Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 239 Posted masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka

 

[RAJ SUNNY]

Thank you so much
Sonali ka sahara ab raj ke bache h raj nahi h toh uske bache he uski nishani h jinhe wo jaan se jayda chahti h socho kya hoga jab sonali ka samna scorpion tribe walo se hoga...

NHI BRO SCORPION WALON KI SONALI KA SAAMNA NHI HOGA AGR WO PAHUNCH B GYE BCHON K PAAS TO JO RAJ NE APNA HUKAM KA IKKA SABSE KHATARNAK HATHIYAR WAHA PRIWAR MEIN MOJUD HAI TO SCORPION WALON KO ROKNE K LIYE WO SAAMNE AAYEGA YANI K MANISHA

 

[prem pujari]

Gyan uski toh bharmar aur words aise hote h ki usai bada reader toh koyi h he nahi aur jab unke comments dekhta hu dusri stories par tab toh kya he kahu muu se aisi tarif nikalti h ki bata bhi nahi sakta hu

pata nahi kyu ye tanj mujhe apne upar laga

2022 ke bad se silent reader ban gaya ata roz hu padha aur wapis chala gaya
jo update acha laga usko response bhi diya like ya anya kisi tarike se

jaha tak mujhe lagta hai ki mere jaise aur bhi log honge jo bas aate hai padhte hai bas
response dena itna bhi jaruri hai kya ki uske liye writer bheek mangne lage kai sare writer to maang hi rahe hai ab shayad Sandeep singh nirwan aap bhi usi raste par chalne ki soch rahe hai aisa lag raha hai mujhe

pls request hai targets set mat karna story ki aisi ki taisi ho jati hai
baki kahaniyo par bhi dekhta hu jaha par target system chal raha hai unka har 3sre 4the din ka chutiyapa hota hai ki target pura nahi hua to update nahi milega " mat do bhai kai kahaniya adhuri hai tumhari bhi reh jayegi to kya hoga koi mar thodi na jayega ya prakarti ulti disha mai chalne lag jayegi ya janjati hi vinaash ke kinare aa jayegi, chand dino ya mahino mai readers tumhari kahani ko hi bhul jayenge"
ant mai tum baith ke sochoge ki kyu band ki aur thikra fodoge readers par, readers ne to bola nahi tha kahani chalu karne ko tumne apne man se chalu ki kyunki tumhara man tha kuch khyalo ko apne in kahaniyo taur par aap bahar nikalna chahte the, man ko halka karna chahte the is wajah ya kisi aur wajah se bhi ki ho apne kahani shuru aage lejana ya rokna apke vichar hai so please ise readers ke nam par mat thopiye ki unke wajah se apka update likhne ka man nahi kar raha ya something else

lekhaki ek kala hai aur bahut log is lekhan kala par vijay prapt kar pate hai yadi apne ki hai to is vyart na jane de
jand likhe hue shabdo se apne jajbaat ya kisi aur ke jajbaat kuch hi log vyakt kar pate hai ki shamne walo ko wo ache se samajh ajaye

agar jyada gyan lage to pls story se ban karwa sakte hai aap
saand, msmt jaisi kai adhuri kahaniya dekhi hai usime mai apki kahani bhi soch lunga mai

 

[prem pujari]

pata nahi kyu ye tanj mujhe apne upar laga

2022 ke bad se silent reader ban gaya ata roz hu padha aur wapis chala gaya
jo update acha laga usko response bhi diya like ya anya kisi tarike se

jaha tak mujhe lagta hai ki mere jaise aur bhi log honge jo bas aate hai padhte hai bas
response dena itna bhi jaruri hai kya ki uske liye writer bheek mangne lage kai sare writer to maang hi rahe hai ab shayad Sandeep singh nirwan aap bhi usi raste par chalne ki soch rahe hai aisa lag raha hai mujhe

pls request hai targets set mat karna story ki aisi ki taisi ho jati hai
baki kahaniyo par bhi dekhta hu jaha par target system chal raha hai unka har 3sre 4the din ka chutiyapa hota hai ki target pura nahi hua to update nahi milega " mat do bhai kai kahaniya adhuri hai tumhari bhi reh jayegi to kya hoga koi mar thodi na jayega ya prakarti ulti disha mai chalne lag jayegi ya janjati hi vinaash ke kinare aa jayegi, chand dino ya mahino mai readers tumhari kahani ko hi bhul jayenge"
ant mai tum baith ke sochoge ki kyu band ki aur thikra fodoge readers par, readers ne to bola nahi tha kahani chalu karne ko tumne apne man se chalu ki kyunki tumhara man tha kuch khyalo ko apne in kahaniyo taur par aap bahar nikalna chahte the, man ko halka karna chahte the is wajah ya kisi aur wajah se bhi ki ho apne kahani shuru aage lejana ya rokna apke vichar hai so please ise readers ke nam par mat thopiye ki unke wajah se apka update likhne ka man nahi kar raha ya something else

