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Update 264 countdown begins posted masti mai padhne ka bindas likes aur revoes pelna ka
Adultery Raj-- hero of the family
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Humko jante ho ya hum bhi de apna introduction
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Agar ye Brother revenge Raj ke liye hai tou phir pakka wo sherdil ke liye lega ,kyuki yogi maharaj ke anusaar Sherdil ki aayu kam hai , aur uski mrityu bhi Raj ko bachane me hi jayegi
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Hello Sandeep Singh Nirwana ,
maine abhi ye story complete ki hai ,as 3rd time, mujhe dukh h ki ye story mujhe pahale nahi mili , that's a really good story, so its pressurised me to read this 3rd time,
for me Reading 238 updates threee time is Unbelievable
mujhe jo baat yaha pasand aayi h ki is story me koi bhi unlogical cheez story ya kuch bhi aisa nahi h jaisa ki baki stories me maine dekha,
the golden things that's Raj ko vastvik taur pe taiyar kiya gaya,like jo iski itni difficult actual training hui h that's I want jo ki real me ek actual World actual real feeling deta h ,raj ne real me asal mehnat kar power li hai
na ki baki stories ki tarah kisi ko SYSTEM mil raha ,kisi ko alag h unlogical powers , jo ki mujhe sabse bhadda lgta h kyonki as per me, mujhe ek real story ki talash thi jaha "logics" ho realness ho na ki in systems, powers wagera wagera,Raj ne jo hasil kiya apni mehnat se kiya,jitne log mare apni physical se maare tranning ki wajah se maaree ,
mai kahna to aur chahta hu par shbd nahi h
bus itna hii..
And after that's jo shabdo ka istemal Kiya Gaya sahi awasaro pe like sonali aur raaj k romance time pe etc, Har ek chhoti si chhoti baat ka yaha logic hai,jo ki wakai lajawab hai, Raj ki training ka part is really awesome use waha puri real training di gayi mehnati karayi gayi,uske bad uske connections bane
and yaha jo ek baat kahi gyi h story ke starting me ( Jagmal Singh dawara)ek golden line jo mai aage jikr krunga wo really appreciatable and mere liye is puri story ka base h
maine abhi ye story complete ki hai ,as 3rd time, mujhe dukh h ki ye story mujhe pahale nahi mili , that's a really good story, so its pressurised me to read this 3rd time,
for me Reading 238 updates threee time is Unbelievable
mujhe jo baat yaha pasand aayi h ki is story me koi bhi unlogical cheez story ya kuch bhi aisa nahi h jaisa ki baki stories me maine dekha,
the golden things that's Raj ko vastvik taur pe taiyar kiya gaya,like jo iski itni difficult actual training hui h that's I want jo ki real me ek actual World actual real feeling deta h ,raj ne real me asal mehnat kar power li hai
na ki baki stories ki tarah kisi ko SYSTEM mil raha ,kisi ko alag h unlogical powers , jo ki mujhe sabse bhadda lgta h kyonki as per me, mujhe ek real story ki talash thi jaha "logics" ho realness ho na ki in systems, powers wagera wagera,Raj ne jo hasil kiya apni mehnat se kiya,jitne log mare apni physical se maare tranning ki wajah se maaree ,
mai kahna to aur chahta hu par shbd nahi h
bus itna hii..
And after that's jo shabdo ka istemal Kiya Gaya sahi awasaro pe like sonali aur raaj k romance time pe etc, Har ek chhoti si chhoti baat ka yaha logic hai,jo ki wakai lajawab hai, Raj ki training ka part is really awesome use waha puri real training di gayi mehnati karayi gayi,uske bad uske connections bane
and yaha jo ek baat kahi gyi h story ke starting me ( Jagmal Singh dawara)ek golden line jo mai aage jikr krunga wo really appreciatable and mere liye is puri story ka base h
Awaiting your upcoming update on Thursday, dear bro, anxiously, excitedly and eagerly. Unable to contain our excitement and anticipation of the arrival of ' Alpha '. Regards
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Agle mai bahut kuch hone wala h...
Ha ha ha hoga kuch toh jarur hoga ......
Ha ye sab dekhne layak rahega
Ap sab kya chahte ho....
Bilkul aj raat late tak likhunga aj 4 k cross ho jayega ..aur phir kal raat taiyar ..
Bro kyoki Main story padhne me busy tha isliye Comments nahi kar paya,par jab bhi comments Dekhta to kuch comments kafi acche hote par wahi kafi negative comments hote
jinhe padhke dukh bhi hota,and gussa bhi aata
maine kai writers dekhe jo story to achi start krte hai and fame aane k baad wo story ke base ko bhul jate hai aur wahi kafi negative comments us chiz ka support krte hai
mai to yahi kahna chahunga ki story kbhi apne base se na bhatke
jinhe padhke dukh bhi hota,and gussa bhi aata
maine kai writers dekhe jo story to achi start krte hai and fame aane k baad wo story ke base ko bhul jate hai aur wahi kafi negative comments us chiz ka support krte hai
mai to yahi kahna chahunga ki story kbhi apne base se na bhatke
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