Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Update no :- 131
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Trishul lete hue naina ko karan or jyoti se jude sawalo ka dhyan aaya , jinke baare m use aaj hi veer se pata chala tha
Naina :- is shastra or mere prashno k utter dene k liye dhanyawad maharaj , parantu ek prashn or h jo mujhe vichlit ker raha h.
Baba muskurate hue :- kahi tumhara prashn , us bhai bahan k jode k liye to ni jinke baare m veer ne bataya tha, kya naam tha unka ha.
"Karan or jyoti "
Karan ka naam sunte hi ek baar fir naina ko param anand ki anubhuti hui , jisse uski ankhe band ho gayi or us anand ko mahasus kerte hue uske chahre pe ek muskan aagayi.
Naina :- karan .
Kuch second us anubhuti ki ka aanand lene k baad naina boli.
Naina :- ji maharaj , uchit kaha aapne , m unhiki baat krr rahi hu .
Kon h ye karan or jyoti , kya sambhandh unka mujhse jo unke naam sunne matra se mujhe parnand ki anubhuti hoti h.
Or jesa ki veer ne unke baare m bataya ki vo bahut hi shaktishali h , jo unke diye hue us mala ki kaat vrushali jesi atyant shaktishali brahm rakshasi k pass tak na tha.
Ghora baba muskurate hue :- ladki mane tumse pahale bhi kaha tha , ager m sab kuch janta to mujhme or ishvar m kya fark hota.
Is sansaar me sabse bada guru samay hi h , wo hi tumhe is vishay k satya se avgat kerwayega , ab mere jane ka samay ho gaya h.
Isliye meri baat mano , filhal k liye in prashno or unse judi shanka ko ek baar dar kinare ker maa ki aradhna ki teyariya kero , tumhari sabhi chintaye apne aap dur ho jayegi.
Naina ghora baba se abhi is baare m or baat kerna chahti thi , per baba usse pahale hi antardhyan ho gaye.
Naina udaas bhi thi or khush bhi , jiska kaaran preety or uska satya tha.
Naina wapas apne room me jane k liye piche mudi hi thi ki sidiyo k samne khade shaks ko dekh , ek baar to uska chahara khil gaya , lekin agle hi pal uske chahre ka rang ud bhi gaya.
Kyunki samne preety khadi thi, jo usko hi ghure ja rahi thi.
Naina man me :- hey devi ma , kahi preety ne meri or ghora baba k bich hui uske satya ki baatchit sun to ni li.
Hey maa esa ni hona chahiye , ye samay bilkul bhi sahi ni h preety ka sachai janne ka .
Preety naina ki or bad rahi thi , or jese jese preety naina ki or badh rahi thi , naina ki dil tezi se dhadak raha tha.
Preety (naina k pas pahunch ) kya baat h sister , tum itni ghabrayi hui kyu ho or ye ghora baba yaha achanak kaha se aagaye the.
Preety k bolne ka dhang normal tha , jise sun naina ne chain ki saans li or
Naina man me :- thank God , lagta h preety ne kuch ni suna.
Or ye sochte hue hi usne jhat se preety ko gale laga liya ,esa ni tha ki naina ne preety ko pahale gale ni lagaya tha .
Lekin aaj naina ne apni dost ko ni , balki apni bahan ko lagaya tha , jise vo anjane m aj tak pahachan na payi thi.
Naina k gale lag preety ko bhi aaj humesha se kuch jyada hi acha laga tha , lekin wo kuch chintit bhi ho gayi naina k ese vyavahar ko dekh .
Preety :- kya hua sister , sab kuch sahi to h na , tum abhi to itni chintit thi or ab
Naina khud ki khushi ko sambhalte hue :- ha meri jaan , sab kuch sahi h, balki yu kaho sab sahi to ab hua h.
Preety :- m kuch samjhi ni sister , tum kya bol rahi ho , sab apnun k sir se bouncer ja rela h.
Naina :- hm kuch ni , vese tum yaha is vakt kya rahi ho.
Preety :- oh hello Madam ye sawal to m puch rahi hu , itni der se tum yaha chat pe ho sona ni h kya .
Bas isliye hi bulane tumhe aati thi , per yaha aayi to dekha ki ghora baba or tum kuch baate ker rahe the or fir baba anterdhyan ho gaye, kisliye aaye the wo yaha.
Naina :- wo wo (trishul ko dek ) ha wo baba hume savdhan kerne aaye the aage k liye , kyunki brahm rakshaso ka patan ker ab hum trityao ki najar me achuke h na , or ab khatra or bhi badhne wala h .
Or sath me mujhe ye divya ashtra bhi pradan kiya h apne ashirvad k roop me , mere yantra k nasht hone k baad ab yahi mera naya ashtra hoga.
