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Thriller RAAZ..... (Completed)

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Abhay ki samajh nahi aa raha tha ke jo vo dekh raha hai vo asliyat thi ya uski aankha ka dhokha. Usne video ko ek pal ke liye pause kiya aur Kamini par zoom kiya, is ummeed ke saath ke shayad video mein koi aur ho jo Kamini jaisi dikhti ho par ummeed galat saabit hui. Jo vo do dekh raha tha vo bilkul vahi tha jo dikhai de raha tha. Koi nazar ka dhokha nahi, koi video ki gadbad nahi. Vo sach Kamini hi thi.

Usne phir se play ka button dabaya aur video dekhne laga.

Video ke saath sound recording nahi tha ilsiye keh pana mushkil tha ke Renuka aur Kamini ke beech kya baat ho rahi thi par andaza lagaya ja sakta tha ke Renuka apni jaan ki bheekh maang rahi thi aur Kamini Vikram ka istemaal karte hue use majboor kar rahi thi ke vo suicide kare.

Agle 15 min tak dono ke beech kuchh baat hoti rahi. Renuka baar baar Kamini ke aage haath jodti rahi. Rassi ka phanda ab bhi uske haath mein tha. Zahir si baat thi ke kisi ko apni jaan lene par majboor karna aasan kaam nahi tha par Kamini bhi apni jagah se tas se mas na hui. Vikram ko usne ek haath se uthaya hua aur doosre haath mein thami revolver ka rukh Vikram ki taraf tha. Achanak usne apne ek haath ka istemaal karte hue hi Vikram ke baal pakad kar khinche.

Vikram shayad zor se munh khol kar chillaya aur Kamini ne agle hi pal Revolver ki nali ko uske munh mein ghusa diya.

Uski ye harkat kaam kar gayi. Ek maan ke saamne uske doodh-peete bachche ke munh mein agar koi revolver ghusa de toh uska reaction vahi hoga jo Renuka ka hua. Usne agle hi pal fauran ek chair ko utha kar bed par rakha aur uske uper chadh kar khadi ho gayi. Haath mein pakdi rassi ke ek kone ko usne ceiling fan ke hook se nikalte hue neeche giraya aur phir chair se neeche utari. Uska rona ab band ho chuka tha aur vo bas bejaan si nazron se kabhi Kamini toh kabhi Vikram ki taraf dekhti. Chair se neeche utar kar usne rassi ke kone ko kamre ke darwaze ke handle se bandha aur phir table ki drawer se ek pen aur paper nikal kar kuchh likhne lagi.

Abhay janta tha ke vo kya likh rahi thi. Ye vo suicide note tha jo baad mein use aur police ko milne wala tha. Kamini ke hilte hue honth dekh kar lag raha tha ke vo suicide letter bhi Renuka ko khud hi dictate kar rahi thi.

Letter likhne ke baad Renuka ne pen ko paper ke uper rakha aur phir palat kar Kamini aur Vikram ko dekhne lagi. Uske chehre ke aasar us waqt kisi aise sipahi ki tarah the jo apni marzi ke khilaff majboor hokar hathyaar daal chuka ho. Na toh ab vo ro hi rahi thi aur na uski aankhon mein koi aansoo tha. Kuchh pal tak vo khamoshi se khadi Kamini ki taraf dekhti rahi. Phir un dono mein kuchh baat hui. Renuka shayad Kamini se ek aakhri baar apne bete ko thaamne ki guzarish kar rahi thi aur Kamini mana karte hue use chair par chadhne ko keh rahi thi. Revolver ki nali ab bhi rote hue Vikram ke munh mein hi thi.

Kuchh pal ki behas ke baad Renuka ek baar phir chair par chadhi aur phande ko apne gale mein daal kar kas liya. Phir jo hua vo within seconds ho gaya. Kamini ne bala ki furti se Vikram ke munh se gun nikali aur use kisi khilone ki tarah bed par uchhal diya. Vikram jakar bed par gira. Is harkat par Renuka ke munh se cheekh nikli. Kamini ne agle hi second mein Renuka ke pairon ke neeche se chair khiska di, jaise use khud darr ho ke kahin Renuka apna irada na badal de.

Bete ko bed par girte dekh Renuka ke munh se nikli cheekh uske gale mein hi ghut kar reh gayi hogi kyunki agle hi lamhe vo gardan mein phase rassi ke phande par jhool gayi aur uska poora shareer bin pani ki machhli ki taraf phadakne laga.

