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Ignore this type negative review(intense to frustrat to you) and consider only positive reviews but don't loose hop, we always with you and keep moving..Note :- yaha jitne log mujhe criticized ker rahe h first of all m unse kahna chahunga ki mujhe koi shok ni h jhut bolne ka jo aap kuch bhi bol rahe ho bina kisi ki koi vajah jane, aap sabko pahale bhi bata chuka hu or aaj dobara bata raha hu mere ghar m is samay bahut pareshaniya chal rahi h, mere father hospitalised h is chakkar m. Mujhe akele ko hi ghar or dukan dono sambhalni pad rahi h, jis chakkar m mujhe khud k liye hi time ni mil pata to m kya karu, kisi k pas koi suggestion ho to de.
Or ek ne ye bhi likha h ki story ko jabardasti lamba khechne k chakker m m ye sab ker raha hu to unko m bata dena chahta hu ki mujhe koi maja ni aaraha kisi ko pareshan kerne m or na hi mujhe koi pese mil rahe h story likhne k liye , isliye bolne se pahale kuch to soch le kero yaar or haa jinko lag raha h m bahana ker raha hu to m unka kuch ni ker sakta Kyunki ye unka khudka mindset esa ho chuka h ki unhe bas writer ki kharabi or galti najar aati h uski situation samjh ni aati.
Or rahi baat update kal raat ko na aapne ki to isme koi galti ni mane to kal raat ko hi update ko poster diya tha, per pata ni ki kese koi net problem ya server down k chakker m update post kyu ni hua, pure din se hospital se free hoker ab ye soch ker betha tha ki dekhe ki kesa laga update dosto ko per koi kami to ni rah gayi, per yaha dekha to badi nirasha hui ki ek itni si baat k liye itna sab mujhe kaha diya.
I realy get very disappointed.
By the way update mane post ker diya h dobara , jese ctitisize kerne k liye comment kiya wese ho sake to review dene k liye bhi comment ker dijiyega thanks.
Intzar rahega. Raaj janne ka. Wese jyada wait mat krwa dena.freind kisi kaaran se update aaj complete ni hua h isliye aapko inform ker raha hu ki please late tak jag ker wait na kare, next ek big mega update kal raat ko aayega jisme kuch naye raaj khulenge Or judenge bhi
freind kisi kaaran se update aaj complete ni hua h isliye aapko inform ker raha hu ki please late tak jag ker wait na kare, next ek big mega update kal raat ko aayega jisme kuch naye raaj khulenge Or judenge bhi
koyi naa..... intezaar rahegi... update ke liye..freind kisi kaaran se update aaj complete ni hua h isliye aapko inform ker raha hu ki please late tak jag ker wait na kare, next ek big mega update kal raat ko aayega jisme kuch naye raaj khulenge Or judenge bhi
Lage raho munna bhai.....freind kisi kaaran se update aaj complete ni hua h isliye aapko inform ker raha hu ki please late tak jag ker wait na kare, next ek big mega update kal raat ko aayega jisme kuch naye raaj khulenge Or judenge bhi
Good updateUpdate no :- 172
Wahi dusri taraf
Naina or uske dost trishastra k tisre hisse ko leker sidha mandir pahunchte h , jaha baba dhyan m bethe the
Naina isse pahale baba ko pukare usse pahale hi baba band ankho k sath hi bol pade.
Baba :- apne maksad m kamyab hui ladki.
Naina :- ji baba humne trishastra k dusre hisse ko prapt ker liya h
Baba :- shabas samne bane ghere m dono hisso ko rakh do.
Naina wesa hi kerti h , samne bane yantra rupi ghere m wo dono hisso ko rakh deti h, jiske baad baba mantrocharan aaramb kerte h or sath m hi navmi ki pooja bhi
Or mantrocharan or puja k purn hone k kuch shan baad dono hisse roshni m chamakte hue hava m udne lage or agle hi shan wo ek dure se jud ek ho gaye .
Dono bhag mil ker ek tir ban gaye , lekin adhura kyunki tir ki upri nok ni thi , jo shayad trishastra ka tisra hissa thi.
Baba ankh khol :- ladki aage bad is mahan astra ko dharan kero
Naina aage bhad isse pahale astra ko dharan kerti h .
Baba :- putri is ashtra ko sambhal ker rakhna kyunki ye na keval samraat ka ant kerne k liye ekmatra ashtra h apitu is sansar ka bhavishya bhi h .
Naina :- ji baba m aapko vachan deti hu m iski raksha har hal har kimat me karungi or (preety ko dekhte hue ) or isko is shastra ki niyati tak bhi pahuchayungi.
Veer :- vo to hum karenge hi naina per sawal ye h ki ye ashtra abhi bhi adhura h iska ek bhag or h jis tak hum abhi tak na pa sake.
Or us bhag k bina to ye shastra shaktihin h
Naina :- veer ne bilkul sahi kaha baba , kripya hume is ashtra k tisre v antim bhag tak pahuchne ka marg prashast kare.
Baba :- ladki mane ye baat tujhe pahale bhi kahi thi or aaj bhi kah raha hu , ki manjil marg puch ker ni apitu marg per chal ker hi.prapt ki ja sakti h.
