Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update no :- 170 (mega update)
Markesh nam h mera.

Ji ha dosto naina Or uske dosto k samne khada wo shaks ya yu kaho ki wo chunoti Or koi ni balki markesh hi tha.

Markesh ka naam sun naina serious ho gayi or boli.

Naina :- oh to tum ho markesh, akhir mulakaat ho hi gayi tumse, ab tum hi hume apne bhai tak pahuchaoge markesh.

Markesh :- pahuchaunga jarur pahuchaaunga ladki , per bhai tak ni balki tumhari mot tak.

Ye bol markesh aage badne laga , naina satark hote hue jaldi se apna trishul nikalti h or ye kya isse pahale ki naina trishul ka istemaal ker pati, usse pahle hi samrat ne ek shakti gole ka prahar naina k hath per ker dala, jisse naina k hath se trishul chut ker dur gir gaya or wo ghayal ho gayi.


Markesh haste hue :- murkh ladki tune kya socha tha in mamuli khilone se tu tritiya rajkumaar ko hara degi.

(Apne hath uper ker talvar prakat kerte hue) kafi waqt se tumhari talash me tha m naina, aaj tera ant ker aaj m un sabhi asur veero ka badla lunga jinko tune mara h.


Veer apne dhanush per baan sandhan kerte hue :- mere hote hue Tu naina ko chu bhi ni sakta samraat

Samraat pure tarike se teyar ho ker aaya tha usne ek ishara kiya or agle hi pal danvo ka ek bahut bada samuh sashatra waha aaphuncha.

Markesh :- apni dost ko to tab bachaoge na ladke jab tum khud bachoge.

Itna bol markesh apne seniko ko adesh deta h humle ka.

Markesh ka adesh sun sab ek sath humla bol dete h naina k dosto pe,

Veer samar se :- samar tum mere piche hi rahana, ni to tum khatre m pad sakte ho.


Samar :- per veer naina bahan.

Veer tir chodte hue :- tum chinta mat karo samar naina ko kuch ni hoga , preety h na

Preety m in logo ko dekhta hu tum naina ki raksha kero.

Per ye kya jaha ek taraf ghayal naina dard se tadaf rahi thi or markesh uski or bad raha tha, whi preety bilkul khamosh or sir niche kiye khade khari thi

Veer ne kayi bat preety ko pukara jab jaker preety hosh m aayi.

Preety hadbadate hue :- ha.

Veer :- aj kya ho gaya h tumhe preety kabse tume pukar raha hu tum jwab hi ni de rahi.

(Naina ki or ishara kerte hue) jaldi se kuch kero naina ko humari madad ki jarurat h.


Preety jab naina ki ye halat dekhti h to firse uska ugra roop jagrit ho gaya or wo naina ki or bhadne lagi.

Tabhi bahut sare seniko ne preety Or veer ko gher liya.

Preety gusse se dahahdte hue :- tumhari ye himmat tum preety ka rasta roko.

Preety ne ek mantra bol apni bahe aage felayi, jiske sath uski dono hatheliya chamakne lagi.


Or fir preety ne badi tezi se ek tali mari, preety k esa kerne se ek garjana k sath roshni bhari esi waves nikl k aage badhi ki uski chapet me aane wala rakshas tinke ki bhati udte hue swaha ho gayi.

Veer preety ki is harkat ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha , kyunki naina ne ek hi war me adhi sena tabah ker dali thi.

Preety aage bhadte hue muskuarte hue :- itni madad kafi h na jaaan.

Preety ki aawaz se veer hosh m aate hue ha m sir hilata h or lag jata h baki sena se niptane me.

Wahi dusri or

Markesh ko apni or badhte hue dekha dard se kaharati hui naina thodi himmat ker apne ghutno k bal uth ker apne trishul ki or bhadne ki kosis kerti h.

Lekin ye kya trishul apne aap hi ud ker or dur ja gira or markesh pas aate hue haste hue bola.

Markesh :- bekar ki kosis mat ker ladki teri mot nishchit h, apne priya jano ko yaad ker le akhri baar.

Naina muskurate hue dard bhari awaaz me :- unko yaad kya kerna markesh jab wo mere pas hi h meri madad k liye.

Markesh naina ki baat ka matlab samjh pata ki usse pahale hi ek jabardast mukka uske pet m pada Or wo kuch dur piche apne aap ghasita gaya.

Markesh :- aaahh.

Markesh ne khud ko sambhalte hue samne ki or dekha to paya ki samne ek or ladki khadi thi, or usine use mukka mara tha.

Ye or koi ni balki preety hi thi.

Markesh ne pahali baar preety ko dhyan se dekha to ek baar chok sa gaya .

Markesh man hi man:- ab ye kon h, jiske prahar ne mujh tak ko hila dala, or to or iski shakal kitni milti h bhaiya se, or baar baar esa ahasas kyu ho raha h mujhe jese m ise janta hu, koi sambandh ho



Preety :- ek ghayal ladki P kya hath uthata h dusht ager dam h to mujhse lad.

Markesh ne abhi tak preety ka trittya nishan ni dekha tha.

Markesh tezi se ek dam preety k samne aagaya or bola

Markesh :- wah, man gaye ladki, kuch to baat h, trittya k rajkumaar k per dagmaga diye, ab ek avsar hume bhi to dijiye.

Ye bol markesh ne bhi ek jabardast prahar preety k pet per kar dala jisse wo udti hi kuch dur ja giri.

Veer chilaya :- preety.

Veer preety ki madad k liye aage bad hi raha tha ki preety apna pet pakad khadi hoti hui boli.

Preety gusse se lal ankho k sath:- ni veer tum bich m mat aao, aaj is dusht ka ant m swayam apne hatho se kar apne mama (pandit ji) ki mot ka badla lungi, kyunki wo trittya isi ka admi tha, jisne mere mama ko mara tha or iske baad iske bhai ko.

Ye bol preety lagbhag udte hue full speed se markesh k pas pahunch ek muka de mara.




Lekin markesh is bar teyar tha isliye is bar wo preety ka mukka aram se sahan ker liya.

Or fir shuru hua preety or markesh ka mahasangram jisme kabhi preety bhari pad rahi thi to kabhi samrat, dono kafi der tak hath per chalate hue hi lad rahe the.


Veer seniko ko marte hue naina ki or badha or apne samar or naina k charo or ek sheild bana di jisse koi unke pas na aasake.


Veer naina ko sambhalte hue :- naina naina tum thik to ho na.

Naina khud ko sambhalte hue :- m thik hu veer, per hume jald hi kuch kerna hoga, preety per bahut bada khatra mandra raha h.

Hume markesh ko rokna hoga isse pahale usse pata chale ki preety kon h.

(Apne trishul ko dhundte hue) mera trishul kaha h.

(Samar se) bhai aap meri madad kijiye trishul dhundne m, uske bina hum markesh ko ni rok payenge, or veer tum jitna jaldi ho sake in seniko ka ant kero

Markesh ladte hue man hi man :- ni ye ni ho sakta isme to mujhe usi shakti ka ahasas ho raha h jo shakti mujhme h, kahi esa to ni.....

Markesh abhi soch hi raha tha ki preety ne ek jabardast mukka marna chaha lekin samrat ne use pakad liya

Lekin tabhi wahi hua jiska dar naina ko tha, preety ka hath pakdte hi markesh ki najar preety k hath P bane trittya k nishan p pad gayi or wo buri tarah chonk gaya.

Markesh man hi man :- to mera shak sahi nikla ye ladki bhi ek trittya h, (gusse se) ek trttya ho ker trittya se gaddari, ni chodunga ise.

Ye sab sochte hi markesh or jyada ugra ho prahar kerne laga

Wahi preety ki shakti abhi markesh k mukable kam jagrit thi, isliye dhire dhire kamjor padne lagi.


Markesh ne bhi moke ka fayda utha chal se preety ki ankho m ek roshni chod di jisse uski ankhe chondhiya k band pad gayi or use kuch dikhna band ho gaya.

Jiska fayda utha ek jordar laat preety ko de mari jisse wo kuch dur ja giri , or uske baad to markesh ne mukke or lato ki barsaat ker di.

Markesh rukte hue :- man gaya tumhe ladki, tum me bahut dam or himmat h, per itni ni ki tum markesh ko hara sako.

(Fir gusse se apni ankhe surkh lal kerte hue ) ha yahi okaat h teri gaddar ladki, kya socha tha tune ki humse gaddari kerke bach jayegi.


Preety ghayal avastha me hi :- himmat to tune dekhi hi kaha h meri markesh

Ye bolte hue preety uthne ki kosis kerti h per markesh use mayavi pashu se bandh deta h.

Markesh haste hue :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni gaya, man to kerta h tujhe abhi mar dalu, per ni usme koi maja ni aayega, fir kya kiya jaye

(Sochne ka natak kerte hue ) haa kyu na esa kiya jaye, tujhse pahale tere is adhik ko m marunga or teri is dost kya naam bataya tha uska ha naina use kya chij h yaar wo to pahale to socha tha ki use mar dalunga, per ni esi chij ko marne m ni balki bister pe maslne m.....

(Shetani hasi k sath) ha ha ye sahi rahega teri is saheli ko tere samne hi maslunga jab bister......

Abhi markesh ne apni baat puri bhi na ki thi ki ek gola use aaker laga or wo kuch dur ja gira.

Per jaldi sambhal kee wo jab khada hua to usne jo dekha uski herani ki sima na rahi preety uske pash se mukt ho chuki thi or wo ab hava me ud rahi thithi or uske dono hath hari roshni se chamak rahe the




Markesh :- asambhav ye tumne kese kiya, mere us pash se bhut preet to kya trittya tak ni chut sakta tha, tumne ye kese kiya.

Preety darwani muskan k sath :- kaha tha na tumse markesh meri himmat tumne ab tak dekhi hi kaha h.

(Apni pith p lagi mayan setalvar nikalte hue) ise to tum pahachante hi hoge na rajkumar.

Markesh ne jese hi preety ki talvar ko dekha to ek bar to uski buri tarah fat gayi, kyonki is talvar ko bhali bhanti pahachanta tha, isi talvar k kaaran hi usko buri tarah beijat hona pada tha .

Markesh herani se :- ye talvar to..

Preety bich me :- vrushali ki h, kyu dekh ker acha na laga ise dobara.

Markesh :- per ye talvar tumhare pas aayi kese.

Veer markesh ki sena ko tabah ker waha aaphuncha or bola.

Veer :- tumhari jaankari k liye bata dy markesh, jis vrushali ne bhutkal me Tumhara maan mardan kiya tha, us vrushali ko pralok pahuchane wali Tumhari ankho k samne hi h.

Markesh :- asambhav, jise trittya k raja or rajkumar tak na hara sake, tum bol rahe ho us vrushali ko is mamuli gaddar ne hara dala.

Veer :- yahi to anter h samrat achai or burayi ka, tum isliye hare kyunki tum adharm k paksh me the or hum isliye jite kyunki dharm humare paksh m tha.

Or aaj bhi fir vesa hi hoga.

Ye bol veer ne ek baan markesh pe chalaya jisse ek dhamake k sath markesh kuch ghayal ho gaya.

Preety ne apni talvaar ko aage kiya tabhi usse bhi ek rays nikli or markesh pe padte hi vo tadafne laga.

Veer :- ab bhi vakt h markesh har man lo or humara marg prashat kero ni to merne k liye teyar ho jao.

Markesh kisi tarah rays se chut gaya or bokhlate hue bola

Markesh hafte hue :- itni jaldi ni , ab ek tritya rajkumaar ki asli shakti se tumhara parichay kerwane ka waqt aagaya h

Ab m wo kerne wala hu jiski tumne ummid bhi na ki hogi, ye bol markesh apna hath uper ker ankhe band ker kuch mantra bolne hi wala hota h ki achanak usper ek jabardast urja ka prahar hua.

Jo or kisi ne ni balki naina ne hi kiya tha, jisne apna trishul khoj liya tha.

Naina :- mere hote hue ni markesh.

Markesh gusse se uth ker uski or bhadte hue :- ni chodunga tujhe.

Naina is baar puri tarah teyar thi, usne jald se ankh band mantra pada or trishul aage kiya, jisse trishul se roshni nikal markesh per padi or us roshni ne pash ka roop le liya.


Jisme markesh bhandhane laga , pash ki pakad dhire dhire majboot hoti ja rahi thi jisse tadafne laga.

Markesh :- bahut badi bhul ker rahi h ladki ek trittya rajkumaar se ber badha ker, abhi bhi vakt h har man le ho sakta h bhaiya samrat ko tum logo P kuch daya aajaye or wo tumhe kuch asan mot dede.

Preety markesh ka gala pakad ker boli :- Tu janana chahata h na ki mane us vrushali ko kese haraya jise tujhe kutto ki tarah jalil kiya to sun

Esa isliye kyunki tu sirf bhokta h, lekin m jo bolti hu vo kerke dikhati hu.

Veer majak me piche se :- or ye jo ni bolti wo to definitely kerti h humari lady don.

Jise sun us serious mahol me bhi hasi agayi.

Markesh man me :- ese to m jyada der inlogo k age ni tik paunga, Mujhe kuch or sochna hoga, per usse pahale mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga.

Markesh kuch soch preety ki piche ki. Or dekhte hue kuch ishara kerta h, jise naina dekh to leti h lekin isse pahale wo kuch samjh pati, ki tabhi uske kano m samar ki chik gunji.


Samar chilate hue :- naina .....

Naina ne us Or dekha to paya ki 2 asur jo najane kese bach gaye the unhone samar ko gher liya h Or wo uspe war kerne wale h.

Samar pe khatra dekh naina ne bina kuch soche samjhe trishul ko markesh ki or se hata Samar ki or ker chilayi.

Naina :- bhai jhuk jaiye.

Samar jaldi se jhuk gaya or trishul ki shakti ne dono ko bhasm ker dala.

Per naina k esa kerne se markesh aajad ho gaya or wo naina or uske dosto ko dhamki dete hue gayab ho gaya.

Markesh :- filhal to m ja raha hu ladki, per ab jo kuch bhi tere sath hoga uski jimedar Tu khud hogi.


Markesh k gayab hote hi naina turant Samar k pas pahunchi or boli.

Naina :- bhai thik to ho n Ap.

Naina k hath me lage ghav ko dekh nam ankho se.

Samar naina ka hath tham:- kesa bhai hu m, jaha ek Bhai apni bahan ki har musibat se raksha kerta h , or ek m hu jo apni bahan ki raksha kerna to dur uspee khud ek bojh bana hua hu.

Naina samjh gayi ki usko ayi chot ka jimedar Samar khud ko samjh raha h.

Naina Samar k gale lag :- bhai aap plz mat roiye jo hua usme galti ni, ulta m to khush jo mujhe aap jesa bhai mila jo apni bahan ko lagi mamuli si chot tak ni sah sakta, such m m bahut lucky hu bhai, jo mujhe duniya k sabse best bhaiya mile

Preety :- sister sahi bol rahi h brother, jo hua usme tumhari koi galtiich ni hone ka.

Oe rahi bat is chot ki to apun kis din kam aayeli, abhi ise thik ker deti hu.

Ye bol preety apni heal power ko use kerti h per ye kya kuch aser ni hota, esa isliye hua kyunki ye ghav ek tritya rajkumaar k vaar se hua tha, jis karan koi dusra tritya ki shakti use thik ni ker pa rahi thi.

Ye baat naina ne sabko samjhayi, kuch der un logo ne waha aaram kiya or fir veer bola

Veer :- ab kya kare naina, kese pata chalega ki konsa rasta hume trishastra tak pahuchayega.

Naina :- trishastra k ek bhag tak hume uska dusra bhag hi pahuchayega veer.

Ye bol naina apne bag se trishastra ka wo bhag nikalti h jo use d2 k vadh k doran mila tha or wo use hatheli per rakh kucg mantra padhti h, jisse wo bhag udne laga ek chamak k sath or ek raste ki or bhad gaya.

Naina ne apne dosto ko us bhag k picha kerne ko kaha or wo sab chal pade apmi manjil ki or.

Lekin herani ki baat ye thi ki na hi naina or na hi uske dosto ne ek baat ko bilkul notice ni kiya tha ki markesh ko achanak se unlogo ka pata kese chala, kyunki aaj tak to wo unhe dhund bilkul na paya tha, fir yu achanak kese ...


Wahi dusri or

Markesh naina or uske dosto se bach ker sidhe vidhwansika k mahal m pahunch gaya jaha per kubdi uska intezaar ker rahi thi.

Kubdi markesh ko dekh uske pass aate hue :- aagaye aap yuvraj, kya ker diya apne un insani kido ka nash.

Markesh gusse se :- humne un insano ko kamzor samjh ker bahut badi galti ki kubdi, wo log koi mamuli insan ni h, deviy shaktiyo se yukt h wo

(Gusse se dant bichte hue) or sabse jyada herani or gusse wali baat ye h ki unka ek sathi ek trittya h.

Kubdi chonk ker :- kya trittya ?

Markesh :- ha kubdi ek gadar tritya jo apne hi kul k nash pe tuli h.

Ye bolte hue markesh ne jo hua wo sab use bata dala, jise sun kubdi kuch soch k kutil muskan k sath boli.

Kubdi :- malik jitna aapne unlogo k baare m bataya h usse ye to paka h ki bal m unhe harana bahut kathin h.

Markesh gusse se :- to Tu kaha na kya chahti h bhudiya ki hum yu hi hath pe hath dhare


Kubdi :- ni malik esi ghustaki kerne ki meri kaha himmat , m to ye kahaan chahti hu jaha bal kam ni aata waha chal ka sahara lena padta h.

Markesh :- dekh bhudiya ek to mera wese hi dimag kharab h or uper se tu mat paka jo bolna h saf bol.

Kubdi :- malik m bas ye kahaana chahti hu ki merr pas ek yojna h.

Ye bol kubdi apni yojna markesh ko sunati h jise sun markesh khush ho gaya or haste shetani hasi k sath.

Kubdi :- bahut khub kubdi dil khush ker dala tune , ab pata chalega un insani kido ko ki markesh se panga lena matlab mot se panga lena.

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Raat ka samay tha to karan or uski family ne ek jagah ruk ker dhabe per dinner kiya or fir wo nikal pade apne ganv ki or.

Kafi raat ho chuki thi or karan or uski family subah tak hi ganv pahuchne wali thi, ye baat ridhima janti thi isiliye usne driver hire kiya hua tha.

Isliye karan apni family ko sone k liye bol deta h or luxyry bus hone k kaaran uski seats sleepers m covert ho jati h jisper sab log adjust ker sone lage.

Karan sabhi ko sula ker ek dusri seat per aker beth gaya kyunki use nind ni aarahi thi, to wo apne phone P kuch der music sunne laga.

