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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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Death halos death game...( Final attack)

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Sala hulk tu aa he gaya ….muje laga hamre marne ke baad ayega”. Abhay “bola tha na tum dono tak pahuchne se pahle maut ko bhi mujse jeetna hoga”…..phir ajju ne apni pocket se pain killer aur t shirt ke tukde karke shiwani shruti aur ajju ko heal kiya …

Abhay-- hume jaldi nikalna hoga khun ki khusboo aur shor sunkar aur bhi janwar ayenge …..

Itna kahkar usne shruti aur shiwani ko apne dono kandho par utha liya aur tezi se bhagne lage….. par bahut dair ho chuki thi khun ki gandh bhukhe sikariyo ko apni aur khinch chuki thi…. Dusra jhund us jagah pahuch chuka tha janha ladayi huvi thi aur apne sathiyo ki maut dekh wo sab jor jor se cheek kar matam manane lage ….

Abhay “bhediyo ka ek aur jhund pahuch gaye h jaldi se hume yanha se nikalna hoga” ….par wo nikal paate tabhi 2 jano ne ped ke upar se niche jump laga di abhay ko hal chal sunayi di usne turant ajju ko ek laat maardi jisai ajju dur hat gaya par abhay ki pith ke andar ek chakuu dhans gaya …

Ajju jor se cheekha abhayyyy……….



Ab agai.........

Death halos death game….

Abayyyyyy….

Abhay ne dard ko sahan karte huve shiwani aur shrutii ko niche letaya aur hath piche le ja kar us knife ko pith se nikal liya….aur palatkar black mask killer ki taraf dekha …..killer ne bhi jump markar ek kick abhay ki chest par maar di ….jisai abhay ek kadam piche ho gaya aur jab killer ne dubara jump maar kar face par marne ki kosis ki tab abhay ne apne ek hath se uski gardan pakad kar hawa mai utha liya…. “Tum jaise kutte sirf piche se he waar kar sakte h …” itna kah kar usne uske sir ko ped se puri takat se takra diya …uska sir kharbhuje ki tarah fat gaya aur dusre hath mai pakda knife uski chest ke aar paar kar usai usi ped mai tang diya toh udhar ajju dusre killer se bheeda huva tha ….abhay ne us taraf dekha aur agai badh kar apni ek kick puri takat se killer ke upar maar di killer ne bhi apne dono hath ko agai kar block karne ki kosis ki par abhay ki kick mai power itni thi ki wo piche khiskta huva ped se takra gaya aur ajju ne isi baat ka fayda uthakar niche pade knife ko utha kar uske seene mai ghop diya …..abhay ne shiwani aur shrutii ko wapas kandhe par uthaya aur ajju ke sath agai jaldi jaldi chal diye ….ab indono killer ke marne se unhe ek rahat ki saans mili inke jane ke kuch dair baad mai he bhediyo ka jhund agaya aur killer ke taza maans ko noch nochkar khane laga …..abhay aur ajju shiwani ke bataye direction mai agai bhadte ja rahe the ….. charo taraf andhera hone aur jhadiyo aur pedo ki wajah se unhe kuch saaf dikhayi nahi de raha ….

Abhay “ aise toh hum kuch nahi kar payenge “

Shiwani dard se karahte huve “abhay socho mat bus bhadte raho hume heemat rakhni hogi “



Dur se Jasien muskarata huva “ master ko bhi humse aise tadpa yadpa kar marne wale khel khelna pasand ata h aj tak kabhi aasan mout nahi di apne dusmano ko ..dekhte hu ye bach kar kitni dair jinda rah payenge ya nahi kyo vithal ab toh khus h na” ……

Vithal “ji bhai main toh ruka he isliye tha in sabki maut apni ankho se dekh saku bus phir commissioner aur wo kutiya sonali bachi h bus”

Jaisen ke piche 25 killers jo young the wo khade the aur wo bhi agai jo ho raha tha dhayan se samaj rahe the ….. wo sabhi yanha training ke baad death and life experience ke liye aye huve the…inmai se 5 jo aj bach jayenge wo …killers organisation mai shamil ho jayenge….



Jasien “ tum sab ki training ki ye last step h muje nirash mat karna …yaad rakhna jo strong aur chalak h wo he agai badhta h wo he is duniya mai jinda bachta h… kamjor hamesa mara jata h….”

Sab yes master….



Insabse se dur ek tufaan aur inki taraf tezi se udta huva araha tha jo inke khel mai bin bulaye huve enter hone wala tha tha par uske enter karne se game ke sabhi niyam badal jane wale the …..

Raj “ agar meri soch sahi h toh wo charo ek sath he honge…kasam h muje main unke khandan ko bhi jaan se maar dalunga unke vansh ka namo nishan is duniya se mita dunga”

Pass mai baithe Jogindar singh bhi soch mai dube huve the akhir ye sabhi unke liye unke bache saman the jinhone hamesa usai bade papa,uncle ,chacha kahke bulaya tha….isliye wo har keemat par unhe bachana chahte the par wo jab tak action nahi le sakte the jab tak charo safely mil na jate ….