Isliye tu baki sab chinta chod apna karm ker , jo tum tino ka bhagya h wo niyati swayam tumhe pahuncha degi.
Tumne us ladki piya or uski maa rekha ko vachan diya tha na sahayata ka.
Naina chonkte hue :- ji baba per ye aapko kese gyaat hua.
Baba :- is baat ko chod naina ki mujhe is bare m kese gyaat hua, apitu jald se jald apne vachan ko purn kerne k safar per nikalne ki vyavastha kero.
Smaran kero mane kya kaha tha , yadi tujhe apni maa tak pahuchna h to usse pahale tumhe kayi mao ka ashirwad praapt kerna hoga.
Ja naina ja , tujhe tera farz teri manzil bula rahi h , ek maa ki karun pukar tujhe bula rahi h.
Naina :- ji baba , parantu kya aap humare sath ni chalenge , yadi aapka ashirwad humare sath hoga to hum shighra hi apni manjil ko prapt ker payenge.
Baba :- mera ashirwad to tum sab ke sath humesha h putri , or rahe mere sath chalne ki baat , to suno mera or tumlogo ka sath is safar m yahi tak tha , ab age ka marg tumhe swayam hi khojna hoga, kyunki ab mere smadhi m jane ka samay aachuka h.
Naina :- ji baba .
Ye bol naina or uske dost baba k charan sparsh kerte h.
Baba :- vijayi bavah putri.
Asha h shigra hi samrat k ant ka samachar praapt hoga.
Ye bol baba sabko ashirwad dete hue anterdhyan ho gaye.
Naina trishastra ko hath me le use dekhte hue :- bas ek padav or samraat fir uske baad tumhare kale samrajya ka ant nishchit h dusht , shighra hi m aaungi teri mritu evam apni maa ki mukti k vaste.
Ye bol naina apni jeap me jaker chupchap Beth gayi or apne dosto k sath nikal padi apne hotel ki or.
Wahi dusri or
Naina or uske dosto k mandir se nikal jate hue ka drishya ek badi si haveli m mojud ek shakti nirmit screen pe saf saf dikhayi pad raha tha.
Jise or koi ni apitu samraat or kubdi dekh rahi the or wahi p mojud vp bhi.
Kubdi naina ki or ishara kerte hue :- yahi h malik , yahi h wo jisne humare yuvraj ko mara.
Yahi h wo brihaspur k bhutnashak jinhone na jane kitne bhut pret dayano ko or uske sath sath humare yuvraj or maharani Vrushali ka ant tak ker dala.
Samraat chonkte hue :- kya Vrushali ka bhi .
Vp :- tumhari ye dasi sahi kah rahi h samraat , in logo ne mahashaktishali Vrushali ko bhi veergati dedali.
Kubdi abhi tak ki sari ghatnaye samraat ko bistar purwak bata dali.
Samraat :- mujhe unki mahima mandal sunane m koi shok ni amma , mujhe bas ye janna h ki kon h ye log or kya chahte j ye log , inka agla pichla sab janna h mujhe taki inhe marne se pahale Jan to saku , akhir esi konsi abhilasha thi inki jinko purn kerne k chakkar m inhone mujhse yani samraat se panga liya.
Vp gusse se :- yahi to vidambna h samraat , in dono ka jan sthan or inke bare m jankari ka pata to aajtak mujhe bhi gyat na tha.
Sunne m asambhav lagta h parantu satya to ye h ki inke astitv tak ka bhan aajtak na hua.
Samraat :- asambhav , aapko bhi inke astitv ka bhan na hua , iska to keval ek hi arth h
Vp bich me :- ki yahi inke janm k piche avashy hi devo ki ya yu kaho us shani ka koi gahari sajish yani mantvya h jo asuro k hit m to Kadapi ni ho sakti.
Samraat :- ni is baar hum devo ko vijayi ni hone denge prabhu , m inhe trishastra ka tisra bhag kabhi prapt ni kerne dunga.
Kubdi :- to maharaj der kis baat ki m sena ko abhi adesh deti hu hum aaj hi inper aakraman karenge.
Samraat :- markesh ki mrityu apni ankho se dekhne k baad bhi esi murkhta bhari baat kerti ho bhudiya, jisne ek tritya ko mar dala , wo bhi ek ni 2 2 bar , wo koi sadharan shakti Kadapi ni ho sakti , or bina shatru ki shakti ko jane or bina kisi yojna k yudh k medan m utarna murkhta h.
Mere bhai ne jo murkhta ki wo m dohrana ni chahta , isliye tumhe mera ek kaam kerna hoga, mujhe tumhe shigra se shighra in logo ki jankari laker deni hogi , 3 din h tere pas , yadi 3 din m mera kam na hua to teri khal ko udhad k m apna paydan (dormat) bana dalunga
Kubdi ghabrate hue :- ji ji malik , lekin aapko janker khushi hogi malik mane apna pasa pahale hi fek diya h , or yahi pasa humara vijayastra or unki kamzori banegi.
