Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

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[subodh Jain]

Update 219

Dead End…..

End of phase two…

Final battle ……

Ek jump ke sath jamin se kayi foot hawa mai dono ek dusre ko jaan se marne ki ankho mai gusa lekar Dono ke dagger apas mai takraye ….aur tannn ki tez awaj huvi …….raj ne hawa mai he ek kick Death halo ki chest par maar diii….jiske force se death halo kayi feet piche jakar niche pathr ki jameen par gira….

Death muskaan ke sath “Maza araha h teri tadap dekh kar kitna dard h teri ankhe mai”

Raj gusai se kaanp utha kyoki death halo ki baat bilkul sahi thi…wo andar he gusai aur badle ki aag mai jal raha tha..

Raj “tujhe nirwana chahiye tha na aj tujhe nirwana he milega….aur nirwana kya karta h ye tujhe pata he hoga…itna kahte he ….raj dubara se attack ke liye death halo ki taraf bhaga aur ek jump ke sath round ghumte huve puri force se waar kiya …jisai death halo ne side mai jump ke sath kudhkar waar ko Dodge kar diya…par raj ne turant ek kick uske muu ki taraf kick kari jisai bhi death halo ne end time par apne hath se block kardi ab raj ne ek back flip mari aur back flip marte huve death helo ke face par kick jad thi….death halo kick ke pressure se kayi kadam piche khisak gaya ……raj ne gusai mai apne dagger ko jameen mai gadh diya aur bola …”tujhe toh main apne hatho se marunga tab jaakar mera kaleja thanda hoga…

Death halo “ye bhi kosis karle …phir apne dagger ko dur fenk kar ye le tere liye maine bhi fenk diya ”

Raj death halo ke dagger dur fenkte he uski taraf akar ek kick uske chest ki taraf ghumayi jisai death halo ne dodge ki aur badle mai tezi se ek kick raj ki chest par jad di jiska pressure itna tha ki wo kayi feet dur tak jameen par ghasitsa huva jaakar ruka..

“Bus ek he waar mai itni dur gir gaya …acha huva ye teeno mar gayi warna kisi aur ke hathe chad jati toh kayi dino tak inke sath apni raate rageen karta”

Nirwana cheekte huve “wo mar gayi par akele nahi teri maut bhi aj he hogi ”

Dono ek sath ek dusre ki taraf aye aur dono ne ek dusre ki taraf puri taakat se punch mara jo takraya ek dusre ke punch se aur dono jane piche khisak gaye aur rukte he dubara se ek dusre ki taraf wapasa badhe …Death halo ne pahle waar karte huve punch mara par ….Nirwana ne usai apne hath se block kar diya aur uska wo hath pakadkar ke usai apni taraf khinchte huve apni elbow se ek tez dhakka uske seene par maarkar diya …death halo abhi dhake se piche khisak he raha tha ki nirwana ne uski taraf ek jump hawa mai lete huve uspar doubble kick ek sath mari aur death halo jaakar pathar se takraya….abhi wo sambhal kar ghutne par baitha he tha ki usai apne upar se nirwana ki puri taakat se kick ati huvi nazar ayi jisai usne apne elbow upar karke block kiya ..par pressure ki wajah se uska dusra hath jo support ke liye ek pathar par tha usmai bhi crack agaya….ek niche toh dusra upar ki taraf se pura force laga raha tha dono ki ankhe ek dusre se mili ….jimai ek dusre ke liye sirf maut thi …death halo ne nirwana ko piche ki taraf uchal diya ….

“Kya naam tha jiski wajah se ye suru huva haa singhniya ki beti …deepika…wo bach gayiii ……par teri maut sabko barabar dard degi …bahut khass h uska tu uska bhai manti h dekha tha college mai tera bahut dhayan rakh rahi thi”

Nirwana “Tu nahi samjhega…..tu ek acha fighter toh bangaya par ek bhai nahi ban paya ye nirwana risto ke liye he jeeta h aur marega bhi unke liye he” ye kahte huve wo agai badha aur ek sath right phir left phir phir right phir left punches ki line laga di aur death halo punches ko block karte huve piche hat ta raha aur hat te huve he uske chehre par ek kroor muskaan agayi aur usne abki baar punch ko block nahi kiya aur usai halka sa push karke side kar diya jiski wajah se nirwana uske kareeb agaya ….aur usne apna unique punch jo competition ke liye banaya tha ..usai nirwana ke tikh dil ke upar mara …..Nirwana piche ki taraf udta huva jaakar gira aur girte he uske muu se khun bahar aakar gira….ye pahli baar tha jab nirwana ne dard ko feel kiya tha…

“Is punch ki practice itni baar isliye he toh ki thi…”

Poonam…jo ek taraf khadi baichaini se ye sab dekh rahi thi …..usne ye dekha toh uski halat bhi kharab ho gayi wo agai jana chahti thi par usai pata tha ki wo kuch nahi kar sakti h isliye usne apne watch ke andar lage button ko press kar diya jo sunil ke pass beep beep ki sound ke sath alert dene lag gayi thi…aur jisai dekhte he helicopter mai uski ankhe gusai se jal uthi thi…..

Nirwana muu se khun thukte huve khada huva….“Bus itna he ….bachpan se ye sarir pathar jaisa bana raha hu sirf apne ke…liye ….ab Nirwana ki bari h…sirf itna bata de akele marega…ya tere ..in level 4 ke kutto ke sath marega”

Abki baar death halo bhi gusai se ubal gaya aur bola “ ye teri meri ladayi h teri maut mere hath se likhi h….ab aja jaban se bahut lad diye dikha kitna dum h”

Nirwana bhi ab raj ko supress karte huve Raj ke upar puri tarah hawi ho gaya ….aur wo bola …”Nirwana ….Teri rooh ko bhi aj itna dard dega ki narak ki aag bhi tujhe sookun degi “.aur war between two mortals suru ho gaya

Nirwana ne ek ke baad ek lagataar left right karte huve punches aur kicks ki barsaat kardi aur death halo bhi lagataar waar ko rokta ja raha tha …dono ke bich ab attack bahut tezi se hone lage ….

