Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

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Upcoming 234....on Sunday

Critical situation..Ye koun se aise readers bhai h jinhe ek update par like dete huve bhi jor agaya

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Superb action se bharpoor update

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Awsome updates

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Superb

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Nice update bro

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Bahut hi majedar aur sansanikhej update bhai, maja aa gaya.
धन्यवाद

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Behad romanchack or thril se bharpoor update waiting for next

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Sandeep bhai
Maine apke last tino update pare
Kis tereh se apki tareef karu
Samjh nahi aa reha sabd nahi h mere pas kahne ko
Last ke tino update to mai kam se kam 20 bar to bad hi chuka hu
Bahut hi umda likhte ho bhai

Bhai bhai .... Thank you so much for your appreciation

Apse ak sikayat bhi h
Jaise ki mai kabhi kabhi time milta h to comments par leta hu apke
To us mai ap aage ke kahani ka ji kar kar dete ho ki kaise hogi kaise jayegi
Kaise dada ji marenge etc etc
Plz bhai request h suspence khatam mat karo

Spam hota h jo kab hoga kaise hoga aur jab hoga tab tak piche ka sab bhul jate h agla phase ate ate kayi mahine gujar jatenge .

Ap logon ko unke sawal ke jabab do but aage ki story kaise hogi kaise jayegi iska jikar nahi sara story ka maza kharab ho jayega
Yahi meri request h
Ager apko bura laga ho to mafi chahunga i am sorry

Openion rakhna chahiye ...mitesh bhai ....dont worry jo dikhta h wo hota nahi aur jo hota h wo dikhta nahi aur jo hoga uska kisi ke pas prediction nahi...
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Wow
Goosebumps Aa Gaye Update Padhke

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Superb update bhai..

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Wow
Goosebumps Aa Gaye Update Padhke

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[urc4me]

Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Aaj hame malum hua ki raj ki tarah Sunil ki bhi ek alag personality hai Jo sirf aur sirf raj ki raksha karane k liye ati wo personality Ane ke baad Sunil kisi k bhi kabu me nahi aa sakata nice

Ha ha ha sunil ka kayi roop h...par sab apko pasand ayenge...

Matalab
Raj = nirwana
Sunil = valentine rider
Gajab ka combination hai bhai
But Sunil ke naye personality ke liye ek mask hona jaruri hai kyunki o bhi ek jimmedar aadami hai yar
Baki is update me agar dadaji k liye action jyada hota to aur bhi maja aa jata

Ha bilkul agai sab hoga ...jo ap soch rahe h...wo plot bhi h story mai ...par abhi dur h

Aur unki ijjat bhi badh jati readers k najaro
Kuch bhi ho Bhai wo bhi thakur jagamal singh hai
Akhir unhono hi to nirwana ko tayar Kiya hai

Action jayda isliye nahi dikha paya 2 seen dikhana chahta tha but update kaafi bada ho gaya...

Bhai ye mera personal opinion hai kisi ko bura Lage to sry in advance

Koyi sorry nahi bro ...agli baar detail action packed update milega....
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Mast update dia hai bhai...maza aa gaya...

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Superb fadu update

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Sandeep singh nirwan vrooo vrooo apki tareef krna apki mehnat ka mazaq orana hoga u have a brilliant writer jo apni story main jaan daal sakta hy u r amazing vroo keep it up

Hiakarji next update thoda special h...

Bhai kya valentine rider isse pahle bhi kisi update me aaya hai ya mujhe yaad nahi. Aur Sunil ka ye naam kaise pada ye bhi nahi pta chala kuch clear krenge.
And update is nice.

