Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Kane the monster]

11 sade 11 tak dene ki kosis karunga bhai aaj , verna kal dopahar ko tak to pakka

Ok boss take your time but only one condition we wanna big bang

 

[monika]

Oops sorry ji edit kerna bhul gaya
2 3 din se kaha thi

Mere paper chalu hai 11 tk to time mila to hi pdhungi

11 ke bad roj visit krungi

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Rohan008]

11 sade 11 tak dene ki kosis karunga bhai aaj , verna kal dopahar ko tak to pakka

Intzaar rhega

 

[sonukale]

waiting for next update

 

[monika]

11 sade 11 tak dene ki kosis karunga bhai aaj , verna kal dopahar ko tak to pakka

kl se acha aaj hi dedo na update kya hai Na kl mera exam hai to mai nhi pdh paungi plz aaj dedo Na update

 

[Harry rocks]

kl se acha aaj hi dedo na update kya hai Na kl mera exam hai to mai nhi pdh paungi plz aaj dedo Na update

Dene ka pura try kar raja hu, lekin update to pura ho

 

[monika]

Hmm acha nhi huaa to bhi koi bat nhi ap likhiye mai prso pdh lungi
Bye bye

 

[Harry rocks]

Announcement.
Next update kal dopahar tak aajayega friends , deri k liye maafi chaunga

 

[Zas23]

Update no :- 83
Location :- kundera ganv se bahar thodi dur ka area

Raat k karib 12.30 baj rahe the , ek admi abhi bike se apne ghar ki or jaa raha tha, aaj use kafi der hogayi thi , ki tabhi uski bike kharab achanak se chalte chalte ruk ruk jati h.

Admi thoda chinta or dar k sath : dhat teri ki , Ab ise kya ho gaya yaar , ek to pahale hi itna late ho gaya hu, uper se ise bhi abhi kharab hona tha

Aadmi abhi bike ko start kerne ki koshish kerne m laga hua tha ki wo dekhta h ki wahi pass se ek ladka gujar raha tha, apni cycle p

Aadmi use rokta hua bola :- bhai yaha aaspas koi machenic milega kya.

Admi thoda sa darpok kism ka tha , or uper se adhi raat ko ese bhayanak jangal k raste p atak gaya tha , isliye ghabrahat k maare esa betuka sawal ker betha.

Ladka :- kesi baat kerte ho chacha bavre ho gaye ho kya is samay konsa machenic milega kya bhala.

Ab to aapko subah hi machenuc milega .


Ye bol wo ladka waha se nikalne laga , use jata dekh wo admi bol pada .

Aadmi :- are jara ruko to beta, wese tum kaha ja rahe ho.

Ladka :- m yahi ganv kundera hi ja raha hu chacha , mere chacha ji ko kal meri jarurat thi to raat ko hi nikal pada yaha aane ko

Aadni ye sun thoda rahat ki saas lete hue bola :- beta m bhi kundera hi jaa raha hu , kyu na dono sath m hi chale, wese bhi ab ganv jyada dur to h ni.

Ladka :- thik h chalo .

Ladka cycle se uter kar , cycle ko ghasitte hue us admi k sath chal pada.

Admi :- wese beta tujhe dar ni laga adhi raat ko yu sunsan or jungle k raste se aate hue


Ladka :- ni chacha isme ghabrana kesa,wese chacha tum itne ghabraye hue se kyu ho.

Admi :- beta ghabrane ki to baat h hi na , ek to ye sunsaan rasta or adhi raat , or ganv m to ye baat bhi feli hui h , ki is raste p ek dayan ghum rahi h aajkal jo logo ko mar deti h

Admi ye bolte bolte thoda aage nikal gaya or jese hi usne ye baat puri ki tabhi wo ladka ek bhayanak aawaz m bola.

Ladka admi or orat ki mili jhuli bhayanak aawaz me bola.

Ladka :- tu kab se dayano se derne laga banshi lal , tu or tere dost to wo h na , jisne kundera ko dayan se bachaya tha na.