Tabhi usko kisi ne chua, karan ne apne earphones hata ker dekhe to paya radha khadi h.

Karan :- are meri barbie doll soyi ni abhi tak.

Radha natkhat andaaz me karan k side m bethte hue :- aato rahi h, per mujhe ese ni sona.

Karan radha k gal khichte hue :- to kese soyegi meri gudiya.

Radha :- mujhe na apne pyare bhaiyu ki god m sona h , please bhai.

Karan :- pagli please kya bolti h, ye to tera haq h tere bhai pe.

Radha :- sachi! To jaldi kero na bhaiya, mujhe bahut jor se nini aarahi h.

Karan :- aaja mera bacha.

Ye bol karan apni seat ko fold ker sleaper banata h Or radha ka sir apni god m rakh ker uske balo ko sahalane laga.

Radha :- bhai ek baat bolu.

Karan :- niiiii...

Radha muh fulate hue :- bhai.

Karan :- are pagli tujhe kabse permission ki jarurat padne lagi.

Radha :- bhai m janti hu ki aap nana nani se bahut jyada gussa ho or hona bhi chahiye jo unhone badi mami k sath kiya uske liye unhe saja to milni hi chahiye, per..

Karan Radha k gal sahalate hue :- per kya meri gudiya.

Radha :- bhai aapko pata h waha humari ek or bahan bhi rahati h, komal naam h uska, bahut hi pyaari h vk or meri best friend bhi bhaiya.

To please bhaiya aap use kuch mat kahana na, jo hua usme uski koi galti bhi ni thi, aapko pata h Bhai meri tarah wo bhi ek bhai k liye bahut tarsi h, to bhaiya plz use bhi aap wese hi pyaar dena , doge na bhaiya.

Karan pyaar se :- meri barbie doll kuch kahe or m na manu esa kabhi ho sakta h, komal sirf apki best friend hi thodi h meri bhi to pyari gudiya h n or m bhala apni gudiya pe bhala kabhi gussa ker sakta hu.

Radha khusi se karan k gal chum :- bilkul ni, mere bhaiya duniya k sabse best bhai h.

Karan :- chalo gudiya ab kafi late ho chuki chalo ab ache bache ki tarah so jao.

Radha :- ok bhaiya good night, love u.

Karan radha k gal chum :- love u to my barbie doll.


Kuch der bad radha ko sulane k bad karan uth ker apne aage ki planning k bare m sochne laga.

Karan man hi man :- radha bilkul sahi bol rahi h, mana ki mere jane ka udeshya waha sabko dand dena h, parantu iskap ye arth ni ki m unhe bhi is sab m ghasit lu , jinka koi dosh ni issav m.

Isliye mujhe dand or prem ka ek esa samanjasaya banana hoga, jisse nyay bhi ho jaye or kisi nirdosh ka pida bhi na ho.

Karan abhi ye sab soch hi raha tha ki ek jani pahachani aawaz uske kaano m padi.

Utam putra mujhe tumse yahi asha thi.

Aawaz sun karan ne aawaz ki disha ki or dekha to paya ki ye aawaz kisi or ki ni swayam kfd ki thi, jo abhi abhi waha prakat hue the.

Karan unhe dekh heran bhi hua or ek shan khush bhi, ye us din k baad pahala moka tha jab shani dev yani apne dharmpita se Karan ki mulakaat hui thi.

Karan apni narajgi bhare swar me :- pranam prabhu, aap yaha.

Shani :- ab tak mujhse naraj ho putra.

Karan vinMrta se :- prabhu mera itna samarthya kaha jo apse naraj ho saku, mere hi ni meri maa k bhi aradhya the aap.

Isliye ye soch ker kasht or hota h ki jinke aage sari jindagi meri ma ne shish jhukaya, unhi nyaykerta ne apni usi bhakt k sath itna anyay hone diya.

Shani man me :- m tumhaari pida samjh sakta hu putra, isliye hi to tumhare shabdo se kabhi mujhe aahat mahaan ni hota, kyunki janta hu ki jab tumhe satya gyaat hoga tab tumhari narajgi swath dur ho jayegi.

Karan apni bat aGe bhadate hue :- kahiye prabhu aaj apne is ansh ki yaad kese aagayi.

Shani Karan k gal sahalate hue :- yaad to use kiya jata h na putra jise bhul gaye ho or bhala ek pita kabhi apne putra ko kabhi bhul sakta h.

(Baat aage bhadate hue) putra m aaj apne pita hone k kartabya ko hi nibhane aaya hu, tumhe us duvidha se nikalne jo tumhare karm me bhadha ban rahi h.

Tab shani ne karan k sir P hath rakha or unke hatho se ek roshni nikal karan k ander samane lagi.

Shani dev k esa kerte hi karan ki ek or power jagrit ho gayi jo abhi tak supt thi.

Shani dev :- putra ye shakti hi tumhara ab sabse shaktishali or amogh astra hogi, iska upyog humesha sambhal ker or soch samjh ker kerna kyoki ye shakti ek shan m sab kuch sudhar sakti h to sab kuch bigad bhi sakti h.

Karan :- meri duvidha dur kerne k liye dhanyavaad pita ji, aP nishchit rahe m aapko nirash ni hone dunga.

Shani dev kuch or bate samjhane k baad :- tumhara kalyan ho putra.

Ye bol shani anterdhyan ho gaye or karan bhi muskrata hua jaker radha ko apne sine se laga ker so gaya.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uski team khander tak pahunch gayi thi, lekin khander k bahar bahut hi jyada pahara tha dayano ka.

Veer :- ab kya kerna h naina.

Naina :- time bahut waste ho gaya h veer, ab hume sirf ek hi kam kerna h direct humla.

Preety :- ye hui na baat

Ye bol preety un dayano pe tut padi Or veer naina or preety k liye rasta banane laga tali wo ander ja sake

Naina :- veer or bhai aap yahi ruk in logo ko sambhaliye or preety tum mere sath aayo, sab vesa hi kerna jesa humne plan kiya tha.


Naina Or preety jaker ek darwaze k bahar khadi ho gayi or preety dayano ki rani ko bahar bulane lagi.

Preety :- abe o vidhwansika himmat h to bahar aa, kamre m kya chupi hui h chudel.

Wahi naina kamre k bahar ek aina (mirror) liye khadi thi.

Yahi naina ka plan tha darasl dayano ki rani vese to ab bhudi ho chuki thi jis kaaran wo kamzor thi, lekin ek Bahut hi bhayank shakti thi uske pass.

Wo ye thi ki ager koi bhi ager uski ankho ki or galti se bhi dekh le to wo turant pathar ka ban jaye.

Isliye hi naina ne ye plan kiya ki jese hi preety ki pukar sun rani bahar aati, naina use mirror dikha mar dalti.

Or esa ho bhi raha tha , vidhwansika bahar aahi gayi thi naina niche najar kiye hue mirror uski or kerne hi wali thi ki achanak se uski hath se mirror apne aap chut krr dur ja gira.

Ye harkat markesh ne hi ki thi, or haste hye bola.

Markesh :- m is bar tujhe kamyab ni hone dunga ladki.

Nains :- or m tumhara ant kerke hi rahungi dusht.

Ye
(Preety se ) preety khatam ker dalo ise.

Per ye kya tabhi wo hua jiski umid naina ne kabhi na ki thi, preety ne markesh pe humla kerne k bajaye naina ka hi gala pakad liya.

Naina tadafte hue :- didi ye aap kya ker rahi ho m naina hu aapki bahan

Markesh :- wo na kisi ki bahan h na hi kisi ki dost murkh ladki wo sirf ek trittya h jo apne yuvraj ka adesh ka palan ker rahi h.

Ji ha dosto markesh ne apni shakti se preety ko vash me ker liya tha.

Markesh :- preety dekh kya rahi h, ghuma de iska sir vidhwansika ki or or bana de use putla.

Naina :- ni didi, aap uski mat suniye aap trittya ni meri bahan ho aap, aap is adharmi k adhin ni ho sakti.

Markesh :- ni preety Tu na kisi ki bahan h na kisi ki mashuka Tu sirf ek trittya h trittya or ye ladki hum trityao ki sabse badi shatru isliye kahata hu apne yuvraj ki baat maan or ker daal iska ant.

Preety gusse se gurate hue :- yaaahhhh

Or wo or wapas se pura jor laga naina ka muh ghumane lagi.

Naina :- ni didi aap shetan ni ho, aapnek pavitra aatma ho, jinke hatho in dusto ka ant nishchit h.

Markesh :- iski baat sun mat preety ye tujhe bhadka rahi h tere apno k khilaf Tu ek tritya h or ye humari sabse badi dushman.

Naina ':- ni di, aap tritya ni balki Meri bahan ho, yaad kijiye di wo pal jo humne sath m bitaye, yaad kijiye wo kasam di jo aapne yaha ane se pahale li thi ki aap mere baba yani Apke mama k hatyaron se badla logi, yaad kijiye di veer jiju ko jinke liye aapne ye safar ka aarambh kiya, kya unka prem bhi is dusht k aage kamzor pad gaya di.

Naina ki baato ka asar preety pe dikhne laga, naina ki baate or yade preety k dimag m aate hi preety ka sir dird se fatne laga or wo chilane lagi.

Preety :- ni m ye ni ker sakti, m ni mar sakti apni bahan ko, ni m koi shetan ni hu.

Naina :- ha di aap koi shetan ni ho aap meri didi ho, veer jiju k pran ho aap or sabse badi baat aap bhua ki wo beti ho, jinko badla lena h in dushton se apne parivar k tabahi ka.

Preety kuch der tadafti rahi .

Naina :- di aap ler sakti ho, aap is shetan se bahut jyada shaktishali ho, kyunki aapke pas dharm ki shakti h or sbse badi baat aapke pas prem ki shakti h or prem wo param shakti h jiska koi. Tod ni, prayas kijiye di prayas kijiye.

(Preety ki sahaayata ka ishara kerte hue) har har mahadev di, har har mahadev.

Preety naina ka ishara samjh gayi or usne khud ko kese na kese shant ker apne aradhya yani bhagwaan bhutnath ka dhyan kerne lagi.

Jiske sath hi naina preety k sharir se kala dhua nikalne laga, jo us nakaratmak urja ka pratik tha jo preety m markesh k sampark or samohan se ayi thi.

Preety apni puri shakti k sath us samohan se bahar aate hue :- har har mahadev.

Preety k esa kerte hi wo sari nakaratmkta ek sath uske sharir se nikal markesh se ja takrayi or wo kuch dur ja gira.

Markesh :- ni, ye sambhav ni.

Naina muskurate hue :- tum kya jano dusht dharm ki shakti se kya kya sambhav h, ab apne ant k liye saj ho ja.


Markesh :- itni jaldi ni.

Markesh apni talvar leker naina ki or bahda hi tha ki ek baan usko aaker laga, jisse ek dhamaka hua or wo dur ja gira or uski talvaar niche gir gayi.

Ye vaar veer ne kia tha jo sabhi dayano ka kam nipta ker aaya tha .

Veer :- bahut ho gaya tera khel markesh ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Samar jaldi se ek mirror jo emergency k liye usne apne sath rakha hua tha use naina ki or throw kerte hue kaha.

Samar :- naina bahan ye lo..

Naina ne jaldi se wo mirror catch kiya or jaldi se najare niche ker mirror ko rani k ankho k samne ker diya.

Naina ne ye itni jaldi kiya ki bhudi rani ko sambhalne ka moka tak na mila or usne galti se khud ko mirror m dekh hi liya.

Or esa kerte hi uska sharir niche se pathar m tabdil hona start ho gaya.

Rani :- niiiiiiiiiii........

Markesh gusse se :- niiiii, ab tum sab maroge....

Naina preety ko kuch ishara kerti h , preety bhi ishara samjh markesh ki talvar jo niche gir gayi thi use jaldi se utha ker bina rani ki or dekhe uska sir kaat dala or veer ne jaldi se bina sir ki ankho ki dekhe sir ko pakad markesh ki or ker dala.




Markesh ko bhi sambhalne ka moka na mila or uski najar bhi rani ki najaro se mil gaya or wo bhi pathar m badalne laga.

Markesh dar se chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii..............., ye ni ho sakta

Or wo jaldi se wha se gyab ho gaya.

Wahi rani ka pura sharir pathar ka ban chuka tha or esa hote hi rani ka sir bhi fat gaya or uske turant baad rani k sharir m se ek roshni nikal naina ki or aagayi .


Naina samjh gayi wo roshni aakhir kya h Or wo turant apna hath age bhadati h , Or wo roshni naina k hath m aaker ek shastra k aage ka bhag k roop m badal gayi.

Naina khush hote hue :- aakhir kar trishastra ka dusra bhag humara hua, ab ek bhag or fir samraat ko humse koi bhi ni bacha sakega.

Preety :- per sister hume wo milega kaha.

Naina :- ye to hume ghora baba hi bata sakte h.

Ab hume chalna chahiye kyunki rasta lamba h or hume subah navmi ki puja k muharat se pahale pahuchna bhi hoga

Preety :- are sister Tu apne hote tension kaheko le reli h, abhi is problm ko full to finish ker deti hu.

Ye bol. Preety ne ek chutki bajayi or apne dosto k sath teleport ho pahunch gayi sidha apni jeep k pas.

Veer :- vese jaan ek baat kahu.

Preety sharm kerte hue :- kya veer kuch to sharm kero sister or samar yahi h.

Veer :- are Bhai sharm kesi apni hone wali bbivi ko hi to jan kaha h padosan ko thodi na

Veer ki is baat pe naina or samar has pade or preety sharma gayi.

Naina :- well done jiju sahi kaha apne.

Preety :- ab bolo bhi kya kahana h hume late ho raha h.

Veer :- m ye bol raha tha ki preety tumhe to dhyan hoga hi ki kuch din baad meri maa ka janmdin aane wala h.

Preety :- ha veer ye din bhi koi bhulne ka h kya bhala, aunty jab tak is duniya m thi, tabtak mujhe bhi apni beti ki tarah hi mana, maa to kaam se sham ko late lotti thi, tab yaad h aunty hi maa k lotne tak mera bhi tumhare sath dhyan rakhti , wahi hume school se ghar k liye lene aati,

yaha tak ki tumhare apne hatho se ek maa ki tarah khana bhi khilati, m kitni khush nasib thi us waqt jo us time ek ni balki 2 2 ma ka pyar mila or ab to...

Ye bolte bolte preety ki ankhe nam ho gayi naina ne kese na kese preety ko sambhala.

Veer :- ha ye to bilkul sach kaha tumne preety maa k liye jese m tha vesi hi tum thi, isliye meri icha h ki humari sagai maa k jamdin per hi ho, tumhe is baat pe koi etraz to ni na.

Preety sagai ka nam sun khush hote hue :- bhala mujhe kyu is baat per etraz kyu hoga veer, balki m to is fesle se bahut khush hu, mujhe koi etraaz ni, per ek baar apni sali sahiba se bhi puch lijiye.

Naina :- lo bahi, ab miya bivi raji to kya karega , bhala mujhe kyu etraz hoga preety, balki i m so happy for you ki akhir kar tum dono ne ye decision le hi liya.

Veer ye jan khush hua ki kisi ko uske fesle pe etraaz ni or gir sab khushi khusi apne hotel ki or nikal pade.

Per preety k man shant ni tha wo ek bahut badi asamjas me thi, ek baat thi jo use khaye ja rahi thi, wo kya thi wo to aage hi pata chalega

Wahi dusri or.

Ek anjan jagah per ek badi si gufa sthit thi, jaha per ek admi jisne sirf tan per ek kali dhoti pahani hui thi wo dhyan m betha tha, aas pass padi samgri or shetan ki murti dekh ker hi samjh aaraha tha ki wo vyakti kali sadhna m lin tha.

Tabhi waha markesh prakat hua, jo dara hua tha kyunki preety k danv k kaaran dhire dhire pathar ka ban raha tha.

Markesh chilate or rote hue us admi ko pukarne laga.

Markesh :- bhaiya mujhhe bachao, bachao mujhe bhaiya , dekhiye un logo ne mere sath kya kiya, bhaiya please mujhe bacha lo.

Ji ha dosto wo admi or koi ni trittyao ka raja or markesh ka bada bhai samraat hi tha jo yaha is gufa m beth apni kali sadhna m lin tha, jiska pata markesh or uske alawa koi ni janta tha.

Apne bhai ki roti hui chikh sun samrat ka dhayan tut gaya or wo chonkte hue uth gaya

Samraat :- chote.....

Vo apne bhai ki ye galat dekh heran ho gaya, lekin isse pahale wo kuch ker pata kafi der ho chuki thi or markesh puri tarah pathar ki maurti ban gaya.

Lekin marte marte usne markesh ko kaha.

Markesh :- dekhiye bhaiya un dushton ne mere sath kya kiya ab aap unko chodna ni .

Or isi k sath markesh ka kaam tamam ho gaya or uska pathar bana sharir bhi tabah ho gaya.

Samraat rote hue chillaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.............

Kafi der tak samraat rota raha or fir gusse se pagal hote hue chilaya :- kisne kisne mara mere bhai ko .

(Gusse se uska sharir jalne laga or gufa kampne lagi) kisnee........


Tabhi uske kaano m ek aawaz padi.

M janta hu samraat aapke bhai ki ye galat kisne ki....


Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Sooperb update bro.

To Markesh ka kaam b tamaam hogaya .

Aur samraat b ut gaya aapne bhai ki wajha se aur Samraatse baat krne Wala zaroor VP hi hoga.

Ab dekte hai aage kya hota hai.

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update no :- 170 (mega update)
Markesh nam h mera.

Ji ha dosto naina Or uske dosto k samne khada wo shaks ya yu kaho ki wo chunoti Or koi ni balki markesh hi tha.

Markesh ka naam sun naina serious ho gayi or boli.

Naina :- oh to tum ho markesh, akhir mulakaat ho hi gayi tumse, ab tum hi hume apne bhai tak pahuchaoge markesh.

Markesh :- pahuchaunga jarur pahuchaaunga ladki , per bhai tak ni balki tumhari mot tak.

Ye bol markesh aage badne laga , naina satark hote hue jaldi se apna trishul nikalti h or ye kya isse pahale ki naina trishul ka istemaal ker pati, usse pahle hi samrat ne ek shakti gole ka prahar naina k hath per ker dala, jisse naina k hath se trishul chut ker dur gir gaya or wo ghayal ho gayi.


Markesh haste hue :- murkh ladki tune kya socha tha in mamuli khilone se tu tritiya rajkumaar ko hara degi.

(Apne hath uper ker talvar prakat kerte hue) kafi waqt se tumhari talash me tha m naina, aaj tera ant ker aaj m un sabhi asur veero ka badla lunga jinko tune mara h.


