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Update 234 Posted masti Mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka
Then don't read simple....Bhai kyu khahni ko itna lamba keech rahe ho… katam karo or doosri Suru karo…… kind of boring now …
1st richaMujhe bhi pata h ...sayad 3 nahi sayad 4 nahi sayad 6 ya 7 toh ho he sakti h....
bhai to mat Padho yaar itni achi kahani chal rahi hai har update ke sath maza do guna hota jaa raha hai apko dusri kahani padhni hai to Xforum per or bhi story chal rahi hai unhe padhloBhai kyu khahni ko itna lamba keech rahe ho… katam karo or doosri Suru karo…… kind of boring now …
वैटिंग फोर अपडेट भाई नेक्सट वीक में पोस्ट करदो जल्दी से बसUpdate 225 posted masti Mai padhne ka aur sirf likes thokne ka
likhte likhte meri bhi ankhe band ho gayi thi....subhe khuli tab pura kiya h update ....kayi baar update ki ending samaj se bahar ho jati h aur complex hoti jati h ..
aur haa agar kisi dost ke comment ka reply rah jaye toh naraj na ho main bus chahta hu jo time mile usmai apke liye update likhu
Ye lo..Bhai kyu khahni ko itna lamba keech rahe ho… katam karo or doosri Suru karo…… kind of boring now …
exams h aur dusra lambi story h jisai ab main thoda short kar raha hu ....taki update jaldi pure ho sake aur story bhi.......aur typical apne ap ho rahe h....charecter jayda hote ja rahe h ..Sandeep singh nirwan
Welcome back sir...I know aap kafi time se de rahe ho update and I also updated with your update...and ye waps exam dene ke baad aapki story writing me kuch badalav aaye h .....phala aap thode ya ho sakta h mera wahm ho per and ye koi sikayat bhi nahi h per aap matlab shyad topical likhne Lage hoor update kam bhias just I said wahm bhi ho sakta h...
Or baki sab maaje hbaki next update ke sath bataungi
Bhai aap tho bura maan gaye… the way u write is too good and koi nahi like sakta aap ke braber … lekin thoda fast karo story ko bus yehi duva hai ….Ye lo..
"Khatam"
Ok ab apni story par dhayan do ....usai pura karo...
Sandeep ji yaad karo mene shyad 6 mahine phale bola thaexams h aur dusra lambi story h jisai ab main thoda short kar raha hu ....taki update jaldi pure ho sake aur story bhi.......aur typical apne ap ho rahe h....charecter jayda hote ja rahe h ..
Process mai daal diya h aur 500 words likh bhi diye h...वैटिंग फोर अपडेट भाई नेक्सट वीक में पोस्ट करदो जल्दी से बस