Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Upcoming update 246....

"Town under killing aura"
yanha sabhi mere bhai h isliye ek baat dil se kahta hu kabhi bhi apni body ke sath careless mat hona choti bhi dikat ho toh uska solution karo aur tab tak karo jab tak jad se khatam na ho jaye party ya ghumne mai hum 1000 rupaye chutkiyo mai uda dete h toh body par kyo nahi kharch sakte h..isliye body ke sath careless mat rahna choti si problem ho turant solution karo

 

[Tri2010]

Update 44


Consequences of strike



Ahhh mere sir mai Dard ho raha tha maine dheere dheere ankhe kholi aur idhar udhar dhekha toh khud ko hospital ke bed pe paya ....aur maine side mai dhekha toh deepika sofe pe so rahi thi.....

Maine ghadi mai time dhekha toh dopahar ke 3 baj rahe the...meri ankhe phirse band ho gayi........



Little flesh back .....


Main jab gaadi mai tha tab

Main khud se bola akela jaakar bi main jaan dene ke alawa kya kar paunga kafi der sochne ke baad idea aya maine apni location sonali ko share ki aur back up ke liye us gunde ka smart phone se 100 number pe dial kiya aur kaha please phone ki location inspector sonali ya Commissioner ko de de ye unhe jaggu ki location pe le ayegi

Police --- Ap koun

Main—Raj naam batana unhe its emergency immidiatly unhe batao puri force le pahuche...

Bus muje itna karna tha ek hour ya thoda jayda unhe uljha kar rakhna tha wo maine bakhubi kar liya tha....

Ye tha un sab ka mere pass pahuchne ka reason...

Fleshback ends ......


Jab dubara meri ankhe khuli toh raat ke 9 baj gaye the

Main--- yaar. 6 hours so raha tha main sayad injunctions ke karan ayi hogi nind maine dheere se hath hilaya toh machine beep karne lagi.....

Aur Fata fat tabi sonali andar ayi aur muje hosh mai dhek wapas dr ko bhulane gayi ....dr ne check kiya aur blood sample leke chala gaya taki final reports bana sake..

Sonali--- toh kaisa lag raha h tumhe....

Main--- not good sir dard h ribs mai dard h kandha bi dard kar raha aur pata ni kya kya....

Sonali---mere sir par hath fira kar Koyi baat ni kuch din aur rest karo tikh ho jaoge by the way tumhe bata du tum 2 din se behosh the blood loss ki se wajah se tumne sabko dara diya tha...

Main--- hhhhhhhhhhh

Sonali ----- Raj .

Main--- Huuu

Sonali---- pyar se dhek kar kuch ni....phir boli thank you ..thank you so much...

Main—for what...

Sonali---tumhari madad se kitne he ladkiyo ki jaan bach gayiii h wo sab ab apni family ke pass h ....

Main----hmmmm santy ho rahi ho...

Sonali--- you know Raj pata h wo kitni khus thi ki wo bach gayi unke chehre ki khusi sirf tumhari wajah se h ....... Thank you ek ladki hoke main unki halat aur bachne ki khusi samaj sakti hu...

Maine right hand se uske gaal sahlaye aur usai kaha its ok sab tikh h

Sonali--- ne mere kaan pakad liye aur marodker boli agar dubara aisi hosiyari dikhayi toh aisa todungi ki hospital mai admit rahoge jindgi bhar

Main- sorry sorry dubara aisa ni karunga

Piche awaj ayi is hutiye ke 2 lagao mam ye aise ni sudhrega

Main--- hutiye yanha hospital mai pada hu tu yanha bi mat sudhariyo

Shweta----- ha sunil bhai 3 4 toh padne he chahiye

Aur sab ake dheere dheere gale mile mere main bi khus ho gaya tha but meri nazar gate pe he thi janha deepika khadi thi aur uski ankho mai ansuu the...

Sonali --- chalo hum kuch khane ko le ate h sabke liye aur iske liye juice ...

Sab bahar chale gaye h aur Di andar ayi...

Main--- Ro kyo rahi ho ap abi Jinda hu ahhhh hh

Ek jhannatedar thapad gaal pe pada tha aur phir mere gale lag kar ro padii...

Derpika—rote hu ma.in.. kitna...dar..gayi...thi...jab tu behose...ho gaya....tha...

Main--- silent raha....

Deepika--- jab wo log mere piche bhag rahe the...muje..teri yaad ayiii bahut ayiii ki tu ajaye...aur hame bachale... Par bhai maine kabhi ni chaha tu...is haalat mai ajaye... I m soory i m sorry bhai ...love u...bhai love ..u sab meri wajah se huva...sorry bhaiii....

Maine---- unko gale se lagaye rakha aur bola ek bhai he kya jo bahan ko bachane ke liye kuch na kare aur ap toh meri pyari di ho na.....

Dmom and D dad – aur tum hamare pyare bahadur bete

Aur sab hasne lage ek week admit rahne ke baad muje uncle aunty ghar le gaye... aur....

Muje ek baat strange lagi muje 3 week ho gaye the but Xabhi sir Aur AaG sir milne ni aye the...Aur na guruji....mere man mai sawal aur jawab dono the jawab ye tha ki maine jo harkat ki h usai Sab naraj h..... Sunil ko bi kuch pata ni tha kuch...

45 din baad main ashram pahucha .... Aur main chal ke guruji ke pass gaya aur unhe pranaam kiya

Guruji --- pranam ab kaisi tabiyat h tumhari

Main—achi h gurudev....

Guru ji--- jao aram karo ....aur sirf padhayi pe dhayan do ...

Main chal diya muje mere jawab mil gaya tha wo naraj the bahut jayda.....

Main agale 15 din ashram mai he rah kar padhta raha kyoki ab exam the jaldi he aur meri taiyari ni thi..

Main--- aj 2 months baad school ja raha tha..



In school .....

Main class mai enter huva toh shweta aur richa sath baithe huve the aur sunil akela main jaake sunil ke sath baith gaya ....Richa ko yahi pata tha ki mere dada ji ki tabiyat serious ho gayi thi....

