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Thanks for the opinion... Pyasa bhoot to abhi abhi naya sarir paya hai. Badla lena abhi start nehi hua... Sayad apko meri next updates maza ayegi. Hope sobhai ji aapki Kahani ke liye Jo aapane topic Chuna hai vah bahut hi Shandar hai main aapke Kahani regularly pad raha hun per mujhe ismein ek Kami Lagi ki ismein jo bhoot Hai vah Kahin Se Bhi daravna Nahin Laga abhi tak bhoot hone a ke Kuchh To advantage dikhaiye thoda sa Kahani mein Khoon kharaba liye sirf sex scene Se Hi story main utna maja Nahin Pa raha hai thoda Badla aur thoda sa Khoon kharaba dekhne ki ichcha hai Ek acchi story likhne ke liye aapko bahut bahut dhanyavad
