Preety trishul ko lete hue :- jara dikhao to mujhe bhi kesa h vo naya shastra .
Trishul ko kuch der dekhne k baad.
Preety :- of o sister , tumhe bhala iski kya jarurat , teri ye saheli teri bahan h na tera kavach .
Apun ka vada h tere se sister , tere uper kiye fayfaye har prahar ko pahale mujhse takrana hoga , or apun apna vada pura jarur karegi , chahe isme apun ki jan bhi....
Preeti abhi kuch aage bolti isse pahale hi naina ne uske muh pe hath rakhte hue pyaar se datne lagi.
Naina :- chup , pagal kahi ki kuch bhi bolti h , khabardar age se esi manhus baat ki to , verna padega ek thappad
Naina k ese react pe preety ek second to chonki or fir hasne lagi.
Preety :- kya sister tumhe to jhut mut ka gussa bhi ni kerna aata.
Preety ki baat sun naina bhi hasne lagi , or boli
Naina :- acha baba m budu , bas ab chale.
Fir naina or preety apne kamre ki or lot gaye , jaha veer bhi betha tha.
Naina :-are veer tum abhi tak soye ni.
Veer :- ha naina vo nind ni aRahi thi isliye socha tumhare pas time spent ker lu.
Naina ankh marte hue :- mere sath time spent kerne aye ho ya apni gf k sath my dear jiju.
Veer or preeti sharma gaye , tab naina boli.
Naina :- are o laila majnu , abhi se hi itna sharmaoge to kese chalega , or ha veer mujhe tumse kuch kahana h.
Veer :- hukum kijiye sali sahiba.
Naina :-acha jiju apni sali pe itna pyar , to aapki sali sahiba ka request samjhiye ya hukum ki .
M chahati hu ki jesa ki hum sab jante h ki parso humari pyari preety ka birthday h or humne mil ker ye plan bhi kiya tha ki hum 3no ek sath celebrate karenge ghum fir ker , to ab us plan me thoda sa change hoga.
Veer :- kesa change naina.
Naina :- change ye h veer ki , jesa ki hum sab jante h or mane mahasus kiya h ki jab se tum or preety relation me aaye ho , jabse tum dono ko apna personal time bilkul bhi na mila , ek sath spent kerne k liye.
Isliye m chahti hu ki veer tum humari preety k birthday per pura time uske sath hi spent kero , akele me.
I mean yaar itni soni gf mili h tumhe , humari pyari preety k roop me to use ghumao firao or date pe leke jao or thoda romance wagerah kero.
Naina ki ye baat sun preety or veer dono hi man hi man khushi se uchal pade , chahte to wo khud bhi yahi the ,lekin wo ye baat naina ko kese bol sakte the.
Per yahi to ek sache dost ki pahachan hoti h , jo apne dost ki icha bina kahe samjh jaye.
Preety :- ye tum kya bol rahi ho sister , m tumhare bina apna birthday kese celebrate kar sakti hu.
Naina :- are meri banno mane kab kaha ki m tumhare sath na hongi , ha pure din to ni per subah party jarur karenge , kyunki uske baad mujhe bhi apni puja kerni hogi.
Preety :- pooja , kesi pooja sister
Naina tab veer or preety ko ghora baba ka nirdesh batati h , jise sun veer or preety bhi puja me sath bethne ka unhe kahate h , per naina unhe mana kar deti h kyunki ye vishesh puja keval tantriko k liye hi hoti h
Fir thodi der yu hi baat kerne k baad , veer apne kamre m chala jata h or preety or naina bhi kapde change ker so jati h
Back to the hero
Karan rohan or priya ghar lot aaye , or jesi vo gadi park ker main gate p pahuchte h to pate h ki kavya main gate pe khadi unka intezaar ker rahi h.
Karan ko dekh ker kavya karan ko apne sine se lagati h or boli.
Kavya :- lala tumhe itni der kese lag gayi
Karan :- of o choti ma aap itna pareshan kyu ho rahi ho gayi jyada der kaha hui or vese bhi ab m bada ho gaya hu
Kavya :- beta bache chahe kitne bhi bade ho jaye ,maa k liye humesha chote hi rahate h .
Or beta vese bhi ek baar lagbhag tumhe mane kho hi diya tha , isliye ab jab bhi jyada der k liye tum meri ankho se ojhal hote ho to ek dar sa lagane lagta h.
Karan kavya k sine se lag :- aap chinta mat kiya kijiye choti ma jab tak aapka prem or ashirwad mere sath h , is duniya ki koi buri takat aapke lala ka kuch ni bigad sakti.
Priya bich me :- ale masi ab andal bhi to aane do , mujhe bahut bhukh lagi h.
Kavya haste hue :- ale ha meli dadi aama chal .
