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Update no :- 67 (mega update)
Karan or jyoti gadi ko chod us disha ki or nikal pade jaha se awaaz aayi thi.karan or jyoti jungle k ander ghus ker kuch dur pahunche to samne pate h ki 3 log ek orat ko ped se bandh rakha tha.
Admi 1 :- tere pati ko ab pata chalega ki , hume na kerne ka kya anjaam hota h.
Admi 2 :- ha sale ko kitni baar kaha tha ki , hume apni jamin bech de , per vo harami na mana.
Admi 3 :- ha aaj acha moka mila h , tera pati to , aaj bahar gaya hua h , aaj tujhe maar k teri lash ki wo halat karenge , jise dekh k wo khud hi mar jayega.
Lekin usse pahale teri jawani ka maza lutenge
Orat(rote) :- bhagwaan k liye mujhe chod dijiye , wo jamin hum ni bech sakte , usi per kheti ker k ham do waqt ki roti kha pate h.
Per un darindo per us bichari k rone ka koi fark ni pada . Or wo abhi uski or bhade hi the ki achanak ek bande ki gardan kisi ne piche se pakad k uska sir ek ped p de mara , jisse uska sir fat gaya , or wo vahi behosh ho gaya
Ye war karan ne hi kiya tha, bache 2no aadmi ye dekh ker heran ho gaye ki 1 bache ne unke hate kate pahalwan aadmi ki ek baar me hi ye halat ker di .
Aadmi 1 :- e ladke kon h tu sale , teri ye majal ki tune mere dost ko mara , ager jinda rahana chahata h to chupchap yaha se chala ja.
Karan :- moka to m tujhe deta hu , chup chap patli gali se nikal lo verna esi jagah p marunga sale, ki doctor ko dikhane m bhi sharm aayegi.
Admi 2 haste hue bola :- ye bacha hame marega.
Ja bache ja nikal le yaha se apni chamiya k sath , verna pahale tere hath per todenge, fir is orat or teri is londiya k sath.......
Abhi usne apni baat bhi ni ki thi ki ,karan ne ek jordar laat uske pet m de mari or wo bhi udte hue ped se takra k behosh ho gaya.
Karan :- mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
Apne 2 sathiyon ki ye halat dekh aadmi 1 ne apni jeb se banduk nikal li ,
Admi 1 :- sale bahut badi galti ker di , tune mere aadmiyo ko maar k , ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.
Or itna bol ker usne karan p goli chalani chahi,side m khadi jyoti ne uske hath p ek jordar laat mardi.
Jisse uske hath se banduk chut k dur gir gayi, or karan ne isi baat ka fayda utha uski dhunayi shuru ker di.
Or usko bhi maar mar k behosh ker diya , fir unhone us orat ki rassiya kholi or jyoti ne usse pucha aap thik to h na.
Orat :- ji m thik hu , aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad aapne meri jaan or ijat dono bachai in hewano se.
Jyoti :- isme shukriya kesa , ye to humara farz tha.
Karan :- wese aap yaha kese , or ye sab aapke piche kyu pade the.
Orat :- kya batau sahab ,m or mere pati yahi thoda aage apne ek chote se ghar m rahate h , isi jungle m .
Or mere pati ek kisan h jo humari hi ek chote se jamin k tukde p kheti kerte h jisse hamara gujara chalta h.
Per ek din in kamino ki najar humari jamin pe pad gayi , jiski kimat main road k pas hone k kaaran bahut jyada h, inhone humse wo jamin kharidne ki bahut koshis ki , peso ka lalach diya , jaan se marne ki dhamki bhi di per mere pati ne inhe saaf saf mana ker diya.
Lekin aaj mere pati kahi bahar gaye hue the , to pata ni inko kese pata chal gaya , or ye mujhe ghar se utha ker yaha le aaye ,
Or ye bol vo rone lagi , jyoti ne use kese n kese shant karwaya , fir boli.
Jyoti :- aapka ghar kaha h aunty , aaiye hum aapko chod dete h.
Orat pahale to na kerti h , per fir maan jati h.
Karan(gundo ki or dekhte hue) :- per hame inka bhi kuch kerna ho
Ye bol wo police ko phone lagane ka try kerta h per signal ni tha waha pe.
Karan :- shit yaar , no signal . Ab kya kare.
Jyoti ko ek idea aata h or wo boli .
Jyoti :- bhai ek idea h , kyu na pahale hum gundo ko yahi bandh k , inko inke ghar tak chod dete h .
Fir aaker kuch soch lenge na.
Karan ko jyoti ki ye baat sahi lagti h or wo bola.
Karan :- acha idea h gudiya , esa ker tu inke sath aage chal , m tab tak inko bandh k aata hu.
Jyoti :- ok bhai.
Fir wo orat or jyoti dhire dhire aage bhadne lagi , or karib 10 min baad karan bhi unke pass bhag k pahunch gaya.
Jungle kafi darawana lag raha tha , har jagah andhera chaya hua tha,or dur kahi se bhediyon k rone ki aawaz aarahi thi.
Or achanak se vatavaran m thand bhi bad gayi thi, pee karan or jyoti ne is baat pe jyada dhyan ni diya tha .
Shayad isliye kyunki unhe bas jaldi se ghar pahunchna tha , kyunki sonam ghar p akeli thi ,or uski tabiyat bhi thik ni thi.
Wo orat un dono ko apne ghar le jati h , jo ek kacha makaan tha. Ander jaker wo unhe ek charpai p bitha thi h or boli.
Orat :- aapka ek baar fir meri jan bachane k liye dhanyawad.
Karan :- ji ab hume ab chalna chahiye.
Orat :- ji ab bahut raat ho chuki h , is samay aao kaha jayenge. Esa kijie aaj raat yahi ruk jaiye, kal subah nikal jaiyega.
Jyoti :- ji hum jarur rukte per hune jana hi hoga , hamari choti bahan ghar per akeli h or uski tabiyat bhi kharab h.
Orat bahut bolti h per karan or jyoti ni mante to wo boli.
Orat :- thik h ,per jane se pahale aapko mere sath ek - 2 cup chahe pini padegi.
Karan or jyoti us orat ko mana ni ker pate or wo orat chay banane chali jati h, or karib 10 min baad wo 3 glass chay lati h.
Fir 3no wahi beth k karan or jyoti chay pine lagte h, or sath m us orat se thodi thodi baate bhi kerne lage.
Per dhire dhire dono ko behoshi si chane lagi , tabhi karan ne ladkhadati aawaz se bola.
Karan :- kon ho tum or kya milaya tha tune chay me.
Ye sun wo orat haste hue apne asli rup me aagayi or boli.
Orat :- kajri hu m. Teri mot.
Or karan or jyoti abhi kuch bol pate itne m vo behosh ho gaye.
Ji haa dosto wo orat kajri hi thi z or ye usika mayajal tha, aakhiri ladki ko pane k liye.or wo gunde bhi kajri k hi pret gulam the.
Kajri(jor jor se haste hue) :- haha akhir kar mujhe 100vi ladki mil hi gayi, ab malik mujhe sabse shaktishali chudel bana denge.
Tabhi kajri ko kuch ahasas hota h or wo us ladki k kamre ki or jati h , jaha per bandhi hui thi wo.
Or jaa ker usko uske balo se pakad leti h. Ladki heran ho jati h ye achanak se kese ho gaya.
Kajri (haste hue) :- yahi soch rahi h na achanak se tera kavach kese tut gaya, lagta h tera wo bhagwan bhi dar k bhag gaya yaha se .
Ab malik to dugna khush ho jayenge , kyunki m unhe ek ni 2 2 ladkiya lake jo dungi.
Ladki :- ni ye ni ho sakta , bhagwan kabhi bhi shetan se ni har sakte.
Kajri :- ho sakta ni , ho chuka h murkh ladki. Ab chal mere sath.
Or kajri us ladki ko ghasitte hue bahar karan or jyoti jo behosh pade the.
Kajri :- pata ni ye sare kamchor kaha mar gaye, lagta h ab is ladke ko mujhe hi thikane lagana hoga.
Ladki(rote hue boli) :- ager tujhe ladki hi chahiye to mujhe hi leja na chudel, in bacho ko kyu marne p tuli h.
Kajri us ki taraf ghum jati h per uska hath , jiske nakhun chaku jese bade or thikhe the wo karan ki or lambe hote hue bad rahe the.
