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Nice update broUpdate 6
Bang Bang
Recap----
Pichle update mai apne dhekha Raj ka school jana aur bade chacha ki planning .. Aur mandir ke rast mai hamle ki sajish....
Ab agai......
Hum sabi 2 gadiyo mai baith gaye aur chal diye mandir ki aur janha ke khatre se anjaan sab masti mai ja rahe the ye mandir maa bhawani ka h ye mandir Do pahadi ke bich mai h yanha kaisa bi ashant man ho shant ho jata h....
Raste mai.....
Dada ji – Beta Nirwana bhagwan se ap jo chahte h uska nivedan karna matlb jo ap chahe wo mangna maa bhawani apki jarur sunegi....
Raj--- ji dada ji muje bahut kuch mangna h bhagwan se main jarur mangunga
Bheema ---- babuji agai ped kata huva h raste mai kuch gadbad h ...
Dada ji ---- kutte agaye lagta h chalte raho aur Raj beta kuch bi ho jaye bilkul bi bahar mat nikalna samje..
Raj--- ji Dada ji
Kalu---- Ustad wo arahe h taiyar ho jayiye ..aj kaam tamam karna he warna hum ni bachenge agar thakur bach gaya toh .thakur ke sath uska driver aur uska pariwar he hoga
Ustad—Are kalu main toh pichle 2 saal se mouka dund raha hu par aj mila h aur jor se taiyaar ho jao sab muje barbaad kiya tha na.Aj tu ni bachega thakur
Kalu – ustad 2 gadiya arahi h har saal toh ek he ati h kuch gadbad h rahne dete h ustad kanhi lene ke dene na pad jaye
Wo kahte h na Din mai ek baar mu se sarawati bolti h matlb sach nikalta he h aur aj wahi huva tha kalu ke sath
Ustad---nii kalu aj toh main ya wo ek he jinda bachega phir ek saal aur intezar ni hota h pichle saal bi kuch ni kiya tha .gadiya arahi h taiyaar ho jao gher lo sabko.
Gadiya ped ke pass akar rukii aur gadi se niche utre Dada ji ..
Dada ji – samne dhek ke bole chupne se kya muje pata ni h ki lakad baggai sher ka sikar karne aye h ajao bahar aur dhekho ki sher ke pass sirf mout h dene ko uski jaan tumare bus ki ni h.....aur apni mucho pe taav dete huve bole aj pahli baar kisi ko jinda chodunga par usai dhek ke koyi ni kahega ki wo jinda h log kahenge ki “JINDA MURDA PAHLI BAAR DHEKHA H “ jo bolta ni h
Uske baad jhadiyo se sare gunde bahar ane lage kisi ke hath mai talwar toh kisi ke pass lath toh kisi ke pass rod sariye the...
Ustad---- Thakur aj tak ka pata ni par aj lakadbhagai jarur karenge sikar “ teri mout hogi aur hamari aj dawat hogi” tera kaleja khaunga main aj raat par afsouse tu ni hoga dhekne ke liye
Dada ji------Hariya choudhary tera baap pata h bahut nek insaan H uski he wajah se pichli baar stree ke sath jabardasti karne ki kosis ki wajah se sirf dand deke chod diya tha par aj aj aj ..ek sabak hoga sabke liye shaitan phone laga iske baab ko dr lane ko bol de...
Shaitan singh ke bahar nikal ne se hariya bi soch mai padh gaya ki thakur akela ni h par usai dar na laga usne socha dono ko he mar denge aj kyoki uske pass itne admi jo the sath aj.
Dada ji—phir bole mera khun ya maans pachana tere bus ki baat ni h babbar sher ka sikar karne aya h pahle kisi aur se hokar gujarna hoga
Aur dada ji chillaye Bheeemaaaaaa.....
Car ka fatak khula aur ek nukili jhutiya (shoes type) pahne bheema nikla gadi se jisai dhek ke 20 gundo ki halat kharab ho gayi thi wo ache se jante the ki bheema jo mout deta h wo kaisi hoti h.......baki jo gunde the wo naye the bheema abi ladayi kam karta tha toh wo usai sakal se itna ni jante the .....par bheema ke karnamai jisne dhekhe h usai us raat nind ni ayi h ......
