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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Update no :- 263
wahi dusri or
Karan subah uthkar puja path or apne nitya karma karte hi sabse pahale pahuncha apne kamre me jaha Jyoti dressing table k pass bethi apne baal bana rahi thi.

Jyoti k chahre p udasi or narajgi saf saf dikhayi de rahi thi,karan uske piche se aaker usko piche se hug kerta h or jyoti ki kamar ko apni bahon m lete hue bola.
Karan :- kya baat h bhai,aj to meri gudiya bahut soni lag rahi h.
Jyoti chutne ki koshish kerte hue :- chodiye mujhe ,mujhe apse koi bat ni kerni,m hui kon apki, ap to khali naina k hi bhaiya ho na jao ab uske pas.
Karan :- ek hath se uske gal sahalate hue,uski gardan chum tease kerte hue :- koi hasina jab ruth jati h to,or bhi hasin ho jati h.
Jyoti dhire dhire pighalne lagi per usne abhi tak apni narajgi ni chodi.

Karan uske samne aker ghutno k bal beth ker :- acha meri gudiya isliye gussa h na ki uske bhaiya ne uspe hath uthaya,to le gudiya tu bhi mujhe mar le dat le per please apne bhaiya se yu mukh na mod.
Ye kahate hue karan Jyoti ko pakade uske hath se khud ko marne laga.

Jyoti ye sah ni payi:- bhai ye kya ker rahe h aap,esa kerke gudiya ko paap mat chadahaiye .

Ye bol jyoti apna hath chudati h or karan ko rote hue gale laga leti h or bolti.

Karan :- mujhe maaf ker de gudiya, mane tujh per apni gudiya per hath uthaya,ji kerta h apne ye hat kat k abhi fek du.

Ye bol wo alag hota h Jyoti se or ek talvar ka avahan kerta h or jese hi talvar ati h to apna hath age ker wo katne hi wala tha ki jyoti ne furti se uska hath roka or talvar ko fek ker ker ek thappad karan ko laga diya .
Jyoti gusse me:- bhaiiii,ye kya kerne ja rahe the aap,bhul gaye ki aapko ek kharoch bhi aati h to taklif mujhe hoti or aap itni si bat p ye kerne chale the ,dobara esa kiya to mujhse bura koi ni hoga.

Karan apna gal sahalate hue :- lo ho gya ab hisab barabar.

Jyoti samjh gayi karan uski tang khich raha tha or ek bar fir uska popat ker diya.

Jyoti karan k sine p pyar se muko ki barsat kerte hue .

Jyoti :- aap sach me bahut gande ho humesha mujhe tang kerte ho.

Ye bolne k sath wo khilkila k hasne lagi or karan k gale lag gayi.

Karan :- bas tu ese hi khush raha ker gudiya, chahe 2 thappad mar le ker per you naraj na hoya ker.

Jyoti:- bhai, sorry mane gusse m kuch jyada hi bol diya kal apko, sorry bhaiyu.

Karan:- tu kyu sorry bol rahi h gudiya balki sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye,jo apni gudiya p hath uthaya,kitna ganda bhai hu na m.

Jyoti:- ji ni aap duniya k best bhaiya ho,or bahan jav galti kare to bhai ka haq h use thappad laga k sahi raste p lagane ka,sorry bhaiyu kal pata ni kyu mujhe itna gussa aagaya ,yaha tak ki m choti ko marne p bhi chali gayi.

Ye bol wo firse rone lagi,karan usko shant karate hue,sshhh koi bat ni gudiya hota h or ((usko chedte hue)) per agge se esi harkat ki to fir thappad padegi,kyunki ye mera haq h,jesa ki tune bola.

Jyoti masum sa chahra bna k:- ha per please dhire lagana,kal wala bahut jor se laga.

Ye bolne k sath dono hasne lage or Jyoti ne naina se bhi mafi mangne ka tay kiya.

Jyoti usko phone lagati h.

Jyoti:- hello choti.

Naina phone uthate hue :- hello di ((wo abhi bhi kal wale accident se dari hui thi)) ji boliye.

Jyoti:- choti ,kal jo hua uske liye sorry,m janti hu mane jo kiya uske baad m ek badi bahan kahalane layak ni ,per fir bhi ho sake to apni is nadan di ko maaf ker dena meri gudiya.

Naina :- are di esa bol k apni choti ko sharminda na kijiye,galti mane bhi to ki thi ,aap dono se badtamiji ki or yaha tak ki bhai p humla bhi kiya.
Please aap apni choti ko maaf ker dijiye.

