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Nav varsh ki bahut bahut shubhkamnaye ...upar wala apke sabhi sapno ko pura kare...aur ye varah apke aur apke pariwar ke liye dhero khushiya laye...
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Nice update Sandeep bhai. But Raj ko jaldi hi expose kar diya aapne sabke samane. Kal bhi ek update de dena bhai . Waiting for next update
Awesome and fantastic update bhai keep posting
Thank you so much for your warm reviews Raj bhai is baar idea nahi tha na ki kya hoga jab tak pata laga sab ho gaya tha warna sayad situation kuch aur he hoti....Bohut shandar bohut zaberdust
Ha manisha wala part suprising he tha laga ye part sabko pasand ayega aur real mai positive replies he mile ....but is baar ka part aur awesome banane ki kosis ki h specialy action aur thrill lovers ke liye .... Ab dekhte h unhe kaisa lagta h Thank you so much apki shandaar behtrin review ke liye and always u r rightBole to ekdam bhawal Update tha bhai.
Suruat se aaj kal ke south movies ke jaisi lagi. Jisme suspens ke sath ek part khtam ho jata hai. Aur next part ka dil tham kar wait Krna padta hai.
Aur bhai mujhe such kahu to is update me bhle hi apne hero raj ne abki band bajati ho aur subko mara ho. Lakin mujhe Manisha aur Aditya ka scene jyada acha laga. Specially manisha ka chalo ab apne hero ki list me ek aur powerful girl add ho gayi hai. Jo kuch ko to sambhal sakti hai. Aur mujhe jaha tak lagta hai raj ke sath rah kar ye aur bhi bahut kuchh sikhegi ab. Aur bhi jyada khatarnak banegi.
Ye sub to nipat gaye aur subko kafi kuch pata bhi chl gaya. Lakin ab naya kafila kiska aa raha hai. Jarur dusri party ka hoga. Aur pata nahi kyu mujhe lag raha hai. Yaha ab sunil ki entry hogi. Jb raj ko jarurat padegi to. Sayad sweta ne use hi call kiya tha.dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai. Bs ab jldi se Update de do bhai.
Thank you hiran bhai samajne ke liye Thank you buddy....Bhai others ka mereko patha nahi but as for me you don't have apologize for anything bro
You're always perfect in your update timings
Even in crucial times u gave update at morning around 5am so bro what i meant to say is even if you didn't give update today nobody will say anything. Cuz we all love your story and respect your dedication please don't get upset bcuz of some comments thank you Bhai
Thank you bilal bhaiAmazing update
Thank you Dark king bro...Nice Update nice Update
Thank you dark king bro but 15000 plus words bi likhta toh bi kam padte sadlover bro isliye suspence ke sath ane do har update 5000 words plus ka he milegaDhamaka bhai atom bomb update esy hi jari rakho....
Lekin please agar update thora long ho jaye to sawad aa jaye ga
Thankyou bilal bhaiAwesome update
Sukhriya bilal bhaiZabardast fantastic update
Sukhriya manij bhai.....Nice update bro super maza aa gaya bhai super mind blowing update
Bilal bha thank you so muchBehad hi jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob fantastic.
Waiting for next update.....
Thank you so much buddy ...वा....... वाजी.... वा.... क्या बात है!
लगे रहो!
बहोत अच्छा है!
Once more
Mega update
Please...... please....
Thank you hiran bhaiHonestly superb update bro
He he he aj ajayega hiakarji .....Sorry buddy but waiting for next biddu sabar naa howey hy ab haam sey
Thank you busy ho aj kal...Literally awesome n amazing
Thank you Rinku bhai aj mil jayega updateKahani bahut hi jabardast hai bhai maja aa gaya agle bhag ki bahut besbri se partichha hai
Aj right timeMarvelous update bro...Super Update..we can't wait for Tuesday but we have to wait... Tuesday 2pm...
Salu bhai fight lambi h is liye ek sath deta toh believe me bilkul maza nahi ata ..Bro ya galt bat ha faight pore data adhe q de
Sukhriya Masoom broWah maza aa gya
Kiya mara hai
Thank you debu bhai agai wale update mai aur maza ane wala h apki pasand ke honge ....... I mean actionFantastic Update....Ab tak ka best action scenes tha is update me ...
