaar ki herani ki sima na rahi , waha karan muskurate hue darwaje p khada apni family ka reaction dekh raha tha.


Jyoti to asha se yu chipki hui thi ki mano wo alag hi naa hona chahti ho , sabke chahre p khushi thi siway ek shaks k , jo yaha is waqt is ghar m mojud hone se hi khush n thi.


Sahi samjha aap logo ne wo thi , Naina .


Ji ha Naina ko gussa to bahut aaraha tha apne samne jyoti ko khush dekhna bilkul ni chahti thi , khush to chodo na jane kyu saral or milan saar jyoti yani ki uski apni badi bahan naina ko futi ankh na suhati thi , shuruat se hi.


Lekin is samay wo kuch bhi bolne k halat m naa thi , kyunki ager is samay wo kuch bhi bolti to bhari uspe hi padne wale tha.


Esa kyu tha wo aage hi pata chalega .


Jyoti khushi k ansu siskte hue :- maa aap aagayi , maa ap ni jante mane aapko kitna miss kiya , maa ab to aap hume kabhi chod k ni jaoge naa.


Asha pyaar se :- shant ho ja mera bacha shant ho ja mumma ab apni bachi ko chod k kayi ni jane wali.


Fir jyoti k alag hote hi shruti or komal aage aake bhuaa or taij kahate hue asha k per chuke gale milti h.


Asha unse bhi gale prem se mili , or fir garima or kavya se khushi khushi gale mili or sab naina se bhi khushi se gale milte h or uska ghar m ache se swagat kerte h.


Karan jo itni der se chup khada tha wo jyoti k paas jake bola :- kyu meri lado , kesa laga apne bhai ka surprise


Jyoti karan k gal chum :- aap duniya k bhai ho bhaiya , thank u so much


Kavya :- lala surprise tune sirf apni lado ko ni hum san ko dedala h , per ye to bata achanak ye sab hua kese .


Karan :- are choti maa batata hu pahale maa ko ander to aane dijiye.


Garima :- aaiye naa bhabhi maa, aaj is ghar ki shoba bad gayi , jo aapke kadam m pade yaha.


Asha :- kya choti tu bhi.


Garima :- are naina beti tum kya waha chupchap khadi ho , aare aao aaram se betho sharma kya rahi ho tumhari bhua ka ghar h koi ger ka thodi naa.


Naina :- ji bhuaaaa.


Fir sabhi beth ker waha bate krte h or nashta bhi laya jata h , jo naina ki pasand k the bread pakode or kofta.


Lekin naina ka muh latka hua tha , wo kuch kha hi ni rahi thi , kavya boli.


Kavya :- are naina beti tum kuch kha kyu ni rahi ho , shruti to bata rahi thi ki tumhe ye bahut pasand h, tumhari tabiyat to sahi h ma


Naina :- ji choti ma esa kuch ni h


Garima :- to tum kuch kha kyu ni rahi beta , (asha se)bhabhi maa aap boliye na kuch naina ko.


Asha :- are guddu tum kyu tension leti ho , shayad bhuk ni hogi ise , jab mN hoga to apne aap kha legi


Asha k way of talking se saf pata chal raha tha ki asha naina se rushth h , jiske piche kaa kaaran shayad aap log jo soch rahe h wahi h.


Chaliye in sabko thoda privacy dete hue , aaiyee ek najar vritrasur pe dal lete h or fir chalenge flashback m ye janne k liye ye sab hua kese , kese asha yaha aayi or sabse badi baat naina mani kese , kya usme karan ko maaf ker diya.


Location :- trikut parwat


Mata adishakti :- vritrasur ek baar punah vichar ker lo, ki tum yahi chahte ho , fir baad m hume dosh mat dena ki humne tumhe punar vichar ka avsar ni diya.


Vritrasur :- ni mata mane jo nirnay liya h uspe kinchit matra sandeh ni h , isliye hey mata mujhe mera manchaha vardaan dene ki kripa kare .


Adishakti :- tathastu vritrasur, parantu..


Vritrasur :- parantu kya mata .


