Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Naina]

Karan ke karnamo me ek aur karnama jud gya. ridhi ko apna bahan bana liya...
waise purani updates ke hisap se karan ki Kai patniya ya premika hogi... kahi ye ridhi bhi...
aise jyoti ne ekdum thik baat boli hai karan ko ki past ko bhul jao, present aur future ko apnao. Agar karan ko kuch karna hi hai to khud ko innocent prove karwao unke samne, jinhone uspe bishwash na kiya.

chalo ye achha huwa ki karan ne aman,jhumki aur Kaya ko rok liya..

Oh to karan aur jyoti ke dil me gahra asar padha jab unko naina ke condition bade me pata chala... yani ki karan aur jyoti ka bahot hi purana rista hai naina se... ( bahan, mouisi, chachi, mami, bua, fufi, taai, ect.) hai.
hmm to karan & jyoti abhi naina ki madad nahi kar sakte.. kab milenge ye waqt ke upor nirbhar karta hai.
ush mala me jo urja thi.. asal me kya hai?
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update....... Keep it up

 

[Rohan008]

Update no :- 108
Guest room me thodi der rest kerne k baad karan or jyoti aage ki kuch planning ker rahe the.ki tabhi unke gate p knock hua .

Karan :- ander aajaiye gate khula h.

Karan k itna bolne pe gate khulta h or vakil sahab ki beti ander enter kerte h , jiske hath me nashte ki tray thi , jo wo karan or jyoti k liye layi thi.

Ladki :- sorry mane tum dono ko disturb to ni kiya na.

Jyoti :- are ni ni esi koi baat ni h ...

Jyoti bolte bolte ruk gayi , kyunki wo unka naam janti hi ni thi , tab wo ladki boli.

Ladki :- oh sorry m tum dono ko apna naam batana to bhul hi gayi , hi mera naam ridhima h , per tumne mere papa ko mama bola h , to is hisab se m tumhari didi hui , to tum mujhe ridhi di bol sakte ho.

Ridhima bahut hi simple ladki thi , usne apni graduation puri ker li thi or apne papa ka khayal rakhi thi or ek company ki manager thi , use kabhi bhi ye bf gf wale chakkr me koi interest raha hi ni tha , uska sara dhyan apne carrier or apne pita ki seva m laga rahata.

Ridhima ki baat sun achanak se karan ko riya ki yaad aagayi , use wo yaad aagaya jab wo pahali baar riya se mila tha or bilkul isi tarah riya ne use apna bhai bana liya tha , uski ankho k samne riya k sath bitaye pyar bhare pal aane lage , fir agle hi pal uski ankho k samne us hadse ka drishy bhi aagaya , jab riya ne usko buri tarah dutkarke or bina koi baat sune usse bura bhala bol sara rishta tod liya tha.

Uske kano me riya or radha k wo sare apshabd gunjane lage , jo un dono ne use bole the.

(Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di , tu ek hawasi h)

Ye sab yaad aate hi karan ki ankho me ashru or mukh per krodh k bhav ubharne lage.

Jyoti apne bhai ki halat ko samjh gayi thi or use shant kerne k liye uske hath ko apne hath me tham liya , jyoti k sparsh ko paker karan dhire dhire shant ho gaya.

Ridhi pareshan ho :- kya hua bhai , mane kuch galat bol diya kya , ager esa h to please mujhse gussa mat hona , itne samay baad to mujhe koi mila h jise m bhai kah saku verna yaha to sabko ladkiyo se ek hi rishte chahiye.

Jesa ki mane bataya ki ridhi ek sidhi sadhi ladki thi , jo apne pita ki ekloti santaan thi to use hamesha ek bhai ya bahan ki kami khalti , usne aaspas k kisi ladke ko bhai apna muh bola bhai banane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin ridhi jesi khubsurat ladki ko ladke keSe aajkal k havas k pujari type ladke apni bahan man lete , isliye wo akeli hi rahi , aaj jab usne apne pita k liye usne karan or jyoti k muh se mana shabd suna to ye ummid leker aayi ki vo to use apni bahan k roop me apna lega, lekin karan k hav bhav k badlte dekh usko apni aakhiri ummid tutti najar aayi .

Karan ne ridhi k muh se uski masumiyat bhari baate suni to wo shant ho gaya.

Karan :- aapse kisne kaha ki m aapse gussa hu " didi ".

Ridhi to ye sun uchal padi or khushi se boli :- kya bole , ek baar or bolo na.

Karan :- kisne kaha m apse naraj hu

Ridhi :- ye ni iske aage jo bola tha vo.

Karan muskan k sath :- didi.

Ye sun ridhi khushi k mare karan k gale lag gayi , karan ne ridhi ki khushi k liye use apni bahan k roop me apna to liya tha, lekin uska dil abhi bhi naye rishte banane k liye ready na tha .

Or esa hona swabhavik hi h , jinse sabse jyada pyaar kare or vo hi vishwasghat kare to sab kuch sahi hona itna aasan ni hota.

Karan k dil me abhi bhi vo baate chal rahi thi , jiske chalte karan k ankho se ansu ki bunde nikalne lagi , jise jyoti ne jhat se puch diya , jo ridhi ko dekh khush thi , ridhi ko to karan k ansu ni dikhe gale lage hone ki vajah se , lekin jyoti ne dekh liye the or wo ni chahati thi ki ridhi ko jo itne salo baad khushi mili uspe pani fire isliye usne karan k ansu poochte hue , apne hoto ko apne hatho se fela , karan ko smile kerne ka ishara kiya.

Kuch der baad ridhi apne kamre m chali gayi or karan or jyoti bed pe let gaye .

Jyoti karan se ek side se chipki hui thi or vo boli.

Jyoti :- bhai kab tak un logo ko yaad kerke rote rahoge , jinse ab hamara koi nata hi ni , jane dijiye na bhai un purani yaado ko kyu taklif dete ho aap khud ko un logo ko yaad ker.

Karan :- kash ye itna aasan hota gudiya , bhale hi unhone humse banavati pyaar kiya , per hamara pyaar to sacha hi tha na gudiya unke liye , dil se apna mana tha na humne , to keSe bhula du unhe.

Jyoti gusse se :- bhai mane kab kaha aap sab bhul jaiye , jo un logo ne humare sath kiya , ye waqt bhulne ka ni balki apni nirdoshta sabit kerte hue , un logo ko is baat karane ka h ki unhone kitna bada paap kiya h mere bhai pe itna ghatiya iljam laga ke.

Bhulne ko to m us rishte ko bol rahi ho , jis kaaran aapne nirdosh hote hue bhi itna sab kuch suna , verna kisi me itna dam ni jo aapko bura bhala bol sake aap pe hath utha sake.

Bhul jaiye un swarthi rishto ko bhai , jinhone hume dukh diya , rishte wo hote h jo humari shakti bane hamara sahara bane na ki wo jo hume kamjor banaye , hume musibat k samay asahay chod de.

