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Nice story bro
Ye kon hai Jo hero ko chup ke dekh rahi hai 🤔🤔
Bro aaj nahi to kal ek aur update de Dena aur complete karna please regular rakhna nahi to aise flow bigad jata hai
 
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घंट चुतिया हीरो है। अबे साले भाग जाता। ये साला तो मिमियाने लगा। कोई इतना भी कैसे चूतियां हो सकता है। अरे हमे परेशान करने वाली टीचर को हमने जब उसको चोदा तो साली रोज हमारे(मेरे) लिए बिरयानी फ्राई मटन कभी मटन करी फिश करी कभी फिश बिरयानी तो कभी वेज सब्जी लाती। रोज टिफिन ले आती। और दोस्तो वह मुस्लिम है। आज भी हफ्ते में 2 बार उससे मिलता हू।
Bro?? Protagonist pahle kamjor hi dikhaya jata hai, story ke shuru se hero ko all-mighty-powerful dikhaya nahi ja sakta. More like a character's journey, it should be a journey. Maine waise hi plot likha hai. And Aryan the protagonist chutiya toh nahi hai, read the narrations carefully, maine mention bhi kiya hai narrations mein. past trauma is the main reason here.
 
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Shaandar update
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Nice story bro
Thanks bro.
Ye kon hai Jo hero ko chup ke dekh rahi hai 🤔🤔
Actually I am happy, finally Kisi Ne iss chizz ko notice to Kiya. Haan! Bilkul koi hai. But aap ko kaise pata ki woh woh dekh rahi hai? Woh dekh raha bhi toh so Sakta hai :D
Bro aaj nahi to kal ek aur update de Dena aur complete karna please regular rakhna nahi to aise flow bigad jata hai
Reader's saath bane rahe toh Chand per jaenge ham :punk:
 
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