Nahi aya h ashutosh bro ....aur itni jaldi ayega bhi nahi...detail agai futre mai clear ho jayegi...
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Bhai faadu update maja aa Gaya

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Super nice update

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Awesome update bhai

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Awesome!!Awesome Update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai

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अब कुछ विशेष तो हुआ ही है। पूरे फेरे तो करवा ही दिए।

ओर राज अब किसी से भाग भी नही सकता

Ha ha ha
Bilkul aur asar bhi turant dikhega

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

bhai superb

emotion drama and suspense



too good

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Fight bahut majedar thi

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Jabardast actionfull update bro

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Bhot vadia update bro ab jaldi se 185ka announce kar do maza aa jawe burrrrrrraaaaaaa

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Bhot vadia update bro ab jaldi se185 v

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Super action packed update bhai, Dil khush ho gaya.

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UPDATE 184

Badi dhaasu aur khooni update thee to aaj Raj ke sath 3 jaan aur jud gayi ya yun kahoon jo bandhan bachpan me in charo ka Devi ke samne bandha thaa Aaj woh ek doosre me mil gaya. Ab jaldi hi yah rishta pura hoga.

Wo bhi beshumar pyar karne wali ....aur rishta bhi wakayi barso purana h

Bohat time baad valentine rider bhi wapas aaya thaa aur aata kyu nahi uski Jaan se bhi Aziz NIRWANA ki jo baat aa gayi thee. Aaj pehli baar Sonali jaisi mout ki Devi ka bhi Dil dehal gaya Sunil ko dekh kar ab usay laga hoga ki waqai woh aaj sach me uska bhai bana hai jaisay woh criminals ke liye maut hai theek usi tarah uska bhai to jallad bana hua thaa.

Ha sunil ki partikriya dekh bahut kuch samaj aya ki kuch toh h jo chipa huva h...sonali ne bhi asli roop nahi dekha h ..warna sach mai dar jati

Thakur apne anjaam ko pohcha apne marte huay logo se bhi usko koi seekh nahi mili aur phir bhi woh apne neech karam se baaz nahi aaya aur theek hi kaha hai yahi karam insaan ko uski durgati ki aur le jaatey hai aur ab yah chapter to khatam hua yahi per.

Ha gaanv ka ek bahut bada chapter khatam ho gaya h ...kam se kam ab kuch toh dar khatam huva unka ki ab koyi hamla nahi hoga...

Lekin maza aayega Aaj raat ke jashan me aur ab 3 mandir me Jo kuch hua to usko sochegi aur jaisa aapne kaha thaa Aaj raat poonam and sonali ka rishta wapas se mazboot hoga ab dekhna hai yah pyaar Raj ko kiya taqat deta hai aur woh kis tarah apne Dushmano ka Nash karta hain

Ha par poonam abhi sab nahi janti h ...richa ki sachayi abhi baki h....bahut maza ane wala h....aur dekhte h raj kaise handle karta h
Thank you for your precious words and beautiful review keep supporting

Bhai jabardast update Majaa ayaa gyaa muja yai tofan ana Ka phela Wali shanti lag rayi hai Raj ki ...

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Jabardast update

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[Sanki Rajput]

Update bohot bawal rahe abtak ke khaskar wo kushti ke akhade me jo tafdi fight hui literally alag level ki imagination par thi bohot bawal aur fir aati hai abhi ke update pe to kya hi kahe bhai gajab ka scene tha literally ummid nhi thi Sunil ki entry hogi wo bhi valentine rider ke roop me jo kuch past ko kholega may be shayad delhi aur mumbai ke bich me jo hua hoga.

Khair bohot dhasu update the Sandeep singh nirwan bhai !!

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bahut hi jabardast update bhai. Apka hr update rongte khade krne vala hota h bhai. Mast

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Haha... Poonam ko to dada ji ne charo ki bachpn ki tasveer dikha di thi, weh samajh gai...

Ha poonam ko wo sab mil raha jo usne uparwale se manga

To devi ne unki bhaint sveekar ker li...

