Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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[Shailesh kumar]

Update 179

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Anu ghar ke andar pareshan hokar ghum rahi thi … “main uske liye kyo pareshan wo toh pyar nahi karta h na muje …..ya isliye pareshan hu ki wo muje pyar karta h…..” anu bahut pareshan thi kyoki raj usai saaf kah chuka tha ki wo usai sach mai bahut pyar karta h par bahan ki nazar se ….usai uska usai ladna usai tease karna acha lagta h ….anu abhi isi udhed bhun mai thi ki….uski maa room mai agayiii…..aur apni beti ko yu pareshan hota dekh kar …

Anu mom “ raj se jagda ho gaya h kya anu”

Anu “mom ap….nahi nahi us idiot se toh roj he jagda rahta h…”

Anu mom muskarakar - Beti tuje shadi ke liye paise wale toh bahut mil jayenge par jo teri kadar kare wo koyi lakho carodo mai ek he milega..….aur Raj unhi mai se ek h …jab tu nashe mai party karke so gayi thi wo tuje lekar ghar aya….warna aj ke ladke fayda pahle uthate h….par raj ko tere paiso mai koyi dilchaspi nahi h….tere papa ke pass paisa he paisa h par samay …wo bilkul nahi h ..muje toh yaad bhi nahi h ki akhiri baar hum bahar sath ghumne bhi kab gaye the ….anuuuu….paiso se jayda pyar jaruri h ….warna paisa sirf duriya he lata h….

Anu apni maa ki baate dhayan se sunti rahi aur phir boli “ actualy maa wo raj muje apne sath viridh asharam lekar gaya tha….uska is duniya mai koyi nahi h toh unhe he apne dada dadi manta h wo aur un bujurgo ka raj ke prati pyar dekh kar mera dil bhi bhavuk ho gaya….muje bhi laga kaas mere bhi dada dadi nana nani hote main bhi kisi ko chacha mama kah pati mere bhi bhai aur bahan hote ….

Anu ki baate sun anu ki maa bhavuk ho gayi wo bolna toh chahti thi par bol nahi payi ….par anu ne unke chahre par arahi sikan aur haav bhaav ko dekh andaza laga liya ki raj sahi h…..

Anu mom “ chal ye sab chod tu kahe toh raj ke sath teri shadi ki baat chalau tere papa se …wo akela h hamre sath he rahega mujhe ghar jamayi…aur beta mil jayega aur tuje dur bhi nahi jana padega….

Anu — mom itni jaldi kya h abhi jaan toh lu usai waise mom agle month mere semester exam start ho rahe h main ussi ghar bula lu padhayi bhi ho jayegi aur usai ache se jaan bhi lungi….

Anu mom muskarakar— sirf padhayi he karni h….warna ajkal ke bache kafi advance h…

Anu — mom ap…

Anu mom — ok ok main tumhare papa se puchungi …

Anu — wo mana kardenge mom….

Anu mom sochte huve — waise wo kisi meeting ka jikra kar rahe the…agle month jana ka … tab tu bula lena…….

Anu — love u mom….

Anu mom — jodiya kismat se he milti h waise thank you wo ghar rahega isliye kah rahi h yaa itna kah muskarne lagi aur bahar agayi..

Maa ke jate he “ ab kya he kahu maa apse socha toh bahut kuch tha par wo Gadha… bhai nikla ….khair ab tu kya kar sakti h anu….teri life suck ho gayiii…kanha tu kya karne ke sapne soch rahi thii….chi chi anu tu ye kya bolne lagi ….bewakoof ladki wo tera bhai h ab ..….ab aisa sochna bhi paap h tere liye……..



Udhar commissioner …Thane mai 3 hour tak soch mai duba raha….usai wakayi ab bahut pachtawa ho raha tha ki usne kyo deal nahi kari pahle laga us sai wo shaks jhut bol raha h par jab usne crime scene ko dekh kar Nirwana ki style aur scene ki similarity ko check kiya toh usai bahut kuch common mil gaya ….par ab wo kaise dhundh sakta tha tabhi usai special officer abhay singh ka naam yaad aya usne apni puri approach laga di abhay tak pahuchne ke liye aur last mai raat hote hote wo contact karta banata huva chief tak pahuch gaya ….

In call……

Commissioner — Hello main mumbayi commissioner bol raha hu

Cheif — kahiye….kaise yaad kiya..

Commissioner - muje Special officer abhay singh se milna h…

Cheif — Special officer Abhay singh wo toh secret mission par h aur jab tak wo khud na chahe usai toh sirf….phir hadbadakar…ap kaise jante h abhay ko…

Phir commissioner ne sari baat chief ko bata di ….

Cheif lambi saans chodkar— ap nahi jante ki apne kya kar diya ….wo waise he police ke ghuskhoro se nafrat karta h aur apne us ACP ko support dekar usai naraj kar diya h…waise wo Acp jinda h ya mar gaya kyoki agar nahi mara h toh uski jindgi bahut dard bhari hone wali h

Commissioner— usne ghar ke andar sucied karli h……

Chief — ha ha ha asaan maut mar gaya ….waise apki imandari…ke bare mai Abhay ne usai bataya hoga….aur isliye usne apse milne ki icha zahir ki hogi warna Nirwana ko jab koyi dhundh he nahi paya toh usai pakadna bahut dur ki baat h commissionersahab tufaan se bacha karte h usai uksaya nahi karte h…you..JUST MISSED…….

Commissioner gahri sans chodkar ek akhiri sawal — wo mumbayi kyo h….

Cheif jor jor se hasne lage ….phir ek dum se serious hokar “sunamii ke liye jismai jitne bharast police officer politician shamil h sab saaf ho jayenge ab ap par depend karta h ap kiski taraf h meri ek raaye h ki kabhi kabhi system se bahar nikalna padta h jurm ko mitne ke liye aur apki jaankari ke liye itna bata du agar…ek wanha pahuch gaya h toh ….khel suru hone wala h….uske sathi kaho ya uske chane wale ya chahe uske bodygaurd wo bhi wanha jald he pahuch jayenge …..aur ha ek baat batana bhul gaya un chahne walo mai main bhi hu….jo uske ek ishare par matlb ek ishare par kisi ko bhi maar sakte h….Bus duwa karna uska dusra chehra Nirwana bahar nahi aye warna katle aam bahut hoga aur saboot ek nahi milega but i m suprise…ki usne normal roop mai bina kisi maarkat ke nirwana bankar apse milna chuna…..ap bahut badi jung ke bich mai ho jitni jaldi apni side chun logo apke liye acha hoga …aur apke chahne wale ke liye…



Call cut hote he commissioner ka dil tezi se dhadhakne laga wo khud se he bola uske chahne wale bhi jald pahuch jayenge matlb wo …..uski ankhe hairani se fail gayi….wo khud se he bola akhir kya karne wale ho tum….…



Raj ne kya kiya….thane se nikalne ke baad….



Raj — khana sath khate h abhay ….

Abhay — Nahi raj bhai….khana hum sath tabhi khayenge jab us killer organization ka naam is duniya se ukhad fenkenge tab main shrutii aur ajju aur sonali mam shiwani mam aur ap sab sath mai khana khayenge…

Raj - shruti kaisi h….

Abhay — ajju ka dhayan rakhti h….aur martial arts ki practice karti h….wo ajju ke siva kisi se baat nahi karti h….aur ajju ka apko pata h wo abhi tak 50 percent he recover huva h…sab meri galti thi mujhe alert rahna chahiye tha sunil bhai ne kaha tha ki usne hume dekh liya h…..par hum he laaparwaha ho gaye…

Raj — abhay dhukhi mat hovo ….jo beet gaya wo badla nahi ja sakta h….

Abhay — sahi kaha raj bhai ye pen drive lijiye ismai apne jo manga sab h …..main jata hu …..

Raj — tikh h…

Abhay ke jate he raj ne taxi pakdi aur sidha pahuch gaya 10 manjila imarat ke samne …..aur lift lekar wo ek flat ke samne pahucha …..

Bahar bell ki awaj soon andar baithi rifat aur uski maa dar gayi uski maa ne heemat kar gate ke hole se bahar dekha toh raj khada tha jissi wo pahchan nahi payi bahar khada raj bhi samaj raha tha isliye usne koyi jald bazi nahi dikhayi aur kuch dair intezaar kiya….kuch dair baad door open huva …

Rifat maa — koun ho beta ….

Raj — itni badi saza dilwa di aur ab bete ko pahchan nahi rahi h….

Rifat ki maa ke chahre par muskaan agayiii….usne jaldi se side hatkar raj ko andar ane ko kaha …..

Rifat abhi dari aur dhayan se raj ko dekh rahi thi…..

Rifat ki maa kuch bolna chahti thi par raj ne rok diya…

Raj “ sher ki bahan sherni hoti h tumhare bhai ka jigar toh sher ka h par muje nahi pata tha ki uski bahan darpok lomdi hogi…..jo door bell se he dar jayegi

Rifat-- main…darpok nahi hu…..

Raj “ toh ap hume bataye ki phir maa ko darwaja kyo kholne diya kitchen se ek chakuu hath mai uthakar khud kholti aur khatra hone par us chakuu se tab tak waar karti jab tak khatra tal nahi jata…”

Rifat kya he bolti wo chup ho gayi aur apni maa ke bhagkar gale lag gayi…

Maa — ye wahi h jinhone tere bhai ki aur hamari jaan bachayi thi….

