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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

Kya mujhe story restart kerni chahiye

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TheMysterious_Ng

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Nice update..


Aisa Kya karm karne Wala h Karan Jiski wajah s sab log pareshan h . Karan to Dandnayak k Roop m sare galat kamo ko hi rok Raha h aur saza de Raha h phir usse aisa Kya hone wala h.. kahi ye sab ranvir s related to ni h h , par ranvir to khud hi itna bada paapi h ki usko saja Dena to banta h ..

Well , Naina n party ka ek ar plan kaam Kar Gaya aur unhone bhediye k sath uski MAA ka bi khathma Kar dia waise itna kathin Ni Raha kyuki dayan n to khud hi dukhi hoke suicide krlia tha par Naina ki chinta ab dusri h..

Preety ka gussa badhta ja Raha h shayad isliye ki wo sab lakshy k karib h Ur Jahan tk lag Raha h samrat aur preety shayad ek hi jaati k ho isliye preetyvjaise unke karib ja rahi h , uske andar kaa tritya insani dimag p havi hota ja rha hoga..

Kher , let's see Kya hota h age...
 

Naina

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Savior Naina ne ush dayan aur ushke bete ko unke aanjam tak pahuncha hi diya.. preety ne bhi bahot sath diya ..Humm to fir se Naina & party chal pade agle pawab ke aur...
Udhar ranvir bhi bawla ho geya hai joh chije tod fod kar raha hai..
Let's see what happens next
wah dil khush kar diya aapne writer sahab sahab...
Brilliant update... Great going
 

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Cha gaye guru tum cha gaye yaar super haaaasssshhhhhhh
Warewolf ka tho kaam tamam kardiya ab ye preety ko kya hua shayad samrat hi hai jo usse preety badla lena chahti hai kis karan vash ye muje thoda andaza hua hai per me nahi batavunga jisne iss story ko likha hai usko hi likhne do or jo ghatna kram shanidev ko chintit kar rahe hai usse sab sahi ho


OM NAMAH SHANISHCHARAYAH
 

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Wahi dusri or

Abhishek k jane k baad vidhi fir se udas ho gayi , jise naina ne notice ker liya.

Naina ne is baare me vidhi se baad m baat kerne ka socha , or wo abhi rest kerne apne kamre me chali gayi.

Agli subah jab sab fresh ho gaye the ,tabhi bhola bhi vaha aapahuncha or khans banane laga , subah k nashte k liye.

Tabhi piche se veer aaya or or bhola k kandhe pe ek chapat lagate hue bola.

Veer :- or bhai bhola , kya hal chal h , badi bhuk lagi h yar kya bana h.

Lekin veer ne jese hi bhola k kandhe pe hath rakha uski ek tez chink nikal gayi .

Bhola :- aaahhh.

Jise sun veer ghabra gaya or uski chink sun sab vaha aaphunche, sab ye dekh k chonk gaye ki bhola k kandhe se khun nikal raha tha.

Naina :- kya hua veer yaha , ye bhola chilaya kyu or ye khun kesa .

Veer :- pata ni naina ye sab kese hua.

Ye bol veer abhi abhi jo hua uske bare me naina ko bata deta h, jise sun veer ko naina bhola ki shirt utarne ko bolti h.

Bhola khub na nukur kerta h , per naina ni mani or usne veer se bhola ki Shirt utarwa hi di.

T shirt utarte hi veer ne dekha ki bhola ka ek kandha buri tarah ghayal h or uspe patiya bandhi h.

Naina ;- are bhola ye chot kese lagi tumhe .

Bhola hickhicate hue :- wo mesahab kal raat ek bhediye ne mujh per hamla ker diya , shayad wo hi tha , jiske baare me aapne bataya tha.

Wo to meri kismat achi h ki m bach k bhag gaya.

Naina :- wese ye baat thodi aajib ni h preety , jab humne us bhediye ko goli mari tab uske daye kandhe pe hi goli lagi thi or tumhare bhi chot daye kandhe pe h.

(Thoda serious hote hue) kahi esa to ni ki tum hi ho vo darinda.

Bhola hickichate hue :- nnni nni memsahab ye ap kya bol rahi ho m kese bhediya hounga m to.

Naina haste hue :- are bas bas itna dar kyu rahe ho yar , m to bas majak ker rahi thi.

Ager tumhe chot lagi to kaam pe kyu aaye tum esa kero ab tum ghar jao.