Isse aage Abhay dekh nahi saka. Iske baad kya hua tha, vo khud bhi bahut achhi tarah janta tha. Apne laptop ko usne ek jhakte ke saath band kiya aur chehre par avishvash ke bhaav liye apna sar pakad kar beth gaya.

"I am sorry" Kuchh seconds baad apne pichhe se aayi aawaz sunkar vo uchhal pada.

Vo video mein itna khoya hua tha ke use andaza hi nahi hua ke kab Kamini uske pichhe aa khadi hui thi.

"You want to explain this?" Kamini ke chehre se saaf zahir tha ke vo jaanti thi ke video mein Abhay kya dekh raha tha.

"I did this only for you" Kamini ke aawaz rooansi ho chali thi, "Because I loved you so much"

"Loved me, you loved me?" Uski baat sunte hi Abhay bhadak sa utha aur sofe se uth kar khatarnaak andaaz mein uski taraf badha.

Par Kamini ne jo kiya usne Abhay ko apni jagah par rukne par majboor kar diya. Usne fauran apne bag mein haath dala aur ek revolver nikal kar Abhay ki taraf taan di. Ye vahi revolver thi jisse usne kuchh din pehle Pratap Rana ki jaan li thi aur jo ke usne video mein Vikram ke uper taan rakhi thi.

"Kya karogi?" Abhay revolver dekh kar mazak udane wale andaaz mein hasa, "Mujhe bhi goli maarogi?"

Jawab mein Renuka ne kuchh na kaha. Sirf revolver haath mein pakde khamoshi se Abhay ki taraf dekhti rahi.

"Kyun? Why?" Abhay ne kuchh pal baad phir sawal kiya.

"Dont you still see it?" Kamini boli, "She was never right for you. She was never the girl for you"

"And you are? A cold-blooded murderer?"

"Maine jo kiya sirf tumhare liye kiya, sirf tumhare pyaar ke liye"

"My love was never yours" Abhay chilla pada, "It was always hers. Guess what, I still do not love you. Tumse shaadi sirf main apne bete ki bhalai ke liye kar raha tha par I am still in love with my wife"

"No you are not" Jawab mein Kamini bhi poore zor se chillayi, "You never loved her. If you did then you never would have doubted her, treated her bad, tried to spy on her, made her life a living hell and beat her up like a bloody animal. You never loved her. And guess what, I didnt kill her, you did. You killed her the day when you assured yourself that your wife was a whore, a worthless woman who was cheating on you. Tum kabhi is baat ko accept hi nahi kar paaye ke Renuka jaisi had se zyada khoobsurat ladki tumhari biwi thi, ek aam si shakal soorat wale insaan ki. You were insecure, you always were. You were only looking for an excuse to turn you insecurity into trust issues, and you grabbed the first chance that you had at it"


Kamre mein kuchh pal ki khamoshi chha gayi. Kahin apne dil mein Abhay bhi janta tha ke Kamini sach bol rahi thi.
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"She never cheated on me, did she?"

Kamini ne jawab na diya.

"Please, just tell me the truth, the whole truth. I beg of you"

"What for Abhay? It isnt going to change anything. It isnt going to bring her back"

"Please, just the truth. She never cheated on me, did she?"

Kamini kuchh pal tak khamoshi se use dekhti rahi aur phir ek lambi saans khinch kar boli,

"No"

"Oh god" Abhay lagbhag apne baal nochta hue sofe par gir sa pada, "What hav I done"

"Listen to me Abhay" Kamini ne ek kadam aage badhaya, "Lets just forget about this please. Lets just go back to a few hours ago when you had not seen this video"

"Forget about this?" Abhay ne uski taraf ghoor kar dekha aur Kamini phir apni jagah par hi ruk gayi, "Forget about that you killed my wife? That you pulled a gun on my son?"

Kamini apni jagah khadi mayus aankhon se uski taraf dekhti rahi.

"Wait a minute" Abhay kuchh yaad karne ki koshish karta hua bola, "It was all you, wasnt it?"

Kamini ne jawab na diya.

"Please for god's sake. Tell me the truth. It was all you, wasnt it?"

"Yes"

"That day when you called me to meet you for lunch at that mall, you knew Kamini was going to be there. You wanted me to see her with another man and start doubting her?"

"Nahi" Kamini ne zid chhodne wale andaaz mein kaha,"That day was just a co-incidence. I just called you for lunch, mujhe nahi pata tha ke Renuka bhi vahan aayegi"

"Toh vo aadmi?"