Rifat dhayan se raj ko dekhte huve “ toh ap hamare bhai se fight karne wale h aur fight mai hamare bhai ko maar denge isiliye bacha rahe h hume”

Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan aagayi “ fight karne wale toh h aur ha main usai marne wala bhi hu…agar apko pasand nahi toh nahi karenge hum fight ”

Rifat ke chahre par muskaan agayi “sach mai agar hum mana kar de toh ap nahi fight karenge aur hamare bhai ko kuch nahi karenge “

Raj “ bilkul nahi par…….ek baat…… nahi 2 baat…..manni padengi hamari”

Rifat gahri soch mai doob gayi…

Raj “ bus itna he pyar h bhai se”

Rifat “ hume apki har baat manjur hum hamre bhai ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte h”

Raj “ phir tikh h toh pahli baat apko self defence sikhna padega manjur h aur main bahut strict hu pitayi bhi karta hu chahe ladka ho ya ladki agar galti karta h “

Rifat “ hum darti nahi h….hume manjur h”

Raj “Godd toh ab dusri baat h ye ki tumhe mere…”

Rifat ka dil joro se dhadkane laga ki ab kya baat kahega kanhi usai ….uske sath…uske dil mai bahut ulte sidhe khayal ane

Raj “ ulta sidha soch liya ho toh main bolu”

Rifat ki maa ke chahre par badi si muskurahat thi….rifat bhi hadbada gayii…” ha boliya na maine kab roka h ap he nahi bol rahe h “

Raj “ jitni baar milogi hume chaye pilani hogi khud banakar majur …”

Rifat khilkhilakar hans padi …aur khusi se boli “muje dono baat manjur h….”

Raj toh phir maa ko kyu pakad rakha h toh pilao chaye ya banani nahi aati h…

Rifat “ sab ata h muje main abhi layi par yanha saman hoga”

Raj “ yanha sab h aur nahi h toh ek list banao abhi online order daal dete h … aur bhi koyi bahana h toh bana lo “

Rifat muu teda karke “ hum jhut nahi bolte h “

Itna kah wo toh chali gayi kitchen mai piche raj muskurata rah gaya….aur phir uske chahre se sari muskaan gayab ho gayiii …wo palatkar bola “ main apse sirf ek sawal puchunga muje umid h ap sach bolengi”

Rifat maa “ pucho beta “

Raj “ apka beta paiso ke liye nahi karta h sab ….garibo ke huk liye wo basti mai lada..iska matlb apne uski parwarish achi kari h…”

Rifat “ haa apne jo kaha wo sach h”

Raj “ toh mera sawal h ki ….jab wo log apko le ja rahe the apne kaha tha apna wada yaad rakhna ….toh aisa kya wada h jo ek maa ko apni beti ki jindgi se bhi jyadaa pyara h”

Rifat ki maa toh jam si gayi raj ka sawal sunke usai umid nahi thi ki raj ye sawal puch lega…..rifat ki maa jami ki jami rah gayiii aur kaafi dair tak aise he shanti rahi tab tak rifat chaye bhi lekar agayi…

Rifat ye lijiye ….main apko kya matlb kis naam se bulau…

Raj chaye ka cup hath mai lete huve apne bhai ko kya kah kar bulati ho wahi bulao….

Rifat muskarne lagi “ main bhai ko bhai he bulati hu…”

Raj “ toh phir aj se tumhare 2 bhai ho gaye dekh lena kahi tumhara bhai gusa na ho jaye ki tumne ek aur bhai bana liya “

Rifat nahi honge he he he wo bahut ache h bus gusa bahut jaldi ajata h …par ye maa ko kya huva

Raj “ mere sawal ka jawab dhundh rahi h…..

Rifat ki maa gahri soch mai rahi phir boli “…wada wada wada usne teen baar bola phir boli….ye wada h mere pati aur bhai ki maut ka ye wada h meri bhabhi aur uske bache ki maut ka …ye wada h….hamare hanste khelte pariwar ko ujdane wale hatyaro ki maut ka ….maine apne bete ko bachpan se sirf badle ke liye taiyar kiya h akele ….taki wo sabki maut ka badla le”

Raj - aj ke halat dekhkar apko kya laga agar apka dhushman aj wale logo se kamjor h toh yakinun apka badla pura hoga …aur agar wo takatwr h toh ap apne bete ko bhi kho dengi phir wada kaise pura hoga aur parinam ka socha h apne ”

Rifat maa “ parinam ke bare mai muje sab pata h aur iske liye hum teeno taiyar h”

Raj “ akhir koun h apka dhudhman muje bataye sayad main apki koyi madad kar pau”

Rifat maa “ beta muje pata h tum bahut takatwar ho tumhari pahuch bhi unchi h par sach bolu muje bhi nahi pata h aur isi sawal ke jawab mai main yanha wanha dhundti kitne he salo se ghum rahi hu”

Raj “ toh apki family ke bare mai batayiye ….”

Rifat maa “ hamara pariwar beta aj tak puri baate maine apne bete ko bhi nahi batayi par aj tum dono ko bataungi…..aj se 20 saal pahle Uttarpardesh ke gaanv mai hamra ghar huva karta tha mere pati fauj mai noukri karte the…unki posting delhi mai thi….. hamari jindgi bahut achi gujar rahi thi main bhi unke sath he delhi rahti thi….kanhi koyi dikat nahi thi …main us waqt pait se thi sherdil yani Ahsaan mere pait mai tha ….janam ka samay nazdik tha muje pados ki he mahila hospital le kar ja rahi thi…tabhi dange suru ho gaye the sab kuch jaam ho gaya tha hum bich mai buri tarah fans gaye aur mere pait mai dard bhi suru ho gaya …muje hamare bachne ki koyi umid nahi thi…par uspal mai mera muu bola bhai pahli baar mujhse mila ….wo hamri maut aur mere bich mai khada ho gaya ….akela sirf akela nihaths sab ke samne khada raha…sher jaisa kaleja …pahad ki tarah atal …jisai tufaan se bhi hilaya nahi ja sake…Koyi bhi hila nahi saka usai …..insaniyat ki jeeti jagti misaal …muje aur mere bache ko usne us din akele apne dum par dhangayiyo ke bich se bachaya….aur jab hum hospital pahuche tab pahli baar maine jana ki wo koyi aam admi nahi h kitne he log uske agai hath jod rahe the…jab Ahsaan is duniya mai aya toh maine uska naam Ahsaan rakha tab unhone kaha ki ye bada hokar apni sachayi achayi se sabka dil jeetega …..ye maut se ladkar jeeta h ye ek sher ki tarah jiyega ye ek Sherdil banega…..isliye iska pyar se naam sherdil rakha ….kuch samay baad hamri jindgi mai buri khabar ayi mere pati ko jhute iljam laga kar fouj se nikal diya …aur wo sab kuch chod dhukhi dil se ghar agaye unke liye unke desh se badhkar kuch nahi tha..wo bahut jayda dhukhi rahne lage tab maine unhe bahut samjhaya aur par hamesa ek he baat kahte the

Ali “ sirf isliye ki main ek musalmaan hu sirf isliye muje nikal diya meri baato par yakin nahi kiya….are….mere khun se pucho usmai dekho sirf deshbhakti h …akele akele apne dono hath se masalkar maar sakta hu bahuto ko”

Unko main aur tut te nahi dekh sakti thi…isliye maine apne muu bole bhai ko bulaya …jab mere pati ko pata chala wo hindu h toh wo naraj ho gaye..

Ali “ chale jao tum aur khabardar jo dubara yanha dikhe toh tumhra ahsaan h muj par isliye jinda chod raha hu”

Pata h tab unhone kya kaha ….unhone kaha “ maine suna tha ki ap bolte ho desh bhakti mere khun mai h…aur abhi main jis se mil raha hu wo toh hindu muslim kar raha h…toh main ye samjhu ki ap sirf bate he karte h”

Ali “ meri har baat sachi h”

Bhai “ toh phir apko ye pata hona chahiye ….jab maine apki patni aur meri bahan ko bachaya tab maine bahuto ko mara koun hindu koun muslim muje nahi pata aur na muje pata tha ki ye meri bahan ek muslim h… main ek nirdosh ko nahi marne de sakta tha …aur ap toh ek fouji h jisai yshi sikhaya jata h ki desh ki seva aur surakhsa kare chahe dhusmaan koyi bhi ho usai maar de…..sab ek jaise nahi hote h…ap sirf mere sath ek hafte bina kisi shart rahiye apko kuch nahi karna h bus dekhna phir apko pata chal jayega sab ek jaise nahi hote h….“

Ali gahri sanschodkar tikh h

Rifat maa “ aur bus tab se mere pati aur bhai ek misal ban gaye ….unki dosti dharam se pare thi…mere pati ke bhai bhi isi neki ki rah mai shamil ho gaye wo hamare pure pariwaar ki surakhsa karte aur wo dono anyay ke virudh ladte …

Raj “ sachayi ke dhushman bahut hote h …”

Rifat maa — Ha beta par wo dono bahut samjhdaar the main ajtak nahi samaj payi kaise koyi unhe maar sakta h mere pati bahut takat waar the aur bhai ke sath rah kar wo aur ache se ladna sikh gaye the aur mere bhai toh akele 100 par bhari pad jaye ….

Raj “ kya naam tha apke pati ka ….”

Ding dong…….gate ki doot bell baji….

