Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Update no :- 248
Friends zoya to yaad hi hogi aapko , ha wahi jiske chakkar m kuch samay pahale karan itna bhaybhit tha ki kahi jyaoti ko uske baare m yaad n aajaye per ab uski story m usse jude har character m changes laye gaye h or sath m rakshabandhan ko bhi 2 din baad hoga agle din k bajaye to aap sab log confuse mat hoiyega.

Location :- kabristan k pas wali road
Karan or jyoti sham ko kuch shopping kerke apni bike per lot rahe the .
Jyoti :- aaj to maja aagaya na bahut kitne dino baad hume yu akele me ghumne or waqt bitane ka moka mila ni to aajkal aapko mere liye waqt hi kaha milta h
Ye bolte hue jyoti ne karan k pith per mukka mara pyaar se per, jyoti ne ye baat bhale hi mazak m boli ho per sach to ye tha ki jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi thi , jab se unhe apna parivar pura wapas mila tha tabse unke berang jindagi m khushi bhare rang to aagaye the , per sath m kahi n kahi dono ko hi apni purani life k sunhare pal bhi yaad aate the, jab wo ek dusre k sath akele m kafi pyara or acha waqt bitate the or unke is pyare quality time m dakhl dene wala koi ni tha
Lekin ab itna badi family hone k kaaran esa hona un dono k liye bahut mushkil ho gaya tha , kyunki har waqt un dono se ya to unki bahane ya ma sath rahate , esa ni tha ki ye sab unhe pasand n tha wo to khush the per wo thodi privacy bhi chahthe the.
Ye sab sochte hue dono bhai bahan ghar ki or lot rahe the , tabhi ek mod p karan ne bike left m ghuma li.
Jyoti :- bhai ye kya ghar ka rasta to sidhe tha n to ye bike aapne is taraf kyu modi is taraf to kabristan h naa.
Karan :- ha gudiya , m janta hu per mane socha ki bahut din ho gaye , hume apni purani swargiya saheli se mile hue, use sharadhanjli diye to socha aaj moka or waqt dono h to .
Karan ki baat sun jyoti ki bhohe tan gayi or muh or hath krodh se kale padne lage or uski muthi bhichne lagi.
Jyoti gusse se :- koi jarurat ni h us gaddar k yaha jane ki bhai ,bhul gaye us kamini zoya ki wo qartut jis k kaaran hum.
Ni bhaiii bilkul bhi ni n to m waha jaungi na hi na hi aapko jane dungi.
Jyoti ka gussa bahut ugra ho raha tha bitte palo k sath jise karan ache se mahasus ker pa raha tha , jiska ahasas kerte hi karan turant bike rokta h or jyoti ko turant sine se laga ker bolta h.
Karan :- sshh shant meri gudiya shant , tum to meri achi bahana ho na , yu gussa ni kerte or gudiya tum to sakshat karuna ki jiti jagti murti ho devta tak tumhare saral or madhur swabhav ki prashansa kerte h , ese m tumhara yu krodh kerna kya sahi h.
Wo bhi uske liye jo ab is duniya m bhi ni h , ni gudiya , gudiya mat bhulo shree ram ne kya kaha tha divangat bhale hi aapka apne jeevan kal m koi bhi raha ho ya kesa bhi ho marnoprant wo saman k layak hi hota hai h chahe wo shatru ho ya mitra .
Karan k samjhane or prem bhare sparsh se jyoti shant to ho gayi per usne kabristan m karan k sath jane ko mana ker diya
Karan kuch dur jaker bike rokta h kyunki samne hi kabristan tha.
Karan ek baar jyoti se ek baar fir chalne ko kahata h per jyoti saf saf mukar jati h ,jisse karan hatash ho chal pada kabristan k pas ki dukan se Zoya k favorite yellow rose leker chal pada under or pahunch gaya kabar ki or.
Jaha jakee uski ankhe nam ho gayi or uske samne bhutkal k madhur pal samne aagayi ho thi ,Jisse wo bhavuk ho gaya.
Pahale to karan ne kaya ki kabar ki safai ki pas m rakhi jhadu se or phir ghutno p bal uski shanti ki prathna kerte hue karan bola
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Karan :- janta hu zoya tum naraj to bahut hogi apne prince se , or hona bhi chahiye us din vada kerke gaya tha ki jald firse milne aaunga per fir bhi itne dino baad aaya
(Karan yaha us din ki baat ker raha tha , jab use yaha use aradhya mile the apne , per jesa ki aapko bataya yaha ab kuch changes kiye gaye h.)
Per tumne dekha n mane apna vada nibhaya h , m is baar bilkul ni ro raha , isliye ab tumhari ye narajgi ni chalegi ha .
Ulta m tumse naraj hu , pata h kyu , (nam ankho se ) kyu ki tum mujhe chod k to gayo sath m esi kasam bhi de gayi ,jis kaaran hum timo ka pavitra Prem k rishe k bich nafrat ki diwar khadi ker di .
Aakhir tumnr esa kyu kiya zoya , kyu , dekha aaj tumhari usi kasam k kaaran hi tumhari sabse achi saheli tumse is kadar nafrat ker bethi h ki yaha tak aayi or fir bhi tumse milne ni aayi
Per usme uski bhi kya galti wo bechari to janti bhi ni ki jisse wo nafrat ker bethi h anjane m aaj usike kaaran hi Humara ye rishta or hum salamat h , or tumhari Kasam or jyoti ko khone k dar k kaaran m na chahte hue bhi kuch kah ni pata.
(Fir kuch der mand mand rone k baad karan khud ko sambhalte hue bola.)
Kher tum bhi kya soch rahi hogi ki ek to tumhara ye dost itne time baad to aaya or apna hi dukhda leke beth gaya.
Or chinta mat kerna meri darling tumhara prince kabbi tumse naraj ni ho sakta or ek waqt esa. Bi. Aayega jab gudiya ko bhi tumhari qurbani ka ahasas hoga or wo bhi apni jhute gusse ko bhula tumse milne aaya karegi .
Or ishwer se meri yahi prathma h meri dost k tum jaha bhi ho khush raho .

Yu hi kuch der yu hi zoya ki kabr se bAte kerne k baad karan waha se bahar aata h.

Jyoti :- mil aaye ho to chale .

Karan :- ha chalo .

Ye bol karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or .

Ghar jake karan or jyoti thodi der aaram kerte h tabhi karan k man m baba ki aawaz gunjti h.

Baba :- putra karn kal tum or putri jyoti mujhse aaker milna , ek vishesh karya h tumhare liye.

Karan :- jo aagya baba.

Karan fir jata h apni sakhi k room k pas.

Uska darwaja to khula tha , per fir bhi karan darwaje ko knock kerte hue .

Karan :- kya hum ander aasakte h senapati mahodaya.

Kaya haste hue :- kya sakha aap bhi sakha aapko bhi ab apni sakhi k room m aane k liye permission leni padegi kya.

Karan ander aate hi kaya jo bed p bethi hui ki god m sir rakh bola.

Karan :- sakhi ye baat sahi h ki hum dost h per tum ek ladki ho tumhari bhi kuch privacy ni.

Kaya :- ji ni dosto k bich koi private chij ni hoti , vese janab aaj humari yaad kese agayi.

Karan :- are bas bas yaar ab tum mat shuru ho jana yaar vese hi jyoti is kaaran udaas h ab tum mat muh mat fula lena.

Kaya :- jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi h naa karan , per hum dono samjhte h ki badi family m thoda to adjustment kerna padta h , per aap fir bhi thoda thoda try keroge to manage ho jayega na.

Karan :- sahi m kaya tum jesi saheli ko pakee m fir se apne ko bhagyashali samjhne laga hu.

Kaya :- fir se matlab ?

Karan ko ahasaas hua ki anjane m usne zoya ki baat ched di , jo wo Kaya ko ni batana chahta tha kyunki isse kaya bhi dukhi hoti or vo bhi , vo apne past ko bhula dena chahta tha.

Per na jane kyu vo jab bhi kaya k sath samay bitata to esa pratit hota ki jese wo apne past m pahunch gaya or apni zoya k paas , or uske sath firse u hi pyar or masti bhare pal bita raha ho , jaha wahi ruthna Manana , ek dusre se hasi majak , tang khichayi wagerah sab .

Shayad esa isliye hota tha karan ki najar m kyunki zoya k baad kaya hi uski zindagi me ek saheli ki tarah aayi thi , jo thi to uski rishte m cousin , per unka dil ka rishta dosti ka tha , jinme swarth or havas jesi kisi burayi ka namonishan na tha , tha to bas masumiyat bhara prem.

Kya sach m esa hi tha ya kuch or kaaran tha iska to aage hi pata chalega.

Karan apne khayalo se bahar aate hue :- kuch ni , vese tumhe pata h aaj friendship day h or m tumhare liye froendship band k sath or sath m gift bhi laya hu

Kaya :- wah yaar what a coincidence m bhi.

Karan :- kya tum bhi.

Kaya :- or ni to kya , mera bhi to apne sakha k sath pahala friendship day h to m ni la sakti kya.

Karan apne jeb se ek choti si dabi nikal kaya ko hath aage bhadane ko bolta h.

Kaya hath aage bhadati h to karan hath pe ek Bahut hi sunder silver ka breslet pahanate hue.

Bola

Karan :- happy friendship day my beautiful sakhi .

Ye bol karan kaya k gal chum leta h jisse kaya khush ho jati h or sath m karan ek necklace bhi gift deta h white gold ka jise dekh Kaya boli

Kaya :- ni ni karan m ye ni le sakti , ye bahut expensive h or ye breclet ki bhi kya jarurat thi itne mahange ki

Karan kaya se :- hat pagal gift ki kabhi value dekhi jati h kya , m kich ni sunne wala tumhe ye lena ho hoga tumhe meri kasam .

Kaya :- per sakha,

Karan :- are mane kaha na , chalo ab ye faltu baate chodo vese bhi ye dusra necklace tumhari saheli jyoti ki or se use choti ma k sath koi kaam se jana pada isliye mane hi dediya .

Wo sab chodo mujhe mera gift do.

Ab kaya ki halat kharab hone lagi , wo sochne lagi ki kaha karan ne use itne mahange band or gift diya or kaha uska ek sadharan sa band or chota sa gift, karan uske baare m kya sochega.

Per karan ne shayad uske man ki baat jan li thi , to usne kaya k bagal m rakhe gift ko utha ker khud hi khol liya.

Kaya to sharmindagi ss sir jhukaye niche karan k reaction ka intezar ker rahi thi , per jab uske kano m karan ki aawaz padi to chok k wo samne dekhti h.

Karan :- wow sakhi its so beautiful, ye mere life ka ab Tak ka best gift h kyunki ye tumne jo Diya h sakhi.

Darasla gift me ek locket tha heart-shaped ka jis per likha tha ki for my best friend my life likha tha , per wo ek sadharan sa tha koi sone chandi ka ni

Kaya :- kya sach m aapko pasand aaya sakha mujhe to laga tha ki ...

Karan bich me :- ki m gift ki value dekh ker ise pasand ni karunga , pagli tumne abhi tak apne sakha ko ni jana , pagli mere liye peso ka koi mahatv ni , balki mahatv rakhta h to wo prem jo is locket roopi gift k roop m mujhe aaaj jo prapt hua h wahi mere liye sabse important h.

Kaya ye sun apni soch p pachtati h or rote hue karan se mafi mangti h jise karan apne sine se shant kerata h or apna hath aage bhadata h or jispe kaya bhi friendship band bandhti h.

Tab karan ko ek idea aata h or wo kaya k locket ko hath m laker us heart sape wale locket k do part ker do locket bana deta h.

Or ek locket khud pahanta h dusra kaya ko pahanate hue bola.

Karan :- aaj se ye locket humare dosti ka wo prateek hoga , jo hum dono k sath humesha rahega.

Kaya ye sun khushi se gale lag jati h karan k or pure chahre ko chumne lagti h or dono ki ankhe ek shan takra jati h or kab dono k hoth mil jate h dono ko pata hi ni chalta.



Dono pationate kiss kerne lage , jisme keval prem tha , kabhi karan kaya k uper k hotho ko chumta to kabhi niche k , kabhi kaya karan k muh m jibh dalti jise karan chusta to kabhi kaya esa kerti or sath sath dono ek dusre k badan ko sahalate hue bed per let gaye




or jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagi to dono alag hue or kaya sharma k karan ki baho m muh chupa leti h or karan uss baho m leke wahi uske sath bed p late jata h

Tabhi achanak se bijli ki garjana k sath bahar barish shuru ho jati h jise dekh sari bahane waha aapahunchi or karan ko sath m unke chal k barish m nahane ko bolti h pahale to karan mana kerta h or unhe bhi rokta h per sabki jid k aage usko manna pada or wo bhi sath m chat pe chal diya jaha sab khub khelte h barish m tab tak jyoti bhi aagayi thi .

Karan kuch der baad jhule pe beth jata h jo chat k bichobich laga hua tha bada sa or apni bahano ko aanand lete hue dekhta h.

Tabhi thak ker komal bhi vaha aajati h or bolti h .

Komal :- bhaiya kya m yaha aapke sath beth sakti hu.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas use khich k apni god m bitha ker uske gal khichte hue bolta h.