Hariya---- oh toh thakur ka kutta bi h sath aj sabko maar dunga aur chillake bola agar inko maar diya toh 1 cr ni 5 cr tum sabke aur piche jo baithi h dono wo bi tumari ...
Hariya ki baate sun jo gunde dar rahe the paiso ka naam sunke khus ho gaye aur hamla kar diya pahle dus gunde dada ji ki taraf aye dadaji ne ek hath car mai dala aur car mai se apni talwar nikali jiska wajan he 10 se 15 kg ke beech tha aur usai dono hatho se bari bari ghumne lage charo taraf aur bolo bahut din ho gaye kasrat kare bheema intezar kariyo dheku jara kitna dum h inmai..
Bheema—babuji apko bahana chahiye ladne ka ap aram kariye main aur chote malik nipat lenge inse ..
Dada ji ---Chup kar ladne de muje acha tikh h hariya aur 10mere baki tum dono ke ...
Ab agai story
Raaj ke najariye se...
Aur agaye dus gunde dadaji ke pass pahle ne lath ghumake sir par marna chaha Dada ji ne jhuk kar uske pair he kaat diye ye dhekar piche wale ek baar ruk gaye par heemat kar phir agai bhade 2 ek sath aye dono ke hath mai rod thi jo sidhi kar mari sir par dada ji ne agai talwar karke rok li aur piche dhaka de kar talwar ghumayi ab talwar he itni bhari thi sidhi gale pe lagi aur gardan dhad se alag ho gayi..dono ki...udhar shaitan chacha ne bi lath nikal lath se pure lathait ban kar gundo pe tut pade aur sir par maar kar phodne lage sir jaise koyi matki phod rahe h par udhar bheema chacha toh alag he. Kulhadi wo bi do taraf wali leke chale the gundo ki taraf pahla jaise he aya teji se mara sir ke bicho bich ye kya.... ek waar ni 2 ni 5 waar kar faad diya bich mai se piche walo ki toh gaand he fat gayi ki ye bc h kya gunde ek dusre ki taraf dhek bol rahe the rakhshas h ye toh..
Udhar Dada ji 7 logo ko maar diya tha baki ke teeno ke ek hath aur ek leg kaat diye .....Aur chal diye hariya ke pass hariya bi talwar pakde taiyaar tha ur bheedi talware apasmai hariya bi tawlwar baaz tha talwar takrane se din mai bi chingariya dikh rahi thi.. par dadaji bhari pade hariya pe..
Dusri taraf shaitan chacha janha lathiyo se sir phod rahe the wanhi bheema chacha gundo ko cheer faad rahe the 20 gundo ko faad diya tha bich mai se aur bheema chacha gusai mai chillaye babuji par ankh uthayi h tum logo ne aj koyi jinda ni bachega sabko khol dunga aur aisa kholunga ki dr bi jod ni payega ..tumhari atma bi dubara ni judegi haramzado..aur itna kahte he tut pade phir se ..5 ki shaitan chacha ne matki matlab sir faad diye the...
Wanhi chachi ne pass ke gaanv ke sarpanch ke pass munim ji se phone karwa diya tha hazaro ki bheed bhagi arahi thi lath fawda katar leke
Gunde jo bache huve the unhone bheema ka kahar aur dada ji talwar se gardan kat ti huvi dhekhi toh wo bhag khade huve....
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Charo taraf khun he khun tha 15 gunde bach ke bhag gaye wo bi ghayal the ...aisa laga jaise lal rang ki holi kheli ho abhi yanha....
Dada ji----- bheema rook jao jane do unhe bus bahut huva shant ho jao kyo ki unhe pata tha ki uska gusa bahut bura h...aur unhone kaha shaitan logo ko bulao rasta saaf karne ke liye
Shaitan chacha --- jarurat ni h wo dhekhiye babuji charo taraf se log arahe tractor aur gadiya aur bhag kar...
