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Karan or jyoti gadi ko chod us disha ki or nikal pade jaha se awaaz aayi thi.karan or jyoti jungle k ander ghus ker kuch dur pahunche to samne pate h ki 3 log ek orat ko ped se bandh rakha tha.

Admi 1 :- tere pati ko ab pata chalega ki , hume na kerne ka kya anjaam hota h.

Admi 2 :- ha sale ko kitni baar kaha tha ki , hume apni jamin bech de , per vo harami na mana.

Admi 3 :- ha aaj acha moka mila h , tera pati to , aaj bahar gaya hua h , aaj tujhe maar k teri lash ki wo halat karenge , jise dekh k wo khud hi mar jayega.

Lekin usse pahale teri jawani ka maza lutenge



Orat(rote) :- bhagwaan k liye mujhe chod dijiye , wo jamin hum ni bech sakte , usi per kheti ker k ham do waqt ki roti kha pate h.

Per un darindo per us bichari k rone ka koi fark ni pada . Or wo abhi uski or bhade hi the ki achanak ek bande ki gardan kisi ne piche se pakad k uska sir ek ped p de mara , jisse uska sir fat gaya , or wo vahi behosh ho gaya

Ye war karan ne hi kiya tha, bache 2no aadmi ye dekh ker heran ho gaye ki 1 bache ne unke hate kate pahalwan aadmi ki ek baar me hi ye halat ker di .

Aadmi 1 :- e ladke kon h tu sale , teri ye majal ki tune mere dost ko mara , ager jinda rahana chahata h to chupchap yaha se chala ja.

Karan :- moka to m tujhe deta hu , chup chap patli gali se nikal lo verna esi jagah p marunga sale, ki doctor ko dikhane m bhi sharm aayegi.

Admi 2 haste hue bola :- ye bacha hame marega.

Ja bache ja nikal le yaha se apni chamiya k sath , verna pahale tere hath per todenge, fir is orat or teri is londiya k sath.......

Abhi usne apni baat bhi ni ki thi ki ,karan ne ek jordar laat uske pet m de mari or wo bhi udte hue ped se takra k behosh ho gaya.

Karan :- mujhe dobara bolne ki aadat ni h.

Apne 2 sathiyon ki ye halat dekh aadmi 1 ne apni jeb se banduk nikal li ,

Admi 1 :- sale bahut badi galti ker di , tune mere aadmiyo ko maar k , ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Or itna bol ker usne karan p goli chalani chahi,side m khadi jyoti ne uske hath p ek jordar laat mardi.

Jisse uske hath se banduk chut k dur gir gayi, or karan ne isi baat ka fayda utha uski dhunayi shuru ker di.

Or usko bhi maar mar k behosh ker diya , fir unhone us orat ki rassiya kholi or jyoti ne usse pucha aap thik to h na.

Orat :- ji m thik hu , aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad aapne meri jaan or ijat dono bachai in hewano se.

Jyoti :- isme shukriya kesa , ye to humara farz tha.

Karan :- wese aap yaha kese , or ye sab aapke piche kyu pade the.

Orat :- kya batau sahab ,m or mere pati yahi thoda aage apne ek chote se ghar m rahate h , isi jungle m .

Or mere pati ek kisan h jo humari hi ek chote se jamin k tukde p kheti kerte h jisse hamara gujara chalta h.

Per ek din in kamino ki najar humari jamin pe pad gayi , jiski kimat main road k pas hone k kaaran bahut jyada h, inhone humse wo jamin kharidne ki bahut koshis ki , peso ka lalach diya , jaan se marne ki dhamki bhi di per mere pati ne inhe saaf saf mana ker diya.

Lekin aaj mere pati kahi bahar gaye hue the , to pata ni inko kese pata chal gaya , or ye mujhe ghar se utha ker yaha le aaye ,

Or ye bol vo rone lagi , jyoti ne use kese n kese shant karwaya , fir boli.

Jyoti :- aapka ghar kaha h aunty , aaiye hum aapko chod dete h.

Orat pahale to na kerti h , per fir maan jati h.

Karan(gundo ki or dekhte hue) :- per hame inka bhi kuch kerna ho

Ye bol wo police ko phone lagane ka try kerta h per signal ni tha waha pe.

Karan :- shit yaar , no signal . Ab kya kare.

Jyoti ko ek idea aata h or wo boli .

Jyoti :- bhai ek idea h , kyu na pahale hum gundo ko yahi bandh k , inko inke ghar tak chod dete h .

Fir aaker kuch soch lenge na.

Karan ko jyoti ki ye baat sahi lagti h or wo bola.

Karan :- acha idea h gudiya , esa ker tu inke sath aage chal , m tab tak inko bandh k aata hu.

Jyoti :- ok bhai.

Fir wo orat or jyoti dhire dhire aage bhadne lagi , or karib 10 min baad karan bhi unke pass bhag k pahunch gaya.

Jungle kafi darawana lag raha tha , har jagah andhera chaya hua tha,or dur kahi se bhediyon k rone ki aawaz aarahi thi.

Or achanak se vatavaran m thand bhi bad gayi thi, pee karan or jyoti ne is baat pe jyada dhyan ni diya tha .

Shayad isliye kyunki unhe bas jaldi se ghar pahunchna tha , kyunki sonam ghar p akeli thi ,or uski tabiyat bhi thik ni thi.

Wo orat un dono ko apne ghar le jati h , jo ek kacha makaan tha. Ander jaker wo unhe ek charpai p bitha thi h or boli.

Orat :- aapka ek baar fir meri jan bachane k liye dhanyawad.

Karan :- ji ab hume ab chalna chahiye.

Orat :- ji ab bahut raat ho chuki h , is samay aao kaha jayenge. Esa kijie aaj raat yahi ruk jaiye, kal subah nikal jaiyega.

Jyoti :- ji hum jarur rukte per hune jana hi hoga , hamari choti bahan ghar per akeli h or uski tabiyat bhi kharab h.

Orat bahut bolti h per karan or jyoti ni mante to wo boli.

Orat :- thik h ,per jane se pahale aapko mere sath ek - 2 cup chahe pini padegi.

Karan or jyoti us orat ko mana ni ker pate or wo orat chay banane chali jati h, or karib 10 min baad wo 3 glass chay lati h.

Fir 3no wahi beth k karan or jyoti chay pine lagte h, or sath m us orat se thodi thodi baate bhi kerne lage.

Per dhire dhire dono ko behoshi si chane lagi , tabhi karan ne ladkhadati aawaz se bola.

Karan :- kon ho tum or kya milaya tha tune chay me.

Ye sun wo orat haste hue apne asli rup me aagayi or boli.

Orat :- kajri hu m. Teri mot.

Or karan or jyoti abhi kuch bol pate itne m vo behosh ho gaye.

Ji haa dosto wo orat kajri hi thi z or ye usika mayajal tha, aakhiri ladki ko pane k liye.or wo gunde bhi kajri k hi pret gulam the.

Kajri(jor jor se haste hue) :- haha akhir kar mujhe 100vi ladki mil hi gayi, ab malik mujhe sabse shaktishali chudel bana denge.

Tabhi kajri ko kuch ahasas hota h or wo us ladki k kamre ki or jati h , jaha per bandhi hui thi wo.

Or jaa ker usko uske balo se pakad leti h. Ladki heran ho jati h ye achanak se kese ho gaya.

Kajri (haste hue) :- yahi soch rahi h na achanak se tera kavach kese tut gaya, lagta h tera wo bhagwan bhi dar k bhag gaya yaha se .

Ab malik to dugna khush ho jayenge , kyunki m unhe ek ni 2 2 ladkiya lake jo dungi.

Ladki :- ni ye ni ho sakta , bhagwan kabhi bhi shetan se ni har sakte.

Kajri :- ho sakta ni , ho chuka h murkh ladki. Ab chal mere sath.

Or kajri us ladki ko ghasitte hue bahar karan or jyoti jo behosh pade the.

Kajri :- pata ni ye sare kamchor kaha mar gaye, lagta h ab is ladke ko mujhe hi thikane lagana hoga.

Ladki(rote hue boli) :- ager tujhe ladki hi chahiye to mujhe hi leja na chudel, in bacho ko kyu marne p tuli h.

Kajri us ki taraf ghum jati h per uska hath , jiske nakhun chaku jese bade or thikhe the wo karan ki or lambe hote hue bad rahe the.

Kajri :- kyu ri manhoos , tujhe in logo ki itni chinta kyu ho rahi h, tu to jayegi tere sath me ye ladki bhi.