Veer apne dhanush per baan sandhan kerte hue :- mere hote hue Tu naina ko chu bhi ni sakta samraat

Samraat pure tarike se teyar ho ker aaya tha usne ek ishara kiya or agle hi pal danvo ka ek bahut bada samuh sashatra waha aaphuncha.

Markesh :- apni dost ko to tab bachaoge na ladke jab tum khud bachoge.

Itna bol markesh apne seniko ko adesh deta h humle ka.

Markesh ka adesh sun sab ek sath humla bol dete h naina k dosto pe,

Veer samar se :- samar tum mere piche hi rahana, ni to tum khatre m pad sakte ho.


Samar :- per veer naina bahan.

Veer tir chodte hue :- tum chinta mat karo samar naina ko kuch ni hoga , preety h na

Preety m in logo ko dekhta hu tum naina ki raksha kero.

Per ye kya jaha ek taraf ghayal naina dard se tadaf rahi thi or markesh uski or bad raha tha, whi preety bilkul khamosh or sir niche kiye khade khari thi

Veer ne kayi bat preety ko pukara jab jaker preety hosh m aayi.

Preety hadbadate hue :- ha.

Veer :- aj kya ho gaya h tumhe preety kabse tume pukar raha hu tum jwab hi ni de rahi.

(Naina ki or ishara kerte hue) jaldi se kuch kero naina ko humari madad ki jarurat h.


Preety jab naina ki ye halat dekhti h to firse uska ugra roop jagrit ho gaya or wo naina ki or bhadne lagi.

Tabhi bahut sare seniko ne preety Or veer ko gher liya.

Preety gusse se dahahdte hue :- tumhari ye himmat tum preety ka rasta roko.

Preety ne ek mantra bol apni bahe aage felayi, jiske sath uski dono hatheliya chamakne lagi.


Or fir preety ne badi tezi se ek tali mari, preety k esa kerne se ek garjana k sath roshni bhari esi waves nikl k aage badhi ki uski chapet me aane wala rakshas tinke ki bhati udte hue swaha ho gayi.

Veer preety ki is harkat ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha , kyunki naina ne ek hi war me adhi sena tabah ker dali thi.

Preety aage bhadte hue muskuarte hue :- itni madad kafi h na jaaan.

Preety ki aawaz se veer hosh m aate hue ha m sir hilata h or lag jata h baki sena se niptane me.

Wahi dusri or

Markesh ko apni or badhte hue dekha dard se kaharati hui naina thodi himmat ker apne ghutno k bal uth ker apne trishul ki or bhadne ki kosis kerti h.

Lekin ye kya trishul apne aap hi ud ker or dur ja gira or markesh pas aate hue haste hue bola.

Markesh :- bekar ki kosis mat ker ladki teri mot nishchit h, apne priya jano ko yaad ker le akhri baar.

Naina muskurate hue dard bhari awaaz me :- unko yaad kya kerna markesh jab wo mere pas hi h meri madad k liye.

Markesh naina ki baat ka matlab samjh pata ki usse pahale hi ek jabardast mukka uske pet m pada Or wo kuch dur piche apne aap ghasita gaya.

Markesh :- aaahh.

Markesh ne khud ko sambhalte hue samne ki or dekha to paya ki samne ek or ladki khadi thi, or usine use mukka mara tha.

Ye or koi ni balki preety hi thi.

Markesh ne pahali baar preety ko dhyan se dekha to ek baar chok sa gaya .

Markesh man hi man:- ab ye kon h, jiske prahar ne mujh tak ko hila dala, or to or iski shakal kitni milti h bhaiya se, or baar baar esa ahasas kyu ho raha h mujhe jese m ise janta hu, koi sambandh ho



Preety :- ek ghayal ladki P kya hath uthata h dusht ager dam h to mujhse lad.

Markesh ne abhi tak preety ka trittya nishan ni dekha tha.

Markesh tezi se ek dam preety k samne aagaya or bola

Markesh :- wah, man gaye ladki, kuch to baat h, trittya k rajkumaar k per dagmaga diye, ab ek avsar hume bhi to dijiye.

Ye bol markesh ne bhi ek jabardast prahar preety k pet per kar dala jisse wo udti hi kuch dur ja giri.

Veer chilaya :- preety.

Veer preety ki madad k liye aage bad hi raha tha ki preety apna pet pakad khadi hoti hui boli.

Preety gusse se lal ankho k sath:- ni veer tum bich m mat aao, aaj is dusht ka ant m swayam apne hatho se kar apne mama (pandit ji) ki mot ka badla lungi, kyunki wo trittya isi ka admi tha, jisne mere mama ko mara tha or iske baad iske bhai ko.

Ye bol preety lagbhag udte hue full speed se markesh k pas pahunch ek muka de mara.




Lekin markesh is bar teyar tha isliye is bar wo preety ka mukka aram se sahan ker liya.

Or fir shuru hua preety or markesh ka mahasangram jisme kabhi preety bhari pad rahi thi to kabhi samrat, dono kafi der tak hath per chalate hue hi lad rahe the.


Veer seniko ko marte hue naina ki or badha or apne samar or naina k charo or ek sheild bana di jisse koi unke pas na aasake.


Veer naina ko sambhalte hue :- naina naina tum thik to ho na.

Naina khud ko sambhalte hue :- m thik hu veer, per hume jald hi kuch kerna hoga, preety per bahut bada khatra mandra raha h.

Hume markesh ko rokna hoga isse pahale usse pata chale ki preety kon h.

(Apne trishul ko dhundte hue) mera trishul kaha h.

(Samar se) bhai aap meri madad kijiye trishul dhundne m, uske bina hum markesh ko ni rok payenge, or veer tum jitna jaldi ho sake in seniko ka ant kero

Markesh ladte hue man hi man :- ni ye ni ho sakta isme to mujhe usi shakti ka ahasas ho raha h jo shakti mujhme h, kahi esa to ni.....

Markesh abhi soch hi raha tha ki preety ne ek jabardast mukka marna chaha lekin samrat ne use pakad liya

Lekin tabhi wahi hua jiska dar naina ko tha, preety ka hath pakdte hi markesh ki najar preety k hath P bane trittya k nishan p pad gayi or wo buri tarah chonk gaya.

Markesh man hi man :- to mera shak sahi nikla ye ladki bhi ek trittya h, (gusse se) ek trttya ho ker trittya se gaddari, ni chodunga ise.

Ye sab sochte hi markesh or jyada ugra ho prahar kerne laga

Wahi preety ki shakti abhi markesh k mukable kam jagrit thi, isliye dhire dhire kamjor padne lagi.


Markesh ne bhi moke ka fayda utha chal se preety ki ankho m ek roshni chod di jisse uski ankhe chondhiya k band pad gayi or use kuch dikhna band ho gaya.

Jiska fayda utha ek jordar laat preety ko de mari jisse wo kuch dur ja giri , or uske baad to markesh ne mukke or lato ki barsaat ker di.

Markesh rukte hue :- man gaya tumhe ladki, tum me bahut dam or himmat h, per itni ni ki tum markesh ko hara sako.

(Fir gusse se apni ankhe surkh lal kerte hue ) ha yahi okaat h teri gaddar ladki, kya socha tha tune ki humse gaddari kerke bach jayegi.


Preety ghayal avastha me hi :- himmat to tune dekhi hi kaha h meri markesh

Ye bolte hue preety uthne ki kosis kerti h per markesh use mayavi pashu se bandh deta h.

Markesh haste hue :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni gaya, man to kerta h tujhe abhi mar dalu, per ni usme koi maja ni aayega, fir kya kiya jaye

(Sochne ka natak kerte hue ) haa kyu na esa kiya jaye, tujhse pahale tere is adhik ko m marunga or teri is dost kya naam bataya tha uska ha naina use kya chij h yaar wo to pahale to socha tha ki use mar dalunga, per ni esi chij ko marne m ni balki bister pe maslne m.....

(Shetani hasi k sath) ha ha ye sahi rahega teri is saheli ko tere samne hi maslunga jab bister......

Abhi markesh ne apni baat puri bhi na ki thi ki ek gola use aaker laga or wo kuch dur ja gira.

Per jaldi sambhal kee wo jab khada hua to usne jo dekha uski herani ki sima na rahi preety uske pash se mukt ho chuki thi or wo ab hava me ud rahi thithi or uske dono hath hari roshni se chamak rahe the




Markesh :- asambhav ye tumne kese kiya, mere us pash se bhut preet to kya trittya tak ni chut sakta tha, tumne ye kese kiya.

Preety darwani muskan k sath :- kaha tha na tumse markesh meri himmat tumne ab tak dekhi hi kaha h.

(Apni pith p lagi mayan setalvar nikalte hue) ise to tum pahachante hi hoge na rajkumar.

Markesh ne jese hi preety ki talvar ko dekha to ek bar to uski buri tarah fat gayi, kyonki is talvar ko bhali bhanti pahachanta tha, isi talvar k kaaran hi usko buri tarah beijat hona pada tha .

Markesh herani se :- ye talvar to..

Preety bich me :- vrushali ki h, kyu dekh ker acha na laga ise dobara.

Markesh :- per ye talvar tumhare pas aayi kese.

Veer markesh ki sena ko tabah ker waha aaphuncha or bola.

Veer :- tumhari jaankari k liye bata dy markesh, jis vrushali ne bhutkal me Tumhara maan mardan kiya tha, us vrushali ko pralok pahuchane wali Tumhari ankho k samne hi h.

Markesh :- asambhav, jise trittya k raja or rajkumar tak na hara sake, tum bol rahe ho us vrushali ko is mamuli gaddar ne hara dala.

Veer :- yahi to anter h samrat achai or burayi ka, tum isliye hare kyunki tum adharm k paksh me the or hum isliye jite kyunki dharm humare paksh m tha.

Or aaj bhi fir vesa hi hoga.

Ye bol veer ne ek baan markesh pe chalaya jisse ek dhamake k sath markesh kuch ghayal ho gaya.

Preety ne apni talvaar ko aage kiya tabhi usse bhi ek rays nikli or markesh pe padte hi vo tadafne laga.

Veer :- ab bhi vakt h markesh har man lo or humara marg prashat kero ni to merne k liye teyar ho jao.

Markesh kisi tarah rays se chut gaya or bokhlate hue bola

Markesh hafte hue :- itni jaldi ni , ab ek tritya rajkumaar ki asli shakti se tumhara parichay kerwane ka waqt aagaya h

Ab m wo kerne wala hu jiski tumne ummid bhi na ki hogi, ye bol markesh apna hath uper ker ankhe band ker kuch mantra bolne hi wala hota h ki achanak usper ek jabardast urja ka prahar hua.

Jo or kisi ne ni balki naina ne hi kiya tha, jisne apna trishul khoj liya tha.

Naina :- mere hote hue ni markesh.

Markesh gusse se uth ker uski or bhadte hue :- ni chodunga tujhe.

Naina is baar puri tarah teyar thi, usne jald se ankh band mantra pada or trishul aage kiya, jisse trishul se roshni nikal markesh per padi or us roshni ne pash ka roop le liya.


Jisme markesh bhandhane laga , pash ki pakad dhire dhire majboot hoti ja rahi thi jisse tadafne laga.

Markesh :- bahut badi bhul ker rahi h ladki ek trittya rajkumaar se ber badha ker, abhi bhi vakt h har man le ho sakta h bhaiya samrat ko tum logo P kuch daya aajaye or wo tumhe kuch asan mot dede.

Preety markesh ka gala pakad ker boli :- Tu janana chahata h na ki mane us vrushali ko kese haraya jise tujhe kutto ki tarah jalil kiya to sun

Esa isliye kyunki tu sirf bhokta h, lekin m jo bolti hu vo kerke dikhati hu.

Veer majak me piche se :- or ye jo ni bolti wo to definitely kerti h humari lady don.

Jise sun us serious mahol me bhi hasi agayi.

Markesh man me :- ese to m jyada der inlogo k age ni tik paunga, Mujhe kuch or sochna hoga, per usse pahale mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga.

Markesh kuch soch preety ki piche ki. Or dekhte hue kuch ishara kerta h, jise naina dekh to leti h lekin isse pahale wo kuch samjh pati, ki tabhi uske kano m samar ki chik gunji.


Samar chilate hue :- naina .....

Naina ne us Or dekha to paya ki 2 asur jo najane kese bach gaye the unhone samar ko gher liya h Or wo uspe war kerne wale h.

Samar pe khatra dekh naina ne bina kuch soche samjhe trishul ko markesh ki or se hata Samar ki or ker chilayi.

Naina :- bhai jhuk jaiye.

Samar jaldi se jhuk gaya or trishul ki shakti ne dono ko bhasm ker dala.

Per naina k esa kerne se markesh aajad ho gaya or wo naina or uske dosto ko dhamki dete hue gayab ho gaya.

Markesh :- filhal to m ja raha hu ladki, per ab jo kuch bhi tere sath hoga uski jimedar Tu khud hogi.


Markesh k gayab hote hi naina turant Samar k pas pahunchi or boli.

Naina :- bhai thik to ho n Ap.

Naina k hath me lage ghav ko dekh nam ankho se.

Samar naina ka hath tham:- kesa bhai hu m, jaha ek Bhai apni bahan ki har musibat se raksha kerta h , or ek m hu jo apni bahan ki raksha kerna to dur uspee khud ek bojh bana hua hu.

Naina samjh gayi ki usko ayi chot ka jimedar Samar khud ko samjh raha h.

Naina Samar k gale lag :- bhai aap plz mat roiye jo hua usme galti ni, ulta m to khush jo mujhe aap jesa bhai mila jo apni bahan ko lagi mamuli si chot tak ni sah sakta, such m m bahut lucky hu bhai, jo mujhe duniya k sabse best bhaiya mile

Preety :- sister sahi bol rahi h brother, jo hua usme tumhari koi galtiich ni hone ka.

Oe rahi bat is chot ki to apun kis din kam aayeli, abhi ise thik ker deti hu.

Ye bol preety apni heal power ko use kerti h per ye kya kuch aser ni hota, esa isliye hua kyunki ye ghav ek tritya rajkumaar k vaar se hua tha, jis karan koi dusra tritya ki shakti use thik ni ker pa rahi thi.

Ye baat naina ne sabko samjhayi, kuch der un logo ne waha aaram kiya or fir veer bola

Veer :- ab kya kare naina, kese pata chalega ki konsa rasta hume trishastra tak pahuchayega.

Naina :- trishastra k ek bhag tak hume uska dusra bhag hi pahuchayega veer.

Ye bol naina apne bag se trishastra ka wo bhag nikalti h jo use d2 k vadh k doran mila tha or wo use hatheli per rakh kucg mantra padhti h, jisse wo bhag udne laga ek chamak k sath or ek raste ki or bhad gaya.

Naina ne apne dosto ko us bhag k picha kerne ko kaha or wo sab chal pade apmi manjil ki or.

Lekin herani ki baat ye thi ki na hi naina or na hi uske dosto ne ek baat ko bilkul notice ni kiya tha ki markesh ko achanak se unlogo ka pata kese chala, kyunki aaj tak to wo unhe dhund bilkul na paya tha, fir yu achanak kese ...


Wahi dusri or

Markesh naina or uske dosto se bach ker sidhe vidhwansika k mahal m pahunch gaya jaha per kubdi uska intezaar ker rahi thi.

Kubdi markesh ko dekh uske pass aate hue :- aagaye aap yuvraj, kya ker diya apne un insani kido ka nash.

Markesh gusse se :- humne un insano ko kamzor samjh ker bahut badi galti ki kubdi, wo log koi mamuli insan ni h, deviy shaktiyo se yukt h wo

(Gusse se dant bichte hue) or sabse jyada herani or gusse wali baat ye h ki unka ek sathi ek trittya h.

Kubdi chonk ker :- kya trittya ?

Markesh :- ha kubdi ek gadar tritya jo apne hi kul k nash pe tuli h.

Ye bolte hue markesh ne jo hua wo sab use bata dala, jise sun kubdi kuch soch k kutil muskan k sath boli.

Kubdi :- malik jitna aapne unlogo k baare m bataya h usse ye to paka h ki bal m unhe harana bahut kathin h.

Markesh gusse se :- to Tu kaha na kya chahti h bhudiya ki hum yu hi hath pe hath dhare


Kubdi :- ni malik esi ghustaki kerne ki meri kaha himmat , m to ye kahaan chahti hu jaha bal kam ni aata waha chal ka sahara lena padta h.

Markesh :- dekh bhudiya ek to mera wese hi dimag kharab h or uper se tu mat paka jo bolna h saf bol.

Kubdi :- malik m bas ye kahaana chahti hu ki merr pas ek yojna h.

Ye bol kubdi apni yojna markesh ko sunati h jise sun markesh khush ho gaya or haste shetani hasi k sath.

Kubdi :- bahut khub kubdi dil khush ker dala tune , ab pata chalega un insani kido ko ki markesh se panga lena matlab mot se panga lena.

Back to the hero.

Raat ka samay tha to karan or uski family ne ek jagah ruk ker dhabe per dinner kiya or fir wo nikal pade apne ganv ki or.

Kafi raat ho chuki thi or karan or uski family subah tak hi ganv pahuchne wali thi, ye baat ridhima janti thi isiliye usne driver hire kiya hua tha.

Isliye karan apni family ko sone k liye bol deta h or luxyry bus hone k kaaran uski seats sleepers m covert ho jati h jisper sab log adjust ker sone lage.

Karan sabhi ko sula ker ek dusri seat per aker beth gaya kyunki use nind ni aarahi thi, to wo apne phone P kuch der music sunne laga.

Tabhi usko kisi ne chua, karan ne apne earphones hata ker dekhe to paya radha khadi h.

Karan :- are meri barbie doll soyi ni abhi tak.

Radha natkhat andaaz me karan k side m bethte hue :- aato rahi h, per mujhe ese ni sona.

Karan radha k gal khichte hue :- to kese soyegi meri gudiya.

Radha :- mujhe na apne pyare bhaiyu ki god m sona h , please bhai.

Karan :- pagli please kya bolti h, ye to tera haq h tere bhai pe.

Radha :- sachi! To jaldi kero na bhaiya, mujhe bahut jor se nini aarahi h.

Karan :- aaja mera bacha.

Ye bol karan apni seat ko fold ker sleaper banata h Or radha ka sir apni god m rakh ker uske balo ko sahalane laga.

Radha :- bhai ek baat bolu.

Karan :- niiiii...

Radha muh fulate hue :- bhai.

Karan :- are pagli tujhe kabse permission ki jarurat padne lagi.

Radha :- bhai m janti hu ki aap nana nani se bahut jyada gussa ho or hona bhi chahiye jo unhone badi mami k sath kiya uske liye unhe saja to milni hi chahiye, per..