Main—Hi

Richa – hi kaise ho aur dadaji kaise h

Main --- wo tikh h aur ab recover kar rahe h ....

Richa--- hmmm interval mai baat karte h

But kismat ek period khali tha aur hum park mai agaye...

Richa--- mere gale lag gayiii aur boli 2 months ke liye koyi bina bataye jata h kya

Main--- sorry jaan love but situation he aisi thi main kya karta raato raat jana pada ...

Humne pyar ke lamhe sath bitaye aur main ashram agaya....mere gaav kaafi bhar gaye the main training ground mai tha aur akela tha koyi ni tha muje dhuk toh huva but maine sabkuch man mai rakh liya aur training karne laga .....

Ek month tak lagatar main aisa he karta raha half yearly exam bi ho gaye hamare ....sab ache se huve mere exam ........

Guruji--- muje lagta h ab tumhe tumhari galti pata lag gayi hogi..

Main--- maafi chahunga guruji agar mere apno ki jaan bachane ke liye muje apni jaan deni pade toh ye galti dubara hogi ...ap chahe koyi bi punishment de sakte ho....

Guruji ---- tikh h agar tumahri nazar mai tumhare maabaap ki itni he izzat h aur badle ki aag itni he thi toh tum ja sakte ho....... Main kah dunga tumhare dada ji se ki tum bhul jao badla......

Main--- shama kare guruji par jo maa baap jinda h unki prati bi meri jimaidari h unhe bi mere mata ne apna bhai banaya tha kya mera unke prati koyi kartavya ni h....

Guruji---- Jinda rah ke karna h yu jaan khatre mai daalke ni

Itna bolkechale gaye...

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Ravi aur javed ki side....

Javed--- wo jaguu ka kuch pata ni chal raha h muje dar lag raha h muje marna ni h main yanha se chala jaunga...

Ravi--- tu darta kyo h abi toh time h ek kaam karte h kuch waqt tak sab rok dete h ok usai baad mai dhekhenge

Javed—par...muje dar lag raha h kanhi usai ye pata lag gaya ye sab humne kiya h toh wo maar dega news mai dhekha ni ki kaise shimla mai katle aam huva h ...

Ravi – main hu just chilll....ok chal ek saal shanti rakhte h jab tak aur evidence ikhate karte h.... ...

Aur dono no plan ek saal ke liye rok liya sayad maut ka dar isai he kahte h....

Ab bus muje jaggu ka khel pura karna tha.... muje jaggu pe bahut gussa araha tha kyoki ye sab uski wajah se he huva tha aur ye bi jaanna tha ki sonali ne muje us din kyo roka tha usai marne se ....

Kal Sunday h aur sonali ne muje bulaya bhulaya h toh muje jana h usai milne ki kyo usne muje roka jaggu ko marne se roka aur Sunday ko specialy ane ko kyo kaha......



Aj ke liye itna he ....

aur real mai kal Sunday h toh kal jaggu speical ayega uske baad story fast forward ho jayegi 6 months ke liye......ab school sidhe 11th class mai he khulenge.....

update chota h but kal bada ayega

Lovely update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Behtrin bhai...

Dil khol kar likhne ko mn hai

Lekin next pr likhuga

Gajab ab tak sabse best review Bhai

 

[Rajesh]

Update 168….

Nirwana vs Death halo’s sanak



Raj….pahle he killer organization ke hamle sa shruti ajju aur abhay, sonali,shiwani ko pahuchi chot se gusai mai tha ab sanki ki is harkat se wo apne aape se bahar ho gaya tha …..gusai ke mare uski soch par NIRWANA ki darindgi raj par hawi hoti ja rahi thi gusai se uske jabde kas kar chipke huve the…..usne ek nazar utha kar sanki ko dekha jo dur se khada usai he dekh raha tha……dono ki ankhe ek dusre se mili …..par undono ke bich khade the kayi sare killers aur wo sab goliya ruktre he turant raj ki taraf aagaye the…..par raj ek tak bus sanki ko he dekhe ja raha tha ….jab ek killer ne attack kiya toh raj ne jhuk kar dodge kiya aur apni sword ko uske pait mai gusa kar puri taakat se upar ki taraf khinch diya jissai uska pait upar tak cheerta chala gaya aur uski antadiya bahar aagayi ….piche se ek ne chupke se hamla kiya par raj ne apni dono sword ko piche karke block kar diya aur ek flip agai ki taraf karte huve piche se kick uske jabde par jad di aur palat kar apni sword uske sir mai dhansa di Raj ko dekh kar ek pal toh killers ruke par wapas apni formation mai attack ke liye taiyaar ho gaye….ye sab dur se tamasha dekh raha sanki bhi Nirwana ki uski taraf ane laga ladne ke liye …raj ne agai khade 2 killers par itni furti se move karte huve waar kiya ki wo war ko rokte usai pahle he ek ki mout ho chuki thi…ab teen killers ek sath raj par attack karne lage raj unke har waar ko roktata huva unse fight kar raha tha …un teeno ke attack aur tez ho gaye ….raj teeno par attack ka ek mouka dekh raha tha abki baar right side wale ne waar kiya toh raj ne piche ki taraf jump marte huve he apni sword sidhi uske pait ki taraf fenk di jo us killer ke liye unexpected thi wo sidhi uske pait mai ghus gayi baki piche khade aur killers raj ki taraf attack karne aye toh sanki ne unhe hath ke ishare se xabhi aur Aag ki taraf bhej diya aur khud raj ko ladte huve dekhne laga usne apni sword par lage poonam ke khun ko dekha toh uski aankho mai khun ki pyas badh gayi aur uski sanak us par hawi hone lagi ye wo sanak thi jiske niche lasho ke dhero dher lag chuke the jab jab wo death halo se sanki bana tha usne khun ki barish karwa di thi..udhar raj ka dusra sathi mitydoot bhi pahuch gaya tha uski nazar raj se mili toh raj ne ishare se un dono shaks ki help karne ko kaha jo charo taraf se gire huve the…mitydoot bekhoff mout ka doot bankar toot pada …aur khoon ki tez gandh aaspass fail gayi thi..….. raj killers ke piche khade sanki ko dekha toh uska gusa apne charam par pahuch gaya usne ek baar right side move kiya phir ek baar left move kiya aur samne wale ki gardan ko cut kar diya ….aur phir dono killers ki taraf dekha aur ek ke waar ko block kiya aur dusre wale ke sword fenk kar sidha dil ke aar paar kardi ab sirf ek bacha tha jiski sword ko raj ne block kar rakha tha …raj ne usai apne hath se gale se pakadkar upar utha liya aur sidha jamin par pata diya usne usai dubar upar uthaya aur niche pataka par uski nazar sanki par he thi aur sanki usai muskarte huve dekh raha tha …raj ne us killer ko kick maar ke dur fenk diya aur apni sword pith par taang lii…sanki ne bhi hath mai pakdi apni sword ko dur fenk diya phir back mail lagi emergency ke liye rakhi gun nikal kar raj ki taraf taan di par raj usai ghurkar dekhta raha phir sanki ne gun ko unloaded karke raj ko dikhate huve ek side gun ki magzine ko aur dusri taraf gun ko fenk diya aur apne dono hath ki ungliya khali karke samne raj ko dikhayi aur dono hatho ki ungliyo se ane ka ishara kiya ……raj ne bina der kiye sidhe uski taraf badhkar right hand se waar kiya jisai sanki ne halka sa move karke apne left hand se block karliya aur right hand ki kohni se raj ke chare par kohni ki jad di raj 2 kadam piche hat gaya ….raj aur sanki ki nazar dubara se mili apki baar sanki ne jump karke raj ki chest par waar kiya raj ne apne dono hath cross karke waar ko block kiya par kick ke pressure se piche kayi kadam khiskta chala gaya …..sanki ke chare par kroor bhav agaye usne pahle right phir left liya raj ko laga punch se pait par waar karega par sanki ne left leg ka support lekar right kick bahut tez raj ki chest par kick maari jisai raj kayi feet piche jaakar gira ….aur girte he ek jhatke se khada ho gaya…..aur sanki ki taraf dekhne laga….