"Uske office ka koi tha, they had a client meeting in that hotel. Vo aksar clients meeting ke liye us hotel ka istemaal karte the. Renuka ne mujhe baad mein bataya tha. Vo aksar vahan jaati thi office ki conferences ke liyes par us din tumhara chehra dekh kar main samajh gayi thi ke tumhein Renuka par shak ho gaya hai. Main sirf tum dono ke beech doubt create karna chahti thi so that you would divorce each other"

"Jhooth kyun bola tha usne mujhse us din ke office mein hi hai? Uske baad usne apna phone bhi off kar diya tha"

"Keh nahi sakti par shayad office ki meeting thi isliye keh diya ho ke office mein hi hai aur meeting ke dauran phone off kar diya ho. Tumhara birthday bhi shayad us din ke aas paas hi aur vo tumhare liye kuchh surprise gift bhi dena chah rahi thi shayad isliye tumhein batana na chah rahi ho ke shopping ke liye aayi hai. Us birthday par usne shayad tumhein ek ghadi gift ki thi kaafi mehengi aur vahin mall pe ek watches ka showroom bhi hai, isliye shayad tumhein surpirse dene ke liye jhooth kaha ho"

"So it was all you then" Abhay ne yaad karte hue kaha, "Raat ko phone par tum hoti thi na uske saath kyunki har subah jab bhi main uska phone dekhta tha toh usmein raat ko tumhara number bota tha aur baad mein ek unknown number se call"

"Haan it was me. Tum usse baat nahi kar rahe the, uspe shak kar rahe the and I was he common friend. Vo sahare ke liye mere paas aati thi"

"Aur vo unknown numbers?"

"Mere hi the jo ke maine sirf is kaam ke liye hi le rakhe the. Vo mujhe call karti thi toh main kisi bahane se palat kar use kisi unknown number se callkarti kyunki main jaanti thi ke tum uska cell dekhoge"

"Wow. Ek taraf vo tumhare paas sahare ke liye aati thi aur doosri taraf main aur tum dono hi taraf se faayda utha rahi thi. Let me guess, vo condoms kewrapper jo mujhe ghar mein mil rahe the ...."

"Maine hi giraye the"

"Of course, mere ghar mein free pass sirf ek tumhein hi haasil tha because you were always like a family to us. Tumhein kaise pata ke main aur Renuka kaun sacondom use karte the?"

"Renuka ne hi bataya tha ke tum sirf ek hi brand ka condom use karte the"

"Us din jab Renuka tumhare saath thi aur maine uske cell pe phone kiya toh ek aadmi ne call receive ki thi"

"Vo mera hi number tha, fake ID par liya hua tha. Tumne call ki toh maine sadak chalte ek aadmi ko kaha ke call receive kare ye kehkar ke koi ladka mujhe pareshan kar raha hai"

"Wow Kamini, wow. Well played. Kaun keh sakta hai ke ek aam si dikhne wali ladki ka dimag itna shaatir chalega but I guess its no surprise at all. The way you solved the Ravi Rana wala case, I mean it was literelly you who did it. TUm saath na hoti toh kuchh na pata chalta mujhe and they way you killed Pratap Rana. Ek second nahi lagaya tha tumne uspar goli chalane mein aur use maarne ke baad tum ekdam calm thi, koi ghabrahat nahi, koi pareshani nahi. Hairani toh mujhe bahut hui thi is baat par"

"Usne tumhein maarne ki koshish ki thi, vo toh uski kismat achhi thi ke mere haath mein us waqt ek gun thi nahi toh uski toh main kitchen knife se boti boti karti"

"Is this gun really your father's?" Abhay ne revolver ki taraf ishara kiya jo abhi bhi uspar tani hui thi, "Ya vo bhi jhooth hi bola tha us din jab maine tumse Pratap Rana ki maut ke baad puchha tha ke ye gun kahan se aayi?"

"Jhooth bol rahi thi. Gun meri hi hai"

"Kahan se aayi?"

"Kya farak padta hai?"

"Yeah I guess. Itna shaatir dimag hai tumhara toh gun bhi kahin na kahin se aa hi gayi hogi. Tell me something, how did you avoid getting any call recorded.