Fir karan rohan k sath ander jata h to pata h ki garima or geeta bhi aayi hui h.
Karan dono k per chuta h or fir dono ko k gal pe kiss ker unhe wish kerta h
Karan garima ko ek side se hug kiye hue :- good evening bhua, good evening mosi
Garima :- good evening mera bacha , kesa h mera bacha.
Karan :- m thik hu bhua , per aapse naraj bhi hu.
Garima :- are esa kyu , mera bacha apni bhua se naraj kyu h bhala
Karan :- wo isliye ki aap itne din mujhse milne ni aayi or na hi humare sath movie dekhne gayi or ha mosi(geeta) m aPse bhi naraj hu isliye hi.
Garima apne kan pakadte hue :- sorry na mera bacha , wo aJkal office m bahut kaam rahata h , ek bahut hi jaruri project ki preparation me lagi hui hu m beta , jiske chalte hue time hi ni milta.
Geeta :- didi sahi bol rahi h beta , aajakal wo kaam me itni busy rahati h ki wo subah jaldi nikal jati h or raat ko late tak hi aati h, na dhang se khana khati h na soti h.
Karan :- ye to bahut galat baat h bhua , aap apna khayal kyu ni rakhti .
Garima :- rakhti to hu beta, per ye project bhi bahut jaruri h , ek bahut hi badi company se hum tie up kerne m lage hue h .
Ager unse humara tie up ho jaye or hume unse hume order mil gaya to company ko bahut fayda hoga or m ni chahti ki ye order kisi or ko mile.
Karan :- hmm , bhua aap esa kijiye is project se related sari info or papers mujhe dedijiye ye sab m dekh lunga.
Garima :- are beta ye sab tum kese , tum rahane do m manage ker lungi.
Karan :- kya bhua aap bhul gayi , m aapki company ka jr manager rah chuka hu or legally aaj bhi m vahi hu
Isliye ye mera hi kaam h mam , aap bas aaram kijiye.
Garima karan k khichte hue :- mam k bache tumhe mana kiya tha na mam bolne se , tu ni manega na.
Karan :- aah bhua dard ho raha h chodo na
Garima :- hat badmash tu ni sudhrega.
Fir karan kese na kese garima ko mana hi leta h is project ki responsibility usko dene ko.
Tab priya jo apni ma ki god me bethi thi vo boli.
Priya :- mosi apko pata h bhaiya ne aaj kya kiya, aaj unhonne bahut acha kam kiya
Karan (rokne k andaaz se) :- priyaaa
Kavya karan ko rokte hue :- tu bol na beti chup kyu ho gayi , kya kiya tumhare bhaiya ne.
Priya fir aaj jo bhi hua vo sari baat sabko bata deti h , karan ki baki sari bahane bhi vaha aaphunchi thi or karan ka kissa sun sab bahut khush the , unhe garv ho raha tha.
Kavya karan ko gale lagate hue :- mera lala hajaro me ek h , sach me beta tum bilkul asha didi k sanskaro ki jiti jagti murat ho
Garima :- hajaro m ni bhabhi lakho me ek h hamara bacha , sabash beta aaj tumne fir se humara naam roshan .
Jyoti samet sari bahane ek sath boli.
Sab :- aap dono hi galat bole , humare bhaiya na hajaro me h na lakho m , humare bhaiya to duniya k one and only best bhaiya h.
Ye bol karan ko charo or se gale laga liya .
Geeta :- sach me beta tum jese farishte aaj kal kaha milte h is duniya me.
M janti hu vimla ko beta , vo ek bahut hi imandar or mahanati orat h , wo tumhare vyapar ko khub ache se bhadayegi or tumhe shikayat ka ek bhi moka ni degi.
Kavya :- per beta humari to koi bhi taxtile factory ni h , fir tumne unhe job kaha di.
Kavya ko lag raha tha ki yaha karan apne pita ki company ki baat ker raha h.
Jyoti baat sambhalte hue :- choti maa aapko humne bataya tha na ki delhi me mummy k muh bole bhai k ghar hum rahate the, to unka koi beta na hone ki vajah se unhone apni factory bhai k naam ker di , or bhai ki mahanat k kaaran aaj pure india m us factory ki kayi branch ho gayi h wo bhi itne kam time m.
Jyoti ne ek jhuti kahani suna k sabko santusht ker diya
Karan :- vo sab chodo or meri pyari bahano ye to batao camping ki teyari kaha tak pahunche.
Shivani :- bhaiya m aapse vahi kahane wali thi , aap ko kal hum sab ko shopping p leker jana h.
Karan :- vo kyu bhala.
Sonam :- are mere budu bhaiya , camping kerni h to uska saman to kharidna hoga na.
Karan :- ok , per kal sab jaldi ready ho jana , kyunki sham ko mujhe or jyoti ko important kam se kahi bahar jana h .
