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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

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Raj

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Hmm to nidhi yeh baat bhul gayi thi ki aasha ne uski ush samay madad ki thi jab chaaro aur se sirf na umeedi mil rahi thi..

are ye jhingul trantik pagla gaya hain kya... joh the great naina se takrane chala tha... sayad ish jhingul ko apni zindagi pyari nahi.. joh jalte angaar se khilwaar karne ki koshish kar raha hai
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill Harry ji :applause: :applause:



WOH KAHAT HAI NA KI JAB GIDAD KI MOUT AATI HAI TOH WOH SHAHAR KI TARAF BHAGTA HAI.
WAISE HI LAGTA HAI IS TANTRIK KI BHI MRITYU NAJDIK AA GAYI HAI ISLIYE YE PAGAL NAINA THE GREAT HUNTER SE PANGA LE RAHA HAI
 
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SHAANDAAR UPDATE BHAI
TOH BHOOTKAAL ME GHATIT GHATNA YAAD DILAYA HAI SHANI DEV NE.JO NIDHI BHOOL CHUKI THI.AB NIDHI KA HRIDAY PARIVARTAN TOH HO GAYA.PAR NAHI PATA CHALA KI USKE SATH AISA KYA HUA JO USKE MAN ME KARAN AUR JYOTI KE LIYE NAFRAT PAIDA HO GAYI AUR DHAN KA LALACH AA GAYA .AUR SHANI DEV AISA KYUN KAHA KI TUMHARI MANOKAMNA BHI KARAN HI PURA KAREGA AISI KYA MANOKAMNA HAI JO SIRF KARAN HI PURA KAREGA JO SHANI DEV KHUD NAHI KIYE.
KHAIR JO BHI ACHCHHA HAI KAM SE EK TOH SAJI RAAH PAR AAGAYA.
YAHA NAINA KO USKE LOCKET NE BACHA LIYA.AUR NAINA NE OS SAYA KA ANT KAR DIYA
KUBADI NE SHAKAL KO KYA PLAN SAMJHAYA HAI YE TOH AAGE HI PATA CHALEGA.
DEKHTE HAIN AAGE KYA HOTA HAI.
 

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Update no :- 170 (mega update)
Markesh nam h mera.

Ji ha dosto naina Or uske dosto k samne khada wo shaks ya yu kaho ki wo chunoti Or koi ni balki markesh hi tha.

Markesh ka naam sun naina serious ho gayi or boli.

Naina :- oh to tum ho markesh, akhir mulakaat ho hi gayi tumse, ab tum hi hume apne bhai tak pahuchaoge markesh.

Markesh :- pahuchaunga jarur pahuchaaunga ladki , per bhai tak ni balki tumhari mot tak.

Ye bol markesh aage badne laga , naina satark hote hue jaldi se apna trishul nikalti h or ye kya isse pahale ki naina trishul ka istemaal ker pati, usse pahle hi samrat ne ek shakti gole ka prahar naina k hath per ker dala, jisse naina k hath se trishul chut ker dur gir gaya or wo ghayal ho gayi.


Markesh haste hue :- murkh ladki tune kya socha tha in mamuli khilone se tu tritiya rajkumaar ko hara degi.

(Apne hath uper ker talvar prakat kerte hue) kafi waqt se tumhari talash me tha m naina, aaj tera ant ker aaj m un sabhi asur veero ka badla lunga jinko tune mara h.


Veer apne dhanush per baan sandhan kerte hue :- mere hote hue Tu naina ko chu bhi ni sakta samraat

Samraat pure tarike se teyar ho ker aaya tha usne ek ishara kiya or agle hi pal danvo ka ek bahut bada samuh sashatra waha aaphuncha.

Markesh :- apni dost ko to tab bachaoge na ladke jab tum khud bachoge.

Itna bol markesh apne seniko ko adesh deta h humle ka.

Markesh ka adesh sun sab ek sath humla bol dete h naina k dosto pe,

Veer samar se :- samar tum mere piche hi rahana, ni to tum khatre m pad sakte ho.


Samar :- per veer naina bahan.

Veer tir chodte hue :- tum chinta mat karo samar naina ko kuch ni hoga , preety h na

Preety m in logo ko dekhta hu tum naina ki raksha kero.

Per ye kya jaha ek taraf ghayal naina dard se tadaf rahi thi or markesh uski or bad raha tha, whi preety bilkul khamosh or sir niche kiye khade khari thi

Veer ne kayi bat preety ko pukara jab jaker preety hosh m aayi.

Preety hadbadate hue :- ha.

Veer :- aj kya ho gaya h tumhe preety kabse tume pukar raha hu tum jwab hi ni de rahi.

(Naina ki or ishara kerte hue) jaldi se kuch kero naina ko humari madad ki jarurat h.


Preety jab naina ki ye halat dekhti h to firse uska ugra roop jagrit ho gaya or wo naina ki or bhadne lagi.

Tabhi bahut sare seniko ne preety Or veer ko gher liya.

