Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

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Raj.....Hero of the family

 

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Poonam…Richa …aur sonali…….teeno he subhe choti chachi ke sath kaam karwa rahi thi wanhi dadaji anirudh sherdil ki maa…raj .. baithe baate kar rahe the…toh unke piche sabhi ladkiyo ne sherdil aur sunil ko gher kar dono ko tang kar rahi thi aur wo dono sabke bich buri tarah fanse huve the ab dono kisi ke devar the toh kisi ke bhai the sabhi dono par pyar luta ranhi thi……aur dono intni balao ke bich chup chap sharmate huve baithe the ..

Dadaji — hume mandir jana h….raj….

Raj “ tikh h dadaji …jaisa ap kahe”

Dadaji “ ek jaruri baat kaptan jogindar aur hum sabne faisla liya h ki sunil ki jald he achi ladki dhundhkar mangni kar di jayegii….

Sunil ke kaano mai jaise he baat padi wo sabke bich se aise uchla jaise garam tave par popcorn uchlata h aur ek sath kayi words bola “ kyaaa,,kyo,kisliye,main he kyo”sabhi ladkiya bhi hairani se dadaji ko dekhne lagi ……

Raj “hhhhhh ye kab huva”

Dadaji “ wo din raat sabka dhayan rakhta h upar se 21 ka ho gaya h ….uska khyal rakhne wali bhi honi chahiye”

Sunil “ main rakh sakta hu khud ka khyal “

Sonali ne turant uske kaaan pakad liye aur boli “ bado ke bich mai nahi bolte h chup chap baithe raho”

Sunil “ dheere se bado ke bich mai are bhai i mean dii meri jindgi ki bali chad rahi h aur ap bol rahi h chup rahu”

Poonam aur richa bhi uske pass agayi

Poonam “ bhai jo ayegi apko pyar he degi uska sath tumhe har muskil se muskil ghadi mai heemat dega …”

Richa “ bhai wo tumhari taakat banegi na ki majburi ….wo us waqt tumhe raah dikhyegi jab tum …kamjor pad jaoge….”

Sunil “ par itni jaldi”

Sab ek sath “ hume bhabhi chahiye ap pahle he raj se bade ho”

Raj khada khada uski halat dekh muskurata raha tabhi deepika ne agai badh sunil ko gale lagakar kaha “kya apni bahno ke liye itni baat nahi manega”

Sunil niche baith gaya …..aur raj ko ghurne …..aur usai ek idea aya “ ok main karunga jo ap bologe jisai bologe karunga par ladki mere liye raj dhundhega …..itna kah wo muskarne ”usai pura yakin tha raj ke pass sab kuch h par time nahi h…isliye uske chehre par aur badi si musaan agayii…

Sab ek sath fir boli gayi bhains pani mai ab bhabhi hamari ana muskil he nahi namumkin h inhe fursat kanha h dhundhne ki inhe khud titliyo se fursat mile tab ye dhundhege na….

Raj ke chehre par muskaan aur gahri ho gayiiiii….

Dadaji anirudh divya rifat ki maa sab jor jor se hasne lage …dadaji “ tikh hume manjur h …….ha ha ha….. ye sab plan isi ka banaya huva plan h jis par tum bharosa kar rahe ho … tumse haa karwane ke liye raj ne he aisa karne ko kaha tha aur dekho tum fans bhi gaye….

Sunil jaldi se khada huva aur raj par jhapat pada “ hum bhai h…tu kaise kar sakta h mere sath ….24 ghanto mai badal gaya tu…..”

Raj “ ha ha ha are chod toh tu mere jigar ka tukda th ,h aur hamesha rahega”main bus apni ankho se teri mangni dekhna chahta hu….

Sunil - kya matlb h tu mere bacho ko bhi khilayega unki shadi bhi kareyega samjha,kuch bhi ulta pulta mat sochna…

Raj “ tikh h tikh tu jeeta….dubara nahi bolunga na sochunga”

Sunil “ nichi gardan karke ab bhai he bhai na raha toh main koun hota hu na karne wala tikh h jaisa ap sab chahe”

Divya “ ab ye bhi bata de koyi ladki bhi dekhi h….iske liye ya sif ha he karwani thi….

Raj ne sunil ki taraf dekha aur phir divya ki taraf dekh ha mai gardan hila di…

Sunil ka muu khula rah gaya aur baki sabhi ladkiya bhi hairan rah gayi…

Poonam ko ek jhatka sa laga aur wo soch mai doob gayi “ manisha ne na raj ji ko rakhi bandhi na he sunil ko baki sab ne ya toh raj ji ko ya sunil bhai

….aur raj ji bhi hamesha manisha se respect se baat karte h izzat karte h toh kanhi sunil bhai keliye ladki manisha he toh nahi …..agar aisa h toh main aur manisha sath rahenge ….poonam khushi se uchal padi aur isi excitement mai wo bold padi “ mujhe ladki pasand h”…

Sab usai he dekhne lage wo jaldi se richa ke piche chip gayiii….

Divya “ poonam yanha ao tum usai janti ho”

Poonam ko ab sharam arahi thi kuch bhi kahne se….

Raj man mai“ poonam ji mere dil ki baat jaan gayi kya..”raj ko poonam ko dekhne laga jo nichi gardan kiye huve khadi thi

Sonali bhi raj aur poonam ko he dekh rahi thi..

Jagmaal singh “ mere pass aakar baitho beti poonam…aur batao kya ap usai janti h”

Poonam dadaji ke pass baithkar yakeen se nahi par …muje yakeen h wo ladki yanhi moujud h hamare bich…..

Sab phir shock ho gaye sur ek dusre ko dekhne lage …

Raj man mai “ ye ladki h kya isai sab pata lag jata h main chakar bhi ismai koyi kami nahi dhund pata hu …aur wo sapno wali ladki ki muskaan bilkul iski muskaan ki tarah kyo dikhti h… main har baar poonam se ek laghav kyo mahsus karta hu”

Divya aur sherdil ki maa koun h wo poonam….

Poonam ne raj ki taraf dekha ….toh raj ne bhi poonam ki taraf dekh …..side khadi richa aur sonali ki nazar barabar ….poonam aur raj par he thi ….aur wo bhi samaj gaye the ki poonam aur raj mai dosti ka rishta gahra h….par sonali ke chehre par rahasmayi muskaan thi….

Poonam “ Bata du”

Anirudh “bata do bhai hume bhi hamre ghar ki sabse badi bahu ko dekhne ki jaldi h”

Poonam ki nazar ladkiyo mai se ek ki taraf gayi aur jis par gayi uska dil joro se dhadkne laga…..

Manisha “ toh raj muje apni bhabhi banakar hamesa apne pass rakhna chahta h…isliye …wo hamesha kahta tha ap sabse khass ho main apko kabhi dur nahi jane dunga apko apne dil ke karib rakhunga…matlb wo meri itni izzat karta h aur ye sirf isliye kyoki maine uski family ki rakhsa ki ….”

Poonam “ manisha”

Bus sabhi manisha ki taraf mood gayi sabhi ne usai gher liya ….