Pilot “In fifteen minuts”



Raj pilot ki baad sunkar apni dress pahan ne laga jo aise he waqt ke liye sunil ne uske liye specialy dress banwayi thi jo andhere mai andhere ki tarah ghul mil jati thi……aur ankho par night vision laga huva tha …taki night mai bhi saaf dikhayi de sake

Jogindar “ raj wada karo jisne hamare pariwar ko chune ki kosis kari h uski maut bahut buri hogi …..

Raj “ wada h mera apse main ab tab tak wapas nahi loutunga jab tak uske pure khandan ko narak nahi bhej dunga wo jo koyi bhi ho janha kayi bhi ho ab usai mere badle ke partishodh mai jalna hoga”



Wanhi andar ajju aur abhay ek baar fir se bhediyo ke ek group se ghir gaye the par abhay ne hight ka fayda uthkar shiwani aur shruti ko ped par chada diya tha aur khud dono ladne ko taiyar ho gaye the ….bhediye undono ke charo aur chakar lagane …aur mouka milte he ek sath dono par tut pade …abhay aur ajju dono takatwaar the par 4 bhediyo ka samna karna itna aasan nahi tha wo ek ko rokta toh dusra apne jabde se sarir ka maans fad deta …bhediye lachile furtile the isliye wo jagah badal badal kar do tarafa hamla kar rahe the..dono jab tak un charo ko maar paye tab tak ajju ka pair buri tarah ghayal ho gaya tha ….abhay ne usai sahara de kar khada kiya…” tu tikh h na ajju”

Ajju—Ha main tikh hu aur itna kahkar wo dubara gir gaya …….

Abhay-- haar mat maan mere yaar heemat kar hume jaldi karna h kaise bhi hume is raat jinda rahna h….



Ek baar fir apne ghav ki parwah kiye bagair abhay ne shruti aur shiwani ko utha liya aur ajju ko sahara dete huve jaldi jaldi agai badhne laga jald he usai mahsus huva ki uske samne pahadi h….par usai kya pata tha ki mout toh unka upar intezar kar rahi h…….pahadi ki dusri taraf se sher bhi sikar ki talash mai pahadi ke upar chad raha tha taki pahadi ki dusri taraf pani ke talabh ki taraf jakar sikar kar sake…….



Raj side …….

Pilot “ 5 minuts” Par niche jungle h land karna mumkin nahi hoga…..

Jogindar ha raj niche kaise utroge charo yaraf jungle he jungle h …

Raj …bus location ke pass le chalo…



Jungle ke karib jaise he helicopter pahucha toh uski gadgadahat jungle ke andar pahle halki phir tez aur tez sunayi dene lagi…..

Shiwani ko jab gadgadahat ki awaj sunayi di toh jaise uske sarir mai nayi jaan agayi ho wo khusi se boli “ maine kaha tha na wo jarur ayega ..wo agaya shrutii…tum heemat rakhna wo hum sabko bacha lega “

Abhay “muje yakeen tha Raj bhai message padhte he madad ko ayenge”

Ajju- tune acha kiya jo ane se pahle Raj ko location bhej di ….

Shiwani man “mai sher ke muu mai hath dalkar tum logo ne bahut badi galti kar di h ab dekhungi tum mai se koun jinda bachta h”….



In charo ko apne jinda rahne ki umid dikhayi dene lagi thi isliye wo jaldi se pahadi ke upar chadne lage….



Dur se Helicopter ki awaj sunkar Jasien aur vithal ke bhi kaan khade ho gaye …..wo jungle ke upar ud rahe helicopter ki taraf dekh kar Jasien gusai se khada ho gaya ..

Jasien “ Toh tumhe imandari se nahi khelna h khel …no problem phir palat kar jo un 25 killers se jo 4ro ke sir ko layega wo sidhe pass ho jayega”

Aur ye baat sunte he wo sabhi active ho gaye aur jungle ke andar ki taraf tezi se unhe marne ke liye bhagne lage unki raftar aam admi se behad tez thi palak jhapakte he wo gayab ho kar jungle ka hissa ban gaye….

Toh udhar Raj ne rassi ko helicopter se niche latka diya…

Jogindar- raj ye khud khusi h in pedo ki unchayi pata nahi h , rafter bhi tez h aur niche kuch dikhayi nahi de raha h…..kya h niche kuch pata nahi h aur tum search light bhi chalu nahi karne de rahe ho

Raj- meri jaan meri nahi h wo sirf pariwar ke liye h aur waise bade papa meri jaan is jungle mai toh bilkul nahi jayegi….muje koyi maar sakta h toh mera koyi apna he …..

Jogindar raj ke sabd soon chup ho gaye …unhe uski sakal mai sahdev ka chehra nazar aane laga …..

Raj..pilot se “mere utarne ke baad search light on karo aur sabhi pahadi ko dekhte raho janha information mile wanhi helicopter ko udate rahna main samaj jaunga itna kahkar usne sath laye bag mai se kafi sari chije apni dress mai bani pocket mai rakh di specially morphine ki high dose jo uske tez se bhi tez dard ko kaafi dair ke liye daba sakti thi aur phir khudke night weapons bhi fit kar liye…phir ek nazar niche dekha aur rassi ke sahahre niche latak gaya jab usko niche ped ka upari heesa dikhayi diya toh wo sidha kudh gaya ….ped ki dalo ko hath se pakdne ki kosis ki par wo tut ti gayi aur phir ek mote tane ko usne pakad liya jisai niche girne se wo bach gaya….night vission se jab usne niche dekha toh abhi bhi usai jameen nahi dikhayi di…..raj “ hmmm ye ped kafi unchai h” itna kah wo furti se ek daal se dusri daal kud ta huva kuch he pal mai niche utar gaya …aur location ki taraf jane laga…..jo usai 100 meter ki duri par thi wo chalte huve helicopter se kuda tha isliye location se thoda dur agaya….