Preety gusse se dahahdte hue :- tumhari ye himmat tum preety ka rasta roko.

Preety ne ek mantra bol apni bahe aage felayi, jiske sath uski dono hatheliya chamakne lagi.


Or fir preety ne badi tezi se ek tali mari, preety k esa kerne se ek garjana k sath roshni bhari esi waves nikl k aage badhi ki uski chapet me aane wala rakshas tinke ki bhati udte hue swaha ho gayi.

Veer preety ki is harkat ko ankhe fade dekh raha tha , kyunki naina ne ek hi war me adhi sena tabah ker dali thi.

Preety aage bhadte hue muskuarte hue :- itni madad kafi h na jaaan.

Preety ki aawaz se veer hosh m aate hue ha m sir hilata h or lag jata h baki sena se niptane me.

Wahi dusri or

Markesh ko apni or badhte hue dekha dard se kaharati hui naina thodi himmat ker apne ghutno k bal uth ker apne trishul ki or bhadne ki kosis kerti h.

Lekin ye kya trishul apne aap hi ud ker or dur ja gira or markesh pas aate hue haste hue bola.

Markesh :- bekar ki kosis mat ker ladki teri mot nishchit h, apne priya jano ko yaad ker le akhri baar.

Naina muskurate hue dard bhari awaaz me :- unko yaad kya kerna markesh jab wo mere pas hi h meri madad k liye.

Markesh naina ki baat ka matlab samjh pata ki usse pahale hi ek jabardast mukka uske pet m pada Or wo kuch dur piche apne aap ghasita gaya.

Markesh :- aaahh.

Markesh ne khud ko sambhalte hue samne ki or dekha to paya ki samne ek or ladki khadi thi, or usine use mukka mara tha.

Ye or koi ni balki preety hi thi.

Markesh ne pahali baar preety ko dhyan se dekha to ek baar chok sa gaya .

Markesh man hi man:- ab ye kon h, jiske prahar ne mujh tak ko hila dala, or to or iski shakal kitni milti h bhaiya se, or baar baar esa ahasas kyu ho raha h mujhe jese m ise janta hu, koi sambandh ho



Preety :- ek ghayal ladki P kya hath uthata h dusht ager dam h to mujhse lad.

Markesh ne abhi tak preety ka trittya nishan ni dekha tha.

Markesh tezi se ek dam preety k samne aagaya or bola

Markesh :- wah, man gaye ladki, kuch to baat h, trittya k rajkumaar k per dagmaga diye, ab ek avsar hume bhi to dijiye.

Ye bol markesh ne bhi ek jabardast prahar preety k pet per kar dala jisse wo udti hi kuch dur ja giri.

Veer chilaya :- preety.

Veer preety ki madad k liye aage bad hi raha tha ki preety apna pet pakad khadi hoti hui boli.

Preety gusse se lal ankho k sath:- ni veer tum bich m mat aao, aaj is dusht ka ant m swayam apne hatho se kar apne mama (pandit ji) ki mot ka badla lungi, kyunki wo trittya isi ka admi tha, jisne mere mama ko mara tha or iske baad iske bhai ko.

Ye bol preety lagbhag udte hue full speed se markesh k pas pahunch ek muka de mara.




Lekin markesh is bar teyar tha isliye is bar wo preety ka mukka aram se sahan ker liya.

Or fir shuru hua preety or markesh ka mahasangram jisme kabhi preety bhari pad rahi thi to kabhi samrat, dono kafi der tak hath per chalate hue hi lad rahe the.


Veer seniko ko marte hue naina ki or badha or apne samar or naina k charo or ek sheild bana di jisse koi unke pas na aasake.


Veer naina ko sambhalte hue :- naina naina tum thik to ho na.

Naina khud ko sambhalte hue :- m thik hu veer, per hume jald hi kuch kerna hoga, preety per bahut bada khatra mandra raha h.

Hume markesh ko rokna hoga isse pahale usse pata chale ki preety kon h.

(Apne trishul ko dhundte hue) mera trishul kaha h.

(Samar se) bhai aap meri madad kijiye trishul dhundne m, uske bina hum markesh ko ni rok payenge, or veer tum jitna jaldi ho sake in seniko ka ant kero

Markesh ladte hue man hi man :- ni ye ni ho sakta isme to mujhe usi shakti ka ahasas ho raha h jo shakti mujhme h, kahi esa to ni.....

Markesh abhi soch hi raha tha ki preety ne ek jabardast mukka marna chaha lekin samrat ne use pakad liya

Lekin tabhi wahi hua jiska dar naina ko tha, preety ka hath pakdte hi markesh ki najar preety k hath P bane trittya k nishan p pad gayi or wo buri tarah chonk gaya.

Markesh man hi man :- to mera shak sahi nikla ye ladki bhi ek trittya h, (gusse se) ek trttya ho ker trittya se gaddari, ni chodunga ise.

