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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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“ Good morning Raj ji”

Raj ne kitchen se arahi poonam ki taraf dekha …aur muskurate huve bola “very good morning poonam ji ye dono aise he dair tak soti h …”

Poonam “kal late soyi thi aur aj sunday h warna padhayi se fursat kanha hoti h inhe”

Raj — acha toh phir ap ….

Poonam — muje adat h subhe 5 baje nind khul jati h phir puja karke nasta banate banate college ka time ho jata h…main apke liye tea lekar aati hu…

Raj poonam ko dhayan se dekh raha tha wo khudse he bola “ raat ko ek baje sayad 1.30 baje he soyi hogi …aur itni jaldi uthkar breakfast ki taiyari kar rahi h…kya aisi bhi ladkiya hoti h duniya mai“

Poonam “ Kya dekh rahe raj ji“

Raj “kuch bhi nahi ”

Tabhi usai piche se awaj sunayi di …
“Kyo ghuur rahe ho meri bahan ko”
Raj “ ghuur nahi soch raha hu ki ek wo h jo kitna kaam karti h aur ek ap ho jo soti rahti h”
“ Agar tumhe subhe subhe he maar khani h toh aise he bol do waise bhi bahut din ho gaye h fight kiye huve “


Raj -Oh aisa kya ajao apko aise toh main kuch kar nahi sakta hu …fight mai he pitunga “
Manisha “ acha 30 minuts ….h tumhare pass “ phir batati hu tumhe itna kah wo ready hone chali gayi …”

Poonam - tea dete huve ap aur manisha hamesha he aise rahte ho…i mean ek dusre ko tang karte huve…

Raj — nahii…ye pyar h hamara unhone mere liye bahut kuch saha aur kiya h main jitna unke liye karu utna kam h ….aisa samaj lo ye jeevan kuch khass jano ke liye he …aur unmai se ye bahut bahut khass h…dekhna chahogi apki bahan akhir kya h ….

Poonam — haaa…
Raj ne jaldi se tea pi aur 15 minut mai he bahar gardan mai agaya……aur shanti se poonam ke sath chair par baith gaya …manishs lower aur t shirt pahan kar aagayiii….

Manisha toh pitne ko taiyar ….

Raj — acha kisne kaha main apse ladunga …

Manisha hairani se dekhne lagiii….

Raj ne hath ko upar uthaya aur niche kar diya…

Manisha aur poonam confusion se raj ko dekhne lagi tabhi mityudoot sidha upar se sidha manisha aur raj ke agai akar kudha ……manisha 2 kadam piche hat gayi aur poonam achanak mityudoot ko dekh kar piche girne ko huvi toh raj ne chair pakad li…..

Raj — apko inse ladna h….

Manisha — inse ladna h h koun ye …..

Raj - body gaurd kahlo ya dost …..bus inhe koyi muje mare ye pasand nahi h…
Aur mera student pite ye muje pasand nahi h apko in par 10 waar baar marna h …aur ye apko sirf push karenge ok

Manisha — ok…

Raj — so lets start…..

Manisha ne bina deri kiye he jump kar ke furti se mityu doot ki chest par jor se waar kiya ….manisha ka waar dekh poonam ki ankhe badi badi ho gayiiii….aur aisa he haal ghar ke andar khade har body gaurds ka tha…. Jo tabse mityudoot ki personality se he hairan pareshan the ki ye kab se ghar ke andar h ….aur hume dikha tak nahi ….manisha ki kick ko mityudoot ne dono hath se block kar liya par manisha ne turant hawa mai he dusri kick mityudoot ke pait par maar di ….aur niche girte he ek jump ke sath dubara khadi ho gayi ….

Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan agayi….

Manisha ne right unch mara toh mityudoot furti se punch ke pass se dodge karta huva piche pahucha aur left hand se push kar diya manisha udti huvi agai ki taraf gayi par apne dono hath jameen par tikar jump ke sath sidhi ho gayi …..manisha ne lagataar ek ke baad baad ek kayi sare punch kiye ….jisai mityu doot asani se dodge karta raha ..mityudoot ne kitni he baar manisha ko jamin par patka ….par fight mai itni baar pitne ke baad bhi manisha ke chahre par koyi sikan nahi thi uski ankhe bahut serious ho rakhi thi….

Raj “ Bus ..
Dono ruk gaye ….

Raj “ apki power mai kafi sudhar huva kitni dair prectice karti ho ….aur kab …”

Manisha — master raat ko 9 se 11 baje tak….

Raj — subhe 4 se 7 ….. jismai subhe half hour yoga ….jismai body streching par pura focus rakhna h jitne lachule hoga sarir utna asan hoga takatwar dhushman se nipatna….

Manisha - ji master ….

Raj - ab kuch moves main sikha raha hu jinhe apko ache se practice karna …..itna kah usne kaafi sare moves kiye ….jinhe manisha dhayan se dekhti rahi….

Raj samaj aya …..

Manisha ji master itna kah usne moves karne suru kar diye …..

Raj wait raj ne piche ja manisha ke dono hath pakde aur pair se pair jod kar move karane suru kar diye karib half hour mai he manisha ki speed tezi se badhne lagi …

Raj — good …agli baar jab perfect ho jao toh ghar par roof par pahuch kar seeti baja dena aur jo aye uske sath apni skills ki practice karna …aur us shakhs ke sath week mai ek din pura dena h jo wo sikhaye sikhna h ….

Manisha ji master….

Poonam toh bus …..hairan pareshan manisha ko he dekh rahi thi jiske hotho ke ek koune se khun toh kohni chili huvi thi par kya mazal ki uske muu se uff bhi nikal jaye ..

Raj ne waqt dekha toh 9 ke kareeb time ho gaya tha… “muje jana hoga ….jald milenge ….”phir palatkar “ thank you poonam ji apke sath waqt baate karke bahut acha laga”
Poonam “ muje bhi bahut acha laga main jitna apko janne ki kosis karti hu utna kam lagta h”

Raj “duniya bahut badi h par main sidha hu bus apno ki parwah aur apno ki khushi chahta hu …bye jald milenge”
Raj ke janne ke baad manisha dhadam se ghass mai gir kar hafne lagi..

Poonam tezi se bhagkar uske pass ayi …” kya huva tuje “
Manisha ghass mai late kar “gadha idiot duffer kanhi ka hii kitna mara us saand ne hath nahi hathoda tha pura sarir tut raha h”

Poonam - par raj ji ke samne toh….

Manisha- “ are wo jab master banta h tab wo raj nahi hota h ek galti ki itni badi saza milti h ki…24 hours dard sahna padta h…marta bhi h stick se….

Poonam — par unhe toh tu pitati rahti h

Manisha — uski jindgi bahut muskil h meri bahan ….wo yanha h par dimag kanhi aur man kanhi aur soch kuch aur ….uski ek badi chook kya kar sakti tuje andaza bhi nahi h phir apni t shirt kp halka sa upar karke ye nishan kiska h…

Poonam - chot ka …

Manisha — Bullet ka h …hume marne ki kosis ki thi muje aur shiwani ko goli lagi thi…

Poonam hairani se manisha ko dekhne lagi…

Manisha — aur pata h tere patidev ne kya kiya ….

Poonam — kya …

Manisha — us shakhs ko 24 hours mai dhundh liya aur helicopters bosts lejakar humare hatho se he ussi marwaya ….uske apno ko koyi chuu nahi sakta h aur agar kisi ne chuu diya toh ….wo Nirr…i mean wo samne wale ke pure khandan ko tadpa tadpa kar marta h……

Poonam —tabhi main sochu meri bahan jo raj ji ko tang karti rahti h wo achanak sidhi kaise ho gayi akhir raj guru ke roop mai samne jo tha…

Manisha-- agar teri enquiry ho hayi toh andar le chal ice de dena warna pata nahi kanha se sarir nila ho jayega….waise kuch bhi kah tuje dekh kar uska chehra normal ho jata h ….warna itni asani se nahi chodta wo muje ..

Poonam — toh subhe kyo pange le rahi thi…

Manisha — ayyii maa toh muje kya pata tha ki is baar khud ki jagah wo saand sa lada dega ..
Poonam ko bhi jor se hansi agayiii…..par raj ki 3 fight wo dekh chukhi thi usai pata tha ki raj ki jindgi bahut muskil h isliye wo choti choti care se he raj ko khus karne ki kosis kar rahi thi…

Idhar car mai

mityudoot — master ye ladki …

Raj — muje pasand h kaisi lagi…

Mitydoot —strong h …itni maar khane ke baad bhi khadi rahi ….

Raj — Isliye Bhabhi banegi meri….

Mityudooy ne road ke bich he jor se break maar diye…..

Raj — are chaloa bhid lag jayegi….ap itna hairan mat ho ….inhe maine sunil ke liye pasand kiya h bus sahi waqt ka intezar kar raha hu……

Mityudoot — par master …wo toh sidhe sadhe h ..waise Jodi khub jamegi…

Raj — Ha….isliye ab dadaji ko bata ta hu wo akar baat karengi par pahle unki maa se mil lu……..

Dono jab ghar pahuche toh 9.45 ho chuke the…..

Raj — bhook lag gayi h ..

Mityudoot — muje bhi lagi h …ap naha lijiye main dekhta hu….

Raj — nahi ap raat se jage huve h….ap security alarm on kar dijiye aur rest kariye main taiyar karta hu breakfast ki ……
Idhar anu nahakar ache se taiyar hokar paidal he raj ke ghar ki taraf chal diii…uska dil bahut khus tha kyoki subhe ke news pepar mai koyi bhi news nahi thi muder ki …aur usai jayda khus thi wo apne pyar raj ko pa lene ki khushi mai ….uske chahre par rah rah kar muskaan arahi thi ….aur is muskaan ke sath wo raj ke ghar pahuchi…….
“Agayi Ao breakfast ready kiya h bhuk lagi hogi .. raat ka dinner na sahi breakfast toh kar he sakte h sath mai…
Anu nazre nichi karte huve chup chap baith gayi…raj ne usai sandwich aur tea di “ nasta karo main abhi ata hu itna kah wo breakfast aur juice lekar mityudoot ke room ki taraf chala gaya …anu ne breakfast uske hath mai dekha toh usai dar laga ki koyi aur ladki toh nahi h…uske chahre ka rang feeka padbe laga…
“Koyi nahi h ghar par tum aram se nasta kar sakti ho”

Anu “ isai kaise pata lag gaya ki main kya soch rahi hu”
Kuch pal baad raj wapas agaya …..aur anu ke pass baithkar breakfast karne laga …anu nazar bachakar raj ko dekh rahi thi aur raj serious hokar nasta kar raha tha…..kuch he dair mai anu ko bhi realise ho gaya ki raj bahut badla huva sa h aj uske chahre par wo majak wo nokh jhok koyi expression nahi h usne breakfast chod diya ….aur raj ko serious kar dekhne lagi ….

Anu “main….”

Raj “pahle wada karo main jab tak na bolu kuch nahi kahogi aur sirf sunogi ….