Raj-- helicopter ki awaj ab dur ho rahi h raat ke andhere mai muje utarte huve kisi ne nahi dekha hoga ….ab bus muje ye dhayan rakhna h ki koyi muje dekh na le baki search light on hone se wo sabhi confuse ho jayenge….

Raj pedo ke upar niche nazar rakhta huva loction par pahuch gaya…

Raj- yanha toh koyi nahi h ye trap toh nahi….tabhi usai wanha ped se latki kati huvi rassi dikhayi di ….. “hmmm iska matlb wo yanha the aur unhe abhay ne jarur yanha se bacha liya hoga par wo gaye kanha agar shiwani unke sath h toh wo jarur koyi clue chodegi….par kanha jald he usai ped par cross ka nishan dikhayi diya phir agai ek ped par aur cross diya “ ye nishan usi ne banaye h iska matlb abhi wo sabhi safe h …aur agar usne ye nishan banaye h toh meri baat usai jarur yaad hogi ki jab andhera ho koyi direction na mile toh seven star ✨ ko follow karo aur unchayi par ja kar khud ko safe rakho …. excellent babe good job “

Itna kah wo ped ke upar chad gaya aur seven stars ki direction dekh kar pedo ke upar se he us taraf badhne laga …

Udhar jasien ke killer bhi jungle mai 5 panch ke group mai fel kar unke sikar ke liye samne se tezi se badh rahe the….ab abhay shruti ajju aur shiwani ke charo taraf maut ka saya mandrane laga tha…andar pahle se he jasien ke admi unka picha kar rahe the aur bhediyo ka ek jhund abhi bhi jungle mai sikar ke liye ghoom raha tha.abhay shruti aur shiwani ko uthakar pahad par chadta ja raha tha taki unchayi par chadkar sabko suraksit kar sake ….aur pahadi ki dusri taraf se jungle ka raja sher talab ki aur ja raha tha aur ab dono ke he bich ki duri minut dar minut kam hoti ja rahi thi ……….idhar Raj ne niche jump laga di aur ab paidal he bahut tezi se seven stars ki direction mai bagne laga …..abhi wo kuch aur dur he aya tha ki usai bhediyo ki lash dikhi ….Raj “ nahi kuch acha nahi…yanha 4 bhediyo ki laash h matlb uncharo ne inka samna kiya h muje aur jaldi karni hogi”…

Ajju abhay shruti shiwani ke sath pahadi par lagh bhagh adhai se jayda chad chuke the ….tabhi unko piche se dur se aati bhediyo ki ghurahat sunayi diii…..

Abhay jaldi ajju ped par chad aur ek ko upar khinch ….ajju ne bina waqt ganvaye ped par chadayi kardi aur shiwani ko upar khinch liya par shruti jo adhmari halat mai thi usai abhay lekar upar lekar chadne laga….bus ek second baad he bhediye bus uske pair ko pakadte pakadte rah gaye aur apne sikar ko na pakadne ki wajah se wo cheek kar baki sathiyo ko bhi bulane lag gaye ….par tabhi unhe ek bahut tez dhahad sunayi di jisai sunte he wo sabhi jhadiyo mai chip gaye …aur samne aya bhukha sher jo khun ki gandh watavaran mai sungh kar ped ki taraf ane laga…..

Ajju “ab kya kare pahadi toh abhi bhi thodi aur unchi aur agar hum unche nahi pahuche toh raj bhai hum tak nahi pahuch payenge “…..

Shiwani “wo ayega aur jarur ayega hume bus usai bulane ka tarika sochna h”



Raj ko pure raste khun ki tez gandh hawa mai aati rahi …par usne ek pal bhi rookna sahi nahi samja aur agai bhadta raha upar helicopter bhi apni search light se sabhi ko dhudhne ki kosis karne laga…par upar se raat aur ghane pedo ke karan unhe insaan toh dur ki baat jamin ka namo nishan tak nahi nahi de raha tha …



Raj “ yanha se unka koyi clue nahi mil raha h ….muje upar chadkar sevenstar ki direction dekhni hogi………itna kah jaldi se ped par chad gaya ….. hmmm us taraf pahadi dikh rahi h wo jarur udhar pahadi ke upar chad gaye honge ….aur jaldi se ped se wapas uatarkar agai bhagne laga tabhi usai dahadne ki bhayankar awaj ayi …….

Udhar….

Killer ka ek group abhay and group ke bilkul karib pahuch gaya tha…. Aur behad he furti se pedo ke upar se jump karte huve agai badh rahe the …ek ne ishara kiya ….toh baki 4 bhi rook gaye aur pahle wale ki taraf dekhne lage …pahle wale ne ishara kiya jiska matlb tha agai bhediyo ka jhund h matlb sikar wanhi h ….baki sabhi ped se uchalte huve pahadi ke upar ki taraf badhne lag gaye …..aur ab unke bich duri sirf 50 meter ki he bachi thi …abhay ko bhi kuch bura sa mahsus huva …..

