Update 170
Suprise ……or…. suspence…..
“Aj tere liye suprise layi hu”
“Suprise ki chod tu 2 din se milne nahi ayi uska jawab de pahle ..,bahan ka itna he khayal h…”
Manisha —- sorry sorry yaar ye chod waise….mere suprise se teri sari sikayat dur ho jayegi…
Poonam - acha …aisa kya suprise h mere liye….
Manisha — tere liye ek sweet si cute doll layi hu jo tuje bahut bahut pasand ayegi….
Poonam — aur kanha h wo sweet doll khud toh chalkar nahi ayegi na….
Manisha — ha ayegi na ….mera suprise h toh mamuli toh hone se raha …
Poonam — paheliya mat bhuja ….bata na kanha chupa kar ayi h doll ko…
Manisha muskarne lagi …ok ..ok…lekar ati hu …
Manisha bahar gayi aur kavita ko sath lekar ayi jo long skirt aur top mai bahut he cute lag rahi thi ….uske chahre par ayi masumiyat usai ek puri barbie dall he bana rahi thi …poonam hairani se kavita ko dekhne lagii….
Manisha —- ye h suprise…h na cute doll …..aur is cute si doll ka naam h….kavita h….aur ye….aur ye pata h koun h …ye h …mere best friend raj ki laadli si cute si bahan h….kaisa laga mera suprise…
Poonam toh ye jaankar hairani se kavita ko dekne lagi phir uski ankho mai kavita ke liye beshumar pyar dikhane laga aur kavita ko pyar se niharne lagi ek baar wo manisha ko khusi se dekhti toh ek baar kavita ko pyar se …
Kavita — hii diii..
Poonam — yanha ao…mere pass….
Aur kavita pass pahuchi toh uske sir par hath fira kar tum toh bahut he cute ho ….bilkul doll ki tarah ……..
phir manisha ki taraf ko hoth hilkar thank you kaha ..manisha samaj gayi aur muskarane lagi….
Kavita — Di …apko ye chot kaise lagi….
Poonam —accident ho gaya tha …ye chodo main abhi meri doll ke liye ice cream mangwati hu …..
Manisha — leti rah aram se aunty ne dekh liya tha wo bhijwa rahi h ….aur aj hum dono tere pass he h toh tu issai jii bhar ke baat kar lena …..
Poonam — ha bilkul ….kyo meri cute doll karogi na mere sath baate …
Kavita — h dii karungi na ap bahut achi ho ….
Manisha man mai — pagli bahut schi h aur wo tera khayal jindgi bhar rakhegi kyoki wo teri hone wali bhabhi h …tere bhai ke pyar mai doob chuki meera h ye…
Kavita — manisha di apne kaha kuch…
Manisha man mai are isai bhi iske bhai ki tarah pata lag jata h kya …
Manisha — nahi kuch nahi kaha….tum dono baate karo …main aunty se milkar aati hu…manisha ke jane ke baad dheere dheere kavita aur poonam ki bonding aise baithi ki dono ki baate he khatam nahi huvi …..
Pune……
Richa — chalo break fast karlo phir muje tumse baat karni h …agar tumhare pass waqt ho
Sunil — ap kabse itni badal ho gayi kyoki main jis richaaa….i mean apko janta tha wo toh order dene mai yakin karti thi…
Richa — badalna sabko padta h …aur tumhare sath mera ek rishta hamesa ke liye is janam mai jud gaya h jo chahe raj mera ho ya na ho wo rahega he meri taraf se ….toh muje us rishte ki maryada bhi rakhni hogi na ….
Sunil — kaafi badal gayi ho ap….chaliye dadaji ko naste par intezar karna pasand nahi h phir hum baat karte h….
Naste karne ke Kuch dair baad ….
Richa — jo puchungi sach bataoge ….
Sunil sochlar — agar jawab huva toh jarur dunga …
Richa — kya raj muje yaad karta h….ye kahkar richa sunil ke chahre ko dhayan se dekhne lagi…
Sunil ne ek lambhi saans chodi aur bola —- kabhi usne apka jikra nahi kiya par ha ye sach h ki usne apko suruwaat mai bahut yaad kiya tha …maine usai akele mai kitni baar purani yaado mai dube huve dekha h ….isliye itna main yakin se kah sakta hu wo apko bhula toh nahi h….
Richa - bhavuk ho gayi …uska dil bhari sa hone laga…….usne heemat kar phir pucha “kya mujse nafrat karta h”
Sunil — muskarakar yaad h na wo akhiri pal jab bhi wo apko manane ki kosis kar raha tha….wo apse bahut pyar karta tha aur aj bhi wo apko bhula nahi h toh …wo apse nafrat kaise kar sakta h par ha ….uski jindgi mai kayi ladkiyo ne…ane ki kosis ki …
Itna sunte he richa turant sunil ko dekhne lagi….uska dil ab aur jor se dhakne laga ki kya koyi ladki h uski jindgi mai…Sunil ne bhi richa ki taraf dekha aur kaha..