Sanki —-kya huva mashuka ka dhukh ho raha h …
Nirwana ne kuch nahi kaha par iski muthiya kas gayi usne ek pair ko jameen jor se push kiya aur sidha sanki ke agai utar gaya …..aur right punch ka tez waar kiya jisai sanki ne block karliya par sanki ko suprise mila raj ki left kick se kyoki right punch toh fekh punch tha leftkick ke padhte he sanki ko tez dard huva wo bhi kayi kadam left side khiskte chala gaya ….

Nirwana - wo koun h main nahi janta par tuje usai bich mai nahi lana chahiye tha…

Sanki “ Sach mai “

Nirwana — Sach …ha ha ha Sach ye h muje tuje tadpana h…..tadpana h teri rooh ko….

Nirwana ne waar kiya toh sanki ne apne hath ko ghumaya ….raj ki dard se Ahhhhhhh nikal gayi raj piche hata toh uski right chest mai knife ghusa huva tha….

Sanki ne apne dono hatho ki ungliyo phir se ghumaya toh ek hath mai knife agaya aur usne raj ke pait ki taraf mara diya Nirwana ne uske hath ko pakad liya sanki ne knife choda aur dusre se hath se pakadkar nirwana ki chest par cut maar diya raj ki white shirt puri tarah se laal ho gayi ……

Nirwana ke chahre par kroor muskaan agayi jisai dekh sanki bhi ek baar toh hairan huva ….. “chal khel bahut huva”

Itna kah Nirwana tezi se agai badha aur ek kick death halo ki taraf maar di jisai death halo kayi kadam piche hat gaya par Jab tak wo sambhlata Nirwana ka right ghutna uski chest par laga jisai wo kayi feet udhte huve piche khade ped se takra gaya …..Nirwana ne tezi se kadam agai bhadaye aur ek right punch death halo ke muu ki taraf maar diya ..death halo sne side mai ludak kar Nirwana ke waar ko dodge kar diya…..death halo ne khade ho kar apne muu se khun thuka aur bola “impressive ….tum pahle ho jisne aj tak itni dair tak mujse fight kari h”

Iske reaction mai Nirwana ne usai dekha aur kaha “muje teri rooh chahiye” itna kaha usne ek sath kayi left right karke punch death halo par kiye jisai death halo block karta gaya …in dono ke war ekdusre par itne tez ho rahe the ki baaki bhi in dono ko fight dekhne lag gaye the …..

Mitydoot “ muje nahi pata tha ki master ki fight skills itni bhayanak h”

Xabhi aur Aag ek dusre ki taraf dekh kar “ ye koun h jo hamari madad kar raha h”



Idhar death halo aur Nirwana ka punch ek dusre ko ek sath pada jisai dono dur piche udte huve gire …..aur ek sath he khade ho gaye aur ek dusre ki taraf bhage Nirwana ne

Death halo ko jhuk kar upar uthaliya aur tezi se piche fenk diya ……death halo ke sir se khun nikalne lage ….uska gusa bhi apne charam par tha ….Nirwana ke jayda khun nikalne se kamjori dikhne lagi thi ….wo tezi se death halo ki taraf finishing attack karne ke liye bhada kyoki ab usai pata tha ki wo ab aur jayda dair nahi lad payega ….udhar death halo gusai mai buri tarah ufan raha tha….wo Nirwana ko har haalmai mai marna chahta tha….dono ek dusre ki taraf badhe ….dono ke punch ek dusre se takrane wale the tabhi end mouke par Nirwana ne apni chest mai dhansha nife bahar nikala aur lefe hand se knife ko death halo ki chest ke andhar tak ghusa diya ….idhar death halo ka punch Nirwana ko laga wo dur jaakar gira …killers organisation ke killers knife death halo ko laga dekh kar jaldi se smoke bomb fenkne lage …..