Ye bol kubdi kuch samraat ko batati h jise sun samraat jor jor se haste hue bola
Samraat :- bahut khub ama , bahut khub , aakhir mane bhi to ye jalilta or katuta tumhi se to sikhi h.
Ab suno jesa m kahata hu vesa hi kero or mujhe shigra se shighra in sabki sari jankari laker do or khasker is ladki (preety ki tasvir ki or aage kerte hue ) ki to jitna shighra ho sake utna shigra kero.
Akhir pata to chale kon h ye gaddar jisne apne kul k sath droh kiya
Kubdi :- ji malik.
Samraat tez aawaz me:- ab khadi khadi mera muh kya dekh rahi ho , jo bola h wo kero
Samrat ki tez awaz sun kubdi waha se ese gayab hui jese ghade k sir .
Kubdi k jate hi samraat preety ki tasvir ko dhyan se dekh man hi man sochne laga.
Samraat :- kyu , akhir kyu is gadar ki tasvir dekh baar baar ese lag raha h ki kuch to sambhamdh h isse mera , kyu esa bar bar lag raha h ki kuch to esa h jo meri najro se bacha hua, ye chahra , ye chahra bhi kuch jana pajachana sa h , kahi ....
(Khayalo ko jhatakte hue ) ni ni esa ni ho sakta , m kuch jyada hi soch raha hu , ye faltu bato pe samay nasht kerne se acha mujhe apni yojna pe dhyan dena chahiye, jisse danav jati k pratyek dushman ka safaya kiya ja sake.
Ye sab sochte hue wo us screen ko apni ankho k samne se hatane hi wala hota h ki ek shan phir uski najar preeti p pad jati h jise dekh wo ruk use dekhta rahata h kuch der or uske baad wo kuch sochte hue screen hata deta h or hall se uth ker apne kamre m chala jata h
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Karan or jyoti kuch der rest kerne k baad uthe hi the ki unka gate knok hua , unhone gate khola to paya samne unki bhua khadi thi.
Bhua :- beta mane tumhe disturb to ni kiya na.
Karan :- are meri darling bhua kesi baate kerti ho aap , aaiye ander aaiye.
Karan garima ko leker ander aata h or h to jyoti bhi bathroom se bahar aati Hui boli.
Jyoti :- bhuaji aap yaha is waqt.
Garima :- ha beta mujhe tumse kuch jaruri baat kerni thi.
Karan sab samjhte hue bhi jan bhujker bola :- boliye bhua
Bhua udaas man se :- beta aaj jo bhi hua m uske liye bahut sharminda hua , mane bilkul bhi ni socha tha ki itna sab kuch hone k baad bhi vo bilkul na badlenge, aaj bhi unki soch wesi h jesi pahale thi , m to khud ni chahti beta ki tum yaha raho per kya karu beta , tumse milne k baad jo mane khushi bhai k or komal beti k chahre pe dekhi h , wesi mane bahut salo baad Dekhi h beta , salo pahale is ghar se keval bhabhi hi ni beta is ghar ka sukh chain or sari khushiyan hi chali gayi thi , bhai to mano hasna hi bhul gaye.
Parantu tumhare aagman k sath aaj unke chahre ki wo muskan firse lot aayi beta.
Isliye ek bahan apne bhai ki or ek bhua apni bhatizi ki khushi ki tumse bhik mangti h beta tum yaha se mat jao , jo galti ma baba ne ki unki saza apne chachu or apni choti bahan ko mat do bate mat do.
Ye bol garima karan or jyoti k per pakdne ko hui , per jyoti ne unhe rokte hue kaha.
Jyoti :- are are bhua ye aap kya ker rahi h , kyu apne hi bacho ko pap ki bhagi bana rahi ho, or rahi baat yaha rukne ki to bhai ne bahar kah to diya tha na ki hum ab yahi rukenge.
Garima :- per beta mujhe laga ki ye sab tumne komal ko bhulane ko kaha hoga.
Jyoti :- kesi baat kerti ho bhua , aap to jante hi ho jhut bolna bhai ka swabhav ni or vese bhi chachu sirf aapke bhai ni humare chacha humare pita saman h vo ,jis prem ko hum salo se tadfe us prem ka ahasas hume keval unke prem bhare aalingan se hi prapt ho gaya .
Jyoti yu hi kafi samjhdari or niti yukt bate kerte hue apni bhua se boli.
Jyoti :- isliye aap nishchit rahiye bhua , hum yaha se kahi ni jane wale , kyunki humne esa kiya to humme or dada dadi m fark hi kaha rahega.
Garima pyaar se jyoti ko gale lagate hue :- haye meri pyari bachi kitni samjhdar ho gayi h , lagta h ab tere hath pile kerne ka time agaya h.
Garima ne bhale hi ye baat yu hi boli ho lekin karan or jyoti hadbada gaye , karan ne baat badalte hue.
Karan :- vese bhua , chachu or komal se to hum mil liye , per humari chachi kaha h.
Jyoti :- ha bhua bataiye na chachi kaha h mujhe unse milna h.
Garima ye sun pahale to thoda pareshan ho gayi phir boli.
Garima :- wo beta tumhari chachi kal hi apne mayke gayi .