Karan speaker p dal phone:- acha chalo sorry sorry fitus ho gaya,ab chodo kalki bate or ye batao mere sath rat ko icecream khane kon chalega.
Dono bahane ek sath '- bhaiya mai.
Jyoti:- wese abhi tu kaha h choti.
Naina:- di ek naye mission p ayi hu tension not,time se pahale ghar pahunch jayuni,apko akele sari icecream ni khane dungi.
Jyoti :- hehe,chal apna dhayan rakhna or koi bhi jarurat ho to yad ker Lena.
Naina:- tension not di,veer or preety di bhi mere sath h aap bas bhaiya ki jeb dhili Kerne ki teyari kero bas.
Love you di ,love you bhai ,bye.
Jyoti ::- love you too choti.
Karan :- love you too nainu.

Naina or karan se baat kerke jyoti ka man kuch yu halka hua wo asma or bhagwan k darshan wali bat bhi bhul si gayi ,kyunki uske liye sirf apne bhai or apne parivar ka pyar mayne rakhta tha,per use dhyan ni tha shayad ye uski ek laparwahi, bhavishya ki ek bahut badi galati sabit ho sakti h.
Wahi dusri or

Jyoti se baat kerne k baad naina ka bhi man halka ho gaya tha.

Veer :- kya bat h naina kya bol rahi thi jyoti bahan.
Naina khushi khushi batati h ki kese Jyoti ne phone kerke sari narajgi dur ker li h.

Preety:- are wah ye to bahut achi baat h sister, Jyoti di ne bhi tumhe maaf ker diya ab hum sab ek parivar ki tarah rah sakenge.

Tabhi naina ko aagage gadi rokne padi kyunki samne sadak do raste m bat gayi thi.

Veer :- kese pata kare naina ki konsa rast sahi h,jisse hum kile tak pahunch sake.

Naina:- humara dabru kab kam aayega.

Veer haste hue :- dabru ab ye kon h.

Naina apni jacket se bottle nikalke kholti h or wahi bona bhut dabru bahar nikalta h jise naina ne kaid kerke apna nokar banaya tha.

Dabru angdai lete hue apni bacho si tone me :- bottle nock kerke ni khol sakti kya naina ki bachi,pata h kitni mast nind so raha tha m.

Naima uski gardan pakad kyu :- kyu be damru k bache kuch jyada hi ni bol raha tu ,karu tera kam tamam.

Damru darte hue :- ni ni sorry,age se esa ni bolunga.

Preety haste hue :- ye jocker kon hai.

Naina veer or preety ko batate hue bolte hue damru se boli.

Naina:- sun damru tu abhi ud ker ja or pata ker konsa rasta purane khandar ki or jata h or ager bhagne ki koshish ki na to.

Damru:- ni ni m ni bhagunga,ye bol wo ud ker uper ki or jane laga or ud ker dono rasto ka muayna kerne k baad aake bola.

Damru :- ye wala rasta sahi h .

Naina:- sabash damru ab tum jaker so sakte ho.
Damru :- pahale uthati h or fir bolti h so jao.
Naina :- kya bola be.
Damru :- kkuch ni.
Ye bol wo ander chala gaya or wo naina apni jeep sahi raste ki or bhada deti h.

Is baat se anjan kile ke preto k mukhiya shakal k doot humesha is raste p najar banaye rakhte h.

Ped p bethe pret ne jese hi naina or uske dosto ko dekha turant apni special bansuri se message pahuncha diya shakal tak.

Shakal ne jab wo bansuri wali aawaz ka message suna .

Shakal :- brihaspur ki bhut nashak naina wo yaha aa rahi h,kyu ,jarur uus satrangi bhale k liye hi aayi hogi.

Per wo aato gayi per wo bachegi ni,usko marke m aaj sare bhut jati ka badla lunga.

Rambha, chilate hue usne apne ek chalave ko bulaya.

Rambha :- hukum mere malik.

Shakal :- naina or uske dost yahi aarahe h ,kuch esa karo ,ki wo raste me hi mare Jaye.

Rambha :- esa hi hoga malik.

Ye bol waha se gayab ho gaya or raste me pahunch achanak se naina ki gadi ka tire kuch yu puncher kiya ki uska accident hote hote bacha ,naina ne en time p gadi ko palatne se bacha liya

Naina hafte hue:- veer , preety tum dono thik to hona.