Adishakti :- parantu yadi tumhe apne vardan ko purn roop se sidh kerna h to jo avadhi tumne nirdharit ki h , utne din tak roj aaker tumhe yaha aradhna kerni hogi, tab hi tumhara var sarthak hoga


Vritrasur :- jo aagaya mata


Adishakti maa ki bhanti samjhate hue ;- ek baat smaran rahe putra vritrasur tum humare bhakt ho , isliye tumhe samjha rahi hu , apne vardan ka kuch esa upyog mat kerna putra , ki baad m prayashchitt kerne ka avsar na mile


Mata vritrasur ko ye nasihat dete hue vaha se antradhyan ho gayi or maa k jaye hi vritrasur shetani haste hue


Vritrasur :- akhir kar ye samay aagaya , (aasman ki or dekh chilate hue ) devoooo saj ho jao apne ant k liye , vritrasur aaraha h


Flashback .


Aiye dekhte h ki akhir kya hua esa ki naina ko apni jid chod k yaha aana hi pada.


Hua darasal ye ki kal dopahar ko jab jyoti so rahi thi , tab karan kuch der k liye man halka kerne or jyoti ki dawaiya lane bazar gaya tha ki tabhi uska phone ring hota h.


Karan apna phone dekhta h to phone asha ka hota h.


Karan :- maa ka phone kahi ghar p kisi ne unhe bata to ni diya jyoti k accident k bare m


Karan phone uthate hue :- hello maaa.


Asha jiski aawaz se saf pata chal raha tha ki wo serious h or gusse m bhi .


Asha :- hello betaaa, tum abhi jald se jald yaha aao or mujhe le jao , ab m is ladki k sath ek second ni rukne wali.


Karan tension m ;- kyaa hua maa , aap itna gusse m kyu ho , batao to sahi.


Asha ;- wo sab m tumhe yaha ane p batati hu m karan , tum bas yaha aao.


Karan :- pr maa.


Asha :- tum aaoge ya m kuch or intezaam karu apne liye.


Karan :- ni ni maa m bas abhi aaya.


Karan ek sunsan jagah p jake teleport ho sidha pahunch gaya pandit ji k ghar , jaha ka najara dekh wo pareshan ho jata h .


Wo pata h ki asha gusse se apna saman pack ker rahi h or naina roye ja rahi h , uske galo p bhi hatho k nishan the , jese use kisi ne kaske thappad mare ho.


Karan :- maa .


Asha :- aagaya beta tu


Karan per chute hue :- ha maa m aagaya , per kya hua maa or ye choti ro kyu rahi h.


Karan naina k pas jake :- choti meri gudiya kya hua tu ro kyu rahi h , or tere gal p ye nishan kese kisne mara tumhe.

Naina siskte bhai :- bbbbhaaiii... Woooo


(Karan ne jese hi naina k muh se bhai suna to uski khushi ki sima hi na rahi ek shan to , or khush bhi kyu naa ho aaj pahali baar usko uski sagi choti bahan ne use pahali baar bhaii kahake pukara tha , lekin is khushi me dukh bhi smilit tha , kyunki uski bahan ro rahi thi.)


Karan naina ka gal thamte hue :- kya hua choti bata n kyu ro rahi h tu , or kisne ....


Asha bich me :- mane mara h is ladki ko , or ab m is ladki k sath ek pal ni rukne wali.


Karan :- maa aap esa kyu bol rahe ho , naina meri bahan h , aapki beti h , koi galti hui isse hui to bachi samjh k maaf ker do naa mumma


Asha gusse se :- galti ni gunah kiya h is ladki ne , janta h beta , tere jis mama k ahasan ka karz chukane k liye mane apne pariwar se tumse or gudiya (jyoti ) gudiya se door tak rahana bhi swikar ker liya , mere unhi swargiya bhai k naam leke chal kiya h mujhse .


Karan :- kyaaa , maa zara saaf shabdo m batao naaa kya bolna chahte ho.


Asha :- samjh ni rahe ho ya apni bahan ko bachane k liye na samjhne ka natak ker rahe ho .