lekhaki ek kala hai aur bahut log is lekhan kala par vijay prapt kar pate hai yadi apne ki hai to is vyart na jane de
jand likhe hue shabdo se apne jajbaat ya kisi aur ke jajbaat kuch hi log vyakt kar pate hai ki shamne walo ko wo ache se samajh ajaye

agar jyada gyan lage to pls story se ban karwa sakte hai aap
saand, msmt jaisi kai adhuri kahaniya dekhi hai usime mai apki kahani bhi soch lunga mai

just for clarification 2014 approx se kahaniyo ko padh raha hu
aur 2020 jan mai ye forum join kiya tha aur lagbhag 3 saal tak active reader bhi raha tha

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

just for clarification 2014 approx se kahaniyo ko padh raha hu
qqaaur 2020 jan mai ye forum join kiya tha aur lagbhag 3 saal tak active reader bhi raha tha

Apke liye nahi h ap mat socho ....
Target set karne se kya mil jayega mujhe prem bhai ....kuch bhi toh nahi ....infact kuch log galiya denge man mai..wo alag jo main chahta nahimaine toh story suru ki thi tab ye bhi nahi pata tha ki kanha tak likhunga ...bus bura lagta tha ki stories adhuri rah jati h isliye ek story likhu taki sabko complete story mile....phir response itna mila ki socha ek bahut badi story likh duu... Bus itna he sochta hu....

Ab baat ati h likes aur reviews ki toh ye unke liye h .... Likes aur reviews nahi dena toh mat do par update na aye toh fir bolo bhi mat aur apni bhadas apne tak rakho tab kyo unko pass shaktimaan ki Tarah shaktiya ajati h likhne ke liye jaise
Time ho gaya ...
Kab ayega...
Waiting....
Ab inke bhi nakhre suru ho gaye h....
Doge ya nahiii...
Bla bla....
Bro ye sab kahna ya likhna uska dil se hak banta h jo update acha lage toh appreciate karte h aur kami lage toh uchit sabdo ke sath reply.....responce dete h... mera bhi record h maine kabhi us reader ko nahi kaha h kuch bhi jisne apni limit paar na ki ho ....infact dava karta hu ki kisi bhi reader ke liye tu ya tum ka use nàhi kiya aur kiya h toh tab he kiya hoga jab usne kiya hoga ...rajput family hu bàki kà nàhi pata par hamare yanha chote bache se bhi ap karke he baat karte h hum.....
Ye sab prem bhai apke liye nahi sabhi ke liye he h..aur aj phir kahta hu likhta hu dil se likhta hu ....bus choti si demand he karta hu wo bhi kabhi kabhi...kyo ki duniya aisi he h bina roye toh maa bhi bache ko dudh nahi pilati h...phir meri toh bisaat he kya h....
Ban apko maja aya apke bahane kuch mere dil ki bhi nikal gayiiii prem bhai ...main dusro jaisa nahi hu ...abhi toh week mai teen update enjoy karo....

 

[sonu paba]

Jyada intezaar nahi karwana bhai jaldi hi update de dena



Sonali sahi me kuchh na kuchh karegi jarur usko raj thoda sa bhi clue mil gya to raj ke ande gye

और हमारे बड़े बुजुर्गो ने कहा है कि खामोश इंसान सबसे ज्यादा खतरनाक होता है उसको उंगली नहीं करना चाहिए। उससे चौदह - चौसठ फीट दूर ही रहो तो अच्छा है नहीं तो 4-64 मार देगी/देगा

Sorry sandip bhai
Thoda sa paua chada li hai bhai to emotion ko pura high kar diya hai to bakchodi kar diya hai to mere typing mistake ya galat word likha gya ho to please ignore kare

Baaki itna bakchodi me ek bolunga bhai wo hai update ka word count abki baar se daal dena bhai
Preeti ki jaldi jaldi bajao uska pura suja do uska bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Nice update
Iss update mein chote chote kafi seen dikhaye jo ki kahani ko aage badhaty hai or mazedaar banate hai
Preeti or Jasmin kuch alag chal chal rahe hai

Sari ghatnaye eksath he chal rahi h isliye clarity bani rahegi

Wahi Sunil & company Finland pahuch gaye or kaam bhi shuru kar diya

Unko raj ke ane se pahle kafi kuch set up rakhna fir raj ke ane par suru ho jayega...

Poonam ko dekh kar acha laga or uski udasi ko dekhkar bura bhi laga

Uska roke agai aur solid ane wala h kya ho jab poonam richa ko thapad jad de...

