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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Pyare rishte
Chapter :- 2
The Journey of dandnayak
Update no :- 101

Sham ka samay ho raha tha , or surya dev pashchim disha ki or badh rahe the.

Shahar k har gharo me light jal chuki thi , sivaye ek ghar k jis kaaran us ghar k lagbhag har kone me andhera apne panv pasar chuka tha

Sivaay ek jagah k , jo us ghar k ander bana mandir tha , jaha ek deepak jal raha tha , jiski lo pura to ni lekin dikhayi dene k liye kaafi ujala ker rahi thi or us dipak k bilkul samne mandir k darvaje ki dahalij k bicho darvaje se pith lagaye ek ladki bethi thi , jiski ankho se aviral aasuo ki dhara bah rahi thi.

Usko dekh ker hi lag raha tha , jese usne 2 din se khana to dur , pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi thi , jis kaaran uska pyare or sunder chahare ka sara noor kho chuka tha , uska komal sharir durbal pad gaya tha.

Usko to jese khud ka ya apne aaspas mojud kisi chij ka hosh hi ni tha, wo to bas nirantar mandir m mojud baal gopal ki pratima ko dekh roye ja rahi thi.

Tabhi us ghar ka gate khulta h or ek ladka jiske hatho me kuch khane ka samman tha vo ghar me enter kerta h or jab vo dekhta h ki pure ghar me andhera fela hua h ,to wo samman ko ek side me rakh ker sabse pahale ghar ki lights on kerta h.

Fir wo kisi ko ghar me dhundte hue mandir ki or pahunch jata h or waha bethi us ladki ko dekh uske pass jata h or uske kandhe pe hath rakhta h.

Ladke ke hath rakhne se wo ladki ek baar utsuk ho jhat se badi ummid se us ladke ki or dekhti h , lekin ladke ko dekh wapas uska chahara uter jata h or wapas vese hi dusri or dekhne lagti h.

Ladka :- gudiya kab tak ese roti rahegi , kya tere ese rone se unki aatma ko taklif ni pahunchegi.

Ladki gusse se :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii, wo jinda h , mera dil janta h ye baat unhe kuch ni hua , wo jarur wapas aayenge.

Ladka :- acha sorry baba.

Ladki wapas us or dekhte hue :- hmmm

Fir ladka wapas hall me jata h or apne sath jo khane ka saman laya tha , use plate me dal ker wapas us ladki k paas jata h or apne hatho se use khilane k liye apna hath us ladki k muh ki or kerta h to ladki us ladke ko side ker boli.

Ladki :- mujhe bhuk ni h bhai .

Ladka :- ese kab tak chalega sonu , tumne parso se kuch ni khaya , ese to tumhari tabiyat kharab ho gayi to

Ladki rote hue :- to ho jane dijiye na rohan bhai , jinki wajah se aapki is bahan k pas ye ghar , aap or ye nayi jindagi mili , ab wo hi is jindagi me ni rahi to is jindagi ka bhi matlab

Ji ha dosto ye dono or koi ni , rohan or sonam hi the or ye jagah karan ka hi ghar tha . Aaj karan or jyoti k us hadse ko 2 din ho gaye the.

Or jab ye khabar sonam ko mili to use bahut bada dhakka laga tha, usne 3 din se kuch khaya piya ni tha , bas sare din ladoo gopal k pas bethi roti rahati.

rohan ne use bahut samjhane ki koshis ki lekin wo sunne ko hi teyar ni thi, or sonam ki is halat se dukhi rohan ne bhi 2 din se kuch ni khaya tha.

Lekin sawal ye uthata tha ki baki sab karan k dost yani or family wale kaha h.

Flashback.

Hua yu ki jab garima subah wapas karan or jyoti k ghar aayi to unhe aaj bhi ghar ko tala laga hua mila, or uper se karan or jyoti dono k hi phone band aarahe the.

Tabhi vaha rohan or sonam bhi taxi se pahunch gaye , or jese hi unhone garima ko dekhte h to unke pass jake unhe namaste kerte h.

Rohan or sonam :- namaste aunty , good morning.

Garima :- good morning beta , aagaye shimla se

Sonam :- ha aunty , wese aap yaha itni subah subah .

Garima :- ha beti wo m karan or jyoti se milne aayi thi.

Sonam :- bhai or di se vo bhi itni subah subah , sab thik to h na aunty .

Garima :- ha sab thik h beta , or pahali baat to tum mujhe aunty bolna band kero , aaj se tum mujhe bhua hi bolna.

Ye bol garima apne or karan or jyoti k rishte k baare m unhe batati h.

Jise sun rohan or sonam bahut khush hote h.

Sonam :- kya sach me aap bhai or di ki bhua ho.

Garima :- ha meri bachi or undono ki hi ni m tumhari bhi bhua hi hu.

Ye bol sonam ko garima gale laga leti h , fir sonam boli.

Sonam :- bhua ji to aap bahar kyu khade ho , ander chaliye or bhai or di ko bhi to ye khush khabri dijiye wo kitne salo se apne parivar k pyaar k liye taras rahe h

Garima :- taras to m bhi rahi hu beti , apne dono jigar k tukdo ko apne sine se lagane ko , lekin wo yaha ho to sahi ghar bhi sham se lock h or undono ka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Sonam to ye sun or tension me aagayi ek to uska man raat se hi ghabra raha tha , uper se ye sun uska tension or badh gaya.

Sonam :- kya , rukiye m try kerti hu.

Sonam bhi call kerne ka try kerti h , per wahi hota h uske sath bhi.

Rohan :- kahi vo dono mere ghar p to ni.

Ye bol wo sab rohan k ghar pahunchte h to gate anita kholti h.

Or rohan ko dekh khush ho ker gale se lagake boli.

Anita :- aagaya mera bacha, kesa raha trip shimla ka.

Rohan :- acha raha mummy.

Fir wo ese hi sonam se mili or boli.

Anita sonam se :- beta tumhara kam ache se ho gaya na , is nalayak ne tujhe tang to ni kiya.

Sonam :- are ni ni aunty bhai ne to meri bahut help ki waha .

Fir anita or garima bhi ek dusre se milker bahut khush hoti h , tab garima boli..

Garima :- aapse milker bahut khushi hui didi , bhabhi akser aapke baRe me mujhe bataya kerti thi , ki kese aap or vo milker masti kiya kerte the.

Asha ki baat ker dono ki ankho me pani aajata h , tabhi rohan bola.

Rohan :- mummy , karan or jyoti yaha aaye hue h kya.

Anita :- ni to beta , infect kal sham se mane unhe dekha tak ni , unke ghar ki bhi light off thi.

Ye sun ker sonam ki tension or badh gayi or sath me garima or rohan ki bhi

Tabhi anita ko kuch yaad aaya or wo boli.

Anita :- kahi wo apne pahale wale ghar to ni gaya

Rohan :- kesi baat kerti ho mummy , wo dono bhala waha kyu jayenge , jaha unki koi ijjat na ho , unki jaha unki soteli ma hi ni , uska saga baap tak uska dushman bana hua h

Rohan ye bol to gaya fir use dhyan aaya ki karan ki bhua abhi uske samne khadi h.

Anita :- are beta to wo shivani se bhi to milne ja sakte h (or garima ki or ishara kerte ) or ese bado k bare m ulta sidha ni bolte

Rohan :- sorry bhuaji m kuch jyada hi bol gaya.

Garima :- ni ni beta tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho tumne to sach bola h bilkul , abhi chalo waha , mujhe khed h ki, mere bhaiya k hote hue bhi mere bache ese dukh dard jhel rahe h. Aaj unki apni bahan se mulakat k sath unhe har sawalo ka jwab bhi dena hoga.

Ye bol garima rohan or sonam k sath waha se nikal gayi karan k purane ghar ki or .

Wahi dusri or
Kuch der baad

Ranvir abhi gadi park kerke apne ghar me jane ko hua hi tha ki tabhi waha ek or gadi bahar aake ruki or jese hi gadi me bethe shaks utre to wo hairani ke mare ankhe fade unhe dekhta rah gaya.

Wo or koyi ni garima thi or unke sath rohan or sonam the.

Garima ne jese hi ranvir ko dekha , vo bhaiya bhaiya kahate hue ranvir k pass dodi , ranvir bhi garima ko dekhte hi bahut khush tha , or sath me hairan bhi

Ranvir garima ko gale laga leta h or khushi k aansu rote hue :- choti tu yaha , itne salo baad , m bata ni sakta m kitna khus hu m aaj

Garima :- kuch esa hi haal mera h bhaiya , aapko dekhne k lie meri ankhe taras gayi thi , aapko or bhabhi ko dekhne ko , bhai aapki narajgi to maa baba se thi na , fir apni gudiya ko kyu bhula diya,kyu aapne mujhse milna to dur ek baar baat karne ki koshish na ki . Bhagwan k khel bhi nirale h jinhe m pure india me dhund rahi thi , wo mere hi shahar me hi the

Jante ho bhaiya aapko or bhabhi ko dekne k liye meri ankhe taras gayi thi,socha tha jab aap or bhabhi milenge to fir se aap dono yuhi sine se lagaoge or wese hi apne hatho de khana khilaoge or pahale jese apna pyar lutaoge , per meri kismat to dekho aaj itne salo baad apne pita saman bhai ko to pa li , per usse pahale hi pata chala ki apni maa jesi bhabhi ko kho diya h mane .

Or bhabi bol wo garima jor jor se rone lagi,ranvir k dil me to koi dukh ni tha asha ki mot ka or hota bhi kese aakhir uska hatyara bhi to wo khud hi tha.

Ranvir :- apne bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya , manta hu mane bahut badi galti ki , lekin maa babuji se narajgi ki vajah se mujhse to wapas ganv jane ka dil na hua or karan or jyoti k peda hone k baad socha bhi ki tujhse milne jau or jab ganv gaya to pata chala teri shadi ho chuki h , mane tere bare m pata kerne ki koshis bhi bahut ki per ganv me kisi ko bhi malum ni tha, to m nirash ho ke wapas lot aaya.

Garima :- ha bhaiya, aapke jane k baad maa babuji to hasna or khushi manana hi bhul gaye the , isliye unhonne meri shadi bahut hi sadharan tarike se ker di thi or ganv k bahut kam log ko hi bulaya tha usme
Pahale to kuch saal hum banglore rahe , per fir radha k papa ne business idher hi settle ker liya.

Radha ka naam sun ranvir ko ek or jhatka laga ki jis radha ko usne apna mohra banaya tha ,wo usiki bhanji h.

Tabhi shivani apni maa kavya k sath ghar k bahar aapahunchi or boli.

Shivani :- papa aap subah subah kaha gaye the or ye aunty kon h apke sath.

Darasal shivani kabhi garima se mili ni thi or na hi garima shivani se mili thi bas dono ne ek dusre k baare me suna tha

Ranvir :- idher aao beta , inse milo ye tumhari bhua h .

Or choti ye h tumhari bhatiji shivani or tumhari bhabhi kavya.

Garima ne jab ye suna to use yaad aaya ki uska aane ka main maksad kya tha.

Garima gusse or nam ankho se :- iska matlab mane jo suna wo sach , bhai aap esa kese ker sakte ho ,aap to kitna pyaar kerte the na bhabhi se , fir bhi aapne esa kiya, yaha tak ki apne bhabhi ki teharvi tak na hone di
Kaha gaya aapka wo pyaar bhai, jiske liye aapne apna ghar parivar yaha tak ki mujhe bhi chod ker chale gaye the , kaha gaya bhai aapka wo pavitra prem

Or kyu kiya aapne apne hi bacho karan or jyoti k sath esa , boliye bhai . Jis kaaran k pichhe aapne ghar choda tha usi ko kyu thukraya, shivani ko itna pyaar or karan or jyoti se itni nafrat kyu bhai .

Boliye bhai kyu , esi kya galti ki thi un masumo ne jo unko itni badi saja di apne , wo apni maa ko to pahale hi kho chuke the or fir unhe pita ka bhi prem ni mila , jawab dijiye bhai,jawab dijiye.

Ye bol wo ghutno k bal beth rone lagi,ranvir ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo apni bahan ko kya jwab de ,tabhi uske kamine dimag me ek idea aaya or vo rota hua niche beth k bola.

Ranvir :- choti manta hu mujhse galti hui, per kam se kam esa to mat bol ki mane apni asha k pyar k sath dhoka kiya , mane dusri shadi isliye ki taki karan or jyoti ko maa ki kami mahasus na ho or wo sadme se bahar aasake , isliye mane kavya se shadi ki , lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki ye meri sabse badi bhul hogi

(Kavya ki or ishara kerte hue) per ulta is orat ne mere bacho ko mujhse or mujhse mere bacho ko dur ker diya , ye jab shuru shuru me aayi to pahale to achi banke rahi , lekin jab shivani hui to iske man me aakhir sotelepan ka janm ho hi gaya , isne dhire dhire mere dono bacho ko torcher kerna shuru ker diya or mere bhi man me unke liye jahar bharna shuru ker diya or m bevkuf pata ni is kamini ki chal me kese aagaya or apne hi bacho k sath durvyavahar kerne laga.

M shayad mafi k layak bhi ni hu meri bahan , chahe to mujhe jo chahe saja dede , tu kahegi to m abhi apne bacho k pero m mafi mangne ko bhi tayar hu bahan , jo tu chahe mujhe saja dele bahan , bas apne bhai ko prayashchitt ka moka dede bas choti ek moka dede bhai ko.