Admi ki us awaaz ko sun buri tarah dar gaya or piche mud k jab wo ladke ko dekhta h , to uski ankho ki putaliya gayab hogayi thi.

Admi :- kkkon ho tum , tumhe mera nam kese pata ,

Ladka :- itni jaldi mujhe bhul gaya bandhi lal , m lila hu.

Ye bol wo apne asli rup m aagaya , jo ki ek ladki thi , lekin wo dayan ban chuki thi


Admi kamptee hue :- nnnni tum lila ni ho sakti ,lila to kabki mar chuki h ,

Lila :- ha sahi bola tune bandhi lal , m mar chuki thi , lekin ab wapas aagayi hu , usi rup m jiska naam de tune or tere sathiyo ne mara tha.

Ab tu or tere sathi ni bachenge , sab k sab marenge , koi ni bachega.

Ye bol wo jor jor se hasne lagi , ye sab sun banshi lal ki gand fat gayi or vo vaha se jitna tez ho sakta tha , bhagne laga.

Lila :- bhag banshi lal bhag , m bhi dekhti hu kab tak apni mot se bachta h tu.


Banshilal apna pura dam lagake bhagte hue apne ghar pahunch gaya or jor jor se darwaza pitne laga.

Tabhi bandhi lal ki bivi gate kholti h , or gate khulte hi vo jhat se ander ghus gate band ker leta h.

Bivi :- kya hua itna dare hue kyu ho ,

Banshi lal kamptee hue :- mujhe bacha lo , karuna (us dami ki bivi ka nam) verna vo mujhe maar dalegi.

Karuna :- kon mar dalegi aapko , kuch to bataiye.

Banshilal :- lila , lila mujhe mar dalegi karuna mujhe bacha lo

Karuna :- ye kese ho sakta h , use mare to 2 saal ho gaya h .

Banshilal :- wo dayan ban lot aayi h karuna or vo ab mere piche padi h.

Karuna :- kya dayan , he bhagwan , per wo apke piche kyu padi h.bhala aapne uska kya bigada tha.

Bandhi lal :- wo wo mujhse.

Karuna bich m tokte hue :- badla lene aayi h na lila tumse banshilal

Banshi lal jiski najar abhi tak gate p thi , wo karana k is andaaz se baat kerne k tarike ko sun jab herani se piche mudke dekha to , usko kaato to khun ni.

Kyunki karuna ki ankho ki putali ya bhi gayab thi , thik vese hi jese banshilal ne us ladke ki dekhi thi

Banshi lal :- kkaruna , kya hua h ye tumhe

Karuna :- karuna ni banshilal m lila hu, kaha tha na mane tu marega or koi ni bachega.

Ye bol karuna k sharir m mojud lila , banshilal k sine m ek bada sa chaku ghop deti h or fir usi chaku ko nikal kayi vaar kerti h .

Or jab banshilal mar gaya , to lila karuna k sharir se nikal k gayab ho gayi or karuna behosh ho gayi .

Back to the hero .

Karan or jyoti hamesha ki tarah jaldi uth gaye or kuch der dhyan m beth ker apne office k liye teyar ho gaye .

Dono ka aaj first day tha , isliye wo late ni hona chahate the , isliye karan or jyoti 2 ghante pahale hi teyar ho gaye.

Karan :- chale gudiya.

Jyoti :- bas ek min bhai rukiye.

Fir wo jaldi se kitchen m jaker dahi shakkar lati h or karan ko khilate hue boli.

Jyoti :- aaj job ka first day h na , to ye khaiye din acha jayega.

Karan usse katori or chamach lete hue jyoti ko khilate hue bola :- fir to sabse pahale ye tumhe khana chahiye meri gudiya , kyunki ager tera din acha gaya , to m to automatically puri din khush rahunga hi na.

Fir dono bhai bahan teyar ho ke kamre se bahar nikalte h or itne m jyoti bhi teyar hoke aajati h school k liye .

Shivani :- all the best bhai , all the best didi for first day.per bhai aap job karenge to apki study ka kya.