Maine spycams lagaye hue the ghar mein par kisi bhi cam par tum record nahi hui kabhi"

"Tumne khud hi bataya tha mujhe is sabke baare mein"

"Oh yeah right, aur jiske baad tumne mujhe lecture bhi pilaya tha ke main galat kar raha hoon, mujhe Renuka par bharosa karna chahiye vagerah vagerah"

"Main jaanti thi ke ghar mein kahan kahan tumne camera fit kiya hai, ke Renuka ki calls, emails vagerah tum track kar rahe ho"

"Aur isi vajah se tumne Renuka ke cell par usse baat karni band kar di kyunki tum jaanti thi ke uski calls main sun sakta hoon"

Kamini ne haan mein sar hilaya.

"Jo Renuka mujhe ghar se aksar gayab milti thi?"

"Main hi bulati thi use"

"Us din jab vo tumhare saath thi aur uske cell ke saare messages mere paas aa rahe the ...."

"Tumne hi bataya tha ke uske sim ka ek clone tumhare paas hai"

"Vo message tumne uske cell se bheja tha?"

"Vo uthkar washroom gayi thi toh uske phone se vo love message maine bhej diya"

"Jis number par bheja tha of course vo tumhara tha"

"Nahi, maine Renuka ki ID chura kar ek number issue kara rakha tha apne address pe. Maine usi sim par message bheja tha taake agar tum uske number ko run karo toh Renuka ke naam par hi dikhaye uske so called boyfriend ka number"

"Ek baat aur batao, tumhein kaise pata tha ke main aur Renuka mujhse is baare mein koi baat nahi karegi. Kabhi darr nahi laga ke hamne aapas mein kabhi baat kar li toh tumhari sachchai saamne aa sakti hai?"

"Jis tarah se tum mujhse baat kar rahe the vaise hi Renuka bhi mujhse roz baat karti thi. I became her best friend as well"

"Ohhhhhh" Abhay samajhne wale andaaz mein bola, "Toh do tarfa khel tha ye. Ek taraf main ye sochta raha ke Renuka mujhe dhokha de rahi hai aur doosri taraf vo bechari ye sochti rahi ke main use dhokha de raha hoon?"

"Haan"

"Isi liye usne mujhe manane ki koshish, mujhse baat karne ki koshish band kar di thi. Jahan ek taraf main ye soch raha tha ke vo shayad apne guilt ki vajah se aisa kar rahi hai, vahin haqeeat ye thi ke vo apni narazgi ki vajah se mujhse baat nahi kar rahi thi"

Kamini ne koi jawab na diya. Sirf chup-chap Abhay ko dekhti rahi.

"Ye camera Renuka ne lagaya tha?" Abhay ne spycam wale pen ko uthate hue kaha.

Kamini ne haan mein sar hilaya.

"You knew about this?"

"Vo tum par bahut zyada shak kar rahi thi aur divorce ke baare mein soch rahi thi. Jis tarah tumhein shak tha ke tumhare pichhe vo kisi aur ko ghar bulati hai usi tarah use shak tha ke uske peeth pichhe tum kisi aur aurat ko yahan laate ho. Court mein tumhein bewafa saabit karne ke liye usne ye cams lagaye the"

"Tumhein nahi pata tha iske baare mein ke kahan lagaye hain?"

"Pata tha, khud nikal kar le gayi thi main saare us din par ek ye reh gaya tha"

"Jab Renuka mujhse divorce lene ka soch hi rahi thi toh use maara kyun?"

"Us din subah main Renuka se milne aayi thi aur uske phone se chup chap ek message bhej kar chali gayi thi. Tumne vo message dekh liya aur Renuka ko maar-peet kar chale gaye. Uske baad Renuka ne phone karke mujhe bulaya tha aur galti se vo doosra phone mere bag mein hi reh gaya tha. Jab main yahan aayi toh Renuka ne mujhe vo message dikhaya. Use khud samajh nahi aa raha tha ke vo message uske cell mein kahan se aa gaya..."

"Aur uske baad usne tumhare saamne hi us number pe call ki. Number tumhare bag mein baja. Renuka ne tumse us baare mein puchha, tumne zaroor koi bahana banaya hoga par bevakoof toh vo thi nahi, usne do aur do chaar kar liye honge"