Jyoti ki ankho me radha or riya k prati rosh saf saf dikhlayi de raha tha. Jise dekh karan ne filhal k liye baat ko badalne ko hi uchit samjha.

Karan :- thik h meri maharani sahiba jesa aap kaho.

Karan :- vese kya m jaan sakta hu kya ms sharma aaj sham ko free h .

Jyoti nakhre dukhate hue :- hmm hu to sahi , per m jan sakti hu janab ki aap esa kyu puch rahe ho.

Karan halke s jyoti k hoth chum :- wo kya h na mane socha ki , aaj sham ko apni soni si gd ko date pe le jaya jaye.

Karan ki is harkat pe jyoti sharma ke karan k sine me muh chipa li.

Karan majak kerte hue:- oh oh dekho to bholi madam ko ese sharma rahi h jese first time ho , verna madam ka khud ka mud hota h to mere hoto ki to kha hi jati h.

Jyoti ye sun karan k sine me pyaar se mukke marte hue boli.

Jyoti :- chi kitne bigad gaye ho aap bhaiya , bhala apni bahan se ese koi bolta h , jaiye m aapse baat ni kerti.

Karan :- are yaar esa mat kero , apni to date h na sham ko.

Jyoti :- ji ni date vate sab cancel or aapko jana h to kisi or ko dhund lo.

Karan majak. Kerte hue :-ok jesi(sochne ka natak kerte hue) tumhari marji , ab or kise leker jau.

Hmm ha kyu na kaya ko bula lu , kaafi din ho gaye apni friend se mile isi bahane vo dharti lok bhi ghum legi.

Kaya ka naam sun to jyoti uchal padi , or boli.

Jyoti :- ji ni kisi ko bulane ki jarurat ni h m h ready hu date k liye.

Karan jyoti ki hadbadahat dekh hasne laga or jyoti sharmate hue fir karan p tut ladi.

Chaliye ab kaya ka jikar aahi chuka h to kyu na rasatal ka bhi ek chakkar laga liya jaye.

Location :- rasatal lok

Aman shonitpur k rajya ko bahut achi tarah se sambhal raha tha , Dracula k barbaad kiye hue un ganvon ko halat ab kafi had tak shdher chuki thi .

Dracula k dar se jinhone shonitpur chod diya tha , ab vo log vapas dhire dhire lotne lage the.

Kaya ne bhi apne pad ki garima or kartvya ka palan puri nishtha se ker rahi thi , vo aman k sath mil rasatal lok me bache baki shetani pishachon ko khatam kerne me lagi hui thi , jo ya to kisi dusre area m chupe hue the , ya jo bhag gaye the.

Kul mila k praja aman k raaj m khushali se apna jivan vyapt ker rahi thi , sab aman ko pure dil se apna maharaj k roop me apna chuke the.

Wahi kaya ne ek or acha kaam ka aarambh ker diya , wo ab rajya ki ladkiyo ko bhi ashtra.shastra ki vidya sikhane lagi , jiske liye usne ek vishesh vidhyalay bhi banwaya jisme jhumki k sath rajya ki sabhi ladkiya shastra vidya sikhne aati , kyunki kaya k sujhav pe hi aman ne ye niyam banaya tha ki rajya ki har kanya or yuvati ko astra vidya sikhna avashyak h taki vo apni raksha swayam kerne me samarth ho.

Lekin jaha ek or har jagh khushali thi , vahi dusri or aman , jhumki or kaya khud hamesha dukhi hi rahate , jabse unhe karan ki mrityu k bare me pata chala or mahadev k kavach k kaaran unki shaktiya aage ki sachai ka pata na laga payi thi.

Aman din raat pratishodh ki aag me jal raha tha or ek din uske sabra ka bandh tut gaya.

Aman or jhumki apne kamre me isi vishay pe baat ker rahe the , jaha kaya bhi mojud thi.

Aman :- bas , bahut ker li pratiksha , ab mujhse or ni ruka jayega , aakhir m kab tak shant rahu ye jante hue ki mere sabse ghanishth mitra ki praakritik mrityu ni , apitu hatya hui h or uske hatyare yu khule aam ghum rahe h.

Isliye mane ab fesla ker liya h ki ab m prathvi pe jarur jaunga .

Kaya :- per maharaj aapne yadi esa kiya to , niyamanusar aap apna rajya kho denge.

Jhumki :- ese rajya ka fayada bhi kya di , jo jiski vajah se mika h , hum uske liye hi kuch na ker sake to.

Aman :- gudiya sahi bol rahi h kaya ,ab chahe kuch bhi parinam ho m ab ni ruk sakta.

Kaya :- yadi esa h to m bhi aapke sath chalungi , karan sirf aapke hi ni mere bhi mitra the , unke hatyaro ka to m khun ki ek ek bund pi jaungi.

Aman ye sun man gaya or usne apni talvar ko yaad kiya or samne divar ki or ker jese hi ek portal kholne ko hua , tabhi ek aawaz unke kaano m padi.

" Are maharaj jara rukiye to sahi , dhiraj rakh jara apne is mitra ki baat sun lijiye"

Aawaz sun 3no chonk pade , or jese hi aawaz ki disha me dekha to unki khushi ka thikana na raha , kyunki unke samne karan khada tha.

Aman or jhumki ko to kuch der apni ankho pe vishwas na hua , tabhi karan fir bola.

Karan :- kya baat h gudia , kya apne bhaiya ko itni jaldi bhul gayi.

Jhumki karan ki aawaz sun jese hi hosh me aayi to karan ki or dodi

Jhumki :- bhaiya.........

Or ye bol karan k gale lag gayi or aman bhi sath me karan k gale lag gaya

Jyada apne dimag pe jor mat daliye friends, karan khud yaha rasatal ni pahuncha , ye to dand nayak ki nayi shakti thi jiski badolat karan ka hi ek chota sa ansh h jo aman ko rokne k liye karan ne bheja h verna rasatal me fir se asantulan fel jata.

Karan kaya se :- oh hello madam , ab aapko alag se invitation dena padega kya.

Y bol karan ne aman ko side me ker apni bahe fela di , or kaya bhi jhat se karan k gale lag gayi.

Kuch der yu 4ro dosto ka bharat milap hota raha , fir jhumki boli.

Jhumki :- bhai aap thik to hona, pata h hum kitna roye the jab aapki...

Ye bolte bolte rone lagi

Aman :- ha bhai , kya ho gaya tha tumko , jaha tak m janta hu ki tumhare samne vo sab kuch bhi ni the , fir he sab kese or tumhari jivan urja hum mahasus kyu ni ker paye.

Karan :- dost jiske sir per mahakal ka hath ho , uska kaal kya bigad sakta h.

Ye bol karan ne sari kahani aman or jhumki ko vistar purvak bata di , jise sun aman karan ko khushi se gale lagate hue .

Aman :- m janta tha ki esa tezvan or shaktishali jisne prachandasur ko hara diya , wo dand nayak mera dost hi ho sakta h.