Jyoti :- wo hum manage ker lenge gudiya , apko is baare m tension lene ki koi jarurat ni h princess , aap bas apni studies p dhyan dijiye.

Fir 3no bhai bahan pahale mandir jaa ker mahadev k darshan ker , shivani ko school chodte hue office pahunch gaye .

Karan or jyoti office pahunch garima k office m jate h.

Karan :- may I come in mam.

Garima :- tumhe kitni baar ek baat kahana hoga beta , tum mujhe mam mat bole kero , mujhe tumhare muh se aunty sunna hi acha lagta h

Karan :- ji aunty

Garima :- hmm good boy

Garima :- dekho beta , m tumhari condition ko janti hu , isliye samjhti hu ki tumhe is job ki kitni jarurat h.

Lekin beta tumhe abhi apni studies p concentrate kerna chahiye , m tumhari maa jesi hu , isliye m to tum dono ko yahi suggest karungi

Or tumhe apne kharcho ki tension lene ki jarurat ni h beta , tumhe kisi bhi chij ki jarurat ho to bejhijak apni is aunty ko yaad ker lena.

Karan ;- apka bahut bahut shukriya aunty , aapne hum dono bhai bahan ko apna maan itna socha , lekin aunty m ese aapse pese ni le sakta

Jyoti dard bhari :- ha aunty bhai bilkul sahi kah rahe h , hum sab kuch apne bal bute p hi pana chahate h , or aapka ye offer humari self respect ko manjur ni hoga aunty .

I m sorry aunty ager aapko meri is baat ka bura laga ho , but sach to yahi h ki mane or bhai ne ab itna kuch sah liya h , ki ab humne decide ker liya h ki hum jo bhi karenge , jese bhi apni life spent kerenge , wo hum apni khud ki mahanat k dam p karenge , na ki kisi se help leker.


Garima jyoti ki dard bhari aawaz sun ker un dono bhai bahan ka dard ache se samjh pa rahi thi.

Garima :- tumhe sorry bolne ki jarurat ni h jyoti beti , tum dono apni jagah p bilkul sahi ho ulta sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye ki mane ese offer deker tumhare swabhiman ko thes pahunchayi .

Koi baat ni beta , tum job kerna chahate ho na to kero , lekin meri ek shart h

Karan :- kesi shart aunty.

Garima :- shart ye h beta ki m tumhe filhal k liye to part time job hi dungi , or tum duty p bhi jab hi aaya keroge , jab tumhari yaha p jarurat ho.

Or jab tumhare final exams ho jayenge tab uske baad tum full time job join ker sakte ho.or wese to tumne jis job k liye aply kiya tha uski salary 55000 per month h .

Lekin tumhari self respect ko dhyan m rakhte hue or tum part time job ker rahe ho , isliye filhal k lie tum.dono ki salary 30000 per month hi hogi.

Karan :- per aunty kya ye sahi hoga .

Garima :- sab sahi h beta , ab m kuch ni sunugi, mane tumhari baat mani na tumhe job deker , ab tumhe bhi meri ye baat manni padegi , aap dono ko aapki gudiya radha ki kasam.

Karan or jyoti radha ki kasam sun garima ki baat maan lete h,

Fir garima juhi ko bulake karan or jyoti ko unka kaam samjhane ka bol deti h

Garima ne karan or jyoti ko ek private cabin diya tha , jisme wo dono apna kaam aaram se ker sake , karan ko juhi k under assistant manager ki job mili or jyoti ko karan ki assistant k sath company ki computer expert ki job mili.

Esa ni tha ki karan or jyoti ko itna sab kuch keval isliye diya tha , ki wo radha k dost the , balki isliye bhi diya kyunki wo is job k liye puri tarah qualified the , unke bas final exams bache the last year k , usse pahale tak k chahe school ho ya college har jagah unhone top kiya tha or to or sports and extra activities m bhi hamesha aage rahate or national level fight champion to vo the hi.

Isi tarah dono bhai bahan ka pahala din office m acha jata h.or wo dono ghar k liye nikal gaye.