Karan Radha k gal sahalate hue :- per kya meri gudiya.

Radha :- bhai aapko pata h waha humari ek or bahan bhi rahati h, komal naam h uska, bahut hi pyaari h vk or meri best friend bhi bhaiya.

To please bhaiya aap use kuch mat kahana na, jo hua usme uski koi galti bhi ni thi, aapko pata h Bhai meri tarah wo bhi ek bhai k liye bahut tarsi h, to bhaiya plz use bhi aap wese hi pyaar dena , doge na bhaiya.

Karan pyaar se :- meri barbie doll kuch kahe or m na manu esa kabhi ho sakta h, komal sirf apki best friend hi thodi h meri bhi to pyari gudiya h n or m bhala apni gudiya pe bhala kabhi gussa ker sakta hu.

Radha khusi se karan k gal chum :- bilkul ni, mere bhaiya duniya k sabse best bhai h.

Karan :- chalo gudiya ab kafi late ho chuki chalo ab ache bache ki tarah so jao.

Radha :- ok bhaiya good night, love u.

Karan radha k gal chum :- love u to my barbie doll.


Kuch der bad radha ko sulane k bad karan uth ker apne aage ki planning k bare m sochne laga.

Karan man hi man :- radha bilkul sahi bol rahi h, mana ki mere jane ka udeshya waha sabko dand dena h, parantu iskap ye arth ni ki m unhe bhi is sab m ghasit lu , jinka koi dosh ni issav m.

Isliye mujhe dand or prem ka ek esa samanjasaya banana hoga, jisse nyay bhi ho jaye or kisi nirdosh ka pida bhi na ho.

Karan abhi ye sab soch hi raha tha ki ek jani pahachani aawaz uske kaano m padi.

Utam putra mujhe tumse yahi asha thi.

Aawaz sun karan ne aawaz ki disha ki or dekha to paya ki ye aawaz kisi or ki ni swayam kfd ki thi, jo abhi abhi waha prakat hue the.

Karan unhe dekh heran bhi hua or ek shan khush bhi, ye us din k baad pahala moka tha jab shani dev yani apne dharmpita se Karan ki mulakaat hui thi.

Karan apni narajgi bhare swar me :- pranam prabhu, aap yaha.

Shani :- ab tak mujhse naraj ho putra.

Karan vinMrta se :- prabhu mera itna samarthya kaha jo apse naraj ho saku, mere hi ni meri maa k bhi aradhya the aap.

Isliye ye soch ker kasht or hota h ki jinke aage sari jindagi meri ma ne shish jhukaya, unhi nyaykerta ne apni usi bhakt k sath itna anyay hone diya.

Shani man me :- m tumhaari pida samjh sakta hu putra, isliye hi to tumhare shabdo se kabhi mujhe aahat mahaan ni hota, kyunki janta hu ki jab tumhe satya gyaat hoga tab tumhari narajgi swath dur ho jayegi.

Karan apni bat aGe bhadate hue :- kahiye prabhu aaj apne is ansh ki yaad kese aagayi.

Shani Karan k gal sahalate hue :- yaad to use kiya jata h na putra jise bhul gaye ho or bhala ek pita kabhi apne putra ko kabhi bhul sakta h.

(Baat aage bhadate hue) putra m aaj apne pita hone k kartabya ko hi nibhane aaya hu, tumhe us duvidha se nikalne jo tumhare karm me bhadha ban rahi h.

Tab shani ne karan k sir P hath rakha or unke hatho se ek roshni nikal karan k ander samane lagi.

Shani dev k esa kerte hi karan ki ek or power jagrit ho gayi jo abhi tak supt thi.

Shani dev :- putra ye shakti hi tumhara ab sabse shaktishali or amogh astra hogi, iska upyog humesha sambhal ker or soch samjh ker kerna kyoki ye shakti ek shan m sab kuch sudhar sakti h to sab kuch bigad bhi sakti h.

Karan :- meri duvidha dur kerne k liye dhanyavaad pita ji, aP nishchit rahe m aapko nirash ni hone dunga.

Shani dev kuch or bate samjhane k baad :- tumhara kalyan ho putra.

Ye bol shani anterdhyan ho gaye or karan bhi muskrata hua jaker radha ko apne sine se laga ker so gaya.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uski team khander tak pahunch gayi thi, lekin khander k bahar bahut hi jyada pahara tha dayano ka.

Veer :- ab kya kerna h naina.

Naina :- time bahut waste ho gaya h veer, ab hume sirf ek hi kam kerna h direct humla.

Preety :- ye hui na baat

Ye bol preety un dayano pe tut padi Or veer naina or preety k liye rasta banane laga tali wo ander ja sake

Naina :- veer or bhai aap yahi ruk in logo ko sambhaliye or preety tum mere sath aayo, sab vesa hi kerna jesa humne plan kiya tha.


Naina Or preety jaker ek darwaze k bahar khadi ho gayi or preety dayano ki rani ko bahar bulane lagi.

Preety :- abe o vidhwansika himmat h to bahar aa, kamre m kya chupi hui h chudel.

Wahi naina kamre k bahar ek aina (mirror) liye khadi thi.

Yahi naina ka plan tha darasl dayano ki rani vese to ab bhudi ho chuki thi jis kaaran wo kamzor thi, lekin ek Bahut hi bhayank shakti thi uske pass.

Wo ye thi ki ager koi bhi ager uski ankho ki or galti se bhi dekh le to wo turant pathar ka ban jaye.

Isliye hi naina ne ye plan kiya ki jese hi preety ki pukar sun rani bahar aati, naina use mirror dikha mar dalti.

Or esa ho bhi raha tha , vidhwansika bahar aahi gayi thi naina niche najar kiye hue mirror uski or kerne hi wali thi ki achanak se uski hath se mirror apne aap chut krr dur ja gira.

Ye harkat markesh ne hi ki thi, or haste hye bola.

Markesh :- m is bar tujhe kamyab ni hone dunga ladki.

Nains :- or m tumhara ant kerke hi rahungi dusht.

Ye
(Preety se ) preety khatam ker dalo ise.

Per ye kya tabhi wo hua jiski umid naina ne kabhi na ki thi, preety ne markesh pe humla kerne k bajaye naina ka hi gala pakad liya.

Naina tadafte hue :- didi ye aap kya ker rahi ho m naina hu aapki bahan

Markesh :- wo na kisi ki bahan h na hi kisi ki dost murkh ladki wo sirf ek trittya h jo apne yuvraj ka adesh ka palan ker rahi h.

Ji ha dosto markesh ne apni shakti se preety ko vash me ker liya tha.

Markesh :- preety dekh kya rahi h, ghuma de iska sir vidhwansika ki or or bana de use putla.

Naina :- ni didi, aap uski mat suniye aap trittya ni meri bahan ho aap, aap is adharmi k adhin ni ho sakti.

Markesh :- ni preety Tu na kisi ki bahan h na kisi ki mashuka Tu sirf ek trittya h trittya or ye ladki hum trityao ki sabse badi shatru isliye kahata hu apne yuvraj ki baat maan or ker daal iska ant.

Preety gusse se gurate hue :- yaaahhhh

Or wo or wapas se pura jor laga naina ka muh ghumane lagi.

Naina :- ni didi aap shetan ni ho, aapnek pavitra aatma ho, jinke hatho in dusto ka ant nishchit h.

Markesh :- iski baat sun mat preety ye tujhe bhadka rahi h tere apno k khilaf Tu ek tritya h or ye humari sabse badi dushman.

Naina ':- ni di, aap tritya ni balki Meri bahan ho, yaad kijiye di wo pal jo humne sath m bitaye, yaad kijiye wo kasam di jo aapne yaha ane se pahale li thi ki aap mere baba yani Apke mama k hatyaron se badla logi, yaad kijiye di veer jiju ko jinke liye aapne ye safar ka aarambh kiya, kya unka prem bhi is dusht k aage kamzor pad gaya di.

Naina ki baato ka asar preety pe dikhne laga, naina ki baate or yade preety k dimag m aate hi preety ka sir dird se fatne laga or wo chilane lagi.

Preety :- ni m ye ni ker sakti, m ni mar sakti apni bahan ko, ni m koi shetan ni hu.

Naina :- ha di aap koi shetan ni ho aap meri didi ho, veer jiju k pran ho aap or sabse badi baat aap bhua ki wo beti ho, jinko badla lena h in dushton se apne parivar k tabahi ka.

Preety kuch der tadafti rahi .

Naina :- di aap ler sakti ho, aap is shetan se bahut jyada shaktishali ho, kyunki aapke pas dharm ki shakti h or sbse badi baat aapke pas prem ki shakti h or prem wo param shakti h jiska koi. Tod ni, prayas kijiye di prayas kijiye.

(Preety ki sahaayata ka ishara kerte hue) har har mahadev di, har har mahadev.

Preety naina ka ishara samjh gayi or usne khud ko kese na kese shant ker apne aradhya yani bhagwaan bhutnath ka dhyan kerne lagi.

Jiske sath hi naina preety k sharir se kala dhua nikalne laga, jo us nakaratmak urja ka pratik tha jo preety m markesh k sampark or samohan se ayi thi.

Preety apni puri shakti k sath us samohan se bahar aate hue :- har har mahadev.

Preety k esa kerte hi wo sari nakaratmkta ek sath uske sharir se nikal markesh se ja takrayi or wo kuch dur ja gira.

Markesh :- ni, ye sambhav ni.

Naina muskurate hue :- tum kya jano dusht dharm ki shakti se kya kya sambhav h, ab apne ant k liye saj ho ja.


Markesh :- itni jaldi ni.

Markesh apni talvar leker naina ki or bahda hi tha ki ek baan usko aaker laga, jisse ek dhamaka hua or wo dur ja gira or uski talvaar niche gir gayi.

Ye vaar veer ne kia tha jo sabhi dayano ka kam nipta ker aaya tha .

Veer :- bahut ho gaya tera khel markesh ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Samar jaldi se ek mirror jo emergency k liye usne apne sath rakha hua tha use naina ki or throw kerte hue kaha.

Samar :- naina bahan ye lo..

Naina ne jaldi se wo mirror catch kiya or jaldi se najare niche ker mirror ko rani k ankho k samne ker diya.

Naina ne ye itni jaldi kiya ki bhudi rani ko sambhalne ka moka tak na mila or usne galti se khud ko mirror m dekh hi liya.

Or esa kerte hi uska sharir niche se pathar m tabdil hona start ho gaya.

Rani :- niiiiiiiiiii........

Markesh gusse se :- niiiii, ab tum sab maroge....

Naina preety ko kuch ishara kerti h , preety bhi ishara samjh markesh ki talvar jo niche gir gayi thi use jaldi se utha ker bina rani ki or dekhe uska sir kaat dala or veer ne jaldi se bina sir ki ankho ki dekhe sir ko pakad markesh ki or ker dala.




Markesh ko bhi sambhalne ka moka na mila or uski najar bhi rani ki najaro se mil gaya or wo bhi pathar m badalne laga.

Markesh dar se chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii..............., ye ni ho sakta

Or wo jaldi se wha se gyab ho gaya.

Wahi rani ka pura sharir pathar ka ban chuka tha or esa hote hi rani ka sir bhi fat gaya or uske turant baad rani k sharir m se ek roshni nikal naina ki or aagayi .


Naina samjh gayi wo roshni aakhir kya h Or wo turant apna hath age bhadati h , Or wo roshni naina k hath m aaker ek shastra k aage ka bhag k roop m badal gayi.

Naina khush hote hue :- aakhir kar trishastra ka dusra bhag humara hua, ab ek bhag or fir samraat ko humse koi bhi ni bacha sakega.

Preety :- per sister hume wo milega kaha.

Naina :- ye to hume ghora baba hi bata sakte h.

Ab hume chalna chahiye kyunki rasta lamba h or hume subah navmi ki puja k muharat se pahale pahuchna bhi hoga

Preety :- are sister Tu apne hote tension kaheko le reli h, abhi is problm ko full to finish ker deti hu.

Ye bol. Preety ne ek chutki bajayi or apne dosto k sath teleport ho pahunch gayi sidha apni jeep k pas.

Veer :- vese jaan ek baat kahu.

Preety sharm kerte hue :- kya veer kuch to sharm kero sister or samar yahi h.

Veer :- are Bhai sharm kesi apni hone wali bbivi ko hi to jan kaha h padosan ko thodi na

Veer ki is baat pe naina or samar has pade or preety sharma gayi.

Naina :- well done jiju sahi kaha apne.

Preety :- ab bolo bhi kya kahana h hume late ho raha h.

Veer :- m ye bol raha tha ki preety tumhe to dhyan hoga hi ki kuch din baad meri maa ka janmdin aane wala h.

Preety :- ha veer ye din bhi koi bhulne ka h kya bhala, aunty jab tak is duniya m thi, tabtak mujhe bhi apni beti ki tarah hi mana, maa to kaam se sham ko late lotti thi, tab yaad h aunty hi maa k lotne tak mera bhi tumhare sath dhyan rakhti , wahi hume school se ghar k liye lene aati,

yaha tak ki tumhare apne hatho se ek maa ki tarah khana bhi khilati, m kitni khush nasib thi us waqt jo us time ek ni balki 2 2 ma ka pyar mila or ab to...

Ye bolte bolte preety ki ankhe nam ho gayi naina ne kese na kese preety ko sambhala.

Veer :- ha ye to bilkul sach kaha tumne preety maa k liye jese m tha vesi hi tum thi, isliye meri icha h ki humari sagai maa k jamdin per hi ho, tumhe is baat pe koi etraz to ni na.

Preety sagai ka nam sun khush hote hue :- bhala mujhe kyu is baat per etraz kyu hoga veer, balki m to is fesle se bahut khush hu, mujhe koi etraaz ni, per ek baar apni sali sahiba se bhi puch lijiye.

Naina :- lo bahi, ab miya bivi raji to kya karega , bhala mujhe kyu etraz hoga preety, balki i m so happy for you ki akhir kar tum dono ne ye decision le hi liya.

Veer ye jan khush hua ki kisi ko uske fesle pe etraaz ni or gir sab khushi khusi apne hotel ki or nikal pade.

Per preety k man shant ni tha wo ek bahut badi asamjas me thi, ek baat thi jo use khaye ja rahi thi, wo kya thi wo to aage hi pata chalega

Wahi dusri or.

Ek anjan jagah per ek badi si gufa sthit thi, jaha per ek admi jisne sirf tan per ek kali dhoti pahani hui thi wo dhyan m betha tha, aas pass padi samgri or shetan ki murti dekh ker hi samjh aaraha tha ki wo vyakti kali sadhna m lin tha.

Tabhi waha markesh prakat hua, jo dara hua tha kyunki preety k danv k kaaran dhire dhire pathar ka ban raha tha.

Markesh chilate or rote hue us admi ko pukarne laga.

Markesh :- bhaiya mujhhe bachao, bachao mujhe bhaiya , dekhiye un logo ne mere sath kya kiya, bhaiya please mujhe bacha lo.

Ji ha dosto wo admi or koi ni trittyao ka raja or markesh ka bada bhai samraat hi tha jo yaha is gufa m beth apni kali sadhna m lin tha, jiska pata markesh or uske alawa koi ni janta tha.

Apne bhai ki roti hui chikh sun samrat ka dhayan tut gaya or wo chonkte hue uth gaya

Samraat :- chote.....

Vo apne bhai ki ye galat dekh heran ho gaya, lekin isse pahale wo kuch ker pata kafi der ho chuki thi or markesh puri tarah pathar ki maurti ban gaya.

Lekin marte marte usne markesh ko kaha.

Markesh :- dekhiye bhaiya un dushton ne mere sath kya kiya ab aap unko chodna ni .

Or isi k sath markesh ka kaam tamam ho gaya or uska pathar bana sharir bhi tabah ho gaya.

Samraat rote hue chillaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.............

Kafi der tak samraat rota raha or fir gusse se pagal hote hue chilaya :- kisne kisne mara mere bhai ko .

(Gusse se uska sharir jalne laga or gufa kampne lagi) kisnee........


Tabhi uske kaano m ek aawaz padi.

M janta hu samraat aapke bhai ki ye galat kisne ki....


Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Sooperb update bro.

To Markesh ka kaam b tamaam hogaya .

Aur samraat b ut gaya aapne bhai ki wajha se aur Samraatse baat krne Wala zaroor VP hi hoga.

Ab dekte hai aage kya hota hai.

 

[gOlDy]

Nice update bro, aur aapki story criticize krne layak hum nhi, hame bas shikayat update ki speed se thi

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Update no :- 171
Markesh ki mrityu dekh samraat gusse me pagal ho gusse se chila raha tha


Samraat :- kisne mara mere bhai ko, kisneeeeeeee.

Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padi.

M batata hu samraat kisne mara aapke bhai ko.

Samraat ne jab us disha m dekha to turant ghutno k bal beth gaya .

Samraat :- mahaprabhu aap yaha.


Ji ha dosto ye aawaz kisi or ki ni vp ki thi or sath me kubdi bhi thi.

Flashback

jab markesh ko pathar me tabdil hote kubdi ne dekha to uski himmat na hui naina or uske sathiyo k pas jane ki himmat na ker payi

.wo turant waha se bhag ker samraat ki haveli pahunch gayi.

Kubdi ghabrayi hui khud se :- mar dala , un dushto ne to humare yuvraj tak ka ant ker dala, aakhir kon h ye log jinhone ek pahale vrushali ko or fir ek tritiya yuvraj ko mar dala, kya dushmani h in logo ki hum danvo se.

Isse pahale ki wo samul danav vansh ka nash kare mujhe hi kuch kerna hoga

Parantu kya or kese.

Jin logo ne markesh tak ko ni choda unko m kese haraungi.

Ab to keval ek hi rasta h, ek hi shaks h jo un logo ka kal ban sakte h, tritiyao k raja, humare malik.


"Samraat"
Samraat ki manosiyat to dekho dosto kitni jabardast thi ki uske nam ko pukarne bhar se haveli k aas pass ka mosam badal gaya or charo or joro shoro se bijli kadkne lagi, jisse aas pas ka vatavaran bahut hi bhayanak ho gaya.

Kubdi shetani hasi k sath :- ha ab humare maharaj hi lenge apne bhai or baki sabhi danav veero ki mrityu ka prtishodh.

Tabhi kuch sochte hue

Kubdi :- per samraat to, apni guft sthan pe sadhana ker rahe h, jis sthan ka mujhe tak na pata, ab m kya karu, kese dhundu apne malik ko.

Tabhi kubdi ko vp ki yaad aayi.

mahaprabhu

ha mahaprabhu hi ab meri madad ker sakte h samraat ko dhundne Or danvo ki raksha hetu

Ye sochte hi kubdi waha se gayab ho gayi.

