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Ek aur Badhiya update bhaiUpdate no :- 111
Jyoti k anterdhyan hone k baad veer bhi apne raste ki or nikal pada , thode aage chalne pr use auto rikshaw bhi mil gaya , jisne beth wo hospital ki or nikal gaya.
Karib adhe ghante baad wo hospital pahunch gaya , jab wo naina k kamre m pahuncha to paya ki naina k chahre pe ek muskan h hosh me na hote hue bhi , jise dekh veer ko bhi thodi khushi hoti h.
Or wahi side me uski jaan preety ,jo subah se hi yaha bethi thi , thak k so chuki thi , jo sote hue bahut pyari lag rahi thi.
Jise dekh veer khud ko rok na paya or dhire se uske gaal ko chum liya, taki wo jag na jaye.
Per veer k sparsh ko preeti nind me bhi pahachan gayi or uski turant ankh khul gayi .
Or jese hi usne veer ko waha paya to khushi se uchal padi or uske gale lag uske pure chahare ko gila ker dala.
Veer :- are are bas kero jan , tum to ese react ker rahi ho jese salo baad mile h , 2 din m hi to aagaya m wapas.
Preety :- jan aapke liye 2 din honge , per mere liye to ye 2 din bhi kayi salo k barabar the , vese aap aarahe ho ye bataya kyu ni.
Veer halke se preeti k hoth chum :- bata deta to meri jaan k chahare pe ye surprise milne ki khushi kaha se dikhti mujhe .
Preeti veer ki is harkat se thoda sharma gayi or uske sine me apna muh chupa liya.
Kuch der ki yu hi pyaar bhari mulakat k baad preeti boli.
Preety :- master ji ka kaam ho gaya kya vese jan.
Veer :- haa jan or sath me tumne jese bola tha , m maa jhandewali k mandir bhi gaya tha , or hamari naina ki salamati ki dua bhi mangi , (mala dikhate hue) dekho m maa ka ashirvad bhi laya hu apne sath , dekhna ab humari naina jald hi thik ho jayegi.
Ye bol veer ne wo mala naina k gale me dal di or maa ka tilak uske mathe pe laga diya.
Tabhi preety ki najar veer k gale me padi jyoti ki di hui shiv rudraksh mala pe padi.
Preety :- wow kitni sunder mala h ye jaan , ye tumne kab li , kya m ise le sakti hu
Veer :- jan ager tum ye jan bhi mang lo to khushi khushi dedu , per sorry yaar ye mala me ni de sakta.
Preeti muh bigadte hue :- wo kyu bhala , esa kya h isme.
Veer :- wo kya h na jaan , ye mala mujhe kisi ne gift di h, jo meri bahut kam time me hi mere liye special ban chuki h.
Preeti ban chuki h sun k ye samjh gayi ki wo koi ladki h , or ye sun wo chid jati h or veer yahi to chahata tha , wo preeti k maje le raha tha.
Preeti :- acha ji, matlab wo ladki h.
Veer :- ab chuki h , ye shabd ladko k liye to use hote ni.
Preeti chidte hue :- acha mujhe bhi to pata chale , esi kon aagayi ab aapki life me , jo itni special ho gayi aapke liye .
Ab to mujhe ye mala chahiye hi h.
Veer :- sorry jan mane kaha na , ye mala m ni de sakta , ye meri special one ka gift h.
Preeti :- esi kon h wo apki, kya wo mujhse bhi jyada special ho gayi aapke liye.
Veer :- esa kyu bolti ho jan, mane esa kab kaha , wo tumse jyada to ni h , per wo mere liye tumse kam bhi ni h special.
Preeti ye sun roni si ho gayi or nam ankho se boli :- ager esa h to jao na uske paas,mere pass kyu aaye.
Veer :- are are meri jan tum to bura man gayi , pahale sun to lo wo h kon , usse sirf mera hi ni , ab tumhara rishta bhi bandh chuka h.
Preeti bacho jese jhala ke :- ji ni mujhe koi sautan ni chahiye.
Veer haste hue :- hey bhagwan, tum kaha ki baat kaha le gayi, are meri bholi preetu, wo jiski m baat ker raha hu , wo or koi ni tumhari nanad yani ki meri bahan h.
Preeti ye sun chonk gayi or boli
Preeti :- nanand , per kese ?
Preeti or veer bachpan se dost ththe , to preeti veer k bare m ache se janti thi or uski family k hadse k baare me bhi, to usko veer k bahan wali baat pe hairani hui .
Tab veer yaha se delhi tak k safar k baare me sari baat preeti ko bata deta h , sivaye karan jyoti or apni shaktiyo wali baat chod ke , kyunki filhal k liye jyoti ne hi use mana kiya tha is baare me unhe batane ko.
Sari baate sun ke preeti bahut khush hui kyunki veer ko hamesha ye dukh rahata tha ki uski koi bahan ni thi or aaj veer ki ye khawaish puri ho chuki thi , sath me use ek nanad bhi mil gayi thi.
Fir preety dhire dhire veer ko mukke marne lagi pyaar se or bolne lagi.
Preeti :- itni der se mujhe pareshan ker rahe ho , bol ni sakte the ki aap didi ki baat ker rahe ho.
Veer :- ho ho sautan se sidha didi.
Preeti ghurte hue :- jaan.
Veer :- acha baba sorry, ab tum hi batao kya jyoti bahan ki di hui ye mala ko tumhe dena chahiye mujhe.
Preeti :- ni ni jan , ye to didi ka pyaar h , jispe aapka hi hak h .
Abhi vo dono baat ker hi rahe the ki achanak kuch esa hua ki wo dono to kya sara hospital herani m pad gaya.
Hua yu ki naina k gale me mojud us mala se wahi shakti punj , jo karan se nikal ker mala m sama gaya tha, wahi shaktipunj mala se nikal naina k ander sama gaya.