Wahi dusri or.

Naina veer or preet subah subah hi nikal gaye the kundera ganv k liye , ab to vo kuch der m kundera pahuchne bhi wale the.

Preety jeep chala rahi thi or veer uske sath aage wali seat p betha hua tha or naina piche bethi hui book padhti hui undono k hasi majak k maje le rahi thi.

Preety :- are sister chodo na is kitab ko ab to , jara kuch der apne dosti se bhi to gappe lada lo.

Veer :- padne de na use preety ,kyu use apne jesa banane p tuli h.tumhe pata h naina , m or preety ek hi sath ek hi school or ek class m hi the.or hamari fulan devi ki esi dosti thi kitabo se ,ki hamesha top kerti thi.

Naina :- kya sach me preety.

Veer :- ha naina , per ye baat alag h ki top hamesha niche se kiya h hamari fulan devi ne.

Ye bol veer hasne laga or naina bhi.

Preety :- are to ab apun isme bhala kya kerti ,apun or books se vesa hi h , jesa mahabharat k karan or arjun ka tha.fir ek din kahi se apun ne kabir ki ye line suni



Pothi Padh Padh Jag Mua
Pandit Bhaya Na Koi !
Dhai Aakhar Prem Ke,
Jo Padhe so Pandit Hoye !!

Bas isliye apun ne socha , jab itna bada aadmi bol raha h kitabo ko padne se koi fayda ni, to apun kayeko apna time khoti kare.

Isliye apun ne books to kiya kinare ,or laga diya apna man is dhai akshar k prem ko apun ki life m sarthak kerne ko.

Ye sab baate usme veer ki ankho m dekh boli ,jese usse apne dil ki baat ka ahasas dilana chah rahi ho.

Veer :- oh ho naina hamari lady don to philosopher ho gayi , vese kya m jan sakta hu kavitri ji , ki ab tak kya aap is dhai aksar k prem ko sarthak ker payi apne jivan me , I mean koi mila kya ya ni.Vese jis hisab se aap ladko ko dhoti ho , mujhe to ni lagta .

Preety :- hum to kabse ready bathe h veer ji , apne is kore jivan me prem k rang lane ko , lekin jise humne is kaam k liye chuna h , vo to kuch samjhta hi ni.

Ye bol preety ne veer ko ankh mar di. Jisse veer jhep sa gaya. Or ese hi kuch der m vo 3no pahunCh jate h kundra.

Per jab ganv k bich pahunch vo jo mahol dekhte h to 3no ko herani or gussa dono aata h.

Darasal ganv k bicho bich ek orat ko ped se bhandha hua tha, wo orat roye ja rahi thi , or ganv k log use marne ka bol rahe the , or fir sabne use pathar marne shuru ker diye.

Tabhi naina jor se chilayi :- ruk jaao, kyu maar rahe ho sab in bechari ko, kya bigada h isne aap sab ka.

Tabhi ganv ka sarpanch bola :- m is ganv ka sarpanch hu, or is orat ko isliye maar rahe h , kyunki ye ek dayan h.or aap log kon ho , pahale to kabhi yaha ni dekha aapko.

Naina :- ji hum musafir h or abhi hi yaha aaye h kisi kaam se , lekin hua kya saari baat to bataiye.

Kal raat isne badi berahami se apne pati ko maar diya .

Ye orat karuna hi thi , jise subah hosh aaya to paya ki sabhi gan vale use ghere khade h , or uske hantho m khun se lathapath chaku bhi h

Ganv vale ye samjh rahe the ki karuna ne apne pati ko mara h , or vo police ko bulane lage.

Karuna ne khud ko bachane k liye kal jo kuch bhi raat ko hua uske samne sab kuch bata diya.

Lila ka naam sun sabhi log ghabra gaye or khas ker kuch log to kuch jyada hi. Fir unhi logo ne karuna ko ye kah ker phasa diya ki ho sakta h ki wo dayan abhi bhi isi orat m ho to iska jinda rahana sahi ni h.