Abhay “ kuch gadbad h bhediyo ka jhund chip gaya h …..aur aaspass behad shanti ho gayi h sher ki dhadne ki awaj bhi nahi arahi h..”

Shiwani “ kanhi uske admi toh nahi agaye h isliye dheere dheere upar chado aur nazar rakho”

Shiwani ki baat sunkar wo dheere dheere ped ke aur upar chadne lage par unke upar chadte samay daliyo ke hilne se sarsarhat ki awaj hone lagi ….niche khada sher upar ki taraf dekhne laga aur apne sikar ko dekhti he bhanyankar garjan muu se nikali …….jasien ke pahle se nazar rakh rahe killers ne un charo ko muskarakar dekha aur phir apni gadhi mai dekh kar kaha “ bus 2 hour aur h phir master ka order tha ki 12 bajte he unhe maar dena h “tabhi pedo se kudhte huve a 2 jane aur wanha agaye …..toh pahle wale killers bole “ tum logo ki training ka waqt nahi huva h abhi 2 hour baki h” uski baat sunkar abhi aya killer bola “ senior master Jasien ne aadesh diya h ki inlogo ko turant maarkar inki gardan unhe dena wala exam mai pass ho jayega….purana killer bola hmmm tikh h wo wanha teesare ped par h …purane wale dono killer aur naye wale 5 killers alag alag hokar ped ki tara bhadne lage….

Wanhi ped par

Ajju--khud ki t shirt kholkar teri t shirt de …

Abhay —kya karna chahta h ….

Ajju — wo helicopter hamare liye h aur jungle bahut bada h aur ped bhi gahre h wo hume dhund nahi payenge isliye hume ek badi lakdi ke sahre unhe ishara dena hoga samjha ab jaldi de …

Abhay-- hmm ye le……..



Sher ki dahad aur bhediyo ki awaje sunkar 2 group aur unki taraf tezi se pass agaye the …. Killers ne ped ke niche sher ko dekha toh unke chahre par muskaan agayi aur sabki nighaye ek sath mili toh kayi blade ek sath hawa mai lahraye aur sher ki dard naak dahad us jungle mai ghoonj gayi ….

Helicopter asmaan se abhay group ko dhundhne ki kosis kar raha tha wo tikh us pahadi ke upar se gujra janha ajju abhay shruti shiwani the par wo cross karta huva agai nikal gaya tabhi …jogindar singh cheekhe “ turn back ..turn back i found something”…aur jab helicopter dubara wanha se gujara tab unhe dikhayi diya wo t shir ka kapda jo ped se upar nikla huva tha wo khusi se cheek pade “mil gaye pilot yanhi light ko focus rakho”…

Dur se Jasien “ so finaly you found. but its too late vithal tum yanhi intezar karo ab lagta h muje he jana hoga jab koyi khud he marne aya h toh main bhi dekhna chahta hu kismai itna jigar h jo mere raste mai araha h”



Par koyi aur bhi tha jo behada tez gati se us taraf bhadta huva pass agaya tha .Raj “ kanha ho tum sab please koyi toh hint do main ab kisi ko khona nahi chata hu” itna bolne ke sath he ek bhediyo ka jhund uske samne agaya ….

Raj “ tum sab galat jagah agaye ho waqt nahi h mere pas” itna kahte he wo apni back se sword nikal kar un charo ko matra char slash mai 2 tukdo mai kaat diya….aur tabhi usai helicoptet ki light pahdi kse thodi niche ek he jagah nazar ayi …wo khud se bola “kya bade papa ko kuch dikha h muje jaldi karni hogi”wo turant pedke upar chad gaya aur jab usai Helicopter ek he jagah gol gol ghumkar light marta nazar aya toh uske chahre par muskarahat agayi. “ Main araha hu bus kuch pal aur heemat rakhna “

Udhar ped ke niche sher ko buri tarah tadfadati huvi maut dekh un charo ko bhi khatre ka ahsas ho gaya aur tabhi ek ke baad ek kayi sare killer us ped ke upar agaye aur sabhi abhay and group ko dekhne lage….

Abhay - taiyar ho jao ….

Sabi charo taraf se unki taraf agai bhadne lage …tabhi upar se ek kick aakar piche se pith par ajju ko padi aur wo balnace nahi kar paya.wo ped ke upar se tute huve patte ki tarah daliyo se takrate huve niche jamin par aakar gira ….abhay ne turant upar ki taraf dekha aur kick marne wale ke pair ko pakad liya aur khinchkar usai bhi niche fenk diya …par ek blade udta huva aakar abhay ki pith mai laga aur wo dard se karah utha ek aur blade aakar uske shoulder par laga aur phir ek kick uski chest par aakar lagi aur wo bhi ped ki dalo se takrata huva niche aakar gira wo last tak khud ko balance karne ki kosis mai tha isliye usai girne se kam chot lagi….par knife ke aur blades ke ghav se khun pani ki tarah bahane laga ….shiwani jo pahle se thodi niche thi usne niche abhay ko dekha aur apne hath knife par kas liye…..niche abhay ne khud ke dard ko sahan karte huve ajju ko sambhal kar ped ke sahare bithaya aur upar ki taraf shiwani ko dekha tabhi uske piche ek ek karke kayi sare killers alag pedo se niche utare …..abhay bhi palat gaya usai tikh samne kayi sare killers alag alag attack position mai khade dikhayi diye jinke hath mai long knifes the …. Upar ped ke killers shiwani ki taraf kis chipkali ki tarah daal se chipakte huve dheere dheere bhadne lage…jinse ladne ke liye shiwani bhi taiyar ho gayi shiwani manmai “ kanha ho tum jaldi ao”

Niche …..