Nirwana ki ankhe death halo ki taraf he thi aur death halo apne killers ke sahre khada hokar dard se dant peeskar Nirwana ko dekh raha tha ….wo wanhi se gusai mai Nirwana ki taraf badha toh killers organisation ke killers ne usai pakad liya smoke bomb ke dhunve se he death halo chillaya “death halo se aj tak koyi nahi bacha h tu marega “

Nirwana ki sarir se khun nikalne ki wajah se wo ek ghutne par baith gaya par uski ankho mai abhi bhi khun ki pyas thi usne dhuve mai gayab ho rahe death hallo ki taraf dekha aur puri taakat se uski taraf bhaga …aur khun us dhunve mai failta gaya ….mityudoot ko apne master ki fikra thi isliye usne xabhi aur Aag ko jane ka ishara kiya wo bhi jaldi se master ke piche gaya ….kuch pal baad jab smoke thodi si hati toh Nirwana sword ke sahare ghutno par tha uske charo taraf kisi ka hath toh kisi ki gardan toh kisi ka pair pada huva tha…..wo wanhi se cheekha “ jis din tu Nirwana se dubara se milega wo din tera ya mera akhiri din hoga” uski ankhe smoke bhi death halo ko dhund rahi thi par usai kuch nahi dikhayi diya uski ankhe dhundhli hone lagi aur usi dhundhli ankho se smoke mai Nirwana ko dikha ek muskarata huva chahra jo usai he dekhe ja raha tha Nirwana jiska chahra krodh ki agni se dhadhkta rahta tha us chahre ko dekh uske chahre par pahli baar muskaan agayi usne apna hath us chahre ko chune ke liye bhadhaya toh…. achanak he ek sword us pyari si muskaan wali ladki ke pait se aarpaar aati usai dikhayi di ….jisai dekh uske chahre par dard ke bhav agaye usai khone ke dar se wo gusai aur dard se tilmalane laga idhar raj ko nind mai aise hilte baichain hone se kavita ki nind toot gayi ….apne bhai ko yuu nind mai tadpta huva dekh wo ghabra gayii wo raj ko awaj ko dene lagi “ bhai kya huva bhai utho bhai ”idhar nind mai Nirwana “ main tumhe kuch nahi hoga ….main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga”…par us ladki ke chare par dard mai bhi muskaan thi ….aur usi muskaan mai usne dum tod diya aur Nirwana bhi nind mai he cheek pada “Nnnnaaaahhhhiiiiiii”cheekte huve baith gaya

Kavita — bhai bhai bhai kya huva apko

Raj “ koun ho tum”

Kavita bhai bhai….koun koun h

Raj hosh mai aate huve kavita ki taraf dekha aur bola pani…..

Kavita jhatke se khadi huvi aur gilass mai pani daalkar raj ko de diya aur apne bhai ke chahre par aye pasine ko saaf karne lagi ….

Kavita — Bura sapna dekha kyaa apne…

Raj —- kavita ko apne gale lagate huve …. “Ha bura sapna tha main tikh hu”

Kavita kuch nahi boli par wo apne bhai ki ye halat dekh samaj rahi thi ki uske bhai ki jindgi aasan nahi rahi hogi….usne raj se alag hokar uske sir ko apni godi mai rakh liya aur bachpan ki tarah sir ko sahlane lagiii …jissai raj ko kuch he dher mai gahri nind agayi…..apne bhai ko yuu chain ki nind sote dekh uski ankho mai khushi ke ansuu agaye….. “main hamesa har musibat mai apka sath dungi bhai muje pata h ap muje kabhi apna dard nahi bataoge …par apki ye bahan apke sath rahegi aur hamesa rahegi”

Ye kahte huve wo bhi apne bhai ke pass uske seene se lagkar so gayii…..



Subhe ….raj ne kavita ko uthaya aur usai fresh hone ke liye kaha aur khud niche agaya janha sunil breakfast kar raha tha….raj ko apni taraf ghurte huve aata dekh wo gusai se usai dekhne laga…

Sunil — tuje maar khani h toh aise he bolde …..yuu ankhe mat faad samjha

Raj usai ghurte huve samne baith gaya ….

Sunil — teri wajah se shweta mujse baat nahi karti h ….sonali bhaaa….sonali bahut gusai mai naraj ho gayi h …..aur toh aur wo shiwani mam …galiya deti rahti h gandi gandiii….. deepika dii mujse baat karna toh dur hostle mai he shift ho gayi h….aur kavita is ne ….itna emotional kiya ki sale main khud ko aur nahi rok sakta paya ….samjha aur tuuu sale muje ghur raha h ankhe dikha raha h….tu mil sabse …tere chahre ko thapado se aisa kar dengi ki bandar ke pichwaade mai aur tere chahre mai trust me koyi fark nahi kar payega jo kanhi se laal kanhi se kala hoga aur just imagine tu inmai se kisi ko bhi palatkar jawab nahi de sakta h na rok sakta h …..

Raj ke sarir mai jhur jhuri si doud gayiiii…aur wo bola “baat teri bhi sahi h par tu janta h na agar maine baat ki toh main unhe ane aur milne se khud ko rok nahi paunga

Sunil — wo muje nahi pata main pagle he bahut pit chuka hu sabse par tu ye simran naam ki is khubsurat bala ko ghar par rakha h agar ye baat sonali aur shweta ko pata chali toh ….tu samaj raha na ….

Tabhi upar ki ek taraf ki sidhiyo se simran t shirt aur shorts mai niche arahi thi toh ek taraf se kavita niche arahi thi….raj sur sunil ne undono ko dekha aur phir ek dusre ki taraf dekha aur dubara un dono ko dekhne lage…..aur yahi haal same kavita aur simran ka tha dono he ek dusre ko dekh kar upar se toh muskarayi par andar he andar ek dusre ki khubsurti se jal uthi….kyoki janha simran india ki top youngest hot and beautiful models mai se ek thi toh kavita khubsoorati mai uski barabar ki thi….aur ladki ladki ki khubsurti ko dekh jale bina rah he nahi sakti h ……niche raj aur sunil ankho ki is ladayi ko asani se dekh sakte the…..par musibaat yanha khatam thodi he hone wali thi ye toh suruwaat thi ….kavita jo abhi gusai aur jalan se andar he andar jal rahi thi …uske jale par namak chidakne tikhi mirch anu agayi …uske chalne se arahi tap….tap….ki awaj se sabka dhayan udhar gaya toh raj ne apna sir pit liya aur sunil hairani se raj ko toh kabhi anu ko dekhne lags kyoki anu ne is wakt ek skirt aur top pahan rakha tha jismai uski gori taange aur 34 ke boobs perfectly dikh rahe the….anu ne jab raj ke tikh bagal mai ek behad khubsurat ladki ko t shirt aur shorts mai dekha toh wo andar tak jal uthi aur boli….