Or is ladke k maas ko to m shaktishali banne ki khushi m davat k tor p khaungi

Itna abhi kajri ne bola hi tha ki , achanak waha ek bhayanak chikh gunj uthi , jo kajri ki hi thi.

Hua yu tha ki jese hi kajri ka hath karan k sine p pahuncha to , jyoti ne ek bade chaku se uska hath hi kaat dala jo kuch esa tha.

Ye foldable hunting knife jyoti ne kal hi kharida tha, aane wale khatre k liye, lekin ek khas baat or thi ki us knife se ek nili roshni se chamak raha tha , jo jyoti k hath se nikal rahi thi.

Kajri gusse or hairani se jhalate hue chikhi :- kon ho tum dono , koi aam insan mere banaye hue behoshi ki dawai se ni bach sakta .

Tum jo bhi ho mere hatho ni bachaoge , tumhare ye war mera kuch ni bigad sakte.ye dekho.

Itna bol wo apna kata hath aage kerti h, or apna hath wapis judne ka intezaar kerti h.


Tabhi kajri ko ek or shock lagta h , jab uska hath wapas ni judta .

Kajri ( gusse se pagal hote hue) :- namumkin , ye mera hath kyu ni jud raha , kon ho tum, kisne bheja h tumhe.

Karan :- tum jese dushto ka kaal hu m, or mujhe bhejne wale vahi ishwer , vahi mahabali hanuman ji h , jinki shakti k samne tumhari itni bhi okaat ni ki tum inhe(ladki ki or ishara kerte hue ) chu bhi ni payi dusht.

Or ha tera wo khas aadmi(pret leader jise karan ne us din sking k time mara tha) mil gaya kya.

Jyoti :- kesi baat kerte ho bhai , use to aapne hi to uske bhai ko pahunchaya tha.



Kajri(chonkte hue) :- acha to vo tha kamine jisne mere khas aadmi k bhai ko mara tha or jisse ladne k liye hi usne meri foz leke gaya tha , per abhi tak uska koi pata ni chala.

Tune use bhi mar diya , kamine ab tu ni bachega

Fir wo apne gulamo ko bulati h.

Kajri :- simha .

Per waha koi ni aata .

Karan haste hue :- jinko yamraj ka hi bulava aagaya h , wo tere bulave m thodi aayenge chudel.

Short flashback.

Karan or jyoti jese hi aawaz ko sun waha pahunche the , to unlogo ko dekhte hi karan or jyoti unko pahachan gaye the.

Karan (man me ) :- dekh rahi h gudiya , in paapio ki notanki.

Jyoti (man me hi) :- ha bhai , ye dusht ese hi masum logo ko fasate h , apne jaal m. Kya bolte ho bhai inka game baja dale.

Karan :- ni re gudiya , ese n hume maja aayega , n hi hamre readers ko , chalo inhi ka game inke sath hi khelte h , dekhte h aakhir ye sab ye ker kyu rahe h.

Fir karan or jyoti jaker un preton ko thikane lagate h , or jab karan jyoti ko aage bhadne ko kahata h , to unke thode aage hi nikalne k baad karan un 3no preton k pass jata h.

Karan :- bas kero notanki salo , ab apne asli rup m aabhi jao.

Pret ye sun buri chonk k uth jate h or unme se ek bola.

Pret 1 :- tu janta h hum kon h.

Karan :- abe itni bekar acting karoge to pahachanunga ni kya , salo tumse achi acting to krk hi ker leta h.

Pret :- ab pahachan hi liya h to marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Karan :- sorry guys , m tumhare sath jarur khelta , per kya h na mere pass time ni h.

So good bye guys , rest in hell.

Ye bol karan apna ek hath age kerta h , jinme se ek laal roshni nikal ker 3no ko jala deti h.

Fir karan jaldi se jyoti k pass pahunch jata h or man hi man jo abhi kiya wo bata deta h.

Fir karan jese hi kajri k ghar m enter kerta h , tabhi karan ko negative energy k sath sath , ek positive energy ka bhi ahasas hota h. Jise mahasus ker karan ko kuch samjh aajata h.

Fir kajri jese hi karan or jyoti ko chay deti h to uska hath karan k hath se touch ho jata h , jisse karan ko uske irado k bare m sab kuch pata chal jata h or ladki k baare m bhi.

Flashback end .

Ab chudel ka gusse k maare bura haal ho gaya tha. Or usne apne dono hatho se aag k gole fekne lagi .

Per karan ko vo apni or slow motion m hi aate hue dikh rahe the , to apni ankh band ker ker mantra bola ,or usi ke sath uske hatho m ek talvar aagayi.ye wahi mantra tha jo baba ne use yaha ane se pahale diya tha.

Or karan ne bade aaram se wo gole us talvaar se rok diye , karan k paas jyada time ni tha , to usne apni ankhe band ker k kuch bola .

Fir apni talvaar kajri ki or ker di , jisse ek roshni nikal k kajri se takrayi, or kajri jo ki hava m udte hue war ker rahi thi uski sari shaktiya nasht ho gayi or wo jamin p aaker gir gayi.

Fir karan or jyoti uski or aage bhadne lage.

Karan :- tere paap ka ghada bhar chuka h kajri , aaj tak jitne bhi tune bure karm kiye h , uske katmfal pane k liye sajj ho ja.

Ye bol karan uski talvaar se uski gardan udani chahi wo bol uthi.

Kajri :- ruk jao , kya tum ek orat p hath uthaoge, kya ye tum jese veer ko shobha dega.

Karan :- sahi kaha , m ek orat pe hath ni utha sakta , per ye to utha sakti h na.

Ye bol k karan jara sa side hua , or uske piche se jyoti samne aayi.

Karan (talvar dete hue) :- le jyoti iski ye aakhiri khawaish bhi puri ker dete h.

Lekin tabhi wo jyoti bol uthi ,

Jyoti :- bhai , iski mot usike hath honi chahiye , jisse isne uska sab kuch chin liya.

Ye bol jyoti us ladki k pass jati h , or apna wo knife jissme abhi bhi wo roshni chamak rahi thi, dete hue boli.

Jyoti :- lijiye , isko aapko hi.marna hoga

Ladki :- ji m kese maar paungi , m to ek sadharan si ladki hu or ye ek chudel.

Jyoti :- bas ladkiyo ki yahi soch use kamzor banati h , bhulo mat is sansaar ki har nari maa adishakti ki hi ansh h , or har ek ladki m hi mahakali mojud hoti h, isliye ye shanka chodo or ker do is dhushta ka ant .

Kyunki nari ager shanka tyag de to khud shankar ban jati h.

Bhulo mat yahi h wo , jisne tumhare pyaar ko berahami se mara tha , kya tum apne pyaar ka badla ni logi.

Jyoti ki ye baat sun ladki ko wo seen yaad aajata h , jab usiki aankho k samne in preto ne us ladke ko mar dala tha, jisse uski aankh se angare barasane lagte h or wo jyoti k hatho se chanku le kajri ki or dod k jati h or wo chanku uske sine m ghop deti h.

Or kajri ek bhayanak chinkh k sath narak ki yatra pe pahunch jati h.

Usko maarne k baad ladki wahi beth rone lagti h , usne apne pyaar ki mrityu ka badla le hi liya tha aakhir kar.

Kuch der rone dene k baad , jyoti us ladki k pas jaker use shant karwati h.

Ladki (hath jod k boli) :- aapka kese m shukriya ada keru , aapne na hi mujhe sirf is chudel se aajad krwa meri raksha ki, balki mere pyaar ki mot ka badla lene m bhi madad ki .

Aap sakshat bhagwan ho.

Ye bol ker vo karan k per pakdne wali hoti h ki karan use rokte hue

Karan :- are are ye kya ker rahe ho aap , aapki raksha humne ni balki , aapki himmat or bajrang bali k prati aapki shradha ne ki h , hum kon hote h unki barabri kerne wale .

Dhanyawad kerna h to un hanumanaji ka hi kijiye, jinhone hume aapki raksha k liye hume madhyam banaya.

Fir karan or jyoti use ye baat kisi ko na batane ka bolte h, jise wo khushi khushi man leti h.

Fir karan uska hath pakadata h or waha se teleport ho sidha us ladki k ghar k samne prakat ho jata h.

Karan :- jaiye ab aap surakshit h , lekin aapse please ye request h ki jo bhi hua aap kisiko mat bataiyega.