Tabhi naina k sharir se atyant tejmayi prakash nikalne laga or felne laga ,jiske kaaran veer or preeti ko ankhe band kerni padi.
Dhire dhire wo prakash pure hospital me fel jata , per na Jane kese wo prakash kamre se bahar na gaya.
Kuch der baad jab prakash hata to veer or preety ne paya , naina jor jor se sanse le rahi h ,samne lcd p heartbeats bhi normal se kafi tez h or fir naina ek baar niii ,chilate hue uth gayi or turant hi wapas behosh ho gayi.
Veer or preeti ye sab dekh dar gaye , per veer ne khud ko sambhala or jaldi se doctor ko bula k laya.
Doctor jab naina ko check kerti h to heran ho jati h or boli.
Doctor :- it's miracles , hows this possible,apki friend ab coma se bahar achuki, she is safe now.
Veer or preety ne to jese ye suna uski khushi ka thikana hi na raha.
Doctor naina k gale me mala dekh :- ye mala inke gals m kese aayi.
Veer :- ye mane pahanayi doctor , ye mata jhandewali ka prasad h.
Doctor :- ager esa h to ye jan lijiye, ma ne aapki sun li h , aapki friend safe h , or mane inhe filhal injection dediya h , kal morning tak inhe hosh aajayega.
Ye bol wo veer or preety ko congratulations kah ker waha se chali gayi.
Aaiye ye bhi jan lete h , jab ye sab chamatkar hua to naina k antarman m kya hua....
Short flashback
Naina jo anjane awsad k chalte koma m chali gayi thi , uske gale me padte hi uske antarman me ek aawaz gunji.
Aawaz :- utho putri kab tak yu nirasha m uljhi rahogi , utho or apne kartavyon ka nirvahan kero , kya tum bhul gayi , apne baba ki nirmam hatya, jiska pratishodh lene k liye ye yatra aarambh ki , bhul gayi apni maa ko jo varsho se us dusht ki kaid me keval tumhari pratiksha me jivit h.
Utho putri ye samay yu nirash hone ka ni balki samay h papiyo k nash or sajano k udhar ka.
Is aawaz k chup hone k baad , use kuch drishya dikhe jo dhundhale the
Pahala drishya.
Ek bhayankar yudh ho raha tha 2 senao ke bich , jitna use dikh raha tha , us hisab se to wo dono dal dev or asur the , yani ki wo drishya deva sur sangram tha.
Tabhi yudh itna bhayanak ho gaya ki , shrishti sankat me aagayi , lekin tabhi achanak ek dhamake k sath yudh ruk gaya or ek awaj gunji.
Awaz :- nyay anayay, pap or punya , ab iska nirnay koi or karega , shighr hi ek urja punj astitv me aayega , jo apne paraye ki sima se uthkar shrishti k pratyek jeev k sath , sambhav se nyay karega.
Is baat k puri hone k sath hi drishya badal gaya or ek or drishy unki ankho k samne aagaya
Dusra Drishya
Ye samudra manthan ka tha , jaha halahal ko mahadev ne jab pi liya tha , to kisi vyakti ne ek jaduyi pyaale me us bhayanak vish ki ek bund chupke le li or apne paas rakh li.
Tisra drishya
Jo kuch esa tha ki ek vyakti bahut hi bhayanak jagah khada h or uski hatho me ek bacha h , use wo dekh ker has raha h or bol raha h.
Vyakti haste hue :- hahaha , akhir kar mere udeshya ka pratham charan purn hua , (us bache ko dekhte hue) mere bache tu hi banega mera wo hatyar , jiske dam p m pure sansar per apna varchasv sthapit ker apne apman ka pratishodh lunga.
Tisra drishy
Ek bada sa tez punj antariksh m mojud tha ,jo achanak 3 bhago me bat gaya.
Jinme se ek bhag gayav ho gaya or baki 2 bhago ko ek nile kapde pahana purush apne sath le gaya or ek orat k garbh me sthapit ker diya.
Chotha drishy.
Pichle drishy wali orat 2 bahut hi khubsurat bacho ko janm de rahi h is drishy me or tabhi vahi vyakti waha prakat hota h or un dono me kuch bate hui jinhe naina sun na payi.
Fir 5va or aakhiri drishy
Jisme wo dekhti h ki ek aadmi or wo orat ek car me betha kayi ja rahe h or achanak car ka balance bigad gaya or wo nadi m gir padi.
Yahi drishy dekh naina chinkhte hue uth ker coma se bahar aagayi , lekin kamjori k kaaran vo vapas behosh ho gayi.
Flashback end.
Jab tak naina ko waps hosh aata h , aaiye jab tak vapas hero ki or chalte h.
Dopahar ko jab ridhi ne jab karan ko company k halat bataye or property bechne ki baat ki tab karan ne saf saf mana ker diya ki wo apni maa se judi kisi chij ko ni bechega.
Jyoti :- bhai chahti to m bhi ni esa kerna , per hamare pas koi option bhi to ni h na.
Karan :- rasta h gudiya , ek investor h jo hamari company m investment abhi hatho hath ker dega.
Ridhi :- kon bhai , ager ese kisi ko jante ho to bulao na use , mujhe bhi milvao.
Karan :- bulane ki kya jarurat h di , investor aapke samne hi to h.
Ye baat karan ne jyoti ko dekhte hue kahi , jise sun ridhima or jyoti dono chonk gayi buri tarah.
Jyoti :- bhai me, per kese ?
Riddhi :- ha bhai, gudiya k pass itni large amount kaha se aayegi.
Karan :- di aap large amount ki baat ker rahi ho , aapko m ye baat bata du aaj k time m hamari gudiya 70 crore ki malkin h.
Karan to jese bomb pe bomb fode ja raha tha.
Jyoti :- bhaiya ye aap kya bol rahe ho mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha, ye sab aap kya bol rahe ho , m kese.