Kajri :- kyu ri manhoos , tujhe in logo ki itni chinta kyu ho rahi h, tu to jayegi tere sath me ye ladki bhi.
Or is ladke k maas ko to m shaktishali banne ki khushi m davat k tor p khaungi
Itna abhi kajri ne bola hi tha ki , achanak waha ek bhayanak chikh gunj uthi , jo kajri ki hi thi.
Hua yu tha ki jese hi kajri ka hath karan k sine p pahuncha to , jyoti ne ek bade chaku se uska hath hi kaat dala jo kuch esa tha.
Ye foldable hunting knife jyoti ne kal hi kharida tha, aane wale khatre k liye, lekin ek khas baat or thi ki us knife se ek nili roshni se chamak raha tha , jo jyoti k hath se nikal rahi thi.
Kajri gusse or hairani se jhalate hue chikhi :- kon ho tum dono , koi aam insan mere banaye hue behoshi ki dawai se ni bach sakta .
Tum jo bhi ho mere hatho ni bachaoge , tumhare ye war mera kuch ni bigad sakte.ye dekho.
Itna bol wo apna kata hath aage kerti h, or apna hath wapis judne ka intezaar kerti h.
Tabhi kajri ko ek or shock lagta h , jab uska hath wapas ni judta .
Kajri ( gusse se pagal hote hue) :- namumkin , ye mera hath kyu ni jud raha , kon ho tum, kisne bheja h tumhe.
Karan :- tum jese dushto ka kaal hu m, or mujhe bhejne wale vahi ishwer , vahi mahabali hanuman ji h , jinki shakti k samne tumhari itni bhi okaat ni ki tum inhe(ladki ki or ishara kerte hue ) chu bhi ni payi dusht.
Or ha tera wo khas aadmi(pret leader jise karan ne us din sking k time mara tha) mil gaya kya.
Jyoti :- kesi baat kerte ho bhai , use to aapne hi to uske bhai ko pahunchaya tha.
Kajri(chonkte hue) :- acha to vo tha kamine jisne mere khas aadmi k bhai ko mara tha or jisse ladne k liye hi usne meri foz leke gaya tha , per abhi tak uska koi pata ni chala.
Tune use bhi mar diya , kamine ab tu ni bachega
Fir wo apne gulamo ko bulati h.
Kajri :- simha .
Per waha koi ni aata .
Karan haste hue :- jinko yamraj ka hi bulava aagaya h , wo tere bulave m thodi aayenge chudel.
Short flashback.
Karan or jyoti jese hi aawaz ko sun waha pahunche the , to unlogo ko dekhte hi karan or jyoti unko pahachan gaye the.
Karan (man me ) :- dekh rahi h gudiya , in paapio ki notanki.
Jyoti (man me hi) :- ha bhai , ye dusht ese hi masum logo ko fasate h , apne jaal m. Kya bolte ho bhai inka game baja dale.
Karan :- ni re gudiya , ese n hume maja aayega , n hi hamre readers ko , chalo inhi ka game inke sath hi khelte h , dekhte h aakhir ye sab ye ker kyu rahe h.
Fir karan or jyoti jaker un preton ko thikane lagate h , or jab karan jyoti ko aage bhadne ko kahata h , to unke thode aage hi nikalne k baad karan un 3no preton k pass jata h.
Karan :- bas kero notanki salo , ab apne asli rup m aabhi jao.
Pret ye sun buri chonk k uth jate h or unme se ek bola.
Pret 1 :- tu janta h hum kon h.
Karan :- abe itni bekar acting karoge to pahachanunga ni kya , salo tumse achi acting to krk hi ker leta h.
Pret :- ab pahachan hi liya h to marne k liye teyar ho ja.
Karan :- sorry guys , m tumhare sath jarur khelta , per kya h na mere pass time ni h.
So good bye guys , rest in hell.
Ye bol karan apna ek hath age kerta h , jinme se ek laal roshni nikal ker 3no ko jala deti h.
Fir karan jaldi se jyoti k pass pahunch jata h or man hi man jo abhi kiya wo bata deta h.
Fir karan jese hi kajri k ghar m enter kerta h , tabhi karan ko negative energy k sath sath , ek positive energy ka bhi ahasas hota h. Jise mahasus ker karan ko kuch samjh aajata h.
Fir kajri jese hi karan or jyoti ko chay deti h to uska hath karan k hath se touch ho jata h , jisse karan ko uske irado k bare m sab kuch pata chal jata h or ladki k baare m bhi.
Flashback end .
Ab chudel ka gusse k maare bura haal ho gaya tha. Or usne apne dono hatho se aag k gole fekne lagi .
Per karan ko vo apni or slow motion m hi aate hue dikh rahe the , to apni ankh band ker ker mantra bola ,or usi ke sath uske hatho m ek talvar aagayi.ye wahi mantra tha jo baba ne use yaha ane se pahale diya tha.
Or karan ne bade aaram se wo gole us talvaar se rok diye , karan k paas jyada time ni tha , to usne apni ankhe band ker k kuch bola .
Fir apni talvaar kajri ki or ker di , jisse ek roshni nikal k kajri se takrayi, or kajri jo ki hava m udte hue war ker rahi thi uski sari shaktiya nasht ho gayi or wo jamin p aaker gir gayi.
Fir karan or jyoti uski or aage bhadne lage.
Karan :- tere paap ka ghada bhar chuka h kajri , aaj tak jitne bhi tune bure karm kiye h , uske katmfal pane k liye sajj ho ja.
Ye bol karan uski talvaar se uski gardan udani chahi wo bol uthi.
Kajri :- ruk jao , kya tum ek orat p hath uthaoge, kya ye tum jese veer ko shobha dega.
Karan :- sahi kaha , m ek orat pe hath ni utha sakta , per ye to utha sakti h na.
Ye bol k karan jara sa side hua , or uske piche se jyoti samne aayi.
Karan (talvar dete hue) :- le jyoti iski ye aakhiri khawaish bhi puri ker dete h.
Lekin tabhi wo jyoti bol uthi ,
Jyoti :- bhai , iski mot usike hath honi chahiye , jisse isne uska sab kuch chin liya.
Ye bol jyoti us ladki k pass jati h , or apna wo knife jissme abhi bhi wo roshni chamak rahi thi, dete hue boli.
Jyoti :- lijiye , isko aapko hi.marna hoga
Ladki :- ji m kese maar paungi , m to ek sadharan si ladki hu or ye ek chudel.
Jyoti :- bas ladkiyo ki yahi soch use kamzor banati h , bhulo mat is sansaar ki har nari maa adishakti ki hi ansh h , or har ek ladki m hi mahakali mojud hoti h, isliye ye shanka chodo or ker do is dhushta ka ant .
Kyunki nari ager shanka tyag de to khud shankar ban jati h.
Bhulo mat yahi h wo , jisne tumhare pyaar ko berahami se mara tha , kya tum apne pyaar ka badla ni logi.
Jyoti ki ye baat sun ladki ko wo seen yaad aajata h , jab usiki aankho k samne in preto ne us ladke ko mar dala tha, jisse uski aankh se angare barasane lagte h or wo jyoti k hatho se chanku le kajri ki or dod k jati h or wo chanku uske sine m ghop deti h.
Or kajri ek bhayanak chinkh k sath narak ki yatra pe pahunch jati h.
Usko maarne k baad ladki wahi beth rone lagti h , usne apne pyaar ki mrityu ka badla le hi liya tha aakhir kar.
Kuch der rone dene k baad , jyoti us ladki k pas jaker use shant karwati h.
Ladki (hath jod k boli) :- aapka kese m shukriya ada keru , aapne na hi mujhe sirf is chudel se aajad krwa meri raksha ki, balki mere pyaar ki mot ka badla lene m bhi madad ki .
Aap sakshat bhagwan ho.
Ye bol ker vo karan k per pakdne wali hoti h ki karan use rokte hue
Karan :- are are ye kya ker rahe ho aap , aapki raksha humne ni balki , aapki himmat or bajrang bali k prati aapki shradha ne ki h , hum kon hote h unki barabri kerne wale .
Dhanyawad kerna h to un hanumanaji ka hi kijiye, jinhone hume aapki raksha k liye hume madhyam banaya.
Fir karan or jyoti use ye baat kisi ko na batane ka bolte h, jise wo khushi khushi man leti h.
Fir karan uska hath pakadata h or waha se teleport ho sidha us ladki k ghar k samne prakat ho jata h.