Ladki :- aap chinta mat kijiye karan ji , m wada kerti hu ye sab mujh tak hi simit rahega.

Ye bol wo karan k galo p ek kiss ker deti h or sharma k apne ghar m chali jati h .

Or karan bichara apna sa muh le wapas jungle pahunch jara h , or man hi man shukar manata h ki jyoti waha ni thi.

Jyoti :- bhai , ab aage kya kerna h.

Karan :- kal hume jana h gudiya , isliye hume aaj hi yaha se preto ka samrajya ka nash kerna hoga.

Jyoti :- wo kese bhai

Karan :- preto k raja vikral ka ant kerke.

Jyoti :- per bhai ,wo milega kaha.

Karan :- wo mujhe kajri se pata chal chuka h gudiya , yaha se 2 mile dur dakshin disha m ek kila h , vahi h vikaral ka thikana.

Jyoti :- to chaliye bhai der kis baat ki,

fir karan or jyoti nikal padte h us disha m.

Abhi unhone chale thodi der hi hui thi ki , karan ko kuch dhayan aaya or wo jyoti se bola.


Karan :- gudiya,ek baat yaad rakhna , ab thodi aage se tujhe apne piche se kayi tarike ki aawaze sunayi degi .Per kuch bhi ho jaye tu piche mud k mat dekhna , verna preto ki maya m hum fas jayege.

Jyoti :- ji bhai.

Karan or jyoti abhi kuch aage hi chale honge ki unhe , aawaz ani shuru ho gayi.

Tabhi karan k kano m rohan ki aawaz padti h.

Rohan :- bhai bacha mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.

Per karan janta tha ki ye sab preto ki maya h , isliye wo aage badhta chala gaya .

Tabhi jyoti ko radha ki aawaz aati h.

Radha :- di bachao mujhe , ye bhut mujhe mar dalenge.

Lekin jyoti bhi khud ko samjha leti h. Tabhi ab undono k kano m asha ki awaz aati h.

Asha :- karan jyoti beta mujhe bachao , m jinda hu . Ye pret yaha mujhe pakad k le aaye the.

Ab jyoti se raha ni jaraha tha , wo mudne wali hi hoti h karan use rok leta h.

Karan :- ni gudiya , ye sirf un preto ki chal h, hume fasane ki.

Ab karan jyoti ko aage chalne ko bolta h or wo uske piche chal raha hota h.

Tabhi jyoti k kaano m karan ki chilane ki aawaz padti h.

Karan :- gudiyaaaaaaa

Karan ki awaz sun jyoti akhir piche mud hi jati h , lekin ye bhi un aatmao ka chal hi tha.

Karan :- ye kya kiya gudiya tune !

Or usike sath aas pas ki pedo ki jade nikal jyoti ko jakadne lagti h , karan unhe apni talvar se katne ki koshis kerta to wo wapas jud jati .

Tabhi karan ko ek idea aata h or wo apni ankhe band ker, apni talvar hava m uthata h , jiske sath uski talvar se aag nikalne lagti h .

Fir karan dobara war kerta h , or is war wo kamyab hota h or jade jal jati h.

Jisse jyoti aajad ho jati h or jamin p gir k hafne lagti h , karan uske pass jake .

Karan :- tu thik to h na jyoti .

Jyoti :- ha bhai and sorry mane aapki bat ni mani.

Karam :- koi baat ni gudiya , m janta hu tune esa sirf meri chinta k mare kiya.

Wahi dusri or

Vikral apni aasuri sadhna m laga hua tha, or 100 vi ladki k intezaar m tha, per use abhi tak karan or jyoti k ane or kajri ki mot ka pata ni chala tha.

Ye karan or jyoti k locket ki ek or khasiyat thi, jiske kaaran koi bhi unki ki mojudgi ka pata ni laga sakta tha.

Or dusrA kaaran ye bhi tha ki, use apni sadhna se fursat hi ni mili thi.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti aage bad hi rahe the ki , unhe ek ghayal bhudha aadmi dikhayi deta h.

Karan or jyoti unke pass jate h or puchte h ,

Jyoti :- baba aapki ye halat kese or aap is jungle m kese .

Bhuda :- beti m musafir hu , yaha se gujar hi raha tha , ki ek bhediye ne hamla ker diya .Usse m bach to gaya kese n kese , per ghayal ho gaya.

Wo samne ped dekh rahi ho aagar uski patiya pis ker mere ghav per laga di jaye to mere ko aaram milega.

Karan(man me ) :- ye sale ni sudharenge, dhyan se gudiya , ye ek special type ka pret h .

Chahe bade se bada tantrik hi kyu na ho ager ise chu le to jal pal bhar m jal jaye. ruko m dekhta hu ise.

Karan :- rukiye baba m lagata hu aapke oshadhi.

Bhudha ye sun muskurane laga.

Ye bol karan ped per chad k patiya todta h or nich utarte hue janbujhker wo pate niche gira deta h.

Karan :- are ye to gande ho gaye , chalo koi baat ni .

Mere pas ek choti pani ki bottle h or karan apni jeb se ek choti si botel nikal ker patiyo ko dhota h or unhe pis kar us bhude k ghavo p lagata h.

Bhudha apne asli rup m aajata h jo jo ek aag se bana shetan tha or gusse m chilaya

Fire devil :- ye kese ho sakta h , tum bach kese gaye, kher chodo ab ni bachoge.

Ye bol vo abhi karan or jyoti ki or bharne laga tha ki , uska sharir achank se pathar ka hone laga.

Devil chikhte hue :- ye kya kiya tune , kya lagaya tha tune mere sharir pe .

Karan :- kuch khas ni , wahi patiya jo tune boli thi , bas un patiyo ko mane gangajal se dhoya tha.

Devil :-. Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Bas itna hi chila paya or uke baad devil pathar ka ban gaya .

Ji ha dosto karan ne apni shaktiyon se gangajal hi mangwa liya tha or usse pattiyo ko dho ker us shetan k laga diya , jisse uski ye halat ho gayi.

Ab karan or jyoti ese hi sab preto ka safaya kerte kerte aakhir vikral k mahal pahunch hi gaye .

Karan k dimag m ek idea aaya or usne jyoti ko bhi vahi man hi man bataya .

Wahi dusri or

Vikral ka ab sabra jwab dene laga tha

Vikaral :- kaha rah gayi ye nikami , ek ladki na la saki 2 hafto m.

Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padti h,

Ladki mil gayi malik .

Vikral :- aao kajri , sahi samay per tu pahunch gayi yaha.

Heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto , ye kajri ni apna hero tha , jisne kajri ka rup dharan kiya tha or sath m jyoti thi , jo behosh hone ka natak ker rahi thi.unhone esa kyu kiya tha vo aage pata chal jayega.

Vikral :- jao kajri ise bhi bakiyo k sath bali kaksh m le jao , hum kuch der m vaha pahunchte h.

Ji haa doston sabhi ladkiya jinda thi jinhe kajri ne pakda tha, vikral shetan ko khush kerne k liye 101 ladkiyo ki bali dena chahata tha , pee vaad m wo 100 p aagaya.

Karan jese hi waha pahunche , to sab ladkiyo ki halat dekh usko rona aagaya or jyoti ko bhi.

Sabki halat bahut kharab thi , sab ka sharir sukh gaya tha. Sab ko dekh ker esa lag raha tha , ki vo aaj yaha ni pahunchte to vo bichariya vikral k hatho marne se pahale hi dam tod deti , sab bediyon m bandhi hui thi.

Sabhi kajri ko dekh k rone lagi or ek boli.

Ladki :- maar kyu ni deti tum hame , kyu tarfa rahi ho yu hume . Kya bigada h humne tumhara.

Karan ab asli rup m aajata h or bola .

Karan :- aap sab please mat roiye, m aap sab ko yaha se chudane hi aaya hu.

Ladki 2 :- hum.kese man le ki , tum un bhuto k sath ni ho

Karan apna hath aage kerta h jisse sab aajad ho jati h or sath ki sath swasth bhi.

Ladki 2 karan k pero m gir ker mafi mangne lagi per karan ne use samjha diya.

Jyoti :- bhai hume in sab ko ek safe jagah bhejna hoga.

Karan baba ko yaad kerta h or sabhi ladkiyo ko gahari nind sula deta h .

Baba jese hi waha aaye karan kuch bolne ko hua per pahale hi baba bol uthe.

Baba :- kuch bolne ki aavashyakata ni h putra , m janta hu tumne mujhe kisliye yaad kiya h.

Or baba sabhi ladkiyo ko apne sath apne aashram m lejate h.