Anu-- 2 din se tumhe dhund rahi hu …..par tumhe apni gf se fursat he nahi h us raat toh party mai bada kah rahe the ki tumhare liye he party mai aya hu aur ab…. Khair college ke quiz competition ka din agaya h samjhe miss cold beauty rajni mam tumhe dhund rahi h aur tumse bahut gusaa h ab dete rahna jawab unhe ….

Raj jitni dair anu bolti rahi man mai bolta raha “meri maa kuch ulta poolta mat bol dena ….please please…satayanash tera beda garg kar diya ……ab toh chupp…hoja …kya khaya tha tere baap ne us raat ….bus kar meri maa….bus……ab ..toh…gaya main…ab ye kavita divya maa ko sab bata degi phir sonali phir shiwani phir deepika dii aur wo tikhi mirch shweta….bhaaddhhh mai gaya mission…jinda he nahi rahunga ab…

Toh idhar sunil raj ko ghurte huve man mai “waah bete 2 khubsoorat balaye ek gharwali toh ek baharwali aur dono ki ankho mai ek dusre ke liye jalan ….ye yanha mouj mai h rook main he sonali bhabhi ko bataunga ab toh”

Toh kavita man mai “ hmmm itni sari gopiyaaa hey bhagwan upar se indono ki muje dekh kar jalan matlb bhai ko pasand karti h”

Raj ne sabko dekh aur phir bola “chup ho ja meri maa bus kar ab meri bhi sunle …yaa apni he Gaye gi…

Anu--- huuuu toh bolo na maine kounsa tumhare muu par hath rakha huva h ..

Raj — ye sunil singhaniya h mere dost aur ye unki sister h miss kavita kal he delhi se aye h ye hamare he college mai padhengi usi ke admission ke liye h ….

Anu — toh pahle nahi bol sakte the …..

Raj hairani se “ wanha 100 metere dur se suru ho gayi thi tum bolne diya muje ….speker bhi tumhare agai fail h …

Anu — huuu parso tour par jana h aj rajni mam ka off h unse ghar jakar mil lena samjhe ..aur parso mere sath he chalna …..main pick karlungi tumhe bye…

Raj hath jodkar jo hukum apka devi ji….

Anu piche mudi aur style se bahar chali gayi….. aag toh wo laga he chuki thi…..

Simran — acha raj main kal sham ko hospital ke liye nikal jaungi jaungi …..

Raj — ap sunil se contact mai rahna ye apko wanha ka address aur kinse milna h sab bata denge aur delhi mai kabhi koyi bhi help chahiye ho ap inse mil lena…

Sunil — waise puna main bhi hospital juanga project ke liye toh inhe sath le jaunga….. advertising new poject sab dekhna h kaafi changes karne h…..tu toh pagle he mana kar chuka h…

Raj fir se suru mat ho jana … aj admission karwa dena kavita ka par kavita ….

Sunil-- muje pata h aur tere sath nahi rahegi ye manisha ke ghar rahegi ….samjha tere sath main isai rahne bhi nahi deta …..tera na ata h na pata h….

Raj ne kavita ke sir par hath fera …aur bola bus isliye tera bhai tujse mil nahi sakta h mere dhushman kounsa kanha baitha huva h aur kab waar karde muje bhi nahi pata h …..

Kavita -koyi baat nahi main apko dekhkar he khus hu main bhai ke sath manisha dii ke ghar chali jaungi …..

Sunil toh tikh h choti tu naha le hum nikalte h warna iske bharose tera admission nahi hoga…

Simran — phir main breakfast ready kar leti hu sabke liye ….

Kavita ke jate he simran boli -apke chahne wale bahut h khaskar ladkiya shweta sab bata chuki h muje…..

Raj ke toh ye sunte he tote ud gaye…usne apne sir par hath maar liya….aur simran usai hansta huva kitchen se dekhti rahi….



Ek taraf raj cold beauty miss rajni ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya toh sunil manisha ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya usne apne sath khubsare fruits aur sweets le liye the…..

Kavita — bhaiya ye manisha di bhai ki classmate thi na .

Sunil — wo uski best friend bhi h …..usne shweta ko bachane ke liye goliya bhi khayi h so ….unse hamesa respect se baat karna ….raj bhi unki bahut bahut izzat karta h …

Kavita — ok i understand ….main dhayan rakhungi…..

Sunil sir par hath fer kar good girl..

Dono ne jab ghar ke bahar security ko inform kiya tab manisha bahar khud recieve karne ayi ….aur sunil ko dekh kar hii kiya aur boli “wo gadha kanha h”

Sunil - wo padhayi ke kaam se gaya huva…

Manisha-- padhayiiii….

Sunil ghar ke andar sofe par baithte huve bola iska matlb apko kuch nahi pata h…..

Manisha confusion bhari ankho se usai dekhne lagi toh sunil muskara kar bola “wo apke he toh college mai h

Manisha cheekte huve “kyaaaaa…..”

Sunil ko raj ki pitayi karwani thi isliye usne aur aag lagane ki sochli aur bola “muje laga tha ap uski best friend ho toh itna toh apko pata hoga par apne toh usai kal he dekha h …so sad apko kaise pata hoga”

Bus fir kya tha manisha ki hath ki muthiya kas gayiiiii aur wo Jawala mukhi ki tarah ubalne lagi aur dheere se boli “gadha kanhi ka mere he college mai hokar mujse nahi mila matlb usai sab pata tha ki main kounse college mai hu itna bada dhokha …chodungi nahi usai main” phir sunil se aur ye koun h…

Sunil — are u kidding….