Karan :- ni maa mujhe sach m ni pata aap kya bol rahi ho, esa kya ker diya choti ne jo aap itna gussa ho uspe hath bhi uthaya or ab ghar bhi chod k ja rahi jo wo bhi naina ko apni beti ko yahi chod k.


Asha :- nii , ni h meri beti , meri beti ye jhuti or matlabi ladki ni ho sakti , jante ho beta isne kya kiya h , isne jhut bola ki das bhaiya ki antim icha thi ki m yahi ruku , lekin sach to ye tha ki das bhaiya to chahte the ki hum sab ek sath mil jul ker rahe , lekin is matlabi or jhuti ladki ne too....


(Gusse se naina ko firse marne k liye) Ise na m tooo...


Naina dar k mare karan k piche chup gayi or kisine lagi .


Karan ko bhi jhatka to laga tha ki naina ne usse nafrat k chalte itna bada jhut bola , apne pariwar ko hi todne ki koshis ki , jisse kasht use bhi pahuncha , lekin paristhiti ko najar rKhte hue usne abhi asha ko shant karane ka decide kiya , kyunki wo apni maa ko achi tarah janta tha ki uski ma ye to badi shant or somya swabhav ki h , lekin ek chij se use sakht nafrat thi , wo tha jhut , use jhut bilkul bhi swikar n tha , or apni santan k muh se bilkul bhi ni,or yaha yo jhut itna bada tha ki kisi ko bhi gussa aajaye.


Karan asha ko rokte hue :- maaa , maa ruk jao , bachi h wooo , please shant ho jaiye.


Asha :- ni karan tu raste se hat jaa aaj to m is ladki ko sabk sikha k rahungi .


Karan :- maa aapko jo kerna h ker lena , per ek baar please aap shant to ho jao or hua kya wo to bataaooo.


(Asha k gale lagte hue ) apko meri or gudiya ki kasam.


Karan ne badi mushkil se kasam deker pahale use shant karwaya or phir naina k ansu puch use shant kerake pani pilata h or use bhi shant kerwa ke bithata h.


Karan :- maa ab bataiye hua......


Abhi wo aage kuch bolta usse pahale hi karan ko kuch abhas hota h , jisske sath hi uske chahre p serious expression aagaye , karan asha se bola.


Karan :- maa mujhe abhi kuch der k liye jana hoga , kisi ki meri madad ki jarurat h , per maa please aap jab tak m naa aau aap choti ko kuch ni bologe.


Asha :- ha mere bahana k veera aap nischit hoke jaye , vese bhi m is ladki se ab koi baat ni kerna chahti bas tu jAldi kam nipta k aa or mujhe yaha se leja.


Karan kuch ni bolta or turant waha se gayab ho gayaa.


Wahi dusri or


Aaiye ek najar karan ki us muh boli bahan per dal lete h jo najane kis majburi k kaaran na chahte hue bhi ki wo na chahte hue bhi ek dusre se dur rah rahe the , yani ki asma per


Asma bhale hi netra hin thi , lekin usne apni is kamzori ko apne p havi ni hone diya tha, bhale hi uske pas ankhe n thi , lekin ishwer ne usko sunne or mahasus kerneki shakti bahut tez di thi , jiske kaaran wo apna har kam almost normally ker pati thi.


Jis dukan p karan us din aasma se mila tha , wo asma ki dukan hi dukan thi , jispe wo phool or chadar or antim sanskar se jude sabhi saman bechkar wo apna gujara kerti thi.


Wo abhi market m kuch rashan ka saman leker apni stick k sahare wapas apne ghar ki or bhad rahi thi , wo khush thi ki aaj bina kisi pareshani k use sab saman bhi mil gaya or aj sale hone k kaaran uski acha khasi savings bhi ho gayi thi.


Lekin us bichari ko ye pata kaha tha ki ye khushi jyada der tak ni tikne wali thi, wo abhi apne ghar ko jati ek sunsan gali cross ker rahi thi ki tabhi waha ek van uske samne ruki , bhale hi asma dekh ni sakti thi , lekin usne gadi ki aawaz se itna to mahsoos ker liya ki kuch to gadbad h .