Tabhi vikaral bhi vaha aajata h or ladkiyo ko gayab dekh gusse se pagal ho jata h .

Vikral :- kon h tu , tu pahuncha kese yaha, or kaha gayi wo sabhi ladkiya.

Karan :- tere liye bas itna janna hi kafi h vikaral m tera kaal hu.

Vikral haste hue :- acha to tu h vo , jiske baare m mahaprabhu ne bataya tha. Tu aato gaya....


Karan bich me tokte hue :- per jina wapas ni jaunga , yahi ghisa pita dialogue marne wala tha na tu , ge backchodiya chod or yudh ker dusht.

Vikaral apni talvaar leker karan ki or bhada , or karan vikral ki or.

Fir shuru hua dono k bich bhayanak yudh , jisme kabhi karan bhari pad raha tha to kabhi vikaral.fir karan ne uski talvar ko kaat diya .

Fir shuru hua unme dvand yudh , dono m hi apaar bal tha , dono hi ek dusre ko kadi takker de rahe the

Per jald hi karan ne usko pachad diya, per usne apne jese kayi mayavi roop bana liye.

Or apni sena ko bhi vaha bula liya jisme lakho ki sankhya me pret the.

Tabhi jyoti ne socha

Jyoti :- lagta h ab mera yudh m pravesh ka samay aagaya h.

Or itna soch usne ankhe band ki or baba ne jo use mantra diya tha , usko bola or ek hath uper kiya, tabhi uske hath me ek divya dhanush aagaya.

Jyoti ne furti se us dhanush ko sena ki or kiya , jese hi pratyncha khichi dhanush per tir apne aap agaya . Or jyoti ne wo tir chod diya.

Or wo tir jake jese hi sena p gira , uske sath hi ek visfot hua or kayi pret mare gaye, fir jyoti ese hi tiro se un preto ki sena p tut padi.

Jyoti :- bhai ap us dusht ka ant kijiya , iske in chirkuto ko to m dekh lungi.


Karan muskuraya or ab asli vikral ko dhundne laga.Karan ne apni ankh band ker man ki anko se asli vikral ko dhunda or ek jordar prahar uske sine p kiya.

Fir karan ne uski gardan uda di , per ye kya wo wapas pahale jese jud gayi, esa baar bar hota raha.vikral mar hi ni raha tha.

Karan ko kuch samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo kya kare , tabhi uske man me baba ki aawaz aayi .

Putra isne apne pran ek esi vastu m dal diya h jo isika prati rup darshati h. Or wo isi kamre m mojud h , pahale tumhe use nasht kerna hoga.

Karan baba ki baat samjh jata h or pass m rakhi vikral ki ek murti jo bilkul vesi dikhti thi , use nasht ker diya per kuch ni hua , ab karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo konsi vastu h.

Tabhi jyoti ka dhyan kamre m rakhe ek aaine pe jata h ,

Jyoti :- is aaine ka yaha kya kaam ho sakta h.

Tabhi jyoti ko puri baat samjh aajati h or wo karan se man me boli.

Jyoti :- bhai, is aaine ko nasht ker dijiye, kyunki aaina hi ek esi vastu h jo , kisi k bhi pratirup ko darsha sakta h aasani se.

Karan vesa hi kerta h or aaine p ek shakti prahar kerta h jisse uske tukde tukde ho jate h or ek kali roshni usse nikal vikaral m sama jati h.

Vikaral chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.

Karan :- ab apni mritu k liye saj ho ja vikral.

Vikaral :- itni jaldi ni ladke .

Or vikral aankhe band kerke kisi ko yaad kerte hue bola

Vikral :- raksha kijiye prabhu , apne is bhakt ki raksha kijiye.

Tabhi vaha tez tez havaye chalne lagi , or ek tez roshni k sath ek shaks karan or vikral k bich m prakat hua. Jise dekh vikral ki sena or jyoti bhi ruk gaye.

Jise dekh karan unhe pahachan gaya or asmanjas fas gaya ki ab vo kya kare.

Kyunki samne preto k devta , shri pret raj sarkaar khade the, jo preton k sath sath insano k bhi pujniya h, rajasthan k mahendipur balaji k mandir m inki bhi hanumanaji k sath puje jate h

Karan ne unhe pranam kiya , or bola.

Karan(man me) :- he prabhu , ye m kya dekh raha hu , aap ish dusht ki raksha krr rahe h , jisne najane kitne masumo ki bali di h , esa mat kijiye bhagwan , m aap per prahar ni ker sakta , kripya mujhe dharm sankat m na dale.

Pret raj (vivashata k bhav se man me bole) :- m vivash hu putra , vikral mera bhakt h or bhut kal m mane ise ek baar vachan diya tha ki , m iske prano ki raksha kerne ek baar jarur aaunga.

Putra m janta hu iske apradh , or m swayam bhi iska ant chahata hu, parantu m apna vachan bhi ni tod sakta , ab tumhe hi kuch kerna hoga putra.

Karan sochne laga ki ab kya kiya jaye , pahale to use kuch samjh ni aaya , fir usko kuch yaad aya jisse uske chahare pe ek muskan aagayi.

Karan(man me) :- vachan to apne kisi or ko bhi diya tha bhut kal m prabhu. Aapki aagya ho to .

Pret raj karan ka ishara samjh jate h or karan ko vesa hi kerne ko kahate h.

Karan ab hath jod ankhe bandh ker ek mantra bolne laga.

Karan:-

अतुलितबलधामं हेमशैलाभदेहं
दनुजवनकृशानुं ज्ञानिनामग्रगण्यम् ।
सकलगुणनिधानं वानराणामधीशं
रघुपतिप्रियभक्तं वातात्मजं नमामि

Or isi k sath karan k sharir se ek roshni nikalne lagi or dhire dhire us roshni ne jo aakar liya , usko dekh sabhi preto included vikral ki fat k hath m aagayi

Kyunki us roshni ne sakshat mahabali hanuman ji ki shape leli thi.

Pretraj ne hanumanaji ko vachan diya tha ki , jaha unka vaas hoga ya koi unka nam bhi lega to koi bhi bhut pret us bhakt ka kuch ni bigad sakega.

Pret raj ko ye moka sahi laga or wo jese hi jane lage.to vikral bol utha.

Vikral :- mujhe yu chod kaha ja rahe h prabhu , aapne mujhe vachan diya tha.

Pret raj :- vachan diya jarur tha vikral per ye ni bola tha ki tumhari raksha m har kisi se kar paunga or yaha to ab is ladke ne hanuman ji ki pratikriti ko le aaya h , ab m bhi kuch ni ker sakta , mujhe jane do .

Or ye bol pret raaj waha se gayab ho gaye.

Yahi to karan ka plan tha , usne sach m hanuman ji ko ni bulaya tha , bas ek hava m hanumanaji ki shape bana di thi.

Karan :- ab to tumhara antim sahara bhi ni raha vikral , or pret raj ko yaha bula tune apne paap ka ghada pura bhar diya h .

Kyunki tune ek dev ko burayi ki taraf kerne ka prayas jo kiya .

Vikral ab bhagne laga , tabhi jyoti boli.

Jyoti :- bhai ye lo.

Or ye bol usne apna dhanush karan ki or feka , or karan ne furti se catch ker , ek tir vikaral k pero m mara , jisse vo vahi gir gaya.

Karan :- tu to bahut bada kayar nikla vikral , yudh m pith dikha ker bhag raha tha.

Per kisi ne kaha h na ki

" mot se bhi bhala koi bach paya h "

Baat to vo bilkul sahi h , per mot se bhi jyada ager kuch khatarnak h jisse koi bhi ni bach sakta , wo h vyakti ka karmfal.

Or tumhe to abhi dono milne wale h , fir tune soch bhi kese liya tu bhag jayega.

Ye sab karan ne vikral ki or bhadte hue bola.

Vikral :- mujhe maf ker do , bas ek ek moka dedo , m sab bure kam chod dunga.

Karan ;- ni vikral , tum ab shama k layak ni ho, ab apna dand pane k liye saj ho jao.

Ye bol karan ne uska sir apni talvar k ek hi vaar se uda diya or vikral k marte hi uski sena m bhagadad mach gayi.

Per vo isse pahale bhagte , jyoti ne ek mantra bol tir unki or choda , jisse sab k sab vahi bandh gaye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Update no :- 62.
Jese hi ring baji, to karan or raka satark ho gaye. Karan ne wade k mutabik pahala attack raka ko kerne diya.