Anu cheekte huve “ tum akhir chahte kya ho raj ….maine wo kiya jo tumne kaha …
Ab sirf ye sarir bacha h wo bhi tumhara he h ab aur kaise khus karu tumhe”

Tadak ek jordar thapad anu ko pada ….
“Kahne se pahle socha karo anu …..tumhe lagta h muje ye chahiye h…mar jana pasand karunga aise karne se pahle …..are main toh tumhe kiss karne se he roj gilani se mar raha hu…”

Anu rote huve “ mujh mai kya kami h kya tum mujse ab pyar nahi karte ho …akhir tum kyo kar rahe ho aisa ”

Raj ne anu ko fafak fafak kar rote dekha toh …agai badhkar usai gale lag liya ….. “Anuuuu… main tumse jo kahna chahta hu uske liye tumhara shant hona jaruri h …main chahta hu pahle tum meri baat suno bus isliye kaha tha ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye bich mai nahi bologi”
Anu ne sir uncha karke raj ko dekha aur ha mai gardan hila di raj ne apne hatho se uske ansuu pounche aur usai sofe par baitha diya ……

Raj —main jo kahne ja raha hu usmai laghbhag sab sach h aur kuch bacha h toh usai tum khud proof karogi ab pahli baat…kal tumne jisai mara wo mera admi tha aur wo jinda h ……Dusri baat Agar main ye kahu ki tumhara bahut bada pariwar h tumhare chacha chachi dada dadi h ………Teesari baat — tumhare maapapa ne jaanbhujkar tumse sabkuch chipaya h toh ….
Anu ki ankho ke ansuu band ho gaye aur wo raj hairani se dekhne lagi wo kahna toh bahut kuch chahti thi par raj ki baat ne usai chup kara rakha tha…
“Muje pata h tumhe bahut se sawal puchne h par meri baat khatam hone ka wait karo …Tumhare papa realstate ka he business nahi karte h balki underworld ke bahut bade don bhi h..”
Anu “Raj tummm”
“ meri baat khatam hone do ab gai suno tumhe sab nahi pata h kyoki tumse sabkuch chipaya gaya h….tumhare pita ne kitne ghar ujad kar ye duniya banayi h tum soch bhi nahi sakti ho aur un ujde huve pariwaro mai unke apne pariwaar bhi h muje malum tum soch rahi hogi ki main jhutha hu dhokhebaz hu par sach yahi h aur tumhare papa ke ujade gaye pariwaro mai se unka apna saga pariwar bhi h aur mainn usi pariwar ka beta hu…..raj ne gahri saans choddiii aur anu se bola ab tum apne sawal puch sakti ho..”
Anu khadi huvi aur raj ke gaal par ek baad ek kayi thapad jad diya raj ne anu ke thapad se palke tak nahi jhapkayi….anu ek tak usai ghoorti rahi usne auro ki tarah koyi reaction nahi diya wo kafi dair aise he raj ko ghoorti rahi …phir boli

Anu “ agar ye baat papa ko bata du toh kya hoga”

Raj “ kal condition yahi jaane ke liye he toh rakhi thi ki tum par kitna yakeen kar sakta hu aur jab yakeen huva toh sachayi batayi”
Anu niche farsh par sir pakad kar baith gayi usai yakeen nahi ho raha tha par wo raj ko bhi ache se janti thi ki raj jhut nahi bolega usai …

Anu — tumhara pyar jhuta tha h na…

Raj — Nahi par…

Anu — bolo raj jab itna bol chuke ho toh sab bol do kuch bhi mat chupao….

Raj —sach bardast nahi kar paogi….

Anu — Dont worry sucied waigarh karne wali ladki nahi hu….agar marungi toh tumhe sath leke marungi…ab batao ki kya baki rah gaya..h..

Raj — Jab main tumse mila mera sirf sach jaankar tumse dur jane ka irada tha par ha ab main tumhe bahut pyar karta hu par ye wo pyar nahi jo ladka ladki ke bich hota h ….ye ek…ye…ek…
Anu ka Dil toh pahle he tut chuka tha ansuu bahkar sukh chuke the wo bus raj ki na ka he wait kar rahi thi aur soch rakha tha ki na sunte he wi chup chap nikalkar raj ko marwa degi aur khud bhi mar jayegii…..wo raj ki na ho saki toh usai bhi wo kisi aur ka nahi hone degi…

Raj- main tumhari sagi bua ka ladka hu aur is rishte se tum meri bahan ho …..
Anu ki halat toh bahut buri ho gayi thi wo apne he bhai se pyar kitni he dair uska dimag soona pada raha ….…..kuch pal baad uske dil mai khayal aya …ki raj ko pata tha main uski bahan hu phir bhi ….usne khade hokar gusai se kayi sare thapad raj ko aur mare aur raj ke seene par jor jor se marne lagiiii….” Kyo raj kyo….tumhe pata tha main tumhari bahan hu phir bhi pyar ka natak kyo kyo kyo raj …kyo kiya tumne aisaaa”

Raj kya he kahta par kahna toh tha he isliye usne kaha “ i m sorry anu….main tumhe kya kahta….. yahi ki main tumhara bhai hu tum yakin nahi kartiii ….kya kahta mere gharwalo ki mout ki wajah tumhare papa h tum yakeen karti mujpar bolo….kya karta main tum he batao isiliye he toh jab bhi tum limits paar karne ki kosis karti tab main tumhe rok deta kyoki main aur nicha nahi gir sakta tha i m sorry anu tum jo chahe mere sath kar sakti ho tumhari kasam main uff tak nahi karunga par sach yahi h hum bhai bahan h”
Anu raj ke he gale lagi rahi ….raj ne usai sofe par baitha diya….
5 minut,30 minut ,ek hour bit gaya, dono mai se koyi kuch nahi bola ….phir anu he boli…. “Raj mere papa bahut ache insaan h …wo kisi ke sath galat nahi kar sakte h kya pata kuch miss understanding huvi ho tumhe”

Raj - Ho sakta h acha ek baat batao kya tumne gour kiya tumhare ghar ki security itni jayda tight kyo h….kyo tumhara bhai hamesa he alag rahta h jagda itna bada bhi nahi tha us waqt jab tumne knife mara tum 14 saal ki thi ….…kya itne waqt mai usne tumse ek bar bhi milne ki kosis ki nahi…Kyo…..sabke internet connection simple h unki speed bhi achi hoti h phir specially tumhare ghar par he private network system kyo h…..”

Anu raj ki baat sunkar hairan ho gayi

Raj “ acha ye sab bhi chodo …tumhare ghar ki itni security h tumhare ghar ke andar ghusna namunkin h phir bhi tum aram se akeli kaise ghumti ho tumhare sath ek bhi body gaurd kyo nahi h……h jawab “

Anu “wo..” itna bol wo chup ho gayiii

Raj “ nahi h jawab ab main tumhe deta hu jawab …kyoki tumhare piche dus body gaurd chupke se nazar rakhte h tum kya karti ho kya nahi kisai milti ho kisai nahi…even….. abhi bhi mere ghar ke bahar 2 admi nazar rakhe huve h…aur tumhare papa ne mere bare mai sabkuch pata karwaya h….aur mera picha 2 admiyo ko bhi lagwaya huva h”

Anu “ tumhe pura yakeen h

Raj ne hath hilaya toh mityudoot ek admi ko ghasit ta huva lekar aya….

Raj “ isai pahchanti ho

Anu “ papa ka Secretry h ye toh…. par ye toh accident mai mara gaya tha”

Raj “ duniya ke liye mara gaya tha par ye jinda h …main coffee lata hu khud he puch lenajab tak isai ki kyo nighrani kar raha tha ye kitne waqt se… tumhare papa office kab office rahte h kab nahi etc ye sab bolega”
Raj ke jaate he anu sab puchti gayi aur jab uske waham ka sheesha tuta toh wo bhi tut gayiii…..uska dil mai jo uske baap ki image thi wo bikhar gayi wo aisi lag rahi thi jaise gahri nind se jagi ho….

Raj “ hota h anu …apno ka dhokha aisa he hota h….main toh apno ke he dhokhe se bachpan mai anath ho gaya tha jab maa baap ki ungli pakadkar chalna sikhna chahiye tha tab sab kho chuka tha ….kyoki kisi apne ne he pith mai chura ghopa tha are paisa chahiye power chahiye sab le leta…. mere papa kabhi na nahi karte par….mujse mera bachpan chin liya mere maa papa chin liye anuu ….tab se aj tak ek ek ko dhundh kar apne hatho se saza de raha hu jisne jaisa kiya uske sath waisa he kar raha hu….kisi ko bhi koyi hak nahi tha ek dudh pite bache se uski maa ka anchal chinne ka ….kitna dard hota h …kitna…main tumhe bata nahi sakta hu……”
Anu raj ki ankho se girte ansuu aur uski bato mai chipe dard ko samaj rahi thi….wo ek taraf apne papa ki wajah se dhukhi thi toh ek taraf raj ke bhai aur uske dard se dhukhi thi kaafi dair aise he chuppi bani rahi

Anu “ tum kya chahte ho mujse”

Raj “Tumne muje maaf kar diya na main sach main tumhe bahut pyar karta hu main khus ki tum meri bahan ho”

Anu ke chahre par dard bhari muskaan agayi “ab batao kya chahte hu tum”

Raj “ tumhare ghar rook kar tumhare ghar mai tumhare papa ke secret matlb unka tikhna kanha …wo killer organization se kaise contact karte h …

Anu “ ok ye easy h agai semester exam h tum raat ko rook sakte ho jis din papa nahi honge us din main Tumhe bula lungi …tab hum ache se ghar mai search kar sakte h…”

Raj “ tum nahi sirf main aur ye itna asan nahi h unke room ke andar ya aaspass security sytem hoga main tumhe kuch device dunga unhe pahle tum ghar ke andar le jana …ok “

Anu “ok”

Raj “tumahare dada dadi ka tum normally apni maa se puchna dekhte h kya kahti h wo i hope kuch bata de …hum .”

Anu normal hokar “ ha …acha ek baat bataoge tumhari gf h kya “

Raj “H bhi aur nahi …par wo khyal teri tarah he rakhti h bus tu baato se ladti h wo baat na karne par hatho aur laato se baat karti h ….halki humne kabhi ek dusre ko gf bf nahi mana par dost se badhkar h wo mere liye…

Anu ke chahre par dard bhari muskaan thi “ kanha h wo “

Raj — pata nahi kanha h filhal par janha bhi hogi ek baat tay h

Anu dhayan se raj ko dekhte huve “aur wo kya”

Raj -muje goli maar degi dekhte he…

Anu shock se “ gundi h….kya…”

Raj “ Ha aisa kah sakti ho ACP h wo aur abhi toh bhadki huvi hogi…kyoki usai nahi pata h main yanha hu”

Anu “chalo acha h jo main nahi kar sakti wo kar degi…waise tum agar meri bua ke bete yani mere bhai nahi huve ya tumhari baate jhuti nikli toh main khud tumhe maar dungi.”