Preety :- hum to thik naina but sanjh ni aaraha ki achanak se tyre puncher kese ho gaya

Naina :- ye to mujhe bhi samjh ni araha per shukar h mane aj subah hi extra stupny jeep me rakh li thi.

Veer :- tum rahane do naina,m change ker deta hu.

Tabhi preety ki najar samne ek dhabe p padi.

Preety:- chal na choti jab tak veer tyre change kerta h jav tak kuch kha lete h ,subah se hum tino ne hi kych ni khaya.

Naina :- bhuk to mujhe bhi lagi,veer tum bhi tyre kerne k baad dhabe per aajana.

Veer ha m sir hilata h or naina or preety dhabe k bahar lagi kursi p beth k khana order kerne k liye bulati h.

Tabhi ek adhed umar ka admi jisne apna chahra kambal se dhaka hua tha wo order lene laga

Naina:- ye chahra kyu dhaka hua h apna bhai

Admi:- chahra jal gaya tha isliye.

Preety:- khana to jala hua ni milega na.

Naina:- preety
Preety :- acha baba sorry.
Thodi der m wo khana leker ata h or tab tak veer bhi achuka tha.

Or vo jese hi khana shuru kerte h , naina ko kuch gadbad lagti h or tabhi uski najar us admi k panvo p padti h,jo ulte the.

Naina :- ishare se veer or preety ko rokti h or us admi ko bulate hue boli.

Naina:- suno isme namak jyada ho gaya h ,jara ise badal do .

Wo admi jess hi plate lene ko jhuka tabhi naina me uspe abhimanntrit jal chidak diya or wo shetan apne asli roop m aake jalne laga ye or koi ni raambha tha jise shakal ne bheja tha.

Naina :- friends,ab is naye safar m jin bhuto se humara samna hone ja raha h vo pahale se bhi kayi jyada khatarnak h.

Jeae ki abhi humne dekha ki kese hume humari shaktio k home k bavjud bhi is chalave ka ahasas ni hua.

Veer '- tum sahi kah rahi ho naina,hume apna har kadam fuk fuk k rakhna hoga.

Naina or uske friends fir apni jeep me bethte h or nikal pade saptrangi bhale ki khoj me wahi dusri or.

Asma jise pata chal gaya tha apni shaktiyo se ki uski jyoti ko karan k khilaaf bhadkane ki chaal nakamyab rahi to uske gusse se para high ho gaya.

Asma khud se :- is baar to tu mere jal se bach gayi kismat se jyoti , per ab jo m chal chalungi usse teri shakti tera apna bhai hi tere khilaaf ho jayega or fir tujhe barbad kerne se mujhe koi ni rok payega.

Hahah.....

Ye bol aasma apni agli chal ki yojna banane lagi.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned.
Jabardast update bhai
Ye Ashma kyu Jyoti ke peeche padi hai usko barbaad kerne ke liye wo bhi Karan ke hi hatho ......?
 

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Kabhi Sunday kabhi Thursday bhai umeed jaha kar ap to balti bhar pani dal dete ho
Bhai m khud regular update Dena chahta hu per meri financial condition is time bahut kharab h 3 mahine se loss k chakar m shop band padi h,is chakkar m na to time mil pa raha h of na hi dimag chal raha h kam na hone ki vajah se ghar kharcha jugad kerke kese n kese chala chala rahe h
 

Harry rocks

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Bhai m khud regular update Dena chahta hu per meri financial condition is time bahut kharab h 3 mahine se loss k chakar m shop band padi h,is chakkar m na to time mil pa raha h of na hi dimag chal raha h kam na hone ki vajah se ghar kharcha jugad kerke kese n kese chala chala rahe h
Ab aap log hi batayiye ese time m update kese likhu.
 
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Gaurav1969

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Harry bhai aapki update 1 padhne ke sath hi ek alag sa affection ho gya is story se jo latest update 263 tak kab padh liya pata hi na chala .aapki lekhni ko sat sat naman hai is reader ki taraf se .bahut hi kamal ki bonding hai karan aur jyoti ke bich .
Tareef ke liye shabd kam par rahe hai ya konse shabd ka chunav kar aapki tareef karu ye samajh nahi aa raha. Aapki story dil ko choo gyi bahut kam hi aisi kahaniya hoti hai jo is tarah dil mein baith jaati hai .
Update 261 ke baad se jo fastforwarding aapne dikhayi kaabil-e-tareef hai bina lay tode bahut se ghatnao ko kuch updates mein prastut karne ka hunar har kisi mein nahi hota .
Aapke reply se samajh skta hu ki bhautik jagat mein aap par bahut si jimmedariyan hai .bhagwan se vinti bhi hogi ki aapki kathinayion ko suljha de tatha aap ko tarakki de .