Ha dost parilok or devalok k tumhare prakram ke kisse rasatal me bhi fel chuke h .

Karan majak :- are bas bas sale , thoda dur hoke baat ker m us type ka ni hu .

Fir kuch der karan k us ansh se un sab ka hasi majak yu hi chala , fir karan ne jald hi milne aanke ka wada ker or aman ko wahi rukne ka bol ker wapas wo ansh karan me aaker sama gaya.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti sham ko veer se mile .

Karan ;:- kyu bhai , tumhara kaam ho gaya kya.

Veer :- ha dost , or tumhara.

Karan :- abhi kaha bhai , hume to kuch din yahi rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- veer bhai aap bhi yahi ruk jaiye na kuch din hum sab milke thoda ghum bhi lenge.

Veer udaas man se :- ni jyoti , m is samay chahu bhi to ni ruk sakta.

Karan :- kyu bhai , esa kya hua , m kal se notice ker raha hu , ager koi pareshani h to hume batao dost.

Shayad hum.kuch madad ker sakte.

Veer :- ni ni bhai , vo baat .

Jyoti udaas man se :- lagta h veer bhai , apne abhi tak hume apna ni mana , ni to aap hume apni problem jarur batate.

Veer :- ni ni jyoti esa bilkul bhi ni h , m to bas is duvidha me hu ki meri problem sun tumhe vishwas na hua to .

Jyoti ne veer ko bharosa dilaya to veer ne abhi tak ki sari ghatnao k baare me batana shuru kiya

Fir veer bola

Veer :- isiliye hi m itna pareshan hu dost , pata ni achanak hamari itni achi saheli ko achanak se kya ho gaya .

Na jane kyu hamesha ache logo ko hi itna kasht sahana padta h , dekho na hamari naina ne kitne logo ki madad ki dusht aatmao se unki raksha ker , fir bhi aaj vo us halat me hospital me jhujh rahi h.

Veer nam ankho se ye sari baate karan or jyoti ko batata h , karan or jyoti ne jese hi ye naam suna to unke hriday me ek is naam se ek gahare rishta ek connection hone ki anubhuti hui. Naina ki is halat ka dun unko bhi bahut kasht hone laga , or karan duvidha me pad gaya ki vo kya kare , kya use naina ki madad k liye abhi jana chahiye, kyunki vo naina k abhi tak k safar k bare m sun itna to samjh gaya tha ki niyati ka ek bahut bade prayojan ko purn kerne k liye naina ko chuna gaya h , per usko ye samjh ni aaraha tha ki uska hastakshep kya uchit hoga.

Tabhi karan ko baba ki yaad aayi or usne man me baba ko yad kiya.

Karan :- pranam baba.

Baba :- yashasvi bhavah putra, prathvi pe tumhara swagat h dand nayak.

M janta hu tum kis duvidha me ho putra , tumhara sochna uchit h naina ki ye yatra jag kalyan k liye avashyak h or filhal k liye tumhara hastakshep uchit na hoga , or jab tumhari avashyakata hogi , niyati khud tumhe waha pahucha degi , parantu ha tum naina or apne naye mitra ki sahayata avashy ker sakte ho.

Karan baba ko dhanyawad kerta h or fir veer k sath karan or jyoti maa jhandewali k dwar me pahunch jate h.

Karan veer or jyoti k sath maa k darshan kerta h or maa se ashirvad mangta h .

Pandit ji veer or karan ko maa p chadi hui ek mala dete h prasad k roop me.

Karan :- lo dost ye maa ka ashirwad h , ise tum apne sath le jaker apni dost ko pahana dena , mujhe maa ki shakti pe pura bharosa h , naina jald hi swasth ho jayegi.

Karan jab veer ko vo mala de raha tha , tab achanak se karam k ander se ek adrishy urja nikal mala me sama gayi , jiska pata na veer ko chala or na hi karan or jyoti ko.

Fir maa ka ek or baar darshan ker karan or jyoti veer k sath khanna sahab k ghar lot aaye thoda ghum fir ker , khanna sahab ne veer ko bhi ek kamra dediya, kyunki uski train kal ki thi

Lekin us mala k sath sath veer ko ek or khas chij milne wali thi, jiska andaza veer ko bilkul bhi na tha .

Vo kya tha , vo pata chalega next update me.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Wow bhai
Ridhima ko bhn bhane wala scene dil ko choo gya
Veer ko bhi kuch powers milne waali h lagta h
Chalo ab naina thk hojaegi
Or karan jyoti bhi naina k baare mein jaan gye {adhura}

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

 

[RAAZ]

Update no :- 108
Guest room me thodi der rest kerne k baad karan or jyoti aage ki kuch planning ker rahe the.ki tabhi unke gate p knock hua .

Karan :- ander aajaiye gate khula h.

Karan k itna bolne pe gate khulta h or vakil sahab ki beti ander enter kerte h , jiske hath me nashte ki tray thi , jo wo karan or jyoti k liye layi thi.

Ladki :- sorry mane tum dono ko disturb to ni kiya na.

Jyoti :- are ni ni esi koi baat ni h ...

Jyoti bolte bolte ruk gayi , kyunki wo unka naam janti hi ni thi , tab wo ladki boli.

Ladki :- oh sorry m tum dono ko apna naam batana to bhul hi gayi , hi mera naam ridhima h , per tumne mere papa ko mama bola h , to is hisab se m tumhari didi hui , to tum mujhe ridhi di bol sakte ho.

Ridhima bahut hi simple ladki thi , usne apni graduation puri ker li thi or apne papa ka khayal rakhi thi or ek company ki manager thi , use kabhi bhi ye bf gf wale chakkr me koi interest raha hi ni tha , uska sara dhyan apne carrier or apne pita ki seva m laga rahata.

Ridhima ki baat sun achanak se karan ko riya ki yaad aagayi , use wo yaad aagaya jab wo pahali baar riya se mila tha or bilkul isi tarah riya ne use apna bhai bana liya tha , uski ankho k samne riya k sath bitaye pyar bhare pal aane lage , fir agle hi pal uski ankho k samne us hadse ka drishy bhi aagaya , jab riya ne usko buri tarah dutkarke or bina koi baat sune usse bura bhala bol sara rishta tod liya tha.

Uske kano me riya or radha k wo sare apshabd gunjane lage , jo un dono ne use bole the.

(Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di , tu ek hawasi h)

Ye sab yaad aate hi karan ki ankho me ashru or mukh per krodh k bhav ubharne lage.

Jyoti apne bhai ki halat ko samjh gayi thi or use shant kerne k liye uske hath ko apne hath me tham liya , jyoti k sparsh ko paker karan dhire dhire shant ho gaya.

Ridhi pareshan ho :- kya hua bhai , mane kuch galat bol diya kya , ager esa h to please mujhse gussa mat hona , itne samay baad to mujhe koi mila h jise m bhai kah saku verna yaha to sabko ladkiyo se ek hi rishte chahiye.