Raj “ main dekhta hu”

Raj ne bahar se door khola toh khub sara ghar ka saman tha….raj ke chahre par muskarahat agayi…kyoki ussi pata tha ye sab anirudh uncle ne bhijwaya h…wo palatkar “ lo agaya sab saman …ab toh dubara bahane nahi marogi…

Rifat bhai mai bahane nahi marti hu..

Raj “ tikh tikh h jao inhe kitchen mai laga do…..phir rifat ki maa se ha ap batayiye kya naam tha …”

Rifat mom “ Ali ….”

Raj ki toh mani dhadhkan he ruk gayi usai aisa jhatka laga tha ki wo bol nahi paya usai story ka harpahlu apne pita aur chacha ali se milta lag raha tha usne …..phir heemat kar pucha aur apke bhai ka naam “

Rifat mom “ sahdev singh”

Raj ko toh itna bada jhatka laga tha ki wo mano hil sa gaya ….usai yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uske ali chacha ki family jinda h …..aur wo is waqt uske tikh samne h ….

Rifat mom ….mere bhai ne sab diya l…….hum sab sath he rahte the bus jab ye ghatna huvi mai apne maa ke pass ayi huvi thi….khabar manhoos he ayi muje Rifat aur Ahsaan ko lekar chipna pada aur chipkar he taiyari kari aur bhai ke pariwar ko dhunti rahi kyoki mere devar aur pati ke marne ki khabar fail chuki thi….maine than liya ki mere bete ko is kaabil banugi ki wo chun chun kar badla lega…..

Rifat ki maa bolti ja rahi thi aur raj sab kuch bhulkar unhe khushi ke ansuu liye dekh raha tha…..aur jab uske emotions controle se bahar ho gaye tab wo khada hokar bathroom ki taraf chala gaya aur bathroom ko andar se band kar liya…..uske chahre par badi si muskaan thi…. “ Dadaji maine unhe dhund liya ….dhundhliya dadaji wo jinda h….ab kuch toh sachayi pata lagegi hume “raj kaafi dair bath room mai raha aur phir wanhi se anirudh goswami se phone par baat kar kuch kaha….aur jab wo bahar aya ….

Rifat maa “ kya baat huvi beta “

Raj kuch bhi nahi…….ap chaliye mere sath aur lomdi tu jaldi se jo kapde inmai se fit aye pahan le ….raj dono ko taiyar karke aur apne sath lekar anirudh goswami ke office ke roof top par pahuch gaya janha rifat aur uski maa confuse thi itna bada office aur building dekhkar….raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan abhi tak barkarara thi….kuch he pal mai gadgadahat ke sath helicopter roof par land huva…

Raj “ maa chinta mat karna…… apki agni pariksha puri huvi aur phir rifat ki taraf dekh kar muskaraya aur sir par hath fera”

Rifat ki maa puchna bahut kuch pichna chahti thi par puch nahi payi….

Raj “ ek akhiri sawal … akhiri baar apke bhai aur pati se milne koun aya tha….

Rifat mom sochte huve…. “ha yaad aya Ravinder singh”

Rifat ki maa ne puch liya “ tum koun ho beta”

Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan agayi “ wo chillaya apke bhai ka beta Raj singh Nirwan

Rifat ki maa ki ankhe fail gayi helicopter upar ki taraf ud gaya aur wo upar se niche ki taraf raj ko dekhte rahi….uski ankho mai hairani aur khushi ke ansuu bah rahe the….

Dono ke jata dekh kar ….

Raj “Ravindar singh ye toh papa dost aur team mai se ek the….toh kya papa maa ki maut se inka sidha talukh h “

Raj ye sochta huva niche anirudh ke office agaya….

Anirudh “ raat hone wali h agar kaam na ho toh raat ka khana sath khaye”

Raj “ uncle ek baat puchuuu…”

Anirudh “ behichak jo puchna h pucho”

Raj -Papa ki income sabse jayda kis chij se hoti thi matlb wo kya karte the….

Anirudh — Beta tumhare maa aur papa ne muje sirf hospital ko sambhalne ka jimma diya tha jab tak tum aur richa 21 kie na ho jaye phir as per leagal documents wo tum dono ke naam ho jayega…..wo chahte the ki tum dono ki agai shadi ho jaye…isliye ye sab unhone tay kiya….aur hospital se unhe bahut achi income hoti thi par unhone kabhi ek rupya tak nahi liya ….aur iske ilawa unki ek team thi….jo ghane junglo mai ancient jagahon ki khoj karte rahte the aur purani chijo ko nikalte the taki acha paisa kama sake ye 2 toh muje pata h……..

Raj “ purani jagahon par khudayi …

Anirudh — ha pata nahi par wo jaise kuch dhundh rahe the….par kya ye sirf wo ya unki team he janti thi….muje bus itna he pata h…ab agar sahdev bhai aur vidya bhabhi ke bare mai aur janna h toh raat ko sath khana padega manjur ho toh bolo ….

Raj — tikh h jaisa ap chahe ….

Raj ne apne chahre par wapas mask laga liya aur anirudh ke sath office se sath bahar nikal gaya…..aur jab dono ghar pahuche toh ….poonam ne darwaza khola …” bade papa ap agaye meeting kaisi rahi par ap toh bole late night ho jayegi aate aate”

Anirudh “ sab yanhi pich logi ya is bade baap ko ghar ke andar bhi ane dogi”

Poonam kitchen ki aur jaate huve- aayiye na main chaye aur paani lekar laati hu….

Anirudh — are tufaan express meri bhi toh sunliya kar…chaye nahi khana he khayenge aur raj bhi hamare sath he dinner karega….

Poonam ke pair thithak gaye….usne turant piche mudkar dekha toh raj usai dekh kar he muskararaha tha…..

Poonam jaldi se kitchen mai bina reaction chali gayiii….

Raj “ ab isai kya huva uncle ke samne kuch aur akele kuch aur ….sach mai ladkiyo ko samajhna bahut muskill h….

Poonam kitchen se “ ap naha lijiye main raj ji ke liye jab tak chaye bana deti hu”

Anirudh - lo bhai ghar mai ghusai nahi ki beti ke sawal aur order suru ho gaye biwi ho toh biwi ke order suno ”

Raj - Din bhar order dene ke baad kabhi order lene bhi chahiye h…

Anirudh — tum bahut agai jaoge beta ji ….are ha acha yaad dilaya ….

Anirudh bol he rahe the ki poonam piche se pani la rahi thi…..

Anirudh “ beta ji meri toh jindgi mai ek he pyar aur ek he shadi h….tum apna socho tumhari kundli mai shadi ke bare mai batate huve pandito ka sir bhi dard hone lag gaya tha…..

Raj hairani se anirudh ko dekhne laga …

Anirudh muskarate huve room ki taraf chale gaye…

Poonam ne jab ye suna toh uska dil soch se dub gaya ki bade papa kya bol tahe h wo puch bhi nahi sakti thi ….toh anirudh ke jaate he

Poonam “ acha ji shadi ki badi jaldi h apki abhi umar h padhne ki kuch banne ki“

Raj muskara “ meri jindgi mai kuch bhi sidhe se nahi hote h poonam ji tabhi usne poonam ko chedne ke liye kaha sivaye ek chij ke”

Poonam “aur wo kya h”

Raj “ ek achi dost se dosti hone ke kyoki wo khana he itna acha banati h khud ba khud ana padta h“

Poonam ko jaise he realise huva ki wo usi ki baat kar raha h toh sharm aur muskarahat uske chahre par agayi …aur wo wapas kitchen mai agayi …

Raj piche jor jor se hasne laga Poonam ne jhuk kar raj ko muskarate huve dekha toh uska bhi dil khushi se jhum utha kyoki pahli baar usne raj ko itni jor se khillhilakar hanste huve dekha tha….wo khana bana rahi tabhi anirudh bhi aakar sofe par baith gaye…

Aniudh —toh pucho raj aur kya jaana chahte ho….

Poonam bhi jhuk kar sari baate soon rahi thi…

Raj — kya maa papa ne kabhi apse mere nana nani ya family ka jikra kiya ….

Anirudh — tumhare papa ne toh kabhi nahi kiya par tumhari maa jikra karti thi ki unke 4 bhai h aur 2 bahan h ya thi ye muje nahi pata par wo sabka dhayan rakhti thi aur khaskar tumhare nana nani ki jaan thi…

Raj ke chahre par muskurahat agayiii…

Anirudh — aur ek maje ki baat sunoge …tumhe hansi ayegi ek baar jab hum unke ghar gaye yani tumhare ghar gaye huve the tab tumhare papa apne sath walo se bahut jaruri baat kar rahe the …par tumhari maa ne sirf itna he kaha tha kheer taiyaar ho gayi h chalo ajao sabhi aur bus fir kya….sabhi tumhare papa ko akela chod khane ke liye doud pade the…..tumhare papa hairan rah gaye the …aur tumhari maa unko dekh jor jor se hansti rahi …..sabhi tumhari maa ki tumhare papa se jayda baat mante the…ek kissa sunata hu ….tumhare papa Ali bhai ke sath uttarpradesh gaye huve tab ….delhi ke home minister jisne tumhare papa ke dhushman se paise kha liye the usne tumhare papa ko giraftar karne ke liye police bhejhi par tumhare papa ghar par the nahi …..kudrati us din vidya hospital ki jameen final karne ke liye main bhi ghar aya huva tha …maine itni police walo ko dekha toh soch mai rah gaya ….Acp chilla kar kah raha tha sahdev ko bahar bhejho warna hume lathi charge karna hoga jo tum sab ke liye acha nahi hoga par tumhare papa ghar hote toh ate …..aur tumhare papa ke sathiyo ne police toh dur unke jutai ko bhi ghar ke gate ke andar nahi ane diya tha …par police ko order the commissioner ke…..tumhare bade papa joginder singh ne commissioner tak ko bhi samjhaya par minister ke agai kiski chalni thi …commissioner bhi paise khakar baitha tha……tab tumhari maa andar se bahar ayi …..aur tumhari maa ko sabhi log devi ki tarah pujte the aisa sayad he koyi ho jinki wo madad nahi karti thi isliye jaise wo ghar se bahar nikli ….aur police walo ne unhe sath chalne ko kaha toh log buri tarah naraj ho gaye unhone police ki gadiyo ko jala diya ….police walo ki jaan bachani muskil ho gayi …bheed ne police ko he giraftar kar liya ….4 Din aur raat tak wo aise gate par baithe rahe bhari police ayi jabardast jhadap huvi par police ko andar tak nahi ane diya …100 200 police aur samne hazaro ki bheed kya kar sakte the tab chief minister ko khud ana pada tha …..un sabki jaan bus tumhari maa ki wajah se nahi gayii