Manisha — No i m not…

Sunil-- so why dont you know her…

Manisha — muje kya pata…

Sunil — ye apke best friend ki choti bahan kavita h….

Kavita — hii diii….

Manisha — what……ye kavita h oh my god ye toh photo se bilkul alag h pahle iske chote baal the aur ab toh ye pari ban gayi h….aur itna kah usai khade hokar gale laga liya…

Kavita — diii wo ek drama ki photo bheji thi shweta dii ko baal tab bhi lambe the wo toh chote dikha rakhe the drama ki wajah se….

Manisha uske gaal khinchte huve so sweet ye kitni pyari h ……

Sunil — ye bahut intelligent bhi h claases jumb karte huve direct first year tak agayi h…..aur ab apke sath he rahegi …ye apke best friend ne he kaha ..

Manisha — acha kiya us nalayak ne ab jab isai milne ayega pitega mujse….aur ab muje bhi ghar par akela nahi rahna padega…….



Idhar Raj rajni mam ke ghar pahuch gaya …rajni gate open kiya toh bahar raj ko dekh wo bina kuch bole he andar chali gayi….Raj bhi piche piche door close karke andar agaya…..rajni sofe par baithi toh wo bhi samne baith gaya…..

Rajni — ab bologe ya aise he chup rahoge…

Raj — hmmm ye samaj lijiye jaise us din jo apne dekha tha wahi sab kar raha tha….aur thodi chot lag gayi thi…..ab apse milne ke baad dr ke pass he jaunga…..dubara dressing ke liye…..

Rajni jo ab tak gusa thi wo gusa chodkar chintit hote huve boli…kya huva kanha lagi dikhao..

Raj-- sab tikh h….

Rajni — tum mere sath chalo dressing karane pahle dressing jaruri h….

Raj — par …

Rajni — filhal main tumhari dost hu aur dost ko is dost ki bahut parwaah h wo turant room mai gayi aur jean aur top pahan ke agayi jismai uski nabhi aur gori patli kamar saaf dikh rahi thi…

Raj usai dekhta rah gaya…..apni aur raj ko aise ghorta dekh kar rajni ne apni dress dekhi aur pucha “achi nahi h”…

Raj muskara kar ap sach mai bahut khubsurat ho ….

Rajni ke toh mano pankh he lag gaye ho …usne raj ka hath pakda aur car garriage ki taraf jane lagi…….raj bus uske sath chalta raha ….jab dono clinic pahuche toh wanha dr female he thi raj pahle he rajni ke samne t shirt open karne ki soch kar jhijhak raha tha ab toh female dr bhi samne thi…..

Dr — itna toh ladkiya bhi nahi sharmaati h phir rajni ki taraf dekhkar “kya tum apni gf ke samne bhi t shirt kholte waqt itna sharmate ho….ya aj kuch special h…

Raj kya bolta ki rajni uski gf nahi h….usne bina kuch kahe apni t shirt open kardi…

Dr ki bhi ankhe uski body dekh chamakne lagi …phir pattiya hatayi toh streches dekh rajni dar gayi aur dr bhi boli “ itne streches kaise aye tumhe ye aise he toh nahi aye h”

Raj kya he bolta par wo sach bhi nahi bol sakta tha isliye bola “sach bata raha hu i hope ap kisi ko nahi batayengi meri gf ke sath kuch gunde jabardasti kar rahe the isliye usai bachne mai ye ghav aye h muje police case nahi chahiye tha ”

Female dr-- ok….phir rajni ki taraf dekh kar tum khusnaseeb ho ki tumhra bf acha h jo tumhari itni care karta h…isliye tumhe bhi apna pyar dikhate huve iski pattiya karni chahiye taki isai pain kam ho…

Rajni - raj ka jhut samaj gayi thi par raj ke liye dil mai soft corner toh tha he uske dil mai isliye usne apne soft hand se bina jhijhke uske ghav ki pattiya dr ki guidence mai change kar di …..

Dr — ye pattiya aur ye dawayiya le lo har dusre se teesare din pattiya change karna aur 10 din baad check up karke taanko ko cut kar denge hum …..aur ha is condition mai no physical reletion ship kuch din patience rakhe…streches par jor ayega….

Rajni toh sharam se pani pani ho gayi wo bus “par main” itna he boli …..

Raj — ok dr main Dhayan rakhunga…no physical relation…..thank you….

Raste mai rajni kuch nahi boli …

Raj — tour par kab jana h …

Rajni-- parso aur main bhi houngi team ke sath …. Jisai tumhe anu ke karib jane mai help hogi…

Raj — wo kaise…

Rajni-- tumhari ussai dosti bhi nahi huvi h puri tarah main tum dono ko akela rahne ka mouka dungi taki tum uske aur kareeb ..ja sako…

Raj — akele toh wo kayi baar mere ghar bhi hoti h….hum akele he hote h us waqt bhi…

Rajni jhunjhalakar idiot ….pyar ki baate karo …gale lagao kiss karo …..uske dil ko chuve ….

Raj ko dil ko chuvo sunkar wo pal yaad agaya jab usne anu ke boobs pakad liye the …….

Rajni —- jab mentaly aur physicaly wo tumhare pyar mai hogi tab tum jo bologe wo sab karegii…ab physicaly matlb samaj rahe ho na ya wo bhi nahi pata h….

Raj — dusri taraf dekh kar pata h muje …ap ssseeeexxx..ki baat kar rahi ho…

Rajni — badi sharam arahi h jab dr kah raha tha tab bade mere bf bankar dawayi lagwa rahe the mujse ….

Raj — toh koun idiot hoga jo apse nahi lagwayega ……

Rajni — matlb mera pass ana acha lagta h tumhe ….

Raj — wo….ye….maine ..aisa toh nahi kaha ….