Gaanv walo 15 minut mai pahuche unhone 10 logo ko tractor ki toli mai se nikal ke phek diya aur bole thakursaab ye log hame bhagte huve dikhe hum pakad ke le aye aur baki 3 ko log ghasit kar dusri taraf se la rahe the aur 2 ko dusri taraf se
Dada ji ---Hmmm inhe wapas daldo gadiyo mai
Gaanv wale ek sath chillane lage bali bali bali chahiye thakur saab inhone hamre bhagwan pe hamla kiya inhe hum jinda ni chodenge aur bheema bi bola babuji bali dijiye inki ya hum cheerfaad karenge inka...
Dadaji--- kuch pal sochke thik h par is hariya ko jinda chodenge chalo mandir maa bhawani ke mandir mai chadegi bali inki
Mandir ke sath mai bali ka sthan h janha bakro ki bali di jati h ....
Dada ji hey ma bhawani rakhsa karna hamari aur hame shakti dena taki in jaise papiyo ki bali deke dharti paap mukt karta rahu.
Thakur saab pe hamle ki khabar se ass pass ke ganvo se hazaro log doude aye the mandir tak .mandir mai jor jor se nare lag rahe the jai ma bhawani jai ma bhawani....aur
Sab gundo ki ek ek kar bali di gayi... Bali dhek ke hariya moot chuka tha 2 baar. Aur mare huve gundo ke mans ko chod diya kutte aur cheel kauvo ke liye
Hariya ke 2 no hath pair ki ungliya aur jeeb kat di gayi sabke samne taki sabko ye yaad rahe....ki anjaam kya hota Thakur jagmal pe hamla karne pe....hariya jinda toh h par murda saaman matalb
WO JINDA...... MURDA JO ....BOLTA H PAR... MARE HUVE SE BI BATTAR HAALAT MAI....
Aj ke liye itna he Sath bane rahiye milte h agle
Agai ab Raj ko 4saal bada ho kar 10 saal ka ho jayega
Nice update broUPDATE –7
RECAP—Pichle update mai bheema aur dadaji ka action aur gundo ki bali dhekhi .sath he gaanv ke logo ka pyar dhekha dada ji ke liye...
Ab agai .....
In mandir---
Raj—hey ma bhawani maine apne ma aur baap toh ni dhekhe par unki kami mere dada ji ne puri ki h ..hey ma bhawani muje itni shakti dena ki koyi bi mere apno pe ane wale kisi bi dhuk dard ko dur kar saku aur is layak banu ki Dadaji ko muj par garv ho main apna ek wajud bana saku khud ki pahchan bana saku.....
Hey maa bhawani mera koyi apna aur bi h kya h toh wo kanha h kya wo mujse pyar karte h agar karte h toh unse milna h muje...
Bus maa muje yahi mangana h apse is balak ki ye pukar puri kardo maaa.......
Dadaji – beta nirwana maa bhawani se apni khawaish mang li ho toh chale...
Main – ji Dada ji
aur hum sab ne mandir mai Bhojan sabko karwaya matlb bhandara lagwaya tha wanha Dada ji ne sab ke liye aur hum khud parsad lekar ghar ki aur chal diye....
Next morning utha main aur school chala gaya yahi schedule tha mera Sunday toh ap sab jante he h tourture etc . chacha ji ne jo plan kiya tha usai chachi ne cancel karwa diya bheema ka trailer dhek ke ...aur dusri planning karne lage teeno milke ..baki sab normal raha phir..
