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ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Admi- (man Mae) apne sir par hath rakar soch raha tha ki yhe
bhgwan aj mere pass duniya ki har khushi hai sab kuch hai bas ek Chirag nhi hai
Ky mere pita ke kiye gaye karm ko mera pura pariwar bugte rahega
Or y sab soch kar uski aankhon mae ansu 😭 a jata hai
Or ek shadi suda mahila ati hai jo uski patni hai
Mahila- ap itna chinta mat kijiye mujhe pura wishwas hai ki hume hamre khandan ka Chirag jarur milega
Ab chalo apki betiya ane wali hogi
Admi - (Ashu poch kar) ha
Chalo
Or ase hi wakt bita gaya aur ek din achanak


ab age chalte hain

To dosto ab app sab soch rahe honge ki ye pati patni kon hai to socho 😂main baad mae bataynga kyuki mai pahle Update deta hu fir introduction 😁ye mera style hai 😎

To ye dono pati patni bahut amir hai par jitne amir utne hi dharmik aur parupkari hai jo log inko jante hai wo inke pariwar ki bahut izzat karte hai

To ek din jab inke bacche school gaye uhye the tabhi inki darwaje par ek dastak hui

- koi hai is ghar mae bahut pyasa hu agar jal mil sakta hai kya

andar se dono pati patni aawaj sunkar darwaje ki aur bade kab dono panuche tab unke samne ek bujurg the jo ki pile dhoti aur ek pila ghamcha( skarp) dale khada hua tha hath mae kamndal aur dusre hath mae rudrax ki mala thi wo sadhu bujurg jarur tha par uske mastak par ek tehj tha

dono pati patni ne unke char spars kiya sadhu bahut khush hua aur bola

sadhu- sada khush raho ishwar tumdono ki har manokamna puri kare

aadmi - ap kon hai baba aur hamre ghar kese padare

aurat- are ye app kya kar rahe ho pahle baba ko andar to ane do

sadhu- nahi nahi bitya

aurat - abhi - abhi apne mujhe beti bola hai kya app apni beti ki itni si baat nahi manege baba

aurat ki is baat ka sadhu baba ke pass koi jawab nahi tha aur wo ghar ke andar gae

dono pati patni ne baba ko ek lakdi ke takat par betha kar unke pawoo dhoe fir unko bhojan karya sadhu baba bahut khush hue aur bole

sadhu- bahut hi aache sanskar hai tum dono ko warana jitne bade ghar gaya sab ne apne darwaje se wapis lota diya tumne ek sadhu ki buk shant ki hai beti mere antar atma ko shant isilye ja jo tum dono ke dil mae barson ki tanana hai wo puri hogi

pati patni dono chok gae par aurat ki ankh bhar aai aur boli

aurat- baba app kya bol rahe hai

sadhu- beti ab tumhare rone ke din gae main janta hu tumko kis baat ka gham hai itni sono sokat hote hue bhi tumko apne parivaar ke chirag ki chinta hai

aurat - sach baba kya app bhavishya

sadhu( bich mae) - beti ek baat dhyan se suno koi kisi ka bhavishya nahi pata kar sakta ha anuman laga sakta hai aur tujhe ek bete ki parapti jarur hogo par mujhe ek vachan de

dono pati patni - vachan diya baba

sadhu - jab tujko santan ki prapti hogi tab tuje mere assram anaa hoga apne bacche ko lekar uska naamkarn waha hoga fir tumdono jesa chaho

dono pati patni bahut khush hogae aur baba ko vachan diya tab baba ne unko apne aasram ki jaan kari di tab baba apne aasram ki aur nikal gaya

"Samya kisi ke liye nahi rukta aur jo samya ko rokne ki kosis kare wo barbad ho gaya"

samya apni raftar se badta gaya aur un dono pati patni ko ye khush khabri mili ki wo maa banne wali

uski khushi ka koi alam nhi tha kyuki hai ek aurat ki zindagi ki sabse badi khushi maa banana hota aur ma apni hai santan ke liya bhagwon se bhi uncha hota hai