Kriti bhi Raj k liye udas hai or share holders kuch alag karne ki firaq mein lage huye hai

Lagta h kriti bhi puar mai ghota kha rahi h jinda hone ka pata laga toh excitement mai kanhi sabke samne gale he na lag jaye

Wahi Raj ne abhi tak kuch bhi kiya nhi sirf sabko observe kar raha hai or jankari nikaal raha hai.

Raj ka khel suru ho gaya aj ke update mai dikh jayega...
Thank you so much for your precious words

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

bro main ne kuch coment read keye logoon k yar har tarha ka banda hota haapp ki story parne wala kuch or story k writer b hote han jo nahi chate k app likho is leye wo bad coment karte ha app ko dishart karne k leye

Hmmmmm mujhe bhi doubt pura hota h kyoki new reader ke comment aur old reader ke comment ke level mai he fark hota h....

so un ki batoon ka bora nahi mano app waqat par update dete ho bohat mahnat ka kam ha app ka is leye app ko thanks k app hamare leye bohat achi kahani likh rahe han

Zahid bhai ye sochne wale kam he log h main bhi kafi saal se is forum par hu pahle reader aur ap writer...par maine aj tak jhut nahi bolta kisi ko bhi meri tarah update itne waqt tak aur na dene par advance mai batate huve nahi dekha h....baki main ache se samaj gaya hu jo apne kaha shukriya

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Itni saari situations ko ek hi update me likhna asaan nahi hai, great narration.

Pahle ye batao apki tabiyat kaisi h maine pahle bhi pucha tha apne bataya nahi

Jenny ka jana Kirti ko kafi weak kar gaya hai. Is halat me Battliwala jarur koi chaal chalega. Bas weh kisi tarah se Sunil se ulajh jaye, maza aa jayega. Lekin weh to Finland me hai.

Jenny ek tarah se kriti ki raaz daar h aur raj ne khud usai lagaya h toh kriti ke liye khass bhi h ...

Udhar Udaipur me Poonam ko Sonali ke aadmi monitor kar rahe hain. Jis tarah se Sonali ka chehra baat kerte samay kathor hua tha, padh kar maza aa gaya.

Sonali ka blast toh agai ayega ...wo aur solid hokar wapasi karegi...kyoki ab wo ek maa bhi h aur agai ek patni bhi hogiii....aur isliye sunil ke admi sonali ko report kar rahe h...

Sonali ka bacchon ko lekar pyar bahut emotional

Yahi toh nishani h ab uske pass raj ki

Ab Rifat, Mamata, Ajay aur Jhanvi ghumne ja rahe hain, weh bhi Andman Nicobar, yeh naazuk paristhiti hai.

Sab dhukhi rahe h aur bache ke ane ke baad he khusiya ayi h aur mamta rifat bhi chahti h sab khus rahe

Unko Tattoo walon ke baare me nahi pata. Kahin yeh log kisi trap me na ulajh jaye, aur usase bhi jaruri, Ajay aur Jhanvi ke bina Mandwa ki defence bhi kamzor ho jayea. No hi-tech.

Kisi ko bhi nahi pata h filhal kyoki unhone jo bhi moment kari h usmai sabko saaf kar diya h sayad rajeev kuch clue laye...

Shri Lanka se layi gayi ladki Sana/ Sofiya ki bhi jhalak mil gayi. Xabhi aur Aag jiske baap hon, Guru ji jaisa sikhane wala ho, ek jwalamukhi tayyar ho raha hai, almost ho gaya hai. Bas usko apne par control karna aur seekhna padega.

Abhi choti h par story agai bhadegi tab sayad uska role agai aye...par ye clear h ki wo banegi bahut powerful..

Finland me Sunil aur Sherdil ka accha welcome hua, aur weh unka challenge jeet kar un sab me shaamil bhi ho gaye. Accha plan banaya hai island dhundne ka.

Isliye kyoki agar jisne ravindar ko kaid karwa rakha usai pata laga toh wo kya nahi karwa sakega finland mai aur ravindar gayab ho gaya toh raaz khulne ki akhiri umid bhi khatam ho jayegi

Dekhte hain kitni jaldi safalta milti hai. Haan, Sunil thoda nervous hai Jenny ki saheliyon ke saath, hahaha...

Ab ladki ke sath us jaisa pati vrita aur shakt lounda samaj se bahar main toh samaj bhi nahi paa raha hu ki kaise uske scenes likhu...

Mujhe laga tha ki Raj us behroopiye ko aaj hi pakad lega jo chipa hua tha ya phir Jabra ko bakra bana dega, lekin aisa kuch nahi hua.

Jabra ka bakra ha ha ha...bilkul banega aur aisa banega ki hanste hanste lot pot ho jaoge...