Karan :- jaiye ab aap surakshit h , lekin aapse please ye request h ki jo bhi hua aap kisiko mat bataiyega.
Ladki :- aap chinta mat kijiye karan ji , m wada kerti hu ye sab mujh tak hi simit rahega.
Ye bol wo karan k galo p ek kiss ker deti h or sharma k apne ghar m chali jati h .
Or karan bichara apna sa muh le wapas jungle pahunch jara h , or man hi man shukar manata h ki jyoti waha ni thi.
Jyoti :- bhai , ab aage kya kerna h.
Karan :- kal hume jana h gudiya , isliye hume aaj hi yaha se preto ka samrajya ka nash kerna hoga.
Jyoti :- wo kese bhai
Karan :- preto k raja vikral ka ant kerke.
Jyoti :- per bhai ,wo milega kaha.
Karan :- wo mujhe kajri se pata chal chuka h gudiya , yaha se 2 mile dur dakshin disha m ek kila h , vahi h vikaral ka thikana.
Jyoti :- to chaliye bhai der kis baat ki,
fir karan or jyoti nikal padte h us disha m.
Abhi unhone chale thodi der hi hui thi ki , karan ko kuch dhayan aaya or wo jyoti se bola.
Karan :- gudiya,ek baat yaad rakhna , ab thodi aage se tujhe apne piche se kayi tarike ki aawaze sunayi degi .Per kuch bhi ho jaye tu piche mud k mat dekhna , verna preto ki maya m hum fas jayege.
Jyoti :- ji bhai.
Karan or jyoti abhi kuch aage hi chale honge ki unhe , aawaz ani shuru ho gayi.
Tabhi karan k kano m rohan ki aawaz padti h.
Rohan :- bhai bacha mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.
Per karan janta tha ki ye sab preto ki maya h , isliye wo aage badhta chala gaya .
Tabhi jyoti ko radha ki aawaz aati h.
Radha :- di bachao mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.
Lekin jyoti bhi khud ko samjha leti h. Tabhi ab undono k kano m asha ki awaz aati h.
Asha :- karan jyoti beta mujhe bachao , m jinda hu . Ye pret yaha mujhe pakad k le aaye the.
Ab jyoti se raha ni jaraha tha , wo mudne wali hi hoti h karan use rok leta h.
Karan :- ni gudiya , ye sirf un preto ki chal h, hume fasane ki.
Ab karan jyoti ko aage chalne ko bolta h or wo uske piche chal raha hota h.
Tabhi jyoti k kaano m karan ki chilane ki aawaz padti h.
Karan :- gudiyaaaaaaa
Karan ki awaz sun jyoti akhir piche mud hi jati h , lekin ye bhi un aatmao ka chal hi tha.
Karan :- ye kya kiya gudiya tune !
Or usike sath aas pas ki pedo ki jade nikal jyoti ko jakadne lagti h , karan unhe apni talvar se katne ki koshis kerta to wo wapas jud jati .
Tabhi karan ko ek idea aata h or wo apni ankhe band ker, apni talvar hava m uthata h , jiske sath uski talvar se aag nikalne lagti h .
Fir karan dobara war kerta h , or is war wo kamyab hota h or jade jal jati h.
Jisse jyoti aajad ho jati h or jamin p gir k hafne lagti h , karan uske pass jake .
Karan :- tu thik to h na jyoti .
Jyoti :- ha bhai and sorry mane aapki bat ni mani.
Karam :- koi baat ni gudiya , m janta hu tune esa sirf meri chinta k mare kiya.
Wahi dusri or
Vikral apni aasuri sadhna m laga hua tha, or 100 vi ladki k intezaar m tha, per use abhi tak karan or jyoti k ane or kajri ki mot ka pata ni chala tha.
Ye karan or jyoti k locket ki ek or khasiyat thi, jiske kaaran koi bhi unki ki mojudgi ka pata ni laga sakta tha.
Or dusrA kaaran ye bhi tha ki, use apni sadhna se fursat hi ni mili thi.
Back to the hero.
Karan or jyoti aage bad hi rahe the ki , unhe ek ghayal bhudha aadmi dikhayi deta h.
Karan or jyoti unke pass jate h or puchte h ,
Jyoti :- baba aapki ye halat kese or aap is jungle m kese .
Bhuda :- beti m musafir hu , yaha se gujar hi raha tha , ki ek bhediye ne hamla ker diya .Usse m bach to gaya kese n kese , per ghayal ho gaya.
Wo samne ped dekh rahi ho aagar uski patiya pis ker mere ghav per laga di jaye to mere ko aaram milega.
Karan(man me ) :- ye sale ni sudharenge, dhyan se gudiya , ye ek special type ka pret h .
Chahe bade se bada tantrik hi kyu na ho ager ise chu le to jal pal bhar m jal jaye. ruko m dekhta hu ise.
Karan :- rukiye baba m lagata hu aapke oshadhi.
Bhudha ye sun muskurane laga.
Ye bol karan ped per chad k patiya todta h or nich utarte hue janbujhker wo pate niche gira deta h.
Karan :- are ye to gande ho gaye , chalo koi baat ni .
Mere pas ek choti pani ki bottle h or karan apni jeb se ek choti si botel nikal ker patiyo ko dhota h or unhe pis kar us bhude k ghavo p lagata h.
Bhudha apne asli rup m aajata h jo jo ek aag se bana shetan tha or gusse m chilaya
Fire devil :- ye kese ho sakta h , tum bach kese gaye, kher chodo ab ni bachoge.
Ye bol vo abhi karan or jyoti ki or bharne laga tha ki , uska sharir achank se pathar ka hone laga.
Devil chikhte hue :- ye kya kiya tune , kya lagaya tha tune mere sharir pe .
Karan :- kuch khas ni , wahi patiya jo tune boli thi , bas un patiyo ko mane gangajal se dhoya tha.
Devil :-. Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
Bas itna hi chila paya or uke baad devil pathar ka ban gaya .
Ji ha dosto karan ne apni shaktiyon se gangajal hi mangwa liya tha or usse pattiyo ko dho ker us shetan k laga diya , jisse uski ye halat ho gayi.
Ab karan or jyoti ese hi sab preto ka safaya kerte kerte aakhir vikral k mahal pahunch hi gaye .
Karan k dimag m ek idea aaya or usne jyoti ko bhi vahi man hi man bataya .
Wahi dusri or
Vikral ka ab sabra jwab dene laga tha
Vikaral :- kaha rah gayi ye nikami , ek ladki na la saki 2 hafto m.
Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padti h,
Ladki mil gayi malik .
Vikral :- aao kajri , sahi samay per tu pahunch gayi yaha.
Heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto , ye kajri ni apna hero tha , jisne kajri ka rup dharan kiya tha or sath m jyoti thi , jo behosh hone ka natak ker rahi thi.unhone esa kyu kiya tha vo aage pata chal jayega.
Vikral :- jao kajri ise bhi bakiyo k sath bali kaksh m le jao , hum kuch der m vaha pahunchte h.
Ji haa doston sabhi ladkiya jinda thi jinhe kajri ne pakda tha, vikral shetan ko khush kerne k liye 101 ladkiyo ki bali dena chahata tha , pee vaad m wo 100 p aagaya.
Karan jese hi waha pahunche , to sab ladkiyo ki halat dekh usko rona aagaya or jyoti ko bhi.
Sabki halat bahut kharab thi , sab ka sharir sukh gaya tha. Sab ko dekh ker esa lag raha tha , ki vo aaj yaha ni pahunchte to vo bichariya vikral k hatho marne se pahale hi dam tod deti , sab bediyon m bandhi hui thi.
Sabhi kajri ko dekh k rone lagi or ek boli.
Ladki :- maar kyu ni deti tum hame , kyu tarfa rahi ho yu hume . Kya bigada h humne tumhara.
Karan ab asli rup m aajata h or bola .
Karan :- aap sab please mat roiye, m aap sab ko yaha se chudane hi aaya hu.
Ladki 2 :- hum.kese man le ki , tum un bhuto k sath ni ho
Karan apna hath aage kerta h jisse sab aajad ho jati h or sath ki sath swasth bhi.
Ladki 2 karan k pero m gir ker mafi mangne lagi per karan ne use samjha diya.
Jyoti :- bhai hume in sab ko ek safe jagah bhejna hoga.
Karan baba ko yaad kerta h or sabhi ladkiyo ko gahari nind sula deta h .
Baba jese hi waha aaye karan kuch bolne ko hua per pahale hi baba bol uthe.