Ranvir ne kaafi achi acting ki , jisme garima fas gayi , kyunki ek to wo itne salo baad apne us bhai se mili thi jiski vo sabse jyada ladli thi or usne apni ankho se apne bhai or bhabhi ka pyaar dekha tha , isliye usko apni bhai ki is emotional acting pe bharosa ho gaya or dusra ye ki soteli maa wali bat bhi usko jam gayi.

Or is tarah ranvir ne apne sare paapo ka tokra bechari kavya k sir pe rakh diya , jis kaaran waha mojud sabhi kavya ko nafrat ki najar se dekh rahe the, kavya ne apni safai dete hue sach batane ki bhi koshis ki

Kavya :- ni , ye jhut h , ye jhut bol rahe h , didi ek baar aap meri baat to suno...

Garima bich me hi :- bas , vahi apni jaban ko lagam do , m apkii koi didi vidi ni hu , or aapka itna sab kuch kerne k baad bhi bolna baki h.

Sharm ni aayi un masumo k sath esa vyavahar kerte , jinke liye tumhe is ghar me laya gaya , m khud gawah hu mere bache aaj bhi tumhe choti maa choti maa kahker tumhari tarif kerte ni thakte or tumne ye sila diya un masumo k pyaar ka , sharm ni aayi tumhe ek maa hoke bhi esi ghatiya harkat kerte hue.

Ese hi bahut kuch bura bhala garima ne bola or bechari kavya chupchap sari khari khoti sunti rahi rote hue.

Kavya :- thik h didi , ager apne mujhe doshi man hi liya h to m ab kya bolu , m aaj hi apni beti k sath ye ghar chod k chali jaungi ,lekin bas ek bar ,bas ek baar mujhe mere bache karan or jyoti se mila do , taki m unko sachai se avgat kara saku.

Garima :- ha taki un ke dil me or jahar bhar sako h na , koi jarurat ni h apko unse milne ki or na hi yaha se jane ,oo kyunki kuch bhi ho ye sachai to badli ni ja sakti ki shivani bhi is ghar ki beti or meri bhatiji h or m apni bhatiji ko apne ghar se dur kahi ni jane dungi or uski umer kam h or use abhi tumhari jarurat h , isliye tum yaha rah sakti ho ,per khabardar mere bacho k karib ane ki kosis bhi ki h to

Garima ki ye baat sun kavya rote hue ghar me wapas chali jati h or fir garima shivani se boli.

Garima :-idher aao beti apni bhua se ni milogi.

Shivani sonam or rohan ki or dekhti h to wo dono ha me gardan ha me hila dete h , jise dekh shivani garima k pass pahunchti h , jise garima kaske gale laga leti h or uske pure chahare ko chum chum k gila ker deti h.

Ranvir :- are choti ab ghar k bahar hi khadi rahegi kya , apne shubh kadmo ko rakh is ghar me chahi manhusiyat ko dur ker gudiya.

Garima :- kya bhai aap bhi

Ye bol wo sab ghar k ander jate h , tabhi sonam boli.

Sonam :- uncle karan bhai or jyoti di yaha aaye the kya.

Shivani udass hoker :- ni to di , bhaiya or didi to yaha us din k baad kabhi lote hi ni or unse mile bhi mujhe kayi din ho gaye .

Tabhi ranvir apna muh dhone k bahane toilet me jaker jaldi se police ko phone kerta h or apna plan ko change ker deta h , pahale jaha direct karan or jyoti ki mot ki khabar sidhe pahuchane ka plan tha ranvir ka , ab uski jagah usne plan change ker ye ker diya tha ki , karan or jyoti ka accident ki khabar hi ghar pe pahuchegi or ye bataya jayega ki unhe hospital le jaya ja raha h or hospital m jab sab ghar pahuchege to doctor ye bol dega ki humne in dono ko bachane ki bahut koshis ki lekin , ye bach ni paye

Ranvir ne esa isliye kiya tha ki uski bahan ko shak na ho or wo apni powers se sachai ka pata lagane ki na koshis kare.

Fir wo wapas aaker hall me beth jata h or purani bate kerne lagta h garima se , tabhi garima boli.

Garima :- bhai mujhe karan or jyoti ki bahut chinta ho rahi h . Wo dono kal se gayab h or unka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Ranvir :- are wo dono kahi gaye honge office k kaam se choti tum chinta kyu kerti ho , tumhare bhatija bhatiji bahut samjhdar h.

Garima :- ni bhai esa to koi bhi office ka kam tha hi ni , infact kal hi to unhonne apna sara kam niptaya tha or mane unhe chuti di thi

Tabhi sonam k phone pe karan k no se phone aata h . Jise dekh sonam khush ho jati h.

Sonam :- rohan bhai , bhua dekho bhai ka phone aaraha h.

Darasal ye phone ranvir ki police ne hi janbujh ker karan ki sim se kiya tha , jo uske phone m pade tute hue mobile me se kismat se mil gaya tha or ranvir ne hi esa kerne ko bola tha

Sonam phone pick ker :- hello bhai ka kaha ho aap , yaha hum kitna pareshan ho rahe h.

Inspector :- hello mis m inspector ..... Bol raha hu , ye kya aapke bhai ka no h.

Sonam police ka nam sun ghabra gayi or boli :- jii ha ye mere bhaiya ka hi no h sir , per ye aapke pas kese , sab thik to h na sir.

Inspector :- ji darasal aapke bhai ka or apki shahar k bahar wale highway k pas ek accident ho gaya h , unki takkar ek truck se ho gayi thi shayad or unke sath ek ladki bhi thi , unki identity dekhi to pata chala wo bhi shayad apki bahan h .

Sonam rote hue :- kya

Sonam ne to jese suna to mano uska dil dhadkna hi ruk gayi ho , uske hath se phone hi chut gaya or wo dhadam se sofe pe gir gayi.

Rohan dar ke :- kya hua sonu , tu chilayi kyu or tu ro kyu rahi h

Sonam kuch bol hi ni rahi thi or ro rahi thi , tab garima ne phone utha ke baat kerti h to inspector sari baat bata k bolta h.

Inspector :- mam hum in dono ko city hospital le ja rahe h , aap dono bhi vaha pahuchiye

Jhatka to garima ko bhi ye sun bahut bada laga ,wo bhi rone lagi , lekin usne khud ko sambhal ker sabko sari baat batayi or sab hospital ki or nikal gaye ,kavya ne bahut bola ki usko bhi sath le chalo lekin kisi ne uski ek baat na suni or use wahi chod gaye or wo bechari roti rah gayi.

Hospital pahunch ker unhe pata chala ki karan or jyoti ko leker police abhi tak pahunchi hi ni , ranvir ko bahut gussa aaraha tha , kyunki uska sara plan bigad gaya tha.

Tabhi waha inspector or 2 constable sir jhukaye pahunche to garima unpe chilayi.

Garima :- ye kesi laparwahi h aapki inspector,kaha h mere bache , kya itni der lagti h aap logo ko .

Inspector :- sorry mam humne bahut koshis ki..

Inspector unhe kuch der pahale ki ghatna batata h.

Darasal police karan k ghar walo ko dikhane k liye un dono ki body ko jis ambulance me je jarahi thi , to bich me padne wale jungle k raste me us gadi ki brake pata ni apne aap kese fail ho gayi or handle lock ho gaya , jisse wo jaker pedo se takra gati or wo ambulance blast ho gayi , jisse uske chithade chithade ud gaye or ander rakhi bodies or driver k bhi.

Garima k sath jese hi sabne ye suna to sabka mano kaleja hi fat gaya or unke dilo ki dhadkan hi ruk gayi .

Sab waha fut fut k rone lage , sonam to ye sun behosh hi ho gayi , jise dekh rohan or garima ghabra gaye or use jaldi se use wahi admit karwate h.

Ranvir to bahar se rone ka natak ker raha tha ,ander se to wo jallad bahut khush tha , bhale hi ye uska plan na ho per wo fir bhi bachne m kamyab ho gaya tha.

Tabhi radha or riya bhi waha aaphunche or radha ne apni maa se pahuncha .

Radha :- kya hua mummy aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or yaha hospital me kya ker rahe ho aap log yaha kya ker rahe ho.
M riya di k ghar pahunchi to aunty ne bataya ki aap sab shivani k ghar gaye ho or humne waha jate hue raste me rohan bhai ko phone kiya to unhone jaldi se yaha pahuchne ko bola.

Garima radha ko gale lagake rote hue sari baat bata deti h.

Jise sun ek baar to radha k bhi ankh me bhi pani aagaye or sath me riya k bhi , unki ankhon k same karan or jyoti k sath bitaye har pal ane lage , lekin fir unki samne kal wali ghatna bhi aagayi or wapas nafrat ka jahar unke man me bhar gaya.

Sham tak sab yu hi rote rahe , sonam ko abhi tak hosh ni aaya tha ,radha or riya ne baki sab ko kese n kese samjhake ghar bhej diya antim sanskar ki teyariyo k liye , wese body to bachi ni thi , per bache kuche sharir k tukdo ka antim sanskar bhi jaruri tha, lekin rohan na mana or wahi ruk gaya.

Kuch der baad sonam ko hosh aagaya or vo chillate hue uth gayi .

Sonam :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii.

Or fir jor jor se fut fut ke rone lagi , rohan radha or riya k sath bhag k uske pas pahuncha or rohan ko dekhte hi sonam uske gale lag ke rone lagi or sath me rohan bhi rone laga.

Dono kafi der tak rote rahe , tab radha ne badi nishthurata se bola.

Radha :- ab bas bhi kero aap dono jo ho gaya so ho gaya , or kitni der tak yuhi rote rahoge.

Radha k ye ese vachan sun rohan or sonam herani ki koi sima na rahi or wo bole.

Rohan :- radha ye kesi baate ker rahi h tu , yaha aaj mane tumne apne , hum sab ne apne bhai jesa dost or bahan jesi saheli ko kho diya h or tu bol rahi h jo hua so hua.

Riya :- to kya galat bola usne betu , jo hona tha wo ho gaya or us jesa insan tha bhi is layak or sath me uski bahan bhi.

Rohan jor se chilaya :- diiiiiii , aapki himmat kese hui mere bhai or bahan k bare me ese bolne ki , ager aaj aapki jagah kisine ye baat boli hoti to m uski jaban bahar khich leta uske muh se.

Radha :- chilayiye mat bhai , di bilkul sahi bol rahi h , jo harkat un dono ne kal ki h , wo aap sunoge to aap bhi yahi bologe..

Ye bol radha kal wali ghatna k bare me rohan or sonam ko vistarapoorvak bata deti h , jise sun sonam or rohan bhi puri tarah shonk ho jate.

Radha :- acha hua sonu , mar gaye wo dono , verna kya pata jo harkat usne maya di k sath ki , wo kal tere sath bhi ker sakte the , mujhe to lagta h vo jyoti bhi usske sath mili hui thi

Abhi radha ne ye baat boli hi thi ki , ek jhanatedar thappad uske galo pe pada, jo kisi or ne ni sonam ne mara tha.

Sonam gusse se chilayi :- kamini teri himmat kese hui mere bhai k bare me ese apshabd bolne ki , tujhe jara si sharam bhi ni aayi apne us bhai k liye itni ghatiya baat bolne k liye, jiski vajah se tu aaj sahi salamat khadi h.

Ek ni aneko baar jisne apni jaan pe khel k teri jaan bachai , tere ko apni sagi bahan jesa jisne pyar diya , teri choti se choti pasand na pasand ka khayal rakha or tum unhi ke ganga jese pavitr charitra ko kalankit jer rahi ho

Riya :- ha to kya help kerne or pyar dene se kisi ka bhi rape kerne ka haq mil jayega kya use .

Rohan :- mujhe bahut sharm aarahi h ye kahate hue ki aap meri di ho , itne samay sath rahakar bhi aap karan or jyoti ko samjh na saki di , or ye meri sonu itne kam samay me ye baat samjh gayi ki chahe duniya idher ki udher ho jaye , lekin mera dost mera bhai esa ghatiya kam kerne ki sapne me bhi ni soch sakta , lekin aap ye baat na samjh payi di.

Or aapne ek baar uski baat tak na suni or dusro ki baato me aake mere dost pe itna bada kalank thop diya.

Riya :- suni sunayi baato pe ni betu , mane apni ankho se dekha h use maya k sath jabardasti kerte hue

Rohan nam ankho se chilaya :- mat kaho mujhe betu , mis riya gupta , aaj aapke is ghatiya or nich karm k kaaran mar gaya h apka betu aapke liye , aaj se aapka or mera koi nata ni h, chali jaiye meri najaro se dur.

Riya to ye sun puri tarah shok ho gayi , aajse pahale rohan ne kabhi usse ese baat na ki thi or nam leker to bilkul bhi ni , jis kaaran wo roti hui waha se bhag gayi.

Sonam radha se :- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha jaruri ni har baar ankho dekha drishy hi sach ho , tumne mere se jyada time bhai k sath gujara , lekin fir bhi tu unhe ache se ni samjh payi radha.

Radha :- sonu meri bat to sun

Sonam :- mat bol mujhe sonu , chali ja yaha se ,ni chahiye mujhe esi saheli jo apne us bhai ki bhi sagi na ho saki , jisne uski khushi k liye kya kuch ni kiya , wo meri kya saheli banegi

Or ha chinta mat kerna tu , m teri ye harkat bhua ko bata ker unhe or taklif ni pahuchaungi, or na hi rohan bhai esa karenge ,lekin tu ye mat sochna ki sachai jyada din tak chupi rahegi or jab tere samne sachai aayegi , tere pas prayashchitt ka moka tak ni hoga.

Ye bol sonam ne radha se muh mod liya , or radha bhi vaha se rote hue chali gayi.