Wahi mahal k us kone m jaha megha ko rakha gaya tha,waha jab rakshasiyo unhone mosam m aaye badlaav ko dekha to wo barish se bachne k liye ghar k bhitar ki Or jane lagi lekin megha apni jagah se hili ni.

Balki jaha sab rakshasiyo k man m chinta utpan ho gayi thi mosam k is sanket se wahi megha k chahre per ek muskaan aagayi thi, jise dekh trijata chonk gayi.

Kyunki megha ko itne varsho me aaj pahali baar usne yu khul ker muskurate hue dekha tha.

Trijata :- kya baat h putri jaha baki sab is mosam k bhayankar parivartan ko dekh chintit h wahi tumhare chahre P ye muskan.

Wese m to bahut khush hu beti aaj itne warsho m tumhe muskurate hue dekh, isliye wajah janne k liye utsuk bhi hu.

Megha :- khushi ka avsar hi to h ye amma, ye mosam ka badlaav ye sab sankeet h ki samraat ka ant aaagaya h Or ye ashubh sanket h us dusht k liye jo use bata rahe h ki uska kaal aagaya h.

Megha abhi ye sab baate bata rahi thi ki tabhi ek dasi waha pahunch sabko markesh k ant ki khabar sunati h.

Megha :- dekha ama kaha tha na mane.

Trijata :- ha putri ab to ishvar se yahi prathna h ki jald hi is dusht samraat ka ant bhi ho jaye or hume mukti mile is papi k gulami se.

Megha :- esa shighra hi hoga amaa, ishvar pe bharosa rakhe.

Wahi dusri or

Aaiye ek najar sonam pe dal lete h.

Raat ka time

Sonam jo apne kamre m karan k jane k baad se hi gumsum bethi thi , wo kuch na bol rahi thi na uske chahre pe koi bhav the, bas uske ankho se ansu bah rahe the Or hatho m krishna ki tasvir thi

Sonam man hi man :- kyu kanha kyu, aakhir kyu kiya tumne mere sath esa, mane humesha bina kisi swaarth k tumhari seva ki , aj tak tumse kuch ni manga apne liye , fir meri bhakti m esi kami raha gayi jo tumne esa kiya mere sath.

Kya yahi sila diya tune apni bhakti ka mujhe, sari duniya tumhe prem ka devta premio ko milane wala kahati h per tumne to apni bhakt se uska prem hi chin liya.

Abhi sonam ye sab shikaayat kerte hue ro hi rahi thi ki achanak se uske kandhe per kisi ne hath rakha Or kuch kaha jiski aawaz sun sonam chonk gayi.

Kya baat h bhai, meri pyari gudiya sona kyu lo lahi h.

Sonam chonk ker us Or dekhte hue :- rohan bhai aap.

Ji ha dosto sonam ko awaz dene wala rohan hi tha jo karan k kahane P waha bus m clone chod ker.

Rohan pyaar se uske gal sahalate hue:- meri sona ro rahi ho or m waha maje karu esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Sonam :- apne ansu chupate hue :- udaas or m ni to bhai, per aap yaha kese aap to nikal gaye the n ganv k liye.

Rohan :- yahi baat meri ankho m ankhe dal ker kah sakti ho sona ki m galat hu.

Sonam najre churane lagi.

Rohan :- sona meri gudiya tumhe apne is bhai se kuch bhi chupane ki jarurat ni h , m sab janta hu gudiya ki tum karan se pyaar karti ho or wo bhi ek bahan k satb sath ek premika ki tarah bhi.


Sonam ye sun buri tarah chonk gayi.

Sona :- kya aap ko kese pata is bare m kya karan bhai ne aapko is bare m bata diya.

Rohan :- sona meri bahan, is bare m mujhe kisi k batane ki jarurat hi kaha padi, 3 mahine humne jo ek sath gujare the usme hi m tumhare man or tumhare prem ko achi tarah samjh chuka tha gudiya .

Karan k liye tumhara prem, unki judai me tumhara yu tadafna, ye sab hi tumhare prem k pramaan hi to the.

Sonam ye sun sharma ker or chinta m sir niche ker leti h ye soch ker ki rohan kya sochega uske bare m ki wo apne bhai ko hi dil de bethi.

Rohan sonam k sir ko uthate :- na mera bacha na tumhe lajjit hone ki koi jarurat nhi h, jo ho raha h wo na sirf tumhari balki karan or jyoti ki bhi niyati h.

Ha gudiya m sab janta hu karan kon h or uski shaktiyo k bare m bhi or itna hi ni ek satya or h jisse tum anbhigya ho.

Ye bol sonam ko rohan apne bare m batata h Or apna kaal wala roop dikhata h.

Jise dekh sonam or chonk gayi or aakhir chonke bhi kyu na in 2 dino m uski duniya badal si gayi.

Sonam :- rohan bhai aap bhi, ye sab kya ho raha h bhai, aakhir kon h ye dandnayak karan, kya maksad h unka Or ye shakti ye prem mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha.


Rohan :- tumhari manodasha m samjh sakta hu m sona, achanak se ye sab samne aana vyakti k astitv ko jhajhor k rakh deta h.

Parantu tum chinta mat kero tumhare sabhi prashno k uttar nikat bhavishya m shighr hi gyaat honge tumhe (man me Or khud karan ko bhi)

Lekin usse pahale tumhe apni niyati ko swikar kerna hoga gudiya, karan kabhi kisi ek ka ni ho sakta, esa vk khud bhi chahe to sambhav ni.

Sona rote hue :- kese swikar ker lu bhai , bataiye kese swikar ker lu apne prem ka batwara, ek ladki ka sirf yahi to ek khawab hota h ki uska hone wala humsafar sirf uska ho , usko prem kare, uska dukh pida samjhe Or uske liye loyal ho, yani ki uske alawa kisi or k alawa soche tak ni, per yaha too

(Siskte hue) kese ker lu bhai apne prem ka batwara wo bhi apni hi badi bahan se.

Rohan sonam ko hriday se laga :- na sona, na mera bacha rote ni, m tumhare dard ko samjh sakta hu gudiya, parantu tum khud hi socho kya karan k liye bhi ye kerna aaasan h, karan k pran baste h to wo h sirf uski bahano m.

Or jyoti jyoti to karan ki aatma h, tumhe apna dukh to dikhayi diya sona per kya tumne socha ki us jyoti per kya but rahi hogi, jisne tumhari hi bhanti karan ko apna sab kuch mana.

Lekin unhone un sab baato ko dar kinar ker apni niyati ko swikar kiya, kyu, kyunki yahi sansaar k hit me h.

Mahan shaktiya apne sath mahan jimmedaariya bhi lati h gudiya, jise unhone samjha Or sansar k kalyan k liye ye tyag kiya.

Sona krishna ne bhi yahi to kaha h gita m dharm ki raksha m apna sarvasv tyagna pade to bhi piche ni hatna chahiye .

Isliye meri baat mano gudiya Or apni niyati ko swikar kero.

Sonam rohan se alag ho kuch ni bolti bas wapas muh niche karke beth jati h


Rohan :- hmm, samjh sakta hu tumhe is sab k liye waqt Or ekant chahiye, tumhe jitna samay chahiye utna lo gudiya Or soch samjh ker apna nirnay lena.

Or ha koi bhi chij ki jarurat ho ya madad chahiye ho to bas yad ker apne rohan bhai ko apne pass hi paogi ye bol rohan waha se anterdhyan ho gaya.

Rohan k jate hi sonam jo itni der khud ko control ki hui thi fir se rone lagi lekin kuch der baad wo ruki or is baar uske dimag m rohan ki kahi bate ghumne lagi jisse prabhavit ho wo sochne ko vivash ho gayi.

Wahi rohan wapas se bus m pahunch jo hua uske bare m karan ko man hi man bata deta h.

Jise sun karan ko taklif bhi hui per usne rohan k nirnay ko sahi bhi taharaya.


Agli subah 5 baje k karib karan and family rajsthan m enterr ker chuke the Or karib 7 baje k karib wo ganv k pas pahunch gaye.

Ram garh wese to yaha aaj bhi 80 ℅ log kheti se apna ghar chalate h, per yaha jyadatar sab sampann the, kaaran jai prakash yani k karan k dada ka yaha ka jagirdaar Or surpanch hona.

Karan k dada wese to ek ache Or imaandar insan h, dayalu bhi, lekin unki ek bhul ne hi unke ghar ka sukha chain mita diya tha, jo tha apni bahu ka tiraskaar kerna, use pratadit kerna.

Bhale hi jai prakash ne kabhi khud asha k sath vesa kuch na kiya, per unhone apni patni ko bhi na roka balki usko Or utsaahit kiya tha, jis kaaran aaj ye sab hua tha.


Karan yahi sab bate man m sochte hue ganv ko dekh raha tha, vo humesha ki tarah jaldi uth gaya tha or baki sab so rahe the

Karan :- maa ab samay aagaya h apke pratyek gunehgar ko unke karmo k fal milne ka, isliye hi m yaha aaya hu jaha se is sab ki shuruaat hui.

Karan yahi soch raha tha ki tabhi jyoti ne uske kandhe per hath rakha, jisse dekh karan uske gal chum ker.

Karan :- uth gayi meri gudiya good morning my love.

Jyoti bhi karan k gal chum :- good morning my sweetu bhaiya.

Wese subah subah kin khayalo m khoye hue the aap.

Karan :- kuch ni bas bahar k najare dekh raha tha, (ankh marte hue) per ander ka hasin najara to iske aage kuch ni.

Jyoti sharma k :- kya bhai kuch bhi, vese sach me bhai ye jagah kitni beautiful h.

Karan dhime se apna hath jyoti ki kamar m dal apni or khechte hue :- ha bilkul meri jan bole to romance k liye bilkul perfect.

Jyoti to khud karan k sath romantic time spend kerna chahti thi jo pichle din aayi pareshaaniyo k kaaran ni ho paya tha, lekin abhi yaha sab mojud the jis kaaran vo dar 'brahi thi

Jyoti jhut muth ka vir:- bhai kya ker rahe ho aap koi dekh lega.

Karan :- sab so rahe h gudiya, ab chal ab morning to ho gayi ab apne in komal hotho ka ras pilake use good bhi bana de meri jaan

Jyoti karan ko dhakelte hue :- koi kiss viss ni milne wali aapko chaliye chhodiye mujhe.

Per karan ni man raha tha.

Jyoti request kerte hue :- bhaiya plz chodiye na abhi yaha koi dekh lega baad m jitna chahe utna pyar ker lena m to aapki hi hu kahi bhage thodi ja rahi hu.

Ye bol jyoti ne jaldi se kuch second k liye karan k hotho ko chum liya or ankh mar di.
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Jyoti k is sexy andaaz pe to karan fida ho gaya or wo bhi jaldi se jyoti k hoth chum bola.

Karan ankh marte hue:- haye ye teri ada, lagta h ab jaldi se koi jugaad lagana hoga av control ni hota.

Jyoti sharma k karan k sine pe mukka marti h pyaar se or fir kuch der yuhi nokjhok or pyar bhari bato k baad wo sab ko jagate h kyonki ganv bas aane hi wala tha.


Sab bahut hi excited the ganv m jese hi bus enter kerti h to sab ganv valo ki najre usi pe jam gayi thi, aakhir pahali baar unhone esi shandar bus apne ganv m dekhi thi.

Bache apni aadat k anusaar gadi k piche piche bhagte h kuch door tak, karib 15 20 min baad karan ki bus ek badi si haveli k bahar ruki , jo karan k dada ka ghar tha.

Gadi k rukne ki aawaz sunte hi sab ghar k bahar aagaye, or intezaar kerne lage apne khandan k chirag or apni pyari poti or bhatiji ka.

Sabse pahale radha or garima uterte h, rajiv ko dekhte hi radha unki or mamu kahate hue dod k gale lag gayi.

Rajiv :- kesi ho meri choti guddu.

Radha :- ek dam first class mamu humesha ki tarah or aap kese ho or komal kaha h.

Dadi :- arr ab sara pyar apne mamu ko hi dogi ya nani se bhi milogi.

Fir radha apne nana nani k gale milti h uske piche piche garima bhi aati h or sabse pehle wo bhi apne bhai k gale milti h.

Rajiv garima ka matha chum :- are aagayi meri guddu kesa raha safar koi taklif to ni hui na raste m.

Fir wo apne maa bap k bhi per chuti h or fir dadi bol padi.

Dadi :- garima beti tune to kaha tha tumhare sath mere pota poti bhi aayenge.

Kaha h vo jaldi se unhe bula beta, teri is maa ki ankhe taraf gayi h apne jigar k tukde ko dekhne ko.

Dada :- ha beta kaha h humare ghar ka chirag.

Rajiv excited hote hue :- ha guddu kaha h mere bache.

Garima :- ji bhai abhi bulati hu.

Fir garima radha ko ishara kerti h, wo bhag ker jati h or sab ko bahar leke ati h.

Sabse pahale geeta shivani priya or kavya uterte h, fir rohan or riya, or jav last m radha karan or jyoti ka hath tha me niche uterte h to dono bhai bahan k mukh per tez or gambhir parantu somya mudra dekh karan k dada dadi or chacha unme kho se jate h.

Radha karan or jyoti ko lekar garima k pas leker jati h or garima sabse pahale apne maa baap se milwate hue boli.

Garima :- beta inse milo ye h tumhare dada dadi.

Karan or jyoti bhale hi un dono se kara the lekin apne sanskaar na bhule karan jyo hi apne dada k per chune ko hotha h to uske dada uss rok k apne sine se laga lete h.

Dada :- mere sher mere jigar k tukde aagaya Tu tera ye dada kabse taraf raha tha tujhe apne sine se lagane ko.

Fir yu hi karan dadi se milta h lekin ek shabd ni bolta.

Fir garima apne bhai k pas le jate hue.

Garima :- beta ye h tumhare.

Karan bich me hi :- chachuuuu..

Ye bol karan khushi se rajiv k per chune ko hua per rajiv ne bhii karan ko apne sine se laga liya.

Rajiv :- mera beta mere sher m bata ni sakta hu aaj m kitna khush hu tum se mil ker mere bache, wo to teri is bhua ne Mujge rok diya tha m verna khud hi waha aaphunchta.

Tabhi jyoti bhi rajiv k per chune ko hui to rajiv ne use rokte hue.

Rajiv :- are are meri bachi ye kya ker rahi ho tum to meri pyari beti ho or betiya ghar ki lakshmi hoti h, unhe per ni chuate.

Ye bol rajiv jyoti ko bhi gale se laga leta h, itne salo baad ek chacha apne bhatije bhatiji se ek dada dadi apne pote poti se mile the to sabki ankho m khushi k ansu the.

Rajiv :- vese manna padega bhatije kya mast body banayi h tumne, 2 4 tips apne chachu ko bhi de.

Garima majak karte hue :- ha beta taki tere chachu ka nikla hua pet ander ho, verna log inhe tere ni mere chacha ji samajhne lagenge

Ye bol wo has padi or sath me sab bhi.

Rajiv :- kya boli chuhiya Tu m or mota, shayad tujhe pata ni ganv ki adhi ladkiya aaj bhi marti h mujhe per.

Garima :- bhai unhe ladkiya ni aunty bolte h or thoda dhire bolo vern bhabhi jhadu leke aati hi hogi .

Rajiv bat badalte hue :- vese meri beti dekh kitni pyari h na guddu, wahi nain naksh wahi tez ese lagta h jese bhabhi ka bachpan hi lot aaya ho h na maa.

Asha ka jikra sun dadi ka mood kharab ho gaya, vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki dada ne use ishare m roka.

Garima ne bhi ye sab dekh liya tha, aate hi koi bhakheda khada na ho isliye wo savko ander leker jane ki kosis kerti h ki tabhi dadi ki najar shivani P padi.

Dadj :- are ye pyari si rajkumaari kon h, idhar aao beta.

Rajiv :- ha guddu ye baki sab kon h jara humare mahamano se humara parichay to karao.

Garima samjh gayi ki ab samay aagaya h bomb futne ka.

Garima kavya ko aage late hue :- bhai ye h humari choti bhabhi kavya or ye inki beti or humari choti bhatizi shivani.

Garima ki ye baat jese hi karan k dada dadi or chacha ne suni wo heran raha gaye, kyunki garima ne sirf karan or jyoti k bare m hi bataya tha unhe.

Rajiv :- ye tum kya bol rahi ho guddu, ye humari bhabhi

Garima :- ha bhai ye sach h.

Fir garima kavya k bare m unhe sab batati h siway ranveer k kaaran karan or jyoti se uske natak k vishay me chod.

Rajiv :- ni m ni man sakta bhaiya esa kese ker sakte h, unhone unke 13 vi tak ka intezar na kiya.

Dadi shivani ko apne gale laga ker :- haye kitni pyari h meri choti poti, bilkul rajkumaari jesi, najar na lage ise kisi ki.

(Garima se) kya galat kiya tere bhai ne rajiv, aakhir mere pote poti ko sambhalne wala bhi to koi chahiye hi tha, m to acha hua mere bete ka picha to chuta us kamini se.

Garima gusse se :- maa.

Dadi :- chilao mat garima, mane kuch galat ni kaha, us kamini ne pahale mere bete ko fasa ker use ghar walo k khilaaf hi shadi kerne ko uksaya, uske peso k liye, fir mere bache k dil m jahar bhar k humse door kiya tha usne.

Rajiv :- ma bas bahut ho gaya, ab aap had se aage badh rahi ho.


Dada :- had se aage tumhaari ma ni tum bad rahe ho rajiv, mat bhulo ki tum apni maa se baat ker rahe ho.

Or tumhari maa ne bilkul sahi to kaha us kulakshini k kaaran hi aaj itne salo tak hume apne pote potiyo se.

Are m to kahata hu ki jo ladki apne maa baap ki sagi na hui thi wo humari sagi kya hoti.

Jyoti ka vinashkari krodh apne dada dadi k vachno se jagrit hone laga tha, uski ankhein laal hone lagi thi or tan kala padne laga.

Wo abhi aage bad hi rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne jyoti ka hath tham use rok liya.

Jyoti ne karan ki or dekha to karan ka bhi kuch vesa hi haal tha lekin na jane kyu usne apni ankhe band ker apne aap ko niyantran karne ka pryas ker raha tha.


Lekin rohan se chup raha na gaya or wo gusse se bol pada.

Rohan :- bas bahut hua aap bade h iska matlab ye ni ki aap kuch bhi bol lenge or hum sun lenge apni mosi k baare m.

Dadi :- e ladke tum hote kon ho humare pariwarik maamle m bolne wale, mahaman ban k aaye ho to mahaman ki had m rahana sikho.