Baba :- kuch bolne ki aavashyakata ni h putra , m janta hu tumne mujhe kisliye yaad kiya h.
Or baba sabhi ladkiyo ko apne sath apne aashram m lejate h.
Tabhi vikaral bhi vaha aajata h or ladkiyo ko gayab dekh gusse se pagal ho jata h .
Vikral :- kon h tu , tu pahuncha kese yaha, or kaha gayi wo sabhi ladkiya.
Karan :- tere liye bas itna janna hi kafi h vikaral m tera kaal hu.
Vikral haste hue :- acha to tu h vo , jiske baare m mahaprabhu ne bataya tha. Tu aato gaya....
Karan bich me tokte hue :- per jina wapas ni jaunga , yahi ghisa pita dialogue marne wala tha na tu , ge backchodiya chod or yudh ker dusht.
Vikaral apni talvaar leker karan ki or bhada , or karan vikral ki or.
Fir shuru hua dono k bich bhayanak yudh , jisme kabhi karan bhari pad raha tha to kabhi vikaral.fir karan ne uski talvar ko kaat diya .
Fir shuru hua unme dvand yudh , dono m hi apaar bal tha , dono hi ek dusre ko kadi takker de rahe the
Per jald hi karan ne usko pachad diya, per usne apne jese kayi mayavi roop bana liye.
Or apni sena ko bhi vaha bula liya jisme lakho ki sankhya me pret the.
Tabhi jyoti ne socha
Jyoti :- lagta h ab mera yudh m pravesh ka samay aagaya h.
Or itna soch usne ankhe band ki or baba ne jo use mantra diya tha , usko bola or ek hath uper kiya, tabhi uske hath me ek divya dhanush aagaya.
Jyoti ne furti se us dhanush ko sena ki or kiya , jese hi pratyncha khichi dhanush per tir apne aap agaya . Or jyoti ne wo tir chod diya.
Or wo tir jake jese hi sena p gira , uske sath hi ek visfot hua or kayi pret mare gaye, fir jyoti ese hi tiro se un preto ki sena p tut padi.
Jyoti :- bhai ap us dusht ka ant kijiya , iske in chirkuto ko to m dekh lungi.
Karan muskuraya or ab asli vikral ko dhundne laga.Karan ne apni ankh band ker man ki anko se asli vikral ko dhunda or ek jordar prahar uske sine p kiya.
Fir karan ne uski gardan uda di , per ye kya wo wapas pahale jese jud gayi, esa baar bar hota raha.vikral mar hi ni raha tha.
Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare , tabhi uske man me baba ki aawaz aayi .
Putra isne apne pran ek esi vastu m dal diya h jo isika prati rup darshati h. Or wo isi kamre m mojud h , pahale tumhe use nasht kerna hoga.
Karan baba ki baat samjh jata h or pass m rakhi vikral ki ek murti jo bilkul vesi dikhti thi , use nasht ker diya per kuch ni hua , ab karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo konsi vastu h.
Tabhi jyoti ka dhyan kamre m rakhe ek aaine pe jata h ,
Jyoti :- is aaine ka yaha kya kaam ho sakta h.
Tabhi jyoti ko puri baat samjh aajati h or wo karan se man me boli.
Jyoti :- bhai, is aaine ko nasht ker dijiye, kyunki aaina hi ek esi vastu h jo , kisi k bhi pratirup ko darsha sakta h aasani se.
Karan vesa hi kerta h or aaine p ek shakti prahar kerta h jisse uske tukde tukde ho jate h or ek kali roshni usse nikal vikaral m sama jati h.
Vikaral chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
Karan :- ab apni mritu k liye saj ho ja vikral.
Vikaral :- itni jaldi ni ladke .
Or vikral aankhe band kerke kisi ko yaad kerte hue bola
Vikral :- raksha kijiye prabhu , apne is bhakt ki raksha kijiye.
Tabhi vaha tez tez havaye chalne lagi , or ek tez roshni k sath ek shaks karan or vikral k bich m prakat hua. Jise dekh vikral ki sena or jyoti bhi ruk gaye.
Jise dekh karan unhe pahachan gaya or asmanjas fas gaya ki ab vo kya kare.
Kyunki samne preto k devta , shri pret raj sarkaar khade the, jo preton k sath sath insano k bhi pujniya h, rajasthan k mahendipur balaji k mandir m inki bhi hanumanaji k sath puje jate h
Karan ne unhe pranam kiya , or bola.
Karan(man me) :- he prabhu , ye m kya dekh raha hu , aap ish dusht ki raksha krr rahe h , jisne najane kitne masumo ki bali di h , esa mat kijiye bhagwan , m aap per prahar ni ker sakta , kripya mujhe dharm sankat m na dale.
Pret raj (vivashata k bhav se man me bole) :- m vivash hu putra , vikral mera bhakt h or bhut kal m mane ise ek baar vachan diya tha ki , m iske prano ki raksha kerne ek baar jarur aaunga.
Putra m janta hu iske apradh , or m swayam bhi iska ant chahata hu, parantu m apna vachan bhi ni tod sakta , ab tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga putra.
Karan sochne laga ki ab kya kiya jaye , pahale to use kuch samjh ni aaya , fir usko kuch yaad aya jisse uske chahare pe ek muskan aagayi.
Karan(man me) :- vachan to apne kisi or ko bhi diya tha bhut kal m prabhu. Aapki aagya ho to .
Pret raj karan ka ishara samjh jate h or karan ko vesa hi kerne ko kahate h.
Karan ab hath jod ankhe bandh ker ek mantra bolne laga.
Karan:-
अतुलितबलधामं हेमशैलाभदेहं
दनुजवनकृशानुं ज्ञानिनामग्रगण्यम् ।
सकलगुणनिधानं वानराणामधीशं
रघुपतिप्रियभक्तं वातात्मजं नमामि
Or isi k sath karan k sharir se ek roshni nikalne lagi or dhire dhire us roshni ne jo aakar liya , usko dekh sabhi preto included vikral ki fat k hath m aagayi
Kyunki us roshni ne sakshat mahabali hanuman ji ki shape leli thi.
Pretraj ne hanumanaji ko vachan diya tha ki , jaha unka vaas hoga ya koi unka nam bhi lega to koi bhi bhut pret us bhakt ka kuch ni bigad sakega.
Pret raj ko ye moka sahi laga or wo jese hi jane lage.to vikral bol utha.
Vikral :- mujhe yu chod kaha ja rahe h prabhu , aapne mujhe vachan diya tha.
Pret raj :- vachan diya jarur tha vikral per ye ni bola tha ki tumhari raksha m har kisi se kar paunga or yaha to ab is ladke ne hanuman ji ki pratikriti ko le aaya h , ab m bhi kuch ni ker sakta , mujhe jane do .
Or ye bol pret raaj waha se gayab ho gaye.
Yahi to karan ka plan tha , usne sach m hanuman ji ko ni bulaya tha , bas ek hava m hanumanaji ki shape bana di thi.
Karan :- ab to tumhara antim sahara bhi ni raha vikral , or pret raj ko yaha bula tune apne paap ka ghada pura bhar diya h .
Kyunki tune ek dev ko burayi ki taraf kerne ka prayas jo kiya .
Vikral ab bhagne laga , tabhi jyoti boli.
Jyoti :- bhai ye lo.
Or ye bol usne apna dhanush karan ki or feka , or karan ne furti se catch ker , ek tir vikaral k pero m mara , jisse vo vahi gir gaya.
Karan :- tu to bahut bada kayar nikla vikral , yudh m pith dikha ker bhag raha tha.
Per kisi ne kaha h na ki
" mot se bhi bhala koi bach paya h "
Baat to vo bilkul sahi h , per mot se bhi jyada ager kuch khatarnak h jisse koi bhi ni bach sakta , wo h vyakti ka karmfal.
Or tumhe to abhi dono milne wale h , fir tune soch bhi kese liya tu bhag jayega.
Ye sab karan ne vikral ki or bhadte hue bola.
Vikral :- mujhe maf ker do , bas ek ek moka dedo , m sab bure kam chod dunga.
Karan ;- ni vikral , tum ab shama k layak ni ho, ab apna dand pane k liye saj ho jao.
Ye bol karan ne uska sir apni talvar k ek hi vaar se uda diya or vikral k marte hi uski sena m bhagadad mach gayi.