Sunil-- kayi ladkiyo ne apni sachi mohobbat ka izhaar kiya par usai pyar se he nafrat ho chuki….usai bus ab apne maabaap ke katilo ko dhundkar saza deni h….. isliye kayi ladkiyo ke hote huve bhi wo akela h ….
Richa — tum bhi meri he puri galti mante ho kya… main us waqt itni samajdaar nahi thi meri umar he kya thi ….nahi pata tha ki pyar kaise karna h…..nahi pata tha ki kis par yakin karu…..nahi pata tha ki sacha pyar kya hota h…nahi pata tha ki dost dhokhebaz bhi hote h…..muje jo dikhaya gaya wo maine sach mana..main kaise apne pyar ko kisi aur ke sath us halat mai bardast kar paati….na tumne… na mere pyar ne….aur na meri best friend shweta ne kisi ne bhi mujpar viswaas kiya kyaa ek baar muje sach batane ki kosis kari hoti agar phir bhi main nahi sunti toh sari meri galti hoti…par kisi ne bhi…kisi ne bhi …..ye bolte bolte richa rone lagi aur rote rote he boli itni buri bhi nahi thi …kya pata tum sab samjate main samaj jati…..are koun ladki apne pyar ko kisi dusri ladki ke sath us halat mai bardast kar paati ….bolo ….kya maine kuch nahi khoya maine dost kho diye ….pyar kho diya…. bahan jaisi saheli kho dii…jisne aj tak mujse baat tak nahi ki dubara se….itna kahte kahte wo fafak fafak ro padi …..
Sunil bolna toh chahta tha par richa ke sawal ke agai wo bhi nisabd ho gaya tha…richa ne apne ansuu punche aur boli…. “Par main richa hu haar nahi manungi ….haa main usai beintiha pyar karti hu karti rahungi aur usi ki hokar rahungi par usai bhi saza jarur dungi galti ki uski bhi galti h agar agni parikhsa muje deni h toh tumhare bhai ne bhi seema laanghi h saza toh usai bhi milni chahiye”
Sunil hairani se richa ko dekhne laga aur man mai he raj ke pitayi ki list jodne laga …..
Sunil man mai sala Sab mili mental he mental he h itna kah khud ke baal mai jor jor se khujli karne laga
Richa — tumhe kya huva…
Sunil jaldi se gardan na mai hilane laga sur bola kuch nahi….muje kya huva h …waise ek baat puchu….
Richa - ha….
Sunil jhijhak kar — sacrifies naam ka word suna h …
Richa — main rank holder hu all india ki toh itna toh pata he hoga…
Sunil richa ka chehra hairani se dekhkar bola—sacrifies ye sabd raj ki jindgi se jude har shaks ki jindi ka heesa h aur agar apko bhi ant mai sacrifies karna pad sakta h….sab Raj par h ki wo kya karta h….
Richa — matlb …
Sunil — kuch nahi bus ap apni kosis karo baki ishwar par chod do par raj ki jindgi mai apke wapas ane ke sirf ek partisat chance h ….ab chaliye muje jana h aur ha ….ye meri taraf se apke liye gift h …
Richa kuch pal sunil ki baat ko samajne ki kosis karne lagi phir usne gift box ko le liya..Richa ne gift box ko open kiya toh usmai se ladkiyo ki ek behad he unique beautifull wrist watch nikali…
Richa -par ye toh bahut mahngi lagti h…
Sunil — ap bhi koyi aam nahi ho… is watch mai tracking tracker h aur voice messanger h jab bhi ap musibat mai hogi aur help ki jarurat hogi tab apke pass madad pahuch jayegi….bus ek message is button ko press karke voice message bhejna h ..
Richa — thank you….gift bahut pasand aya….…
Sunil — ok chale
Raj room….
Raj ki subhe nind khuli toh usai apne hath par dabav mahsus huva usne gardan ghumakar dekha toh wo chok gaya ..kyoki anu usai bilkul chipak kar so rahi thi ….wo hadbadakar khada hogaya aur anu ke sir ke niche se raj ka hath khisakne se uski nind bhi tut gayi …wo kamasakar baith gayi…
Anu — khun nahi piya h tumhara ok…achi nind arahi thi jaga diya…..
Raj — Pagal ladki tum yanha kya kar rahi ho…
Anu — tumne he toh kaha tha na….ki mere sath sona muje dar lagta h sapno se…
Raj - ankhe fade usai dekhne laga….
Anu — calm down actualy muje raat ko laga ki kanhi tumhe phirse sapne aye toh…isliye agayi aur tum sach mai nind mai pareshan ho rahe the….