Abhay khun thuk kar…. “Aaaahkk thuu abe ajju.. ye benstokes tere bhai kuposhan ke sikar lag rahe h bhosdike mare huve se lag rahe h”

Par ajju kya jawab deta wo toh behosh ho chuka tha …aur upar shruti pahle se he behosh thi…

Abhay- “ajju ajju kuch toh bol mere bhai…aahhhhhhhh….ghuuuurrrr …..main aj tum se kisi ko nahi chodunga…..ajao kutto tumhara daddy tumhe aj chodna sikhayega…..”



Sabhi killers ne ek dusre ki taraf dekh ishara kiya aur abhay ki tara badhne lage…abhay bhi pure gusai mai funkaar utha …usai ajju shrutii aur shiwani ki halat dekh pahle he bahut gusa araha tha…usne dono hath mai khanjar le liya aur agai arahe dono killer ki taraf dekhne laga wo 15 trained killers se gira huva tha par dar ka ek ansh bhar bhi uski ankho mai nahi tha…..wo agai ek kadam he badha tha ki hawa ko cheerne wali awaj uske kano mai ayi ….

Whooossssssss…..

Aur phir….

khachhhhhhh……


Agai wale dono killer jamin par niche gire pade the …….Aur phir dikhi ek parchayi jo tezi se ped ke upar move karti huvi jump markar sidha usi ped par agayi jispar shiwani thi aur shiwani kuch bol pati usai pahle he uski taraf aa rahe killers sukhe patte ki tarah niche girne lage ….aur wo parchayi sidha us ped se jump karti huvi abhay ke tikh samne utri ……jiske hath mai ek lamba khanjar aur pith par sword tangi huvi thi…. ..

Us shakhs ne palatkar abhay ko dekha aur palak jhapakte he pocket se ek liquid injecter nikal kar abhay ke leg mai morphine ki high dose ghusa di…..abhay jab tak samjta kuch he palo mai usai uski body mai ho raha beintiha dard gayab hote huve mahsus huva ……

Abhay — Tum agaye…

Raj- lets hunt begins….phir ek sword uski taraf karke take this ….

Abhay ne raj ki taraf dekha phir na mai gardan hilayi aur apne hatho ko masal kar killers ki taraf dekhne laga….aur ek baar raj ki taraf muskaraya phir sidha un killers ki taraf bhag gaya ….sabhi killers bahut furtile the wo bhi abhay par furti se waar karne lage ….abhay hath ghuma raha tha par wo easily dodge karte huve bach rahe the par ek ka hath abhay ke hath mai agaya aur abhay ke chare par katilana bhav agaye usne us killer ko uthakar apne ek hath se teen baar dono taraf uthakar patak aur killer ki hadiya ka chura nikal diya aur phir ek pair uski chest par rakh kar dono hath ukhad fenk diya….is bich kayi knife ke cut usai baki killers se mile par morphine ki heavy dose se usai abhi dard mahsus nahi ho raha tha wo ab ek saand mai badal gaya tha jisai sirf marna tha apne dushman ko …usne samne se arahe killer ke knife ke waar ko apne nange hath se pakad liya aur dusre hath se uski gardan pakad li ..aur bola “ daddy told you today i give you lesson how to fuck(baap ne pahle he kaha tha wo aj tume chodna sikhayega)”itna kah puri takat se ek kick uski chest par maar di jisai wo kayi feet hawa mai udta huva pahad ki dhalan se niche ki taraf ludkta huva pathro se takra gaya ….uska ek bhi waar jisai pada wo adhmara hota chala gaya

Udhar raj ko bhi 4 killers ne gher rakha tha ….jismai se ek ne knife se pahle waar raj ki chest par kiya jisai raj ne side hat te huve apne dagger se block kar liya par dusre ne leg par waar kiya toh raj jump ke sath dusri taraf khud gaya phir 2 ne ek sath waar kiya toh raj piche ki taraf jump karke move ho gaya …..