Nirwana ne death halo ke waar ko block karte huve uski chest par kick mari aur death halo ke piche udte he hawa mai uska hath pakda aur apni taraf khinch kar ek punch uske muu par mara …..death halo hawa mai round ghumte huve niche aakar gira…

Poonam “maar dalo isai…maar dalo raj…jinda mat chodna ..”

Janha poonam joshi mai thi toh wanhi level 4 ke fighter ki muthiya kas gayi gusai se …apne master ko pit te huva dekhkar

Nirwana ne niche pade huve death halo ko mouka diye bina he …ek pait par kick mari par mari….par kick padne se pahle he …death halo jump lekar dusri taraf jump kar gaya …

Par ab nirwana ne koyi raham nahi dikhaya aur dubara se left kick toh right punch toh right kick left punch se agai Badh kar waar karta raha …death halo bhi block karte huve palatwaar karne laga …dono bara bar ke fighter the par jeet aj usi ki honi thi jiske seene mai aag bhari huvi thi …

Wanhi …. 20 minut pahle

“Tumhe kitna waqt lagega raj ke pass pahuchte huve”

Mirtyudoot “ agar akela pahado se niklu toh half hour”

Sunil “jaldi pahucho aur kavita mamta aur manisha ko bhi jaldi lejao sabko khatra h jaldi”

Mirtydoot “ek hour lag jayega”

Sunil “Jaldi karo waqt nahi h poonam ne emergency singnal bheja h jaldi karo “

Mirtyudoot turant tezi se pahad ke ek koune se niche aya …sab usai dekhte he ghabra gaye aur sath mai aye hotel ke safety gaurds ne roka toh mirtyudoot ne ek jhappad jad diya wo he kafi tha usai behosh karne ke liye”

Mirtyudoot sidha kavita ki taraf gaya …

Kavita aur manisha anu jo dress change karne ja rahi thi achanak females ki taraf mirtyudoot ko aise ata dekh kar chounk gayi par manisha ne turant react kiya ..

Mirtyudoot “hume abhi nikalna h “

Manisha ne “jaldi se phone nikala aur usmai video record karke hotel staff ki taraf fenk diya aur boli “ ye proof h tumhare liye hum marzi se jaa rahi h….phir palat kar … “jaldi chalo tum dono”

Kavita anu manisha un halke geele kapdo mai he mirtyudoot ke sath bhag padi piche sab unhe hairani si dekhte rah gaye … par wo kuch 100 meter he agai badhe the ki …level 4 ka wo fighter un charo ke pahadi ke upar samne agaya …

Manisha apne balo ka juda bandh ti huvi “anu kavita piche jaldi chip jao aur phir jhuk kar apni jeans ko pairo ke pass se upar karke ek lambaa churaa nikal liya ….

Mirtyudoot “main isai sambhal lunga ap rukiye”

Par manisha boli “waqt nahi h ap attack karo main mouka milte he waar kar dungi ”itna kah wo side mai ghumti huvi agayi aur mouke ka intezar karne lagi kyoki usai pata tha ki wo kya kar sakti h ….

Mirtyudoot kuch karta ussi pahle he us level 4 ke fighter ne gun nikal li par manisha ne raj ki strict training li thi isliye usne turant react kiya aur apne hath mai pakda knife uski taraf fenk diya aur level 4 ka fighter bhi war ko dodge karte huve manisha ki taraf gun ko aim karte huve fire kar diya par manisha bhi taiyar iske liye wo pahle he taiyar thi …isliye wo ek taraf kudh gayi aur goli uske baju ko chuti huvi nikal gayi …itna waqt mityudoot ke liye bahut tha usne turant apni gun nikal li aur ek sath kayi sare fire uski taraf kar diye par bulletproof jacket aur apni furti ki wàjah se wo bach gaya…..ab mirtydoot manisha bhi apna long knife hath mai lekar taiyar ho gayi wo teeno amne samne ho gaye gun ki awaj soon kar baki sabka dhyan bhi unpar chala gaya aur wo bhi us taraf ane lage…..

Mirtydoot ne agai badh pahla waar kiya jisai us fighter ne jhuk kar waar ko dodge kar diya toh manisha ne ek kick uske pait mai maar di ….wo thada unbalance huva toh mirtydoot ne ek punch uske muu par jad diya jiske pressure se niche pade pather par tezi se takraya…manisha ne bhi tezi se agai badh uske seene par knife ko marne ke liye jump lagadi par wo level 4 ka fighter tha usne turant react kiya aur manisha ke pait mai lete huve he kick jad di manisha dur jaakar giri …par ye waqt dard se tadapne ka nahi tha ..wo back flip ke sath hawa mai uchli aur dubara se khadi ho gayi..aur cheeki “waqt nahi h hamare pass jaldi”

Mityudoot bahut tezi se waar karne laga aur manisha gol gol unke charo taraf ghumkar perfect attack kar us fighter ko ghayal karne lagi

Baki sare jo wanha pahuch gaye the unhe toh samne ki fight dekh hairani ho rahi thi ki ek ladki itni jabardast fight kaise kar sakti h…

Mirtydoot ne jaise he usko chest par punch mara wo fighter hawa mai piche uda toh tezi se piche ayi manisha ne chakku ka waar uske sir par kiya par us killer ne hath agai kar diya par long knife hath ko fadta huva pressure se aar paar ho gaya aur manisha dusre hath sebina waqt ganwaye ek mukka khinchkar uske muu par maar diya …wo dusri taraf gira toh …mirtydoot ne bina waqt ganvaye uska ek hath pakda aur uski kalayi twist karke tod diii usne mirtydoot ko ek kick markar side kar diya par …tabhi usai apne upar se jump ek sath khanjar tezi se niche lati huvi manisha dikhi …aur wo sirf apne dono hath samne karke rok paya par do tarafa hamle ne usai mouka he nahi diya …aur mityudoot ne uski jhang mai apna dusra knife nikalkar ghop diya…manisha ne puri taakat lagadi aur knife ko uske seene mai ghop diya .. mirtyudoot lagatar knife ko uski body mai aarpar karta raha…