Raj — muskara kar chudail ki chanya jo pad gayi h isliye darawane sapne aate h…
Anu — yuuu main chudail..,itna kah usne raj ko coller se pakadkar apni taraf marne ke liye khinch liya ..
Raj — chot lagi h seene par…
Anu — acha h jayda hiloge nahi
Raj main toh mazak kar raha tha…
Anu — nahi main chudail hu ab tumhara khun piyungi….itna kah wo jhut muth he raj ki gardan ki taraf badhi …
Raj ne turant anu ki nangi kamar par apne hath kas liye …anu ko current sa laga uski ankhe chodi ho gayi..aur agle he pal dusre hath se anu ko apni banho mai le liya …anu ka seena jor se dhadaktahuva raj ke seene se takrane laga…..
Anu —- rajjj….
Raj ne koyi jawab nahi diya aur dheere dheere apne hotho ko uske hoto ke karib le gaya …anu ki ankhe kiss ke ahsas se he band hoti gayiii….raj ne dheere se uske gaal par kiss kari aur bola….
“Achi bachi ye sab nahi karti h”
Anu jo kiss karne ki feelings mai doob gayi thi raj ki baato se hosh mai ayi aur gusai se chikhi “tum…tumm…aj bahut pitoge mujse abhi ..main bachi hu …kanha se bachi lagti hu”
Raj usai upar se niche tak dekhne laga..
Anu “kutta kamina kanhika aise bhi koyi dekhta h tharki kanhike “
Raj tumne toh kaha ki kanha se bachi hu wanhi dekh raha tha …waise baat toh sahi kuch jagah kafi badi gayi h…..
Anu kutte kamine ….tharki …..
Raj ne agai badh jaldi se usai pakad liya aur uske hotho ko apne hotho se kaid kar liya….anu ka sara gusa furr ho gaya …aur uske hath khud ba khud raj ke balo mai chale gaye aur wo kiss ka ahsah lene lagi…….aur jab sans tuti tab anu ka seena aur jor se dhadakne laga wo ..
Raj — ab toh gusa nahi ho …
Anu ne niche gardan karte huve he na mai sir hilaya…
Raj-- ok toh main nahane ja raha hu …mere sath nahane ka irada toh nahi h na ab…
Anu pahle toh sharmayii phir jate huve piche moodkar jeeb nikal kar “eeeeeeee… gande ladke tumhare sath koun nahana chata h bade aye”
Raj — muskarakar kabhi toh sath nahana he padega na warna pyar kaise hoga…
Anu pyar kaise hoga ye sunte he …rook si gayi aur uske chahre par muskaan agayii …par dubara se piche moodkar gusai se raj ko dekha aur chali gayi …
Raj bhi geele kapde se apne badan ko saaf karne chala gaya naha wo sakta nahi tha kyoki taanke jo lage pade the apne badan ko saaf karke wo bahar aakar apne ghav ko dekhne laga ….tabhi door ko open karke rajni agayi …
Rajni ne raj ko sirf towal mai dekha toh ek baar sharmayi phir door ko band karke andar agayi …
Raj are ap itni jaldi…
Rajni — ha main nahi aasakti hu kya sirf anu he aasakti h kya ….
Raj — wo baat nahi h…..
Rajni raj ki chest par ungli rakh kar uske karib aakar toh kya baat h….
Raj — hadbadakar kuch bhi toh nahi ….
Rajni — uske chare ke karib aakar lagta subhe kafi gulabi rahi h janab ki…isliye hoto ke niche lipstic ke mamuli se nishan h….
Raj apni ungliyo se saaf karne laga toh…
Rajni —mukarakar anu lagta h subhe kiss karne agayi ….tabhi mera ana kyo pasand hoga…wo he toh khass h ab…
Itna kah wo palat ke jane lagi toh raj ne uska hathpakadliya aur ek jhatke se ghumakar usai apni taraf khinch liya aur ek hath uski kamar mai daal liya ….aur apne chahre ke uske chahre ke karib le aya ….
Raj — ap ek pari ho aur mai ek devil hu jiske pass ane par sirf dard milta h muje pata h apke dil mai kya h par…..meri jindgi mai pyar ki koyi jagah nahi h….main kab tak yanha hu ye bhi pata nahi h …..ap pavitra ho aur main ek pappi jiski atma tak khun se rangi huvi h….isliye mujse dur rahne mai he apki bhalayi h
Rajni raj ki ankho mai ankhe dalkar— tum koun ho kya ho ye mayne nahi rakhta h raj …tum…ek nek dil insaan ho jo bure ke sath bura aur ache ke sath bahut acha karta h ….muje bus jab tak yanha ho tumhara sath chahiye ….