Raj “ phir papa kab aye”

Anirudh “ wo ghar nahi aye par agle din puri delhi ne dekha ki Acp ko road ke bich bhaga bhaga kar sahdev bhai ne chapplo jhto se mara …..puri delhi mai usai nanga doudaya …

Raj — commissioner aur wo minister…

Anirudh — jor jor se hasne lage ….

Raj kya huva….

Anirudh —un dono ke khane mai nind ki goliya mila di aur uthakar unhe phir dheere se raj ke kaan mai prostitute khane chod aye ….news aur media ne subhe unki buri halat kar di aur tumhare papa ke log pahle he bheed mai moujud the unhone undono ko kapde tak nahi pahnne diya …..aur jab officialy suspend huve tab …..sabke samne ghasit ghasit kar jaan se maar diya…..

Raj — Toh phir wo maa ko lekar nana nani ke pass kyo nahi gaye kabhi….

Anirudh — gaye the ….par ek insaan ne tumhare nana ko patti padha rakhi thi …isliye unhone hamesa tumhare maa papa ko dhikaar diya…..par ek baar baat tab badh gayi jab ….tumhari maa ki shadi jisai hone wali thi usne kaha ki “vidya agar tum sahdev ko chodkar meri ho jao toh hum tumhe apna lenge” jis par tumhare nana ne bhi hami bhar diii…tumhari maa ke man ko gahra dhakka laga …..unhone unchi awaj mai kaha “ pita ishwar ka roop hota h wo apni santan ki khushi chahta h …par ap apni he beti ka ghar ujadna chahte h kaise pita h ap “

Tumhare nana ne bhi gusai mai vidya bhabhi ko thapad maar diya …

Tab tumhare pita tumhare nana ko bus marne wale he the ki wo insaan bich mai agaya aur idhar tumhari maa ne sahdev bhai ko rok liya ……bus yahi sab h jo main janta hu …..raj tumhare papa aur maa ke bare mai…..

Ye sab baate karte karte …un teeno ne he khana kha liya tha ….aur raat ke 11 baj rahe the ……

Raj — Khane ke liye Thank you so much main ab chalta hu……

Anirudh — beta dair raat ho gayi h…aj tumhara body gaurd bhi sath nahi h …..isliye yanhi rook jao….subhe chale jana ye bhi toh tumhara he ghar h …..poonam beti raj ke liye …..room taiyaar kardo…

Poonam ne raj ko kuch kahne ka mouka nahi diya — Aayiye ra ji sab taiyar h ….

Raj ko lekar wo kavita manisha jis room mai rukti h wanha pahuchi ….. “ye raha apka room tabhi ussi kuch yaad aya wo boli raj ji ap apni ankhe band kariye aur jab tak main na bolu ankhe nahi kholni h….”

Raj ki ankhe band hote he wo internal garments jo kavita manisha ne khud ke liye rakhe the unhe lekar turant apne room mai rakh ayi “ ab ap ankhe khol lijiye”

Poonam “ main apke liye pani laati hu “

Raj ko wanha chod wo pani lene chali gayiii aur jald he wapas lout bhi ayi ….raj ko phir se gahri soch mai dekh kar “ pata h apke sath kya problem h …..”

Raj - are ap aa bhi gayi …

Poonam “ main toh aungi he na ….aur ap hamesa sochte sochte itni gahrayi mai kyo chale jate h”

Raj — jab koyi rasta nahi milta h toh gahrayi mai utarna padta h poonam ji …

Poonam aur raj ki ankhe mili …tab poonam boli “ acha muje toh apki ankho dhero sawal dikhte h par kya wakayi har sawal ka jawab ek sath janna jaruri h raj ji….maine bade papa ki sari baate suni ….aur us waqt ap bahut khus bhi the….muje pata h ap apne maapapa ko bahut yaad karte ho ….par jitna hum yaad karenge jitna hum sochenge jitni jaldi hum karenge hum utni he uljhan mai fanste jaayenge kyoki wajah hoti h jalbazi ki wajah se milne wale adhure jawab jo sukun dene ki bajaye dhukh uljhan he dete h…”

Raj poonam ki baat sun uski aur dekhta raha …poonam ke chahre par bolte huve bhi pyari si muskaan thi…Aj pahli baar tha jab raj ne bahut he dhayan se poonam ko dekha tha …

Poonam “apko apke sabhi sawalo ke jawab milenge raj ji par …apko bhi ek ek karke he paheli ko hal karna hoga….. warna sivaye dhuk ke kuch nahi milega” poonam ka dhayan bhi raj par gaya raj ko apni taraf aise dekhte dekh wo bhi usai he dekhne lagi…

Poonam “ acha ek baat kahu raj ji manoge “

Raj “ ha “

Poonam “mere sath sirdi sai baba ke mandir chalenge meri ek mannat thi “

Raj “ek dost ki itni si icha bhi koyi puri na kar sake wo dost kaisa…tikh h hum chalenge “

Poonam ke chahre par ayi muskurahat aur khushi ne raj ko kuch pal ke liye usmai usai khone ko majbur kar diya ….aj raat bhi jab wo gahri nind mai tha usai wahi sapna aya …jismai ladki ka dhundhla dhundla chehra usai muskurata huva dikhayi diya ….aur boli “ bahut dair kardi ane mai” achanak uski nind tut gayi……

Raj “ akhir koun ho tum kyo har baar mere sapne mai aati ho”



Aj ke liye itna he …….

Masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka kyoki ab past ke kuch aur raj ujagar hone wale h …….

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Bhai ikk request hai ending change Karo tumhare teeni hi pasand nahi aarahe bhai

Isko akhir kyun hatred from love story jaise shadi karwadena chahe 10 hi kyun naa hoo akele Raj ko dusre planet mat bhejna bhai maja nahi aayega

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Sandeep bhai apne story ke starting eka update me eka banglow ka jikara kiye te usa gar ke rahne vale be bhota atyachar ho rahe hai ...vo hi Raj ke nanhila hai kya ?

Sayad waha per kisi ko kidnap Kiya gya hai , sayad raj ka koi relative hai

 

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Update finish ho gaya h ....

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[subodh Jain]

Update 179

Hakikat

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Anu ghar ke andar pareshan hokar ghum rahi thi … “main uske liye kyo pareshan wo toh pyar nahi karta h na muje …..ya isliye pareshan hu ki wo muje pyar karta h…..” anu bahut pareshan thi kyoki raj usai saaf kah chuka tha ki wo usai sach mai bahut pyar karta h par bahan ki nazar se ….usai uska usai ladna usai tease karna acha lagta h ….anu abhi isi udhed bhun mai thi ki….uski maa room mai agayiii…..aur apni beti ko yu pareshan hota dekh kar …

Anu mom “ raj se jagda ho gaya h kya anu”

Anu “mom ap….nahi nahi us idiot se toh roj he jagda rahta h…”

Anu mom muskarakar - Beti tuje shadi ke liye paise wale toh bahut mil jayenge par jo teri kadar kare wo koyi lakho carodo mai ek he milega..….aur Raj unhi mai se ek h …jab tu nashe mai party karke so gayi thi wo tuje lekar ghar aya….warna aj ke ladke fayda pahle uthate h….par raj ko tere paiso mai koyi dilchaspi nahi h….tere papa ke pass paisa he paisa h par samay …wo bilkul nahi h ..muje toh yaad bhi nahi h ki akhiri baar hum bahar sath ghumne bhi kab gaye the ….anuuuu….paiso se jayda pyar jaruri h ….warna paisa sirf duriya he lata h….

Anu apni maa ki baate dhayan se sunti rahi aur phir boli “ actualy maa wo raj muje apne sath viridh asharam lekar gaya tha….uska is duniya mai koyi nahi h toh unhe he apne dada dadi manta h wo aur un bujurgo ka raj ke prati pyar dekh kar mera dil bhi bhavuk ho gaya….muje bhi laga kaas mere bhi dada dadi nana nani hote main bhi kisi ko chacha mama kah pati mere bhi bhai aur bahan hote ….

Anu ki baate sun anu ki maa bhavuk ho gayi wo bolna toh chahti thi par bol nahi payi ….par anu ne unke chahre par arahi sikan aur haav bhaav ko dekh andaza laga liya ki raj sahi h…..