Ok
Sari bahane shopping k naam se uchal padi or karan k kisses ki jhadi lagate hue :- thank you bhaiya.
Fir sabhi ne dinner kiya.
Wahi dusri or.
Location rasatal lok
Aman k raj me pure rasatal lok me aman or chain fela hua tha , har or khushhali thi.
Kaya bhi apna kaam ko bhakubi nibha rahi thi , jesi ki mane aapko pahale bataya tha , aman k adeshanusar rajya ki har ladki ko self defense lena anivary tha , jiske liye ek special school bhi banaya gaya tha , jaha ki coach kaya thi.
Rajya ki sabhi ladkiyo k sath apni pyari raj humari jhumki urf shweta bhi training le rahi thi usme or sath sath vo yudh kala bhi sikhti , taki waqt aapne pe wo apne bhai ya yu kaho apne mangeter ki sahayta ker sake yudh bhumi m
Dharti ki tarah yaha bhi sunday ka off rahata tha , per shweta m sikhne ka itna junoon tha ki wo kaya k sath sunday ko bhi training kerti.
Aaj bhi wo wahi ker rahi thi , kaya or jhumki dono talvar baji ki practice ker rahi thi.
Jhumki prahar ka prahar kerte hue :- dekhna didi aaj to m tumko hara hi dungi.
Kaya waro ko rokte hue :- hmm ye baat m pichle 2 hafto se ddun rahi hu rajkumari ji
Jhumki talvar chalate hue hu :- offo didi aapko kitni baar mane bola h ki aap mujhe naam se bulaya kijiye , ek to aap mujhse badi ho or uper se aapko mane didi mana h.
Kaya :- acha sorry jhumki ji , ab jara abhyas pe dyan de.
Jhumki :- hm ye sahi h , to m kaha thi.
Kaya haste hue :- filhal to aap hume harane k nakam koshis m lagi hui thi.
Jhumki :- koshis kamyab hogi ya nakam ye to wakt hi batayega didi.
Ye bolte hue jhumki ne apne prahar tez ker diye , lekin kaya ek fully trained yodha thi , means ager wo dharti ki hoti to ek professional commando hoti.
Isliye wo aaram se jhumki k waro ko rok rahi thi , jisse jhumki chid rahi thi , tabhi jhumki ko ek idea aaya or wo ek taraf dekhte hye boli.
Jhumki :- are karan bhaiya aap yaha.
Karan ka nam sun kaya khush ho us or dekhne lagi , jisse uska dhyan bhatak gaya or jhumki ne moke ka fayda utha ker ek prahar ker kaya ki talvar udadi or khushi se uchhalte hue boli.
Jhumki :- yah hum jit gaye didi haar gayi.
Kaya muskurate hue bAcho jese :- ye to beimani h.
Jhumki :- prem or jang me sab jayaj hota h didi , jang hum ker hi rahe the or lagta h prem aapko ho hi gaya h.
Kaya :- hat pagli kuch bhi bolti h.
Jhumki :- ni sachi didi , mujhe to yahi lagta h , dekha na abhi kese karan bhaiya ka nam sun keSe khushi se uchal padi , kahi esa to ni ki humari didi ko karan bhaiya se wo ho gaya h.
Kaya thoda sa sharmate hue :- are ni pagli esa kuch ni h , wo to bas humare ek ache dost h or hum unki saheli bas , unki or meri barabri kaha.
Jhumki :- pyaar me bada chota kaha hota h didi , mujhe to yahi lagta h or aapke chahre pe aayi ye sharmahat bhi isi baat ki or ishara ker rahi h.
Didi ager esa kuch h to bata dijiye , abhi moka bhi h , kal karan bhaiya yaha aane wale bhi h .
Kaya bich me khushi se :- kya karan ji kal humare yaha aanewale h.
Jhumki chedte hue :- haye haye khushi to dekho aapke chahre ki , ha kal raat ko unki mujhse or bhai se baat hui or mane unhe jid kerke yaha bula hi liya bhojan pe.
Abhi bhi moka h di bol do , aaap kaho to kal aapke rishte ki baat ker le karan bhaiya se.
Kaya :- ruk badmash tujhe m batati hu , bahut shetan ho gayi h tu
Jhumki haste hue kaya ko chidati hui bhag gayi or kaya bas muskurate hue rah gayi or talab k pas muh dhone lagi or sochne lagi.
Kaya :- kya jhumki ka kahana sahi h , kya m sach me karan ji se muhabbat kerne lagi hu.
Ni ni jhumki to abhi bachi h use in chijo ki abhi kaha samjh , m to bas unki ek saheli hu or vese bhi unki or meri kya barabari .
Ye sochte hue usne khud ko pahale saaf kiya or fir mahal me apne kaksh me lot gayi
Lekin wo aaj bahut khush thi , jabse usne ye khabar suni thi ki kal karan aaraha h ,usse kal ka intezaar nj ho raha tha , isliye wo abhi se hi teyariyo m lag gayi.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
Stay tuned