Karan :- batata hu meri gudiya, tumhe yaad h jab hum 8th me the , tab me har roj 3-4 ghante k liye bahr jata tha , tujhe koi na koi bahana ker , ya apne friends k sath khelne ka bol.or esa 12 th tak chala.
Jyoti :- ha bhai , mujhe achi tarah yaad h or mujhe is baat ki hamesha herani rahati ki aap jate kaha ho , kyunki us samy to humare koi dost to tha hi ni, lekin mujhe aap p pura vishwas tha us time bhi or aaj bhi ki aap kuch bhi galat ni ker sakte or na hi mujhse kuch chupaoge.
Karan :- mujhe maaf kerna meri gudiya , itne samay se mane tumse ye baat chupayi , actually m us time khelne ni , balki tution classes dene jata tha.
Jyoti :- kya.
Ha dosto karan kafi pahale ye samjh chuka tha ki kabhi na kabhi aaj jesi paristhitiya unki life me jarur aayengi or unke pita ka vyavahar se ye dar uska or bhi sudridh ho raha tha , use apni chinta ni , balki jyoti k bhavishya ki chinta thi.
Isliye usne jyoti se chipa ker chote bacho or apni class k kuch amir bacho ko tution dena start ker diya, jiske badle me use aaram se mahine k 10 15 hajar rs mil jate.
Usne ye baat jyoti se isliye chupayi , kyunki ye baat ager wo jyoti ko batata to jyoti use esa bilkul na kerne deti , ye samjh k uske kaaran uske bhai ko uske kaaran taklif ho rahi h.
Shuru shuru me to bas wo sare peso ko ikhata kerta , lekin use kya fayda hota , tab ek din usne apne principal se is baare me sujhav manga to principal bola.
Principal :- beta aap apne or apni sister k future k liye itna soch rahe ho ye bahut achi baat h , or har bache ko esa sochna or kerna bhi chahiye.
Lekin ager acha fal pana ho to keval karm kerna hi paryapt ni hota , uske liye ye bhi dekhna padta h ki apna karm kerne ka tarika kya h.
Mere kahane ka matlab h,Beta jo tum earning ker rahe ho inhe bas yu hi apne pas mat rakho , balki inhe sahi jagah invest kero.
Karan is baare me sun principal se hi help mangta h to principal apne ek khas dost jo in sab mamlo me expert tha or share market m broker bhi usse karan ko milvata h.
Wo broker karan ko bilkul sahi advice deta h, jise man karan jyoti k nam se ek demate account khol , apne kuch pese invest ker deta h or kuch pese kahi or jagaho pe.
Shuru shuru me to karan ko loss bear kerna pada , per dhire dhire usko fayda bhi hone laga
Wo chahe jitna bhi ho per karan santusht tha ki , nuksan to ni ho raha or sath sath wo apne aas pas k chote mote ya bade compitition me bhi participate kerta rahata, jiski prize money wo apne shares me lagata
Fir mahashivratri k baad 11 lakh me se 2.5 rs bach gaye , tab karan akele hi wo pese pandit ji ko dene gaya to pandit ji bole.
Pandit ji :- beta ye baki pese m ni le sakta , ise tum apne pas hi rakho
Karan :- ni pandit ji ye pese bhagwan k h , inhe apne pas rakhna paap hoga
Pandit :- beta ye tumhari mahant ki kamai h , or mahant ki kamai ko rakhna kese pap hua or vese bhi bhagwan to bhav k bhuke h unhe in peso se kya kaam , vo to hamesha yahi chahenge ki unka bhakt har taklif se door rahe , isliye tume ye pese rakhne honge , tumhe tumhare shiv ki kasam .
Kasam sun karan ko manna pada , or usne kuch peso ko to apne shares account m invest ker diya or baki bache peso se usne ek chota sa plot kharid liya , jyoti k naam se hi.
Maa lakshmi or mahadev ki kripa se bahut kam time me uske investment or jamin ki value achi khasi ho gayi.
Or tab tak karan ki nokri bhi lag gayi thi uski bhua ki company me, isliye karan ne socha tha ki wo ye sab ek surprise gift ki tarah jyoti ko dega , apne or jyoti k 21ve janmdin per.
Lekin usse pahale hi wo hadsa hua or jab karan or jyoti ko maa lakshmi se maha aishwaryashali hone ka vardan mila to uske plot or shares ki kimat to mano aasman chune lagi .
Or ye baat karan ko kal hi pata chali thi, apni shaktiyon k dwara.
Jiska natija aaj samne h ki karan ne aaj apne dam pe apni bahan ko karodpati bana dala.
Jyoti jese hi ye sunti h , to apne bhai ka apne liye itna prem dekh uski ankh nam ho gayi or wo karan k gale lag subakne lagi.
Jise dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha or wo uske sir ko hilate hue bola.
Karan :- gudiya tum ro kyu rahi ho please chup ho jao , acha kahi tum mujhse isliye to naraj jinki mane tumse ye baat chupayi , ager esa h to please apne bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya , chahe to koi bhi saza dede , per please yu ro ker mujhe kyu tadfa rahi h.
Ye bol karan ne apne kaan pakad liye , jise dekh jyoti ne turant rona chod karan ko esa kerne se roka or boli.
Jyoti :- are are bhai esa kerke mujhe sharminda mat kijiye , ye ansu to khushi k h , ye dekh ker ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar kerte ho , aapne sirf mere liye itni kam umar me itni taklif jheli , or mujhe ye baat jahir tak na hone di.
(Udaas hote hue) or ek m hu jo aaj tak aapke liye kuch na ker saki , or ulta aap pe hi bojh ban gayi.
Karan tez aawaz me :- jyotii.
Karan ki tez aawaz sun ek baar to jyoti or ridhima dono kamp si gayi .
Karan ko jab is baat ka aahas hua to usne khud pe control kiya or bola.
Karan :- ye tu kesi baat ker rahi h gudiya , aaj to esa bol diya, ager dobara esa bola na to m tujhse kabhi baat ni karunga.
