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Aryan ke baare me sab sochte hue Nupur ke ankho ke samne kareeb 2 saal pahele hua incident dikhne lagta he, jaha se ye sab start hua tha.
"Us din Aryan ka 18th Birthday the. Aur wo birthday sabhi cousins ne Goa me sath me milkar celebrate kiya. Pura Din achhe se Celebrate kiya. Usi raat sab thak ke soye gye the par bich rat me kisi ke chillane se sabki nind khul gai aur jis room se awaj aai thi us room ke taraf bhage. Aur wha jo dekha us se sab shock reh gye. Wha Aryan nude tha aur Sandhya ro rahi thi, usne jo night dress pahena tha wo kuch jagaho se fata hua tha. Sandhya ne sabko bataya ke Aryan ne uske sath Rape karne ki koshish ki. Aryan to us waqt bilkul apne hosh me nahi tha. Uski aankhe bilkul laal thi. Pure nashe me tha Aryan Aur us raat se Aryan ko sab nafrat karne lage. "
Nupur wo incident yaad karke fir se soch me pad jati he.
"Aryan, Kya vesa sach me kar sakta he? Jitna me use use janti thi wo esa bilkul nahi kar sakta, par us din Wo pure nashe me tha aur Nashe me insaan ko kuch bhi hosh nahi raheta. Kisi ese vese insaan ne lagaya hota ilzam to ek bar ye bhi khyal ata dimag me ke wo ladki juth bol rahi, Par wo ilzaam kisi ese vese insaan ne nahi par Sandhya ne lagaye the, Sandhya esa galat ilzaam to kabhi nahi laga sakti. Wo aur Aryan to ek dusre ko bhai-bahen mante the, wo esa kyun karegi? "
Kuch der baad Nupur apne khyalo me se bahar aati he. Wo dekhti he Ke Aryan ki ankho se anshu ki dhaar beh rahi thi.
Fir wo jake Tiya ki health condition dekhti he, Tiya ko abhi hosh nahi aaya tha. Aur bad wo ek najar Aryan pe daalti he, Uske dil me ek bar khyal aya ke wo Aryan ko dilaasa de par abhi uski jo nafart thi Aryan ke liye wo haavi ho gai uspe aur wo sidha wha se nikal jati he bunglow jane ke liye.
Jab kafi der tak Tiya ko hosh nahi aya to Aryan ne Doctor se jake baat ki, to Doctor ne bataya ke wo Dawai ka asar he to thode der lagegi patient ko, filhal wo Tiya ki condition pe pura dhyan rakhe hue he. Koi pareshani ki baat filhal to nahi he.
Aryan Doctor se baat karke fir Tiya ke pass jake beth jata he.
Dopaher ke 3 baje tak Antim Sanskar karke Bhavna, Kavya aur Anmol sabhi Hospital aa jate he jab ki Jyotika bunglow chali gai thi khana banane ke liye. Vese to Hospital me canteen tha par Anmol ghar ka khana jyada prefer karte tha.
Bhavana, Kavya aur Anmol bhi Tiya ke pass beth jate he. Wo bhi pareshan ho rahe the ki Tiya ko abhi tak hosh kyu nahi aya tha. To Aryan Doctor ne use jo bola tha wo batata he. To unka tension kuch kam hota he.
Kavya ne dekha to Aryan ki ankhe laal thi.
Kavya: Aryan Beta, Ab tum bhi ghar jao aur thoda Aram karo. Dekho tumhari ankhe, kitni laal he. Pakka Tum puri rat ni soye ho na?
Aryan : Don't worry mom. I'm okay. Jab tak Tiya ko hosh ni aata tab tak me yahi rahunga.
Anmol : Ok Aryan. Par at least yahi pe hi fresh to ho jao.
Kavya : Haan Aryan. Kal tumne Blood bhi diya he na, to abhi thoda nasta karo. Bad me jab Jyoti di aaye tab khana bhi he tumhe.
Aryan Ok bolke fresh hone chale jata he.
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Jyoyika Bunglow pe pahonchti he.
Usnn dekha to hall me nupur bethi thi.
Jyotika: Nupur, Me khana banane jaa rahi hu.
Nupur : Mummy, Bas Roti banani he, baki ka mene bana liya he.
Jyotika: Ohhh.. Badhiya. Thik he to me roti banati hu. Fir Tiffin le jana he.