Karan udaas hote hue :- kya , per kya unko pata ni tha kya ki aaj hum aane waLe h.
Garima karan ko puchkarte hue :- ni beta darasl tumhari chachi k pitaji ki tabiyat thodi kharab thi , isliye unhe jana pada , per tum tension mat lo , wo parso tak aajayegi.
Thodi der baat kerne k baad garima waha se chali gayi or raat ko sabne khana apne apne room me hi kiya , kyunki aaj subah k hadse se sabka mood off tha.
Jyoti humesha ki tarah karan ko apne hatho se khana khilate hue :- dekhiye na bhai , humne kya socha tha or kya ho gaya.
Karan :- matlab ?
Jyoti :- matlab ye ki bhai yaad h bhai jab hum akele the to humesha sochte the ki kash humara bhi ek bada sa parivar hota , jisme hum sab milker pyaar se ek sath rahate , na koi gila shikwa or na hi koi man mutav per yaha to (nam ankho se) parivar to mila per..
Iske aage vo kuch bol na saki or subakne lagi.
Karan turant jyoti ko shant kerwate hue :- na meri gudiya mera bacha yu rote ni , mane tumse kitni baar kaha h , ye tumhare aasu mere liye anmol h inhe yu na bahaya kero .
Jyoti :- rou ni to kya karu bhaiya, mujhse ni dekha jata apne pariwar me yu man mutav .
Kitni Masum thi jyoti , ye wahi jyoti thi jise subah apne dada dadi ki shakal tak na dekhni thi or ab wo unhike liye ro bhi rahi thi.
Karan :- are meri pyari jan , to isme rone ki kya baat h , aapke bhaiya h na , dekhna wo jald hi sab sahi ker denge
Jyoti :- sachi bhaiya.
Karan jyoti k gal chum :- muchi gudiya.
Jyoti :- promise kero.
Karan :- god promise.
Jyoti khushi se :- yahoooo , aap sach me duniya k best bhaiya ho.
Ye bol wo karan ka chahra gila ker deti h .
Jyoti serious hote hue :- per bhai ye aap keroge kese.
Karan :- bas dekhti ja gudiya , kal se aarambh hoga dada or dadi per dandnayak ka dand chakra .
Ye bol karan ek rahasmyi muskurahat deta h , jise jyoti samjh jati h or wo bhi muskurane lagi.
Jyoti jony lever style me :- abhi maja aayega na bhidu log
Ye bol wo has padi or sath m karan bhi.
Or fir dono bhai bahan thodi planning or thoda romance ker so gaye
Dekhte h kal ka naya savera kya gul khilata h.
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
Stay tuned
Nice updateupdate no :- 173
Aaiye ek najar humare sahayak kaal yani Rohan pe bhi najar dal lete h.
Rohan or riya bhi raat ka dinner ker done ki teyari m lage hue the , riya abhi abhi fresh ho ker jese hi bathroom se bahar aayi h to pati h ki Rohan bed per betha kisi gambhir soch m khoya hua h or sath me uski ankhe bhi halki nam h.
Riya apne betu ki ankh m ansu dekh chintit ho uthi .
Riya Rohan k pas ja :- betu teri ankhho m ye ansu , kisi ne kuch kaha kya tujhe.
Rohan kuch na bolte hue bas na m gardan hilata h.
Riya :- to fir tu yu ro kyu raha h bhai, please mat ro na , bata naa , tu to janta h na tere ankho m ansu teri didu se dekhe ni jate .
Rohan :- janta hu didu per kya karu di or ni dekhi jati apne dost apne bhai karan or jyoti ki taklife.
(Rohan ki rulayi fut padi) kya kya ni Saha unhone pahale apni maa ko khona , pita ka prem to unhe kabhi nasib hua hi ni , balki unke khud k pita ne hi pahale unse unki maa ko china or fir dusri maa or bahan tak ko dur ker dala.
Dono bhai bahan ne na jane kitni taklifo k sath apna bachpan gujara , jis umer me bacho ko mata pita k prem or unke support ki sabse jyada jarurat hoti h us waqt unhe mila to kya , julm or apno ki hi nafrat .
(Siskte hue ) aaj ka hi dekh lo na di , yaad h di jab hume or karan or jyoti ko garima bhua or apni family k bare m ni pata to kitna taraste the wo us pyaar k liye.
Kya kya socha na tha unhone apni family k bare m
(Rohan ki is baat m riya ko wo din yaad aajata h , jab wo apni graduation se pahale college m padhte the.)
Short flashback
Ek din Saturday ka time tha to college ki chuti ka time k time sabhi dost milte h.
Rohan rahat ki sams lete hue :- aahhh akhir kar chuti ho hi gayi , Verna aaj to math k lecturar ne to sara dimag hi chat jana tha mera
Radha :- ha Rohan bhai aap bol to sahi rahe ho , ye weak to bahut hi boring gaya h bas class test or boring lecture vagera, kyu na kuch interesting kiya jaye.
Jyoti Radha se :- ha kyu ni choti , friends mere pas ek plan h , kal Sunday h kyu na hum movie dekhne chale or fir thoda bahut ghum bhi aayenge.