Anu mom “ chal ye sab chod tu kahe toh raj ke sath teri shadi ki baat chalau tere papa se …wo akela h hamre sath he rahega mujhe ghar jamayi…aur beta mil jayega aur tuje dur bhi nahi jana padega….

Anu — mom itni jaldi kya h abhi jaan toh lu usai waise mom agle month mere semester exam start ho rahe h main ussi ghar bula lu padhayi bhi ho jayegi aur usai ache se jaan bhi lungi….

Anu mom muskarakar— sirf padhayi he karni h….warna ajkal ke bache kafi advance h…

Anu — mom ap…

Anu mom — ok ok main tumhare papa se puchungi …

Anu — wo mana kardenge mom….

Anu mom sochte huve — waise wo kisi meeting ka jikra kar rahe the…agle month jana ka … tab tu bula lena…….

Anu — love u mom….

Anu mom — jodiya kismat se he milti h waise thank you wo ghar rahega isliye kah rahi h yaa itna kah muskarne lagi aur bahar agayi..

Maa ke jate he “ ab kya he kahu maa apse socha toh bahut kuch tha par wo Gadha… bhai nikla ….khair ab tu kya kar sakti h anu….teri life suck ho gayiii…kanha tu kya karne ke sapne soch rahi thii….chi chi anu tu ye kya bolne lagi ….bewakoof ladki wo tera bhai h ab ..….ab aisa sochna bhi paap h tere liye……..



Udhar commissioner …Thane mai 3 hour tak soch mai duba raha….usai wakayi ab bahut pachtawa ho raha tha ki usne kyo deal nahi kari pahle laga us sai wo shaks jhut bol raha h par jab usne crime scene ko dekh kar Nirwana ki style aur scene ki similarity ko check kiya toh usai bahut kuch common mil gaya ….par ab wo kaise dhundh sakta tha tabhi usai special officer abhay singh ka naam yaad aya usne apni puri approach laga di abhay tak pahuchne ke liye aur last mai raat hote hote wo contact karta banata huva chief tak pahuch gaya ….

In call……

Commissioner — Hello main mumbayi commissioner bol raha hu

Cheif — kahiye….kaise yaad kiya..

Commissioner - muje Special officer abhay singh se milna h…

Cheif — Special officer Abhay singh wo toh secret mission par h aur jab tak wo khud na chahe usai toh sirf….phir hadbadakar…ap kaise jante h abhay ko…

Phir commissioner ne sari baat chief ko bata di ….

Cheif lambi saans chodkar— ap nahi jante ki apne kya kar diya ….wo waise he police ke ghuskhoro se nafrat karta h aur apne us ACP ko support dekar usai naraj kar diya h…waise wo Acp jinda h ya mar gaya kyoki agar nahi mara h toh uski jindgi bahut dard bhari hone wali h

Commissioner— usne ghar ke andar sucied karli h……

Chief — ha ha ha asaan maut mar gaya ….waise apki imandari…ke bare mai Abhay ne usai bataya hoga….aur isliye usne apse milne ki icha zahir ki hogi warna Nirwana ko jab koyi dhundh he nahi paya toh usai pakadna bahut dur ki baat h commissionersahab tufaan se bacha karte h usai uksaya nahi karte h…you..JUST MISSED…….

Commissioner gahri sans chodkar ek akhiri sawal — wo mumbayi kyo h….

Cheif jor jor se hasne lage ….phir ek dum se serious hokar “sunamii ke liye jismai jitne bharast police officer politician shamil h sab saaf ho jayenge ab ap par depend karta h ap kiski taraf h meri ek raaye h ki kabhi kabhi system se bahar nikalna padta h jurm ko mitne ke liye aur apki jaankari ke liye itna bata du agar…ek wanha pahuch gaya h toh ….khel suru hone wala h….uske sathi kaho ya uske chane wale ya chahe uske bodygaurd wo bhi wanha jald he pahuch jayenge …..aur ha ek baat batana bhul gaya un chahne walo mai main bhi hu….jo uske ek ishare par matlb ek ishare par kisi ko bhi maar sakte h….Bus duwa karna uska dusra chehra Nirwana bahar nahi aye warna katle aam bahut hoga aur saboot ek nahi milega but i m suprise…ki usne normal roop mai bina kisi maarkat ke nirwana bankar apse milna chuna…..ap bahut badi jung ke bich mai ho jitni jaldi apni side chun logo apke liye acha hoga …aur apke chahne wale ke liye…



Call cut hote he commissioner ka dil tezi se dhadhakne laga wo khud se he bola uske chahne wale bhi jald pahuch jayenge matlb wo …..uski ankhe hairani se fail gayi….wo khud se he bola akhir kya karne wale ho tum….…



Raj ne kya kiya….thane se nikalne ke baad….



Raj — khana sath khate h abhay ….

Abhay — Nahi raj bhai….khana hum sath tabhi khayenge jab us killer organization ka naam is duniya se ukhad fenkenge tab main shrutii aur ajju aur sonali mam shiwani mam aur ap sab sath mai khana khayenge…

Raj - shruti kaisi h….

Abhay — ajju ka dhayan rakhti h….aur martial arts ki practice karti h….wo ajju ke siva kisi se baat nahi karti h….aur ajju ka apko pata h wo abhi tak 50 percent he recover huva h…sab meri galti thi mujhe alert rahna chahiye tha sunil bhai ne kaha tha ki usne hume dekh liya h…..par hum he laaparwaha ho gaye…

Raj — abhay dhukhi mat hovo ….jo beet gaya wo badla nahi ja sakta h….

Abhay — sahi kaha raj bhai ye pen drive lijiye ismai apne jo manga sab h …..main jata hu …..

Raj — tikh h…

Abhay ke jate he raj ne taxi pakdi aur sidha pahuch gaya 10 manjila imarat ke samne …..aur lift lekar wo ek flat ke samne pahucha …..

Bahar bell ki awaj soon andar baithi rifat aur uski maa dar gayi uski maa ne heemat kar gate ke hole se bahar dekha toh raj khada tha jissi wo pahchan nahi payi bahar khada raj bhi samaj raha tha isliye usne koyi jald bazi nahi dikhayi aur kuch dair intezaar kiya….kuch dair baad door open huva …

Rifat maa — koun ho beta ….

Raj — itni badi saza dilwa di aur ab bete ko pahchan nahi rahi h….

Rifat ki maa ke chahre par muskaan agayiii….usne jaldi se side hatkar raj ko andar ane ko kaha …..

Rifat abhi dari aur dhayan se raj ko dekh rahi thi…..

Rifat ki maa kuch bolna chahti thi par raj ne rok diya…

Raj “ sher ki bahan sherni hoti h tumhare bhai ka jigar toh sher ka h par muje nahi pata tha ki uski bahan darpok lomdi hogi…..jo door bell se he dar jayegi

Rifat-- main…darpok nahi hu…..

Raj “ toh ap hume bataye ki phir maa ko darwaja kyo kholne diya kitchen se ek chakuu hath mai uthakar khud kholti aur khatra hone par us chakuu se tab tak waar karti jab tak khatra tal nahi jata…”

Rifat kya he bolti wo chup ho gayi aur apni maa ke bhagkar gale lag gayi…

Maa — ye wahi h jinhone tere bhai ki aur hamari jaan bachayi thi….

Rifat dhayan se raj ko dekhte huve “ toh ap hamare bhai se fight karne wale h aur fight mai hamare bhai ko maar denge isiliye bacha rahe h hume”

Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan aagayi “ fight karne wale toh h aur ha main usai marne wala bhi hu…agar apko pasand nahi toh nahi karenge hum fight ”

Rifat ke chahre par muskaan agayi “sach mai agar hum mana kar de toh ap nahi fight karenge aur hamare bhai ko kuch nahi karenge “

Raj “ bilkul nahi par…….ek baat…… nahi 2 baat…..manni padengi hamari”

Rifat gahri soch mai doob gayi…

Raj “ bus itna he pyar h bhai se”

Rifat “ hume apki har baat manjur hum hamre bhai ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte h”

Raj “ phir tikh h toh pahli baat apko self defence sikhna padega manjur h aur main bahut strict hu pitayi bhi karta hu chahe ladka ho ya ladki agar galti karta h “

Rifat “ hum darti nahi h….hume manjur h”

Raj “Godd toh ab dusri baat h ye ki tumhe mere…”

Rifat ka dil joro se dhadkane laga ki ab kya baat kahega kanhi usai ….uske sath…uske dil mai bahut ulte sidhe khayal ane

Raj “ ulta sidha soch liya ho toh main bolu”

Rifat ki maa ke chahre par badi si muskurahat thi….rifat bhi hadbada gayii…” ha boliya na maine kab roka h ap he nahi bol rahe h “

Raj “ jitni baar milogi hume chaye pilani hogi khud banakar majur …”

Rifat khilkhilakar hans padi …aur khusi se boli “muje dono baat manjur h….”