Ye sab sochte hi markesh or jyada ugra ho prahar kerne laga

Wahi preety ki shakti abhi markesh k mukable kam jagrit thi, isliye dhire dhire kamjor padne lagi.


Markesh ne bhi moke ka fayda utha chal se preety ki ankho m ek roshni chod di jisse uski ankhe chondhiya k band pad gayi or use kuch dikhna band ho gaya.

Jiska fayda utha ek jordar laat preety ko de mari jisse wo kuch dur ja giri , or uske baad to markesh ne mukke or lato ki barsaat ker di.

Markesh rukte hue :- man gaya tumhe ladki, tum me bahut dam or himmat h, per itni ni ki tum markesh ko hara sako.

(Fir gusse se apni ankhe surkh lal kerte hue ) ha yahi okaat h teri gaddar ladki, kya socha tha tune ki humse gaddari kerke bach jayegi.


Preety ghayal avastha me hi :- himmat to tune dekhi hi kaha h meri markesh

Ye bolte hue preety uthne ki kosis kerti h per markesh use mayavi pashu se bandh deta h.

Markesh haste hue :- rasi jal gayi per bal ni gaya, man to kerta h tujhe abhi mar dalu, per ni usme koi maja ni aayega, fir kya kiya jaye

(Sochne ka natak kerte hue ) haa kyu na esa kiya jaye, tujhse pahale tere is adhik ko m marunga or teri is dost kya naam bataya tha uska ha naina use kya chij h yaar wo to pahale to socha tha ki use mar dalunga, per ni esi chij ko marne m ni balki bister pe maslne m.....

(Shetani hasi k sath) ha ha ye sahi rahega teri is saheli ko tere samne hi maslunga jab bister......

Abhi markesh ne apni baat puri bhi na ki thi ki ek gola use aaker laga or wo kuch dur ja gira.

Per jaldi sambhal kee wo jab khada hua to usne jo dekha uski herani ki sima na rahi preety uske pash se mukt ho chuki thi or wo ab hava me ud rahi thithi or uske dono hath hari roshni se chamak rahe the




Markesh :- asambhav ye tumne kese kiya, mere us pash se bhut preet to kya trittya tak ni chut sakta tha, tumne ye kese kiya.

Preety darwani muskan k sath :- kaha tha na tumse markesh meri himmat tumne ab tak dekhi hi kaha h.

(Apni pith p lagi mayan setalvar nikalte hue) ise to tum pahachante hi hoge na rajkumar.

Markesh ne jese hi preety ki talvar ko dekha to ek bar to uski buri tarah fat gayi, kyonki is talvar ko bhali bhanti pahachanta tha, isi talvar k kaaran hi usko buri tarah beijat hona pada tha .

Markesh herani se :- ye talvar to..

Preety bich me :- vrushali ki h, kyu dekh ker acha na laga ise dobara.

Markesh :- per ye talvar tumhare pas aayi kese.

Veer markesh ki sena ko tabah ker waha aaphuncha or bola.

Veer :- tumhari jaankari k liye bata dy markesh, jis vrushali ne bhutkal me Tumhara maan mardan kiya tha, us vrushali ko pralok pahuchane wali Tumhari ankho k samne hi h.

Markesh :- asambhav, jise trittya k raja or rajkumar tak na hara sake, tum bol rahe ho us vrushali ko is mamuli gaddar ne hara dala.

Veer :- yahi to anter h samrat achai or burayi ka, tum isliye hare kyunki tum adharm k paksh me the or hum isliye jite kyunki dharm humare paksh m tha.

Or aaj bhi fir vesa hi hoga.

Ye bol veer ne ek baan markesh pe chalaya jisse ek dhamake k sath markesh kuch ghayal ho gaya.

Preety ne apni talvaar ko aage kiya tabhi usse bhi ek rays nikli or markesh pe padte hi vo tadafne laga.

Veer :- ab bhi vakt h markesh har man lo or humara marg prashat kero ni to merne k liye teyar ho jao.

Markesh kisi tarah rays se chut gaya or bokhlate hue bola

Markesh hafte hue :- itni jaldi ni , ab ek tritya rajkumaar ki asli shakti se tumhara parichay kerwane ka waqt aagaya h

Ab m wo kerne wala hu jiski tumne ummid bhi na ki hogi, ye bol markesh apna hath uper ker ankhe band ker kuch mantra bolne hi wala hota h ki achanak usper ek jabardast urja ka prahar hua.

Jo or kisi ne ni balki naina ne hi kiya tha, jisne apna trishul khoj liya tha.

Naina :- mere hote hue ni markesh.

Markesh gusse se uth ker uski or bhadte hue :- ni chodunga tujhe.

Naina is baar puri tarah teyar thi, usne jald se ankh band mantra pada or trishul aage kiya, jisse trishul se roshni nikal markesh per padi or us roshni ne pash ka roop le liya.


Jisme markesh bhandhane laga , pash ki pakad dhire dhire majboot hoti ja rahi thi jisse tadafne laga.