Radha excited hote hue :- nice idea di , to kal pakka raha movie ka or ha sabko aana padega kisi ka koi bahana ni chalega.
Riya :- sorry radhu per m or betu kal ni aapyenge.
Radha :- di that's not fare , aapko aana hi hoga.
Riya :- choti yakin mano man to humara bhi bahut tha tum sab k sath ane ka per kya kare.
Papa ne kal ka plan pahale hi decide kiya hua h , kal hum sabko 2 din k liye humare dadaji k yaha jana h, wo kya h na dadaji kafi dino se hume bula rahe h or hum ni gaye to humari kher ni , akhir bhai dadi ka ladla jo thahra.
Rohan :- kya ladla or m , nice joke di , ladli to aap ho dadu ki yaad h pichli baar jab hum pichli baar ganv gaye the or ped se aam todte hue aap gir gayi thi niche to aapko to kisine kuch na kaha , per sabne meri khabar leli .
Riya :- wo to leni hi thi na plan kiska tha.
Rohan :- acha ji or aam khane ki jid kisne ki thi.
Karan :- are are ab aap dono firse jhagadne mat lagna.
Rohan :- baki kuch bhi kaho dada dadi ka yaha maja bahut aata h , h na di.
Riya Rohan ko Konhi marte hue ishara kerti h jyoti ki or.
Rohan us taraf dekhta h to pata h jyoti ki ankhe nam h , jise dekh riya boli.
Riya :- kya hua jyotu tu ro kyu rahi h.
Jyoti apni ankhe saf kerte hue :- kuch ni di bas apke muh se apke or apke dada dadi k
Kisse sun thodi emotional ho gayi or khud ko rok ni payi.
Karan jyoti ko ek side se apne sine se laga ker .
Karan :- ha di esa hi kuch hall mera h , aap log kitne lucky ho na jo aapke pas apki puri family h , Anita mosi , uncle or to or itna pyar kerne wale dada dadi.
Or humare pas (ankhe saf kerte hue ) kabhi kabhi aap sab ko dekh ker kafi jealous feel hota h ki kash humari bhi koi family hoti , Ager wo h bhi to humko to kuch pata bhi ni is bare me kuch, na jane mujhe or gudiya ko akhir kab tak ye akelapan jhelna hoga.
Karan or jyoti ko emotional hote dekh riya ne unhe jhat se gale laga liya or boli.
Riya :- lagaungi tum domo k ek ager aage se esa bola ki tum akele ho ya tumhari koi family ni , hum h na tumhari family, kya
Radha :- ha bhai di ne bilkul sahi kaha , aap hi to bolte ho na ki hum aapke dost ni apno se badker h , fir bhi aap esi bate kerte ho , jaiye m aapse baat ni kerti.
Ye bol Radha apna muh mod leti h , jise dekh karan turant uske pas jata h or ghutno p Beth apne kaan pakad bolta h.
Karan :- are ni ni barbie doll apne bhaiya k sath esa mat kero , dekho m kan pakad k sorry bol raha hu.
Radha :- ek shart pe hi aapko mafi milegi bhaiya, aapko promise kerna hoga ki aage se aap kabhi esi baat ni karoge.
Karan muskurate :- promise gudiya , ab to maaf ker de apne bhaiya ko meri jaan .
Radha bas muskurate hue karan k gal ko chum leti h , jo ishara tha ki usne karan ko maaf kiya..
Jyoti :- aapne bilkul sahi kaha di m hi bevkuf thi jo itni pyari family k hote hue bhi khud ko akela kah rahi thi , apni gudiya ko maaf ker do na didu.
Riya jyoti ko gale laga leti h.
Rohan :- karan jyoti Tum log udaas mat ho yaad h mummy ne hume bataya tha ki asha mosi kisi shivpur ganv se belong kerti thi , hum summer vacation m vaha jarur jayenge ho sakta h waha tumhare familybhi mil jaye.
Jyoti :- ha hum jarur jayenge Rohan bhai.
Karan :- ab meri gudiya ne ha bol diya to m kon hota hu mana kerne wala.
Flashback end
Rohan :- or aaj jab unhe itne salo baad apni family mili bhi to ye sab hua , aakhir kab tak sahana padega unhe ye sab di.
Riya jo Rohan ko rota dekh or purani yado ko yad ker khud bhi ro padi thi wo ko control kerte hue.
Riya :- shant ho jao bhai ese rote ni h , tum hi socho agee hum hi yu royenge to humare karan or jyoti ko kon sambhalega, isliye hume majbut bane rahna hoga na.
Ese hi kuch der wo Rohan ko shant kerwati h or phir or use pani pilate hue.
Riya :- betu tum na bilkul chinta mat kero mujhe pura bharosa h bhai or jyoti apne prem se sab kuch sahi ker denge humesha ki tarah or hum unka sath denge or fir humare karan or jyoti ki jindagi m koi problem ya dukh ni hoga
Rohan man me '- yahi to vidambna or dukh ki baat h di jiske kaaran m bhavuk ho utha tha ki di "mahan pad k sath mahan jimedariya bhi aati h " jiske liye unhe sabke sukho k liye or sansar k kalyan k liye najane kitne balidaan dene honge bhavishya me , ishvar ki bhi kya ajib lila h, sabko nyay batne wale ko najane kitne anyay sahane pade or bhavishya m kitne nayay sahne padenge.