"Poori tarah nahi. Maine use kaha tha ke jab main thodi der pehle aayi thi toh mere cell mein balance nahi tha aur apne boyfriend ko maine uske number se message bhej diya tha. Uske baad main apne boyfriend se milne gayi thi aur mere boyfriend ka phone mere paas reh gaya tha par usmein kayi baatein aisi thi jinka tuk nahi ban raha tha jaise ke maine us message mein husband likha tha par mere koi husband tha hi nahi. Mere us message ki vajah se Renuka ko tumne itna maara tha, is lihaaz se Renuka ko mujh par chillana chahiye tha ke maine aisa kyun kiya use bina bataya par vo kuchh nahi boli, sirf chup rahi. Darr mujhe uska nahi tumhara tha ke tum do aur do chaar kar loge. Maine bahana banaya aur vo chup ho gayi thi us din par uske chehre se saaf zahir tha ke use mujhpar shak ho gaya hai. Main jaanti thi ke us din shaam ko vo zaroor tumse us baare mein baat karegi. Bhale mere baare mein kuchh na kahe par tumhein ye zaroor batayegi ke jis message ko dekh kar tumne use itna maara vo Kamini ne bheja tha"

Aage kisi sawal ki zaroorat nahi thi. Abhay jaanta tha ke uske baad Kamini ne kya kiya tha.

"Ab?" kuchh pal ki khamoshi ke baad Kamini ne kaha.

"I cant let you get away with it" Abhay ne jawab diya, "I wont. Either you kill me or I will have you pay back for what you did"

"Kill you?" Kamini uski baat sunkar has padi, "You know that doesnt sound like a bad idea, only If I had thought of it earlier. Tumhein maar hi deti kuchh arsa pehle toh itna kuchh hota hi nahi. Tum the saare fasad ki jad, tumhare liye main pyaar mein itni andhi ho gayi thi ke sahi galat kuchh nahi dikha. Sahi keh rahe ho tum, tumhein hi maar dena chahiye tha"

"Maar hi diya tumne indirectly, ab chhoda kya hai?"

"I want you to remember something Abhay. Bahut tarsi hoon main tumhare liye. Bevakoof nahi hoon main, jaanti hoon ke jo maine kiya vo bahut galat kiya aur ab kuchh bhi sahi hone ki koi ummeed nahi hai. Sirf isi liye khamoshi se khadi tumhare saare sawalon ke jawab de rahi thi. Ab jis mod par main aur tum aa gaye hain vahan se vaapsi mumkin nahi. Dil ke haathon majboor thi main. Bachpan se hi sabne bataya ke meri shaadi tumse hogi, mere gharwalo ne bhi yahi kaha aur tumhare gharwalo ne bhi. Bachpan se hi dil mein ye baat is qadar bas gayi thi ke kab main tumhare ishq mein baawli ho gayi, pata hi nahi chala aur jab tum mere bajay kisi aur ke ho gaye toh toot gayi thi main. Kuchh badal gaya tha mere andar. Pehle tumse mohabbat karti thi sirf par Renuka ke aane ke baad tumse mohabbat ke saath saath nafrat bhi karne lagi thi. Renuka ko maine sirf isliye nahi maara ke main tumhein haasil karna chahti thi. Sach toh ye hai ke iske saath saath ye bhi khyaal dil mein tha ke kam se kam main tumhein us takleef ka kuchh taste doongi jo tumhari vajah se mujhe hui thi. Bure kaam ka nateeja bura hi hota hai Abhay. Renuka ki laash par chadh kar tumhein haasil karni ki koshish ki hai maine, poori kaise ho sakti thi"

Abhay ne koi jawab na diya, sirf Kamini ki taraf dekhta raha.

"Alvida Abhay. Zindagi bhar tumhare liye tadpi main aur ab dekho, tumhare liye tadapti hi ja rahi hoon. Manzil ke itna kareeb aakar maut aa gayi" Kehte hue Kamni ne Revolver ko apne sar par lagaya aur Trigger khincha.

Abhay ne na kuchh kiya aur na kaha. Sirf khamoshi se Kamini ko dekhta raha.

THE END
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Uske agle hi din meri maan ke zor daalne par Renuka ne office se maternity leave le li. Halanki vo abhi sirf mushkil se ek mahina pregnant thi par meri maan ne use office jaane se saaf mana kar diya. Uske office wale bhi is shart par maan gaye ke vo rozana kuchh ghante ke liye ghar se kaam karegi.

Jahan mere maan baap is baat ko lekar behad khush the vahin mere toh jaise armano par pani phir gaya tha. Kahin apne dil mein main is baat par yakeen kar chuka tha ke Renuka ki kokh mein pal raha bachcha mera nahi tha. Hamare ghar mein ek naya member judne wala tha aur har koi bas usi ki taiyyari mein laga hua tha. Sara din ghar mein kabhi is baat par charcha rehti ke ladka hoga ya ladki toh kabhi is baat par ke bachche ka naam kya rakhenge. Jab bada ho jaayega toh kaun se school mein bhejenge, bada hokar vo kya banega vagerah vagerah. Par mere dimag mein in sabse hatkar ek alag hi soch badhti ja rahi thi.