Sunil raj ke pass khada tha uska gala dabate huve kamine kya bigada maine tera gf dhundta h wo muje pit ti h bahan banwayi wo toh aise dhoyengi ki idea bhi nahi h aur ab biwi dhundhi wo bhi khunkaar sach bata main tera apna he hu na gair toh nahi “

Raj dheere se “ wo bahut bahut achi h ….tuje unse achi ladki nahi milegi… tu ek din yaad karega muje ….bhabhi ke liye wo upar se sakht par dil se bahut naram h ….please muje wo he ladki meri bhabhi chahiye …”

Dadaji “ choti bahu pooja ki thali taiyar karo aur ap sahdev ki maa …khandani kangan lekar aye aur kaptaan aur jogindar ko video call lagao”

Raj manisha ke pass chala gaya ….sari ladkiya side ho gayi….

Raj “ muje nahi pata ki bhabhi ka rista kya hota h wo kaisi hoti h….par…apko dekha toh laga ki ap jaisi he hoti hongi ek dost ek bahan aur ek maa ki tarah care karne wali ,samjhne wali ,support karne wali ….dehradhun mai choti choti mulakaato ke baad …maine apko aur ache se jana aur apko apni bhabhi maanne laga…..aur apko he kyo mana kyoki….sunil ….aur main ek jaise h….dono dhukhi maine apne maa papa ko khoya toh uska is duniya mai koyi nahi tha aur usne kabhi khud ko dhukhi nahi hone diya par main uske dil ki halat janta tha.wo aj bhi sabke liye sab karta h par badle mai kisi se kuch nahi mangta h aur aisi he ap h sabka dhayan rakhti h aur badle mai koyi sikayat koyi deemand nahi karti h..aur usne mera har waqt sath nibhaya h maut ko bhi rasta badalne par majbur kar diya ….tabhi se soch liya tha ki uski jindgi mai usai lekar aunga ….jo usai mujse jayda pyar de uske dil ki baat ko samjhe..usai sambhale…uski care kare… jaise ye sabki karta h….aur is duniya mai meri bhabhi yani apke sivaye koyi nahi ho sakti h jo uski care kar sake…manta hu thoda ullu h…par wo bahut achah wo apko hamesha khus rakhega …..raj ne manisha ke hatho ko apne hath mai le liya….aur agai bola kya ap meri bhabhi …meri dost ….aur is nalayak ki patni bankar hamre sath rahengi…….

Manisha jo emotional ho chuki thi uski ankhe bhar ayii aur usne ek baar sunil ki taraf dekha jo ussi he dekh raha tha….phir haa mai gardan hila di ….raj ne turant manisha ko gale laga liya…” thankyou thank you soo much i love you bhabhi i love you ……

Manisha “ i love you too”

Sabhi ladkiyo ne raj ko alag kar diya aur khusi se manisha ko gher liya …..kaptan aur deepika ki maa bahut khus thi …..deepika ne bhi agai badh sunil ko gale laga liya uski ankho mai bhi khushi ke ansuu the….toh baki sab ne bhi bari bari manisha ko gale laga liya …



Shwets — he he he …ab toh sunil bhai ki pitayi he pitayi h…..

Sunil - choti chuhiya …..

Shweta - bakri fansi fatak mai ye kahwat toh suni thi..

Par ye toh bakra fans gaya he he he he he….

Kavita “ aur pitega wo alaga se

Dono jor jor se hasne lagi…

Sunil - rook tumhe mai batata hu …

kuch he waqt mai pooja ki thali lekar choti chachi ne arti utari aur dadi ne khandani kangan manisha ko pahnaya …….manisha ne sab bado ko paanv chuve…..sunil aur manisha ki jodi ki aarti utari gayi tab raj bhi emotional ho gaya ….

Richa “khushi ke ansuu nahi rokte h raj ….sunil ko wo sab mil Raha h jo tum muje batate the…..tumne usai har khushi di h tumne apna wada pura kiya raj aj uske pass ek pariwaar h jo usko koyi kami mahsus nahi hone dega“

Raj “par kuch wade adhure rah gaye”

Richa “wade kabhi adhure nahi hote h raj wade pure honge ….

Raj “ samay bit gaya richa …..”itna kah wo chala gaya

Richa “ muje nahi pata ki main tumhare layak ab hu ya nahi par main tumhe pane ke liye apni kismat khud likhungi ….aur bhagwan se bhi ladna pada tumhe pane ko toh ladungi……par apna wada puri karungi…..itna kah wo sunil ke pass chali gayi…

Raj dur se“ hum kabhi ek nahi ho sakte h richa kyoki main toh ek hawas ka bhukha hu …yahi kaha tha na tumne…..hum kabhi ek nahi ho sakte h….”

Poonam richa aur raj ko baat karta dekh koyi jayda dhayan nahi diya kyoki raj aur richa class mate the warna …usai pal bhar mai he sab samaj aajata…..poonam manisha ki khushi se behad khus thi ….kyoki dono bahane sab tikh raha toh jindgi bhar sath rahne wali thi….raj wanha se uthkar bahar agaya……kuch pal baad sherdil bhi agaya….

Sherdil “kya huva “

Raj kuch nahi “ mouka h jagah ho jaye do do hath….. main bhi dekhu ki kitna dum h”

Sherdil “ pahle inhe toh hara duu”

Tabhi piche se dono mityudoot bhi agaye jinki kalayi par divya ne rakhi bandhi huvi thi….aur pahli baar dono muskara rahe the ….tabhi unhe ek aur awaj sunayi diii…..

“ Bheema se jitkar dikhao toh manunga ki dum h “

Mityudoot “ toh suru kare”

Bheema “ haveli ke piche akhda h…wanha chalte h”

Sherdil “ sabki taraf dekh kar chalo intezar nahi ho raha h…. Deri kyo karni“

Aur sabhi haveli ke piche ki taraf chale gaye ajay jaldi se andar ki taraf bhaga ….aur hall mai ghooste he…chilaya “haveli ke piche fight suru hone wali h”

Divya “ toh ismai itni hairani wali kya baat h wanha toh pahalwan khusti karte he rahte h”

Ajay “ Raj bhai bheema chacha sherdil bhai aur wo do 7 feet ke the na wo ek dusre se ladne wale h”



Haveli ke piche “ koun ladega”

Bheema “ muje raj se ladna h ….”

Mityudoot muje bhi master se ladna h

Sherdil muje inse(mityudoot) ki taraf dekh kar inhe harana h

Mityudoot bache tum …galti mat karna warna main bilkul raham nahi dikhaynga …sherdil “ aur main bhi nahi dikhaunga”

Bheema mityudoot ki taraf dekh kar apna master samaj kar raham mat dikhana jitna pit sako utna pitna…

Raj “ sapna he rahega chacha”

Mityudoot “ maffi”

Andar

Sabhi us waqt kya…….sab ek sath khade ho gaye aur jaldi se haveli ke piche ki taraf bhage par sunil shanti se baitha raha ….par usai hairani tab huvi jab uski nazar manisha ki taraf wo sabse pahle gayab huvi thi ….

Sunil ne apne sir par hath maar liya aur haveli ke piche ki taraf chal diya…..aur khudse he bola …ye devar bhabhi kabhi sukun nahi ane denge meri jindgi mai shadi se pahle he ye haal h toh baad mai kya hoga….

Shweta dadaji jaldi chaliye na fight miss ho jayegi….