Aasma :- kon haiii , kyaaaaaa ........


Abhi asma aage kuch bol pati , usse pahale hiii do jan gadi se niche uter k asma ko lapak k utha liya or gadi m dalne lage.


Asma chilane lagi :- bachaoooooo koi to bacha oooo...... Aahhhh bhaijan ..


Gunda 1 dusre gunde se :- e dekh kya raha muh band ker londiya ka , isse pahale koi chikh sun k aajaye.


Ye bol gunde 1 ne jaldi se uske muh p hath rakha or jaldi se usne asma k muh p kapda bandh diya or usko gadi m fek ker use leker waha se rafu chakkar ho gaye.


Gunda 1 ::- rafiq bhai aaj to bahut tagda maal hath laga h , boss to khush ho jayenge.


Rafiq :- sahi kaha saajid bhai ,or khush honge kyu nii , mal ekdam gadraya hua jooo h .


Ye bol wo hasne lage , lekin wo murkh ye ni jante the , wo aasma ko ni apni bhayanak mot ko leker ja rahe the apne sath.


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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Location :- ketu lok


Rahu ketu or vritrasur ki jab planning puri hui to ketu ne bola.


Ketu :- mitra yojna to ban gayi , ab waqt h yojna p amal kerne ka.


Vritrasur :- avashya , abhi lo mitra.


Tab vritrasur waha se trikut parwat k shikhar p , jo shastro k anusaar maa adishakti ka sthan mana jata h or ek bhavya mandir bhi mojud h maa kaa


Vritrasur waha pahunch maa adishakti ka avahan kerte hue :- hey mahamaya , jagadjanni mataa, kripya darshan de , hey maa bhutkal m.jo aapne mujhe samay aane p manchaha vardaan dene ka jo wachan diya tha , ab us vachan ko purn kerne ka samay aagaya h maa , heyyy maa isliye apne is bhakt ko darshan dene ka sobhagya prapt kare.


Ye sab baate bol vritrasur maa ka avahan kerne laga.


Vritrasur k avahan k sath hi waha tez hawaye chalne lagi , mandir m mojud ghantiya bajne lagi or pakshiyon ne bhi chachahana shuru ker diya.


Tabhi mandir m mojud maa ki murat se ek divya jyoti nikl ker waha asman m aagayi or us jyoti se ek divya roshni nikal charo or fel gayi.


Or jab kuch der baad kuch roshni hati to samne mojud shaks ko dekh vritrasur k chahre p ek shetani muskaan aagayi , kyunki samne ma adishakti prakat ho gayi thi.


Back to the hero.


Darwaje p asha or naina ko dekh ker jaha jyoti samet sare parivaar ki herani ki sima na rahi , waha karan muskurate hue darwaje p khada apni family ka reaction dekh raha tha.


Jyoti to asha se yu chipki hui thi ki mano wo alag hi naa hona chahti ho , sabke chahre p khushi thi siway ek shaks k , jo yaha is waqt is ghar m mojud hone se hi khush n thi.


Sahi samjha aap logo ne wo thi , Naina .


Ji ha Naina ko gussa to bahut aaraha tha apne samne jyoti ko khush dekhna bilkul ni chahti thi , khush to chodo na jane kyu saral or milan saar jyoti yani ki uski apni badi bahan naina ko futi ankh na suhati thi , shuruat se hi.


Lekin is samay wo kuch bhi bolne k halat m naa thi , kyunki ager is samay wo kuch bhi bolti to bhari uspe hi padne wale tha.


Esa kyu tha wo aage hi pata chalega .


Jyoti khushi k ansu siskte hue :- maa aap aagayi , maa ap ni jante mane aapko kitna miss kiya , maa ab to aap hume kabhi chod k ni jaoge naa.


Asha pyaar se :- shant ho ja mera bacha shant ho ja mumma ab apni bachi ko chod k kayi ni jane wali.