Sabse badi baat jo mujhe pareshan kar rahi thi vo ye thi ke us din Renuka ke saath vo ladka kaun tha. Kaun tha jo meri bagal se meri biwi ko nikal le gaya aur mujhe khabar tak nahi hui. Peshe se main ek investigative journalist tha, is tarah ki baatein pata lagana mera kaam tha. Maine faisla kiya tha ke agle kuchh din tak Renuka par nazar rakhunga, uski har movement ka pata lagaoonga ke kahan jaati hai, kisse milti hai aur kitna waqt kahan guzarti hai. Par uske maternity leave lene ke baad mera ye plan fail ho gaya. Usne maternity leave kya li, ghar se toh usne jaise nikalna hi chhod diya. Bas sara din ghar par meri maan ke saath bethi baatein karti rehti thi aur agar ghar se nikalti bhi toh maan ke saath. Kayi baar chupke se maine un dono ka pichha kiya ye sochkar ke shayad vo maan ko kuchh bahana banakar chori se us ladke se mile par aisa kuchh hua nahi. Vo jis kaam se nikalte the nipta kar ghar vaapis aa jaate the. Na toh vo maan se alag hoti thi aur na hi beech mein kahin koi use milta tha.

Doosri baat ye ke main pata lagana chahta tha ke bachcha mera hai ya nahi. Yun toh mujhe yakeen tha ke bachche ka baap main nahi hoon par phir bhi apne dil ki tasalli ke liye ek baar confirm karna chahta tha. Kuchh doctors se maine pata kiya toh jawab ye mila ke is tarah ka test karne ke liye kuchh mahine wait karna padega. Pregnancy ke shuru ke dino mein is tarah ka koi test nahi kiya ja sakta.

Par pareshani ki baat ye thi ke aisa koi test karaya kaise jaaye. Zahir si baat thi ke main asal vajah toh Renuka ko bata nahi sakta tha. Jo bhi karna tha use bina bataye karna tha. Par phir iske liye kisi aise doctor ki bhi zaroorat thi jo is kaam merin khamoshi se mera saath de. Mere saath saath vo bhi Renuka se jhooth bole ke normal koi test kar raha hai aur baad mein nateeja chahe kuchh bhi ho, bachcha mera ho ya na ho, is baat ko bahar na nikalne de, sirf apne tak rakhe.

Renuka ki jasoosi karne ka ab mere paas sirf ek hi tareeka tha. Uske phone aur laptop ko track karna. Kayi baar maine uska phone utha kar contact list, call list aur inbox mein messages dekhe par aisa kuchh nahi mila jo mujhe uske aashiq ka naam aur pata bata sakta. Vo jo bhi kar rahi thi bahut hi hoshiyari se kar rahi thi aur mere paas sivaay uske phone aur laptop ko track karne ke aur koi rasta nahi bacha tha. Kaam mushkil nahi tha. Ek aadmi tha meri pehchan mein jo ye mere liye kar sakta tha, Akram Ballebaaz.

"Kya haal hain sarkar, bade din baad idhar ka rasta bhoole" Main Akram se milne gaya toh vo bahut hi garam joshi se mujhse mila.

Uska naam Akram Ballebaaz kyun tha ye koi nahi janta tha sivaay uske aur vo kisi ko batata nahi tha. Asli naam kya tha ye bhi koi nahi janta tha aur sab use bas Akram Ballebaaz hi keh kar bulate the. Yahan tak ke uske driving licence aur passport par bhi uska naam Akram Ballebaaz hi tha. Aage pichhe uska koi nahi tha aur koi nahi janta tha ke vo kaun tha, kahan se aaya tha par aadmi kaam ka tha. Bina kisi degree aur formal education ke computers aur electrical gadgets ki bahut hi zabardast knowledge thi use.

"Ek kaam tha yaar" Maine kaha.

"Bataiye kiski jasoosi karni hai ab" Vo bola, "Par pehle ye bataiye ke garam lenge ya thanda"

Ye bhi uski bahut purani aadat thi. Apne paas aane wale har insaan ko kuchh khila pila kar zaroor bhejta tha, bhale hi saamne wala lakh mana karta rahe. Isse pehle bhi jab bhi main usse mila toh kuchh kha pikar hi nikla, bhale hi mera dil ho ya na ho. Is waqt bhi main janta tha ke mana karke kuchh haasil nahi hoga isliye khamoshi se use kuchh thanda laane ke liye bol diya. Usne phone uthaya aur kisi ko 2 cold drinks aur samose laane ko kaha.