Per vo isse pahale bhagte , jyoti ne ek mantra bol tir unki or choda , jisse sab k sab vahi bandh gaye.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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Karan or jyoti gadi ko chod us disha ki or nikal pade jaha se awaaz aayi thi.karan or jyoti jungle k ander ghus ker kuch dur pahunche to samne pate h ki 3 log ek orat ko ped se bandh rakha tha.
Admi 1 :- tere pati ko ab pata chalega ki , hume na kerne ka kya anjaam hota h.
Admi 2 :- ha sale ko kitni baar kaha tha ki , hume apni jamin bech de , per vo harami na mana.
Admi 3 :- ha aaj acha moka mila h , tera pati to , aaj bahar gaya hua h , aaj tujhe maar k teri lash ki wo halat karenge , jise dekh k wo khud hi mar jayega.
Lekin usse pahale teri jawani ka maza lutenge
Orat(rote) :- bhagwaan k liye mujhe chod dijiye , wo jamin hum ni bech sakte , usi per kheti ker k ham do waqt ki roti kha pate h.
Per un darindo per us bichari k rone ka koi fark ni pada . Or wo abhi uski or bhade hi the ki achanak ek bande ki gardan kisi ne piche se pakad k uska sir ek ped p de mara , jisse uska sir fat gaya , or wo vahi behosh ho gaya
Ye war karan ne hi kiya tha, bache 2no aadmi ye dekh ker heran ho gaye ki 1 bache ne unke hate kate pahalwan aadmi ki ek baar me hi ye halat ker di .
Aadmi 1 :- e ladke kon h tu sale , teri ye majal ki tune mere dost ko mara , ager jinda rahana chahata h to chupchap yaha se chala ja.
Karan :- moka to m tujhe deta hu , chup chap patli gali se nikal lo verna esi jagah p marunga sale, ki doctor ko dikhane m bhi sharm aayegi.
Admi 2 haste hue bola :- ye bacha hame marega.
Ja bache ja nikal le yaha se apni chamiya k sath , verna pahale tere hath per todenge, fir is orat or teri is londiya k sath.......
Abhi usne apni baat bhi ni ki thi ki ,karan ne ek jordar laat uske pet m de mari or wo bhi udte hue ped se takra k behosh ho gaya.
Karan :- mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.
Apne 2 sathiyon ki ye halat dekh aadmi 1 ne apni jeb se banduk nikal li ,
Admi 1 :- sale bahut badi galti ker di , tune mere aadmiyo ko maar k , ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.
Or itna bol ker usne karan p goli chalani chahi,side m khadi jyoti ne uske hath p ek jordar laat mardi.
Jisse uske hath se banduk chut k dur gir gayi, or karan ne isi baat ka fayda utha uski dhunayi shuru ker di.
Or usko bhi maar mar k behosh ker diya , fir unhone us orat ki rassiya kholi or jyoti ne usse pucha aap thik to h na.
Orat :- ji m thik hu , aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad aapne meri jaan or ijat dono bachai in hewano se.
Jyoti :- isme shukriya kesa , ye to humara farz tha.
Karan :- wese aap yaha kese , or ye sab aapke piche kyu pade the.
Orat :- kya batau sahab ,m or mere pati yahi thoda aage apne ek chote se ghar m rahate h , isi jungle m .
Or mere pati ek kisan h jo humari hi ek chote se jamin k tukde p kheti kerte h jisse hamara gujara chalta h.
Per ek din in kamino ki najar humari jamin pe pad gayi , jiski kimat main road k pas hone k kaaran bahut jyada h, inhone humse wo jamin kharidne ki bahut koshis ki , peso ka lalach diya , jaan se marne ki dhamki bhi di per mere pati ne inhe saaf saf mana ker diya.
Lekin aaj mere pati kahi bahar gaye hue the , to pata ni inko kese pata chal gaya , or ye mujhe ghar se utha ker yaha le aaye ,
Or ye bol vo rone lagi , jyoti ne use kese n kese shant karwaya , fir boli.
Jyoti :- aapka ghar kaha h aunty , aaiye hum aapko chod dete h.
Orat pahale to na kerti h , per fir maan jati h.
Karan(gundo ki or dekhte hue) :- per hame inka bhi kuch kerna ho
Ye bol wo police ko phone lagane ka try kerta h per signal ni tha waha pe.
Karan :- shit yaar , no signal . Ab kya kare.
Jyoti ko ek idea aata h or wo boli .
Jyoti :- bhai ek idea h , kyu na pahale hum gundo ko yahi bandh k , inko inke ghar tak chod dete h .
Fir aaker kuch soch lenge na.
Karan ko jyoti ki ye baat sahi lagti h or wo bola.
Karan :- acha idea h gudiya , esa ker tu inke sath aage chal , m tab tak inko bandh k aata hu.
Jyoti :- ok bhai.
Fir wo orat or jyoti dhire dhire aage bhadne lagi , or karib 10 min baad karan bhi unke pass bhag k pahunch gaya.
Jungle kafi darawana lag raha tha , har jagah andhera chaya hua tha,or dur kahi se bhediyon k rone ki aawaz aarahi thi.
Or achanak se vatavaran m thand bhi bad gayi thi, pee karan or jyoti ne is baat pe jyada dhyan ni diya tha .
Shayad isliye kyunki unhe bas jaldi se ghar pahunchna tha , kyunki sonam ghar p akeli thi ,or uski tabiyat bhi thik ni thi.
Wo orat un dono ko apne ghar le jati h , jo ek kacha makaan tha. Ander jaker wo unhe ek charpai p bitha thi h or boli.
Orat :- aapka ek baar fir meri jan bachane k liye dhanyawad.
Karan :- ji ab hume ab chalna chahiye.
Orat :- ji ab bahut raat ho chuki h , is samay aao kaha jayenge. Esa kijie aaj raat yahi ruk jaiye, kal subah nikal jaiyega.
Jyoti :- ji hum jarur rukte per hune jana hi hoga , hamari choti bahan ghar per akeli h or uski tabiyat bhi kharab h.
Orat bahut bolti h per karan or jyoti ni mante to wo boli.
Orat :- thik h ,per jane se pahale aapko mere sath ek - 2 cup chahe pini padegi.
Karan or jyoti us orat ko mana ni ker pate or wo orat chay banane chali jati h, or karib 10 min baad wo 3 glass chay lati h.
Fir 3no wahi beth k karan or jyoti chay pine lagte h, or sath m us orat se thodi thodi baate bhi kerne lage.
Per dhire dhire dono ko behoshi si chane lagi , tabhi karan ne ladkhadati aawaz se bola.
Karan :- kon ho tum or kya milaya tha tune chay me.
Ye sun wo orat haste hue apne asli rup me aagayi or boli.
Orat :- kajri hu m. Teri mot.
Or karan or jyoti abhi kuch bol pate itne m vo behosh ho gaye.
Ji haa dosto wo orat kajri hi thi z or ye usika mayajal tha, aakhiri ladki ko pane k liye.or wo gunde bhi kajri k hi pret gulam the.
Kajri(jor jor se haste hue) :- haha akhir kar mujhe 100vi ladki mil hi gayi, ab malik mujhe sabse shaktishali chudel bana denge.
Tabhi kajri ko kuch ahasas hota h or wo us ladki k kamre ki or jati h , jaha per bandhi hui thi wo.
Or jaa ker usko uske balo se pakad leti h. Ladki heran ho jati h ye achanak se kese ho gaya.
Kajri (haste hue) :- yahi soch rahi h na achanak se tera kavach kese tut gaya, lagta h tera wo bhagwan bhi dar k bhag gaya yaha se .
Ab malik to dugna khush ho jayenge , kyunki m unhe ek ni 2 2 ladkiya lake jo dungi.
Ladki :- ni ye ni ho sakta , bhagwan kabhi bhi shetan se ni har sakte.
Kajri :- ho sakta ni , ho chuka h murkh ladki. Ab chal mere sath.
Or kajri us ladki ko ghasitte hue bahar karan or jyoti jo behosh pade the.
Kajri :- pata ni ye sare kamchor kaha mar gaye, lagta h ab is ladke ko mujhe hi thikane lagana hoga.
Ladki(rote hue boli) :- ager tujhe ladki hi chahiye to mujhe hi leja na chudel, in bacho ko kyu marne p tuli h.
Kajri us ki taraf ghum jati h per uska hath , jiske nakhun chaku jese bade or thikhe the wo karan ki or lambe hote hue bad rahe the.
Kajri :- kyu ri manhoos , tujhe in logo ki itni chinta kyu ho rahi h, tu to jayegi tere sath me ye ladki bhi.