Jesa ki mane bataya ki ridhi ek sidhi sadhi ladki thi , jo apne pita ki ekloti santaan thi to use hamesha ek bhai ya bahan ki kami khalti , usne aaspas k kisi ladke ko bhai apna muh bola bhai banane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin ridhi jesi khubsurat ladki ko ladke keSe aajkal k havas k pujari type ladke apni bahan man lete , isliye wo akeli hi rahi , aaj jab usne apne pita k liye usne karan or jyoti k muh se mana shabd suna to ye ummid leker aayi ki vo to use apni bahan k roop me apna lega, lekin karan k hav bhav k badlte dekh usko apni aakhiri ummid tutti najar aayi .

Karan ne ridhi k muh se uski masumiyat bhari baate suni to wo shant ho gaya.

Karan :- aapse kisne kaha ki m aapse gussa hu " didi ".

Ridhi to ye sun uchal padi or khushi se boli :- kya bole , ek baar or bolo na.

Karan :- kisne kaha m apse naraj hu

Ridhi :- ye ni iske aage jo bola tha vo.

Karan muskan k sath :- didi.

Ye sun ridhi khushi k mare karan k gale lag gayi , karan ne ridhi ki khushi k liye use apni bahan k roop me apna to liya tha, lekin uska dil abhi bhi naye rishte banane k liye ready na tha .

Or esa hona swabhavik hi h , jinse sabse jyada pyaar kare or vo hi vishwasghat kare to sab kuch sahi hona itna aasan ni hota.

Karan k dil me abhi bhi vo baate chal rahi thi , jiske chalte karan k ankho se ansu ki bunde nikalne lagi , jise jyoti ne jhat se puch diya , jo ridhi ko dekh khush thi , ridhi ko to karan k ansu ni dikhe gale lage hone ki vajah se , lekin jyoti ne dekh liye the or wo ni chahati thi ki ridhi ko jo itne salo baad khushi mili uspe pani fire isliye usne karan k ansu poochte hue , apne hoto ko apne hatho se fela , karan ko smile kerne ka ishara kiya.

Kuch der baad ridhi apne kamre m chali gayi or karan or jyoti bed pe let gaye .

Jyoti karan se ek side se chipki hui thi or vo boli.

Jyoti :- bhai kab tak un logo ko yaad kerke rote rahoge , jinse ab hamara koi nata hi ni , jane dijiye na bhai un purani yaado ko kyu taklif dete ho aap khud ko un logo ko yaad ker.

Karan :- kash ye itna aasan hota gudiya , bhale hi unhone humse banavati pyaar kiya , per hamara pyaar to sacha hi tha na gudiya unke liye , dil se apna mana tha na humne , to keSe bhula du unhe.

Jyoti gusse se :- bhai mane kab kaha aap sab bhul jaiye , jo un logo ne humare sath kiya , ye waqt bhulne ka ni balki apni nirdoshta sabit kerte hue , un logo ko is baat karane ka h ki unhone kitna bada paap kiya h mere bhai pe itna ghatiya iljam laga ke.

Bhulne ko to m us rishte ko bol rahi ho , jis kaaran aapne nirdosh hote hue bhi itna sab kuch suna , verna kisi me itna dam ni jo aapko bura bhala bol sake aap pe hath utha sake.

Bhul jaiye un swarthi rishto ko bhai , jinhone hume dukh diya , rishte wo hote h jo humari shakti bane hamara sahara bane na ki wo jo hume kamjor banaye , hume musibat k samay asahay chod de.

Jyoti ki ankho me radha or riya k prati rosh saf saf dikhlayi de raha tha. Jise dekh karan ne filhal k liye baat ko badalne ko hi uchit samjha.

Karan :- thik h meri maharani sahiba jesa aap kaho.

Karan :- vese kya m jaan sakta hu kya ms sharma aaj sham ko free h .

Jyoti nakhre dukhate hue :- hmm hu to sahi , per m jan sakti hu janab ki aap esa kyu puch rahe ho.

Karan halke s jyoti k hoth chum :- wo kya h na mane socha ki , aaj sham ko apni soni si gd ko date pe le jaya jaye.

Karan ki is harkat pe jyoti sharma ke karan k sine me muh chipa li.

Karan majak kerte hue:- oh oh dekho to bholi madam ko ese sharma rahi h jese first time ho , verna madam ka khud ka mud hota h to mere hoto ki to kha hi jati h.

Jyoti ye sun karan k sine me pyaar se mukke marte hue boli.

Jyoti :- chi kitne bigad gaye ho aap bhaiya , bhala apni bahan se ese koi bolta h , jaiye m aapse baat ni kerti.

Karan :- are yaar esa mat kero , apni to date h na sham ko.

Jyoti :- ji ni date vate sab cancel or aapko jana h to kisi or ko dhund lo.

Karan majak. Kerte hue :-ok jesi(sochne ka natak kerte hue) tumhari marji , ab or kise leker jau.

Hmm ha kyu na kaya ko bula lu , kaafi din ho gaye apni friend se mile isi bahane vo dharti lok bhi ghum legi.

Kaya ka naam sun to jyoti uchal padi , or boli.

Jyoti :- ji ni kisi ko bulane ki jarurat ni h m h ready hu date k liye.

Karan jyoti ki hadbadahat dekh hasne laga or jyoti sharmate hue fir karan p tut ladi.

Chaliye ab kaya ka jikar aahi chuka h to kyu na rasatal ka bhi ek chakkar laga liya jaye.

Location :- rasatal lok

Aman shonitpur k rajya ko bahut achi tarah se sambhal raha tha , Dracula k barbaad kiye hue un ganvon ko halat ab kafi had tak shdher chuki thi .

Dracula k dar se jinhone shonitpur chod diya tha , ab vo log vapas dhire dhire lotne lage the.

Kaya ne bhi apne pad ki garima or kartvya ka palan puri nishtha se ker rahi thi , vo aman k sath mil rasatal lok me bache baki shetani pishachon ko khatam kerne me lagi hui thi , jo ya to kisi dusre area m chupe hue the , ya jo bhag gaye the.

Kul mila k praja aman k raaj m khushali se apna jivan vyapt ker rahi thi , sab aman ko pure dil se apna maharaj k roop me apna chuke the.

Wahi kaya ne ek or acha kaam ka aarambh ker diya , wo ab rajya ki ladkiyo ko bhi ashtra.shastra ki vidya sikhane lagi , jiske liye usne ek vishesh vidhyalay bhi banwaya jisme jhumki k sath rajya ki sabhi ladkiya shastra vidya sikhne aati , kyunki kaya k sujhav pe hi aman ne ye niyam banaya tha ki rajya ki har kanya or yuvati ko astra vidya sikhna avashyak h taki vo apni raksha swayam kerne me samarth ho.

Lekin jaha ek or har jagh khushali thi , vahi dusri or aman , jhumki or kaya khud hamesha dukhi hi rahate , jabse unhe karan ki mrityu k bare me pata chala or mahadev k kavach k kaaran unki shaktiya aage ki sachai ka pata na laga payi thi.