Dadaji “ are chal toh raha hu …aur unki ladai intni jaldi khatam nahi hogi

Shweta muje dekhni h…please jaldi chaliye ….choti chachi ajay jhanvi….mamta ye charo sabse jayda excited the fight dekhne ke liye ….

Akhade mai…..

Bheema ne deri kiye bina right kick ke sath attack kiya ….raj ne right hand se kick block kardi tabhi mityudoot ne ek punch raj ke chest par jad diya jisai raj piche udta huva jaakar gira….aur ek jhatke se wapas khada ho gaya par khade hote he usai dikhi bheema ki tezi se aati kick jisai usne jaldi se jhuk kar dodge kiya aur jhukne ke sath he ek kick dusre pair par maar di …par usi waqt mityudoot ne kick raj ke kandhe par maar di raj kayi feet dur fislata huva piche jaakar ruka…….

Mityudoot ne bheema ko uthaya dono ke chehre par muskaan thi

Bheema “aj bahut pitenge tuje”

toh wanhi 2 saand apas mai bhide huve the sherdil mai jawani ka josh aur taakat thi toh dusre mityudoot mai taakat,experience aur skill thi wo sherdil ke waar se lagataar bach raha tha aur joints par attack kar raha tha ….par tabhi mityudoot ko ek waar sherdil ka pada jisai mitydoot dur jaakar piche gira ….dono ne ek dusre ko dekha aur dubara se ek dusre ki taraf bhage aur bhid gaye ….koyi bhi 6 feet se niche ki hight ka nahi tha …aisa lag raha tha jaise kayi monsters ek dusre se bhid gaye ho…

Haveli se sab log wanaha…pahuch gaye ….janha akhade ka seen dekh sab hairan ho gaye …ek taraf sherdil lagataar waar kiye ja raha tha toh….ek taraf raj par mityudoot aur bheema paglo ki tarah attack par attack kiye ja rahe the….

Shiwani dheere se “ kya lagta h dii jiju jitenge ya apke sasur”

Sonali “ sir par chapat lagate huve …raj ki skill jabardast h par bheema chacha ki power bhi bahut h unhe khud raj ke papa ne fight sikhayi h aur unke sath wo shakhs bhi pura skilled lag raha h toh raj abhi muskill mai h….”

Deepika “ bhabhi afcourse bhai he jitenge dekh lena ha wo alag baat h ki ap 2 raato se apke sath h toh energy kam …”

Tabhi sonali ne uske kaan pakad liye … “ tu shiwani ke sath mat raha kar ye khud toh bigad rahi sath he apni sangat tujmai daal rahi h lagta h teri shadi karwa i padegi”

Shiwani “ wah khud karo toh pyar aur hum sirf baat he kare toh gunehgaar”

Deepika sonali dono hasne lagi….andar…bheema ne raj ko pakda toh mityudoot ne phir uchalkar raj ki chest par kick jad di….

Raj man mai “ hmm ek block aur dusra attack karta h matlb ek muje bhatkata h toh dusra satik waar karta h… trick toh shandar apnayi h”

Abki baar raj ne bhi dono ko suprise kiya …bheema ke waar ko block karne ki bajaye usai avoid karta huva sidha mityudoot ke pass pahuch gaya …mityudoot ne bhi hath se waar kiya ..raj ne bhi usai dodge kiya aur kamar se pakadkar upar uthakar puri taakat se dur fenk diya …aur turant bheema chacha ki taraf palat gaya…aur apna punch unki taraf chala diya ….bheema ne bina deri ke apna punch raj ke punch ke samne chala diya ….dono ke punch apas mai takraye dono he kayi kadam piche hat gaye tabtak mityudoot dubara uthkar bheema ke pass agaya…



Mamta “ bhai toh jabardast fight karte h…

Rifat “ bilkul mumbayi mai toh sabko bahut buri tarah mara tha…

Richa “ are wo chodo car ki entry tum dono ne nahi dekhi bilkul hero ki tarah hume bachane pahucha tha….kya lag raha tha us waqt mera hero car ki drifting bilkul filmi style mai ”

Mamta “ phir se sapne dekhne lagi “

Richa “nnnn nahi toh”

Rifat mamta hasnte huve he he he dikh raha h….



Akhade mai ….sherdil “kaisa laga dard huva” itna kah usne dubara se waar kiya par usi waqt mityudoot ne furti se bhagkar jump ke sath ghutne ki seene par de maari jisai …sherdilll kayi feet dur jaakar gira …..mityudoot jaldi se pass pahucha aur uthakar…gol ghumakar niche patak diya …..

Mityudoot “ experience bache …”

Sherdil bhi jhatke se khada huva aur ek sath power ikhatti karke kayi sare punch mityudoot ko mara diye mityudoot bhi achanak itne powerfull hamle ke liye taiyar nahi tha 2 ,3 punch muu par lage phir usne piche hat te huve block karliye…aur phir sherdil par tezi se waar kar diye ab uski speed bahut tez ho gayi aur sherdil uske koyi waar ko match nahi kar paa raha tha…wo dur jaakar gira…aur muu se khun thuk diya…

Sherdil ki maa ki ankho mai gusai ki jhalak dikhi toh…Deepika kavita mamta rifat shweta ne khun dekha toh wo chintit ho gayi aur sherdil ke pass jane lagi toh divya ne sabko rok diya…..

Sherdil — ok ok ap jeete..par agli baar main jeetunga

Mityudoot “ main bachpan se he mout se lad raha hu …tumhare pita se bhi lad chuka hu….aur abhi tummai unki taakat ka 50 partisat he h….tumhe abhi bahut mehnat karni hogi …agai yakinun tum muje hara doge”

Sherdil ne ha mai gardan hila di aur phir wo raj ki taraf dekhne laga ….janha mityudoot aur bheema ke hotho se khun nikal raha tha toh raj bhi mitti se sana huva tha …dono raj ki fighting skill jante the….isliye muqabla kada ho raha tha ….

Raj ne agai badh bheema chacha par jump ke sath lagataar 2 kick mari aur phir unka advantage lete huve piche mityudoot ki taraf bhaga par mityudoot ne raj ke arahe hath ke waar ko block kiya aur kohni se muu par mari aur raj ko uparutha liya raj action leta tabhi bheema ne jump ke sath he raj ko mityudoot ke hathmai pakde huve he kick mari raj kayi foot dur jaakar gira ….aur apna pait pakad jhuk gaya…..

Akhade se bahar bhi ek jung chal rahi thi jo nazro ki thi aur wo thi….manisha aur sunil ki….janha sunil aram se …. shiwani anjana ke pass baitha h “ acha h pito aur maro hamesaha muje pitwaata h meri shadi karwayega,muje dhokha dega …aj maza araha isai maar khata dekh kar are left se ha pith par ….ha jor se aur taakat se….are wanha nahi ghutno par maro…kaas popcorn aur hote toh show dekhne mai maza ajata aur achanak usai bahut dar feel huva aur jab usne idhar udhar dekha toh manisha ki gusai se bhari ankhe usai dikhi jo usai he dekh rahi thi ….aur kah rahi thi jao madad karo …sunil ki halat patli ho gayi wo dheere se bola ….hey bhagwan ab ismai kounsi devi agayi….ohh …inka bhabhi wala charecter jaag gaya…..aur bhabhi

charecter maa ki tarah protective hota h….sunil ko dar toh lag raha tha phir usai khud ki pitati yaad agayi isliye wo khudse bola …bilkul nahi help karunga usna manisha ki taraf hickichate huve na mai gardan hila di…bus manisha gusai se kaanpne lagi ….sunil…dheere se shiwani ke pass is tarah ho gaya ki bata raho mere pass police ka support h muje nahi lagta h dar……

Jagmaal singh— Bheema aur mityudoot dono bahut takastwar h aur sab sahdev ke sath lade huve h ….unka gyan …aur anubhav itna h ki raj dono ko ek sath harana muskill h….