Or is ladke k maas ko to m shaktishali banne ki khushi m davat k tor p khaungi
Itna abhi kajri ne bola hi tha ki , achanak waha ek bhayanak chikh gunj uthi , jo kajri ki hi thi.
Hua yu tha ki jese hi kajri ka hath karan k sine p pahuncha to , jyoti ne ek bade chaku se uska hath hi kaat dala jo kuch esa tha.
Ye foldable hunting knife jyoti ne kal hi kharida tha, aane wale khatre k liye, lekin ek khas baat or thi ki us knife se ek nili roshni se chamak raha tha , jo jyoti k hath se nikal rahi thi.
Kajri gusse or hairani se jhalate hue chikhi :- kon ho tum dono , koi aam insan mere banaye hue behoshi ki dawai se ni bach sakta .
Tum jo bhi ho mere hatho ni bachaoge , tumhare ye war mera kuch ni bigad sakte.ye dekho.
Itna bol wo apna kata hath aage kerti h, or apna hath wapis judne ka intezaar kerti h.
Tabhi kajri ko ek or shock lagta h , jab uska hath wapas ni judta .
Kajri ( gusse se pagal hote hue) :- namumkin , ye mera hath kyu ni jud raha , kon ho tum, kisne bheja h tumhe.
Karan :- tum jese dushto ka kaal hu m, or mujhe bhejne wale vahi ishwer , vahi mahabali hanuman ji h , jinki shakti k samne tumhari itni bhi okaat ni ki tum inhe(ladki ki or ishara kerte hue ) chu bhi ni payi dusht.
Or ha tera wo khas aadmi(pret leader jise karan ne us din sking k time mara tha) mil gaya kya.
Jyoti :- kesi baat kerte ho bhai , use to aapne hi to uske bhai ko pahunchaya tha.
Kajri(chonkte hue) :- acha to vo tha kamine jisne mere khas aadmi k bhai ko mara tha or jisse ladne k liye hi usne meri foz leke gaya tha , per abhi tak uska koi pata ni chala.
Tune use bhi mar diya , kamine ab tu ni bachega
Fir wo apne gulamo ko bulati h.
Kajri :- simha .
Per waha koi ni aata .
Karan haste hue :- jinko yamraj ka hi bulava aagaya h , wo tere bulave m thodi aayenge chudel.
Short flashback.
Karan or jyoti jese hi aawaz ko sun waha pahunche the , to unlogo ko dekhte hi karan or jyoti unko pahachan gaye the.
Karan (man me ) :- dekh rahi h gudiya , in paapio ki notanki.
Jyoti (man me hi) :- ha bhai , ye dusht ese hi masum logo ko fasate h , apne jaal m. Kya bolte ho bhai inka game baja dale.
Karan :- ni re gudiya , ese n hume maja aayega , n hi hamre readers ko , chalo inhi ka game inke sath hi khelte h , dekhte h aakhir ye sab ye ker kyu rahe h.
Fir karan or jyoti jaker un preton ko thikane lagate h , or jab karan jyoti ko aage bhadne ko kahata h , to unke thode aage hi nikalne k baad karan un 3no preton k pass jata h.
Karan :- bas kero notanki salo , ab apne asli rup m aabhi jao.
Pret ye sun buri chonk k uth jate h or unme se ek bola.
Pret 1 :- tu janta h hum kon h.
Karan :- abe itni bekar acting karoge to pahachanunga ni kya , salo tumse achi acting to krk hi ker leta h.
Pret :- ab pahachan hi liya h to marne k liye teyar ho ja.
Karan :- sorry guys , m tumhare sath jarur khelta , per kya h na mere pass time ni h.
So good bye guys , rest in hell.
Ye bol karan apna ek hath age kerta h , jinme se ek laal roshni nikal ker 3no ko jala deti h.
Fir karan jaldi se jyoti k pass pahunch jata h or man hi man jo abhi kiya wo bata deta h.
Fir karan jese hi kajri k ghar m enter kerta h , tabhi karan ko negative energy k sath sath , ek positive energy ka bhi ahasas hota h. Jise mahasus ker karan ko kuch samjh aajata h.
Fir kajri jese hi karan or jyoti ko chay deti h to uska hath karan k hath se touch ho jata h , jisse karan ko uske irado k bare m sab kuch pata chal jata h or ladki k baare m bhi.
Flashback end .
Ab chudel ka gusse k maare bura haal ho gaya tha. Or usne apne dono hatho se aag k gole fekne lagi .
Per karan ko vo apni or slow motion m hi aate hue dikh rahe the , to apni ankh band ker ker mantra bola ,or usi ke sath uske hatho m ek talvar aagayi.ye wahi mantra tha jo baba ne use yaha ane se pahale diya tha.
Or karan ne bade aaram se wo gole us talvaar se rok diye , karan k paas jyada time ni tha , to usne apni ankhe band ker k kuch bola .
Fir apni talvaar kajri ki or ker di , jisse ek roshni nikal k kajri se takrayi, or kajri jo ki hava m udte hue war ker rahi thi uski sari shaktiya nasht ho gayi or wo jamin p aaker gir gayi.
Fir karan or jyoti uski or aage bhadne lage.
Karan :- tere paap ka ghada bhar chuka h kajri , aaj tak jitne bhi tune bure karm kiye h , uske katmfal pane k liye sajj ho ja.
Ye bol karan uski talvaar se uski gardan udani chahi wo bol uthi.
Kajri :- ruk jao , kya tum ek orat p hath uthaoge, kya ye tum jese veer ko shobha dega.
Karan :- sahi kaha , m ek orat pe hath ni utha sakta , per ye to utha sakti h na.
Ye bol k karan jara sa side hua , or uske piche se jyoti samne aayi.
Karan (talvar dete hue) :- le jyoti iski ye aakhiri khawaish bhi puri ker dete h.
Lekin tabhi wo jyoti bol uthi ,
Jyoti :- bhai , iski mot usike hath honi chahiye , jisse isne uska sab kuch chin liya.
Ye bol jyoti us ladki k pass jati h , or apna wo knife jissme abhi bhi wo roshni chamak rahi thi, dete hue boli.
Jyoti :- lijiye , isko aapko hi.marna hoga
Ladki :- ji m kese maar paungi , m to ek sadharan si ladki hu or ye ek chudel.
Jyoti :- bas ladkiyo ki yahi soch use kamzor banati h , bhulo mat is sansaar ki har nari maa adishakti ki hi ansh h , or har ek ladki m hi mahakali mojud hoti h, isliye ye shanka chodo or ker do is dhushta ka ant .
Kyunki nari ager shanka tyag de to khud shankar ban jati h.
Bhulo mat yahi h wo , jisne tumhare pyaar ko berahami se mara tha , kya tum apne pyaar ka badla ni logi.
Jyoti ki ye baat sun ladki ko wo seen yaad aajata h , jab usiki aankho k samne in preto ne us ladke ko mar dala tha, jisse uski aankh se angare barasane lagte h or wo jyoti k hatho se chanku le kajri ki or dod k jati h or wo chanku uske sine m ghop deti h.
Or kajri ek bhayanak chinkh k sath narak ki yatra pe pahunch jati h.
Usko maarne k baad ladki wahi beth rone lagti h , usne apne pyaar ki mrityu ka badla le hi liya tha aakhir kar.
Kuch der rone dene k baad , jyoti us ladki k pas jaker use shant karwati h.
Ladki (hath jod k boli) :- aapka kese m shukriya ada keru , aapne na hi mujhe sirf is chudel se aajad krwa meri raksha ki, balki mere pyaar ki mot ka badla lene m bhi madad ki .
Aap sakshat bhagwan ho.
Ye bol ker vo karan k per pakdne wali hoti h ki karan use rokte hue
Karan :- are are ye kya ker rahe ho aap , aapki raksha humne ni balki , aapki himmat or bajrang bali k prati aapki shradha ne ki h , hum kon hote h unki barabri kerne wale .
Dhanyawad kerna h to un hanumanaji ka hi kijiye, jinhone hume aapki raksha k liye hume madhyam banaya.
Fir karan or jyoti use ye baat kisi ko na batane ka bolte h, jise wo khushi khushi man leti h.
Fir karan uska hath pakadata h or waha se teleport ho sidha us ladki k ghar k samne prakat ho jata h.
Karan :- jaiye ab aap surakshit h , lekin aapse please ye request h ki jo bhi hua aap kisiko mat bataiyega.