Fir jyoti k alag hote hi shruti or komal aage aake bhuaa or taij kahate hue asha k per chuke gale milti h.


Asha unse bhi gale prem se mili , or fir garima or kavya se khushi khushi gale mili or sab naina se bhi khushi se gale milte h or uska ghar m ache se swagat kerte h.


Karan jo itni der se chup khada tha wo jyoti k paas jake bola :- kyu meri lado , kesa laga apne bhai ka surprise


Jyoti karan k gal chum :- aap duniya k bhai ho bhaiya , thank u so much


Kavya :- lala surprise tune sirf apni lado ko ni hum san ko dedala h , per ye to bata achanak ye sab hua kese .


Karan :- are choti maa batata hu pahale maa ko ander to aane dijiye.


Garima :- aaiye naa bhabhi maa, aaj is ghar ki shoba bad gayi , jo aapke kadam m pade yaha.


Asha :- kya choti tu bhi.


Garima :- are naina beti tum kya waha chupchap khadi ho , aare aao aaram se betho sharma kya rahi ho tumhari bhua ka ghar h koi ger ka thodi naa.


Naina :- ji bhuaaaa.


Fir sabhi beth ker waha bate krte h or nashta bhi laya jata h , jo naina ki pasand k the bread pakode or kofta.


Lekin naina ka muh latka hua tha , wo kuch kha hi ni rahi thi , kavya boli.


Kavya :- are naina beti tum kuch kha kyu ni rahi ho , shruti to bata rahi thi ki tumhe ye bahut pasand h, tumhari tabiyat to sahi h ma


Naina :- ji choti ma esa kuch ni h


Garima :- to tum kuch kha kyu ni rahi beta , (asha se)bhabhi maa aap boliye na kuch naina ko.


Asha :- are guddu tum kyu tension leti ho , shayad bhuk ni hogi ise , jab mN hoga to apne aap kha legi


Asha k way of talking se saf pata chal raha tha ki asha naina se rushth h , jiske piche kaa kaaran shayad aap log jo soch rahe h wahi h.


Chaliye in sabko thoda privacy dete hue , aaiyee ek najar vritrasur pe dal lete h or fir chalenge flashback m ye janne k liye ye sab hua kese , kese asha yaha aayi or sabse badi baat naina mani kese , kya usme karan ko maaf ker diya.


Location :- trikut parwat


Mata adishakti :- vritrasur ek baar punah vichar ker lo, ki tum yahi chahte ho , fir baad m hume dosh mat dena ki humne tumhe punar vichar ka avsar ni diya.


Vritrasur :- ni mata mane jo nirnay liya h uspe kinchit matra sandeh ni h , isliye hey mata mujhe mera manchaha vardaan dene ki kripa kare .


Adishakti :- tathastu vritrasur, parantu..


Vritrasur :- parantu kya mata .


Adishakti :- parantu yadi tumhe apne vardan ko purn roop se sidh kerna h to jo avadhi tumne nirdharit ki h , utne din tak roj aaker tumhe yaha aradhna kerni hogi, tab hi tumhara var sarthak hoga


Vritrasur :- jo aagaya mata


Adishakti maa ki bhanti samjhate hue ;- ek baat smaran rahe putra vritrasur tum humare bhakt ho , isliye tumhe samjha rahi hu , apne vardan ka kuch esa upyog mat kerna putra , ki baad m prayashchitt kerne ka avsar na mile


Mata vritrasur ko ye nasihat dete hue vaha se antradhyan ho gayi or maa k jaye hi vritrasur shetani haste hue


Vritrasur :- akhir kar ye samay aagaya , (aasman ki or dekh chilate hue ) devoooo saj ho jao apne ant k liye , vritrasur aaraha h


Flashback .


Aiye dekhte h ki akhir kya hua esa ki naina ko apni jid chod k yaha aana hi pada.


Hua darasal ye ki kal dopahar ko jab jyoti so rahi thi , tab karan kuch der k liye man halka kerne or jyoti ki dawaiya lane bazar gaya tha ki tabhi uska phone ring hota h.