Raka ne moke ka pura fayda utha ker ek jordar punch karan k pet m mara.

Yu to karan ko usse koi fark ni pada tha, lekin dikhane k liye halke se dard k impression chahare p late hue bola.

Karan :- bas itna hi dam h tujhme , bol to ese raha tha jese , koi bahut badi top ho.

Chal m tujhe batata hu ki asli punch kise kahate h . Ye bol karan thodi takat se raka k pet m de mara, or raka lagbhag udte hue ring k pole se takraya.

Karan(haste hue) :- are are tum to itne m hi fuss ho gaye, kya bol rahe the , ki m haar man lu, kyu kaha gaya tera dam .

Karan k yu achanak badle is style or ravaiye ko dekh heran hone ki jarurat ni h dosto.

Bat darasal ye hui ki , jab fight se pahale karan or raka ne ek dusre se hath milaya tha.

Tab raka ne karan ka hath daba ker use dard pahuchane ki koshis ki thi , karan ko koi khas farq ya yu kahlo koi farq ni pada.

Ulta karan ki ek shakti jagrit(active) ho gayi , jisse use raka k bare m apne aap hi sab kuch pata chal gaya.

Ye karan ki wo shakti thi , jo kfd ne hi di thi , jisme ye hoga ki , karan jo koi bhi hani pahuchane ki koshis karega to , is shakti ki badolat karan ko us admi k bare m sab kuch pata chal jayega. Jese uska past , present , uski khasiyat or kamjori bhi. Isi shakti k karan ki help se hi to karan ne khan brother ki band bajayi thi.

Or esa hi raka k sath hua , jisse karan ko jo raka k bare m pata chala , uske baad karan ka gussa bhadak gaya.

Kyunki raka ek ghatiya or criminal insan tha. Chori , lut , murder ese kayi bure kaam kiye hue the usne.
Kitni masum ladkiyo ki jindagi kharab ki hui thi usne.

Yaha tak ki wo is had tak gir chuka tha ki usne ek 7 sal ki bachi ko bhi ni choda apni havas k chakkar me.

Karan (dahadte hue ) :- kyu bas itna hi dam tha kya tujhme , namard . Kya teri mardangi bas choti bachiyo p hi chalti h.

Raka khada hua or karan ki or doda or ek bar fir usne ek jordar punch marna chaha , lekin karan ne use dodge ker diya.

Or ek or jordar mukka uske muh pe de mara or haste hue bola.

Karan :- beta ! Tumse na ho payega.

Karan ka ye dialogue sun stadium m mojud sabhi log hasne lagte h.

Karan :- chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhega , ek moka or deta hu tuje , 10 min h tere pass , ager mujhe hara sakta h to ker le koshis ker le.

Ye mera wada h ki 10 min pur hone tak m kuch ni karunga.

Ye sun raka k chahare per ek chamak aajati h or wo jaldi se uth karan p attack kerna shuru ker deta h.

Usne jaker ek jordar laat karan k pet m mari , jisse wo apni jagah se jara sa piche ghisak gaya. Lekin koi khas fark na pada.

Ab raka pura pagal ho gaya tha , usne karan p lato or ghuse ki barsaat ker di , jisse karan thoda bahut ghayal hua.

Wese to karan ki m heel power thi , lekin usne janbhujkar uska prayog ni kiya, ki ager achanak se ghav bharne lage to logo ko shak hoga.

Fir raka ne karan ne karan ko niche gira diya. Lekin karan fir khada ho gaya.

Raka:- sale tu kis mitti ka bana h , itni mar k baad to ache se acha wrestler bhi na uth paye .

Per aaj tu raka k hatho ni bachega sale, tu aaj yaha se 4 kandho p hi jayega bhenc.........


Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Raka ne abhi apni baat puri bhi ni ker paya tha ki ek jordar punch uske muh p pada , jisse uske aage 7 8 daat sahid ho gaye. Jo ki karan ka tha, jiski ankhe gusse se lal ho chuki thi

Karan(tez awaaz me) :- tune abhi ek ni apni jindagi ki 2 sabse badi galtiya ker di h.

1 . Baato m ulajh k apne 10 min gava ker.

2 . Or sabse badi galti teri ye h kute ki , tune meri bahan ko gali di. Jo tu ab apne jindagi ki aakhiri galti hi samjh.

Bas ab tera time over ho gaya h, ab apne sare bure kamo ka dand bhugatne ko teyar ho ja.

Raka ne fir ek baar use punch marne ki koshis ki , lekin karan ne uske punch ko bich m hi pakad , uske ek second m ghuma k tod dala

Raka dark mare karahane laga , lekin ab karan rukne k mood m ni tha. Or karan ek jordar puch raka k pet p de mara , jiske dard k raka apne ghutne p aagaya .

Fir karan ne ek jordar lat uske muh p mari jisse wo gir kar tadapne laga.

Karan :- uth na kute , kaha gayi teri mardangi , kyu dard ho raha hai h na. Lekin ye dard un masumo k dard k aage kuch bhi ni h, jinke tumne ghar ujade .

Soch kya bit rahi hogi , un logo k uper jinke ghar k chirag tumne chand peso k liye bhujaye.kya gujrai hogi us maa p, jiske bhudape k sahare ko tune berahami se maar dala.

Fir karan raka ko jabardasti khada kerta h or bola .

Karan:- kya hua sale namard , lad na . Kyu ab kya hua.

Or karan ne ek spin kick uske muh pe jad di or raka fir se gir pada.

Or fir karan uskl ulta ker uska ek per utha ker karan bola.

Karan :- inhi pero ki juti samjhta h na tu har nari ko.

Or ye bol karan ne raka k pero k joint pe jordar laat marke uska per bhi tod diya.

Fir karan ne uska dusra hath pakad k bola .

Karan :- isi hath se tune , un masum ladkiyo ki aabru luti thi na hevan .

Or karan itna bol raka ka dusra hath bhi tod deta h jisse raka ki chikh pure stadium m gunj jati h.

Sabhi karan k is roop ko dekh k heran the.

Or karan ne apne aap ko aakhiri attack k liye teyar kerte hue raka ki tango k bich aate hue bola.

Karan :- or ye us haiwaniyat k liye jo tune us masum bachi k sath ki thi.

Or ye bol karan ne ek jordar laat uske main point p de mari , jisse raka behosh ho gaya.

Refree ne isi ke sath karan ko vijeta ghoshit ker diya gaya. Prize distribution jyoti ki flight k baad hone wala tha.

Karan fir ring se nikal ker nikal ker apni bahano k pass pahuncha , to sabse pahale radha or sonam karan k gale mili.

Radha(khusi se fule na samati hui boli):- many many many congratulations bhai , aakhir aap jit hi gaye.m to kabse bol rahi thi ki aap hi jitoge.


Ye moti to yakin hi ni ker rahi thi mera,man hi ni rahi thi.

Sonam :- congratulations bhaiya , I knew it ki aap hi jitoge.

E bandariya kyu jhut bol rahi h. Mane kab bola .

Karan :- are bas bas ab ladne mat lag jana , khushi ka moka h . Party kis kis ko chahiye.

Dono :- ek sath party , yahooooo.

Fir karan jese hi jyoti ki or bhadta h to , jyoti dod k aake karan k gale lag jati h , or pyaar se uske mathe ko chum boli.

Jyoti :- congratulations my champion bhaiya.

Or ye bol wo karan ko kas k gale laga leti h , jisse karan ki chot dab jati h, jiski uski halki chikh nikal jati h.

Jyoti chikh sun sab samjh jati h or karan ka hath pakad sonam ko boli .

Jyoti :- choti jaldi se hume ek ache doctor k yaha le chal.

Karan :- are gudiya m thik hu.

Jyoti bich m tokte hue .

Jyoti :- aap jara chup hi rahiye , bolte ho thik hu, kitna lag gaya h aapko.

Sonam :- ha bhai , di bilkul sahi bol rahi h.

Or fir wo 3no karan ko clinic leke jati h.

Wahi dusri or naina pandit ji k sath pados k gav apne pahunch gayi apni jeep m.


Thakur jese hi pandit ji ko dekhta h to bhag ke aaker unke pero m gir k bola.

Thakur :- pandit ji , kripya meri bachi ko bacha lijiye , pata ni konsi bala meri bachi k gale pad gayi h.

Jisko koi tantrik ya koi ojha ni bhaga paya , ab aap hi mera antim sahara ho , pandit ji meri bachi ko bacha lijiye.