Mirtyudoot “chaliyee ye mar gaya h aur nahi bhi mara toh jinda bhi nahi bachega”

Piche khade male students ki toh piche se jitni fat sakti thi ussai jayda fat gayi thi aur ladkiyo ki dar se jitni sikud sakti thi usai bhi jayda sikud gayi thi…jis cold beauty ko wo admire karte the purpose karne ka bahana dhundhte the wo itni bhayanak hogi kisi ne nahi socha tha ….insabse bekhabar ….manisha anu aur kavita ke sath pahado ke upar se raj ki taraf bhaghi ja rahi thi…

Manisha “anu kavita ….janha chipne ke liye kahe wanha chipi rahna aur jab tak madad na aye wanha se bahar mat ana chahe kuch bhi ho jaye …”

Dono ne ha mai sir hila diya ….

wanhi….

Nirwana ne death halo ke punch ko rok kar uske muu par punch mara aur aur hath ko pakadkar ghumakar niche pathro par patka ……ab tak dono ke sarir khun se puri lath path ho chuke the par ek jana bhi rookne ka naam nahi le raha tha…….Death halo muu se khun thuk ta huva khada huva aur nirwana ke arahe punch ko dodge karke uski ribs par kick mari ….Nirwana udta huva piche gira …

Death halo “uth sale”

Nirwana bhi hath tika kar khada huva aur bhagkar usko kamar se pakdkar upar uthaya aur dur fenk diya….aur wanhi se kohni ka waar banate huve sidha uski chest par kohni ko de mara….death halo ke muu se khun nikal pada wo dard se karhata huva tikh se khada bhi nahi huva tha ki ….Nirwana ne halka piche hokar apne right hand se ek full force ke sath punch uske pait mai diya …aur is punch ki power se …death halo kayi feet dur jakar ghasit ta huva piche ptharo se takrays ….

Nirwana gusai se upar asman ki taraf dekhkar dhahada uska dard uska gusa us dhahad mai dikh raha tha….par uski ankho mai nami thi …usne death halo ko gusai se funkarte huve gale se pakadkar upar uthaya aur ek kick jad di …death halo piche wale pathar se dubaraya ….aur wo dubara se khada huva….apne master ko aise dekh baaki level 4 ke killers active ho gaye aur unmai se ek gusai se apni muthiya band karne laga….idhar death halo khada huva aur apnee baju se muu par arahe khun ko pounchkar “Tu ek acha fighter h …Nirwana sayad hum dost ho sakte the par tune bhai ko maar kar galat kiya”

Nirwana “naa…..aaj naa…kal naa… he kisi aur janam mai ….hum dhushman h aur dhushman he rahenge” ye kah usne death halo ko lagtar kayi sare punches mar diye ….aur ek baar phir pathrili jameen pàr niche patak diya…. Death halo muu se khun thukta huva khada huva …aur apni pocket se knife nikal liya aur bola “ab tere marne ka waqt agaya h bahut khel liya tere sath …..”Dono ek dusre ko dekhne lage pahad ki choti par sirf niche bah rahi nadi ki tez awaj he arahi thi…par yanha dono ab apne final attack ke liye taiyar ho gaye…

Nirwana ne bhi apne pair ke pass se apna ek emergency knife nikal liya ….

Death halo ab apne uniques moves ke sath kinfe ko ghumate huve final attack ke liye ane laga…. Toh Nirwana bhi ek kadam agai badh gaya …death halo ne left mai knife liya aur end mouke par knife ko ek style se ghumays par usne seceretly ek aur knife right hand ki taraf se apne hath mai le liya aur dono ke waar huve …par 2 second baad he death halo ki ankhe fail gayiii aur usne turant hairani se nirwana ki taraf dekha ….wo aur hairan ho gaya….kyoki nirwana ne us par waar he nahi kiya tha uska knife hawa mai he tha… wo toh bus uske piche dekh raha tha usne jaldi se piche dekha toh wo gusai se jal utha kyoki level 4 ek fighter ne poonam ki gardan par knife se halka sa cut laga rakha tha poonam ki gardan se dheere dheere khun araha tha ….wo wanhi se se cheeka “chod du usai” phir usne raj ki taraf dekha jiske seene mai knife gussa huva tha aur uske knife ke takat se marne ki wajah se piche hota ja raha tha uski ankho mai udasi thi…….wo kuch soch pata usai pahle he Nirwana pahad ke kinare se niche bah rahi nadi mai girne laga usne pakadne ke liye tezi dikhayi par jab tak wo gir gaya …..usne jaldi se niche jhank kar dekha toh Nirwana niche girta huva usai he dekh raha tha ….ek killer hone ke bavjud uski ankho mai aj pahli baar kisi aur ke liye izzat dikhayi dii thi…

“Tu sacha fighter tha ….agle janam hum dost na sahi toh dhushman bhin nahi honge …” itna kah wo gusai se piche palta aur us killer ko dekhne laga “ ye ladayi meri aur uski thi …ussai aise marna hota toh kab ka maaar deta un teeno ko kyo marta wo un teeno ke liye ek baar kahne par khud he mar jata ……ye meri aur uske bich ki ladayi thi par tune dhikhe se usai marwa diya” itna kah wo gusai se se jal utha aur pata nahi kaise par uski raftar ek dum se bahut tez ho gayiii aur usne ek jhatke mai us killer ko gardan se utha liya aur pathar par uske sir ko patak diya aur tab tak patakta raha jab tak sir fat na gaya….