Raj “ ok majur h ….muje yakin nahi ho raha h tum normal ho gayi ….chalo..lunch ka time ho gaya h main bana deta hu….sath khate h…

Anu “ pyar accept kar chuke hote aur phir dhokha dete toh trust me phir tum chahe sage bhai he nikalte masr deti tumhe….waise ek sawal h us rast meri dress kyo badli phir tumne jab tumhe pata tha ki main tumhari bahan hu “

Raj ki ankhe badi ho gayi— bewakoof ladki ek lagaunga khinch kar …rajni mam ne badle the tumhare kapde…tu meri bahan h….matlb tu abhi bhi …wahi sab soch rahi thi ki maine badle …..bewakoof ladki….

Anu “ sawal tha toh puch liya doubt toh nahi rahega ….Chalo acha h …kam se kam itni akal toh thi tumhe….ab sochti hu tum galat nahi ho…. Ek baat toh saaf h ki meri maa ko bhi sach nahi pata h”

Raj “ game tumhari soch se bahut bada h tumhre baap ko pata laga tum sach janti ho wo palak jhapkaye bina tumhe maar dega aur tumhari maa ko bhi”

Anu “ toh phir “

Raj — Mama kans h toh …..muje bhi krishan banna hoga badla lena h apni maa ka ….apne Baap ka…..Anu ….aisa paisa kis kaam kam ka jo apno se apno ko he chin le …30 Din h semester suru hone mai ….phir Game ke piche Hum game khelenge …..bus tum kabhi pata mat lagne dena ki tumhe sab pata h kyoki galti se bhi tumhare baap ko bhansk lag gayi ki tum unke khilaaf ho tumhare sath wo tumhari maa ko bhi maar dega……chalo ab khana finish karo

Raj aur Anu ne khana khaya….anu normal ho chuki thi….dono abhi baat he kar rahe the ki ….

Mityudoot — master ….

Raj — situation…

Mityudoot — master …

Raj — bata sakte ho…..

Mityudoot — Master Sherdil aur uski family par attack huva h…….hume abhi nikalna hoga warna unka bachna namunkin h …..

Anu ghabra uthi…..ab bhai ho gaya ho chahe raj par pyar toh karti he thi wo….isliye usne jaldi se uthkar raj ki baju pakad li….

Raj — tum ghar jao ……anu….
Anu kuch kahna chahti thi par kah nahi payi….

Dusri taraf …Dharawayi ke andar galiyo se apni maa aur bahan ka hath pakde sherdil tezi se bhag raha tha…aur uske piche the bahut sare gundai jis galli se mudta wanha wo nazar ajate …..

Sherdil — jaldi jaldi ye charo taraf h apko chupne ki jagah dhundhni hogi….taki ap dono wanha surkshit raho main inka dhayan apni taraf khinch lunga ….
Rifat hanfte huve - bhai ….jisne usdin bachaya tha ussai madad mangiye…

Sherdil — number nahiii liye the uske ….

Maa — dekh hume kuch bhi ho jaye par tu maksad mat bulna wada kar muje ….tu chun chun kar marega un sabko….

Sherdil — maa kuch nahi hoga hume ….

Maa — wada kar …muje …
Apni maa ki ankho mai….gusa dekhsherdil “wada h maa …ab tum agai bhago main inhe rokta hu itna kah wo piche mud gaya aur gundo par lohe ki rod se tut pada 6.5 feet ki hight aur sarir ussi uske pita se virasat mai mila tha uska ek waar itni taskat se pada ki sir ke andar rod dhans gayi usne dusre ko gardan se pakadkar upar utha liya aur lohe ki rod niche jabde se gusakar kar upar sir se bahar nikal di ..aur usai dur fenk diya aur ek ke waar se bachte huve ek pait mai puri takat se punch mara ….wo udta huva piche walo par gira ….sher dil ne ek ke pair ko pakadkar…usko ghumakar deewar pe de mara uska sir tarbhuj ki tarah fat gaya uska roudra roop dekhkar baki ulte paanv wapas bhag gaye …..sherdil palat kar chillate huve bhaga maaa…..Rifat…..maaa…par usai koyi jawab nahi mila tabhi do jane uske samne aye toh sherdil ne ek ko gale se pakadkar upar uthaya aur niche jameen jor se patak diya ….aur dusre ke seene par kaskar last mari jisai wo udta huva deewar tod kar ghar mai ghus gaya sherdil gusai se ubhal raha tha….tabhi usai awaj sunayi di “ teri meri mere pass h munna ab bahar aja bahut khel liye pakdam pakdayiii…..agar tu jaldi agaya toh teri maut sayad teri maa bahan ko bacha le warna ye kanha gayi tu sapne mai bhi nahi jaan payega”
Sherdil ka dil baith gaya awaj sunkar ….

Idhar raj car mai sochte huve“ muje time lagega …kya karu “…….raj ka dimag bahut tezi se doud raha tha….” kitna waqt lagega “

Mirtydoot - Half hour master …..
Raj — usai upar lagao

Mirtyudoot ne foren neeli baati nikalkar upar laga dii…neeli baatti ke siren bachte he tarffic police ke constable ne jaldi jaldi traffic clear karna suru kar diya black fortuner jo raj ke liye bullet proof sunil ne banwayi thi wo kisi vvip ki tarah tarffic ko cheerti huvi ja rahi thi….….

Dharawayiii….
10 minut baad sherdil sabke samne agaya….
"Toh tu aahe gaya…..bahut tez bhagta h …."
Sherdil ne ghutno par apni maa aur bahan ko dekha jinke hotho ke kouno se khoon bah raha tha….uski ankho se gusai ke aur bebasi se ansuu bah nikle ….
Maa-- Apna wada yaad rakh …wo wada hamri maut se bada h …..tuje aj yanha nahi marna h….
Sherdil apni maa aur bahan ki halat dekh gusai aur tadap se andar he andar jal raha tha….ek taraf maa ko diya waada unka maksad tha aur dusri taraf ….uski maa aur bahan ka jeevan tha…
“ Lagta h tuje teri maa sur bahan ka jeevan pyara nahi h…..le jao re is budhiya ko khatam kardo aur isai jinda rakho ye seva karne ke kaam ayegiiii….”
Sherdil dahad utha …. “aj khuda kasam atum mai se ek bhi jinda nahi bachega”
“ Sahi kaha par ulta kah gaya hum toh jinda bachenge par tu nahi aur teri maut se sabko pata lag jayega ki humse takrane ka anzaam kya hota h le jao maar do isai aur iske sath jo karna h wo karo “
Sherdil ki maa aur bahan ne sherdil ko aise dekha jaise akhiri baar dekh rahi ho ….. “ apna wada yaad rakhna beta”
Gunde dono ko ghasite huve piche le gaye …aur apni maa bahan ko apni ankho ke agai se ojhal hote he wo sherdil kisi ghayal sher ki tarah dard se dhahadta huva bheed gaya sabse uske dono hatho mai rod thi jisai wo andha dhun barsata ja raha tha ….wo bus kaise bhi apni maa aur bahan tak pahuchna chahta tha par uske samne aur usko gher kar bahut sare gunde khade the
Andar ….. sherdil ki mas
“ E khuda maine hamesa sache dil se teri ibadat ki h na mere pati ne na humne kabhi kisi ke sath galat kiya h maine duwa mai bhi sabki bhalayi chahi toh kya tujse meri ek murad bhi puri nahi hogi”

Gunda “Mangle duwa …..marne se pahle itna toh tere liye kar he sakte h …aur tu janeman chinta mat kar tu maregi nahi….tu chahe roj duwa mangna ha ha ha ….”

Maa “ maut tumhari bhi asaan nahi hogi khuda ne tumhari maut bhi likh di h …wo kabhi apne nek bando ko akela nahi chod ta h”

Sherdil ki maa ki baat sunkar sab jor se hasne lage …..unsab ki hansi se Rifat dar se rone lagi ….

Tabhi un sabki hansi ko cheerti huvi awaj ayii…
“ Maa jo kahti h wo sach he kahti h…..khuda kabhi apne nek bando ko akela nahi chodta h ….”
Sabhi ne ek sath piche mudkar dekha toh raj khada tha……

“ Koun h be tu”

“Main koun hu wo jaruri nahi h jaruri ye h ki maa ne kya kaha …unhone kaha ki tumhari maut bahut buri hogi ….aur sach bolu tumhari maut nahi tumhari jindgi bahut buri hogi …marne tak sochte toh main tum sabko maar deta par …kisi ladki ki izzat se khelna ,jabardasti karna i hate all these things ohhh…tum toh ganwar ho …”

Raj ki baat sunkar gunde gusai se ubal rahe the toh maa aur Rifat raj ko dekh rahi thi…
Bahar….sherdil ko jor se cheekhe sunayi dene lagi usne piche ki taraf dekha toh usko gher kar khade gunde ko bhi piche se awaj sunayi di unhone ne bhi piche moodkar dekha toh ….ek 7 feet ka insaan hath mai talwaar liye gajar muli ki tarah sabko kate ja raha tha….sherdil ne jab usai dekha toh uski sans mai sans agayi aur wo bhi puri jaan lagakar sabko marne laga ab uske waar satik ho gaye the usai raj ki baate yaad ane lagi uska haar waar ghutne par toh sir par ho raha tha ..aur kuch he dair mai sare dher pade the…..wo niche pade huve gundo ke sir fodne laga…