Aman din raat pratishodh ki aag me jal raha tha or ek din uske sabra ka bandh tut gaya.

Aman or jhumki apne kamre me isi vishay pe baat ker rahe the , jaha kaya bhi mojud thi.

Aman :- bas , bahut ker li pratiksha , ab mujhse or ni ruka jayega , aakhir m kab tak shant rahu ye jante hue ki mere sabse ghanishth mitra ki praakritik mrityu ni , apitu hatya hui h or uske hatyare yu khule aam ghum rahe h.

Isliye mane ab fesla ker liya h ki ab m prathvi pe jarur jaunga .

Kaya :- per maharaj aapne yadi esa kiya to , niyamanusar aap apna rajya kho denge.

Jhumki :- ese rajya ka fayada bhi kya di , jo jiski vajah se mika h , hum uske liye hi kuch na ker sake to.

Aman :- gudiya sahi bol rahi h kaya ,ab chahe kuch bhi parinam ho m ab ni ruk sakta.

Kaya :- yadi esa h to m bhi aapke sath chalungi , karan sirf aapke hi ni mere bhi mitra the , unke hatyaro ka to m khun ki ek ek bund pi jaungi.

Aman ye sun man gaya or usne apni talvar ko yaad kiya or samne divar ki or ker jese hi ek portal kholne ko hua , tabhi ek aawaz unke kaano m padi.

" Are maharaj jara rukiye to sahi , dhiraj rakh jara apne is mitra ki baat sun lijiye"

Aawaz sun 3no chonk pade , or jese hi aawaz ki disha me dekha to unki khushi ka thikana na raha , kyunki unke samne karan khada tha.

Aman or jhumki ko to kuch der apni ankho pe vishwas na hua , tabhi karan fir bola.

Karan :- kya baat h gudia , kya apne bhaiya ko itni jaldi bhul gayi.

Jhumki karan ki aawaz sun jese hi hosh me aayi to karan ki or dodi

Jhumki :- bhaiya.........

Or ye bol karan k gale lag gayi or aman bhi sath me karan k gale lag gaya

Jyada apne dimag pe jor mat daliye friends, karan khud yaha rasatal ni pahuncha , ye to dand nayak ki nayi shakti thi jiski badolat karan ka hi ek chota sa ansh h jo aman ko rokne k liye karan ne bheja h verna rasatal me fir se asantulan fel jata.

Karan kaya se :- oh hello madam , ab aapko alag se invitation dena padega kya.

Y bol karan ne aman ko side me ker apni bahe fela di , or kaya bhi jhat se karan k gale lag gayi.

Kuch der yu 4ro dosto ka bharat milap hota raha , fir jhumki boli.

Jhumki :- bhai aap thik to hona, pata h hum kitna roye the jab aapki...

Ye bolte bolte rone lagi

Aman :- ha bhai , kya ho gaya tha tumko , jaha tak m janta hu ki tumhare samne vo sab kuch bhi ni the , fir he sab kese or tumhari jivan urja hum mahasus kyu ni ker paye.

Karan :- dost jiske sir per mahakal ka hath ho , uska kaal kya bigad sakta h.

Ye bol karan ne sari kahani aman or jhumki ko vistar purvak bata di , jise sun aman karan ko khushi se gale lagate hue .

Aman :- m janta tha ki esa tezvan or shaktishali jisne prachandasur ko hara diya , wo dand nayak mera dost hi ho sakta h.

Ha dost parilok or devalok k tumhare prakram ke kisse rasatal me bhi fel chuke h .

Karan majak :- are bas bas sale , thoda dur hoke baat ker m us type ka ni hu .

Fir kuch der karan k us ansh se un sab ka hasi majak yu hi chala , fir karan ne jald hi milne aanke ka wada ker or aman ko wahi rukne ka bol ker wapas wo ansh karan me aaker sama gaya.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti sham ko veer se mile .

Karan ;:- kyu bhai , tumhara kaam ho gaya kya.

Veer :- ha dost , or tumhara.

Karan :- abhi kaha bhai , hume to kuch din yahi rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- veer bhai aap bhi yahi ruk jaiye na kuch din hum sab milke thoda ghum bhi lenge.

Veer udaas man se :- ni jyoti , m is samay chahu bhi to ni ruk sakta.

Karan :- kyu bhai , esa kya hua , m kal se notice ker raha hu , ager koi pareshani h to hume batao dost.

Shayad hum.kuch madad ker sakte.

Veer :- ni ni bhai , vo baat .

Jyoti udaas man se :- lagta h veer bhai , apne abhi tak hume apna ni mana , ni to aap hume apni problem jarur batate.

Veer :- ni ni jyoti esa bilkul bhi ni h , m to bas is duvidha me hu ki meri problem sun tumhe vishwas na hua to .

Jyoti ne veer ko bharosa dilaya to veer ne abhi tak ki sari ghatnao k baare me batana shuru kiya

Fir veer bola

Veer :- isiliye hi m itna pareshan hu dost , pata ni achanak hamari itni achi saheli ko achanak se kya ho gaya .

Na jane kyu hamesha ache logo ko hi itna kasht sahana padta h , dekho na hamari naina ne kitne logo ki madad ki dusht aatmao se unki raksha ker , fir bhi aaj vo us halat me hospital me jhujh rahi h.

Veer nam ankho se ye sari baate karan or jyoti ko batata h , karan or jyoti ne jese hi ye naam suna to unke hriday me ek is naam se ek gahare rishta ek connection hone ki anubhuti hui. Naina ki is halat ka dun unko bhi bahut kasht hone laga , or karan duvidha me pad gaya ki vo kya kare , kya use naina ki madad k liye abhi jana chahiye, kyunki vo naina k abhi tak k safar k bare m sun itna to samjh gaya tha ki niyati ka ek bahut bade prayojan ko purn kerne k liye naina ko chuna gaya h , per usko ye samjh ni aaraha tha ki uska hastakshep kya uchit hoga.

Tabhi karan ko baba ki yaad aayi or usne man me baba ko yad kiya.

Karan :- pranam baba.

Baba :- yashasvi bhavah putra, prathvi pe tumhara swagat h dand nayak.

M janta hu tum kis duvidha me ho putra , tumhara sochna uchit h naina ki ye yatra jag kalyan k liye avashyak h or filhal k liye tumhara hastakshep uchit na hoga , or jab tumhari avashyakata hogi , niyati khud tumhe waha pahucha degi , parantu ha tum naina or apne naye mitra ki sahayata avashy ker sakte ho.

Karan baba ko dhanyawad kerta h or fir veer k sath karan or jyoti maa jhandewali k dwar me pahunch jate h.

Karan veer or jyoti k sath maa k darshan kerta h or maa se ashirvad mangta h .

Pandit ji veer or karan ko maa p chadi hui ek mala dete h prasad k roop me.

Karan :- lo dost ye maa ka ashirwad h , ise tum apne sath le jaker apni dost ko pahana dena , mujhe maa ki shakti pe pura bharosa h , naina jald hi swasth ho jayegi.