Lekin ek baat hai, Sarika ka naam sun kar Warden kyon chonk gayi, kahin isi ki wajah se to Neha depression me aa kar drug ki aadi ho gayi hai...

Sarika ki kahni bhi aahe rahi h bus jayda nahi h kuch gine chune updates mai sarika preeti sab clear ho jayengi par ye tay h sex jarur kafi dikhega...par...kuch naya ...aur detail mai bhi nahi...
Thank you so much for your precious words and appreciation...dododo bro as always review .shandar raha...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Delhi me Richa kya hua hai uske dad ko pata hai ki nahi Raj jinda hai

Pata honi chahiye kyoki baap h toh uski sahmati hogi ...aur anirudh ne toh pahle he haa bol diya tha...

aur usne shadi ki hai agar yeh baat Sona bhabhi aur Poonam bhabhi ko pata chali to bawal to ho hi jayega

Ha ha ha ismai koyi sak h kya ....dudh jamaye koyi aur malayi khaye koyi...sonali h wo chalta firata barood...

Divya Bua ki class lagegi tab to story me aur bhi thamakedaar hoga

Divya saas h toh sayad unhe bakhs de sure nahi hu par umid h

kriti ko Richa se milna chahiye kyuki vo bhi uski friend hai

Bahut lamba ho jayega koyi na chota part dalene ki Kosis karunga...

Poonam k liye Sona bhabhi k me soft corner jo kyoki unhe pata hai ki Raj ke sath uska bepannah pyaar hai to Sona bhabhi Poonam ko dur nahi jata nahi dekh sakti

Poonam wo ladki h jo manisha ke sath ghar ki neev banegi...aur pite ghar ko jodkar rakhegi...ab dekhte h kaise sab hota h kyoki raj toh richa ko patni manega nahiii kyoki usai yaad nahi h...

Raj aur uske bachcho ki kundli k raaz ek hi jaisa ho par ye story k suspense k liye bhi accha hai bachcho ka naam Karan baki hai aur

Karan arjun rakh de acha rahega aur unke karan he toh pura suspence bana huva h...

Raj ke nanihal ka kahani me jikra hona chahiye writer ji Yogi baba bhi ne Raj ke dadaji ko bata dena chahiye ki vo abhi Jinda hai kyunki Raj unke apne chahite bete aur bahu ki ek loti nishani hai us nishani k bhi 2 nishaniyan hai

Sadhu baba ne kyo nahi batays ya mana kiya jab story ki ending ayegi tab pata chalega toh ap ohhh he bologe bahut kuch h jo last mai connect hoga...aur do nishaniya ...unki bhi bahut ahmiyat h ...

jo Poonam ko pata chalani chahiye kya pata uska dil me jo pyaar hai voh bahar aa jaye

Scorpion tribe wale yanhi h aur kyo chipaya h nahi batays uska reason raj ki wapasi ke baad pata lag jayega apko

Raj madhu se pyaar karta tha to apne pyaar k nishaniyon se koi kaise dur ja sakte hai

Raj ne madhu ko sukh diya par chije pahle he clear thi dono mai...

MLA k bete ka intro achcha laga hai par har koi achcha thodi ho sakta hai school lover hai to kya hua par jo ladki ek baar jise sacche dil se pyaar karti ho ya yeh kahu siddhat se pyaar karti ho voh bhi use k liye jiyegi

Wo alag baat h par mla ka beta pyar toh karta h school time se ab kitna sacha ya jhuta ya koyi sajis ye agai clear hoga ...par poonam ke piche filhal sonali khadi h

Mission Finland shuru ho gaya hai
junagadh ka event thoda dheeme lag raha hai matlab info niklana hai us family me kya chal raha hai yeh bhi pata chala jata to accha lagta

Thoda sabar karo kadiya sab judi huvi h aur judti jayengiii

but koi problem nahi hai Aaj ka update achcha laga Raj ke madad k liye koi to hona chahiye writer ji

Uski wajah updates mai batayi na main

kyunki yahi ek story hai jiske update me besabri se intezar rahta hai bhale hi sex scene nahi hai par story padke iske previous update baar baar padhne ka ji chahta hai

Are sex ki bharmar h bus sabra karo...bus ha ek adha scene he detail mai ayega baki normal sex ke honge ..

Sorry is lambe pravachan ke liye
Moon light k update me khun ki shuruaat hogi aise lag raha hai par agle update ka intezar rahega writer ji (#SSN)

Ha khun ki gandh toh h ye sure h ...bus padhkar batana ...
Thank you so much for your precious words and Detailed review Devildanny bro

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Wonderful
Bhaut Hee Jabardast aur Lazawab Update Diyaa Hee
Keep It Up ️

Thank you