Leader “ tu gaya sale teri maa aur bahan marengi pahle …” itna kah wo andar ki taraf Rifat aur maa ko marne bhaga ….
Sherdil bhi uske piche bhaga toh mityudoot ne rok diya ….sherdil gusai se dekhne laga ….
Mitydoot “yanha unhe asan maut milti par andar wo jinda toh rahenge par maut se buri jindgi jiyenge….”
Sherdil hairani se dekhne laga …..
Andar….
Jaise he leader pahucha uski buri tarah fat gayii uske admi farsh par pade huve the aur ek shakhs unki ungliya kaat raha tha….
Leader tu koun h be …
“ Main koun hu jaruri nahi h jaruri h wo pura karna jo maa ne kaha … par tu koun h”
Rifat “ Bhai jaan yahi wo jiske kahne par sab huva h “
Raj “ tu bahar se jinda andar agaya chal muje mar de aur yanha jo chahe wo karle “
Leadar “ maro sale ko”
Khach khach khachhh ki awaj ghunj huvi aur chikh pukar mach gayiiii….5 second mai h kisi ka hath toh kisi ka pair kata huva niche pada tha….
Leader “ itna he bada turamkha h toh hatho sa lad phir dekhta hu tuje “
Raj “chal teri ye khawish puri kari itna kah raj ne dagger ko saaf kiya aur pith mai laga liya…
Leader ne jaise he kick mari raj ne apna ghutna uske ghutne ke halka sa side mai de mara kadak ke sath wo tut gaya phir pair ke dusre ghutne par kick de mari….leader chikh utha ….
Tabhi bahar se police ki gadiyo ki awaj ghunjne lag gayi police ki kayi bolero ek ke baad ek akar bahar ruki ….
Sherdil ne agai badhne ki kosis ki toh …
Mityudoot — hume abhi nikalna hoga andar master sambhal lenge…..
Sherdil par maa aur bahan..
Mityudoot — master h jaldi chalo…
Andar raj leader ki ek ek hadiya tod raha tha….
Raj “ lo maa khuda ne apki fariyad sunli agar abhi bhi koyi kami ho toh batao apne jo duwa mangi us sai buri saza mili h inhe ”
Sherdil ki maa ne apne dono hatho ko uthakar raj ko duwa diii..
Tabhi kayi sare police wale ghar ke andar agaye….aur andar ka scene dhek unki halat kharab ho gayi aur kayiyo ne ulti bhi kar di….
Leader “tambe shoot kar isai “
Raj “ Tambe matlb teri jaban abhi bhi chal rahi h “ itna kah raj ne uski jaban kaat di”
Acp — Rook jao warna shoot kar dunga…
Raj khada hokar tambe ke pass gaya “ itni lashe dekhne ke baad tuje kya lagta h koun hu main ….meri t shir par ek kharoch tere pure khandaan ko duniya se gayab kar degi yakeen nahi kosis karle …tere ye jo tambe ke tare chamak rahe h wo bhi nahi bacha payenge”
Acp tambe “ dhamki deta h sale”
Raj , “ tambe tambe lagta h tuje tere pariwar ki parwah nahi h…..tu tere commissioner ko phone laga aur meri baat kara warna agle ek hour mai …jo hoga tu usai sah nahi payega tu inse paise khakar chup chap thane mai baitha raha aur akhir mai jab pass palta jaldi se agaya “
Tambe ko gusa toh bahut aya par usne commissioner ko sari baat batayiii…commissioner ne raj se baat kari….phir raj ne wapas phone de diya …..
Raj Piche mudkar “ ap dono ko abhi ek fortuner lene ayegi usmai chalo jana “
Rifat kuch kahna chahti thi par uski maa ne usai rok diya aur ha mai gardan hila di ..…..raj police ki gadi mai baithkar police station agaya aur aate he tambe ne usai lock up mai daal diya …
Tambe — iske upar murder ka case bana sare proof h…..
Inspecter — par commissioner sahab …
Tambe — main dekh lunga unhe waise bhi criminals se nafrat h wo kisi khuni ko maaf nahi karte h….
Inspecter — yes sir aur FIR bana di
Tambe — Ab tu kaise bachega aur iska ye nakaab utaro main bhi dekhu ye koun h sala…
Raj — Tambe Aag se mat khel …..
Tambe — Nikalo sale ka mask main bhi dekhu iske piche koun harami h…aj iski sari akad iske pichwade mai ghusa dunga…
Ek sath kayi police wale andar ghusai aur raj ki taraf agai badhe kuch dair baad he sabhi farsh par tute huve hatho ke sath niche dard mai karahte huve pade the …
Tambe ne gun nikali aur raj par taan di …
Raj “ na na aisi galti mat karna ….tu muje yanha nahi laya h main yanha khud yanha aya hu “
Tambe - tera chahra toh main dekh kar rahunga ……
Tabhi …..police ki ek sath kayi gadiya andar aakar ruki aur usmai se commissioner utar kar andar aya …
Commissioner - Tambe ye kya kar rahe ho tum….
Tambe — Andar dekhiye sir sabke hath tod diye h isne ….
Commissioner - Apni gun niche karo….abhi ke abhi….
Tambe ne gun nicho kari toh…. commissioner raj ke pass pahucha …
Raj — Deal kare…
Commissioner — main criminals ke sath deal nahi karta hu….aur tumne toh aj sabke samne kitne ko maar diya h….
Wo agai aur kuch kahta raj bol utha …
Raj “pata h muje laga ap bahut samajdaar ho par ab muje apse koyi Deal nahi karni h aur trust me aj ke baad apko har pal deal na karne ka sirf afsouse he hoga ki kyo us din maine uski baat nahi suni”
Commissioner — Tambe …proof collect karo case banao aur court mai isai pesh karo
Tambe — khushi ke sath salute marte huve yes sir…..
wo agai koyi aur action leta tabhi ….ek white fortuner bahar aakar ruki …..usmai se ek hulk jaisa banda utarkar aya …..aur sidha commissioner ke pass gaya …
Shaks — this is for you….
Commissioner - who r you…
Shakhs ne apna i card nikal kar commissioner ko diya jis par likha huva tha “Central police… Special officer Abhay singh”
Commissioner ne lifafe ke andar letter ko pada tha uske chahre par sikan agayi ….wo soch mai padh gaya..
Abhay — sochne samajhne ke liye apke pass Waqt he waqt h unhe bahar nikaliye …
Commissioner — Gusai se Tambe ….
Tambe ne Fatafat lock up khola ….
Raj uske pass se nikalte hu …. “Main kabhi jhut nahi bolta hu ….ya toh tu abhi khudko goli maar lena warna tere ghar pahucne se pahle tere biwi bacho ko main maar dunga “
Tambe wahi ghutno ke bal baith gaya…..
Raj “ apki imandari ke kisai bahut sune the socha tha …milkar kaam karenge par dhukh huva apki sachayi jaankar …..”
Commissioner - main …
Raj main ye wo sabka time gaya commissioner sahab you just missed it…..main wahi shakhs hu jiski jaankari ap lene aye the …. Jiske baare mai apko maine bataya tha …
Raj toh chala gaya par commissioner sir pakad kar khada raha gaya….wo khudse he badbadata raha ye Nirwana h ….ye ….Nirwana….h….
Bahar ….
Raj — Abhay sari taiyariya kaisi chal rahi h…
Abhay — muskarakar sab jaisa apne chaha waisa he ho raha h….
Raj — waqt araha h abhay …..jald he hakikat samne ane wali h…phir tumhe mouka milega badle ka…
Abhay — inhi hath se cheerdunga…..sabko…
Likes aur revoes mai kanjusi nahi rakhne ka 6.1k words ka h…..

Aj ke liye itna he …..
Bahut jabarjast update raha bhai, Anu se bhi Raj ne bate share karke Anu ko apne pale me le liya he. Baki muje to lagta he ye Anu ka bap senior Victor aur bhai Junior Victor he.
 

Miteshkm34

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Update likhne mai waqt lagta h ....isliye time milte he likh deta hu.....jald milega ap tukh ho jaoge
Nahi Sandeep bhai
Mai us bare mai bat nahi kar reha

Apko batata hu
Last week jo apne update Diya tha n
Tab maine uske aage ke bare mai socha ki aage ap kya likhoge kaise likhoge
To usi time mujhe yellow barr ne kat liya

Fir kal second time mai apke last updated kr aage ke bare mai socha ki aage ap kaise le jaoge
To kal 2 bar mujhe barrr ne kata
Maine socha pata nahi kya h kyo kat rahi h
Mai fir bhi sochta reha
To hath se mi ki Android watch gir gayi 2500 wali
Mera demag kharab
Maine fir bhi har n mani
Fir bhi sochta reha
To bike ke samne ak gadda aa gaya
Aur us gadde mai jate hi aise dhachki lagi
Ki bike ki light horn indicator sab kam karna band ho gaye
Uske bad se fir aage ki story n sochi maine


But yeh sab sach h
 

dododo

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Game behind game.....

War……countdown……begins
18 ..updats too left …..

“ Good morning Raj ji”

Raj ne kitchen se arahi poonam ki taraf dekha …aur muskurate huve bola “very good morning poonam ji ye dono aise he dair tak soti h …”

Poonam “kal late soyi thi aur aj sunday h warna padhayi se fursat kanha hoti h inhe”

Raj — acha toh phir ap ….

Poonam — muje adat h subhe 5 baje nind khul jati h phir puja karke nasta banate banate college ka time ho jata h…main apke liye tea lekar aati hu…

Raj poonam ko dhayan se dekh raha tha wo khudse he bola “ raat ko ek baje sayad 1.30 baje he soyi hogi …aur itni jaldi uthkar breakfast ki taiyari kar rahi h…kya aisi bhi ladkiya hoti h duniya mai“

Poonam “ Kya dekh rahe raj ji“

Raj “kuch bhi nahi ”

Tabhi usai piche se awaj sunayi di …
“Kyo ghuur rahe ho meri bahan ko”
Raj “ ghuur nahi soch raha hu ki ek wo h jo kitna kaam karti h aur ek ap ho jo soti rahti h”
“ Agar tumhe subhe subhe he maar khani h toh aise he bol do waise bhi bahut din ho gaye h fight kiye huve “


Raj -Oh aisa kya ajao apko aise toh main kuch kar nahi sakta hu …fight mai he pitunga “
Manisha “ acha 30 minuts ….h tumhare pass “ phir batati hu tumhe itna kah wo ready hone chali gayi …”

Poonam - tea dete huve ap aur manisha hamesha he aise rahte ho…i mean ek dusre ko tang karte huve…

Raj — nahii…ye pyar h hamara unhone mere liye bahut kuch saha aur kiya h main jitna unke liye karu utna kam h ….aisa samaj lo ye jeevan kuch khass jano ke liye he …aur unmai se ye bahut bahut khass h…dekhna chahogi apki bahan akhir kya h ….

Poonam — haaa…
Raj ne jaldi se tea pi aur 15 minut mai he bahar gardan mai agaya……aur shanti se poonam ke sath chair par baith gaya …manishs lower aur t shirt pahan kar aagayiii….

Manisha toh pitne ko taiyar ….

Raj — acha kisne kaha main apse ladunga …

Manisha hairani se dekhne lagiii….

Raj ne hath ko upar uthaya aur niche kar diya…

Manisha aur poonam confusion se raj ko dekhne lagi tabhi mityudoot sidha upar se sidha manisha aur raj ke agai akar kudha ……manisha 2 kadam piche hat gayi aur poonam achanak mityudoot ko dekh kar piche girne ko huvi toh raj ne chair pakad li…..

Raj — apko inse ladna h….

Manisha — inse ladna h h koun ye …..

Raj - body gaurd kahlo ya dost …..bus inhe koyi muje mare ye pasand nahi h…
Aur mera student pite ye muje pasand nahi h apko in par 10 waar baar marna h …aur ye apko sirf push karenge ok

Manisha — ok…

Raj — so lets start…..

Manisha ne bina deri kiye he jump kar ke furti se mityu doot ki chest par jor se waar kiya ….manisha ka waar dekh poonam ki ankhe badi badi ho gayiiii….aur aisa he haal ghar ke andar khade har body gaurds ka tha…. Jo tabse mityudoot ki personality se he hairan pareshan the ki ye kab se ghar ke andar h ….aur hume dikha tak nahi ….manisha ki kick ko mityudoot ne dono hath se block kar liya par manisha ne turant hawa mai he dusri kick mityudoot ke pait par maar di ….aur niche girte he ek jump ke sath dubara khadi ho gayi ….

Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan agayi….