Or ye bhi sun lo m apna kaha hua ek shabd wapas ni lungi , kyunki mane jo kaha wo sach h.

Wo kamini ek kulta , lalchi orat thi jisne mere bete ko. Na sirf mujhse door kiya balki uske dil. M mere liye jahar bhara, ek no ki charitrhin Or papi orat thi wo, acha hua mar gayi, akhir bhagwaan ne usko uske karmo ka fal de hi diya, are m to....

Abhi dadi aage kuch bol pati ki waha ek bhayanak aawaz gunj uthi.

Bassssssssssssssss...

Ye koi or ni balki karan hi tha jiski sahanshakti ki sima khatam ho chuki thi, uski ankhe laal k bajaye ab kali padne lagi thi or uske muthi bich chuki thi.

Karan aage apne dadi k pasand aaker :- bas, bahut ho gaya aapka ye natak, ab ek bhi shabd meri khilaaf kisi k muh se nikla to m bhul jaunga ki mera kya rishta h tum logo se.

(Garima ki or dekhte hue) kya isliye aap mujhe yaha leker aayi thi bhua ki yaha laker meri ankho k samne hi bich sadak pe sabke samne yu meri swargniy maa ka apman ho, unka yaha is tiraskar kiya jaye.

Garima ka sir sharmnindgi se niche ho chuka tha wo pachta rahi thi ki wo karan or jyoti ko kyu yaha leker aayi

Karan apne dada k pas jaker :- ky kaha tha apne meri maa ko lalchi, jisne apke bete se shadi sirf peso k liye ki.

Bade hi afsos k sath, ni balki bahut khushi k sath aapke is galat fehmi ko todte hue ye batana chahta hu ki lalachi meri maa ni balki aapka beta tha, jisne meri maa ko jhute pyar k jaal m fasaya kyu sirf unki property k liye, per afsos kamyab na jo paya.

Dada gusse se :- tumhari himmat kese hui esa bolne ki, sharm ni aati apne baap per esa ghinona iljam lagate hue.

Karan :- isi baat ki hi to sharmindgi h ki wo kamina mera baap h jisne meri maa ki hatya ki.

Dadi gusse se karan ko thappad maarne ko hui ki tabhi garima ne unka hath pakad liya or gusse se boli.

Garima gusse se :- mere bete ko hath lagane ki bhi mat sochna ma , karan jo bol raha h wo sach h ma, ranvir bhai ab mere bhai ya apke bete ni rahe ab vo sirf or sirf ek hatyare h jinhone na keval humari bhabhi yani apki bahu ko mara, balki unki khokh m pal rahi ek nanhi jaan ko bhi mara.

Ye bolte hue garima k ankho se ansu bahane lage or wo fir rote hue sara majra apne ghar walo ko bata deti h or sath me vo video bhi dikha deti h jo karan ne banayi thi.

Rajiv to apne bhai ki kartoot sun sadme se chala gaya or gir pada ghutno k bal.

Garima bhai chilate hue rajiv k pas gayi or rajiv garima k gale lag foot foot k rone laga.

Rajiv ka hal bhi bilkul wesa ho chuka tha jesa garima ka hua tha jab use apne bhai ki sachai pata chali thi.

Wo Dono bhai bahan bhi karan or jyoti ki tarah judwa the isliye wo ek dusre ka dard ache se samjhte the , isliye wo dono ek dusre ko santwana de rahe the.

Karan rajiv k pas aaker niche ghutno k bal beth :- itna sab hone k baad bhi m yaha aaya chachu sirf aapke liye, kyunki us mushkil ki ghadi m keval aap or bhua hi the jinhone meri maa ka sath ni choda, unki pag pag per madad ki.

Yakin maniye chachu mane kabhi pita ka prem na paya, parantu jab mujhe pahali baar beta kahake gale lagaya, jab mujhe ek shaswat prem. Ka anubhav hua jo ek pita hi apne bete ko de sakta h.

Parantu hum yaha ab yaha ni ruk sakte, kyunki jaha humari maa ka koi samman ni waha humare liye rahana bhi ek shan paap h.

Chal jyoti

Ye bol karan uth ker rajiv k per chuta h or jyoti ka hath tham bus ki or badha.

Rajiv khada ho karan ko rokte hue :- ni beta m ab tumhe yu ni jane dunga itne varsho baad to mujhe apne bete se milne ka sobhagya mila h, abhi tumhe hi to kaha na beta m tumhare liye tumhare pita saman hu to kya ek beta apne pita ki baat ni manega.

Jyoti :- chachu esi baat ni h, aapke liye to apke in dono bacho ki jan bhi hajir hhai, per please hume yaha mat rokiye.

Hum ni ruk sakte ek pal bhi waha jaha humari maa ko dukh k alawa kuch na mila yaha bitaya hua ek ek pal hume humari maa p hue hatyacharo ka anubhav kerwa raha h, isliye isse pahale ki hum aavesh me aaker kuch ker bethe isse bahater yahi hoga ki hum yaha se chale jaye.

Ye bol jyoti karan ka hath thame chal padi Or unke piche piche baki sab bhi kyunki ab kisi k rukne ka koi matlab ni tha, garima bhi ek bar rajiv k gale mil chal padi.

Abhi karan bus k pas pahuncha hi tha ki tabhi uske kano me ek pyari per dard bhari aawaz padi .


Ruk jaiyeeeee bhaiya please....

Karan samet jab piche mude to karan ne paya ki ye awaz ek ladki ki thi jo besakhi ki madad se jitna tezi se ho sake utna tezi se karan k pas aarahi thi or ruk jaiye bhaiya ruk jaiye bhaiya pukar rahi thi.

Per ye kya achanak se us ladki ka balance bigad gaya or wo jamin per gir gayi.

Radha ghabra k :- komal.

Karan samjh gaya ye ladki or koi ni komal thi, yani ki uske chacha ki ladki Or uski choti bahan.
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Komal girne k baad bhi ni ruki or roti hui khud ko ghasite hue boli.

Komal :- bhaiya ruk jaiye mujhe chod k mat jaiye.

Karan ne jab apni bahan ki ye halat dekhi to uski ankho se jhar jhar ansu bahane lage .

Wo turant bhag k komal k pas jata h or jaldi se ghutno k bal beth use uthatha h or bethne m madad kerta h.

Komal masumiyat se rote hue :- bhaiya

Or fir komal karan k sine se lipat jati h or khushi or dard k mile jhule bhav k ansuo k sath.

Kafi der tak komal karan k gale lagi rahi karan bhi bina kuch bole use apni baho me liye wahi betha raha Or uske sir ko sahalate hue.

Kuch der baad karan se yu hi gale lage rahane k baad komal boli.

Komal masumiyat se apne kaan pakad:- bhaiya dadu dadi ki taraf se m aapko sorry bolti hu, please aap mat jao na bhaiya, mere sath yaha koi ni khelta sab mujhe chidate h langdi bol ker.

(Subakte hue ) papa ne jab mujhe aapke bare m bataya tavse mujhe aap ka hi intezaar tha, ki akhir kar bhagwan ne meri sun li oe or mujhe bhi ek bhaiya diye jo mere sath khelenge mujhe khub pyar bhi karenge, per ager ab aap bhi mujhe chod k ja rahe ho.

Please mat jao na bhaiya , ager ap bhi chale jaoge to m fifir se akeli pad jaungi bhaiya or fir....

Ye sab bol komal rone lagi, apni itni masum bahan ki ankho m ansu karan se ek pal bhi bardaasht na ho rahe the.

Karan pyaar se :- ssshhh, na babu na ese rote ni h aap to meri pyaari doll ho na or aap to meri pyaari babu ho na .

Komal :- pal bhaiya.

Karan :- ale pagli ab tera ye bhai itni door se aaya h Or tu h ki bas roye ja rahi ho, ab apne bhaiya or didi ko unka room ni dikaogi.

Komal ye sun khushi se chonkte hue :- iska matlab ....

Jyoti pyaar se uske pass beth :- ha meli little dol iska matlab ye h ki aapke bhaiya or didi apko chod k kahi ni jane wale.

Komal khushi se :- sachi didi.

Karan komal k gal chum :- muchi mela babu.

Komal khusi se karan or jyoti k ek sth gale lag gayi, khusi k ansu k sath.

Karan komal ko chedte hue :- are babu ab bas yahi khada Hi rakhogi ya apne is bhai ko kuch khilaogi pilaogi bhi, bahut bhuk lagi h yaar.

Jyoti haste hue :- lo aate hi shuru ho gaye petu kahi ke

Komal :- oh ha sorry bhaiya m to bhul hi gayi, aap chaliye mere sath bhaiya ander apko malum h mane apke liye special halva banaya h apne hatho se.

Karan :- are wah fir to aapko mujhe apne hatho se khilana bhi padega, jyoti se puch lo ye hum bhai bahan k rules .

Komal :- ha ha bhaiya kyu ni, aap chaliyebto sahi aaj m apne bhaiya ko apne hatho se hi khilaungi.

Ye bol komal uthne ki koshish kerti h per dhadam. Se gir jati h kyunki uske hatho m uski besakhiya ni thi.

Ek baar to komal ka dil ro padta h apni majburi per humesha ki tarah per wo khud P control ker apni baisakhi ko dhundne lagi.

Tabhi karan jo apni bahan ki is halat ko dekh bahut dukhi tha usne jhat se komal ko apni god m utha liya or ghar ki or le jane laga.

Komal :- bhaiya ye aap kya ker rahe h ap thake hue ho esa kerne se aapko or pareshaani hogi, please mujhe niche utar dijiye m khud chal lungi.

Lekin karan ni mana or bola.

Karan :- hat pagli mujhe apni ful jesi bahan ko uthane m bhala kya pareshani hogi balki ulta mere liye to ye khushi ka moka h ki aaj m apni pyari bahan k kaam aa pa raha hu.


Ese hi pyari pyari bate kerte hue karan wapis ghar ki or bada or apne dada dadi ki or bina dekhe rajivv k pas pahuncha

Rajiv khushi se :- beta m Bahut khush hu ki tum itna sab hone k baad bhi yahi ruk rahe ho.

Karan :- chachu ab humari choti princess ko kese m. Rula sakta hu bhala , to aap mera or mere sabhi dosto k liye bhi room saf kerwa dijiye.

Rajib :- beta wo to mane kal hi kerwa diya the gudu ne mujhe sab bata diya tha, tum ander jaker aaram kero komal tumhe tumhara room bata degi or baki sabki chinta mat kero sabka saman unke room tak pahuch jayega.

Karan :- thanks chachu.

(Komal se) chale choti gudiya.

Komal ha m sir hilati h.

Karan apne dada dadi ko bilkul ignore kerte hue ghar Me chala jata h Or komal k bataye kamre m jaker dono bhai bahan fresh ho ker aaram Kerne lage.

Karan ki chachi yani nidhi to yaha mojud thi hi ni wo kal raat ko hi bahana bana k apne mayke chali gayi thi.

Karan k dada dadi ka to fir bhi samjha aata tha per kyu unki chachi bhi karan or jyoti k sath esa behave ker rahi thi, ye to samjh se pare tha

Wahi dusri Or

Location :- gufa.

Haveli se gayab ho sidha kubdi vp k pas pahunch use sari baate batati h jinhe sun vp bhi chonk jata h Or wo turant kubdi k sath samrat k pas pahunch gya tha.

Short flashback end

Vp :- ha samraat m, or mere aane ka udeshya bhi yahi h ki m tumhe bata saku ki tumhare bhai ki hatya kisne ki h.

Samraat :- yadi esa h prabhu to kripya shigra us dusht ka nam bataiye jisne mere bhai ko. Mara, m uska samool nash ker dunga.

Kubdi :- yuvraj ko marne wale 3 insan the malik o

Samraat :- kya, ye kya bakwas ker rahi h tu insan to , unki kya okaat k tritiya yuvraj ko mar sake.

Kubdi :- yahi sach h malik or itna hi ni malik unhone kayi bhut pishach dayano ko. Mar yaha wo pahunch chuke h wo dusht.

Fir kubdi ab tak ki sari kahani samraat ko batati h

Samraat gusse se :- bhut pishach to kide makode h, per is baar unhone ek tritiya ko mara h kere bhai. Ko

Esi mot marunga unko ki mot bhi unko apne aghosh m lene se kamp jayegi

Vp. :- ni samrat ye samy josh se ni balki hosh se kam lene ka h, dushman utna bhi kamzor ni jitna tum samjh rahe ho.

Kubdi :- ha malik mahaprabhu bilkul. Sahi bol rahe h, or to or un logo k pas ab trishastr bhi h.

Samrat chomk ker :- kya trishastra

Vp :- ha samrat, dracula, vikraal or vidheansika tino mare ja chuke h Or unme se 2 ko marne wale wo hi h jinhone tumhare bhai ko mara.

Kubdi :- or sabse badi sharm ki baat to ye h malik ki un logo ka sath bhi ek tritiya ladki hi de rahi h.

Samrat herani or gusse se :- kya kaha ek tritiya, esi kon gadar aagayi jo apne hi kul k nash P tuli h.

Apne bhai k hathiyaari us ladki naina ko to m baad m marunga pahale m us gadar ko esi saja dunga ki bhavishy me koi bhi humse gaddari ka khwab tak na dekhega


Vp :- m bhi yahi chahta hu samraat.

Samraat :- parantu mahaprabhu apne kaha ki us ladki naina k pas keval 2 bhag h to tisra bhag kaha h.

Vp gusse se :- tisra bhag us kamine k pas h samraat jo us shani ka ansh h jise hum usne hum danvo k nash k liye bheja h, us rakshak k pas.

Samraat :- kahi aap usi karan ki to bat ni ker rahe maharaj jise varsho purv

Vp :- ha samraat vahi rakshak jo hum danvo k rah ka sabse bada kata h, ab uske marne ka samay aa chuka h samraat or ye kaam ab keval tum hi ker sakte ho kyunki tumhare pas brahma k vardan ka vo kavach h jise khud shani tak ni tod sakta.

Samraat :- yadi esa h maharaj to samjhiye aapka kam ho gaya, parantu usse pahale m apne bhai ki mot ka badla lunga.

Tez aawaz me chilate hue.

Naina tujhe samrat chahiye tha na, to le aaraha h ye samraat teri mot ka pegam le ker

Ye bol samraat jor jor se shetani hasi hasne laga or sath m vp or kubdi bhi

Aakhir kya chal raha h samraat k dimag me, kya hogi is dusht ki agli chal, kese samna karegi naina Or uske dost samraat ka or kese dand dega karan apne dada dadi ko janne k liye hi yu hi sath bane rahiye

Stay tuned

Wah bohat hi zabardast update bro.

Karan and family aapne ghar pohonch hi Gaye akhir aur Dada dadi phir se anaap shanap bake jarahe te Karan k Maa k bare mai aur bilkul sahi time ghusa krliya Karan ne.

Ab Samraat pehle Naina k paas araha hai ab dekte Karan aur Naina ki mulaaqat kis tarah hoti hai.

And waiting for next update bro.

 

[Vk248517]

Bhaiaapka story update to pura fast hai baki writers se. Ab to jrur story pura pdunga.abhi pdna start kr rha hun

 

[Vk248517]

Bhaiaapka story update to pura fast hai baki writers se. Ab to jrur story pura pdunga.abhi pdna start kr rha hun

 

[Aakash.]

I loved seeing the wrath of the Samraat, now he will understand that you get the same results as you do. Kubdi is also very clever. Megha guessed right, the end of the Samraat is near. Samraat and VP are planning together, meaning more difficult problems are to arise.
Sonam is so cute, I can't see her sad, don't do that. Sonam loves Karan so much, don't give him any more trouble. Well, Karan has sent Rohan to convince Sonam, the sooner Sonam understands this, the better it will be.
Karan and his family have reached the village. I was waiting for this moment because now Karan will meet her which he hates. Heart gets happy seeing Karan and Jyoti's unwavering love. Everyone is very happy with Karan and Jyoti's arrival but it is impossible to forget that pain. In the end, Dada and Dadi show their true looks, but I don't like it when Dadi insults Karan's mother. I liked the way Karan responded.
Komal is so sweet and nice I can feel her pain. Until now, the brother who was lacking in Komal's life is complete today. I feel relieved seeing both.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[Prince Charlee]

Nice update. K&J ne Komal ki wajah se gaon me rehne ka faisla kiya hai dekhte hai K&J kaise apne dada dadinko saza dete hai aur yah chachi kiun aise bhag gai yah bhi dekhna pade ga is ka kya reason hai.
Karan ne Rohan ke zariye Sonam ko samjhane ka acha tarika nakila hai dekhte hai Sonam kab tak apna nirnay leti hai aur aisa kya sach hai jo Rohan ko to pata hai lekin Karan ko nahi???
VP ne is bar Samrat ko Dandnayak ke samne lane ka socha hai dekhte hai K&J and Naina aur uski team kaise Samrat ka samna karte hai.

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Update no :- 171
Markesh ki mrityu dekh samraat gusse me pagal ho gusse se chila raha tha


Samraat :- kisne mara mere bhai ko, kisneeeeeeee.

Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padi.

M batata hu samraat kisne mara aapke bhai ko.

Samraat ne jab us disha m dekha to turant ghutno k bal beth gaya .

Samraat :- mahaprabhu aap yaha.


Ji ha dosto ye aawaz kisi or ki ni vp ki thi or sath me kubdi bhi thi.

Flashback

jab markesh ko pathar me tabdil hote kubdi ne dekha to uski himmat na hui naina or uske sathiyo k pas jane ki himmat na ker payi

.wo turant waha se bhag ker samraat ki haveli pahunch gayi.

Kubdi ghabrayi hui khud se :- mar dala , un dushto ne to humare yuvraj tak ka ant ker dala, aakhir kon h ye log jinhone ek pahale vrushali ko or fir ek tritiya yuvraj ko mar dala, kya dushmani h in logo ki hum danvo se.

Isse pahale ki wo samul danav vansh ka nash kare mujhe hi kuch kerna hoga

Parantu kya or kese.

Jin logo ne markesh tak ko ni choda unko m kese haraungi.

Ab to keval ek hi rasta h, ek hi shaks h jo un logo ka kal ban sakte h, tritiyao k raja, humare malik.


"Samraat"
Samraat ki manosiyat to dekho dosto kitni jabardast thi ki uske nam ko pukarne bhar se haveli k aas pass ka mosam badal gaya or charo or joro shoro se bijli kadkne lagi, jisse aas pas ka vatavaran bahut hi bhayanak ho gaya.

Kubdi shetani hasi k sath :- ha ab humare maharaj hi lenge apne bhai or baki sabhi danav veero ki mrityu ka prtishodh.