Rajni kuch aur bolti usai pahle he raj ne uske gulabi hotho ko apne hotho se jakad liya …rajni ki ankhe khuli ki khuli rah gayi …par kuch he seconds mai raj ke badan se nikalti mahak aur hotho ki tapish ne uske badan ke rom rom ko apni tapish se garam kar diya aur wo raj ke hotho ki tapish aur uski banho mai pigalti chali gayi … uski halat abhi bin pani ki machli ki tarah ho gayi thi wo raj ki ankho mai dekh rahi thi aur uska kasa huva seena ful kar kabhi raj ke seene se takrata toh kabhi ragad kha raha tha….rajni ki pahli pyar bhari aur passionate kiss thi …jab uski sanse kabhu mai huvi toh ab uski ankho mai sharm chane lagi aur apni ankho ko niche kar liya ….
Raj-- Apki is sharam aur saralta ko kabhi khone mat dena …..
Rajni tum taiyaar ho jao ….itna kah wo palat ke jane lagi aur rook kar bina piche he mudi he boli ….pata nahi mujse tumse pyar h kya par main khus hu jitne din tum mere sath ho wo mere jindgi ke sabse khusnaseeb pal h….
Raj piche khada khudse he bola pyar ye mere naseeb mai nahi h ….jissai pyar kiya wo samjhi nahi aur jo muje pyar karti h unhe main pyar de nahi sakta ….pata nahi kab maut se samna ho jaye….itna kah wo bhi taiyar hone laga….
Toh wanhi ….door…
Xabhi aur Aag chot se recover ho chuke the aur unhone lagbhag mumbayi ka har koyi kouna chaan mara tha par killer group ka unhe kuch pata nahi laga tha….
Xabhi - isai ek baat saaf h ki unke kabile ka tikhna bahut he gupt h aur wo sab alag alag hokar aate h…..
Aag-- hume us shaks ko bhi dhundhna chahiye wo bhi hamri madad kar sakta…
Xabhi — ye yudhh hamara h humre badle ka h AAG aur hume he ladna hoga kyoki tabhi pata lagega ki akhir aisa kya huva jo bhagawat ho gayi …aur sab alag ho gaye sahdev bhai jaise nek dil insaan ko dhokha mila….yahi wo kadi h jo hume dhundhni h…
Aag — toh raj ko ….
Xabhi — usai abhi yanha ane mai waqt lagega ….jab tak hume sab kuch dhundh kar rakhna h ….usai delhi padhne do abhi
Par inhe kya pata tha ki tufaan toh achuka h …aur inke behad kareeb h…
Wanhi inhi ki tarah jungle ke andar pahado ke bich mai kuch jameen ke niche bane ek bahut bade kabile ke bicho bicho ek shaks ko bandh rakha tha uske chahre par koyi dar nahi tha….
“Ye teri saza h tumhari wajah se humare kabile ke 30 sishya mare gaye …tum mere descendent kaise ho sakte ho”
Death halo jo pichle kayi dino se narak se bhi kathor saza paa raha tha par uska sarir is saza aur dard ke baad aur majboot hote ja raha tha…uske charo taraf khade shishaya har 3 hour baad usai dus minut tak marte the jisai uski sahan shakti badhti ja rahi thi ….wo apne maste ki baate sunkar jor se cheekha …..”main tuje dhund nikalunga NIRWANA phir apne inhi hatho se cheer dunga…Aaaaaahhhhhhh”sanki ki kururta ko sab jante the isliye jo killers usai saza de rahe the wo bhi rook gaye par death halo ne jaise he unhe dekha unka sarir kanpne laga…. “ Maro muje maine kaha maro”
Sab dar se kanpte huve marne lage
“Aur jor se maro”
Sanki dard ko sahte huve apni ankho mai gusa liye sab sahta raha aur ye sab dur se khada uska master dekh raha tha……..uske hotho par ek tirchi muskaan thi…aur usi muskaan ke sath usne kaha sahdev sahdev tere ye waafadar sathi aj bhi teri wafadari kar rahe h….tera guru pata nahi aj tak kanha chipa h sab marenge main nahi toh wo marenge …..par wo raj jaankar rahenge jo us din hum sab se chipa kar usai chipa diya …usai hum dhundh nikalenge…..bus tere pariwar ke baaki log mil jaye…itna kah uske chahre par bhayanak muskaan agayii aur wo jor jor se hasne laga “‘ha ha ha ha ha tum sab bhi usi ki tarah maroge tadap tadap tadap kar maroge ek baar phir bhishan sangram hoga us din ki tarah narsanhaar hoga …..ha ha ha ha ha” …..
I hope ki compensation update ap sabko behad pasand aya hoga kyoki aj kuch partisat raj khula h toh ek naya suspense bhi samne agaya hoga ki past mai aisa kya huva hoga ……
Masti mai padhne ka aur bina kanjusi ke likes thokne ka ……
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