Poonam toh mano ….samne jo huva ussai dekh jinda lash bangayi aur wo us shock se wanhi ghutno par baith gayiii…uski nazar udhar he thi janha se raj is waqt niche gira tha……..

death halo “aj se tum sab apni jindgi jioge main bulau toh he wapas aoge…main ab master ke agle sapne ko pura karne ke liye ja scorpian tribe ja raha hu ….tum sab turant nikal jao yanhse ab kisi ko nahi marna h ”

Itna kah usne ek apni wrist watch mai ek button dabaya toh 10 minut baad he ek helicopter …ki awaj ane lagiii…

Wanhi …manisha aur teeno ne bhi ye awaj suni….

Manisha “jaldi anu kavita jaldi se chip jao….hum agai jaate h”

Par unhe kya pata tha jo hona h wo toh ho chuka tha uska devar dost bhai uska sabkuch unse bahut dur ja chuka tha….

Death halo helicopter mai baith te huve bhi niche us tez bah rahe pani ko he dekh raha tha ……

Kareeb half 15 minut baad …mirtyudoot aur manisha wanha pahuche aur teeno ki lash dekhi toh manisha ki ankhe bhar ayi par poonam ko aise badhhawaas ek tak ek taraf dekhte huve paya toh ….wo aur ghabra gayii ….aur jaldi se uske pass pahuchi …

Manisha “pooonam poonam… aise kyo baithi h aur raj kaha h ye sab kisne kiya….”

Par poonam kya bolti ….wo toh jo abhi huva uske sadme mai sab bhul chuki thi aur uska dimag bus ek he jagah rook gaya tha….. mirtyudoot aaspass ko ache se dekhne laga aur ek jagah raj ka dagger niche dhansa huva dikha phir niche jagah jagah khun ke nishan the jisai usai pata lag gaya tha ki bhayankar ladayi huvi h….

Manisha jo poonam ko hosh mai lane ki kosis kar rahi thi …usne poonam ko khinchkar do thapad mare ……. “Bol poonam …hosh mai aa kidne kiya..kuch toh bol…”

Manisha ke thapad khane ke baad usne sirf itna he kaha “maar diya …maar diya“ poonam jo shiwani ko mari huvi dekh kar ro rahi thi usne poonam ko apni banho mai bhar liya ussai poonam ki halat dekhi nahi ja rahi thi…

Par poonam gale lagehuve bolti rahi

Poonam “maar diya… mere raj ko maar diya …wo mar nahi sakta h …usne abhi he toh kaha tha wo mujse shadi karega…phir wo kaise mar sakta h”

Tabhi ek aur helicopter ki gadgadahat wanha ghunjne lagi aur ajju ki help se sunil wanha utra …aur samne ka haal dekh wo buri tarah ghabra utha ek taraf usai apni badi bahan shiwani ki laash dikhi jo khun se lathpath thi toh ek taraf apni choti bahan poonam ko pagle ki tarah bolte huve dekh wo dhukhi ho gaya … kavita aur anu bhi wanha mirtydoot ke ishare par wanha pahuch chuki thi ….aur shiwani ki lash dekh uske pass bhaghkar foot foot kar rone rahi thi…

Sunil ko dekhti he poonam turant khadi ho gayiiii aur manisha ko dur dhakel kar sunil ki taraf bhagkar uska collar pakadkar boli….…”tummm valentine rider hona ….tum sab kuch kar sakte hona…tum bahut takat war ho jao mere raj ko dhundh kar lao jao jao….are tum khade kyo ho jao na jaldi usai lekar ao…usne bola tha main jo mangungi wo tum laakar doge ….tum jate kyo nahi …”

Poonam ki aisi halat dekh manisha anu aur kavita foot foot kar ro padi ….

Sunil ne poonam ko gale laga liya aur apni bhighi ansuo se shiwani ko dekhta raha

Mirtyudoot dhukhi hokar “ ap jaldi se unka tracker track karwayiye ab yanha kya huva h ya ye bata sakti h ya master”

Sunil ne ussai koyi reply nahi diya usne poonam ko apni banho se alag kiya aur bola “ usne jo kaha tha sahi kaha tha main launga raj ko chahe dharti khodkar paatal se laana pade ya asman cheer bhagwaan ke pass jana pade main launga” usne manisha ko poonam ko sambhalne ko bola aur khud bhari kadamo ke sath shiwani ki taraf jane lage…uske kadam uth he nahi rahe the shiwani ki shakal dekh usai abhi kuch mahine pahle ki baat yaad agayii.. “tere jaisa bhai mil gaya …aur kya chahiye …marungi na budape mai toh meri chita ko aag tu he dena”

Sunil “apne budape ka wada kiya tha mujhse” sunil ke liye is waqt bahut muskil ho raha tha par …uske andar bhara gusa uske upar hawi hota ja raha tha…. Usne shiwani ke sir ko apni godi mai rakh liya aur kayi dair aisa he baitha raha aur phir khada ho gaya …ab uski ankho mai ek aag thi jo …kisi ko bhi jalne ke liye kafi thi….

uski ankhe aaspass ke area ko scan karne lagi aur wo chalte huve usi kinare ke pass agaya janha se raj gira tha …

Aur phir “ sabko ghar lejao aur sabko bula lo prayagraaj ki is nadi ke har kinare har jagah ke chape chape ko chaan maro kab tak raj ki body nahi milegi koyi rukna nahi chahiye h …har airport har samundra ki ship kisi ko mat chodna jitna paisa chahiye milega par sabko kaam par lagao dhundhna h raj ko ”

Mirtyudoot ne haa mai gardan hilayi aur sunil se koyi sawal nahi kiya aur shiwani simran aur rajni ki body ko aur anu kavita poonam teeno ko bhi sath wapas le gaya …par kisi ne ye nahi dekha tha ki unke jane ke baad sunil ka expression pura change ho gaya tha………

Tikh isi waqt dehradun mai bhi … madhu ne do judwa bacho ko janam diya ……. Madhu “dono ko chumte huve boli tumhare papa jaldi ayenge tumse milne ke liye wo tumse bahut pyar karte h….”