"Ek baat bata Akram"

"Kahiye"

"Tu sala sara din yahan betha khata rehta hai aur phir bhi hai single pasli?"

Aur ye haqeeqat bhi tha. Vo apne office mein betha sara din bhains ki tarah jugali karta rehta tha par phir bhi itna dubla tha ke agar hawa chale toh udne ka darr ho jaaye.

"Allah ka karam samajh lijiye bas" Usne haskar jawab diya.

"Achha ek toh mujhe ek sim ka clone chahiye" Main matlab ki baat par aate hue kaha.

"Ho jaayega"

"Aur doosra mujhe ek laptop mein koi aisa bug ya virus daalna hai jo us laptop se jaane wali har email ki ek copy mujhe forward kare. Agar Skype, Yahoo ya MSN jaisi kisi chat service ke zariye koi chat ki ja rahi ho toh vo chat save kare aur mujhe email kar de"

"Email wala toh aasan hai, vo toh mil jaayega par ye chat wala zara tricky hoga"

"Ho paayega?"

"Haan ho toh jaayega par ek do din lagenge"

"Uski tension nahi hai. Jab taiyyar ho jaaye toh bata dena main laptop leta aaoonga"

"Kiska laptop hai?"

"Hai kisi ka. Ek kaam aur karna hai, ek landline tap karna hai ke jo bhi call incoming ya outgoing us phone se ho vo kahin record ho jaaye"

"Haan ho jaayega par jaake ek chhota sa device phone ke andar bethana padega"

"Vo toh tu jab chaahe kar dena. Mera hi landline hai"

"Apna phone tap kar rahe ho?" Usne hairat se meri taraf dekhte hue puchha.

"Haan yaar" Maine jawab diya, "Karna padta hai kabhi kabhi aisa bhi?"

"Par kyun?" Usne hairani se mujhse puchha.

"Arrey aisa kuchh nahi hai, aajkal zara ajeeb ajeeb se phone aa rahe hain ghar par aur uper se mera kuchh kaam bhi aisa hai. Toh sochta hoon ke ghar par kuchh install kara loon aisa jisse ke ghar par aane wali calls track ki ja saken, conversation record ho sake"

"Haan ho jaayega, aap jab bolo main ghar aake laga jaoonga"

"Main phone kar doonga tujhe" Main nahi chahta tha ke vo ye kaam Renuka ke saamne aakar kare isliye use kisi aise time par bulana zaroori tha jab ghar par koi na ho, "Most probably kal ya parso hi"

"Ye emails aur chat ka kya chakkar hai?"

"Track kar raha hoon kisi ko, evidence chahiye hogi kuchh uska gunaah saabit karne ke liye"

"Email wala toh aasan sa hi kaam hai, ek chhota sa spyware dalna hai bas. Chat record karne wala bhi ho jaayega, thoda sa time chahiye hoga"

"Theek hai"

"Aur Bhabhi ji ke kya haal chaal hain?"Usne achanak sawal kiya.

"Theek hai vo bhi" Ek pal ke liye mere munh se nikalne hi wala tha ke vo pregnant hai par phir maine baat zubaan tak hi rok li.

Usi raat dinner ke baad jab main aur Renuka sone ke liye lete toh vo mere kareeb hokar let gayi. Maine bas ek baar uski taraf bedili se muskura kar dekha aur aankhen band kar li. Usne khud hi apna sar utha kar mere seene par rakhe aur aur meri ek bazu ko apne jism par lape-te hue mere baahon mein simat si gayi. Uska aisa karna mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aaya par man maarkar main chup chap aankhen band kiye leta raha.

"Ek baat puchhun?" Kuchh lamhon ki khamoshi ke baad vo boli.

"Hmmmm" Maine jawab mein sirf haami bhari.

"Naraz ho mujhse kya?"

"Nahi toh" Uske achanak is sawan ne mujhe aankhen khol kar uski taraf dekhne par majboor kar diya.

"Kuchh din se dekh rahi hoon ke bade kate kate se rehte ho, jaisa kuchh kehna chah rahe ho mujhse, kuchh puchhna chah rahe ho par keh nahi pa rahe. Sirf khamoshi se andar hi andar ghut rahe ho. Mujhse koi bhool ho gayi kya?"