Rajni — raj ke chahre par ungli ghuma kar toh phir kaise kaha…..

Raj ke chahre par paseene ane lage …..paaaani paani peena h….

Rajni —- jor se khilkhilakar hans padi aur raj ke gaal ko pyar se chum liya…..tum bahut sweet ho raj……

Raj — rajni ko dekhne laga…..

Rajni jeans mai kitchen ki taraf jate huve boli …..ladki ka man aur tan jis din jeet liya wo tumhare liye kuch bhi karegi ….aur ye jab hoga jab wo dono sahmati se tumhe de man bhi aur tan bhi …ye baat har ladki par lagu hoti h…..

Raj — jhijhakte huve par sex ….

Rajni — pyar mai shadi he ho last mai ye kanhi likha nahi h raj ..phir khud se boli jaise tum aur main chaha kar bhi ek nahi ho sakte h…….phir jor se …jo hota h wo dono ki sahmati se hota h raj pyar pane ka he naam nahi h kabhi kabhi usmai sab paakar bhi khona padta h…….

Raj — ap itni gahri baate bhi bolti ho …..

Rajni coffee banate huve “ har ladki ka ek khawab hota h …..samjhe mr…abhi tum mere dost ho aur wo bhi special wale tum wo pahle ladke ho jo mere ghar aye ho….

Raj — ok….Thank you ……..so much…

Rajni-- so lunch karoge….main khana acha banati hu….kya khaoge ..

Raj —- waise muje allu ke paranthe bahut pasand h aj ghar ka khane ki meri bhi icha h ….

Rajni — ok toh tum aur sirf main …..

Raj — muskarakar irade nek h na …

Rajni — us raat jab muje gundo se bachaya tha aur muje bra aur panty mai dekhkar bhi tumne meri itni respect aur care ki thi ye ghar rent pe availiable karwaya …. Toh muje mere irado par sak ho sakta h par tumhare par nahi….aur waise bhi tum aur main he ghar mai toh muje toh koyi dikat nahi h agar tum ho toh ….irade nek na ho toh muje koyi dikat nagi h….

Raj ko yuuu ankhe fadta dekh rajni agai boli “acha ye batao muje wanha ghumaoge bilkul bf ki tarah no mam no teacher ok”

Raj — jo hukum apka …..kisi ladki ne kaha tha khubsoorati ko mana nahi karna chahiye ….

Raj ki is baat par dono hans pade ……

Lunch finish kar raj ne rajni ko thank you kaha toh ….

Rajni boli aise nahi phir raj ke behad karib aakar uski ankho mai dekhkar apne gal agai karti huve boli yanha par thank you do aj isi se kaam chala lungi raj ne jaldi se uske gaal par kiss di aur nikal gaya…piche rajni muskarati rah gayiii uske chahre par sachi muskaan thi jo kitne salo baad ayi thi…..



Toh mumbayi mai kanhi underworld ki confrence meeting mai..

Victor gusai se ubal raha tha-- Tum mai se koyi batayega ki kyo kisi ko nahi pata h ki wanha itni lashe kaise bichi koun the wo log jo killers organisation aur humse bhid gaye…….aur humara ek bhi admi jinda nahi bacha kya tum log itne nakara ban gaye ho….tum sabko pata h hum sab log killers organisation ke raham par palte h …………

Sabhi ko chup dekh kar …..victor chikha-- ab koyi jawab dega ….

Par kisi ki bhi koyi awaj nahi ayi…..

Victor--- mumbayi mai ab kuch din shanti rakho …kuch din mamla garam rahega ab bahar ke sahro ko target karo…..Aur abhi haal he mai puna mai vidya group of medical college ne new project mai bada investment kiya h wanha se suruwaat karo…..is baar ye tum sambhaloge …..Jigra…..

Jigra-- ji jr. Victor aisa he hoga main aj he nikal jata hu……





Toh udhar ….puna mai…

“Ap sab itne lazy kyo ho …fast karo bhai parso ….function h … kya izzat rahegi hamri…

Ladka-- mam ap ap rest kijiye sab ho jayega hum sab lage h na….

Ladki “ ye medical college mere liye sabkuch h isliye koyi galti nahi mere dadajii ayenge ….samjhe koyi gadbad huvi toh sabko pitungi ….

Dean - piche se aate ho richa beti sab sahi se ho raha h …tum rest karo subhe se lagi huvi ho…..

Richa — Uncle ap is medical college ke dean aur MD ho apse aisi umid nahi h muje….

Dean — oh…..by the way janha tak muje pata h tum ho real owner toh ….main toh sirf naam ka MD hu..

Richa —- ssahhhhhh uncle ap aisi bate mat kiya karo main student he tikh hu

Dean— ha ha ha chalo kuch khalo parso Thakur jagmaal singhji bhi ayenge aur tumhre liye bata du unki khoyi huvi beti Divya as a sr dr join kar rahi h wo he is project ko handle karengi……

Richa man mai - raj ki bua bhi h kya raj bhi ayega…..bahut samay bit gaya h kya sach mai muje bhul gaya hoga ……..kyo raj kyo….ek baar sach bataya toh hota muje……phir lambhi saans chodkar…..sayad mere pyar aur vishwaas mai he kami rah gayi hogi i love you raj main tumse bahut pyar karti hu…ye kahte kahte uska man bhar aya tha usai uski akhiri baate yaad ane lag gayi thi jo raat ko usne kahi thi…..richa ki ankhe bhig gayi ……aur unhi bhighi ankho se wo boli i m sorry raj ….i miss so much…..



Aj ke liye itna he masti mai padhne ka bindass likes pelne ka……..so finally jo wait kar rahe the richa ka uski ek jhalak ab dekhne ko milegi…..