Wanhi….Ranjan death halo ke raj ke mar jane ke message ke baad …apni sari planing kar raha tha ki wo jhunjhunun kyo gaya tha phir kanha gaya kiske sath tha…sab kuch set karne ke baad chain se delhi mai he underworld ke khufiya base mai apni raat rangin kar raha tha uske heesab se zahar wale hathiyar se jagmaal singh ka bachna namukin tha aur raj ki confirmation death halo ne usai de he thi…..ab usai kisi ka dar nahi tha …wo khudse he bola … “ab toh waqt h jhute ansuu dikhane ka ….kuch waqt aur phir baaki sab ko bhi maar dunga phir sab mera he hoga ….par pahle manisha ko thoda manana hoga”itna kah wo apni tango ke bich mai baithi ladki se bola come on darling show me your skills i m feeling very tired” aur apni ankh band kar li…..par usai kya pata tha ki sach ussai utni he dur h jitni ki sonali behosh h…..jald he sari jagah ye khabar failne lagi ki Nirwana mar chuka h …. underworld mai khushi ki lahar doud gayiiii….par ….ek mahine baad ….ek ghatna ne pure desh mai sansani faila di ….kyoki 100 logo ki lasho ka video viral ho gaya tha jismai ek shakhs jinda logo ke ek ek aang ko tukdo mai kaat raha tha aur be dard di se tadpa rahs tha….aur jab media se ye pata laga ki ye sab delhi underworke ke log h toh delhi underworld toh thar thar kaanpne laga par roj hatyaye hoti rahi police kuch nahi kar paa rahi thi…roj raat ye video viral hote …aur back ground mai ek naam khun se likha huva hota …happy murder valentine's day….from valentine rider …uski dashat nirwana se bhi jayda fail gayiii thi raat ko koyi bhi criminal bhar niklne se bhi khoff khane laga tha

Ek saal baad…..

..ek jana road par bottle se peeta huva road ke biche bich ja raha tha ….tabhi ek 3 ,4 car piche se ayi aur usai side hatne ke liye horn dene lagi par us shakhs ko ghanta fark nahi pada aur wo aise he bicho bich chalta raha…tab gadi msi baithe ek ne jor se usai chillakar bola .. “bhosdike marne ki jaldi h toh truck ke agai aaja …in gadiyo se nahi marega”

Toh dusra bola “side hata na yaar bhabhi ke hath ka khana khane jana h”

Piche baitha ek aur bola “bhosdike ye bol na ki nachawna h bhabhi ko daru aur khane ke waqt”itna kah wo hansta huva niche utara aur ek laat us shakhs ko di aur wo road ke kinare gir gaya …aur girne ki wajsh se uski bottle bhi gir gayii …jisai dekh wo tadap utha aur …wanhi bottle pakadkar baith gaya…par kuch pal baad he ek car uske pass akar ruki aur usmai se ek ladki niche utri aur usko aise baithe dekh kar boli “ap toh kah rahe the ki ap mujse kabhi naraj nahi honge aur gusa nahi karenge….par ap toh bina bataye he ghar se agaye ….”

Par us shakhs ne koyi jawab nahi diya …aur bus us ladki ko dekhte huve apni bottle agai kardi ….

Ladki “maine iske liye nahi danta tha apko maine toh apne subhe yoga nahi kiya isliye danta tha apko bola tha na ki roj subhe 4 se 7 baje tak karna h par ap ache bacho ki tarah baat mante he nahi ho…acha i m sorry agai se nahi dantungi “

Par us shakhs ne dubara bottle dikha di aur jis taraf wo carwale gaye the us taraf ishara kar diya…

Ladki “kisi ne apko gira diya aur bottle bhi gira di”

Shakhs ne ha mai gardan hilayi…

Ladki “ap chaliye mere sath main sabko dant lagaungi kaise apko bottle gira dii”

Us shakhs ke chahre par muskaan agayi aur usne us ladki ke gaal par chum liya…

Ladki “acha itna pyar araha h toh mujhe bina bataye nahi ate main kitna pareshan ho gayi thi…” itna kah usne us shakhs ko khada kiya aur apne hatho se uske kapde saaf karti huvi “gande kar liye na chalo ghar chalkar nahla dungi…aur usai car mai baithaya aur jis taraf wo log gaye toh us taraf chal di….

Wanhi wo log ek ghar ke angaan mai ….

“Thakur saab…simran hamari bhabhi h ap bhaiya ne toh kaha tha ki jab bhi dil kare simran ke hath ka khana khao unka nach dekho …ab agar ap mana karoge toh humai bhaiya ko batana hoga aur phir ap jante he wo kya karenge waise bhi agle mahine shadi hone he wali h wanha badi haveli mai toh roj sabke samne nachna hoga apko….aur waise bhi khusti mai har he chuke ho ap”

Thakur saab bus bebas hokar dekhte rah gaye ……

Tabhi ek jana agai badha sur simmi ka hath pakadte huve “bhabhi ji chaliye na sath mai dance karte h suna h bahut award jeete h dance mai apne” abhi wo kuch aur karta tabhi unhe horn sunayi diya sur ek car ghar ke angan mai dhakhil huvi….sabki nazar udhar gayi toh sab us ladki ko dekhte rah gaye blue colour ke suit mai wo gajab ki sundar lag rahi thi…. Par bagal mai usi shakhs ko bahar dusri bottle pakde utarta dekh wo sare hairan rah gaye wo ladki chutki bajate huve… “tum mai se koun sa tha wo jisne inhe dhaka dekar giraya” ladki ki meethi awaj sunkar ek bola “bc ye toh bhabhi se kantap maal h yaar …par ye is bewde ke bangal mai kya kar rahi h….isai toh hamare pass hona chahiye..”

Ladki “maine pucha koun tha jisne inhe dhakka mara “

Ek jana agai aya “darling main he tha wo…. par ab chal tu bhi agayi h toh tujhe bhi dhakke mar lenge …waise bhi tu dhakke wali chij he h”

Us ladki ne ek baar piche moodkar apne sath aye shakhs ko dekha jo aram se gadi mai baitha bahar dusri taraf dekhte huve pee raha tha aur phir palat kar boli “abe mote suwar tu khichad mai naha le toh suwar aur tujhmai koyi fark nazar nahi aye…”

Tabhi thukur saab bole beti …tum yanha kyo ayi ho abhi jao yanha se jaldi ..phir un sabki taraf dekhkar tumhe khana mil jayega par sarafat aukat mai raho”

Toh ek jana bola “lagta h budhe ki akad nahi gayi h pure UP mai thu thu karwa ke ….”