Karam :- pagli tu to jaan h apne bhaiya ki , tujhe bhala puchne ki jarurat h kya.

Komal :- oouch bhai esa mat kiya kero .

Karan dusra gaal khichte hue :- m to karunga .

Komal :- acha ye baat , ruko m batati hu aapko ye bol wo karan k gudgudi kerne lagi , jispe karan ki hasi nikalne lagi.

Karan kuch der baad :- acha ye bata komal tera man to lag raha h na yaha koi pareshani to ni na.

Komal :- ni bhaiya esa kuch ni h , domo tayiji mera khub khayal rakhti h mumma k jese or aapke hote esa ho sakta h , bas sare din ghar p rahakar bore ho jati hu .

Karan ::- acha meri choti gudiya bore ho jati h koi ni jald hi jab sab bade office k kaam se free ho jayenge to sab chalenge.

Komal :- itna intezar kyu kerna bhai , aapke pas powers h na to chaliye kahi ghumke aate h.

Komal ne thoda tez bol di ye baat , jisse karan hadbadda gaya or komal ko shant kiya wo to acha hua barish ki aawaz m kisi ne suna ni .

Komal udass ho ker '- sorry bhaiya.

Karan :- koi baat ni mera bacha bas aage se thoda dhyan rakhna , wese bahut din ho gaye yaar chachi se baat ni ki chalo unko call kerte h.

Apni maa ka naam sun kee komal khush ho jati h or karan turant nidhi ko video call kerta h jisse Nidhi 2 ring m utha leti h.

Karan :- namaste my beautiful chachi kesi ho aap.

Nidhi :- khush raho beta , aakhir mere bete ko Chachi ki yaad aahi gayi .

Karan :- ni ni chachi esi baat ni h wo to.

Nidhi :- na beta n koi bahana ni chalega , teri to m udher aake hi khabar lungi sheetan , or kesa h mere laal

Karan :- bas ek dam mast chachi , per aapki bahut yaad aati h , aap jaldi se aajao na.

Nidhi :- mera to khud tere bina kaha ji lagta h mere laal , bas tere chachu or mamu ka jese hi kam pura hua ni hum turant aajayenge.

Karan :- ji chachi , lo komal se baat kijiye.

Phir karan komal ko phone dedeta h , komal bhi apni maa se baat ker bahut khush hoti h or tabhi sari bahane bhi waha ikhatha ho nidhi se baato m lag jati h.

To karan ek side chala jata h or aasman ko niharne lagta jh per kahi n kahi use kuch bahut bure hone ka ahsas ho raha tha , jese koi sankat aane wala ho uske jivan m or u ye mosam usi ka ishara ho

Saal k is waqt barish aam baat thi per fir bhi najane kyu karan ko esa anubhav ho raha tha.

Fir kuch der baad wo apne chacha se baat ker phone rakhta h , itne m choti ma bhi aajati h or bolti h

Choti maa :- chalo bacho ab niche chalo bahut bhig liye, ab jyada der yaha rahe to bimar pad jaoge

Kavya ki baat maN sabhi niche chal dete h

Kavya karan se :- lalla naina kaha h itni der ho gayi mujhe to chinta ho rahi h.

Sonam or komal jo kal k hue baat se gussa the sonam se vo bol padi.

Sonam :- chodiye na maa , aap kyu us nakchadi ki chinta kerti ho , kitna ganda vyavhar kiya tha aapse or bhai or didi p to kal hath bhi uthaya ,

Karan datte hue :- sonuu ,

Karan ki daat se sonam sir jhuka leti h to kavya use sine se laga k boli.

Kavya :- ni beta esa ni bolte , wo abhi choti h uper se usne itni si umer m kya kya ni jhela , to hum sab me adjust hone or sabko samjhne m time to lagega hi na , dhire dhire sab thik ho jayega.

Kash naina yaha hoti to kavya k madhur vyavahar ko dekh ker use apni bhul ka shayad ahasas ho jata .

Karan :- choti maa ap chinta mat kijiye naina aaj rohan or riya di k yaha rukne wali h meri baat ho gayi thi mosi ee.

Karan yaha jhut bolta h kyunki wo janta tha ki Naina jarur apne kisi mission p hi hogi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Himalaya.

Yaha bhi bhayank tufan sa mosam ho raha tha , charo or bijli kadak rahi thi , musladhar barish ho rahi thi, wahi usi tufan k bich choti p khadi akshara narayan se var mang rahi thi

Narayan :- ek baar punah vichar ker lo putri akshara , tumne jo abbi kaha wahi var tumhe chahiye .

Akshara :- ha karuna nidhan mujhe yahi var chahiye kripya mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ye sun soch m pad gaye , tab akshara boli .

Akshara '- kis soch m pad gaye prabhu mane amratv jesa koi esa var to ni manga jism aapko itna sochna pade ya mera itna tap prayapt ni , yadi esa h to m or bhi kathor tap k liye saj hu.

Narayan :- ni putri, tumhe or kisi tap ki avshyakta ni itna prayapt h , isliye m shrishti palak vishnu tumhe tumhara icchit vardan pradan kerta hu .

Parantu smaran rahe putri is vardan ka kabhi durpyog mat karna ni to ye var kahi tumhare liye abhishap ban jayega , ise tum meri tumhare prati chinta samjho ya chetavani.

Akshara :- jo aagya Prabhu, ab ap mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ashirvad mudra me :- tathastu.

Ye bol narayan vaha se anterdhyan ho gaye or unke jate hi akshara shetani hasi haste hue.

Akshara :- sharap to avshya banega aapka vardaan prabhu parantu mere liye ni apitu us kamini or uske parivar k liye.

Hahahahaa

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update no :- 211
Karan k ankho se nind koso dur thi , use rah rah ker apni purani yaade k kaaran, uski ankho se nirantar aansu bahte rahe kafi time , lekin usne kuch samay baad khud per kabu pa liya.

Karan man me khud se hi :- are ye m kya ker raha hu , bhale hi wo past kitna dukhdayi h mera , per jo bhi h mere hi kermo ka phal h jise mujhe bhogna hi hoga.

Lekin m apne karmo ka fal apni guriya ko ni bhogne dunga , meri gudiya ne pahale hi bahut dard or taklif jheli h past me , ab or m usko dukhi ni hone dunga .

Or uske liye chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe khud ko kabu m rakhna hoga , kyunki m ese hi dukhi raha to gudiya ko mujh pe shak ho jayega or ager usne mujhpe jara sa bhi force kiya to m usse humare us gujre hue dukhdayi ateet chupa ni paunga , jo wo bhul chuki h us hadse k baad.

Kyuki us past k yaad aane se meri gudiya ko kasht hi pahuchega or ho sakkta h ki wo mujhse dur..

(Nam ankho se ) ni ni m esa ni hone dunga ,chahe bhale hi is dukh k athah agni m mujhe puri jindgi jalna pade , per m us dukh ki ek anch bhi apni gudiya tak ni pahunchne dunga.

Ye sochte hue karan ne apne ansu puche or khud ko majbut rakhne ka irada ker apne Aradhya se uske liye shakti ki prathna kerta h or fir apni gudiya yani jyoti ki or dekh ek baar muskura ker uske gaal chum leta h , jisse jyoti k nind m hi uske chahre p muskaan aajati h or wo karan se or kaske chipak jati h.

Karan bhi jyoti ki muskan dekh apna dard ek baar bhul jata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga, nind ki wadio m kho jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Shani lok

Shani dev aaj apne singhasan pe ni bethe the , balki wo apne singhasan k piche lage lohe ka bade se taraju ko nihar rahe the , jo pratik tha nayay k devta Shani k nyay ka.

Shani dev taraju ko dekhte hue :- putra karn jis prakar humare is taraju k dono palde ek hi saman ek hi sthan p sthir h , vese hi is sansar m sthith humare dawara rachit nayay chakra k liye sab ek saman h chahe dev ho ya asur manushya ho ya gandarbh.

Sadharan manushy ho ya swayam mera hi ansh swayam dandnayak hi kyu na ho , humara nyaya chakra sab k liye ek saman h , isliye chahe bhutkaal m jo bhi karm , jo bhi bhule tumse hui , uska fal to humara nyay chakra tumhe avashy denga , tumhare hi kiye gaye bhutkaal k karmo ka fal ab tumhare samksh tumhari ab tak ki sabse durgam or kashtdayi pariksha k roop m samaksh aayegi putra , jisme hum chahker bhi tumhari sahayta ni ker payenge , kyunki is samay tumhare Pita ni , balki.

(Apne dand ko dharam kerte hue) is sansaar ka Karmfal data hoga.

Tabhi mata chaya waha aate huye boli.

Mata dukhi swar me:- mana putra ki putra karn ne jo karm kiye uska hi fal h , parantu usne jo kiya wo uski majburi thi putra , uske sivay uske pas or koi marg ni tha putra , ye baat tum bhi jante ho putra , fir uske sath itni kathorta kyu putra.

Shani :- janta hu mata , parantu m vivash hu , guru dev ne mujhe jis pad p asin kiya h , m uski Garima or maryada ko putra moh k vashibhoot ho ni bhang ker sakta , is pad k liye chahe koi bhi ho dev ho ya asur , manushya ho ya ishwer , chahe swayam m Karmfal data hu ya uska ansh sab ek saman h , jis kaarsn m na chahte hue bhi karan ki koi sahayta ni ker sakta.

Or itna hi ni mata is nyay chakra se m bhi kaha achuta hu, dekhiye na mata m bhi is Karmfal k chakra m lipt ho chuks hu , jitni taklif mere putra ko apne bhutkaal k karmo k kaaran ho rahi or aage hone wali h , utni hi mujhe bhi hogi , kyu ki uske karmo ka fal mujhe yani Karmfal data ko hi pradan kerna h , jisme mujhe hi apar kasht prapt hona h , or is kasht ka kaaran bhi yahi h ki bhavishya m karan k liye gaye nirnay m mera bhi hath tha or sahmati bhi , prishthitio k Anukul hone k kaaran , isi kaaran mujhe apne hi putra ko karmo ka fal pradan kerte hue kasht dene ka dand prapt ho raha h mata.

Ye bolte hue man se dudrid Shani k anko m bhi ek shan nir aagaye, lekin unhone apne aap ko agle hi shan sambhal liya or apne ashru puchte hue waha se chale jate h

Mata chaya hath jod prathna kerte hue :- hey narayan , hey mahadev ye kesi lila h aapki prabhu , mere dono hi putra us kasth ko jhel rahe h , un karmo ka fal bhog rahe h jinme unka koi swarth na tha , tha to keval sansar k kalyan ki fikar , fir unke sath esa sab kyu mahadev.

Hey mahadev aapki is bhaktn ko ap per pura bharosa h aap jo bhi karenge uchit karenge , parantu sath m hi hey prabhu ek binti h aapse ki prabhu mera putra karan jitna apne kartvya k prati dudrid h utna hi najuk hriday h uska , kripya use shakti dena prabhu , use tutne mat dena bhGwan

Ye sab sochte hue mata apne kash m jati h , lekin tabhi unke man me ek baat aayi.

Mata :- mana ki jo bhi ho raha h wo karan k bhutkal k kaaran ho raha , prantu prashn ye h ki ye sab abhi hi kyu , itne varsh bit chuke us ghatna ko , aaj tak to kabhi esa na hua , itna bhay itni asuraksha k bhav putra karan jese veer k hriday m yu achanak aana koi sadharan baat to bilkul ni , avashy hi kisi ka bahut bada shadyantra h k, kisi ka nakaratmak prabhav ne hi karan k man m bhay ka itna bhayankar prabhav dala h per esi konsi shakti h jo dandnayak ko prabhavit ker sakti h

Kuch sochne k baad ek naam mata chaya k mastishk m gunja.

Mata chaya :- ha is sansaar m ek hi nakaratmak shakti h jo putra karan ko prabavit ker sakti h.

(Chintit or gambhirta bhare swar me ek naam lete hue ) Rahu.

Aaiye jab rahu ka nam aahi gaya h to ek najar uspe bhi dal li jaye.

Rahu jo Shani or devi chaya pe najar rakhte hue unke vartalp sun raha tha , jab usne devi chaya k mukh se apna naam suna to ek bhayankar hasi haste hue bola.

Rahu :- bilkul sahi pahachana aapne devi chaya , or kon ho sakta h uske alawa jiska dusra naam hi bhay h , jiska bhay se tino loko k jiv , yaha tak dev bhi thar thar kampte h , us jagat ko apne bhay rupi astra se prabhavit kerne wale , singhika putra rahu k alawa or kon us dandnayak ki ye halat ker sakta h.

Shani or devo us din to bhale hi tumne mahadev ki sahayta se mujhse karan ki raksha ker samraat ki hatya kerwa di ho or use apni vijay or meri prajay samjh rahe ho , parantu satya to ye h ki rahu humesha tum devo se ek kadam aage rahata h.

Ketu :- kya Bharata karan ki ye halat aapne ki h parantu kese or kab


Rahu :- bharata ketu , jab meri chodi hui shakti gagan me akasmat pragat hue om ne apne ander samahit ker li thi , jab hi m samjh gaya tha ki mahadev kisi bhi shan jagrit hone wale h , tabhi mane badi hi chalaki se devo ki najro se chupate hue apni bhaykarini sidhi ka upyog Bandi banne se pahale hi us karan pe ker dala tha or is prakar ab mahadev or na hi wo Shani chahker bhi humara kuch ni bigad sakte kyunki mane esa unki antim chetavni se pahale hi ker dala tha.