( dosto app sab ko ek bat bta du ki story mae insect to hoga par maa se nahi aur apna hero eklawta hoga isliye sagi bahan to hogi nahi)

to samya apni chal se age badne laga aur samya aa gaya uske peda hone ka

hospital mae operation room ke bahar 3log tensan😫main dikha rahe the aur bar bar operation room ki aur dhekh rahe the jinme 2 aadmi the aur ek aurat aur do choti choti bachiya jo soo rahe the

ab aadmi 1 - jo wahi pati tha

aadmi2_ uska chota bhai aur aurat 2- uski biwi thi

aadmi-2 bhaiya app jada chinata maat kariye dekhna operation acche se hoga aur bahbhi bhi tik hongi

aaddmi1- are kese chinta na karu andar meri biwi hai

aurat - bhaiya ye tik bol rahe hai app chinta maat kriye bas bhagwon se pratna kare sab tik hoga dekhna bhabhi aur bacha bilkul tik honge

aadmi1- tum sahi bolti ho bahu

kuch aur samya bit gaya ab ghadi main bajne wale the 12 charo aur sirf shanti sirf aur sirf shanti kabhi kabhi chamgadd aur kutto ki rone ki awaaj ke shath shath sunke patao ki awajj


hawa bhi aj yese bah rahi thi ki jiski wajah se pedo se ajib si awaj aa rahi thi

ssssssssssaaaaarrrr sssssssaaaarrr

purnima ki raat thi par jese badal aur chand ke bich jung chidi hui thi badal puri tarah se chand ki roshni ko niglne ki kossis kar raha ho aur chand apni roshni falane par wo raat thi

"red blood moon" ki

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mosum apna alag hi rang dikha raha tha bijliya ke shath- shath barish ho rahi thi ghadi mae awaj gunji

taaaannnnn taaaaaaannn taaaaan

aur idhar docter ke hatho mae ek sundar sa bacha jisko dekh kar koi bhi doctor ya nurse apna dhyan nahi hata paa rahi thi ek alag sa akarsan mae sab kedh ho gaye

par jub unhone bacche ki ankho ko dekha to sab daar gai aur tik usi wakt



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Excellent update.
 

Monsterboy

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Bhai
sabdo ka kafi axaa chayan kiya gya hai
starting me kux jada hi Engle vs demon kar diya par koi baat nhi
jaisa ki har story me ye hota hi hai
to adhiktar log in parts ko skip karna jada pasand karte hain
lekin der se hi sahi jo main character hai wo aa gya
as a reader mera to yahi opinion hoga ki story me thoda verities laao
jaise jaise character aage badhega usme add karte jao
warna sabhi story same ho jayengi
god vs demon ko le lo ya jo band ho gayi Subham ki story dekh lo unhone kux hatkar likha hai
to readers uska wait raat k 11baje tak karte hain
baki aap iss kahani k writer hain jaisa likhenge waise hi views milenge
 

Yash420

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Bhai Pura Mind-blowing Update
Lakin Bhai aap se ek sikayat he ki aap update toh late ker rahe ho lakin Bhai update chota bhi de rahe ho
Baki kahani Jabardast hai Bhai
 

king of darkness0411

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sorry guys maim aoko na update diya na reply aur wajha ye hai hamre ek karibi dost ki rode accident mae death ho gaya ladaka 21 saal tha isliye muje unke yaha hometown se bajar jaba ajj hi wapas aya hu kal update duga sayad 2 update ek shath du hope app naraz no ho ki writer update nahi de raha hai sorry again
 

Abhi123

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sorry guys maim aoko na update diya na reply aur wajha ye hai hamre ek karibi dost ki rode accident mae death ho gaya ladaka 21 saal tha isliye muje unke yaha hometown se bajar jaba ajj hi wapas aya hu kal update duga sayad 2 update ek shath du hope app naraz no ho ki writer update nahi de raha hai sorry again
Ok bhai koi baat nahi
 