Nupur :Mummy, chaliye me bhi aapki help karti hu.
Aur fir wo dono kitchen me jake roti banane lagte he.
Fir wo dono roti bana lete he aur Tiffin leke Hospital ke liye nikal jate he.
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Hospital me Aryan fresh ho chuka tha.
Anmol aur Kavya wha pe jo Dusra bed tha whi bethe the. Aryan ko dekhke Kavya bolti he,
Kavya : Aryan beta. Agar jyada bhukh lagi he to me tere liye bahar se biscuits leke aau?
Aryan : Nahi Mom. Muje utni bhukh nahi he.
Anmol : Beta, abhi Jyoti bhabhi aate hoge khana le kar. Khane me koi na nahi, Tumhe Apni health ka bhi dhyan rakhna he, Tabhi sab sambhal paoge.
Aryan : Ok Dad.
Aryan fir se Tiya jis bed pe thi uske pass jata he.
Bhavana whi bed ke pass chair pe bethi hui thi. Bhavna kafi udas thi. Ab wo apane pati ko kho chuki thi aur beti abhi behosh he hospital me to Dukh to hoga hi,
Aryan (Man Me) : Abhi Accident ke bare me Aunty se puchna sahi nahi he. Abhi us bare me baat karuga to wo sab yad karke jyada dukhi ho jayegi. Accident ke bare me Aunty se bad me baat karuga .
Aryan wha khade soch raha tha ye sab ke tabhi Bhavna ki najar Aryan pe padi.
Bhavna : Are Aryan Beta betho na.
Fir Aryan bhi whi dusri chair leke beth jata he.
Aryan : Aunty, muje pata je aap bhot pareshan ho. Par ab jo hona tha ho chuka. Me ye janta hu ke asan nahi hota ese halat me apne aap ko sambhalna. Tiya ko is halat me dekh ke mene khud ko kese sambhala he wo me janta hu. Par Aapko bhi apne aapko sambhalna hoga, Tiya ke liye.
Bhavna : Haan Aryan, Tum sach bol rahe ho. Vese tumhara Ehsaan to hum zindgi bhar nahi bhulege. Tumne Tiya ki jaan bachai he.
Aryan : Aunty, Esa bolke muje paraya mat kijiye. Tiya Best Friend he meri. Mera farz he ke chahe kesi bhi muskeli aye, muje uski help karni chahiye, use protect karna chahiye. Usme Ehsaan ki koi baat nahi he.
Bhavna wo sunke bhavuk ho jati he aur Aryan ko gale laga leti he aur rone lagti he.
Aryan aur Kavya, Bhavna ko shant karate he.
Bhavana : Aap sab ka bhot bhot dhanyawad. Aap log to hummare apno se bhi badhkar ho. Dekho na hummare ristedato ko. Sab chale gye. Bas jab khusi ka mauka hota he tab hi sath dena pasand karte he sab.
Kavya : Bhavna Ji. Aap shant rahie. Aur esa mat sochiye ki aap akele ho. Hum sab he na aapke sath.
Bhavna, Kavya ki bat sunke Kavya ke gale lag jati he.
Utne me Jyotika aur Nupur tiffin leke aa jati he. Fir sabhi khana kha lete he. Khana khane ke bad Aryan fir se Tiya ke bed ke pass ja ke beth jata he.
Wo Tiya ke hath ko apne hath me leta he aur Dhire se bolne lagta he,
"Tiya, Plz Utho na. I miss u so much. Abhi to hume kafi time spend karna he, Kaafi sari baate batani he tumhe, Kitne time se milna chahta tha aur ab tum mili to ye halat me. Tumhe esi halat me dekhke mene kese apne aap ko control rakha he wo bas me hi janta hu."
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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section. Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits. And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC "Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world. Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time. And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.
To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread
To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread
To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread
To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread
| Position | Benifits |
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| Winner | 1500 Rupees +  Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories) |
| 1st Runner-Up | 500 Rupees +  Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories) |
| 2nd Runner-UP | 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Best Supporting Reader |  Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof | 200 Likes for each report |
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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai. Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge. Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye. Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega. Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain. Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries ThreadContest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread
| Position | Benifits |
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| Winner | 3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories) |
| 1st Runner-Up | 1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories) |
| 2nd Runner-UP | 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) |
| 3rd Runner-UP | 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes |
| Best Supporting Reader | 750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes |
| Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof |  200 Likes for each report |