Ye bol rahu haste hue bola.

Rahu :- ab dekhna ketu , kese mere dwara rachit bhay or pida k Chakravyuh us karan ko tod k rakh dega bhitar se bhi or uske or jyoti k rishte ko bhi.

Ketu :- parantu rahu kya hum is baar Safal ho payenge, kyunki hum ye prayas pahale bhi ker chuke h , lekim asafal rahe to tumhe esa kyu lagta h ki is baar hum safal honge.

Rahu :- vo isliye ketu , kyu ki is baar hum apni bhul sudharane wale h , humne har bar ek hi bhul ki h ki humne humesha ek tarfa or sharikrik aghat kerne ka prayas kiya h us dandnayak pe , jo humesha vifal rahe kyunki vo sharirik roop se bahut hi shaktishali h or uske sathi humesha uske kavach k roop m rahe h.

Parantu esa is baar na hoga , is baar aghat ek tarfa or sharikrik ni balki ek mansik aghato ka esa Chakravyuh hoga , jo karan k astitv ko ander se ek dam nasht ker denge or esa kerne wale hum ni , honge uske apne , jisse wo sabse jyada prem kerta h vahi uski barbadi ka kaaran banegi.

Ketu :- tumhara arth h ki uski.

Rahu :- ha ketu ha uski bahane , jinhe sabse badi shakti manta aya h na wo rakshak ab rahu k prabhav se dekhna kese vo hi uska kaal banegi.

Ye bol rahu hasne laga or sath m ketu bhi.

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Agli subah karan jaldi uth jata h or naha dhoke fresh ho ker jyoti ko uthata h.

Jyoti ankh khol karan ki gardan m bahe dal :- good morning bhaiyu.

Karan jyoti k gal chum:- good morning meri gudiya.

Jyoti bhi vese hi karan k gal chumte , halke se uske hotho ko bhi chum leti.

Karan :- haye , sahi maine m to ab hui morning good to.

Karan ki ye baat sun jyoti shamaht se apna muh chupa leti h , jyoti ki is ada pe to karan fida ho gaya.

Karan :- haye m marjawan teri is ada pe Kudiye.

Karan k muh se esi baat sun jyoti khilkhila k hasti h or bolti h .

Jyoti :- bhai aap bethiye m nahake aati hu.

Karan ankh marte hue :- kaho to m bhi tumhe join keru.

Jyoti Sharma k jhuta gusa dikhate hue thappad ka ishara kerte hue :- chup badmaash.

Ye bol hasti hui wo bathroom m chali gayi , subah subah ki romantic nok jhok ne karan ka mood acha ker diya or wo raat valo baato ko bhul chuka tha.

Fir Karan apni dono Mao k pas jaker unhe good morning wish kerta h

Kavya gal p kiss kerte hue :- good morning mera bacha

Asha bhi vesa hi kerti h.

Karan:- choti ma aap sab ready ho to hum nikalne ki teyari kare.

Asha karan se :- beta hume aaj aj yahi rukna hoga.

Karan :- wo kyu mummy

Tab asha batati h ki master ji ki icha thi ki wo aaj aj or ruke or naina ne bhi ye hi zid ki thi .

Asha :- beta tumko koi problem to ni h na.

Karan :- ni maa mujhe isme kesi problem hogi , naina meri choti or pyari bahan h uski jid m puri ni karega to or kon karega.

Asha pyaar se karan ko puchkarte hue :- mera pyara bacha.

Karan :- mummy , choti maa m abhi Mandir ja raha hu koi saman lana ho to bata dijiye.

Garima :- ni lala , tum aaram se jao or ghum bhi aao thoda.

Karan :- ji choti ma, love u

Ye bol wo apni dono ma k gal p kiss kerke nikal pada ghar se bahar.

Tavbi piche se Radha use pukarte hue aati h.


Radha :- good morning bhaiya.

Karan Radha k gal sahalate hue :- good morning my barbie doll.

Radha pyaar se humesha ki tarah apnii adar anusar:- bhai nind ache se aayi na raat ko, vese aap abhi kaha ja rahe ho.

Karan :- kuch ni choti bas mandir tak ja raha tha , tum chalogi mere sath

Radha :- ha ha kyu ni bhaiya , bahut din ho gaye aapke sath walk p gaye hue.

Fir yu hi dono bhai bahan yu hi baate kerte hue , mandir Jate h or jab prathna kerke wo lot rahe the ki tabhi unhone dekha ki komal sonam or shivani , or diya ganv k chopal me baki bacho k sath khel rahi h to Radha bhi bhag k unko join ker leti h or karan vahi pas m beth apni bahano ko khelta dekhne laga.

Tabhi karan apne side m dekta h ki ek bacha jiske harmonica tha wo use bajane ki koshis ker raha tha , jise dekh karan puchta.

Karan :- are chote kya ker rahe ho tum.

Bacha :- bhaiya m ye mouth organ bajane ki koshis ker raha hu , per dekho na mujhse ye thik se baj hi ni raha.

Karan :- acha lao to , aao m tumhe sikhata hu ye kese bajate h.

Ye bol karan us bache se wo mouth organ leke use samjhate hue ek dhun bajane lagta h

Karan sholey ki wahi dhun bajake sunata h jo film m amitab bachan bajata tha , karan k mouth organ ki dhun sun sare bache or uski bahane khelna chod uski surili dhun se mantrmugdh ho uske pas aajati h or bina use disturb kiye hue use sunne lagi

Kuch der baad jab karan ruka to sab bache or uski bahane jordar taliya bajake karan ki tarife kerne lage.

Or sab ek sath tez tez aawaz me bolne lage.

Sonu :- wow bhai aap to sach m multi-talented ho , kitna acha bajaya aapne ye organ .

Komal :- sonu di bilkul sahi bol rahi h bhai , aapne bahut hi pyaari dhun bajayi , aapne kaha se sikha ye bajana.

Komal ka ye sawal sun karan ki muskan gayab ho gayi or fir se uski aankho k samne uski purani yaade aane lagi.

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Karan :- na baba na ye meri bas ki baat ni h , ye tere hi hatho m acha lagta h or tere dwara bajaye gaye sur.

Samne wala shaqs :- yaar mote tu ek tto tu ghabrata bahut h try to ker k dekh na , bahut easy h.


Jyoti :- ha bhai ...... Ne sahi kaha ek baar try to kero

Karan hathiyar girate hue :- matlab meri ni suni jane wali.

Dono ek sath :- bilkul bhi ni.

Karan :- chalo jab tumne college m sabke samne ijjat ka faluda banane ka soch hi liya h to chalo fir .


Wo shaqs karan ko samjhate hue :- dekho isko ese pakadte h or fir ese muh pe rakhte h , ab m kerke dikati hu tumhe or baad m tum bhi vesa hi kerna samjhe.

Ye bol wo shaqs ne ek dhun bajana shuru kiya jisko karan bade hi dhyan sw dekh raha tha .

Or fir baad m rokte hue , dekha kitna easy to h , ab chalo tumhari bari.

Karan ko pahale to thodi ghabrahat ho rahi thi , kyunki harmonica ki dhun sun ker kafi students jama ho chuke the waha , ab itne sabke samne bajane m usko thodi jhijak ho rahi thi.

Tabhi jyoti or wo shaqs :- common karan , bhai , let's do it.

Tab jyoti or us shaqs ki hosla awzai se karan me thodi himmat aayi or usne bajana shuru kiya.

Pahale to use thodi mushkil hui , lekin baad m usne itna acha bajaya ki sab students ne uski tarif ki .

..... :- wah mote tune to kamal ker diya , ek hi baar m itna acha bajaya, mujhse bhi acha , that's like my boy

Karan :- h na chalo ager esa h to kal se coaching lene aajana fir ghar or fees hum wahi discuss ker lenge

...... :- (haste hue ) pagal kahika.

Ye bol wo teno has pade.

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Karan apni yaado m hi khoya hua tha ki tabhi diya ki aawaz se wo hosh m aaya ,

Diya :- bhai kaha kho gaye , please ek baar firse organ bajaiye na.

Karan ye sun ek fiki muskan k sath organ firse uthata h or apne us atit ko yaad kerte hue karan fir ek baar wahi dhun bajata h jo usne us din bajayi thi.

Tere Jaane Ka Gham,
Aur Naa Aane Ka Gham,
Phir Zamaane Ka Gham,
Kya Karein?

Raah Dekhe Nazar,
Raat Bhar Jaag Kar,
Par Teri Toh Khabar Na Mile,

Bahut Aayi Gayi Yaadein,
Magar Iss Baar Tum Hi Aana,
Iraade Phir Se Jaane Ke Nahi Laana,
Tum Hi Aana,

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Meri Dehleez Se Hokar,
Baharein Jab Guzarti Hain,
Yahan Kya Dhoop Kya Saavan,
Hawayein Bhi Barasti Hain,

Humein Poocho Kya Hota Hai,
Bina Dil Ke Jiye Jaana,

Bohat Ayi Gayi Yaadein,
Magar Is Baar Tum Hi Aana.

Karan us organ ko bajate hue apni un yaado m mano kho sa hi gaya tha , or sath m uski bahano samet baki sab bache us dhun m

Jab karan ne dhun bajana band ker samne dekha to usne paya ki samne jyoti khadi h , jise dekhte hi uske chahre p muskan aajati h , per agle hi pal wahi dar or chinta ki rekhaye , lekin is bar karan ne apne nishchay k anusar jald hi apne bhav bas normal kerte hue bole.

Karan :- are gudiya tu khadi kyu h aa beth na mere pas , vese tum kab aayi.

Jyoti :- jab aap itni hi shiddat or dhayanmagn ho itni pyaari dhun bsja.rahe the , to bolke disturb kerna mujhe sahi na laga bhai.

Ye bol jyoti karan ko pyari muskan deti h , or karan bhi

Jyoti :- vese bhai aapne ye organ bajana kab sikha, mujhe to esa yaad hi hi aaraha .

Karan abhi aage kuch bolta usse pahale hi tabhi sabke kano m ek kisi ladki ki chikh suni

Karan ne us or dekha to paya ki ek oraat unki or bhagke aarahi h, or wo jaker karan se vinti kerne lagi.

Orat :- please mujhe bacha lo , kuch gunde mere piche pade h , wo mujhe mere ganv se jabardasti utha k kahi leke jarahe h , yaha unki gadi band pad gayi to m kese n kese bach k yaha tak pahunchi hu , please mujhe bacha lo , mujhe kahi chupa do

Karan :- dekhiye aap pahale shant ho jaiye , aapko kuch ni hoga , ab aap surakshit h, Radha jara inke liye pani to lao.

Tab Radha dod k pas k pyau se unke liye pani lake pilati h , or abhi us ladki ne pura pani piya bhi ni tha ki wo gunde jo us ladki k piche pade the , wo waha pahunch gaye.

G1 :- oh to yaha h tu , badi hi aag h na tujme , teri aag to hum jaldi hi nikalenge , chal ab chupchap

Ye bol wo gunda dusre aadmi ko us orat ko pakadne ko kahata , lekin isse pahale wo gunda us ladki tak pahuchta tabhi ek jordar mukka uske muh p pada or wo mukka kisi ne ni karan ne hi mara tha, jiske kaaran wo gunda dhul chatne laga.

Karan :- kyu re tumhare baap ka raz h kya jo inhe kahi bhi jabardasti apne sath lejaoge.

G1:- bache humare raste se hat ja or jake kahi or khel, tu janta ni ki hum kon ...

Karan :- are band kero yar apna vahi purama ghisa pita dialogue , ki m janta ni hu tum kon ho or kan kholke sun lo na hi mujhe koi interest h janne ka , isliye ager bhalayi chahte ho to chupchap chale jao yaha se , ni to kahi jane k layak ni bachoge

G1 haste hue :- bahut charbi chadi h tujhme bache , ruk abhi sab utarte h ,

ye bol G1 apne ek admi ko ishara kerta h or wo karan ki or bhagta h , or jese hi ek ghusa marne ko hota h to karan bich m hi uska hath rok usko buri tarah marod ek jordar laat uske sine p marta h , jisse wo kuch dur jake girta h or fir baki bhi gunde uski taraf aaker uspe humla kerte h G1 ko chod ker , lekin karan jald hi unhe bhi dhul.chata deta h.

Karan G1 se :- ab ager akal thikane ho gayi ho to chupchap apne sathiyo ko leker yaha se 9 do 11 ho jao, ni to aage tum khud jimmedar hoge

Ye bol karan jese hi piche mudne ko hua to uske kano m G1 ki aawaz padi.

G1 :- itni bhi kya jaldi h bache , khel to abhi shuru hua h

Karan jab wapas mudke dekhta h to thoda chok jata h , kyunki jin gudo ko usne abhi dhoya tha , unke ghav apne aap bharne lage or wo agle hi pal wapas yu khade ho gaye jese unko kuch hua hi na ho or unki ankho ki putliyan gayab ho gayi , jinhe dekh karan ki bahane buri tarah dar gayi , jyoti or diyu ko chod k.