Reza

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sorry guys maim aoko na update diya na reply aur wajha ye hai hamre ek karibi dost ki rode accident mae death ho gaya ladaka 21 saal tha isliye muje unke yaha hometown se bajar jaba ajj hi wapas aya hu kal update duga sayad 2 update ek shath du hope app naraz no ho ki writer update nahi de raha hai sorry again
Ok bhai
 

Rahul

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badhiya kahani hai
 

Shainky

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Bhai aaj yo update dene vale the na but av tak ek v update nhi aaya na...??????

aise kab tak wait kre hum..
 

king of darkness0411

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Update 7

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hawa bhi aj yese bah rahi thi ki jiski wajah se pedo se ajib si awaj aa rahi thi

ssssssssssaaaaarrrr sssssssaaaarrr

purnima ki raat thi par jese badal aur chand ke bich jung chidi hui thi badal puri tarah se chand ki roshni ko niglne ki kossis kar raha ho aur chand apni roshni falane par wo raat thi

"red blood moon" ki

image


mosum apna alag hi rang dikha raha tha bijliya ke shath- shath barish ho rahi thi ghadi mae awaj gunji

taaaannnnn taaaaaaannn taaaaan

aur idhar docter ke hatho mae ek sundar sa bacha jisko dekh kar koi bhi doctor ya nurse apna dhyan nahi hata paa rahi thi ek alag sa akarsan mae sab kedh ho gaye

par jub unhone bacche ki ankho ko dekha to sab daar gai aur tik usi wakt

ab age

doctor ke hatho mae wo baccha khel raha tha aur doctor aur nuras kisi pathar ke but ki tarah us bacche ko nihar rahi thi baccha tha hi itna masum ki koi bhi usse apni nazar na hata paye

par jub doctor ne usski ankho ko dekha to ek minat ke liye dar 😰 gai kyuki uski ankho ka color dark red tha jese ankho mae khun uthar ayaha ho tabhi acchank jese samya ruk ss gaya har chij ruk gai sirf us bacche ko chod kar room mae ek roshni fell gai aur uss roshni se ek hath uss bacche ke upar gaya aur uski ankho ka color dark blue ho gaya aur roshni bhi gayab ho gaya aur jo samya ruka hua tha fir se chalne laga aur baccha bhi rone laga

tabhi nursh bahar nikai aur

nursh- mr sing mubarak ho app pita ban gaye ladka hua hai

To imtro time ( dosto abhi short intro dunga taki app log confuse na ho jaye uske baat ek full intro dunga with image)

mr smrat sing - hero ke pita

mis sima sing - hero ki ma ( apke liye mom 😇😇)

mr samar sing - smart ke chotr bhai aur hero ke chacha

miss simar sing - samar ki patni aur hero ki chachi

baccha ka abhi koi intro nahi hoga unko intro sidhe full intro mae bas itns ki samar aur simar ke do bacche hai

back to story

jub nursh ne ye khushkabri sunai to samar samrat ke gake lagta hua

samar - mubarak ho bhiya mubarak ho app papa ban gayi aur main chacha hamre parivar ka varish aa gaya bhiya

samrat( nam ankho ke shath) - ha mere bhai tujhko bhi bahut bahut mubarak akhir mujhse jada khushi tum dono ko hai

tabhi samrat ki nazar simar ( bahu) par padi jiski ankho se anshu bah rahe the

smarat samar se- dekh bahu kyu ro rahi hai ja chup kara usko main tab tak doctor se baat kar leta hu

samar apni biwi ke pass jakar uske kandhe par hath rakhkar

samar- ye kya hai simar aj wo hua jiske liye tumne hamne kitni manat kiya aur year sub mooke par tum ansu baha rahi ho