Anirudh — ha thakur saab maine dekha h dono ko ladte huve sahdev bhai ke sath ye dono khunkhar aur bahut behraham h ….

Divya “ mera beta dono par bhari padega…..



Raj “ khudse practice achi ho rahi h koyi aur move jo maine ap tak practice nahi kiya bacha nahi h….toh strenghth ke sath attack kar du…..abhi nahi …thoda aur inki skill dekh lu…”

Raj ne dubara dono ke kandho par kohni se waar ka try kiya aur apni speed se thoda dheere maar bhi diya jissai dono ko thoda dard toh huva par dono ne ek sath raj ko piche ki taraf tezi se dhakka de diya …raj 2 palti khakar ruka aur ab uske chehre par kutil muskaan agayi par agai action leta tabhi usai uske samne ….poni tale mai choti bandhe ladki ki pith dikhayi di…



Aur yahi haal bahar baithe sabka tha ….

Dadaji …..divya…..anirudh hairan the toh bheema bhi hairan tha par mityudoot ke chahre par badi si muskaan thi….

Mityudoot “ akhade …mai apka koyi kaam nahi h”

Manisha “ wo mere teacher h ….toh ek ke samne 2 kaise ho sakte h aur mere teacher bhi risto ke karan he haar rahe h ….par…ladki samajkar halke mai mat lena muje….main koyi raham nahi karungi…

Jagmaal singh — ye kya ….h unhone turant piche ki taraf dekha ……

Sonali “ wo raj ki student bhi h aur bhabhi bhi toh dono he rishte se wo raj ko harte kaise dekhegi”

Divya shock mai thi toh sunil bechareapne baal noch raha tha aur deepika shiwani uski haslat par muskara rahi thi….

Anirudh “ manisha beti ko ladna ata h”

Sonali “ uncle wo black belt fighter h aur raj se laghbhag 2 saal se training le rahi h toh kya lagta h”

Deepika “sunil tu toh pitaga”



Andar raj “ nahi apko andar nahi ana chahiye tha phir sochksr ..tikh h ….ap inse lad chuki ho inse jeetni dair ladogi apki skills fast hongi maine jo moves bataye h wo use kijiyea par ye bhi koyi raham nahi dikhayenge …phir bheema chacha ki taraf muskarakar ….bahut khel ho gaya chacha…bheema bhi muskara kar agai badha…toh…raj ne bina deri kiye lagatar tezi se waar karne suru kar diye bheema ek ko rokte toh dusra padta ….bheema ne bhi raj ko pakdliya aur waar khate huve raj ko uthakar niche patak diya par raj lagataar waar karta raha bheema ne gale se pakadkar raj ko upar uthaya toh raj ne laat ko bheema chach ke muu par de mara bheema chacha piche khiske toh raj ne ghutno ki tezii se chest par de mari bheema chacha piche udte huve gire raj bhi jaldi se pass pahucha aur waar karne laga toh bheema ne dubara ussi jakad liya aur uthakar puri taakat se dur fenk diya …abki baar raj ko jor se dard huva …



Bheema “ jaldi usai harao hume ye ladati jeetni h kisi bhi haal mai …ladati mai koyi raham nahi“

Mityudoot tezi se waar kar raha tha par manisha dodge karte huve kabhi ghutno mai toh kabhi pait par waar kar rahi thi wo mityudoot se 1.5 feet choti thi jiska ussi fayda mil raha tha aur raj ki movement skill ki wajah se uski speed movement aur reaction ki tez ho gayi thi i isliye wo tezi se attack kar rahi thi par ye aisa he tha jaise hathi ke upar ek chote sher ne attack kiya ho ….manisha ke war se mityudoot ko dard toh ho raha tha…par kuch khass nahi ….tabhi mityudoot ne ek hath se pakadkar manisha ko dur fenk diya jisai manisha ko tez dard huva par wo jaldi se khadi ho gayi ….

Mityudoot “ haar manlo warna bahut dard hoga “

Manisha “ muskarane lagi “

Mityudoot lagatar waar karne laga jisai manisha dodge karti toh kuch bahut tezi se usai lagte …

Jagmaal singh “wah maza agaya ….kya ladki h…nidar tez diler…..bhai muje toh ab ye sunil ki liye chahiye he chahiye ….”

Divya - wakayi papa ye toh bahut tez h isliye he toh raj ne isai pasand kiya mere bete ki choice laa jawab h…



Mityudoot “ tumhari speed tez ho gayi h par muje hara nahi sakti ho”

Manisha “ muje toh bus apko rokna tha wo dekhiye “

Aur jaise he mirtydoot ne piche dekha manisha turant tezi se upar ki taraf khudi aur apni kohni ki mityudoot ke kandhe par de mari ….aur mityudoot samaj pata manisha ne piche akar ghutno ke piche puri takat se kick maari…

Idhar raj ne bhi bheema chacha ko uthakar mitti mai patak diya aur punch unke muu par rakh diya….

Raj “ haar gaye ….”

Bheema “ bahu ka sahara liya “

Raj “ really chacha apko aisa lagta h”

Bheema tikh h yaar par ye bahu ko bhi fight aati h“

Raj “ ye mera wo hahiyaar h jo us waqt kaam ayega jab hum sab alag uljhe huve honge aur ye pariwaar ki rakhsa karengi … ha thodi emotional h gusa jaldi ata h bus ye ek kami h”

Bheema “ wo tumhe bahut chahti h isliye us saand se bhi bhid gayi”

Raj “ akhir kounsi bhabhi apne devar ko kuch hone degi”

Phir raj ne manisha ki taraf dekha janha mityudoot ne manisha ke dono hath pakad liye the ….

Raj chillakar “jump kick ”

Manisha “ ne turant jum karke mityudoot ke jabde par kick maarke khud ko free kara liya aur jab mityu doot ne piche moodkar dekha toh fight khatam ho gayi thi wo gusai se bheema ko dekhne laga jabki bheema uski taraf dekh kar bola “ aise mat dekh main ghar ki bahu se nahi pita hu”…

Mityudoot “ waham mai mat rahna ladke dekhle …jab maar khayega tab samaj ajayega….”



Manisha turant raj ke pass agayi aur usko check karne lagi ….

Raj - apki skill improve ho gayi h….

Chatakkkkk ….

Raj hhhhhh….

Manishsa…ne uske kapde saaf karne jari rakhe aur phir apni chunni se uske chehre ko saaf kiya ….