Nice update bro

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai dono hi update mast diye h apne
Jitni tareef karu unti kam h

Thank you so much mitesh bro

1. Ak sawal jab deth Hello ne sabke piche admi laga rakhe h to wo sunil ko kyo nahi trace kar paye jab weh deepika aur sonali ko lene gaya tha

Kyoki unlogo ne delhi se bahar nikalne ke liye saste vehicle ka use kiya tha ....aur phir private plane se heemichal nikal gaye

2. Aur ager trace kar rahe h to wo mandwa tak pauch chuke honge
Matlab next update mai ladai fix h gaon ke bhaher

Sunil ko bhi pata h ki death halo deepika aur sabko dhundh raha h isliye wo koyi galti nahi karega

3. Manisha chali gayi apne mama ke ladke ko rakhi bhadhne

Haa....

4. Aur apne Divya aur manisha ki ma conversation nahi dikhaya

Huva he nahi h ...hoga toh jarur dikhayenge

5. Raj kab bat karke dada ji se manisha aur sunil ki

Karega karega bro...

6. Ab raj sherdil ko traning dega. Mumbai jate hi

Ab ye toh raj he jane ki kya karega wo

7. Ponam ke papa lagta h raj ke papa ke kareebe the jo dada ji poonam ke papa ka sunte hi poonam ko gale laga liya

Hmm koyi toh link h jis tarah anirudh ne kaha us heesab se wo jarur judi huvi h

8. Rakhi ka sceen to apne acha dikha diya but poona aur richa ko sachai ka pata kab karwaoge

Apne ap pata chal jayega

9. Ab sunil phas gaya h kyoki sonali didi ban gayi h to wo raj ka sach bata payega ki nahi ya fir aur pitai karwani h

Ab sach bata ke kya karega ....sach sonali ko pata h

10. Mujhe lagta h wo ladki poonam ho sakti h jo raj ko marte waqt bachane aayegi.

Hmm ho sakta h...

11. Ager attak kai hue raj par marne wale to al richa ko bhi bachane mai samne lao. Isse yeh hoga ki raj ke man mai richa ke liye bhi feeling jagegi.

Richa ka charecter already postive mai h aur jeet mai h toh abhi poonam ka waqt h

Lovely update bhai

Iske alawa koi aur story bhi likh chuke ho to batana
Unko bhi parne ka man karne laga h ab

Nahi mitesh bhai ye pahli he h story h....
Thank you so much keep supporting bro......

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Sahi kaha Naik bhai apne pehle to dono ne hi dushmano ke naak mai dham kar rakha tha.ab to teen ho gaye or yeh tikdi kya hangame or dhamal karti hai dekhne wala hoga

Ha ha ha kar he diya h dekh lijiyega ....bahut hungame h..
Par jayda dikha nahi paunga....

Bohot hi shandaar update tha bhai

Kaafi masti mazaak ho gaya is update m...

Family time masti mai guzra h

Kavita ne achi class lagwaa di Raj ki...

Lol phans gaya bechara...

Bechara phans gaya but look who came for hi rescue? "Poonam"
Ye ladki naa hoti to pata nhi Raj ka kya hota...
pr acha tha bua pehle hi samajh gyii thi...

Ha ha ha ...divya sab dekh chukhi h jindgi mai isliye wo sab samajti h aur dhayan rakhti h

Khaane k time bhi Raj or Richa k beech ki woh khamosh jung chal rhi thi "khaaana.banaate huwe"

Ha ha ha ....pyar to bacha h...thoda he sahi

Ab SherDil bhi Raj k saath jaa rha hai, mtlb maza badhne waala hai...

Ha kyoki family se usai bhi pyar milna chahiye

Or Sandeep singh nirwan bhai, sorry yrr pichle Kaafi time se thk se review nhi de paa rha hun naa apni story pr active hun...

Koyi baat nahi ap ate ho wahi bahut h mere liye ...

Bss kuch personal kaam hain phir Job ki talaash bhi chal rhi hai to time ki killat hai..
Infact aaj bhi subah 7 baje kaa gaya tha Interview k liye or shaam 5 baje ghr aaya hun...

Interview sabse jayda jaruri h matlb job etc kyoki usai jayda kuch nahi chahiye ....job h toh sab h ...

Baaki aapki baat bilkul thk hai k aap apne study or family time m baith kr update likhte ho to readers ka response dena to banta hi hai...
Wrna dil m kahin na kahin ek dard sa reh jaata hai k itni mehnat kis k liye kr rha hun jab inhe hi koi response nhi dena to...

Bilkul bilkul maine 182 update continue pura din baithkar likha h.....toh halat he kharab ho gayiiii....isliye thoda hak toh mangte he h

Bakai umeed hai k agle updates oorr bhi maze k honge ...

Bilkul sherdil ki fight ayegi...most experienced mityudoot se....

 

[@BADMAN]

एक डाउट है, मनीषा किसको राखी बांधी है, ये नही बताया गया है, Sandip Singh nirvan Bhai bata sakte hai kya aap

 

[Eternal king]

Bhai Sunil or Manish ke love story ka part esa phase me hogi ya 3rd phase me?????

 

[great....]

Bro ...kis bhi story ki har meeting point imp hota h....agar ye part yaad nahi h ya skip kiya h toh phir story padhna bekar h kyoki wanhi se poonam ko raj se pyar huva h...Toh ...jaldi story padhne ka yahi nuksaan h....

Bro.... woh to muje pata hai ki raj kumbh ke mele me gya tha waha usne fight ki thi poonam ke chacha ko bachaya tha wha par poonam ko raj se pyar huva tha but ye......raj ka divya se milna usme poonam ka kya chakar hai wo yad nahi....

that's the reason why i am asking about update number

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bro.... woh to muje pata hai ki raj kumbh ke mele me gya tha waha usne fight ki thi poonam ke chacha ko bachaya tha wha par poonam ko raj se pyar huva tha but ye......raj ka divya se milna usme poonam ka kya chakar hai wo yad nahi....

that's the reason why i am asking about update number

Ye update i think 99 ya 100 wala ek baar dubara padho apko apke sare jawab bilkul spast milenge warna main toh hu he

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

एक डाउट है, मनीषा किसको राखी बांधी है, ये नही बताया गया है, Sandip Singh nirvan Bhai bata sakte hai kya

last comment ab tak yaad h muje..... Aur maine kaha bhi tha ki ....main janta hu ki second id kya h