Markesh :- bahut badi bhul ker rahi h ladki ek trittya rajkumaar se ber badha ker, abhi bhi vakt h har man le ho sakta h bhaiya samrat ko tum logo P kuch daya aajaye or wo tumhe kuch asan mot dede.

Preety markesh ka gala pakad ker boli :- Tu janana chahata h na ki mane us vrushali ko kese haraya jise tujhe kutto ki tarah jalil kiya to sun

Esa isliye kyunki tu sirf bhokta h, lekin m jo bolti hu vo kerke dikhati hu.

Veer majak me piche se :- or ye jo ni bolti wo to definitely kerti h humari lady don.

Jise sun us serious mahol me bhi hasi agayi.

Markesh man me :- ese to m jyada der inlogo k age ni tik paunga, Mujhe kuch or sochna hoga, per usse pahale mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga.

Markesh kuch soch preety ki piche ki. Or dekhte hue kuch ishara kerta h, jise naina dekh to leti h lekin isse pahale wo kuch samjh pati, ki tabhi uske kano m samar ki chik gunji.


Samar chilate hue :- naina .....

Naina ne us Or dekha to paya ki 2 asur jo najane kese bach gaye the unhone samar ko gher liya h Or wo uspe war kerne wale h.

Samar pe khatra dekh naina ne bina kuch soche samjhe trishul ko markesh ki or se hata Samar ki or ker chilayi.

Naina :- bhai jhuk jaiye.

Samar jaldi se jhuk gaya or trishul ki shakti ne dono ko bhasm ker dala.

Per naina k esa kerne se markesh aajad ho gaya or wo naina or uske dosto ko dhamki dete hue gayab ho gaya.

Markesh :- filhal to m ja raha hu ladki, per ab jo kuch bhi tere sath hoga uski jimedar Tu khud hogi.


Markesh k gayab hote hi naina turant Samar k pas pahunchi or boli.

Naina :- bhai thik to ho n Ap.

Naina k hath me lage ghav ko dekh nam ankho se.

Samar naina ka hath tham:- kesa bhai hu m, jaha ek Bhai apni bahan ki har musibat se raksha kerta h , or ek m hu jo apni bahan ki raksha kerna to dur uspee khud ek bojh bana hua hu.

Naina samjh gayi ki usko ayi chot ka jimedar Samar khud ko samjh raha h.

Naina Samar k gale lag :- bhai aap plz mat roiye jo hua usme galti ni, ulta m to khush jo mujhe aap jesa bhai mila jo apni bahan ko lagi mamuli si chot tak ni sah sakta, such m m bahut lucky hu bhai, jo mujhe duniya k sabse best bhaiya mile

Preety :- sister sahi bol rahi h brother, jo hua usme tumhari koi galtiich ni hone ka.

Oe rahi bat is chot ki to apun kis din kam aayeli, abhi ise thik ker deti hu.

Ye bol preety apni heal power ko use kerti h per ye kya kuch aser ni hota, esa isliye hua kyunki ye ghav ek tritya rajkumaar k vaar se hua tha, jis karan koi dusra tritya ki shakti use thik ni ker pa rahi thi.

Ye baat naina ne sabko samjhayi, kuch der un logo ne waha aaram kiya or fir veer bola

Veer :- ab kya kare naina, kese pata chalega ki konsa rasta hume trishastra tak pahuchayega.

Naina :- trishastra k ek bhag tak hume uska dusra bhag hi pahuchayega veer.

Ye bol naina apne bag se trishastra ka wo bhag nikalti h jo use d2 k vadh k doran mila tha or wo use hatheli per rakh kucg mantra padhti h, jisse wo bhag udne laga ek chamak k sath or ek raste ki or bhad gaya.

Naina ne apne dosto ko us bhag k picha kerne ko kaha or wo sab chal pade apmi manjil ki or.

Lekin herani ki baat ye thi ki na hi naina or na hi uske dosto ne ek baat ko bilkul notice ni kiya tha ki markesh ko achanak se unlogo ka pata kese chala, kyunki aaj tak to wo unhe dhund bilkul na paya tha, fir yu achanak kese ...


Wahi dusri or

Markesh naina or uske dosto se bach ker sidhe vidhwansika k mahal m pahunch gaya jaha per kubdi uska intezaar ker rahi thi.

Kubdi markesh ko dekh uske pass aate hue :- aagaye aap yuvraj, kya ker diya apne un insani kido ka nash.

Markesh gusse se :- humne un insano ko kamzor samjh ker bahut badi galti ki kubdi, wo log koi mamuli insan ni h, deviy shaktiyo se yukt h wo

(Gusse se dant bichte hue) or sabse jyada herani or gusse wali baat ye h ki unka ek sathi ek trittya h.

Kubdi chonk ker :- kya trittya ?

Markesh :- ha kubdi ek gadar tritya jo apne hi kul k nash pe tuli h.