Sunil “ ha ha ha aur karle bhabhi bhabhi “

Raj “ manisha ko badi badi ankhe fade aur gaal par hath rakhe dekhta rah gaya”

Manisha “ jab jaldi hara sakte the …toh pitne ki jarurat thi”

Raj “ pahle wajah puchti sahi nahi lagti tab marti toh samaj ata rakh diya raipta …koun si bhabhi marti h….main toh khud ki aur unki skill ki kami dekh raha tha taaki dur saku”

Mainsha gaal par hath firakar “ toh bolna chahiye tha na…chalo gande ho gaye ho chalkar naha lo”…



Poonam shweta kavita se “ raj ke liye manisha ka pyar agai is hadh tak badh jayega ki kisi ne raj ka bura socha toh beshakh wo raj ke liye usai marne mai bhi hichkichayegi nahi …..wo raj ke liye bahut jayda possesive hoti jayegi ab”

Wanhi akhade se bahar aakar sunil aur manisha ki ankhe mili toh manisha ne apni gardan jhatak dii….

Sonali sunil se “ waise kuch bhi ho raj ne tumhare layak ladki dhundhi h”

Sunil hairani se ankhe fade sonali ko dekhta rah gaya …tabhi piche se shweta ne usai pakad liya….kya huva ….mere sweet se bhai ko…..

Sunil “ hone kya h yaar ghar par sab ki sab dhol ki tarah bajati h…

Shweta gaal ko chumkaar tuu sab ka ladla h na meri jaan…

Sunil - ha wanha island par teri moujh ho rahi h na ….sahi h …sahi h…

Shweta — ilove u muje pata h ….tune he sab arrange kiya isliye ummmahhh ummmahhha ummmahhha …

Sunil - pura chehra gila kar diya chal ab



haveli mai ek hour baad…

Jagmaal singh ke room mai —

“ Beti tumhare chacha..Ka kya naam h”

Poonam “dadaji ranveer singh”

Jagmaal singh ne ek gahri saans li aur khade hokar book shelf ke piche se album nikala aur poonam ko dikhaya…” kya yahi tumhare pita h“

Poonam ne jab us group photo ko dekha toh hakki bakki rah gayi uski nazar ek baar album par toh ek baar uski nazar jagmaal singh par jati apni maa papa ki photo dekh uski ankhe bhig gayi…

Jagmaal singh “ Na beti na bilkul rona nahi h….kya isliye maine tumhe photo dikhayi “

Par poonam apni bhavnao ko rok nahi payi….hamesha muskarane wali ladki ka chehra ansuao se bhig gaya …

Jagmaal singh- Acha kya janna nahi chahogi ye photo mai koun h tumhare mummy papa ki godh mai ….

Poonam ne dadaji ki taraf se dekha aur ha mai gardan hila di….

Jagmaal singh “Ye raj h “

Poonam ki bhighi ansu hairani si fail gayi uske chehre par hazaro sawaliya nishan the ….jo jagmaal singh ne padh liye….

Jagmaal singh “ tumhare pita aur raj ke pita jigri yaar the …manlo ek jisam do jaan…

Poonam ye baat jaankar hairan rah gayiii…wo ab jagmaal singh ki taraf utsukta se dekhne lagi….

Jagmaal singh — tumhara naam maine he rakha h….poonam…jo andheri raat mai bhi apne ujale se dilo ke andhere ko dur kar deti h ….aur ye dekho ye tum teeno ho aur tumne raj ki ungli bhi kaskar pakdi huvi h jisai dekhkar sab hasne lage the ki ladki ne paida hote he ladka pasand karliya…

Poonam ke chehre par muskurahat aagayi aur wodhayan se photo ko dekhne lagi ….boli mai ek photo le lu dadaji please …

Jagmaal “ kyo nahi …ye kahte waqt dhayan se poonam ko dekhne lage”

Poonam - ye koun h dadaji

Jagmaal singh - ye richa h aur ye jo tumhe jhula jhula rahi h na…ye sonali beti…h

Poonam sonali…

Jagmaal - ha jisai tum abhi mili ho…

Poonam toh hairan pareshan ho rakhi thi usai aj jitna bada shock kabhi nahi laga tha ..

Poonam aur batayiye na dadaji muje aur janna h

Jagmaal singh - ye sonali ke birthday ki photo h …sahdev aur sonali ke papa sath milkar gunehgaaro ko khatam karte the …aur anirudh ke pariwar ko sahdev ne bachaya toh dheere dheere teeno mai dosti badhti gayi …tumhre chacha ka delhi kaam padta rahta tha isliye anirudh se unki bhi dosti ho gayi …isliye sabhi yanha sonali ke birthday par ikhatta huve the …jab tum teeno ko palne mai letaya tab sonali tum teeno ko dekh kar bahut khus huvi aur wo bari bari tumhe jhula dene lagi aur kahne lagi mumma kya mai sabhi ko apne pass rakhlu aur bus usi yaad ko yaadgar banane ke liye capture kar liya …….

Poonam “ par chacha ji ne toh kabhi bataya he nahi “

Jagmaal singh “ beti bahut se raj h jo tumhe nahi pata h abhi …….aur main abhi tumhe bata bhi nahi sakta hu …aur dekho itne salo baad aj phir tum charo ek sath ho …tumhari kismat mai ek dusre ka sath likha huva h “

Poonam ke dil mai ek sawal bahut dair se uth raha tha aur usai usne puch he liya“ kya mere mata pita accident mai mare gaye the “

Jagmaal singh “ tikh h jawab dunga par vachan do agai sawal nahi karogi”

Poonam “wada mai nahi puchungi”

Jagmaal singh “ tumhari maa ki maut goli lagne se huvi thi….jisai accident dikhaya gaya tha….aur tumhare pita ki maut huvi h ya nahi ye aj bhi paheli h wo akhiri baar mujse milne ke baad sahdev se he milne gaya tha aur phir sab bikhar gaya …..kyo huva kisne kiya isi paheli ka jawab raj dhundh raha h……par tum kabhi bhi raj ko kuch nahi bataogi …usai khud sab sawalo ka jawab dhundhne do ….muje yakin h wo atit ke har khoye panne ko dhundh nikal lega ……aur ravindar ke sath kya huva uska bhi jawab mil jayega “

Poonam “ kya unki jindgi hamesha itni muskil bhari rahegi…”

Dadaji “ haa beti …par tum sab ho na uske sath ……jaise tumhare pita na hamesha uske pita ka sath nibhaya muje yakin h tum bhi uska sath nibhaogi”

Poonam ne ha mai gardan hila di…

Dadaji “ tumhari rashi kanya h “

Poonam “ jii kya huva dadaji “

Dadaji “Kuch nahi bus uske sath rahna ….”

Poonam “ kosis karungi dadaji”

Jagmaal singh “ khus raho meri bachi tum chaho toh ye album le ja sakti ho dekhkar de dena par bahar kisi ko samaj gayi na ..