Raj “hmm trained fighters knife se fight kar rahe matlb training ki last stage par h” phir apni ankho se ek ek karke sabke pattern ko dekha aur apne attack ko ready kar liya “know my turn” aur ek step right lekar agai wale ko jhukar pait par cut diya aur turant he left side move karke killer ke upar se jump lete huve huve uske gale par cut maar diya ab uske samne 2 jane khade the aur wo dono bhi raj ko he dekh rahe the dono ki nazre apas mai mili aur ek sath he dono ne attack kiya ek ka attack gale par tha toh ek ka leg par tha raj ghomte huve dono ke waar ke bich se nikal gaya aur furti se jamin par pair maar kar mudkar ek ki taraf dagger fenka aur dusre ki taraf bhagkar uske waar se bachte huve uske gale par waar kar diya aur dono wanhi maar gaye ….Raj ne piche moodkar dekha toh abhay 4 killers se ghira huva tha aur kisi ghayal saand ki tarah un sabhi par fuunkaar raha tha …aur wo sabhi apni furti ka fayda utha kar alag jagah se abhay par waar kar rahe the…..Raj “ abhay inse lad nahi payega wo pahle he ghayal h “ itna kah kar wo jaldi se chipte huve ek killer ke piche pahuch gaya aur ek ki gardan ko kaat diya achanak hamle se wo sabhi thoda vichlit ho gaye toh abhay ne bhi ek ko giraft mai kar uski gadan tod di ab two vs two tha wo dono killers dheere dheere piche hatne lage ….ahay ne ye dekha toh unki taraf jane laga toh raj ne rok liya…

Raj — nahi ….ye toh suruwat h …ye toh puppets h asli toh ab samne ayega…..



Tabhi Clap ………ki awaj wanha sunayi diii …….



“Smart very smart tabhi main sochu ki ye log ab tak jinda kaise h…..so finaly you are the back bone of team”



Raj--- so what???? are you afraid( toh kya???. tum dar rahe ho)….

Jasien — Fear…Dar…wo kya hota h….i dont know…i know only one thing …..kill killl killl and killl peoples…that is only reason why i m here….

Raj — badbola samay ki barbadi……lets finish this game…..

Jasien- why not …sirf tum aur mai ….

Abhay - nahi raj ye mera sikar h…

Jasien-- you and me …….ha ha ha tum mera match nahi ho ….but its ok warm up ho jayega …

Abhay agai ki taraf bhadte huve “waqt batayega” ye sunkar jasien ke chahre par muska agayi ….aur wo ek kadam left ek kadam right ke pattern mai agai badha aur abhay ki arahi kick ko dodge kiya aur uske dusre pair ke ghutne par kick maar di jisai abhay ladkhada gaya….Jasien “tum bahut kamjor ho” jasien ki baat sunkar abhay ko gusa agaya usne apna punch uske muu ki taraf ghumaya par jasien ne easily dodge kar diya “ come on hit hard and fast” abhay ko jasien ki baat buri tarah chub rahi thi usne jaldi se phir lagatar punch ghumaye jissai jasien easily bach gaya ….aur abhay ki back ki taraf aakar ek behad tez punch uski pith par jad diya jisai abhay agai ki taraf jaakar gira

Raj man mai “ye powerfull h iski training kaafi hard huvi h pain fear iska namonishan nahi h dimag isliye abhay ke attack ko easily padh par raha h ….”

Jasien- come on champ fight abhi toh ek he punch hit kiya h …..

Abhay ke khade hote he jasien furti se uske uske kareeb pahuch gaya aur kayi punch sari body par alag alag jagah jad diye abhay kati patang ki tàrah niche gir pada…… par abhay ko morphine ke dose ki wajah se abhi dard mahsus nahi ho raha tha but raj janta tha ki abhay ki kayi haddiya tut chuki h…



Raj “bahut huva”



Jasien ke chare par ayi muskaan gayab ho gayi Raj ne bhi abhay ko ek baar dekha aur apni pith se sword nikalkar side rakhti aur phir dagger ko bhi side rakh diya aur apne ek hath ke ishare se fight ke liye invite kiya ye dekh Jasien ne bhi apni back se dagger nikalkar side mai rakh diya aur raj ki taraf chalte huve ane laga…..

Jasien “ acha ek yodha warrior fight will ke sath”apne fighters ki taraf dekh kar aj ek acha sabak hoga tumhare liye…ki kaise ladte h….

Itna bola usne ek kick Raj ke ribs ki taraf mari jisai raj ne apne lefe hand se block kar diya…..par kick mai pressure bahut tha wo do kadam side khisak gaya….

Jasien kuch dum toh h….ab isai bacho ….itna kahkar usne ek jump sidhe raj ki taraf li aur right leg se kick mari jisai raj ne block karli par tabhi left kick chest par padi jisai raj piche ki taraf hawa mai kuch upar hote huve piche ki taraf girne laga toh usne apne hath jameen par tika diya aur ulta khada ho gaya aur hath se jameen mai pressure se dhaka mara sidhe jasien ke samne agaya……dono ki ankhe dubara se dusre se mili aur jasien ke ek sath kayi punches raj ki taraf barsne lage…..

Raj man mai “ ek minut mai 60 power punches style ye toh xabhi sir aur aag sir ne muje batayi thi ….toh ye professional killer h…

Raj ne bhi jaldi se uska tod ko dhund kar apne leg se ek kick jad di ..jisai jasien ko apni ribs mai pain mahsus huva…

Jasien “ toh tu is technique ko janta h phir tuje bhi in sabke sath marna hoga”

Aur right kick raj ke face par mari …raj ne niche jhukh kar dodge kiya par jasien ne furti se ghumkar right punch raj ke face mara diya jisai raj ne apne dono hath ko cross karke rok liya ….phir jump karke back flip marte huve jasien ke face par ek kick mar di ….jasien piche jaa kar gira….uske sabhi trainees ye dekh kar shock ho gaye …jasien ne apne hotho se khun nikalte huve mahsus kiya aur apne anguthe se khun ko saaf kiya…..