Manisha ne right unch mara toh mityudoot furti se punch ke pass se dodge karta huva piche pahucha aur left hand se push kar diya manisha udti huvi agai ki taraf gayi par apne dono hath jameen par tikar jump ke sath sidhi ho gayi …..manisha ne lagataar ek ke baad baad ek kayi sare punch kiye ….jisai mityu doot asani se dodge karta raha ..mityudoot ne kitni he baar manisha ko jamin par patka ….par fight mai itni baar pitne ke baad bhi manisha ke chahre par koyi sikan nahi thi uski ankhe bahut serious ho rakhi thi….

Raj “ Bus ..
Dono ruk gaye ….

Raj “ apki power mai kafi sudhar huva kitni dair prectice karti ho ….aur kab …”

Manisha — master raat ko 9 se 11 baje tak….

Raj — subhe 4 se 7 ….. jismai subhe half hour yoga ….jismai body streching par pura focus rakhna h jitne lachule hoga sarir utna asan hoga takatwar dhushman se nipatna….

Manisha - ji master ….

Raj - ab kuch moves main sikha raha hu jinhe apko ache se practice karna …..itna kah usne kaafi sare moves kiye ….jinhe manisha dhayan se dekhti rahi….

Raj samaj aya …..

Manisha ji master itna kah usne moves karne suru kar diye …..

Raj wait raj ne piche ja manisha ke dono hath pakde aur pair se pair jod kar move karane suru kar diye karib half hour mai he manisha ki speed tezi se badhne lagi …

Raj — good …agli baar jab perfect ho jao toh ghar par roof par pahuch kar seeti baja dena aur jo aye uske sath apni skills ki practice karna …aur us shakhs ke sath week mai ek din pura dena h jo wo sikhaye sikhna h ….

Manisha ji master….

Poonam toh bus …..hairan pareshan manisha ko he dekh rahi thi jiske hotho ke ek koune se khun toh kohni chili huvi thi par kya mazal ki uske muu se uff bhi nikal jaye ..

Raj ne waqt dekha toh 9 ke kareeb time ho gaya tha… “muje jana hoga ….jald milenge ….”phir palatkar “ thank you poonam ji apke sath waqt baate karke bahut acha laga”
Poonam “ muje bhi bahut acha laga main jitna apko janne ki kosis karti hu utna kam lagta h”

Raj “duniya bahut badi h par main sidha hu bus apno ki parwah aur apno ki khushi chahta hu …bye jald milenge”
Raj ke janne ke baad manisha dhadam se ghass mai gir kar hafne lagi..

Poonam tezi se bhagkar uske pass ayi …” kya huva tuje “
Manisha ghass mai late kar “gadha idiot duffer kanhi ka hii kitna mara us saand ne hath nahi hathoda tha pura sarir tut raha h”

Poonam - par raj ji ke samne toh….

Manisha- “ are wo jab master banta h tab wo raj nahi hota h ek galti ki itni badi saza milti h ki…24 hours dard sahna padta h…marta bhi h stick se….

Poonam — par unhe toh tu pitati rahti h

Manisha — uski jindgi bahut muskil h meri bahan ….wo yanha h par dimag kanhi aur man kanhi aur soch kuch aur ….uski ek badi chook kya kar sakti tuje andaza bhi nahi h phir apni t shirt kp halka sa upar karke ye nishan kiska h…

Poonam - chot ka …

Manisha — Bullet ka h …hume marne ki kosis ki thi muje aur shiwani ko goli lagi thi…

Poonam hairani se manisha ko dekhne lagi…

Manisha — aur pata h tere patidev ne kya kiya ….

Poonam — kya …

Manisha — us shakhs ko 24 hours mai dhundh liya aur helicopters bosts lejakar humare hatho se he ussi marwaya ….uske apno ko koyi chuu nahi sakta h aur agar kisi ne chuu diya toh ….wo Nirr…i mean wo samne wale ke pure khandan ko tadpa tadpa kar marta h……

Poonam —tabhi main sochu meri bahan jo raj ji ko tang karti rahti h wo achanak sidhi kaise ho gayi akhir raj guru ke roop mai samne jo tha…

Manisha-- agar teri enquiry ho hayi toh andar le chal ice de dena warna pata nahi kanha se sarir nila ho jayega….waise kuch bhi kah tuje dekh kar uska chehra normal ho jata h ….warna itni asani se nahi chodta wo muje ..

Poonam — toh subhe kyo pange le rahi thi…

Manisha — ayyii maa toh muje kya pata tha ki is baar khud ki jagah wo saand sa lada dega ..
Poonam ko bhi jor se hansi agayiii…..par raj ki 3 fight wo dekh chukhi thi usai pata tha ki raj ki jindgi bahut muskil h isliye wo choti choti care se he raj ko khus karne ki kosis kar rahi thi…

Idhar car mai

mityudoot — master ye ladki …

Raj — muje pasand h kaisi lagi…

Mitydoot —strong h …itni maar khane ke baad bhi khadi rahi ….

Raj — Isliye Bhabhi banegi meri….

Mityudooy ne road ke bich he jor se break maar diye…..

Raj — are chaloa bhid lag jayegi….ap itna hairan mat ho ….inhe maine sunil ke liye pasand kiya h bus sahi waqt ka intezar kar raha hu……

Mityudoot — par master …wo toh sidhe sadhe h ..waise Jodi khub jamegi…

Raj — Ha….isliye ab dadaji ko bata ta hu wo akar baat karengi par pahle unki maa se mil lu……..

Dono jab ghar pahuche toh 9.45 ho chuke the…..

Raj — bhook lag gayi h ..

Mityudoot — muje bhi lagi h …ap naha lijiye main dekhta hu….

Raj — nahi ap raat se jage huve h….ap security alarm on kar dijiye aur rest kariye main taiyar karta hu breakfast ki ……
Idhar anu nahakar ache se taiyar hokar paidal he raj ke ghar ki taraf chal diii…uska dil bahut khus tha kyoki subhe ke news pepar mai koyi bhi news nahi thi muder ki …aur usai jayda khus thi wo apne pyar raj ko pa lene ki khushi mai ….uske chahre par rah rah kar muskaan arahi thi ….aur is muskaan ke sath wo raj ke ghar pahuchi…….
“Agayi Ao breakfast ready kiya h bhuk lagi hogi .. raat ka dinner na sahi breakfast toh kar he sakte h sath mai…
Anu nazre nichi karte huve chup chap baith gayi…raj ne usai sandwich aur tea di “ nasta karo main abhi ata hu itna kah wo breakfast aur juice lekar mityudoot ke room ki taraf chala gaya …anu ne breakfast uske hath mai dekha toh usai dar laga ki koyi aur ladki toh nahi h…uske chahre ka rang feeka padbe laga…
“Koyi nahi h ghar par tum aram se nasta kar sakti ho”

Anu “ isai kaise pata lag gaya ki main kya soch rahi hu”
Kuch pal baad raj wapas agaya …..aur anu ke pass baithkar breakfast karne laga …anu nazar bachakar raj ko dekh rahi thi aur raj serious hokar nasta kar raha tha…..kuch he dair mai anu ko bhi realise ho gaya ki raj bahut badla huva sa h aj uske chahre par wo majak wo nokh jhok koyi expression nahi h usne breakfast chod diya ….aur raj ko serious kar dekhne lagi ….

Anu “main….”

Raj “pahle wada karo main jab tak na bolu kuch nahi kahogi aur sirf sunogi ….

Anu cheekte huve “ tum akhir chahte kya ho raj ….maine wo kiya jo tumne kaha …
Ab sirf ye sarir bacha h wo bhi tumhara he h ab aur kaise khus karu tumhe”

Tadak ek jordar thapad anu ko pada ….
“Kahne se pahle socha karo anu …..tumhe lagta h muje ye chahiye h…mar jana pasand karunga aise karne se pahle …..are main toh tumhe kiss karne se he roj gilani se mar raha hu…”

Anu rote huve “ mujh mai kya kami h kya tum mujse ab pyar nahi karte ho …akhir tum kyo kar rahe ho aisa ”

Raj ne anu ko fafak fafak kar rote dekha toh …agai badhkar usai gale lag liya ….. “Anuuuu… main tumse jo kahna chahta hu uske liye tumhara shant hona jaruri h …main chahta hu pahle tum meri baat suno bus isliye kaha tha ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye bich mai nahi bologi”
Anu ne sir uncha karke raj ko dekha aur ha mai gardan hila di raj ne apne hatho se uske ansuu pounche aur usai sofe par baitha diya ……

Raj —main jo kahne ja raha hu usmai laghbhag sab sach h aur kuch bacha h toh usai tum khud proof karogi ab pahli baat…kal tumne jisai mara wo mera admi tha aur wo jinda h ……Dusri baat Agar main ye kahu ki tumhara bahut bada pariwar h tumhare chacha chachi dada dadi h ………Teesari baat — tumhare maapapa ne jaanbhujkar tumse sabkuch chipaya h toh ….
Anu ki ankho ke ansuu band ho gaye aur wo raj hairani se dekhne lagi wo kahna toh bahut kuch chahti thi par raj ki baat ne usai chup kara rakha tha…
“Muje pata h tumhe bahut se sawal puchne h par meri baat khatam hone ka wait karo …Tumhare papa realstate ka he business nahi karte h balki underworld ke bahut bade don bhi h..”
Anu “Raj tummm”
“ meri baat khatam hone do ab gai suno tumhe sab nahi pata h kyoki tumse sabkuch chipaya gaya h….tumhare pita ne kitne ghar ujad kar ye duniya banayi h tum soch bhi nahi sakti ho aur un ujde huve pariwaro mai unke apne pariwaar bhi h muje malum tum soch rahi hogi ki main jhutha hu dhokhebaz hu par sach yahi h aur tumhare papa ke ujade gaye pariwaro mai se unka apna saga pariwar bhi h aur mainn usi pariwar ka beta hu…..raj ne gahri saans choddiii aur anu se bola ab tum apne sawal puch sakti ho..”
Anu khadi huvi aur raj ke gaal par ek baad ek kayi thapad jad diya raj ne anu ke thapad se palke tak nahi jhapkayi….anu ek tak usai ghoorti rahi usne auro ki tarah koyi reaction nahi diya wo kafi dair aise he raj ko ghoorti rahi …phir boli

Anu “ agar ye baat papa ko bata du toh kya hoga”

Raj “ kal condition yahi jaane ke liye he toh rakhi thi ki tum par kitna yakeen kar sakta hu aur jab yakeen huva toh sachayi batayi”
Anu niche farsh par sir pakad kar baith gayi usai yakeen nahi ho raha tha par wo raj ko bhi ache se janti thi ki raj jhut nahi bolega usai …

Anu — tumhara pyar jhuta tha h na…

Raj — Nahi par…

Anu — bolo raj jab itna bol chuke ho toh sab bol do kuch bhi mat chupao….

Raj —sach bardast nahi kar paogi….

Anu — Dont worry sucied waigarh karne wali ladki nahi hu….agar marungi toh tumhe sath leke marungi…ab batao ki kya baki rah gaya..h..