Ek reader ke taraf se ek request hai aapse ki kripya is story ko adhura na chhode bhale hi shuruat se aapke sath nahi raha hu par aasha hai ki ant tak aapke sath bana rahunga . Aap dono life (writer's life and personal life)ko balance karte hue update de wo hi sabse badi baat hogi .
Jald se jald aapke notification ki ummeed rahegi aur naye updates ki bhi .
Once again thank you so much for this great amzing wonderful story.
 

Gaurav1969

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Waiting for your next marvellous update harry bhai
 

Harry rocks

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Harry bhai aapki update 1 padhne ke sath hi ek alag sa affection ho gya is story se jo latest update 263 tak kab padh liya pata hi na chala .aapki lekhni ko sat sat naman hai is reader ki taraf se .bahut hi kamal ki bonding hai karan aur jyoti ke bich .
Tareef ke liye shabd kam par rahe hai ya konse shabd ka chunav kar aapki tareef karu ye samajh nahi aa raha. Aapki story dil ko choo gyi bahut kam hi aisi kahaniya hoti hai jo is tarah dil mein baith jaati hai .
Update 261 ke baad se jo fastforwarding aapne dikhayi kaabil-e-tareef hai bina lay tode bahut se ghatnao ko kuch updates mein prastut karne ka hunar har kisi mein nahi hota .
Aapke reply se samajh skta hu ki bhautik jagat mein aap par bahut si jimmedariyan hai .bhagwan se vinti bhi hogi ki aapki kathinayion ko suljha de tatha aap ko tarakki de .

Ek reader ke taraf se ek request hai aapse ki kripya is story ko adhura na chhode bhale hi shuruat se aapke sath nahi raha hu par aasha hai ki ant tak aapke sath bana rahunga . Aap dono life (writer's life and personal life)ko balance karte hue update de wo hi sabse badi baat hogi .
Jald se jald aapke notification ki ummeed rahegi aur naye updates ki bhi .
Once again thank you so much for this great amzing wonderful story.
Bhai kal thoda free hu kal update dene ki koshish kerta hu kyunki abhi to aj pure din se ghar lota hi hu,m khud chahta hu ye story complete ho per halato k karan ho raha h ye sab
 

Gaurav1969

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Bhai kal thoda free hu kal update dene ki koshish kerta hu kyunki abhi to aj pure din se ghar lota hi hu,m khud chahta hu ye story complete ho per halato k karan ho raha h ye sab
Harry bhai aapko jab jaise time nikalta hai aap update dijiyega hum aapko force nahi kar rahe hai .bas ye story ke end tak ka safar pura karne ki ek khwaish hai usko jaroor aap pura kijiyega .
jeewan mein kathinaiyan bahut sari hai un kathinaiyon se nipatate hue aapko time mil jaye to update de dijiyega hum aapka besabri se intezar karenge.
waiting for next update .
 

Gaurav1969

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Jabardast update bhai
Ye Ashma kyu Jyoti ke peeche padi hai usko barbaad kerne ke liye wo bhi Karan ke hi hatho ......?
Maybe Zoya ke kaaran kyonki Asma aur Zoya sisters the aur kuch aisa hua tha past mein jisse Zoya ki maut ka kaaran Asma Karan ko manti hai isiliye Karan se badla lene ke liye Jyoti ko uske opposite kar rahi hai
 

Gaurav1969

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Harry bhai aapne bola tha ki friday yani yesterday update aayega par saturday yani today tak bhi naahi diya........ hurt hua .
Koi na intezaar kar lenge jaldi updates dijiyega .
Aap ye bhi to kar skte ho ki updates ready kar lo 5 6 tab aaram se time leke dena
 

Harry rocks

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Harry bhai aapne bola tha ki friday yani yesterday update aayega par saturday yani today tak bhi naahi diya........ hurt hua .
Koi na intezaar kar lenge jaldi updates dijiyega .
Aap ye bhi to kar skte ho ki updates ready kar lo 5 6 tab aaram se time leke dena
He idea acha h ,ab esa hi karunga,ya do bade update dunga,Diwali k baad se
 
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