Raj toh phir maa ko kyu pakad rakha h toh pilao chaye ya banani nahi aati h…

Rifat “ sab ata h muje main abhi layi par yanha saman hoga”

Raj “ yanha sab h aur nahi h toh ek list banao abhi online order daal dete h … aur bhi koyi bahana h toh bana lo “

Rifat muu teda karke “ hum jhut nahi bolte h “

Itna kah wo toh chali gayi kitchen mai piche raj muskurata rah gaya….aur phir uske chahre se sari muskaan gayab ho gayiii …wo palatkar bola “ main apse sirf ek sawal puchunga muje umid h ap sach bolengi”

Rifat maa “ pucho beta “

Raj “ apka beta paiso ke liye nahi karta h sab ….garibo ke huk liye wo basti mai lada..iska matlb apne uski parwarish achi kari h…”

Rifat “ haa apne jo kaha wo sach h”

Raj “ toh mera sawal h ki ….jab wo log apko le ja rahe the apne kaha tha apna wada yaad rakhna ….toh aisa kya wada h jo ek maa ko apni beti ki jindgi se bhi jyadaa pyara h”

Rifat ki maa toh jam si gayi raj ka sawal sunke usai umid nahi thi ki raj ye sawal puch lega…..rifat ki maa jami ki jami rah gayiii aur kaafi dair tak aise he shanti rahi tab tak rifat chaye bhi lekar agayi…

Rifat ye lijiye ….main apko kya matlb kis naam se bulau…

Raj chaye ka cup hath mai lete huve apne bhai ko kya kah kar bulati ho wahi bulao….

Rifat muskarne lagi “ main bhai ko bhai he bulati hu…”

Raj “ toh phir aj se tumhare 2 bhai ho gaye dekh lena kahi tumhara bhai gusa na ho jaye ki tumne ek aur bhai bana liya “

Rifat nahi honge he he he wo bahut ache h bus gusa bahut jaldi ajata h …par ye maa ko kya huva

Raj “ mere sawal ka jawab dhundh rahi h…..

Rifat ki maa gahri soch mai rahi phir boli “…wada wada wada usne teen baar bola phir boli….ye wada h mere pati aur bhai ki maut ka ye wada h meri bhabhi aur uske bache ki maut ka …ye wada h….hamare hanste khelte pariwar ko ujdane wale hatyaro ki maut ka ….maine apne bete ko bachpan se sirf badle ke liye taiyar kiya h akele ….taki wo sabki maut ka badla le”

Raj - aj ke halat dekhkar apko kya laga agar apka dhushman aj wale logo se kamjor h toh yakinun apka badla pura hoga …aur agar wo takatwr h toh ap apne bete ko bhi kho dengi phir wada kaise pura hoga aur parinam ka socha h apne ”

Rifat maa “ parinam ke bare mai muje sab pata h aur iske liye hum teeno taiyar h”

Raj “ akhir koun h apka dhudhman muje bataye sayad main apki koyi madad kar pau”

Rifat maa “ beta muje pata h tum bahut takatwar ho tumhari pahuch bhi unchi h par sach bolu muje bhi nahi pata h aur isi sawal ke jawab mai main yanha wanha dhundti kitne he salo se ghum rahi hu”

Raj “ toh apki family ke bare mai batayiye ….”

Rifat maa “ hamara pariwar beta aj tak puri baate maine apne bete ko bhi nahi batayi par aj tum dono ko bataungi…..aj se 20 saal pahle Uttarpardesh ke gaanv mai hamra ghar huva karta tha mere pati fauj mai noukri karte the…unki posting delhi mai thi….. hamari jindgi bahut achi gujar rahi thi main bhi unke sath he delhi rahti thi….kanhi koyi dikat nahi thi …main us waqt pait se thi sherdil yani Ahsaan mere pait mai tha ….janam ka samay nazdik tha muje pados ki he mahila hospital le kar ja rahi thi…tabhi dange suru ho gaye the sab kuch jaam ho gaya tha hum bich mai buri tarah fans gaye aur mere pait mai dard bhi suru ho gaya …muje hamare bachne ki koyi umid nahi thi…par uspal mai mera muu bola bhai pahli baar mujhse mila ….wo hamri maut aur mere bich mai khada ho gaya ….akela sirf akela nihaths sab ke samne khada raha…sher jaisa kaleja …pahad ki tarah atal …jisai tufaan se bhi hilaya nahi ja sake…Koyi bhi hila nahi saka usai …..insaniyat ki jeeti jagti misaal …muje aur mere bache ko usne us din akele apne dum par dhangayiyo ke bich se bachaya….aur jab hum hospital pahuche tab pahli baar maine jana ki wo koyi aam admi nahi h kitne he log uske agai hath jod rahe the…jab Ahsaan is duniya mai aya toh maine uska naam Ahsaan rakha tab unhone kaha ki ye bada hokar apni sachayi achayi se sabka dil jeetega …..ye maut se ladkar jeeta h ye ek sher ki tarah jiyega ye ek Sherdil banega…..isliye iska pyar se naam sherdil rakha ….kuch samay baad hamri jindgi mai buri khabar ayi mere pati ko jhute iljam laga kar fouj se nikal diya …aur wo sab kuch chod dhukhi dil se ghar agaye unke liye unke desh se badhkar kuch nahi tha..wo bahut jayda dhukhi rahne lage tab maine unhe bahut samjhaya aur par hamesa ek he baat kahte the

Ali “ sirf isliye ki main ek musalmaan hu sirf isliye muje nikal diya meri baato par yakin nahi kiya….are….mere khun se pucho usmai dekho sirf deshbhakti h …akele akele apne dono hath se masalkar maar sakta hu bahuto ko”

Unko main aur tut te nahi dekh sakti thi…isliye maine apne muu bole bhai ko bulaya …jab mere pati ko pata chala wo hindu h toh wo naraj ho gaye..

Ali “ chale jao tum aur khabardar jo dubara yanha dikhe toh tumhra ahsaan h muj par isliye jinda chod raha hu”

Pata h tab unhone kya kaha ….unhone kaha “ maine suna tha ki ap bolte ho desh bhakti mere khun mai h…aur abhi main jis se mil raha hu wo toh hindu muslim kar raha h…toh main ye samjhu ki ap sirf bate he karte h”

Ali “ meri har baat sachi h”

Bhai “ toh phir apko ye pata hona chahiye ….jab maine apki patni aur meri bahan ko bachaya tab maine bahuto ko mara koun hindu koun muslim muje nahi pata aur na muje pata tha ki ye meri bahan ek muslim h… main ek nirdosh ko nahi marne de sakta tha …aur ap toh ek fouji h jisai yshi sikhaya jata h ki desh ki seva aur surakhsa kare chahe dhusmaan koyi bhi ho usai maar de…..sab ek jaise nahi hote h…ap sirf mere sath ek hafte bina kisi shart rahiye apko kuch nahi karna h bus dekhna phir apko pata chal jayega sab ek jaise nahi hote h….“

Ali gahri sanschodkar tikh h

Rifat maa “ aur bus tab se mere pati aur bhai ek misal ban gaye ….unki dosti dharam se pare thi…mere pati ke bhai bhi isi neki ki rah mai shamil ho gaye wo hamare pure pariwaar ki surakhsa karte aur wo dono anyay ke virudh ladte …

Raj “ sachayi ke dhushman bahut hote h …”

Rifat maa — Ha beta par wo dono bahut samjhdaar the main ajtak nahi samaj payi kaise koyi unhe maar sakta h mere pati bahut takat waar the aur bhai ke sath rah kar wo aur ache se ladna sikh gaye the aur mere bhai toh akele 100 par bhari pad jaye ….

Raj “ kya naam tha apke pati ka ….”

Ding dong…….gate ki doot bell baji….

Raj “ main dekhta hu”

Raj ne bahar se door khola toh khub sara ghar ka saman tha….raj ke chahre par muskarahat agayi…kyoki ussi pata tha ye sab anirudh uncle ne bhijwaya h…wo palatkar “ lo agaya sab saman …ab toh dubara bahane nahi marogi…

Rifat bhai mai bahane nahi marti hu..

Raj “ tikh tikh h jao inhe kitchen mai laga do…..phir rifat ki maa se ha ap batayiye kya naam tha …”

Rifat mom “ Ali ….”

Raj ki toh mani dhadhkan he ruk gayi usai aisa jhatka laga tha ki wo bol nahi paya usai story ka harpahlu apne pita aur chacha ali se milta lag raha tha usne …..phir heemat kar pucha aur apke bhai ka naam “

Rifat mom “ sahdev singh”

Raj ko toh itna bada jhatka laga tha ki wo mano hil sa gaya ….usai yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uske ali chacha ki family jinda h …..aur wo is waqt uske tikh samne h ….

Rifat mom ….mere bhai ne sab diya l…….hum sab sath he rahte the bus jab ye ghatna huvi mai apne maa ke pass ayi huvi thi….khabar manhoos he ayi muje Rifat aur Ahsaan ko lekar chipna pada aur chipkar he taiyari kari aur bhai ke pariwar ko dhunti rahi kyoki mere devar aur pati ke marne ki khabar fail chuki thi….maine than liya ki mere bete ko is kaabil banugi ki wo chun chun kar badla lega…..

Rifat ki maa bolti ja rahi thi aur raj sab kuch bhulkar unhe khushi ke ansuu liye dekh raha tha…..aur jab uske emotions controle se bahar ho gaye tab wo khada hokar bathroom ki taraf chala gaya aur bathroom ko andar se band kar liya…..uske chahre par badi si muskaan thi…. “ Dadaji maine unhe dhund liya ….dhundhliya dadaji wo jinda h….ab kuch toh sachayi pata lagegi hume “raj kaafi dair bath room mai raha aur phir wanhi se anirudh goswami se phone par baat kar kuch kaha….aur jab wo bahar aya ….

