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Update 231 Posted masti mai padhne ka bindass likes pelne ka
Raj hero of the family "Battle for revenge"
Raj hero of the family "Battle for revenge"
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That's gud newsBilkul overall cutoff ke paar huva h
Hamare shubhkaamnayen hamesha aapke saath rahega Sandeep Bhai - prelims ke baare mein acchhi khabar sunkhe Dil khush huwa aur aanewaale mains ke liye hamare duayen aapke kaamyabi ke liye. Eshwar ji ki Krupa hamesha aapke saath rahe, yeh hi hamare Aasha aur duayen hain, mannpriya Sandeep Bhai.
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Thank you so muchHamare shubhkaamnayen hamesha aapke saath rahega Sandeep Bhai - prelims ke baare mein acchhi khabar sunkhe Dil khush huwa aur aanewaale mains ke liye hamare duayen aapke kaamyabi ke liye. Eshwar ji ki Krupa hamesha aapke saath rahe, yeh hi hamare Aasha aur duayen hain, mannpriya Sandeep Bhai.
and update bhi 2.5 k ho gaya h...aj raat definitely 4 k ho jayega....toh kal raat update mil sakta h Dear Sandeep ji, I am confident that your exams have gone well and you will definitely come put with flying colours. I avoided making any comments on your thread so as not to distract you. I am sure you would have rejuvenated yourself with new energy and would continue to delight us with your wonderful story.
My short review on previous two updates -
Update 229 - Yudh-The first movement…part one
1. 7 Tattuwale ab ho gaye, pehle 2 ko mila kar. Do kide - Sunil aur Narpat. Par yeh jaan kar thoda aashcharya hua ki unki prathmikta Raj ke bacchon ko dhundne ki hai na ki Raj ko.
2. Sherdil aur teeno behno ka vartalap bahut hi hilarious tha. Bechara Sherdil.
3. Raj ka sapna - jisme weh Nirwana ban kar lad raha tha aur uske saamne sab khatam ho gaya - shayad pichle janam ka hai. Lagta hai ki ab Raj aur Nirwana ke brain me kuch connection ho gaya hai, ya kuch aur. Ye shaksha shayad is janam me tattuwalon ka leader ho.
4. Simmi ka darr Nirwana ne kya khoob tareeke se dur kiya hai.
5. Balram ke tau Bhawani ki acchi dhulayi huyi.
Update 229 - Yudh part 2 “kulhada”
1. ACP Vijay ek naya character saamne aaya.
2. Richa Bhawani se jabaan lada kar ander se Raj ko bula rahi thi, jisko Nirwana ne sun liya.
3. Nirwana ko dekh kar Richa ko pehle afsos hua ki kahin uska Deepu (Raj) to nahi haar gaya aur Nirwana ne uske mashtik par pura kabza kar liya hai.
4. Pura ladayi ka sequence bahut hi bhibhats ke saath-saath vyangpurn bhi tha. Padhne ke baad kayi baar padhne par majboor ho gaya. Great writing skills.
5. <Nirwana palatkar simmi ki taraf dekh kar “meri maa thi vidya..” itna kah wo chala gaya>
Yeh to sabko pata hai, lekin Richa kyon chaunki. Kya usko isme Raj ki jhalak dikhi...
6. Ye aakhir me kya suspense chhod diya. Tattuwale kisi aur duniya se hain, Ravinder ka milan apni putri Poonam se aur apne pati Raj se, aur kuch samay baad Nirwana apne mata-pita ke liye ladega, kya weh jinda hain. Khair, abhi to Xabhi aur Aag ko Tattuwalon ke peeche lagaya hai. Aur Abhay ko kahan bheja hai, Shadi me ya phir Ravinder ko chhudane ke liye.
Ab kal raat ka intezar rahega jab next update aane wala hai.
My short review on previous two updates -
Update 229 - Yudh-The first movement…part one
1. 7 Tattuwale ab ho gaye, pehle 2 ko mila kar. Do kide - Sunil aur Narpat. Par yeh jaan kar thoda aashcharya hua ki unki prathmikta Raj ke bacchon ko dhundne ki hai na ki Raj ko.