simar( apne ansu ko pochte hue) - are ye to khushi ke anshu hai app nahi samjh pawoge jante hai jub bi didi ( sima) mere baccho pae aona pyar lutati to unki mamta dekh mere man bhi hota ki kas didi ki bhi koi aulad hoti jispar mae apna payar luta sakti aur aj dekho mera sapna pura ho gaya sab un gurudev ki kripa hai

samar- tum sahi bol rahi ho simar hum sab ne aasa hi chod di thi par un gurudev ki baat sach sabit hui

aur dono kuch bate karte rahe ab samrat ki aur kahani modte hai


samrat doctor se - nurse meri biwi aur bacche kese hai kya main unse mil sakta hu

doctor - mr samrat ma aur baccha dono bilkul tik hai koi chinta ki baat nahi hai aur abhi abhi biwi ko nind ka injection diya gaya taki toda unko aram mile aur bacche ki kuch normal janch ki jaa rahi hai fir app dono se mil sakte hai

samrat itna sunke toda relax ho gaya aur ek nurse ko bola kar
apni jeb se noto ki gadi nikak kar
- pure hospital main mitai batwa do
nurse khushi - khushi chali jaati hain

todi der baad doctor samrat aur unki family ko andar ane ko bolte hai aur samrat ke hatho main uske bacche ko sop deti hai tabhi sima ko bhi hose ane lagta hai to

simar- main didi ki madad karti hu

samrat aur samar dono ko kuch bhan hi nahi raha ki simar ne kya bola kyuki dono to bas us pyare se bacche main kho gaya the aur dono ki ankh nam ho chuki baccha bhi dono ko dekj kar muskura raha tha

tab tak sima puri tarah se hose mae aa chuki thi

sima( tode dard se) - choti mera baccha kaha hai

simar- ab app tik to hai na didi aur hamara beta bilkul tik hai rukiye main lati hu usko

simar jake donoko awaj ddeti hai par dono koi response nahi dete

tab simar samar ki hila kar bolti hai - are sara din kya app dono baccho hi payar karoge are abhi uski maa aur chachi bhi dijiye

dono bhai bacche ko dena nahi chahte the par dena pada tabhi doctor boli

doctor - app dono bahsr jaiye bacche ko dudh pilana hai dono bhai bahar ki aur nikal gae

sima dard mse thi par jab wo aone bacche ko dekhti hai to jese uske sarir ka room khil utha uske andar ek nai urja aa gai ho aur uska sara dard mit gaya

jese ki har ma apni santan ko is duniya mae lane ke liya kitne dard ka samna karti hai aur apne bacche ko dekhkar aona sara dard bhul jati hai
par aj is dhuniya main wahi aulad apne hi ma baap ko ghar se bahar nikal deta hai 😭 jisko is duniya mae lane ke liye aur aur palane ke liya ma baap na jane kitni ki muskili ko samna karte hai jab wahi aulad uske budape mai jab usnko sabse jada jarurat hoti hai tabhi wo unko unhi ke ghar se nikal deta hai

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to jab sima aone bacche ko dekhti hai to usko chumne lagti hai aur rone bhi lagti hai

simar- didi chaliye rona band kijiye aur mere bacche ko dudh pils dijiye usko bhuk lagi ho

kher ab isnko yahi chodte hai

sima ko kuch din bad hospital se chuti mil gai aur wo log ghar wapas aa gae

jaha rat ko sabhi log holl mae bethe hue the

samar- bhiya ab hame hamare bete ka namkarn bhi kara dena chahiye

samrat- to tik bol raha hai chote aur shath mae ek mega party bhi

sima- wo sab tik hai ji par sabse pahake isko gurudev ke asram bhi le jana hai

simar- koi baat nahi didi ek kaam karte app aur bhiya dono guruji ke asram nikakl jana main aur ye (samar) party ki sari tayari kar lenge

samar- simar ka idea tik hai bhiya app log kal hi nikak jaiye guru je assram

" zindagi bhi kyu khel khelti hai dost jinko aona samjha usne hi zindagi ka sabse bada dhoka de diya "
 
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