Pankaj bhai wo raka ko vithal ne dus ladkiya bhejne ko kaha tha toh 5 ahle pakad li thi.....wahi h wo aur sahi kaha sabke alag plan h koyi pyar pana chahta h koyi fun toh koyi apna maal pana chata h par ye pata h sab close hote jayenge tab action love ka dhamaka paka hoga kisi ka sir fatega toh kisi ka bed tutega..Mast jhakkasss. Raj ka school life Achi chal rhi hai. Jahan School ke students Raj ko low class ka smjhte hai unko jab pta chalega Raj kon hai toh Hawa tight Ho jana hai. Raka ke paas 5ldkiyan hai ye kahan se gai. Or ab rinky ko uthane ka plan hai Anthony alag apna plan bnaye baitha har koi kuch na kuch plan bna rha hai kon safal hota hai kon asafal ye toh wqt btayega. Sultan ko lekr raka darra hua hai lekin Sultan ko visvas hai woh nirwana ko maar dega ye to wqt btayega jb uska samna nirwana se hoga. Idhar shweta alg msti me hai. Or rinky ne baazi maar liya madhu se pehle chumma chati kr liya usne Raj ke sath. Sbka apna -2 plan hai kisko success milta hai dekhte agey ane Wale update me
Thanks nayak bhai update on time he milega.....Maza aagya bhai
Next update jaldi de dena wait nhi ho rha ab
Hmmmm baat sahi h main toh kahta he aya hu ki bahut kam sex ayega socho yaar abi tak 81 update aye h ek bi jagah bina wajah sex nahi dikhaya har kisi ki ek fantasy rahi h chaheAre bhai yr tum na aise hmare comments me jo negative point me utna dhyan na Diya kro or rhi suspense ki baat toh mai ek story padhta tha uske hr update me suspense or itna suspense ki bolo mat abhi ka sus 20 30 update baad khulta tha agr koi sa update miss kiye matlab jab suspence khulega tab confusion or ha bhai jaise mai abhi kuch reply padhe to bas itna kahunga ki readers ki apni soch hoti hai to unpar jada dhyan na do or jo tumne apne dimag me story soch kr rkhi hai use dete rho kyunki Mai kuch aisi bhi story padhi hai jisme bade bade mega type update hai usme bhi lagatar 2 3 se upr ya itna hi continue boring story hai or dusro ka to nhi bol skta mai but maine khud writer ko bola ki boring ho thi hai or ye writer bhi janta tha ki story boring ja rhi but usne scene change nhi kiye bcoz uska hr update piche ke update or age aane wale update se link hota tha to bhai reader agr aisa msg ya review den to bol dena ki áage kuch update wait kro fr dhamake dar update milengi but bhai bus req hai bura mat manana ye chaho to meri ek Raye h bhai ki befijul ke sex scene na krna bhai kyunki o bus space khata hai bhai story aage jldi nhi bdti or mujhe lgta hai aake paas iski aachi khasi story soch rkhi hogi to aise writer jaise jinke paas story nhi hoti toh jaise taise krke story ko sex scene se jod denge or puri update ko siskiyon me uh ah se bhar dete to ye meri ummid hai bhai ki agr meri Raye achi lgi ho to please ye follow kren nhi waise bhi hme story se mtlb sex scene to mn ke upr depend krta hai padhne ka mn hua to pdh liya nhi to usko story se skip kr aage main story pdh lete hai hmare liye i update fr chhota pd jata hai banki writer tum or story tumhari to jo bhi hoga thare mind me hoga or ummid hai fadu type update lagatar aate rahenge or hm padhte rahenge
And one more thing i am always supporting your this story
Fabulous mind blowing performance bhai jannn
जबरदस्त update bhai
Thank you much andyking bhai khubsoorat pratikriya ke liyeशानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann
Thank you jai bhaimast gazb superb update dear
bole to awesome
Thank yoy dar bhaiNice update bro
Shandar jaandaar awesome super se uper replyGajabहे भ*** मित्र, सर्वप्रथम आप अपने क्रोधाग्नी को पल भर के लिए अपने घर के शीतक यंत्र (fridge) मे डाल कर सोचीये ।
अगर आप के उस टिप्पणी से... कहानी के पाठक गण को इतना बुरा लगा...
तो कहानी के लेखक को कैसा लगा होगा, मै ये मानता हूँ कि आपका उद्देश्य संदीप जी के भावनाओ का ठेस पहुँचाना नहीं था, परन्तु अंजाने मे ही सही... उन्हे बुरा लगा...
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एक बात और... जब यहाँ लेखक अपनी कहानिया लिखते है तो हम उनसे उम्मीद करते है की कहानी के अंश को कुछ इस तरह लिखे जिससे हमे कहानी अच्छे तरह से समझ आये, अगर कहानी मे उनके लेखे हुए शब्द का अर्थ ही हमे उल्टे समझ आये... तो हम तो वो उल्टे अर्थ को ही मानलेंगे...
उसी तरह... पाठक गण के टिप्पणियों मे भी ऐसे ही भाषा का उपयोग होना चाहिए जिसे पढ़कर कोई उसका दो अर्थ न निकाल पाए,
खैर... आप एक कुशल उपदेशक है... मैं ये ही चाहूँगा की आगे कभी भी किसी को उपदेश देने का मन हो तो... सही शब्दो का चुनाव करे...
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और अंत मे... आपने कहानी से विदाई ले ही ली है तो... क्या ही करे....
जाइये... कोई बंदिश थोड़े न है....
और यहाँ की टेंसन मत लीजियेगा... यहाँ हम सब है एंजॉय करने के लिए... आप खुशी खुशी जाइये...
धन्यवाद
lagta h andy bhai se kafi update miss ho gaye the ya ek kuch update padhke he maza ata h rightलाजवाब out standing fabulous update bhai jann superree duperrere