Poonam “ thank you dadaji …aur gale lag gayi “

Jagmaal “ Thank you kahti h ranveer ne yahi sikhaya h… “

Phir kafi dair aur poonam se baate karte rahe aur jab room se bahar ayi toh Poonam ka dil dhukhi bhi tha aur khus bhi kyoki usai pata lag gaya tha ki uska sath raj ke sath bachpan ka h…par dhukhi wo isliye thi ki uske maa papa ki maut kyo huvi ya uske pita jinda h usai kuch nahi pata tha…..wo jaise he bahar nikli usai sonali sofe par phone par baat karti huvi dikhayi di….uske chahre par pyari si muskaan agayi….usne khud ko waisa he imagine kiya aur mahsus kiya ki sonali usai palne mai muskil se hilti huvi khila rahi h…..sonali ki nazar bhi poonam ki taraf gayi usne dhayan se poonam ko dekha …poonam bina kuch kahe raj ka room jo abhi uska tha wanha agayi …….

Raj ….kavita mamta …rifat …jhanvi …ek he room mai baithe gappe maar rahe the …

Tabhi …

Choti chachi — Raj apko mandir jana h wanha pahuchne mai samay lagega isliye ap taiyar hokar niche ayiye dadaji apka intezar kar rahe h…



Raj “ Ji chachi aj hum khet wale ghar mai rukenge toh wanha kisi ko kahkar saaf safayi karwa dijiyega“

Choti chachi …muskrakar “kiske sath rukenge ap wanha”

Raj “ nahi nahi ….hum sab honge ….”

Choti chachi “ toh humne toh kuch galat socha he nahi sirf sawal pucha sur muskrate huve wapas chali gayi”phir wanha se richa ke pass “ yanha room mai baithne se wo tumhara nahi hoga ….”

Richa “main “

Choti chachi - shadi ho bhi gayi beti toh bhi wo pyar nahi milega aur sikayate …bate karne se he dur hoti h…wo upar se sakht andar se naram h chalo ..tumhe uske sath mandir ke liye jana h….aur richa ke gaal ko sahla kar chali gayi”



Sonali ne poonam ko taiyar hokar niche aate dekha toh dhayan se dekhne lagi aur poonam ki nazar bhi ….brabar sonali par he thi janha poonam ke dil mai pyar aur izzat thi toh sonali ke dil mai dhero sawal isliye usne pass ate he puch liya .





Sonali “ baitho ….tum muje dekhti kyo rahti ho”

Poonam “ nahi dekhne ki ek wajah bata do ap…ACP ho stylish ho …..hight physic sab perfect h ..toh kyo nahi dekhu”

Sonali “ tum sidha jawab nahi de sakti ho”

Poonam “ yahi sawal mera h ap sidha sawal jo man mai h wo kyo nahi puchti ho”

Sonali ko irritation hone lagi aur usne ankhe band karke khud ko shant kiya …samne baithi poonam pyari muskaan ke sath sonali ko dekhti rahi …

Sonali “ Raj ko pasand karti ho”

Poonam “ wo ache insaan h …toh kyo pasand nahi karungi “

Sonali phir irritate hone lagi par ghar thi toh gusa daba kar rakha.. “ mera matlb h kya tum usai pyar karti ho”

Poonam “ap aur mai sunil ko rakhi bandh kar bahan ban gayi h aur is naate main apki choti bahan huvi isliye jo apko pasand h wo muje bhi pasand hona chahiye na toh ha pyar toh h…”

Sonali ko ab gusa ane laga sur poonam ko sonali ki jhunjhulat par pyar araha tha..

Sonali “ fine toh tum sidha jawab nahi dogi tikh h…muje bhi kuch nahi puchna h tumse “

Par poonam kanha chodne wali thi…” apko dar h ki main raj ko chin na lun”

Sonali “ tumm “

Poonam “ bahan choti bahan …”

Sonali gusai se dant pisti rah gayi….

Tabhi jagmaal singh “apko pata h na ki hume mandir jana h phir ap aise baithi huvi h taiyaar kyo nahi huvi”

Sonali “ wo dadaji main”

Jagmaal singh “jao jaldi se taiyaar hokar ao dekho poonam beti taiyar h…”

Sonali ne poonam ko dekha toh poonam apni pyari si muskaan se sonali ko dekh he rahi thi…..

Kuch dair mai ….richa bhi agayiii….

Richa “ Dadaji hum kool devi ke mandir ja rahe h….

Dadaji- ha main bahar hu tum sab jaldi se ajao…

Raj niche aya tab

Sunil raj ko dekhkar muskarane laga….

Raj tuje kya huva

Sunil “ Dekh raha hu hone wali biwi meri tujse pyar karti h….bahane meri tujhe pasand karti h….aur …teri wajah se pitayi meri hoti h….toh is heesab se tu mera rahu aur ketu dono h samjha…..”

Raj “ gusa kyo hota h”tabhi richa aur poonam dono ek sath gate ke pass se piche moodkar raj ko dekha

Sunil “ ye le dono tuje he dekh rahi h aur ha dono ko koyi pareshani nahi honi chahiye samjha ….”

Raj “ sale bahan kya mili palat gaya “

Poonam dur se chillakar “ bhai ap bhi chalo hamare sath “

Sunil “ rahno do main gaya toh khawama kha ye pit jayega…iski wajah se tumhari bhabhi jo huvi bhi nahi h abhi tak wo pahle he bhadki huvi h…ab agar isai hath lagaya toh shadi se pahle he divorce ho jayega aur baki sab bhi meri he galti manege”

Richa “ ohh….hum h na hum mana lenge unhe hamare rahte apko bilkul chinta karne ki jarurat nahi h “

Sunil “ tum jao ye tumhare liye i mean is beshram ke liye h…phir dheere se aur tu ud mat jayda upar dekh mera brahmastra araha h….beta chain se tuje bhi jeene nahi dunga main….

Raj ne upar dekha toh sonali printed …cream colur ke suit mai Arahi thi raj ka toh muu khula ka khula rah gaya….

Sunil “muu band kar kamine bahan h meri aur khabar daar jo galat socha …bahut pitunga”…

Raj hairani se muje pitega …

Sunil shadi ke baad jo karna ho wo karna par ab nahi samjha dafa ho ja ab …taaki mera rahu ketu ki dasha tikh ho ..



Sonali poonam ko dekhte huve jaan bhujkar raj ke pass gayi aur uska hath pakadkar bahar ane lagi …..poonam ke chehre par muskurahat aa gayii …

Richa halat se majbur thi is liye wo na kah sakti thi na dikha sakti thi apni feelings isliye wo ….bus jo ho raha tha hone de rahi thi…..

Raj ke dono taraf teeno ladkiya bala ki khubsoorat lag rahi thi piche ….

Sunil “ mere bhai richa ab meri bahan h aur muje pata h wo badal gayi h….par tu bhi jisai dur kar deta h usai dur kar he deta h…..na main uski side le sakta hu na teri…hey ishwar ….raj richa ko kabhi bhula he nahi isliye richa ko kabhi usai dur mat karna…..tabhi uski nazar dusri manzil par gayi janha manisha khadi usai hath jod upar wale se duwa mangte dekh rahi thi”usne apne dono kaan pakad maafi mangi toh manisha ne gadan jhatak di aur wapas room mai chali gayii….

Sunil muu liye khada rah gaya…





Bahar dadaji ne poonam aur sonali ko apne sath chetak mai baitha liya jabki raj aur richa piche wali dusri car mai baith gaye …..

Raj richa ke sath uncomfortable mahsus kar raha tha…..aur kuch bhi nahi bola ….