Pandit ji use uthate hue bole :- are thakur sahab esa mat kijiye, m apni puri koshis karunga.

Fir pandit ji or naina haveli k us kamre m jate h , jaha per thakur ki beti ko bandh k rakha tha.

Kyunki wo bahut hi khunkhar ho chuki thi , wo kisi ko bhi dekhti to marne dodti, usne abhi tak 15 aadmiyon ko buri tarah ghayal ker diya tha .

Wo dikhne m bahut bhayanak lag rahi thi,uske ankho ki putliya sikud k itni choti ho gayi thi , jo use or bhi drawana bana rahi thi.

Pandit ji ne naina ko thakur or uske parivar k pass rahane ko bol , us ladki k pass gaye.


Pandit ji ko dekh wo aatma bahut bhadak gaya.

Ladki(pret) :- pandit tu mera khuch ni bigaad sakta , tu bhi bakiyon k jese khali hath hi jayega yaha se.

Pandit ji uspe gangajal phekte hue bole :- bata kon h tu , kyu pada h is masum k piche.

Ladki :- kyu bhude , kya karega jan ke , tere ye chote mote totke mera kuch ni bigad sakte .

Pandit ji bar bar usper mantra bol k gangajal dalte rahe , us pret ko taklif to bahut ho rahi thi per , koi khas asar bhi ni ho raha tha.

Ladki :- kyu kya hua bhude , bas itna hi jor tha tujhme , ab meri baari h , tu ab bachna to h ni , isliye teri aakhiri khawaish samjh k bata raha hu.

Ye ladki mujhe pasand achuk h pandit or ab yahi meri dulhan banegi .

Pandit ji :- murkhta mat ker dusht , tu ek pret h or ye ek insan , chod de iske sharir ko , mujhe majbur mat ker.

Ladki :- to dikha apni takat budhe m bhi dekhu, kitni takat h tujhme .

Pandit ji apni ankhe padh jal uspe maarte h , is baar us pret ko bahut kasht hota h, per ye kya wo jald hi normal ho jata h.

Pandit ji :- asambhav mere is mantra se to shaktishali se shaktishali pret bhi ni bach sakta.

Tu koi sadharan pret ni ho sakta kon h tu.

Ladki :- m usi prajaati ka hu pandit , jisne tujhe pahale bhi haraya tha, or aaj bhi tu marega.

Ye bolte hue us ladki ne apne full sleeve suit k hath wali side se fad diya. Or us ladki k hatho p ek nishan ubhara hua tha. Kuch esa.






Pandit ji uske nishan ko dekh saham gaye , or wo ladki ne ab apni rasiya tod di, or hava m udte hue , pandit ji k pas aayi or unka gala pakad liya.

Naina(chilate hue ):- babaaa

Pandit ji achanak se tadafte hue bole , beti tu bhag yaha se, teri jan ko khatra h.

Naina :- ni baba m aapko yu chod k kahi ni jaungi.

Ladki :- bhude , uski ni tu apni chinta ker

or ye bol usne bol k pandit ji ko divar p de mara gale se utha k.

Naina :- babaaa.

Ab naina ka krodh badhne laga tha, or yaha wo ladki pandit ji ko baar bar utha utha k idher se udher fek rahi thi.

Pandit ji lahu luhan ho chuke the, per wo bar bar naina ko waha se bhagne ko hi bol rahe the.

Abhi wo ladki kuch or kerti to use achanak se jhatke lagne lage or pandit ji uski pakad se chut gaye.

Esa isliye hua kyunki ab naina se ruka ni gaya or usne apna yantra nikal liya jisse nikalti divya kirne us pret per padne lagi.




Naina gusse se :- bas bahut ho gaya tera dhust aatma , tujhe mere baba ko.marne ka hisab chukana hi hoga.

Lekin wo pret kuch jyada hi shakti shali tha or usne apni shakti se ek gamla hava m utha ker naina k hath pe de mara or naina k hath se wo yantra chut gaya.

Pret :- ladki ab tu or tera baap dono maroge or tumhare sath sath marega ye pura thakur khandan .

Itna bol wo ladki hava m udti hui naina ki or bhadi or naina ko usne apni shaktiyo se dhaka de divar se chipka diya.

Ladki :- ab tujhe koi ni bacha sakta ,

itna bol wo jese hi naina ki gardan pakdni chahi , or jese hi usne naina k gale ko chua .

Tabhi ek jordar current usko laga or wo jaker dur gir pada.

Jab naina ne apne gardan k pass dekha to usne paya , ki uske gale m mojud wo locket chamak raha tha , jo uske gale m bachpan se hi tha.

Ladki :- asambhav ye kese ho sakta h , ki mera tere chune bhar se hi , mane apni adhi shakti kho di.

Naina jaldi se khud ko sambhalti h or jaldi se acha sa moka samjh apna yantra utha leti h.

Per ye kya uske locket se ek laal rang ki roshni nikal ke , uske yantra m sama jati h.

Itne me wo ladki wapas naina ki or bhadti h or fir ek baar naina apna yantra aage ker deti h .

Or is bar nilli roshni ki jagah purple roshni us yantra se nikal k us ladki p padne lagti h.

Or is baar us pret ki halAt kharab hone lagti h, or wo chilate hue bola.

Ladki :- dusht ladki , tune esi kya maya ker di h jo mujhko tak jala rahi h

Naina:- ye maya ni dusht achai ki shakti h , or burayi chahe kitni bhi takat war ho jaye achai k aage ni tik sakti.

Or fir naina ek mantra bolti h jisse us shetan ki chikhe gunj uthati h .

Ladki m mojud shetan ek saye k roop m bahar aagaya jo jal raha tha.

Or wo marte hue bola .

Shetan :- tune mujhe , yani ki ek "trittya" ko marker , bahut badi bhul ki h ladki . Ab tu lambe samay tak jinda ni bachegi. Hamare maharaj jarur badla lenge tere se.

Naina :- tritiya ?

Usne ye shabd dobara is andaz m bola jese puch rahi ho ki ye tritiya kya h.

Lekin ye bol wo saya jal ker gayab ho jata h or wo ladki sahi ho ker behosh ho jati h.

Back to the hero .

Karan apne kamre m shirt less betha tha , or jyoti uske sharir per dava laga rahi thi.

Karan :- aah , gudiya dhire .Or ye kya laga rahi h tu jo itni jalan ho rahi h


Jyoti :- aap to chup hi rahiye , kya jarurat thi bekar m mar khane ki , dekhiye kitni chot lagi h apko.

Ye bolte hue uski ankho m pani aagaye or karan ne use gale se laga k bola .

Karan :- are gudiya ab tu kyu rone lagi , m thik to hu mera bacha, ye dekh

Or karan ne apni ankhe band ker healing power se khud ko thik ker liya.

Tab jaker jyoti ko thodi rahat hui or wo boli.

Jyoti :- per bhai aapko wo sab kerne ki kya jarurat thi. Or ap match k doran aggressive kyu ho gaye the.

Karan use raka k bare m sari baate batata h jise sun jyoti ko raka p gussa bhi aata h or apne bhai p garv bhi hota h.

Jyoti karan ko gale lagate hur :- I really proud of u bhai , aapne bilkul sahi kiya esa hevan ko to esi hi saja milni chahiye.

Fir ese hi dono bhai bahan baate kerte hue so jate h . Agle din kuch khas ni hota or wo din yu hi ghumne firne m nikal jata h.

Aaj jyoti ka final match tha or samne wali opponent ek black belt thi or pichle saal ki winner bhi.

Jyoti or wo ladki pahale to ek dusre se hath mila k all the best bolte h or fir ghanti bajte hi mukabla shuru ho jata h.

Wo ladki aggressive nature ki thi or usne ghanti k bajte hi , attack kerna shuru ker diya.

Lekin apni jyoti uske har ek war ko block kerte hue uske sath khel rahi thi. Or jab laga bahut hua uska khel to ab usne attack shuru ker diye .

Wo us ladki se dugni speed m attack ker rahi thi. Ladki ne khub dat ker jyoti ka mukabla kiya or use achi khasi takkar bhi di .

Lekin akhir kar jyoti ne bazi maar hi li. Or jyoti ko is saal ka winner ghoshit ker diya gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Note :- sorry friends jyoti k final battle ko short m nipta diya , per m is tournament ko lamba ni khichna chahata tha.

karan ne raka ka game baja diya

naina ne tritiya ka per y tritiya kya hota hai..


jyoti bhi apni fight jeet gyi

ab jaldi se shimla shimla matter close ho sakta hai...


akhir naina se jo milna hai

 

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Update no :- 63
Jese hi jyoti k jitne ki announcement hui , to pure stadium m tournament k pure hone ki khushi m pure auditorium m fire crackers chalu ho gaye.