Ye bolte hue markesh ne jo hua wo sab use bata dala, jise sun kubdi kuch soch k kutil muskan k sath boli.

Kubdi :- malik jitna aapne unlogo k baare m bataya h usse ye to paka h ki bal m unhe harana bahut kathin h.

Markesh gusse se :- to Tu kaha na kya chahti h bhudiya ki hum yu hi hath pe hath dhare


Kubdi :- ni malik esi ghustaki kerne ki meri kaha himmat , m to ye kahaan chahti hu jaha bal kam ni aata waha chal ka sahara lena padta h.

Markesh :- dekh bhudiya ek to mera wese hi dimag kharab h or uper se tu mat paka jo bolna h saf bol.

Kubdi :- malik m bas ye kahaana chahti hu ki merr pas ek yojna h.

Ye bol kubdi apni yojna markesh ko sunati h jise sun markesh khush ho gaya or haste shetani hasi k sath.

Kubdi :- bahut khub kubdi dil khush ker dala tune , ab pata chalega un insani kido ko ki markesh se panga lena matlab mot se panga lena.

Back to the hero.

Raat ka samay tha to karan or uski family ne ek jagah ruk ker dhabe per dinner kiya or fir wo nikal pade apne ganv ki or.

Kafi raat ho chuki thi or karan or uski family subah tak hi ganv pahuchne wali thi, ye baat ridhima janti thi isiliye usne driver hire kiya hua tha.

Isliye karan apni family ko sone k liye bol deta h or luxyry bus hone k kaaran uski seats sleepers m covert ho jati h jisper sab log adjust ker sone lage.

Karan sabhi ko sula ker ek dusri seat per aker beth gaya kyunki use nind ni aarahi thi, to wo apne phone P kuch der music sunne laga.

Tabhi usko kisi ne chua, karan ne apne earphones hata ker dekhe to paya radha khadi h.

Karan :- are meri barbie doll soyi ni abhi tak.

Radha natkhat andaaz me karan k side m bethte hue :- aato rahi h, per mujhe ese ni sona.

Karan radha k gal khichte hue :- to kese soyegi meri gudiya.

Radha :- mujhe na apne pyare bhaiyu ki god m sona h , please bhai.

Karan :- pagli please kya bolti h, ye to tera haq h tere bhai pe.

Radha :- sachi! To jaldi kero na bhaiya, mujhe bahut jor se nini aarahi h.

Karan :- aaja mera bacha.

Ye bol karan apni seat ko fold ker sleaper banata h Or radha ka sir apni god m rakh ker uske balo ko sahalane laga.

Radha :- bhai ek baat bolu.

Karan :- niiiii...

Radha muh fulate hue :- bhai.

Karan :- are pagli tujhe kabse permission ki jarurat padne lagi.

Radha :- bhai m janti hu ki aap nana nani se bahut jyada gussa ho or hona bhi chahiye jo unhone badi mami k sath kiya uske liye unhe saja to milni hi chahiye, per..

Karan Radha k gal sahalate hue :- per kya meri gudiya.

Radha :- bhai aapko pata h waha humari ek or bahan bhi rahati h, komal naam h uska, bahut hi pyaari h vk or meri best friend bhi bhaiya.

To please bhaiya aap use kuch mat kahana na, jo hua usme uski koi galti bhi ni thi, aapko pata h Bhai meri tarah wo bhi ek bhai k liye bahut tarsi h, to bhaiya plz use bhi aap wese hi pyaar dena , doge na bhaiya.

Karan pyaar se :- meri barbie doll kuch kahe or m na manu esa kabhi ho sakta h, komal sirf apki best friend hi thodi h meri bhi to pyari gudiya h n or m bhala apni gudiya pe bhala kabhi gussa ker sakta hu.

Radha khusi se karan k gal chum :- bilkul ni, mere bhaiya duniya k sabse best bhai h.

Karan :- chalo gudiya ab kafi late ho chuki chalo ab ache bache ki tarah so jao.

Radha :- ok bhaiya good night, love u.

Karan radha k gal chum :- love u to my barbie doll.


Kuch der bad radha ko sulane k bad karan uth ker apne aage ki planning k bare m sochne laga.

Karan man hi man :- radha bilkul sahi bol rahi h, mana ki mere jane ka udeshya waha sabko dand dena h, parantu iskap ye arth ni ki m unhe bhi is sab m ghasit lu , jinka koi dosh ni issav m.

Isliye mujhe dand or prem ka ek esa samanjasaya banana hoga, jisse nyay bhi ho jaye or kisi nirdosh ka pida bhi na ho.

Karan abhi ye sab soch hi raha tha ki ek jani pahachani aawaz uske kaano m padi.

Utam putra mujhe tumse yahi asha thi.

Aawaz sun karan ne aawaz ki disha ki or dekha to paya ki ye aawaz kisi or ki ni swayam kfd ki thi, jo abhi abhi waha prakat hue the.