Aise he din bit te rahe city taraki karti rahi
Dada ji ne haveli ko aur surakhshit kar diya tha is beech choti moti ghatnaye hoti rahi
After 5 year
Main 7th class mai hu aur babita 9th mai surendra 11th mai h aj school ka new session start ho raha h main ye batana bhul gaya hu abi height meri 4 fit h rang gora h smart hu but one thing about me.main abi shakt lounda hudont Lough
Yaar ghar mai. Mahol ap sabhi lago ko pata he h. respect ladies ki bado ki etc etc ka naraa h dadaji hka so readers thats why i m shakt lounda abi ke liye lol meri class mai 30 ladke aur 20 ladkiya h ab ye ni pata h muje ye ghurti kyo rahti h .. ohh main ye batana toh bhul he gaya ki main topper hu class ka ek baar ache se padh lu toh phir bhulta ni hu mere frnds h but close frnds ni h chalo ab bahut huva class start karte h
Table pe duster thokne ki awaj ayi thak thak Students silent kisi ne shor kiya toh murga bana dunga
Main dheere se lol ye teacher toh gender change karwata h ladkiya murgi se murga banegi..
Teacher – my self sunil sethi and i m your new class teacher so all of you stand up one by one and give your intro...
Sabne intro dena suru kiya maine bi diya aur sirf Raj naam liya aur baith gaya
Teacher – tell me your fathers name
Main chup raha kuch ni bola
Teacher – i said tell me your father name tumahare papa ka naam batao
Main again chup raha kyoki aisa kabhi kabhi hota tha jab new teacher ata tha aur phir kuch na bolta dhek baitha deta tha but is teacher ke achi khasi khujli thi pichwade mai
Teacher lawarish h kya jo baap ka naam ni pata h ...
Teacher phir se bol be lawarish h kya lawarish h toh tera admission kisne karaya yanha pe sur muskarane laga
Main chup raha par ye chuppi us teachr ko ni pata tha uske liye kitni bhari padne wali h ..meri ankho mai ansuu aur chera pe krodh tha aur mere mu se nikal gaya wo jo ni kahna chahiye tha.....
Main chillake
Lawarish...
Lawarish...
Lawarish...
Ye tu banega is janam ni har janam kyo ki
“MERA NAAM MAI H NIRWAANA AUR JISKA MTALB H MOKHS.... WO MAIN DETA NI HU AJ SE TERI ROOH BHATKEGI AUR TERE SARIR KO KHAYENGE ASMAN KE UDTE PARINDE AJ AUR IS PAL SE TU KHATAM”
AUR TERI MOUT ITNI DARDNAAK HOGI KI TUJE KOYI PAHCHAN NI PAYEGA
YE MERE WORDS H NIRWAANA MOKHS DENE WALE KE WORDS
Gusai ke mare mera sir dard hone laga tha aur main behosh ho jata hu
In between two hours
Jab main behosh tha kya huva
In call
Teacher –maine kosis ki thi pata karne ki wo uski he aulad h ya ni ya Jagmaal ke pariwar se h ya ni par register mai kuch ni likha h aur class ki sari baat batata h sivaye raj ki dhamki wali....
In call samne se madarchod sab gudgobber kar diya tune nikal wanha se jaldi se ab sab satark ho jayenge teri wajah se sab khatm ho gaya bhag mc jaldi wanha se
In 2 hours mai mere behosh hone ke baad teacher ne kisi se baar ki aur dusri traf principal side jo huva
Jab principal ko pata laga toh uski gaand he fat gayi usai apni mautnazar arahi thi ki ..principal sunil se kaha mr sunil apne usai force kyo kiya maine apko kaha bi tha ki class ke kisi bi bache ko koyi personal detail ke liye force ni karega ap pahle he state ke bahar ke h maine sirf apko thakur hari singh ke kahne pe naukri di thi ap abi ke abi resign kijye aur chale jayiye....
Muje school medical room mai dr ne check kiya aur ek injection laga ke bola principal sir iske mind mai bahut stress h jo gusai mai nikla h.....ye bahut khatarnak h iske liye aur sabi ke liye jinse isai nafrat h matlb ap aisa samaj lijiye ek bomb fit h mind mai jo jab bi fatega toh iski frustration anger gussa niklega aur phir kya hoga i dont know ye sirf mera andaza h i hope main galat ho jau itni si umar mai itna gussa actualy dr ne class ki camera recording dheki thi .... Isi liye wo itna judge kar paya detail mai..
Aj ke liye itna he
Next update mai Raj ka chota. Sa khatarnak roop dhekne ko milega...
Sath bane rahe........
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