Agle din karan or jyoti k avasheshon ka antim sanskar ker diya gaya or sonam bhi discharge hoke apne ghar aagayi , garima ne use bahut manaya ki wo unke sath uuske ghar chale , per sonam ne kuch samay akele rahane ki baat bol ker mana ker diya

Rohan or sonam ne apne wade k anusar sachai kisi ko ni batayi , lekin undono ne radha or riya se apna sara nata tod liya or rohan ne bhi anita se sonam ko sambhalne ka bahana ker , apne ghar se sonam k ghar me shift ho gaya tha, anita bhi sonam k liye man gayi , kyuki wo bhi janti thi ki karan or jyoti k baad vo sabse close Rohan k thi , isliye anita bhi man hi gayi.

Flashback end.

Rohan :- acha lagta h tumhe apne kanha pe bharosa ni raha sonu.

Sonam :- ni bhai ye kesi baat bol rahe ho aap ,ek aapke siva kanha hi to h jispe mera bharosa bacha h , bharosa h mujhe apne kanha pe ki unhone bhai or di ko kuch ni hone diya hoga or wo jaldi hi mujhe mere bhaiya or di ko lota denge.

Rohan :- bharosa h na , fir chalo khana khao , jab karan or jyoti wapas aayenge or tumhe is halat me dekhenge to kya unhe acha lagega , wo tumhe bahut datenge or tumse jyada to wo mahashay meri band bajayega ki mane tera khayal na rakha or meri bahan mujhe pitne ka shonk ni h.

Rohan ki yahi khasiyat thi ki wo rote hue chahre pe bhi muskurahat la deta tha , wo bhi apne dost jesa hi tha ,jisse kisi ka dukh ni dekha jata tha or yaha to uski khas dost or uski bahan sonam thi.

Sonam rohan ki is bat pe thoda muskura padi or itne din baad sonam k chahahre pe halki si hi sahi , per muskan dekh k rohan k chare pe bhi ek santushti or chen bhari muskan aayi or wo bade hi pyar se sonam ko khana khilane laga ,tabhi sonam ne roti ka ek tukda lete hue boli.

Sonam :- bhai m janti hu aapne bhi meri tarah parso se kuch ni khaya , lijiye aap bhi khaiye.

Ese hi dono bhai bahan khana khate h ek dusre k hatho , fir sonam ko rohan uske kamre me lejata h or apni god me uska sir rakh sulane lagta h.

Sonam :- bhai ek baat puchu , aapko sach me kanha ji pe bharosa h ya bas ap mera dil rakhne ko ye bate bol rahe ho.

Rohan :- ni sonu mujhe sach me kanha ji pe bharosa h , lekin unse bhi jyada bharosa mujhe tere vishwas pe h , kyunki m janta hu ki ek bahan ka vishwas or dil ki baat kabhi jhuti ni hosakti or uska vishwas ko tutne to swayam bhagwan bhi ni dete.

Yuhi bate kerte dono bhai bahan so gaye

Or wahi dusri or jab ye baat kavya ko pata chali ki uske ankho k tare ab ni rahe or unki body tak na mili to wo bichari to bawali si ho gayi thi , wo bhi lagbhag sare din rote rahati or apne lachari k liye khud ko kosti rahati , wo to bas apni dusri beti shivani k liye khud ko sambhale hui thi , verna uski vo manodasha ho gayi thi ki wo khud ko kuch bhi ker sakti thi

Shivani ka hal bhi kuch kam bura ni tha , niyati ko is bichari masum pe bhi taras na aaya tha or ise hamesha dukh hi mila , pahale bachpan me hi apne bhai bahan se dur hone ka dukh , fir itne salo baad jab vo mili to unse bura bartav kerne ka jo natak kerti , uska dukh , phir itne salo baad jab usse bhai bahan ka pyar mila to , niyati se wo bhi ni dekha gaya or chin liya, usse uske bhai bahan ko.

Wo masum sare din apne kamre me bethi karan or jyoti ki tasvir ko leke roti rahati , usko garima kese n kese bhula fusla k khana khila to deti , lekin vo apni jarurat se bahut kam hi khati , jis karan vo kamjor padne lagi

Or ye khabar jab gita tak pahunchi to dukh usko bhi kam na hua , karan or jyoti se bhale hi uska dur dur tak ka koi rishta na ho , lekin un dono ke prem k kaaran gita se unka dil ka rishta jud gaya tha. Jis kaaran gita ko bhi kafi bada dhaka jhatka laga , wo bhi.khub royi.

Priya bechari ko to kuch samjh hi ni thi ki ho kya raha h , or uske masum dil pe koi bura asar na pade , isliye use to is baare me kisi ne bataya bhi ni tha .

Wo bichari baar bar karan or jyoti k bare me puchti rahati , lekin use ye bata kar sab tal dete ki karan or jyoti abhi bahar gaye hue h or wo jald hi wapas lot k aayenge.

Jis karan vo masum roj ghar k bahar gate le khadi ho ker apne bhaiya or didi ka intezaar kerti rahati , jise dekh garima or rone lagti.

Radha or riya bhi ajib halat me fasi hui thi, kabhi to dono ko karan or jyoti k sath bitaye pyaar bhare palo ki bar bar yaad aati , jis kaaran vo karan or jyoti ko yaad ker khub rone lagti , lekin fir wapas nafrat ka parda un dono ki ankho pe pad jata.

Wahi rasatal lok me aman , shweta or kaya ko bhi kafi time se bechaini ho rahi thi or jab unhone apni shaktiyo se karan k bare me pata kiya or unhe karan or jyoti ki mot ki khabar pata chali , to wo sab bhi shok me dub gaye or unke sath pura rasatal bhi us vyakti ki mrityu k shok me dub gaya , jinki vajah se unhe aajadi mili thi.

Aman ko ye to pata chal gaya tha ki karan ka accident ni murder hua h or vo apne bhai jese dost ki mot ka badla lene prathvi pe jana chahata tha, lekin rasatal k niyamanusar rasatal ka naya raja k raj , ko jab tak pura ek saal na ho jaye , wo rasatal lok se bahar ni ja sakta , is kaaran vo bichara apni majburi pe rota hua , apni bahan k sath shok me duba hua tha.or kaya ka bhi hal bahut bura tha , vo bhi karan ki yaad me din bhar roti rahati.

Time :- 2.5 mahine baad



Prathvi se kayi prakash yojan dur ek bahut hi sunder lok tha ,jaha pariyo ka raaj tha , yani wo parilok tha , lekin ab yaha kaal bhanu k dost prachandasur , jo ek bahut hi mayavi rakshas tha uska raaj tha , jisne parilok k raja som or rani shrutkirti ko bandi banake , parilok ko hathiya liya tha or apne hatya charo or dushkrityo se usne parilok jese sunder lok ko nark jesa bana dala tha , jispe sirf asuro ka raaj tha , har or khun kharaba macha hua tha or sari praja dusht prachandasur k aatank k kaaran trahi mam trahi mam ker ishwer ko pukarti rahati.

Lekin ye kya aaaj to parilok ka najara bilkul badal chuka tha , aaj yaha parilok k wasiyo ki ni , balki dusht asuro ki puri sena ki kati fati lashe padi thi or prachandasur , ghutno k bal bandhi bana hua jhuka hua tha .

Or uske samne ek yuvak khada tha , jiska pura sharir kale or nile kapdo se dhaka hua tha or chahare per ek mask tha, jisme se uski nili jhil di ankhe saf saf dikh rahi thi or hath me ek trishul tha.

Prachandasur us yuvak k aage gidgida raha tha :- shama , shama ker dijiye hey mahan yodha , aap to mahaveer h or shama to veero ka aabhushan hoti h.

M aapko vachan deta hu m patal lok lot jaunga or wapas kabhi parilok ki or dekhunga tak ni

Yuvak :- shama ka avsar diya tha tumhe chetavani k sath per tum na mane prachandasur , ab tumhara kuch ni ho sakata.kyunki

"Ddandnayak na kabhi kuch bhulta h or na hi dobara kisi ko shama kerta h"

Ye bol us yuvak ne apne hath me pakda trishul prachandasur k sine me ghop diya or jab wo raksas dharashayi ho jamin pe gira , tab us yuvak ne us asur k sine pe per rakh diya or jiske sath hi wo rakshas jal k rakh ho gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned
Nice update bhai
Kaafi emotional update tha
Sonam ko ye pata Chala ki
Karan and Jyoti ka garima se
Kya rishta hai aur garima ne use
Bhi use bhua kehne ko kaha h

Sab jaha Karan and Jyoti k liye
Pehle to pareshan the but jab ye
Pata Chala ki Karan and Jyoti
Ab is duniya mein nahi rahe to
Sabko bahut dukh hua
Ranvir phir ek baar chaal chal
Gya saara ilzaam bechari kavya
Pe daal Diya usne ab pata nai
Kavya ka Sach kàb saamne ayega
Karan and Jyoti kàb wapis aake
Apna badla lenge ranvir maaya aur
Viraaj se. Karan to parilok mein hai
But Jyoti kaha h.
Sonam aur Rohan ne ek doosre
Ko sambhal rakha hai, kanha ki kripa
Jald hi hogi unpe aur unke vishwaas
Ko kanha tootne nai denge aur jald
Hi Karan ND Jyoti se unko milwaenge
Karan ne Jyoti ki kasam bhi khai hai
Ki wo viraaj ko nai chordega use to
Sabse pehle viraaj ko saza deni chahiye

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Bhai iss update ek ke tho bhul hi gaye hai aap vahi hamare pyre naina veer or priti unka kya hua sabka haal tho aapne bata diya apne yaha tak ki rasaatal ki bi bayan kardi per inlogonki nahi

Vahi maya or viraaj ki khaber hame chahiye bi nahi or saath hi saath vp or kalbhanu ki uska tho aab age ayega hi story per muje iss update me naina logonki khabar chahiye thi khair i hope aap next update me iss kami ko poora kardenge



Story likhte likhte tum mahir hogaye ho aaj ka hi update lelo kitna acha update tha or rohan or sonamka karan or jyoti ke prati vishwaas ko kitni achi tareke se aapne discribe kiya bahut acha aab jyada intezaar mat karwana kal waise bi janmastami hai (ohhh 1bajgaye na)mera matlub aaj ek or update ki asha hai aapse so pls muje pata hai aap niji jeeban me bahut vyast hai per me apko order tho nahi de sakta request kar sakta hu so pls aaj ek or update dedijiye uske baad chahe aap ek hafta na do pls bhai koshish tho kar hi sakte ho
 

FRIDAY

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Good update....
I think it was very impressive start of 2nd part of story.There were
lots of emotional scenes which was well described.Ranvir's trap worked very well for Garima.
Rohan & Sonam beleive that karan didn't do anything wrong.Karan & jioty will back.
On the other side, Riya & Radha had mixed feelings about them.
Some new character has been introduced.
Still it early days....
Let's see what is waiting for us in upcoming updates.

Good update....
Keep it up....
 

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Chapter :- 2
The Journey of dandnayak
Update no :- 101

Sham ka samay ho raha tha , or surya dev pashchim disha ki or badh rahe the.

Shahar k har gharo me light jal chuki thi , sivaye ek ghar k jis kaaran us ghar k lagbhag har kone me andhera apne panv pasar chuka tha

Sivaay ek jagah k , jo us ghar k ander bana mandir tha , jaha ek deepak jal raha tha , jiski lo pura to ni lekin dikhayi dene k liye kaafi ujala ker rahi thi or us dipak k bilkul samne mandir k darvaje ki dahalij k bicho darvaje se pith lagaye ek ladki bethi thi , jiski ankho se aviral aasuo ki dhara bah rahi thi.

Usko dekh ker hi lag raha tha , jese usne 2 din se khana to dur , pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi thi , jis kaaran uska pyare or sunder chahare ka sara noor kho chuka tha , uska komal sharir durbal pad gaya tha.

Usko to jese khud ka ya apne aaspas mojud kisi chij ka hosh hi ni tha, wo to bas nirantar mandir m mojud baal gopal ki pratima ko dekh roye ja rahi thi.

Tabhi us ghar ka gate khulta h or ek ladka jiske hatho me kuch khane ka samman tha vo ghar me enter kerta h or jab vo dekhta h ki pure ghar me andhera fela hua h ,to wo samman ko ek side me rakh ker sabse pahale ghar ki lights on kerta h.

Fir wo kisi ko ghar me dhundte hue mandir ki or pahunch jata h or waha bethi us ladki ko dekh uske pass jata h or uske kandhe pe hath rakhta h.

Ladke ke hath rakhne se wo ladki ek baar utsuk ho jhat se badi ummid se us ladke ki or dekhti h , lekin ladke ko dekh wapas uska chahara uter jata h or wapas vese hi dusri or dekhne lagti h.

Ladka :- gudiya kab tak ese roti rahegi , kya tere ese rone se unki aatma ko taklif ni pahunchegi.

Ladki gusse se :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii, wo jinda h , mera dil janta h ye baat unhe kuch ni hua , wo jarur wapas aayenge.

Ladka :- acha sorry baba.

Ladki wapas us or dekhte hue :- hmmm

Fir ladka wapas hall me jata h or apne sath jo khane ka saman laya tha , use plate me dal ker wapas us ladki k paas jata h or apne hatho se use khilane k liye apna hath us ladki k muh ki or kerta h to ladki us ladke ko side ker boli.

Ladki :- mujhe bhuk ni h bhai .

Ladka :- ese kab tak chalega sonu , tumne parso se kuch ni khaya , ese to tumhari tabiyat kharab ho gayi to

Ladki rote hue :- to ho jane dijiye na rohan bhai , jinki wajah se aapki is bahan k pas ye ghar , aap or ye nayi jindagi mili , ab wo hi is jindagi me ni rahi to is jindagi ka bhi matlab

Ji ha dosto ye dono or koi ni , rohan or sonam hi the or ye jagah karan ka hi ghar tha . Aaj karan or jyoti k us hadse ko 2 din ho gaye the.