 

[Harry rocks]

Wah kya timing hai janab kii

Jabardast update, maja aa gaya

Fabulous

Fantastic updates

Boht e achi story hai apki ........kepp writing

Rapchik superb lovely and awesome update bhaiji.
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Really kya update tha naina ko ghora baba ne preety ka raaz bta diya aur usse nya astra bhi dediya.
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Flashback mai bahot se raaz khul gye aur samart k khatme ka bhi pta chal gya.
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Naina ne baba se karan aur joyti k baare mai nhi pucha aur rudraksh k baare mai.
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Karan aur sonu k beech nya mahool aur fir kavya k saath full flirt masti mai jabardast tha.
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Karan ne rohan ko bhi bta diya apni feelings k baare mai aur uss ki soch k baare mai radha aur riya k liye.
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Karan ne priya ki dost aur basti walo ki madad bhi kar di aur apni company ko bhi fayda karwa diya.
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Keep posting.
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Boht khoob update yar is update ma boht bare jhatke diya han tumne Waise mujhe shak to pehle sa hi tha ka pretty samrat ki beti hogi ab daikhte han next kya hoga

Very nice update..

Update m kafi kuch tha aaj to...

Sabse Pehle to preety ki sachai jaankar shock hogae. Wo Naina ki bhua ki beti h jinhe samraat n dhokha dia tha aur jiska result Preeti h. Preeti ko shayad ye sab pata Ni hoga ki uske MAA k sath jisne dhokha dia aur abhi Jisko wo Marne ja rahe h wo ek hi h yaani samraat ..

Samraat auf trittya ki bi Puri history pata chal Gai but shrap k anusaar samraat ko uski hi santaan maar Sakti h yani Preeti aur samraat ko Marne k liye spcl weapon chahiye Jo h Trishashtra jiske tukde abhi Karan aur Naina k paas h . Iska mtlb samraat k ant k liye pehle teeno ko milna padega . Jab KJ aur Naina +pretty + veer milenge uske baad hi shashtra ek hopaega ar tab hi ant hoga samraat ka...

Kher , mushkil badi hone wali h let's see kaisa samne karenge sab .Ar kIaise milenge .. abhi to 10 days ka break h Naina k liye aur shyaad utne dino m KJ bi free hojaenge apni family s ...


Is update m Karan aur Sonam ki bi chemistry dikhai Jo shayad kafindino baad ayi h. Shyaad hi kafi Sonam ko itna time mila hoga Karan k sath Rene ka jitna aaj Mila but agar Sonam bi Karan ki wives m s hogi to ye jaruri bi h ki dono k beech m pyar badhe ya atleast Sonam ko is baat ka ehshash ko ki wo Karan s Kia tarah Wala pyar karti h...

After that aaj Karan s ek acha kaam bi hua jiske badle usse aneko logo ki duaiye mili h . Madhyam to Priya bani par Karam to Karan n hi Kia h...

Well it's time for party sorry camping..
Let's see Kya hota h ab aage ..

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

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Super bro. Sare idea sari soch hi badal dali ki aage kya hoga. Per story me suspence bahut jyada aagaya hai. Ab sare vichar Naina ki maa or karan ke rista aapas me real maa bete wala hoga ya nahi. Kya naina bhi karan karan ki real bahan hai jo karan ne apne baap ko kahi thi saza dete time ki uski maa pregnet thi to wo naina hi honi Chahiye uske pet me. But ab aajke update ne suspence or bada diya.
Superb update bro super.

Ek baat achi hogayi isme ki samraat or preeti ki sachayi samne ayi ab naina ki navaratri ki puja hona hai tho usme thoda time lag jayega or ab naina ki pyar preeti ke liye or jyada bhadegi jisse preeti ko jaroor shaq ho sakti hai


Karan ka or sonam ka scene kafi acha tha ab jyoti ki list me ek or add hogayi aisa karte karte radha riya ko bi add mat kar dena thoda distence tho rehani chahiye

Aab pteety ki saheli ek hi school me padegi jo wo roj bor hojati thi ab renu ke ane se usko uski ek sathi mil gayi jo bahut jaruri thi or basti ko bi sahi salamt kardiya unlogonko rojgaar deke


Itna sub hua iss update me lagta hai kafi soch samajke likhe ho aise hi update chahiye thi super