Rohan soch m khoya hua tha ki riya ne use jhakjhor k pukara.
Riya :- betu kaha kho gaye.
Rohan :- haa... Kayi bhi to ni di
Acha di m soch raha tha ki karan or jyoti aajke hua hadse k kaaran kafi udas honge na hume unse jake baat kerni chahiye.
Riya '- baat to tumhari sahi h betu chalo.
Fir Rohan or riya nikal pade karan or jyoti k kamre ki or tabhi unhe raste m Rajiv mile.
Rajiv :- are beta tum dono raat ko yaha , koi kam tha .
Rohan :- ha uncle
Rajib :- beta karan or jyoti ki tarah tum bhi mujhe chachu bula sakte ho.
Riya :- chachu wo hum karan or jyoti se milne ja rahe the , kya aap hume unka room bata sakte ho.
Rajib :- ha kyu ni beta , aage left se 2 room , or beta koi bhi problem ho to bejijak bata dena.
Rohan :- ji chachu.
Fir rajiv vaha se nikal pada or Rohan or riya bhi dono room me enter hote h to samne ka najara dekh unke chahro pe santusti bhari muskan aajati h.
Kyunki samne karan or jyoti bilkul shanti or pyar se so rahe the or unke chahre p wohi humesha wali chir parichit muskam bhi thi , jo ye sabit ker rahi thi ki wo dono subah ki baat ko shayad bhul gaye h.
Riya :- kitne pyaare lag rahe h na sote hue ye dono .
Rohan dhime se :- hmm wo to h di , ab hume yaha se chalna chahiye, kahi ye uth na jaye
Riya :- oops sorry , ha betu bas ek minute.
Riya karan or jyoti ki chadar ko sahi kerti h jo unke uper se kuch hat gayi thi or dono k mathe ko chum bahar aajati h.
Riya :- wese ek baat manni padegi na betu , kitna pyar h in domo bhai bahan m mano do jism ek jaan ho.
Rohan :- sahi kaha di aapne yahi prem hi to h jo inhe itna sab hone k baad bhi tutne ni deta or ye prem hi to h jis kaaran aaj hume ese pyare dost mile
Riya :- ha bhai , m to bhagwan se humesha yahi mangti hu ki karan jesa bjai bhagwan har bahan ko de verna na hi de.
Rohan jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- kya kaha didu iska matlab m acha bhai ni hu.
Ye bol rohan apna muh fula leta h.
Riya :- are pagal tu gussa kyu ho raha h , janta h mane esa kyu kaha.
Rohan na m sir hilata h
Riya :- are budu wo isliye kyunki mera betu jesa is duniya m koi ho hi ni sakta , love you betu
Ye bol riya Rohan k dono gal chum leti h or fir najane use kya sujhta h ki wo apne hoth ko Rohan k niche wale hot per rakh use kuch second ka halka sa smooch bhi dedeti.
Jise Rohan chonk jata h or ek jhatka bhi lagta h kyunki ye uski life ka first lip kis tha wo bhi uski khud ki sagi bahan ka jisse wo thoda exited ho jata h or dhire dhire riya ka sath dene laga or uske pant m uska asar bhi dikhne laga land halka sa khada hone laga , jo riya ko Rohan k gale lage hone ki vajah se use apne pet p feel hua hua , jise mahasus kerte hi riya ko ahasas hua ki wo kaha or kya ker rahi thi.
Or wo jhat se alag ho gayi, jisse Rohan ki tandra tuti.
Rohan :- di ye kya tha.
Riya sharmate hue :- kya tha ka kya matlab ye mera pyar tha apne betu k liye , ab chalo room m raat bahut ho rahi h.
Ye bol riya jaldi se vaha se nikal gayi.
Rohan ko to abhi bhi yakin ni ho raha tha ki jo abhi hua wo sapna tha ya sach , tabhi use apna niche ka ahasas hua.
Jisse Rohan ek baar to kafi sharminda ho gaya.
Rohan :- are ye kya ye kya ho gaya mujhse , di kya soch rahi hogi mere bare m , ab kese karunga m di ka samna.
(Fir kuch sochte hue ) lekin shuruaat bhi to di ne hi ki thi , kahi esa to ni ki di..
(Jhatakte hue ) ni ni m kuch jyada hi soch raha hu , mujhe ab jana chahiye
Ye soch Rohan bhi apne kamre mein ja pahncha or paya ki riya to so bhi gayi usne chain ki saas li or wo bhi bagal m so gaya.
Wahi dusri or
Naina or preety pooja puri kerke apne hotel k room m pahunchi to preety ne naina ko kaske gale laga liya khushi k mare.
Naina :- are are jara khushi to dekho humari didi ki.
Preety :- khush kese na hou sister , aakhir kar mera sapna pura hone wala h , mera pyar mera veer mujhse sagai kerne wala h , m bata ni sakti m kitna khush hu sister.