Karan unhe dekh heran bhi hua or ek shan khush bhi, ye us din k baad pahala moka tha jab shani dev yani apne dharmpita se Karan ki mulakaat hui thi.

Karan apni narajgi bhare swar me :- pranam prabhu, aap yaha.

Shani :- ab tak mujhse naraj ho putra.

Karan vinMrta se :- prabhu mera itna samarthya kaha jo apse naraj ho saku, mere hi ni meri maa k bhi aradhya the aap.

Isliye ye soch ker kasht or hota h ki jinke aage sari jindagi meri ma ne shish jhukaya, unhi nyaykerta ne apni usi bhakt k sath itna anyay hone diya.

Shani man me :- m tumhaari pida samjh sakta hu putra, isliye hi to tumhare shabdo se kabhi mujhe aahat mahaan ni hota, kyunki janta hu ki jab tumhe satya gyaat hoga tab tumhari narajgi swath dur ho jayegi.

Karan apni bat aGe bhadate hue :- kahiye prabhu aaj apne is ansh ki yaad kese aagayi.

Shani Karan k gal sahalate hue :- yaad to use kiya jata h na putra jise bhul gaye ho or bhala ek pita kabhi apne putra ko kabhi bhul sakta h.

(Baat aage bhadate hue) putra m aaj apne pita hone k kartabya ko hi nibhane aaya hu, tumhe us duvidha se nikalne jo tumhare karm me bhadha ban rahi h.

Tab shani ne karan k sir P hath rakha or unke hatho se ek roshni nikal karan k ander samane lagi.

Shani dev k esa kerte hi karan ki ek or power jagrit ho gayi jo abhi tak supt thi.

Shani dev :- putra ye shakti hi tumhara ab sabse shaktishali or amogh astra hogi, iska upyog humesha sambhal ker or soch samjh ker kerna kyoki ye shakti ek shan m sab kuch sudhar sakti h to sab kuch bigad bhi sakti h.

Karan :- meri duvidha dur kerne k liye dhanyavaad pita ji, aP nishchit rahe m aapko nirash ni hone dunga.

Shani dev kuch or bate samjhane k baad :- tumhara kalyan ho putra.

Ye bol shani anterdhyan ho gaye or karan bhi muskrata hua jaker radha ko apne sine se laga ker so gaya.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uski team khander tak pahunch gayi thi, lekin khander k bahar bahut hi jyada pahara tha dayano ka.

Veer :- ab kya kerna h naina.

Naina :- time bahut waste ho gaya h veer, ab hume sirf ek hi kam kerna h direct humla.

Preety :- ye hui na baat

Ye bol preety un dayano pe tut padi Or veer naina or preety k liye rasta banane laga tali wo ander ja sake

Naina :- veer or bhai aap yahi ruk in logo ko sambhaliye or preety tum mere sath aayo, sab vesa hi kerna jesa humne plan kiya tha.


Naina Or preety jaker ek darwaze k bahar khadi ho gayi or preety dayano ki rani ko bahar bulane lagi.

Preety :- abe o vidhwansika himmat h to bahar aa, kamre m kya chupi hui h chudel.

Wahi naina kamre k bahar ek aina (mirror) liye khadi thi.

Yahi naina ka plan tha darasl dayano ki rani vese to ab bhudi ho chuki thi jis kaaran wo kamzor thi, lekin ek Bahut hi bhayank shakti thi uske pass.

Wo ye thi ki ager koi bhi ager uski ankho ki or galti se bhi dekh le to wo turant pathar ka ban jaye.

Isliye hi naina ne ye plan kiya ki jese hi preety ki pukar sun rani bahar aati, naina use mirror dikha mar dalti.

Or esa ho bhi raha tha , vidhwansika bahar aahi gayi thi naina niche najar kiye hue mirror uski or kerne hi wali thi ki achanak se uski hath se mirror apne aap chut krr dur ja gira.

Ye harkat markesh ne hi ki thi, or haste hye bola.

Markesh :- m is bar tujhe kamyab ni hone dunga ladki.

Nains :- or m tumhara ant kerke hi rahungi dusht.

Ye
(Preety se ) preety khatam ker dalo ise.

Per ye kya tabhi wo hua jiski umid naina ne kabhi na ki thi, preety ne markesh pe humla kerne k bajaye naina ka hi gala pakad liya.

Naina tadafte hue :- didi ye aap kya ker rahi ho m naina hu aapki bahan

Markesh :- wo na kisi ki bahan h na hi kisi ki dost murkh ladki wo sirf ek trittya h jo apne yuvraj ka adesh ka palan ker rahi h.

Ji ha dosto markesh ne apni shakti se preety ko vash me ker liya tha.

Markesh :- preety dekh kya rahi h, ghuma de iska sir vidhwansika ki or or bana de use putla.

Naina :- ni didi, aap uski mat suniye aap trittya ni meri bahan ho aap, aap is adharmi k adhin ni ho sakti.

Markesh :- ni preety Tu na kisi ki bahan h na kisi ki mashuka Tu sirf ek trittya h trittya or ye ladki hum trityao ki sabse badi shatru isliye kahata hu apne yuvraj ki baat maan or ker daal iska ant.

Preety gusse se gurate hue :- yaaahhhh

Or wo or wapas se pura jor laga naina ka muh ghumane lagi.

Naina :- ni didi aap shetan ni ho, aapnek pavitra aatma ho, jinke hatho in dusto ka ant nishchit h.

Markesh :- iski baat sun mat preety ye tujhe bhadka rahi h tere apno k khilaf Tu ek tritya h or ye humari sabse badi dushman.

Naina ':- ni di, aap tritya ni balki Meri bahan ho, yaad kijiye di wo pal jo humne sath m bitaye, yaad kijiye wo kasam di jo aapne yaha ane se pahale li thi ki aap mere baba yani Apke mama k hatyaron se badla logi, yaad kijiye di veer jiju ko jinke liye aapne ye safar ka aarambh kiya, kya unka prem bhi is dusht k aage kamzor pad gaya di.

Naina ki baato ka asar preety pe dikhne laga, naina ki baate or yade preety k dimag m aate hi preety ka sir dird se fatne laga or wo chilane lagi.

Preety :- ni m ye ni ker sakti, m ni mar sakti apni bahan ko, ni m koi shetan ni hu.

Naina :- ha di aap koi shetan ni ho aap meri didi ho, veer jiju k pran ho aap or sabse badi baat aap bhua ki wo beti ho, jinko badla lena h in dushton se apne parivar k tabahi ka.

Preety kuch der tadafti rahi .

Naina :- di aap ler sakti ho, aap is shetan se bahut jyada shaktishali ho, kyunki aapke pas dharm ki shakti h or sbse badi baat aapke pas prem ki shakti h or prem wo param shakti h jiska koi. Tod ni, prayas kijiye di prayas kijiye.

(Preety ki sahaayata ka ishara kerte hue) har har mahadev di, har har mahadev.

Preety naina ka ishara samjh gayi or usne khud ko kese na kese shant ker apne aradhya yani bhagwaan bhutnath ka dhyan kerne lagi.

Jiske sath hi naina preety k sharir se kala dhua nikalne laga, jo us nakaratmak urja ka pratik tha jo preety m markesh k sampark or samohan se ayi thi.

Preety apni puri shakti k sath us samohan se bahar aate hue :- har har mahadev.

Preety k esa kerte hi wo sari nakaratmkta ek sath uske sharir se nikal markesh se ja takrayi or wo kuch dur ja gira.

Markesh :- ni, ye sambhav ni.

Naina muskurate hue :- tum kya jano dusht dharm ki shakti se kya kya sambhav h, ab apne ant k liye saj ho ja.


Markesh :- itni jaldi ni.

Markesh apni talvar leker naina ki or bahda hi tha ki ek baan usko aaker laga, jisse ek dhamaka hua or wo dur ja gira or uski talvaar niche gir gayi.

Ye vaar veer ne kia tha jo sabhi dayano ka kam nipta ker aaya tha .

Veer :- bahut ho gaya tera khel markesh ab marne k liye teyar ho ja.

Samar jaldi se ek mirror jo emergency k liye usne apne sath rakha hua tha use naina ki or throw kerte hue kaha.

Samar :- naina bahan ye lo..

Naina ne jaldi se wo mirror catch kiya or jaldi se najare niche ker mirror ko rani k ankho k samne ker diya.

Naina ne ye itni jaldi kiya ki bhudi rani ko sambhalne ka moka tak na mila or usne galti se khud ko mirror m dekh hi liya.

Or esa kerte hi uska sharir niche se pathar m tabdil hona start ho gaya.

Rani :- niiiiiiiiiii........

Markesh gusse se :- niiiii, ab tum sab maroge....

Naina preety ko kuch ishara kerti h , preety bhi ishara samjh markesh ki talvar jo niche gir gayi thi use jaldi se utha ker bina rani ki or dekhe uska sir kaat dala or veer ne jaldi se bina sir ki ankho ki dekhe sir ko pakad markesh ki or ker dala.




Markesh ko bhi sambhalne ka moka na mila or uski najar bhi rani ki najaro se mil gaya or wo bhi pathar m badalne laga.

Markesh dar se chilaya :- niiiiiiiiiii..............., ye ni ho sakta

Or wo jaldi se wha se gyab ho gaya.

Wahi rani ka pura sharir pathar ka ban chuka tha or esa hote hi rani ka sir bhi fat gaya or uske turant baad rani k sharir m se ek roshni nikal naina ki or aagayi .


Naina samjh gayi wo roshni aakhir kya h Or wo turant apna hath age bhadati h , Or wo roshni naina k hath m aaker ek shastra k aage ka bhag k roop m badal gayi.

Naina khush hote hue :- aakhir kar trishastra ka dusra bhag humara hua, ab ek bhag or fir samraat ko humse koi bhi ni bacha sakega.

Preety :- per sister hume wo milega kaha.

Naina :- ye to hume ghora baba hi bata sakte h.

Ab hume chalna chahiye kyunki rasta lamba h or hume subah navmi ki puja k muharat se pahale pahuchna bhi hoga

Preety :- are sister Tu apne hote tension kaheko le reli h, abhi is problm ko full to finish ker deti hu.

Ye bol. Preety ne ek chutki bajayi or apne dosto k sath teleport ho pahunch gayi sidha apni jeep k pas.

Veer :- vese jaan ek baat kahu.

Preety sharm kerte hue :- kya veer kuch to sharm kero sister or samar yahi h.

Veer :- are Bhai sharm kesi apni hone wali bbivi ko hi to jan kaha h padosan ko thodi na

Veer ki is baat pe naina or samar has pade or preety sharma gayi.

Naina :- well done jiju sahi kaha apne.

Preety :- ab bolo bhi kya kahana h hume late ho raha h.

Veer :- m ye bol raha tha ki preety tumhe to dhyan hoga hi ki kuch din baad meri maa ka janmdin aane wala h.

Preety :- ha veer ye din bhi koi bhulne ka h kya bhala, aunty jab tak is duniya m thi, tabtak mujhe bhi apni beti ki tarah hi mana, maa to kaam se sham ko late lotti thi, tab yaad h aunty hi maa k lotne tak mera bhi tumhare sath dhyan rakhti , wahi hume school se ghar k liye lene aati,

yaha tak ki tumhare apne hatho se ek maa ki tarah khana bhi khilati, m kitni khush nasib thi us waqt jo us time ek ni balki 2 2 ma ka pyar mila or ab to...

Ye bolte bolte preety ki ankhe nam ho gayi naina ne kese na kese preety ko sambhala.

Veer :- ha ye to bilkul sach kaha tumne preety maa k liye jese m tha vesi hi tum thi, isliye meri icha h ki humari sagai maa k jamdin per hi ho, tumhe is baat pe koi etraz to ni na.

Preety sagai ka nam sun khush hote hue :- bhala mujhe kyu is baat per etraz kyu hoga veer, balki m to is fesle se bahut khush hu, mujhe koi etraaz ni, per ek baar apni sali sahiba se bhi puch lijiye.

Naina :- lo bahi, ab miya bivi raji to kya karega , bhala mujhe kyu etraz hoga preety, balki i m so happy for you ki akhir kar tum dono ne ye decision le hi liya.

Veer ye jan khush hua ki kisi ko uske fesle pe etraaz ni or gir sab khushi khusi apne hotel ki or nikal pade.

Per preety k man shant ni tha wo ek bahut badi asamjas me thi, ek baat thi jo use khaye ja rahi thi, wo kya thi wo to aage hi pata chalega

Wahi dusri or.

Ek anjan jagah per ek badi si gufa sthit thi, jaha per ek admi jisne sirf tan per ek kali dhoti pahani hui thi wo dhyan m betha tha, aas pass padi samgri or shetan ki murti dekh ker hi samjh aaraha tha ki wo vyakti kali sadhna m lin tha.

Tabhi waha markesh prakat hua, jo dara hua tha kyunki preety k danv k kaaran dhire dhire pathar ka ban raha tha.

Markesh chilate or rote hue us admi ko pukarne laga.

Markesh :- bhaiya mujhhe bachao, bachao mujhe bhaiya , dekhiye un logo ne mere sath kya kiya, bhaiya please mujhe bacha lo.

Ji ha dosto wo admi or koi ni trittyao ka raja or markesh ka bada bhai samraat hi tha jo yaha is gufa m beth apni kali sadhna m lin tha, jiska pata markesh or uske alawa koi ni janta tha.

Apne bhai ki roti hui chikh sun samrat ka dhayan tut gaya or wo chonkte hue uth gaya

Samraat :- chote.....

Vo apne bhai ki ye galat dekh heran ho gaya, lekin isse pahale wo kuch ker pata kafi der ho chuki thi or markesh puri tarah pathar ki maurti ban gaya.

Lekin marte marte usne markesh ko kaha.

Markesh :- dekhiye bhaiya un dushton ne mere sath kya kiya ab aap unko chodna ni .

Or isi k sath markesh ka kaam tamam ho gaya or uska pathar bana sharir bhi tabah ho gaya.

Samraat rote hue chillaya :- niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.............

Kafi der tak samraat rota raha or fir gusse se pagal hote hue chilaya :- kisne kisne mara mere bhai ko .

(Gusse se uska sharir jalne laga or gufa kampne lagi) kisnee........


Tabhi uske kaano m ek aawaz padi.

M janta hu samraat aapke bhai ki ye galat kisne ki....


Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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freind kisi kaaran se update aaj complete ni hua h isliye aapko inform ker raha hu ki please late tak jag ker wait na kare, next ek big mega update kal raat ko aayega jisme kuch naye raaj khulenge Or judenge bhi
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