2. Sherdil aur teeno behno ka vartalap bahut hi hilarious tha. Bechara Sherdil.
3. Raj ka sapna - jisme weh Nirwana ban kar lad raha tha aur uske saamne sab khatam ho gaya - shayad pichle janam ka hai. Lagta hai ki ab Raj aur Nirwana ke brain me kuch connection ho gaya hai, ya kuch aur. Ye shaksha shayad is janam me tattuwalon ka leader ho.
4. Simmi ka darr Nirwana ne kya khoob tareeke se dur kiya hai.
5. Balram ke tau Bhawani ki acchi dhulayi huyi.
Update 229 - Yudh part 2 “kulhada”
1. ACP Vijay ek naya character saamne aaya.
2. Richa Bhawani se jabaan lada kar ander se Raj ko bula rahi thi, jisko Nirwana ne sun liya.
3. Nirwana ko dekh kar Richa ko pehle afsos hua ki kahin uska Deepu (Raj) to nahi haar gaya aur Nirwana ne uske mashtik par pura kabza kar liya hai.
4. Pura ladayi ka sequence bahut hi bhibhats ke saath-saath vyangpurn bhi tha. Padhne ke baad kayi baar padhne par majboor ho gaya. Great writing skills.
5. <Nirwana palatkar simmi ki taraf dekh kar “meri maa thi vidya..” itna kah wo chala gaya>
Yeh to sabko pata hai, lekin Richa kyon chaunki. Kya usko isme Raj ki jhalak dikhi...
6. Ye aakhir me kya suspense chhod diya. Tattuwale kisi aur duniya se hain, Ravinder ka milan apni putri Poonam se aur apne pati Raj se, aur kuch samay baad Nirwana apne mata-pita ke liye ladega, kya weh jinda hain. Khair, abhi to Xabhi aur Aag ko Tattuwalon ke peeche lagaya hai. Aur Abhay ko kahan bheja hai, Shadi me ya phir Ravinder ko chhudane ke liye.
Ab kal raat ka intezar rahega jab next update aane wala hai.
Chalo BhAi Ab Update Ke Lie BOL Sakta.. Hu ....
Apke exam ache se Ho Gaya So . Ab Kal UPdate De deNa . Bro....
Waiting fOr.. UPdate.....
Apke exam ache se Ho Gaya So . Ab Kal UPdate De deNa . Bro....
Waiting fOr.. UPdate.....
Sandeep Bhai Mene Story to Puri Read kar li h or Aapke new update ke sath hi continue chal rha hu or kai baar revision bhi kar chuka hu par ab mera ek thought h
(219 Update Par)" sahdev ka pariwar jinda h….(aur wo jinda h )toh uska beta bhi jinda hoga”
And jab raj devprayag trip par ja rha tha to usko sapna bhi Aaya tha Apne Maa or Pita ka Jo kisi jail me band the or raj ne ganga maiya se prathna bhi ki thi Is Sapne ke Upar
Thought- Kya Raj ke pita Sahdev Singh or Ma Vidya jinda h or Agar bo jinda h to unka seen to fir Story ke last villain Ke part se Aayega May be And story Me to abhi tak unko death ke upar depend par liya ja rha h Aage Aapke upar depend karta h yhe to ki bo dead h ya Alive That's it.
(219 Update Par)" sahdev ka pariwar jinda h….(aur wo jinda h )toh uska beta bhi jinda hoga”
And jab raj devprayag trip par ja rha tha to usko sapna bhi Aaya tha Apne Maa or Pita ka Jo kisi jail me band the or raj ne ganga maiya se prathna bhi ki thi Is Sapne ke Upar
Thought- Kya Raj ke pita Sahdev Singh or Ma Vidya jinda h or Agar bo jinda h to unka seen to fir Story ke last villain Ke part se Aayega May be And story Me to abhi tak unko death ke upar depend par liya ja rha h Aage Aapke upar depend karta h yhe to ki bo dead h ya Alive That's it.
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Dododo review ka reply dena muskil ho jata h aur har reader comment karta h aur ap jaise reader detail mai shandaar review dete h unka reply na de pau toh khudko bura lagta h ...jinka dil saaf h wo samaj jate h toh kisi ko ye feel hota h ki sirf bade reviews ka he reply dete h...exam high tension mode mai h umid h ki prelims 90 percent clear ho jayega...ab main ki taiyari suru karunga koyi risk nahi lena chahta hu golden opportunity h..
