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Okkk koyi baat nahi...Honestly mujhe ye update kuch khaas pasand nahi aaya.
Ha kafi kuch nikal gaya.tha..Mostly part skipable tha
7k words me bhi 80-90 % sex scene me hi nikal gaya.
Ha socha tha par neha ke according likhna pada ya aise kahu likhta chala gaya toh tikh rahegaJabki kai jagah par jaise Madhu aur Raj ki suhagraat aur Raj - Rajni ke sex scenes ko aapne 4-5 line me hi nipta rakha hai.
Hmmmm iska jawab abhi nahi dunga main ...Aditya ke sath fight ke waqt Raj bhayankar nashe me tha aur nind me tha, phir bhi usne apne aap ko handle kar liya tha to yahan iss tarah halke se nashe se uska bahakna sense nahi banata.
Sex se toh nahi batayegii kuch bhi ...par kich toh karna he hoga raj koHaa agar sex ke jariye woh neha se koi info nikalwana chahe to alag baat hai but I don't think neha jyada kuch bata payegi.
Possibal nahi tha kyoki sur bhi kaand baki hI think ye sex update kuch update baad aata to sahi rehta.
Hmm iske bare mai agai aur detail ayegi tab clear hogaBaki ye naya aadmi kaun hai, jise Raj pehle se janta hai lekin woh Raj ko nahi janta aur uski video bhi Raj ke paas thi.
Ye toh agle update mai he pura clear ho jayega...ek shandar fight ke sathLet's see next update me kya hoga, Jasmine haar jayegi yaa phir puspendra ko dhool chata degi?
Thank you so much for your precious words and review...agla kal he araha h...Nice update
Waiting for next update eagerly, keep it up.
Thank you so muchWaah Bhai Maza aa gaya NIce Shandar erotic UPdate Fire UPdate hai
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Hona he tha wo bhi dhamakedaar1st Encounter hO Gaya NehA Ka.....
Nahi rajni ke sath kiya thaMaza aa Gaya Bhut Dino Ke Bad Raj Ko Sex MiLa hAi..... Shayad Madhu Ke Bad Ab Kiya Hai Raaj Ne..
Nahi raj he h aur uski kosis bhi h ki nirwana bahar bhi na aye ...Per mUJJe Esa LaGa Raaj Ne sex na kerke Nirwana Ne Kiya hO Apki Kya Ray Hai Is Bare me...
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Wo bhi tabad tod kiya tha ..Madhu ke baad pehli baar? Are you sure!
Madhu ke baad to Mumbai me Rajni madam ke sath aur ek khadoos professor bhi thi college ki uske sath.
Aur bich me jab sab mandwa me aaye the tab anjana ke sath bhi.
Aur do saal se Richa ke sath kabaddi to nahi khel raha tha naa.
Already update bahut bada ho gaya tha isliye rukna pada ...har baar kuch na kuch adhura he rahega ..Bhai FIGHt TO PUri Kardete yaar Adhuri CHor di Aapne
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