Rifat maa “ kya baat huvi beta “

Raj kuch bhi nahi…….ap chaliye mere sath aur lomdi tu jaldi se jo kapde inmai se fit aye pahan le ….raj dono ko taiyar karke aur apne sath lekar anirudh goswami ke office ke roof top par pahuch gaya janha rifat aur uski maa confuse thi itna bada office aur building dekhkar….raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan abhi tak barkarara thi….kuch he pal mai gadgadahat ke sath helicopter roof par land huva…

Raj “ maa chinta mat karna…… apki agni pariksha puri huvi aur phir rifat ki taraf dekh kar muskaraya aur sir par hath fera”

Rifat ki maa puchna bahut kuch pichna chahti thi par puch nahi payi….

Raj “ ek akhiri sawal … akhiri baar apke bhai aur pati se milne koun aya tha….

Rifat mom sochte huve…. “ha yaad aya Ravinder singh”

Rifat ki maa ne puch liya “ tum koun ho beta”

Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan agayi “ wo chillaya apke bhai ka beta Raj singh Nirwan

Rifat ki maa ki ankhe fail gayi helicopter upar ki taraf ud gaya aur wo upar se niche ki taraf raj ko dekhte rahi….uski ankho mai hairani aur khushi ke ansuu bah rahe the….

Dono ke jata dekh kar ….

Raj “Ravindar singh ye toh papa dost aur team mai se ek the….toh kya papa maa ki maut se inka sidha talukh h “

Raj ye sochta huva niche anirudh ke office agaya….

Anirudh “ raat hone wali h agar kaam na ho toh raat ka khana sath khaye”

Raj “ uncle ek baat puchuuu…”

Anirudh “ behichak jo puchna h pucho”

Raj -Papa ki income sabse jayda kis chij se hoti thi matlb wo kya karte the….

Anirudh — Beta tumhare maa aur papa ne muje sirf hospital ko sambhalne ka jimma diya tha jab tak tum aur richa 21 kie na ho jaye phir as per leagal documents wo tum dono ke naam ho jayega…..wo chahte the ki tum dono ki agai shadi ho jaye…isliye ye sab unhone tay kiya….aur hospital se unhe bahut achi income hoti thi par unhone kabhi ek rupya tak nahi liya ….aur iske ilawa unki ek team thi….jo ghane junglo mai ancient jagahon ki khoj karte rahte the aur purani chijo ko nikalte the taki acha paisa kama sake ye 2 toh muje pata h……..

Raj “ purani jagahon par khudayi …

Anirudh — ha pata nahi par wo jaise kuch dhundh rahe the….par kya ye sirf wo ya unki team he janti thi….muje bus itna he pata h…ab agar sahdev bhai aur vidya bhabhi ke bare mai aur janna h toh raat ko sath khana padega manjur ho toh bolo ….

Raj — tikh h jaisa ap chahe ….

Raj ne apne chahre par wapas mask laga liya aur anirudh ke sath office se sath bahar nikal gaya…..aur jab dono ghar pahuche toh ….poonam ne darwaza khola …” bade papa ap agaye meeting kaisi rahi par ap toh bole late night ho jayegi aate aate”

Anirudh “ sab yanhi pich logi ya is bade baap ko ghar ke andar bhi ane dogi”

Poonam kitchen ki aur jaate huve- aayiye na main chaye aur paani lekar laati hu….

Anirudh — are tufaan express meri bhi toh sunliya kar…chaye nahi khana he khayenge aur raj bhi hamare sath he dinner karega….

Poonam ke pair thithak gaye….usne turant piche mudkar dekha toh raj usai dekh kar he muskararaha tha…..

Poonam jaldi se kitchen mai bina reaction chali gayiii….

Raj “ ab isai kya huva uncle ke samne kuch aur akele kuch aur ….sach mai ladkiyo ko samajhna bahut muskill h….

Poonam kitchen se “ ap naha lijiye main raj ji ke liye jab tak chaye bana deti hu”

Anirudh - lo bhai ghar mai ghusai nahi ki beti ke sawal aur order suru ho gaye biwi ho toh biwi ke order suno ”

Raj - Din bhar order dene ke baad kabhi order lene bhi chahiye h…

Anirudh — tum bahut agai jaoge beta ji ….are ha acha yaad dilaya ….

Anirudh bol he rahe the ki poonam piche se pani la rahi thi…..

Anirudh “ beta ji meri toh jindgi mai ek he pyar aur ek he shadi h….tum apna socho tumhari kundli mai shadi ke bare mai batate huve pandito ka sir bhi dard hone lag gaya tha…..

Raj hairani se anirudh ko dekhne laga …

Anirudh muskarate huve room ki taraf chale gaye…

Poonam ne jab ye suna toh uska dil soch se dub gaya ki bade papa kya bol tahe h wo puch bhi nahi sakti thi ….toh anirudh ke jaate he

Poonam “ acha ji shadi ki badi jaldi h apki abhi umar h padhne ki kuch banne ki“

Raj muskara “ meri jindgi mai kuch bhi sidhe se nahi hote h poonam ji tabhi usne poonam ko chedne ke liye kaha sivaye ek chij ke”

Poonam “aur wo kya h”

Raj “ ek achi dost se dosti hone ke kyoki wo khana he itna acha banati h khud ba khud ana padta h“

Poonam ko jaise he realise huva ki wo usi ki baat kar raha h toh sharm aur muskarahat uske chahre par agayi …aur wo wapas kitchen mai agayi …

Raj piche jor jor se hasne laga Poonam ne jhuk kar raj ko muskarate huve dekha toh uska bhi dil khushi se jhum utha kyoki pahli baar usne raj ko itni jor se khillhilakar hanste huve dekha tha….wo khana bana rahi tabhi anirudh bhi aakar sofe par baith gaye…

Aniudh —toh pucho raj aur kya jaana chahte ho….

Poonam bhi jhuk kar sari baate soon rahi thi…

Raj — kya maa papa ne kabhi apse mere nana nani ya family ka jikra kiya ….

Anirudh — tumhare papa ne toh kabhi nahi kiya par tumhari maa jikra karti thi ki unke 4 bhai h aur 2 bahan h ya thi ye muje nahi pata par wo sabka dhayan rakhti thi aur khaskar tumhare nana nani ki jaan thi…

Raj ke chahre par muskurahat agayiii…

Anirudh — aur ek maje ki baat sunoge …tumhe hansi ayegi ek baar jab hum unke ghar gaye yani tumhare ghar gaye huve the tab tumhare papa apne sath walo se bahut jaruri baat kar rahe the …par tumhari maa ne sirf itna he kaha tha kheer taiyaar ho gayi h chalo ajao sabhi aur bus fir kya….sabhi tumhare papa ko akela chod khane ke liye doud pade the…..tumhare papa hairan rah gaye the …aur tumhari maa unko dekh jor jor se hansti rahi …..sabhi tumhari maa ki tumhare papa se jayda baat mante the…ek kissa sunata hu ….tumhare papa Ali bhai ke sath uttarpradesh gaye huve tab ….delhi ke home minister jisne tumhare papa ke dhushman se paise kha liye the usne tumhare papa ko giraftar karne ke liye police bhejhi par tumhare papa ghar par the nahi …..kudrati us din vidya hospital ki jameen final karne ke liye main bhi ghar aya huva tha …maine itni police walo ko dekha toh soch mai rah gaya ….Acp chilla kar kah raha tha sahdev ko bahar bhejho warna hume lathi charge karna hoga jo tum sab ke liye acha nahi hoga par tumhare papa ghar hote toh ate …..aur tumhare papa ke sathiyo ne police toh dur unke jutai ko bhi ghar ke gate ke andar nahi ane diya tha …par police ko order the commissioner ke…..tumhare bade papa joginder singh ne commissioner tak ko bhi samjhaya par minister ke agai kiski chalni thi …commissioner bhi paise khakar baitha tha……tab tumhari maa andar se bahar ayi …..aur tumhari maa ko sabhi log devi ki tarah pujte the aisa sayad he koyi ho jinki wo madad nahi karti thi isliye jaise wo ghar se bahar nikli ….aur police walo ne unhe sath chalne ko kaha toh log buri tarah naraj ho gaye unhone police ki gadiyo ko jala diya ….police walo ki jaan bachani muskil ho gayi …bheed ne police ko he giraftar kar liya ….4 Din aur raat tak wo aise gate par baithe rahe bhari police ayi jabardast jhadap huvi par police ko andar tak nahi ane diya …100 200 police aur samne hazaro ki bheed kya kar sakte the tab chief minister ko khud ana pada tha …..un sabki jaan bus tumhari maa ki wajah se nahi gayii

Raj “ phir papa kab aye”

Anirudh “ wo ghar nahi aye par agle din puri delhi ne dekha ki Acp ko road ke bich bhaga bhaga kar sahdev bhai ne chapplo jhto se mara …..puri delhi mai usai nanga doudaya …

Raj — commissioner aur wo minister…

Anirudh — jor jor se hasne lage ….

Raj kya huva….

Anirudh —un dono ke khane mai nind ki goliya mila di aur uthakar unhe phir dheere se raj ke kaan mai prostitute khane chod aye ….news aur media ne subhe unki buri halat kar di aur tumhare papa ke log pahle he bheed mai moujud the unhone undono ko kapde tak nahi pahnne diya …..aur jab officialy suspend huve tab …..sabke samne ghasit ghasit kar jaan se maar diya…..

Raj — Toh phir wo maa ko lekar nana nani ke pass kyo nahi gaye kabhi….