Ab is phase ki akhiri ladayi ke baad scorpion tribe ki detail ani suru ho jayegi ...
Socho jab sab sath mai hongi tab kya hoga..
Ha ho sakta h usai pichle janamki yade dikhi ho ya nirwana ki ...ya sirf uski imagination ho but agar sahi huvi toh agai kya hone wala h ye ap andaza laga sakte h.....
Ab balram ki bari h
Nirwana sirf vidya ki wajah se he yanha h
Nirwana bus yahi ek naam sari mistary bani huvi h agai sab clear hota chala jayega....agla phase toh aur blender hoga sirf maarkaat
ha ha ha ye nahi bataunga kya pata ki richa ko kuch aisa pata h jo kisi ko nahi pata h ....
Ho sakta h pita putri se matlb ravindar ki wapsi ho rahi ho
..agle phase mai sab ek sath like alag jagah se dubara ikhatte honge ...abhay ki entry ka wait karo bahut dhansuu role h uska jab bhi ayega
Bilkul aj raat update ayega jo bahut kuch khass lekar ane wala h ...
Thank you so much for your f precious words...ab padhayi suru karta hu...
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Congratulations for your exam...that you did well. 
Definitely you'll get achieve what you want.
Pichle do update kamal ke the...Aur ek tarah se ye confirm ho hi gaya hai ki kahani sirf iss duniya ki nahi balki kisi aur duniya ki bhi hai, jahan se Nirwana belong karta hai.
Aur shayad woh scene ki ek aurat aag me jal rahi hai sab uske past life ke hi scene hai.
Ab tak ye sirf ek split personality ka khel tha lekin now it's different. To kya Sunil ki Valentine rider vali personality bhi vahi se aati hai jahan se Nirwana aata hai. Kyoki Sunil ke mamle me ye utna extreme nahi lagta jitna Raj ke mamle me hai.
Jab mandir par hari chaudhari me attack kiya tha tab Sunil pehli baar valentine rider bana. Tab Sunil ne Raj se pucha ki main yahan kab se hu then Raj saif hum bahut lambe waqt se yahan hai. Tab uska matlab nahi clear hua tha.
Nirwana Raj ko kamjor manta hai, uske hisab se Raj ke chahne wale uski kamjori hai, aur woh unko utni importance nahi deta lekin Vidya ko woh apni maa manta hai pure dil se. Isliye shayad Ruchi hairan hui ki Raj Nirwana rehte hue bhi apni maa ko nahi bhula.
Action ekdum top notch tha update me.
Over the top update.... Raat ka intezar next update ke liye.
Definitely you'll get achieve what you want.
Pichle do update kamal ke the...Aur ek tarah se ye confirm ho hi gaya hai ki kahani sirf iss duniya ki nahi balki kisi aur duniya ki bhi hai, jahan se Nirwana belong karta hai.
Aur shayad woh scene ki ek aurat aag me jal rahi hai sab uske past life ke hi scene hai.
Ab tak ye sirf ek split personality ka khel tha lekin now it's different. To kya Sunil ki Valentine rider vali personality bhi vahi se aati hai jahan se Nirwana aata hai. Kyoki Sunil ke mamle me ye utna extreme nahi lagta jitna Raj ke mamle me hai.
Jab mandir par hari chaudhari me attack kiya tha tab Sunil pehli baar valentine rider bana. Tab Sunil ne Raj se pucha ki main yahan kab se hu then Raj saif hum bahut lambe waqt se yahan hai. Tab uska matlab nahi clear hua tha.
Nirwana Raj ko kamjor manta hai, uske hisab se Raj ke chahne wale uski kamjori hai, aur woh unko utni importance nahi deta lekin Vidya ko woh apni maa manta hai pure dil se. Isliye shayad Ruchi hairan hui ki Raj Nirwana rehte hue bhi apni maa ko nahi bhula.
Action ekdum top notch tha update me.
Over the top update.... Raat ka intezar next update ke liye.
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Bus aj raat ki taiyari he h bro update dene ki
