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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family
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Bahut bahut sukhriya pratikriyao ke liye.Ekdam zakkasss update bhidu
Ye raj ne kisko dekh liya jo isko itana gussa ayaa
Sonali to tadap rahi hey raj keliye
Sath bane rahe pyar ka mousam bi ayega....
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THank you so much for sach a lovely comments ...
Sahi kaha apne raaz bhai
Update dopahar ko 2pm tak ajayega
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Tuesday Big megha update near about 6000 words ka 2 pm tak ajayega.......
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Nice line sandeep bhai
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Always remember one think ........ Whenever you use the word "RAJPUT" the attitude of rajput is more important but you missed it .........Kal update ni de paunga isliye aj bada update diya h enjoy
Recap ....
Pichle update mai apne dhekha ki kaise Raj ne apne vicharo ki neev ki pahal karli h
Ab agai....
Dur kanhi Bharat ke ek state M.P mai ek khoobsurat jagah JUNGARH jo pahodo aur nadi se giri huvi h dharti ka swarg h wanha mousam har 12 mahine suhana rahta h wanha....
Ek bahut badi haveli h jiski sundarta bahut he bhawaya huva karti thi jisai pure state mai jana jata h. ab wo stri ki sooni mang ki trah dikhti .ghar mai kafi log h par sab dare huve rahte h .pal pal apni maut ki ghadiya gin rahe h... dusri taraf puri city aur ye state shant h dar ke saye mai aur wanha Raj karte h insaan ke roop mai wo shaitan aur uska. Pariwar jinhone pure state ko gulam bana rakha h aur band kar rakha h us pariwar ko ghar ke andar he..jinke marne ke kuch saal baki h
Kahte h yanha 7 saal pahle sab tikh tha phir kya huva pata ni par aj sab bahut dhuk mai atyachar mai jee rahe h ya kaho ki pal pal mar rahe h
ab chalte h Raj ki taaf
Subhe ko 5.30 pe uthna jaleel hona ye niyam h mera subhe ka waqt nasta karte waqt aram se nikalna phir haveli mai kaam karna pani dena garden mai pani aur saaf safayi karna jo ki mere liye bahut he dhukhdayi tha par who ...cares....
-Aise he dopahar huvi pura din badi aur choti chachi mujse ghar ki safayi aur ghar ke kaam karwati rahi..
Choti chachi – ja farsh par pocha marde wanha ganda ho gaya h
Main saaf karne gaya aur niche baith kar saaf kar raha tha ki piche table se pith takra gayi aur wanha pada pot tut gaya aur bus fir kya .. ap kudh he dheklo kya hota h mere sath
Choti chachi – haramkhore manhoos kanhike pot tod diya tu kha ja sabko apne maa baap ko kha gaya yanha aake mere pati ko kha gaya rook tuje main batati hu tadak tadak 5 thapad pade muje..badi chachi aur chacha khus ho rahe the dadi ne dhekha par boli kuch ni ..
choti chachi ---aj bhukha rahega toh pata lagega aur muje gasit kar mere room mai le gayi aur bahar se band kar diya
Main – andar ja ke gira farsh par gira aur rone laga kyoki muje pata h ki ek galti muje mujpar bahut bhari padti h par hu toh main bi ek insaan ek bacha he hu jis sai galti ho he jati h.. Main gale mai pahne locket ko dhek ke mer mu se sabd ansuo ke sath nikle maa oh maa apne aur papa ne pahnaya tha na ye locket..ap muje kyo ni le gayi sath mai kyo chod gayi is duniya mai dhekho apke bete ke sath kya ho raha h aur isi trah main leta huva farse par maapapa ko yaad kar ro raha tha. Maa main apse kabi baat ni karunga ap gandi ho apne muje apne sath ni leke gayi kya ap muje pyar ni karti thi aur phir... Main late gaya
Thodi dhair baad room ka darwaja khula aur mamta ayi
Mamta—bhai.. Bhaiya... Jago na dhekho main laddu layi hu apke liye apne dopahar ko khaya ni na maine mummy ko ullu bana ke layi hu ap khao na wo choti h par usai bi pata h lagne pe dard hota h uske chote hath jo piche chupe huve the unmai se laddu nikalke muje diye aur gale lag gayi mere
Main—maine uski traf pyar bhari nazro se dhekha aur gaal pe hath sahlaya aur ek laddu leke kha liya aur kaha kisi ko pata lag gaya toh mamtuu tuje mujse dur karenge tuje bi marenge wo jaldi se abi chali jao wo phir chupke se chali gayi.....
Sham ko badi chachi ne darwaja khola unke sath surendra aur babita sabi the jo hans rahe the...
Badi chachi--- yaad rakhna agar mu khola niche Dada ji ke pass toh zahar dekar maar dungi samja
Main ---Dar gaya tha kyoki muje jeena h . Jeena h apne wajud ke liye main chup raha aur unki ha mai ha milata raha jo unhone kaha wo maine waisa he kiya
Sham ka khana khaya aur so gaya apne kamre mai aj main kisi ke pass ni gaya sawal toh bahut h mere pass jinke jawab bada hoke dhundne h muje isiliye in sawalo ko dafna ke main nind ki gahrayiyo mai chala gaya...
Subhe ka waqt tha 5.30 pe uthana aur ek kick ke sath suruwat honi meri wahi jalil hone thapad khana etc..
Aj dada ji jaldi agaye aur room mai chale gaye maine unhe dhekha aur unke pass chala gaya aur godi mai sar rakh kar so gaya
Dada ji ---Beta nirwaana kya huva
Main kuch ni dada ji bus ap jaldi agaye toh apki godi mai sone ka man tha toh agaya
Dada ji –man mai putra muje pata h ki tu kya sochta h aur kya hota h tere sath Bus kuch time aur h abi tuje bahut heematwala banna h..