Ha...lagta toh h aur bali bhi chad gayi h

Yahan clear ker dena tha na ki Raj ki 'kacchi' bhi utar gayi thi... hahaha... Kya khoob likha hai, Poonam ko pata chal gaya ki Sonali hi nahi balki Richa bhi Raj ke physically kafi close reh chuki hai, per Poonam ko bhi sharam nahi aayi, lagta hai weh Raj ko tan, mann aur dhan se apna pati maan chuki hai... lekin best part tha aakhir sharam kisko aayi... Raj ko...

Ha ha ha ...ha richa ke liye doubt h par confirm nahi huva h abhi ...par kya kismat h roop ki teen deviyo ne apne hatho se snan karaya h ...kya halat huvi hogi

ohhh... to Raj ki kacchi bach gayi thi... so sad...

Ha ha ha sonali ne toh utari he h..

To Raj ne teeno ko accept ker liya, Richa to uske mann se kabhi bhi nikli nahi thi, per Poonam ko bhi... good... per alag mehsus hona... hmmmm...

Par expectations kis level par huvi h ye waqt batayega ...

Poonam ko puja ka mahatva pata tha, bina ruke apni puja kerti rahi... kya ladki hai...

Wo ladki usai apna pati maan he chuki h ....dil se

Poonam ke sab doubt clear ho gaye... use samajh aa gaya ki weh teeno hi Raj ke saath rahengi...

Ha usai sayad sabse jayda pata h...teeno mai...

Jis tarah se Pandit ji ne 7 phere liva ker puja karayi thi, pehle mujhe laga ki weh Raj ki shaadi kara rahe hain, lekin baad me clear ho gaya ki weh Raj ki lambi aayu ke liye hi hai... aur uski is ladayi me uski raksha kerne me teeno ka bahut bada yogdaan hoga, khas ker Poonam ka.

Ab teeno he kyo iske liye apko ye part yaad rakhna hoga jawab spast roop se agai milenge.....ki kyo kaise ye sab kiya aur kisliye kiya..

ab aate hain ladayi par, ek ek vakya romanch se bhara pada tha, Bheema chacha ki ladayi, Mrityudoot ka yuddha, unka dhyan jara sa bhatakne per chot khana, aur sabse badi baat, dada ji ka ladna aur ant me sone per suhaga, pandit ji ka havan pura kerne ke liye sab ka bhid jana.

Pandit side strong charecter h jo bich bich mai ayenga aur romanch bhar dega...

Manisha ka role yahan per clear ho gaya, weh dono ki dosti ko aur majboot ker degi. Confidence to dekho, main khane per wait karungi. Khas baat''' aur aapka bhi...

Ha ha ha sunil ke bare mai wo bahut kuch janti h ab ek devar h aur ek pati toh dono ka intezar toh banta h

confusion...

Ye to mere sir ke uper se nikal gaya. Pehle socha kahin Sunil kisi dusre janam ki yaadon me to nahi chala gaya, lekin phir kayi baar padhne ke baad laga ki jaise Raj ki ek split personality hai 'Nirvana', usi tarah se Sunil ki bhi hogi 'Valentine Rider'. Kya dhansu concept hai. Aur Sunil ki ladayi dekh ker to rongtee khade ho gaye.

Itna kah sakta hu agai sunil ka role bahut jabardast hone wala h jisai dekh kar padhkar bahut romaanch syega...

Great update.

Thank you so much as usual bahut behtrin review ...jaisi muje umid thi...
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Hot and cold sexy pyaar wala update

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Update 183
Bahot badhiya shaandar update bhai
baat kerte kerte Sunil ka rishta bhi pakka ho gaya maneesha k sahi h bechara Sunil hi sabse pehle kyon fasta h lekin Maneesha Sunil k liye bahot achchi ladki sabit ho yeh tow 100 % Sach h

Sahi kaha apne dono ki jodi perfect h

Tow mirityudoot or bheema Raj or Sherdil m zabardast fight huwi jisme sherdil tow haar gaya lekin Raj n bheema ko haraya or jab Raj ko maar pad Rahi thi tab Maneesha bhibkood gayi or fir usne jo kala dikhayi sabke muh khule rehe gaye or hamare Sunil bhi ka bhi muh khula lekin apni halat ka soch ker baherhal Maneesha n bhi mirityudoot ko dhool chata daali

Ye sirf isiliye dikhaya gaya h taaki agai kabhi manisha kabhi faddu action dikhaye toh koyi achambit na ho...