Or ganv vale bhi unlogo ki baato m aagaye , kyunki unme se ek ganv ka pandit tha.

Sari baat sunne k baad naina boli.

Naina :- are aap ese kese bol sakte h ki inme abhi bhi dayan hogi or kisne kaha aapse ki dayan inko marne se mar jayegi.

Pandit :- e ladki tu hoti kon h , is vedo k gyata brahaman k gyan pe ungli uthane wali.

Veer :- brahaman vo jo brahm k marg pe chale or ahankar krodh jesi bhavnao se dur rahe ,lekin aap to apni baato se khud hi apni vidya p sandeh kerwa rahe ho pujari ji.

Preety kalayi marodte hue :- sister or veer sahi bol rele h mamu log, chupchap hume check kerne do verna

Naina :- ni preety , iski jarurat ni h , bhul gayi inspector sahab ne apna personal phone no dete hue kya kaha tha ki kabhi bhi hume jarurat pade hum unhe bula le.

Veer :- ha naina, ye log ese ni manege tum police ko hi phone lagao.

Police ka naam sun sarpanch dar jata h, kynki ager police aati to sabse pahale use hi pakadti.

Tabhi sarpanch ka hi ek admi usse bola :- ladki ko checking kerne dijiye, sarpanch ji , police aayi to kafi lafda hoga.

Or vese bhi ye vahi log h jinhone brihaspur k pret ka or thakur sahab ki beti ko bachaya tha, ye dekho akhbar m photo bhi chapi h inki.

Sarpanch akhir kar maan hi jata h, fir naina jaldi se jaker karuna ko kholti h or apne edp meter se use check kerti h, jisse meter m koi negative energy show ni hoti , iska matlab tha ki ab karuna m koi dayan ni thi.or ganv valo ko sabit kerne k liye , usne karuna p gangajal bhi manga ker dala, taki wo apni baat saabit ker sake.

Ganv vale ye dekh rahat ki saans lete h , fir naina ganv ki orto k sath use vaidji k pas ilaj k liye bhej deti h.

Fir sarpanch naina se bola :- dhanyawad aapka beti , aaj tumne hum sab k hatho paap hone se bacha liya.

Naina :- ji iski jarurat ni h , per aage se ye baat dhyan rakhna , kuch bhi esa kerne se pahale, ek baar punarvjchar or sahi se janch padtal avashya ker lena.

Sarpanch :- ji beta , vese aapse ek vinti h , aap hamare ganv ki mahaman ho , or is ganv ka sarpanch hone k naate apse meri vinti h ki ,aaj k din ap hamare yaha gujare.

Naina sarpanch ko mana ni ker pati or veer ko uski mosi k ghar kal ane ka bol preety k sath sarpanch k ghar chali jati h , preety to veer ko chodna ni chahati thi , per kya kare majburi jo thi.

Sarpanch apni jeep m tha or naina or preety apni, tabhi preety boli.

Preety :- sister , mujhe ye admi sahi ni lag rela h , ye jitna sharif banne ki koshis ker raha h , mujhe ni lagta wo itna h.

Naina majak kerte :- esa kyu , isliye kyunki iski vajah se tum veer se dur ho gayi.

Preety :- wo baat alag h sister. , Per tumne notice ni ki ye baat ki us dayan wali baat ki to isne kese taal sa diya or ye lila h kon.

Naina :- ha preety bol to tu sahi rahi h , sahi vakt dekh m inse us bare m bhi baat karungi.

Sarpanch k ghar pahuchne per , sarpanch or uski bivi , dono ki ache se mahamanvaji kerti h.

Fir kuch der baad sarpanch jab unse kundera ane ka kaaran puchta h to naina usi paper ko nikalti h jispe wo 3 ka nishan tha or sarpanch ko dikhati hui boli.

Naina :- hum isko dhundte hue aaye h sarpanch ji , kya aap jante h is nishan k bare m.

Sarpanch nishan ko dekhke chokte hue bola.:- trittya

Naina :- aap jante ho trittya k baare m , to bataiye na kon or kya h ye trittta

Sarpanch :- jesa ki aap janti hi hongi ki danvo k teen prakar hote h.