Car jaise he gaanv se 10 km dur nikli …jhadiyo se ek admi ne phone nikala aur call laga diya sur jab smne se hello ki awaj ayi tab wo bola “ Thakur saab 2 gadiya nikli h….chote udaipur ke raste par “

Thakur “ kya ….bahut bhadiya agai ke admiyo ko phone laga aur unhe bolna muje phone karte rahe muje har jankari chahiye h “

Admi ji thakur saab….

Call cut hote he “ thakur jagmaal tume mere bete ko mara….uska baap abhi jinda h harendra aur hari tumhari kasam tumhara baap aj Jagmaal singh ke khun se nahakar tumhari atma ko shanti dega….itna kah usne apne sabhi admiyo ko ikhatta karna suru kar diya …



In car …

Richa “ kya mere baithne se tumhe pareshani ho rahi h toh mai utar jati hu”

Raj “ nahi “

Richa “ muje nahi pata tum kya sochte ho …par raj main bhi 16 saal ki he thi….us waqt…jo dikhaya wo dekha maine “

Raj “ ab koyi baat nahi us bare mai”

Richa “ raj ki taraf ghumkar par muje bolna h aur tumhe sunna hoga …….”

Raj ne kuch nahi kaha ….

Richa “ mana mai thi paiso ki ghamandi….bewakoof par pyar tumhe he kiya….aur tum…toh samajdaar the ..sab pata tha sabki madad karte the….kyo nahi bataya sach tumne ….”

Raj gusai se “ tum sunti mera sach”

Richa “ nahi sunti jabardasti batate nahi sunti toh ek thapad mar dete akal ajati …un logo ki asliyat bata dete toh ….aj jo meri halat h wo toh kam se nahi hoti …..sirf ladti he na tumse par tum toh power full the na kya kar pati main tumhara…par aj aise tumhare bina ghoot ghoot kar toh nahi jeeti main….”

Raj bus richa ki baat sunta raha ….

Richa “ kaise kaise main tumhe kisi sur ke sath dekh pati batao jab sabne bola ki ao tumhe raj ka sach dikhate h main sach dekhna chahti thi aur jo dikha wo maine apni ankho se dekha ….agar yahi sab tumhare samne mai karti toh…“

Tadak ….ek jordar jhapad richa ko pada ….

Richa rote huve “ bus yahi thapada us waqt kyo nahi mara ……us samay kyo nahi jataya ye hak ….

Us waqt kyo nahi dikhaya ye gusaa….phir ansuu punchkar muskarate huve …tum jhut bolte ho ki tum mujhe pyar nahi karte ho…muje bhul gaye ho….par sach ye tum abhi bhi muje pyar karte ho ….main tumhare layak hu main ye sabit karungi…..itna yaad rakhna sari galti meri he nahi thi….jindgi bhar sath nibhane ka wada tumne bhi kiya tha toh mere kahne bhar se he chod doge muje …chale jaoge mujse dur…….phir gahri saans lekar …main is janam toh tumse ab dur nahi jaungi …tum jitna dur jaoge main pass aungi …tum avoid karoge main sahungi….tum maroge toh bhi sahungi par dard ya sikayat ki uff tak nahi karungi….tumhe …koyi aur bhi pasand ayi toh bhi kuch nahi kahungi par tumhe pyar karti hu aur karti rahungi ye hak tum mujse chin nahi sakte ho………

Richa rote huve ja rahi thi aur apni feelings bataye ja rahi thi…..aur raj pathar ki tarah bina kisi expression ke samne raste ko dekh raha tha……..

Aur richa bus usai ….

Toh car mai jagmaal singh…..

Jagmaal singh “ lagta h sonali bitiya aj pareshan h…

Sonali nahi toh

Poonam “ Lag to yahi raha h dadaji chehre h ….lagta h kisi ne subhe subhe gusa dila diya h”

Sonali ne piche moodkar poonam ko dekha….

Jagmaal “ muje lagta h dono bahno ki abhi tak tikh se mulakaat huvi nahi h

Poonam “ Nahi dadaji Di bahut achi h…bus inhe pyar jatana nahi ata h…thodi gusail h…par dil ki bahut achi h..

Dadaji tumhe itni jaldi kaise pata laga

Poonam “ wo raat ko”

Sonali jaldi se “ raat ko khana khilate waqt humari mulakaat huvi thi itna kah usne poonam ko ghookar dekha”

Jagmaal “ par raat ko toh maine kisi aur ko bhi sath dekha tha “

Sonali aur poonam dono chonk pade aur ek dusre ko dekhne lage …..

Dadaji “ ha …manisha ko bhi dekha tha …galary mai ”

Poonam aur sonali ki jaan mai jaan ayi….

Sonali hum kanha ja rahe h dadaji…

Dadaji “ hum raj ki lambhi umar ki duwa ke liye ja rahe h….”

Sonali “uski umar waise he bahut lambi h dadaji kam se kam 100 saal jiyega

Dadaji aahh bharkar “ Beti kisiki jindgi mai kya ho jaye yanha baithe sab samjhte h tumne sabne apno ko khoya h …. aur is bachi ne toh bachpan mai he sab kho diya …tumhare bheema chacha …dekhlo aur main toh hu he….

Bheema “ ap aisi baate mat kiya kijiye ….main apka beta nahi hu kya maine koyi kami chodi h beta banne mai aur apko aur bada pariwar chahiye toh raj ki kayi shadiya kara dijiye aur unse khubsare pota potiya mil jayenge apko”

Bheema ki baat soon janha sonali chup toh poonam sharma gayi…

Dadaji “ are tum sab he toh pariwar ho … lo 2 ghante kaise nikle pata he nahi aur hum pahuch bhi gaye”



Toh udhar pura gadiyo ka kafila ek ke baad ek chote udaipur ki taraf araha tha… “ ek kaam kar wanha ke pardhan ko bhi bol de …ab barso purani dhusmani khatm karne ka waqt agaya h ..Yaa to wo aj marega ya main marunga …par is baar aar paar ki jung hogi……jis mandir par tune mere pita ko mara wanhi tujhe marunga jagmaal ….



Wanhi mandir ki jagah dekh poonam khus ho gayi ……aur dadajiko dekhne lagi….

Wanhi raj “ i m sorry”

Richa kis liye thapad ke liye ….pyar se na sahi gusai se he sahi tumne hak toh jataya itna kah usne apne baal tikh kiye taki raj ka thapad na dikhe aur halka sa face par touch up kar liya

Raj usai dekhta rah gaya ….

Richa ne uska hath pakda aur agai dadaji ki taraf chalne lagi sonali bina kisi expression ke richa ko dekhne lagi…..

Jagmaal singh - bheemaaaaa….

Bhema “ samaj gaya….”

Raj koyi baat h….dadaji…

Jagmaal singh - ap teeno jaye aur pandit ji jaisa kanhe ap charo ko karna h hume kayi sawal nahi chahiye …khaskar sona beti ap aur raj…

Dono ek sath jii dadaji ….

Teeno paidal he pahadi ki adhi unchayi jo car se puri karli thi baaki unhe paidal he puri karni thi aur jab wo upar pahuche toh..