Bada hi rapchik update diya be bhai. Preeti ka raz khol ke rakh diya lekin kya ye raz preeti ko nahi pata chalna chahiye tha. Use bhi to pata chalta ki uska baap kitna ghatiya inshan he. Taki wi aur jor shor se apni shaktiya bhadati samtrat ko marne ke liye. Ye trisakti hatiyar ka ek hissa to sayad karan ke paas he jo usane pret raj ko maar kar prapt kiya tha. Karan aur sonam ke beech ki batcheet badi emotional thi. Usake baad thodi masti bhi hui jo aapne nahi dikhayi. Fir karan ka vimla ki madad karna bhi achha laga.
Waiting 4 next update

Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 970

 

[Harry rocks]

Superb update bhai

Kya baat kya basy... Gajab maza aaya padh kar bhai bahut khoob.... Itne sare raaj khule or abhi kuchh baki rah gaye.... Maine to soch raha tha wo naina ka raaz bnayege lekin kuchh or hi nikal gaya... Ab aage dekhte hai kaise dusra talwar hasil hota hai... Or kaise naina karan joti se milti hai... Aage ka intezar hai bhai g

Lajawab super fantastic update Bhai

Wonderful update bro
Kafi saare raaz b open up hue like preeti ke jnm ka rahasya... K uske pitah samar asal mein woh samrat h jiska ant krne k liye woh naina ka saath de rhi h
Aur uski maa asal mein Pandit ji ki di thi
Samrat k vyaktitva ka ek aur nakaratmak pahlu bhi ujagar hua k woh aurat ko sirf bhog ki vastu maatra manta h jbki haqiqat toh yh h k yadi rab aurat ko na banate toh purush kisi bhi karye ko ni kr pata qk rab ki qudrat ne aurat aur mard ko ek dusre ka poorak banaya h na ki koi vastu....
Karn ka bhi ek aur pahlu ynhn dikhaya gya h logon ki har sambhav tareeqe se madad krne wala aur unke aatmsamman ka sambal banne wala that's nyc
Trishastra ka woh doosra bhag wahi h na jo karn ko prapt hua tha preton k pichhle raja ka ant karke
Vrushali k jivan ka bhi ek naveen pahlu dikhaya h jo aksar logon k vastvik jeevan mein bhi hota h yani bahut samay tak Sachche Dil aur pak niyat se nekiyan karna aur ek samay ke baad un nekiyon se kamaye punya aur khoobiyon par maghroor ho jana.....
Khair the situation is becoming more and more interesting waiting for your next update

Full to jabardast update Bhai Maza aa Gaya padk . hurreay.

Bhai bhot zabardast update hai Maza a Gaya

Kya likhte ho aap
Yar Dil karta hai bas padte Jaya padte Jaya or kabhi khatam hi na ho

Bhai ye Kahani Puri zaroro karna pls or agla update jaldi Dena pls agle update ka intezar rahe gab
bay best of luck Bhai agle update ke liye

Too good & very well written
Mega update Harry Bhai
Maza aa gya is update ko padh ke
Naina ka mann bahut ashaant tha
Uske Mann mein Jo bahut saare
Sawaal the usme mein se bahut
Saare sawaalo ka jawaab aaj use
Mil hi gya aur aise bhi Kai saare
Raaz the jinke baare mein wo nai
Jaanti thi par wo ab jaan gayi hai
Un baato ko. Jis wajah se uska nishchay
Pehle se bhi bahut drirrdh ho gya hai.
Preety apni bhua aur samraat ki sachayi
Ko to wo ab jaan hi gayi hai but mujhe
Lagta hai ki Naina ko ye sachayi preety
Ko subah hi Bata Deni chahiye kyunki
Der agar use Satya pata Chala to wo
Kahi Naina ko hi galat na samajh baithe.

Preety Samraat ka Satya jaan Kar ki kaise
usne use uski maa aur najaane kitni hi
Aurto k saath aisa ghinona kaam Kiya hai
Aur to aur apne hi ajannme Bache Tak ko
Maare daala hai usne to. Preety aur veer
K bhi iraade drirrdh hinge aur wo bhi Naina
Ko support to Kar hi rahe hai wo bhi is
Maamle ki gambhirta ko samjhenge ki
Samraat ko maarna itna bhi asaan nai hoga.

Trishastra ko paane ki planning unhe
Abhi se Karni shuru Kar Deni chahiye aur
Waise bhi jaise baba ne bataya hai ki
Gupt navratro mein MAA ki puja aur vrat
Se Naina ko Vijay ka ashirwaad prapt ho
Jayega aur trishul uska Naya Astra hoga.

