Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 263 ONE TWO THREE Posted Masti Mai padhne ka bindaas likes aur revoes pelne ka

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Isme ek aur add kardo
Eternity ki setting Jennifer ke sath bhi hojaye .

Hmm ye kar sakte h ...par mech aur mike ko dekh kar lagta nahi h ki wo kisi ko bhi apni bahan ke pass ane denge

 

[Gaurav1969]

Update 260-262
Every update is on par with earlier ones ....
Abhi Finland ke plot mein climax tak nahi pahuncha hai aur itne saare kaand ho chuke ...first island ki wo action series fighting....naye naye characters ka bhi story mein judna sath hi kuch purane scenes jinka kabhi jikra nahi hua(Raj ki training ke dauran missions) unse related log ab saamne dikh rahe hai....so Raj prison mein pahunch chuka hai aur Ravinder singh se bhi mil liya...par ek baat jo bahut khatak rahi hai aakhir ye guthhi kya hai Nirwana ka and same waisa hi kuch Ravinder singh ka bhi haal dekhne se lag raha hai ye double souls ki kya hi kahani hai ye to ab Guruji ya Ravinder singh hi batayenge....Block B mein indono ne jo fight ki hai uske baad shayad hi koi prisoner hoga jo inhe approach kare....past ki bahut si yadein hai jo Nirwana apne tak samete hue hai ,,dekhna hoga kab hume dekhne milta hai ye....Prison escape ka route and plan taiyaar ho raha hai khaai se hi niklenge ye dono ....waise ye commander bhi ulti khopdi ka maloom padta hai mujhe ,jab dekh raha hai do janwar apas mein lad rahe hai to unhe ek sath rakhna hi kyon ? Jo bhi ho iska bhi bura waqt aane ko hai ...ab baat kiya jaye Bengaluru ki to Rajeev Poonam Muskan aur Gaurav(doctor) ab ek impenetrable bunker mein khud ko lock kar liye hai scorpion ke bande se bachne ke liye ...aur Narpat singh baki ko divert karne ke liye yaha se door nikal gye ab ye charo to safe hai ye dikh raha hai par Narpat singh grave danger mein na pad jaye...Sare main log finland mein hai help ke liye bulana ya nahi bulana ek barabar hai ....Ab inhe to bas intezaar hai ki kab Raj Ravinder singh ko lekar wapas aaye ....Mandwa se Udaipur ki shifting bhi ho chuki hai and officially announce bhi karwa diya Nirwan haveli ka ...ye sanket hai Mahayuddh ka jaisa Mahaguru ne bola tha...shadow warriors security mein tainat hai bus intezaar hai to usi ek sakhs ka....Richa Divya ke sath hai Hulk ki protection mein...Poonam bunker mein besudh padi hai ..Aur Sonali ki koi khoj khabar nahi (kaha gyi SSN bro humari Sonali Bhabhi?)...Story apne peak ko chhone ke bahut hi kareeb hai bus Finland ke tour ke khatam hone ki der hai....is yuddh mein kya nishkarsh nikalta hai kaun apne phirse door hote hai Raj se Aur kaun se purane sathi wapas sang mein aate hai ye bhi dekhne layak hoga....
Update humesha ki tarah lajawab tha bhai...
Kuch points jo thode odd lage use mention kar raha hu as if aapko bhi aisa lagta hai to improve karna nahi to koi baat nahi-
Combat fights thode vaast hote jaa rahe hai,instead of large explanation, short detailing ki need hai
Kuch scenes ka jump shift jyada feel hota hai thode connecting words bich mein rahe to best rahega...
And new characters update kar diyo thoda issue hota hai naam se samjhne mein...

 

[abhi09]

Mast uptate hai brother

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Wonderful excellent nice update carryon

Thank you

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Action Shuru ho gaya
Tow Ravinder Singh tow poora saandh ban gaya h
Dekhte h kab mulaqat Hoti h Raj se
Lee ek badhiya dost mil gaya Raj ko dekhte h aage kaam aayega ya nahi Lee
Ab dekhte h doosre block Kitne khaternaak bande milte h or unke Saath Raj kaise niptata h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar lajawab update

Sorry.late reply ke liye..
Dono ki mukakat se lekar bahut kuch apne padh liya hoga aur i think comment bhi kar diya hoga...
Thank you so much naik bhai sath bane rahe

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Thoda jyada time le lo vai par 7k se upar ka update dena inzaar kar lenge tab tak aaram se likho vai koi jaldi nahi hai

7k se upar ka he diya h aur apne toh padhakar comments bhi de diye h

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Aram se Sunday Tak update do 10k se uper hona chahiye take your time
Wait kr lenge

Itna bada likh pana muskil h yogesh bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Th

Wonderful update bhai.. ACTIVE MODE mast hai.

Thank you

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai aap ne Ravinder uncle se Milne ka is ya iske baad hoga
Bhai ab jldi ye sab 5 ya 6 update me khatam ab fight nhi family love dekhne ka man Vp Shweta ki saitani voh Sonali ke daat vo ponam ka pyar bhai ab is jagah akar family ke na hone par feel nhi aa rahi itni acchi fight ke baad bhi feel nhi aarahi
Bhai family ke bina happiness nhi hoti dil me khusi nhi hoti yrr

Wo sab bhi ayega awasthi bro bus ..thoda waqt aur waise bhi story mai maine updates bahut kam kar diye h toh story mai main scenes he ayenge...

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Shandar damakedar fighting update sandeep bhai dekhte h ye lee kuch alg soch rha h ya raj hi sab kuch kra kar red zone me gaya h

Thank you so much ...and maafi bhai