Or jab ye khabar sonam ko mili to use bahut bada dhakka laga tha, usne 3 din se kuch khaya piya ni tha , bas sare din ladoo gopal k pas bethi roti rahati.

rohan ne use bahut samjhane ki koshis ki lekin wo sunne ko hi teyar ni thi, or sonam ki is halat se dukhi rohan ne bhi 2 din se kuch ni khaya tha.

Lekin sawal ye uthata tha ki baki sab karan k dost yani or family wale kaha h.

Flashback.

Hua yu ki jab garima subah wapas karan or jyoti k ghar aayi to unhe aaj bhi ghar ko tala laga hua mila, or uper se karan or jyoti dono k hi phone band aarahe the.

Tabhi vaha rohan or sonam bhi taxi se pahunch gaye , or jese hi unhone garima ko dekhte h to unke pass jake unhe namaste kerte h.

Rohan or sonam :- namaste aunty , good morning.

Garima :- good morning beta , aagaye shimla se

Sonam :- ha aunty , wese aap yaha itni subah subah .

Garima :- ha beti wo m karan or jyoti se milne aayi thi.

Sonam :- bhai or di se vo bhi itni subah subah , sab thik to h na aunty .

Garima :- ha sab thik h beta , or pahali baat to tum mujhe aunty bolna band kero , aaj se tum mujhe bhua hi bolna.

Ye bol garima apne or karan or jyoti k rishte k baare m unhe batati h.

Jise sun rohan or sonam bahut khush hote h.

Sonam :- kya sach me aap bhai or di ki bhua ho.

Garima :- ha meri bachi or undono ki hi ni m tumhari bhi bhua hi hu.

Ye bol sonam ko garima gale laga leti h , fir sonam boli.

Sonam :- bhua ji to aap bahar kyu khade ho , ander chaliye or bhai or di ko bhi to ye khush khabri dijiye wo kitne salo se apne parivar k pyaar k liye taras rahe h

Garima :- taras to m bhi rahi hu beti , apne dono jigar k tukdo ko apne sine se lagane ko , lekin wo yaha ho to sahi ghar bhi sham se lock h or undono ka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Sonam to ye sun or tension me aagayi ek to uska man raat se hi ghabra raha tha , uper se ye sun uska tension or badh gaya.

Sonam :- kya , rukiye m try kerti hu.

Sonam bhi call kerne ka try kerti h , per wahi hota h uske sath bhi.

Rohan :- kahi vo dono mere ghar p to ni.

Ye bol wo sab rohan k ghar pahunchte h to gate anita kholti h.

Or rohan ko dekh khush ho ker gale se lagake boli.

Anita :- aagaya mera bacha, kesa raha trip shimla ka.

Rohan :- acha raha mummy.

Fir wo ese hi sonam se mili or boli.

Anita sonam se :- beta tumhara kam ache se ho gaya na , is nalayak ne tujhe tang to ni kiya.

Sonam :- are ni ni aunty bhai ne to meri bahut help ki waha .

Fir anita or garima bhi ek dusre se milker bahut khush hoti h , tab garima boli..

Garima :- aapse milker bahut khushi hui didi , bhabhi akser aapke baRe me mujhe bataya kerti thi , ki kese aap or vo milker masti kiya kerte the.

Asha ki baat ker dono ki ankho me pani aajata h , tabhi rohan bola.

Rohan :- mummy , karan or jyoti yaha aaye hue h kya.

Anita :- ni to beta , infect kal sham se mane unhe dekha tak ni , unke ghar ki bhi light off thi.

Ye sun ker sonam ki tension or badh gayi or sath me garima or rohan ki bhi

Tabhi anita ko kuch yaad aaya or wo boli.

Anita :- kahi wo apne pahale wale ghar to ni gaya

Rohan :- kesi baat kerti ho mummy , wo dono bhala waha kyu jayenge , jaha unki koi ijjat na ho , unki jaha unki soteli ma hi ni , uska saga baap tak uska dushman bana hua h

Rohan ye bol to gaya fir use dhyan aaya ki karan ki bhua abhi uske samne khadi h.

Anita :- are beta to wo shivani se bhi to milne ja sakte h (or garima ki or ishara kerte ) or ese bado k bare m ulta sidha ni bolte

Rohan :- sorry bhuaji m kuch jyada hi bol gaya.

Garima :- ni ni beta tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho tumne to sach bola h bilkul , abhi chalo waha , mujhe khed h ki, mere bhaiya k hote hue bhi mere bache ese dukh dard jhel rahe h. Aaj unki apni bahan se mulakat k sath unhe har sawalo ka jwab bhi dena hoga.

Ye bol garima rohan or sonam k sath waha se nikal gayi karan k purane ghar ki or .

Wahi dusri or
Kuch der baad

Ranvir abhi gadi park kerke apne ghar me jane ko hua hi tha ki tabhi waha ek or gadi bahar aake ruki or jese hi gadi me bethe shaks utre to wo hairani ke mare ankhe fade unhe dekhta rah gaya.

Wo or koyi ni garima thi or unke sath rohan or sonam the.

Garima ne jese hi ranvir ko dekha , vo bhaiya bhaiya kahate hue ranvir k pass dodi , ranvir bhi garima ko dekhte hi bahut khush tha , or sath me hairan bhi

Ranvir garima ko gale laga leta h or khushi k aansu rote hue :- choti tu yaha , itne salo baad , m bata ni sakta m kitna khus hu m aaj

Garima :- kuch esa hi haal mera h bhaiya , aapko dekhne k lie meri ankhe taras gayi thi , aapko or bhabhi ko dekhne ko , bhai aapki narajgi to maa baba se thi na , fir apni gudiya ko kyu bhula diya,kyu aapne mujhse milna to dur ek baar baat karne ki koshish na ki . Bhagwan k khel bhi nirale h jinhe m pure india me dhund rahi thi , wo mere hi shahar me hi the

Jante ho bhaiya aapko or bhabhi ko dekne k liye meri ankhe taras gayi thi,socha tha jab aap or bhabhi milenge to fir se aap dono yuhi sine se lagaoge or wese hi apne hatho de khana khilaoge or pahale jese apna pyar lutaoge , per meri kismat to dekho aaj itne salo baad apne pita saman bhai ko to pa li , per usse pahale hi pata chala ki apni maa jesi bhabhi ko kho diya h mane .

Or bhabi bol wo garima jor jor se rone lagi,ranvir k dil me to koi dukh ni tha asha ki mot ka or hota bhi kese aakhir uska hatyara bhi to wo khud hi tha.

Ranvir :- apne bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya , manta hu mane bahut badi galti ki , lekin maa babuji se narajgi ki vajah se mujhse to wapas ganv jane ka dil na hua or karan or jyoti k peda hone k baad socha bhi ki tujhse milne jau or jab ganv gaya to pata chala teri shadi ho chuki h , mane tere bare m pata kerne ki koshis bhi bahut ki per ganv me kisi ko bhi malum ni tha, to m nirash ho ke wapas lot aaya.

Garima :- ha bhaiya, aapke jane k baad maa babuji to hasna or khushi manana hi bhul gaye the , isliye unhonne meri shadi bahut hi sadharan tarike se ker di thi or ganv k bahut kam log ko hi bulaya tha usme
Pahale to kuch saal hum banglore rahe , per fir radha k papa ne business idher hi settle ker liya.

Radha ka naam sun ranvir ko ek or jhatka laga ki jis radha ko usne apna mohra banaya tha ,wo usiki bhanji h.

Tabhi shivani apni maa kavya k sath ghar k bahar aapahunchi or boli.

Shivani :- papa aap subah subah kaha gaye the or ye aunty kon h apke sath.

Darasal shivani kabhi garima se mili ni thi or na hi garima shivani se mili thi bas dono ne ek dusre k baare me suna tha

Ranvir :- idher aao beta , inse milo ye tumhari bhua h .

Or choti ye h tumhari bhatiji shivani or tumhari bhabhi kavya.

Garima ne jab ye suna to use yaad aaya ki uska aane ka main maksad kya tha.

Garima gusse or nam ankho se :- iska matlab mane jo suna wo sach , bhai aap esa kese ker sakte ho ,aap to kitna pyaar kerte the na bhabhi se , fir bhi aapne esa kiya, yaha tak ki apne bhabhi ki teharvi tak na hone di
Kaha gaya aapka wo pyaar bhai, jiske liye aapne apna ghar parivar yaha tak ki mujhe bhi chod ker chale gaye the , kaha gaya bhai aapka wo pavitra prem

Or kyu kiya aapne apne hi bacho karan or jyoti k sath esa , boliye bhai . Jis kaaran k pichhe aapne ghar choda tha usi ko kyu thukraya, shivani ko itna pyaar or karan or jyoti se itni nafrat kyu bhai .

Boliye bhai kyu , esi kya galti ki thi un masumo ne jo unko itni badi saja di apne , wo apni maa ko to pahale hi kho chuke the or fir unhe pita ka bhi prem ni mila , jawab dijiye bhai,jawab dijiye.

Ye bol wo ghutno k bal beth rone lagi,ranvir ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo apni bahan ko kya jwab de ,tabhi uske kamine dimag me ek idea aaya or vo rota hua niche beth k bola.

Ranvir :- choti manta hu mujhse galti hui, per kam se kam esa to mat bol ki mane apni asha k pyar k sath dhoka kiya , mane dusri shadi isliye ki taki karan or jyoti ko maa ki kami mahasus na ho or wo sadme se bahar aasake , isliye mane kavya se shadi ki , lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki ye meri sabse badi bhul hogi

(Kavya ki or ishara kerte hue) per ulta is orat ne mere bacho ko mujhse or mujhse mere bacho ko dur ker diya , ye jab shuru shuru me aayi to pahale to achi banke rahi , lekin jab shivani hui to iske man me aakhir sotelepan ka janm ho hi gaya , isne dhire dhire mere dono bacho ko torcher kerna shuru ker diya or mere bhi man me unke liye jahar bharna shuru ker diya or m bevkuf pata ni is kamini ki chal me kese aagaya or apne hi bacho k sath durvyavahar kerne laga.

M shayad mafi k layak bhi ni hu meri bahan , chahe to mujhe jo chahe saja dede , tu kahegi to m abhi apne bacho k pero m mafi mangne ko bhi tayar hu bahan , jo tu chahe mujhe saja dele bahan , bas apne bhai ko prayashchitt ka moka dede bas choti ek moka dede bhai ko.

Ranvir ne kaafi achi acting ki , jisme garima fas gayi , kyunki ek to wo itne salo baad apne us bhai se mili thi jiski vo sabse jyada ladli thi or usne apni ankho se apne bhai or bhabhi ka pyaar dekha tha , isliye usko apni bhai ki is emotional acting pe bharosa ho gaya or dusra ye ki soteli maa wali bat bhi usko jam gayi.

Or is tarah ranvir ne apne sare paapo ka tokra bechari kavya k sir pe rakh diya , jis kaaran waha mojud sabhi kavya ko nafrat ki najar se dekh rahe the, kavya ne apni safai dete hue sach batane ki bhi koshis ki

Kavya :- ni , ye jhut h , ye jhut bol rahe h , didi ek baar aap meri baat to suno...

Garima bich me hi :- bas , vahi apni jaban ko lagam do , m apkii koi didi vidi ni hu , or aapka itna sab kuch kerne k baad bhi bolna baki h.

Sharm ni aayi un masumo k sath esa vyavahar kerte , jinke liye tumhe is ghar me laya gaya , m khud gawah hu mere bache aaj bhi tumhe choti maa choti maa kahker tumhari tarif kerte ni thakte or tumne ye sila diya un masumo k pyaar ka , sharm ni aayi tumhe ek maa hoke bhi esi ghatiya harkat kerte hue.

Ese hi bahut kuch bura bhala garima ne bola or bechari kavya chupchap sari khari khoti sunti rahi rote hue.

Kavya :- thik h didi , ager apne mujhe doshi man hi liya h to m ab kya bolu , m aaj hi apni beti k sath ye ghar chod k chali jaungi ,lekin bas ek bar ,bas ek baar mujhe mere bache karan or jyoti se mila do , taki m unko sachai se avgat kara saku.

Garima :- ha taki un ke dil me or jahar bhar sako h na , koi jarurat ni h apko unse milne ki or na hi yaha se jane ,oo kyunki kuch bhi ho ye sachai to badli ni ja sakti ki shivani bhi is ghar ki beti or meri bhatiji h or m apni bhatiji ko apne ghar se dur kahi ni jane dungi or uski umer kam h or use abhi tumhari jarurat h , isliye tum yaha rah sakti ho ,per khabardar mere bacho k karib ane ki kosis bhi ki h to

Garima ki ye baat sun kavya rote hue ghar me wapas chali jati h or fir garima shivani se boli.

Garima :-idher aao beti apni bhua se ni milogi.

Shivani sonam or rohan ki or dekhti h to wo dono ha me gardan ha me hila dete h , jise dekh shivani garima k pass pahunchti h , jise garima kaske gale laga leti h or uske pure chahare ko chum chum k gila ker deti h.

Ranvir :- are choti ab ghar k bahar hi khadi rahegi kya , apne shubh kadmo ko rakh is ghar me chahi manhusiyat ko dur ker gudiya.

Garima :- kya bhai aap bhi

Ye bol wo sab ghar k ander jate h , tabhi sonam boli.

Sonam :- uncle karan bhai or jyoti di yaha aaye the kya.

Shivani udass hoker :- ni to di , bhaiya or didi to yaha us din k baad kabhi lote hi ni or unse mile bhi mujhe kayi din ho gaye .

Tabhi ranvir apna muh dhone k bahane toilet me jaker jaldi se police ko phone kerta h or apna plan ko change ker deta h , pahale jaha direct karan or jyoti ki mot ki khabar sidhe pahuchane ka plan tha ranvir ka , ab uski jagah usne plan change ker ye ker diya tha ki , karan or jyoti ka accident ki khabar hi ghar pe pahuchegi or ye bataya jayega ki unhe hospital le jaya ja raha h or hospital m jab sab ghar pahuchege to doctor ye bol dega ki humne in dono ko bachane ki bahut koshis ki lekin , ye bach ni paye

Ranvir ne esa isliye kiya tha ki uski bahan ko shak na ho or wo apni powers se sachai ka pata lagane ki na koshis kare.

Fir wo wapas aaker hall me beth jata h or purani bate kerne lagta h garima se , tabhi garima boli.

Garima :- bhai mujhe karan or jyoti ki bahut chinta ho rahi h . Wo dono kal se gayab h or unka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Ranvir :- are wo dono kahi gaye honge office k kaam se choti tum chinta kyu kerti ho , tumhare bhatija bhatiji bahut samjhdar h.

Garima :- ni bhai esa to koi bhi office ka kam tha hi ni , infact kal hi to unhonne apna sara kam niptaya tha or mane unhe chuti di thi

Tabhi sonam k phone pe karan k no se phone aata h . Jise dekh sonam khush ho jati h.

Sonam :- rohan bhai , bhua dekho bhai ka phone aaraha h.

Darasal ye phone ranvir ki police ne hi janbujh ker karan ki sim se kiya tha , jo uske phone m pade tute hue mobile me se kismat se mil gaya tha or ranvir ne hi esa kerne ko bola tha

Sonam phone pick ker :- hello bhai ka kaha ho aap , yaha hum kitna pareshan ho rahe h.

Inspector :- hello mis m inspector ..... Bol raha hu , ye kya aapke bhai ka no h.

Sonam police ka nam sun ghabra gayi or boli :- jii ha ye mere bhaiya ka hi no h sir , per ye aapke pas kese , sab thik to h na sir.

Inspector :- ji darasal aapke bhai ka or apki shahar k bahar wale highway k pas ek accident ho gaya h , unki takkar ek truck se ho gayi thi shayad or unke sath ek ladki bhi thi , unki identity dekhi to pata chala wo bhi shayad apki bahan h .

Sonam rote hue :- kya

Sonam ne to jese suna to mano uska dil dhadkna hi ruk gayi ho , uske hath se phone hi chut gaya or wo dhadam se sofe pe gir gayi.

Rohan dar ke :- kya hua sonu , tu chilayi kyu or tu ro kyu rahi h

Sonam kuch bol hi ni rahi thi or ro rahi thi , tab garima ne phone utha ke baat kerti h to inspector sari baat bata k bolta h.

Inspector :- mam hum in dono ko city hospital le ja rahe h , aap dono bhi vaha pahuchiye

Jhatka to garima ko bhi ye sun bahut bada laga ,wo bhi rone lagi , lekin usne khud ko sambhal ker sabko sari baat batayi or sab hospital ki or nikal gaye ,kavya ne bahut bola ki usko bhi sath le chalo lekin kisi ne uski ek baat na suni or use wahi chod gaye or wo bechari roti rah gayi.

Hospital pahunch ker unhe pata chala ki karan or jyoti ko leker police abhi tak pahunchi hi ni , ranvir ko bahut gussa aaraha tha , kyunki uska sara plan bigad gaya tha.

Tabhi waha inspector or 2 constable sir jhukaye pahunche to garima unpe chilayi.

Garima :- ye kesi laparwahi h aapki inspector,kaha h mere bache , kya itni der lagti h aap logo ko .

Inspector :- sorry mam humne bahut koshis ki..

Inspector unhe kuch der pahale ki ghatna batata h.

Darasal police karan k ghar walo ko dikhane k liye un dono ki body ko jis ambulance me je jarahi thi , to bich me padne wale jungle k raste me us gadi ki brake pata ni apne aap kese fail ho gayi or handle lock ho gaya , jisse wo jaker pedo se takra gati or wo ambulance blast ho gayi , jisse uske chithade chithade ud gaye or ander rakhi bodies or driver k bhi.

Garima k sath jese hi sabne ye suna to sabka mano kaleja hi fat gaya or unke dilo ki dhadkan hi ruk gayi .

Sab waha fut fut k rone lage , sonam to ye sun behosh hi ho gayi , jise dekh rohan or garima ghabra gaye or use jaldi se use wahi admit karwate h.

Ranvir to bahar se rone ka natak ker raha tha ,ander se to wo jallad bahut khush tha , bhale hi ye uska plan na ho per wo fir bhi bachne m kamyab ho gaya tha.

Tabhi radha or riya bhi waha aaphunche or radha ne apni maa se pahuncha .

Radha :- kya hua mummy aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or yaha hospital me kya ker rahe ho aap log yaha kya ker rahe ho.
M riya di k ghar pahunchi to aunty ne bataya ki aap sab shivani k ghar gaye ho or humne waha jate hue raste me rohan bhai ko phone kiya to unhone jaldi se yaha pahuchne ko bola.

Garima radha ko gale lagake rote hue sari baat bata deti h.

Jise sun ek baar to radha k bhi ankh me bhi pani aagaye or sath me riya k bhi , unki ankhon k same karan or jyoti k sath bitaye har pal ane lage , lekin fir unki samne kal wali ghatna bhi aagayi or wapas nafrat ka jahar unke man me bhar gaya.

Sham tak sab yu hi rote rahe , sonam ko abhi tak hosh ni aaya tha ,radha or riya ne baki sab ko kese n kese samjhake ghar bhej diya antim sanskar ki teyariyo k liye , wese body to bachi ni thi , per bache kuche sharir k tukdo ka antim sanskar bhi jaruri tha, lekin rohan na mana or wahi ruk gaya.

Kuch der baad sonam ko hosh aagaya or vo chillate hue uth gayi .

Sonam :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii.

Or fir jor jor se fut fut ke rone lagi , rohan radha or riya k sath bhag k uske pas pahuncha or rohan ko dekhte hi sonam uske gale lag ke rone lagi or sath me rohan bhi rone laga.

Dono kafi der tak rote rahe , tab radha ne badi nishthurata se bola.

Radha :- ab bas bhi kero aap dono jo ho gaya so ho gaya , or kitni der tak yuhi rote rahoge.

Radha k ye ese vachan sun rohan or sonam herani ki koi sima na rahi or wo bole.

Rohan :- radha ye kesi baate ker rahi h tu , yaha aaj mane tumne apne , hum sab ne apne bhai jesa dost or bahan jesi saheli ko kho diya h or tu bol rahi h jo hua so hua.

Riya :- to kya galat bola usne betu , jo hona tha wo ho gaya or us jesa insan tha bhi is layak or sath me uski bahan bhi.

Rohan jor se chilaya :- diiiiiii , aapki himmat kese hui mere bhai or bahan k bare me ese bolne ki , ager aaj aapki jagah kisine ye baat boli hoti to m uski jaban bahar khich leta uske muh se.

Radha :- chilayiye mat bhai , di bilkul sahi bol rahi h , jo harkat un dono ne kal ki h , wo aap sunoge to aap bhi yahi bologe..

Ye bol radha kal wali ghatna k bare me rohan or sonam ko vistarapoorvak bata deti h , jise sun sonam or rohan bhi puri tarah shonk ho jate.

Radha :- acha hua sonu , mar gaye wo dono , verna kya pata jo harkat usne maya di k sath ki , wo kal tere sath bhi ker sakte the , mujhe to lagta h vo jyoti bhi usske sath mili hui thi

Abhi radha ne ye baat boli hi thi ki , ek jhanatedar thappad uske galo pe pada, jo kisi or ne ni sonam ne mara tha.

Sonam gusse se chilayi :- kamini teri himmat kese hui mere bhai k bare me ese apshabd bolne ki , tujhe jara si sharam bhi ni aayi apne us bhai k liye itni ghatiya baat bolne k liye, jiski vajah se tu aaj sahi salamat khadi h.

Ek ni aneko baar jisne apni jaan pe khel k teri jaan bachai , tere ko apni sagi bahan jesa jisne pyar diya , teri choti se choti pasand na pasand ka khayal rakha or tum unhi ke ganga jese pavitr charitra ko kalankit jer rahi ho

Riya :- ha to kya help kerne or pyar dene se kisi ka bhi rape kerne ka haq mil jayega kya use .

Rohan :- mujhe bahut sharm aarahi h ye kahate hue ki aap meri di ho , itne samay sath rahakar bhi aap karan or jyoti ko samjh na saki di , or ye meri sonu itne kam samay me ye baat samjh gayi ki chahe duniya idher ki udher ho jaye , lekin mera dost mera bhai esa ghatiya kam kerne ki sapne me bhi ni soch sakta , lekin aap ye baat na samjh payi di.

Or aapne ek baar uski baat tak na suni or dusro ki baato me aake mere dost pe itna bada kalank thop diya.

Riya :- suni sunayi baato pe ni betu , mane apni ankho se dekha h use maya k sath jabardasti kerte hue

Rohan nam ankho se chilaya :- mat kaho mujhe betu , mis riya gupta , aaj aapke is ghatiya or nich karm k kaaran mar gaya h apka betu aapke liye , aaj se aapka or mera koi nata ni h, chali jaiye meri najaro se dur.

Riya to ye sun puri tarah shok ho gayi , aajse pahale rohan ne kabhi usse ese baat na ki thi or nam leker to bilkul bhi ni , jis kaaran wo roti hui waha se bhag gayi.

Sonam radha se :- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha jaruri ni har baar ankho dekha drishy hi sach ho , tumne mere se jyada time bhai k sath gujara , lekin fir bhi tu unhe ache se ni samjh payi radha.

Radha :- sonu meri bat to sun

Sonam :- mat bol mujhe sonu , chali ja yaha se ,ni chahiye mujhe esi saheli jo apne us bhai ki bhi sagi na ho saki , jisne uski khushi k liye kya kuch ni kiya , wo meri kya saheli banegi

Or ha chinta mat kerna tu , m teri ye harkat bhua ko bata ker unhe or taklif ni pahuchaungi, or na hi rohan bhai esa karenge ,lekin tu ye mat sochna ki sachai jyada din tak chupi rahegi or jab tere samne sachai aayegi , tere pas prayashchitt ka moka tak ni hoga.

Ye bol sonam ne radha se muh mod liya , or radha bhi vaha se rote hue chali gayi.

Agle din karan or jyoti k avasheshon ka antim sanskar ker diya gaya or sonam bhi discharge hoke apne ghar aagayi , garima ne use bahut manaya ki wo unke sath uuske ghar chale , per sonam ne kuch samay akele rahane ki baat bol ker mana ker diya

Rohan or sonam ne apne wade k anusar sachai kisi ko ni batayi , lekin undono ne radha or riya se apna sara nata tod liya or rohan ne bhi anita se sonam ko sambhalne ka bahana ker , apne ghar se sonam k ghar me shift ho gaya tha, anita bhi sonam k liye man gayi , kyuki wo bhi janti thi ki karan or jyoti k baad vo sabse close Rohan k thi , isliye anita bhi man hi gayi.

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Rohan :- acha lagta h tumhe apne kanha pe bharosa ni raha sonu.

Sonam :- ni bhai ye kesi baat bol rahe ho aap ,ek aapke siva kanha hi to h jispe mera bharosa bacha h , bharosa h mujhe apne kanha pe ki unhone bhai or di ko kuch ni hone diya hoga or wo jaldi hi mujhe mere bhaiya or di ko lota denge.

Rohan :- bharosa h na , fir chalo khana khao , jab karan or jyoti wapas aayenge or tumhe is halat me dekhenge to kya unhe acha lagega , wo tumhe bahut datenge or tumse jyada to wo mahashay meri band bajayega ki mane tera khayal na rakha or meri bahan mujhe pitne ka shonk ni h.

Rohan ki yahi khasiyat thi ki wo rote hue chahre pe bhi muskurahat la deta tha , wo bhi apne dost jesa hi tha ,jisse kisi ka dukh ni dekha jata tha or yaha to uski khas dost or uski bahan sonam thi.

Sonam rohan ki is bat pe thoda muskura padi or itne din baad sonam k chahahre pe halki si hi sahi , per muskan dekh k rohan k chare pe bhi ek santushti or chen bhari muskan aayi or wo bade hi pyar se sonam ko khana khilane laga ,tabhi sonam ne roti ka ek tukda lete hue boli.

Sonam :- bhai m janti hu aapne bhi meri tarah parso se kuch ni khaya , lijiye aap bhi khaiye.

Ese hi dono bhai bahan khana khate h ek dusre k hatho , fir sonam ko rohan uske kamre me lejata h or apni god me uska sir rakh sulane lagta h.

Sonam :- bhai ek baat puchu , aapko sach me kanha ji pe bharosa h ya bas ap mera dil rakhne ko ye bate bol rahe ho.

Rohan :- ni sonu mujhe sach me kanha ji pe bharosa h , lekin unse bhi jyada bharosa mujhe tere vishwas pe h , kyunki m janta hu ki ek bahan ka vishwas or dil ki baat kabhi jhuti ni hosakti or uska vishwas ko tutne to swayam bhagwan bhi ni dete.

Yuhi bate kerte dono bhai bahan so gaye

Or wahi dusri or jab ye baat kavya ko pata chali ki uske ankho k tare ab ni rahe or unki body tak na mili to wo bichari to bawali si ho gayi thi , wo bhi lagbhag sare din rote rahati or apne lachari k liye khud ko kosti rahati , wo to bas apni dusri beti shivani k liye khud ko sambhale hui thi , verna uski vo manodasha ho gayi thi ki wo khud ko kuch bhi ker sakti thi

Shivani ka hal bhi kuch kam bura ni tha , niyati ko is bichari masum pe bhi taras na aaya tha or ise hamesha dukh hi mila , pahale bachpan me hi apne bhai bahan se dur hone ka dukh , fir itne salo baad jab vo mili to unse bura bartav kerne ka jo natak kerti , uska dukh , phir itne salo baad jab usse bhai bahan ka pyar mila to , niyati se wo bhi ni dekha gaya or chin liya, usse uske bhai bahan ko.

Wo masum sare din apne kamre me bethi karan or jyoti ki tasvir ko leke roti rahati , usko garima kese n kese bhula fusla k khana khila to deti , lekin vo apni jarurat se bahut kam hi khati , jis karan vo kamjor padne lagi

Or ye khabar jab gita tak pahunchi to dukh usko bhi kam na hua , karan or jyoti se bhale hi uska dur dur tak ka koi rishta na ho , lekin un dono ke prem k kaaran gita se unka dil ka rishta jud gaya tha. Jis kaaran gita ko bhi kafi bada dhaka jhatka laga , wo bhi.khub royi.

Priya bechari ko to kuch samjh hi ni thi ki ho kya raha h , or uske masum dil pe koi bura asar na pade , isliye use to is baare me kisi ne bataya bhi ni tha .

Wo bichari baar bar karan or jyoti k bare me puchti rahati , lekin use ye bata kar sab tal dete ki karan or jyoti abhi bahar gaye hue h or wo jald hi wapas lot k aayenge.

Jis karan vo masum roj ghar k bahar gate le khadi ho ker apne bhaiya or didi ka intezaar kerti rahati , jise dekh garima or rone lagti.

Radha or riya bhi ajib halat me fasi hui thi, kabhi to dono ko karan or jyoti k sath bitaye pyaar bhare palo ki bar bar yaad aati , jis kaaran vo karan or jyoti ko yaad ker khub rone lagti , lekin fir wapas nafrat ka parda un dono ki ankho pe pad jata.

Wahi rasatal lok me aman , shweta or kaya ko bhi kafi time se bechaini ho rahi thi or jab unhone apni shaktiyo se karan k bare me pata kiya or unhe karan or jyoti ki mot ki khabar pata chali , to wo sab bhi shok me dub gaye or unke sath pura rasatal bhi us vyakti ki mrityu k shok me dub gaya , jinki vajah se unhe aajadi mili thi.

Aman ko ye to pata chal gaya tha ki karan ka accident ni murder hua h or vo apne bhai jese dost ki mot ka badla lene prathvi pe jana chahata tha, lekin rasatal k niyamanusar rasatal ka naya raja k raj , ko jab tak pura ek saal na ho jaye , wo rasatal lok se bahar ni ja sakta , is kaaran vo bichara apni majburi pe rota hua , apni bahan k sath shok me duba hua tha.or kaya ka bhi hal bahut bura tha , vo bhi karan ki yaad me din bhar roti rahati.

Time :- 2.5 mahine baad



Prathvi se kayi prakash yojan dur ek bahut hi sunder lok tha ,jaha pariyo ka raaj tha , yani wo parilok tha , lekin ab yaha kaal bhanu k dost prachandasur , jo ek bahut hi mayavi rakshas tha uska raaj tha , jisne parilok k raja som or rani shrutkirti ko bandi banake , parilok ko hathiya liya tha or apne hatya charo or dushkrityo se usne parilok jese sunder lok ko nark jesa bana dala tha , jispe sirf asuro ka raaj tha , har or khun kharaba macha hua tha or sari praja dusht prachandasur k aatank k kaaran trahi mam trahi mam ker ishwer ko pukarti rahati.

Lekin ye kya aaaj to parilok ka najara bilkul badal chuka tha , aaj yaha parilok k wasiyo ki ni , balki dusht asuro ki puri sena ki kati fati lashe padi thi or prachandasur , ghutno k bal bandhi bana hua jhuka hua tha .

Or uske samne ek yuvak khada tha , jiska pura sharir kale or nile kapdo se dhaka hua tha or chahare per ek mask tha, jisme se uski nili jhil di ankhe saf saf dikh rahi thi or hath me ek trishul tha.

Prachandasur us yuvak k aage gidgida raha tha :- shama , shama ker dijiye hey mahan yodha , aap to mahaveer h or shama to veero ka aabhushan hoti h.

M aapko vachan deta hu m patal lok lot jaunga or wapas kabhi parilok ki or dekhunga tak ni

Yuvak :- shama ka avsar diya tha tumhe chetavani k sath per tum na mane prachandasur , ab tumhara kuch ni ho sakata.kyunki

"Ddandnayak na kabhi kuch bhulta h or na hi dobara kisi ko shama kerta h"

Ye bol us yuvak ne apne hath me pakda trishul prachandasur k sine me ghop diya or jab wo raksas dharashayi ho jamin pe gira , tab us yuvak ne us asur k sine pe per rakh diya or jiske sath hi wo rakshas jal k rakh ho gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Kafi emotional update tha jaha sabhi dukhi the wahi riya aur radha ab bhi baz na aye
rohan aur sonam ne sahi kiya unse rishta tod kar
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Pyare rishte
Chapter :- 2
The Journey of dandnayak
Update no :- 101

Sham ka samay ho raha tha , or surya dev pashchim disha ki or badh rahe the.

Shahar k har gharo me light jal chuki thi , sivaye ek ghar k jis kaaran us ghar k lagbhag har kone me andhera apne panv pasar chuka tha

Sivaay ek jagah k , jo us ghar k ander bana mandir tha , jaha ek deepak jal raha tha , jiski lo pura to ni lekin dikhayi dene k liye kaafi ujala ker rahi thi or us dipak k bilkul samne mandir k darvaje ki dahalij k bicho darvaje se pith lagaye ek ladki bethi thi , jiski ankho se aviral aasuo ki dhara bah rahi thi.

Usko dekh ker hi lag raha tha , jese usne 2 din se khana to dur , pani ki ek ghut tak ni pi thi , jis kaaran uska pyare or sunder chahare ka sara noor kho chuka tha , uska komal sharir durbal pad gaya tha.

Usko to jese khud ka ya apne aaspas mojud kisi chij ka hosh hi ni tha, wo to bas nirantar mandir m mojud baal gopal ki pratima ko dekh roye ja rahi thi.

Tabhi us ghar ka gate khulta h or ek ladka jiske hatho me kuch khane ka samman tha vo ghar me enter kerta h or jab vo dekhta h ki pure ghar me andhera fela hua h ,to wo samman ko ek side me rakh ker sabse pahale ghar ki lights on kerta h.

Fir wo kisi ko ghar me dhundte hue mandir ki or pahunch jata h or waha bethi us ladki ko dekh uske pass jata h or uske kandhe pe hath rakhta h.

Ladke ke hath rakhne se wo ladki ek baar utsuk ho jhat se badi ummid se us ladke ki or dekhti h , lekin ladke ko dekh wapas uska chahara uter jata h or wapas vese hi dusri or dekhne lagti h.

Ladka :- gudiya kab tak ese roti rahegi , kya tere ese rone se unki aatma ko taklif ni pahunchegi.

Ladki gusse se :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii, wo jinda h , mera dil janta h ye baat unhe kuch ni hua , wo jarur wapas aayenge.

Ladka :- acha sorry baba.

Ladki wapas us or dekhte hue :- hmmm

Fir ladka wapas hall me jata h or apne sath jo khane ka saman laya tha , use plate me dal ker wapas us ladki k paas jata h or apne hatho se use khilane k liye apna hath us ladki k muh ki or kerta h to ladki us ladke ko side ker boli.

Ladki :- mujhe bhuk ni h bhai .

Ladka :- ese kab tak chalega sonu , tumne parso se kuch ni khaya , ese to tumhari tabiyat kharab ho gayi to

Ladki rote hue :- to ho jane dijiye na rohan bhai , jinki wajah se aapki is bahan k pas ye ghar , aap or ye nayi jindagi mili , ab wo hi is jindagi me ni rahi to is jindagi ka bhi matlab

Ji ha dosto ye dono or koi ni , rohan or sonam hi the or ye jagah karan ka hi ghar tha . Aaj karan or jyoti k us hadse ko 2 din ho gaye the.

Or jab ye khabar sonam ko mili to use bahut bada dhakka laga tha, usne 3 din se kuch khaya piya ni tha , bas sare din ladoo gopal k pas bethi roti rahati.

rohan ne use bahut samjhane ki koshis ki lekin wo sunne ko hi teyar ni thi, or sonam ki is halat se dukhi rohan ne bhi 2 din se kuch ni khaya tha.

Lekin sawal ye uthata tha ki baki sab karan k dost yani or family wale kaha h.

Flashback.

Hua yu ki jab garima subah wapas karan or jyoti k ghar aayi to unhe aaj bhi ghar ko tala laga hua mila, or uper se karan or jyoti dono k hi phone band aarahe the.

Tabhi vaha rohan or sonam bhi taxi se pahunch gaye , or jese hi unhone garima ko dekhte h to unke pass jake unhe namaste kerte h.

Rohan or sonam :- namaste aunty , good morning.

Garima :- good morning beta , aagaye shimla se

Sonam :- ha aunty , wese aap yaha itni subah subah .

Garima :- ha beti wo m karan or jyoti se milne aayi thi.

Sonam :- bhai or di se vo bhi itni subah subah , sab thik to h na aunty .

Garima :- ha sab thik h beta , or pahali baat to tum mujhe aunty bolna band kero , aaj se tum mujhe bhua hi bolna.

Ye bol garima apne or karan or jyoti k rishte k baare m unhe batati h.

Jise sun rohan or sonam bahut khush hote h.

Sonam :- kya sach me aap bhai or di ki bhua ho.

Garima :- ha meri bachi or undono ki hi ni m tumhari bhi bhua hi hu.

Ye bol sonam ko garima gale laga leti h , fir sonam boli.

Sonam :- bhua ji to aap bahar kyu khade ho , ander chaliye or bhai or di ko bhi to ye khush khabri dijiye wo kitne salo se apne parivar k pyaar k liye taras rahe h

Garima :- taras to m bhi rahi hu beti , apne dono jigar k tukdo ko apne sine se lagane ko , lekin wo yaha ho to sahi ghar bhi sham se lock h or undono ka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Sonam to ye sun or tension me aagayi ek to uska man raat se hi ghabra raha tha , uper se ye sun uska tension or badh gaya.

Sonam :- kya , rukiye m try kerti hu.

Sonam bhi call kerne ka try kerti h , per wahi hota h uske sath bhi.

Rohan :- kahi vo dono mere ghar p to ni.

Ye bol wo sab rohan k ghar pahunchte h to gate anita kholti h.

Or rohan ko dekh khush ho ker gale se lagake boli.

Anita :- aagaya mera bacha, kesa raha trip shimla ka.

Rohan :- acha raha mummy.

Fir wo ese hi sonam se mili or boli.

Anita sonam se :- beta tumhara kam ache se ho gaya na , is nalayak ne tujhe tang to ni kiya.

Sonam :- are ni ni aunty bhai ne to meri bahut help ki waha .

Fir anita or garima bhi ek dusre se milker bahut khush hoti h , tab garima boli..

Garima :- aapse milker bahut khushi hui didi , bhabhi akser aapke baRe me mujhe bataya kerti thi , ki kese aap or vo milker masti kiya kerte the.

Asha ki baat ker dono ki ankho me pani aajata h , tabhi rohan bola.

Rohan :- mummy , karan or jyoti yaha aaye hue h kya.

Anita :- ni to beta , infect kal sham se mane unhe dekha tak ni , unke ghar ki bhi light off thi.

Ye sun ker sonam ki tension or badh gayi or sath me garima or rohan ki bhi

Tabhi anita ko kuch yaad aaya or wo boli.

Anita :- kahi wo apne pahale wale ghar to ni gaya

Rohan :- kesi baat kerti ho mummy , wo dono bhala waha kyu jayenge , jaha unki koi ijjat na ho , unki jaha unki soteli ma hi ni , uska saga baap tak uska dushman bana hua h

Rohan ye bol to gaya fir use dhyan aaya ki karan ki bhua abhi uske samne khadi h.

Anita :- are beta to wo shivani se bhi to milne ja sakte h (or garima ki or ishara kerte ) or ese bado k bare m ulta sidha ni bolte

Rohan :- sorry bhuaji m kuch jyada hi bol gaya.

Garima :- ni ni beta tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho tumne to sach bola h bilkul , abhi chalo waha , mujhe khed h ki, mere bhaiya k hote hue bhi mere bache ese dukh dard jhel rahe h. Aaj unki apni bahan se mulakat k sath unhe har sawalo ka jwab bhi dena hoga.

Ye bol garima rohan or sonam k sath waha se nikal gayi karan k purane ghar ki or .

Wahi dusri or
Kuch der baad

Ranvir abhi gadi park kerke apne ghar me jane ko hua hi tha ki tabhi waha ek or gadi bahar aake ruki or jese hi gadi me bethe shaks utre to wo hairani ke mare ankhe fade unhe dekhta rah gaya.

Wo or koyi ni garima thi or unke sath rohan or sonam the.

Garima ne jese hi ranvir ko dekha , vo bhaiya bhaiya kahate hue ranvir k pass dodi , ranvir bhi garima ko dekhte hi bahut khush tha , or sath me hairan bhi

Ranvir garima ko gale laga leta h or khushi k aansu rote hue :- choti tu yaha , itne salo baad , m bata ni sakta m kitna khus hu m aaj

Garima :- kuch esa hi haal mera h bhaiya , aapko dekhne k lie meri ankhe taras gayi thi , aapko or bhabhi ko dekhne ko , bhai aapki narajgi to maa baba se thi na , fir apni gudiya ko kyu bhula diya,kyu aapne mujhse milna to dur ek baar baat karne ki koshish na ki . Bhagwan k khel bhi nirale h jinhe m pure india me dhund rahi thi , wo mere hi shahar me hi the

Jante ho bhaiya aapko or bhabhi ko dekne k liye meri ankhe taras gayi thi,socha tha jab aap or bhabhi milenge to fir se aap dono yuhi sine se lagaoge or wese hi apne hatho de khana khilaoge or pahale jese apna pyar lutaoge , per meri kismat to dekho aaj itne salo baad apne pita saman bhai ko to pa li , per usse pahale hi pata chala ki apni maa jesi bhabhi ko kho diya h mane .

Or bhabi bol wo garima jor jor se rone lagi,ranvir k dil me to koi dukh ni tha asha ki mot ka or hota bhi kese aakhir uska hatyara bhi to wo khud hi tha.

Ranvir :- apne bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya , manta hu mane bahut badi galti ki , lekin maa babuji se narajgi ki vajah se mujhse to wapas ganv jane ka dil na hua or karan or jyoti k peda hone k baad socha bhi ki tujhse milne jau or jab ganv gaya to pata chala teri shadi ho chuki h , mane tere bare m pata kerne ki koshis bhi bahut ki per ganv me kisi ko bhi malum ni tha, to m nirash ho ke wapas lot aaya.

Garima :- ha bhaiya, aapke jane k baad maa babuji to hasna or khushi manana hi bhul gaye the , isliye unhonne meri shadi bahut hi sadharan tarike se ker di thi or ganv k bahut kam log ko hi bulaya tha usme
Pahale to kuch saal hum banglore rahe , per fir radha k papa ne business idher hi settle ker liya.

Radha ka naam sun ranvir ko ek or jhatka laga ki jis radha ko usne apna mohra banaya tha ,wo usiki bhanji h.

Tabhi shivani apni maa kavya k sath ghar k bahar aapahunchi or boli.

Shivani :- papa aap subah subah kaha gaye the or ye aunty kon h apke sath.

Darasal shivani kabhi garima se mili ni thi or na hi garima shivani se mili thi bas dono ne ek dusre k baare me suna tha

Ranvir :- idher aao beta , inse milo ye tumhari bhua h .

Or choti ye h tumhari bhatiji shivani or tumhari bhabhi kavya.

Garima ne jab ye suna to use yaad aaya ki uska aane ka main maksad kya tha.

Garima gusse or nam ankho se :- iska matlab mane jo suna wo sach , bhai aap esa kese ker sakte ho ,aap to kitna pyaar kerte the na bhabhi se , fir bhi aapne esa kiya, yaha tak ki apne bhabhi ki teharvi tak na hone di
Kaha gaya aapka wo pyaar bhai, jiske liye aapne apna ghar parivar yaha tak ki mujhe bhi chod ker chale gaye the , kaha gaya bhai aapka wo pavitra prem

Or kyu kiya aapne apne hi bacho karan or jyoti k sath esa , boliye bhai . Jis kaaran k pichhe aapne ghar choda tha usi ko kyu thukraya, shivani ko itna pyaar or karan or jyoti se itni nafrat kyu bhai .

Boliye bhai kyu , esi kya galti ki thi un masumo ne jo unko itni badi saja di apne , wo apni maa ko to pahale hi kho chuke the or fir unhe pita ka bhi prem ni mila , jawab dijiye bhai,jawab dijiye.

Ye bol wo ghutno k bal beth rone lagi,ranvir ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki wo apni bahan ko kya jwab de ,tabhi uske kamine dimag me ek idea aaya or vo rota hua niche beth k bola.

Ranvir :- choti manta hu mujhse galti hui, per kam se kam esa to mat bol ki mane apni asha k pyar k sath dhoka kiya , mane dusri shadi isliye ki taki karan or jyoti ko maa ki kami mahasus na ho or wo sadme se bahar aasake , isliye mane kavya se shadi ki , lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki ye meri sabse badi bhul hogi

(Kavya ki or ishara kerte hue) per ulta is orat ne mere bacho ko mujhse or mujhse mere bacho ko dur ker diya , ye jab shuru shuru me aayi to pahale to achi banke rahi , lekin jab shivani hui to iske man me aakhir sotelepan ka janm ho hi gaya , isne dhire dhire mere dono bacho ko torcher kerna shuru ker diya or mere bhi man me unke liye jahar bharna shuru ker diya or m bevkuf pata ni is kamini ki chal me kese aagaya or apne hi bacho k sath durvyavahar kerne laga.

M shayad mafi k layak bhi ni hu meri bahan , chahe to mujhe jo chahe saja dede , tu kahegi to m abhi apne bacho k pero m mafi mangne ko bhi tayar hu bahan , jo tu chahe mujhe saja dele bahan , bas apne bhai ko prayashchitt ka moka dede bas choti ek moka dede bhai ko.

Ranvir ne kaafi achi acting ki , jisme garima fas gayi , kyunki ek to wo itne salo baad apne us bhai se mili thi jiski vo sabse jyada ladli thi or usne apni ankho se apne bhai or bhabhi ka pyaar dekha tha , isliye usko apni bhai ki is emotional acting pe bharosa ho gaya or dusra ye ki soteli maa wali bat bhi usko jam gayi.

Or is tarah ranvir ne apne sare paapo ka tokra bechari kavya k sir pe rakh diya , jis kaaran waha mojud sabhi kavya ko nafrat ki najar se dekh rahe the, kavya ne apni safai dete hue sach batane ki bhi koshis ki

Kavya :- ni , ye jhut h , ye jhut bol rahe h , didi ek baar aap meri baat to suno...

Garima bich me hi :- bas , vahi apni jaban ko lagam do , m apkii koi didi vidi ni hu , or aapka itna sab kuch kerne k baad bhi bolna baki h.

Sharm ni aayi un masumo k sath esa vyavahar kerte , jinke liye tumhe is ghar me laya gaya , m khud gawah hu mere bache aaj bhi tumhe choti maa choti maa kahker tumhari tarif kerte ni thakte or tumne ye sila diya un masumo k pyaar ka , sharm ni aayi tumhe ek maa hoke bhi esi ghatiya harkat kerte hue.

Ese hi bahut kuch bura bhala garima ne bola or bechari kavya chupchap sari khari khoti sunti rahi rote hue.

Kavya :- thik h didi , ager apne mujhe doshi man hi liya h to m ab kya bolu , m aaj hi apni beti k sath ye ghar chod k chali jaungi ,lekin bas ek bar ,bas ek baar mujhe mere bache karan or jyoti se mila do , taki m unko sachai se avgat kara saku.

Garima :- ha taki un ke dil me or jahar bhar sako h na , koi jarurat ni h apko unse milne ki or na hi yaha se jane ,oo kyunki kuch bhi ho ye sachai to badli ni ja sakti ki shivani bhi is ghar ki beti or meri bhatiji h or m apni bhatiji ko apne ghar se dur kahi ni jane dungi or uski umer kam h or use abhi tumhari jarurat h , isliye tum yaha rah sakti ho ,per khabardar mere bacho k karib ane ki kosis bhi ki h to

Garima ki ye baat sun kavya rote hue ghar me wapas chali jati h or fir garima shivani se boli.

Garima :-idher aao beti apni bhua se ni milogi.

Shivani sonam or rohan ki or dekhti h to wo dono ha me gardan ha me hila dete h , jise dekh shivani garima k pass pahunchti h , jise garima kaske gale laga leti h or uske pure chahare ko chum chum k gila ker deti h.

Ranvir :- are choti ab ghar k bahar hi khadi rahegi kya , apne shubh kadmo ko rakh is ghar me chahi manhusiyat ko dur ker gudiya.

Garima :- kya bhai aap bhi

Ye bol wo sab ghar k ander jate h , tabhi sonam boli.

Sonam :- uncle karan bhai or jyoti di yaha aaye the kya.

Shivani udass hoker :- ni to di , bhaiya or didi to yaha us din k baad kabhi lote hi ni or unse mile bhi mujhe kayi din ho gaye .

Tabhi ranvir apna muh dhone k bahane toilet me jaker jaldi se police ko phone kerta h or apna plan ko change ker deta h , pahale jaha direct karan or jyoti ki mot ki khabar sidhe pahuchane ka plan tha ranvir ka , ab uski jagah usne plan change ker ye ker diya tha ki , karan or jyoti ka accident ki khabar hi ghar pe pahuchegi or ye bataya jayega ki unhe hospital le jaya ja raha h or hospital m jab sab ghar pahuchege to doctor ye bol dega ki humne in dono ko bachane ki bahut koshis ki lekin , ye bach ni paye

Ranvir ne esa isliye kiya tha ki uski bahan ko shak na ho or wo apni powers se sachai ka pata lagane ki na koshis kare.

Fir wo wapas aaker hall me beth jata h or purani bate kerne lagta h garima se , tabhi garima boli.

Garima :- bhai mujhe karan or jyoti ki bahut chinta ho rahi h . Wo dono kal se gayab h or unka phone bhi ni lag raha.

Ranvir :- are wo dono kahi gaye honge office k kaam se choti tum chinta kyu kerti ho , tumhare bhatija bhatiji bahut samjhdar h.

Garima :- ni bhai esa to koi bhi office ka kam tha hi ni , infact kal hi to unhonne apna sara kam niptaya tha or mane unhe chuti di thi

Tabhi sonam k phone pe karan k no se phone aata h . Jise dekh sonam khush ho jati h.

Sonam :- rohan bhai , bhua dekho bhai ka phone aaraha h.

Darasal ye phone ranvir ki police ne hi janbujh ker karan ki sim se kiya tha , jo uske phone m pade tute hue mobile me se kismat se mil gaya tha or ranvir ne hi esa kerne ko bola tha

Sonam phone pick ker :- hello bhai ka kaha ho aap , yaha hum kitna pareshan ho rahe h.

Inspector :- hello mis m inspector ..... Bol raha hu , ye kya aapke bhai ka no h.

Sonam police ka nam sun ghabra gayi or boli :- jii ha ye mere bhaiya ka hi no h sir , per ye aapke pas kese , sab thik to h na sir.

Inspector :- ji darasal aapke bhai ka or apki shahar k bahar wale highway k pas ek accident ho gaya h , unki takkar ek truck se ho gayi thi shayad or unke sath ek ladki bhi thi , unki identity dekhi to pata chala wo bhi shayad apki bahan h .

Sonam rote hue :- kya

Sonam ne to jese suna to mano uska dil dhadkna hi ruk gayi ho , uske hath se phone hi chut gaya or wo dhadam se sofe pe gir gayi.

Rohan dar ke :- kya hua sonu , tu chilayi kyu or tu ro kyu rahi h

Sonam kuch bol hi ni rahi thi or ro rahi thi , tab garima ne phone utha ke baat kerti h to inspector sari baat bata k bolta h.

Inspector :- mam hum in dono ko city hospital le ja rahe h , aap dono bhi vaha pahuchiye

Jhatka to garima ko bhi ye sun bahut bada laga ,wo bhi rone lagi , lekin usne khud ko sambhal ker sabko sari baat batayi or sab hospital ki or nikal gaye ,kavya ne bahut bola ki usko bhi sath le chalo lekin kisi ne uski ek baat na suni or use wahi chod gaye or wo bechari roti rah gayi.

Hospital pahunch ker unhe pata chala ki karan or jyoti ko leker police abhi tak pahunchi hi ni , ranvir ko bahut gussa aaraha tha , kyunki uska sara plan bigad gaya tha.

Tabhi waha inspector or 2 constable sir jhukaye pahunche to garima unpe chilayi.

Garima :- ye kesi laparwahi h aapki inspector,kaha h mere bache , kya itni der lagti h aap logo ko .

Inspector :- sorry mam humne bahut koshis ki..

Inspector unhe kuch der pahale ki ghatna batata h.

Darasal police karan k ghar walo ko dikhane k liye un dono ki body ko jis ambulance me je jarahi thi , to bich me padne wale jungle k raste me us gadi ki brake pata ni apne aap kese fail ho gayi or handle lock ho gaya , jisse wo jaker pedo se takra gati or wo ambulance blast ho gayi , jisse uske chithade chithade ud gaye or ander rakhi bodies or driver k bhi.

Garima k sath jese hi sabne ye suna to sabka mano kaleja hi fat gaya or unke dilo ki dhadkan hi ruk gayi .

Sab waha fut fut k rone lage , sonam to ye sun behosh hi ho gayi , jise dekh rohan or garima ghabra gaye or use jaldi se use wahi admit karwate h.

Ranvir to bahar se rone ka natak ker raha tha ,ander se to wo jallad bahut khush tha , bhale hi ye uska plan na ho per wo fir bhi bachne m kamyab ho gaya tha.

Tabhi radha or riya bhi waha aaphunche or radha ne apni maa se pahuncha .

Radha :- kya hua mummy aap sab ro kyu rahe ho or yaha hospital me kya ker rahe ho aap log yaha kya ker rahe ho.
M riya di k ghar pahunchi to aunty ne bataya ki aap sab shivani k ghar gaye ho or humne waha jate hue raste me rohan bhai ko phone kiya to unhone jaldi se yaha pahuchne ko bola.

Garima radha ko gale lagake rote hue sari baat bata deti h.

Jise sun ek baar to radha k bhi ankh me bhi pani aagaye or sath me riya k bhi , unki ankhon k same karan or jyoti k sath bitaye har pal ane lage , lekin fir unki samne kal wali ghatna bhi aagayi or wapas nafrat ka jahar unke man me bhar gaya.

Sham tak sab yu hi rote rahe , sonam ko abhi tak hosh ni aaya tha ,radha or riya ne baki sab ko kese n kese samjhake ghar bhej diya antim sanskar ki teyariyo k liye , wese body to bachi ni thi , per bache kuche sharir k tukdo ka antim sanskar bhi jaruri tha, lekin rohan na mana or wahi ruk gaya.

Kuch der baad sonam ko hosh aagaya or vo chillate hue uth gayi .

Sonam :- bhaiiiiiiiiiii.

Or fir jor jor se fut fut ke rone lagi , rohan radha or riya k sath bhag k uske pas pahuncha or rohan ko dekhte hi sonam uske gale lag ke rone lagi or sath me rohan bhi rone laga.

Dono kafi der tak rote rahe , tab radha ne badi nishthurata se bola.

Radha :- ab bas bhi kero aap dono jo ho gaya so ho gaya , or kitni der tak yuhi rote rahoge.

Radha k ye ese vachan sun rohan or sonam herani ki koi sima na rahi or wo bole.

Rohan :- radha ye kesi baate ker rahi h tu , yaha aaj mane tumne apne , hum sab ne apne bhai jesa dost or bahan jesi saheli ko kho diya h or tu bol rahi h jo hua so hua.

Riya :- to kya galat bola usne betu , jo hona tha wo ho gaya or us jesa insan tha bhi is layak or sath me uski bahan bhi.

Rohan jor se chilaya :- diiiiiii , aapki himmat kese hui mere bhai or bahan k bare me ese bolne ki , ager aaj aapki jagah kisine ye baat boli hoti to m uski jaban bahar khich leta uske muh se.

Radha :- chilayiye mat bhai , di bilkul sahi bol rahi h , jo harkat un dono ne kal ki h , wo aap sunoge to aap bhi yahi bologe..

Ye bol radha kal wali ghatna k bare me rohan or sonam ko vistarapoorvak bata deti h , jise sun sonam or rohan bhi puri tarah shonk ho jate.

Radha :- acha hua sonu , mar gaye wo dono , verna kya pata jo harkat usne maya di k sath ki , wo kal tere sath bhi ker sakte the , mujhe to lagta h vo jyoti bhi usske sath mili hui thi

Abhi radha ne ye baat boli hi thi ki , ek jhanatedar thappad uske galo pe pada, jo kisi or ne ni sonam ne mara tha.

Sonam gusse se chilayi :- kamini teri himmat kese hui mere bhai k bare me ese apshabd bolne ki , tujhe jara si sharam bhi ni aayi apne us bhai k liye itni ghatiya baat bolne k liye, jiski vajah se tu aaj sahi salamat khadi h.

Ek ni aneko baar jisne apni jaan pe khel k teri jaan bachai , tere ko apni sagi bahan jesa jisne pyar diya , teri choti se choti pasand na pasand ka khayal rakha or tum unhi ke ganga jese pavitr charitra ko kalankit jer rahi ho

Riya :- ha to kya help kerne or pyar dene se kisi ka bhi rape kerne ka haq mil jayega kya use .

Rohan :- mujhe bahut sharm aarahi h ye kahate hue ki aap meri di ho , itne samay sath rahakar bhi aap karan or jyoti ko samjh na saki di , or ye meri sonu itne kam samay me ye baat samjh gayi ki chahe duniya idher ki udher ho jaye , lekin mera dost mera bhai esa ghatiya kam kerne ki sapne me bhi ni soch sakta , lekin aap ye baat na samjh payi di.

Or aapne ek baar uski baat tak na suni or dusro ki baato me aake mere dost pe itna bada kalank thop diya.

Riya :- suni sunayi baato pe ni betu , mane apni ankho se dekha h use maya k sath jabardasti kerte hue

Rohan nam ankho se chilaya :- mat kaho mujhe betu , mis riya gupta , aaj aapke is ghatiya or nich karm k kaaran mar gaya h apka betu aapke liye , aaj se aapka or mera koi nata ni h, chali jaiye meri najaro se dur.

Riya to ye sun puri tarah shok ho gayi , aajse pahale rohan ne kabhi usse ese baat na ki thi or nam leker to bilkul bhi ni , jis kaaran wo roti hui waha se bhag gayi.

Sonam radha se :- bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha jaruri ni har baar ankho dekha drishy hi sach ho , tumne mere se jyada time bhai k sath gujara , lekin fir bhi tu unhe ache se ni samjh payi radha.

Radha :- sonu meri bat to sun

Sonam :- mat bol mujhe sonu , chali ja yaha se ,ni chahiye mujhe esi saheli jo apne us bhai ki bhi sagi na ho saki , jisne uski khushi k liye kya kuch ni kiya , wo meri kya saheli banegi

Or ha chinta mat kerna tu , m teri ye harkat bhua ko bata ker unhe or taklif ni pahuchaungi, or na hi rohan bhai esa karenge ,lekin tu ye mat sochna ki sachai jyada din tak chupi rahegi or jab tere samne sachai aayegi , tere pas prayashchitt ka moka tak ni hoga.

Ye bol sonam ne radha se muh mod liya , or radha bhi vaha se rote hue chali gayi.

Agle din karan or jyoti k avasheshon ka antim sanskar ker diya gaya or sonam bhi discharge hoke apne ghar aagayi , garima ne use bahut manaya ki wo unke sath uuske ghar chale , per sonam ne kuch samay akele rahane ki baat bol ker mana ker diya

Rohan or sonam ne apne wade k anusar sachai kisi ko ni batayi , lekin undono ne radha or riya se apna sara nata tod liya or rohan ne bhi anita se sonam ko sambhalne ka bahana ker , apne ghar se sonam k ghar me shift ho gaya tha, anita bhi sonam k liye man gayi , kyuki wo bhi janti thi ki karan or jyoti k baad vo sabse close Rohan k thi , isliye anita bhi man hi gayi.

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Rohan :- acha lagta h tumhe apne kanha pe bharosa ni raha sonu.

Sonam :- ni bhai ye kesi baat bol rahe ho aap ,ek aapke siva kanha hi to h jispe mera bharosa bacha h , bharosa h mujhe apne kanha pe ki unhone bhai or di ko kuch ni hone diya hoga or wo jaldi hi mujhe mere bhaiya or di ko lota denge.

Rohan :- bharosa h na , fir chalo khana khao , jab karan or jyoti wapas aayenge or tumhe is halat me dekhenge to kya unhe acha lagega , wo tumhe bahut datenge or tumse jyada to wo mahashay meri band bajayega ki mane tera khayal na rakha or meri bahan mujhe pitne ka shonk ni h.

Rohan ki yahi khasiyat thi ki wo rote hue chahre pe bhi muskurahat la deta tha , wo bhi apne dost jesa hi tha ,jisse kisi ka dukh ni dekha jata tha or yaha to uski khas dost or uski bahan sonam thi.

Sonam rohan ki is bat pe thoda muskura padi or itne din baad sonam k chahahre pe halki si hi sahi , per muskan dekh k rohan k chare pe bhi ek santushti or chen bhari muskan aayi or wo bade hi pyar se sonam ko khana khilane laga ,tabhi sonam ne roti ka ek tukda lete hue boli.

Sonam :- bhai m janti hu aapne bhi meri tarah parso se kuch ni khaya , lijiye aap bhi khaiye.

Ese hi dono bhai bahan khana khate h ek dusre k hatho , fir sonam ko rohan uske kamre me lejata h or apni god me uska sir rakh sulane lagta h.

Sonam :- bhai ek baat puchu , aapko sach me kanha ji pe bharosa h ya bas ap mera dil rakhne ko ye bate bol rahe ho.

Rohan :- ni sonu mujhe sach me kanha ji pe bharosa h , lekin unse bhi jyada bharosa mujhe tere vishwas pe h , kyunki m janta hu ki ek bahan ka vishwas or dil ki baat kabhi jhuti ni hosakti or uska vishwas ko tutne to swayam bhagwan bhi ni dete.

Yuhi bate kerte dono bhai bahan so gaye

Or wahi dusri or jab ye baat kavya ko pata chali ki uske ankho k tare ab ni rahe or unki body tak na mili to wo bichari to bawali si ho gayi thi , wo bhi lagbhag sare din rote rahati or apne lachari k liye khud ko kosti rahati , wo to bas apni dusri beti shivani k liye khud ko sambhale hui thi , verna uski vo manodasha ho gayi thi ki wo khud ko kuch bhi ker sakti thi

Shivani ka hal bhi kuch kam bura ni tha , niyati ko is bichari masum pe bhi taras na aaya tha or ise hamesha dukh hi mila , pahale bachpan me hi apne bhai bahan se dur hone ka dukh , fir itne salo baad jab vo mili to unse bura bartav kerne ka jo natak kerti , uska dukh , phir itne salo baad jab usse bhai bahan ka pyar mila to , niyati se wo bhi ni dekha gaya or chin liya, usse uske bhai bahan ko.

Wo masum sare din apne kamre me bethi karan or jyoti ki tasvir ko leke roti rahati , usko garima kese n kese bhula fusla k khana khila to deti , lekin vo apni jarurat se bahut kam hi khati , jis karan vo kamjor padne lagi

Or ye khabar jab gita tak pahunchi to dukh usko bhi kam na hua , karan or jyoti se bhale hi uska dur dur tak ka koi rishta na ho , lekin un dono ke prem k kaaran gita se unka dil ka rishta jud gaya tha. Jis kaaran gita ko bhi kafi bada dhaka jhatka laga , wo bhi.khub royi.

Priya bechari ko to kuch samjh hi ni thi ki ho kya raha h , or uske masum dil pe koi bura asar na pade , isliye use to is baare me kisi ne bataya bhi ni tha .

Wo bichari baar bar karan or jyoti k bare me puchti rahati , lekin use ye bata kar sab tal dete ki karan or jyoti abhi bahar gaye hue h or wo jald hi wapas lot k aayenge.

Jis karan vo masum roj ghar k bahar gate le khadi ho ker apne bhaiya or didi ka intezaar kerti rahati , jise dekh garima or rone lagti.

Radha or riya bhi ajib halat me fasi hui thi, kabhi to dono ko karan or jyoti k sath bitaye pyaar bhare palo ki bar bar yaad aati , jis kaaran vo karan or jyoti ko yaad ker khub rone lagti , lekin fir wapas nafrat ka parda un dono ki ankho pe pad jata.

Wahi rasatal lok me aman , shweta or kaya ko bhi kafi time se bechaini ho rahi thi or jab unhone apni shaktiyo se karan k bare me pata kiya or unhe karan or jyoti ki mot ki khabar pata chali , to wo sab bhi shok me dub gaye or unke sath pura rasatal bhi us vyakti ki mrityu k shok me dub gaya , jinki vajah se unhe aajadi mili thi.

Aman ko ye to pata chal gaya tha ki karan ka accident ni murder hua h or vo apne bhai jese dost ki mot ka badla lene prathvi pe jana chahata tha, lekin rasatal k niyamanusar rasatal ka naya raja k raj , ko jab tak pura ek saal na ho jaye , wo rasatal lok se bahar ni ja sakta , is kaaran vo bichara apni majburi pe rota hua , apni bahan k sath shok me duba hua tha.or kaya ka bhi hal bahut bura tha , vo bhi karan ki yaad me din bhar roti rahati.

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Prathvi se kayi prakash yojan dur ek bahut hi sunder lok tha ,jaha pariyo ka raaj tha , yani wo parilok tha , lekin ab yaha kaal bhanu k dost prachandasur , jo ek bahut hi mayavi rakshas tha uska raaj tha , jisne parilok k raja som or rani shrutkirti ko bandi banake , parilok ko hathiya liya tha or apne hatya charo or dushkrityo se usne parilok jese sunder lok ko nark jesa bana dala tha , jispe sirf asuro ka raaj tha , har or khun kharaba macha hua tha or sari praja dusht prachandasur k aatank k kaaran trahi mam trahi mam ker ishwer ko pukarti rahati.

Lekin ye kya aaaj to parilok ka najara bilkul badal chuka tha , aaj yaha parilok k wasiyo ki ni , balki dusht asuro ki puri sena ki kati fati lashe padi thi or prachandasur , ghutno k bal bandhi bana hua jhuka hua tha .

Or uske samne ek yuvak khada tha , jiska pura sharir kale or nile kapdo se dhaka hua tha or chahare per ek mask tha, jisme se uski nili jhil di ankhe saf saf dikh rahi thi or hath me ek trishul tha.

Prachandasur us yuvak k aage gidgida raha tha :- shama , shama ker dijiye hey mahan yodha , aap to mahaveer h or shama to veero ka aabhushan hoti h.

M aapko vachan deta hu m patal lok lot jaunga or wapas kabhi parilok ki or dekhunga tak ni

Yuvak :- shama ka avsar diya tha tumhe chetavani k sath per tum na mane prachandasur , ab tumhara kuch ni ho sakata.kyunki

"Ddandnayak na kabhi kuch bhulta h or na hi dobara kisi ko shama kerta h"

Ye bol us yuvak ne apne hath me pakda trishul prachandasur k sine me ghop diya or jab wo raksas dharashayi ho jamin pe gira , tab us yuvak ne us asur k sine pe per rakh diya or jiske sath hi wo rakshas jal k rakh ho gaya.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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