Karan apna phone dekhta h to phone asha ka hota h.


Karan :- maa ka phone kahi ghar p kisi ne unhe bata to ni diya jyoti k accident k bare m


Karan phone uthate hue :- hello maaa.


Asha jiski aawaz se saf pata chal raha tha ki wo serious h or gusse m bhi .


Asha :- hello betaaa, tum abhi jald se jald yaha aao or mujhe le jao , ab m is ladki k sath ek second ni rukne wali.


Karan tension m ;- kyaa hua maa , aap itna gusse m kyu ho , batao to sahi.


Asha ;- wo sab m tumhe yaha ane p batati hu m karan , tum bas yaha aao.


Karan :- pr maa.


Asha :- tum aaoge ya m kuch or intezaam karu apne liye.


Karan :- ni ni maa m bas abhi aaya.


Karan ek sunsan jagah p jake teleport ho sidha pahunch gaya pandit ji k ghar , jaha ka najara dekh wo pareshan ho jata h .


Wo pata h ki asha gusse se apna saman pack ker rahi h or naina roye ja rahi h , uske galo p bhi hatho k nishan the , jese use kisi ne kaske thappad mare ho.


Karan :- maa .


Asha :- aagaya beta tu


Karan per chute hue :- ha maa m aagaya , per kya hua maa or ye choti ro kyu rahi h.


Karan naina k pas jake :- choti meri gudiya kya hua tu ro kyu rahi h , or tere gal p ye nishan kese kisne mara tumhe.

Naina siskte bhai :- bbbbhaaiii... Woooo


(Karan ne jese hi naina k muh se bhai suna to uski khushi ki sima hi na rahi ek shan to , or khush bhi kyu naa ho aaj pahali baar usko uski sagi choti bahan ne use pahali baar bhaii kahake pukara tha , lekin is khushi me dukh bhi smilit tha , kyunki uski bahan ro rahi thi.)


Karan naina ka gal thamte hue :- kya hua choti bata n kyu ro rahi h tu , or kisne ....


Asha bich me :- mane mara h is ladki ko , or ab m is ladki k sath ek pal ni rukne wali.


Karan :- maa aap esa kyu bol rahe ho , naina meri bahan h , aapki beti h , koi galti hui isse hui to bachi samjh k maaf ker do naa mumma


Asha gusse se :- galti ni gunah kiya h is ladki ne , janta h beta , tere jis mama k ahasan ka karz chukane k liye mane apne pariwar se tumse or gudiya (jyoti ) gudiya se door tak rahana bhi swikar ker liya , mere unhi swargiya bhai k naam leke chal kiya h mujhse .


Karan :- kyaaa , maa zara saaf shabdo m batao naaa kya bolna chahte ho.


Asha :- samjh ni rahe ho ya apni bahan ko bachane k liye na samjhne ka natak ker rahe ho .


Karan :- ni maa mujhe sach m ni pata aap kya bol rahi ho, esa kya ker diya choti ne jo aap itna gussa ho uspe hath bhi uthaya or ab ghar bhi chod k ja rahi jo wo bhi naina ko apni beti ko yahi chod k.


Asha :- nii , ni h meri beti , meri beti ye jhuti or matlabi ladki ni ho sakti , jante ho beta isne kya kiya h , isne jhut bola ki das bhaiya ki antim icha thi ki m yahi ruku , lekin sach to ye tha ki das bhaiya to chahte the ki hum sab ek sath mil jul ker rahe , lekin is matlabi or jhuti ladki ne too....


(Gusse se naina ko firse marne k liye) Ise na m tooo...


Naina dar k mare karan k piche chup gayi or kisine lagi .


Karan ko bhi jhatka to laga tha ki naina ne usse nafrat k chalte itna bada jhut bola , apne pariwar ko hi todne ki koshis ki , jisse kasht use bhi pahuncha , lekin paristhiti ko najar rKhte hue usne abhi asha ko shant karane ka decide kiya , kyunki wo apni maa ko achi tarah janta tha ki uski ma ye to badi shant or somya swabhav ki h , lekin ek chij se use sakht nafrat thi , wo tha jhut , use jhut bilkul bhi swikar n tha , or apni santan k muh se bilkul bhi ni,or yaha yo jhut itna bada tha ki kisi ko bhi gussa aajaye.