Jyoti ring se nikalte hi karan ki or bhagi , karan ne bhi muskurate hue apni bahe fela di or jyoti apni full speed se karan k gale lag gayi or karan use gale lagaye hue hi thoda utha k gol gol ghum apni khushi jatane laga.

Jyoti :- dekha bhai , m jit gayi .

Karan (uske mathe ko chumte hue) :- ha meri gudiya jeet hi gayi , per mujhe koi hairani ni h tumhare jitne pe , tere p pura vishwas jo tha mujhe pura bharosa jo h tujh per.

Phir jyoti radha or sonam or radha se bhi gale milti h.

Radha:- congratulations di ,

Sonam.:- congratulations didu.

Jyoti dono k gaalo ko chum ker unhe thank u bolti h.

Fir karan or jyoti ek dusre ka hath pakad price distribution k liye jate h.

Tabhi ek announcement hoti h.

Anchor :- ladies and gentlemen rukawat k liye mafi chahata hu ki , lekin ek bahut hi jaruri announcement kerni h mujhe.

Aaj jo prize distribution ka program hona tha, wo kinhi kaarano se aaj postpone kiya ja raha h.

Or ab prize distribution aaj ni , balki parso hoga, or function ki location kal announce ker di jayegi.

Radha:- shit yaar , m kitni excited thi bhai ko di ko first prize milte hie dekhne k liye, chalo koi baat ni ek din or sahi hum kal ni parso wapas jayenge.

Sonam bhi ye sun ker khush ho gayi ki kam se kam use ek din or mil jayega ,apni saheli or apne bhai bhahan k sath rahane ka.

Per yaha karan tension m aagaya tha , usne garima se ek din pahale lotne ka wada jo kiya tha , kyunki garima ko waha radha ki jarurat thi.

Fir isi baare m sochte hue karan or apni bahano k sath , hotel ki or nikal jata h.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- thakur house.

Naina ne us pret ka ant kerti h , uske baad use thodi kamjori mahasus hoti h.

Tabhi uski najar pandit ji per padti h or wo dod k unke pass jati h jinki halat bahut kharab thi , unka pura sharir lahu luhan ho gaya tha , or wo behosh ho gaye the.

Naina(rote hue ) :- baba , uthiye baba kya hua aapko , are koi jaldi se ambulance ko bulao.

Thakur jaldi se pass k shahar se ambulance bulata h , or jab tak ambulance aaye , tab tak naina ne pandit ji ki first aid ker di.

Thodi hi der m ambulance aajati h ,or pandit ji ko usme letakar hospital ki or nikal jati h.

Naina ki nili ankho se ansu jhar jhar bah rahe the , jisko dekh to kisi ka bhi dil tadaf uthe.

Karib 20 min m ambulance hospital pahunch jati h, or ambulance se nikal ker do compounder unhe hospital me le jate h.

Or ek compounder jaldi se jaa ker doctor ko bula k lata h , doctor ko dekhte hi naina unke pero m gir k roti hui boli .

Naina:- please doctor mere baba ko bacha lo, m apke pao padti hu, mere baba k alawa is duniya m koi ni h.

Doctor(nanina ko uthate hue):- are beti ye kya ker rahi ho utho, m dekhta hu tumhare baba ko.

Ye bol doctor pandit ji ko examine kerta h or bolta h.

Doctor:- oh my god, inki condition bahut hi critical h , ye hua kese .
I m.sorry ye police case h , mujhe police ko info kerna hoga.

Tabhi piche se doctor k kano m ek aawaj padti h.

"Wo sab m dekh lunga doctor sahab , bas pandit ji ko kuch ni hona chahiye"

Ye awaaz thakur ki hi thi , jo ambulance k piche piche hi apni car m aagaya tha.

Doctor :- are thakur sahab aap yaha,

Thakur :- wo sab chodo doctor, abhi bas aap pandit ji ka ilaz kero , or unko kuch ni hona chahiye.

Thakur ek bahut hi powerful, lekin ek dil insaan tha, usko andaza tha ki doctor ye police case wala drama jarur karenge , isliye wo khud bhi unke sath aagaya tha.

Doctor turant pandit ji ko ot m leker jata h , or naina hath jod k thakur se boli.

Naina:- aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad thakur sahab , aapne mere pe bahut bada upkaar kiya h

Thakur :- esa bol k mujhe lajjit mat kero beti , upkaar to tumne pure thakur khandan p kiya h beti , meri bachi ko us shaitan se bacha ker ,
Tum sach me hamare liye masiha ban k aayi ho.

Or ye bol thakur naina k per pakadne ko hota h to naina unhe ro k boli .

NainA:- are thakur sahab ye aap kya ker rahe h, aap mujhse umra , pad or har chij m mujhse bade h , esa kerke mujhe pap ka bhagi na banaye.

Or m kon hoti hu kaha kuch kerne wali, kerne wali to mere bholenath or meri maa jagdamba kali h, unhi ki kripa se m us shaitan ko maar payi.

Aapko dhnyawad kerna h , to un maa jagat janni ko kijiye.

Thakur :- tum sach me mahan ho beti , maa tum.per apni kripa sadev banaye rakhe

Tabhi thakur ki najar naina k sharir per padti h , chote to usko bhi aayi thi , or uske kapde bhi kuch side se fat gaye the.

Thakur jaldi se ek lady doctor ko bulata h or use naina k ilaaz kerne ko bol naina ko bhej deta h uske sath.

Or ek nurse ko kuch pese deker naina k liye ek jodi kapde mangwata h.

Thodi der m naina ki marahm pati ho jati h, or wo thakur k mangwaye hue kapde pahan k ot k bahar beth jati h , or doctor k bahar aane ka intezaar kerne lagti h.

Karib 2 ghante baad doctor bahar aata h or bolta h.

Doctor :- I m sorry thakur sahab , unki halat bahut hi jyada critical h or hum ab kuch ni ker sakte .

Unke paas ab jyada samay ni h , yahi koi 5 6 ghante ka samay h , aap chahe to unhe ghar le ja sakte h.

Naina ye sun k buri tarah tut jati h , use bahut bada jhatka laga tha.

Naina(rote hue) :- kya m apne baba se mil sakti hu.

Doctor :- ha beti , hum abhi thodi der m unhe genral ward m shift kar denge , tum tab unse mil lena.

Thodi der baad pandit ji ko general ward m shift ker diya jata h, or naina pandit ji k side m beth rone lagti h.

Tabhi pandit ji k sharir m halchal hoti h , jise dekh naina apne ansu puch leti h .

Pandit ji ko jese hi hosh aata h , pahale to wo bahut ghabra jate h or unhe naina ki chinta hone lagti h per jab unki najar naina p padti h to unhe rahat pahunchti h.

Pandit ji :- tu thik to h na beti or hum yaha kese pahunche .

Fir naina pandit ji ko sari baat batati h or boli .

Naina:- baba aap chinta mat kijiye ,ap jaldi thik ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beti m janta hu ki mera ant samay nikat aachuka h , kyu yu jhut bol ke khud ko taklif de rahi ho.

Ab naina k sabar ka bandh tut jata h or wo jor jor se rote hue pandit ji k gale lag k boli.

Naina:- ni baba , aapko kuch ni hoga , m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , aapko kahi ni jane dungi.

Pandit ji :- beta ye to jindagi ka katu satya h , jiska janm hua h uski mrityu bhi nishchit h . Or tum kabse sach se darne lagi .

Naina:- ni baba m aapko kuch ni hone dungi , m duniya k sabse ache se ache doctor ko dikhaungi, aap jald hi swasth ho jaoge .

Pandit ji :- beta ab iska koi fayda ni h,meri bachi m apne pran is hospital m ni tyagna chahata , mujhe mere ghar , meri maa k pass le ja meri bachi.

Meri ye aakhiri khawaish h ki , m apne praan maa k charno m hi tyagu.

Naina ne bahut koshis ki pandit ji ko samjhane ki or bade doctor k pass le jane ki , lekin pandit ji ni mane , shayad unhe ab apne ant samay k ane ka ahasas ho chuka tha.

Isliye wo wapas ma k mandir jane ko bol rahe the , unhonne sari umra maa ki seva ki thi , or unki yahi khawaish thi , ki wo apne pran maa k charno m tyag.