Or ye sab tumhare hi kaaran hua sister ager Tum na hoti to shayad hum kabhi ek na ho pate.
Naina :- esi baat ni h preetu, mane kuch ni kiya , ye sab to tumhare or veer k sache prem k kaaran hua.
Kher wo sab chodo or ye batao is khusi k moke pe party kab de rahi ho .
Preety :- aaj sham ko pakka party.
Naina :- sham ko kyu , abhi kyu ni.
Preety sharmate hue :- wo isliye kyunki veer bol rahe the ki..
Naina haste hue use chidati hui :- oh to ye baat h humari didi ko hone wale jiju k sath time spent kerna h , lovey dovey , huyy.
Ye bol naina preety ko chidane lagi
Preety :- ja m tujhse baat ni kerti humesha mujhe chidati rahati h.
Naina :- acha baba sorry ab ni chidati , per party sham ko paka na.
Preety :- ofcourse meri jaan.
Naina :- yaad se party dedena or ha (ankh marte hue ) or jiju k sath itni mahanat mat ker lena ki sham ko uth hi na pao.
Preety jhuta gussa dikhate hue :- thahar kamini tujhe m batati hu .
Ye bol preety naina ko jhut mut ka marne lagi.
Thodi der masti majak k baad k baad preety boli.
Preety :- sham ko ready rahana treat k liye, hum sab 6 baje nikalenge.
Naina :- ok sure .
Sab se yaad aaya samar bhai kaha h, kabse dikhayi na diye
Preety :- yaar jabse mandir se hum lote h mane bhi ni dekha.
Naina chintit hote hue :- hey maa , ek to wese hi bhai k uper khatra mandra raha h or uper se markesh ko mar ker hum trityao ki najar m aachuke h , ese m bhai kahi khatre m na pad jaye.
Preety :- off o sister tum bevajah hi pareshan ho rahi ho , wo yahi kahi honge , abhi aajayenge.
Samar room m enter kerte hue :- preety sahi bol rahi h bahan , wo m yahi pass m gaya tha kuch saman lane.
Preety bhi un dono ko chod nikal jati h vaha se.
Naina narajgi dikhate hue :- aapko kuch chahiye tha to mujhe bolna chahiye tha na ek to apko aaram ki jarurat h or uper se ab khatra bhi , lekin ap ho ki sunte hi ni.
Samar :- off o choti tum bekar m hi itna tension le rahi ho , m ab bilkul thik to hu , ulta aaram ki jarurat to tumhe h meri bahan .
(Naina k ghayal hath ko tham nam ankho se) kitni chot lag gayi h tumhe , ye sab meri vajah se hua na , kesa bhai hu m jo apni bahan ki raksha bhi na ker paya.
Naina :- are ye kya bhai aap phir se rone lage , mane kal bhi kaha tha na jo hua usme aapki koi galti ni thi or ulta bhai aapne to kal sabit kiya ki aap to duniya k best bhai ho.
Samar :- wo kese.
Naina :- wo ese mere pyare bhaiya yadi aapne sahi time pe ager mujhe mirror na lake diya hota kal to shayad aapki ye bahan abhi jinda na hoti.
Samar naina k muh pe hath rakh :- pagli kahi ki esa ni bolte mane wahi kiya jo ek bhai ko kerna chahiye.
Naina :- wahi to m bol rahi hu Bhai, ap duniya k best bhai ho.
(Samar k hath me shopping bags dekh , )
Wese ye kya bhaiya ap akele shopping per gaye that's not fare, vese mere liye kya laye.
Samar :- vo kya h na wo tumhare hath pe chot lagi thi na to medical se bandages or dawaiya lene gaya tha wahi se Lotte time ek shop p mujhe ek dress pasand aagayi , to socha apni pyari si bahan k liye le lu.
Naina khushi se :- dress mere liye, dikhao na bhaiya.
Tab samar naina ko wo dress dikhata h jise dekh naina bahut khush hoti h or khush ho bhi kyu na aakhir usko mila ye pahala gift tha jo usko uske bhai ne diya tha.
Naina khushi se samar k gal ko chum :- it's sooo beautiful bhai , than u so much.
Samar :- pagli bhai ko thank you bolti h , acha ab pahanke to dikha ise m bhi to dekhu meri gudiya p ye dress kesi lagti h.
Naina :- ha kyu ni bhai , bas aap 5 min wait kijiye.
Ye bol naina bathroom m dress leker chali jati h or kuch der baad dress pahanke jese hi bahar aati h to samar k chahre pe muskan fel jati h , kyounki naina pe wo dress kafi jach rahi thi.
Naina :- kesi lag rahi hu Bhai m.
Samar naina k gal chum :- bahut khubsurat bilkul ek Rajkumari ki tarah.
Naina apni tarif sun khush ho jati h , fir wo dono bhai bahan ek sath bath bate kerne lage.
Samar :- vese choti mujhe apne baare m to kuch bhi yaad ni, per tum to apne bare m kuch batao na jese tum sab yaha kya ker rahe ho kyu tritya ko marna chahte ho.
Naina :- iske piche ek lambi kahani h bhai, baat darasl hua yu.