Anirudh — gaye the ….par ek insaan ne tumhare nana ko patti padha rakhi thi …isliye unhone hamesa tumhare maa papa ko dhikaar diya…..par ek baar baat tab badh gayi jab ….tumhari maa ki shadi jisai hone wali thi usne kaha ki “vidya agar tum sahdev ko chodkar meri ho jao toh hum tumhe apna lenge” jis par tumhare nana ne bhi hami bhar diii…tumhari maa ke man ko gahra dhakka laga …..unhone unchi awaj mai kaha “ pita ishwar ka roop hota h wo apni santan ki khushi chahta h …par ap apni he beti ka ghar ujadna chahte h kaise pita h ap “

Tumhare nana ne bhi gusai mai vidya bhabhi ko thapad maar diya …

Tab tumhare pita tumhare nana ko bus marne wale he the ki wo insaan bich mai agaya aur idhar tumhari maa ne sahdev bhai ko rok liya ……bus yahi sab h jo main janta hu …..raj tumhare papa aur maa ke bare mai…..

Ye sab baate karte karte …un teeno ne he khana kha liya tha ….aur raat ke 11 baj rahe the ……

Raj — Khane ke liye Thank you so much main ab chalta hu……

Anirudh — beta dair raat ho gayi h…aj tumhara body gaurd bhi sath nahi h …..isliye yanhi rook jao….subhe chale jana ye bhi toh tumhara he ghar h …..poonam beti raj ke liye …..room taiyaar kardo…

Poonam ne raj ko kuch kahne ka mouka nahi diya — Aayiye ra ji sab taiyar h ….

Raj ko lekar wo kavita manisha jis room mai rukti h wanha pahuchi ….. “ye raha apka room tabhi ussi kuch yaad aya wo boli raj ji ap apni ankhe band kariye aur jab tak main na bolu ankhe nahi kholni h….”

Raj ki ankhe band hote he wo internal garments jo kavita manisha ne khud ke liye rakhe the unhe lekar turant apne room mai rakh ayi “ ab ap ankhe khol lijiye”

Poonam “ main apke liye pani laati hu “

Raj ko wanha chod wo pani lene chali gayiii aur jald he wapas lout bhi ayi ….raj ko phir se gahri soch mai dekh kar “ pata h apke sath kya problem h …..”

Raj - are ap aa bhi gayi …

Poonam “ main toh aungi he na ….aur ap hamesa sochte sochte itni gahrayi mai kyo chale jate h”

Raj — jab koyi rasta nahi milta h toh gahrayi mai utarna padta h poonam ji …

Poonam aur raj ki ankhe mili …tab poonam boli “ acha muje toh apki ankho dhero sawal dikhte h par kya wakayi har sawal ka jawab ek sath janna jaruri h raj ji….maine bade papa ki sari baate suni ….aur us waqt ap bahut khus bhi the….muje pata h ap apne maapapa ko bahut yaad karte ho ….par jitna hum yaad karenge jitna hum sochenge jitni jaldi hum karenge hum utni he uljhan mai fanste jaayenge kyoki wajah hoti h jalbazi ki wajah se milne wale adhure jawab jo sukun dene ki bajaye dhukh uljhan he dete h…”

Raj poonam ki baat sun uski aur dekhta raha …poonam ke chahre par bolte huve bhi pyari si muskaan thi…Aj pahli baar tha jab raj ne bahut he dhayan se poonam ko dekha tha …

Poonam “apko apke sabhi sawalo ke jawab milenge raj ji par …apko bhi ek ek karke he paheli ko hal karna hoga….. warna sivaye dhuk ke kuch nahi milega” poonam ka dhayan bhi raj par gaya raj ko apni taraf aise dekhte dekh wo bhi usai he dekhne lagi…

Poonam “ acha ek baat kahu raj ji manoge “

Raj “ ha “

Poonam “mere sath sirdi sai baba ke mandir chalenge meri ek mannat thi “

Raj “ek dost ki itni si icha bhi koyi puri na kar sake wo dost kaisa…tikh h hum chalenge “

Poonam ke chahre par ayi muskurahat aur khushi ne raj ko kuch pal ke liye usmai usai khone ko majbur kar diya ….aj raat bhi jab wo gahri nind mai tha usai wahi sapna aya …jismai ladki ka dhundhla dhundla chehra usai muskurata huva dikhayi diya ….aur boli “ bahut dair kardi ane mai” achanak uski nind tut gayi……

Raj “ akhir koun ho tum kyo har baar mere sapne mai aati ho”



Aj ke liye itna he …….

Masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka kyoki ab past ke kuch aur raj ujagar hone wale h …….

Hmesa ki tarah sandar update
Agle ka intejar

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Sandeep bhai apne story ke starting eka update me eka banglow ka jikara kiye te usa gar ke rahne vale be bhota atyachar ho rahe hai ...vo hi Raj ke nanhila hai kya ?

Ha ha ha wo seen bhi part h aur behad important part h .....ab wo nanihaal ka h ya kisi aur ka ye toh agai pata lagega

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai ikk request hai ending change Karo tumhare teeni hi pasand nahi aarahe bhai

Kahte h pahli story ki neev he dusri story ki jhalak hoti h

Isko akhir kyun hatred from love story jaise shadi karwadena chahe 10 hi kyun naa hoo akele Raj ko dusre planet mat bhejna bhai maja nahi aayega

Shadi toh hogi bro ...ismai koyi sak nahi h....

Please request hai

Love k sath family rakh kar hi end karwao

Agar family ke sath raha toh dusre planet kaise jayega aur agar usai bhi dhokha mila toh jinda he nahi rah payega ....end tak jane do ...deepak bhai bahut twist h suspence h ki kya hoga aur past mai sab kyo huva .....
Thank you aise he apne beshkeemti saabd likhte rahe

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Zabardast update

Thank you

bhai kahani mai current badta ja rehe hai


GADAR Macha rehe hai kahani


179 completed

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Superb & fantastic update ( Nirwana G )

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Nice update

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Bhai aapko shastang pranam. Or apki lekhni ko bhi..

Bus apka sath chaiye ....
Dhanyawaad utsaha wardan ke liye

Apke har update ek se badhkar ek hote hai.. jinke baare me kisi shabd se unki sarahna karna Kam hoga..har shabd jo sarahna ke liye prayog hote hai wo sabhi apki lekhni ke liye kam pdenge..

Muje khusi apko update pasand aye ye ek writer ke liye garv ka pal hota h jab reader dwara usai aisi sarharna mile

Apki ek aadat mujhe bahut achhi lagti hai.. ki aap apne shabdo pr khare utarte hai.. aap jo samay dete hai usse pahle hi karne ki Puri kosis karte hai.. or dete bhi hai.. ye apka plus point hai. Readers bhi usi writer ko pasand krte hai jinki story achhi ho sath hi writer apne kahe shabdo pr khara utre.. warna koi to samay aaj ka dete hai or update agle din aata hai..

Ha bro jab main reader tha main bhi update ka hamesa intezar karta tha aur khayal ata tha kya samay dena itna muskil h update ka ....ek din agai ka de do taki reader pareshan toh na ho ....

update bahut hi shandaar tha... Raj ne sherdil ki maa or bahan ko unke jaate waqt btaya ki wo unke muh bole Bhai ka beta hai.. raaj ko bhi feel hone laga hai ki Poonam jo ki usko pyar karti hai usme kuchh khaas hai.. sayad wo aakarshit hone lga hai Poonam se.. or sayad sapne me aane wali ladki Poonam hi hai.. esa mera manna hai..

Usai aj nahi toh kal poonam ki feeling ka ahsas ho he jayega par poonam ki baato se raj ko hamesa sonali ki yaad aati h ...aur sher dil wala part milan wala do jagah hoga isliye asani se khatam kar diya....

dhire dhire sab aane wale hai.. sonali ji to aate hi dhamaka krengi.. mujhe injaar hai jab sherni Poonam se milegi..

Yanha soch raha hu sonali aur poonam ki mulakaat dhamakedaar ho...phir sochta hu normal rakh du confuse hu...

I think dhokha dene wale apne hai to unme raaj ke chacha shaitan bhi shamil hoga.. ek pyade ke roop me... kyuki villan to koi badi top hi hai..

Shaitan ka role abhi dikha nahi h ...dhokhe mai ...jayda par usne jo kiya paiso ke liye kiya ....villion last mai sabki apeksha se alag he niklega.....

Aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad Bhai.. itni adbhut kahani ke liye..

Apki khoobsurat aur shandaar jaandar pratikriya ke liye tahe dil se dhayawaad...sath bane rahe...

As usual awesome update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai

Thank you bro

Bahut hi emotional update Bhai

Milan h baap beti ka ....jo khun se nahi dil ka tha.

Sandeep Bhai next update kab de rahe ho

Vivek bhai aj dopahar

Bhai ye kaha pada

Sab story mai he h bro ....agar update ya story yaad h toh bahut suspense h..

I'm back Kuch masroof tha Dubai Jany ki tiyari Mai ab free huwa hn
Bhai Update bhot Kamal ki h jitni tareef krun Kam h
Ab Maza aye Ga JB sherdil or raj mil kr muqabla karn gy

Dubayi ...wao nawab bhai maje ho gaye paisa ka paisa job ke liye ja rahe ho toh aur ghumayi ki ghumayi maje karo....jab time mile tab ao bhaiyo ka hamesa dil se welcome h...

Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Rasprad update dopahar ko....

Gjb Sandeep bhai
Sorry for late review

Yogesh bhai kya sorry sab busy ho jate h kaam mai jab mouka mile tab review de

Nice update

Thank you