Raj — Jab main tumse mila mera sirf sach jaankar tumse dur jane ka irada tha par ha ab main tumhe bahut pyar karta hu par ye wo pyar nahi jo ladka ladki ke bich hota h ….ye ek…ye…ek…
Anu ka Dil toh pahle he tut chuka tha ansuu bahkar sukh chuke the wo bus raj ki na ka he wait kar rahi thi aur soch rakha tha ki na sunte he wi chup chap nikalkar raj ko marwa degi aur khud bhi mar jayegii…..wo raj ki na ho saki toh usai bhi wo kisi aur ka nahi hone degi…

Raj- main tumhari sagi bua ka ladka hu aur is rishte se tum meri bahan ho …..
Anu ki halat toh bahut buri ho gayi thi wo apne he bhai se pyar kitni he dair uska dimag soona pada raha ….…..kuch pal baad uske dil mai khayal aya …ki raj ko pata tha main uski bahan hu phir bhi ….usne khade hokar gusai se kayi sare thapad raj ko aur mare aur raj ke seene par jor jor se marne lagiiii….” Kyo raj kyo….tumhe pata tha main tumhari bahan hu phir bhi pyar ka natak kyo kyo kyo raj …kyo kiya tumne aisaaa”

Raj kya he kahta par kahna toh tha he isliye usne kaha “ i m sorry anu….main tumhe kya kahta….. yahi ki main tumhara bhai hu tum yakin nahi kartiii ….kya kahta mere gharwalo ki mout ki wajah tumhare papa h tum yakeen karti mujpar bolo….kya karta main tum he batao isiliye he toh jab bhi tum limits paar karne ki kosis karti tab main tumhe rok deta kyoki main aur nicha nahi gir sakta tha i m sorry anu tum jo chahe mere sath kar sakti ho tumhari kasam main uff tak nahi karunga par sach yahi h hum bhai bahan h”
Anu raj ke he gale lagi rahi ….raj ne usai sofe par baitha diya….
5 minut,30 minut ,ek hour bit gaya, dono mai se koyi kuch nahi bola ….phir anu he boli…. “Raj mere papa bahut ache insaan h …wo kisi ke sath galat nahi kar sakte h kya pata kuch miss understanding huvi ho tumhe”

Raj - Ho sakta h acha ek baat batao kya tumne gour kiya tumhare ghar ki security itni jayda tight kyo h….kyo tumhara bhai hamesa he alag rahta h jagda itna bada bhi nahi tha us waqt jab tumne knife mara tum 14 saal ki thi ….…kya itne waqt mai usne tumse ek bar bhi milne ki kosis ki nahi…Kyo…..sabke internet connection simple h unki speed bhi achi hoti h phir specially tumhare ghar par he private network system kyo h…..”

Anu raj ki baat sunkar hairan ho gayi

Raj “ acha ye sab bhi chodo …tumhare ghar ki itni security h tumhare ghar ke andar ghusna namunkin h phir bhi tum aram se akeli kaise ghumti ho tumhare sath ek bhi body gaurd kyo nahi h……h jawab “

Anu “wo..” itna bol wo chup ho gayiii

Raj “ nahi h jawab ab main tumhe deta hu jawab …kyoki tumhare piche dus body gaurd chupke se nazar rakhte h tum kya karti ho kya nahi kisai milti ho kisai nahi…even….. abhi bhi mere ghar ke bahar 2 admi nazar rakhe huve h…aur tumhare papa ne mere bare mai sabkuch pata karwaya h….aur mera picha 2 admiyo ko bhi lagwaya huva h”

Anu “ tumhe pura yakeen h

Raj ne hath hilaya toh mityudoot ek admi ko ghasit ta huva lekar aya….

Raj “ isai pahchanti ho

Anu “ papa ka Secretry h ye toh…. par ye toh accident mai mara gaya tha”

Raj “ duniya ke liye mara gaya tha par ye jinda h …main coffee lata hu khud he puch lenajab tak isai ki kyo nighrani kar raha tha ye kitne waqt se… tumhare papa office kab office rahte h kab nahi etc ye sab bolega”
Raj ke jaate he anu sab puchti gayi aur jab uske waham ka sheesha tuta toh wo bhi tut gayiii…..uska dil mai jo uske baap ki image thi wo bikhar gayi wo aisi lag rahi thi jaise gahri nind se jagi ho….

Raj “ hota h anu …apno ka dhokha aisa he hota h….main toh apno ke he dhokhe se bachpan mai anath ho gaya tha jab maa baap ki ungli pakadkar chalna sikhna chahiye tha tab sab kho chuka tha ….kyoki kisi apne ne he pith mai chura ghopa tha are paisa chahiye power chahiye sab le leta…. mere papa kabhi na nahi karte par….mujse mera bachpan chin liya mere maa papa chin liye anuu ….tab se aj tak ek ek ko dhundh kar apne hatho se saza de raha hu jisne jaisa kiya uske sath waisa he kar raha hu….kisi ko bhi koyi hak nahi tha ek dudh pite bache se uski maa ka anchal chinne ka ….kitna dard hota h …kitna…main tumhe bata nahi sakta hu……”
Anu raj ki ankho se girte ansuu aur uski bato mai chipe dard ko samaj rahi thi….wo ek taraf apne papa ki wajah se dhukhi thi toh ek taraf raj ke bhai aur uske dard se dhukhi thi kaafi dair aise he chuppi bani rahi

Anu “ tum kya chahte ho mujse”

Raj “Tumne muje maaf kar diya na main sach main tumhe bahut pyar karta hu main khus ki tum meri bahan ho”

Anu ke chahre par dard bhari muskaan agayi “ab batao kya chahte hu tum”

Raj “ tumhare ghar rook kar tumhare ghar mai tumhare papa ke secret matlb unka tikhna kanha …wo killer organization se kaise contact karte h …

Anu “ ok ye easy h agai semester exam h tum raat ko rook sakte ho jis din papa nahi honge us din main Tumhe bula lungi …tab hum ache se ghar mai search kar sakte h…”

Raj “ tum nahi sirf main aur ye itna asan nahi h unke room ke andar ya aaspass security sytem hoga main tumhe kuch device dunga unhe pahle tum ghar ke andar le jana …ok “

Anu “ok”

Raj “tumahare dada dadi ka tum normally apni maa se puchna dekhte h kya kahti h wo i hope kuch bata de …hum .”

Anu normal hokar “ ha …acha ek baat bataoge tumhari gf h kya “

Raj “H bhi aur nahi …par wo khyal teri tarah he rakhti h bus tu baato se ladti h wo baat na karne par hatho aur laato se baat karti h ….halki humne kabhi ek dusre ko gf bf nahi mana par dost se badhkar h wo mere liye…

Anu ke chahre par dard bhari muskaan thi “ kanha h wo “

Raj — pata nahi kanha h filhal par janha bhi hogi ek baat tay h

Anu dhayan se raj ko dekhte huve “aur wo kya”

Raj -muje goli maar degi dekhte he…

Anu shock se “ gundi h….kya…”

Raj “ Ha aisa kah sakti ho ACP h wo aur abhi toh bhadki huvi hogi…kyoki usai nahi pata h main yanha hu”

Anu “chalo acha h jo main nahi kar sakti wo kar degi…waise tum agar meri bua ke bete yani mere bhai nahi huve ya tumhari baate jhuti nikli toh main khud tumhe maar dungi.”

Raj “ ok majur h ….muje yakin nahi ho raha h tum normal ho gayi ….chalo..lunch ka time ho gaya h main bana deta hu….sath khate h…

Anu “ pyar accept kar chuke hote aur phir dhokha dete toh trust me phir tum chahe sage bhai he nikalte masr deti tumhe….waise ek sawal h us rast meri dress kyo badli phir tumne jab tumhe pata tha ki main tumhari bahan hu “

Raj ki ankhe badi ho gayi— bewakoof ladki ek lagaunga khinch kar …rajni mam ne badle the tumhare kapde…tu meri bahan h….matlb tu abhi bhi …wahi sab soch rahi thi ki maine badle …..bewakoof ladki….

Anu “ sawal tha toh puch liya doubt toh nahi rahega ….Chalo acha h …kam se kam itni akal toh thi tumhe….ab sochti hu tum galat nahi ho…. Ek baat toh saaf h ki meri maa ko bhi sach nahi pata h”

Raj “ game tumhari soch se bahut bada h tumhre baap ko pata laga tum sach janti ho wo palak jhapkaye bina tumhe maar dega aur tumhari maa ko bhi”

Anu “ toh phir “

Raj — Mama kans h toh …..muje bhi krishan banna hoga badla lena h apni maa ka ….apne Baap ka…..Anu ….aisa paisa kis kaam kam ka jo apno se apno ko he chin le …30 Din h semester suru hone mai ….phir Game ke piche Hum game khelenge …..bus tum kabhi pata mat lagne dena ki tumhe sab pata h kyoki galti se bhi tumhare baap ko bhansk lag gayi ki tum unke khilaaf ho tumhare sath wo tumhari maa ko bhi maar dega……chalo ab khana finish karo

Raj aur Anu ne khana khaya….anu normal ho chuki thi….dono abhi baat he kar rahe the ki ….

Mityudoot — master ….

Raj — situation…

Mityudoot — master …

Raj — bata sakte ho…..

Mityudoot — Master Sherdil aur uski family par attack huva h…….hume abhi nikalna hoga warna unka bachna namunkin h …..

Anu ghabra uthi…..ab bhai ho gaya ho chahe raj par pyar toh karti he thi wo….isliye usne jaldi se uthkar raj ki baju pakad li….

Raj — tum ghar jao ……anu….
Anu kuch kahna chahti thi par kah nahi payi….

Dusri taraf …Dharawayi ke andar galiyo se apni maa aur bahan ka hath pakde sherdil tezi se bhag raha tha…aur uske piche the bahut sare gundai jis galli se mudta wanha wo nazar ajate …..

Sherdil — jaldi jaldi ye charo taraf h apko chupne ki jagah dhundhni hogi….taki ap dono wanha surkshit raho main inka dhayan apni taraf khinch lunga ….
Rifat hanfte huve - bhai ….jisne usdin bachaya tha ussai madad mangiye…

Sherdil — number nahiii liye the uske ….

Maa — dekh hume kuch bhi ho jaye par tu maksad mat bulna wada kar muje ….tu chun chun kar marega un sabko….

Sherdil — maa kuch nahi hoga hume ….

