Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Upcoming update 245
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Thank you so much for your well wishes ...mains result is out and i m selected for interview...
Ek phir ap sabki duwaye chahiye final interview ke liye ...

 

[Lp143]

Wow super update bhai update pad kar maja aaya bhai

 

[Zoro x]

Isi baat pe is baar ek aur shandaar update likhna suru kar raha hu .. Wednesday ko mil jayega ....Zoro bhai.........
Tehe dil se dhanyawad 1100 ka chadva chad gaya h

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[Zoro x]

Sandeep singh nirwan भाई पशुपति से बदला लेने के तीनो ही बराबर के हकदार है​

आप लेखक हैं किसका हक ज्यादा बनता है यह आप ही बता सकते हैं

वों बताएंगे नहीं भाई

सीधा अपडेट हीं देंगे

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Story bahut hi acchi hai aur aapki presentation is also good par lagta hai apki ghar mein woh ekta kapoor ke serials kuch zyada chalti hai toh kuch jagahon par story ki kheencha tani hogayi.

Pahle to bhayi ye smjho ki story me family intension aur kuch jyada family moment hai ye story main trance hai boleto sequence bhai.....ju ko ek aur baat bata du ki story me ye jo Shewata ke scenes aur other families charecter jude hue hai wo kisi na kisi lineup se unsabka raaz ek dusre juda hi hua hai to isse ekta kapoor ka family drama jo ju ne kaha wo kahna galat hoga but haa manta hu kuch jagah scene intentionaly ache nhi lagte but ju log ko ek baat bata du ki iss story me jo bhi chis Sandeep bhai ne add ki hui hai wo sab ek dusre se judi hui na ki compare ki hui hai jaise others story me hoti hai action aur family sequences and emotion sab alag hi scenes me show hota hai ya writer ke dwara dikhaya jata hai but Sandeep bhai ne yaha kuch alag hi kiya jo hai ki unhone kuch scenes emotionally actionable banaya hai to kuch family intensions se to kuch actions part alag hi jo abhi chal raha hai, well ,ju ko bhi ye sab baate smjh me aa jaengi jab ye story kuch aur aage badh jaegi

Ek aur important thing.... Raj ko uske dadaji 5 saal keliye shiksha aur khud ko nikharne keliye ashram bejha tha par lahta nahin shiksha ka sahi
upayog kar raha hai because he doesn't seem to be strong enough mentally sometimes when u r fighting a huge battle mentally u should be very strong than physically.

Well,I am agreed with you brother but tumne sayad se ek chis story me notice nhi ki....ki Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ne ispar ek plot bhi jodd rakha hai jo ye tha jab raj par Xabhi aur aag ne attack kiya tha apne kuch disciples ke sath aur wo scenes aage jakr clear hua tha ki yye sab kyu hua jab uske guru ne raj ko uski galti ko smjhaya aur uss se samna krwaya ki wo apna maksad bhul raha hai aur wo kisi aur hi line me jaa raha hai aur wahi se raj ka 1 months ka silsila suru hua, well,ab to smjh gaye hoge bhai ki ye jo baat aapne kahi ye sab Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ne pahle hi soch rakha tha aur isiko lekr wo ek plot generate bhi kr chuke hai.

Jab dushman se badla lena hi hai toh uske ghar mein jaa kar dhindora peetne ki kya zarroorat thi finish the job silently. Jab raj ko ya uske dadaji ko
khud nahin pata ki asli aur main dushman koun hai toh aisi mein khul kar samne anaa not good.

Haa mai bhi manta hua iss baat ko but pashupati ko to khud nhi pata raj kon hai....usse to pahle kuch smjh nhi aaya tha ki raj aisa kyu kr raha hai lekin fir jab usne divya ko uske sath dekha to usse yahi lag raha hai ki raj divya ke karan uske sath ye sab kar raha hai, to dushman ko to pata lagne se raha aur rahi baat ki pashupati pata laga to sakta hai n to nhi bilkul bhi nhi pata laga sakta kyuki raj ka dehradun se pahle koi clue hai nhi to not a chance ki koi pata laga paye aur main Dushman ki baat idhar dehradun ke scenes me bilkul na haa mandwa me hai kuch namune jinka scene clearout hote rahta hai.