Karan bhi samjh gaya ki samne jo h wo koi mamuli insan ni h , usne turant chutki bajayi , jisse komal Radha samet sabhi bache jaha thw wahi tham gaye.

G1 :- oh to tu bhi hum jesa hi h fir to bahut maja aane wala h khel me .

Karan apni talvaar ka avahan kerte hue :- maja ni murkho samay h tumhari saja ka.


G1 :- kon kisko saja deta h wo waqt hi batayega.

Ye bol G1 ne kuch mantra padha jiske sath hi waha kuch der pahale kuch hi gunde the, ab waha puri ek sena khadi thi.

Sena ko dekh jyoti or diya ne bhi apne hathyaar nikal liye or fir ganv ka wo chopal ek ranbhumi m tabdil ho gaya.

Wo to Karan ne apni shaktio se kuch logo ko chod sabko freez ker diya tha , verma itna khofnak manjar dekh to ganv valo ko heart atack aajata.

Per ye kya karan or uske sathiyo ka koi bhi war un rashaymayi darindo p koi asar hi ni ker raha tha .

Diya ek teer se 2 darindo k sir uda deti h , lekin unke sir wapas se jud jate h tab pareshan ho diya boli:- bhai ye sab kya ho raha h , humara koi bhi vaar ka asar kyu ni ho raha in pe.

Jyoti apni talvar se ek darinde ko bich se chirte hue :- diya ye in shetano ki koi maya h , jis kaaran esa ho raha h , inhe harana h to us maya ka tod dundna hoga hume.

Karan ne ek baat notice ki ki un sabke gale me ek jese locket the , tab karan ne jyoti or diya ko kuch soch ker un locket ko todne ka nirdesh diya.

Diya or jyoti ne vesa kiya bhi lekin uska koi asar hua ni ,

Tabhi jyoti ne dekha ki same wesa hi locket G1 k gale m hi tha jo lekin thoda bada tha.

Jyoti :- bhai uska locket dekhiye bakiyo se kitna bada h , shayad use hi nasht kerne se ye maya tute


Karan ko jyoti ki baat sahi lagi or usne apni talvaar ko dhanush m badal G1 k locket ko nishana bana teer choda or wo teer sidhe jake uske locket se laga jisse wo nasht ho gaya or uske nasht hote hi Maya bhi tut gayi or ab wo darinde marne lage.

G1 :- tune meri maya ko nasht to ker diya bache , lekin tu aaj fir bhi jinda ni bachne wala

Ye bol wo khud ladayi k.medan m aagaya or karan se yudh kerne laga, vo bhale hi karan jitns shaktishali na ho lekin fir bhi wo kafi achi takar de raha tha use.

Or wahi dusri or jyoti or diya devi kalrati ka Swaroop dharan ker dono hatho se unki sena ka nash ker rahi thi , apne ko harte dekh us shetan ne ek chal chali usne badi hi chalaki se usne apne ek sathi ko ishara kiya ki or G1 ka ishara pa uska sathi karan k pith piche uspe humla kerne hi wala hota ki achanak uske sharir m aag lag gayi or wo jalne laga.

Ye aag aasman se aayi thi , jise dekh G1 jese hi uper dekhta h to uski herani se ankh khuli ki khuli rah gayi , kyu ki ek bada sa kova k muh se wo prachand agni nikal rahi thi, jo uski sena ka vinash ker rahi thi.

Ji ha dosto sahi pahachana aapne ye or koi ni humare dandnayak ka vahan kam Aziz dost or uska sahayak rohan tha , jo karan ki sahayta k liye vaha pahunch gaya tha

G1 gusse :- se ni chodunga tujhe , ye bol G1 ne tezi se udte hue karan k pas aaker use mukka marna chaha lekin karan ne ek hath se uske mukke ko rok dusre hath se ek jordar mukka de mara jise wo hawa me uchal gaya or uper jane laga, karan tezi se uske uske pas pahuchta h or dono hatho or fir hava m ek jordar lat marta h use , jisse wo chikte hue or dur jane laga or fir se karan uske pas pahunch uske uper jake ek apne dono hath mila k ek jordar mukka uske pet m de mara , jiske kaaran wodhadam see niche aagira

Wahi dusri ie Jald hi dandnayak k sathiyo ne puri sena ka nash ker diya or G1 ko karan ne jese hi Bandi bana ker usse uske bare m jankari nikalni chahi.

Lekin usse pahale hi.

G1 :- m marna pasand karunga per gaddari ni .

Ye bol usne apne pas pade hi chaku se khud k sine m ghop ki jan leli.


G1 k marte hi waha ka mahol shant ho gaya or jyoti , diya or veer karan k pas aate h

Diya :- bhai ye sab kya tha kon the ye log , jaha tak mujhe knowledge h ye koi vampires ya koi asur to the ni.

Jyoti :- per inki shakti or darindgi dekh to ye confirm h ki ye log koi aam insan ni h.

Rohan :- wo chahe koi bhi ho jyoti , lekin aaj ki ladai k baad hum inlogo ki dushmano ki list m shamil ho chuke h or aage bhi hum per ye log humla jarur karenge.

Karan :- humpe humla kare ya na kare lekin hume esa kuch kerna hoga jisse wo log yaha k logo p wapas humla na kare humare chalte or isme mujhe tum dono ki help chahiye hogi rohan or jyoti.

Veer :- ye bhi koi puchne wali baat h dost aao.

Ye bol karan veer or jyoti ek circuler shape banate hue khade hote h or karan k ishare pe rohan or jyoti karan k sath ek mantra padh apna hath uper kerti h , jiske sath hi un tino k hatho se ek roshni nikal ek sath mil ek shakti ka roop leleti h , jise karan asman m chod deta h or uske sath hi us shakti ne us ganv k sath sath hi aaspas k sabhi ganvo k uper ek sheild ban gaya.

Jyoti :- bhai ye kam to ho gaya bhai , lekin ab in lasho ko thikane lagaiye or bahano ki bhi yaade mitani hongi , kyu ki wo buri tarah dar chuki thi un darindo ko dekh.


Karan hehe :- apko hukm sir ankho p madam .

Jyoti or baki sab bhi has pade or fir rohan or karan ne apni power se sabki lasho ko jalake thikane m laga diya.

Or wahi jyoti ne apni bahano ki yaade mitane lagi , lekin esa kerte hue use ek badi ajib si feeling aane lagi , use esa lagne laga ki jesa esa kuch uske sath bhi hua h.

Lekin jyoti ne agle hi pal us khayal jatakte hue , apna kaam kerne lagi.

Kuch der baad jab sara kam ho gaya to karan ne us ladki mind se koi uski kidnapping ki yaade mita ker use uske ghar pahuncha diya or esa hi usne uski family k sath bhi kiya .

Or fir sab kuch thik kerne k baad karan apni jagah aaker wapas oragan bajata h jiske sath hi wapas sab normal ho jata h or unki bahano ko bas itna hi dhyan rahata h ki karan unhe organ bajake dikha raha tha.

Tabhi kaya or riya bhi waha aajati h or bolne lagi.

Riya veer se :- are ye kya bhai mane tum ko in sab ko ghar bulane k liye bheja tha or tum bhi idher inke sath hi lag gaye.

Veer :- didu vo sab chodo na dekho karan kitna acha organ baja raha h .

Tab veer k kahane pe karan ek dhun unhe bhi baja k sunata h to jaha riya ka man khush ho jata h , wahi kaya to apne sakha ki dhun m kho si gayi.

Wo bahut hi pyari si muskaan k sath karan ko niharte hue wo dhun ka aanand lene lagi .

Jab karan ki najre kaya ko khud ko yu ghurta pati h to karan naughty way me use ankh marta h , jise kaya k gaal tamatar jese lal ho gaye sharmhat se karan ki is harkat se.

Fir jab karan ne apna organ banana band kiya to riya ne tarif kerte hue bola.

Riya :- ab aap logo ka music concert ho gaya ho to ab ghar chale khana ready kis kis or uske baad ice cream bhi h .

Ice cream ka nam sun ker sab khush ho gaye or Radha bhagti hui boli.

Radha :- jo sabse pahale ghar pahucha sabse jyada ice cream uski.

Ye bol wo bhagi or uske piche baki sab bhi or yu hi masti majak m race lagate hue wo log ghar pahunche.

Or fir sabne masti kerte hue ice cream ka aanand liya.

Jyoti Garima se :- bhua naina kaha h , wo ak subH se dikhayi na di.

TB Garima batati h ki wo abhi preety or veer k sath hi rukegi or kal subah tak aajayegi

Fir ese hi pura din nikal jata h or agle din aagaya tha vidai ka naina ka man to bahut dukhi tha brihaspur ko chod ker jane ka lekin ghar to jama hi tha.

Lekin usne jid kerke veer or preety ko bhi apne sath chalne ko kaha apne ganv or kuch din uske sath rahane ki hi jid ki jise preety or veer tal na paye.


Or fir master ji se vida leker naina or uska parivar chal pada apni manjil ki or jo tha naina ka ghar yani ki rampur


Ek on naina bahut khush thi apne ghar jane ki to sath m bahut tension m bhi thi ki wo kese apne baba ki sachai batayegi apni maa ko.

Karan jo naina ko tension m dekhta h to jake puchta h, lekin naina apne rude way m use jhagad ker use waha se bhaga deti h

Sham ko kareeb 6 baje tak naina or uski family ne rampur m enter ker liya , jaha naina ko wapas aaya dekh waha k ganvvale bhi bahut khush hote h.

Or naina ki tarif k pul bandhte h , fir naina un sab se baad m milne ane ka wada ker wo sab nikal pade apne ghar ki or.

Or thodi der m unki dono gadiya ma kali k mandir k samne thi.

Asha uter k us jagah ko ek tak niharte hue apni un yaado ko taza kerti hui , mandir m jake darshan kerti u

Asha :- hey maa aapko koti koti dhanyawad maa aapki kripa k liye, jis kaaran mere bache mujhe wapas mile or burai ka nash sambhav hua or apne darshan k punah sobhagya dene k liye bhi maa.

Fir asha waha pandit ji ko dhundne lagi , lekin jab use pandit ji kahi ni mile , unki jagah to koi or hi pandit tha , jinhe Naina ne hi rakha tha Mandir ki uske piche se dekh rekh k liye , to wo naina se puchti h.

Asha :- naina beti Das bhaiya kaha h vo kahi dikhayi ni de rahe.

Naina badi mushkil se apna rona control kerte hue :- maa vo vo

Asha :- m bhi na ek dam bhulakkad hu shayad bhaiya is waqt ghar m honge or maa k bhog ki teyari ker rahe honge , m unse vahi mil leti hu.

Ye bol wo ghar m bhi jati h , lekin jab pandit ji use waha bhi ni milte to ab asha ko bhi kisi anarth ka andesha hone laga.


Asha ghabrahat se :- naina beti tu kuch bol kyu ni rahi h , kaha h bhaiya , na jane mujhe kyu kisi anarth ka andesha ho raha h, bol na beti kaha h tumhare baba.

Naina se ab or control ni hua or wo fut fut k rone lagi , naina ko yu rota dekh sab heran or parehan the.

Asha naina ko gale laga :- kya hua beti tu ro kyu rahi h , kya hua bhaiya ko, jo tu unke nam sunte hi rone lagi

Naina kuch bolne ki himmat me ni thi , usne bas ek divar ki or ishara kiiya or jaise hi asha ne us or dekha to uska mano kaleza fat gaya or wo jor se ni chilate hue beshosh ho gayi.

Karan or jyoti apni ma ko behosh hote dekh :- maaaaaa

Or wo turant uske pas bhage or asha ko hosh m lane ki koshish kerne lage or unke ankho m bhi ansu the


Wahi dusri or.

Ek gadi kisi anjan raste p dodti hui ja rahi thi , or us gadi m betha shaks or koi ni balki wahi shaks or koi ni wahi unhi me ek tha , jinse karan ki brihaspur m takkar hui thi.

Ye banda sirf isliye bach gaya , kyu ki wo apne sathiyo ka gadi m intezaar ker raha tha, lekin jab kafi der bad bhi jab uske sathi wapas na aaye the to wo unki khoj m unke piche piche jab vaha pahunchta h to usne or apne sathiyo ko karte hue dekhta h to uski dar se halat kharab ho gayi or uski himat na hui waha jane ki

Or darse jyada uski herani ki sima na rahi jab usme karan or uske sathiyo k chahro ko dekha , wo turant waha se bhaga or gadi samet teleport or kahi kisi or hi state k kis ganv k area m pahunch gaya tha or wo apni gadi Doda pahunch gaya ek badi si haveli k samne.

Gadi rok usne turant waha k darbaan se kaha ki use turant maharani sahiba se milna h abhi ki abhi ek bahut jaruri khabar deni h unhe.

Dar ban turant ander jata h or thodi der baad us shaqs ko aake ander jane deta h

Wo shaqs jaker ek orat k samne sir jhuka k khada ho jata h or unko pranam kerta h


Orat jo kapdo se hi kahi ki rani lag rahi thi , wo ek bhayanak aawaz me boli.

Orat :- bolo Mansingh itni jaldi hume kisliye milna tha or meri vidhi k liye ladki laye.