Maa — wada kar …muje …
Apni maa ki ankho mai….gusa dekhsherdil “wada h maa …ab tum agai bhago main inhe rokta hu itna kah wo piche mud gaya aur gundo par lohe ki rod se tut pada 6.5 feet ki hight aur sarir ussi uske pita se virasat mai mila tha uska ek waar itni taskat se pada ki sir ke andar rod dhans gayi usne dusre ko gardan se pakadkar upar utha liya aur lohe ki rod niche jabde se gusakar kar upar sir se bahar nikal di ..aur usai dur fenk diya aur ek ke waar se bachte huve ek pait mai puri takat se punch mara ….wo udta huva piche walo par gira ….sher dil ne ek ke pair ko pakadkar…usko ghumakar deewar pe de mara uska sir tarbhuj ki tarah fat gaya uska roudra roop dekhkar baki ulte paanv wapas bhag gaye …..sherdil palat kar chillate huve bhaga maaa…..Rifat…..maaa…par usai koyi jawab nahi mila tabhi do jane uske samne aye toh sherdil ne ek ko gale se pakadkar upar uthaya aur niche jameen jor se patak diya ….aur dusre ke seene par kaskar last mari jisai wo udta huva deewar tod kar ghar mai ghus gaya sherdil gusai se ubhal raha tha….tabhi usai awaj sunayi di “ teri meri mere pass h munna ab bahar aja bahut khel liye pakdam pakdayiii…..agar tu jaldi agaya toh teri maut sayad teri maa bahan ko bacha le warna ye kanha gayi tu sapne mai bhi nahi jaan payega”
Sherdil ka dil baith gaya awaj sunkar ….

Idhar raj car mai sochte huve“ muje time lagega …kya karu “…….raj ka dimag bahut tezi se doud raha tha….” kitna waqt lagega “

Mirtydoot - Half hour master …..
Raj — usai upar lagao

Mirtyudoot ne foren neeli baati nikalkar upar laga dii…neeli baatti ke siren bachte he tarffic police ke constable ne jaldi jaldi traffic clear karna suru kar diya black fortuner jo raj ke liye bullet proof sunil ne banwayi thi wo kisi vvip ki tarah tarffic ko cheerti huvi ja rahi thi….….

Dharawayiii….
10 minut baad sherdil sabke samne agaya….
"Toh tu aahe gaya…..bahut tez bhagta h …."
Sherdil ne ghutno par apni maa aur bahan ko dekha jinke hotho ke kouno se khoon bah raha tha….uski ankho se gusai ke aur bebasi se ansuu bah nikle ….
Maa-- Apna wada yaad rakh …wo wada hamri maut se bada h …..tuje aj yanha nahi marna h….
Sherdil apni maa aur bahan ki halat dekh gusai aur tadap se andar he andar jal raha tha….ek taraf maa ko diya waada unka maksad tha aur dusri taraf ….uski maa aur bahan ka jeevan tha…
“ Lagta h tuje teri maa sur bahan ka jeevan pyara nahi h…..le jao re is budhiya ko khatam kardo aur isai jinda rakho ye seva karne ke kaam ayegiiii….”
Sherdil dahad utha …. “aj khuda kasam atum mai se ek bhi jinda nahi bachega”
“ Sahi kaha par ulta kah gaya hum toh jinda bachenge par tu nahi aur teri maut se sabko pata lag jayega ki humse takrane ka anzaam kya hota h le jao maar do isai aur iske sath jo karna h wo karo “
Sherdil ki maa aur bahan ne sherdil ko aise dekha jaise akhiri baar dekh rahi ho ….. “ apna wada yaad rakhna beta”
Gunde dono ko ghasite huve piche le gaye …aur apni maa bahan ko apni ankho ke agai se ojhal hote he wo sherdil kisi ghayal sher ki tarah dard se dhahadta huva bheed gaya sabse uske dono hatho mai rod thi jisai wo andha dhun barsata ja raha tha ….wo bus kaise bhi apni maa aur bahan tak pahuchna chahta tha par uske samne aur usko gher kar bahut sare gunde khade the
Andar ….. sherdil ki mas
“ E khuda maine hamesa sache dil se teri ibadat ki h na mere pati ne na humne kabhi kisi ke sath galat kiya h maine duwa mai bhi sabki bhalayi chahi toh kya tujse meri ek murad bhi puri nahi hogi”

Gunda “Mangle duwa …..marne se pahle itna toh tere liye kar he sakte h …aur tu janeman chinta mat kar tu maregi nahi….tu chahe roj duwa mangna ha ha ha ….”

Maa “ maut tumhari bhi asaan nahi hogi khuda ne tumhari maut bhi likh di h …wo kabhi apne nek bando ko akela nahi chod ta h”

Sherdil ki maa ki baat sunkar sab jor se hasne lage …..unsab ki hansi se Rifat dar se rone lagi ….

Tabhi un sabki hansi ko cheerti huvi awaj ayii…
“ Maa jo kahti h wo sach he kahti h…..khuda kabhi apne nek bando ko akela nahi chodta h ….”
Sabhi ne ek sath piche mudkar dekha toh raj khada tha……

“ Koun h be tu”

“Main koun hu wo jaruri nahi h jaruri ye h ki maa ne kya kaha …unhone kaha ki tumhari maut bahut buri hogi ….aur sach bolu tumhari maut nahi tumhari jindgi bahut buri hogi …marne tak sochte toh main tum sabko maar deta par …kisi ladki ki izzat se khelna ,jabardasti karna i hate all these things ohhh…tum toh ganwar ho …”

Raj ki baat sunkar gunde gusai se ubal rahe the toh maa aur Rifat raj ko dekh rahi thi…
Bahar….sherdil ko jor se cheekhe sunayi dene lagi usne piche ki taraf dekha toh usko gher kar khade gunde ko bhi piche se awaj sunayi di unhone ne bhi piche moodkar dekha toh ….ek 7 feet ka insaan hath mai talwaar liye gajar muli ki tarah sabko kate ja raha tha….sherdil ne jab usai dekha toh uski sans mai sans agayi aur wo bhi puri jaan lagakar sabko marne laga ab uske waar satik ho gaye the usai raj ki baate yaad ane lagi uska haar waar ghutne par toh sir par ho raha tha ..aur kuch he dair mai sare dher pade the…..wo niche pade huve gundo ke sir fodne laga…

Leader “ tu gaya sale teri maa aur bahan marengi pahle …” itna kah wo andar ki taraf Rifat aur maa ko marne bhaga ….
Sherdil bhi uske piche bhaga toh mityudoot ne rok diya ….sherdil gusai se dekhne laga ….
Mitydoot “yanha unhe asan maut milti par andar wo jinda toh rahenge par maut se buri jindgi jiyenge….”
Sherdil hairani se dekhne laga …..
Andar….
Jaise he leader pahucha uski buri tarah fat gayii uske admi farsh par pade huve the aur ek shakhs unki ungliya kaat raha tha….
Leader tu koun h be …
“ Main koun hu jaruri nahi h jaruri h wo pura karna jo maa ne kaha … par tu koun h”
Rifat “ Bhai jaan yahi wo jiske kahne par sab huva h “
Raj “ tu bahar se jinda andar agaya chal muje mar de aur yanha jo chahe wo karle “
Leadar “ maro sale ko”
Khach khach khachhh ki awaj ghunj huvi aur chikh pukar mach gayiiii….5 second mai h kisi ka hath toh kisi ka pair kata huva niche pada tha….
Leader “ itna he bada turamkha h toh hatho sa lad phir dekhta hu tuje “
Raj “chal teri ye khawish puri kari itna kah raj ne dagger ko saaf kiya aur pith mai laga liya…
Leader ne jaise he kick mari raj ne apna ghutna uske ghutne ke halka sa side mai de mara kadak ke sath wo tut gaya phir pair ke dusre ghutne par kick de mari….leader chikh utha ….
Tabhi bahar se police ki gadiyo ki awaj ghunjne lag gayi police ki kayi bolero ek ke baad ek akar bahar ruki ….
Sherdil ne agai badhne ki kosis ki toh …
Mityudoot — hume abhi nikalna hoga andar master sambhal lenge…..
Sherdil par maa aur bahan..
Mityudoot — master h jaldi chalo…
Andar raj leader ki ek ek hadiya tod raha tha….
Raj “ lo maa khuda ne apki fariyad sunli agar abhi bhi koyi kami ho toh batao apne jo duwa mangi us sai buri saza mili h inhe ”
Sherdil ki maa ne apne dono hatho ko uthakar raj ko duwa diii..
Tabhi kayi sare police wale ghar ke andar agaye….aur andar ka scene dhek unki halat kharab ho gayi aur kayiyo ne ulti bhi kar di….
Leader “tambe shoot kar isai “
Raj “ Tambe matlb teri jaban abhi bhi chal rahi h “ itna kah raj ne uski jaban kaat di”
Acp — Rook jao warna shoot kar dunga…
Raj khada hokar tambe ke pass gaya “ itni lashe dekhne ke baad tuje kya lagta h koun hu main ….meri t shir par ek kharoch tere pure khandaan ko duniya se gayab kar degi yakeen nahi kosis karle …tere ye jo tambe ke tare chamak rahe h wo bhi nahi bacha payenge”
Acp tambe “ dhamki deta h sale”
Raj , “ tambe tambe lagta h tuje tere pariwar ki parwah nahi h…..tu tere commissioner ko phone laga aur meri baat kara warna agle ek hour mai …jo hoga tu usai sah nahi payega tu inse paise khakar chup chap thane mai baitha raha aur akhir mai jab pass palta jaldi se agaya “
Tambe ko gusa toh bahut aya par usne commissioner ko sari baat batayiii…commissioner ne raj se baat kari….phir raj ne wapas phone de diya …..
Raj Piche mudkar “ ap dono ko abhi ek fortuner lene ayegi usmai chalo jana “
Rifat kuch kahna chahti thi par uski maa ne usai rok diya aur ha mai gardan hila di ..…..raj police ki gadi mai baithkar police station agaya aur aate he tambe ne usai lock up mai daal diya …
Tambe — iske upar murder ka case bana sare proof h…..
Inspecter — par commissioner sahab …
Tambe — main dekh lunga unhe waise bhi criminals se nafrat h wo kisi khuni ko maaf nahi karte h….
Inspecter — yes sir aur FIR bana di
Tambe — Ab tu kaise bachega aur iska ye nakaab utaro main bhi dekhu ye koun h sala…
Raj — Tambe Aag se mat khel …..
Tambe — Nikalo sale ka mask main bhi dekhu iske piche koun harami h…aj iski sari akad iske pichwade mai ghusa dunga…
Ek sath kayi police wale andar ghusai aur raj ki taraf agai badhe kuch dair baad he sabhi farsh par tute huve hatho ke sath niche dard mai karahte huve pade the …
Tambe ne gun nikali aur raj par taan di …
Raj “ na na aisi galti mat karna ….tu muje yanha nahi laya h main yanha khud yanha aya hu “
Tambe - tera chahra toh main dekh kar rahunga ……
Tabhi …..police ki ek sath kayi gadiya andar aakar ruki aur usmai se commissioner utar kar andar aya …
Commissioner - Tambe ye kya kar rahe ho tum….
Tambe — Andar dekhiye sir sabke hath tod diye h isne ….
Commissioner - Apni gun niche karo….abhi ke abhi….
Tambe ne gun nicho kari toh…. commissioner raj ke pass pahucha …
Raj — Deal kare…
Commissioner — main criminals ke sath deal nahi karta hu….aur tumne toh aj sabke samne kitne ko maar diya h….
Wo agai aur kuch kahta raj bol utha …
Raj “pata h muje laga ap bahut samajdaar ho par ab muje apse koyi Deal nahi karni h aur trust me aj ke baad apko har pal deal na karne ka sirf afsouse he hoga ki kyo us din maine uski baat nahi suni”
Commissioner — Tambe …proof collect karo case banao aur court mai isai pesh karo
Tambe — khushi ke sath salute marte huve yes sir…..
wo agai koyi aur action leta tabhi ….ek white fortuner bahar aakar ruki …..usmai se ek hulk jaisa banda utarkar aya …..aur sidha commissioner ke pass gaya …
Shaks — this is for you….
Commissioner - who r you…
Shakhs ne apna i card nikal kar commissioner ko diya jis par likha huva tha “Central police… Special officer Abhay singh”
Commissioner ne lifafe ke andar letter ko pada tha uske chahre par sikan agayi ….wo soch mai padh gaya..
Abhay — sochne samajhne ke liye apke pass Waqt he waqt h unhe bahar nikaliye …
Commissioner — Gusai se Tambe ….
Tambe ne Fatafat lock up khola ….
Raj uske pass se nikalte hu …. “Main kabhi jhut nahi bolta hu ….ya toh tu abhi khudko goli maar lena warna tere ghar pahucne se pahle tere biwi bacho ko main maar dunga “
Tambe wahi ghutno ke bal baith gaya…..
Raj “ apki imandari ke kisai bahut sune the socha tha …milkar kaam karenge par dhukh huva apki sachayi jaankar …..”
Commissioner - main …
Raj main ye wo sabka time gaya commissioner sahab you just missed it…..main wahi shakhs hu jiski jaankari ap lene aye the …. Jiske baare mai apko maine bataya tha …
Raj toh chala gaya par commissioner sir pakad kar khada raha gaya….wo khudse he badbadata raha ye Nirwana h ….ye ….Nirwana….h….
Bahar ….
Raj — Abhay sari taiyariya kaisi chal rahi h…
Abhay — muskarakar sab jaisa apne chaha waisa he ho raha h….
Raj — waqt araha h abhay …..jald he hakikat samne ane wali h…phir tumhe mouka milega badle ka…
Abhay — inhi hath se cheerdunga…..sabko…
Likes aur revoes mai kanjusi nahi rakhne ka 6.1k words ka h…..