Sonam aur Karan k Dil bhi bilkul Saad hai
Dono ki ek doosre ki jindagi mein Kya
Ehmiyat hai ye wo jaante hai. Aaj Karan ko
Ye ehsaas ho gya ki Sonu bhi Karan ko
Na sirf maanti hai but uske Dil mein Karan
K liye kis hadd Tak pyaar chippa hua hai.
Karan me jis tarah se Rohan ko samjhaya
Wo bhi sahi hai ki ab Rohan ko bhi Riya aur
Radha ko maaf Kar Dena chahiye. Karan ne
Jis tarah se vimla aur Renu k saath saath
Poori basti walo ki madad ki wo to bahut
Hi sarahniye hai. Par Rohan k Mann mein
Kya sawaal hai Jo wo baad mein Karan se
Poochne ki soch Raha hai.

Waiting for the next update

bohat achi update thi bro
waiting for next update

Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 970

 

[Harry rocks]

Awesome one brother

PREETI ka full background bta kar acha kiya bhai ji aur NAINA ko apni ek cousin toh mil hi gyi baaki bhi mil jayenge (KJ)
Well hum yeh toh jante hain ki PREETI sachai jaan lene ke baad bhi NAINA ka hi sath degi aur apni MOM kr sath hue anyaay ka badla bhi legi

TRISHASTRA ke do hisse mil chuke hain aur uska teesra hissa bhi NAINA ko milega
KJ NAINA and party ke sath milkar TRISHSTRA ka use karenge aur SAMRAT ka khatma karenge as SAMRAT ki mout uske khud ke ansh(preeti) se hi ho skti hai toh yahan main lead PREETI ke hathon mai jayegi kuch time ke liye

KJ ne maaf kar diya hai RADHA aur RIYA ko but unhe ek hidayat dena yah ek lesson dena jaruri hai jo vo dono kar rhe hain

SONAM ke aur kareeb jana KARAN ka yeh sabit krta hai ki uski kai wife hongi yeh kiss hadd tak sach hai aur uski apni wives ke prati kya nazariya hoga

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR

What a clearing of suspense regarding Preeti that was not thinkable
Ha ye to shaq tha Preeti Kahi na Kahi samraat ki maut ki vjh hogi magr aise ye kbhi nhi socha tha
Are ye kya hua Karan Bhai bad manners bina knock kiye nhi jate

Good handle by Sonam , Karan ne Rohit ko bahut ache se smjhaya a good update
Overall nice update Harry rocks

Today's update was very good. Ghora Baba opened all the secrets one after the other. When Naina comes to know that Preety is really her sister, she is shocked and it is difficult to believe that Preety's father is the Samraat.
I think Preety will kill her father in the last. Flashback revealed a lot about the Samraat. After 10 days, Naina and her friends are leaving for a new journey. This journey is going to be very exciting. Naina has got a trishool.
Karan sees Sonam changing clothes and realizes his mistake, the love has grown between the two. Karan helps Vimala and her girl Renu a lot and also helps people living in colony. There was a big update this time, now a lot more is going to happen in the story.
Harry Bro, you are writing very well, now let's see what happens next in the story till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You.....

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Naha mega update tha

Zabardast update

Super fantastic mind-blowing dhashu megaupdate
Ye update kafi shandar hai , esme priti sevjude raj khole gye , jaisi ummid thi ki priti tritya hai uska relation samrat se awshy hoga aur uski hi beti hai .
Bhoot sad story thi priti ke maa ki .
Ab us mahila ka samrat ko diya gya shrap falit ho chuka hai sari kadiya jud rhi jo samrat ke maut ka rasta bna rahi hai .
Ab intzar rhega ki naina aur kj ke milne ka taki samrat ke liye .
Waiting for next awesome update

Bohat hi zabardast update aur taqreeban saare pehaliya solve ho gayi hain aur preeti ki zindagi ka bhi raaz khul ke Saamne aaya hain ab baari hai to naina kaisay apni shaktiyo ko bada kar saare hatiyaar mohayya karti hai aur idhar sonam aur karan ke beech me bhi shayad ek naye rishte ka janam ho raha hain magar kia jyoti isay accept karegi aur sath sath kia moqa banega jo karan jyoti naina se milege.
Bohat a che dhang se likh raho bro maza aa raha hain pad ker lekin updates thoda late hoti hai magar aapki dedication aur aapki apni busy life ko made nazar hum aapki is dedication ki respect karte hai.

this update was full of effort.
long and awesome one , too many things going on.
The story of Preety was expected, but the fact that she is the sister of Naina was unexpected.
the boon asked by Samrat was as usual clever.
let's see when will Naina tell Preety about all his truth.
this Aghori baba is also a character gaining more and more importance with time.
Karan shares his wisdom with Rohan.
let's see how the camping part goes.
The Renu scene was nice.
till now Rohan hasn't asked Karan Jyoti anything.
Expecting it soon

brilliant update,
keep rocking bro.