Par tabhi wo ladki bol padi “oye bhuji huvi lakdi ke bhuje huve koyle idhar dekh ….meri taraf “bado se bolne ki tameez nahi h tujhe suwar”

Ab wo sare ladki ko gusai se dekhte huve uski taraf bhadne lage ….ye dekh ladki apne dhuppatte ko sharmate huve hath se hilate huve boli “main ye batana toh bhul gayi mujhe halka sa bhi takleef ho inhe bardast nahi hoti h ….aur phir ye pagal ho jate h ….jo aye samne ussi todne fodne lagte h…aur mujhe koyi aur tum toh mujhe pakadna chahte ho touba touba tumhara kya hoga main soch bhi nahi sakti hu.”

Ladki ki bat sabko mazak lagi ….aur unmai se ek wahi mota jisai suwar kaha tha wo jaldi se agai badha …aur wo ladki mand muskarte huve khudse he boli yahi toh main chahti hu….ek baar chuvo tum mujhe…ladki ki soch se anjan jaise he us mote ne kaskar us ladki ka hath pakda wo ladki dard se jor jor se karahne lagiii….aur rone ka jor jor se natak karti huvi cheekne lagi “apko nichuu ko pakad liya inhone ye gand log apko nichuu ko mar rahe ho…..wo sare bhi hairan rah gaye aur jisne hath pakad rakha tha wo bhi hairan rah gaya ki kya he noutaki kar rahi h par ye hairangi jayda dair nahi rahi kyoki uske wapas palat te he ek kanch ki bottle uske chehre par ghus gayi aur pura chehre khun se laal ho gaya …..

Wo shakhs jo pee raha tha ab lambi lambhi sanse lene laga…aur ghusai se cheekne laga uski ankhe gusai se puri tarah laal ho gayi aur agle he pal usne mote ke hath ko pakda aur jad se ukhad diya…..sare ek ek kadam piche ho gaye….

Ladki “wo sare apko nichuu ko apne sath lejana chahte h aur phir sharmate huve wo jo main apke sath ghar ghar khelti hu na wo khelna chahte the…”.aur wo ye shakhs sunte he paglo ki tarah cheekhne laga aur unpar tut pada usne ek ke kaan ko itna tezi se khincha ki ukhad kar hath mai aa gaya aur phir ek thapad uske gaal par mara jiske sath uska gaal he fad gaya…..aur phir piche palat kar ek ke taang ke bich itni jor se kick mari ki wo kayi feet upar uchal gaya aur niche ane se pahle he ek punch uske thopde par pada aur ek side ke sare dant uske muu se bahar aa pade aur sidha …thakur saab ke kadmo mai jakar gira….thakur sab ne dekha ki wo bus apni jindgi ke akhiri sans lets hlets hu jhatke kha raha h…idhar us shakhs ne ek ke sidha gale par toh kisi ke ghutne par aisi jagah waar kiye janha se hadiya tutne ke baad judne mai salo lag jani thi…

Piche khadi us ladki ke chehre par ek ajeeb si muskaan thi ye sab dekh kar ….aur wo boli… “ dard ho raha h”

Wo shakhs wanhi rook gaya aur turant ladki ki taraf bhaga aur uske hath pair chehre ko check karne laga…..

Sare wo jo aye the aur thakur saab ka pariwaar bhi ladki ki noutanki dekh hairan the ki pitayi ishar huvi h aur dard isai ho raha h….

Ladki “thoda sa dard ghar chalkar dawayi laga dena …”

Shakhs ne haa mai gardan hila diii..

Ladki “ap baitho main abhi ayi “

Aur shakhs ke baithne ke baad palatkar sabko dekhte huve man mai bola “Ye pariwar jiska h wo jinda h …isliye jitne din dur rahoge jinda rahega ….main layi he usai tumhari maut ke liye bhale he yaddash chali gayi h uski par…jis din uski yadasht wapas ayegi…wo pahle se dugna khunkhar aur takaat waar hoga itna kah wo car mai baithi aur us shakhs ke chehre par pyar se hath firaya ..us shkhs ne apna sir uske kandhe par rakh diya…….

Wanhi yanha se bahut dur ….

Ek jagah jo bilkul alag ….jaise wo is duniya ka heesa he na ho wanha …ek sath bahut sare log ek ghutne par baithe huve the aur unke samne ek shakhs khada tha ….wo bola “ sahdev ka pariwar jinda h….aur wo jinda h toh uska beta bhi jinda hoga”

Samne se “master wo mar chuka h”

Wo shakhs “tum isiliye aj tak level 6 par he ho wo mar nahi sakta h jabtak uske pass wo sadhu h phir ek taraf dekh kar Tum dono India ko ache se jante ho jao dhundho usai agar hume agai badhna h toh uska milna jaruri h…” uski baat khatam hote he wo dono jinki pith par scorpian ka bada se tatuu tha wo sir jhuka kar nikal gaye…

pichle update par mujhe bahut umid thi ap sab se par nirasha hath lagi .....jaise apko mujhse jaldi aur ache bade update ki umid rahti h waise he mujh bhi apse rahti h ye har waqt kahne ki jarurat nahi hoti h yr understanding h ek reader aur writer ki......main bhi apne competitive exam ke time mai se waqt nikal kar update likhta hu ...........par meri ye baat bhi kisi ke ego par lagegi toh kuch meri baat samjhenge bhi ...ab mujhe lagta h ek break ki jarurat h jo le raha hu kuch waqt ke liye... Aur ha reviews mat likhna kyoki ab reply nahi kar paunga review ka par ha doubt ya questions ho toh besak reply karunga online ate he .....