Mansingh :- malkin m usi bare m batane to aaya hu , humare jo sathi ladki la rahe the wo sabhi mare gaye.

Rani gusse se :- kya bakwas ker rahe ho tum , kiski itni majal k.mere aadmio ko mare or un darindo ko koi sadharan insan.mar kese sakta h.

Malkin :- malkin vo koi sadharan insan ni the or sab mayavi the or jante ho unke smuh me mane kise dekha .

Rani :- kise ?

Mansingh :- malkin Aryan ko.

Rani herani or khushi se :- kya firse kaho.

Mansingh apni baat dobara bat dohrate h.

Rani khusi se :- tum.sach kah rahe ho na , tum jante ho na ager tumhari ye baat jhut nikli to tumhara kya hashr ho sakta h.

Mansingh kampte hue :- janta hu malkin meri itni majal kaha jo aapse jhut bolu m.

Rani ye sun shetani hasi haste hue :- akhir kar , mera intezaar khatam hua , tum lot hi aaye Aryan , ab mera maksad pura ho ker hi rahega.

Mansingh bich m tokte hue :- bich m tokne k liye shama chahunga malikin , lekin is achi khabar k sath ek buri khabar bhi h , Aryan akela ni h , uske sath prerna bhi lot Ayi h

Prerna Naam sunte hi rani k chahra gusse se lal ho gaya or usne ek glass utha same pade mirror p marte hue kaha.

Rani :- aahhhsh , prerna kamini tu kab mera or Aryan ka picha chodegi , pichli baar to tune mujhse Aryan ko dur ker use bacha liya tha , lekin is baar esa ni hoga , kyu ki is baar m Aryan se pahale tujhse hi niptungi.

Tab rani kuch sochte hue ek sone k sikko ki potli is khush khabri ka inam dete hue Mansingh ko dete hue use kuch adesh deti h or use waha se bhejte hue wo ek kamre ja ek photo ko dekhte hue boli.

Rani :- Aryan pichli baar bhale hi hum tumse juda hue , lekin is bar esa ni hoga , is baar hum apne maksad m kamyab hoke hi rahenge.

Ye bol rani waha se apne room m chali gayi

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... To rahu ne karan pe apna bhay ban chala diya chalaki se....dekhte hai ab kya naina ka samna kaose karte hai or jyoti or karan ke bich jo rishta hai kya wo rishta wapas se thik hogi ya nhi....or ye sab thik karne me kya kya karna padhega dekhye hai....or kahani me ab ye nayi aurat koun hai jo prerna or aryaan ke bich aayi hai....or ye prerna or aryaan hai koun...?????kya karan or jyoti hi hai ye dono...???
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[The king]

Update no :- 248
Friends zoya to yaad hi hogi aapko , ha wahi jiske chakkar m kuch samay pahale karan itna bhaybhit tha ki kahi jyaoti ko uske baare m yaad n aajaye per ab uski story m usse jude har character m changes laye gaye h or sath m rakshabandhan ko bhi 2 din baad hoga agle din k bajaye to aap sab log confuse mat hoiyega.

Location :- kabristan k pas wali road
Karan or jyoti sham ko kuch shopping kerke apni bike per lot rahe the .
Jyoti :- aaj to maja aagaya na bahut kitne dino baad hume yu akele me ghumne or waqt bitane ka moka mila ni to aajkal aapko mere liye waqt hi kaha milta h
Ye bolte hue jyoti ne karan k pith per mukka mara pyaar se per, jyoti ne ye baat bhale hi mazak m boli ho per sach to ye tha ki jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi thi , jab se unhe apna parivar pura wapas mila tha tabse unke berang jindagi m khushi bhare rang to aagaye the , per sath m kahi n kahi dono ko hi apni purani life k sunhare pal bhi yaad aate the, jab wo ek dusre k sath akele m kafi pyara or acha waqt bitate the or unke is pyare quality time m dakhl dene wala koi ni tha
Lekin ab itna badi family hone k kaaran esa hona un dono k liye bahut mushkil ho gaya tha , kyunki har waqt un dono se ya to unki bahane ya ma sath rahate , esa ni tha ki ye sab unhe pasand n tha wo to khush the per wo thodi privacy bhi chahthe the.
Ye sab sochte hue dono bhai bahan ghar ki or lot rahe the , tabhi ek mod p karan ne bike left m ghuma li.
Jyoti :- bhai ye kya ghar ka rasta to sidhe tha n to ye bike aapne is taraf kyu modi is taraf to kabristan h naa.
Karan :- ha gudiya , m janta hu per mane socha ki bahut din ho gaye , hume apni purani swargiya saheli se mile hue, use sharadhanjli diye to socha aaj moka or waqt dono h to .
Karan ki baat sun jyoti ki bhohe tan gayi or muh or hath krodh se kale padne lage or uski muthi bhichne lagi.
Jyoti gusse se :- koi jarurat ni h us gaddar k yaha jane ki bhai ,bhul gaye us kamini zoya ki wo qartut jis k kaaran hum.
Ni bhaiii bilkul bhi ni n to m waha jaungi na hi na hi aapko jane dungi.
Jyoti ka gussa bahut ugra ho raha tha bitte palo k sath jise karan ache se mahasus ker pa raha tha , jiska ahasas kerte hi karan turant bike rokta h or jyoti ko turant sine se laga ker bolta h.
Karan :- sshh shant meri gudiya shant , tum to meri achi bahana ho na , yu gussa ni kerte or gudiya tum to sakshat karuna ki jiti jagti murti ho devta tak tumhare saral or madhur swabhav ki prashansa kerte h , ese m tumhara yu krodh kerna kya sahi h.
Wo bhi uske liye jo ab is duniya m bhi ni h , ni gudiya , gudiya mat bhulo shree ram ne kya kaha tha divangat bhale hi aapka apne jeevan kal m koi bhi raha ho ya kesa bhi ho marnoprant wo saman k layak hi hota hai h chahe wo shatru ho ya mitra .
Karan k samjhane or prem bhare sparsh se jyoti shant to ho gayi per usne kabristan m karan k sath jane ko mana ker diya
Karan kuch dur jaker bike rokta h kyunki samne hi kabristan tha.
Karan ek baar jyoti se ek baar fir chalne ko kahata h per jyoti saf saf mukar jati h ,jisse karan hatash ho chal pada kabristan k pas ki dukan se Zoya k favorite yellow rose leker chal pada under or pahunch gaya kabar ki or.
Jaha jakee uski ankhe nam ho gayi or uske samne bhutkal k madhur pal samne aagayi ho thi ,Jisse wo bhavuk ho gaya.
Pahale to karan ne kaya ki kabar ki safai ki pas m rakhi jhadu se or phir ghutno p bal uski shanti ki prathna kerte hue karan bola
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Karan :- janta hu zoya tum naraj to bahut hogi apne prince se , or hona bhi chahiye us din vada kerke gaya tha ki jald firse milne aaunga per fir bhi itne dino baad aaya
(Karan yaha us din ki baat ker raha tha , jab use yaha use aradhya mile the apne , per jesa ki aapko bataya yaha ab kuch changes kiye gaye h.)
Per tumne dekha n mane apna vada nibhaya h , m is baar bilkul ni ro raha , isliye ab tumhari ye narajgi ni chalegi ha .
Ulta m tumse naraj hu , pata h kyu , (nam ankho se ) kyu ki tum mujhe chod k to gayo sath m esi kasam bhi de gayi ,jis kaaran hum timo ka pavitra Prem k rishe k bich nafrat ki diwar khadi ker di .
Aakhir tumnr esa kyu kiya zoya , kyu , dekha aaj tumhari usi kasam k kaaran hi tumhari sabse achi saheli tumse is kadar nafrat ker bethi h ki yaha tak aayi or fir bhi tumse milne ni aayi
Per usme uski bhi kya galti wo bechari to janti bhi ni ki jisse wo nafrat ker bethi h anjane m aaj usike kaaran hi Humara ye rishta or hum salamat h , or tumhari Kasam or jyoti ko khone k dar k kaaran m na chahte hue bhi kuch kah ni pata.
(Fir kuch der mand mand rone k baad karan khud ko sambhalte hue bola.)
Kher tum bhi kya soch rahi hogi ki ek to tumhara ye dost itne time baad to aaya or apna hi dukhda leke beth gaya.
Or chinta mat kerna meri darling tumhara prince kabbi tumse naraj ni ho sakta or ek waqt esa. Bi. Aayega jab gudiya ko bhi tumhari qurbani ka ahasas hoga or wo bhi apni jhute gusse ko bhula tumse milne aaya karegi .
Or ishwer se meri yahi prathma h meri dost k tum jaha bhi ho khush raho .

Yu hi kuch der yu hi zoya ki kabr se bAte kerne k baad karan waha se bahar aata h.

Jyoti :- mil aaye ho to chale .

Karan :- ha chalo .

Ye bol karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or .

Ghar jake karan or jyoti thodi der aaram kerte h tabhi karan k man m baba ki aawaz gunjti h.

Baba :- putra karn kal tum or putri jyoti mujhse aaker milna , ek vishesh karya h tumhare liye.

Karan :- jo aagya baba.

Karan fir jata h apni sakhi k room k pas.

Uska darwaja to khula tha , per fir bhi karan darwaje ko knock kerte hue .

Karan :- kya hum ander aasakte h senapati mahodaya.

Kaya haste hue :- kya sakha aap bhi sakha aapko bhi ab apni sakhi k room m aane k liye permission leni padegi kya.

Karan ander aate hi kaya jo bed p bethi hui ki god m sir rakh bola.

Karan :- sakhi ye baat sahi h ki hum dost h per tum ek ladki ho tumhari bhi kuch privacy ni.

Kaya :- ji ni dosto k bich koi private chij ni hoti , vese janab aaj humari yaad kese agayi.

Karan :- are bas bas yaar ab tum mat shuru ho jana yaar vese hi jyoti is kaaran udaas h ab tum mat muh mat fula lena.

Kaya :- jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi h naa karan , per hum dono samjhte h ki badi family m thoda to adjustment kerna padta h , per aap fir bhi thoda thoda try keroge to manage ho jayega na.

Karan :- sahi m kaya tum jesi saheli ko pakee m fir se apne ko bhagyashali samjhne laga hu.

Kaya :- fir se matlab ?

Karan ko ahasaas hua ki anjane m usne zoya ki baat ched di , jo wo Kaya ko ni batana chahta tha kyunki isse kaya bhi dukhi hoti or vo bhi , vo apne past ko bhula dena chahta tha.

Per na jane kyu vo jab bhi kaya k sath samay bitata to esa pratit hota ki jese wo apne past m pahunch gaya or apni zoya k paas , or uske sath firse u hi pyar or masti bhare pal bita raha ho , jaha wahi ruthna Manana , ek dusre se hasi majak , tang khichayi wagerah sab .

Shayad esa isliye hota tha karan ki najar m kyunki zoya k baad kaya hi uski zindagi me ek saheli ki tarah aayi thi , jo thi to uski rishte m cousin , per unka dil ka rishta dosti ka tha , jinme swarth or havas jesi kisi burayi ka namonishan na tha , tha to bas masumiyat bhara prem.

Kya sach m esa hi tha ya kuch or kaaran tha iska to aage hi pata chalega.

Karan apne khayalo se bahar aate hue :- kuch ni , vese tumhe pata h aaj friendship day h or m tumhare liye froendship band k sath or sath m gift bhi laya hu

Kaya :- wah yaar what a coincidence m bhi.

Karan :- kya tum bhi.

Kaya :- or ni to kya , mera bhi to apne sakha k sath pahala friendship day h to m ni la sakti kya.

Karan apne jeb se ek choti si dabi nikal kaya ko hath aage bhadane ko bolta h.

Kaya hath aage bhadati h to karan hath pe ek Bahut hi sunder silver ka breslet pahanate hue.

Bola

Karan :- happy friendship day my beautiful sakhi .

Ye bol karan kaya k gal chum leta h jisse kaya khush ho jati h or sath m karan ek necklace bhi gift deta h white gold ka jise dekh Kaya boli

Kaya :- ni ni karan m ye ni le sakti , ye bahut expensive h or ye breclet ki bhi kya jarurat thi itne mahange ki

Karan kaya se :- hat pagal gift ki kabhi value dekhi jati h kya , m kich ni sunne wala tumhe ye lena ho hoga tumhe meri kasam .

Kaya :- per sakha,

Karan :- are mane kaha na , chalo ab ye faltu baate chodo vese bhi ye dusra necklace tumhari saheli jyoti ki or se use choti ma k sath koi kaam se jana pada isliye mane hi dediya .

Wo sab chodo mujhe mera gift do.

Ab kaya ki halat kharab hone lagi , wo sochne lagi ki kaha karan ne use itne mahange band or gift diya or kaha uska ek sadharan sa band or chota sa gift, karan uske baare m kya sochega.

Per karan ne shayad uske man ki baat jan li thi , to usne kaya k bagal m rakhe gift ko utha ker khud hi khol liya.

Kaya to sharmindagi ss sir jhukaye niche karan k reaction ka intezar ker rahi thi , per jab uske kano m karan ki aawaz padi to chok k wo samne dekhti h.

Karan :- wow sakhi its so beautiful, ye mere life ka ab Tak ka best gift h kyunki ye tumne jo Diya h sakhi.

Darasla gift me ek locket tha heart-shaped ka jis per likha tha ki for my best friend my life likha tha , per wo ek sadharan sa tha koi sone chandi ka ni

Kaya :- kya sach m aapko pasand aaya sakha mujhe to laga tha ki ...

Karan bich me :- ki m gift ki value dekh ker ise pasand ni karunga , pagli tumne abhi tak apne sakha ko ni jana , pagli mere liye peso ka koi mahatv ni , balki mahatv rakhta h to wo prem jo is locket roopi gift k roop m mujhe aaaj jo prapt hua h wahi mere liye sabse important h.

Kaya ye sun apni soch p pachtati h or rote hue karan se mafi mangti h jise karan apne sine se shant kerata h or apna hath aage bhadata h or jispe kaya bhi friendship band bandhti h.

Tab karan ko ek idea aata h or wo kaya k locket ko hath m laker us heart sape wale locket k do part ker do locket bana deta h.

Or ek locket khud pahanta h dusra kaya ko pahanate hue bola.

Karan :- aaj se ye locket humare dosti ka wo prateek hoga , jo hum dono k sath humesha rahega.

Kaya ye sun khushi se gale lag jati h karan k or pure chahre ko chumne lagti h or dono ki ankhe ek shan takra jati h or kab dono k hoth mil jate h dono ko pata hi ni chalta.



Dono pationate kiss kerne lage , jisme keval prem tha , kabhi karan kaya k uper k hotho ko chumta to kabhi niche k , kabhi kaya karan k muh m jibh dalti jise karan chusta to kabhi kaya esa kerti or sath sath dono ek dusre k badan ko sahalate hue bed per let gaye




or jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagi to dono alag hue or kaya sharma k karan ki baho m muh chupa leti h or karan uss baho m leke wahi uske sath bed p late jata h

Tabhi achanak se bijli ki garjana k sath bahar barish shuru ho jati h jise dekh sari bahane waha aapahunchi or karan ko sath m unke chal k barish m nahane ko bolti h pahale to karan mana kerta h or unhe bhi rokta h per sabki jid k aage usko manna pada or wo bhi sath m chat pe chal diya jaha sab khub khelte h barish m tab tak jyoti bhi aagayi thi .

Karan kuch der baad jhule pe beth jata h jo chat k bichobich laga hua tha bada sa or apni bahano ko aanand lete hue dekhta h.

Tabhi thak ker komal bhi vaha aajati h or bolti h .

Komal :- bhaiya kya m yaha aapke sath beth sakti hu.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas use khich k apni god m bitha ker uske gal khichte hue bolta h.

Karam :- pagli tu to jaan h apne bhaiya ki , tujhe bhala puchne ki jarurat h kya.

Komal :- oouch bhai esa mat kiya kero .

Karan dusra gaal khichte hue :- m to karunga .

Komal :- acha ye baat , ruko m batati hu aapko ye bol wo karan k gudgudi kerne lagi , jispe karan ki hasi nikalne lagi.

Karan kuch der baad :- acha ye bata komal tera man to lag raha h na yaha koi pareshani to ni na.

Komal :- ni bhaiya esa kuch ni h , domo tayiji mera khub khayal rakhti h mumma k jese or aapke hote esa ho sakta h , bas sare din ghar p rahakar bore ho jati hu .

Karan ::- acha meri choti gudiya bore ho jati h koi ni jald hi jab sab bade office k kaam se free ho jayenge to sab chalenge.

Komal :- itna intezar kyu kerna bhai , aapke pas powers h na to chaliye kahi ghumke aate h.

Komal ne thoda tez bol di ye baat , jisse karan hadbadda gaya or komal ko shant kiya wo to acha hua barish ki aawaz m kisi ne suna ni .

Komal udass ho ker '- sorry bhaiya.

Karan :- koi baat ni mera bacha bas aage se thoda dhyan rakhna , wese bahut din ho gaye yaar chachi se baat ni ki chalo unko call kerte h.

Apni maa ka naam sun kee komal khush ho jati h or karan turant nidhi ko video call kerta h jisse Nidhi 2 ring m utha leti h.

Karan :- namaste my beautiful chachi kesi ho aap.

Nidhi :- khush raho beta , aakhir mere bete ko Chachi ki yaad aahi gayi .

Karan :- ni ni chachi esi baat ni h wo to.

Nidhi :- na beta n koi bahana ni chalega , teri to m udher aake hi khabar lungi sheetan , or kesa h mere laal

Karan :- bas ek dam mast chachi , per aapki bahut yaad aati h , aap jaldi se aajao na.

Nidhi :- mera to khud tere bina kaha ji lagta h mere laal , bas tere chachu or mamu ka jese hi kam pura hua ni hum turant aajayenge.

Karan :- ji chachi , lo komal se baat kijiye.

Phir karan komal ko phone dedeta h , komal bhi apni maa se baat ker bahut khush hoti h or tabhi sari bahane bhi waha ikhatha ho nidhi se baato m lag jati h.

To karan ek side chala jata h or aasman ko niharne lagta jh per kahi n kahi use kuch bahut bure hone ka ahsas ho raha tha , jese koi sankat aane wala ho uske jivan m or u ye mosam usi ka ishara ho

Saal k is waqt barish aam baat thi per fir bhi najane kyu karan ko esa anubhav ho raha tha.

Fir kuch der baad wo apne chacha se baat ker phone rakhta h , itne m choti ma bhi aajati h or bolti h

Choti maa :- chalo bacho ab niche chalo bahut bhig liye, ab jyada der yaha rahe to bimar pad jaoge

Kavya ki baat maN sabhi niche chal dete h

Kavya karan se :- lalla naina kaha h itni der ho gayi mujhe to chinta ho rahi h.

Sonam or komal jo kal k hue baat se gussa the sonam se vo bol padi.

Sonam :- chodiye na maa , aap kyu us nakchadi ki chinta kerti ho , kitna ganda vyavhar kiya tha aapse or bhai or didi p to kal hath bhi uthaya ,

Karan datte hue :- sonuu ,

Karan ki daat se sonam sir jhuka leti h to kavya use sine se laga k boli.

Kavya :- ni beta esa ni bolte , wo abhi choti h uper se usne itni si umer m kya kya ni jhela , to hum sab me adjust hone or sabko samjhne m time to lagega hi na , dhire dhire sab thik ho jayega.

Kash naina yaha hoti to kavya k madhur vyavahar ko dekh ker use apni bhul ka shayad ahasas ho jata .

Karan :- choti maa ap chinta mat kijiye naina aaj rohan or riya di k yaha rukne wali h meri baat ho gayi thi mosi ee.

Karan yaha jhut bolta h kyunki wo janta tha ki Naina jarur apne kisi mission p hi hogi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Himalaya.

Yaha bhi bhayank tufan sa mosam ho raha tha , charo or bijli kadak rahi thi , musladhar barish ho rahi thi, wahi usi tufan k bich choti p khadi akshara narayan se var mang rahi thi

Narayan :- ek baar punah vichar ker lo putri akshara , tumne jo abbi kaha wahi var tumhe chahiye .

Akshara :- ha karuna nidhan mujhe yahi var chahiye kripya mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ye sun soch m pad gaye , tab akshara boli .

Akshara '- kis soch m pad gaye prabhu mane amratv jesa koi esa var to ni manga jism aapko itna sochna pade ya mera itna tap prayapt ni , yadi esa h to m or bhi kathor tap k liye saj hu.

Narayan :- ni putri, tumhe or kisi tap ki avshyakta ni itna prayapt h , isliye m shrishti palak vishnu tumhe tumhara icchit vardan pradan kerta hu .

Parantu smaran rahe putri is vardan ka kabhi durpyog mat karna ni to ye var kahi tumhare liye abhishap ban jayega , ise tum meri tumhare prati chinta samjho ya chetavani.

Akshara :- jo aagya Prabhu, ab ap mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ashirvad mudra me :- tathastu.

Ye bol narayan vaha se anterdhyan ho gaye or unke jate hi akshara shetani hasi haste hue.

Akshara :- sharap to avshya banega aapka vardaan prabhu parantu mere liye ni apitu us kamini or uske parivar k liye.

Hahahahaa

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[Harry rocks]

Harry rocks भाई ये अक्षरा का जिक्र पहले किस अपडेट मे हुआ था, क्या आप मुझे अपडेट संख्या बता सकते है ।

Part 2 m tha update no mujhe bhi yad ni

 

[Akil]

Both updates were wonderful bro keep it up.....

 

[Harry rocks]

Both updates were wonderful bro keep it up.....

Ye kya bhai itna chota review wo bhi 2 update k liye that's not fair

 

[Naik]

Update no:- 247
location :- Tina house.


Shanaya ne raat ko hui ghatna k bare m batana shuru ker diya.


Short flashback


Hua darasl hua jab us ladki ki aatma ne teena k sharir oer kabza kiya to uske baad wo teena ki gadi ko apne megic se sahi ker usme beth ker teena m ghar aapahunchi.


Jaha abhi ghup andhera tha or jese hi teena ne lights on ki to ...


Surpriseeeeeeeeee


Ye awaze uske kan m gunji or samne the teena k dost jo uske cake or flowers liye uska welcome kam ker rahe the kyunki aJ Teena ka birthday tha.


Jo the rohit shanaya or ankit (tisra dost) jo use wish kerte hue uske paas aane lage.


Teenaa:- ni ni mujhe Koi mat chunaa.


Per uske dost ni mamte to teena apni shaktiyo se cake ko kiddo m badal ankit k muh per maar deti h jisse ankit gussa ho jata h or wo teena ko marne ko doda per usse pahale hi Teena jaldi se apne kamre m bhag gayi.


Shanaya :- ye sab kese ho gYa , ye Cake achanak se sad kese gaya or ye teena ese kyu behave ler rahi h


Ankit gusse se :- are bhad m jaye wo nakchadi.


Ye bol wo gusse se waha bathroom m jata h muh dhome per ye kya jese hi wo muh dhone laga to pani to nikla ni balki usi shetan ne use pani jese nigal liya tub se nikal ker, kyu ki usne teena ko pakdne ki koshis m use chu liya tha.


Wahi dusri or


Teena m mojud us aatma ne kamre m jaker chain ki saaas li , lekin esa sochna bhul thi uski kyunki kisi ne use agle hi pal hug ker liya picche se or jab wo piche mudi to wo or koi ni Ankur tha yani teena ka boyfriend.


Ankur :- kaha rah gayi thi tum neri Jan, kabse tumhare hotho ka ye ras pine ko m aatur tha.


Teena :- mujhe please mat chuo or bhago yaha se ni to wo tumhe mar dalega


Ankur majak m baat lete hue '- are hum to pahale hi tumhare pyaar m mar chuke h meri jaan or koi bhala hume kese marega.


Abhi ankur teena ko kiss kerne hi wala tha ki tabhi ek dahad k sath waha wo shetan pragat hua jise dekh ankur ki fat gayi or wo jese hi bhagne ko hua ki us shetan nr Apne chaku jese nakhuno se ek jordar war uske sine p kiya , jisse wo niche gir k tadafne laga, or fir wo shetan ankur ki or bhandne laga usko Marne.


Teena :- please use mat maro , wo to apni girlfriend ko chu raha tha , use kaha pata tha mere bare m


Per us shetan k kya fark padne wala tha or wo jese hi war kerne ko hua ki usi samay suraj ug aaya or use majburan gayab hona pada, per wo ladki khush ho gayi kyu ki wo gayab ni hui or usne than liya ki ab wo isi sharir m rahegi , taki din m bhi bahar rah sake or us shetan se bhi bach sake.


Flashback end


Shanaya or rohit ko kamre k ander wali ghatna pata ni thi , or wo Ankit ko bhi dhund rahe the , unko jitna maloom tha wo naina ko bata diya.


Naina :- mujhe teena ka room dikhao.


Shanaya :- ji chaliye.


Ye bol wo naina ko teena k room k pas leker jati h or jese hi dawaja kholne hoti h ki naina bol padi.


Naina :- ni us darwaje ko mat chuna .


Fir naina paa m pade ek stuff toy ko darwaje p fekti h jiske sath hi us toy lo itna khatarnak jhatka laga ki wo jal utha


Jise dekh shanaya or rohit k to tote hi ud gaye,or wo naina ko sawaliya najar se dekhti h


Naina :- wo jo bhi aatma ya shetani shakti h wo ni chahti ki hum uske karib aaye isliye usne esa kiya


Rohit :- oh no ankur , jo teena ka bf tha wo bhi isi room m tha kahi use.


Naina :- oh no , hume jald hi kuch kerna hoga.


Naina apne bag se apne crossbow ko jo jadu se wapis trishul ban gaya tha naina ki icha se use nikalti h or ek mantra bol darwaje ki or kerti h jiske sath hi ek orange roshni trishul se nikal us gate se takrati h or us pret ki shakti nasht ho jati h.


Or wo teeno turant ander jate h jaha ankur ghayal behosh pada tha jise dekh rohir or Shanaya ghabra gaye or turabt doctor ko bulaker usko dusre kamre m leja first aid ker waha pahumche.


To paya ki teena jo abhi us ladki ki aatma k control m h , wo almari p bethi h.


Naina :- dekho tum jo bhi ho teena ko chod do or koi samasya h to mujhe batao m tumhari help jarur karungi.


Per wo aatma Naina p hi humla ker deti h uske uper kud per shakti ki nayi shakti k aage wo tik no pati or naina ek jhatke m use hava m gale se pakad utha ker niche patka or ek hath ko piche marod uske use apne bas m lete hue apne trishul ko uske mathe p lagate hue usne unkh band ker mantra padha to use us aatma ka past najar aata h.


Jaha pata chalta h ki us ladki ka nam vidya tha , jiski Sagai ek vicky naam k ladke se hui thi , lekin wo ek psyco type ladka tha ,jisko ye bilkul bardasht ni tha ki vidya ko uske alawa koi chu bhi le, or galti se esa ker deta to wo use lad jata , yaha tak wo marne marne p uter aata.


Ese hi ek baar wo ek club m gaye jaha wo dance enjoy kerne lage ,lekin kuch der baad vicky ko toilet Laga to wo waha se chala gaya


Per jab wo wapas aaya to usne paya ki ek ladka vidya k sath dance ker raha tha or anjane m use jara sa usne vidya ko chua hi tha ki jise dekh vicky ka dimag garam ho gaya or usne counter p rakhi ek bottle us ladke k sir p de mari jisss wo khunam khun ho gaya or waha hungama ho gaya , jisse wo dono badi mushkil se kese n kese nikal k bhage.


Per ab Vidya Vicky se tang aagayi thi or car m se hi jhagda kerte hue sagai todne ki baat kerte hue use gadi se utar dene ko boli or jab vicky n mana to usne chalti car se kudne ki kosis kerne lagi or vicky use rokne ki, is chakkar m uska dhyan road se hat gaya oe ek truck se un dono ko bhayanak accident ho gaya.


Or wo dono usme mare gaye , vicky ki lash gate khul car se adhi bahar gir gayi , jise uske khun se ek nishan ban gaya jise dekh Naina chonk k aankh kholti h or ek mantra se pahale to teena ko behosh kerte h.


Or jati h us almari k pas jaha khun k chite pade the, jiske pas ja naina ghutno p beth use dekhte hue bolti h.


Naina :- kya mujhe white tape milegi.


Shanaya :- ha m abhi lati hu.


Ye bol shanaya hall m se tape lati h , jise naina un khun k chito p laga un chito ko aapas m connect kerti h , jisse ek nishan banta h jise .dekh naina boli.


Naina :- oh to mera shak sahi nikla .


Rohit :- kesa shak naina ji.


Naina sari story batate hue :- us raat vicky k khun k chito se ratlami pret ka nishan ban gaya tha , jis kaaran ratlami pret wo khud bhi ban gaya h , jo marne k baad bhi vidya k piche pada h or roj raat usi accident wali road p ye khuni khel khelte h ye dono


Ratlami preet shetano ki wo prajati h jo hajaro salo se dharti p mojud h jo sankhya m to ab bahut kam h per bahut khatarnak h
Use nasht ni kiya ja sakta , use to sidhe nark lok m bhejna hi ek matra use chutkare ka upaay h.


Shanaya :- yadi esa h to hum karenge kese.


Apne beg se yantra nikal :- is bhuol yantra ki madad se , sbaba ka diya ye yantra ek divya shakti h jiski madad se swarg or nark k raste ko khol kisi bhi aatma ko uske anusar waha bheja sakta h.


Rohit '- phir der kis baat ki kijiye kriya aarambh.


Naina :- ye itna aasan ni h rohit hume ye kaam wahi kerna hoga jaha se undono ka past juda ho , yani k vidya ka ghar jo usi road p aage h.


Naina or Shanaya rohit raat ki planning kerne lagi hue the , per isse anjan ki koi unlogo ki baat sun or dekh raha h jo or koi ni teena ya yu kaho vidya thi, jo hosh m aagayi thi , per chupchap leti rahi , uske man m kya tha wo khud hi janti thi.


Wahi dusri or


Rohan or riya thoda ghum fir or romantic pal k baad ghar aate h jaha dono bahut khush the.


Riya jaldi se room me jati h apne or bed p uchal k bed p letti h or kisi ko phone kerti h.


Riya :- helllo bebes , ek good news h .


Samns se:- kya baat h darling itni khush , lagta h rohan ne humari Darling k love ko accept ker hi liya .


Riya sharmate hue ha bolti h or aaj ki hui sari ghatna k baare m batati h, jise sun samne wali boli.


Samne se :- wow congratulations babe, i really happy for u , aakhir tune apne love ko pa hi liya , pata ni mere nasib m ye khushi kab nasib hogi.


Riya :- nasib to tab hogi na meri jan jab tum apnw pyaar ka ijhar kerogi , tumn apna pyar ka ijhar to door abji tak apne pyaar ko dikhaya tak ni bhai ko.


Samne se :- per kya bhai baat manege , kahi esa n ho ki wo naraj ho mujhse rishta hi tod de.


Riya :- esa kuch ni hoga meri jan tu ghabra mat , mujhe pura yakin h tumhe wo jarur apnayega.


Uhi riya samne wali ladki ko kafi time tak samjhati h or usko himmat deti h , jisse usme thodi himmat aati h or wo bhi apne pyaar k ijhar ka nishchay kerti h or fir thode hasi majak k sath dono call rakhti h.


Wahi dusri or


Wo tapasvini to yaad hogi hi jiske tap se swarg lok bhi hil gaya tha uska tap ab purn hone m aagaya tha.


Uska sharir purn roop se sukh ker kala pad chuka tha kathor tap k kaaran , or uske sharir per chitiyo ne apna ghar bana liya tha , jis kaaran chitiyo k kaatne se usko bahut pida hone lagi thi , lekin usne ese hal m bhi tap bhang ni hone diya apna .


Narad ji :- Narayan narayan kitna kathor tap ka palan kiya h putri akshara (us ladki ka naam ) ne prabhu narayan ka parantu afsos usne ye tap bhakti bhav se ni apitu pratishodh ki bhavna ki apurti k liye kiya ja raha h.


Dhire dhire akshara k mantrajap ki dhawani baikunth m shir sagar p virajman narayan k aas pas pahunchne lagi.


Ommmmm namooo narayanaye....ommmm namoooo narayanayeeeee.


Jise sunn Narayan k netra jo band the wo khul gaye or unke chahre p ek muskan aagayi or wo turant waha se antardhyan ho gaye.


Wahi dusri or akshara k tapoagni na keval himalya ko pighla rahu thi ,jisse baad ki sthiti utpan hone lagi dharti per apitu sath m hi uski deh ko bhi shati pahunchane m lagi hui thi.


Jis kaaran se uska sharir jalne laga .


Tabhi agle hi pal ek mahatez Himalaya or aaspas k pure sthan ko prakat ho apne m sama leta h.


Or jab wo prakash hatta h to samne char bhuja dhari jagatpalak shri hari narayan khade the .


Jinhone apne hath ko varmudra m laya jisse ek prakash nikal akshara p pada jisse na keval uske tez per niyantrit hua apitu sath m hi uska sunder komal sharir bhi purntah pahale jesa ho gaya


Narayan :- tumhara tap ab purn hua putri , netra kholo hum tumse prasan h putri akshra.


Narayan ki madhur swar sun jese hi akshara ne netra khole to sare sansaar m achanak se kothul mach gaya , aakash m bijliya bhayankar garjana kerne lage or sabhi devo samet brahmdev k chahre p vhi chinta ki lakir najar aane lagi


Or netra kholne k sath hi apne samne apne aradhya shri narayan ko dekh akshara k chahre p ek kutil muskan aagayi.


Stay tuned.

Bahot khoob
Shaandaar
Update bhai

 

[Naik]

Update no :- 248
Friends zoya to yaad hi hogi aapko , ha wahi jiske chakkar m kuch samay pahale karan itna bhaybhit tha ki kahi jyaoti ko uske baare m yaad n aajaye per ab uski story m usse jude har character m changes laye gaye h or sath m rakshabandhan ko bhi 2 din baad hoga agle din k bajaye to aap sab log confuse mat hoiyega.

Location :- kabristan k pas wali road
Karan or jyoti sham ko kuch shopping kerke apni bike per lot rahe the .
Jyoti :- aaj to maja aagaya na bahut kitne dino baad hume yu akele me ghumne or waqt bitane ka moka mila ni to aajkal aapko mere liye waqt hi kaha milta h
Ye bolte hue jyoti ne karan k pith per mukka mara pyaar se per, jyoti ne ye baat bhale hi mazak m boli ho per sach to ye tha ki jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi thi , jab se unhe apna parivar pura wapas mila tha tabse unke berang jindagi m khushi bhare rang to aagaye the , per sath m kahi n kahi dono ko hi apni purani life k sunhare pal bhi yaad aate the, jab wo ek dusre k sath akele m kafi pyara or acha waqt bitate the or unke is pyare quality time m dakhl dene wala koi ni tha
Lekin ab itna badi family hone k kaaran esa hona un dono k liye bahut mushkil ho gaya tha , kyunki har waqt un dono se ya to unki bahane ya ma sath rahate , esa ni tha ki ye sab unhe pasand n tha wo to khush the per wo thodi privacy bhi chahthe the.
Ye sab sochte hue dono bhai bahan ghar ki or lot rahe the , tabhi ek mod p karan ne bike left m ghuma li.
Jyoti :- bhai ye kya ghar ka rasta to sidhe tha n to ye bike aapne is taraf kyu modi is taraf to kabristan h naa.
Karan :- ha gudiya , m janta hu per mane socha ki bahut din ho gaye , hume apni purani swargiya saheli se mile hue, use sharadhanjli diye to socha aaj moka or waqt dono h to .
Karan ki baat sun jyoti ki bhohe tan gayi or muh or hath krodh se kale padne lage or uski muthi bhichne lagi.
Jyoti gusse se :- koi jarurat ni h us gaddar k yaha jane ki bhai ,bhul gaye us kamini zoya ki wo qartut jis k kaaran hum.
Ni bhaiii bilkul bhi ni n to m waha jaungi na hi na hi aapko jane dungi.
Jyoti ka gussa bahut ugra ho raha tha bitte palo k sath jise karan ache se mahasus ker pa raha tha , jiska ahasas kerte hi karan turant bike rokta h or jyoti ko turant sine se laga ker bolta h.
Karan :- sshh shant meri gudiya shant , tum to meri achi bahana ho na , yu gussa ni kerte or gudiya tum to sakshat karuna ki jiti jagti murti ho devta tak tumhare saral or madhur swabhav ki prashansa kerte h , ese m tumhara yu krodh kerna kya sahi h.
Wo bhi uske liye jo ab is duniya m bhi ni h , ni gudiya , gudiya mat bhulo shree ram ne kya kaha tha divangat bhale hi aapka apne jeevan kal m koi bhi raha ho ya kesa bhi ho marnoprant wo saman k layak hi hota hai h chahe wo shatru ho ya mitra .
Karan k samjhane or prem bhare sparsh se jyoti shant to ho gayi per usne kabristan m karan k sath jane ko mana ker diya
Karan kuch dur jaker bike rokta h kyunki samne hi kabristan tha.
Karan ek baar jyoti se ek baar fir chalne ko kahata h per jyoti saf saf mukar jati h ,jisse karan hatash ho chal pada kabristan k pas ki dukan se Zoya k favorite yellow rose leker chal pada under or pahunch gaya kabar ki or.
Jaha jakee uski ankhe nam ho gayi or uske samne bhutkal k madhur pal samne aagayi ho thi ,Jisse wo bhavuk ho gaya.
Pahale to karan ne kaya ki kabar ki safai ki pas m rakhi jhadu se or phir ghutno p bal uski shanti ki prathna kerte hue karan bola
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Karan :- janta hu zoya tum naraj to bahut hogi apne prince se , or hona bhi chahiye us din vada kerke gaya tha ki jald firse milne aaunga per fir bhi itne dino baad aaya
(Karan yaha us din ki baat ker raha tha , jab use yaha use aradhya mile the apne , per jesa ki aapko bataya yaha ab kuch changes kiye gaye h.)
Per tumne dekha n mane apna vada nibhaya h , m is baar bilkul ni ro raha , isliye ab tumhari ye narajgi ni chalegi ha .
Ulta m tumse naraj hu , pata h kyu , (nam ankho se ) kyu ki tum mujhe chod k to gayo sath m esi kasam bhi de gayi ,jis kaaran hum timo ka pavitra Prem k rishe k bich nafrat ki diwar khadi ker di .
Aakhir tumnr esa kyu kiya zoya , kyu , dekha aaj tumhari usi kasam k kaaran hi tumhari sabse achi saheli tumse is kadar nafrat ker bethi h ki yaha tak aayi or fir bhi tumse milne ni aayi
Per usme uski bhi kya galti wo bechari to janti bhi ni ki jisse wo nafrat ker bethi h anjane m aaj usike kaaran hi Humara ye rishta or hum salamat h , or tumhari Kasam or jyoti ko khone k dar k kaaran m na chahte hue bhi kuch kah ni pata.
(Fir kuch der mand mand rone k baad karan khud ko sambhalte hue bola.)
Kher tum bhi kya soch rahi hogi ki ek to tumhara ye dost itne time baad to aaya or apna hi dukhda leke beth gaya.
Or chinta mat kerna meri darling tumhara prince kabbi tumse naraj ni ho sakta or ek waqt esa. Bi. Aayega jab gudiya ko bhi tumhari qurbani ka ahasas hoga or wo bhi apni jhute gusse ko bhula tumse milne aaya karegi .
Or ishwer se meri yahi prathma h meri dost k tum jaha bhi ho khush raho .

Yu hi kuch der yu hi zoya ki kabr se bAte kerne k baad karan waha se bahar aata h.

Jyoti :- mil aaye ho to chale .

Karan :- ha chalo .

Ye bol karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or .

Ghar jake karan or jyoti thodi der aaram kerte h tabhi karan k man m baba ki aawaz gunjti h.

Baba :- putra karn kal tum or putri jyoti mujhse aaker milna , ek vishesh karya h tumhare liye.

Karan :- jo aagya baba.

Karan fir jata h apni sakhi k room k pas.

Uska darwaja to khula tha , per fir bhi karan darwaje ko knock kerte hue .

Karan :- kya hum ander aasakte h senapati mahodaya.

Kaya haste hue :- kya sakha aap bhi sakha aapko bhi ab apni sakhi k room m aane k liye permission leni padegi kya.

Karan ander aate hi kaya jo bed p bethi hui ki god m sir rakh bola.

Karan :- sakhi ye baat sahi h ki hum dost h per tum ek ladki ho tumhari bhi kuch privacy ni.

Kaya :- ji ni dosto k bich koi private chij ni hoti , vese janab aaj humari yaad kese agayi.

Karan :- are bas bas yaar ab tum mat shuru ho jana yaar vese hi jyoti is kaaran udaas h ab tum mat muh mat fula lena.

Kaya :- jyoti bhi apni jagah sahi h naa karan , per hum dono samjhte h ki badi family m thoda to adjustment kerna padta h , per aap fir bhi thoda thoda try keroge to manage ho jayega na.

Karan :- sahi m kaya tum jesi saheli ko pakee m fir se apne ko bhagyashali samjhne laga hu.

Kaya :- fir se matlab ?

Karan ko ahasaas hua ki anjane m usne zoya ki baat ched di , jo wo Kaya ko ni batana chahta tha kyunki isse kaya bhi dukhi hoti or vo bhi , vo apne past ko bhula dena chahta tha.

Per na jane kyu vo jab bhi kaya k sath samay bitata to esa pratit hota ki jese wo apne past m pahunch gaya or apni zoya k paas , or uske sath firse u hi pyar or masti bhare pal bita raha ho , jaha wahi ruthna Manana , ek dusre se hasi majak , tang khichayi wagerah sab .

Shayad esa isliye hota tha karan ki najar m kyunki zoya k baad kaya hi uski zindagi me ek saheli ki tarah aayi thi , jo thi to uski rishte m cousin , per unka dil ka rishta dosti ka tha , jinme swarth or havas jesi kisi burayi ka namonishan na tha , tha to bas masumiyat bhara prem.

Kya sach m esa hi tha ya kuch or kaaran tha iska to aage hi pata chalega.

Karan apne khayalo se bahar aate hue :- kuch ni , vese tumhe pata h aaj friendship day h or m tumhare liye froendship band k sath or sath m gift bhi laya hu

Kaya :- wah yaar what a coincidence m bhi.

Karan :- kya tum bhi.

Kaya :- or ni to kya , mera bhi to apne sakha k sath pahala friendship day h to m ni la sakti kya.

Karan apne jeb se ek choti si dabi nikal kaya ko hath aage bhadane ko bolta h.

Kaya hath aage bhadati h to karan hath pe ek Bahut hi sunder silver ka breslet pahanate hue.

Bola

Karan :- happy friendship day my beautiful sakhi .

Ye bol karan kaya k gal chum leta h jisse kaya khush ho jati h or sath m karan ek necklace bhi gift deta h white gold ka jise dekh Kaya boli

Kaya :- ni ni karan m ye ni le sakti , ye bahut expensive h or ye breclet ki bhi kya jarurat thi itne mahange ki

Karan kaya se :- hat pagal gift ki kabhi value dekhi jati h kya , m kich ni sunne wala tumhe ye lena ho hoga tumhe meri kasam .

Kaya :- per sakha,

Karan :- are mane kaha na , chalo ab ye faltu baate chodo vese bhi ye dusra necklace tumhari saheli jyoti ki or se use choti ma k sath koi kaam se jana pada isliye mane hi dediya .

Wo sab chodo mujhe mera gift do.

Ab kaya ki halat kharab hone lagi , wo sochne lagi ki kaha karan ne use itne mahange band or gift diya or kaha uska ek sadharan sa band or chota sa gift, karan uske baare m kya sochega.

Per karan ne shayad uske man ki baat jan li thi , to usne kaya k bagal m rakhe gift ko utha ker khud hi khol liya.

Kaya to sharmindagi ss sir jhukaye niche karan k reaction ka intezar ker rahi thi , per jab uske kano m karan ki aawaz padi to chok k wo samne dekhti h.

Karan :- wow sakhi its so beautiful, ye mere life ka ab Tak ka best gift h kyunki ye tumne jo Diya h sakhi.

Darasla gift me ek locket tha heart-shaped ka jis per likha tha ki for my best friend my life likha tha , per wo ek sadharan sa tha koi sone chandi ka ni

Kaya :- kya sach m aapko pasand aaya sakha mujhe to laga tha ki ...

Karan bich me :- ki m gift ki value dekh ker ise pasand ni karunga , pagli tumne abhi tak apne sakha ko ni jana , pagli mere liye peso ka koi mahatv ni , balki mahatv rakhta h to wo prem jo is locket roopi gift k roop m mujhe aaaj jo prapt hua h wahi mere liye sabse important h.

Kaya ye sun apni soch p pachtati h or rote hue karan se mafi mangti h jise karan apne sine se shant kerata h or apna hath aage bhadata h or jispe kaya bhi friendship band bandhti h.

Tab karan ko ek idea aata h or wo kaya k locket ko hath m laker us heart sape wale locket k do part ker do locket bana deta h.

Or ek locket khud pahanta h dusra kaya ko pahanate hue bola.

Karan :- aaj se ye locket humare dosti ka wo prateek hoga , jo hum dono k sath humesha rahega.

Kaya ye sun khushi se gale lag jati h karan k or pure chahre ko chumne lagti h or dono ki ankhe ek shan takra jati h or kab dono k hoth mil jate h dono ko pata hi ni chalta.



Dono pationate kiss kerne lage , jisme keval prem tha , kabhi karan kaya k uper k hotho ko chumta to kabhi niche k , kabhi kaya karan k muh m jibh dalti jise karan chusta to kabhi kaya esa kerti or sath sath dono ek dusre k badan ko sahalate hue bed per let gaye




or jab dono ki saanse ukhadne lagi to dono alag hue or kaya sharma k karan ki baho m muh chupa leti h or karan uss baho m leke wahi uske sath bed p late jata h

Tabhi achanak se bijli ki garjana k sath bahar barish shuru ho jati h jise dekh sari bahane waha aapahunchi or karan ko sath m unke chal k barish m nahane ko bolti h pahale to karan mana kerta h or unhe bhi rokta h per sabki jid k aage usko manna pada or wo bhi sath m chat pe chal diya jaha sab khub khelte h barish m tab tak jyoti bhi aagayi thi .

Karan kuch der baad jhule pe beth jata h jo chat k bichobich laga hua tha bada sa or apni bahano ko aanand lete hue dekhta h.

Tabhi thak ker komal bhi vaha aajati h or bolti h .

Komal :- bhaiya kya m yaha aapke sath beth sakti hu.

Karan kuch ni bolta bas use khich k apni god m bitha ker uske gal khichte hue bolta h.

Karam :- pagli tu to jaan h apne bhaiya ki , tujhe bhala puchne ki jarurat h kya.

Komal :- oouch bhai esa mat kiya kero .

Karan dusra gaal khichte hue :- m to karunga .

Komal :- acha ye baat , ruko m batati hu aapko ye bol wo karan k gudgudi kerne lagi , jispe karan ki hasi nikalne lagi.

Karan kuch der baad :- acha ye bata komal tera man to lag raha h na yaha koi pareshani to ni na.

Komal :- ni bhaiya esa kuch ni h , domo tayiji mera khub khayal rakhti h mumma k jese or aapke hote esa ho sakta h , bas sare din ghar p rahakar bore ho jati hu .

Karan ::- acha meri choti gudiya bore ho jati h koi ni jald hi jab sab bade office k kaam se free ho jayenge to sab chalenge.

Komal :- itna intezar kyu kerna bhai , aapke pas powers h na to chaliye kahi ghumke aate h.

Komal ne thoda tez bol di ye baat , jisse karan hadbadda gaya or komal ko shant kiya wo to acha hua barish ki aawaz m kisi ne suna ni .

Komal udass ho ker '- sorry bhaiya.

Karan :- koi baat ni mera bacha bas aage se thoda dhyan rakhna , wese bahut din ho gaye yaar chachi se baat ni ki chalo unko call kerte h.

Apni maa ka naam sun kee komal khush ho jati h or karan turant nidhi ko video call kerta h jisse Nidhi 2 ring m utha leti h.

Karan :- namaste my beautiful chachi kesi ho aap.

Nidhi :- khush raho beta , aakhir mere bete ko Chachi ki yaad aahi gayi .

Karan :- ni ni chachi esi baat ni h wo to.

Nidhi :- na beta n koi bahana ni chalega , teri to m udher aake hi khabar lungi sheetan , or kesa h mere laal

Karan :- bas ek dam mast chachi , per aapki bahut yaad aati h , aap jaldi se aajao na.

Nidhi :- mera to khud tere bina kaha ji lagta h mere laal , bas tere chachu or mamu ka jese hi kam pura hua ni hum turant aajayenge.

Karan :- ji chachi , lo komal se baat kijiye.

Phir karan komal ko phone dedeta h , komal bhi apni maa se baat ker bahut khush hoti h or tabhi sari bahane bhi waha ikhatha ho nidhi se baato m lag jati h.

To karan ek side chala jata h or aasman ko niharne lagta jh per kahi n kahi use kuch bahut bure hone ka ahsas ho raha tha , jese koi sankat aane wala ho uske jivan m or u ye mosam usi ka ishara ho

Saal k is waqt barish aam baat thi per fir bhi najane kyu karan ko esa anubhav ho raha tha.

Fir kuch der baad wo apne chacha se baat ker phone rakhta h , itne m choti ma bhi aajati h or bolti h

Choti maa :- chalo bacho ab niche chalo bahut bhig liye, ab jyada der yaha rahe to bimar pad jaoge

Kavya ki baat maN sabhi niche chal dete h

Kavya karan se :- lalla naina kaha h itni der ho gayi mujhe to chinta ho rahi h.

Sonam or komal jo kal k hue baat se gussa the sonam se vo bol padi.

Sonam :- chodiye na maa , aap kyu us nakchadi ki chinta kerti ho , kitna ganda vyavhar kiya tha aapse or bhai or didi p to kal hath bhi uthaya ,

Karan datte hue :- sonuu ,

Karan ki daat se sonam sir jhuka leti h to kavya use sine se laga k boli.

Kavya :- ni beta esa ni bolte , wo abhi choti h uper se usne itni si umer m kya kya ni jhela , to hum sab me adjust hone or sabko samjhne m time to lagega hi na , dhire dhire sab thik ho jayega.

Kash naina yaha hoti to kavya k madhur vyavahar ko dekh ker use apni bhul ka shayad ahasas ho jata .

Karan :- choti maa ap chinta mat kijiye naina aaj rohan or riya di k yaha rukne wali h meri baat ho gayi thi mosi ee.

Karan yaha jhut bolta h kyunki wo janta tha ki Naina jarur apne kisi mission p hi hogi.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- Himalaya.

Yaha bhi bhayank tufan sa mosam ho raha tha , charo or bijli kadak rahi thi , musladhar barish ho rahi thi, wahi usi tufan k bich choti p khadi akshara narayan se var mang rahi thi

Narayan :- ek baar punah vichar ker lo putri akshara , tumne jo abbi kaha wahi var tumhe chahiye .

Akshara :- ha karuna nidhan mujhe yahi var chahiye kripya mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ye sun soch m pad gaye , tab akshara boli .

Akshara '- kis soch m pad gaye prabhu mane amratv jesa koi esa var to ni manga jism aapko itna sochna pade ya mera itna tap prayapt ni , yadi esa h to m or bhi kathor tap k liye saj hu.

Narayan :- ni putri, tumhe or kisi tap ki avshyakta ni itna prayapt h , isliye m shrishti palak vishnu tumhe tumhara icchit vardan pradan kerta hu .

Parantu smaran rahe putri is vardan ka kabhi durpyog mat karna ni to ye var kahi tumhare liye abhishap ban jayega , ise tum meri tumhare prati chinta samjho ya chetavani.

Akshara :- jo aagya Prabhu, ab ap mujhe mera ichit var pradan kare.

Narayan ashirvad mudra me :- tathastu.

Ye bol narayan vaha se anterdhyan ho gaye or unke jate hi akshara shetani hasi haste hue.

Akshara :- sharap to avshya banega aapka vardaan prabhu parantu mere liye ni apitu us kamini or uske parivar k liye.

Hahahahaa

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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