Dil mein toh aaya ke keh doon ke tumse vo galti hui hai jiske baad har galti chhoti pad jaati hai.

"Nahi toh, aisa toh kuchh bhi nahi hai" Main sirf itna hi keh paya.

"Jaanti hoon main tumhein bahut achhi tarah" Vo vaise hi lete lete boli, "Tumhari aankhon mein dikhta hai mujhe ke koi baat pareshan kar rahi hai tumhein. Kya hua hai"

"Tumhein is tarah pareshan dekh kar jaan nikalti hai meri, please agar kuchh hai toh bata do"

"Main sach keh raha hoon aisa kuchh nahi hai" Maine jhoothi tasalli deni chahi, "Veham hai tumara. Thoda kaam vagerah ke chakkar mein phasa hua hoon isliye aisa lag raha hai tumhein"

"Is it because of the child?" Usne jaise meri baat suni hi nahi.

"Child? What do you mean?"

"Dekh rahi hoon ke jabse main bataya hai ke i am pregnant tum kuchh pareshan se ho. Maine vo ghadi lakar di thi, tumne ek baar bhi use nahi pehna. Pasand nahi aayi?"

Mujhe achanak yaad aaya ke uski laayi hui ghadi toh main bhool hi gaya tha.

"Nahi pasand toh bahut hai, you know i wanted to buy it" Mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya ke kya bahana banaoon ke main kyun ghadi ek baar bhi try nahi ki.

"If you dont want a baby right now then we dont have to do it" Usne phir baat ka rukh bachche ki taraf mod diya.

"Matlab?"

"Jabse main pregnant hoon khoye khoye se rehte ho, mere kareeb tak nahi aate. Agar bachche ko lekar pareshan ho toh we dont have to go through it. We can abort the baby"

"Kya bol rahi ho?" Mujhe uske andaaz se mehsoos hua ke vo serious thi toh main uthkar betha.

"There is nothing more imporant to me than you are. If you dont want this baby then i dont want it either" Aur ye kehte hue uski aankhen chhalak aayi. Do mote mote aansoon uski palkon se behkar uske gaalon par ludhak gaye.

Dil hi dil mein ye toh khud maine bhi kayi baar socha tha ke is bachche ko gira diya jaaye par Renuka se kaise kahun ye decide nahi kar paya. Aur ab jabki vo khud hi mere saamne bachcha girane ki baat kar rahi thi toh main ye decide nahi kar pa raha tha ke kaise react karun.

"Kuchh bolo na, kyun naraz ho?" Usne apna ek haath mere gaal par rakha.

"Main nahi hoon naraz, seriously"

"Jhooth bol rahe ho, chhupa rahe ho mujhse. Nahi batana toh mat batao par jo bhi galti hui mujhse, maaf to kar sakte ho. Please? I am sorry" Aur ye kehkar usne badi masoomiyat se kisi chhoti bachchi ki tarah apne dono kaan pakad liye.

Us ek lamhe main samajh nahi paya ke kya sahi hai aur kya galat. Hazar sawal ek baar phir dil mein umad pade. Kya mera shak sahi tha ya main bas yun hi baat ka batangad bana raha tha? Mere saamne bethi ye ladki jo bhaari palken liye apne kaan pakde mujhse maafi maang rahi thi, bina ye jaane ke vo kis baat ki maafi maang rahi hai, kya ye asal thi ya sirf ek natak? Kya is maafi mein sachchai thi ya apni bewafai ko chhupane ki koshish?

Kya vo mera pyaar tha jo use yun tadpa raha tha ya uska apna mujhe dhokha dene ka guilt jisne use is tarah maafi maangne par majboor kar diya tha? Ek pregnant aurat jo apna bachcha tak girane ko taiyyar thi meri khushi ke liye, meri mohabbat mein, kya ye haqeeat thi ya vo aurat haqeeat thi jo us din ek hotel ke band kamre mein kisi paraye mard ke saath kuchh ghante bita kar aayi thi? Kya vo bachcha isliye gira rahi thi kyunki use lagta tha main is baat se pareshan hoon aur bachcha nahi chahta? Ya isliye ke vo jaanti thi ke ye bachcha mera hai hi nahi?

Vo bachchon ki tarah kaan pakde mere saamne bethi ro rahi thi aur main bas uske chehre ki taraf dekhe ja raha tha.
शक

What a fukc.....

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शक

What a fukc.....

ओह कितनी शिद्दत से शक किया होगा इसने
So, I wasn't wrong.


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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread



Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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