Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Abhi mein ne tumare saare update pade karan bhai .

Sach me kamal ki story likhi hai.
Tumne
jaise mein story padhna chahata tha yeh story bilkul vaise hii hai .


Vaise shuru me mujhe yeh story bilkul pasand nahi aae

Kiuki mein ne pyare riste story phele padi hue thi

Or vo story mujhe bilkul bhi achi nahi lagi
Har readers ki apni apni soch hoti hai kisi ko story achi lagti hai kisi ko nahi.

Isliye mein ne negative vote kiya tha

Please bhai yeh personal mat lena kiuki mujhe jaisa lagta hai mein sach bolta hue mein upar upar se nice update ya fantastic update bol kar bina pasand kiye review nahi deta hu
Mera jo bhi review hota hai vo mann or bhawnao se hota hai
Kiuki writer ke sath reader ke bhi bhawanae us story se jud jati hai.
Or jaise acha lagta hai readers vaise comment karte hai.
Vo acha bhi ho sakta hai or bura bhi


Kiuki ek writer story isliye likhta hai ki vo yeh pata kar sake ki kya mere ander vo kabliyat hai ki mein ek fantastic story likhu or reader unki story padh kar bataye ki jo mein ne apni mehnat se story likhi hai vo kesi hai

Or jaruri nahi ki sab ko vo story pasand aae.


Vaise mujhe pata hai yeh aap ki first story hai to likhne me thodi problem bhi hoti hai.
Kisi readers ko story achi lagti hai kisi ko nahi


Magar jab mujhe roshni he bataya ki yeh story bohot achi hai apne isme negative review kiu diya
Jab mein vaishnu devi me tha to usne khud meri id se vo negative review hata diya or bohot achi story wale vote par dal diya.

Fir mujhe laga ki apki story age padhni chahiye or age padhte padhte mere yeh story puri tarha se change lagi.


Har update age padhte padhte intersting hote chale gae.


Har update ko apne bohot hii khubsuraat tarike se likha hai.

Karan or jyoti ka mazak or pyaar bohot hi ache tarike se dikaya gaya hai.

Or mata sati or mahadev ki story mein ne pehle bhi padi hai .
Magar apne vo yaad bhi taza kara di


Or yeh karan or jyoti kdf ka hii ansh hai.

Or us chudel ka khel ko bohot fantastic tarike se dikaya gaya hai.

Or uska ant bhi bohot alag or mazedaar tha.

Ab pret bhi story me aa gaye hai.
Or unka ant bhi bohot shandaar tarike se dikaya gaya hai.

Drugs ke mafiyo ko karan ne jo ek jhatke mein khatam kiya vo bhi unexpected tha.

Or karan or jyoti ka pyaar bohot hii sacha or honest hai.

Mujhe jyoti or karan ka character bohot pasand aya .

Vaise rohan ka bhi charector bohot acha hai.


Overall kahu to ek bohot zabardast story likhi hai apne
Aise hii likhe raho bhai.

Apki mehnaat kabiliye tarif hai.

Yeh baat story padhkar dikai deti hai.

Jaha karan or jyoti apne lakhye ki taraf aage bad rahe hai

Vahi narad jii or kdf ki baate bohot hii romanchak dikai hai apne

Ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.

Asha hai ki age ke update bhi karan bhai aap jabardast hii likhoge

Vaise abhi mein ne 68 update hii pade hai abhi tak jo apne index mein deye hue tha
Jaise hii time milta hai next update ka review deta hu.


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Rohan

Thank you so much bhai, aapko hi ni yaha bahut se logo ko shuruat m vesa hi laga or ha pahale wali pyare rishte sach me hi bahut bekar thi , mane to bas shuruat or thoda idea liya us story se baki sab mane khud hi likha. Ese hi sath bane rahiyegar bhai , waiting for your next comment
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Mast update bro

Waiting for next

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I m full agree

Mene kuch esa hi socha tha

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waiting

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Nice update

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Waiting

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Zabardast update

Mast update tha bhai. Ab dekhate hai naina ke seth kay hota hai

Superb Lajawab update Bhai

Excellently written..... fantastic update bhai... keep writing

Ok bro

OK Bhai
Best of luck

Thik hai bhai

Mujhe bhi current update ka h

Intjar

Intzaar rhega

Phir to mega update hona chahiye

Waiting for next update Bhai

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Very nice and fantastic update