Jasien “ ab tumne muje gusa dila diya “. Haaaayiiiiya….aur ek jump ke sath khada ho gaya aur behad tezi se akar raj ke seene par punch jad diya jisa raj ne block kiya par kayi feet piche khiisak gaya aur wo sambhal pata tab tak ek aur punch tezi se aakar pada…raj piche kayi feet dur jakar gira……

Raj “man mai hhmm strenght h but iski weekness bhi yahi h” ye kahte huve wo dheere se khada huva aur apne hatho ko dheere dheere move kiya aur ant mai jasien ki taraf ane ka ishara kiya jasien bhi furti se bhagkar hawa mai jump kar kick raj ko marni chahi par raj ne inch bhar se uski kick ko dodge kiya aur ek hatheli ka waar jasien ki chest par maar diya …jissai jasien wapas udta huva pathar se takra gaya…..jasien ke muu se khub sara khun muu se aakar gira ….wo dubara tezi se khada aur aur raj ke upar left right punch aur kick ki barsaat karne laga jisai raj block karta ja raha tha par pain usai bhi ho raha tha….par ek punch phir akar raj ki chest par laga aur wo jameen se ludakta huva kayi feet dur jaakar gira wo khada hota usai pahle he jasien hawa mai jump marte huve …..raj ki taraf aya…jisai dekh abhay aur shiwani ki ankho mai chinta aur dar ke bhav agaye….par end waqt par raj side mai hat gaya …..

Raj “ ab meri bari h ….. “one hit one bone” aur raj body ko strech karke sidha khada ho gaya …aur jasien ke attack ka wait karne laga aur jasien ne jasai he right kick mari raj ne jhuk usi right leg ke joint par punch mar diya kadak ke sath uske ghutne ki hadi tut gayi aur wo ghutne par agaya …..Raj “ second punch for upper bone” ye kahkar agle second uske dono shoulder ki haddiyo ko tod 2 hit se tod diya

Raj “ last hit for life”

Jasien “ wait tum kaise maine apni puri jindgi isko sikhne mai bitayi par main nahi sikh paya”

Raj ne apne punch ko wapas liya aur usai kaha ….”peace …tumhare har attack se sirf killing aati h..jabki ….is technique ka base safety h…is liye ye tabhi sikh paoge jab tum khud killing se dur rahoge”

Jasien ne ek thandi aaanhhh bhari aur bola “ muje meri sword se he marna h “

Raj “ insabke p piche koun h”

Jasien -main mere master se gaddari nahi karunga par tumne muje ek sikh di h isliye ….main tumhe badle mai jarur kuch dunga aur phir killer ko bulakar ishara kiya ….aur kuch baate raj ko batayi..



Raj “ alvida agle janam ache insan banna” aur sword uske seene ke paar kar di phir palat kar le jao aur izzat ke sath vidayi do aur apne master se kahna jald mulakat hogi hamri jabtak meri family se dur rahe warna koyi bhi jinda nahi bachega”……



Raj man mai “ duniya mai aj bhi wafadari h is shakhs ne apne master ke liye maut kabul karli ab ” …

Sabhi killers Jasienki body kolekar chale gaye chale gaye…phir raj ne ped ke upar chad kar rasi ko niche karne ka ishara kiya aur one by one sabko upar bhejne laga … janha jogindar singh ne unhe helicopter mai khinch liya ..

Raj “ abhay tikh hone par sabka dhayan rakhe “

Abhay “ aj se ye jindgi apki udhar h apki apne meri bahan aur dost ko bachakar a muj par ahsan kiya h”

Raj “ bhavuk mat hovo hum ek pariwar h isliye ye mera farj h dadaji se contact karna aur in sabke ilaj mai jo bhi kharch aye uski parwa mat karna ye inka best se best dr se ilaj karwana aur mere message ka intezaar karna in sabhi ko taiyaar karna agai ladayi bahut badi hogi“

Abhay “ par ap kanha ja rahe h”

Raj “ is khel ko khatam karne kyoki muje jo chahiye tha wo mil gaya h”

Abhay “ par”….abhay ke baki sabd muu mai he rah gaye ……..raj ja chuka



1 month later …….Mumbayii

Undergrounde fighting

Anchor …….ek saal se number one fighter mika jisne ab tak ek bhi fight nahi hari h…50 lakh fight ki entry ke liye aur jeetne par 5 cr milenge ….h koyi mayi ka laal….jo apni kismat ajmayega…..tabhi ek ladki uske kaan mai akar kahti h…..

Anchor wo wo wo…..koyi h jo mika ko challenge karta h…

Sab ek sath hairani se itne log mare ja chuke h is mika ke hatho se ab ye koun agaya aur marne …



Anchor toh welcome h hamare new fighter...... “Nir...waa…..na….”



I think ye hamari story ka ab tak ka sabse bada update h 28000 letters ka h jo teen update ko milkar banta h….har baat detail mai describe karne ki kosis ki h agar koyi sawal ho toh jarur puch sakte h …



So masti mai padhne ka likes aur revoes pelne ka
Awesome update bro
 

Naik

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Update no 171
Sherdil ki kia dhamal Daar entry huwi h kon h yeh Banda
Bahen Rifat ki BAAT se pata chal raha UP se h yeh log or kisi ko dhoond rehe h kisko lekin bhai zabardast entry Mari h Kahani m dekhte aage kia pata chalta inke baare m
Anu ab shayad poori tarah se Raj ke uske Dil m jagah ban gayi h lekin Raj ek jagah bola ki bahen h woh kaise kia tarah bahen
Yeh kon aa gaya jisko NIRWANA ke baare m pata h ya fir sirf hawwa bana Dana h baherhal yeh hawwa NIRWANA ko jaaan ne walo ko pata chal gaya h ki woh Mumbai h or Jo Jo uske khaternaak kisse Janta h uski hawa tight ho gayi ab dekhte h kia hota h aage
Behtareen zabardast shaandar update bhai
 

Sandeep singh nirwan

Jindgi na milegi dobara....
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Nice update bro aag laga di hai
Thank you..
Msst update bhai
Thank you neerav bhai
Abhi purane kaafi raaz khulne vaki the apne ask aur nya game open kr dia
Dair savere ye sab toh hona he he h..
Ab hogi asli ladia
But me khu ga ki raj ka reunion hoga
Idea acha diya h apne toh karwa de reunion shandar andaz mai
jb sb se sbse bdi ladai to tb hi hogi. Abhi ke lie dekhna hoga ki raj kese tackle krta h sbko
Ha ye jaruri h par yanha ek plot aisa taiyar huva h ki ...katle aam hoga..
And I'm waiting for raj and sonali patches
And hope ki story ke end me ye doni sath bo
Raj sonali patch up ....sonali ka last reaction dekhe the ne apne ki koyi reaction nahi tha....
Thank you for your precious words 🙏👍👍👍
Bahtareen update bhai
Thank you
Humesha ki tarah sandar update
Aur humesha ki tarah aaj bhi man nahi bhara
Ab agai har baar kuch naya milega raj poonam ki bonding ...ladkiyo ki jalan sanki ka atank toh man toh nahi bharega
Bahut kam hi kahani hai jinhe itna pasnd karta hun
Dhanybaad itni sandar kahani likhne ke liye
Dhanyawaad subodh bhai....
Aur plz kahani ko bich me mat chhodna
Puri jarur karna
Kahani ko pura jarur karunga chahe taiyari ke chalte ek adh mahine band kardu par story jarur puri hogi....
Sath bane rahe...
Sandeep Bhai update to bahut badhiya diya hai aapne ekdm fantastic 😻
Ellysperry bro finaly tasalli se reply karte h apke review ka First of all thank you so much ....
Aur ye Naya shaks sherdil ye mujhe Ali ki family ka lag rha hai jo apne family ke katilo ko khoj rha hai aur Raj ke papa bhi to Ali ko apna Bhai hi mante the
Bilkul abhi tak ki story aur plot se yahi lag raha ki wo ali ki family ka h ....bilkul apke prediction bilkul durust h👍👍👍
Aur ab Nirwana ki identity kisne leak ki humko to lagta hai underworld boxing se hi Nirwana ki information mili hai death halo, aur se aur jr victor ko .
Nahi ye past se koyi h ....jo behad chalak aur tez h jo ...dawa kar raha h ki wo janta h nirwana ko ab kitna sach h ye toh agai he pata lagega
Udhar Raj ne Anu ko Puri tarah se apne pyar ke jaal me phasa liya aur rajni madam to Puri taiyar hai raaj ke liye kuch bhi kerne ke liye
Ha anu attach hone lagi h raj se ab dekhte h ki agai kya hota h..but rajni ke sath bonding dekhne mai bahut maza ane wala h unka sex bhi read karne wala hoga...
Ab to raj ko pta lag gya hai ki uski identity kisi ne leak ker di hai aur
Ha ye toh pata lag gaya h
sabse badi baat xabhi aur aag dono ko bhi pta lag ki raj Mumbai me hi hai ab to aur bhayanak game suru hoga aur jab raj, xabhi aur aag milenge tab kya hoga

I am so excited 😆
Ha par xabhi aur aag ki expectations se alag wo pahle he mumbayi agaya h
Thank you so much for your precious words and beautiful review keep supporting 🙏👍🙏👍🙏👍🙏👍
Absolutely stunning update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai
Thank you
Mast update h bhai.... Abhi se hi wait nhi ho rha next episode ka😂😂
Thank you Tuesday ko milega..
superb update..... :applause: :applause:
Thank you
Shandar update
Thank you iron man bro....
Thanks ( Nirwana ) giving a super update
Thank you 😌
ab sonali vs anu vs richa vs Poonam ???? 😁 raj ke to l**** lag gaye

mazedar update
Solid lag gaye ...explain apko pahle he kar diya h..
Zabardast update
Thank you
Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha
Thank you
Fantastic zabardast update 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thank you
Waah brother kya suspense create kiya hai maza aa gya😍😍😍😍.
Thank you bro
 
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