Bahut badhiya update dear

Mind-blowing Update Bhai

Samrath ne bhutkaal Mai bhi aneko paap kiye hai jisse ab uska anth usiki santaan karegi...

Aur is Samrath ki santaan or koi Nahi apni Preeti hi hai... interesting...

Naina ko Preeti ke janm Ka Satya gyaat ho Gaya or ab wo apni muhh bholi bua ko mile us ghatiya chhal Ka badla ab Samrath se legi...

Lekin jab Preeti ko is sachai ke bare mai gyaat hoga tab uska kya reaction hoga?..

Aur wo kamina Samrath bada harami nikla Brahma ji se wardaan mang liya...

Magar Jaise pichli baar in tritya prajati Ka janm hua tik waise unka anth Karne ke liye 3no anusaro pret, pishach or dayano ne milkar ek bar fir apni shaktiyo ko ekatrit ker ek urja punj ka nirmaan kiya jisse bana Trishatra...

Magar Bhai Trishatra 3 hisso mai hai or is story ke main characters bhi 3... Ek hissa Karan ko to Mila or ek Naina ko to us hisab se 3ra bhaag Jyoti ko milna chahiye?...

Aur Sonam ke sath acha scene banaya warna lag Nahi Raha tha ke wo bhi is story ki heroine hai...

Ab Dekhte hai Camping Mai kaise Radha aur Riya dono milke Karan Ka Dil jeetti hai.

Eagerly waiting 4 next update

Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 970

 

[Harry rocks]

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha ha

Waiting for next update

Next update kal raat ko

Ok bro waiting for it

Ok bhai and waiting for next update

Will be waiting

Pakka ya fir parso

Waiting

Ok waiting

Waiting for the next update

Waiting

BHAI AAP NE TOH KAMAAL KAR DIYA DHOTI KO FAAD KE RUMAAL KAR DIYA.
WAH BHAI NAINA KI LAGBHAG BAHUT HAD TAK KI PARESHANIYON AUR KHAS KARKE SAMRAT AUR PREETY KA KISSA SUNA KE HAL KAR DIYA.AGHORI BABA HI WOH VYAKTI HAIN JO NAINA KE PAAS USKE SAWAALON KA JAWAAB LE KAR PAHUCHE HAIN.AUR DANAV DASI SE JAANKARI LENE WALE BHI AGHORI BABA HI THE. BABA NE NAINA KO BATA DIYA HAI KI SAMRAAT KI MOUT KAISE HOGI AUR KISKE HATHON HOGI.AB TRISHASHTRA HASIL KARNA HOGA NAINA KO JISKA EK BHAG TOH UNKO MIL CHUKA HAI.BAKI KE PRAPT KARNE HAIN.

YAHA KARAN AUR JYOTI APNI FAMILY ME AA KAR BAHUT KHUSH HAI AUR HO BHI KYUN NA AAKHIR KOUN NAHI CHAHATA KI WOH APNE PARIWAAR KE SATH RAHE AUR UNKA PYAR AUR SNEH PRAPT KARE.
KARAN NE PRIYA KI SAHELI KE LIYE JO KIYA WOH SARAHNEEY TOH THA HI LEKIN JO POORE BASTI WALON KE LIYE SOCHA WOH ATULNEEY HAI BAHUT HI MAHAAN KARYA KIYA HAI KARAN NE BASTI WALON KO KAAM DE KAR.
AB TOH BHAI INTEJAAR HAI KARAN JYOTI NAINA PREETY AUR VEER KE NEW ADVENTURE KI.
DEKHATE HAIN AGALE UPDATE ME KYA HOTA HAI

Waiting for update harry bhai.
Aaj update kab aayega.

Waiting

Aj update aayega na

Waiting

Bhai waiting...

Waiting

Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 970

 

[Harry rocks]

Bhai aapki story bahut hi badiya lagi hai ab tak. Mai ek silent reader the lekin abse nahi rahunga . Bahut hi gajab story likh rahe ho keep going Bhai bus ek gujarish hai ki is story ko aap beech me adhura mat chhodna all that best Bhai
Waiting for next update............

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai
Or ha ye story jarur complete hogi
Thanks for your support bhai
Stay tuned and keep reading
New update on page no :- 970

 

[Rahul0087@]

Bhai bahut hi achha update diya hai
Sab log abhi apni normal life me byast hai
Lekin lagta hai bahut hi jald kuch khatarnaak hone wala hai .... Dekhte
Wait and see

 

[Raja thakur]

Fantastic updates

 

[King]

Superb update bhai