Ladki :- aap chinta mat kijiye karan ji , m wada kerti hu ye sab mujh tak hi simit rahega.
Ye bol wo karan k galo p ek kiss ker deti h or sharma k apne ghar m chali jati h .
Or karan bichara apna sa muh le wapas jungle pahunch jara h , or man hi man shukar manata h ki jyoti waha ni thi.
Jyoti :- bhai , ab aage kya kerna h.
Karan :- kal hume jana h gudiya , isliye hume aaj hi yaha se preto ka samrajya ka nash kerna hoga.
Jyoti :- wo kese bhai
Karan :- preto k raja vikral ka ant kerke.
Jyoti :- per bhai ,wo milega kaha.
Karan :- wo mujhe kajri se pata chal chuka h gudiya , yaha se 2 mile dur dakshin disha m ek kila h , vahi h vikaral ka thikana.
Jyoti :- to chaliye bhai der kis baat ki,
fir karan or jyoti nikal padte h us disha m.
Abhi unhone chale thodi der hi hui thi ki , karan ko kuch dhayan aaya or wo jyoti se bola.
Karan :- gudiya,ek baat yaad rakhna , ab thodi aage se tujhe apne piche se kayi tarike ki aawaze sunayi degi .Per kuch bhi ho jaye tu piche mud k mat dekhna , verna preto ki maya m hum fas jayege.
Jyoti :- ji bhai.
Karan or jyoti abhi kuch aage hi chale honge ki unhe , aawaz ani shuru ho gayi.
Tabhi karan k kano m rohan ki aawaz padti h.
Rohan :- bhai bacha mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.
Per karan janta tha ki ye sab preto ki maya h , isliye wo aage badhta chala gaya .
Tabhi jyoti ko radha ki aawaz aati h.
Radha :- di bachao mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.
Lekin jyoti bhi khud ko samjha leti h. Tabhi ab undono k kano m asha ki awaz aati h.
Asha :- karan jyoti beta mujhe bachao , m jinda hu . Ye pret yaha mujhe pakad k le aaye the.
Ab jyoti se raha ni jaraha tha , wo mudne wali hi hoti h karan use rok leta h.
Karan :- ni gudiya , ye sirf un preto ki chal h, hume fasane ki.
Ab karan jyoti ko aage chalne ko bolta h or wo uske piche chal raha hota h.
Tabhi jyoti k kaano m karan ki chilane ki aawaz padti h.
Karan :- gudiyaaaaaaa
Karan ki awaz sun jyoti akhir piche mud hi jati h , lekin ye bhi un aatmao ka chal hi tha.
Karan :- ye kya kiya gudiya tune !
Or usike sath aas pas ki pedo ki jade nikal jyoti ko jakadne lagti h , karan unhe apni talvar se katne ki koshis kerta to wo wapas jud jati .
Tabhi karan ko ek idea aata h or wo apni ankhe band ker, apni talvar hava m uthata h , jiske sath uski talvar se aag nikalne lagti h .
Fir karan dobara war kerta h , or is war wo kamyab hota h or jade jal jati h.
Jisse jyoti aajad ho jati h or jamin p gir k hafne lagti h , karan uske pass jake .
Karan :- tu thik to h na jyoti .
Jyoti :- ha bhai and sorry mane aapki bat ni mani.
Karam :- koi baat ni gudiya , m janta hu tune esa sirf meri chinta k mare kiya.
Wahi dusri or
Vikral apni aasuri sadhna m laga hua tha, or 100 vi ladki k intezaar m tha, per use abhi tak karan or jyoti k ane or kajri ki mot ka pata ni chala tha.
Ye karan or jyoti k locket ki ek or khasiyat thi, jiske kaaran koi bhi unki ki mojudgi ka pata ni laga sakta tha.
Or dusrA kaaran ye bhi tha ki, use apni sadhna se fursat hi ni mili thi.
Back to the hero.
Karan or jyoti aage bad hi rahe the ki , unhe ek ghayal bhudha aadmi dikhayi deta h.
Karan or jyoti unke pass jate h or puchte h ,
Jyoti :- baba aapki ye halat kese or aap is jungle m kese .
Bhuda :- beti m musafir hu , yaha se gujar hi raha tha , ki ek bhediye ne hamla ker diya .Usse m bach to gaya kese n kese , per ghayal ho gaya.
Wo samne ped dekh rahi ho aagar uski patiya pis ker mere ghav per laga di jaye to mere ko aaram milega.
Karan(man me ) :- ye sale ni sudharenge, dhyan se gudiya , ye ek special type ka pret h .
Chahe bade se bada tantrik hi kyu na ho ager ise chu le to jal pal bhar m jal jaye. ruko m dekhta hu ise.
Karan :- rukiye baba m lagata hu aapke oshadhi.
Bhudha ye sun muskurane laga.
Ye bol karan ped per chad k patiya todta h or nich utarte hue janbujhker wo pate niche gira deta h.
Karan :- are ye to gande ho gaye , chalo koi baat ni .
Mere pas ek choti pani ki bottle h or karan apni jeb se ek choti si botel nikal ker patiyo ko dhota h or unhe pis kar us bhude k ghavo p lagata h.
Bhudha apne asli rup m aajata h jo jo ek aag se bana shetan tha or gusse m chilaya
Fire devil :- ye kese ho sakta h , tum bach kese gaye, kher chodo ab ni bachoge.
Ye bol vo abhi karan or jyoti ki or bharne laga tha ki , uska sharir achank se pathar ka hone laga.
Devil chikhte hue :- ye kya kiya tune , kya lagaya tha tune mere sharir pe .
Karan :- kuch khas ni , wahi patiya jo tune boli thi , bas un patiyo ko mane gangajal se dhoya tha.
Devil :-. Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
Bas itna hi chila paya or uke baad devil pathar ka ban gaya .
Ji ha dosto karan ne apni shaktiyon se gangajal hi mangwa liya tha or usse pattiyo ko dho ker us shetan k laga diya , jisse uski ye halat ho gayi.
Ab karan or jyoti ese hi sab preto ka safaya kerte kerte aakhir vikral k mahal pahunch hi gaye .
Karan k dimag m ek idea aaya or usne jyoti ko bhi vahi man hi man bataya .
Wahi dusri or
Vikral ka ab sabra jwab dene laga tha
Vikaral :- kaha rah gayi ye nikami , ek ladki na la saki 2 hafto m.
Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padti h,
Ladki mil gayi malik .
Vikral :- aao kajri , sahi samay per tu pahunch gayi yaha.
Heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto , ye kajri ni apna hero tha , jisne kajri ka rup dharan kiya tha or sath m jyoti thi , jo behosh hone ka natak ker rahi thi.unhone esa kyu kiya tha vo aage pata chal jayega.
Vikral :- jao kajri ise bhi bakiyo k sath bali kaksh m le jao , hum kuch der m vaha pahunchte h.
Ji haa doston sabhi ladkiya jinda thi jinhe kajri ne pakda tha, vikral shetan ko khush kerne k liye 101 ladkiyo ki bali dena chahata tha , pee vaad m wo 100 p aagaya.
Karan jese hi waha pahunche , to sab ladkiyo ki halat dekh usko rona aagaya or jyoti ko bhi.
Sabki halat bahut kharab thi , sab ka sharir sukh gaya tha. Sab ko dekh ker esa lag raha tha , ki vo aaj yaha ni pahunchte to vo bichariya vikral k hatho marne se pahale hi dam tod deti , sab bediyon m bandhi hui thi.
Sabhi kajri ko dekh k rone lagi or ek boli.
Ladki :- maar kyu ni deti tum hame , kyu tarfa rahi ho yu hume . Kya bigada h humne tumhara.
Karan ab asli rup m aajata h or bola .
Karan :- aap sab please mat roiye, m aap sab ko yaha se chudane hi aaya hu.
Ladki 2 :- hum.kese man le ki , tum un bhuto k sath ni ho
Karan apna hath aage kerta h jisse sab aajad ho jati h or sath ki sath swasth bhi.
Ladki 2 karan k pero m gir ker mafi mangne lagi per karan ne use samjha diya.
Jyoti :- bhai hume in sab ko ek safe jagah bhejna hoga.
Karan baba ko yaad kerta h or sabhi ladkiyo ko gahari nind sula deta h .
Baba jese hi waha aaye karan kuch bolne ko hua per pahale hi baba bol uthe.