Dadaji—apka aj admission karwana h na ap taiyaar ho jayiye ..
Main--- ji Dada ji kahke upar room mai chala gaya aur taiyaar hone laga maine dimple T shirt aur pant pahni thi aur agaya niche jake mandir mai maa bhawani ka ashriwaad liya aur pahuch gaya Dada ji ke pass.. Dadad ji hum taiyaar h chale
Dada ji – Ne dhyan se meri taraf dhekha aur man mai bilkul sahdev pe gaya h aur samjdari mai apni ma pe gaya h kaas wo dono jinda hote toh dhek pate ki aj unka bacha Rajasthan ke sabse bade school mai padhne ja raha h jo bahu vidya ka sapna tha
Aur bolte h beta Raj ap nasta kare phir hum chalenge
Babita aur surendra toh jalbhun gaye the aur chacha chachi aur choti chachi bi jaal bhun gayi thi man he man sab baduaye de rahe the.
Main-- man mai muje pata h ye log kya soch rahe hmaine nasta kiya aur bahar agaye bahar ek rolls royce type ki modified car khadi thi jispe agai likha tha chetak jo Dada ji kabi kabi bade functions mai leke jate the aur driving seat pe baithe the bheem chacha.. Hum baith ke nikal gaye school
School bahut he shandar front mai playground 2 manjila building gajab ka tha school.. Muje toh pasand agaya
In principal office
Principal-- paseene se bhiga huva tha Thaa.. Kur saaab appp
DaDa ji –ap aram se baith jayiye inse mile ye h Kunwar Raj singh Nirwaan son of Sahdev and vidya singh Nirwan
Itna intro sunte he principal rumal nikaal ke paseene puchne laga usko apni maut dikhne lagi wo thar thar kaanp raha tha Jaise usne Kisi aise ke naam sun liye hi jo usai ni sunne the...
Main – inhe kya huva Dada ji ye kanp kyo rahe h
Dadaji –kuch ni huva inhe principal ki daraf dhek ke principal se kaha ye ab apki school mai padhenge
Principal--- hairani se ji ji ji
Dada ji – bheema Kunwar Raj ko bahar school dikhao
Aur Raj ke jane ke baad
Dada ji – Hum apse jo kah rahe h ek baar kahenge ap dhayan se suniyega Hamare pote ke baare mai koyi bi jan kari is school ke bahar gayi toh tumhe pahchanne wala is dharti pe ni milega tumahre sarir ko cheel aur kutto ke liye chod dunga main ye baat dhayan rakhna ye aam bacho ki trah padhega koyi special treatment ni
Aur ha always remember my words...... ... Thakur jagmaal singh words...
Principal jo kanmp raha tha wo aur dar gaya aur itna he bola ji ji ji... Thakur... Saab.. Yaad rakhu.. nga.. Kisi ko niii pata lagega
Ab Dada ji kyo ni chahte ki kisi ko pata lage main koun hu mere maa baap koun h ye Raj ka Raj h
Next morning
Dada ji...
5.30 am Nirwaana....
Main – main niche ate huve ji ji Dada ji
Dada ji hamre sath ao
Main -ji Dada ji aur main unke sath chal diya bahar sadhu sant bhukhe garib sab baithe the main pahli baar he aya tha aj kyo ki Dada ji ne bacho ko mana kar rakha tha wanha ane se jab main wanha pahucha toh sa bhojan kar rahe the subhe hamara roj ka tha sadhu sanyasi jaldi bhojan karte h idilye subhe jaldi he bhojan shuru ho jata tha jo 9 baje tak chalta tha main Dada ji ke sath se agai chala gaya muje khud he kuch khinchav khinche ja raha tha maine faalo ki choti tokri uthayi aur sadhu santo ke pass jake unke thaile mai rakhne laga jo sabke liye aschariye ki baat thi
Ek sadhu ko group dhayan se muje dhek raha tha unhone muje bulaya aur mere sit par hath rakh kuch pal chup raha aur phir uski ankhe chamakne lagi...wo bade dhyan se mastisk ki rekha padhne lage unhe jaise kuch mil gaya ho aur unke chahre pe muskrahat aagayiii...
Sadhu—putra kya naam h apka
main – Raj naam h baba
Sadhu—jor...se Raj ke h kayi Raj.....putra kabhi darna ni uarwala khud teri taqdeer badlega .......aur jab wo badlega ....tab tu badlega... Aur badlegi teri kismat .. Jo tere h wo taras rahe h tere intezar mai... Unke dhukho.. Tu unka muktidharak banega......
Aur Sare sadhu khade ho gaye aur muje ashriwaad dene lage
Aj ke liye itna he
Sath bane rahiye aur apni partikriyaye dete rahiye
Azhar mujeeb
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muje nahi lagta ki maine Rajput word ka use kiya Attitude Rajput ke ghar paida hone se nahi ata h Rajput ka Attitude uske karmo se ata h ...aur yahi is story mai h hero sabse dur heemachal mai raha h...ye baat notice nahi ki apne... Dhanyawad........
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Bilkul sahi baat hai ki rajput ka attitude unke karmo se aata hai lekin jinke karm rajput wale hote hai unki baaton se wo jhalakta hai........ Peheli baat bhai main aapko gyan nahi de raha tha kyonki aap likh rahe hai toh likhte waqt ye choti choti cheeje dekhni chahiye aur yahi ek achche writer ki pehechan hoti hai........... Baki apko bura laga toh aage se kuch nahi bolunga
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