Fir naina samar ko apni kahani batane lagi .
Wahi dusri or
Aaiye ek najar humari sonam pe bhi dal li jaye.
Sonam ne jesa decide kiya tha wo apne hometown shimla aacuki thi or usi orphan house m ruki hui thi jaha wo pali badhi thi.
Yaha ane se uska dukh or kasht to kuch kam hua tha , lekin abhi bhi wo gumsum rahti thi .
Rohan ki baato se kuch prabhavit ho usne rona to chod diya tha , lekin wo apna nirnay ni le pa rahi thi abhi bhi.
Ek din yu hi wo garden m bethi bacho ko khelte hue dekh rahi thi ki tabhi waha Rima aati h.
Rima to aapko yaad hogi hi na , ye wahi h jo sonam ki friend or senior hone k sath sath yaha ki teacher bhi h or isike sath apne hero ko flirt kerna mahanga pada tha.
Rima :- tu yaha bethi h or m tumhe pure ashram me dhund rahi hu.
Sonam apni tandra se bahar aate hue apni udasin aawaz me.
Sonam :- mujhe , kya baat h Rima koi kaam tha kya.
Rima sonam k side m bethte hue :- kya baat h sonu mane ek baat notice ki h jabse tu yaha aayi h bilkul gumsum rahati h , na kisi se baat kerti h or na hi ghulti milti h , tu itna kese badal gayi sonu.
Sonam :- samay sab badal deta h Rima, to k kis khet ki muli hu.
Rima. :- sonam tu mujhe apni dost manti h na to bata kya baat h tujhe meri kasam .
Sonam :- ye tune kya Kiya Rima , kasam kyu di.
Rima :- to tum sach bata hi ni rahi thi.
Sonam :- Rima meri bahan , m tujhe pura sach abhi to ni bata sakti , per itna samjh le meri dost ki teri is saheli ne apna pahale pyar ko hi kho diya h.
Sonam ki yu utptang bate jyada to Rima ko samjh ni aaraho thi , per wo itna samjh gayi thi ki mamla jarur pyar ka h or sonam abhi kisi esi confusion m h , jisse bahar aane k liye use ekant ki jarurat h.
Rima :- chal koi baat ni sonu , mujhe tujh per puura bharosa h , jab tumhe lage ki tum apni problem mujhse share ker sakti ho to bejijak kerna , per abhi to mere sath chalo chacha tumhe bula rahe h.
Sonam :- kya chacha ji , per kyu.
Rima :- kya pata yaar , mane pucha bhi to wo bole ki pahale m tumhe leker aayi tabhi batayenge.
Sonam :- ok
Fir dono saheliya sath me owner k office me pahunchte h to chacha bole
Chacha :- naina beta mane or Rima dono ne notice kiya h ki jabse aap yaha aayi ho tabse aap gumsum rahati ho or udas bhi
Aakhir baat kya h beta apne chacha ko to batao.
Sonam kuch ni bolti to owner bole
Chacha :- chalo koi baat ni beta , tumhari udasi ko tumharr chacha abhi dur ker denge.
Tumhare liye mere pas ek surprise gift h.
Ye bol sonam ko ek envelop pakda dete h , sonam jese hi wo envelop khol k dekhti h to khush ho jati h , kyunki usme Vrindavan samet pure brij mandal ka tour pass tha.
Or ho bhi kyu na ho sonam thahri ek Krishna bhakt or ek Krishna bhakt k liye isse badi khushi ka moka kya hoga ki use krishna ki bhumi p jane k sobhagya mile.
Sonam ka bhi vaha jane ka man bahut man tha , per use kabhi moka na mila tha , ye baat uske ChaCha bhi jante the , isliye hi to unhone achanak sonam ko yaha bulaya taki wo usse mil bhi sake or uski ye icha bhi puri ker sake.
Chacha :- kesa laga mera gift meri bachi ko.
Sonam khusi se apne chacha k gale lag :- thank you so much chacha Ji, m bata ni sakti m kitna khush hu
Chacha :- tum khush to tumhra ye chacha bhi khush beti , ab jaldi se tum or Rima packing ker lo , kal sham ki tum domo ki flight h.
Sonam or Rima ek sath :- ji chacha
Ye bol wo dono ek sath nikal pade
Wahi shani lok me.
Shani jo ye sab ghatna dhyan me bethe dekh rahe the , unhone muskurate hue ankhe kholi.
Shani :- hmm , Vrindavan , dhanya ho bhagwan aapki lila , kya marg chuna h apne sonam ko uski niyati tak pahuchane ka.
Ek or sonam karan ki shakti banne k marg pe agrasar hone ja rahi h , vahi dusri or naina bhi apne gantvya k najdik h , parantu is baat se anbhighya ki khatra uski soch se kayi jyada nikat or bada h or putra karan bhi apne dandnayak lila ka ek or adhyay aarambh kerne wala h.
Ab dekhna ye h ki in tino k marg bhin hone k bavjood bhi ye tino kab or kese ek honge.
Ye sab bol shani wapas anterdhyan ho gaye
Aaj k liye bas itna hi
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