Tow Poonam k papa or Raj k papa dono jigri dost Thai or poonam Richa or Sonali ka rishta banchman m hi Raj se jod dia gaya tha jo ko poonam ko tow pata chal gaya jagmaal ji se Baki abhi Sonali or Richa ko pata chalna Baki h

Richa bechari abhi kya umid rakhe kya nahi usai kuch pata nahi h par jo mil raha h usai wo bahut khus h aur jayda janne ki chaha bhi nahi h...

poonam apni badi bahen Sonali se khoob Maza le Rahi h or jab Sonali ko pata chalega ki Poonam kon h tab Sonali or poonam ki bonding bahot zabardast banne wali h

Ha ek halka fulka seen dekhne ko mil sakta h bonding ka

Richa n aaj apne Dil ka saara Dard Raj k saamne rakh dia or Raj bhi Richa se abhi bhi pyar kerta h yeh bhi Raich ko achche se pata chal gaya jab Raj n uske Gaal ker dia apne haath se

Ha pahla pyar koyi kaise bhul sakta h kabhi bhi nahi

Baherhal mandir tow sab log pahoch gaye or jagmaal k dushmano tak yeh khaber bhi pahoch gayi ab dekhna yeh kitni maar kaat hoti h or kon naye Raaz khulte h
bahot badhiya zabardast shaandar update bhai

Milega behtreen action dekhne ko milega . thank you for your precious words

Superb

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Interesting update

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Kamal story lajwab update

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Mind blowing update

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Superb update

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[Danny09]

Arey Bhai next update ki sambhavnaayein kab ki hai?

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bro.... Update kab milega?

Aj

Update 184
bahot behtareen zabardast shaandar update bhai
pandit ji ko bhi poori Kahani pata h iss khandan ki

Thank you apne sahi kaha...unhe kuch toh pata h

yeh tow ab pakka ho gaya ki yeh teen tow Raj biwi banegi ab aage or judti h ya nahi yeh Sandeep bhai jaane
baali sirf naam ka tha itni aasani se mar gaya bas uske admiyon n thodi bahot himmat dikhayi baali ko tow jagmaal ji n badi aasani maut ka Rasta dikha dia

Ha ha ha biwi ka toh pata nahi par premika toh ban he gayi h...bali ki toh dadaji ne ache se li h

Sunil ki tow lagta h aatma hi badal gayi thi aise kaat raha tha jaise gajer mooli koyi insaan itna nirdayi kaise ho Sakta h bhala zabardast

Ha sunil ne wakayi nirwana se ek kadam agai nikla

Manisha ki baato se aisa active huwa Sunil ki fir peeche mud ker nahi dekha or jab dekha tow sabka sarwnash ho gaya tha
bahot behtareen zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai

Ha ha ha thank you so much for your precious words and beautiful review nail bhai keep supporting

kab aur kitna age

waise jada dur jane se gharwalo ne mana kar rakha hai

Jana bhi nahi h...

Bahut bahut wonderful maza aagya

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sunil is sweet only till family members safe

Satyawachan

khatarnak update... sunil second side comes out

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Pratisha agle rasprad update ki

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Fantastic mind-blowing super extraordinary update

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Wonderful update Bhai...Sunil ka Naya chera.... superb..

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Waiting for update Bhai...

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bahut hi mazedar update Bhai intezar rahega agle update ka

Bus ab line mai h reply fir one hour study then editing fir study

Raj ka koe kukhar rup dekneko milega bhae

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