Tabhi kuch sochte hue

Kubdi :- per samraat to, apni guft sthan pe sadhana ker rahe h, jis sthan ka mujhe tak na pata, ab m kya karu, kese dhundu apne malik ko.

Tabhi kubdi ko vp ki yaad aayi.

mahaprabhu

ha mahaprabhu hi ab meri madad ker sakte h samraat ko dhundne Or danvo ki raksha hetu

Ye sochte hi kubdi waha se gayab ho gayi.

Wahi mahal k us kone m jaha megha ko rakha gaya tha,waha jab rakshasiyo unhone mosam m aaye badlaav ko dekha to wo barish se bachne k liye ghar k bhitar ki Or jane lagi lekin megha apni jagah se hili ni.

Balki jaha sab rakshasiyo k man m chinta utpan ho gayi thi mosam k is sanket se wahi megha k chahre per ek muskaan aagayi thi, jise dekh trijata chonk gayi.

Kyunki megha ko itne varsho me aaj pahali baar usne yu khul ker muskurate hue dekha tha.

Trijata :- kya baat h putri jaha baki sab is mosam k bhayankar parivartan ko dekh chintit h wahi tumhare chahre P ye muskan.

Wese m to bahut khush hu beti aaj itne warsho m tumhe muskurate hue dekh, isliye wajah janne k liye utsuk bhi hu.

Megha :- khushi ka avsar hi to h ye amma, ye mosam ka badlaav ye sab sankeet h ki samraat ka ant aaagaya h Or ye ashubh sanket h us dusht k liye jo use bata rahe h ki uska kaal aagaya h.

Megha abhi ye sab baate bata rahi thi ki tabhi ek dasi waha pahunch sabko markesh k ant ki khabar sunati h.

Megha :- dekha ama kaha tha na mane.

Trijata :- ha putri ab to ishvar se yahi prathna h ki jald hi is dusht samraat ka ant bhi ho jaye or hume mukti mile is papi k gulami se.

Megha :- esa shighra hi hoga amaa, ishvar pe bharosa rakhe.

Wahi dusri or

Aaiye ek najar sonam pe dal lete h.

Raat ka time

Sonam jo apne kamre m karan k jane k baad se hi gumsum bethi thi , wo kuch na bol rahi thi na uske chahre pe koi bhav the, bas uske ankho se ansu bah rahe the Or hatho m krishna ki tasvir thi

Sonam man hi man :- kyu kanha kyu, aakhir kyu kiya tumne mere sath esa, mane humesha bina kisi swaarth k tumhari seva ki , aj tak tumse kuch ni manga apne liye , fir meri bhakti m esi kami raha gayi jo tumne esa kiya mere sath.

Kya yahi sila diya tune apni bhakti ka mujhe, sari duniya tumhe prem ka devta premio ko milane wala kahati h per tumne to apni bhakt se uska prem hi chin liya.

Abhi sonam ye sab shikaayat kerte hue ro hi rahi thi ki achanak se uske kandhe per kisi ne hath rakha Or kuch kaha jiski aawaz sun sonam chonk gayi.

Kya baat h bhai, meri pyari gudiya sona kyu lo lahi h.

Sonam chonk ker us Or dekhte hue :- rohan bhai aap.

Ji ha dosto sonam ko awaz dene wala rohan hi tha jo karan k kahane P waha bus m clone chod ker.

Rohan pyaar se uske gal sahalate hue:- meri sona ro rahi ho or m waha maje karu esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Sonam :- apne ansu chupate hue :- udaas or m ni to bhai, per aap yaha kese aap to nikal gaye the n ganv k liye.

Rohan :- yahi baat meri ankho m ankhe dal ker kah sakti ho sona ki m galat hu.

Sonam najre churane lagi.

Rohan :- sona meri gudiya tumhe apne is bhai se kuch bhi chupane ki jarurat ni h , m sab janta hu gudiya ki tum karan se pyaar karti ho or wo bhi ek bahan k satb sath ek premika ki tarah bhi.


Sonam ye sun buri tarah chonk gayi.

Sona :- kya aap ko kese pata is bare m kya karan bhai ne aapko is bare m bata diya.

Rohan :- sona meri bahan, is bare m mujhe kisi k batane ki jarurat hi kaha padi, 3 mahine humne jo ek sath gujare the usme hi m tumhare man or tumhare prem ko achi tarah samjh chuka tha gudiya .

Karan k liye tumhara prem, unki judai me tumhara yu tadafna, ye sab hi tumhare prem k pramaan hi to the.

Sonam ye sun sharma ker or chinta m sir niche ker leti h ye soch ker ki rohan kya sochega uske bare m ki wo apne bhai ko hi dil de bethi.

Rohan sonam k sir ko uthate :- na mera bacha na tumhe lajjit hone ki koi jarurat nhi h, jo ho raha h wo na sirf tumhari balki karan or jyoti ki bhi niyati h.

Ha gudiya m sab janta hu karan kon h or uski shaktiyo k bare m bhi or itna hi ni ek satya or h jisse tum anbhigya ho.

Ye bol sonam ko rohan apne bare m batata h Or apna kaal wala roop dikhata h.

Jise dekh sonam or chonk gayi or aakhir chonke bhi kyu na in 2 dino m uski duniya badal si gayi.

Sonam :- rohan bhai aap bhi, ye sab kya ho raha h bhai, aakhir kon h ye dandnayak karan, kya maksad h unka Or ye shakti ye prem mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha.


Rohan :- tumhari manodasha m samjh sakta hu m sona, achanak se ye sab samne aana vyakti k astitv ko jhajhor k rakh deta h.

Parantu tum chinta mat kero tumhare sabhi prashno k uttar nikat bhavishya m shighr hi gyaat honge tumhe (man me Or khud karan ko bhi)

Lekin usse pahale tumhe apni niyati ko swikar kerna hoga gudiya, karan kabhi kisi ek ka ni ho sakta, esa vk khud bhi chahe to sambhav ni.

Sona rote hue :- kese swikar ker lu bhai , bataiye kese swikar ker lu apne prem ka batwara, ek ladki ka sirf yahi to ek khawab hota h ki uska hone wala humsafar sirf uska ho , usko prem kare, uska dukh pida samjhe Or uske liye loyal ho, yani ki uske alawa kisi or k alawa soche tak ni, per yaha too

(Siskte hue) kese ker lu bhai apne prem ka batwara wo bhi apni hi badi bahan se.

Rohan sonam ko hriday se laga :- na sona, na mera bacha rote ni, m tumhare dard ko samjh sakta hu gudiya, parantu tum khud hi socho kya karan k liye bhi ye kerna aaasan h, karan k pran baste h to wo h sirf uski bahano m.

Or jyoti jyoti to karan ki aatma h, tumhe apna dukh to dikhayi diya sona per kya tumne socha ki us jyoti per kya but rahi hogi, jisne tumhari hi bhanti karan ko apna sab kuch mana.

Lekin unhone un sab baato ko dar kinar ker apni niyati ko swikar kiya, kyu, kyunki yahi sansaar k hit me h.

Mahan shaktiya apne sath mahan jimmedaariya bhi lati h gudiya, jise unhone samjha Or sansar k kalyan k liye ye tyag kiya.

Sona krishna ne bhi yahi to kaha h gita m dharm ki raksha m apna sarvasv tyagna pade to bhi piche ni hatna chahiye .

Isliye meri baat mano gudiya Or apni niyati ko swikar kero.

Sonam rohan se alag ho kuch ni bolti bas wapas muh niche karke beth jati h


Rohan :- hmm, samjh sakta hu tumhe is sab k liye waqt Or ekant chahiye, tumhe jitna samay chahiye utna lo gudiya Or soch samjh ker apna nirnay lena.

Or ha koi bhi chij ki jarurat ho ya madad chahiye ho to bas yad ker apne rohan bhai ko apne pass hi paogi ye bol rohan waha se anterdhyan ho gaya.

Rohan k jate hi sonam jo itni der khud ko control ki hui thi fir se rone lagi lekin kuch der baad wo ruki or is baar uske dimag m rohan ki kahi bate ghumne lagi jisse prabhavit ho wo sochne ko vivash ho gayi.

Wahi rohan wapas se bus m pahunch jo hua uske bare m karan ko man hi man bata deta h.

Jise sun karan ko taklif bhi hui per usne rohan k nirnay ko sahi bhi taharaya.


Agli subah 5 baje k karib karan and family rajsthan m enterr ker chuke the Or karib 7 baje k karib wo ganv k pas pahunch gaye.

Ram garh wese to yaha aaj bhi 80 ℅ log kheti se apna ghar chalate h, per yaha jyadatar sab sampann the, kaaran jai prakash yani k karan k dada ka yaha ka jagirdaar Or surpanch hona.

Karan k dada wese to ek ache Or imaandar insan h, dayalu bhi, lekin unki ek bhul ne hi unke ghar ka sukha chain mita diya tha, jo tha apni bahu ka tiraskaar kerna, use pratadit kerna.

Bhale hi jai prakash ne kabhi khud asha k sath vesa kuch na kiya, per unhone apni patni ko bhi na roka balki usko Or utsaahit kiya tha, jis kaaran aaj ye sab hua tha.


Karan yahi sab bate man m sochte hue ganv ko dekh raha tha, vo humesha ki tarah jaldi uth gaya tha or baki sab so rahe the

Karan :- maa ab samay aagaya h apke pratyek gunehgar ko unke karmo k fal milne ka, isliye hi m yaha aaya hu jaha se is sab ki shuruaat hui.

Karan yahi soch raha tha ki tabhi jyoti ne uske kandhe per hath rakha, jisse dekh karan uske gal chum ker.

Karan :- uth gayi meri gudiya good morning my love.

Jyoti bhi karan k gal chum :- good morning my sweetu bhaiya.

Wese subah subah kin khayalo m khoye hue the aap.

Karan :- kuch ni bas bahar k najare dekh raha tha, (ankh marte hue) per ander ka hasin najara to iske aage kuch ni.

Jyoti sharma k :- kya bhai kuch bhi, vese sach me bhai ye jagah kitni beautiful h.

Karan dhime se apna hath jyoti ki kamar m dal apni or khechte hue :- ha bilkul meri jan bole to romance k liye bilkul perfect.

Jyoti to khud karan k sath romantic time spend kerna chahti thi jo pichle din aayi pareshaaniyo k kaaran ni ho paya tha, lekin abhi yaha sab mojud the jis kaaran vo dar 'brahi thi

Jyoti jhut muth ka vir:- bhai kya ker rahe ho aap koi dekh lega.

Karan :- sab so rahe h gudiya, ab chal ab morning to ho gayi ab apne in komal hotho ka ras pilake use good bhi bana de meri jaan

Jyoti karan ko dhakelte hue :- koi kiss viss ni milne wali aapko chaliye chhodiye mujhe.

Per karan ni man raha tha.

Jyoti request kerte hue :- bhaiya plz chodiye na abhi yaha koi dekh lega baad m jitna chahe utna pyar ker lena m to aapki hi hu kahi bhage thodi ja rahi hu.

Ye bol jyoti ne jaldi se kuch second k liye karan k hotho ko chum liya or ankh mar di.
..

Jyoti k is sexy andaaz pe to karan fida ho gaya or wo bhi jaldi se jyoti k hoth chum bola.

Karan ankh marte hue:- haye ye teri ada, lagta h ab jaldi se koi jugaad lagana hoga av control ni hota.

Jyoti sharma k karan k sine pe mukka marti h pyaar se or fir kuch der yuhi nokjhok or pyar bhari bato k baad wo sab ko jagate h kyonki ganv bas aane hi wala tha.


Sab bahut hi excited the ganv m jese hi bus enter kerti h to sab ganv valo ki najre usi pe jam gayi thi, aakhir pahali baar unhone esi shandar bus apne ganv m dekhi thi.

Bache apni aadat k anusaar gadi k piche piche bhagte h kuch door tak, karib 15 20 min baad karan ki bus ek badi si haveli k bahar ruki , jo karan k dada ka ghar tha.

Gadi k rukne ki aawaz sunte hi sab ghar k bahar aagaye, or intezaar kerne lage apne khandan k chirag or apni pyari poti or bhatiji ka.

Sabse pahale radha or garima uterte h, rajiv ko dekhte hi radha unki or mamu kahate hue dod k gale lag gayi.

Rajiv :- kesi ho meri choti guddu.

Radha :- ek dam first class mamu humesha ki tarah or aap kese ho or komal kaha h.

Dadi :- arr ab sara pyar apne mamu ko hi dogi ya nani se bhi milogi.

Fir radha apne nana nani k gale milti h uske piche piche garima bhi aati h or sabse pehle wo bhi apne bhai k gale milti h.

Rajiv garima ka matha chum :- are aagayi meri guddu kesa raha safar koi taklif to ni hui na raste m.

Fir wo apne maa bap k bhi per chuti h or fir dadi bol padi.

Dadi :- garima beti tune to kaha tha tumhare sath mere pota poti bhi aayenge.

Kaha h vo jaldi se unhe bula beta, teri is maa ki ankhe taraf gayi h apne jigar k tukde ko dekhne ko.

Dada :- ha beta kaha h humare ghar ka chirag.

Rajiv excited hote hue :- ha guddu kaha h mere bache.

Garima :- ji bhai abhi bulati hu.

Fir garima radha ko ishara kerti h, wo bhag ker jati h or sab ko bahar leke ati h.

Sabse pahale geeta shivani priya or kavya uterte h, fir rohan or riya, or jav last m radha karan or jyoti ka hath tha me niche uterte h to dono bhai bahan k mukh per tez or gambhir parantu somya mudra dekh karan k dada dadi or chacha unme kho se jate h.

Radha karan or jyoti ko lekar garima k pas leker jati h or garima sabse pahale apne maa baap se milwate hue boli.

Garima :- beta inse milo ye h tumhare dada dadi.

Karan or jyoti bhale hi un dono se kara the lekin apne sanskaar na bhule karan jyo hi apne dada k per chune ko hotha h to uske dada uss rok k apne sine se laga lete h.

Dada :- mere sher mere jigar k tukde aagaya Tu tera ye dada kabse taraf raha tha tujhe apne sine se lagane ko.

Fir yu hi karan dadi se milta h lekin ek shabd ni bolta.

Fir garima apne bhai k pas le jate hue.

Garima :- beta ye h tumhare.

Karan bich me hi :- chachuuuu..

Ye bol karan khushi se rajiv k per chune ko hua per rajiv ne bhii karan ko apne sine se laga liya.

Rajiv :- mera beta mere sher m bata ni sakta hu aaj m kitna khush hu tum se mil ker mere bache, wo to teri is bhua ne Mujge rok diya tha m verna khud hi waha aaphunchta.

Tabhi jyoti bhi rajiv k per chune ko hui to rajiv ne use rokte hue.

Rajiv :- are are meri bachi ye kya ker rahi ho tum to meri pyari beti ho or betiya ghar ki lakshmi hoti h, unhe per ni chuate.

Ye bol rajiv jyoti ko bhi gale se laga leta h, itne salo baad ek chacha apne bhatije bhatiji se ek dada dadi apne pote poti se mile the to sabki ankho m khushi k ansu the.

Rajiv :- vese manna padega bhatije kya mast body banayi h tumne, 2 4 tips apne chachu ko bhi de.

Garima majak karte hue :- ha beta taki tere chachu ka nikla hua pet ander ho, verna log inhe tere ni mere chacha ji samajhne lagenge

Ye bol wo has padi or sath me sab bhi.

Rajiv :- kya boli chuhiya Tu m or mota, shayad tujhe pata ni ganv ki adhi ladkiya aaj bhi marti h mujhe per.

Garima :- bhai unhe ladkiya ni aunty bolte h or thoda dhire bolo vern bhabhi jhadu leke aati hi hogi .

Rajiv bat badalte hue :- vese meri beti dekh kitni pyari h na guddu, wahi nain naksh wahi tez ese lagta h jese bhabhi ka bachpan hi lot aaya ho h na maa.

Asha ka jikra sun dadi ka mood kharab ho gaya, vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki dada ne use ishare m roka.

Garima ne bhi ye sab dekh liya tha, aate hi koi bhakheda khada na ho isliye wo savko ander leker jane ki kosis kerti h ki tabhi dadi ki najar shivani P padi.

Dadj :- are ye pyari si rajkumaari kon h, idhar aao beta.

Rajiv :- ha guddu ye baki sab kon h jara humare mahamano se humara parichay to karao.

Garima samjh gayi ki ab samay aagaya h bomb futne ka.

Garima kavya ko aage late hue :- bhai ye h humari choti bhabhi kavya or ye inki beti or humari choti bhatizi shivani.

Garima ki ye baat jese hi karan k dada dadi or chacha ne suni wo heran raha gaye, kyunki garima ne sirf karan or jyoti k bare m hi bataya tha unhe.

Rajiv :- ye tum kya bol rahi ho guddu, ye humari bhabhi

Garima :- ha bhai ye sach h.

Fir garima kavya k bare m unhe sab batati h siway ranveer k kaaran karan or jyoti se uske natak k vishay me chod.

Rajiv :- ni m ni man sakta bhaiya esa kese ker sakte h, unhone unke 13 vi tak ka intezar na kiya.

Dadi shivani ko apne gale laga ker :- haye kitni pyari h meri choti poti, bilkul rajkumaari jesi, najar na lage ise kisi ki.

(Garima se) kya galat kiya tere bhai ne rajiv, aakhir mere pote poti ko sambhalne wala bhi to koi chahiye hi tha, m to acha hua mere bete ka picha to chuta us kamini se.

Garima gusse se :- maa.

Dadi :- chilao mat garima, mane kuch galat ni kaha, us kamini ne pahale mere bete ko fasa ker use ghar walo k khilaaf hi shadi kerne ko uksaya, uske peso k liye, fir mere bache k dil m jahar bhar k humse door kiya tha usne.

Rajiv :- ma bas bahut ho gaya, ab aap had se aage badh rahi ho.


Dada :- had se aage tumhaari ma ni tum bad rahe ho rajiv, mat bhulo ki tum apni maa se baat ker rahe ho.

Or tumhari maa ne bilkul sahi to kaha us kulakshini k kaaran hi aaj itne salo tak hume apne pote potiyo se.

Are m to kahata hu ki jo ladki apne maa baap ki sagi na hui thi wo humari sagi kya hoti.

Jyoti ka vinashkari krodh apne dada dadi k vachno se jagrit hone laga tha, uski ankhein laal hone lagi thi or tan kala padne laga.

Wo abhi aage bad hi rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne jyoti ka hath tham use rok liya.

Jyoti ne karan ki or dekha to karan ka bhi kuch vesa hi haal tha lekin na jane kyu usne apni ankhe band ker apne aap ko niyantran karne ka pryas ker raha tha.