Poonam “ wao kya jagah h kitni shanti h…sonali di apke liye achi h”

Sonali “ tumm”

Poonam “ choti bahan par gusa karti ho ap toh….gusail didi”

Sonali dant pisti rah gayi aur richa aur poonam muskarne lagi ….

Mandir ke andar pahuche toh pura mandir saza huva tha aur samne bada sa hawankund tha ….aur uske pass baithe huve the lambhi dhadi aur dhoti pahne huve pandit ji….

Panditji “ Ao bacho…ao…main toh kabse tumhara intezar kar raha tha…. Bahut der kardi ane mai…aur tum beta raj….bachpan mai dekha tha…ab bahut bade ho gaye ho…. Ao baitho …aur tum teeno ….raj ki dhanyi taraf baithna …”

Baki kisi ko toh nahi par poonam ko bakhubhi pata tha ki dhanyi taraf baithne ka kya matlb hota h aur usai hairani tab huvi jab ..pandit ji uske chehre ko dekh muskura rahe the ….aur wo tab hairan rah gayi jab pandit ji bole “ tumhari manokamna jarur puri hogi yahi tumhari niyati h….par jimai dariya bhi bahut hongi”



apsabke pyar aur sath ke liye dhanyawad….agla update ek dhamkedar action packed hoga….ek naye raaz ke sath………..

Fantastic, mind blowing update Bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

But Bhai dada ji to story ki aatma hai ...aatma hi nhi rahegi to story.???.....haa ghayal kerwa do dada ji ko buri tarah se ,haa itna hi ghayal karwaiye jisse wo(dada ji ) Bach jaaye .......but death na ho. Kyuki abhi to unko ( dada ji) ko apne dost ( raj ke Nana ji) se bhi to milna hai .......
Aur us gaddar se bhi badla lena hai. Jisne ye sab khel khela hai unki family ke sath .....Haa dada ji ko story ke ending me maar sakte hai but abhi katai nahi .......

Aur Bhai Raj ka death halo ne sab kuch to cheen liya hai abhi uske dost ( ajju , Shruti ) Puri tarah se recover nhi huye hai.....aur usne (death halo) Poonam ko bhi Marne ki kosis ,aur to aur death halo ne sonali ,Sunil ajju , Shruti aur Shivani sabko ko Marne ki kosis ki thi , kya itna kaafi nhi hai uski ( death halo) dardnaak maut ke liye ,,,
jo abhi dada ji ko marega nhi Aisa nhi hona chahiye dada ji is story ki aatma hai agar aatma hi nhi rahegi to story kis kaam ki kyuki dada ji hi raj ka aage ka margdarshan karenge ,raj ko aage ka rashtra btayenge

Yudh mai khona aur pana dono h ...main aisa he writer hu ellysperry bronuksaan dono taraf hoga aur bawal hoga ....agai story itni touchi hogi ki sabhi dil se jud jayenge story se aur ye raj ki wajah se nahi sirf story ke other charecters ki wajah se hoga jo raj ke apne h.........aur tab ayega main villian samne..
Aur sab nanihal part ke baad hoga..... Isliye dekhte jao bahut kuch khass honga agai jo painfull ...emotionaly brake karne wala hoga.....

 

[ellysperry]

Bhai mere kahne ka matalab hai ki dada ji ko Kam se kam phase 3 tak to hone hi chahiye ....

dada ji ko marna hi hai to unko phase 3 me jo main villain hai wo bhi to maar sakta hai na ... But abhi death halo ke hatho nhi

 

[sorbobhuk]

Yudh mai khona aur pana dono h ...main aisa he writer hu ellysperry bronuksaan dono taraf hoga aur bawal hoga ....agai story itni touchi hogi ki sabhi dil se jud jayenge story se aur ye raj ki wajah se nahi sirf story ke other charecters ki wajah se hoga jo raj ke apne h.........aur tab ayega main villian samne..
Aur sab nanihal part ke baad hoga..... Isliye dekhte jao bahut kuch khass honga agai jo painfull ...emotionaly brake karne wala hoga.....

WAISE UPDATE KAB AARAHA HAI

 

[Eternal king]

But Bhai dada ji to story ki aatma hai ...aatma hi nhi rahegi to story.???.....haa ghayal kerwa do dada ji ko buri tarah se ,haa itna hi ghayal karwaiye jisse wo(dada ji ) Bach jaaye .......but death na ho. Kyuki abhi to unko ( dada ji) ko apne dost ( raj ke Nana ji) se bhi to milna hai .......
Aur us gaddar se bhi badla lena hai. Jisne ye sab khel khela hai unki family ke sath .....Haa dada ji ko story ke ending me maar sakte hai but abhi katai nahi .......

Aur Bhai Raj ka death halo ne sab kuch to cheen liya hai abhi uske dost ( ajju , Shruti ) Puri tarah se recover nhi huye hai.....aur usne (death halo) Poonam ko bhi Marne ki kosis ,aur to aur death halo ne sonali ,Sunil ajju , Shruti aur Shivani sabko ko Marne ki kosis ki thi , kya itna kaafi nhi hai uski ( death halo) dardnaak maut ke liye ,,,
jo abhi dada ji ko marega nhi Aisa nhi hona chahiye dada ji is story ki aatma hai agar aatma hi nhi rahegi to story kis kaam ki kyuki dada ji hi raj ka aage ka margdarshan karenge ,raj ko aage ka rashtra btayenge

Bhai sehmata hu esa point se Sandeep bhai plz take readers emotions into consideration nd make it ..aap story ke writer hai ache bure ka pata hai story ka plot pata hai bt bhai baaki emotions alag hai nd death ka pain alag hai vo buri tara se toda dega kisi ko be chaye vo kitana bi strong nd cold hearted vo nd already raj have lost he's most prescious one mom nd dad ...ye dadaji ka mat karo bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai mere kahne ka matalab hai ki dada ji ko Kam se kam phase 3 tak to hone hi chahiye ....

dada ji ko marna hi hai to unko phase 3 me jo main villain hai wo bhi to maar sakta hai na ... But abhi death halo ke hatho nhi

Ha ye possible h ..
Kyoki phase three ke baad he main villian ki entry hogi aur phase three mai death halo ki maut hogi...

Bhai sehmata hu esa point se Sandeep bhai plz take readers emotions into consideration nd make it ..aap story ke writer hai ache bure ka pata hai story ka plot pata hai bt bhai baaki emotions alag hai nd death ka pain alag hai vo buri tara se toda dega kisi ko be chaye vo kitana bi strong nd cold hearted vo nd already raj have lost he's most prescious one mom nd dad ...ye dadaji ka mat karo bhai

Ok point consider kar liya h but main villian ke hatho he dadaji ki death hogi .....aur phase 4 mai kar diya h sab ...ab toh tikh h.....baki ane de opinion kya kahte h sab....

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

WAISE UPDATE KAB AARAHA HAI

Update likh he raha hu ab i mean half se agai badh raha hu .....is baar friday ya Thursday night he ayega.....

 

[ellysperry]

Ha ye possible h ..
Kyoki phase three ke baad he main villian ki entry hogi aur phase three mai death halo ki maut hogi...

Kya matlab Sandeep Bhai abhi jo warr hone wala hai usme death halo nhi marega ???

aur ye makhan chor (death halo) kitna din abhi Zinda rahega .....