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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

Kya mujhe story restart kerni chahiye

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Harry rocks

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Very nice update bhai
Maza as gya
Viraaj aur Maya apne kaminepan
Or utaaru hai ab unhe dand milna
Hi chahiye wo jald hi milega bhi

Karan ko Yun mahadev ki aagya
Ki avehlna nai karni chahiye thi
Jyoti to Karan ko samjha sakti hai

Radha ko bhi ab apni galti ka ehsas
Ho Raha h jaise jaise wo kawach
Khatam ho Raha hai uska Dil
Pehle ki tarah saaf ho Raha h

Bhale hi Riya aur Radha be Karan
aur Jyoti k saath galat Kiya ho but
Ab Karan aur Jyoti ko inhe viraaj aur
Maya se bachana hi hoga

Sonam aur Rohan ne bhi bahut
Dukh jhela hai Karan aur Jyoti
Ki maut ki khabar sunke unhe bhi
Karan aur Jyoti k loutne se hi
Khushi milegi

VP k liye abhi tension aur badhegi
Jab Karan aur Jyoti wapis aa jayenge
Aur vaise bhi MAA MAHALAKSHMI JI
ka aashirwaad hai ki Karan aur Jyoti
Ko jeevan mein kabhi bhi dhan
Aishwarya sukh sampati ki kami
Nai hogi aur MAA ka aashirwaad kaise
Khaali ja sakta hai

Swati k aane se pehle hi Karan
Aur Jyoti wapis dharti Lok pe
Aa jaye aur Swati k aane se
Pehle hi sab kuch wo theek Kar
De taaki Swati k hone wale Bache
Par koi bura asar na pade

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Nice update..

vP ko apne asuro k Marne ki jankari mil hi gai. Abtk to wo kafi khush tha ki rakshak ki maut hone s ab wo surakshit h but aisa ni h .. ab wo b scoh m pad gaya h ki kisne kia hoga ye sav..

Mahadev ka krodh swabhavik h kyuki Karan n sirf personal reason k liye apne duties ko follow karne s Mana krdia . Ye to purnta galat h.
Devi Chaya n mahadev s time maanga h ki wo khud samjhaegni Karan ko but wo kaise ye karengi ye dekhna h..


Dusri taraf dharti p to ab anarth honewala h..
Viraaj Maya ki kaali kartute abhi b jaari h aur ab bht jald unka nishana Riya k sath sath Radha p b h. Riya to ABI Rohan ki ignorance ki wajah s sad h aur wahi Radha k Dil m b ab ye baat aarahi h ki Kash wo Karan ki baat sun leti.
Dono ko hi apni galtio ka eshahsh h but abtk unke Mann m ab b doubts h Karan ko leke but Jo b ho ab to Karan jytoi ko kch na kch karna hi padega wo b bht jald .

Riya Radha dono ko misunderstanding Hui thi but agar unke sath viraaj Maya n kch galat krdia to wo acha ni hoga .

Dusri taraf ab swati ki pregnancy ki news sun Kar Rohan pareshan h ki kaise Swati ko Sach chupae kyuki wo khud aane wali h ek week m.

Ab to Karan Jyoti Jo entry leni hi chahiye kyuki jarurat sabko h. Sirf yahan ni balki Naina ko b..


Let's see Kya hota h..
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WAAH BHAI BAHUT HI KHOOBSOORAT SHAANDAAR FANTASTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATE.