Aj ke liye itna he …..
Anu khadi huvi aur raj ke gaal par ek baad ek kayi thapad jad diya raj ne anu ke thapad se palke tak nahi jhapkayi….
Wah... excellent update.
Pehle part me Raj aur Manisha ka kya relationship hai, bahut sunder tarike se dikhaya. Kahan Manisha Raj ko marti rehti, lekin master ke role me to alag hi rang the. Yeh bhi Raj ka pyar hai jo weh Manisha ko harr khatre se ladne ke liye train ker raha hai. Ab Poonam ko samajh me aa gaya ki Raj ki jindagi kin khatron se ghiri huyi hai.

Main yahi soch raha tha ki Raj Anu ko sach kaise batayega aur Anu ka kya reaction hoga. Apne ye scene bahut acchi tarah se handle kiya. Kuch interesting quotes,
usai yakeen nahi ho raha tha par wo raj ko bhi ache se janti thi ki raj jhut nahi bolega usai …

“ ha …acha ek baat bataoge tumhari gf h kya “
Main nahin to koi aur bhi nahin
Raj -muje goli maar degi dekhte he…

chalo acha h jo main nahi kar sakti wo kar degi…
Anu chah ker bhi Raj ko nuksan nahin pahuncha sakti.
Anu “ pyar accept kar chuke hote aur phir dhokha dete toh trust me phir tum chahe sage bhai he nikalte masr deti tumhe….
I really feel sad for Anu. Bahut accha character dikhaya hai uska.

Sherdil ka scene bhi full of thrill tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki Raj ko nahi pata Sherdil Ali ka beta hai, shayad use to Ali ke baare me bhi pata na ho. Weh to Sherdil ko isliye bacha raha hai ki weh ek nekdil insan hai...
apki imandari ke kisai bahut sune the socha tha …milkar kaam karenge par dhukh huva apki sachayi jaankar …..
Mumbai Commissioner ka role confusing hai...
'apki imandari ke kisai bahut sune the socha tha …milkar kaam karenge par dhukh huva apki sachayi jaankar ….'
isase to lagta hai ki weh bhi underworld se mila hua hai...

To Abhay bhi action me aa gaya hai...
 

Sandeep singh nirwan

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Nahi Sandeep bhai
Mai us bare mai bat nahi kar reha
Hhhhh ....🤔🤔🤔
Apko batata hu
Last week jo apne update Diya tha n
Tab maine uske aage ke bare mai socha ki aage ap kya likhoge kaise likhoge
To usi time mujhe yellow barr ne kat liya

Fir kal second time mai apke last updated kr aage ke bare mai socha ki aage ap kaise le jaoge
To kal 2 bar mujhe barrr ne kata
Maine socha pata nahi kya h kyo kat rahi h
Mai fir bhi sochta reha
To hath se mi ki Android watch gir gayi 2500 wali
Mera demag kharab
Maine fir bhi har n mani
Fir bhi sochta reha
To bike ke samne ak gadda aa gaya
Aur us gadde mai jate hi aise dhachki lagi
Ki bike ki light horn indicator sab kam karna band ho gaye
Uske bad se fir aage ki story n sochi maine


But yeh sab sach h
Bhai bhai bhai.......ye kya coincidence huva🤦 apke sath ....main duwa karta hu ki uparwala apke sath aur koyi bhi buri ghatna na aj na kabhi jeevan mai kare ....thoda bahut rasi fal dekhlo name ke according ...main kam he manta hu par kabhi follow kar leta hu taaki ...sab sahi rahe......
Wah... excellent update.
Pehle part me Raj aur Manisha ka kya relationship hai, bahut sunder tarike se dikhaya. Kahan Manisha Raj ko marti rehti, lekin master ke role me to alag hi rang the. Yeh bhi Raj ka pyar hai jo weh Manisha ko harr khatre se ladne ke liye train ker raha hai. Ab Poonam ko samajh me aa gaya ki Raj ki jindagi kin khatron se ghiri huyi hai.
Ek time aisa bhi ayega jab dhushman raj ke ghar tak bhi pahuchenge tab .....manisha ka role very imp hoga ....kyoki wo ghar ki bahu aur saviour hogi.......
Main yahi soch raha tha ki Raj Anu ko sach kaise batayega aur Anu ka kya reaction hoga. Apne ye scene bahut acchi tarah se handle kiya. Kuch interesting quotes,
Rona dhona jayda dikhta toh jayda serial type ka ho jata isliye khincha nahi...
Main nahin to koi aur bhi nahin



Anu chah ker bhi Raj ko nuksan nahin pahuncha sakti.
Ha agar raj ki baa sach huvi toh wo koyi action nahi legi warna jo goli chala sakti h wo kuch bhi kar sakti h
I really feel sad for Anu. Bahut accha character dikhaya hai uska.
Abhi sad h par thoda aur build hoga uska charecter ....
Sherdil ka scene bhi full of thrill tha. Mujhe lagta hai ki Raj ko nahi pata Sherdil Ali ka beta hai, shayad use to Ali ke baare me bhi pata na ho. Weh to Sherdil ko isliye bacha raha hai ki weh ek nekdil insan hai...
Ye part jayda lamba nahi jane dunga .....kyoki agai is phase mai bahut kuch h jo dikhana h....isliye jald pata lag jayega
Mumbai Commissioner ka role confusing hai...
'apki imandari ke kisai bahut sune the socha tha …milkar kaam karenge par dhukh huva apki sachayi jaankar ….'
isase to lagta hai ki weh bhi underworld se mila hua hai...
Nahi wo bus immandari ke andar jayda bah gaya ....kuch apne officer par trust kar liya par chasme jaldi utar jate h uske sath bhi yahi hoga...
To Abhay bhi action me aa gaya hai...
Abhay ....ka gusa abhi bhi barkarar h ek baat toh saaf h ki wo suru se he raj ke sath tha.....
Thank you for your precious words 🙏👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Bahut jabarjast update raha bhai, Anu se bhi Raj ne bate share karke Anu ko apne pale me le liya he. Baki muje to lagta he ye Anu ka bap senior Victor aur bhai Junior Victor he.
Underworld ki meeting mai raj ki photo dikhayi gayi thi...tab sr aur jr victor bhi the .....🤔🤔🤔🤔🤣
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Hhhhh ....🤔🤔🤔

Bhai bhai bhai.......ye kya coincidence huva🤦 apke sath ....main duwa karta hu ki uparwala apke sath aur koyi bhi buri ghatna na aj na kabhi jeevan mai kare ....thoda bahut rasi fal dekhlo name ke according ...main kam he manta hu par kabhi follow kar leta hu taaki ...sab sahi rahe......
Bhai mai yeh sab chij ko manta hu
Kyoki mere sath kai bar aisa hua h
Ki jaise mai kuch galat karne ki soch reha hu ya karne wala hu to mujhe chot lag jati h
Jaise ki pair mud gaya ya bike takrate takrate bachi etc.

Ho sakta h maine jo aage story ke bare mai socha
Usko ap kisi aur tarike se dikhana chahte ho
Aur mai kuch galat tereh se soch reha tha
Isliye aisa hua ho

But thanks bhai
Lovely comments
 
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Bahut jabarjast update raha bhai, Anu se bhi Raj ne bate share karke Anu ko apne pale me le liya he. Baki muje to lagta he ye Anu ka bap senior Victor aur bhai Junior Victor he.
Bhai ji thoda socho agar sr.victor Anu ka baap hai to phir manohar Singh kaun hai , kyuki manohar singh ne raj ko dekha bhi hai aur Raj se mila bhi hai ,
But victor ne raj ko dekha tak nhi hai ,uske pass only Raj ki photo hai jisse wo raj ko khoj rha hai .

To Manohar aur victor dono same kaise ho sakte hai ?
 
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Bhai ji thoda socho agar sr.victor Anu ka baap hai to phir manohar Singh kaun hai , kyuki manohar singh ne raj ko dekha bhi hai aur Raj se mila bhi hai ,
But victor ne raj ko dekha tak nhi hai ,uske pass only Raj ki photo hai jisse wo raj ko khoj rha hai .

To Manohar aur victor dono same kaise ho sakte hai ?
I also think so. Aur jab bade business walo ki meeting huyi thi, usme paisa na dene ki wajah se merne walo ki list me sabse uper naam Manohar Sing ka hi tha.
 

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I also think so. Aur jab bade business walo ki meeting huyi thi, usme paisa na dene ki wajah se merne walo ki list me sabse uper naam Manohar Sing ka hi tha.
Wait and watch game behind game h toh twist behind twists h..........
 

Sandeep singh nirwan

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Bhai ji thoda socho agar sr.victor Anu ka baap hai to phir manohar Singh kaun hai , kyuki manohar singh ne raj ko dekha bhi hai aur Raj se mila bhi hai ,
But victor ne raj ko dekha tak nhi hai ,uske pass only Raj ki photo hai jisse wo raj ko khoj rha hai .

To Manohar aur victor dono same kaise ho sakte hai ?
Twists lots of twists
 
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