Kisne kaha tu bojh h mere pe , pagli ye pesa to aaj h kAl ni hoga, lekin meri asli sampati , meri shakti meri sathi sab kuch h tu , tu hi to h jo mera har mushkil ghadi me mera sahara bani , jab kabhi ma ki yaad aayi to mujhse choti hone k bavjood bhi , ek ma ki tarah mujhe sambhLa or yaha tak ki lori sunake sulaya bhi. Tu sirf meri bahan ni meri sakhi , meri dost meri jindagi h tu.
Or ager tera ye sath na hota mere pas to shayad m kabka mar....
Karan abhi aage kuch bolta ,usse pahale hi jyoti ne karan k muh pe hath rakh diya or na me sir hilane lagi , jese esi manhoos baat na bolne ko bol rahi ho.
Jyoti ki is masoom aada pe karan ko pyaar aaya or usne uske dono gaal chum usko apne sine se laga liya .
Tabhi ridhima bol padi.
Ridhima :- are bhai m bhi hu yaha , koi hamse bhi to pucho , lagta h mere chote bhai bahan apni didi se pyaar ni kerte.
Ye bol vo muh fula k beth gaye , tabhi karan or jyoti ne ek dusre ki or dekha or karan ne shetani muskan k sath ankh mari , jiske sath jyoti k chahre pe bhi, or phir dono ridhima pe tut pade or use gudgudi kerte hue , uske chahre ko gila kerne lage.
Thodi der masti majak k baad , sab fir se kaam me lag gaye or karan apne man me bola.
Karan :- mere so called papa , mr ranvir sharma , bahut jer liya aapne apni paap ki kamayi pe aish , ab dandnayak k dand pane ko sajj ho jao.
Wahi dusri or
Raat ko karib 11 baje radha k ghar k bahar unka security guard apni duty pe laga hua tha, wese to radha k ghar me ek ni 2 guards the , per aaj dusre wale ki tabiyat kharab thi , to wo aaj chuti pe tha.
Tabhi ek anjan aadmi waha aata h or guard se puchta h ki
Admi :- bhai sahab kya mr mehta ka ghar yahi h.
Guard :- ji ni aap galat adress pe aagaye ho , ye to humari madam mrs garima gupta ka ghar h.
Admi :- kahi ap un mashoor business women mrs gupta ki baat to ni ker rahe.
Guard ko ab kuch shak sa hone laga to bola.
Guard :- ha ha unhi ka h , ab tum jao or mujhe apna kam kerne do.
Admi :- are are jata hu na dost , gussa kyu kerte ho , vese kon kon h aapki madam ki family me.
Guard apna danda dikhate :- usse tumhe kya matlab , tum chalo nikalo yaha se.
Admi apni jeb se use 2000 k 2 note nikal dikhate hue ,
Admi :- are are dost gussa kyu hote ho mane to bas ye soch k tumse pucha ki chalo tumhara koi fayda ho.
Guard thoda lalachi type ka admi tha , usne us admi se wo 4 hajar rs leker garima k ghar k members or jitna wo janta tha , sab us admi ko bata dala.
Jise sun wo admi muskurate hue waha se chala gaya or kuch aage jaker wo kisi ko call kerke bolta h.
Admi :- hello boss aapne jo kaam bola tha wo ho gaya h .
Ye bol wo sari info phone pe samne wale ko bata deta h.
Samne wala :- shabas , tumhari payment pahunch jayegi kal subah tere pas.
Fir wo aadmi phone kaat k waha se nikal jata h
Wahi dusri or
Subah ho chuki thi or naina ko bhi hosh aachuka tha , jise dekh veer or preety fule ni sama rahe the.
Naina bhi khush thi thik ho ker , lekin uske man me asankhya prashno ka makadjal ban chuka tha , jiska use kuch samjh ni araha tha ki wo kese utter ka pata kare.
Or sath me 2 naam gunj rahe the, jo use 5ve drishya me sune the jo the
Karan or jyoti.
Na jane kyu use in namo se apna bahut purana sambhandh juda h , esa pratit ho raha tha
Kuch der itne sawalo k bare me sochne se uske sir me dard hone laga , jiske liye doctor ne dawai dete huee use rest kerne ka bola .
Preety :- doctor sahi bol rahi h sister , tum abhi bas aaram kero or kisi bare me mat socho , jab tak tum thik ni ho jati , m tumhe kayi ni jane dungi.
Naina ankh mar :- are wah jiju , hamari preetu to bahut achi hindi bolne lagi , lagta h apne bahut achi coaching di h hamari sister ko.
Ye bol wo hasne lagi or veer bhi , lekin preety sharmane lagi , aaj bahut time baad 3no k chahre pe khushi loti thi .
Wahi dusri or
Wahi jaha ye nayi subah veer or preety k liye khushkhabri laya to vahi ranveer k liye ek bada jhatka laya.
Ranvir jo raat bhar ayashi ker raha tha , ek call girl k sath , wo abhi bed pe nanga so raha tha or side me wahi call girl bhi nangi padi thi.
Tabhi ranveer ka phone baja .
Ranveer jhalate hue :- ye subah subah kiski gand me khujli machi h jo is time phone ker raha h.
Ranvir ne jese hi phone recive kiya to samne wale ne jo usse kaha use sun uske chahare ka rang udd gaya.
Ranvir gusse or pareshani me :- kya....
Ranvir ki awaz sun wo call girl bhi jag gayi or usne bina baat jane boli
Call girl :- kya baat h sahab , aaj to bahut jaldi uth gaye aap , kahe to ek round or ho jaye.
Lekin ranvir gusse me pagal ho raha tha, isliye usne us ladki k muh pe pese mar , use dhakke mar ke bhaga diya waha se or wo ladki bhi ranvir ko gali dete hue waha se nikal gayi
Fir ranvir gusse me jaldi se teyar ho waha se nikal pada apni car me beth ker , ek or
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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shandaar update bhaiUpdate no :- 111
Jyoti k anterdhyan hone k baad veer bhi apne raste ki or nikal pada , thode aage chalne pr use auto rikshaw bhi mil gaya , jisne beth wo hospital ki or nikal gaya.
Karib adhe ghante baad wo hospital pahunch gaya , jab wo naina k kamre m pahuncha to paya ki naina k chahre pe ek muskan h hosh me na hote hue bhi , jise dekh veer ko bhi thodi khushi hoti h.
Or wahi side me uski jaan preety ,jo subah se hi yaha bethi thi , thak k so chuki thi , jo sote hue bahut pyari lag rahi thi.
Jise dekh veer khud ko rok na paya or dhire se uske gaal ko chum liya, taki wo jag na jaye.
Per veer k sparsh ko preeti nind me bhi pahachan gayi or uski turant ankh khul gayi .
Or jese hi usne veer ko waha paya to khushi se uchal padi or uske gale lag uske pure chahare ko gila ker dala.
Veer :- are are bas kero jan , tum to ese react ker rahi ho jese salo baad mile h , 2 din m hi to aagaya m wapas.
Preety :- jan aapke liye 2 din honge , per mere liye to ye 2 din bhi kayi salo k barabar the , vese aap aarahe ho ye bataya kyu ni.
Veer halke se preeti k hoth chum :- bata deta to meri jaan k chahare pe ye surprise milne ki khushi kaha se dikhti mujhe .
Preeti veer ki is harkat se thoda sharma gayi or uske sine me apna muh chupa liya.
Kuch der ki yu hi pyaar bhari mulakat k baad preeti boli.
Preety :- master ji ka kaam ho gaya kya vese jan.
Veer :- haa jan or sath me tumne jese bola tha , m maa jhandewali k mandir bhi gaya tha , or hamari naina ki salamati ki dua bhi mangi , (mala dikhate hue) dekho m maa ka ashirvad bhi laya hu apne sath , dekhna ab humari naina jald hi thik ho jayegi.
Ye bol veer ne wo mala naina k gale me dal di or maa ka tilak uske mathe pe laga diya.
Tabhi preety ki najar veer k gale me padi jyoti ki di hui shiv rudraksh mala pe padi.
Preety :- wow kitni sunder mala h ye jaan , ye tumne kab li , kya m ise le sakti hu
Veer :- jan ager tum ye jan bhi mang lo to khushi khushi dedu , per sorry yaar ye mala me ni de sakta.
Preeti muh bigadte hue :- wo kyu bhala , esa kya h isme.
Veer :- wo kya h na jaan , ye mala mujhe kisi ne gift di h, jo meri bahut kam time me hi mere liye special ban chuki h.
Preeti ban chuki h sun k ye samjh gayi ki wo koi ladki h , or ye sun wo chid jati h or veer yahi to chahata tha , wo preeti k maje le raha tha.
Preeti :- acha ji, matlab wo ladki h.
Veer :- ab chuki h , ye shabd ladko k liye to use hote ni.
Preeti chidte hue :- acha mujhe bhi to pata chale , esi kon aagayi ab aapki life me , jo itni special ho gayi aapke liye .
Ab to mujhe ye mala chahiye hi h.
Veer :- sorry jan mane kaha na , ye mala m ni de sakta , ye meri special one ka gift h.
Preeti :- esi kon h wo apki, kya wo mujhse bhi jyada special ho gayi aapke liye.
Veer :- esa kyu bolti ho jan, mane esa kab kaha , wo tumse jyada to ni h , per wo mere liye tumse kam bhi ni h special.
Preeti ye sun roni si ho gayi or nam ankho se boli :- ager esa h to jao na uske paas,mere pass kyu aaye.
Veer :- are are meri jan tum to bura man gayi , pahale sun to lo wo h kon , usse sirf mera hi ni , ab tumhara rishta bhi bandh chuka h.
Preeti bacho jese jhala ke :- ji ni mujhe koi sautan ni chahiye.
Veer haste hue :- hey bhagwan, tum kaha ki baat kaha le gayi, are meri bholi preetu, wo jiski m baat ker raha hu , wo or koi ni tumhari nanad yani ki meri bahan h.
Preeti ye sun chonk gayi or boli
Preeti :- nanand , per kese ?
Preeti or veer bachpan se dost ththe , to preeti veer k bare m ache se janti thi or uski family k hadse k baare me bhi, to usko veer k bahan wali baat pe hairani hui .
Tab veer yaha se delhi tak k safar k baare me sari baat preeti ko bata deta h , sivaye karan jyoti or apni shaktiyo wali baat chod ke , kyunki filhal k liye jyoti ne hi use mana kiya tha is baare me unhe batane ko.
Sari baate sun ke preeti bahut khush hui kyunki veer ko hamesha ye dukh rahata tha ki uski koi bahan ni thi or aaj veer ki ye khawaish puri ho chuki thi , sath me use ek nanad bhi mil gayi thi.
Fir preety dhire dhire veer ko mukke marne lagi pyaar se or bolne lagi.
Preeti :- itni der se mujhe pareshan ker rahe ho , bol ni sakte the ki aap didi ki baat ker rahe ho.
Veer :- ho ho sautan se sidha didi.
Preeti ghurte hue :- jaan.
Veer :- acha baba sorry, ab tum hi batao kya jyoti bahan ki di hui ye mala ko tumhe dena chahiye mujhe.
Preeti :- ni ni jan , ye to didi ka pyaar h , jispe aapka hi hak h .
Abhi vo dono baat ker hi rahe the ki achanak kuch esa hua ki wo dono to kya sara hospital herani m pad gaya.
Hua yu ki naina k gale me mojud us mala se wahi shakti punj , jo karan se nikal ker mala m sama gaya tha, wahi shaktipunj mala se nikal naina k ander sama gaya.
Tabhi naina k sharir se atyant tejmayi prakash nikalne laga or felne laga ,jiske kaaran veer or preeti ko ankhe band kerni padi.
Dhire dhire wo prakash pure hospital me fel jata , per na Jane kese wo prakash kamre se bahar na gaya.
Kuch der baad jab prakash hata to veer or preety ne paya , naina jor jor se sanse le rahi h ,samne lcd p heartbeats bhi normal se kafi tez h or fir naina ek baar niii ,chilate hue uth gayi or turant hi wapas behosh ho gayi.
Veer or preeti ye sab dekh dar gaye , per veer ne khud ko sambhala or jaldi se doctor ko bula k laya.
Doctor jab naina ko check kerti h to heran ho jati h or boli.
Doctor :- it's miracles , hows this possible,apki friend ab coma se bahar achuki, she is safe now.
Veer or preety ne to jese ye suna uski khushi ka thikana hi na raha.
Doctor naina k gale me mala dekh :- ye mala inke gals m kese aayi.
Veer :- ye mane pahanayi doctor , ye mata jhandewali ka prasad h.
Doctor :- ager esa h to ye jan lijiye, ma ne aapki sun li h , aapki friend safe h , or mane inhe filhal injection dediya h , kal morning tak inhe hosh aajayega.
Ye bol wo veer or preety ko congratulations kah ker waha se chali gayi.
Aaiye ye bhi jan lete h , jab ye sab chamatkar hua to naina k antarman m kya hua....
Short flashback
Naina jo anjane awsad k chalte koma m chali gayi thi , uske gale me padte hi uske antarman me ek aawaz gunji.
Aawaz :- utho putri kab tak yu nirasha m uljhi rahogi , utho or apne kartavyon ka nirvahan kero , kya tum bhul gayi , apne baba ki nirmam hatya, jiska pratishodh lene k liye ye yatra aarambh ki , bhul gayi apni maa ko jo varsho se us dusht ki kaid me keval tumhari pratiksha me jivit h.
Utho putri ye samay yu nirash hone ka ni balki samay h papiyo k nash or sajano k udhar ka.
Is aawaz k chup hone k baad , use kuch drishya dikhe jo dhundhale the
Pahala drishya.
Ek bhayankar yudh ho raha tha 2 senao ke bich , jitna use dikh raha tha , us hisab se to wo dono dal dev or asur the , yani ki wo drishya deva sur sangram tha.
Tabhi yudh itna bhayanak ho gaya ki , shrishti sankat me aagayi , lekin tabhi achanak ek dhamake k sath yudh ruk gaya or ek awaj gunji.
Awaz :- nyay anayay, pap or punya , ab iska nirnay koi or karega , shighr hi ek urja punj astitv me aayega , jo apne paraye ki sima se uthkar shrishti k pratyek jeev k sath , sambhav se nyay karega.
Is baat k puri hone k sath hi drishya badal gaya or ek or drishy unki ankho k samne aagaya
Dusra Drishya
Ye samudra manthan ka tha , jaha halahal ko mahadev ne jab pi liya tha , to kisi vyakti ne ek jaduyi pyaale me us bhayanak vish ki ek bund chupke le li or apne paas rakh li.
Tisra drishya
Jo kuch esa tha ki ek vyakti bahut hi bhayanak jagah khada h or uski hatho me ek bacha h , use wo dekh ker has raha h or bol raha h.
Vyakti haste hue :- hahaha , akhir kar mere udeshya ka pratham charan purn hua , (us bache ko dekhte hue) mere bache tu hi banega mera wo hatyar , jiske dam p m pure sansar per apna varchasv sthapit ker apne apman ka pratishodh lunga.
Tisra drishy
Ek bada sa tez punj antariksh m mojud tha ,jo achanak 3 bhago me bat gaya.
Jinme se ek bhag gayav ho gaya or baki 2 bhago ko ek nile kapde pahana purush apne sath le gaya or ek orat k garbh me sthapit ker diya.
Chotha drishy.
Pichle drishy wali orat 2 bahut hi khubsurat bacho ko janm de rahi h is drishy me or tabhi vahi vyakti waha prakat hota h or un dono me kuch bate hui jinhe naina sun na payi.
Fir 5va or aakhiri drishy
Jisme wo dekhti h ki ek aadmi or wo orat ek car me betha kayi ja rahe h or achanak car ka balance bigad gaya or wo nadi m gir padi.
Yahi drishy dekh naina chinkhte hue uth ker coma se bahar aagayi , lekin kamjori k kaaran vo vapas behosh ho gayi.
Flashback end.
Jab tak naina ko waps hosh aata h , aaiye jab tak vapas hero ki or chalte h.
Dopahar ko jab ridhi ne jab karan ko company k halat bataye or property bechne ki baat ki tab karan ne saf saf mana ker diya ki wo apni maa se judi kisi chij ko ni bechega.
Jyoti :- bhai chahti to m bhi ni esa kerna , per hamare pas koi option bhi to ni h na.
Karan :- rasta h gudiya , ek investor h jo hamari company m investment abhi hatho hath ker dega.
Ridhi :- kon bhai , ager ese kisi ko jante ho to bulao na use , mujhe bhi milvao.
Karan :- bulane ki kya jarurat h di , investor aapke samne hi to h.
Ye baat karan ne jyoti ko dekhte hue kahi , jise sun ridhima or jyoti dono chonk gayi buri tarah.
Jyoti :- bhai me, per kese ?
Riddhi :- ha bhai, gudiya k pass itni large amount kaha se aayegi.
Karan :- di aap large amount ki baat ker rahi ho , aapko m ye baat bata du aaj k time m hamari gudiya 70 crore ki malkin h.
Karan to jese bomb pe bomb fode ja raha tha.
Jyoti :- bhaiya ye aap kya bol rahe ho mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha, ye sab aap kya bol rahe ho , m kese.
Karan :- batata hu meri gudiya, tumhe yaad h jab hum 8th me the , tab me har roj 3-4 ghante k liye bahr jata tha , tujhe koi na koi bahana ker , ya apne friends k sath khelne ka bol.or esa 12 th tak chala.
Jyoti :- ha bhai , mujhe achi tarah yaad h or mujhe is baat ki hamesha herani rahati ki aap jate kaha ho , kyunki us samy to humare koi dost to tha hi ni, lekin mujhe aap p pura vishwas tha us time bhi or aaj bhi ki aap kuch bhi galat ni ker sakte or na hi mujhse kuch chupaoge.
Karan :- mujhe maaf kerna meri gudiya , itne samay se mane tumse ye baat chupayi , actually m us time khelne ni , balki tution classes dene jata tha.
Jyoti :- kya.
Ha dosto karan kafi pahale ye samjh chuka tha ki kabhi na kabhi aaj jesi paristhitiya unki life me jarur aayengi or unke pita ka vyavahar se ye dar uska or bhi sudridh ho raha tha , use apni chinta ni , balki jyoti k bhavishya ki chinta thi.
Isliye usne jyoti se chipa ker chote bacho or apni class k kuch amir bacho ko tution dena start ker diya, jiske badle me use aaram se mahine k 10 15 hajar rs mil jate.
Usne ye baat jyoti se isliye chupayi , kyunki ye baat ager wo jyoti ko batata to jyoti use esa bilkul na kerne deti , ye samjh k uske kaaran uske bhai ko uske kaaran taklif ho rahi h.
Shuru shuru me to bas wo sare peso ko ikhata kerta , lekin use kya fayda hota , tab ek din usne apne principal se is baare me sujhav manga to principal bola.
Principal :- beta aap apne or apni sister k future k liye itna soch rahe ho ye bahut achi baat h , or har bache ko esa sochna or kerna bhi chahiye.
Lekin ager acha fal pana ho to keval karm kerna hi paryapt ni hota , uske liye ye bhi dekhna padta h ki apna karm kerne ka tarika kya h.
Mere kahane ka matlab h,Beta jo tum earning ker rahe ho inhe bas yu hi apne pas mat rakho , balki inhe sahi jagah invest kero.
Karan is baare me sun principal se hi help mangta h to principal apne ek khas dost jo in sab mamlo me expert tha or share market m broker bhi usse karan ko milvata h.
Wo broker karan ko bilkul sahi advice deta h, jise man karan jyoti k nam se ek demate account khol , apne kuch pese invest ker deta h or kuch pese kahi or jagaho pe.
Shuru shuru me to karan ko loss bear kerna pada , per dhire dhire usko fayda bhi hone laga
Wo chahe jitna bhi ho per karan santusht tha ki , nuksan to ni ho raha or sath sath wo apne aas pas k chote mote ya bade compitition me bhi participate kerta rahata, jiski prize money wo apne shares me lagata
Fir mahashivratri k baad 11 lakh me se 2.5 rs bach gaye , tab karan akele hi wo pese pandit ji ko dene gaya to pandit ji bole.
Pandit ji :- beta ye baki pese m ni le sakta , ise tum apne pas hi rakho
Karan :- ni pandit ji ye pese bhagwan k h , inhe apne pas rakhna paap hoga
Pandit :- beta ye tumhari mahant ki kamai h , or mahant ki kamai ko rakhna kese pap hua or vese bhi bhagwan to bhav k bhuke h unhe in peso se kya kaam , vo to hamesha yahi chahenge ki unka bhakt har taklif se door rahe , isliye tume ye pese rakhne honge , tumhe tumhare shiv ki kasam .
Kasam sun karan ko manna pada , or usne kuch peso ko to apne shares account m invest ker diya or baki bache peso se usne ek chota sa plot kharid liya , jyoti k naam se hi.
Maa lakshmi or mahadev ki kripa se bahut kam time me uske investment or jamin ki value achi khasi ho gayi.
Or tab tak karan ki nokri bhi lag gayi thi uski bhua ki company me, isliye karan ne socha tha ki wo ye sab ek surprise gift ki tarah jyoti ko dega , apne or jyoti k 21ve janmdin per.
Lekin usse pahale hi wo hadsa hua or jab karan or jyoti ko maa lakshmi se maha aishwaryashali hone ka vardan mila to uske plot or shares ki kimat to mano aasman chune lagi .
Or ye baat karan ko kal hi pata chali thi, apni shaktiyon k dwara.
Jiska natija aaj samne h ki karan ne aaj apne dam pe apni bahan ko karodpati bana dala.
Jyoti jese hi ye sunti h , to apne bhai ka apne liye itna prem dekh uski ankh nam ho gayi or wo karan k gale lag subakne lagi.
Jise dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha or wo uske sir ko hilate hue bola.
Karan :- gudiya tum ro kyu rahi ho please chup ho jao , acha kahi tum mujhse isliye to naraj jinki mane tumse ye baat chupayi , ager esa h to please apne bhai ko maaf ker de gudiya , chahe to koi bhi saza dede , per please yu ro ker mujhe kyu tadfa rahi h.
Ye bol karan ne apne kaan pakad liye , jise dekh jyoti ne turant rona chod karan ko esa kerne se roka or boli.
Jyoti :- are are bhai esa kerke mujhe sharminda mat kijiye , ye ansu to khushi k h , ye dekh ker ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar kerte ho , aapne sirf mere liye itni kam umar me itni taklif jheli , or mujhe ye baat jahir tak na hone di.
(Udaas hote hue) or ek m hu jo aaj tak aapke liye kuch na ker saki , or ulta aap pe hi bojh ban gayi.
Karan tez aawaz me :- jyotii.
Karan ki tez aawaz sun ek baar to jyoti or ridhima dono kamp si gayi .
Karan ko jab is baat ka aahas hua to usne khud pe control kiya or bola.
Karan :- ye tu kesi baat ker rahi h gudiya , aaj to esa bol diya, ager dobara esa bola na to m tujhse kabhi baat ni karunga.
Kisne kaha tu bojh h mere pe , pagli ye pesa to aaj h kAl ni hoga, lekin meri asli sampati , meri shakti meri sathi sab kuch h tu , tu hi to h jo mera har mushkil ghadi me mera sahara bani , jab kabhi ma ki yaad aayi to mujhse choti hone k bavjood bhi , ek ma ki tarah mujhe sambhLa or yaha tak ki lori sunake sulaya bhi. Tu sirf meri bahan ni meri sakhi , meri dost meri jindagi h tu.
Or ager tera ye sath na hota mere pas to shayad m kabka mar....
Karan abhi aage kuch bolta ,usse pahale hi jyoti ne karan k muh pe hath rakh diya or na me sir hilane lagi , jese esi manhoos baat na bolne ko bol rahi ho.
Jyoti ki is masoom aada pe karan ko pyaar aaya or usne uske dono gaal chum usko apne sine se laga liya .
Tabhi ridhima bol padi.
Ridhima :- are bhai m bhi hu yaha , koi hamse bhi to pucho , lagta h mere chote bhai bahan apni didi se pyaar ni kerte.
Ye bol vo muh fula k beth gaye , tabhi karan or jyoti ne ek dusre ki or dekha or karan ne shetani muskan k sath ankh mari , jiske sath jyoti k chahre pe bhi, or phir dono ridhima pe tut pade or use gudgudi kerte hue , uske chahre ko gila kerne lage.
Thodi der masti majak k baad , sab fir se kaam me lag gaye or karan apne man me bola.
Karan :- mere so called papa , mr ranvir sharma , bahut jer liya aapne apni paap ki kamayi pe aish , ab dandnayak k dand pane ko sajj ho jao.
Wahi dusri or
Raat ko karib 11 baje radha k ghar k bahar unka security guard apni duty pe laga hua tha, wese to radha k ghar me ek ni 2 guards the , per aaj dusre wale ki tabiyat kharab thi , to wo aaj chuti pe tha.
Tabhi ek anjan aadmi waha aata h or guard se puchta h ki
Admi :- bhai sahab kya mr mehta ka ghar yahi h.
Guard :- ji ni aap galat adress pe aagaye ho , ye to humari madam mrs garima gupta ka ghar h.
Admi :- kahi ap un mashoor business women mrs gupta ki baat to ni ker rahe.
Guard ko ab kuch shak sa hone laga to bola.
Guard :- ha ha unhi ka h , ab tum jao or mujhe apna kam kerne do.
Admi :- are are jata hu na dost , gussa kyu kerte ho , vese kon kon h aapki madam ki family me.
Guard apna danda dikhate :- usse tumhe kya matlab , tum chalo nikalo yaha se.
Admi apni jeb se use 2000 k 2 note nikal dikhate hue ,
Admi :- are are dost gussa kyu hote ho mane to bas ye soch k tumse pucha ki chalo tumhara koi fayda ho.
Guard thoda lalachi type ka admi tha , usne us admi se wo 4 hajar rs leker garima k ghar k members or jitna wo janta tha , sab us admi ko bata dala.
Jise sun wo admi muskurate hue waha se chala gaya or kuch aage jaker wo kisi ko call kerke bolta h.
Admi :- hello boss aapne jo kaam bola tha wo ho gaya h .
Ye bol wo sari info phone pe samne wale ko bata deta h.
Samne wala :- shabas , tumhari payment pahunch jayegi kal subah tere pas.
Fir wo aadmi phone kaat k waha se nikal jata h
Wahi dusri or
Subah ho chuki thi or naina ko bhi hosh aachuka tha , jise dekh veer or preety fule ni sama rahe the.
Naina bhi khush thi thik ho ker , lekin uske man me asankhya prashno ka makadjal ban chuka tha , jiska use kuch samjh ni araha tha ki wo kese utter ka pata kare.
Or sath me 2 naam gunj rahe the, jo use 5ve drishya me sune the jo the
Karan or jyoti.
Na jane kyu use in namo se apna bahut purana sambhandh juda h , esa pratit ho raha tha
Kuch der itne sawalo k bare me sochne se uske sir me dard hone laga , jiske liye doctor ne dawai dete huee use rest kerne ka bola .
Preety :- doctor sahi bol rahi h sister , tum abhi bas aaram kero or kisi bare me mat socho , jab tak tum thik ni ho jati , m tumhe kayi ni jane dungi.
Naina ankh mar :- are wah jiju , hamari preetu to bahut achi hindi bolne lagi , lagta h apne bahut achi coaching di h hamari sister ko.
Ye bol wo hasne lagi or veer bhi , lekin preety sharmane lagi , aaj bahut time baad 3no k chahre pe khushi loti thi .
Wahi dusri or
Wahi jaha ye nayi subah veer or preety k liye khushkhabri laya to vahi ranveer k liye ek bada jhatka laya.
Ranvir jo raat bhar ayashi ker raha tha , ek call girl k sath , wo abhi bed pe nanga so raha tha or side me wahi call girl bhi nangi padi thi.
Tabhi ranveer ka phone baja .
Ranveer jhalate hue :- ye subah subah kiski gand me khujli machi h jo is time phone ker raha h.
Ranvir ne jese hi phone recive kiya to samne wale ne jo usse kaha use sun uske chahare ka rang udd gaya.
Ranvir gusse or pareshani me :- kya....
Ranvir ki awaz sun wo call girl bhi jag gayi or usne bina baat jane boli
Call girl :- kya baat h sahab , aaj to bahut jaldi uth gaye aap , kahe to ek round or ho jaye.
Lekin ranvir gusse me pagal ho raha tha, isliye usne us ladki k muh pe pese mar , use dhakke mar ke bhaga diya waha se or wo ladki bhi ranvir ko gali dete hue waha se nikal gayi
Fir ranvir gusse me jaldi se teyar ho waha se nikal pada apni car me beth ker , ek or
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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