Karan jab veer ko vo mala de raha tha , tab achanak se karam k ander se ek adrishy urja nikal mala me sama gayi , jiska pata na veer ko chala or na hi karan or jyoti ko.

Fir maa ka ek or baar darshan ker karan or jyoti veer k sath khanna sahab k ghar lot aaye thoda ghum fir ker , khanna sahab ne veer ko bhi ek kamra dediya, kyunki uski train kal ki thi

Lekin us mala k sath sath veer ko ek or khas chij milne wali thi, jiska andaza veer ko bilkul bhi na tha .

Vo kya tha , vo pata chalega next update me.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Karan

Update no :- 108
Guest room me thodi der rest kerne k baad karan or jyoti aage ki kuch planning ker rahe the.ki tabhi unke gate p knock hua .

Karan :- ander aajaiye gate khula h.

Karan k itna bolne pe gate khulta h or vakil sahab ki beti ander enter kerte h , jiske hath me nashte ki tray thi , jo wo karan or jyoti k liye layi thi.

Ladki :- sorry mane tum dono ko disturb to ni kiya na.

Jyoti :- are ni ni esi koi baat ni h ...

Jyoti bolte bolte ruk gayi , kyunki wo unka naam janti hi ni thi , tab wo ladki boli.

Ladki :- oh sorry m tum dono ko apna naam batana to bhul hi gayi , hi mera naam ridhima h , per tumne mere papa ko mama bola h , to is hisab se m tumhari didi hui , to tum mujhe ridhi di bol sakte ho.

Ridhima bahut hi simple ladki thi , usne apni graduation puri ker li thi or apne papa ka khayal rakhi thi or ek company ki manager thi , use kabhi bhi ye bf gf wale chakkr me koi interest raha hi ni tha , uska sara dhyan apne carrier or apne pita ki seva m laga rahata.

Ridhima ki baat sun achanak se karan ko riya ki yaad aagayi , use wo yaad aagaya jab wo pahali baar riya se mila tha or bilkul isi tarah riya ne use apna bhai bana liya tha , uski ankho k samne riya k sath bitaye pyar bhare pal aane lage , fir agle hi pal uski ankho k samne us hadse ka drishy bhi aagaya , jab riya ne usko buri tarah dutkarke or bina koi baat sune usse bura bhala bol sara rishta tod liya tha.

Uske kano me riya or radha k wo sare apshabd gunjane lage , jo un dono ne use bole the.

(Riya :- mat bol apni gandi juban se mujhe di , tu ek hawasi h)

Ye sab yaad aate hi karan ki ankho me ashru or mukh per krodh k bhav ubharne lage.

Jyoti apne bhai ki halat ko samjh gayi thi or use shant kerne k liye uske hath ko apne hath me tham liya , jyoti k sparsh ko paker karan dhire dhire shant ho gaya.

Ridhi pareshan ho :- kya hua bhai , mane kuch galat bol diya kya , ager esa h to please mujhse gussa mat hona , itne samay baad to mujhe koi mila h jise m bhai kah saku verna yaha to sabko ladkiyo se ek hi rishte chahiye.

Jesa ki mane bataya ki ridhi ek sidhi sadhi ladki thi , jo apne pita ki ekloti santaan thi to use hamesha ek bhai ya bahan ki kami khalti , usne aaspas k kisi ladke ko bhai apna muh bola bhai banane ki koshis bhi ki , lekin ridhi jesi khubsurat ladki ko ladke keSe aajkal k havas k pujari type ladke apni bahan man lete , isliye wo akeli hi rahi , aaj jab usne apne pita k liye usne karan or jyoti k muh se mana shabd suna to ye ummid leker aayi ki vo to use apni bahan k roop me apna lega, lekin karan k hav bhav k badlte dekh usko apni aakhiri ummid tutti najar aayi .

Karan ne ridhi k muh se uski masumiyat bhari baate suni to wo shant ho gaya.

Karan :- aapse kisne kaha ki m aapse gussa hu " didi ".

Ridhi to ye sun uchal padi or khushi se boli :- kya bole , ek baar or bolo na.

Karan :- kisne kaha m apse naraj hu

Ridhi :- ye ni iske aage jo bola tha vo.

Karan muskan k sath :- didi.

Ye sun ridhi khushi k mare karan k gale lag gayi , karan ne ridhi ki khushi k liye use apni bahan k roop me apna to liya tha, lekin uska dil abhi bhi naye rishte banane k liye ready na tha .

Or esa hona swabhavik hi h , jinse sabse jyada pyaar kare or vo hi vishwasghat kare to sab kuch sahi hona itna aasan ni hota.

Karan k dil me abhi bhi vo baate chal rahi thi , jiske chalte karan k ankho se ansu ki bunde nikalne lagi , jise jyoti ne jhat se puch diya , jo ridhi ko dekh khush thi , ridhi ko to karan k ansu ni dikhe gale lage hone ki vajah se , lekin jyoti ne dekh liye the or wo ni chahati thi ki ridhi ko jo itne salo baad khushi mili uspe pani fire isliye usne karan k ansu poochte hue , apne hoto ko apne hatho se fela , karan ko smile kerne ka ishara kiya.

Kuch der baad ridhi apne kamre m chali gayi or karan or jyoti bed pe let gaye .

Jyoti karan se ek side se chipki hui thi or vo boli.

Jyoti :- bhai kab tak un logo ko yaad kerke rote rahoge , jinse ab hamara koi nata hi ni , jane dijiye na bhai un purani yaado ko kyu taklif dete ho aap khud ko un logo ko yaad ker.

Karan :- kash ye itna aasan hota gudiya , bhale hi unhone humse banavati pyaar kiya , per hamara pyaar to sacha hi tha na gudiya unke liye , dil se apna mana tha na humne , to keSe bhula du unhe.

Jyoti gusse se :- bhai mane kab kaha aap sab bhul jaiye , jo un logo ne humare sath kiya , ye waqt bhulne ka ni balki apni nirdoshta sabit kerte hue , un logo ko is baat karane ka h ki unhone kitna bada paap kiya h mere bhai pe itna ghatiya iljam laga ke.

Bhulne ko to m us rishte ko bol rahi ho , jis kaaran aapne nirdosh hote hue bhi itna sab kuch suna , verna kisi me itna dam ni jo aapko bura bhala bol sake aap pe hath utha sake.

Bhul jaiye un swarthi rishto ko bhai , jinhone hume dukh diya , rishte wo hote h jo humari shakti bane hamara sahara bane na ki wo jo hume kamjor banaye , hume musibat k samay asahay chod de.

Jyoti ki ankho me radha or riya k prati rosh saf saf dikhlayi de raha tha. Jise dekh karan ne filhal k liye baat ko badalne ko hi uchit samjha.

Karan :- thik h meri maharani sahiba jesa aap kaho.

Karan :- vese kya m jaan sakta hu kya ms sharma aaj sham ko free h .

Jyoti nakhre dukhate hue :- hmm hu to sahi , per m jan sakti hu janab ki aap esa kyu puch rahe ho.

Karan halke s jyoti k hoth chum :- wo kya h na mane socha ki , aaj sham ko apni soni si gd ko date pe le jaya jaye.

Karan ki is harkat pe jyoti sharma ke karan k sine me muh chipa li.

Karan majak kerte hue:- oh oh dekho to bholi madam ko ese sharma rahi h jese first time ho , verna madam ka khud ka mud hota h to mere hoto ki to kha hi jati h.

Jyoti ye sun karan k sine me pyaar se mukke marte hue boli.

Jyoti :- chi kitne bigad gaye ho aap bhaiya , bhala apni bahan se ese koi bolta h , jaiye m aapse baat ni kerti.

Karan :- are yaar esa mat kero , apni to date h na sham ko.

Jyoti :- ji ni date vate sab cancel or aapko jana h to kisi or ko dhund lo.

Karan majak. Kerte hue :-ok jesi(sochne ka natak kerte hue) tumhari marji , ab or kise leker jau.

Hmm ha kyu na kaya ko bula lu , kaafi din ho gaye apni friend se mile isi bahane vo dharti lok bhi ghum legi.

Kaya ka naam sun to jyoti uchal padi , or boli.

Jyoti :- ji ni kisi ko bulane ki jarurat ni h m h ready hu date k liye.

Karan jyoti ki hadbadahat dekh hasne laga or jyoti sharmate hue fir karan p tut ladi.

Chaliye ab kaya ka jikar aahi chuka h to kyu na rasatal ka bhi ek chakkar laga liya jaye.

Location :- rasatal lok

Aman shonitpur k rajya ko bahut achi tarah se sambhal raha tha , Dracula k barbaad kiye hue un ganvon ko halat ab kafi had tak shdher chuki thi .

Dracula k dar se jinhone shonitpur chod diya tha , ab vo log vapas dhire dhire lotne lage the.

Kaya ne bhi apne pad ki garima or kartvya ka palan puri nishtha se ker rahi thi , vo aman k sath mil rasatal lok me bache baki shetani pishachon ko khatam kerne me lagi hui thi , jo ya to kisi dusre area m chupe hue the , ya jo bhag gaye the.

Kul mila k praja aman k raaj m khushali se apna jivan vyapt ker rahi thi , sab aman ko pure dil se apna maharaj k roop me apna chuke the.

Wahi kaya ne ek or acha kaam ka aarambh ker diya , wo ab rajya ki ladkiyo ko bhi ashtra.shastra ki vidya sikhane lagi , jiske liye usne ek vishesh vidhyalay bhi banwaya jisme jhumki k sath rajya ki sabhi ladkiya shastra vidya sikhne aati , kyunki kaya k sujhav pe hi aman ne ye niyam banaya tha ki rajya ki har kanya or yuvati ko astra vidya sikhna avashyak h taki vo apni raksha swayam kerne me samarth ho.

Lekin jaha ek or har jagh khushali thi , vahi dusri or aman , jhumki or kaya khud hamesha dukhi hi rahate , jabse unhe karan ki mrityu k bare me pata chala or mahadev k kavach k kaaran unki shaktiya aage ki sachai ka pata na laga payi thi.

Aman din raat pratishodh ki aag me jal raha tha or ek din uske sabra ka bandh tut gaya.

Aman or jhumki apne kamre me isi vishay pe baat ker rahe the , jaha kaya bhi mojud thi.

Aman :- bas , bahut ker li pratiksha , ab mujhse or ni ruka jayega , aakhir m kab tak shant rahu ye jante hue ki mere sabse ghanishth mitra ki praakritik mrityu ni , apitu hatya hui h or uske hatyare yu khule aam ghum rahe h.

Isliye mane ab fesla ker liya h ki ab m prathvi pe jarur jaunga .

Kaya :- per maharaj aapne yadi esa kiya to , niyamanusar aap apna rajya kho denge.

Jhumki :- ese rajya ka fayada bhi kya di , jo jiski vajah se mika h , hum uske liye hi kuch na ker sake to.

Aman :- gudiya sahi bol rahi h kaya ,ab chahe kuch bhi parinam ho m ab ni ruk sakta.

Kaya :- yadi esa h to m bhi aapke sath chalungi , karan sirf aapke hi ni mere bhi mitra the , unke hatyaro ka to m khun ki ek ek bund pi jaungi.

Aman ye sun man gaya or usne apni talvar ko yaad kiya or samne divar ki or ker jese hi ek portal kholne ko hua , tabhi ek aawaz unke kaano m padi.

" Are maharaj jara rukiye to sahi , dhiraj rakh jara apne is mitra ki baat sun lijiye"

Aawaz sun 3no chonk pade , or jese hi aawaz ki disha me dekha to unki khushi ka thikana na raha , kyunki unke samne karan khada tha.

Aman or jhumki ko to kuch der apni ankho pe vishwas na hua , tabhi karan fir bola.

Karan :- kya baat h gudia , kya apne bhaiya ko itni jaldi bhul gayi.

Jhumki karan ki aawaz sun jese hi hosh me aayi to karan ki or dodi

Jhumki :- bhaiya.........

Or ye bol karan k gale lag gayi or aman bhi sath me karan k gale lag gaya

Jyada apne dimag pe jor mat daliye friends, karan khud yaha rasatal ni pahuncha , ye to dand nayak ki nayi shakti thi jiski badolat karan ka hi ek chota sa ansh h jo aman ko rokne k liye karan ne bheja h verna rasatal me fir se asantulan fel jata.

Karan kaya se :- oh hello madam , ab aapko alag se invitation dena padega kya.

Y bol karan ne aman ko side me ker apni bahe fela di , or kaya bhi jhat se karan k gale lag gayi.

Kuch der yu 4ro dosto ka bharat milap hota raha , fir jhumki boli.

Jhumki :- bhai aap thik to hona, pata h hum kitna roye the jab aapki...

Ye bolte bolte rone lagi

Aman :- ha bhai , kya ho gaya tha tumko , jaha tak m janta hu ki tumhare samne vo sab kuch bhi ni the , fir he sab kese or tumhari jivan urja hum mahasus kyu ni ker paye.

Karan :- dost jiske sir per mahakal ka hath ho , uska kaal kya bigad sakta h.

Ye bol karan ne sari kahani aman or jhumki ko vistar purvak bata di , jise sun aman karan ko khushi se gale lagate hue .

Aman :- m janta tha ki esa tezvan or shaktishali jisne prachandasur ko hara diya , wo dand nayak mera dost hi ho sakta h.

Ha dost parilok or devalok k tumhare prakram ke kisse rasatal me bhi fel chuke h .

Karan majak :- are bas bas sale , thoda dur hoke baat ker m us type ka ni hu .

Fir kuch der karan k us ansh se un sab ka hasi majak yu hi chala , fir karan ne jald hi milne aanke ka wada ker or aman ko wahi rukne ka bol ker wapas wo ansh karan me aaker sama gaya.

Back to the hero.

Karan or jyoti sham ko veer se mile .

Karan ;:- kyu bhai , tumhara kaam ho gaya kya.

Veer :- ha dost , or tumhara.

Karan :- abhi kaha bhai , hume to kuch din yahi rukna hoga.

Jyoti :- veer bhai aap bhi yahi ruk jaiye na kuch din hum sab milke thoda ghum bhi lenge.

Veer udaas man se :- ni jyoti , m is samay chahu bhi to ni ruk sakta.

Karan :- kyu bhai , esa kya hua , m kal se notice ker raha hu , ager koi pareshani h to hume batao dost.

Shayad hum.kuch madad ker sakte.

Veer :- ni ni bhai , vo baat .

Jyoti udaas man se :- lagta h veer bhai , apne abhi tak hume apna ni mana , ni to aap hume apni problem jarur batate.

Veer :- ni ni jyoti esa bilkul bhi ni h , m to bas is duvidha me hu ki meri problem sun tumhe vishwas na hua to .

Jyoti ne veer ko bharosa dilaya to veer ne abhi tak ki sari ghatnao k baare me batana shuru kiya

Fir veer bola

Veer :- isiliye hi m itna pareshan hu dost , pata ni achanak hamari itni achi saheli ko achanak se kya ho gaya .

Na jane kyu hamesha ache logo ko hi itna kasht sahana padta h , dekho na hamari naina ne kitne logo ki madad ki dusht aatmao se unki raksha ker , fir bhi aaj vo us halat me hospital me jhujh rahi h.

Veer nam ankho se ye sari baate karan or jyoti ko batata h , karan or jyoti ne jese hi ye naam suna to unke hriday me ek is naam se ek gahare rishta ek connection hone ki anubhuti hui. Naina ki is halat ka dun unko bhi bahut kasht hone laga , or karan duvidha me pad gaya ki vo kya kare , kya use naina ki madad k liye abhi jana chahiye, kyunki vo naina k abhi tak k safar k bare m sun itna to samjh gaya tha ki niyati ka ek bahut bade prayojan ko purn kerne k liye naina ko chuna gaya h , per usko ye samjh ni aaraha tha ki uska hastakshep kya uchit hoga.

Tabhi karan ko baba ki yaad aayi or usne man me baba ko yad kiya.

Karan :- pranam baba.

Baba :- yashasvi bhavah putra, prathvi pe tumhara swagat h dand nayak.

M janta hu tum kis duvidha me ho putra , tumhara sochna uchit h naina ki ye yatra jag kalyan k liye avashyak h or filhal k liye tumhara hastakshep uchit na hoga , or jab tumhari avashyakata hogi , niyati khud tumhe waha pahucha degi , parantu ha tum naina or apne naye mitra ki sahayata avashy ker sakte ho.

Karan baba ko dhanyawad kerta h or fir veer k sath karan or jyoti maa jhandewali k dwar me pahunch jate h.

Karan veer or jyoti k sath maa k darshan kerta h or maa se ashirvad mangta h .

Pandit ji veer or karan ko maa p chadi hui ek mala dete h prasad k roop me.

Karan :- lo dost ye maa ka ashirwad h , ise tum apne sath le jaker apni dost ko pahana dena , mujhe maa ki shakti pe pura bharosa h , naina jald hi swasth ho jayegi.

Karan jab veer ko vo mala de raha tha , tab achanak se karam k ander se ek adrishy urja nikal mala me sama gayi , jiska pata na veer ko chala or na hi karan or jyoti ko.

Fir maa ka ek or baar darshan ker karan or jyoti veer k sath khanna sahab k ghar lot aaye thoda ghum fir ker , khanna sahab ne veer ko bhi ek kamra dediya, kyunki uski train kal ki thi

Lekin us mala k sath sath veer ko ek or khas chij milne wali thi, jiska andaza veer ko bilkul bhi na tha .

Vo kya tha , vo pata chalega next update me.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Ek rishta aur jud gaya karan aur jyoti ka ridhi ke sath lekin kia doodh ka jala ab chaah se bhi darega ya phir apne antar dawand pe qabu paayega dand nayak. Idhar niyati dheere dheere JK ko naina ki taraf lekar aa rahi hain. Aur us se pehlay dandnayak ko earth per apna first mission complete karna hai. Apna begunahi ka saboot dena hai aur zalimo se unke ek ek paap ka hisab kar ke apni saloni ke dukhay dil ko khush karna hain.

 

[Daamha]

thx bro pehla kam to ap ne ker diya ab dosre ki baari thx you are such a good writer

 

[Daamha]

bhai manta hu karan bohat saaf dil ka aadmi hai lekin plz aik baar kehne per hi riya aur radha ko maaf mat karna un ko bhi un ki galti ka ahsaas karwana manta hu un per kuch jadoo ka asar tha lekin un ka pyar bhi karan aur jyoti ke liye kamzor tha agar jadoo he wajha hoti to sonam per bhi asar hota lekin us per nahi huwa q kay us ka pyar sacha tha

 

[Tharcius30]

Awesome update bhai Maja agaya...

 

[Asmit rout]

Awesome update bro. You r a very good writer..and wetting for next update..

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Nice update...

Well ye to KJ ki jaise niyati h ki jahan b hote h wahan apneaap hi Rishte ban jate h. Kahi dosti k to kahi bhia behan k.
Pehle veer s itne Kam samay m dosti Hui aur ab khannashahab ki beti jinhe Karan jyoti n mama bola tha unki beti Ridhima ko behan maan Lia..

Karan k Dil m abi b kafi gehre zakhm h jinhe Riya Radha n diye the aur unki wajah s Karan hichkicha Raha tha ..but Ridhima ki simplicity n honesty ko dekh Kar usne b accept karlia is new relation ko..


Kafi time baad Rasatal k b darshan hogae. Yahan kafi progress ho chuki h. Aman ache s apna rajya sambhal Raha h aur Kaya n to ladkio k liye special training school banaya h .

Aman jhumki aur Kaya to almost dharti p Jane wale the badla lene but sahi time p karann k ansh n aake sabko rok Lia aur unke sath time b spend kia ..
Bs jyoti hi h Jo insab s abtk ni mili h..

Baad m KJ veer s dobara mile h aur is baar KJ ko veer k dwara Naina k bare m pata chala h. Naina ki yatra aur use kaamo ko sunkar Karan Jyoti kfi impress hue honge air sath m dukhi h ki Naina ki halat aisi h..

Well. Ab to Naina b thek hone wali h kyuki is baar Karan ki koi power ka anshsath m jaega Naina k paas jiske bare m kisi ko ni pata ..but ye dusri Kya cheez hogi Jo veer leke Jane Wala h ye dekhna h..


Let's see Kya hota h..

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[COSMO]

Mast update hai bhai. Lagta hai veer ki bhi kuch saktiya Milne vali hai.