Lekin rohan se chup raha na gaya or wo gusse se bol pada.

Rohan :- bas bahut hua aap bade h iska matlab ye ni ki aap kuch bhi bol lenge or hum sun lenge apni mosi k baare m.

Dadi :- e ladke tum hote kon ho humare pariwarik maamle m bolne wale, mahaman ban k aaye ho to mahaman ki had m rahana sikho.

Or ye bhi sun lo m apna kaha hua ek shabd wapas ni lungi , kyunki mane jo kaha wo sach h.

Wo kamini ek kulta , lalchi orat thi jisne mere bete ko. Na sirf mujhse door kiya balki uske dil. M mere liye jahar bhara, ek no ki charitrhin Or papi orat thi wo, acha hua mar gayi, akhir bhagwaan ne usko uske karmo ka fal de hi diya, are m to....

Abhi dadi aage kuch bol pati ki waha ek bhayanak aawaz gunj uthi.

Bassssssssssssssss...

Ye koi or ni balki karan hi tha jiski sahanshakti ki sima khatam ho chuki thi, uski ankhe laal k bajaye ab kali padne lagi thi or uske muthi bich chuki thi.

Karan aage apne dadi k pasand aaker :- bas, bahut ho gaya aapka ye natak, ab ek bhi shabd meri khilaaf kisi k muh se nikla to m bhul jaunga ki mera kya rishta h tum logo se.

(Garima ki or dekhte hue) kya isliye aap mujhe yaha leker aayi thi bhua ki yaha laker meri ankho k samne hi bich sadak pe sabke samne yu meri swargniy maa ka apman ho, unka yaha is tiraskar kiya jaye.

Garima ka sir sharmnindgi se niche ho chuka tha wo pachta rahi thi ki wo karan or jyoti ko kyu yaha leker aayi

Karan apne dada k pas jaker :- ky kaha tha apne meri maa ko lalchi, jisne apke bete se shadi sirf peso k liye ki.

Bade hi afsos k sath, ni balki bahut khushi k sath aapke is galat fehmi ko todte hue ye batana chahta hu ki lalachi meri maa ni balki aapka beta tha, jisne meri maa ko jhute pyar k jaal m fasaya kyu sirf unki property k liye, per afsos kamyab na jo paya.

Dada gusse se :- tumhari himmat kese hui esa bolne ki, sharm ni aati apne baap per esa ghinona iljam lagate hue.

Karan :- isi baat ki hi to sharmindgi h ki wo kamina mera baap h jisne meri maa ki hatya ki.

Dadi gusse se karan ko thappad maarne ko hui ki tabhi garima ne unka hath pakad liya or gusse se boli.

Garima gusse se :- mere bete ko hath lagane ki bhi mat sochna ma , karan jo bol raha h wo sach h ma, ranvir bhai ab mere bhai ya apke bete ni rahe ab vo sirf or sirf ek hatyare h jinhone na keval humari bhabhi yani apki bahu ko mara, balki unki khokh m pal rahi ek nanhi jaan ko bhi mara.

Ye bolte hue garima k ankho se ansu bahane lage or wo fir rote hue sara majra apne ghar walo ko bata deti h or sath me vo video bhi dikha deti h jo karan ne banayi thi.

Rajiv to apne bhai ki kartoot sun sadme se chala gaya or gir pada ghutno k bal.

Garima bhai chilate hue rajiv k pas gayi or rajiv garima k gale lag foot foot k rone laga.

Rajiv ka hal bhi bilkul wesa ho chuka tha jesa garima ka hua tha jab use apne bhai ki sachai pata chali thi.

Wo Dono bhai bahan bhi karan or jyoti ki tarah judwa the isliye wo ek dusre ka dard ache se samjhte the , isliye wo dono ek dusre ko santwana de rahe the.

Karan rajiv k pas aaker niche ghutno k bal beth :- itna sab hone k baad bhi m yaha aaya chachu sirf aapke liye, kyunki us mushkil ki ghadi m keval aap or bhua hi the jinhone meri maa ka sath ni choda, unki pag pag per madad ki.

Yakin maniye chachu mane kabhi pita ka prem na paya, parantu jab mujhe pahali baar beta kahake gale lagaya, jab mujhe ek shaswat prem. Ka anubhav hua jo ek pita hi apne bete ko de sakta h.

Parantu hum yaha ab yaha ni ruk sakte, kyunki jaha humari maa ka koi samman ni waha humare liye rahana bhi ek shan paap h.

Chal jyoti

Ye bol karan uth ker rajiv k per chuta h or jyoti ka hath tham bus ki or badha.

Rajiv khada ho karan ko rokte hue :- ni beta m ab tumhe yu ni jane dunga itne varsho baad to mujhe apne bete se milne ka sobhagya mila h, abhi tumhe hi to kaha na beta m tumhare liye tumhare pita saman hu to kya ek beta apne pita ki baat ni manega.

Jyoti :- chachu esi baat ni h, aapke liye to apke in dono bacho ki jan bhi hajir hhai, per please hume yaha mat rokiye.

Hum ni ruk sakte ek pal bhi waha jaha humari maa ko dukh k alawa kuch na mila yaha bitaya hua ek ek pal hume humari maa p hue hatyacharo ka anubhav kerwa raha h, isliye isse pahale ki hum aavesh me aaker kuch ker bethe isse bahater yahi hoga ki hum yaha se chale jaye.

Ye bol jyoti karan ka hath thame chal padi Or unke piche piche baki sab bhi kyunki ab kisi k rukne ka koi matlab ni tha, garima bhi ek bar rajiv k gale mil chal padi.

Abhi karan bus k pas pahuncha hi tha ki tabhi uske kano me ek pyari per dard bhari aawaz padi .


Ruk jaiyeeeee bhaiya please....

Karan samet jab piche mude to karan ne paya ki ye awaz ek ladki ki thi jo besakhi ki madad se jitna tezi se ho sake utna tezi se karan k pas aarahi thi or ruk jaiye bhaiya ruk jaiye bhaiya pukar rahi thi.

Per ye kya achanak se us ladki ka balance bigad gaya or wo jamin per gir gayi.

Radha ghabra k :- komal.

Karan samjh gaya ye ladki or koi ni komal thi, yani ki uske chacha ki ladki Or uski choti bahan.
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Komal girne k baad bhi ni ruki or roti hui khud ko ghasite hue boli.

Komal :- bhaiya ruk jaiye mujhe chod k mat jaiye.

Karan ne jab apni bahan ki ye halat dekhi to uski ankho se jhar jhar ansu bahane lage .

Wo turant bhag k komal k pas jata h or jaldi se ghutno k bal beth use uthatha h or bethne m madad kerta h.

Komal masumiyat se rote hue :- bhaiya

Or fir komal karan k sine se lipat jati h or khushi or dard k mile jhule bhav k ansuo k sath.

Kafi der tak komal karan k gale lagi rahi karan bhi bina kuch bole use apni baho me liye wahi betha raha Or uske sir ko sahalate hue.

Kuch der baad karan se yu hi gale lage rahane k baad komal boli.

Komal masumiyat se apne kaan pakad:- bhaiya dadu dadi ki taraf se m aapko sorry bolti hu, please aap mat jao na bhaiya, mere sath yaha koi ni khelta sab mujhe chidate h langdi bol ker.

(Subakte hue ) papa ne jab mujhe aapke bare m bataya tavse mujhe aap ka hi intezaar tha, ki akhir kar bhagwan ne meri sun li oe or mujhe bhi ek bhaiya diye jo mere sath khelenge mujhe khub pyar bhi karenge, per ager ab aap bhi mujhe chod k ja rahe ho.

Please mat jao na bhaiya , ager ap bhi chale jaoge to m fifir se akeli pad jaungi bhaiya or fir....

Ye sab bol komal rone lagi, apni itni masum bahan ki ankho m ansu karan se ek pal bhi bardaasht na ho rahe the.

Karan pyaar se :- ssshhh, na babu na ese rote ni h aap to meri pyaari doll ho na or aap to meri pyaari babu ho na .

Komal :- pal bhaiya.

Karan :- ale pagli ab tera ye bhai itni door se aaya h Or tu h ki bas roye ja rahi ho, ab apne bhaiya or didi ko unka room ni dikaogi.

Komal ye sun khushi se chonkte hue :- iska matlab ....

Jyoti pyaar se uske pass beth :- ha meli little dol iska matlab ye h ki aapke bhaiya or didi apko chod k kahi ni jane wale.

Komal khushi se :- sachi didi.

Karan komal k gal chum :- muchi mela babu.

Komal khusi se karan or jyoti k ek sth gale lag gayi, khusi k ansu k sath.

Karan komal ko chedte hue :- are babu ab bas yahi khada Hi rakhogi ya apne is bhai ko kuch khilaogi pilaogi bhi, bahut bhuk lagi h yaar.

Jyoti haste hue :- lo aate hi shuru ho gaye petu kahi ke

Komal :- oh ha sorry bhaiya m to bhul hi gayi, aap chaliye mere sath bhaiya ander apko malum h mane apke liye special halva banaya h apne hatho se.

Karan :- are wah fir to aapko mujhe apne hatho se khilana bhi padega, jyoti se puch lo ye hum bhai bahan k rules .

Komal :- ha ha bhaiya kyu ni, aap chaliyebto sahi aaj m apne bhaiya ko apne hatho se hi khilaungi.

Ye bol komal uthne ki koshish kerti h per dhadam. Se gir jati h kyunki uske hatho m uski besakhiya ni thi.

Ek baar to komal ka dil ro padta h apni majburi per humesha ki tarah per wo khud P control ker apni baisakhi ko dhundne lagi.

Tabhi karan jo apni bahan ki is halat ko dekh bahut dukhi tha usne jhat se komal ko apni god m utha liya or ghar ki or le jane laga.

Komal :- bhaiya ye aap kya ker rahe h ap thake hue ho esa kerne se aapko or pareshaani hogi, please mujhe niche utar dijiye m khud chal lungi.

Lekin karan ni mana or bola.

Karan :- hat pagli mujhe apni ful jesi bahan ko uthane m bhala kya pareshani hogi balki ulta mere liye to ye khushi ka moka h ki aaj m apni pyari bahan k kaam aa pa raha hu.


Ese hi pyari pyari bate kerte hue karan wapis ghar ki or bada or apne dada dadi ki or bina dekhe rajivv k pas pahuncha

Rajiv khushi se :- beta m Bahut khush hu ki tum itna sab hone k baad bhi yahi ruk rahe ho.

Karan :- chachu ab humari choti princess ko kese m. Rula sakta hu bhala , to aap mera or mere sabhi dosto k liye bhi room saf kerwa dijiye.

Rajib :- beta wo to mane kal hi kerwa diya the gudu ne mujhe sab bata diya tha, tum ander jaker aaram kero komal tumhe tumhara room bata degi or baki sabki chinta mat kero sabka saman unke room tak pahuch jayega.

Karan :- thanks chachu.

(Komal se) chale choti gudiya.

Komal ha m sir hilati h.

Karan apne dada dadi ko bilkul ignore kerte hue ghar Me chala jata h Or komal k bataye kamre m jaker dono bhai bahan fresh ho ker aaram Kerne lage.

Karan ki chachi yani nidhi to yaha mojud thi hi ni wo kal raat ko hi bahana bana k apne mayke chali gayi thi.

Karan k dada dadi ka to fir bhi samjha aata tha per kyu unki chachi bhi karan or jyoti k sath esa behave ker rahi thi, ye to samjh se pare tha

Wahi dusri Or

Location :- gufa.

Haveli se gayab ho sidha kubdi vp k pas pahunch use sari baate batati h jinhe sun vp bhi chonk jata h Or wo turant kubdi k sath samrat k pas pahunch gya tha.

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Vp :- ha samraat m, or mere aane ka udeshya bhi yahi h ki m tumhe bata saku ki tumhare bhai ki hatya kisne ki h.

Samraat :- yadi esa h prabhu to kripya shigra us dusht ka nam bataiye jisne mere bhai ko. Mara, m uska samool nash ker dunga.

Kubdi :- yuvraj ko marne wale 3 insan the malik o

Samraat :- kya, ye kya bakwas ker rahi h tu insan to , unki kya okaat k tritiya yuvraj ko mar sake.

Kubdi :- yahi sach h malik or itna hi ni malik unhone kayi bhut pishach dayano ko. Mar yaha wo pahunch chuke h wo dusht.

Fir kubdi ab tak ki sari kahani samraat ko batati h

Samraat gusse se :- bhut pishach to kide makode h, per is baar unhone ek tritiya ko mara h kere bhai. Ko

Esi mot marunga unko ki mot bhi unko apne aghosh m lene se kamp jayegi

Vp. :- ni samrat ye samy josh se ni balki hosh se kam lene ka h, dushman utna bhi kamzor ni jitna tum samjh rahe ho.

Kubdi :- ha malik mahaprabhu bilkul. Sahi bol rahe h, or to or un logo k pas ab trishastr bhi h.

Samrat chomk ker :- kya trishastra

Vp :- ha samrat, dracula, vikraal or vidheansika tino mare ja chuke h Or unme se 2 ko marne wale wo hi h jinhone tumhare bhai ko mara.

Kubdi :- or sabse badi sharm ki baat to ye h malik ki un logo ka sath bhi ek tritiya ladki hi de rahi h.

Samrat herani or gusse se :- kya kaha ek tritiya, esi kon gadar aagayi jo apne hi kul k nash P tuli h.

Apne bhai k hathiyaari us ladki naina ko to m baad m marunga pahale m us gadar ko esi saja dunga ki bhavishy me koi bhi humse gaddari ka khwab tak na dekhega


Vp :- m bhi yahi chahta hu samraat.

Samraat :- parantu mahaprabhu apne kaha ki us ladki naina k pas keval 2 bhag h to tisra bhag kaha h.

Vp gusse se :- tisra bhag us kamine k pas h samraat jo us shani ka ansh h jise hum usne hum danvo k nash k liye bheja h, us rakshak k pas.

Samraat :- kahi aap usi karan ki to bat ni ker rahe maharaj jise varsho purv

Vp :- ha samraat vahi rakshak jo hum danvo k rah ka sabse bada kata h, ab uske marne ka samay aa chuka h samraat or ye kaam ab keval tum hi ker sakte ho kyunki tumhare pas brahma k vardan ka vo kavach h jise khud shani tak ni tod sakta.

Samraat :- yadi esa h maharaj to samjhiye aapka kam ho gaya, parantu usse pahale m apne bhai ki mot ka badla lunga.

Tez aawaz me chilate hue.

Naina tujhe samrat chahiye tha na, to le aaraha h ye samraat teri mot ka pegam le ker

Ye bol samraat jor jor se shetani hasi hasne laga or sath m vp or kubdi bhi

Aakhir kya chal raha h samraat k dimag me, kya hogi is dusht ki agli chal, kese samna karegi naina Or uske dost samraat ka or kese dand dega karan apne dada dadi ko janne k liye hi yu hi sath bane rahiye

Stay tuned

Hmmmm
Very good update
Very well written and described
Mostly karan and his grandparents scene......very good....


Karan ke dada dadi.....mujhe nahi lagta ki wo log kabhi sudhar engender......Jo iss age tak nahi sudhre wo ab kya sdhrenge.....phir chahe unhe kitna bhi....punish kar lo.....
Jinhe kabhi apni galati hee nahi dikhti.....har situation me wo kisi or ko dosh dete hai or unki age Abhi lagbhag 60-70 hogi....jinke karam iss age tak bhi na sahi hue wo ab bache hue 5 10 saalon ke liye kya sahi honge.....

Sonam ab samajhne lagi hai....something is better then nothing.......

Samraat ke pass naya plan hai....dekhna hai Naina us se kaise bachti hai......

Anyways
Very good update
Thanks

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Note :- yaha jitne log mujhe criticized ker rahe h first of all m unse kahna chahunga ki mujhe koi shok ni h jhut bolne ka jo aap kuch bhi bol rahe ho bina kisi ki koi vajah jane, aap sabko pahale bhi bata chuka hu or aaj dobara bata raha hu mere ghar m is samay bahut pareshaniya chal rahi h, mere father hospitalised h is chakkar m. Mujhe akele ko hi ghar or dukan dono sambhalni pad rahi h, jis chakkar m mujhe khud k liye hi time ni mil pata to m kya karu, kisi k pas koi suggestion ho to de.

Or ek ne ye bhi likha h ki story ko jabardasti lamba khechne k chakker m m ye sab ker raha hu to unko m bata dena chahta hu ki mujhe koi maja ni aaraha kisi ko pareshan kerne m or na hi mujhe koi pese mil rahe h story likhne k liye , isliye bolne se pahale kuch to soch le kero yaar or haa jinko lag raha h m bahana ker raha hu to m unka kuch ni ker sakta Kyunki ye unka khudka mindset esa ho chuka h ki unhe bas writer ki kharabi or galti najar aati h uski situation samjh ni aati.

Or rahi baat update kal raat ko na aapne ki to isme koi galti ni mane to kal raat ko hi update ko poster diya tha, per pata ni ki kese koi net problem ya server down k chakker m update post kyu ni hua, pure din se hospital se free hoker ab ye soch ker betha tha ki dekhe ki kesa laga update dosto ko per koi kami to ni rah gayi, per yaha dekha to badi nirasha hui ki ek itni si baat k liye itna sab mujhe kaha diya.

I realy get very disappointed.

By the way update mane post ker diya h dobara , jese ctitisize kerne k liye comment kiya wese ho sake to review dene k liye bhi comment ker dijiyega thanks.

Hmmmm
I understand your situation.....
Dekh bhai ye teri story hai.....tu ise jaise chahe chala....log to kahenge hee....

Inhe bas material chahiye....to entertainment.....inhe koi matlab nahi tu kya kar raha hai ya kaha busy hai....

Ab ye tere upar hai ki inhe kaise handle karta hai.....agar tujhe lagta hai ki tu story par regularly updated de sakta hai to...continue kar....
OR agar tujhe jyada problem hai iss samay.....to kuch din ruk ja.....kuch din story ko rok kar ....jab free ho jaaye.....saare kaam set ho jaaye tab updates dena.....
Lekin ye tujhe decide karna hai....ki kaise aage badhe....

Rahi baat readers ki to wo to aise comments karenge hee....ha wo baat alag hai ki jo naye readers hote hai wo iss tarah ke comments jyada karte hai.....

Lekin aakhir reader log jab bar bar story ko dekhenge....bookmarks mai se....pr use open karenge or agar unhe progress nahi mili to
....kuch to log kahenge......

Isliye pahle tu decide kar tujhe kya karna hai....roj ak update dene se tujhe konsa pulitjar mil jaayega.....pr na dene se bhi koi nuksaan nahi hai.....

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