Baba :- kuch bolne ki aavashyakata ni h putra , m janta hu tumne mujhe kisliye yaad kiya h.
Or baba sabhi ladkiyo ko apne sath apne aashram m lejate h.
Tabhi vikaral bhi vaha aajata h or ladkiyo ko gayab dekh gusse se pagal ho jata h .
Vikral :- kon h tu , tu pahuncha kese yaha, or kaha gayi wo sabhi ladkiya.
Karan :- tere liye bas itna janna hi kafi h vikaral m tera kaal hu.
Vikral haste hue :- acha to tu h vo , jiske baare m mahaprabhu ne bataya tha. Tu aato gaya....
Karan bich me tokte hue :- per jina wapas ni jaunga , yahi ghisa pita dialogue marne wala tha na tu , ge backchodiya chod or yudh ker dusht.
Vikaral apni talvaar leker karan ki or bhada , or karan vikral ki or.
Fir shuru hua dono k bich bhayanak yudh , jisme kabhi karan bhari pad raha tha to kabhi vikaral.fir karan ne uski talvar ko kaat diya .
Fir shuru hua unme dvand yudh , dono m hi apaar bal tha , dono hi ek dusre ko kadi takker de rahe the
Per jald hi karan ne usko pachad diya, per usne apne jese kayi mayavi roop bana liye.
Or apni sena ko bhi vaha bula liya jisme lakho ki sankhya me pret the.
Tabhi jyoti ne socha
Jyoti :- lagta h ab mera yudh m pravesh ka samay aagaya h.
Or itna soch usne ankhe band ki or baba ne jo use mantra diya tha , usko bola or ek hath uper kiya, tabhi uske hath me ek divya dhanush aagaya.
Jyoti ne furti se us dhanush ko sena ki or kiya , jese hi pratyncha khichi dhanush per tir apne aap agaya . Or jyoti ne wo tir chod diya.
Or wo tir jake jese hi sena p gira , uske sath hi ek visfot hua or kayi pret mare gaye, fir jyoti ese hi tiro se un preto ki sena p tut padi.
Jyoti :- bhai ap us dusht ka ant kijiya , iske in chirkuto ko to m dekh lungi.
Karan muskuraya or ab asli vikral ko dhundne laga.Karan ne apni ankh band ker man ki anko se asli vikral ko dhunda or ek jordar prahar uske sine p kiya.
Fir karan ne uski gardan uda di , per ye kya wo wapas pahale jese jud gayi, esa baar bar hota raha.vikral mar hi ni raha tha.
Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare , tabhi uske man me baba ki aawaz aayi .
Putra isne apne pran ek esi vastu m dal diya h jo isika prati rup darshati h. Or wo isi kamre m mojud h , pahale tumhe use nasht kerna hoga.
Karan baba ki baat samjh jata h or pass m rakhi vikral ki ek murti jo bilkul vesi dikhti thi , use nasht ker diya per kuch ni hua , ab karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo konsi vastu h.
Tabhi jyoti ka dhyan kamre m rakhe ek aaine pe jata h ,
Jyoti :- is aaine ka yaha kya kaam ho sakta h.
Tabhi jyoti ko puri baat samjh aajati h or wo karan se man me boli.
Jyoti :- bhai, is aaine ko nasht ker dijiye, kyunki aaina hi ek esi vastu h jo , kisi k bhi pratirup ko darsha sakta h aasani se.
Karan vesa hi kerta h or aaine p ek shakti prahar kerta h jisse uske tukde tukde ho jate h or ek kali roshni usse nikal vikaral m sama jati h.
Vikaral chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
Karan :- ab apni mritu k liye saj ho ja vikral.
Vikaral :- itni jaldi ni ladke .
Or vikral aankhe band kerke kisi ko yaad kerte hue bola
Vikral :- raksha kijiye prabhu , apne is bhakt ki raksha kijiye.
Tabhi vaha tez tez havaye chalne lagi , or ek tez roshni k sath ek shaks karan or vikral k bich m prakat hua. Jise dekh vikral ki sena or jyoti bhi ruk gaye.
Jise dekh karan unhe pahachan gaya or asmanjas fas gaya ki ab vo kya kare.
Kyunki samne preto k devta , shri pret raj sarkaar khade the, jo preton k sath sath insano k bhi pujniya h, rajasthan k mahendipur balaji k mandir m inki bhi hanumanaji k sath puje jate h
Karan ne unhe pranam kiya , or bola.
Karan(man me) :- he prabhu , ye m kya dekh raha hu , aap ish dusht ki raksha krr rahe h , jisne najane kitne masumo ki bali di h , esa mat kijiye bhagwan , m aap per prahar ni ker sakta , kripya mujhe dharm sankat m na dale.
Pret raj (vivashata k bhav se man me bole) :- m vivash hu putra , vikral mera bhakt h or bhut kal m mane ise ek baar vachan diya tha ki , m iske prano ki raksha kerne ek baar jarur aaunga.
Putra m janta hu iske apradh , or m swayam bhi iska ant chahata hu, parantu m apna vachan bhi ni tod sakta , ab tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga putra.
Karan sochne laga ki ab kya kiya jaye , pahale to use kuch samjh ni aaya , fir usko kuch yaad aya jisse uske chahare pe ek muskan aagayi.
Karan(man me) :- vachan to apne kisi or ko bhi diya tha bhut kal m prabhu. Aapki aagya ho to .
Pret raj karan ka ishara samjh jate h or karan ko vesa hi kerne ko kahate h.
Karan ab hath jod ankhe bandh ker ek mantra bolne laga.
Karan:-
अतुलितबलधामं हेमशैलाभदेहं
दनुजवनकृशानुं ज्ञानिनामग्रगण्यम् ।
सकलगुणनिधानं वानराणामधीशं
रघुपतिप्रियभक्तं वातात्मजं नमामि
Or isi k sath karan k sharir se ek roshni nikalne lagi or dhire dhire us roshni ne jo aakar liya , usko dekh sabhi preto included vikral ki fat k hath m aagayi
Kyunki us roshni ne sakshat mahabali hanuman ji ki shape leli thi.
Pretraj ne hanumanaji ko vachan diya tha ki , jaha unka vaas hoga ya koi unka nam bhi lega to koi bhi bhut pret us bhakt ka kuch ni bigad sakega.
Pret raj ko ye moka sahi laga or wo jese hi jane lage.to vikral bol utha.
Vikral :- mujhe yu chod kaha ja rahe h prabhu , aapne mujhe vachan diya tha.
Pret raj :- vachan diya jarur tha vikral per ye ni bola tha ki tumhari raksha m har kisi se kar paunga or yaha to ab is ladke ne hanuman ji ki pratikriti ko le aaya h , ab m bhi kuch ni ker sakta , mujhe jane do .
Or ye bol pret raaj waha se gayab ho gaye.
Yahi to karan ka plan tha , usne sach m hanuman ji ko ni bulaya tha , bas ek hava m hanumanaji ki shape bana di thi.
Karan :- ab to tumhara antim sahara bhi ni raha vikral , or pret raj ko yaha bula tune apne paap ka ghada pura bhar diya h .
Kyunki tune ek dev ko burayi ki taraf kerne ka prayas jo kiya .
Vikral ab bhagne laga , tabhi jyoti boli.
Jyoti :- bhai ye lo.
Or ye bol usne apna dhanush karan ki or feka , or karan ne furti se catch ker , ek tir vikaral k pero m mara , jisse vo vahi gir gaya.
Karan :- tu to bahut bada kayar nikla vikral , yudh m pith dikha ker bhag raha tha.
Per kisi ne kaha h na ki
" mot se bhi bhala koi bach paya h "
Baat to vo bilkul sahi h , per mot se bhi jyada ager kuch khatarnak h jisse koi bhi ni bach sakta , wo h vyakti ka karmfal.
Or tumhe to abhi dono milne wale h , fir tune soch bhi kese liya tu bhag jayega.
Ye sab karan ne vikral ki or bhadte hue bola.
Vikral :- mujhe maf ker do , bas ek ek moka dedo , m sab bure kam chod dunga.
Karan ;- ni vikral , tum ab shama k layak ni ho, ab apna dand pane k liye saj ho jao.
Ye bol karan ne uska sir apni talvar k ek hi vaar se uda diya or vikral k marte hi uski sena m bhagadad mach gayi.
Per vo isse pahale bhagte , jyoti ne ek mantra bol tir unki or choda , jisse sab k sab vahi bandh gaye.
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