Sara kuchh khatam hi kar diya
Puri stori hi dubara se suru ho gai
Aur aap antar dhyan ho gaye
Agla update kab tak ayega ye hi bata do

 

[Tri2010]

Update ka

Update 219

coming soon.....220..

Nightmare...Beast Mode...

Update ka intejar rahega bhai

 

[zahidrahim0071]

main ne bohat socha ye end q hoa is part ka raj abi lavel 5 ya 6 k fighter se muskil se fight kar pa raha ha or os k sath sath us k apne us k sath hoon ya dosman k qabze main hoon to us ki taqat khatam is leye us ne apne app ko sb se chopa leya ha mazed skils up karne k leye us k apne b buch gaye kisi had tak pahle muje part ka end acha nahi laga lakin abi k leye sayad ye he best tha

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Ghayal sher ki sanse uski dahad se bhi jyada khatarnaak hoti h iss dialogue k sahi hone ka samay aa raha h
ek taraf suneel h jo out of control ho gya h aur dusri taraf raaj h apna hero
Waiting

Kuch toh hoga ...jo agle update mai dikhega.......sunil toh h he out of control bahut kuch dekhne ko milega agle update mai

 

[hrs170]

Update 219

coming soon.....220..

Nightmare...Beast Mode...

Naam se hi lag rha ki agle update me kya hone wala hai
Bhai ye aur bta dete kb tk aayega ye update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Raj yh Kya locha abhi lvl 4 aor5 k chkr Sy nikly nhn yhn log lvl6 MN atky pry hn
Ab yh lrki kn Hy jisy yhn kisi ko lrwana Hy
Daro wala to raj Hy Koch smjh MN Aya
Bhai Meri sari story MN break chl rhi ap
WALTA MN bhi break Hy aor pta nhn AP bhai kb start krn gy

Locha kuch nahi h bro bus khel nahi jung janha aur takatwaar log ayenge...aise he ate rahte h ....break toh bro...
Thank you so much....

great update bhai

Thank you so much

as the title of update dead end
sabkuch dead end par ruk gaya
raj nadi me girgaya aur poonam ko sadma lag gaya

Bilkul sadma lag gaya gaya h ab dekhte h kya hota h

baakiyo ko bhi lagega jab sabko pata chalega
sunil ka valentine rider wala roop jaag gaya hai

Hmmm agar jaag gaya hoga toh kohram mach jayega ..

ek mahine ka fast forward fir 1 saal ka

Bilkul bro jaruri tha...

fir bhi raj ka pata nahi chla baaki log bhi jinke uper attack hua tha jo jakhmi hue the unka kya halat hai kuch pata nahi chala may be next part me

Ye sab agai clear hoga....

ab idhar 1 saal baad shayad ye sharabi raj hi hai jo yadast kho chuka hai aur shyad jo ladki uske saath hai usi ne use bacha hai aur saath me hai

Yadasht toh chali gayi h ....bilkul usi ne save kiya h ....ab agai sab clear hoga ..
Thank you so much for your precious words

but ye dono shayad raj ke nana ke area me hai

Bilkul wanhi h

ab next part shyad pura scorpion tribe par focused hoga saath hi saath raj ke nana log ke taraf
and at last
best of luck for your exams and preperations
hope your return will great

Abhi exam time mai waqt h ...ab dekhte h koun kya karta h ...aur kaise sab karte h ...nanihal mai tandav toh hoga he

Agree with you dear bro . Aise bekaar logon ki wajah se tang aakar , maayoos hokar , na jaane kitne writers apni kahaaniyaan adhure chodkar chale Gaye, aur toh aur, is writing field KO hi alvida keh diye. Yeh log readers ke naam par hi kalank Hain . In Jaise logon KO mods through ban Kar dena hi behtareen rahega XF ke liye. Congrats for your daring reply

Sahi kaha ...apne aur sab bahut dhukhi hote h ki story adhuri rah gayiii ..h...
Par aise log bahut kharab h sale na khud kuch acha karte h na dusro ko karne dete h...

Kyonki policewaali hone ke bawajood Shivani natkhat aur chulbuli bhi this aur uski harkaten hat ek reader KO bhaa gayi thi - isiliye uski untimely death pe Sabine afsos jataya tha (including myself).

Bilkul sabne bahut bura feel kiya h including me isiliye futre mai uski dubara wapsi hogi ...

Tnq for dropping the hint that at a later stage, character by the name of Shiwani, (all will be delighted if only she's the same Shiwani who cheated the death& once again came back to entertain us as before) may pepup the further proceedings, dear bro . Any decisions in this regard remain solely at your kind discretion . Regards .

Thank you so much again for your precious words and beautiful review keep supporting

 

[Velntine Rider]

Prediction ke bare me Nirwana bhai apne bataya ki sahi ja rahe hain Shiwani ko lekar sach me bahot dukh hua ek aisa charecter story ne kho Diya jo kisi na kisi wajah se Raj ko khusi ke kuch pal Diya karti thi wo scene abhi bhi mere dimag me ghum raha hai ki kitni berahmi se Raj ke samne Death Halo ne Teeno ka gala kaat dala Pani me girna to alag bat thi lekin sab se zyada agar raj hurt hua hai to apni bebasi se ki samne hone ke bawajud bhi wo un teeno me se kisi ko bacha nahi saka...
Kya zara si bhi Ummed nahi hai ki Shivani Bach Jaye

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Awesome update....

Thank you

Ab main kya kahoon, update to accha tha lekin aasha ke bilkul vipreet tha.

Ho jata h dododo bro isliye toh dead end tha

Nirwana aur Death Halo ka fighting scene bahut hi rochak tha, kaise dono ek dusre ke vaar se bachte huye ek dusre par toot pade the. Aakhir me lagne laga tha ki NIrwana Death Halo par haavi ho gaya tha, lekin Poonam ki gardan par chaku dekh kar Raj ruk gaya aur usi ka fayda utha kar Death Halo ne uske seene me chaku maar kar use dhakka de diya.