Bhola mana kerta h ,lekin naina ni mani or use bhej hi diya.

Bhola k jane k baad naina ne vidhi se boli.

Naina :- vidhi di mujhe kuch baat kerni h aapse akele me.

Dono ek kamre me jate h or fir naina boli.

Naina :- di m baat ko jyada ghumaungi firaungi ni , bas m yahi confirm kerna chahati hu ki aap officer abhishek se pyaar kerti ho na.

Vidhi ye sun chonk gayi or boli.

Vidhi jhut :- ni to ye tumse kisne kaha.

Naina :- dekhiye di humare pass time bahut kam h aapke 23ve birthday ko keval 5 din bache h or yadi aapke dil m sach m kuch h to bol dijiye, kahi esa na ho bahut der ho jaye

Naina ki baat sun vidhi ghabra gayi or usne sharmate hue is sach ko swikar to ker liya , lekin apne halato ko leke rone lagi , jise naina chup karate hue boli

Naina :- di aap chinta mat kijiye , aapki ye choti bahan aapse vada kerti h ki aapki shadi jarur hogi or abhishek k sath hi hogi.

Vidhi :- per kese.

Naina :- mere paas ek plan or h .

Fir naina ne sabko ander bulaya or sumitra se pahale vidhi k rishte ki baat ki , sumitra bhi apni beti ki khushi ko apni khushi maan ker ha bol di.

Fir naina ne sabko apna plan bataya , jise sunker vidhi boli.

Vidhi :- ni m esa ni ker sakti , m abhishek ki jaan ko khatre me ni dal sakti naina.

Naina :-. Meri baat ko samjhiye di , yahi aakhiri rasta h hamare pass.aap mujhpe bharosa rakhiye di , m aapko vachan deti hu ki abhishek ko kuch ni hoga.

Vidhi :- per kese naina , jesa tumne bataya ki tumhare plan ki safalta k liye us bhediye ki asli pahachan pata hona jaruri h.

Hum kese pata karenge wo kon h.

Preety :- are don't worry big sister , jr sister ne is baare me pahale hi pata ker diyela h , wo jo koi bhi tha , bhesh badal k kuch der pahale tak humare bich hi tha.

Sumitra :- kya kon tha vo.

Naina :- bhola.

Short flashback

Naina ne jabse werewolf ki kahani suni thi or jab se vo bhola se mili thi use bhola ki harkato se uspe shak hone laga.

Jese usko dekhte hi bhola ka naina ko gusse se dekhna , us raat jungle me yantra ko dekh dar jana or fir bar bar kahane pe bhi us yantra ko na pakadna.

Or isliye hi naina ne us nakli shadi wale din bhola lo chuti dedi thi .

Or aaj naina ne bhola k usi side wale khande pe chot dekhi to usne man hi man preety ko apni new power use kerne ko kaha.

Jo ye thi ki wo apni us power ko activate kerne k baad kisi bhi chalawe ko pahachan sakti h ,arthat koi uske samne roop badal k aaye to bhi use uska asli roop dikh jayega.

Vesa hi bhola k sath hua , jese hi preety ne apni power activate ki use bhola ka asli roop najar aagaya or usne naina ko ye baat bata di

Isliye usne bhola ko jabardasti wapas bhej diya.

Sumitra or vidhi ko yakin hi ni ho raha tha , jo wafadar nokar unke 7 salo se kam ker raha tha , wo hi unka asli dushman tha

Sham ko vidhi ne abhishek ko dinner pe bulaya jaha , sumitra ne vidhi ka rishta rakha abhishek k samne

Jise sun abhishek khush ho gaya kyunki vo bhi vidhi ko like kerta tha, lekin vidhi jese hi vo bhi kabhi apne dil ki baat ni kah paya.

Abhishek :- aunty , sach kahu to m bhi college time se vidhi ko chahta hu per kabhi kah ni paya.

Or aaj jab kismat khud mujhe mere pyaar se mila rahi h to m na kese kahu, mujhe ye rishta definitely manjoor h.

TAbhi naina boli .

Naina :- kismat hamesha sath ni deti officer, ager fal pana ho to kuch karm bhi kerne padte .

Abhishek :- matlab

Naina :- matlab yah h ki ager aapko ager vidhi di ko pana h to humara sath dena hoga.

Ye bol naina sari bAate bata ker abhishek ko plan batati h , jise sun abhishek bola.

Abhishek :- m tum logo se kitni baar bolu ki m ye sab bakwas ko ni manta , ye bhut pret tritya sab bakwas h.

Tabhi vaha side me bethi preety jo sari baate sun rahi thi vo gusse se uthi or abhishek ki or badhi.

Naina dar gayi kyunki usne preety ka gussa dekha tha, usne preety ko kuch bolna chaha, per preety ne apna hath uper ker naina ko shant rahane ka ishara kiya.

Preety k hath pe bana trittya ka nishan bhi chamak raha tha, preety ja ker bilkul abhishek k samne khadi ho gayi.

Or apna ek hath abhishek k bagal se aage ese bhadaya, jese kisi chij ko pakad rahi ho.

Abhishek abhi kuch bolta usse pahale hi preety ki banduk jo ek kone me padi hui thi , wo apne aap udte hue preeti k us hath me aagayi.

Abhishek vidhi or sumitra ki to ye dekh ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi.

Preeti style se banduk ko pakde hue :- to mr abhishek abhi bhi in baato ko bakwas bologe , ya plan execute kab kerna h vo discuss ker le.

Abhishek ab kya bolta bichara , vo to heran ho chuka tha ye sab dekh ker or preeti k hath pe chamkte hue nishan dekh ker bhi.

Use live evidence jo mil gaya tha , isliye wo ready ho gaya , or fir sab ne plan ek baar or discuss kiya.

Agli subah

Sumitra ne bhola ko bulaaya or boli.

Sumitra :- maaf kerna beta tumhe chot lagi hui m bhi taklif di , per ye kaam bhi bahut jaruri tha.

Bhola :- are ni ni malkin aap mafi mat mangiye, ye to kaam h mera , vese bhi ab m thik hu.

Sumitra :- chalo ye to achi baat , h darasal kaam ye tha ki tumhe vidhi beti or abhishek ko aaj shahar leke jana hoga.

Bhola k to ye sun aankho me ek baar chamak aagayi , kyunki use vidhi ko kidnapped kerne ka moka jo mil gaya tha.

Bhola :- wo sab to thik h malkin lekin kya ek anjan k sath choti malkin ko bhejna sahi hoga.

Sumitra :- are m ttumhe batana to bhul hi gayi , tumhari choti malkin ki mane abhishek se shadi fix ker di h , kyunki tumhari malkin shuru se abhishek ko pasand kerti h.

Isliye to ye dono jane wale h shadi ki shopping kerne or naina bhi shadi tak koi na koi us bhediye ka upay soch hi legi.

Ye sun bhola k tan badan me aag lag gayi.

Bhola :- ni ye ni ho sakta vidhi sirf or sirf meri h , wo tantrika isse pahale kuch kare , is londe ko aaj hi khatam ker vidhi ko lejaunga.

Ye soch bhola man hi man hasne laga.

Kuch der baad abhishek or vidhi bhi teyar ho ke aagaye .

Or bhola unhe jeep me bitha ker nikal pada , shahr se madhsvpur k bich ka pura rasta sunsan tha , isi baat ka fayda uthana chaha bhola ne.

Bhola gadi chala raha tha or abhishek or vidhi romantic baato me lage hue the, jisse werewolf ka para high hone laga tha

Vidhi :- bas 2 din ki baat or fir hum dono ek ho jayenge he na jaan

Abhishek :- ha jaan , ye to h , ab to bas tum ye socho ki honeymoon pe kaha jana h.

Ye sun vidhi to sharma gayi lekin bhola ne apna aapa kho diya or usne jor se brake lagayi .

Or gusse me guraya

Bhola :- esa ni ho sakta.

Abhishek :- tum hote kon ho humare bich bolne wale

Bhola :- teri mot .

Ye bol bhola dahadte hue apne asli roop me aagaya , jise dekh vidhi or abhishek dar k mare kampne lage.

Lekin vidhi ne sahas dikhate hue abhishek ka hath pakad ek or bhagi.

Werewolf haste hue :- bhago kitna bhag sakte ho m bhi to dekhu ye bol vo bhi unke piche bhaga .

Thodi der bhagne k baad vidhi or abhishek ek jagh ruk gaye , ab unse or ni bhaga ja raha tha shayad.

Tabhi vo bhediya bhi vaha aaphuncha , lekin abhi bhi un 3no k bich kuch duri thi .

Werewolf :- haha bola tha na tum bhag sakte ho per bach ni sakte , ab to tum gaye.

Ye bol warewolf unpe jhapatne k liye chalang lagayi thi ki ek goli aaker use lagi , wo bhi chandi ki, thik uske sine me.

Ye goli naina ne chalayi thi , jo wHi ek ped pe chupi bethi thi or unke idher aane ka hi ishara ker rahi thi.

Yahi plan tha naina ka or shetano ki tarah us werewolf or uski maa ki shaktiya bhi din m kamjor pad jati h , ye baat naina janti thi .

Isliye is bAR usne raat k bajaye din ka plan banaya , is vajah or naina k dobara kavach ko pahanne se komolika ko plan k bare m pata na chala.

Wo bhi bhola k piche piche kuch duri pe gadi me aarahi thi , or sath me preety bhi thi.

Or usne vidhi se contact kerne k liye Bluetooth ka istemal kiya tha, isliye jab werewolf ne unper hamla kiya tab naina ne hi un bluetooth k jariye us specific jagah aane ko kaha , jaha wo pahale se ready thi.

Or aage kya hua wo aap jante hi h .

Naina or preety uske pas gayi or naina ne pucha.

Naina :- bata kaha milegi teri maa.

Bhola marte hue :- ni bataunga , mar to raha hi hu , isliye apne hi hatyare ka fayda kya karu.

Jise sun preety gusse me aagayi or boli.

Preeti :- aakhiri baar puch rahi hu , kaha milegi teri ma.

Bhediya :- bola na ni batunga.

Preety ne gusse se gardan pakad li uski or chilayi :- kya bola ni batayega , ek trittya ko mana karega tu , teri ye majal .

Aakhiri baar puch rahi hu chupchap pata bata verna , teri aatma ka vo hal hoga , jiska andaza ni h tujhe.

Trittya nam sunte hi bhediya ki gand fat gayi or uski najar preety k nishan pe gayi jise dekh uski halat kharab ho gayi.

Or usne ek sab kuch bak diya , jise sun preeti ne uski gardan tod ker uska kaam nipta diya.

Naina :- di aap or abhishek ab ghar jaiye , aage khatra h bbahut.

Naina ne unhe samjha bhujaker ghar bhej diya or khud nikal pade komolika k ade pe.

Wahi dusri or

Jungle k ek kone me ek bahut hi purana khandar tha , jo komolika ka ada tha.

Komolika ghumti hui apne bete k lotne ka intezaar ker rahi thi , kyunki use subah se hi kuch anhoni ka andesha ho raha tha or bola se uska contact bhi ni ho raha tha or din hone ki vajah se vo kuch khas ker bhi ni sakti thi

Ab bhale hi wo dayan ho , lekin thi to wo bhi ma hi na.

Komolika :- kidher rah gaya mera dinu subah se, na koi khabar na kuch , kahi esa to ni ki us tantrika ne mere bache ko.

Ni ni esa ni ho sakta.

Tabhi uske kaan me ek aavaj pahunchi.

Aawaz :- badi bechain ho komolika.

Komolika ne us or dekha to chonk ker chilayi .

Komolika :- tantrika tu yaha kese pahunchi

Naina :- bas tere bete ne hi bataya rasta.

Komolika :- kya kiya tume mere bete k sath , kaha h mera beta.

Naina :- sabar rako, abhi milva dete h .

Preety jara bhola urf dinesh ko leker to aayo.

Tabhi khandar me preety enter kerti h , jisne dinesh ki lash ko uthaya hua tha.

Dinesh ki lash dekh komolika rone lagi apne bete k sine pe sir rakh or kuch der baad vo chilayi.

Komolika :- ni chodungi, tum yaha aato gaye ho tum yaha lekin ab jinda ni lotoge.

Ye bol usne do aag k gole bana naina or preety ki or feke.

Lekin preeti teyar thi , usne bhi ek bada sa gola banaya or un golo ki or choda , vo gole preeti ki shakti se takra ker nasht ho gaye or preety ka gola sidha komolika ko laga.

Jise ghayal komolika samjh gayi ki uska pala ek trittya se pad gaya h , jiske aage vo kuch bhi ni.

Komolika rote hue boli:- m tum logo ko ni hara sakti or apne bete ke bina bhi ni ki sakti isse acha hoga m khud ko hi khatam ker lu.

Ye bol komolika ne ek chaku mangwaya or usne pahale apni choti kat dali , kyunki dayno ki sari shaktiya uski choti m hoti h or fir usi chaku ko usne apne sine m ghop liya or wo mar gayi.

Ye sab itna jaldi hua ki naina or preety sirf dekhte hi rah gayi.

Kuch der baad naina or preety ne un dono maa bete ki lasho ka antim sanskar kiya or nikal pade ghar ki or.

Ghar jaker unhone sabko ye khushkhabri sunayi to sab khushi se jhum uthe.

Agle din kafi dhumdham se abhishek or vidhi ki sagai karwayi gayi .

Uske agle din naina or uske dosto ne ab vaha se vida lene ki permission mangi sumitra se.

Sumitra :- beti tumne jo hum per ahasan kiya h hum use jindagi bhar ni bhulenge.

Beti per ek icha or thi kuch din or yahi ruk jati to acha hota.

Lekin naina ne unhe apne mission k bare me samjhate hue , unse jane k liye permission mangi or ye vada bhi kiya ki vo vidhi ki shadi m jarur aaaayenge.

Is tarah naina or uske dosto ne waha se vida li.

Lekin ek baat jo sabse jyada ajib lag rahi thi use or usko khaye ja rahi thi ki

Vo jese jese apni manjil ki or bad rahe the , vese vese preety ka gussa or gusse me kiya gaya vahashipan bhi bad raha tha

Usko samjh ni aaraha tha ki aakhir ye chakkar kya h , kya connection h preety or trittya k bich

Pareshani ek ni kayi thi , vo samrat ki khoj me madavpur aaye the , lekin yaha unhe na samrat mila or na hi koi hint , isliye ab use samjh ni aaraha tha ki ab vo aage kis or jaye.

Wahi dusri or

Ranvir to ab buri tarah se pagal ho chuka tha , wo apne hi office me tod fod macha raha tha.

Kyunki Dn ne ek bahut bada jhatka use de dala tha , kese aaiye jante h

Aaj subah wo abhi office me kaam ker hi raha tha ki uske office ka peon aaya.

Peon :- may I come in sir.

Ranvir :- come in , bolo kya kam h.

Peon :- sir ye ek letter aaya h aapke liye .

Ranvir :- ok ise yaha rakh do or jao.

Peon vesa hi kerta h or chala jata h , kuch der baad jab vo letter dekhta h to uske pero tale jamin khisak jati h or gusse se chilaya.

Ranvir :- ni esa ni ho sakta , ni

Kese kese hua ye , kisne kiya ye.

Jarur wo dn hi hoga , kamine tune mujhe kahi ka ni choda , ab tu ni bachega.

Ye bol wo gusse se tod fod macha raha tha, kyunki wo letter ek legal notice tha , jiske according ab vo apni hi main company ka owner ni raha tha

Uske 60 % shares kahi or kisi or k pas chale gaye the , per ye sab hua kese usko samjh ni aaraha tha.

Esa kese hua ye next update me hi pata chalega.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- shani lok .

Shani dev bahut chinta me the.

Devi chaya :- kya hua putra itne chintit kyu ho.

Shani :- chintit hone ka hi to vishay h mata , jis ghatna karm ko leker hum or narayan chintit the , us ghatna ka aarambh ho chuka h.

Wo samay aachuka h jab karan ka ek karm is sansar k bhagya ka nirnay karega.

Mata :- tum chinta mat kero putra , mujhe mahadev per or apne putra karn per purn vishwas h , sab kuch sahi hi hoga.

Shani :- asha h mata esa hi ho

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Good update bhai.
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Kya baat h bhola uf warewolf ka uss ki dayan maa k saath khatma ho hi gya aur vidhi ko uss ka pyar mil hi gya.
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Preety ki problem shayad samarat se hi related h ho sakta h wo uss ki beti ho ya kisi karibi ki jiss se uss k khun mai hi samarat se nafart ho uss k paas aane se khoon ubal maar tha ho.
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Ranvir to lut gya kangal ho gya.
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Kfd ko chinta h matlb koi bhot bda dharam sankat aane wala h karan k saamne.
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Keep posting.
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DEVILWANTED

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kya preety ke andar ki tritya bahar aane ko ho rahi hai ya kuch or karan hai....
ab ranveer ko pata chalega ki usne kis se panga liya hai.... maza to tab aayega jab karan uske samane hoga aur vo shock ho jayega.. and kuch bhi nahi kar payega.....

awesome update....

keep update
 
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