VIRAJ AUR MAYA APNA QAHI GHATIYA KAAM YAHA BHI SHURU KAR DIYE HAIN .
PAR JALD HI INKO BHI APNI KARNI KA PHAL MILEGA.AB VIRAJ RITU KE CHAKKAR ME OAD GAYA HAI.DEKHATE HAIN DONO KITNE KAMYAAB HOTE HAI.
PATAL LOK ME KUABAR SO PAHUCH GAYI HAI KI PRACHANDASUR BHI MARA GAYA JISSE VP PAGAL HI GAYA HAI .EI BAAR TOH USKE DIMAAG NE HINT DIYA PAR KAHTE HAIN NA VINAASH KALE VIPREET BUDDHI.
ISLIYE WOH APNE VIVEK KI BAAT KO TAAL GAYA.
YAHA MAHADEV BHI RUSHT HAIN KARAN AUR JYOTI SE KYUN KI IN DONO NE APNE PRATHAM KARYA JANKALYAN KO HI INKAAR KAR DIYA.JO KI INKA MUKHYA UDDESHYA HAI.MATA CHHAYA NE BHAGWAAN SHIV SE WAQT MANGA HAI DONO KO SAMJHANE KE LIYE AB YE BHI DEKHANA HAI MATA CHHAYA UNKO KAISE SAMJHATI HAI YA KISKE DWARA SAMJHATI HAI.
SONAM AB KHUSH RAHNE LAGI HAI KANHA KE DWARA SWAPNA DIKHAYE JAANE KE BAAD .
SONAM KO YE BHI SAMAJH AA GAYA HAI KI MAIN DUKHI RAHUNGI TOH ROHAN BHI DUKHI HO JAYEGA.RITU ROHAN KO KO MANANE ME LAGI HAI PAR ROHAN HAI KI AISA NARAJ HO GAYA HAI KI MAANNE KI TAIYAR HI NAHI.LEKIN ROHAN NE JO BAAT KAHI HAI KI RISHTA SIRF KHOON KA NAHI HOTA BALKI KUCH RISHTE DIL SE AISE BAN JAAYE HAIN KI TIDE SE BHI NAHI TOOTATE.
AUR JAB UN LOGON NE KARAN KO APNI SAFAYI DENE KA MOUKA NAHI DIYA TOH ROHAN KAISE DE DE.
RADHA BHI 50 50 KE CHAKKAR ME GHANCHAKKAR BANI HUYI HAI USKO SAHI GALAT SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA HAI.
BHAI WAKAYI ME KAHANI ITNI GAJAB MOD AUR FLOW ME CHAL RAHI HAI KI KYA KAHE .
BHAI CHHA GAYE HO AAP TOH.



BHAI AAP PAHALE APNE HEALTH PAR DHYAN DO BAAD ME STORY.
GOD BLESS YOU BHAI
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Ha g ku bhaii


Team up kar ke khelte hai

Kya hua bhai

Firstly congratulations for second part and get well soon bro we r waiting for new updates

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first of all i am highly thankful of you brother
ke apne mujhe ye story recomend ki mujhe toh bs ye incest lgi but jb padna shuru believe me bhai i just love this story and your writing skills are awesome bhai

i once again highly thankful of you to suggest me this story

now coming to the story review untill now

bhai aap ne story ke sath sath jo indian mythology ka mix up kia i just love that from bottom of my heart

karan ki jyoti ke liye hr ik feeling aapni katai jehar treke se likhi hai jo sidja dil pe lgi hai

karan aur jyoti ka nature la javab hai i love both of them mujhe ye jaan ke acha lga ki kavya, shivani, rohan, and sonam ka karan ke liye love abhi bhi vaosa ho hai but had se jyada increase kr gya hai

karan phir se vo dard nhi sehna chahta jo iisne uss time sha hoga jb kisi ne iski baat ka vishvas toh kya suni tk nhi thi isliye vo vapas earth pr jane sse ktra rha hai jo khi shi bhi hai but usse apni duty nho bhulno chahiye and i hope mata chaya ke idea se vo samajh jaye ki niyati se bhaga nhi ja skta
ab bs unke bapas aane ka intzaar hai jb aayenge toh kya hoga vo sabh padne ke liye
mai koi jaldi mai mhi balki jo dil mai aaaya usse hi likh kr review de rha hoon

and i once again highly thankful of you to suggesting me this beautiful story

mujhe apki writing ke liye passion bhi bahut pasand aaya jo aapne health ko chod update dia but mai chahta hun ki aap pehle fully recover hon tanki update jald se jald aana shuru hon

FROM NOW I AM YOUR REGULAR READER
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Waiting for update bro




Waiting update

Waiting for next update bro all the best


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Super fantastic mind-blowing update

Karan or jyoti ko swym mhadev ne bchaya or shani dev ne clone bnakar uhe earth pr mara hua dikhaya
Mhadev ne unki urja ko chhupakar vp or asuro ko bhrmit kar diya ki rakshak ab nhi rha
Ye dono apne mhadev ke kailash phuch gye or mhadev ke darshan bhi kiye
Apno se mile dhoke ne karan or jyoti ke pyar ko to bdha diya or we khul kr pyar krne lge h pr shayd karan ke andar nafrat ne jgh bna li h wo sonam shivani or rohan ko bhi shayd bhul gya ki we bhi ab uspr ykin nhi karte
Naina to koma me chali gyi h shayd ab lgta h karan ke milne ke bad hi koma se waps aayegi
Ye kya karan ko mhadev ne vardan de diya patniyo ka ab uski watt lgne wali h
Karan ne mhadev ka prithivi wapas jane ka aadesh thukra diya
Devi chaya ne nhi mnaya to shayd kuchh anrth ho jayega
Mhadev jitne bhole h unhe krodh utni hi jldi aata h
Mza aa gya harry bhai
Bhoot umda update h
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