Brother ju ke thinking segments bohot clearout the but ju ne jo bhi apni baat rakhi unke opposite side se bhi jara sochna chahiye tha to sayad ju ko ye sari chise clearout ho jaati. Well bhai ju ke comment ko reply kr ke laga ki mai 11-12 Update aur kuch purane update ke scenes fir se padh liya ho.Khair keep it up bhai !!

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Sandeep singh nirwan भाई पशुपति से बदला लेने के तीनो ही बराबर के हकदार है​

आप लेखक हैं किसका हक ज्यादा बनता है यह आप ही बता सकते हैं

Hak toh teeno ka he toh kya kahte ho teeno he saza de ....tikh toh froog bhai teeno he denge.....deal done...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Pahle to bhayi ye smjho ki story me family intension aur kuch jyada family moment hai ye story main trance hai boleto sequence bhai.....ju ko ek aur baat bata du ki story me ye jo Shewata ke scenes aur other families charecter jude hue hai wo kisi na kisi lineup se unsabka raaz ek dusre juda hi hua hai to isse ekta kapoor ka family drama jo ju ne kaha wo kahna galat hoga but haa manta hu kuch jagah scene intentionaly ache nhi lagte but ju log ko ek baat bata du ki iss story me jo bhi chis Sandeep bhai ne add ki hui hai wo sab ek dusre se judi hui na ki compare ki hui hai jaise others story me hoti hai action aur family sequences and emotion sab alag hi scenes me show hota hai ya writer ke dwara dikhaya jata hai but Sandeep bhai ne yaha kuch alag hi kiya jo hai ki unhone kuch scenes emotionally actionable banaya hai to kuch family intensions se to kuch actions part alag hi jo abhi chal raha hai, well ,ju ko bhi ye sab baate smjh me aa jaengi jab ye story kuch aur aage badh jaegi

Well,I am agreed with you brother but tumne sayad se ek chis story me notice nhi ki....ki Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ne ispar ek plot bhi jodd rakha hai jo ye tha jab raj par Xabhi aur aag ne attack kiya tha apne kuch disciples ke sath aur wo scenes aage jakr clear hua tha ki yye sab kyu hua jab uske guru ne raj ko uski galti ko smjhaya aur uss se samna krwaya ki wo apna maksad bhul raha hai aur wo kisi aur hi line me jaa raha hai aur wahi se raj ka 1 months ka silsila suru hua, well,ab to smjh gaye hoge bhai ki ye jo baat aapne kahi ye sab Sandeep singh nirwan bhai ne pahle hi soch rakha tha aur isiko lekr wo ek plot generate bhi kr chuke hai.

Haa mai bhi manta hua iss baat ko but pashupati ko to khud nhi pata raj kon hai....usse to pahle kuch smjh nhi aaya tha ki raj aisa kyu kr raha hai lekin fir jab usne divya ko uske sath dekha to usse yahi lag raha hai ki raj divya ke karan uske sath ye sab kar raha hai, to dushman ko to pata lagne se raha aur rahi baat ki pashupati pata laga to sakta hai n to nhi bilkul bhi nhi pata laga sakta kyuki raj ka dehradun se pahle koi clue hai nhi to not a chance ki koi pata laga paye aur main Dushman ki baat idhar dehradun ke scenes me bilkul na haa mandwa me hai kuch namune jinka scene clearout hote rahta hai.


Brother ju ke thinking segments bohot clearout the but ju ne jo bhi apni baat rakhi unke opposite side se bhi jara sochna chahiye tha to sayad ju ko ye sari chise clearout ho jaati. Well bhai ju ke comment ko reply kr ke laga ki mai 11-12 Update aur kuch purane update ke scenes fir se padh liya ho.Khair keep it up bhai !!

Ha ha ha maturity levels by levels ayengi ye samjna hoga readers ko ....

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

हम इंतजार कर रहे हैं फिर बुधवार का बेसब्री से


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