Akhir m naina ko pandit ji ki jid manni hi padi or usne thakur ki madad se pandit ji ko apne mandir le ker pahunchi .

Or wahi thakur ne mandir k ander ek gada or takiya lagwaya or pandit ji ko uspe leta diya gaya.

Naina wahi side m bethe royi ja rahi thi , or pandit kuch sochte hue bole.

Pandit ji :- beti .

Naina:- ha baba boliye.

Pandit ji :- beti mera ant samay nikat achuka h , lekin m jane se pahale tumhe tumhare satya or tumhare jivan k prayojan se avgat kerwa dena chahata hu .

Taki mrityu k baad meri aatma ko shanti mil sake .

Naina:- kesi sachai baba.

Pandit ji thakur ki or dekhte h or thakur pandit ji ka ishara samjh mandir se bahar chala jata h.fir pandit ji bole.



Pandit ji :- beta , sabse pahale to m tujhse shama chahata hu ki mane tujhse aajtak ye sachai chupayi.

Fir pandit ji bole.

Pandit ji :- beti , satya ye h ki m tumhara , sach m pita ni hu.

Naina ko ye sun bahut bada sock lagta h.

Naina :- ni baba ye satya ni h , kah dijiye , apne jo bola wo jhut h.

Pandit ji (rote hue ) :- ni beti , mane jo bola h wo purntah satya h.mane to bas tumhe ek putri ki tarah pala h . Lekin tumne mujhe kabhi ahasas hi ni hone diya ki tum meri beti ni ho na hi mere man me esa kabhi vichar aaya.

Naina(rote hue boli) :- ager ye satya h to kon h mere pita , kon h wo maa , jisne apni beti ko yu asahay chod diya.

Mujhe janm dene wale bhale hi koi or ho baba , parantu mere liye mere pita mere baba aap hi rahoge.

Naina (gusse me)Mujhe ni janna us maa k bare m , jisne apni bachi ko janm to diya , per use marne chod diya.

Pandit ji :- ni beta , esa ni bolte . Tumhari maa ki bahut badi majburi thi , or abhi bhi vo khatre m.

Naina:- kya ?

Pandit ji :- ha beti , m tumhe batata hu kya kaaran tha , tumhari maa ka tumhe mere pas chodne ka.


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Sham ho chuki thi or karan ki tension or bhi bad gayi thi , kyunki use msg mila tha .

Jiske according prize distribution ceremony parso raat ko thi , pahale to usne socha hua tha , ki ceremony din m ho jayegi or wo sham ko yaha se nikal k raat tak apne ghar pahunch jayenge , per yaha to sab ulta ho raha tha.

Karan radha ko apne room m bulata h or use wo sab bat batata h or bolta h.

Karan :- gudiya , tum kal ki flight se wapas ghar lot jao , aunty ko tumhari bahut jarurat h .

Radha:- nahi bhai m apke bina yaha se kahi ni jane wali , or ek din m koi fark ni padne wala.

Jyoti :- baat ko samjhne ki koshis ker choti , aunty ko waha jarurat h tumhari.

Radha:- ni di mane kaha na m kahi ni jane wali , m aapki prize ceremony dekh ker hi jaungi.

Karan or jyoti use bahut samjhate h per radha man hi ni rahi thi.

Radha(rote hue) :- m samjh gayi , aap ni chahate na m yaha ruku or wo bacho jese rote hue kamre se bhag gayi.

Karan :- are gudiya ruk to.

Tabhi sonam kamre m enter kerti h or boli.

Sonam:- kya hua bhaiya , aap itna pareshan kyu ho or ye radha yu rote hue kyu gayi.

Karan ko sonam ko dekh ek ummid ki kiran najar aati h or karan use sari baat batata h.

Karan :- gudiya ab tu hi radha ko samjha sakti h , kyunki jaha tak m samjh raha hu , prize distribution to bahana h , asal m to uska tumhe chod k jane ka man ni h.

Please choti ab tu hi kuch ker .

Sonam bhi ye baat sun udaas ho jati h , chahati to wo bhi ni thi ki radha jaye , per uska jana jaruri tha, ye soch ker boli.

Sonam :- thik h bhaiya, m radha se baat kerti hu.

Karan sonam ko gale laga ke bola

Karan :- thank you so much gudiya hamari majburi samjhne k liye , m janta hu ki tu bhi bahut udaas h radha k jane se .

Per meri gudiya tu chinta mat ker , hum dobara jald hi aayenge , tumse milne.

Sonam ye sun thoda khush hote hue boli:- per bhai meri ek shart h, ki radha k jane k baad aapko mere ghar p rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- are gudia , tu kyu bina bajah pareshan ho rahi h.

Lekin sonam karan or jyoti ko mana hi leti h or bad jati h radha k kamre ki or .

Jaha radha takiye m muh chupaye roye ja rahi thi.

Sonam uske pass jake uske sir ko sahalate hue boli .

Sonam :- e bandriya kyu ro rahi h or
Ye m kya sun rahi hu tune bhai ki baat ni mani.

Radha sonam ko dekh jhat se uske gale lag rome lagi or boli

Radha :- dekh na sonam , bhai mujhe yaha rukne ni de rahe , m bhai ki prize distribution ceremony dekhna chahati hu.

Sonam :- acha , to ye mote mote aansu , ceremony k liye .

Udaas hone ki acting kerte hue .

Sonam :- or m soch rahi thi , meri saheli mujse dur hone pe udass h .

Radha uski baat ko samjh gai or usko gale lagate hue boli.

Radha:- ha sonu(radha sonam ko pyar se kabhi kabhi sonu bolti h) , sach yahi h ki m tujhe chod k ni jana chahati , jindagi m pahali baar to ek sachi saheli mili muje , ab m usse bichdna ni chahati


Sonam:- m bhi kaha khush hu radhu aap sab k jane se , m jab aap logo se jab pahali baar mili thi , tab m kitni khush hui thi ,m bata ni sakti , bhagwan ne karan bhaiya or jyoti didi itna pyar kerne wale k rup m bhai bahan or tere rup me itni achi saheli jo di bhagwan ne .

Mujhe to pata hi nk chala , kab 2 hafte nikal bhi gaye. M to khud ni chahati ki tum jao , per aunty ko bhi vaha tumhari jarurat h na. Tum hi batao Aunty mere bare m kya sochegi ki kesi saheli mili tumhe , jo usko apni maa. Se hi dur ker rahi h.
Tum chahti ho esa ho .

Radha ne na m sir hilaya.

Sonam :- to fir meri baat maan radhu or kal tum apni mummy k pas chali jao.

M tumhe promise kerti hu , ki jald m tumse milne aayungi, or hum dono fir khub ghumenge. Ghumaogi na mujhe.

Radha sonam k samjhane p maan jati h or boli .

Radha :- thik h sonu , tu bolti h to m jarur jaungi.

Per moti apna wada yaad rakhna , ager tu hamare jane k baad ni ayi humse milne jald or hume bhul gayi to yaha aaker tujhe pitungi .

Sonam:- ha jarur.

Or uske galo ko khichte hue boli

Sonam :- or tu bhi koi bhulne wali item h kya meri bandriya.

Ye bol dono hasne lagti h or dono jake ye baat karan or jyoti ko batati h ki radha man gayi h .Or radha bhi apne behavior k liye karan or jyoti se mafi mangti h.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

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Note :- I m very disappointed friends , kal mane ek ni 2 updates diye , fir bhi koi acha response ni aaya , ulta pahle se bhi kam response mila, please friends ager mujhse story m koi romance ya sex ko abhi add ni ker raha abhi ye soch k alawa bhi aapki najar m koi galti h to jarur bataiye .
Ese likhne m maja ni aata.or ha m un writer jesa ni hu ko response na ane ka bahana ker story adhuri chod dete h.
Mane ye pyari story shuru ki h to complete bhi jarur karunga friends , per please apne review jarur diya kijiye

naina ke pitaji (pandit ji) apni akhri sase gin rahe aur inhi akhri lamho me unhone ek sach ka bomb blast kardiya ki naina unki putri ni hai, matlab ki naina karan or jyoti ki sagi bahen hi hai ..

prize distribution 2 din delay kyu hua?

radha ko manna bada teda kaam nikla per apni moti gudiya ne use manna hi liya

per yeh log sonam ko bhi sath kyu nhi le jate, waha radha ra saath reh sakti hai...


superb update

 

[sonukale]

Waiting

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

waiting for update bro .