Karan asha ko rokte hue :- maaa , maa ruk jao , bachi h wooo , please shant ho jaiye.


Asha :- ni karan tu raste se hat jaa aaj to m is ladki ko sabk sikha k rahungi .


Karan :- maa aapko jo kerna h ker lena , per ek baar please aap shant to ho jao or hua kya wo to bataaooo.


(Asha k gale lagte hue ) apko meri or gudiya ki kasam.


Karan ne badi mushkil se kasam deker pahale use shant karwaya or phir naina k ansu puch use shant kerake pani pilata h or use bhi shant kerwa ke bithata h.


Karan :- maa ab bataiye hua......


Abhi wo aage kuch bolta usse pahale hi karan ko kuch abhas hota h , jisske sath hi uske chahre p serious expression aagaye , karan asha se bola.


Karan :- maa mujhe abhi kuch der k liye jana hoga , kisi ki meri madad ki jarurat h , per maa please aap jab tak m naa aau aap choti ko kuch ni bologe.


Asha :- ha mere bahana k veera aap nischit hoke jaye , vese bhi m is ladki se ab koi baat ni kerna chahti bas tu jAldi kam nipta k aa or mujhe yaha se leja.


Karan kuch ni bolta or turant waha se gayab ho gayaa.


Wahi dusri or


Aaiye ek najar karan ki us muh boli bahan per dal lete h jo najane kis majburi k kaaran na chahte hue bhi ki wo na chahte hue bhi ek dusre se dur rah rahe the , yani ki asma per


Asma bhale hi netra hin thi , lekin usne apni is kamzori ko apne p havi ni hone diya tha, bhale hi uske pas ankhe n thi , lekin ishwer ne usko sunne or mahasus kerneki shakti bahut tez di thi , jiske kaaran wo apna har kam almost normally ker pati thi.


Jis dukan p karan us din aasma se mila tha , wo asma ki dukan hi dukan thi , jispe wo phool or chadar or antim sanskar se jude sabhi saman bechkar wo apna gujara kerti thi.


Wo abhi market m kuch rashan ka saman leker apni stick k sahare wapas apne ghar ki or bhad rahi thi , wo khush thi ki aaj bina kisi pareshani k use sab saman bhi mil gaya or aj sale hone k kaaran uski acha khasi savings bhi ho gayi thi.


Lekin us bichari ko ye pata kaha tha ki ye khushi jyada der tak ni tikne wali thi, wo abhi apne ghar ko jati ek sunsan gali cross ker rahi thi ki tabhi waha ek van uske samne ruki , bhale hi asma dekh ni sakti thi , lekin usne gadi ki aawaz se itna to mahsoos ker liya ki kuch to gadbad h .


Aasma :- kon haiii , kyaaaaaa ........


Abhi asma aage kuch bol pati , usse pahale hiii do jan gadi se niche uter k asma ko lapak k utha liya or gadi m dalne lage.


Asma chilane lagi :- bachaoooooo koi to bacha oooo...... Aahhhh bhaijan ..


Gunda 1 dusre gunde se :- e dekh kya raha muh band ker londiya ka , isse pahale koi chikh sun k aajaye.


Ye bol gunde 1 ne jaldi se uske muh p hath rakha or jaldi se usne asma k muh p kapda bandh diya or usko gadi m fek ker use leker waha se rafu chakkar ho gaye.


Gunda 1 ::- rafiq bhai aaj to bahut tagda maal hath laga h , boss to khush ho jayenge.


Rafiq :- sahi kaha saajid bhai ,or khush honge kyu nii , mal ekdam gadraya hua jooo h .


Ye bol wo hasne lage , lekin wo murkh ye ni jante the , wo aasma ko ni apni bhayanak mot ko leker ja rahe the apne sath.


Aaj k liye bas itna hi


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