Pret :- khuni aatmaye, jo pahale khud bhi insan thi marne se pahale , or logo ko marna unhe preshan kerna inka aanand ka sadhan h. Or burayi inka dharm




Pishach :- khun pine wale wo darinde, jinka bhojan manav ka maas or pani insani khun hota h , preton se jyada shaktishali or tez , jinhe vampire bhi kaha jata h.

Dayan :- danvo ki vo prajati jinme keval nari hi hoti h , kale jadu m maharat hasil danvo ki ye vo prajati h jinke panv ulte or inki jaan inke baalo m hoti h.

Kuch dayane to jab banti h jab 100 chudel marti h or kuch jab jo pahale insan hi thi , lekin kaale jadu k sampark se wo dayan ban gayi.inki umer bhi 500 ya 1000 sal hoti h,




Aaj se karib 50 saal pahale , pata ni in 3no jati k mukhiyao ko kya sujhi ,jo unhone khud ki sari shaktiyo ko ek sath milka or apna sab kuch tyag yaha tat ki apne astitv or shaktiyo ka bhi tyag ker ek nayi prajati ko janm diya.arthat apni shaktiyo ko ek sath milaker ek nayi prajapati ko janm diya

Jo trittya h , trittya pret pishach or dayan 3no se hi shaktishali hote h or 3no ki khubiya hi inme hoti h.

Ye preto ki tarah mayavi , pishachon ki tarah khun pine wale or dayano ki tarah hajaro sal jite h

Naina :- oh to trittya ka arth ye h ki ye pret pishach or dayan tino k samavesh se bani ek nayi prajati h.

Sarpanch ;- ha beti.

Naina :- aap trittyao k bars m itna jante ho to , jarur samraat k bare m bhi kuch jante honge.

Samrat ka nam sun sarpanch darte hue bola :-. Samraat .

Naina :- ha samraat, kya kuch jante h uske bare m aap.

Sarpanch :- samraat to trittyao ka raja h , bahut hi khatarnak or bahut hi shaktishali .

Kuch salo pahale kundera or uske aaspas ka area trityao or samrat ki rajdhani thi , yaha ek mayavi haveli thi , jisme samraat rahata tha , or ttittyao ne is ilake m bahut aatank macha rakha tha, lekin fir ek din pata ni sab kaha chale gaye yaha se , or samraat bhi apni mayavi haveli k sath yaha se gayab ho gaya

Naina ye sun thoda nirash ho jati h ki ab yaha use samraat ni milega , lekin is baat ki santushti bhi thi ki kam se kam use ye to pata chala ki ye trittya h kya.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti jese hi ghar aate h to dekhte h ki unke papa sofe p hi bethe h or sath m bajaj bhi.

Ranvir unko dekh jyoti se bola :- are jyoti beti tum aagayi , jara idher to aao or karan beta aao bhi.

Karan or jyoti ka to herani se bura hal ho gaya ,kyunki itne saalo baad aaj ranvir ne unse itne pyaar se baat ki thi.

Jyoti or karan unke pass jake khade ho jate h.

Ranvir :- are bacho khade kyu ho betho na .

Karan or jyoti ek sofe pe ek dusre se sat k beth jaate h or fir ranvir bola

Ranvir :- are jyoti beta aap or aapke bhai kaha gaye hue the itni der se

Jyoti :- ji papa wo mane or bhai ne a job kerna start kiya h to usika first day tha

Ranvir :- acha beta , vese beta ab se tumhe ye job vagrerah kerne ki jarurat ni h , tum kal hi Jake resignation de dena waha or koi problem ho to mujhse bolna ,m dekh lunga.

Jyoti :- per kyu papa.

Fir ranvir jo baat bolta h , vo baat karan or jyoti k uper ek bahut bada bomb sa fatta h

Esa kya bola ranvir ne jo karan or jyoti p ek bomb sa fata , ye sab next update m pata chalega.

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