Bilkul jeet toh pakki he thi ..par end moment par sab palat gaya...sur raj maut ke muu mai chala gaya...

Udhar Mirtyudoot aur Manisha ki fight level 4 ke fighter se acchi rahi. Yeh bhi clear ho gaya ki Sunil ko signal kisne bheja tha. Sunil pahuncha bhi, lekin dair se.

Bilkul dair se nahi bus galat ho gaya aur dair se he aya....

Is update me bahut se gap reh gaye, aakhir Sonali, Joginder, Jagmaal Singh, Sherdil, Bheema aur Abhay ka kya hua.

Inka agai pata lagega...abhi bats deta toh maza nahi ata h..

Mere andaaz se Abhay to bacha nahi hoga lekin aur sab theek ho gaye honge. Kya Sonali Ranjan ke paeron par jale huye ke nishan check kar payi. Ranjan ka kya hua.... Mana Valetine Rider ne underworld me tahalka macha diya hai, lekin kya weh Mama ka bhed jaan paya. Mere khayal se ek update aur hona chahiye jisme yeh sab clear ho jaye.

Ye sare sawal sur inka jawab agai pata lagega.... Par bahut kuch huva h ye tay h..aur valentine rider bahut khatarnaak h aur agai uska roop dikhega par .agai usai bhi jayda khataranak koyi aur he hoga...

Vakayi me yeh to ek tarah ka 'Dead End' aa gaya hai, Raj ke pariwar aur sathiyon ke liye.

Bilkul dead end h aur ye dead bahut kuch apne sath le gaya ye dead end...

Ab story Phase 3 me prevesh kar gayi hai. Saaf hai weh pagal ladka Raj hi hai jo apni memory kho gaya hai. Ladki kaun hai samajh nahi aaya.

Phase three ke pahle part mai 1.5 k words likh liye h...ladki kya ..uska jald he pata lag jayega...

<gande kar liye na chalo ghar chalkar nahla dungi…>
<wo sare apko nichuu ko apne sath lejana chahte h aur phir sharmate huve wo jo main apke sath ghar ghar khelti hu na wo khelna chahte the…>

Isse to lagta hai ki Raj apni memory kho kar bilkul bacchon jaisa ho gaya hai aur yeh ladki Raj ke bahut close aa gayi hai. Uska Raj par confidence dekh kar lagta hai ki Raj pehle bhi kuch logon ko tod chuka hai.

Bacho jaisa toh nahi par ha bahut kuch bhul gaya h..kitna ye agle update mai pata lag jayega.......

<Ye pariwar jiska h wo jinda h …isliye jitne din dur rahoge jinda rahega ….main layi he usai tumhari maut ke liye bhale he yaddash chali gayi h uski par…jis din uski yadasht wapas ayegi…wo pahle se dugna khunkhar aur takaat waar hoga>

Saaf hai ki yeh Raj ka nanihal hai aur weh ladki bhi nanihal se hi hogi. Weh Raj ke jariye Thakur (Balram ke baap) se badla lena chahti hai.

Wo ladki kanha se ye sab agai clear ho jayega par ha nanihal mai h aur ab bari balram aur uske baap ki h ....

<sahdev ka pariwar jinda h….aur wo jinda h toh uska beta bhi jinda hoga>

To kya Sahdev bhi jinda hai. Aur yeh rahasmayi baba... Aur yeh Scopian tribe videsh me hai ya kisi aur planet me...

Ye ek aise term h jinki wajah se story aur jayda intresting hone wali h ..

Khair, abhi to time hai padhayi karne ka, kahani to baad me bhi chalti rahegi. Wishing you all the best for your competitive exams. TC...

Thank you so much for your precious words and appreciation...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai majaa aa gya raj aur death halo ki ladayi se par death halo fir bach gya aur raj ki yaddasht chli gyi hai aur ab dekhte h kab tak bapas aati hai
Aur valentine rider apna happy valentine's day mna rha hai wo bhi khunkhar dhang se

Thank you so much for your precious words

Prediction ke bare me Nirwana bhai apne bataya ki sahi ja rahe hain Shiwani ko lekar sach me bahot dukh hua ek aisa charecter story ne kho Diya jo kisi na kisi wajah se Raj ko khusi ke kuch pal Diya karti thi wo scene abhi bhi mere dimag me ghum raha hai ki kitni berahmi se Raj ke samne Death Halo ne Teeno ka gala kaat dala Pani me girna to alag bat thi lekin sab se zyada agar raj hurt hua hai to apni bebasi se ki samne hone ke bawajud bhi wo un teeno me se kisi ko bacha nahi saka...
Kya zara si bhi Ummed nahi hai ki Shivani Bach Jaye

Bilkil bhai bahut kuch huva h story mai...aur ek saal mai bhi bahut kuch h ....aur ye seen jo uske samne huva uske dosto aur sathiyo ka marna ...par sach ye h ki jo huva uska reaction puri story mai bahut kuch change kar dega ....
Thank you for your precious words

Jabardast story hai 1 week me Puri story padh Li hai bahut hi maza aya. Ek dum solid action aur twists.

Phase 3 kad se start hoga bhai.

Bro suru h week mai ek update ayega jo aur stories ke 2 updates ke barabar hota h...
Thank you..

Yeh Jo sharabi admi hai vo Raj hi ho sakta hai
Mind- blowing update

Thank you

Fantastic update Sandeep brother. Fight scene bht OP tha or us k bad VR ka khuaf ho shuru hua underworld mein wah. Fabulous update

Thank you so much bro

Humesha ki tarah ek dum fadu update brother maza aa gya.

Thank you so much

AAP apne padai mai concentrate kariye uske baad ek dhamakedaar comeback kariye humesha aap ko pyaar dete rahenge jaise ab tak dete aya hun.

Intezaar rahega apka.....

Abhi is month aur update dunga bro fir nahi de paunga....
thank you for your precious words and support...

Bhai bhut hi sandar apdet diya apne mjaa a gya

Thank you

 

[urc4me]

Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki